These are the edition's working notes, published as they were written. They record, work by work, where Migne's plate is defective or the reading uncertain: the printed form, what the English does with it, and why. They are not a groomed apparatus. Where a note argues with itself, withdraws an earlier decision, or leaves a question open, that is the record of how the reading was actually reached, and it is left standing — a conjecture that is visible can be checked, and one that has been tidied away cannot.
The English never silently repairs the page. A construable but wrong reading is rendered literally and the conjecture is recorded here, never applied to the text. How the English is produced and checked →
BAND A — chunks 0000–0038, cols 0841A–0918C, Psalms I–XLIX
Merged 2026-09-04 from eight stint files. Bands B (chunks 0039–0076, Ps 51–100) and C (0077–0105, Ps 101–150) are separate runs; the work ships only when all three are merged.
⛔ The merge is not the concatenation. §A below is the reconciliation — the conventions that now bind Bands B and C, the drift that was found, and how each was settled. The eight stint files follow verbatim and unabridged in §E; nothing in them has been cut.
A1. The tituli — ruled from the Glossa's own argument, not from preference
In finem→ "Unto the end." ⛔ NOT "for the choirmaster" (the sense of the Hebrew lamnatseach). The Glossa argues from finis meaning END:Finis duobus dicitur modis, quando aliquid deficit, vel quando perficitur. A stint found further evidence at 0884B, where Migne writesNon moriar jam in finemin his own prose four lines from the titulus. Verified across Band A: 26 occurrences, zero rivals.Diapsalma/Diapsalmus→ unanglicized and ROMAN, never italic, never "Selah". ⚑ This was the one true convention conflict in Band A, and the fault was the launch brief's, not a stint's. The brief said "italic as Migne sets it" — and Migne sets it ROMAN. Two stints read the plate and overrode the brief; one obeyed it and italicised a single occurrence. They were not diverging from each other, they were following contradictory instructions. Settled on five plate reads (0849B, 0870D–0883A, 0887C, 0891D, incl. the masculine form); the single italic is reverted; the brief is corrected. Italicising it also breaks the Latin/English span parity every stint checks — the error had a second, silent cost.Canticum graduum→ "A canticle of degrees", andgradus→ degree throughout. Load- bearing, not stylistic: the gloss numbers the gradual psalms as a series in its own voice (Quartus gradus, Septimus gradus, Decimus gradus). ⚑ Band A contains none of these — they begin at Ps 119, in Band C. The ruling is recorded here so Band C inherits it.Psalmus DavidandPsalmus ipsi Davidare different lemmata and stay different. Several carry a⚑in the lemma brief because Migne's titulus and the Clementine's differ; three stints fired[var:]on such tituli, consistently.
A2. Psalm numbering — Vulgate, and the one apparent exception is not one
Vulgate/LXX numbering governs the whole book. Never convert a psalm number. Chunk 0010 carries two heads both numbered X — PSALMUS X.-- Secundum Hebraeos. (the Hebrew psalm 10, which our Clementine holds as the tail of Ps 9, its VERS. restarted at 1) and PSALMUS X. (the Vulgate Ps 10). Migne glosses the passage twice under one numeral, and that is his text: nothing was renumbered, merged or marked. The stint collated all nine ⚑ Ps 9:2x spans individually and every one agreed word for word.
⛔ The natural inference — that the Glossa follows the Hebrew division and runs one ahead thereafter — is false, and was tested rather than assumed: first-lemma probes for every psalm head in the work score 138 same-number / 0 offset / 3 undecided.
A3. Heads
PROTHEMATA IN PSALTERIUM. → PROTHEMATA ON THE PSALTER. · PSALMUS PRIMUS. → PSALM ONE. but PSALMUS II. → PSALM II. — Migne spells the first out and numbers the rest, and his inconsistency is followed, not regularised. Roman numerals stay Roman.
A4. The vocabulary axes — measured across all 39 chunks, not asserted
A mechanical sweep of the merged Band A English:
| axis | result |
|---|---|
usque ad → "as far as" | 209 occurrences, zero rivals. ⚑ Re-grounded 2026-09-04 — see §A7: the test is now the etc. splice, NOT italic membership. Four "down to" are the non-formula temporal look-alikes three stints independently identified. No chunk carries Latin usque ad without the English formula. |
gentes family | Gentiles 30 · nations 12 · nation 5 · heathen 0 — the axis working as designed (both renderings licensed by context, decided per site) |
mysterium/sacramentum | mystery 4 · sacrament 10, kept 1:1 |
daemonium/diabolus | demon 6 · devil 30 · Satan 1, no bleed |
turba/multitudo | crowd 0 · multitude 1 — the instrument was checked: this is a Psalter, and the Gospel crowds are simply absent. Not evidence of drift. |
⚑ The archaism check needed a refinement, and it is a real finding for Bands B and C. The settled test for whether -eth/saith is licensed is italic membership — archaism is permitted only inside quoted scripture. A sweep flagged one saith as gloss-voice. It is not: it stands inside « guillemets », quoting Isa 45:1. Quoted scripture in this work is marked TWO ways — italic lemmata AND guillemet quotations — so an italic-only test mis-flags. Use both. Confirmed clean otherwise: 1 saith, 1 doth, both licensed.
A5. RULED BY WILSON 2026-09-04 — settled, inherit, do not re-open
- ⭐
gens tenebrarum@0887D → "people of darkness" (was "nation of darkness"; the English is changed at 0022.md). The Manichaean power of Non appropiant qui dicunt fatum facit peccare, vel fortuna … vel gens tenebrarum, quae Deo rebellat — third in a list of determinist excuses. Thegentesaxis does not reach it: it rules the ethnic/political plural, and this is a singulargensnaming a cosmological principle. "Race" was offered and declined. The axis gains no sixth word — this is a named exception to it, and a singulargensin a non-ethnic metaphor is flagged, not folded into the axis. Dominus virtutum→ "Lord of hosts" (the gloss glosses it by angels). Bands B and C will meet it again; recorded so they inherit it.sedes→ "seat", not "throne", because "throne" collides with the order Throni.
A6. ⭐⭐ RULED 2026-09-04 — WHAT THE ENGLISH IS A TRANSLATION OF
The plate where the leaf has been read; our twin where it has not. Where a translator has opened the column and Migne's type differs from our TEI, the English renders what Migne printed, and the divergence goes in data/briefs/<idno>-PENDING-TEI-PATCHES.md so the Latin converges on the English when the patch lands. Where no leaf has been read, the twin is all there is and the twin is translated.
Why this and not "always translate the twin": at 0973B our twin prints the non-word ominus (qui non ominus jaculatur) and the plate reads eminus. Translating the twin there would have forced either untranslatable garble or a [sic:] publicly accusing Migne of Corpus Corporum's defect. The doctrine was already stated in the pending-patch file — on this work the plate is the text and our TEI is a witness to it — and this makes it govern the English too.
⛔ The gate is the plate read, not the translator's confidence. This licence exists only for a column somebody actually opened; it is never a warrant to emend from the Latin alone. And every such site MUST appear in the patch file — an English that silently outruns its Latin, with no pending patch to close the gap, is the drift this rule is designed to prevent.
A7. ⭐⭐ RULED 2026-09-04 — usque ad: THE etc. SPLICE TEST REPLACES ITALIC MEMBERSHIP
usque ad is Migne's abridgment formula ("as far as") only where it follows an etc. and names the point at which the quotation resumes. Everywhere else it is ordinary Latin and is rendered by sense.
Italic membership is WITHDRAWN as the test. It fails in both directions, and col 0953C carries both cases four words apart inside one italic run:
Occiduum tempus, etc., usque ad contra quos Dominus: Vobiscum sum usque ad consummationem saeculi, etc.
The first is the formula; the second is Matthew 28:20. No italic test can separate them; the etc. test does. Measured over the whole work: 777 occurrences, 733 formula, 44 not. Over the translated chunks 0000–0076: 483 formula, 24 not.
⚑ This re-grounds Band A's 209 renderings; it does not overturn them. Only five of the 24 non-formula sites used the formula's words, and four are legitimate sense-renderings that happen to reuse them (spread as far as the ends of the earth). One was repaired: Mic 4:10 @0984C, usque ad Babylonem venies, "as far as Babylon" → "even unto Babylon", to agree with 0073's already sense-rendered unto the consummation of the world — two quoted-scripture sites of one construction that had been rendered two ways.
⭐ Band C inherits this and needs it: the gradual psalms carry usque ad constantly.
46 columns read, every marker standing on a column somebody opened (plate-gate OK). Zero foot-of-page conjecture apparatus on any page read, in either layer.
⭐⭐ The measured case for the plate gate, and it is the strongest this project has produced.
- One stint had six
[sic:]candidates and the plate withdrew five. Every withdrawn one read as a confident Migne defect from the Latin alone. - Another had the exact mirror: it declined
In sua in virtute@0890A reasoning that a doubled short word is the classic transcriber artifact — and at 500 dpi Migne sets it plainly. A[d: in]now stands there.
Neither "trust the text" nor "suspect the transcriber" is a rule. Only the leaf is.
⛔ The mod-4 clipping rule the launch brief once gave is WITHDRAWN. It said a left-hand column numbered 1 (mod 4) is clipped at the inner margin. Refuted: 841, 849, 893, 897, 1045 clipped against 853, 857, 861, 865, 869, 877, 881, 889, 901, 909 clean. A coin flip. The original claim rested on four consecutive leaves plus one — a single physical gathering — so the congruence was an artifact of contiguity. Clipping is real and sporadic; open the column, never infer. Its failure mode runs where nobody audits: applied blind it silently withholds good markers, and it had blocked three before a stint looked.
39 TEI patches applied in one pass after the band's translation was complete (data/tei-patches/8967.json; queue and classes in data/briefs/8967-PENDING-TEI-PATCHES.md). Our Latin is Corpus Corporum's transcription, and across the ~46 columns read it departs from Migne at roughly 1.5 sites per column — consistent with 9003's independent collation of the sibling PL 114 Psalter at ~3 per page. The class runs in three directions:
- CC moves Migne ONTO the Clementine.
Dominus conservet(0903D),audiebam(0899B),populis(0895A),Multiplicati sunt super numerum(0902C),sordescat(0847A). Invisible to any Vulgate collation by construction — the divergence is erased before an instrument looks. - CC REPAIRS Migne's real defects, destroying markers we are entitled to fire.
Nocere(0908C, restored —[sic: Nocere]now stands),iniquitetem(0910C), and two erased dittographies (etsi. Etsi→etc.@0887B;doc-/ctus). - Our Latin carried words the plate lacks. 0904A, where CC replaced Migne's
quasi,withsed Deusand insertedin. Verified on the leaf before patching.
Four English twins changed with the Latin: 0908C ([sic: Nocere] fired), 0904A, 0866D ("or the fat" → "the fat"), 0902C ("above number" → "in number").
⛔ Three reported sites were REFUSED, and each refusal is a rule:
locutus→locutos— at 900 dpi the glyph is ambiguous, andlocutus(perfect deponent, "and afterwards I myself spoke") is correct Latin wherelocutosis a solecism. A patch needs positive evidence.- ⭐
possit→rossit, and its whole class. The plate's broken sorts are not Migne's errors. A damagedpthat images asris the condition of this copy's inking, not a reading of the edition. Compositor errors (wrong sorts SET) are restored; ink damage is not — that line is whyiniquitetemandNocereare in androssitis out. Desiderabilia→Desiderabillia— deferred: two occurrences stand in col 0871D and the report does not say which. Re-read the leaf; do not guess.
⚑ And one site was confirmed against the editor's own doubt. Multiplicati sunt super numerum looked wrong to challenge, because the gloss beneath repeats "Super numerum". The plate settles it: the lemma reads numerum and the gloss's Super numerum is the gloss expanding its lemma, which is how this commentary works throughout.
## C1. Patched in the Latin, deliberately NOT marked 0903D Dominus → Dominum conservet. The English is unchanged. Convention 3 renders a fragmentary lemma as the phrase it stands for (Ps 40:3), and no [var:] is owed: the gloss does not argue from the word, and Dominum/Dominus is exactly the letter-level corruption the settled single-word [var:] rule excludes.
## C2. Markers the patch pass UNLOCKED, for a later pass
Seb isti@0876B — our twin readSed istiand did not construe; the plate readsSeb isti; the conjecture isSedisti(Prov 23:1–2), supplying exactly the missing verb and person. No marker could reach it before the patch:[sic:]may wrap only type the twin carries and[cj:]needs the printed word present. The patch is a precondition for the apparatus, not a cleanup after it.- 0902C a
[var:]against Ps 39:6 is now available on the restored lemma.
- The blind polarity read on all 39 chunks — required, and it is a reading pass, not a grep.
- Bands B and C, then a three-band merge of this file.
- Gallica, three sites this copy cannot answer:
quae non est nisi [inquieta] mente@0885B (f443) ·enumerantur/emunerantur@0898D (f449) ·excrescentibus pilis@0905A (f453). - One
In Hebraeoclause unread. Two of three are closed: 0868A prints(quod in Hebraeo)with no Hebrew type at all, and 0902B'sIn Hebraeolwas CC debris forIn Hebraeo. - The
gens tenebrarumruling (§A5).
Band A marker totals: 37 [var:] · 6 [sic:] · 2 [cj:] · 1 [d:].
Nothing below is abridged. Each stint's own reasoning, declined list and checks stand as written.
§E.0000 — stint file cruces-0000.md, verbatim
Range: src/latin/8967/0000.md–0004.md, cols 0841A–0850A. Content: the PROLOGUS BEATI HIERONYMI, the PROTHEMATA IN PSALTERIUM, and Psalms I–IV. Lemma brief: data/briefs/8967-lemmata-0000.txt.
⚠ This file is one stint's range. It must be merged into src/english/8967/cruces.md.
§0 · SPAN COUNT RECONCILIATION (the required check)
My brief's header states 6 spans for chunks 0000–0004. Counting … in my own Latin:
| chunk | italic spans |
|---|---|
| 0000 | 0 |
| 0001 | 6 |
| 0002 | 0 |
| 0003 | 0 |
| 0004 | 0 |
| total | 6 |
The totals AGREE (6 = 6), and the six spans are the same six, in the same order. No head-of-range shortfall, no tail spill. This range's brief was split correctly.
⚑ One discrepancy, and it is in the brief's column labels, not its membership. The brief files all six spans under [0841A]/[0842B]/[0842D]. In the Latin, nebel and organum. stand after the [0841B] anchor, not [0841A]. Membership is unaffected and nothing downstream reads those labels, but a later stint reconciling by band rather than by chunk would be misled. Reported rather than worked around.
⚑ Front matter carries few lemmata by nature — six spans across 3,921 Latin words — exactly as the launch message predicted. Four of the six are single words used as words (nebel, organum., visio,, videns.) and two are the name-etymologies forti manu / pacificus,. None of the six is a VERS.-addressed verse lemma; the verse lemmata in Psalms I–IV are set in guillemets, not italics.
The six spans, checked in place
| col | span | verdict |
|---|---|---|
| 0841B | nebel (נבל) | The Hebrew name of the instrument. Recovered from the plate and confirmed by me at p. 426; CC drops all Hebrew from this work. Kept exactly as it stands, unromanized, per the launch brief. |
| 0841B | organum. | The Latin name, cited as a Latin word in a sentence naming the word in three languages (Heb./Gk./Lat.). Englishing it to "organ" would destroy the sentence's point, so it stays. Not a Vulgate lemma; nothing to collate. |
| 0842B | visio, | Englished to a vision, (convention 2). Not a quotation: it is the gloss's own equation prophetia = visio. Punctuation kept inside the span as Migne sets it. |
| 0842B | videns. | Englished to one that sees. — see §3.1 for why not "a seer". |
| 0842D | forti manu | The etymology of David. Brief marks ✓ Jdc 4:24: that match is irrelevant — the phrase there is Israel's hand prevailing over Jabin, and this gloss is naming what the name David means. Not a scripture lemma. Englished strong of hand. |
| 0842D | pacificus, | The etymology of Solomon. Englished peaceable,. ⚑ Migne sets forti manu in the ablative and pacificus in the nominative in one apposition (si David est et Salomon, id est, forti manu et pacificus). Plate-confirmed at p. 426. Rendered as printed; not tidied to a common case. |
§1 · MARKERS FIRED — three [var:], no [sic:], no [cj:], no [d:], no [ed:]
All three stand on columns I read at Migne's plate this session (see §2); plate-gate.mjs 8967 returns ✓ for all three.
[var:]@ 0844D (chunk 0002) — Gn 3:12. Migne prints« Mulier quam dedisti mihi me seduxit. »The Clementine reads Mulier, quam dedisti mihi sociam, dedit mihi de ligno, et comedi. Sense-changing: Adam's excuse in the Vulgate is that the woman gave him of the tree; Migne's makes her seduce him — importing the verb the Vulgate assigns to the serpent one verse later (Gn 3:13, serpens decepit me). The gloss is building the abiit / stetit / sedit triad on exactly this clause (sedit, dum se excusavit), so the wording is load-bearing. Plate-confirmed at 600 dpi, p. 427, mid-line, right-hand (clean) column. Rendered as printed; the marker sits beside the rendering.
[var:]@ 0848B (chunk 0003) — 1 Pt 3:19. Migne prints« Quando iis qui erant in carcere, spiritibus profectas praedicavit… »The Clementine reads In quo et his, qui in carcere erant, spiritibus veniens praedicavit. Plate-confirmed at 600 dpi, p. 429, right-hand (clean) column: the plate genuinely reads profectas. ⚑ profectas is a real word-form (fem. acc. pl. of profectus, -a, -um) with nothing in the clause to agree with; the sense the sentence needs is the masculine nominative profectus, "having gone forth" — parallel to the Vulgate's veniens. I rendered it for that sense ("having gone forth") and put the divergence and the conjecture in the marker rather than quarantining the word, per 7a⁗: quarantining it would have taken the participle that carries Christ's descent, which is the whole point of the citation. I did not fire a[sic:]beside it — see §4.2.
[var:]@ 0848D (chunk 0004) — Rm 5:3. Migne prints« Gaudemus in tribulationibus scientes quod tribulatio, etc. »; the Clementine reads gloriamur in tribulationibus. Plate-confirmed at 600 dpi, p. 429, right-hand (clean) column. Rejoicing for glorying — a lexical substitution in a proof-text adduced for consolation. Fired because the column is clean, read, and mid-line; the divergence is one word and I say so in the marker rather than arguing sense from it.
§2 · PLATE READS DONE THIS STINT — three new pages, recorded
data/plate-reads.json had 0841A–0842D and 0849A–0850D for this work. My range also covers 0843A–0848D, which was unread, and half my [var:] candidates fell there. I rendered and read pp. 427, 428 and 429 of raw/scans/pl113/patrologiaecurs04migngoog.pdf (map PDF page = (column + 11) / 2, corner numbers checked first on every page) and recorded all three reads. Cols 0841A–0850D of this work are now fully read.
- Zero foot-of-page conjecture apparatus on all three pages, of either the numbered or the asterisk layer. That is consistent with the five pages read at chunking; coverage stays
spot. - The mod-4 clipping rule held 6 of 6: 843 clean, 845 clipped, 847 clean.
⭐ 2a. A CORPUS CORPORUM DEPARTURE FROM THE PLATE — 0847A, needs a TEI patch, NOT a marker
The plate reads sordescet; our TEI reads sordescat (Apoc 22:11, in the Ps 2:9 gloss). Confirmed at 600 dpi. This is the class CLAUDE.md test 4 names: CC silently normalizing Migne toward a familiar text — Migne's future indicative pulled into the Clementine's present subjunctive, and it is invisible from the Latin alone.
⛔ No marker is owed and I fired none. A [sic:] may wrap only words carried verbatim from the plate, and our Latin column does not carry this one; a [var:] would assert that our printed Latin diverges from the Vulgate, which — as CC prints it — it does not. The correct repair is a data/tei-patches/8967.json entry restoring sordescet, after which the divergence becomes a real (small) [var:] candidate. My English renders our Latin twin (sordescat, "may be defiled still") and flags it here. Escalated: this needs an editor's decision, not a translator's.
2b. Two further CC-vs-plate departures, both cosmetic, both logged for the same patch pass
- 0845A — the plate sets one note,
(AUG. CASS.). CC splits it into a bare running-textAUG.plus a separate[n: (CASS.)]. My English reproduces CC's shape exactly (an unanglicized bareAUG.in the running text) because marker parity is checked against the twin. Reported, not repaired. - 0848D — the plate sets
duxisti, v. «(comma, lowercase v.); CC givesduxisti. V. «. I reproduce CC's. ⚑ I could not settle what Migne'sv.abbreviates — vide? versus? — and I did not guess: it passes through as printed. - 0849D — the plate closes
« In corde. »; CC drops the closing guillemet, which is why chunk 0004's guillemets run 29 « against 28 ». I reproduce CC's (sacred 1:1 against the twin). Same for chunk 0002 (25/24) and chunk 0003 (56/57); I did not "balance" any of them.
2c. What the clipped column cost me — one candidate withdrawn for want of a second copy
0845B, Jo 7:38. CC reads « Qui crediderit in me… » against the Clementine's Qui credit in me — a future perfect for a present, and a real candidate. On the plate the word breaks across the line exactly at the clipped inner margin (Qui cre- / [3–5 chars lost]…in me), and 845 is a left-hand column ≡ 1 (mod 4). Per §3 of the launch brief this does not ship on this copy. Marker withheld. Settleable in one Gallica IIIF request (ark:/12148/bpt6k5505319w, f = (column + 1) / 2 → f423); left for whoever runs the second-witness pass.
§3 · THE DIVERGENCE LIST — every scripture quotation in the range, including the clean ones
7a″ says the list is the deliverable. Every guillemeted quotation and every VERS. lemma in cols 0841A–0850A was collated against sources/vulgate/clementine-flat.txt. Findings first, then the checked-clean.
3.1 Divergences found, marker DECLINED, with the reason
| col | Migne prints | Clementine | why no marker |
|---|---|---|---|
| 0842B | Directus est Spiritus Domini in David | 1Rg 16:13 et directus est spiritus Domini a die illa in David, et deinceps | Straight abridgment of a longer verse; no word altered. Plate-confirmed p. 426. |
| 0842C | Si David in spiritu vocat eum Dominum, quomodo filius ejus est? | Two verses spliced: Mt 22:43 Quomodo ergo David in spiritu vocat eum Dominum + Mt 22:45 Si ergo David vocat eum Dominum, quomodo filius ejus est? | A conflation, not a divergence in wording: every word is Matthew's and the sense is unchanged. Migne's own (Matth. XXII.) covers both verses. Plate-confirmed. Named here because a conflation is exactly what a later reader would want flagged. |
| 0842C | Non voluntate humana allata est… locuti sunt sancti homines Dei | 2Pt 1:21 Non enim voluntate humana… sancti Dei homines | Dropped connective + word order. Sense identical. Plate-confirmed. |
| 0843B | Unde mihi hoc, ut veniat mater Domini? etc. | Lc 1:43 Et unde hoc mihi, ut veniat mater Domini mei ad me? | Word order and an abridgment Migne himself marks with etc. Sense identical. ⚑ Note the transposed Unde mihi hoc is the order at Rt 2:10 — a memory-quotation cadence, not an argument. |
| 0843A | citation (Lev. XIII) for the leper's oil | the rite is Lv 14:15–18; Lv 13 is the diagnosis of leprosy | A citation, not a quotation: refDisplay keeps what Migne printed and refKey resolves it at indexing. Plate-confirmed Lev XIII. Not [var:] territory. |
| 0844A | Da partes septem, necnon et octo | Ecl 11:2 Da partem septem necnon et octo | Plural for singular; plate-confirmed. Declined because the gloss argues from the numbers seven and eight, not from the noun, so the sense does not turn on it. |
| 0844B | Sicut scriptum est in libro Psalmorum | Act 1:20 Scriptum est enim in libro Psalmorum | Plate-confirmed. The gloss's argument is that liber is singular, which both readings give identically. |
| 0845B | ut Job: « Aquae multae populi multi » | The phrase is in no book of Job. Nearest sense: Apc 17:15 Aquae… populi sunt; the words populi multi recur at Is 2:3, Ez 38:9, Zach 8:22 | A mis-attribution by the gloss, not a wording divergence, so [var:] is the wrong instrument. ⚑ And ut Job stands at a line opening in the clipped column 845 — I could not verify it at the plate at all, so I make no claim about whose it is. |
| 0847A | Ecce hic positus est in ruinam | Lc 2:34 Ecce positus est hic in ruinam | Word order only. Plate-confirmed p. 429. |
| 0847A | qui justus est, justificetur adhuc: et qui in sordibus est, sordescat adhuc | Apc 22:11 sets the filth clause first and the justice clause last, after Qui nocet, noceat adhuc | Clause reordering of a four-member series that Migne quotes only in part. Sense of each member unchanged. ⚑ See §2a — the same site carries a real CC/plate departure on sordescet. |
| 0848B | illuminabit tibi Christus | Eph 5:14 illuminabit te Christus | Plate-confirmed. Dative for accusative; in English both are "shall enlighten thee". Not sense-changing. |
| 0848C | benedictio tua sit super populum tuum | Ps 3:9 et super populum tuum benedictio tua | Migne supplies sit and reorders inside his own gloss, which is quoting to address God (et o Domine). Rendered as printed. |
| 0849A | V. « Gaudemus… — the leading v. | — | Not a scripture question. See §2b: unresolved abbreviation, passed through. |
3.2 Quotations collated and found to AGREE with the Clementine — the checked negatives
Recorded because a findings list alone cannot be told from a stint that never looked.
- 0842B Nolite tangere christos meos = Ps 104:15 verbatim (also 1Par 16:22).
- 0842D–0843A Haec dicit Dominus christo meo Cyro = Is 45:1 verbatim.
- 0843B In principio, creavit Deus coelum et terram = Gn 1:1 (Migne's comma after principio is his pointing; the Clementine spells caelum where CC prints coelum — an orthographic normalization of the flat file, per
sources/vulgate/README.md, not a divergence). - 0843B Ecce Virgo concipiet = Is 7:14 verbatim (twice).
- 0843C Quadraginta dies, et Ninive subvertetur = Jon 3:4 verbatim (Migne drops only the verse's opening Adhuc).
- 0844A Miserere mei Deus = Ps 50:3; Misericordiam et judicium cantabo tibi = Ps 100:1; Omnis spiritus laudet Dominum = Ps 150:6 — all three verbatim, and all three the correct hinge-verses of the three fifties the gloss is counting.
- 0844B Domine, quid multiplicati = Ps 3:2 verbatim.
- 0844C Tecum principium = Ps 109:3; Ego dormivi = Ps 3:6; Longe a salute mea = Ps 21:2 — all verbatim incipits.
- 0847A qui in sordibus est, sordescat adhuc = Apc 22:11 verbatim as our Latin prints it (see §2a for the plate).
- 0847D Quod facis, fac citius = Jo 13:27 verbatim.
- 0849B Sol non occidat super iracundiam vestram = Eph 4:26 verbatim.
- Every
VERS. n.--lemma of Psalms I, II, III and IV was checked against Ps 1–4 in the Clementine and every one matches its own verse, verbatim, at the printed number — see §3.3.
3.3 ⭐ THE VERSE NUMBERING IS RIGHT, AND I CHECKED IT RATHER THAN ASSUMING IT
Per §1 of the launch brief. All 30 VERS. addresses in my range resolve to the Vulgate verse of that number in their own psalm, with zero offset:
- Ps I — VERS. 1 Beatus vir qui non abiit (1:1) · 2 Sed in lege (1:2) · 3 Et erit (1:3) · 4 Non sic impii (1:4) · 5 Ideo non resurgent (1:5) · 6 Quoniam novit Dominus (1:6). ✓
- Ps II — 1 Quare fremuerunt gentes · 2 Reges · 3 Dirumpamus · 4 Irridebit · 5 Loquetur ad eos · 6 Ego autem · 7 Dominus dixit · 8 Postula · 9 Reges eos · 10 Et nunc, reges, intelligite · 12 Nequando irascatur · 13 Cum exarserit. ✓
- Ps III — 1 Psalmus (the titulus) through 8 Quoniam tu percussisti. ✓
- Ps IV — 1 In finem through 9 In pace in idipsum. ✓
⚑ VERS. 11 is missing from Psalm II, and it is a GAP, not a defect. Migne runs 10 → 12 → 13. Plate-confirmed, p. 429. Ps 2:11 is Servite Domino in timore, et exsultate ei cum tremore, and the recension simply carries no gloss on it: 12 and 13 sit on their own correct verses either side, so nothing has slipped. This is not the Jude-style out-of-sequence numbering the brief warns about and must not be "restored" — reproduced exactly as printed.
§4 · CANDIDATES REJECTED, AND WHY — the measured instrument
4.1 modo etiam apposuit @ 0841C — declined, and the copy cannot settle it
Migne prints Nam David composuit omnes psalmos: modo etiam apposuit, in quo multos auxiliatores habuit. apposuit has no object and modo is a bare ablative; the sentence wants something like modos etiam apposuit ("he supplied the melodies as well"), which is what the following in quo multos auxiliatores habuit is about. I did NOT emend. I rendered it "he moreover appended them, wherein he had many helpers", taking modo etiam adverbially, which keeps every printed word and invents no noun.
⛔ And the plate cannot arbitrate: the verb stands at a LINE OPENING in column 841, which is clipped (the read at chunking recorded exactly this). Our copy shows …uit,. Needs Gallica f421. Logged, no marker.
4.2 No [sic:] on profectas @ 0848B — deliberate
The obvious move is to stack a [sic:] on the [var:]. I declined, and the reason is the class prior, not a hunch: profectas is a real, well-formed Latin word — Pattern 12 marks type the plate got wrong, and nothing here shows the plate got anything wrong. It reads exactly as a father's loose participle would if his copy had profectus and a compositor set the wrong ending — but that is a guess about whose error it is, and 9004 measured translating agents' attribution guesses at 5 right against 9 wrong. The [var:] states both readings without claiming a culprit, which is what Pattern 14 is for. ⚑ On that same work 8 of 27 [sic:] fell at the plate and every fall was a single word; profectas is a single word.
4.3 Candidates raised and rejected on inspection
quem novit Deus@ 0849B — masculine relative for the neuter antecedent corde. A solecism, not a defect, and Pattern 9 territory; medieval Latin does this constantly. Rendered "which God knows". No marker.Non retropendet@ 0848C — retropendere is not a classical verb and reads oddly. But it is transparently formed (retro + pendere, "to weigh back"), it is plate-confirmed p. 429, and it stands in a clean column with normal spacing. Rendered literally, "He does not weigh back". Pattern 7, no marker. ⚑ Flagged so a blind reader does not think it was missed.in latitudine gaudii duxisti@ 0848D — ablative where the sense wants the accusative of motion (in latitudinem). Plate-confirmed. Rendered "into the breadth of joy" for the sense the verb duxisti forces, which is what the printed words allow. No marker; a case ending is not a Pattern 10 non-word.vel etiam diabolis et angelis ejus@ 0847D — a plural diabolis with a singular ejus hanging off it. Plate-confirmed p. 429. Rendered "by devils and his angels", carrying the mismatch. Per axis 3 the word is devil(s), never "demon". No marker.ut sitis aqua@ 0845B — sitis is the noun "thirst" (nominative), not the verb "you may be": qua reficitur interior homo, ut sitis aqua = the inner man is restored by wisdom "as thirst by water". ⚑ This is a live mis-parse trap of exactly the Judith ferias shape (a noun readable as a subjunctive) and I name it so no later pass silently "fixes" it.nomine, non numine@ 0844C — a nomen/numen jingle English cannot keep. Rendered "in name, not in the divine power", losing the sound and keeping the sense. Not a defect; recorded because the loss is real.- PSAMUS CXXIV — outside my range and already settled at the plate; no action, per §3 of the launch brief.
§5 · RENDERING CALLS AND CONVENTIONS APPLIED
In finem→ "Unto the end." (launch brief §2.1) at 0848D, and the gloss immediately under it argues from finis meaning END (quando aliquid deficit, vel quando perficitur), which is the axis's own justification standing in my range. Rendered "The end is said in two ways, when something fails, or when it is completed."Diapsalma→ diapsalma, unanglicized (brief §2.2), four occurrences at 0849A–0849C. ⚑ Migne sets it in ROMAN here, not italic — so my English sets it roman too. The brief says "italic as Migne sets it"; in this book, at these four sites, he does not. Italicizing it would also have broken span parity against the twin. Never "Selah", never "pause".gentes→ nations throughout Psalm II (0846A Quare fremuerunt gentes, 0846C in omnibus gentibus, 0847A do tibi gentes haereditatem). Axis 4: this psalm sets gentes against populi, not against Judaei, and the gloss expounds it of Herod, Pilate and the spread of Christ's name through the world — plainly generic, so "nations". Stated here because the Douay gives "the Gentiles" at Ps 2:1 and Acts 4:25 and the familiar cadence pulls hard.mysterium→ mystery (0842A plus mysteriorum, 0843C altioris mysterii, 0848D in magno mysterio). No sacramentum occurs in this range, so the 1:1 axis is untested here.usque ad— does not occur in my range, in either the formula or the temporal sense.- Commentator's voice not archaised (axis 1): dicit/ait → "says", throughout. The only
-ethforms in my English are inside guillemeted scripture (casteth, dwelleth, knoweth, showeth), which is where axis 1 permits them. (ID.)and(Ibid.)never expanded — 23 of them in this range, all passed through verbatim.AUG.at 0845A passes through as a bare unanglicized siglum in the running text, because that is what our Latin twin has. See §2b.- Second person (Pattern 17): plural vos/vestris/dominemini → you/your (0847B, 0849A–B); singular cognosceris addressed to God at 0849D → thou. No reverence-thou anywhere.
PSALMUS PRIMUS.→PSALM ONE.butPSALMUS II./III./IV.→PSALM II./III./IV.— numerals mirror the plate, per the shared brief's measured rule.PROTHEMATA IN PSALTERIUM.→PROTHEMATA ON THE PSALTER.⚑ Prothemata is kept: it is a technical name for a class of prefatory material, it is current in English medieval studies, and "Preliminary Themes" would read as a description rather than a title. First use of this head in the corpus — flagged for the merge so the other seven stints and Bands B/C match it.PROLOGUS BEATI HIERONYMI IN LIBRUM PSALMORUM.→THE PROLOGUE OF BLESSED JEROME ON THE BOOK OF PSALMS.— the shipped corpus form (8946 Ecclesiastes, 8948 Esther).
§6 · THE THREE CONTAINMENT TESTS, PLUS THE FOURTH
[sic:]swallowing — n/a: I fired none. Both[var:]markers sit beside a complete rendering; stripping every marker from my English leaves four readable sentences with no stranded article, preposition or doubled mark.- Negation attachment, host named — all 34 printed negatives in the range walked, host word named, host located in the English. Two were on the 2a trigger population and are recorded: - 0847D qui gloriam majestatis non putant ad humilia posse descendere — the non is on putant, not on posse. Written "who do not think that the glory of majesty can descend", never "who think it cannot". - 0848C saeviunt illi, sed non dormirem, nisi vellem — non on dormirem, nisi on vellem, and the
sedcorrelative confirms the scope. "they rage, but I would not sleep, unless I willed it." - Also carried without softening: nisi sequantur laudanda (0845A), nec otiosa (0845A), alii nec judicabunt, nec judicabuntur (0845D), ne mundus post eum abiret (0846B), qui nolunt jugum Christi sibi imponi (0846B), ut non temere dominemini (0847B), nihil patientiae (0847C), Aliter non sperarent (0848A), quae non Deus / quae non faciunt quod promittunt (0849A), non ei consentiat ratio (0849B), quae non ducitur ad effectum (0849C), non in multiplicitate saeculi (0850A). - Punctuation band by band — colons, semicolons, question marks, guillemets and exclamations compared inside every one of the 37 column bands in my range. All bands match 1:1 except one, and that one is licensed:
[0842A]carries one extra colon in the English, from Pattern 8b — Migne closes the indirect question Solet quaeri cur… legantur? with a mark English cannot carry, so it is recast direct behind a colon: "It is commonly asked: why are the psalms read in the Church before other Scriptures?" The?is preserved, not dropped. All three of the Latin's question marks are present in the English. ⚑ In the first pass this comparison returned 16 mismatched bands — every one a comma I had promoted to a semicolon or colon out of habit. Fifteen were reverted to the printed mark. The test earns its place. - "Does it ASSERT what he asserts?" — every paragraph read back against the Latin with the counts already clean. Two things this caught that nothing else would have: - 0846C — I had first written "they wish to subjugate us to themselves" with the unexpressed subject taken as the kings. It is the Lord and his Christ: the whole speech is the kings quoting their bonds (Dirumpamus… quibus nos sibi astringere volunt), and sibi points back through the lemma to adversus Dominum et adversus christum ejus. The antecedent is in the lemma above, exactly as the brief warns. - 0846B — Prior qui infantes occidit Herodes, posterior qui Pilato consensit: the posterior is also a Herod (Antipas), which the next sentence proves (Solus enim rex Herodes et princeps Pilatus). I did not supply the name, because Migne does not; the English keeps his bare "the latter, he who consented with Pilate".
§7 · SECTIONS READ CLEAN
Cols 0841A–0844C (the prothemata entire), 0844D–0846A (Psalm I), 0846A–0848C (Psalms II–III) and 0848D–0850A (Psalm IV) were each read line by line against the Latin twin, and against the plate for 0841A–0850D. Apart from the sites named above, no polarity defect, no dropped clause, no supplied or destroyed punctuation mark, and no unexpressed-subject ambiguity remained unresolved. verify-english.mjs 8967 is silent on chunks 0000–0004; plate-gate.mjs 8967 returns ✓ on all three of my markers.
§8 · HANDOFF — what the merge and the editor must act on
sordescat→sordescetneeds adata/tei-patches/8967.jsonentry (§2a). Editor's call.- Two Gallica second-witness reads are owed and each costs one HTTP request (§2c, §4.1):
f423for crediderit @ 0845B,f421for apposuit @ 0841C. PROTHEMATA ON THE PSALTER.andPSALM ONE./PSALM II.are first uses; the other seven Band A stints and Bands B and C must match them.- The lemma brief's column labels are off for chunks 0000–0004 (§0). Membership is correct; only the printed band label is wrong. Worth checking whether the same generator mislabels the other 21 ranges.
- My three new plate reads are in
data/plate-reads.json; cols 0841A–0850D of this work are now fully read and the mod-4 clipping rule stands at 6 of 6.
§E.0005 — stint file cruces-0005.md, verbatim
Band A, stint covering src/latin/8967/0005.md … 0009.md.
§0 · SPAN COUNT RECONCILIATION — the brief and the Latin AGREE
data/briefs/8967-lemmata-0005.txt declares 21 italic spans. Counted in my own Latin:
| chunk | spans |
|---|---|
| 0005 | 3 |
| 0006 | 2 |
| 0007 | 3 |
| 0008 | 2 |
| 0009 | 11 |
| total | 21 ✅ |
The identities match too, not merely the total: 12 × usque ad, plus (Isa. [0851A] XXVI), Cognoscetur., Convertantur peccatores., convertentur,, In infernum,, Patientia., Exsurge., exsurge., Sciant. — the nine named spans of the brief, in the brief's order.
⚠ The brief's COLUMN BANDS are unreliable, though its list is not. Several spans are labelled with the chunk's colContext rather than the band they actually stand under: e.g. all three of chunk 0005's are labelled [0850A] when they fall at 0850D, 0850D→0851A and 0851B; chunk 0009's mid-chunk spans are all labelled [0857A], when two of them stand at 0858C and 0859A; and the brief's [0852D] and [0855C] entries are really 0853A and 0855C-in-chunk-0008. The count and the identities are sound; do not use the brief's band labels to locate a span.
§1 · PLATE READS — I READ MY WHOLE RANGE AT THE PLATE, AND IT CHANGED THREE CALLS
At launch only cols 0849A–0850D of my range had been read. I rendered and read PDF pages 430–435 of raw/scans/pl113/patrologiaecurs04migngoog.pdf (map PDF page = (column + 11)/2, re-verified against the printed corner numbers on every page), covering cols 0849A–0859D, plus one 600-dpi crop. All five new reads are recorded in data/plate-reads.json.
Foot-of-page apparatus: ZERO on all six pages, of either layer (numbered Forte conjectures or asterisk cross-references). Full page width was rendered each time, so this is not a bottom-strip crop. Coverage for this work stays spot; a checked zero over ten more columns is worth having, but it is not a claim that the work has none.
⚑⚑ 1a. THE mod-4 CLIPPING RULE IS FALSIFIED — 853 AND 857 ARE CLEAN
data/plate-reads.json recorded, from five pages, that "a left-hand column whose number is congruent to 1 (mod 4) loses ~3–5 characters at the start of most lines; 3 (mod 4) is clean," and the launch brief's §3 turned that into a policy: a quarter of this work's columns cannot license a claim about line-opening type.
It does not hold. Read today at 200 dpi:
| col | mod 4 | inner margin |
|---|---|---|
| 0851 | 3 | clean |
| 0853 | 1 | CLEAN |
| 0855 | 3 | clean |
| 0857 | 1 | CLEAN |
| 0859 | 3 | clean |
Two counter-examples in five pages. Against the earlier tally (841 clipped·1, 849 clipped·1, 1043 clean·3, 1045 clipped·1, 1047 clean·3) the rule now stands at 5 confirmations and 2 refutations, so congruence 1 (mod 4) is a predictor of risk, not a rule. The scan's clipping is a per-gathering accident of how tightly that copy was held open, not an arithmetic property of the column number. scan_defect in data/plate-reads.json has been amended to say so.
⭐ Operationally: never decline a reading on the strength of the column number. Render the page. It costs one pdftoppm call, and on this range it turned a policy-declined column into two shipped markers and one withdrawn accusation.
§2 · deeidam @0853B — NOT MIGNE'S. CORPUS CORPORUM'S. NO [sic:] OWED.
Our Latin at 0853B prints
« merito » (etsi non videatur hominibus) « deeidam ab inimicis meis inanis, »
a non-word, with the correct form Decidam printing eleven words later in the same paragraph (« Decidam merito ab inimicis. »). Every internal signal said "carried type, fire a [sic:]" — and CLAUDE.md says in as many words that internal corroboration proves an error exists, never whose it is.
The plate settles it: Migne prints de- at the end of one line and cidam at the head of the next. The word is decidam, correctly set, hyphenated across a line break. Corpus Corporum's OCR fused the break and misread c as e.
- English: rendered normally — « let me deservedly fall away from my enemies. » — because that is what Migne prints.
- No
[sic:]. Firing one would have accused Migne of his transcriber's defect, exactly as the already-repairedPSAMUS CXXIVwould have. - ⭐ Recommended: a
data/tei-patches/8967.jsonentry,deeidam→decidamat 0853B, on the same footing as thePSALMUS CXXIVrepair. Left for the merge — I did not write the patch file, since a patch changes the Latin column for every downstream stint.
⚑ This is the single most instructive site in my range: it is the shape 9004 measured (confident our-file/Migne calls running 5 right and 9 wrong), and it went the way only the plate could decide.
§3 · MARKERS FIRED — 10, ALL ON COLUMNS I READ AT THE PLATE TODAY
node scripts/plate-gate.mjs 8967 returns ✓ (read: read) on all ten. Unread markers added by this stint: ZERO — the ratchet is not touched.
The one [sic:]
@0852C — [sic: poenitentes avertitur] · Narrat aerumnas quibus poenitentes avertitur. A plural subject against a singular passive verb. Plate-verified at 600 dpi (page 431, crop): Migne prints pœnitentes avertitur. This is Pattern 12's second test — English "penitents are turned away" is number-neutral in a way the Latin is not, so rendering it silently repairs the disagreement and leaves the reader nothing to see; it is the signa … ardeat case (11632 @0304A) exactly.
Per 7a⁗ the marker does not stand alone: the sense is rendered in plain words beside it ("the hardships by which penitents are turned away [sic: …]"), so stripping the marker leaves a clause with its verb intact.
⚠ The alternative parse, recorded because it is not absurd: if poenitentes were read as a singular participle agreeing with an unexpressed subject, the clause construes. It cannot be: the form is plural and Latin does not take an accusative object under a passive. But a reader who wants to re-adjudicate has the printed reading and this note.
The nine [var:] — Migne's scripture against the Clementine
Every one is plate-confirmed as Migne's own text, not our source's, and every one is cited from sources/vulgate/clementine-flat.txt.
| col | Migne prints | Clementine | why it is material |
|---|---|---|---|
| 0850D/0851A | sed tolletur impius, ne videat gloriam Dei (Isa. XXVI) | Is 26:10 et non videbit gloriam Domini | the Vulgate has nothing answering to tolletur impius; the gloss's argument is the removal (quia tunc non habitabit) |
| 0852A | Adhuc te loquente dicam, ecce adsum (Isa. LXV) | Is 65:24 adhuc illis loquentibus, ego audiam | 2nd person singular against 3rd plural, and ecce adsum is Is 58:9's clause, not Is 65's |
| 0853C | Melior est qui vincit iram, quam qui cepit civitatem (Prov. XVI) | Prv 16:32 Melior est patiens viro forti, et qui dominatur animo suo expugnatore urbium | an entirely different rendering of the verse (LXX-shaped) |
| 0853D | Terra es, et in terram reverteris (Gen. III) | Gn 3:19 pulvis es et in pulverem reverteris | ⭐ the gloss argues from the divergent word: quia terra, id est, terrena est. On the Vulgate's pulvis the argument does not run |
| 0856B | Stulta mundi elegit Deus ut confundat fortia (I Cor. I) | 1Cor 1:27 quae stulta sunt mundi elegit Deus, ut confundat sapientes | fortia belongs to the second clause, infirma mundi elegit Deus; Migne welds the halves |
| 0857A | In finem pro occultis filiis | Ps 9:1 pro occultis filii | ⭐ see §4 — Migne's plural cannot bear the gloss's own next words |
| 0857B | Ite, maledicti (Matth. XXV) | Mt 25:41 Discedite a me maledicti | "Go" for "Depart from me": the whole quoted tag is the divergence |
| 0858B | requiring ultione sanguinem eorum | Ps 9:13 quoniam requirens sanguinem eorum | ultione is an interpolation, and the gloss builds on it (in judicio, ubi … poena occisori erit) |
| 0858C | Vidua, quae vivit in deliciis, mortua est (I Tim. V) | 1Tim 5:6 Nam quae in deliciis est, vivens mortua est | the Vulgate's paradox — living, she is dead — is what the gloss is expounding (mors jam est ipsa laetitia), and Migne's rewriting loses it |
§4 · pro occultis filiis @0857A — read at 600 dpi, and the gloss is the witness
Migne heads Psalm IX « In finem pro occultis filiis. » and glosses it at once: « Nec additur cujus, per excellentiam est unigenitus Dei » — nor is it added whose. The question "whose?" can only be asked of a genitive singular, which is what the Clementine prints (pro occultis filii). Migne's filiis is a dative/ablative plural and cannot govern cujus.
I re-cropped the line at 600 dpi (page 434) before touching it, precisely because a terminal -s is the class of reading a 200-dpi render gets wrong. The plate is unambiguous: filiis.
- English renders Migne: « Unto the end, for the hidden sons. » Pattern 7, no exception.
[var:]beside it, naming the Clementine's filii and saying that this is what the gloss's cujus presupposes.- Not a
[cj:]. The reading is not a conjecture question: nothing is defective, and a second witness (the Clementine) settles what the received text says. Pattern 14 is the marker that carries a divergence between Migne's scripture and the received text, and this is exactly that.
§5 · THE RULED AXES — what my range did with each
In finem→ "Unto the end." Three occurrences: 0853A (In finem, psalmus), 0855C (In finem, pro torcularibus), 0857A (In finem pro occultis filiis). All rendered "Unto the end." No choirmaster anywhere.Diapsalma. ⚠ My range does NOT contain the explaining passage — the launch message says it does, butDiapsalma secundum Hieronymum semper, Hebraei Sela…stands at 0849B, in chunk 0004, the previous stint's range. What my range has is one genitive at 0858D–0859A: Hic est canticum diapsalmatis, rendered "Here is the canticle of the diapsalma" — the term kept, unanglicized, italic, per the ruling. Note that Migne does not italicize it here, so this is one italic span in the English that has no counterpart in the Latin; that is the register rule for untranslated technical Latin, and it is deliberate.usque ad. All 12 italic occurrences → "as far as", the splice formula, unvaried. ⚑ Three UNITALICISED occurrences are NOT the formula and were rendered by sense, per the axis's own exception clause: 0855D–0856A Scripturae usque ad infantes ductae ("led down as far as babes") and per eas usque ad robur nutriuntur ("nourished unto strength") — ordinary extent; and 0857C et qui modo occulte, usque ad quem aliquid valent hostis frameae — a relative ("up to which"), which "as far as" cannot render at all. A rawusque adgrep over my chunks returns 15, not 12; that is the instrument, not drift.gentes. One occurrence, 0850B, inside Ps 2:8 dabo tibi gentes, haereditatem tuam, rendered "Gentiles." The frame is the Judaei/gentes typology in its sharpest form — the Church against the aemula who is shut out of the inheritance — not the generic in omnes gentes.turba/multitudo/daemonium/mysterium/sacramentum.daemonesat 0857C → demons;diabolusthroughout → devil;mysteriumat 0853A (futura mysteria, Mysterium incarnationis) → mystery. No turba, no multitudo, no sacramentum, no natio, no gentilis in my range.- Sigla. 111
[n: …]across the five chunks, passed through verbatim. No(ID.)or(Ibid.)expanded — 32(Ibid.)and 0(ID.)stand exactly as printed. Migne's(CAS.)at 0852D and(CASS.)elsewhere are both reproduced as printed; they are not normalized to one another. - Numerals in heads.
PSALMUS V.→PSALM V., numerals kept, after 9003's shippedIN PSALMUM VI.→ON PSALM VI. - Psalm numbering. Vulgate throughout, nothing converted. My range ends at 0859A, one column before the double-numbered head at 0859B; the
⚑ Ps 9:2xflags of §1 of the launch brief fall in chunk 0010, not here. - Pattern 17. One live site: 0858B imo non est oblitus ut putatis → "as you think" (2nd person plural). Also 0850D non dicit intendite, sed intende — the gloss's whole point is the number, so it is rendered "he does not say attend ye, but attend."
§6 · CRUCES — passages rendered literally, with the difficulty named
- @0850C — contra timorem mortis, periculi, utilitatis. The three fears of adversity are given as death, peril and utility, which is not a fear. Rendered as printed, "against the fear of death, of peril, of profit." Probably inutilitatis, or utilitatis in the sense of the loss of one's goods, but nothing on the plate decides it and the conjecture would be ours. Plate-confirmed (page 430) — Migne prints utilitatis. No marker: it is a real word in a real slot, and the English does not assert something false, only something odd.
- @0850C — the closing sentence of the argumentum has no main verb. Ad postremum commemorans praemia beatorum, ut … converteret, et … concitarent. Rendered as the fragment it is. Note also the number: poena converteret (sg.) beside praemia concitarent (pl.), which is correct Latin, each verb with its own subject.
- @0850C — Trina oratio, verba, oris psalmodiam, clamorem, cordis affectum … Ecce ter de eodem. The gloss announces three and names two (words = the mouth's psalmody; a cry = the heart's affection); the third is intellige in the psalm verse, which the gloss does not repeat. Rendered as printed. No emendation.
- @0852B — cujus comparatione coactus est confiteri mala sua. The unexpressed subject is the rich man (Dives), not Lazarus: he is the subject of Confessus est dives two clauses back, and it is he who is compelled. ab his praemoneri — "forewarned by these" — is genuinely ambiguous between Moses-and-the-prophets (Lc 16:29) and Lazarus; rendered with the ambiguity kept, since English can keep it here.
- @0854B — Superbus diabolus, quia per iniquitatem vincitur, subdit: An anacoluthon: the participial clause has no finite verb of its own and subdit has no expressed subject. Rendered flat — "The devil is proud, because he is overcome by iniquity, he adds:" — with the roughness visible.
- @0854A — Et quia ablatio hominis, quia poena est diabolo, dicitur ira Dei contra eum. A second anacoluthon (Et quia … dicitur, with no apodosis). Rendered as printed.
- @0854C — et earum fines dirigit justum, et non solum dirigit, sed adjuvat justum. justum is accusative where the sense wants justi ("their ends, the just man's"). Rendered literally, "directs also their ends, the just man". ⛔ Declined for
[cj:]: the English is awkward, not false — the sentence still asserts that God directs and helps the just man, which is what the gloss asserts, so Pattern 18's bar ("the English then asserts something the author did not") is not met. - @0854D/0855A — « Nunquid irascitur. » and « Nunquid adducit iram per singulos dies. » Both are questions in the psalm and both are closed with a full stop on the plate (page 432, verified). Pattern 8: the marks ride as printed, so the English reads « Is he angry. » and « Doth he bring anger every day. » Not 8b — nothing is being recast, and English is not refusing the mark; Migne simply did not print one. Both chunks 0007 and 0009 carry zero question marks in Latin and zero in English.
- @0855A — Alia littera: « Nunquid adducit iram per singulos dies. » and @0855A Alia littera: Frameam suam splendificavit. ⛔ No
[var:]on either. Migne flags these himself as variant readings; marking our own would tell the reader twice and blur whose observation it is (the ( sic ) principle of Pattern 12). - @0855A — nec impar dictum est hoc, quia arcum suum tetendit, » — a closing guillemet with no opener. Reproduced. Guillemets across my range are 1:1 with the Latin and deliberately unbalanced in five places (0005 23«/22», 0006 24«/23», 0007 62«/61», 0008 29«/26», 0009 41«/36»), all plate-confirmed: Migne opens quotations he never closes (« Ut scuto., « In inferno., « Frameae., « Conculcet in terra vitam meam,, « Stulta mundi « elegit Deus). Do not balance these.
- @0855C — superdescendent (0007, VERS. 17). A rare compound, not a defect; rendered "they shall come down upon". detrudent has an unexpressed object, supplied as "it" (the caput/anima of the same clause).
- @0856A — cum tamen et illi fidem, et hi sapientiam veram impugnent. The pronoun binding is the trap: illi = the heretics (defenders of the faith), hi = the philosophers (defenders of wisdom), so each impugns the thing he defends. Rendered "the former … the latter" to fix the binding in English, which has no ille/hic proximity contrast.
- @0856B — hoc bene convenit primitivis. primitivis is substantival with no noun; rendered "those of the first age" rather than supplying "[Christians]" in brackets, since the gloss's subject (the apostles seen in posteris) makes the reference plain.
- @0852D — CC drops a comma the plate prints (Dat exemplum fideliter, orantes audiri, page 431). Noted, not marked: the Latin column is our source's,
[sic:]/[var:]do not reach punctuation, and the sense is unaffected either way ("faithfully" attaching to orantes or to audiri). Rendered on the sense our Latin gives: "those who pray faithfully are heard." - Migne's own verse numbering skips, reproduced as printed, never reordered: chunk 0006 runs VERS. 3 → VERS. 5 (no 4); chunk 0007 runs VERS. 8 → VERS. 10 and VERS. 13 → VERS. 15; chunk 0008 runs VERS. 5 → VERS. 8; chunk 0009 runs VERS. 2 → VERS. 4 and VERS. 7 → VERS. 10. All plate-confirmed on pages 431–434.
§7 · DECLINED — divergences and defect candidates I checked and did NOT mark
⭐ On Luke, 12 of 17 corrections came out of declined lists. This is the list.
Scripture that AGREES with the Clementine — checked, verbatim, clean
| col | quotation | verdict |
|---|---|---|
| 0850B | Postula a me, et dabo tibi gentes, haereditatem tuam | = Ps 2:8 exactly (Migne's comma after gentes aside) |
| 0853D | Qui gloriatur, in Domino glorietur | = 1Cor 1:31 exactly |
| 0856B | qui non honorificat Filium, non honorificat Patrem | = Jo 5:23 exactly (fragment) |
| 0856C | Lunam et stellas quae tu fundasti | = Ps 8:4 exactly |
| 0857A | Posuerunt in coelum os suum | = Ps 72:9 (only coelum/caelum) |
| 0855A | arcum suum tetendit | = Ps 7:13 exactly |
| 0857D | lemma « Quoniam requirens. » | = Ps 9:13 opening exactly (the divergence is ultione, downstream — see §3) |
| 0858D | lemmata « Exsultabo », « In laqueo » | = Ps 9:16 exactly |
| 0859A | Cognoscetur (Ps 9:17), Convertantur peccatores / In infernum (Ps 9:18), Patientia (Ps 9:19), Sciant (Ps 9:21) | all exact; the brief's ✓ on Convertantur peccatores at Ps 9:18 is confirmed, and it is its own psalm's verse, not a ⚑ |
Divergences that are REAL and were judged not material — logged, not marked
- 0852A, 1Pt 4:18 — Migne « Si justus vix salvabitur, impius ubi apparebit? »; Clementine et si justus vix salvabitur, impius et peccator ubi parebunt? An omitted et peccator and a singular for a plural. The proposition is unchanged and the gloss uses only the justus/impius contrast. Declined — Pattern 14's bar is "changes the sense."
- 0853D, Gn 3:14 — « Terram manducabis » for the Clementine's terram comedes. A synonym; the gloss turns on terram, which both texts have. Declined.
- 0854A, Ps 7:2 — « O Domine Deus meus, etc. » for Domine Deus meus, in te speravi. A supplied vocative O on an abridged citation. Declined.
- 0854D, Ps 6:3 — « Infirmus sum, sana me, Domine » for Miserere mei, Domine, quoniam infirmus sum; sana me, Domine. An abridgment stitched from the verse's own words, and one this very commentary glossed forty columns earlier at Ps VI. Declined.
- 0856A, 1Pt 2:2 — « quasi modo geniti » for sicut modo geniti infantes. Synonym plus abridgment. Declined.
- 0856B, Is 40:12 — « Qui appendit tribus digitis molem terrae » for quis appendit…. A relative for an interrogative in a phrase quoted as a description. Declined.
- 0857A, Is 14:13–14 — « Ascendam in coelum et exaltabo solium meum, et ero similis Altissimo » for In caelum conscendam, super astra Dei exaltabo solium meum … similis ero Altissimo. ascendam/conscendam is a near-synonym, the missing super astra Dei is the recension's ordinary abridging, and the word order is the only other difference. Declined — this is the one I came closest to firing, and the reason I did not is that no clause of the gloss rests on any of the three differences.
- 0858A, Ps 9:11 — lemma « Quoniam non reliquisti » for quoniam non dereliquisti. Simplex for compound, identical sense. Declined.
Defect candidates that were NOT defects
deeidam@0853B — plate says de-cidam. Withdrawn before it was ever fired. See §2.praedicaris@0856A (et est, non solum a perfectis, sed et ab insipientibus praedicaris) — a second-person passive dropped into a third-person context. It is correct Latin in a change of address: the gloss turns to God, as thou hast perfected praise four lines later confirms. Not a defect; rendered "thou art proclaimed."quibusdam quies, quibusdam tormentum@0852C — verbless, but a normal Latin ellipsis. No marker.Arguuntur in judicio, qui sine fundamento.@0851D–0852A — verbless relative clause, the same ellipsis. No marker.superdescendent@0855C — a rare compound, not a non-word; Pattern 9. No marker.- The
[Gen. III]/(Gen. III)bracket difference @0853D — the plate sets square brackets where our TEI gives[n: (Gen. III)]. That is the chunker's note form, not a textual matter. Noted only.
§8 · CHECKS RUN, WITH RESULTS
- Column anchors: 36 across the five chunks, verbatim, in order, and each checked against the word it stands beside in the Latin (2b), not merely for presence. Two are deliberately mid-construction, matching Migne:
(Isa. [0851A] XXVI)sits inside an italic span, and[0855D],[0851D],[0852B],[0853D],[0857C]open a line immediately beforeVERS., exactly as the Latin sets them. [n: …]notes: 111, identical strings in identical order. No[nt:]conversions — every note in my range is a bare attribution siglum or a scripture locator, none is editorial prose (Pattern 15).- Guillemets: exact 1:1 per chunk, unbalanced where Migne is unbalanced. See §6.10.
- Question marks: 0/0, 2/2, 0/0, 1/1, 0/0. Exact.
- Punctuation by band (Test 3): semicolons now exact in all five chunks (1/1, 2/2, 12/12, 6/6, 3/3) — my first draft ran 10 against Migne's 1 in chunk 0005, which is precisely the comma→semicolon drift the test exists to catch, and it was corrected rather than swept. Colons run 31/30, 28/28, 56/56, 30/29, 47/47 after markers are stripped.
- Word ratios: 1.46 · 1.47 · 1.44 · 1.45 · 1.43. Tight, and within the band on every chunk.
- Em-dashes: zero in all five chunks.
- 7a⁗ strip test: every marker deleted and the English read back. Nothing stranded; the one
[sic:]leaves a clause with its verb, its subject and its sense. - Test 2 / 2a (negation attachment): all 88 printed negation words walked one at a time, each mapped to the single Latin word it attaches to. Five sites carry the 2a trigger shape (a negative on a verb with a correlative adjacent) and all five were resolved from the structure, not from what reads well: 0851D non vult a mortuis, sed a vivis rogari · 0854C non delectari in carne, sed in Domino · 0855A non in ipso est ira, sed in angelis irae · 0855A non propter justitiam qua non gaudent, sed propter malitiam (two negatives, two different hosts, one sentence) · 0856A qui nondum escam, sed lac sumere possunt.
- Test 5 (does it ASSERT what he asserts?): each finished paragraph read back against the Latin. The two that changed as a result are §6.12 (the illi/hi binding, which had been reversed in draft) and §6.4 (the subject of coactus est).
node scripts/plate-gate.mjs 8967— ✓ on all ten of my markers.node scripts/verify-english.mjs 8967— zero errors and zero warnings on 0005–0009 (the run fails only on chunks other stints have not yet written).node scripts/scan-raw-markers.mjs— clean.
§9 · FOR THE MERGE
data/plate-reads.jsonwas edited by this stint — five new reads (cols 0851A–0859D) and an amendment toscan_defect. The amendment is a substantive correction to a rule the launch brief relies on; it should be reflected in the launch brief's §3 before the remaining stints run, or they will keep declining markers on 1 (mod 4) columns that are in fact perfectly legible.deeidam@0853B wants a TEI patch (data/tei-patches/8967.json, → decidam). Not written here because it changes the Latin column for everyone.- The lemma brief's band labels are wrong for at least chunks 0005 and 0009 (§0). The counts are right. If another stint reports "my spans are not at the bands the brief gives," that is this, not a mis-split.
(CAS.)@0852D vs(CASS.)elsewhere is Migne's own inconsistency, plate-confirmed, and is passed through. If a later pass normalizes sigla across the work, this is one of the sites.
§E.0010 — stint file cruces-0010.md, verbatim
Stint 5 of Band A. Psalms X (Hebrew division) · X · XI · XII · XIII · XIV · XV · XVI · XVII.
0. Span reconciliation — REQUIRED CHECK, and it AGREES
data/briefs/8967-lemmata-0010.txt declares 307 spans for chunks 0010–0014. Counted mechanically in my own Latin (re.findall(r'\[^]+\*') over the body of each chunk):
| chunk | spans |
|---|---|
| 0010 | 69 |
| 0011 | 68 |
| 0012 | 44 |
| 0013 | 32 |
| 0014 | 94 |
| total | 307 |
307 = 307. No discrepancy. The brief's first and last entries ([0859A] Secundum Hebraeos. and [0870B] Magnificans, salutes.) are also the first and last spans of my Latin, so the split is correct at both ends, not merely in total.
⚑ Re-checked against the corrected brief issued mid-stint (stale column labels repaired): the header still declares 307 and the file still carries 307 [0…] rows. Membership is by chunk, not by band, so nothing moved. The count stands.
English span counts run higher by exactly the italics inside our own markers: 0010 +4 (three [var:]), 0011 +3 (one [var:], one [cj:]), 0012 +0, 0013 +0, 0014 +2 (one [var:]). Every italic span of the Latin has an italic span in the English at the same place.
1. The two heads both numbered X — NOT a defect, and nothing was touched
Chunk 0010 carries ## PSALMUS X.-- Secundum Hebraeos. (0859B–0861A) and then ## PSALMUS X. (0861A–0861D). Both are reproduced as Migne prints them, in his order, with his VERS. numbers restarted at 1 in the second. Read at the plate (p. 435, cols 859/860 and p. 436, col 861): the heads print exactly so. No renumbering, no merge, no marker.
The nine ⚑ MATCHES ONLY ELSEWHERE — Ps 9:2x flags in my brief (0859B–0860D) are the checker reporting correctly — the Hebrew division is the tail of Clementine Ps 9 — and no [var:] was fired on any of them. Collated individually against sources/vulgate/clementine-flat.txt:
Ut quid. = Ps 9:22 · Dum superbit. = 9:23 · Incenditur pauper…cogitant. = 9:23 · Quoniam laudatur. = 9:24 · Irae suae. = 9:25 · Inquinatae. / In omni tempore. / omnium inimicorum suorum dominabitur. = 9:26 · Dixit, / sine malo, / Non movebor. = 9:27 · cujus maledictione os plenum, / sub lingua ejus, = 9:28 · In occultis, = 9:29 · Oculi ejus in pauperem, / Leo in spelunca, = 9:30 · Inclinabit. = 9:31 · In finem. = 9:32 (ne videat in finem) · Contere brachium. / Quaeretur. = 9:36 · Dominus regnabit…saeculi. = 9:37 · desiderium pauperum, / Praeparationem cordis. = 9:38 · Judicare pupillo et humili, = 9:39. All agree with the Clementine word for word except the three sites marked in §2.
Vulgate numbering governs from PSALMUS XI onward and it was checked, not assumed: every lemma of Psalms XI–XVII in chunks 0011–0014 resolves to Clementine Ps 11–17 at the same number (spot-verified across all 24 VERS. heads in the range). Nothing is offset.
2. Markers fired — five, every one on a column read at the plate this session
Plate: on-disk raw/scans/pl113/patrologiaecurs04migngoog.pdf, PDF page = (column + 11) / 2, re-calibrated against the printed corner numbers on every page opened (p. 435 = 859/860, 436 = 861/862, 437 = 863/864, 438 = 865/866, 439 = 867/868, 440 = 869/870). All six pages of my range were read; all six are recorded in data/plate-reads.json. plate-gate.mjs 8967 passes every marker below.
| col | marker | why it is licensed |
|---|---|---|
| 0860B | [var: Vulg. Ps 9:33 exaltetur manus tua ; ne obliviscaris pauperum…] | Migne prints Exsurge, Domine Deus, et exaltetur manus, ut obliviscaris — read at 400 dpi. A polarity flip: the Clementine's ne obliviscaris ("forget not") becomes a purpose clause ("that thou mayest forget"), in a lemma whose own gloss is Precatur judicium. Material by any test. |
| 0860B | [var: Vulg. Ps 9:34 Propter quid…] | Migne's lemma reads Propter quod irritavit impius Deum — but his own gloss four words later quotes propter quid? and expounds it as a question. The interrogative the commentary argues from is not the word the lemma prints. This is the [var:] test exactly: the gloss argues from the word. |
| 0860B | [var: Vulg. Ps 9:34 dixit enim in corde suo, with no Deus…] | Migne prints Dixit enim Deus in corde suo. The Clementine has no subject there, and the subject the psalm supplies is the impius of the preceding clause. Inserting Deus changes who speaks — and Augustine's gloss (Sensus iste pronuntiationem quaerit) is precisely about how the sentence is to be delivered. Material. |
| 0862D | [var: Vulg. Prov 20:26 Dissipat impios rex sapiens, et incurvat super eos fornicem…] | Migne prints ventilator est impiorum rex sapiens, et immittit illis rotam malorum under his own reference (Prov. II). Read at the plate on p. 436. This is not a variant of the Clementine's wording, it is a different Latin version of the verse (a winnower and a wheel against a scatterer and an arch), and the gloss builds on the wheel — id est, ambitum volubilium. |
| 0868A | [var: Vulg. Ps 17:11 volavit super pennas ventorum…] | Migne prints Volavit super pennas vento — singular — and then glosses it Ventos, quibus nihil est velocius — plural. Read on p. 439. The gloss expounds a word the lemma no longer prints. |
And one Pattern-18 conjecture note:
| col | marker | why |
|---|---|---|
| 0862B | [cj: Germinatio; read Geminatio, "the doubling"] | Ps 11:3 prints in corde et corde; Migne's gloss is Germinatio, duplex cor significat — and germinatio ("a budding") signifies nothing of the kind, while geminatio ("a doubling") is the whole point of the repeated corde. Read at 500 dpi: Migne prints Germinatio, so this is his and not CC's, which is why it takes [cj:] and not a source patch. Pattern 18's bar is met — the faithful English ("germination signifies a double heart") asserts something the author did not. The gloss is additive: the printed word keeps its English. |
3. ⛔ SIX CORPUS CORPORUM DEPARTURES FROM THE PLATE — patch candidates, NOT [sic:]
Every one was found by reading the plate, none is detectable from the Latin alone, and none takes a marker, because a [sic:] would accuse Migne of his transcriber's defect. This is ~1 per page, against the standing 9003 estimate of ~3 per page, so the class is behaving as documented.
- 0862C — a compound siglum split. The plate sets
(AUG., CASS.). Our TEI gives bare running textAUG.,followed by a separate[n: (CASS.)]. The English reproduces the twin. - 0863D — a siglum unencoded and its point dropped. The plate sets
(CASS.); our TEI gives bare text(CASS)— no[n: ]wrapper, no full stop. English reproduces the twin. - 0864A — a dropped letter inside a siglum. The plate sets
(CASS.); our TEI gives[n: (CAS.)]. ⚠ Do not sweep this: Migne's own(CAS.)at 0863A and 0863C was read at 400 dpi and IS his. Two forms, one of them ours, and only the plate tells them apart. - 0866D — an inserted word. The plate reads
non humiles, adipem, id est, carnalem sensum retinuerunt; our TEI insertsvelbeforeadipem(read twice at 400 dpi). This is the only one of the six that touches the sense. - 0870A — a full stop softened to a comma. The plate reads
et dilatatio. et confirmatio(500 dpi); our TEI giveset dilatatio, et confirmatio. Pattern 8 class. - 0870C — an inserted comma. The plate reads
Magnificans salutes.; our TEI givesMagnificans, salutes..
Plus a seventh which is not a word at all: 0867C captu+m. The plate reads captum cleanly (p. 439); the + is the only one in this work's TEI. The English renders Migne's word ("a man taken captive") and fires no marker — carrying an unrenderable CC artifact into the English under a [sic:] would blame Migne for it.
⛔ THE POLICY I APPLIED, stated so the merge can undo it in one pass. For (1)–(6) — all renderable — the English follows the Latin twin as it currently stands, so the parallel columns agree and a blind reader does not report a dropped or invented word that is really a pending patch. Only for captu+m, which cannot be rendered at all, does the English follow the plate instead. If data/tei-patches/8967.json is extended and the work re-chunked, item 4 requires one English edit (0013.md: drop the "or" before "the fat") and items 5–6 require none, being punctuation of the Latin only. I did not patch or re-chunk: seven other stints are writing chunks of this work in parallel and chunk-work.mjs rewrites every chunk from TEI.
4. Divergences from the Clementine CHECKED AND DECLINED — the declined list
Per 7a″ these are the deliverable as much as the fired markers. Each was collated against sources/vulgate/clementine-flat.txt and each is Migne's, confirmed at the plate.
Declined as immaterial (sense unchanged):
- 0861B
quia quae perfecisti destruxerunt— Ps 10:4 has quoniam. A connective swapped for its synonym inside the gloss's own re-quotation; the lemma above it prints Quoniam correctly. No sense turns on it. - 0863A
Cupio dissolvi et esse cum Christo(Phil. I.) — Phil 1:23 reads desiderium habens dissolvi. Same sense; the cupio form is the ordinary patristic citation of this verse. - 0863B
Est peccatum ad mortem, non pro eo dico ut quis oret— 1 Jo 5:16 reads non pro illo dico ut roget quis. Pronoun and word order only; the negation and the sense are intact. - 0863D
Veniet ex Sion qui avertit captivitatem, vel impietatem a Jacob— Rom 11:26 (citing Is 59:20) reads qui eripiat, et avertat impietatem a Jacob. ⚑ Declined for a positive reason, not a weak one: Migne's own vel shows the Glossa is offering the two readings itself. A[var:]would tell the reader what the text already tells him, in our voice. - 0864C
Nec fecit proximo malum— Ps 14:3 has proximo suo malum. A possessive dropped in a lemma that is clipped anyway. - 0864C
Vade retro, Satanas— no Clementine verse reads this; Mt 16:23 has Vade post me Satana, Mk 8:33 Vade retro me Satana. This is the proverbial form, adduced by the gloss as a commonplace ("ut cum dixit"), not quoted as a proof-text. Crux, no marker. - 0864C
timentes Dominum glorificat— Ps 14:4 has timentes autem Dominum glorificat. Clipped, not divergent. - 0864D
Jam non dicam vos servos, sed amicos— Jo 15:15 reads Jam non dicam vos servos … vos autem dixi amicos. A compression of two clauses into one, with no change of assertion. - 0865A
Sanctis qui sunt in terra— Ps 15:3 has in terra ejus. Clipped. - 0868D
Ecce praevenerunt— Ps 17:19 has praevenerunt me in die afflictionis meae; the Ecce is the gloss's own pointing word, not a variant reading. - 0869A/B
tu, Domine, populum humilem salvum facies— Ps 17:28 has no vocative. An added Domine in a formula the gloss quotes three times; nothing turns on it. - 0869A
Habemus thesaurum istum in vasis fictilibus— 2 Cor 4:7 has Habemus autem. A connective dropped at the head of a quotation. - 0870B
Disperdidisti, Pater,— Ps 17:41 has odientes me disperdidisti and no vocative; the gloss introduces it as Supra ait and supplies the addressee its own argument needs (eadem operatio Patris et Filii). The gloss's construction, not a divergent text. - 0870B
Et exaltetur Deus salutis— Ps 17:47 has Deus salutis meae. Clipped, and the gloss immediately restores de Deo salutis meae. - 0868A
Virga furoris mei Assur, ipse vero non cognovit— a conflation of Is 10:5 and 10:7, freely quoted; neither half is being adduced as a text with a reading at stake. - 0868A
Clarificavi, et iterum clarificabo— Jo 12:28 exactly, with the Clementine's leading Et dropped.
Declined suspicions that the plate REFUTED (recorded because a checked negative is worth as much as a finding):
- 0866B doubled scilicet —
Scilicet opera hominum: quas scilicet merentur opera hominumreads like a dittography and is not: the plate prints it exactly so (p. 438). Rendered as printed, no[d:]. - 0869A
sordescat— checked at the coordinator's request, since the same form was a confirmed CC normalisation elsewhere in this work (the other site's plate reads sordescet). Here the plate agrees with our TEI: p. 440, read at 500 dpi, printsqui in sordibus est, sordescat adhuc. No patch is owed at this site, and the other site's finding must not be generalised to it. - 0867B
iustorumfor justorum — our TEI's only i/j outlier in the range; the plate prints justorum. An orthographic normalisation of no consequence, exempt under Pattern 9. Recorded only so the next reader does not spend the page-fetch I already spent.
Declined because they are Migne's own apparatus, not ours to mark:
- 0868A
aqua satians [ alias saliens]— Migne's own inline variant note, in his brackets, with his italic alias. Carried through verbatim, the reading untranslated (a reading needs no English), exactly as a numbered[cn:]would be. Not marked as ours. - 0868A
[n: (Matth. II)]— the reference is attached to non per speciem, which is 2 Cor 5:7, and it does not fit; the next paragraph cites(II Cor. V)correctly. Migne's citation, passed through verbatim under convention 4. Not expanded, not corrected — a reference correction iscitation-corrections.json's business, not a translator's. (ID.)/(Ibid.)— 20 of them in the range, none expanded.
5. Cruces in the gloss prose
- 0859D
vel, Deus eum, ut hic ulciscatur(Ps 9:25). The verb is elided; it must be carried over from non quaeret three clauses earlier, so the English reads "God will not seek him out." The negation therefore governs a verb the Latin does not print at this point. Rendered with the negation, per 7a; the alternative (an affirmative "God seeks him out to avenge himself here") would be exactly the silent repair 7a forbids. - 0859D
id est levior, lingua ejus, quae intus nocet: illa, scilicet poena extra.The comparative has no quam, and illa has no clear antecedent. Rendered as closely as the words allow ("that is, it is the lighter; his tongue, which harms within: that other, namely, is the punishment without"). Not smoothed; not marked — the words are all real and in their slots. - 0861C
usque ad qui tunc dicit sancta sacramenta, cum per sanctos dentur.The abridgment's resumption tail opens with a relative whose antecedent was cut away with the omitted text. Parsed as ordinary prose per the brief's warning and rendered "he then calls the sacraments holy"; the qui is left to do the work of a demonstrative, which is what the splice made of it. - 0866B
Quo sui judicatus videatur prodisse(Ps 16:2). sui is doing something the syntax does not license cleanly. Rendered "whereby he who was judged may be seen to have come forth as his own." Real words in real slots; crux, no marker. - 0866C
Mira, sunt quae nova sunt: haec sunt quae in carne cessit mirantibus Judaeis.cessit is intransitive and takes no quae. Rendered literally ("which he yielded in the flesh"). Crux, no marker. - 0867B
et hoc qui praeoccupavit mortalitas et possibilitas(Ps 17:8 gloss). qui does not agree with anything; the sentence does not construe. Rendered as closely as the printed words allow, "and this, which mortality and possibility forestalled." No conjecture is offered, because two are available (quod, quae) and nothing in the passage chooses between them. - 0868A
Dedit vocem: ut non dixit: Hic est Filius meus dilectus— flagged, examined, and found sound: at Jo 12:28 the voice from heaven did not say what it said at the Transfiguration, and Cassiodorus is drawing exactly that contrast. The plate prints non (p. 439) and the English carries it. Recorded here because it reads at first like a dropped cum and a later reader will stop on it.
6. Unexpressed subjects supplied, with the authority for each
Per the brief's dominant-defect warning, every pronoun the Latin does not print:
- 0859B Dum superbit. → "While the wicked man is proud." Subject impius from Ps 9:23, the verse the lemma clips.
- 0859B Quoniam laudatur. → "For the sinner is praised." Subject peccator from Ps 9:24.
- 0859C Inquinatae. → "Defiled." Its noun is viae illius (Ps 9:26), and the gloss's own next clause supplies it (et ideo viae ejus … sordent), so the English keeps the participle bare and lets the gloss govern.
- 0860C Vides enim quoniam tu laborem et dolorem. → "…that thou considerest labour and sorrow." The verb consideras is the next word of Ps 9:35 and the lemma stops before it; English cannot leave the accusatives without a verb. Expanded per convention 3.
- 0861B Quoniam quae perfecisti. → "For the things which thou hast perfected." Here I did not supply destruxerunt, because the same paragraph re-quotes the fuller quia quae perfecisti destruxerunt and expanding both would erase Migne's clipping.
- 0863D Dominum non, → "The Lord they have not called upon." invocaverunt from Ps 13:5.
- 0864D Et munera super innocentem. → "And gifts against the innocent." ⚑ I did NOT expand to the Vulgate's non accepit. Convention 3 would license it, but 7a forbids a negation in the English that the Latin does not print, and 7a wins: the gloss's own sed non contra innocentes carries the sense two clauses later.
- 0867B Frameam. → "The sword," not "thy sword": Ps 16:13 has frameam tuam, and the gloss makes the sword the soul, not God's.
- 0867A
Populus catulus leonis— "the people is the young of a lion." The predicate is unexpressed; Populus is the printed subject. - 0865B
sed ab ipso habet omnia— subject of habet supplied as Christ the man, not God: "but Christ the man has all things from him." Added by the polarity pass (chunks 0010–0019). The English had carried Deus forward as the subject ("but has all things from him"), which made the sentence say God receives all things from a creature — the opposite of the anti-Pelagian conclusion the same sentence draws (destruitur arrogantia hominum et haeresis Pelagianorum). §7a mechanism 5 (agency mis-bound); the noun is the sentence's own.
7. Vocabulary axes — every decision in the range
In finem→ "Unto the end" at 0860A, 0861A, 0862D. ⚑ The 0860A occurrence glosses Ps 9:32's ne videat in finem, so the rendering is not merely the titulus convention here — the gloss (Negant videre Deum) argues from the end of seeing. No exception taken.Diapsalmaat 0859B: unanglicized, and set roman, because Migne sets it roman there (p. 435). The launch brief says "italic as Migne sets it"; he does not, so neither do we, and the span counts stay 1:1.gentesfamily, all seven occurrences decided from the context, not by rule:- 0859D
Omnes gentes occupabo(Antichrist speaking) → nations — generic. - 0860D
ab hoc regno peribitis gentes→ nations — the psalm's own vocative (Ps 9:37), generic, no Judaei in view. - 0862C
Inopes, gentiles … pauperes, Judaei→ Gentiles — the typological opposition in its purest form, printed in one clause. - 0863D
plenitudo gentium(Rom 11:25) → Gentiles — same opposition, the Jews named in the same sentence. - 0865C
Haereditas enim ad gentes→ Gentiles — Christ's inheritance against the cup of the passion, in a psalm the gloss reads ut sit rex Judaeorum. - 0867B
Gentiles in inferno→ Gentiles (gentilisper the 2026-09-04 addition). - 0868C
transitus ad gentesand 0870Bexaltatio gentium→ Gentiles — both stand against Judaei in their own clause (depressio Judaeorum, et exaltatio gentium). - 0869D
non dii gentium→ nations — generic, and set against paganos in the next clause, which is rendered "pagans". - singular
gensat 0864Aut pro gente et loco→ nation. This is the Jo 11:48 formula (tollent locum nostrum et gentem) and it is the axis's own worked example. usque ad. 25 italic occurrences, all the abridgment formula, all → "as far as". ⚑ Three look-alikes were decided the other way and are named here per addendum D: 0863Dqui sunt usque ad secundam divisionem(unitalicised, spatial → "as far as the second division"); 0863Dusque ad unumis not in my range but its neighbourusque ad: Timor Dei ante oculosIS the formula with Migne's colon carried; and 0865DUsque ad noctem,which is Ps 15:7's own words and renders "Even till night" — a lemma, not a splice.turba/multitudo/daemonium: the range contains noturbaand nomultitudo(grep run and checked against the brief's instrument warning — thenatiohits in this range are all examinatio-, conclusione, and the like, i.e. the documented false positive). Onedaemonibusat 0868C → demons;diabolusat 0864C, 0866D, 0867A, 0870A → devil.mysterium/sacramentum: nomysteriumin the range;sacramentaat 0861C andsacramentorumat 0868A → sacraments.- thou / you (Pattern 17): every second-person singular is thou — the psalm's addressee throughout, and the gloss's own ut justos accipias (0861D) and Hinc trahe exemplum (0865D), both singular imperatives to the reader. No plural second person occurs in the range.
8. Sections read clean, and how
- Question marks: 0010 five, 0011–0014 one each; English matches Latin exactly, chunk by chunk. The five in 0010 are propter quid? / quid proficit…? (0860B), Cur dicunt transmigra? / …sagittare rectos? (0861B), Justus autem, quid fecit? (0861C) — all read on the plate. No mark was supplied and none deleted; no 8b recast was needed, because Migne prints no
?on an indirect question anywhere in this range. - Column anchors: all 26 verified present, in order, and against the word they stand beside in the Latin (test 2b), not merely present. Two sit mid-construction and were split to match:
et exaltetur [0860B] manus→ "and let [0860B] thy hand be exalted", andDe absconditis [0867B] tuis.→ "Of the hidden things [0867B] that are thine." — two spans in the Latin, two in the English, the anchor between them. ⚠ One anchor cannot be placed exactly:Bonorum [0865B] meorumreverses in English, so it stands as "Of my [0865B] goods"; the slot inside the two-word phrase is the same, the word order is not. - Notes: 146
[n: …]across the five chunks, identical in count, order and content to the Latin. No[n:]was converted to[nt:]— every one is a bare attribution siglum or a scripture reference, i.e. a citation, never prose. - Negation, checked by attachment and not by count (test 2/2a). The trigger population — a negative near a quantifier or correlative — fires at five sites in the range, and each host was proved from the sentence's structure:
- 0859C
non solum non metuitur reprehensor, sed etiam auditur laudator— the first non is on solum, the second on metuitur; the sed etiam clause proves it. - 0864C
malignum non esse, nisi qui a Creatore ad creata convertitur— the non is on the predicate and the nisi restores the exception; "no one is malignant save he who…". - 0861D
sed non nisi his qui peccatores sunt— non nisi is the correlative, rendered "but not save upon those who are sinners", both particles carried. - 0867A
nemo non prius in se quam in alium peccat— a double negative, carried as one ("there is no one who does not sin against himself first"), not collapsed into a positive. - 0863B
Non solum propter me illuminare, sed ne inimicus gaudeat— non on solum, and the second clause's ne kept as its own negative. - 7a⁗ (a marker swallowing the sense): not applicable — no
[sic:]is fired in this range, so nothing is quarantined and nothing can hide inside a bracket. Stripping every marker from the English leaves five readable chunks with no stranded article or preposition. - Punctuation by band: colons and semicolons compared band by band against the Latin twin across all 26 anchors; zero mismatched bands. (The two plate-vs-TEI punctuation departures at 0870A and 0870C are §3 items — differences between the plate and our Latin, not between our Latin and our English.)
- Foot-of-page apparatus: six pages read full width (435–440) and ZERO notes of either layer — no numbered
Forteconjecture and no asterisk cross-reference. The work's coverage staysspot; this is six more checked zeros, not a claim that the work has none. - The mod-4 clipping rule fails on my pages. Columns 861, 865 and 869 are all ≡ 1 (mod 4) and all three are CLEAN in this copy. That is three more counterexamples on top of the ones stints 0015–0019 and 0025–0028 recorded the same day, and it means no marker in this range needed the Gallica second witness: every column of 0859–0870 is legible in the on-disk scan. The rule should be treated as withdrawn, not merely qualified.
In Hebraeoclauses: one of the work's three outstanding ones falls in my range, at 0868A(quod in Hebraeo), and it is now read: the plate sets no Hebrew type there at all, so nothing was dropped and none is to be supplied. Two remain unread elsewhere in the work.- The fourth test (does the English ASSERT what he asserts?): run last, paragraph by paragraph against the Latin, with the counts already known clean. It changed three renderings: the elided quaeret at 0859D (§5), the refusal to supply non accepit at 0864D (§6), and the scope of non in labiis dolosis at 0866A, where the negative belongs on the prepositional phrase and not on prodeat — "let my judgment come forth from thy countenance not in deceitful lips", never "let not my judgment come forth".
§E.0015 — stint file cruces-0015.md, verbatim
Psalms XVIII–XXVIII. Stint 0015 of Band A.
⚑ Every column label in this file was derived from the [NNNNx] anchors in my own Latin chunks, not from the lemma brief. The brief's column labels were stale when I received it (corrected on disk 2026-09-04); membership was never affected, so §0's reconciliation stands unchanged, but any label here that disagrees with an older copy of the brief is mine and is the one to trust.
0. SPAN COUNT RECONCILIATION — the brief is CORRECT
data/briefs/8967-lemmata-0015.txt declares 330 spans. Counted in my own Latin:
| chunk | spans |
|---|---|
| 0015 | 72 |
| 0016 | 57 |
| 0017 | 42 |
| 0018 | 84 |
| 0019 | 75 |
| total | 330 |
Exact agreement. No mis-split at either end of my range: 0015 opens on VERS. 1.-- In finem. at 0870C, which is the brief's first line, and 0019 closes on Diluvium. at 0883A, which is its last.
English span counts run over the Latin by exactly the number of italic runs inside my own markers (0015 +1, 0016 +1, 0017 +0, 0018 +0, 0019 +5). Anchors, [n:] notes and question marks are at 1:1 parity in all five chunks; verify-english.mjs reports no error on any of them.
## 1. ⛔⛔ THE HEADLINE, AND IT IS NOT A TRANSLATION QUESTION: OUR LATIN TWIN HAS BEEN SILENTLY ## CORRECTED, AT ROUGHLY ONE SITE PER COLUMN
I read six plates for this range (archive.org patrologiaecurs04migngoog, PDF page = (column + 11) / 2, re-verified against the printed corner numbers on p. 441, which reads 871 in the left corner). Eleven places where our chunked Latin does not say what Migne printed — and the direction is overwhelmingly one way: our twin is tidier than the plate, and tidier in the direction of the Vulgate and of ordinary Latin.
| col | Migne's plate prints | our Latin twin reads | class | |
|---|---|---|---|---|
| 0871C | Anima. Voluntates | Animas. | normalized toward Vulg. Ps 18:8 (convertens animas) | |
| 0871C | Sapientium : de divinis | Sapientiam: | normalized toward Vulg. Ps 18:8 (sapientiam praestans) | |
| 0871D | Desiderabillia super aurum | Desiderabilia | normalized (plate is a non-word, doubled sort) | |
| 0871D | Cibus Dei est mel ; solutus jam a saeculo | …mel; id est, solutus… | words supplied by the digitization | |
| 0875D | Prima gratia, locus pascuae | ocus pascuae | corrupted by the digitization (dropped L, the PSAMUS CXXIV class) | |
| 0876B | dicitur : Seb isti ad mensam divitis | Sed isti | normalized (plate is a split non-word) | |
| 0876B | Impinguisti : octava | Impinguasti: | normalized toward Vulg. Ps 22:5 | |
| 0877A | eum commendando alios invitet | commmendando | corrupted by the digitization (trebled m) | |
| 0877A | Et elevumini. Contra portas mortis | Et elevamini | normalized toward Vulg. Ps 23:7 | |
| 0879B | *cor calore spiri-\ | tus* (line break) | spiriritus | corrupted — a join artifact at the break |
| 0879D | quia dilexi me facere decoram domum | lilexi | corrupted by the digitization | |
| 0882D | ut cervi omne genuo ferarum | genus | normalized (plate is a non-word) |
⚑ Two further sites are recorded with lower confidence because the italic a of this face at this scan quality is not always separable from u: 0878D Oculi supientis in capite (twin: sapientis) and 0878D De necessitutibus (twin: necessitatibus). Both would be normalizations if real. I record them as unsettled, not as findings — a second witness (Gallica ark:/12148/bpt6k5505319w, f = (column + 1) / 2) settles either in one HTTP request. ⭐ The control that makes them worth raising at all rather than dismissing as a scan artifact: unambiguous italic a's on the very same column (Anima, usque ad, Semen) image cleanly.
⚑ What follows, and it binds any later reader of these chunks:
- This is the same class 9003's stints found in the sibling Glossa Psalter (PL 114), at the same order of density. It is not a local accident and it is not confined to one volume.
- No
[sic:]or[cj:]may be fired anywhere in this range on the strength of the Latin twin alone. The twin has already been cleaned of most of the plate's defects; a marker keyed to it would either miss the real defect or, worse, blame Migne for a reading he does not carry. My one[sic:]and my one[cj:]are safe only because I read their plate lines. - ⛔ Five
[sic:]candidates were WITHDRAWN by the plate — ocus, commmendando, spiriritus, lilexi, genus. Every one of them read as a confident Migne defect from the Latin alone, and every one is ours. That ratio (5 withdrawn, 1 confirmed) is the measured answer toCLAUDE.md8a's warning that a translating agent's attribution guess is not evidence. - The fix is
data/tei-patches/8967.json+ a re-chunk, which is outside a translating agent's remit and must not be done mid-batch. I am escalating it, not doing it. - My English follows the TWIN, not the plate, on the 9003 precedent — our English sits in a parallel column beside the twin — except at the four sites where the twin is a non-word and there is nothing to render: ocus → "a place", commmendando → "commending", spiriritus → "spirit", lilexi → "I have loved". Each takes the plate's reading, and each is listed here so the call can be overruled.
1a. ⭐ THE mod-4 CLIPPING RULE IS REFUTED — two counter-examples in my range
The launch brief's §3 stated that a left-hand column congruent to 1 (mod 4) loses 3–5 characters at the inner margin, verified 5 of 5. That rule is now WITHDRAWN work-wide (the coordinator's correction of 2026-09-04, on counterexamples from three stints). In my range:
| col | mod 4 | predicted | actual |
|---|---|---|---|
| 871 | 3 | clean | clean |
| 873 | 1 | clipped | clipped (infirmis prints as firmis) |
| 875 | 3 | clean | clean |
| 877 | 1 | clipped | CLEAN |
| 879 | 3 | clean | clean |
| 881 | 1 | clipped | CLEAN |
⛔ Two of the three predicted-clipped columns in my range are whole. Other stints found the same at cols 853, 857 and 901. Work-wide tally after my six pages: clipped 841, 849, 873, 893, 897, 1045 · clean 853, 857, 871, 875, 877, 879, 881, 895, 899, 901, 1043, 1047. The clipping is real but it is per leaf, not arithmetic — the rule was derived from five pages and generalized past its evidence.
⚑ The failure mode runs in the direction nobody audits. Applied blind, the rule does not produce false markers; it silently withholds true ones on columns this copy answers perfectly well, and a withheld marker leaves no trace anywhere. My [var:] at 0881C is exactly such a case: it stands on a line-opening word in a column the rule would have disqualified, and the page shows the line whole. Predict with the rule if you like; never decide with it. Where a column genuinely IS clipped and the marker rests on a line opening, the second witness (Gallica) is still required — that part stands.
2. MARKERS FIRED — six, every one on a column I read at the plate
node scripts/plate-gate.mjs 8967 reports ✓ on all six. My nine plate reads are recorded in data/plate-reads.json with honest band-level from/to: I read parts of six pages, not six whole pages, and the entries say which parts.
| col | chunk | marker | why it is licensed |
|---|---|---|---|
| 0871C | 0015 | [sic: Quaecunquae] | Plate p. 441 sets Quæcunquæ testimonia dedit Israel — the doubled ae is Migne's own, not CC's ligature expansion. A non-word; quaecunque is what the sentence needs. Column 871 is 3 (mod 4) and clean, and the word stands mid-line. 7a⁗: the sense is rendered beside the marker — "Whatsoever [sic: …] testimonies he gave" — the clause keeps its subject, its verb and its object with the bracket deleted. |
| 0873D | 0016 | [var: …] on Ps 21:3 | Plate p. 442 confirms Clamabo et non exaudies. Per diem, et non exaudies, et nocte et non ad insipientiam. The Clementine has Deus meus, clamabo per diem, et non exaudies ; et nocte, et non ad insipientiam mihi. Migne doubles the et non exaudies and drops mihi. Sense-changing: the doubling is what Cassiodorus's non auditur ad salutem corporalem answers. Column 873 IS clipped, but the lemma stands mid-line and is fully legible, so §3's line-opening bar does not apply. |
| 0880A | 0019 | [var: …] on the Ps 26 titulus | Plate p. 445 confirms PSALMUS XXVI. / VERS. 1. — In finem. (AUG., CASS). The Clementine heads Ps 26 Psalmus David, priusquam liniretur. — no In finem at all. Material, and the gloss proves it material: it expounds De prima unctione per quam certificatur secunda, which answers to priusquam liniretur and to nothing in In finem. Right-hand column, never clipped. |
| 0880B | 0019 | [cj: corruptionem; read incorruptionem] | Plate p. 445 confirms Quem trepidet, caro, cum induerit corruptionem. Pattern 18 exactly: the word is real, correctly set, unbroken, and the faithful English ("when it shall have put on corruption") asserts the opposite of the consolation the sentence is making — the flesh has nothing to fear once it has put on incorruption (1 Cor 15:53–54, and Augustine's own text). Migne's word keeps its English and the conjecture stands beside it. ⭐ Chosen over [var:] deliberately: the phrase is unitalicized gloss prose, not a marked scripture citation, so Pattern 14's population does not include it; and over [sic:], because the type is not broken at all. |
| 0881C | 0019 | [var: …] on the Ps 27 titulus | Plate p. 446 confirms PSALMUS XXVII. / Psalmus huic. The Clementine heads Ps 27 Psalmus ipsi David. Material, and again the gloss shows it: the very next clause is Per David aliquando intelligitur caput — the exposition depends on a David that Migne's own titulus no longer prints. Column 881 is 1 (mod 4), and the lemma opens its line — but the column is CLEAN on this copy (see §1a), which is what licenses it. |
| 0882D | 0019 | [var: …] on Lc 10:19 | Plate p. 446 confirms Dedi, enim ait, vobis potestatem conculcare super serpentes. The Clementine has Ecce dedi vobis potestatem calcandi supra serpentes. A different verb in a different construction, and the gloss's whole image is the trampling. Right-hand column. |
⚠ Per Pattern 14 none of these say why the readings differ. Migne's compositor, his copy-text, an Old Latin reading and the glossator's memory are all live, and telling them apart is research.
3. 7a″ — THE VULGATE COLLATION. This is the deliverable, and it includes the clean ones.
Every lemma in my range was read word by word against sources/vulgate/clementine-flat.txt before its English was written. Six divergences took a marker (§2). The rest are below, INCLUDING the ones that agree exactly — a list of findings alone cannot be told apart from a report by an agent that never looked.
3a. Divergences found, marker DECLINED, with the reason
| col | Migne | Clementine | why declined |
|---|---|---|---|
| 0872A | Delicta enim quis intelligit? | Ps 18:13 Delicta quis intelligit? | Plate p. 441 CONFIRMS the enim. But it is a connective the gloss supplies to hinge its own sentence (nec mirum:), and it changes no sense whatever. Not material; Pattern 14's bar is "in a way that changes the sense." |
| 0872C | caecitas ex parte contigit in Israel, et sic omnis Israel salvus fieret | Rom 11:25 + 11:26 | Not a divergence at all: the words are exact, and the omitted donec plenitudo gentium intraret is an elision across the verse boundary, the ordinary abridgment move. Nothing to mark. |
| 0874A | Dicentes: Spera in Domino | Ps 21:9 Speravit in Domino | A deliberate recast into direct address — the gloss is quoting what the Jews say, in irony. Not a textual divergence, and 0874A is a column I did not read: the ship test forbids the marker either way. |
| 0874C | Tanquam cera · 0874D Aruit tanquam testa | tamquam | Orthography only (tanquam/tamquam), and Migne's normal spelling throughout the volume. Never material. |
| 0874C | De ventre matris meae, Deus meus | Ps 21:11 de ventre matris meae Deus meus es tu | A clipped lemma, not a variant; the copula is simply cut. Convention 3, no marker. |
| 0876A | Nam et si | Ps 22:4 Nam etsi | Word division only. |
| 0876B | Qui manducat et bibit indigne | 1Cor 11:29 Qui enim manducat | Plate p. 443 confirms Migne drops enim. A dropped connective at the head of a quotation introduced by de qua Apostolus; no sense turns on it. Declined for the same reason as 0871D — and recorded so the two are visibly decided the same way. |
| 0876B | capite descendit unguentum in barbam barbam Aaron, et in oram | Ps 132:2 Sicut unguentum in capite, quod descendit in barbam, barbam Aaron, quod descendit in oram | A compression, not a variant. ⚑ The doubled barbam barbam is the Clementine's own reading and is NOT dittography — I checked it specifically because it looks exactly like a Pattern 11 [d:] candidate. Declined, and recorded as a checked negative. |
| 0876C | Psalmus David. (Ps 23) | Ps 23:1 Prima sabbati. Psalmus David. | Migne prints the second half of the titulus only. Not a divergence — and the gloss quotes the missing half in its own voice (In prima sabbati mundus conditus), which proves he had it. |
| 0878D | Oculi sapientis in capite, id est, in corde ejus | Ecl 2:14 Sapientis oculi in capite ejus | Word order inverted and id est, in corde ejus is the glossator's own, printed inside the italic. Attributed on the plate to Sal. (Solomon), which is a memory quotation by construction. Inversion changes no sense; declined. |
| 0879A | Psalmus. (Ps 25) | Ps 25:1 In finem. Psalmus David. | A bare one-word titulus. ⚑ Deliberately not contrasted with the Ps 22/23 tituli: per the shared brief's closing section, a clipped lemma and a complete one-word lemma are different classes, and manufacturing an inconsistency between them is the error three readers made in one batch. Column 879A not read; no marker available regardless. |
| 0882B | Psalmus David in consummatione | Ps 28:1 Psalmus David, in consummatione tabernaculi | Clipped before tabernaculi, and the gloss puns on consummatione alone (ut se offerant tali consummatori). Convention 3, no marker. |
| 0880B | quaeritur — see §2 | the [cj:]; listed there. |
3b. Lemmata checked and found to AGREE with the Clementine exactly
Recorded because a checked negative is worth having. Ps 18: Coeli enarrant (18:2), Dies diei (18:3), In sole, Tabernaculum suum, De thalamo, Gigas ad currendam (18:6), Nec est qui se abscondat (18:7), Lex Domini (18:8), Justitiae Domini (18:9), Timor Domini (18:10), Desiderabilia super aurum (18:11 — the twin's spelling; see §1), Ab occultis (18:13). Ps 19: Exaudiat, In die tribulationis, Dei Jacob (19:2), Mittat/Auxilium (19:3), Memor, Sacrificii (19:4), Tribuat, Omne (19:5), Laetabimur (19:6), In potentatibus, Salus dexterae (19:7). Ps 20: Domine in virtute tua laetabitur (20:2), Quoniam praevenisti, Coronam (20:4), In salutari tuo: gloriam et magnum decorem, super eum (20:6), In gaudio cum vultu tuo, Quoniam rex sperat in Domino (20:7), Inveniatur manus tua (20:9), Fructum eorum de terra perdes, et semen eorum (20:11), Quoniam pones (20:13), Exaltare (20:14). Ps 21: Deus, Deus, Respice in me, Quare me dereliquisti, Longe a salute mea (21:2), In sancto habitas, Laus Israel (21:4), In te speraverunt patres nostri, speraverunt (21:5), Ego autem, Vermis et non homo, opprobrium (21:7), Ab uberibus, De ventre (21:10–11), Ne discesseris a me, Tu extraxisti, Spes mea ab uberibus, In te projectus sum (21:11–12), Circumdederunt (21:13), Aperuerunt, Sicut leo (21:14), Sicut aqua, In medio ventris mei (21:15), Aruit … testa virtus mea, Lingua mea (21:16), Foderunt (21:17), Dinumeraverunt omnia ossa mea, Inspexerunt me (21:18), Diviserunt sibi vestimenta mea (21:19), Unicornium, humilitatem meam (21:22), Qui timetis Dominum, laudate eum (21:24), Timeat eum omne semen Israel, quoniam non sprevit, Pauperis (21:25), Apud te laus mea in Ecclesia magna (21:26), Laudabunt Dominum qui requirunt eum: vivent + Corda eorum … convertentur ad Dominum (21:27–28, continuous across the verse boundary and exact on both sides), Manducaverunt et adoraverunt, In conspectu ejus cadent (21:30), Annuntiabitur (21:32). Ps 22: Psalmus David, Dominus regit me (22:1), In loco pascuae, Super aquam (22:2), Animam meam, Deduxit, Super semitas (22:3), Mecum es, Virga tua (22:4), Parasti in conspectu, In conspectu meo mensam, Et calix meus (22:5), Et misericordia (22:6), Et ut inhabitem (22:7). Ps 23: Domini est terra (23:1), Et super flumina (23:2), Quis ascendet (23:3), Quis stabit, Innocens, Qui non accepit, In vano (23:4), Attollite, Et elevamini, Portae aeternales (23:7), Quis est (23:8), Dominus fortis, Fortis, Potens, Potens in praelio, Virtutes (23:10). Ps 24: In finem, Ad te, Domine, levavi (24:1), Confido, Neque irrideant me inimici, Supervacue, Vias tuas, Domine, demonstra (24:2–4), Doce, Deus salvator meus (24:5), Reminiscere, Miserationum, Quae a saeculo (24:6), Delicta, Juventutis, Ignorantias, Memento mei, tu, Secundum misericordiam (24:7), Dulcis, Rectus, Propter hoc, In via (24:8), In judicio (24:9), Misericordia et veritas, Testamentum (24:10), Propter nomen tuum, Domine (24:11), Quis est homo (24:12), Anima, Semen, Firmamentum est (24:13–14), Unicus (24:16), De necessitatibus (24:17), Respice (24:19), Innocentes et recti adhaeserunt (24:21), Israel (24:22). Ps 25: Judica, In innocentia (25:1), Proba me, Ure renes (25:2), Misericordia, Complacui in veritate (25:3), Non sedi, Odivi, Vani (25:4–5), Malignantium (25:5), Lavabo, Et altare, Inter innocentes (25:6), Vocem laudis (25:7), Domine, Dilexi decorem (25:8), Ne perdas, cum impiis (25:9), Dextera eorum (25:10), Pes, stetit, in directo (25:12). Ps 26: Dominus illuminatio, Dominus protector vitae meae, A quo trepidabo (26:1), Super me nocentes, edant, carnes, Infirmati sunt (26:2), Castra, In hoc ego (26:3), Unam petii, Omnibus diebus vitae meae, Ut videam (26:4), In abscondito (26:5), Circumivi (26:6), Exaudi, Domine, vocem meam (26:7), Tibi dixit, Cor (26:8), Ne avertas, Ne declines, Salutaris meus (26:9), Quoniam pater, patrem, Matrem (26:10), Legem pone mihi (26:11), Tribulantium (26:12), Credo videre, Bona (26:13), Exspecta (26:14). Ps 27: Ad te, Domine, Ne sileas, et assimilabor (27:1), Ad templum (27:2), Da illis (27:4), Quoniam non, Destrues, Benedictus, Dominus (27:5–7), Salvum, Et rege, Extolle (27:9). Ps 28: Afferte Domino, Filios arietum, Vox Domini (28:1–3), Libani, Cedri Libani (28:5), Desertum (28:7), Dominus (28:10), Diluvium (28:10).
⚑ Two spans in the brief carry a ⚠ NOT in Clementine verbatim that is answered by Migne himself, not by us. At 0880D the gloss prints Alia littera: Ut contempler delectationem Domini — Migne is announcing his own variant against Ps 26:4's ut videam voluptatem Domini, so a [var:] would be re-asserting what the text has just said. And at 0880D avertat vultum is the glossator paraphrasing Ps 26:9's Ne avertas faciem tuam, inside his own sentence, and italicized as a catchword rather than quoted. Neither is a divergence in Migne's scripture.
4. THE HARD READINGS — where I chose, and what decided it
4a. 0876B Sed isti ad mensam divitis — the most interesting crux in the range, and it is DECLINED
Our twin prints De hac dicitur: Sed isti ad mensam divitis, id est, Christi, scito et te similia debere praeparare. That does not construe: Sed isti has no verb and no antecedent, and the sentence then swings to a second-person imperative.
The plate (p. 443) reads Seb isti — a non-word in italic, and the b is unmistakable at 300 dpi.
⚑ The conjecture I believe is right, and the reason it is in the crux and not in the text: Sedisti — "thou hast sat at the table of a rich man; know that thou too must prepare the like," which is the well-attested school form of Prov 23:1–2 and supplies exactly the verb and the person the sentence is missing. The plate's Seb + isti is then a broken d plus a word division at the wrong place — Pattern 10's split-run shape.
⛔ I did not fire anything. A [sic:] may only wrap type carried verbatim from the plate, and our twin does not carry Seb; a [cj:] requires Migne's printed word to appear verbatim in the twin, and Sedisti appears in neither. The honest state is: the twin is wrong, the plate is broken, the conjecture is strong, and the repair belongs in data/tei-patches/8967.json, after which a [sic: Seb isti] with the conjecture beside it becomes both possible and correct. My English renders the twin as it stands — "But these at the table of the rich man," — which is deliberately as rough as the Latin.
⭐ The rival I weighed and rejected: reading isti as a dative ("but to that man, at the table of a rich man…"). It loses because it still leaves the clause verbless and it does not explain the plate's b.
4b. usque ad — the formula, and one look-alike
The italic usque ad splice formula occurs 44 times in my range (45 occurrences of the words in all) and is rendered "as far as" in every one — the English carries exactly 44 — including the three that carry Migne's own punctuation into the span (usque ad, at 0871D, usque ad: Dirige, at 0877C, usque ad Dulcis, at 0878A — the punctuation and the extra word ride as printed).
⚑ One occurrence is NOT the formula and is not italicized, and I checked it rather than assuming: 0870D haec doctrina diebus et noctibus continuatur usque ad posteros — this sits inside the resumption tail of a formula that has already fired, it is unitalicized, and its sense is extent in time. Rendered "down to those who come after." Per axis 6, the axis governs the formula, not the words wherever they occur.
4c. Diapsalma / Diapsalmus — unanglicized, and ROMAN, and here is why
Three occurrences: Diapsalma at 0872C (Ps 19:5) and 0872D (Ps 20:4), Diapsalmus at 0877A (Ps 23:7). All three pass through unanglicized per launch brief §2.2 — never "Selah," never "pause."
⚑ But all three are set ROMAN in my Latin, not italic, and the plate agrees (p. 444 confirms Attollite. Diapsalmus. with the term in roman while Attollite is italic). The brief's phrasing is "italic as Migne sets it"; Migne does not set it italic here. I have kept them roman, which also preserves the sacred 1:1 italic-span parity — italicizing them would have introduced three English spans with no Latin twin. ⚑ Flagging it for the merge: if the other stints in this band italicized theirs, the band is inconsistent and mine is the one that follows the plate.
⚑ Note also that Migne prints two forms of the word, Diapsalma and Diapsalmus, within four columns. Both ride as printed; neither is normalized to the other.
4d. In finem — 5 occurrences, all "Unto the end."
0870C (Ps 18), 0872B (Ps 19), 0872D (Ps 20), 0877B (Ps 24), 0880A (Ps 26). ⚑ Two further occurrences are lowercase and not the lemma and are rendered as ordinary prose: 0870C respicit in finem, id est, Christum and 0882B per totum hoc saeculum usque in finem. Never "for the choirmaster." ⭐ Psalm 18's own gloss in my very first line is the argument in miniature: hic propheta respicit in finem, id est, Christum, vel in ultima tempora — the commentary glosses the lemma as END and as Christ, and a "choirmaster" rendering would leave that sentence expounding a word not on the page.
4e. The gentes axis — two occurrences, decided opposite ways
- 0871A qui omnes gentes in unum erat congregaturus — Pentecost, all tongues, no Jew/Gentile opposition in view. Generic → "all nations."
- 0882C spiritum timoris dedit Judaeis et gentibus — the opposition is printed in the sentence itself. → "to the Jews and to the Gentiles."
⚠ I checked the instrument before reporting either. A raw natio grep over my range returns zero true hits; \bgentes catches nothing else. There is no natio, no gentilis, no gentilitas, no ethnicus, no turba, no multitudo, and no daemonium anywhere in cols 0870C–0883A. diabolus occurs twice (0876C a principe diabolo, 0881B saeculum pater vel diabolus) and is "devil" in both. mysterium occurs twice (0874C legis mysteria, 0877B novo mysterio) and sacramentum five times (0871A, 0872A, 0874C, 0876B, 0880A); they are 1:1 throughout, and 0874C carries both in adjacent sentences — sacramentum ablutio peccatorum and legis mysteria comparat cerae — which is where the axis is settled mechanically.
4f. The unexpressed subject — every supplied pronoun, and what decided it
| col | Latin | supplied | what decided it |
|---|---|---|---|
| 0870C | de gloria Christi in qua Patris aequalis | "he is equal to the Father" | Christi stands in the same clause; nothing else is masculine nominative. |
| 0871C | Omnes in illo recte | "All are right in him" | The subject is Justitiae from the lemma above, feminine plural. English takes the bare "All" rather than "they," which would float. |
| 0871D | cujus voluntatem suae praeponit | "whose will he sets before his own" | The one who desires — the psalmist of Desiderabilia, from the lemma above. |
| 0872B | quae tempore tribulationis vult ei fieri | "to be done for her" | Ecclesiae in the immediately preceding paragraph, and the psalm is read of the Church throughout. ⚠ ei is ambiguous in gender; the antecedent is not. |
| 0872B | ut sicut illi, ita tibi … det | "as to him, so to thee" | Dative singular answering Dei Jacob in the same clause. ⚑ A nominative plural illi ("as they did") also parses; I record it as a rival and take the dative because the lemma is Dei Jacob and the sentence is about what God gives. |
| 0874B | ab uberibus enim facit, quod vix maturus | "one scarcely come of age" | vix maturus has no noun; the comparison is to a man, from vera humanitas two clauses earlier. |
| 0877D | non ergo in me fallat | "let him not fail in me" | God, the addressee of Reminiscere miserationum tuarum. |
4g. Negation fidelity — the sites where carrying the printed word makes the sentence odd
⭐ 0870D–0871A is the one that would have been repaired silently. Migne prints:
Planius diceret, in quibus non audiantur voces eorum, vel, omnium sermonum audiantur voces eorum: illud idem facit per relativum.
The first limb has the non; the second does not, and the two limbs are offered as alternatives (vel). Read straight, the gloss offers "in which their voices are not heard" and "the voices of all their words are heard" as the same thing, which they are not. I carried both exactly as printed and did not supply a non in the second limb. Column 871A was read at the plate (p. 441) and it prints exactly this. It is Migne's, and it is the kind of thing this edition exists to show.
⚑ Test 2a sites — a negative resting on a verb with a correlative nearby — fired twice, and both were re-hosted from the sentence's structure rather than from what read well:
- 0879D quia non eis, sed concordat domui Dei. The non looks as though it sits on concordat. The
sedcorrelative shows it governs eis. Rendered "because it is not with them, but with the house of God, that he agrees," not "because he does not agree with them." - 0880B ut maledico dente non me, sed carnalia desideria consumant. Same shape, same resolution: the negative is on me, and the English puts it there — "so that with their cursing tooth they consume not me, but my carnal desires."
Other negatives carried without incident and checked individually: 0871C qui non docuit quod non fecit (two), non serviliter · 0871D non foras mittitur · 0872A Non est majus delictum · 0873C non justitiae, sed delictorum · 0873D non exaudies (twice), non ad insipientiam, nullae in eo tenebrae, non auditur · 0874A Vermis et non homo · 0874B non vir, non in peccata hominis, Nec conceptio sine Deo, nec in peccato · 0874C non ad sapientiam reseratum · 0874D Non ut fenum · 0875A ne in majorem numerum crescerent · 0875B sed non tunica desuper, quam nemo potest dividere · 0875C Non ejus qui, non tumentis, non praesumi · 0875D non prohibeat, non pro instructione · 0876C qui non permanent · 0876D non deputavit animam rebus non permanentibus (two), non juravit in dolo, nullis eam fecibus · 0877D non erubescam, in nullo sustinente patienter fallit · 0878A Non pro aetate, quae mala esse non scimus, nemo bonus nisi Deus · 0878B non ex crudelitate · 0879B Non angelorum · 0879C non merita, sed misericordiam, ne quid delicti remaneat, non asperitas, non sedi · 0879D non est locus veri sacrificii extra · 0880A Ne perdas (twice), quibus hic non communico · 0881A non aliud quam doces · 0881A non nisi unam, non putat iram, nisi si avertat vultum · 0881B Non in ira declinat · 0882A non optare, non secundum quod · 0882B nec etiam visibilia, ut nihil mihi noceat, nec post, ne laedantur, Ne declinent.
⚑ Every one of these is present in the English, on the word it attaches to in the Latin — the test run was Test 2's, not "are all the negatives present."
⭐ And it was also checked mechanically, band by band, which is the shared brief's test 3 applied to negation rather than to punctuation: 105 negative tokens in the Latin, partitioned by the column anchors (which are verified 1:1), against the English's. No band anywhere in my range has Latin negatives and zero English negatives — the direction that would betray a lost negation. ⚠ Five bands flagged the other way (0870C, 0872B, 0872D, 0876C, 0882D: Latin 0, English >0) and all five are the instrument, not the text — an un\w+ pattern catching unto, unicorn, unheard and unlettered (the last rendering illiterati, whose negative is real and Latin). Checked before reporting, per the shared brief's standing warning that every one of these greps manufactures a number that reads like a violation.
4h. Punctuation ridden as printed
- 0873A the gloss breaks off: Ideo super eum, quoniam dabis . . . . . — five spaced points, reproduced verbatim. Migne's ellipsis, not ours, and not a lost passage.
- 0879C vel ipsa ustio est misericordia, non asperitas — our twin prints no closing period, and the English carries none. ⚑ The plate (p. 445) DOES print one; this is a twelfth CC departure, of the punctuation class, and it is listed here rather than in §1 because it changes no word.
- 0874D
[n: (CASS.)]: foderunt.— the colon stands after the note. Carried in place. - 0873A / 0880A
[n: (ID.)].and[n: (AUG.)],— the note's own trailing mark rides with it. - 0882A
[n: ( Ibid. )]— Migne's internal spacing inside the siglum, carried verbatim. - Question marks: 3 / 1 / 5 / 1 / 3 across the five chunks, at parity with the Latin, and none supplied. ⚑ The one place I wanted to supply one and did not:
VERS. 13.-- Delicta quis.at 0872A is the fragment of Ps 18:13 Delicta quis intelligit?, and convention 3 expands a fragment to the phrase it stands for — but Migne prints a period, so the English reads "Who understandeth sins." with a period. Four lines later the same words return as a full quotation with Migne's own?, and there the English has one.
4i. (ID.) and (Ibid.) never expanded
38 (ID.) and 13 (Ibid.) in my five chunks, every one passed through verbatim and unexpanded, per launch brief §4. Note that the sigla vary in case and form across my range — (CAS.) at 0871B, (CASS.) everywhere else; (Hier.), (HIER.) and (Hier., AUG.) all within two columns; (AUG., CASS.) and (CASS., AUG.) both occur. All ride exactly as our twin sets them. Migne's attributions in this recension are unreliable and passing one through is not endorsing it.
5. WHAT I READ CLEAN, AND WHERE A BLIND READER SHOULD GO FIRST
Read clean: the whole of Ps 19 (0872B–0872D) and Ps 20 (0872D–0873B) — short, formulaic, and every lemma agreeing with the Clementine; Ps 22's ten-graces sequence (0875D–0876C) apart from the Seb isti crux; Ps 24's Reminiscere/Delicta juventutis stretch (0877D–0878B).
Go here first:
- §1's table. It is the finding with consequences beyond this range, and eleven of its twelve rows can be confirmed or refuted from one Gallica request each.
- 0876B
Sed isti(§4a) — the one place where our Latin column prints a sentence that cannot be construed and the English is deliberately rough. - 0880B
corruptionem(§2) — the only[cj:], and the only place a reader could believe the Glossa asserts the opposite of what it means. - 0870D–0871A, the non that appears in one limb and not its twin (§4g). If someone later "repairs" it, the repair will read better than the truth, which is the signature of the class.
- 0870D et ipsi eidem facti nox, tenebrosis scientiam quae de humanis — an abridgment resumption tail that I rendered as closely as the words allow ("and these same are made night to him, giving to the darkened the knowledge which is of things human") and do not claim to have fully construed. scientiam is an accusative with no governing verb in the surviving text. ⚑ Per the shared brief's §5: the splice removes words, it does not suspend grammar — the tail is genuinely defective here, not merely elliptical, and I am naming it rather than smoothing it.
- 0877C usque ad qui non per omnes, minus perfectos — a second tail of the same kind, rendered flat ("who not through all, the less perfect") because no reading of it is secure.
6. WHAT I DID NOT DO
- No
data/tei-patches/8967.json. Twelve entries are owed (§1) and re-chunking mid-batch would rewrite every stint's Latin. Escalated. - No second-witness check at Gallica for the two low-confidence italic a/u sites (§1) or for the eleven confirmed ones. One request each; it is the cheapest open item in this range.
- No expansion of
(ID.)/(Ibid.), no reordering of anything, no Hebrew invented — the one In Hebraeo clause in my range (0881D, Minus est in Hebraeo) asks for nothing.
§E.0020 — stint file cruces-0020.md, verbatim
Band A, stint covering Psalms XXIX–XXXIII (Vulgate numbering). Latin src/latin/8967/0020.md–0024.md.
§0. Span reconciliation — the count agrees
data/briefs/8967-lemmata-0020.txt declares 267 spans. Counting … runs in the body of my own five Latin chunks (frontmatter excluded):
| chunk | spans |
|---|---|
| 0020 | 29 |
| 0021 | 74 |
| 0022 | 44 |
| 0023 | 63 |
| 0024 | 57 |
| total | 267 |
267 = 267. The brief is not mis-split at this range. Head and tail also agree by inspection: the brief's first line is [0883A] VERS. 1.-- Psalmus cantici in dedic., which is the first span of 0020; its last is [0892B]-band, matching the tail of 0024.
Mechanical parity, all five chunks, Latin ↔ English: column anchors 5/10/6/9/8 present, verbatim and in order; [n: …] notes 22/42/22/31/24, contents identical and in order; italic spans 29/74/44/63/57 after stripping [var: …]; question marks 1/1/1/4/3. Punctuation compared band by band (Test 3), ? ; : — zero mismatched bands across all 38 bands.
§1. THE PLATE WAS READ — five pages, cols 0883–0892, all recorded
⛔ Nobody had read any column in my range. Under the corrected §3 of the launch brief (the mod-4 clipping rule is withdrawn — the plate is the arbiter, a rule about the plate is not) I opened all five leaves before firing anything: PDF pages 447–451 of raw/scans/pl113/patrologiaecurs04migngoog.pdf, at 200 dpi full-page with 450–500 dpi crops, corner numbers read first on every page. Map PDF page = (column + 11) / 2 verified — p. 447 carries 883/884 in the corners. All five reads are recorded in data/plate-reads.json.
Clipping, observed rather than predicted:
| page | cols | left col | state |
|---|---|---|---|
| 447 | 883 / 884 | 883 | clean |
| 448 | 885 / 886 | 885 | CLIPPED — VERS. lost entirely at line openings (prints as a bare 9, 10.), interior lines lose 3–6 chars |
| 449 | 887 / 888 | 887 | clean |
| 450 | 889 / 890 | 889 | clean ⭐ |
| 451 | 891 / 892 | 891 | clean |
⭐ Col 889 is 1 (mod 4) and is perfectly clean — a further counterexample to the withdrawn rule, alongside 853, 857 and 901. Had I decided by the rule rather than by the plate I would have withheld nothing here (no marker of mine falls in 889), but I would have withheld the [d:] at 0890A on the belief that its neighbourhood was unreliable, and that marker turns out to be licensed. The failure mode is exactly the one the correction names.
⚑ Zero foot-of-page conjecture apparatus of either layer on all five pages — no numbered Forte notes, no asterisk layer. Recorded as five more spot reads; it does not license the claim that the work has none.
§1a. Markers fired — six
Five [var: …] and one [d: …]. Every [var:] rests on sources/vulgate/clementine-flat.txt, cited book chapter:verse, and every one now also rests on the plate: I confirmed that Migne prints what our TEI says he prints before making a public claim about his text. No [sic:] and no [ed:] anywhere in the range — see §3.
⚑ node scripts/plate-gate.mjs 8967 exits 0: every marker in this range stands on a column that was read.
| col | Migne prints | Clementine | why licensed |
|---|---|---|---|
| 0883D | Non morte morieris (Gn 3:4, the serpent) | Gn 3:4 Nequaquam morte moriemini | Number changes (2 sg. vs 2 pl.) and the negative word changes. The gloss puts the words in the devil's mouth addressing Adam alone, so the singular is doing work; the reader must not be left thinking Migne prints the received plural. |
| 0886B | Unguentum effusum est nomen tuum | Ct 1:2 Oleum effusum nomen tuum | Different noun (ointment/oil) and a supplied est. The noun is the whole point of the citation, adduced for the Spirit's outpouring. |
| 0886D | titulus Intellectus David. (Ps 31) | Ps 31:1 Ipsi David intellectus | Launch brief §2.4 makes the David / ipsi David distinction load-bearing. Migne drops ipsi and inverts. |
| 0888B/C | titulus In finem. (Ps 32) | Ps 32:1 Psalmus David | The Clementine has no In finem over Psalm 32 at all. This is the largest titulus divergence in my range; it is not an abbreviation of the received heading but a different heading. |
| 0890C | titulus Psalmus David. (Ps 33) | Ps 33:1 Davidi, cum immutavit… | Dative Davidi against Migne's Psalmus David; brief §2.4 again. The pre-scan's ⚑ MATCHES ONLY ELSEWHERE — Ps 3:1, Ps 4:1… is explained by exactly this: Migne's form is the heading of other psalms, not of this one. |
| 0890A | In sua in virtute nullus salvatur — a doubled preposition | — (not a scripture claim) | ⭐ [d: in], and the plate is what licensed it. I had declined this under the Ship Test while the column was unread, because a doubled short word is the classic Corpus Corporum artifact and Pattern 11's marker asserts "Repeated in Migne's plate." Read at 500 dpi, the plate sets In sua in virtute with normal spacing either side — the doubling is Migne's own. Per 11a the two runs differ, so the marker goes on the intrusion, which is the second in: removing it leaves In sua virtute, the reading the whole verse-group argues (Non salvatur rex … in abundantia virtutis suae non salvabitur). |
| 0891A | Immittet Angelum (Ps 33:8) | Ps 33:8 Immittet angelus Domini in circuitu timentium eum | Accusative object against a nominative subject — Migne's psalter has God sending an angel; the Clementine has the angel encamping. The gloss then discusses two further readings, which proves the lemma is under textual pressure at this very word. This is the most material divergence in the range and the one a 7a″ conformation would have destroyed: the familiar English ("the angel of the Lord shall encamp round about") is not what Migne prints. |
⚑ On the three tituli (0886D, 0888B/C, 0890C): brief §2.4 names Migne-vs-Clementine titulus divergence as "a real finding, not a checker fault," and the band is already doing this — the 0019 stint fired [var:] on the tituli of Ps 26 and Ps 27 (0880A, 0881C) and the 0026/0027 stint on Ps 35 and Ps 36. Mine are consistent with that practice, and all three are plate-confirmed.
§2. In-force conventions — where each bit in my range
In finem→ "Unto the end." Two occurrences: 0884C (Ps 30 titulus, In finem psalmus. → "Unto the end, a psalm.") and 0888B/C (Ps 32 titulus). ⭐ The range supplies fresh evidence for the ruling: at 0884B, glossing Non compungar, Migne writesNon moriar jam in finem— in finem in the commentator's own prose, plainly temporal, "unto the end." A "for the choirmaster" reading of the titulus would make the same two words mean two unrelated things four lines apart.Diapsalma— four occurrences, all in-range: 0887C, 0887C, 0887D (Diapsalma) and 0891D (Diapsalmus, masculine). All four are carried unanglicized. ⚠ Not italicized, because Migne does not italicize them — ✅ checked at the plate on all four, pp. 449 and 451: they are set in roman, and none of the four is inside a…span, so adding italics would also create English spans with no Latin twin and break the 267-span parity. ✅Diapsalmusat 0891D is confirmed masculine at the plate, so the form beside the work's 37Diapsalmais Migne's. The launch message's "unanglicized and italic" is followed on the first half and yielded to the plate on the second, per the shared brief's rule that every italic span in the Latin is an italic span in the English in the same place. Flagging for the merge in case the band wants it otherwise.Psalmus David/Psalmus ipsi David— one occurrence, 0890C, rendered "A psalm of David" (see §1).- Sigla — 141 notes across the five chunks, all passed through verbatim. No
(ID.)or(Ibid.)expanded; 0883A carries a compound(AUG., CASS.), likewise verbatim. - Vulgate numbering — untouched. Heads printed PSALM XXIX–XXXIII; every first-lemma probe I made against the Clementine resolved to the same-numbered psalm (Ps 29:1, 30:1, 31:1, 32:1, 33:1). No offset anywhere in this range, consistent with the brief's 138/0/3 measurement.
§3. The three type-defect candidates — ALL THREE SETTLED AT THE PLATE
⭐ Every one of these was declined while the columns were unread, and the plate then settled all three — two against my instinct and one for it. That is the measured lesson of 9004 with a case attached: frequency and internal corroboration prove an error EXISTS, never whose it is.
### 3a. 0884B — in aeter num laudabo te → CC's. No marker owed. Our Latin prints in aeter num laudabo te. The plate reads in æter-num laudabo te, hyphenated across a line break (450 dpi crop, right column, band B). Corpus Corporum dropped the hyphen and left the space. Our corruption, exactly the class the coordinator's de-cidam→deeidam names.
- Rendered "For ever I will praise thee." No
[sic:], and none is owed: firing one would have accused Migne of CC's defect. - ➜ TEI-patch candidate: PL 113 col. 0884B, PDF p. 447 right column.
aeter num→aeternum.
### 3b. 0890A — In sua in virtute nullus salvatur → MIGNE'S. [d: in] FIRED. ⛔ This is the one I got wrong while the column was unread. I had reasoned that a doubled short word is the classic CC artifact and declined the marker under Ship Test B. The plate sets In sua in virtute plainly, at 500 dpi, with normal spacing on both sides — Migne's own dittography, and col. 890 is clean, so nothing about the copy explains it away.
- Marker now fired, per Pattern 11a on the intrusive copy:
In his own [d: in] strength no one is saved. Both occurrences are rendered, as Pattern 11 requires. - ⚑ The general point, and it is the reason this crux is worth its length: my confidence pointed the wrong way, and the only thing that corrected it was opening the page. The withdrawn mod-4 rule would have reinforced the error rather than caught it.
### 3c. 0886B — --VERS. 21. → CC's. No marker owed. Our Latin reads [0886B]--VERS. 21. A conturbatione., the only such form in 2,035 verse addresses in this work. The plate reads the ordinary VERS. 21. — A conturbatione (p. 448, right column, band B). CC transposed the dashes to the wrong side of the address across the column break.
- Reproduced verbatim in the English, since the address passes through untranslated. No marker.
- ➜ TEI-patch candidate: PL 113 col. 0886B, PDF p. 448 right column.
§3a. ⭐ FIVE MORE CORPUS CORPORUM DEPARTURES, found by reading the whole line
These are the addendum-C class — every one was found while reading the plate for a different word a few words away, and not one is detectable from our files, because in each case CC's reading is the tidier one. They are TEI-patch candidates per the coordinator's ruling, not markers: a [sic:]/[d:] must wrap text that is verbatim in the Latin twin, and in each case the defective text is precisely what our twin does not contain.
| col | Migne prints | our TEI reads | class | leaf |
|---|---|---|---|---|
| 0883D | Non movebor ad hoc bono | ab hoc bono | normalization to a form that construes — movebor ad + ablative does not construe and ab does | p. 447 L, band D |
| 0887B | Dum clamarem tota die, etsi. Etsi non sit sibi conscius quis | etc. Etsi non sit… | ⭐ a plain dittography in Migne's plate, silently tidied away by CC. Read at 450 dpi; unmistakable | p. 449 L, band B |
| 0887C | (ID.) Diapsalma poenitudinem commendans — no period after Diapsalma | Diapsalma. poenitudinem | punctuation inserted. ⚑ This retro-explains an oddity I had already logged from the file alone: our TEI's lowercase poenitudinem after a full stop. It is lowercase because in Migne there is no full stop | p. 449 L, band C |
| 0887C | omnibus sanctis dici. (with a period) | dicit communem | normalization to a form that construes | p. 449 L, band C |
| 0891A | Circumdat Angelus Domini gyro timentes eum | in gyro | a preposition SUPPLIED by CC — same shape as 8969 @1168B's supplied est | p. 451 L, band A |
⚑ The consequence for the English, stated plainly: my translation renders the Latin twin as shipped, so it currently reads "moved from this good," "etc.", and "in a ring." If these five patches land, three of my sentences must change with them — the etsi one materially, since Migne's doubled word wants a [d: etsi]. Flagging it here rather than pre-empting a patch that has not been made.
### 3d. Real words that read oddly — logged, no marker, per addendum A ### 3d. Real words that read oddly — logged, no marker, per addendum A Addendum A of the shared brief: a real, well-formed word that reads oddly is Migne's until a plate says otherwise. Four sites, none marked:
- 0883C —
quod morte solvistis(2 pl.). "the first sin, which by death you have loosed." The surrounding discourse is 3 sg. (vindicavit in nos). ✅ Plate-confirmed as Migne's. Rendered as printed; the address to a plural "you" may be Augustine turning to his hearers, or may be for solvisti. No marker. - 0883D —
Vespere facit.Rendered "He acts at evening." Two words, no object, standing between the ad vesperum / ad matutinum gloss and Adam's speech. Reads like an abridgment stub. ✅ Plate-confirmed as Migne's, so nothing is missing from our side. Rendered literally. - 0887C —
sicut supra de rectione inveteratio(Ps 31:5). Rendered "as above the growing old from governance." ⚑ rectione makes no sense here; the conjecture istectione, "from the covering," which restores the chain Migne himself builds two columns earlier — Ps 31:1 tecta sunt peccata and 0887A'sTegit, ne in judicio reveletur. ✅ Read at the plate: Migne printsde rectione inveteratio. So this is a conjecture about Migne's text, not about CC's, and it stays a conjecture: rendered as printed (Pattern 7), no[sic:](a real Latin word), no[cj:](the crux is where the conjecture lives). - 0891A —
et si in primis in jucundum accedite. Rendered "and if among the first, come ye into what is pleasant." The doubledin … inconstruction here is grammatical (unlike 3b) but the clause is obscure. Rendered as printed.
§4. The negation and scope work — 7a, 7a″, Tests 2 and 2a
### 4a. ⭐ The site that would have been silently repaired: 0885B ira per zelum turbat: quia et haec, concussa mente, contemplationem dissipat, quae non est nisi inquieta mente; sed inde post paululum plus proficit ad videndum.
Read straight, the printed words say contemplation does not exist except with an unquiet mind — the opposite of what the sentence is arguing, since the whole point is that a shaken mind scatters contemplation. The obvious repair (quieta mente, or moving the non) is exactly the silent repair 7a forbids.
- Rendered as printed: "…scatters contemplation, which is not except with an unquiet mind; but thereafter, after a little, it profits the more toward seeing."
- Two parses both construe, and I am naming both rather than choosing silently: (i) est is existential — "which does not exist save with an unquiet mind," which contradicts the argument and points at a plate defect; (ii) est carries an ellipsis of dissipata from the preceding clause — "which is not [scattered] save by an unquiet mind," which construes and agrees with the argument. The English takes neither exclusively: "which is not except with an unquiet mind" leaves the ellipsis open exactly as the Latin does.
- ⛔ Read at the plate and NOT settled — this is the one place in my range the copy fails. Col. 885 is clipped, badly, and the plate's lines run
contemplatione dissipat, quæ non est nisi/[…]mente ; sed inde post paululum plus proficit. The word our TEI gives as inquieta falls exactly at a clipped line opening, so this copy cannot confirm that Migne prints it, nor rule out that he prints quieta — which is the reading that would dissolve the whole crux. ➜ Needs the second witness: Gallicaark:/12148/bpt6k5505319w,f = (column + 1) / 2= f443. One IIIF request settles it. Recorded as an open plate read, and no marker fired in the meantime.
### 4b. ⭐ Test 2a fired, host proved from structure: 0886D si nulli hoc faceret, non videretur vigilare divina providentia, si omnibus non servaretur divina patientia.
- Rival reading: "if the divine patience were not kept for all" — i.e. omnibus inside the negated clause. Rejected, because it makes the second limb a non-sequitur and destroys the
si nulli … si omnibusparallel that the sentence is built on. - Taken: si omnibus is elliptical for si omnibus hoc faceret, and the non stays on servaretur — "if he did this to none, the divine providence would not seem to be watchful; if to all, the divine patience would not be preserved." The negative did not move; only the parallel identifies where the scope of the condition ends. This is the Colossians/Esther hole exactly. Migne prints commas throughout and the English keeps them (band parity holds).
### 4c. ⭐ Test 2a examined and NOT repaired: 0890D Mansueti, non de sua intelligentia superbientes; non jugum Dei, indomitorum more, ferentes.
- Taken: the surface scope, non on ferentes — "not bearing the yoke of God after the manner of the untamed." This is what the parallel member forces: the first limb puts non on the participle (non … superbientes), so the second does too.
- Rival: non scoping the manner-phrase indomitorum more — "bearing the yoke of God, but not after the manner of the untamed" — which is theologically far smoother and is why it must be named and refused: reading well is what the wrong host gives you.
- The English wording preserves the same order the Latin has and so preserves the same ambiguity.
### 4d. ⛔ A question mark Migne does NOT print: 0891C Pascebat Dominus contemnentem se, et deseret timentem. Promittit autem non superflua, sed necessaria. The a fortiori sense obviously wants a question — he fed the man who despised him, and will he forsake the man who fears him? — and every English translation of Augustine here supplies one. Pattern 8 forbids it: a ? Migne does not print is never supplied. ✅ Read at the plate (p. 451, left column, band C): Migne prints a full stop. The statement form is his, not our source's, so the decision is now evidence-backed rather than merely rule-backed. Rendered as he prints it: "The Lord was feeding him that despised him, and he will forsake him that fears him." The next sentence (Promittit autem non superflua) contradicts it, which is the tell 7a always gives and is precisely what this edition exists to show. No marker; logged.
### 4e. Negatives checked clean, host named (Test 2 run on each) non tantum … sed etiam 0883A (host tantum) · non terreat 0883A · non sinit 0884A · nemini … nullum 0884A · nunquam sine ea 0884A · non viderent 0884B · Non compungar / Non moriar 0884B · non differas 0884D · nec parcitur 0885B (host parcitur, with the et parcitur morti pivot proving it) · nec … nec … ulla 0885B · ne … videatur 0886A · nullam … non turbantur 0886B · Ne … turbaret 0886B (host turbaret, tantum on promissio) · ne noceantur 0886B · non sum confusus 0886C · non amant … neque 0886C · non diligere 0886C · Non in quibus non invenit 0887A (host of the first non is the whole in quibus phrase, proved by the sed quibus remitit correlative) · non sit 0887A · ne … reveletur / non imputabitur / Non est dolus 0887A · non vult confiteri 0887B · non imputavit / non imputat / non justos se praedicant 0887B (host justos, proved by sed se agnoscentes) · Etsi non sit sibi conscius … non tamen justus 0887B · non appropiant 0887D · ne putetur 0887D · Nolite fieri / non approximant / non recedunt 0888A · nisi … non possumus 0888B · non sufficit, nisi abundet 0888C · Ne quis putet / non nisi 0888D · non cognoscens / quis non dabit 0888D · non indigent 0889A · Non terroribus … non nisi a Deo 0889B · Ne habeant effectum 0889C · non peccata 0889D (host is the object peccata, not vidit — the sed vidit omnes filios correlative proves it) · non ex Adam 0889D · Non salvatur … nec facti … Non modo … sed et … Nemo … nisi … nec … nec 0889D–0890A (host of Non modo is modo, proved by sed et exteriora) · non vult sola facere 0891A (host examined: non on vult with sola predicative; unde vocat alios shows the force lands on sola, and the English "does not wish to do alone" carries both) · Non possunt … non aliud quam 0891A · Non confundantur / non erubescit / non accessit 0891A · nec erubescet 0891B · Nullus … non securitatem praesumat 0891C · non superflua, sed necessaria 0891C · Non est inopia 0891C · fidem non habent / non satiantur / Deum non habent 0891C · ne nomen timoris horreatur 0891D · non capietur 0892A · Nec … diffidas 0892A · ut nec mentio 0892A · Non corporaliter, sed 0892B · ut nec patientia pereat 0892B · Non modo mala … tamen pessima 0892B (host modo, proved by the tamen pivot) · Non omnium … sed eorum 0892B (host omnium, proved by sed eorum) · non reconciliatur 0892C. Every printed negative is in the English, on the word the Latin attaches it to, and none is supplied.
§5. 7a″ — the lemma inventory walked. Divergences found and NOT marked
The declined list is the deliverable. Each of these was collated against sources/vulgate/clementine-flat.txt; each is a real difference from the received text; none rose to Pattern 14's "changes the sense" threshold, and each is recorded so a later reader need not re-derive it.
| col | Migne | Clementine | why declined |
|---|---|---|---|
| 0884B | Dum mihi molesti essent (Ps 34:13) | cum mihi molesti essent | ✅ plate-confirmed. dum and cum are synonymous here; the sense is identical. Migne also drops the opening Ego autem, which a citation naturally clips. |
| 0886A | Discerne causam meam cited (Psal. XLI) | the words are Ps 42:1 | ✅ plate-confirmed: Migne sets (Psal. XLI). The text matches the Clementine exactly; only his locator is off by one. Notes pass through verbatim (convention 4); correcting a locator would be an editorial act. Logged, not marked. |
| 0883D | Tristis est anima mea usque ad mortem cited (Matth. XVI.) | the words are Mt 26:38, verbatim | ✅ plate-confirmed: Migne sets (Matth. xvi.). Same class — text exact, locator wrong (XVI for XXVI). Note carried verbatim. ⚑ Also an addendum-D look-alike: the usque ad here is the verse's own words ("even unto death"), not the abridgment formula, and is rendered as such. |
| 0888D | Fides tua te salvum fecit cited (Matth. X) | exact at Lc 17:19 / Lc 18:42; Matthew's parallel (9:22) reads salvam | ✅ plate-confirmed: Migne sets (Matth. x). Text matches a Clementine verse verbatim; the locator points at the wrong gospel. Note verbatim. |
| 0887B | Est justus qui perit in justitia sua | Ecl 7:16 justus perit in justitia sua | ✅ plate-confirmed. Migne recasts with Est … qui. The assertion is identical; this is a syntactic frame for the Unde: introduction, not a textual variant. |
| 0887B | Nihil mihi conscius sum | 1Cor 4:4 Nihil enim mihi conscius sum | ✅ plate-confirmed. A dropped connective enim at the head of a quotation. No sense change. |
| 0887C | usque ad: in manibus temulenti | Pr 26:9 in manu temulenti | ✅ plate-confirmed. Singular→plural. This is the resumption tail of an abridgment splice, i.e. Augustine's words at the point the recension resumes, not a lemma quoted as scripture. |
| 0890C | Et dabit illi Dominus sedem David | Lc 1:32 et dabit illi Dominus Deus sedem David patris ejus | ✅ plate-confirmed. One dropped word (Deus); Dominus remains the subject and the clause asserts the same thing. The tail clip (patris ejus) is ordinary quotation. |
| 0891A | Non confundantur | Ps 33:6 facies vestrae non confundentur | ⚑ Declined deliberately, and the plate does not rescue it. Migne prints Non confundantur (confirmed p. 451). The difference from the Clementine is mood/tense and turns on a single letter, and sources/vulgate/README.md warns that a call resting on one letter should say so rather than trust this copy to that precision. The gloss (Quidquid hic fiat justo, non erubescit) reads with either. Named here so it is not lost. |
| 0889B | Timeat omnis terra | Ps 32:8 Timeat Dominum omnis terra | ✅ plate-confirmed. A medial word missing from the lemma — but the gloss restores it three words later, sed Dominum timeat terra. The glossator's own text plainly had Dominum; the lemma is clipped, not divergent. |
| 0886B | Ego dixi in excessu | Ps 30:23 Ego autem dixi in excessu mentis meae | ⚑ This is the pre-scan's ⚑ MATCHES ONLY ELSEWHERE — Ps 115:2 and it is fully explained. Dropping autem makes the fragment coincide letter-for-letter with the opening of Ps 115:2. The lemma's true home is Ps 30:23, its own psalm — the gloss expounds fear and the excessus mentis of Ps 30, and the very next span quotes Ps 30:23's own tail (Ideo exaudisti vocem orationis meae). Taken seriously per launch brief §1 and resolved: not one of the nine legitimate elsewhere-matches at 0859B–0860D, and not a divergence — a medial clip of a connective, the same class as the 1Cor 4:4 case above. |
| 0884B | Domine Deus, in aeternum confitebor tibi | Ps 29:13 Domine Deus meus, in aeternum confitebor tibi | ✅ plate-confirmed as Migne's. A dropped possessive in a lemma the gloss then re-quotes twice without it. The assertion is unchanged and the gloss turns on in aeternum, not on meus. Named because it is a real divergence and would otherwise be invisible. |
| 0883A | Psalmus cantici in dedic. | Ps 29:1 Psalmus cantici, in dedicatione domus David | ✅ plate-confirmed (in dedic.). Migne abbreviates. Rendered with the abbreviation preserved — "A psalm of a canticle, at the dedic." — because the truncation is his, and Domus David is picked up as the next lemma, showing the rest of the titulus is present in his text. |
| 0884C | In finem psalmus. | Ps 30:1 In finem. Psalmus David, pro extasi | Clipped titulus. The gloss opens by expounding Exstasis, so pro extasi was in his text. Abbreviation, not divergence. |
| 0885C | Oblivioni datus sum tanquam mortuus a corde | Ps 30:13 …tamquam mortuus a corde | ⭐ A checked negative worth recording: the brief's ⚠ NOT in Clementine verbatim fired on nothing but the tanquam/tamquam orthographic variant. Text otherwise exact. |
| 0891A | Circumdat Angelus Domini in gyro timentes eum | — | No marker, and deliberately. The Glossa itself introduces it as Alii interpretes sic transtulerunt — it is telling the reader it is another version. A [var:] here would annotate what the text already says. ⚑ And see §3a: the plate has no in — the preposition is CC's. |
| 0891A | Immittet Angelum Dominus | — | Same: Mendosi codices habent. The Glossa is doing its own textual criticism and naming the reading as faulty. Marking it would duplicate the author's own apparatus. ⚑ Migne prints a full stop after habent where a colon is expected; reproduced as printed ("Faulty codices have it."), with the object supplied in English because habent is transitive and English cannot elide it. |
### Lemmata collated and found to agree with the Clementine exactly So the list above cannot be mistaken for a report by an agent who only checked the flagged ones. Ps 29: 29:3, 29:4 (in lacum), 29:6 (Quoniam ira, ad vesperum, et ad matutinum laetitia, fletus), 29:7 (Ego autem), 29:8 (voluntate tua praestitisti decori meo virtutem, avertisti faciem tuam), 29:9 (Ad te, Domine, clamabo), 29:10 (Quae utilitas in sanguine meo, dum descendo in corruptionem), 29:11, 29:12, 29:13 (non compungar). Ps 30: 30:2, 30:3 (accelera, esto mihi), 30:5 (educes, de laqueo … absconderunt), 30:6 (in manus), 30:8 (exsultabo et laetabor, humilitatem meam, necessitatibus), 30:9 (in loco spatioso, statuisti in loco spatioso), 30:10 (miserere mei Domine, tribulor, conturbatus, in ira oculus), 30:11 (paupertate), 30:12 (super omnes inimicos meos, vicinis, notis), 30:13 (qui videbant me foras, vas perditum), 30:14 (vituperationem multorum, in circuitu, in eo dum convenirent simul), 30:16 (sortes meae, eripe), 30:17 (illustra, salvum me fac in misericordia), 30:18, 30:19 (all three), 30:20, 30:21 (a conturbatione, proteges), 30:22 (benedictus, mirificavit), 30:23 (in excessu mentis, a facie oculorum tuorum, ideo exaudisti…), 30:24 (all four), 30:25. Ps 31: 31:1 (beati quorum remissae sunt, iniquitates, peccatum), 31:2 (beatus vir), 31:3 (tacui, quoniam tacui, dum clamarem tota die), 31:4 (configitur spina, spina, aerumna), 31:5 (delictum meum, dixi), 31:6 (pro hac orabit, tempore, verumtamen in diluvio), 31:7 (tu es refugium, erue), 31:8 (intellectum tibi dabo, ×3), 31:9 (all six), 31:10. Ps 32: 32:1 (exsultate), 32:2 (cithara, in psalterio), 32:3 (cantate ei, canticum novum), 32:4 (quia rectum est, et omnia opera, in fide), 32:5 (terra), 32:6 (verbo, coeli, omnis virtus eorum), 32:7 (sicut in utre, abyssos), 32:8 (ab eo, commoveantur), 32:9, 32:10 (all four), 32:11 (all three), 32:12 (beata gens), 32:13 (de coelo), 32:15 (finxit, sigillatim ×2), 32:16 (non salvatur rex, gigas), 32:17 (fallax equus, equus), 32:18 (ecce oculi, oculi, metuentes eum), 32:19, 32:20, 32:21 (quia in eo, speravimus ×2), 32:22 (fiat misericordia tua, in te). Ps 33: 33:2, 33:3 (in Domino laudabitur anima mea, mansueti), 33:4 (magnificate Dominum, magnificate ×2), 33:5 (exquisivi Dominum, ex omnibus), 33:6 (accedite ×3), 33:7 (pauper, iste), 33:9 (gustate et videte, gustate, suavis est Dominus), 33:10 (omnes sancti ejus, quoniam, non est inopia), 33:11 (divites eguerunt et esurierunt, esurierunt), 33:12 (venite filii audite me, docebo vos), 33:13 (dies videre bonos), 33:14 (prohibe ×2), 33:15 (diverte a malo), 33:16 (oculi Domini ×3, in preces), 33:17 (memoriam), 33:19 (juxta est Dominus, juxta est), 33:20 (multae tribulationes justorum, multae, liberabit), 33:21 (ossa, et unum), 33:22 (pessima, qui oderunt), 33:23 (redimet animas).
⚑ One conflation, logged and not marked: 0892B Sicut et in Novo Testamento, juxta est, et salvabit,. Both words stand in Ps 33:19 but not adjacent (Juxta est Dominus iis qui tribulato sunt corde, et humiles spiritu salvabit). The Glossa is compressing its own psalm's verse while saying "as also in the New Testament," which is itself odd. Rendered as printed; no received text to collate a conflation against.
§6. Vocabulary axes — every call in the range
- Axis 1, the commentator's voice is not archaised.
ait0886D → "says";inquit0888B → "says";dicitthroughout → "says"/"means".-ethforms appear only inside italic scripture spans (In the Lord shall my soul be praised, Standeth for ever, That hate, The rich have wanted), never in gloss prose. Checked by the italic-membership test. - Axis 2,
turba/multitudo. ⚑ Instrument checked first, per the brief. Neither word occurs in my 267 spans or in the gloss prose of chunks 0020–0024. Nothing to report — and nothing to mis-report, since a raw\bturbagrep here returns turbatus, conturbatus, turbantur, perturbati, turbat and perturbationis, all of them turbare, none of them turba. - Axis 3,
daemonium/diabolus.daemonum0889C → "of demons".diabolus0883D, 0884D → "the devil";a diabolo0889B, 0892B → "by the devil". The two are never merged. ⚑ Note the brief's warning holds here:\bdaemonimissesdaemonum, which is the only occurrence in the range. - Axis 4, the gentes family — three calls, all stated:
- 0889C
Gentium.→ "Of the Gentiles." This is the Judaei/gentes typology at its plainest: Migne glossesGentium. Dum idololatriam destruxitand immediately oppositePopulorum. Judaeorum. The gloss itself supplies the opposition. - 0889C
in quibus gentes conversae→ "in which the Gentiles are converted." Same paragraph group, same opposition, Christian times against the Jews of v. 10. - 0889C
Beata gens.→ "Blessed is the nation." Singular gens, and the axis'snationsbranch: the lemma is the Vulgate's own generic "blessed is the nation whose God is the Lord." ⚑ The two calls sit five lines apart and are deliberately different — gens the blessed people in the lemma, gentes the converted Gentiles in the gloss. Naming it here so the merge does not read it as drift. - 0888A
gentilis indomitus→ "the untamed Gentile." The 2026-09-04 addition, applied; and the context is the sharpest possible warrant, since the very next clause readsmulus, Judaeus piger ad credendum. - 0884C
persecutione omnium gentium→ "the persecution of all the nations." Plainly generic (omnium gentium, the axis's own cited pattern), the whole world persecuting the Church, no Jew/Gentile opposition in view. Stated because it is the one gentes in the range rendered "nations". - ⭐ A word the axis does not rule on:
gens tenebrarum(0887D, the Manichaean "race of darkness"). Rendered "the nation of darkness" — i.e. held to the axis'snationrather than invented as a sixth word. Flagging rather than deciding silently, which is the behaviour the axis section rewards. If the series wants "race" here, this is the only site in my range. natiodoes not occur. ⚑ Instrument checked: a rawnatiogrep in my chunks returns dedicatione, incarnatione, tribulatione, desperatione, damnatio-shaped forms — zero real natio.- Axis 5,
mysterium/sacramentum.mysteriumdoes not occur.sacramento0891B → "sacrament";sacramentis0891D → "sacraments". 1:1. - Axis 6,
usque ad→ "as far as". ⚑ Decided per occurrence (addendum D). 44 occurrences in the range. 43 are the abridgment formula and take "as far as". One is not: 0883D, inside the italic span Tristis est anima mea usque ad mortem — Mt 26:38's own words, rendered "even unto death." Taking the formula reading there would have swallowed a lemma's words, which is the trap the addendum names. - Additional in-range chains held 1:1, stated because the gloss argues from them:
confiteor→ confess everywhere (0883B Confitemini "Confess ye", 0884A confiteamur peccata / confiteamur laudem, Confessio gemina est, 0884B confitebor tibi). The gloss at 0884A builds its whole point on the word being one word — a "give thanks" for the lemma and a "confess" for the exposition would break it.exsulto→ exult,laetor→ be glad,gaudeo→ rejoice, forced by 0885A's own definition (Exsultare est … gaudere: laetari, temperata affectione).fingo→ fashion againstformo→ form, forced by 0889D (Finxit. Manu gratiae formavit).
§7. Anchors, subjects, and the sections read clean
Anchor positions (2b — presence and order are verified mechanically; position is not): every one of the 38 anchors was checked against the word it stands beside in the Latin, not merely that it is present. Four sit mid-construction and were deliberately split to match Migne:
- 0883C at
quod morte [0883C] solvistis→ "which by death you have [0883C] loosed." - 0884B at
tempore [0884B] tristitiae→ "in a time of [0884B] sadness". - 0886C at
vocem orationis [0886C] meae→ "the voice of my [0886C] prayer." ⚑ The one case where the split point could not be kept identical: Latin splits orationis | meae, English inverts to my | prayer. The anchor stays inside the same two-word unit, which is the closest available position; 8995's precedent at 0605B is the model. - 0888D at
id est, [0888D] remunerat→ "that is, [0888D] rewards".
Supplied subjects and elisions (the dominant defect class — every one named):
- 0883C
Demorabitur→ "It shall abide", subject = fletus, the immediately preceding lemma Fletus., not the laetitia of the following clause. - 0883D
Deus a Christo faciem→ "God turned away his face from Christ." The verb is elided and lifted from the lemma directly above (Avertisti). English cannot leave a clause verbless; the verb is Migne's own, one span away, not a conjecture. - 0889B
sed quod a Deo utiliter, ideo ab eo→ "but what is moved by God is moved profitably" — commovetur supplied twice from the clause immediately preceding, where Migne prints it. - 0885C
Foras, Christum→ "Without, Christ" — the verb (videbant) is in the lemma above; the ellipsis is carried into the English rather than filled out. - 0886C
si omnibus→ "if to all" — see §4b for the proof. - 0885B
quot et quanta ea perturbant→ "how many and how great are the things that disturb": ea is nominative plural neuter and the verb has no expressed object. Rendered without supplying one. - 0885B
Statuisti in loco spatioso,expanded to "Thou hast set my feet in a spacious place" (convention 3; the lemma carriesetc.and Ps 30:9 supplies pedes meos). This is expansion of a fragment, not conformation — the printed words are not altered, and Migne's text agrees with the Clementine here. - 0887A
Beati quorum remissae sunt,expanded to "Blessed are they whose iniquities are forgiven" — same class, and the gloss's very next lemma is Iniquitates., which names the supplied word. - ⚑ By contrast 0885B
In ira oculus.was NOT expanded → "In anger the eye." Migne is glossing the two words as a pair and immediately treats in ira on its own (In ira persecutorum), so an expansion to "my eye is troubled with anger" would import a verb the gloss does not use. The two treatments are different classes (fragment-with-etc. vs. a two-word gloss target), named here so a later reader does not manufacture an inconsistency between them.
Read clean, no findings: 0884A (Ps 29:10–11, the twofold-confession passage), 0884D–0885A (Ps 30:3–8), 0888C (Ps 32:2–3, harp and psaltery), 0889A (Ps 32:6, the Apostles as heavens), 0891D–0892A (Ps 33:12–16). These were read line by line against the Latin under Test 5 — does the English assert what he asserts — and produced nothing.
Em-dashes: two in the range, both carrying real parenthesis (0890C Cum immutavit vultum — Christ, that is, the sacrifice — coram; 0890B Because in him — lest anyone murmur about patience — he adds the gift). Not a defect class; not marked; noted only so the count is on record.
§E.0025 — stint file cruces-0025.md, verbatim
Band A, stint covering Psalms XXXIV–XXXVIII. Latin src/latin/8967/0025.md–0029.md.
0. SPAN COUNT RECONCILIATION — the brief is CORRECT
data/briefs/8967-lemmata-0025.txt declares 243 spans. Counted mechanically over the five chunks' Latin bodies (\(?!\)(.+?)\*, DOTALL, frontmatter excluded):
| chunk | spans |
|---|---|
| 0025 | 73 |
| 0026 | 31 |
| 0027 | 44 |
| 0028 | 49 |
| 0029 | 46 |
| total | 243 |
243 = 243, and the brief's own line count (^\[0) is also 243. No mis-split. The head of the range (VERS. 1.-- Judica, Domine.) and the tail (Remitte mihi.) are both present, so the file is not shifted at either end. English span parity is 1:1 in every chunk after markers are stripped.
1. PLATE READS — SIX PAGES, ALL SIX COLUMNS-PAIRS OF THIS RANGE
None of cols 0892–0901 had ever been read. All six pages were read for this stint from the on-disk PL 113 scan (raw/scans/pl113/patrologiaecurs04migngoog.pdf, PDF page = (column + 11) / 2), corner numbers checked first, full page width, with 500 dpi crops on every candidate. Recorded in data/plate-reads.json. Zero foot-of-page conjecture apparatus of either layer on any of the six pages (consistent with the work's existing spot coverage; still a sample, not a proof).
⚠⚠ THE MOD-4 CLIPPING RULE HAS A COUNTEREXAMPLE IN THIS RANGE
The launch brief §3 states the rule as regular, 5 of 5: a left-hand column congruent to 1 (mod 4) loses 3–5 characters at the inner margin. In my range 893 and 897 are clipped exactly as predicted (VERS. prints as s.), and 895 and 899 are clean as predicted (3 mod 4). But column 901 is 1 (mod 4) and is CLEAN — page 456's left column opens Verumtamen. (AUG.) Diapsalmus. with the V whole, and every line beneath it is entire.
So the rule is a strong tendency, not an invariant. Render the page before invoking it. Had I applied it blind, I would have refused to settle three candidates in col 901 that the copy in hand answers cleanly (hahet, Iter, Diapsalmus).
2. MARKERS FIRED — six, every one on a column read at the plate
| col | chunk | marker | why it is licensed |
|---|---|---|---|
| 0893A | 0025 | [var: Vulg. apprehendat eum …] | Migne prints Apprehendat eos. (Ps 34:8); the Clementine reads apprehendat eum. Plate p.452: col 893 is clipped, but the lemma stands mid-line and is fully legible, so §3's line-opening bar does not apply. The plural is what the gloss expounds — Ne scilicet suis sceleribus relinquantur is plural in Migne's own next clause. Sense-changing, so Pattern 14 applies. |
| 0894C | 0025 | [sic: super gaudeant] | Plate p.452, 500 dpi: Migne sets Non super gaudeant. in three words at VERS. 24, against Non supergaudeant. fused nineteen lines above in the same column at VERS. 19. The internal control is on the same plate; the split is Migne's type, not CC's. Pattern 10 split-type → Pattern 12. The English carries the sense as well as the marker ("Let them not rejoice over me"), per test 1. |
| 0895A | 0026 | [var: Vulg. Ps 35:1 In finem. Servo Domini ipsi David. …] | Plate p.453: Migne's titulus reads In finem sermo. The Clementine has Servo Domini ipsi David. A word where the received text has a servant: sense-changing. ⚑ Note the class: sermo is a real, well-formed word, so under addendum A it is Migne's until a plate says otherwise — and the plate says it is Migne's. That makes the marker [var:], never [sic:]. |
| 0896B | 0027 | [var: Vulg. Ps 36:1 Psalmus ipsi David. …] | Plate p.453: Migne heads Ps 36 Psalmus David. where the Clementine has Psalmus ipsi David. This is the ⚑ the brief pre-scan raised, and launch brief §2.4 rules it a real finding, not a checker fault. The two tituli are different lemmata and stay different in English. |
| 0898B | 0028 | [var: Vulg. Gn 2:17 in quocumque … morieris …] | Plate p.454: Migne prints In quacumque die comederitis, morte moriemini. — plural — against the Clementine's singular comederis … morieris. Material, and the mismatch is visible in Migne's own frame: he introduces it as Vindictae quas minabaris Adae (singular) and applies it et nobis (plural). |
| 0898D | 0028 | [sic: qualiliter] | Plate p.454, 500 dpi: Migne sets quali- at the end of one line and liter at the head of the next — a doubled syllable across the break, i.e. qualiliter for qualiter. A doubled syllable is the non-word class that addendum A records as right every time, and here the plate itself shows the doubling. The English carries the sense ("in what manner") beside the marker. |
⚑ Class split for this range: 4 [var:] and 2 [sic:], and both [sic:] rest on a plate-visible defect rather than on a corpus argument. Every one of the eight suspicions I raised against a real, well-formed word was refuted or declined; every one I raised against a non-word was settled at the plate — and five of those seven non-words turned out to be Corpus Corporum's, not Migne's (§3). That is the reverse of what a corpus-frequency argument would have predicted, and it is the whole reason for reading.
3. ⛔⛔ SIX SITES WHERE OUR LATIN IS NOT MIGNE'S — no marker owed, TEI patches wanted
This is the highest-value finding of the stint. In every one of these, firing the marker the Latin file invites would have publicly blamed Migne for Corpus Corporum's defect. Recommend data/tei-patches/8967.json entries; I have not written them, because a patch rewrites the chunk under a translation that has already been filed.
| col | our Latin | THE PLATE | class |
|---|---|---|---|
| 0894B | Iniracundia | In iracundia. (two words, 500 dpi) | CC fusion. Rendered "In wrath." No [sic:]. |
| 0894D | spemagna | In spe / magna fidelium finis (line break) | CC fusion at a hyphenless break. Rendered "In great hope". No [sic:]. |
| 0895C | inquitatem | iniquitatem | CC drop. Rendered "the iniquity". No [sic:]. |
| 0899A | pro rumpit | pro-/rumpit (ordinary line-break hyphenation) | CC split. Rendered "breaks forth". No [sic:]. |
| 0901C | hahet | habet (500 dpi) | CC corruption (b→h). Rendered "has". No [sic:]. |
| 0899B | audiebam | audiebant | CC NORMALIZATION — see below. |
| 0895A | populis | populus (500 dpi) | CC NORMALIZATION — see below. |
3a. ⭐ TWO NEW MEMBERS OF THE NORMALIZATION CLASS (brief §4), and neither is detectable from the Latin
Both were found by reading the whole line for a different word — exactly the mechanism addendum C describes.
- 0899B, VERS. 14. Migne prints Tanquam surdus non audiebant, et sicut mutus non aperiens os suum. Our TEI prints
audiebam— which is the Clementine's reading at Ps 37:14. The digitization has silently conformed Migne's lemma to the Vulgate. This is the fourth instance of the class in the series and the first where the tidied form is the received biblical text itself, which is the worst possible case for 7a″: a divergence that a Vulgate collation cannot see, because the collation was run against the text the corruption produced. Our English renders our Latin ("I heard not"); the plate wants "they heard not". - 0895A, VERS. 28. Migne prints quando Novum Testamentum populus praedicavit — an ungrammatical nominative, since the subject is lingua ejus. Our TEI prints
populis, the dative that makes the clause construe. Our English renders our Latin ("to the peoples"). Migne's page says "when the people preached the New Testament".
⚠ Weaker, NOT settled: 0898D enumerantur. The plate at Narratio, in qua … miseriae appears to read emunerantur (m/n transposed), a non-word, where our TEI reads enumerantur. The inking on that line is heavy and I could not separate m from nu with confidence at 500 dpi. Recorded as unsettled, not as a finding. A single Gallica IIIF crop (ark:/12148/bpt6k5505319w, f = (column + 1) / 2, so f449) would close it.
4. DECLINED — every candidate raised and not marked, with the reason
⚑ Listed because on Luke 12 of 17 corrections came from declined lists rather than from fired markers. Nothing below is a marker; several are places a later reader should look.
4a. Declined SCRIPTURE divergences (checked against sources/vulgate/clementine-flat.txt)
- 0892D
Tanquam pulvis ante faciem venti.vs Ps 34:5tamquam. Orthographic only (tanquam/tamquam); Migne uses the -n- form throughout. Plate-confirmed as Migne's. Pattern 9. No marker. - 0893C
Pax vestra ad vos revertetur(Migne cites Matth. X) vs Mt 10:13pax vestra revertetur ad vos. Word order only — the verb agrees exactly. Pattern 14 requires a change of sense; the gloss's point is the returning, which both orders give. Plate read (col 893 is clipped, but the divergent words sit mid-line). No marker. - 0894D
Devoramus.vs Ps 34:25Devoravimus eum. Present for perfect, plate-confirmed (p.452). Declined as tense-only: the psalm asserts the same thing either way, and Migne's own gloss is present-tense too (Devorantur incorporati), so the tense is not idle. ⚑ This is the closest call in the range; a later reader who thinks Pattern 14's bar is lower than I have taken it should look here first. - 0896B
in tuo luminevs Ps 35:10in lumine tuo. Word order only, plate-confirmed. No marker. - 0896D
Miseretur et retribuetvs Ps 36:21miseretur et tribuet. A real divergence (retribuet, "shall repay", for tribuet, "shall give") and arguably sense-changing — but it stands at a LINE OPENING in column 897, which is 1 (mod 4) and is clipped on this copy (the plate showsMiseretur etending one line and the clipped…et,opening the next). §3 forbids the marker on this witness. ⛔ Owed: one Gallica IIIF crop at f449. Rendered as our Latin has it; no marker fired. - 0898A
Psalmus David in rememoratione de sabbato.vs Ps 37:1in rememorationem. Ablative for accusative, plate-confirmed. Case only; the titulus says the same thing. Declined. (Contrast the two tituli that were marked, at 0895A and 0896B, where a different word is at stake, not a different case of the same word.) - 0898C
livores mei;vs Ps 37:6. Migne himself flags it — alia littera — so it is his own apparatus, not an unannounced divergence. Pattern 18a's ❌ class ("anything the edition already glosses"). No marker. - 0898C
Currentes cum sponso post odorem unguentorum.vs Ct 1:3. Declined because it is not offered as a quotation: the gloss says gemamus: and then weaves the verse into its own sentence (the Clementine has Trahe me, post te curremus in odorem unguentorum tuorum; there is no sponso and no currentes in it). A[var:]here would assert a divergence in a citation that was never made. - 0899B
Quia dixi: Ne quando supergaudeant…vs Ps 37:17Nequando. Word-division of an orthographic compound; the Clementine's own printing of nequando varies. Pattern 9. ⚑ Deliberately NOT treated as the 0894C class: there the split producessuper gaudeant, two independently meaningful words that destroy the verb, and there was a fused control in the same column. Here nothing is destroyed and there is no control. - 0899D
Ut quid me dereliquisti?, referred by Migne to supra, i.e. Ps 21:2quare me dereliquisti. Ut quid and quare both mean "why"; the form Migne gives is the Old-Latin/Mt 27:46 one. No change of sense. Declined; recorded because a reader hunting Old-Latin survivals in this book will want it. - 0901B
Et tabescere fecisti sicut araneam animam.vs Ps 38:12…animam ejus. Migne drops ejus. A clipped lemma, not a divergence — convention 3 territory. No marker. - 0900D
Verum tamen.split vsVerumtamen.fused, both plate-confirmed on p.455/456 within a few lines of each other. Declined: verum tamen as two words is perfectly good Latin ("but yet"), so there is no non-word and nothing for[sic:]to wrap. Rendered identically ("But yet") in both places, deliberately. - Verse numbering. Migne addresses Ps 36:19 as
VERS. 18.(0896D) and Ps 38:11/12/13/14 asVERS. 10./11./12./14.(0901B–D). His numbering, reproduced verbatim, never corrected. The psalm numbers themselves are the Vulgate's throughout and none was touched.
4b. Declined CONJECTURES ([cj:])
- 0901C
Iter mala saeculi petit sibi adesse. Plate-confirmed at 500 dpi: Migne printsIter, not Inter. Inter mala saeculi ("amid the evils of the world") is the near-certain reading and is what the surrounding gloss requires. The[cj:]is DECLINED and Inter is the conjecture that lost only in the sense that no marker carries it: Pattern 18a's bar is that the printed word must make the sentence assert something the author is arguing against, and a bare nominative Iter with no verb does not assert anything — it fails to construe, which 18a explicitly keeps in the decline class. The English renders the printed words as they stand ("A journey. He asks for himself the evils of the world to be at hand…"), which reads as strangely as the Latin does. - 0894A
Intende … ut ego intensus immerito. Elliptical: the apodosis is missing. Rendered literally ("that I, undeservedly stretched out") with nothing supplied. The pun is on Intende/intensus and the stretching is the cross. Not a defect; Migne's abridgment. No marker. - 0901D
Hic sibi petit dimitti, ut certus dijudicium perveniat. perveniat wants ad; rendered "may come to the judgment" without supplying a preposition in the Latin's voice. Real word, plate-confirmed. Crux only.
4c. Not defects at all — recorded so a blind reader does not re-raise them
VERS 5.--without the period, twice (0025 at Ps 34:5, 0029 at Ps 38:5). The plate printsVERS. 5.correctly in both places (pp. 451, 455). CC's dropped period. Reproduced as our Latin twin has it, per convention 1's verbatim rule; no[sic:], since the defect is not Migne's.[0901A]-- Verumtamen.— a bare--where aVERS. n.--address would stand. Plate-confirmed: Migne runs the paragraph on without a verse number. Reproduced.- Siglum spelling varies:
(CASS.),(CAS.),(Cass.),(ID.),(Ibid.),(HIER.). Passed through verbatim and unanglicized, and no(ID.)or(Ibid.)was expanded (launch brief §4). 148 notes across the five chunks (0025: 42 · 0026: 14 · 0027: 28 · 0028: 30 · 0029: 34), order and count 1:1. (ID).at 0895C is bare text, not a[n: …]note — CC failed to tag that one attribution. Left exactly as it stands in the Latin twin; not our error to fix in English.Diapsalmus.at 0901A and 0901C. Migne sets it roman, not italic, and in the masculine Diapsalmus rather than Diapsalma. Kept unanglicized and roman, mirroring the plate — launch brief §2.2 rules the word untranslatable ("a word the text explains cannot be replaced by its explanation"); it says italic as Migne sets it, and here he does not.In finem→ "Unto the end" at 0895A and 0900A, per launch brief §2.1. No exception was needed or taken.usque ad→ "as far as", 29 occurrences of the abridgment splice formula (0025:1 · 0026:5 · 0027:8 · 0028:4 · 0029:11), all rendered as far as. ⚑ Checked per occurrence against addendum D: none of the 29 is a lemma's own words in this range — every one stands between anetc.and a resumption tail, and every tail was parsed as ordinary prose. The nearest look-alike,Usque ad nubes.at 0895D, is a lemma (Ps 35:6) and is rendered "Even to the clouds", not with the formula.Non supergaudeant.(0894A) andNon super gaudeant.(0894C) both render "Let them not rejoice over me". Identical English by design; the[sic:]is what distinguishes them, and the launch brief's rule on bare lemmata (expand the stump, never contract its twin) forbids differentiating them by mutilating one.
5. THE FOUR TESTS, run on the finished files
- Anchor position (2b). All 37 column anchors present, verbatim, in order — and each was checked against the word it stands beside in the Latin, not merely for presence. Three sit mid-construction and were split identically in English:
Loosed [0893A] by God,pressed him [0898D] that he should not now be raised up,who was crucified [0900A] with him. The two anchors that fall inside an italic span in the Latin (Amat judicium et non derelinquet [0897C] sanctos suos.) keep the anchor inside the span in English. - Punctuation by band (test 3). Colons, semicolons, question marks and guillemets compared band by band across all 42 bands of the five chunks, with our own markers stripped. Zero mismatched bands. Five sites were repaired to reach that: an invented colon at 0893D (Alii interpretes, takes Migne's comma), an invented semicolon at 0895A, an invented colon at 0896D, an invented semicolon at 0900A, and an invented colon at 0900C. All five were mine, all were smoothing, and the totals would have hidden two of them.
- Question marks. Latin 1, English 1 in 0025 (
o Domine, quis? etc.); Latin 1, English 1 in 0028 (Ut quid me dereliquisti?). No mark supplied and none deleted. ⚑ Two places invite a mark Migne does not print and did not get one:Domine, quando respicies.(0894A) andQuando videbimus vindictam de eis qui nobis insultant.(0894A) both end in a full stop on the plate, and both end in a full stop in English, however interrogative they read. - Negation attachment (tests 2 / 2a). Every printed negative was named to its host word. The four that fire 2a's trigger condition (a negative on a verb with a quantifier or correlative nearby) and how each was resolved from structure, not from what reads well:
- 0894A
Dissoluti … nec tamen prae duritia compuncti.— thenecgoverns compuncti, not dissoluti; thetamenis the pivot. Kept as two italic spans in order, with the negative on the participle. - 0894A
nec tamen compuncti sunt, id est, poenituerunt.— the appositive poenituerunt glosses the verb, and therefore stands under the negative. It is rendered as such, and it was tempting to render "that is, they did not repent", which would have moved Migne's negation from his word onto mine. - 0895C
Non quod non potuit; perniciosius agit contra seipsum qui quod potest non vult.Three negatives, three hosts: quod, potuit, vult. All three carried. ⚠ The sed-less correlative here ispotest … non vult, and the negative belongs on vult, not on potest — "does not will what he can", never "cannot will". - 0895C
Sunt enim quaedam quae, etsi volunt, non intelligere homines possunt … et ut tamen bene agerent, intelligere possunt.Thenongoverns possunt and theetsi voluntis concessive; the second clause is affirmative and had to stay so. - 0894C
Nemo enim malus, qui non prius sibi noceat.— nemo + non, both carried, producing the double negative Migne prints. - Test 5 (does it ASSERT what he asserts). Read back paragraph by paragraph with the counts already clean. It moved three renderings:
- 0892D
ne habeant quid oblatrenthad been smoothed to "that they may have nothing to bark at", which quietly moves the negative onto quid. Restored to "that they may not have what to bark at". - 0893B
nec defecit, qui omnia fecithad "nor did he fail"; the perfect is a standing state here (nihil suavius … ipsum ergo pete), so "nor has he failed". - 0901C
Iter mala saeculi petit sibi adessehad been smoothed into "he asks that the evils of the world be present to him", which reads fluently and is false — it makes the psalmist petition for the world's evils. Rebuilt as the printed words stand (§4b.14).
6. UNEXPRESSED SUBJECTS — every supplied pronoun, and what fixed it
The dominant defect class. Sites where two readings both construe:
- 0894C
Tuam, Domine Deus. Quae in se est, vel quam ei dedit.Quae is justitia. Both the subject of dedit and the referent of ei are unexpressed and neither is recoverable from the sentence. Rendered "Which is in himself, or which he gave to him" — deliberately as underdetermined in English as in Latin. The likeliest reading is God's justice, given to Christ, but Ps 34:24 (Judica me secundum justitiam tuam) does not settle it and I have not settled it silently. - 0893A
quos divina gratia non humectat— quos are the dissoluti, from the lemma above (Fiant tanquam pulvis), not from the sentence. "they whom". - 0894D
ut his illa curent— his = pudor and reverentia, illa = audacia and impudentia, both from the two preceding clauses. Rendered "that by these they may cure those", keeping the demonstratives rather than resolving them. - 0894D
Illi dicunt, euge animae suae quae laetitia fugit— quae may be nominative with laetitia ("from which gladness flees") or agree with laetitia. Rendered "from which gladness flees"; the contrast with isti … suam laetitiam ponunt … quae est perpetua is what decided it, since the point is that their gladness does not last. Flagged rather than settled. - 0897C
Vel, non permittit damnari justum cum judicabitur ille ab impio; vel, illi impio, scilicet ad malum ejus.ille is the just man in the first limb and the impious man in the second; ejus in the second is the impious man's. Rendered so. - 0900A
Vox est veteris hominis qui cum eo crucifixus, hic autem in persona propria loquitur.hic is Christ, not the old man — the sentence turns on the contrast. Rendered "but here he speaks in his own person".
7. VOCABULARY AXES — instrument checked before reporting
Greps run with the brief's warnings applied (the natio/damnatio- trap, \bdaemoni missing oblique cases, the raw usque ad overcount):
turba/multitudo: zero occurrences of either noun. ⚑ The instrument fires anyway:\bturbreturns turbata at 0899B (ratio nuper turbata), which is the verb, exactly the trap the brief names. Nothing to report.daemonium/diabolus/satanas: two sites, 0898Dsed et diabolus, qui corpus affligitand 0901DNon in diaboli civitate→ devil in both. No daemoni- and no satan- of any case in the range.natio/gentes/gens/gentilis/ethnicus: one site, 0897Bquia per omnes gentes dilatata, of the Church spread through the whole world — generic, not the Judaei/gentes opposition, so "nations" per axis 4's second limb. (The raw grep also returns damnari, dilatata noise; checked by eye.)mysterium/sacramentum: zero of either.- Commentator's voice not archaised:
dicit/ait→ "says"; the-ethforms in this stint appear only inside italic lemmata (He loveth judgment,He sheweth mercy,He hath said,Thou that preachest), which is the italic-membership test axis 1 names. gradus: zero (no gradual psalms in this range).
8. SECTIONS READ CLEAN
- 0025 (Ps 34) — read clean apart from the sites named above; the VERS. 12 retribuebant antithesis (ego … ipsi …, four limbs) checked limb by limb for a reversed comparative.
- 0026 (Ps 35) — clean; the coelum/nubes/montes chain at 0895D was checked for a dropped
nonatquae post, de eis et si non ab eisand it is present. - 0027 (Ps 36) — clean; 8 of the chunk's 44 spans are abridgment splices and every tail was parsed as ordinary prose per addendum D's warning.
- 0028 (Ps 37) — the densest negation block in the range (
Non est sanitas/Non est pax/non est absconditus/non aperiens, ten printed negatives across 0898C–0899C). All ten named to a host and all ten present. Clean. - 0029 (Ps 38) — clean apart from 0901C.
§E.0030 — stint file cruces-0030.md, verbatim
Psalms XXXIX–XLIV. Band A, stint covering chunks 0030–0034.
0. Span reconciliation — MY LATIN AGREES WITH THE BRIEF
data/briefs/8967-lemmata-0030.txt heads its inventory 267 spans. Counted directly off my own Latin (body only, frontmatter excluded): 0030 = 47 · 0031 = 41 · 0032 = 63 · 0033 = 53 · 0034 = 63 → 267. Exact agreement, chunk by chunk and in total. No missing head-of-range spans, no borrowed tail. The English carries 267 spans in the same order.
⚑ The brief's column labels were stale when I began (a line carrying anchors but no spans never advanced the band, so spans inherited the chunk's opening column) — e.g. VERS. 7 and VERS. 8 of Psalm XXXIX were filed under 0902C when they stand under 0902D. The coordinator corrected the file mid-stint. Membership was never affected, and I located every span from my own Latin, not from the labels.
Other parity, all 1:1 against the Latin twin: column anchors (7 · 5 · 9 · 9 · 9, verbatim and in place beside the same word), [n:] notes (35 · 28 · 39 · 34 · 34, byte-identical and in order), question marks (0 · 1 · 7 · 1 · 0). Zero em-dashes supplied.
1. PLATE READS — FOUR NEW PAGES, cols 0903A–0910D
Nobody had read 0903–0910. I read all four leaves before firing anything. Recorded in data/plate-reads.json; PDF page = (column + 11) / 2, corners checked first on each.
| page | cols | left col clipped? |
|---|---|---|
| 457 | 903 / 904 | 903 clean (3 mod 4) |
| 458 | 905 / 906 | 905 CLIPPED (1 mod 4) |
| 459 | 907 / 908 | 907 clean (3 mod 4) |
| 460 | 909 / 910 | 909 CLEAN — and 909 is 1 (mod 4) |
⭐ A third counterexample to the withdrawn mod-4 rule. Col 909 is congruent to 1 (mod 4) and its line-openings are whole (Obdormis. Negligere videris.). Col 905, also 1 (mod 4), is clipped. The congruence predicted the risk on one leaf and mispredicted it on the other, in the same range. The coordinator's ruling — predict with it, never decide with it — is confirmed once more from a leaf it would have wrongly written off.
Page 456 (cols 901/902) was already recorded as read; I re-opened it anyway at 500 dpi, because the recorded read carried no findings against my own chunk's words and my chunk opens under 0901D.
2. MARKERS FIRED — five [var:], zero [sic:]
Every one stands mid-line in a column I opened at the plate. Each is a divergence between what Migne PRINTS (plate and our TEI agreeing) and the Clementine, cited from sources/vulgate/clementine-flat.txt, never from recollection.
- 0904D ·
In fine intellectus.(Ps XLI titulus) — Clementine Ps 41:1In finem. Intellectus filiis Core.Migne has the ablative fine for the accusative finem, and drops filiis Core. Material: §2 of the launch brief settlesIn finemas "Unto the end" precisely because the Glossa argues from finis as a terminus reached; the ablative says "at the end," not "unto." Plate p. 457, col 904D, mid-line, clean column. - 0907D ·
Si vos persecuti fuerint in una civitate, fugite in aliam.— Clementine Mt 10:23Cum autem persequentur vos in civitate ista, fugite in aliam.Wholly different protasis (conditional perfect subjunctive against a temporal future, una civitate against civitate ista). Plate p. 459, col 907, clean. - 0908B ·
In similitudinem gentium. [n: (Ibid.)]— Clementine Ps 43:15in similitudinem gentibus, dative. ⭐ The decisive evidence is internal: the gloss's own paraphrase two words later reads gentibus sunt appositi — it expounds the DATIVE while the lemma above it prints the genitive. That is 7a″'s pattern with the halves reversed, and it makes the divergence material. Plate p. 459, col 908, clean. - 0910B ·
Pro his qui commutabuntur ex filiis Core.— Clementine Ps 44:1pro iis qui commutabuntur. Filiis Core. Migne's added ex turns the sons of Core from the addressees of the psalm into the source out of which the change is made, and the gloss beside it is arguing exactly about who is changed (multi de suis inimicis supponent se sibi).his/iisalone would not have earned a marker; the preposition does. Plate p. 460, col 910B, clean. - 0911B ·
Virgines et proximae.— Clementine Ps 44:15virgines post eam ; proximae ejus, with a semicolon and no connective. The gloss turns on the connective: post enumeratio partium est distincta, cum dicitur: Virgines et proximae — the et is what makes the enumeration "distinct," so this is the gloss arguing from the word. Plate p. 461 (read by another stint, col 911 clean), confirmed against my own re-read of the page.
No [sic:] is owed anywhere in this range. Every non-word and every unconstruable form in my Latin turned out at the plate to be Corpus Corporum's, not Migne's — see §3. Conversely, every defect Migne actually prints in these ten columns has already been tidied away by CC before it reached us, so there is nothing left in our Latin to carry.
3. ⛔ CORPUS CORPORUM NORMALIZATION — 28 SITES IN TEN COLUMNS, AND THE CLASS RUNS BOTH WAYS
This is the largest finding of the stint and it is not a translation matter. Reading the plate word for word against our TEI over cols 0902–0910 turned up 28 places where our Latin is not what Migne prints. None is a marker; all are TEI-patch candidates in the sense of translation-style.md § "Source patches" and of the sordescat→sordescet patch already in data/tei-patches/8967.json. I have NOT patched them: eight stints are running on this work concurrently and chunk-work.mjs rewrites every chunk, so the patch must be applied once, after the band merges, and the chunks re-cut then.
⚠ Our English mirrors the Latin twin in every one of these, not the plate — except the two marked ⭐ below, where our Latin holds no word at all to render. When the patch lands, these sentences must be re-read against it.
3a. CC changed a word Migne prints (15)
| col | leaf | Migne prints | our TEI reads | note |
|---|---|---|---|---|
| 0902C | p. 456 | Haec sunt miro Dei | mira | CC supplies the concord Migne lacks |
| 0902C | p. 456 | post locutos egomet | locutus | |
| 0902D | p. 456 | enumerare rossit | possit | broken p on the plate |
| 0902D | p. 456 | fecisti qui velles | quid | |
| 0903C | p. 457 | de secundis : Qui dicant mihi | dicunt | conformed to the VERS. 16 lemma above |
| 0903C | p. 457 | VERS. 17.-- Et dicunt. | dicant | ⚑ the same pair swapped the OTHER way, this one toward the Clementine (Ps 39:17 et dicant) |
| 0903D | p. 457 | ne qui gloriam | quis | |
| 0903D | p. 457 | unius homini vox | hominis | |
| 0903D | p. 457 | VERS. 3.-- Dominum conservet. | Dominus | ⛔ the Clementine's own form at Ps 40:3 |
| 0904A | p. 457 | infirmitas durio superetur | duris | |
| 0905A | p. 458 | fontem ad bibendum | ab | mid-line, legible in the clipped column |
| 0906A | p. 458 | quod notantur in modico | notatur | |
| 0904C | p. 457 | alii fratres in aliquid sperabant | in illum aliquid | CC supplies an object Migne does not print |
| 0908D | p. 459 | Nocere dicitur Deus | Noscere | ⭐ CC REPAIRED a genuine Migne defect — the sentence needs noscere, and CC gave it |
| 0910C | p. 460 | odit Deus iniquitetem | iniquitatem | ⭐ a NON-WORD, with iniquitatem correctly set nine words earlier in the same sentence. Had CC not tidied this, it is a [sic:] on Migne's own type. |
⛔ Two of these are undetectable by any check this edition runs, and they are the reason this section is long. Dominum→Dominus (0903D) and the VERS. 17 dicunt→dicant (0903C) both move Migne's text onto the Clementine's reading — so a Vulgate collation sees agreement where the plate has divergence, exactly the judicabit→judicavit mechanism recorded in CLAUDE.md 8a. A [var:] on either was made impossible, not merely wrong, before I ever saw the file.
⭐ And the class runs in both directions on one leaf-pair: at 0902C CC manufactured a concord Migne does not print (miro→mira), and at 0908D it repaired a real corruption (Nocere→ Noscere). Neither direction is detectable from our Latin, because both leave a well-formed word.
3b. CC changed the words Migne sets, not just their spelling (2)
- 0904A — Migne:
haec bona temporalia : quasi, facit haec doloribus plena, ne eis spes habeatur.Our TEI:haec bona temporalia: sed Deus facit haec doloribus plena, ne in eis spes habeatur.CC has replaced Migne's secondquasi,withsed Deusand insertedin. This is much larger than the ordinary letter-level class and I flag it as the one entry here that deserves a second eye before patching: it is the only site in the ten columns where our Latin carries words the plate does not carry at all. The English follows our twin ("but God makes them full of sorrows"); on the plate the clause is verbless and elliptical. - 0902D — Migne:
Multiplicati sunt numerum.Our TEI:Multiplicati sunt super numerum.CC has addedsuper, which is the Clementine's reading at Ps 39:6. Another member of the invisible class: the addition creates agreement with the Vulgate where the plate diverges.
3c. CC changed Migne's punctuation (9)
0903B bona dicit malo, animo (comma dropped) · 0903C professio in aeternum. gaudentes (full stop dropped) · 0903D the head PSALMUS XL. with a final period, dropped, so our head reads PSALMUS XL and my English head reads PSALM XL to match · 0904C malus ingressus. malus egressus. (full stop → comma) · 0906A nemo. confitetur (Migne's own mid-sentence full stop, dropped) · 0907B Deus auribus. (comma inserted, giving Deus, auribus.) · 0910A vel de populo ad populum. (terminal stop dropped, so my English paragraph also ends without one) · 0911B idolorum cultoribus. (full stop → comma) · 0904D Hieronymum.. (double stop reduced to one).
⚑ The PSALMUS XL. case is worth naming separately: a head is not a spelling. Our Latin prints ## PSALMUS XL and Migne prints PSALMUS XL., and the heads array in the frontmatter carries the period-less form. I have mirrored our twin rather than the plate, because heads are checked against it, but the plate reading is the one to restore.
3d. ⭐ Two sites where our Latin holds nothing to render — the English follows the PLATE
These are the only two places where I have not mirrored the twin, and I say so here because a silent departure is exactly what this file exists to prevent.
- 0902B —
In Hebraeol. Our TEI prints a non-word. The plate printsIn Hebraeo, clean, mid-line, in a clean column (p. 456). Pattern 7's non-word rule would carry it in italics under a[sic:], but a[sic:]accuses Migne's type and I have seen that his type is sound: firing one would be a false public claim of exactly the kind CLAUDE.md 8a exists to stop. The English reads "In the Hebrew." ⚑ This is one of the three unreadIn Hebraeoclauses named in launch brief §3; it is now read, and no Hebrew type stands at this site on the plate — Migne prints the Latin phrase only, so there is nothing for CC to have dropped and nothing to recover. - 0902D —
ἀποπομπάιohgr;ι. Our TEI carries an unconverted SGML entity:&ohgr;is Greek small omega, so CC's rendering of the single characterῳ(omega with iota subscript) has broken intoohgr;ι. The plate printsἀποπομπάιῳ, read at 500 dpi on p. 456. The word is untranslated Greek in both columns either way, so nothing is gained by printing markup debris at the reader; the English carries the plate'sἀποπομπάιῳ. It is the dative of ἀποπομπαῖος, the LXX's word for the scapegoat at Lev 16, which is precisely what Migne's own gloss says next (id est, emissario).
4. RENDERINGS AND WHY — the calls a reader will want argued
4a. The settled axes, and the instrument check before reporting anything
gentes family: 9 occurrences, all rendered Gentiles. 0902A gentes idola colentes · 0908A traditi gentibus in servitutem · 0908B gentium / gentibus sunt appositi · 0908D fides tua gentibus · 0908D sed gentibus, quae putant mortuum · 0910D gentes designantur, Tyri, gentium, gentes scilicet. Every one stands in a plain Judaei/gentes opposition — three of them name the Jews or Judaea in the same sentence — so none is the generic "nations" case. Singular gens at 0906D (Gens non sancta) → nation, per the axis. pagani at 0904D → pagans, a fourth word.
⚑ Instrument checked before reporting, as the shared brief requires. A raw \bturb grep returns 3 hits in my range and not one is turba: they are turbatur (×2) and turbari, the verb turbare — the exact false positive the brief names. Zero turba, zero multitudo, zero natio (and zero of its -natio look-alikes), zero daemoni-, zero mysterium/sacramentum. One diabolo (0908C) → devil.
usque ad: 23 occurrences, and I decided each one from what stands on either side. All 23 follow etc., and open an italic span — every one is the abridgment formula, rendered "as far as". There is no Sap-8:1-style look-alike in this range (addendum D checked, not assumed). Two carry Migne's comma inside the span (usque ad, at 0905A and 0905C) and are rendered as far as,, comma inside the italics.
In finem → "Unto the end" (0901D, 0903C, 0906C, 0909B), never "for the choirmaster". In fine at 0904D → "At the end", because Migne prints the ablative; see marker 1. Diapsalmus at 0907D → "Diapsalmus", roman and unanglicized. ⚑ Note the FORM: Migne prints the Latinised nominative Diapsalmus, not Diapsalma, and prints it in roman, not italic. The launch brief's rule ("italic as Migne sets it") therefore yields roman here, and italicising it would have added a 268th span. The stint at 0911A–0912D independently confirmed the same form one column later. Psalmus David at 0906C → "a psalm of David"; no Psalmus ipsi David falls in this range.
4b. Unexpressed subjects — every supplied pronoun, named
- 0905B
dilatavi super seipsam— "I have spread it out above itself." It = animam meam, from the lemmaEffudiabove (Ps 41:5 effudi in me animam meam), not from the sentence.seipsamis feminine and fixes it. - 0906A
Qua ad me turbatur anima— "Whereby the soul is troubled toward me." Rendered literally on Qua. The obvious conjecture is Quia ("because"), and the plate printsQua(p. 458, col 906A, clean), so this is Migne's and not ours. I did not take the conjecture: it would be a silent repair, and the sentence construes after a fashion as printed. - 0908C
quod a circumstantibus irrogat— active singular verb with no expressed subject. Rendered "which one inflicts from among those standing round." The subject is the vicinus of the previous clause. Flagged rather than smoothed. - 0910A
Et quia deducet te inoffense— "And because it shall lead thee on without stumbling." It = dextera tua, from Ps 44:5 (deducet te mirabiliter dextera tua), which is the verse the whole Regna gloss is expounding. Nothing in the sentence names it. - 0908B
quando eos comparibus poenis affecerunt— "when they afflicted them." They = the gentes of the lemma; eos = the martyrs. - 0910B
supponent se sibi— "shall put themselves under him," sibi reflexive to the psalm's te, the bridegroom, not to the enemies.
4c. Negation — each printed negative, and the word it sits on
Test 2 run word by word; the trigger population of 2a (a negative on a verb with a quantifier or correlative nearby) fires at three sites and all three are resolved from the sentence's own structure, not from what reads well:
- 0909C
Non sono, qui transit, comparat Verbum: sed scripto, quod manet.Thenonsits on sono, not on comparat — proved by thesed scriptocorrelative, which supplies the alternative term of the comparison, not an alternative verb. English: "He compares the Word not to sound, which passes away, but to writing." Had it floated onto the verb ("he does not compare") the sed clause would have nothing to attach to. - 0909C
quia non aliud post aliud, sed omnia simul in uno Verbo aeterno—nonon aliud post aliud, again fixed bysed omnia simul. - 0910B
Nemo sibi multum de misericordia praesumat, blandiatur— Migne prints no negative on blandiatur;Nemogoverns both jussives asyndetically. English: "Let no one presume much to himself concerning mercy, or flatter himself." The "or" carries Nemo's scope across; it is not a supplied negation, and writing "let him not flatter himself" would have added anonMigne does not print.
Not in the trigger population, resolved as printed: 0909D quae non sub cruciatu humano cogitat quod ... divulgat — I kept the printed order ("which does not under human torment devise what it divulges") rather than resolving the scope, because there is no correlative to settle whether the non governs cogitat or the prepositional phrase. The English preserves the ambiguity that the Latin has; naming it here is the honest treatment. Carried without smoothing elsewhere: non hominem (0901D) · non me (0901D) · non turpe, non theatrale (0902B) · qui non temporalia sperat (0902B) · non est quod putatur (0902C) · Nulli auctores (0902C) · noluisti / noluit / non audit (0902C–D) · non petisti (0902D) · non parva / non prohibebit / non sim piger (0903A) · Non abscondi (0903A) · non diffidens (0903B) · non sufficit / Ne tardaveris / Nisi breviati (0903C) · non petentibus (0903C) · Ne putes / ne ... superetur / ne ... spes habeatur / ne ... deserti (0904A) · Non solum aperti inimici (0904B) · Non audent (0904B) · nonne habet (0904C) · nondum ad damnationem (0904C) · Non amaritudo (0905B) · non extra (0905B) · Deum non videam (0905B) · nihil est in mundo / si non modo (0905C) · non obsistam (0905D) · nisi vitia carnis essent (0905D) · Nemo currit ... nisi ... nisi / nemo confitetur nisi (0906A) · non in superbis (0906A) · Non petit peccata sua (0906C) · Gens non sancta (0906D) · ne ab eis corrumpatur (0906D) · non curat (0906C) · et non patitur (0907A) · non amentur (0907B) · ne putetur ambigua (0907B) · Non juvenes (0907B) · auctor non mutatur (0907C) · Non enim in arcu meo sperabo / gladius meus non salvabit me / ne nos traherent (0907C) · non tamen obliti Dei (0907D) · nullus acquirit / vel nullus pro eis (0908A) · quia non transitorie (0908A) · non erant in nobis (0908A) · Non recessit (0908A) · non permisisti (0908C) · non obliviscuntur (0908C) · Non pro criminibus (0908D) · non dormire / non sibi / non persequerentur (0908D) · Hactenus non obliti (0908D) · etsi nesciamus (0909A) · non das spiritum (0909A) · non habet ultra (0909B) · nihil sit in opere quod non prius fuit (0909C) · non aliud (0909C) · Non deauratis (0911B) · Vel non in circumcisione (0911A). Every one is on the page, and none was added.
4d. Lemmata I checked against the Clementine and found in AGREEMENT — the negative list
A findings list alone cannot be told from a report by an agent that never looked, so: these are the multi-word lemmata I collated verbatim and found identical to the Clementine, spelling variation apart. Exspectans exspectavi (Ps 39:2) · Mirabilia tua (39:6) · Multiplicati sunt super numerum (39:6, but see §3b — our text agrees only because CC made it agree) · Sacrificium et oblationem noluisti (39:7) · Aures autem perfecisti mihi (39:7) · In capite libri scriptum est de me (39:8) · Domine, tu scisti (39:10) · Non abscondi (39:11) · Misericordia tua (39:12) · Qui volunt mihi mala (39:15) · Ne tardaveris (39:18) · Intellectus filiis Core (41:1) · Qui intelligit (40:2) · Dominus conservet (40:3 — agrees only because CC made it agree, §3a) · Et vivificet (40:3) · Dominus opem (40:4) · Inimici mei dixerunt (40:6) · Et si ingrediebatur (40:7) · Egrediebatur foras (40:7) · In idipsum (40:8) · Et retribuam eis (40:11) · Quemadmodum desiderat (41:2) · Quando veniam (41:3) · Fuerunt mihi lacrymae meae panes (41:4) · Haec recordatus sum (41:5) · In locum tabernaculi (41:5) · In voce exsultationis (41:5) · Quare tristis / Quare conturbas (41:6) · Ad meipsum (41:7) · Propterea memor (41:7) · De terra Jordanis (41:7) · Abyssus abyssum (41:8) · Apud me oratio (41:9) · Quare oblitus (41:10) · Dum confringuntur ossa (41:11) · Judica me / Et discerne (42:1) · Quare tristis incedo (42:2) · Emitte lucem tuam (42:3) · Et introibo (42:4) · Confitebor tibi in cithara (42:4) · Salutare vultus mei (42:5) · Ad intellectum (43:1) · Deus auribus (43:2) · Sed dextera tua (43:4) · Tu es ipse rex meus et Deus meus (43:5) · Non enim in arcu meo sperabo / gladius meus non salvabit me (43:7) · Nunc autem repulisti (43:10) · Vendidisti populum tuum sine pretio (43:13) · Opprobrium vicinis (43:14) · Venerunt super nos (43:18) · et declinasti / a via tua (43:19) · humiliasti nos (43:20) · Si obliti sumus nomen Dei (43:21) · Propter te mortificamur (43:22) · Et tribulationis (43:24) · In terra venter (43:25) · Speciosus forma (44:3) · Populi sub te cadent (44:6) · dilexisti justitiam / Et odisti (44:8) · Myrrha et gutta (44:9) · Filiae regum (44:10) · Astitit regina (44:10) · Audi, filia (44:11) · Et concupiscet rex (44:12) · Omnis gloria / Ab intus (44:14) · Adducentur regi (44:15) · Pro patribus tuis nati sunt tibi filii (44:17). Outside the Psalter: nomen quod est super omne nomen (Phlp 2:9) · Semel locutus est Deus (Ps 61:12) · Quod factum est in ipso vita erat (Jo 1:3–4) · eructat verbum (Ps 18:3) — all four verbatim.
4e. Divergences from the Clementine that I DECLINED to mark, with the reason
⛔ Twelve of Luke's seventeen corrections came off a declined list, so this section is not filler.
- 0902C
Non est qui similis tibi.— Clementine Ps 39:6non est qui similis sit tibi. Declined: an ellipsis in a clipped lemma, not a change of reading. The Glossa cuts lemmata mid-phrase constantly (Lacu.,Carmen.,Nomen.), and nothing in the gloss under it turns on the copula. Marking it would put a[var:]on the abridgment's habit. - 0908A
Derisum his qui in circuitu.— Clementine Ps 43:14derisum his qui sunt in circuitu nostro. Declined for the same reason: the lemma simply stops. The gloss expounds derisus and contemptus, neither of which is at issue. - 0909A
Quare oblivisceris?— Clementine Ps 43:24 runsQuare faciem tuam avertis? oblivisceris inopiae nostrae et tribulationis nostrae?Migne splices two clauses into one. Declined: a conflation of adjacent words of the same verse is the abridgment cutting, and the gloss immediately treatsEt tribulationis.as its own lemma, exactly as the Clementine divides. Nothing is asserted about another text. - 0908D
Exsurge, quia propter te mortificamur.— a conflation of Ps 43:23 and 43:22, both verbatim. Declined: the gloss says outright that it is joining them (et ut perseveremus:). - 0908A
Dedisti nos tanquam oves escarum.— Clementinetamquam. Declined:tanquamis an attested orthography of the same word, Pattern 9's exempt class. Same forlacrymae/lacrimaeat 0905B,coelum/caelum,charitas/caritas. - 0903C
Qui dicunt mihi: Euge, euge.— Clementine Ps 39:16 closesEuge, euge !with an exclamation. Declined: Pattern 8 governs the plate's own marks and Migne prints a full stop; a difference in a received text's punctuation is not a divergence of reading. - 0910B
Pro his ...— thehis/iishalf. Fired the marker onex, declined it onhis.hisforiisis a routine orthography of the period;exis a preposition that changes the relation. The marker names only what it can stand behind. - 0906C
Modicum quidem contristavi illum,attributed to Isaias. Not in the Clementine verbatim under that name (nearest is Is 57:17, which shares no wording). Declined: this is the Glossa quoting a father's paraphrase, and[var:]compares Migne's scripture with the received text of the verse he cites — here I cannot identify the verse he cites, and Pattern 14 forbids speculating. Crux, not marker. - 0904D
vere, vere,as Aquila's rendering. Not in the Clementine, and should not be: it is a report of a translator's version, not a citation. - 0902D
Ecce venio(Apc 3:11 etc.). Verbatim in several places; the psalm's own Ps 39:8 also readsecce venio. No divergence. - 0905A
Filii Core,glossedfilii calvi. An etymology, not a citation. - 0907D
Salvasti,, 0910ARegna., and the other 96 single-word spans. Checked in place against the verse each stands in; all are the verse's own word.
4f. Passages read clean, and hard calls where two readings both construe
- 0902D
vel, possunt esse duae dictiones pro peccato.Two readings: (a) "pro peccato may be two words" — the phrase just discussed is a pair, not a compound; (b) "there may be two words for sin." I took (a), because the sentence's whole context is the lemmaPro peccato.and its relation tooblationemtwo clauses above, and because Migne printspro peccatounitalicized here where he italicised it as a lemma four words earlier — which is why the English could not set it in italics without adding a 268th span. (b) loses because nothing in the passage is counting synonyms. Recording the rival because the apparatus never shows the reader what was weighed. - 0903B
Et qui bona dicit malo animo, et qui mala dolose laudando, uterque malus est.The second member has a gerund where a finite verb is wanted (laudando for laudat). The plate prints it so (p. 457, col 903B, clean). Rendered with the anacoluthon visible — "and he who evil things by praising them deceitfully" — rather than repaired to "and he who praises evil things deceitfully," which would smooth away a fact about this printing. No[sic:]: laudando is a real word in its own grammatical slot, which Pattern 12 explicitly exempts. - 0907D
Enumerat mala quae hic fecerunt boni, non tamen obliti Dei.fecerunt — "which the good did here." The sense the passage wants is plainly "suffered" (the whole psalm is the martyrs' complaint), and pertulerunt or passi sunt is the obvious conjecture. The plate printsfecerunt(p. 459, col 907D, clean column, mid-line), so it is Migne's, and Pattern 7 forbids reading the conjecture into the English. Rendered literally, conjecture recorded here. - 0905C
Qui, si investigas, nihil est in mundo quare hoc debeas.Qui stands where Quia is wanted. Rendered literally ("Who, if thou searchest, there is nothing..."). Real word, occupying a slot, so no marker; the conjecture is Quia. - 0903B
Complaceat, Trinitatem personarum; tibi, singulariter unitatem essentiae signat.⚑ The argument does not survive translation and the reader should know it. Cassiodorus reads the Trinity out of the com- prefix of complaceat and the unity out of the singular tibi. English "May it be pleasing" carries no prefix, so the first half of the argument is invisible in our column and legible only in the Latin one opposite. I have not glossed it in the text — that would be an editorial act — but it is the clearest case in this range of an argument that lives in the Latin word. - 0902B
Haec falsa, sed opera tua mirabilia, coelum, terra, elidit superstitiones.Singulareliditagainst a plural subject. Rendered with the singular kept ("dashes superstitions to pieces"), because English has an exponent for verb number and normalising it would hide a fact about the plate. No marker: this is not carried type, it is our English rendering his reading. - 0904A the
Universum enim stratum,pair. Two italic spans withenimbetween them. English word order wants "for" first, which would leave the two spans adjacent and read as one run. I kept a word between them — "The whole indeed couch," — so the two lemmata stay visibly distinct.lectum→ bed andstratum→ couch throughout, kept apart because Ps 40:4 sets them in one verse and the gloss glosses each separately. - 0906A
modico. Jordanis. [n: (Ibid.)]— one italic run in our TEI containing two lemmata and a note. The plate setsin modico Jordanisas a single italic phrase with no interior stops (§3a). Our English mirrors the twin's structure, so it reads "in the little one. Jordan.", which is odd; when the patch lands it should become one phrase. - 0904C the stray full stop after
[n: (AUG.)].Reproduced verbatim. Migne's compositor, not ours. - Migne's verse numbering skips, all reproduced as printed and none reordered: Psalm XXXIX runs 14 → 16 (no VERS. 15) and prints
VERS. 12.without the--every other address carries; Psalm XL skips 5 and 12; Psalm XLIII skips 3, 6, 9, 16 and 25; Psalm XLIV skips 16. - 0903C
## PSALMUS XL— the only head in the range without a final period. Mirrored as## PSALM XL; the plate has the period (§3c).
5. UNREADABLE ON THIS COPY — one site, logged for the second witness
0905A excrescentibus pilis et cornibus. Column 905 is clipped at the inner margin, and the line break falls exactly at the clip: the plate shows excrescentibus ending one line and t cornibus opening the next, so whether Migne sets pilis cannot be settled here. Our TEI's reading is probably right — the same sentence ends cornua et pilos deponit — but "probably right" is not a plate read, and no marker rests on it either way. Second witness: Gallica ark:/12148/bpt6k5505319w, f = (column + 1) / 2 → f453, one IIIF request.
6. NOT DEFECTS — raised, checked, and closed
amicabusat 0911B (laudatur sponsa ab amicabus). Looks like a slip for amicis. The plate printsamicabus(p. 461, col 911, clean) — the archaic feminine dative-ablative plural on the filiabus/deabus pattern, and exactly right here, since the friends of the bride are women. Migne's, correct Latin, no marker, no conjecture.Diapsalmusfor Diapsalma at 0907D — plate-confirmed, and confirmed again by the neighbouring stint at 0912A. Migne's form, not a corruption.non declinasti (alia littera)at 0908C — Migne's own variant note, printed inline in his voice. Reproduced as printed; no marker of ours is stacked on it, per the shared brief's rule about Migne's own apparatus.In labiis,Dico opera,Lingua, calamusat 0909C — flagged by the pre-scan as not in the Clementine. All three are fragments of Ps 44:2–3 cut at a word boundary (diffusa est gratia in labiis tuis; dico ego opera mea regi; lingua mea calamus scribae). No divergence.(ID.)and(Ibid.)— 39 of the 175 sigla in this range. Passed through verbatim and not expanded to the names they point at, per launch brief §4.
§E.0035 — stint file cruces-0035.md, verbatim
Band A, final stint, Psalms XLV–XLIX. Latin src/latin/8967/0035.md–0038.md.
0. SPAN COUNT RECONCILIATION — the brief is CORRECT
data/briefs/8967-lemmata-0035.txt declares 222 spans. Counted mechanically over the four chunks' Latin bodies (frontmatter excluded, \[^]\):
| chunk | spans |
|---|---|
| 0035 | 59 |
| 0036 | 51 |
| 0037 | 45 |
| 0038 | 67 |
| total | 222 |
222 = 222, and the brief's own inventory-line count (^\[0) is 222 as well. No mis-split. The head of the range (VERS. 1.-- In finem. at 0911C) and the tail (Salutare Dei. at 0918B) are both present, so the file is shifted at neither end.
English span parity is 1:1 in every chunk with markers stripped, as are notes (31 / 19 / 26 / 39), column anchors (identical lists, in order and in place), question marks (0 / 1 / 1 / 2), colons and semicolons band for band.
1. PLATE READS — FOUR PAGES, ALL EIGHT COLUMNS OF THIS RANGE, ALL PREVIOUSLY UNREAD
Cols 0911–0918 had never been read. All four pages (PDF 461–464 by the work's map, PDF page = (column + 11) / 2, on-disk raw/scans/pl113/patrologiaecurs04migngoog.pdf) were opened for this stint, corner numbers read before the text (911/912, 913/914, 915/916, 917/918), full page width at 300 dpi with 600 dpi crops on every candidate. Recorded in data/plate-reads.json. Zero foot-of-page conjecture apparatus of either layer on any of the four pages — consistent with the work's existing spot coverage, and still a sample.
⚑ All four left-hand columns (911, 913, 915, 917) are CLEAN. None is 1 (mod 4), so this range adds nothing to that tally either way; it is recorded only so a later stint need not re-open the leaves. Every marker below rests on a word read mid-line in a clean column.
2. MARKERS FIRED — three, each licensed by a column read at the plate
2.1 [sic: sucipientis] — 0914B, chunk 0036
Migne prints Id est, populi non sucipientis misericordiam. Read at 600 dpi, mid-line, in a clean column: the plate itself sets sucipientis, and Corpus Corporum transcribed it faithfully. A non-word (for suscipientis), and brief §A's rule — a suspicion aimed at a non-word has been right every time — is here settled by the plate rather than by frequency. The marker does not swallow the word: the English reads "of a people not receiving [sic: sucipientis] mercy", and with the bracket deleted the clause still has its participle, its negation (non) and its object (misericordiam).
2.2 [var: Vulg. Ps 48:2 Audite haec, omnes gentes] — 0915A, chunk 0037
Migne heads Psalm XLVIII's second verse Odite haec, omnes gentes. — "Hate these things" — where the Clementine has Audite. Plate-confirmed at 300 dpi in a clean column. This is the sharpest thing in the range, because the gloss under it argues from the Vulgate reading and not from Migne's: Cassiodorus answers Nullum excipio ("I except none") and the next verse's gloss Nulli sermonem subtraho ("I withhold my speech from none") — both are glosses on an invitation to hear, and neither has any purchase on a command to hate. Pattern 7 therefore governs the English: it reads "Hate these things, all ye nations", and the [var:] carries the divergence. ⛔ Conforming the lemma to Audite would have been the exact 7a″ silent repair, and it would have concealed the one place in this range where Migne's plate and his own commentary come apart.
omnes gentes here → nations, not Gentiles: the gloss reads the address as universal (Nullum excipio, Nulli sermonem subtraho, audiat haeres terrae … justus), with no Judaei/gentes opposition anywhere in the psalm.
2.3 [sic: Tempesta] — 0916D, chunk 0038
Migne prints Tempesta valida. where the Clementine (Ps 49:3) has tempestas valida. Plate-confirmed at 600 dpi. Why [sic:] and not [var:], which was the rival and lost: a [var:] asserts that Migne's text diverges from a witness, which implies a reading some tradition holds. No witness reads tempesta; the nominative does not exist for this noun, and tempesta valida will not construe. What the plate shows is a dropped final letter — a defect in the type — so [sic:] is the honest instrument and [var:] would have dressed a broken sort as a textual variant. The English still says "A mighty tempest": the marker records the type, not the sense.
3. CANDIDATES DECLINED — with reasons, and this list is the deliverable
Plate-confirmed as Migne's, and deliberately left unmarked:
- 0916D
in circumitu ejus(Clementine Ps 49:3 in circuitu ejus). Plate-confirmed, so it is Migne's and not the digitization's. Declined because circumitus and circuitus are the same lexeme and the sense is untouched — Pattern 14 marks a divergence when it is material, and an orthographic doublet is not. Recorded here so the negative is on file. - 0913B
Deus sedet super sedem sanctam.(Clementine Ps 46:9 sedem sanctam suam). Plate-confirmed. Declined as a truncated citation, not a variant: the gloss cuts the quotation precisely at the words it is about to take up as its own next lemma (Sedem sanctam. follows immediately). Marking the omission would convict Migne of a reading where he was only quoting as far as he needed. - 0917A
Deus est judex justus.Neither Ps 49:6 (quoniam Deus judex est) nor Ps 7:12 (Deus judex justus, fortis) matches it verbatim, and it stands inside an usque ad resumption tail, where the recension itself re-sets the words. Declined because I cannot say which verse the span is a divergence FROM, and a[var:]that names the wrong verse is worse than none. The crux is the safe instrument here and this is it. - 0916D
usque ad: exibit de Sion lex, et Verbum Domini de Jerusalem.(Isa 2:3 Clementine: de Sion exibit lex, et verbum Domini de Jerusalem). Word order only, inside an abridgment tail. Immaterial; declined. - 0914D
Dilectio fortis est ut mors.(Cant 8:6 Clementine: fortis est ut mors dilectio). Same words, different order, in the gloss's own voice under whence Solomon. Immaterial; declined. ⚑ Noted because a reversal of this shape was a real defect at 7914 @1079B — but there the reversal was ours, against a plate that printed the order straight. Here the plate prints the reordering, so there is nothing of ours to undo. - 0913D
ab aquilone pandetur omne malum(Jer 1:14: Ab aquilone pandetur malum super omnes habitatores terrae). An adapted citation inside an usque ad tail — omne has been pulled forward out of omnes habitatores. Declined as adaptation, not divergence. - 0913D
In Bethlehem Judae secundum Scripturas.(Mt 2:5: In Bethlehem Judae: sic enim scriptum est per prophetam). The gloss's own summary of the answer given to Herod, not a quotation offered as one. Declined. - 0913C
Psalmus vel laus cantici filiis Core secunda,(Clementine Ps 47:1: Psalmus cantici, filiis Core, secunda sabbati). The vel laus is the glossator offering an alternative rendering of the titulus, marked as such by vel; it is not a claim about the Psalter's text. Declined. - 0918C
quem novit, qui aliquid alii quam gratiae Dei attribuit.The sense plainly wants a negative — Augustine's point is that the man who ascribes anything to something other than God's grace does not know Christ. Migne prints no negative, confirmed at 600 dpi, and Pattern 7a forbids supplying one. The English carries the printed reading and contradicts itself, which is the evidence. (See §4 for what our TEI does to the same clause.)
Real words that read oddly, rendered as printed and NOT raised as plate candidates (brief §A: a real word reading oddly is Migne's): 0914C qui multis: (the clause has no verb and the colon hangs — rendered literally, "who to many:"); 0917D Nostra tribulatio proprie est timore salutis (ablative where a genitive is expected); 0918A In his omnia tonat vitia; 0916A quasi felicitas nominatur impiorum. All four are on read pages and all four print exactly as our Latin has them.
4. CC-NORMALIZATION CANDIDATES — SEVEN, all TEI-patch material, NO markers owed
Every one was found by reading the whole line for a different word, exactly as brief §C predicts. ⛔ None of these may carry a marker in either direction: firing a [sic:] on one would accuse Migne of his transcriber's defect. They are logged for data/tei-patches, with the leaf named.
| column | leaf | Migne's plate | our TEI | class |
|---|---|---|---|---|
| 0912B | PDF 461 | diluculo | diliculo | CC corruption (u→i); our file holds a non-word |
| 0914A | PDF 462 | Conteres naves Tharsis. (space) | naves-Tharsis | CC hyphenation artifact at a line break |
| 0915A | PDF 463 | sed quae omnia concludi. | concludit | CC normalization — the plate's form does not construe, which is why it was tidied |
| 0915D | PDF 463 | jumentis, non alia re, sed in sapientia | non in alia re | CC supplies an in (the 8969 @1168B class exactly) |
| 0917A | PDF 464 | qui pluris habent opere charitatis | opera | CC normalization |
| 0917C | PDF 464 | Hic similitudinibus figurat Ecclesiam | His | CC alteration to a different word (adverb → ablative) |
| 0918C | PDF 464 | qui aliqui alii quam gratiae Dei attribuit | aliquid | CC normalization, and the most substantive: aliquid is what makes the clause construe at all |
⚑ Three further CC artifacts of a lower order, listed so nobody re-derives them: 0917C our TEI sets VERS, 11.-- with a comma where the plate sets VERS. 11.; 0915A our TEI sets [n: ((AUG.)] with a doubled parenthesis where the plate sets a single (AUG.); and at 0918B the plate's own line-break dittography doc-/ctus is silently repaired to doctus in our TEI. The English reproduces our TEI verbatim in the first two cases, because a VERS. address and a note both pass through unaltered.
⚑ And a habit rather than a defect, reported once as a class: CC supplies a full stop before a siglum where the plate prints none (0914D Furem, currebas (Ibid.), 0918B Tui similis (CASS.), 0918B Rapiat (CASS.), 0916C In progenies patrum (Ibid.)), and supplies the -- after VERS. n. where Migne omits the dash (0915D VERS. 12, 0916A VERS. 15). Nothing turns on either; no patch is worth filing for them individually.
5. VOCABULARY CALLS — the axes, and the two the axes did not rule on
gentes, eleven occurrences, split deliberately:
- → Gentiles wherever the Judaei/gentes typology is the gloss's own argument: 0911C (quod caecitas contigit in Israel, quod Apostoli transierunt ad gentes), 0911D, 0911D amaritudine gentium, 0912A Immanitas gentium, 0912A Contradicentes, gentes, 0912C–D Psalm XLVI's Omnes gentes and the two glosses under it (vos omnes gentes ad quas transivit gratia), 0913B (expulsis Judaeis, gentes in filios Abrahae succedunt — the opposition stated in as many words).
- → nations where the sense is plainly generic: 0912A cui gentes et regna subjiciuntur — the phrase is Ps 45:7's own (conturbatae sunt gentes, et inclinata sunt regna), a pair of political words with no typology attached; and 0915A Odite haec, omnes gentes with its gloss (see §2.2).
genssingular of the Jewish people → nation: 0914C Per Judam, gens earum ostenditur.- ⚑ I checked the instrument before reporting any of this:
natiooccurs zero times in these four chunks (every apparent hit is damnationis / incarnationis / significatio), and there is nogentilisorgentilitasin the range.
usque ad, thirty-four occurrences, decided per occurrence per brief §D. ⛔ A raw grep returns 34 and the formula is 32 of them — the trap brief §D names, and it fires twice in this range. The two look-alikes are both A solis ortu usque ad occasum: at 0916D inside the lemma span (Ps 49:1's own words) and at 0917A unitalicised in the gloss that re-quotes it. Both are temporal and both are rendered "from the rising of the sun unto the going down", identically in both places. That is the Lc 16:16 exception from the shared brief, met in the wild. The other 32 are the abridgment formula → "as far as".
Diapsalma / Diapsalmus — both forms occur and both stand. Migne sets Diapsalmus at 0912A, 0912B, 0916A and 0916B, and Diapsalma at 0913A. Neither is anglicized and neither is replaced by its explanation; each is carried in the form the plate prints, roman where Migne sets it roman (he does, in all five places — so no italics were added, which would have broken span parity as well as fidelity).
Dominus virtutum → "the Lord of hosts" (0912B, and twice at 0914A). ⚑ This is a departure from this work's other renderings of virtutum ("of the virtues" — 0866C, 0885B, 0901C) and it is taken because the gloss argues from the word: at 0914A the comment on In civitate Domini virtutum is quia ibi custodes angelos deputat, "because there he appoints angels as guards", and at 0913B the gloss on Sedem sanctam is Throni, Virtutes, et sancti — the angelic orders. Migne's virtutes in this title are the hosts, on his own showing. Saying so here rather than silently, per the brief: this is the axis a Band B or C stint will meet next (Deus virtutum recurs at 0947A, 0975B, 0978D, 0979B, 0981A).
sedes → "seat", never "throne" (0913B, twice). Forced by the same sentence: the gloss explains sedem sanctam as Throni, Virtutes, et sancti, so "throne" in the lemma would collide with the angelic order Thrones three words later and make the gloss circular.
saeculum → "the world" (0911D, 0916B), matching the work's 22 prior uses. diabolus → devil (0916A), daemonibus → demons (0917D) — axis 3 kept apart; there is no daemonium/diabolus collision in the range.
6. FRAGMENTARY LEMMATA — expanded per convention 3, and the ones left as they stand
Expanded, because the governed word is elided and the stump would say nothing:
- 0913A
Omnis. [n: (Ibid.)]→ "Of all the earth." (Ps 46:8 rex omnis terrae Deus). The gloss's whole argument is the universality — Non ut Jupiter Cretae, Mars Thraciae — so a bare "All." would strand it. - 0918B
Statuam contra tuam.→ "I will set against thy face." (Ps 49:21 statuam contra faciem tuam). Faciem is elided between contra and tuam; the gloss's own next words are ante faciem ponam.
Left as they stand, because nothing is elided (the class distinction the shared brief insists on): Mane., Vocem., Noster., Posuit., Prodigia., Excelsus., Terribilis., Dextera., Gloria., Domus., Stultus., Asaph,, Sum. and the rest of the one-word run. Contrasting these with the two above would manufacture an inconsistency that is not there.
⚑ One I could not expand and did not: 0913D Quoniam reges contra. Ps 47:5 reads Quoniam ecce reges terrae congregati sunt, convenerunt in unum, which contains no contra. Read at the plate: Migne sets contra inside the italic run, and it governs nothing. The likeliest reading is that it answers the gloss's own question two words earlier (Tutandam, et quid opus est? — guarded against what? reges contra, the kings against her), but that is a conjecture and supplying "her" would put it in the text. Rendered literally, "For the kings against." and logged.
7. UNEXPRESSED SUBJECTS SUPPLIED — named, with what licenses each
- 0911D Nos enim fugiebamus eas — "we were fleeing them": eas is feminine and its antecedent is not in the sentence. It is tribulationibus from Ps 45:2 (adjutor in tribulationibus quae invenerunt nos nimis), which is also what supplies the subject of invenerunt in the lemma above. Both stand or fall together, and the verse settles both.
- 0913A in qua speciosus erit fulgens ut sol, qui nunc est abjectus — the subject of erit is the Christian people of the clause before, and qui nunc est abjectus attaches to it, not to a new person. Rendered "in which he shall be comely, shining as the sun, who now is abject", which keeps the Latin's own ambiguity rather than resolving it; flagged rather than decided.
- 0912D ut nondum credentes sub pedibus habeat — the subject is Ecclesia, named two words earlier (Sic est exaltata Ecclesia).
- 0918A cui charitate jungimur — the antecedent is Ecclesiae, which is the gloss's expansion of matris in the lemma Et adversus filium matris; the Church, not the mother's son.
- 0916C ut malus a malo quiescat — malus is the man, malo the evil; rendered "that the evil man may rest from evil" and not "from the evil man".
8. NEGATION — every printed negative named to its host
Sixty-three negatives across the four chunks (non, nec, neque, nisi, ne, nullus, nemo, nihil, nunquam), all carried. The ones where the host is not the adjacent verb, which is the 2a trigger population — a negative resting near a quantifier, correlative or predicate:
- 0912B
non enim illius tantum est Deus— the negative belongs ontantum, not on est. The preceding clause is Qui tanta nobis dedit quanta dedit Jacob: the point is not that God fails to be Jacob's God, but that he is not Jacob's alone. English: "for he is not the God of him alone." - 0912B
Non nisi filiorum crucis— both particles carried ("Not save of the sons of the cross"); rendering it "Only of the sons of the cross" would have dropped two negatives and passed every count. - 0915C
pro qua tantum timebiturwith quasi non est quod timeam before it — tantum is the restrictive, and the English puts it there: "for that alone shall there be fear." - 0918A
non casu alii derogat, sed studio— anon … sedcorrelative, so the negative is oncasuand not on derogat: "he detracts from another not by chance, but of set purpose." Putting it on the verb would have said he does not detract, which the sentence is denying. - 0918A
non cum voluntate facit— the negative is on the phrase cum voluntate, not on the verb; the sentence concedes that he does the thing, and denies that he wills it. - 0917D
non ideo quod Deus inde delectaretur, sed ne daemonibus offerentur— anon … sedwith a second negative (ne) inside the sed clause; both stand, and the ne clause is a purpose clause, not a second denial of the first. - 0913B
Nemo sapienter facit quod non intelligit— two negatives, two hosts, both kept. - 0914C
quia nullus est, et si nesciat cultum, qui huic nomini non se subjiciat— three negative words in one sentence, each on its own host; the nullus … qui non is a double negative that English must keep as a double negative, not flatten to "everyone submits".
9. THE FOURTH TEST — read back for what the English ASSERTS
Run last, with every count already clean. Two paragraphs read smoothly where the Latin is rough and were re-checked for that reason:
- 0914C populi non sucipientis misericordiam, qui multis: ut nulla videantur esse grana, sed tamen nonnulla — the smooth reading would supply a verb for qui multis and make the grains a simile of the temple. Nothing was supplied; the colon and the dangling multis stand.
- 0918C Christus, qui cum gratia venit, quem novit, qui aliquid alii quam gratiae Dei attribuit — see §3.9. The English asserts what Migne asserts, which is the opposite of what Augustine meant, and the crux is where that belongs.
10. GATE STATE — read this before shipping the work
node scripts/plate-gate.mjs 8967 passes all three of my markers (0914B, 0915A, 0916D) and fails on one marker outside my range: 0904D 0032.md [var: Vulg. Ps 41:1 …], chunk 0032, which belongs to the stint on 0030–0034. Col 0904 is unread. Either that page is read at PDF 458 and recorded, or the marker is withdrawn — it cannot ship as it stands.
Eight Opus stints, 38 chunks, 39,328 Latin words. verify-english clean, plate-gate OK, patch-audit OK. This section is the reconciliation, not the concatenation; the eight stint files stand verbatim in §G.
F1. ⭐ EIGHT FOR EIGHT ON THE SPAN COUNT
384 · 294 · 373 · 367 · 352 · 272 · 302 · 258 — every stint's own count of the italic spans in its Latin matched its lemma brief exactly. That count is the only detector a mis-split brief has (verify-english cannot see one), so the Band B split is sound everywhere it was tested. Two stints also checked that the brief's first and last entries matched their range's first and last spans.
F2. ⛔⛔ THE HEADLINE, AND IT CORRECTS WHAT THE BAND LOOKED LIKE BEFORE THE PATCH PASS
Before the patch pass Band B stood at 106 [var:] against 4 [sic:], and that ratio was read — by me, in this session — as evidence that the defects in these columns are overwhelmingly Corpus Corporum's rather than Migne's. That reading was wrong, and the error is instructive.
The [sic:] count was suppressed by patch ordering, not by Migne's cleanliness. A [sic:] may wrap only type our twin carries; CC had already repaired dozens of Migne's real defects, so the markers were unfireable while the twin disagreed with the plate. One stint reported zero [sic:] on a range containing twelve Migne defects, and another found that its twin carried none of the six standing on its leaves.
After the patch pass restored them, Band B stands at:
| marker | count |
|---|---|
[sic:] | 53 |
[var:] | 112 |
[cj:] | 12 |
[d:] | 2 |
⭐ The lesson is general and belongs to the series: on a work whose twin has been silently repaired, NO MARKER COUNT MEANS ANYTHING UNTIL THE PATCH PASS HAS RUN. Quoting one before is quoting the digitization's opinion of Migne, not Migne.
F3. THE PLATE — 90 columns, none of which had been opened when the band began
Every stint read its own leaves; plate-gate refuses a marker on a column nobody opened, and it passes work-wide. What the leaf did that no other instrument could:
- It withdrew markers. Six candidates in Band A's own reckoning, and in Band B at least sixteen more, every one of which read as a confident Migne defect from the Latin alone. One stint had six
[sic:]candidates and the plate took five. - It reversed the direction three times in one range — two candidates withdrawn as ours,
intrepretaturconfirmed as Migne's when it read like the classic transcriber artifact. - ⭐ It stopped a false
[var:]against Migne.solennitatis@0960A looked like a divergence from the Clementine; the plate shows Migne printssolemnitatis, agreeing with it. CC had de-diphthonged him and manufactured the appearance of a divergence.
### ⚠ A SECOND IMAGING HAZARD, MEASURED — italic e images as c Found by the 0044–0048 stint (Ostcndisti, omncs, Vallcs), briefed into wave 2, and it then withdrew eleven false accusations against Migne across the band (omncm, opcrantis, Zcb, Eccc, undc, verbornm, agom, nocent among them). Without a same-letter control on the same line, this one hazard would have manufactured a defect class that does not exist. It belongs beside the h/b warning — which also fired in reverse this band, our TEI carrying biatu where the plate reads hiatu.
⛔ The turned-sort pair Viuo and Clamabuut is deliberately NOT in that class: an n cannot become a clean bottom-arched u by failing to ink. The distinction is what makes the hazard rule usable rather than a licence to decline everything.
### The mod-4 clipping rule stays withdrawn, and is now refuted 22 more times Band A drew "column ≡ 1 (mod 4) is clipped" from four consecutive leaves. Band B opened ~90 columns and found exactly one clipped column in the whole band, 0981 — and the marker resting in its margin was WITHHELD and logged for Gallica, not fired. That is the rule's real failure mode (silent withholding) being made visible instead of being allowed to happen.
F4. OUR LATIN IS NOT MIGNE'S — 149 patches over 73 columns
~1.4 departures per collated column, agreeing with Band A and with 9003's independent collation of the sibling PL 114 Psalter. The class runs three ways, all three found here:
- CC moves Migne ONTO the Clementine — invisible to any Vulgate collation by construction. ⭐⭐
conculcabit→conculcabis@1000B is the one to remember: the gloss's very next words are Serpentem calcat Ecclesia, the third person the whole exposition is built on.Audivit→Audivi@1007B erased a first/third-person divergence before any instrument looked. - CC REPAIRS Migne's defects, destroying markers we are entitled to fire — including a compositor eye-skip @0991C, where CC reconstructed the sense Migne lost, so nothing in our twin could ever have shown the plate was broken.
- CC MANUFACTURES defects and readings. ⭐ @0942A it INSERTS
Sinainto a lemma whose whole point is thatSinais absent — Migne's next gloss reads Quidam libri non habent mons, sed a facie Dei Sina Israel — making Migne argue against a text he did not print. And @0999D/1000A it manufactured a dittography at the column turn where Migne breaksIdeo-|que; no[d:]is owed, because the doubling is ours.
F5. WHAT THE PATCH PASS ITSELF FOUND — scripts/patch-audit.mjs
chunk-work.mjs refuses a find that matches zero or many times. That is uniqueness, and uniqueness is not location. The new audit resolves each patch's EDIT offset to its enclosing <pb/> and compares with the declared column. On its first run it found:
- 24 of Band A's 43 applied patches had NO column recorded at all, so the check had never been possible on more than half the file.
- One Band A patch was filed at the wrong column (
Gen. III, filed 0855C, lands 0853D) — the 9003 failure recurring. The repair was aimed right; the RECORD was wrong, which would have sent anyone re-reading that leaf to the wrong page. - Four Band B sites were one BAND letter off, and a patch pair at 0928B would have deadlocked the queue — one edit fell inside the other's find string, so the second would have matched zero times and aborted chunking outright.
⭐ The ordering rule was then vindicated by measurement: re-chunking with all 192 patches left Band A's 39 Latin chunks and Band C's 29 byte-identical, all 38 of Band B's changed, and no chunk boundary moved — so Band A's filed English was untouched and Band C's lemma briefs did not need regenerating.
F6. CONVENTIONS — inherited, confirmed, and the exceptions taken
- §A2
DiapsalmaROMAN — confirmed by twelve more plate reads across the band. - §A4
Psalmus David≠Psalmus ipsi David— ⭐ now evidenced from Migne's own plate rather than merely obeyed: at 1010A he printsPsalmus ipsi Davidexactly, four columns from thePsalmus Davidthat took a[var:]. He sets both forms. In finem→ "Unto the end." held throughout. ⚑ One recorded non-engagement: @0976D Migne does not printIn finemat that titulus at all (Intellectus pro his qui commutabuntur), so the ruling is not engaged there.usque ad— three stints independently took exceptions, and Wilson's ruling of 2026-09-04 (§A7) settles the class: theetc.splice test replaces italic membership. Re-audited across the band afterwards: 274 formula, 18 non-formula, and every English rendering is consistent with the ruling. The twoas far asoutside a splice are genuine sense-renderings (spread as far as the ends of the earth).gens tenebrarumdoes not occur anywhere in Band B; ruled by Wilson on Band A's single site as "people of darkness" (§A5).- Convention 3 exception, named:
Deus quis similis?@0982C — expanding the stump would silently decide the est/erit question the gloss exists to argue.
F7. ⛔ STILL OWED
- The blind polarity read has NOT run on Band B. Band A's found six of our own defects, four invisible to every other check, and one stood in a column the cruces had already logged. A logged column is not a checked column.
- Five reported sites remain unpatched, each because the report itself declined or could not rule:
Nafrubimus@0962B (the letter would not settle asfortat 1200 dpi, and a patch must not guess a letter any more than a marker may),Malivolenti :@0929A, 0926B's self-contradictory report,res alienas/res aliena@0971D, and(Rom. IX)→(Rom. IV)@0971A — where CC CORRECTED Migne, so restoring it needs acitation-corrections.jsonentry landed with it (⛔ column written WITHOUT its leading zero, or it matches nothing and still reports 0 unparsed). - Five Gallica sites, one IIIF request each:
f443,f449,f453(Band A), 0932B (Misericordia/Misericordiam, in col 0932's over-inked outer margin) and 0981C (filiis/filii Excelsi omnes, in the band's one clipped column). - Residual prose punctuation listed by three stints as "recorded, not argued" is not applied; the sense-bearing and lemma-internal marks are.
- Band C — chunks 0077–0105, 29 chunks, 28,516 words. Its briefs are current and unaffected by the patch pass. It carries the gradual psalms, and it inherits §A6 (the plate where read), §A7 (the
etc.splice test) and the two imaging hazards.
⛔ Nothing ships until all three bands are merged. Nothing here is pushed or deployed.
Four Opus readers, fenced from cruces.md, every stint file and every brief, split 0039–0047 / 0048–0057 / 0058–0066 / 0067–0076. Every one named its clean chunks and its rejected candidates. 28 sites, 24 ours. Recorded via polarity-record.mjs.
⛔⛔ IT AUDITED THE PATCH PASS THAT HAD JUST RUN, AND THE PATCH PASS FAILED
Seven of the twenty-eight are defects I introduced or left behind earlier the same day, every one found by a reader who could not see the patch report, the pending file, or the cruces:
- A
[sic:]fired on the WRONG WORD.[sic: Eccesiam]@0920C sat after "kingdom", telling the reader Migne's plate is defective at regnum. The defective type is Ecclesiam = Church. A misplaced marker is a false public accusation against Migne at a word he set correctly. liberavit@0927A — I patched the Latin to Migne's doubled perfect and left the English reading "will deliver", so our English manufactured the perfect-for-future gloss the plate does not have, in the one place where Migne's own parallel (dedit, id est, dabit) proves the defect.quid@0929D — patched the Latin, left the English readingqui, demoting an interrogative to a relative modifier with no marker.sint erant@0944A — patched away CC's supplied relative, left the English rendering CC's fluent clause, silently repairing a broken column.: et@0989C — I listed the English edit as owed in the patch-pass record and never made it.biatu@0924B — a patch its stint reported and I never built.- The unmatched CC parenthesis @0936D — same.
⭐ The lesson is a mechanism, not an exhortation. The stint reports are PROSE and I extracted 149 patches from them by hand; nothing reconciled reported sites against applied ones, and nothing checked that a fired marker sits on the word it accuses. Two of the seven were pure omission, and I would not have found them by re-reading my own work, because my own work is where the omission is. The blind read is the only instrument in this pipeline that audits the pass that precedes it.
The systematic finding — THREE readers, three ranges, one habit
Fourteen lemmas that Migne prints SHORT and our English silently completed from the Vulgate: In finem pro his → "for those who shall be changed" · Nonne → "Shall not my soul be subject to God" · Nolite sperare in → "in iniquity" · Te decet → "A hymn becometh thee" · Anticipaverunt vigilias → "My eyes prevented the watches" · Cibabis → "Thou wilt feed us" · manus in cophino → "his hands" · In sancto → "In my holy one" · Sicut sol in conspectu → "in my sight" · Opprobri servorum → "of thy servants" · In sinu → "In my bosom" · In pennis → "Under his feathers" · Adorate Dominum in atrio → "in his court".
⚑ How much the convergence is worth, stated honestly: all four readers were told to watch for "a supplied possessive the Latin never printed", so their agreement on the CLASS is one brief speaking three times, not three independent findings ([[feedback_briefed-agents-are-not-independent]]). What none was told is the PATTERN — that these cluster specifically in truncated lemmas and run toward the Vulgate. And one site carries its own proof without any convergence: at 0965B Oculi mei is itself a separate lemma which the glossator then expounds twice, and Migne's third gloss offers inimici mei as the alternative subject — which only makes sense if the head lemma carried none. Supplying it pre-empts the gloss it exists to introduce.
⛔ This is 7a″ conformation inside the apparatus rather than inside a quotation, and it is the failure profile predicted for verse-by-verse commentary. All fourteen are now rendered as printed.
The sense-level defects — the class with no grep signature
Ten, every one of which read perfectly in English:
Judicandi igitur ante precentur absolvi@0962C — a nominative plural gerundive read as a genitive, so the English lost who is praying.quibus imperat et ipse dilectus@0942B — a nominative subject turned into a predicate, so this gloss and Migne's own next gloss three lines below said opposite things about who the Beloved is, and only in English.sub spe religionis@0984C rendered "under the show of religion" — specie for spe. It converts an unfulfilled hope into hypocrisy, a different charge, in a passage whose proof-text is about a hope carried through the fall.idem corpus sanat, et lavat caput@0984D — idem pulled off the word it stands next to; the clause's whole force is that the body healed piecemeal now is the SAME body healed at the end.Superiora Dominus@0927C — nominative read as genitive, turning a statement about who SPEAKS into one about whose things they are, in a sentence entirely about who is speaking.jacta in Dominum, non alium qui portus est@0925A — the harbour attached to "another", and the same sentence then ended "not a harbour", contradicting itself two clauses later.quod adhuc hodie facit@0949B — an unanchoredfacitwhose nearest English referent was Christ, so the page read as Christ casting the gall.cui et dicet@0937A — the supplied "he" resolved to God, so the page had God praying "Hear us, thou who art the Saviour."congregata ab aliis rapiuntur@0933C — the agent attached to the wrong verb, so others did the gathering and nobody did the snatching.et quod Trinitas@0993A — a supplied "he was" carried the subject over from Verbum and stated that the incarnate Word is the Trinity.
A marker WITHDRAWN, and it was mine
[d: videantur, et] @0991C is withdrawn. [d:] marks type Migne prints twice adjacently; the earlier videantur is eight words back in a different clause and et … et is a correlative pair. Firing it deleted a finite verb and one limb of the correlative, and lost the point — that they still seem to be friends. Now rendered as printed. The reader was right and I was wrong, on a call I had made in the merge two hours earlier.
⚑ Where a reader was RIGHT ABOUT THE FACT AND WRONG ABOUT THE RULE — twice
The standing pattern for a fenced reader, and both instances are instructive:
- It asked for
[sic: PSLMUS]on the Psalm C head. Declined: Pattern 9 normalizes a section label in English precisely because the facing Latin preserves the misprint. The observation (the defect is invisible in English) is correct; the remedy is not. - It filed the @0936D parenthesis as Migne's, deleted by us. It is CC's, inserted — the reader could see our TEI but not the leaf, so it read an addition as a deletion. It is now patched out, which is what its stint had asked for.
Two sites left OPEN by the read
quidam mundi defecerunt@0995B — mundi is genitive of mundus or nominative plural of mundus "clean". In a passage about prelates slain and the just plundered, "certain cleansed ones failed" fits better and would reverse who is failing. The reader raised it rather than filing it: it needs the plate.Non per agentes promissa@0980D — the sense wants "[they lied] by not performing what was promised", but Migne prints the non on the prepositional phrase. Moving it inside would be a Pattern 7 repair. Left as printed, with the strain recorded.
Result: 28 sites, 24 ours, all applied except the two left open above. verify-english, plate-gate and patch-audit clean.
After the blind polarity read, seven open sites were closed by re-opening the leaf on the on-disk scan (raw/scans/pl113/patrologiaecurs04migngoog.pdf), rendered at 150–1200 dpi. Every one had been correctly refused earlier — a patch must not guess a letter, and a report that contradicts itself must not be acted on — and every one fell to a single render.
⚑ The lesson for Band C: a site a stint declines is not necessarily hard. Several of these were simply never re-opened.
Closed at the plate
- ⭐⭐
Nafrubimus@0962C. The 0054–0058 stint declined to transcribe the marker because the letter betweenNaandrubimuswould not resolve asforteven at 1200 dpi. Re-read at 600 and 1200 dpi: the glyph carries a tall ascender with the hooked top of an italicf, standing to the height of thebofbimus, against the shorter straight-stemmedtoftuaon the same line. ⭐ And the leaf supplies the control the stint lacked: Migne setsNarrabimus. Invocabimus nomen tuum.CORRECTLY a few lines above in the B band, so both forms stand in one column.[sic: Nafrubimus]now fired. (Rom. iv)@0971A. Migne printsiv; Rom 9:27 is the true locus, so CC had corrected him. Restored, with acitation-corrections.jsonentry so the index still resolves to Rom 9:27 — the policy of 2026-07-18 exactly. ⚑ TheIbid.hazard was checked, not assumed: the next note in the chunk is an explicit(Prov. II), so nothing inherits a corrected key. ⛔ The column is written971a, without its leading zero — the normalisation that otherwise matches nothing while still reporting 0 unparsed.res aliena@0971D. Confirmed as Migne's. No marker: the concord mismatch has no English exponent (Pattern 12(2)), and with the reading confirmed his, Pattern 9 governs. English unchanged.et attribuam@0926B. Its stint's report contradicted itself about which form the plate carried; at 500 dpi Migne printsid est, et attribuam. CC'seiis the reading that construes, which is why it was substituted.[cj: et; read ei]fired.Malivolenti :@0929A/B. Filed as "a departure needing a ruling, not a defect", because Malivolenti is a real form. At 700 dpi Migne printsMalivolenti :, ending-i, with his usual space before the colon. The ruling: the parallel member ispeccatum, operis, a GENITIVE, so the construction wants malivolentiae and the printed form has no slot.[cj: Malivolenti; read malivolentiae]fired.
⭐ The site whose QUESTION was misdiagnosed — quidam mundi @0995B
The blind reader raised it and said it needs the plate. The plate settles nothing: it prints quidam mundi defecerunt exactly as our TEI has it. Both readings use the same letters, so no transcription check could ever have decided it — it is a parse, not a reading.
What decides it is internal. mundi is either the genitive of mundus (world) or the nominative plural of mundus "clean". Two things favour "clean": (a) the lemma it glosses is ab emendatione, where the Vulgate reads ab emundatione — our own [var:] two words away records it — so the gloss's mundi picks up the cleansing root its lemma has lost; and (b) mundi … in terram redacti sunt is a real antithesis (clean → earth), while "certain of the world failed and were brought down to the earth" is close to tautologous. Rendered "certain clean ones have failed." The alternative is recorded here, not buried.
Confirmed in passing, from leaves opened for other reasons
Super et fundatam @0979A · bene siccata @0980A · the lemma manus in cophino with no ejus · perpercit @0971A · Cynomia · Spiritus vadens et non revertens · De manu tribulationis · and ⭐ Quoniam qui audivit? @0929C with Quis audivit? quoted twice below it — the Class-1 patch verified independently from the leaf rather than from the report.
⛔ What the plate could NOT close
- Col 0981 is genuinely clipped, verified by rendering from x=0: characters are missing from the line starts and the loss is ragged, which no rectangular crop produces.
filiis/filii Excelsi omnes@0981C stays owed to Gallica, and the 0064–0068 stint's report is vindicated rather than taken on trust. Non per agentes promissa@0980D — the plate confirms the words verbatim, so this too is a parse and not a reading. Migne prints thenonon the prepositional phrase; moving it inside would be a Pattern 7 repair. English unchanged, strain recorded, as its reader recommended.
The Gallica list is unchanged at five — f443, f449, f453 (Band A), 0932B and 0981C. None of the seven sites closed above was a Gallica site: all seven were answerable from the copy already on disk, which is precisely why they should not have stayed open.
Nothing below is abridged. Each stint's own reasoning, declined list and checks stand as written — including the candidates it raised and rejected, which are the measured instrument.
§G.0039 — stint file cruces-0039.md, verbatim
Range: src/latin/8967/0039.md–0043.md, cols 0918C–0930C. Psalms L–LVIII. Lemma brief: data/briefs/8967-lemmata-0039.txt.
⚠ This file is one stint's range. It must be merged into src/english/8967/cruces.md.
§0 · SPAN COUNT RECONCILIATION (the required check)
My brief's header states 384 spans for chunks 0039–0043. Counting … runs in my own Latin:
| chunk | italic spans |
|---|---|
| 0039 | 86 |
| 0040 | 29 |
| 0041 | 89 |
| 0042 | 89 |
| 0043 | 91 |
| total | 384 |
The brief's total and my own count agree exactly. The split is sound for this range. The English carries 384 spans in the same order and the same places (checked mechanically with the [var: …] markers stripped, since their contents are italic and inflate a naive count).
Anchors: 12 · 4 · 11 · 11 · 10 = 48, all reproduced verbatim, in order, and each checked against the word it stands beside in the Latin, not merely for presence (test 2b). Question marks: 1 · 0 · 3 · 1 · 4, matching the Latin band for band. noteCount matches the body in all five once the frontmatter incipit's own [n:] is discounted — the documented off-by-one false positive, not a finding.
§1 · THE PLATE — seven leaves, and what they changed
Read: PDF pages 464–470 at 200 dpi full page plus 400 dpi crops, raw/scans/pl113/ patrologiaecurs04migngoog.pdf. Corner numbers read FIRST on p. 464 (917 / 918), confirming PDF page = (column + 11) / 2, then on every subsequent leaf. Recorded in data/plate-reads.json as six full reads covering cols 0917A–0928D; 0929–0930 were already on record.
⭐ Not one column in cols 0917–0930 is clipped at the inner margin. 0921 and 0925 are both 1 (mod 4) and both perfectly clean, which is one more counterexample to the withdrawn rule. No foot-of-page conjecture apparatus of either layer on any of the seven leaves.
18 word-level CC departures from the plate over 13 columns ≈ 1.4 per column — Band A's measured rate. Every one is reported in data/briefs/8967-PENDING-TEI-PATCHES.md with its column and leaf. None of them took a marker, because a [sic:] on any of them would publicly accuse Migne of the digitization's error, and because [sic:] content must appear verbatim in the Latin twin, which by construction it does not.
What the plate settled that the Latin alone could not
hiatu/biatu@0924B — and it cut the OPPOSITE way from the standing warning. The brief warns that lowercasehimages asbin this scan family. Here our Latin carriesbiatuand the plate readshiatu. I settled the letter against thehofhabitaculisstanding on the same printed line, per the same-line control rule, not against the type in isolation. The English renders "the gulf of earthly desire".deservit/deserit@0921A — checked, clean.Non deserit malum, qui diligit super benignitatemreadsdeseriton the leaf, and nothing in this range is dative-governed. The standing check was run and returns a negative; recording the negative is the point.Laetctur@0923B — a candidate I DECLINED after reading it. Theeof Laetetur images asc. That is a broken sort on this copy, thepossit→rossitclass Band A refused: it is not reported for patching and it takes no marker. Our Latin'sLaeteturis right and stays.- The heads. CC has the terminal periods backwards on three of four in this range —
PSALMUS L./PSALMUS LIon the plate againstPSALMUS L/PSALMUS LI.in our Latin, andPSALMUS LIV.againstPSALMUS LIV. My English follows the Latin twin, per §A3 (PSALM L,PSALM LI.,PSALM LIV), so three English heads move when the Latin is patched. Flagged so the patch pass does not leave the twins disagreeing. Quoniam qui audivit?@0929C — the plate readsqui, our Latinquis, the Clementine (Ps 58:8)quis. Class 1: the divergence was erased before any Vulgate collation could see it. Migne's own gloss quotes the verse back asQuis audivit?twice nine lines below, so the plate carries both readings. No[var:]fired, because the word our page prints is CC's, not Migne's; the marker becomes available the moment the patch lands, and that is said in the patch queue.
§2 · THE DIVERGENCE LIST — every lemma word, against the Clementine
⭐ This section names what I checked, not that I looked. All 384 spans were walked. Below are (a) the divergences that took a marker, (b) the divergences I found and DECLINED with reasons, and (c) the lemmata I checked and found to agree exactly. Sources: sources/vulgate/clementine-flat.txt.
2a. [var:] fired — eleven
| col | Migne prints | Clementine | why it is material |
|---|---|---|---|
| 0919D | exsultant ossa humiliata | Ps 50:10 exsultabunt | present against future, and the gloss's own argument is the present: et quia jam humilis jam exsultant. The tense is what the sentence is for. |
| 0920D | Abimelech | Ps 51:2 Achimelech | and the gloss argues from the difference: Jerome's note reads Dicit, in Hebraeo Achimelech … ergo Abimelech patris mei regnum, and Cassiodorus writes in domum Achimelech one paragraph above. Migne prints both forms; the divergence is his subject. |
| 0923B | Laetetur disertum, et floreat tanquam lilium | Isa 35:1 Laetabitur deserta et invia, et exsultabit solitudo, et florebit quasi lilium | jussive for future, twice, and half the verse absent |
| 0923C | Ego Deus et non homo, et civitatem non ingredior | Os 11:9 Deus ego, et non homo; in medio tui sanctus, et non ingrediar civitatem | present indicative for future: "I do not enter the city" against "I will not enter the city", in a gloss distinguishing the city God refuses from the city he inhabits |
| 0925B | Populus, qui a sanctis longe fit | Ps 55:1 pro populo qui a sanctis longe factus est | present for perfect — and Migne's own second quotation, eight lines below at 0925C, reads longe factus est. The control stands on the same leaf. |
| 0926C | Vota laudationis | Ps 55:12 vota tua, quae reddam, laudationes tibi | the possessive and the dative both vanish; the gloss expounds "vows of praise" as a single thing |
| 0926D | corrumpas David | Ps 56:1 ne disperdas | a different verb in the titulus, and the gloss is built on it (ne, tu, Pilate … corrumpas David). ⚑ Ps 57 and 58, two chunks later, print ne disperdas — so the divergence is local to this titulus, not a house spelling. |
| 0927A | Misit Verbum de coelo | Ps 56:4 Misit de caelo, et liberavit me | Verbum is not in the verse, and the whole gloss is about the Word sent out of the hidden essence. ⚑ Migne's own next lemma, three lines down, reads Misit de coelo and agrees with the Vulgate exactly — the divergence and its control are on one leaf. |
| 0929C | Surge, Petre, macta et manduca | Act 10:13 Surge, Petre : occide, et manduca | macta is sacrificial slaying, and the gloss uses mactare three times around it (Ut mactent et manducent … quo mactat Petrus). occide would not license the argument. |
| 0929D | Sustinuit vasa irae apta, et ad interitum, in multa patientia, ut notas faceret divitias suas | Rom 9:22–23 sustinuit in multa patientia vasa irae, apta in interitum, ut ostenderet divitias gloriae suae | gloriae is gone and the verb is changed |
| 0930B | Ite, maledicti, in ignem aeternum | Mt 25:41 Discedite a me maledicti in ignem aeternum | Discedite a me replaced outright |
All eleven stand on columns recorded in data/plate-reads.json; plate-gate.mjs passes on all of them.
2b. Divergences found and DECLINED — with the reason, because a blind reader will look here
Pattern 14's bar is a divergence that changes the sense. These do not clear it, and firing them would bury the eleven above in noise:
In ore stultorum est cor eorum@0920D vs Sir 21:29In ore fatuorum cor illorum. Three differences, and the sense is unchanged. ⛔ But the decisive reason is other: the plate readsstulorsorum, a non-word, so the word our page prints is CC's repair, not Migne's. A[var:]here would compare the Clementine against a reading Migne never set. Declined, and reported for patching instead.Non potest abscondi civitas supra montem posita@0923C vs Mt 5:14Non potest civitas abscondi supra montem posita. Word order only. No sense turns on it.Nuntiabo@0924B vs Ps 54:18annuntiabo. The prefix only, and Migne himself writesannuntiaat 0924D. Not a sense change.a tempestate@0923B vs Ps 54:9et tempestate. The Vulgate's noun is governed by the samea; the preposition repeated changes nothing.Pro nihil@0925D vs Ps 55:8pro nihilo. A real word, and the gloss reads it adverbially either way (quasi nihil inde tibi sit).Deus meus es, tu@0926B vs Ps 55:10Deus meus es. An appended emphatic pronoun.In tituli inscriptione ipsi David cum tenerent eum@0925B vs Ps 55:1David in tituli inscriptionem, cum tenuerunt eum. Case and mood, no sense change.ipsi Davidis deliberately kept distinct per §A1.4 and is not the divergence.Et coepit Jesus taedere et pavere@0927B vs Mc 14:33coepit pavere et taedere. Migne reverses the two verbs and suppliesJesus. No sense turns on the order — but note that this is the cinis et pulvis shape from 7a″, so: my English keeps Migne's order and does not restore the Vulgate's.In hoc natus sum, ut testimonium perhibeam veritati@0924C vs Jo 18:37, which readsEgo in hoc natus sum, et ad hoc veni in mundum, ut …. A compression, not a divergence.Nonne duodecim horae sunt diei?@0925D vs Jo 11:9Nonne duodecim sunt horae diei?. Word order.sperantes in divitiis praevaluerunt in vanitate sua@0929B vs Ps 51:9speravit in multitudine divitiarum suarum, et praevaluit in vanitate sua. Deliberately pluralized by the gloss to apply the verse to the fortes of Ps 58:4. An adaptation the gloss makes on purpose is not the class Pattern 14 marks.Recte@0928A vs Ps 57:2recta judicate. Adverb for neuter plural; the gloss argues from neither.Circumibunt@0929C vs Ps 58:7circuibunt. Orthography.Fortitudinem meam … susceptor meus es, Deus.@0929D — the trailingDeusis the head of Ps 58:11 pulled into the lemma. Not a variant reading.
2c. Checked and found to agree with the Clementine exactly
Every remaining lemma in the range. Named so that this list cannot be mistaken for the work of an agent who only reported findings:
- Ps 50 (0918C–0920C):
Miserere mei, Deus·Secundum magnam misericordiam tuam·Magnam misericordiam·Miserationum·Amplius lava me·Munda me·Quoniam iniquitatem (meam)·Contra me·Tibi soli peccavi·Coram te·Ut justificeris·Vincas cum judicaris·In iniquitatibus·Ecce enim·Veritatem·Incerta et occulta·Occulta·Asperges me·Hyssopo·Super nivem·Auditui meo·Averte·In visceribus meis·Ne projicias me a facie tua·Spiritu principali·spiritum rectum·Spiritum sanctum·Docebo·De sanguinibus·Justitiam tuam·Laudem tuam·Sacrificium Deo·Contribulatus·Cor contritum·Benigne fac·Muri·Tunc acceptabis sacrificium·oblationes·holocausta·Tunc imponent·vitulos·Altare. ⚑spiritum principalem@0920A is not a divergence: it is the gloss inflecting its own lemma into the accusative afterper. The lemma proper at VERS. 14 isSpiritu principali, which is Ps 50:14 verbatim. - Ps 51 (0920C–0921C):
Doeg·Quid gloriaris in malitia·Cogitavit·Sicut novacula·Dilexisti malitiam·Lingua dolosa·Propterea Deus·Et radicem tuam de terra viventium·Videbunt justi(both) ·Ego autem·Oliva fructifera·In aeternum et in saeculum saeculi·Fecisti, et exspectabo nomen. - Ps 52 (0921C–0922A):
Dixit insipiens·Insipiens·Deus de·Si est·Omnes declinaverunt·Nonne scient·Deum non invocaverunt·Ossa eorum qui hominibus placent— Ps 52:6 verbatim (the plate'sqniis a turned sort, reported for patching) ·Confusi sunt·Quis dabit ex. - Ps 53 (0922A–0922C):
Ziphaei·Deus, in nomine·Deus, exaudi·Percipe·Alieni·Ecce enim·Adjuvat·Averte mala inimicis·In veritate·Voluntarie sacrificabo. ⚑In virtuteis not a divergence: Migne labels it himself,secundum aliam litteram. ⚠Mihi autem,@0922C I could not place in Ps 53. It reads as a lemma pickup and the nearest Clementine home is Ps 138:17. No marker; logged as unplaced rather than guessed. - Ps 54 (0922C–0925B):
In finem in carminibus·Intellectus·Exaudi, Deus, orationem meam·Ne despexeris deprecationem·In exercitatione·Conturbatus sum a voce inimici(spans the 54:3/54:4 verse break, which is Migne's clipping, not a variant) ·Cor meum conturbatum·Timor et tremor·Contexerunt me tenebrae·Sicut columbae·Ecce elongavi·Et mansi in solitudine·Exspectabam eum·Praecipita·Divide·In civitate·Et labor in medio ejus·Usura·Quoniam si inimicus·Abscondissem me forsitan ab eo·Tu vero, homo·Unanimis·Notus·Dux·Notus meus. Qui simul·Cibos·Veniat·Veniat mors·Descendant in infernum viventes·Viventes·In habitaculis·in medio·Ego autem·Vespere et mane·mane·meridie·Narrabo·Appropinquant mihi·Quoniam inter multos erant mecum·Exaudiet Deus·Humiliabit illos qui est ante saecula·Non enim est illis commutatio …·Contaminaverunt·Ira·Cor·Molliti sunt sermones·jacula·Ipsi sermones·Curam tuam·Fluctuationem·Contristatus sum in exercitatione·Tu vero·Dies suos, ego autem·Laetare, sterilis, quae non paris(Gal 4:27 verbatim). - Ps 55 (0925B–0926D):
Allophyli·Geth·Miserere mei, Deus·Impugnans tribulavit me·Ab altitudine·Altitudo diei·sperabo·Tota die·Inhabitabunt·In ira populos confringes(both) ·Deus, vitam meam annuntiavi tibi·Posuisti lacrymas·In quacunque die·In Deo laudabo verbum·In Domino·Laudabo sermonem·In me sunt·Quoniam eripuisti·Ut placeam. - Ps 56 (0926D–0928A):
In finem·Miserere mei·Et in umbra·Misit de coelo·Liberavit·dedit·in opprobrium conculcantes me·Misit Deus·Misericordiam·Veritatem·Misericordiam suam·Dormivi·Conturbatus·Filii hominum·Lingua·Tristis est anima mea(Mt 26:38) ·Exaltare·Laqueum paraverunt·Pedibus·Incurvaverunt·Ante faciem meam foveam·Paratum·cantabo·Exsurge, gloria mea·exsurgam diluculo·Exsurge, psalterium et cithara·Ad coelos. - Ps 57 (0928A–0929A):
In finem ne disperdas David in tituli·Si vere utique justitiam loquimini·Manus vestrae·Concinnant·Alienati sunt peccatores a vulva·Furor illis·Surdae et obturantis·Terra·cauda·Venefici incantantis·Deus conteret·Molae fractae·Dentes·In ore·Molas leonum confringet Dominus. Ad nihilum devenient·Confringet·Ad nihilum·Tanquam aqua·Intendit arcum·Priusquam spinae·Rhamnum(both) ·Sicut viventes, sic·Sic in ira absorbet eos·Laetabitur justus cum viderit vindictam·Et dicet homo·Deus judicans eos. ⚑Medicamenti medicati a sapienteis Migne's own labelledalia littera, not a divergence. - Ps 58 (0929A–0930C):
In finem ne·Ne disperdas·Quod scripsi, scripsi(Jo 19:22) ·Eripe·De inimicis·Eripe me·Fortes·Iniquitas·peccatum·Exsurge·In occursum·Vide·Convertentur·Ad vesperam·Circumibunt·Et gladius·Gladius·Deridebis eos ad nihilum·Quis audivit·Ostendit·Ne occidas·insertis·Ne quando obliviscantur·In virtute tua·Depone·Delictum oris eorum·delictum·Et comprehendantur·In superbia·Et de exsecratione·Annuntiabuntur in consummatione·In ira consummationis·consummationis·consumptionis·Et scient·Convertentur ad vesperam·Murmurabunt·Ego autem·Et exaltabo·Misericordiam·Ad vesperum demorabitur fletus, et ad matutinum laetitia, Ps 29:6 verbatim.
§3 · NEGATION — every printed negative, and the word it is on
I named the host word for each non/nec/neque/nisi/nunquam/nullus/nihil/ne in the range and checked the negative sits on that host in the English, not merely that it is present (test 2, and test 2a's hole). The sites where the check bit:
- @0918C
non cadendi, sed, etsi cecideris, resurgendi ne desperes— two negatives, on cadendi and on desperes, and English apposition would happily drop the second. Rendered "not of falling, but of rising again if thou hast fallen, that thou despair not." - @0920A
robur solum petit non auferri— ⚑ the exact 2a trigger: a negative on an infinitive with the quantifiersolumbeside it.solummodifiesrobur, not the asking: he asks that the strength alone not be taken. Rendered "he asks that its strength alone be not taken away" — the negative onauferri, the quantifier onrobur. - @0925C
non ait: Non timebo, sed, sperabo in te— two negatives, one of them inside a quoted refusal. Both carried; thesedcorrelative is what fixes the scope. - @0928B
Non solum non faciunt, sed nec audire volunt— three negatives, and the first belongs tosolum, not tofaciunt. Rendered "Not only do they not do, but they will not even hear." - @0930A
Non eos, sed delictum occide— ⚑ the sharpest one in the range, and the §4 class exactly. Thenonis oneos, not onoccide: the command is to kill, and to kill the sin instead of the men. "Slay not them, but the sin" reads the negative onto the verb and inverts Augustine. Rendered "It is not them, but the sin, that thou art to slay", which puts the scope where the Latin puts it. - @0925B
Vae! qui peccant et non poenitent— the apposition trap from §4. Both the!(kept where Migne sets it, after Vae, not moved to the end of the sentence) and thenoncarried. - @0922B
qui non nisi temporalia noverunt—nonandnisiboth printed, both rendered: "who know nothing except things temporal." - @0921A
Non deserit malum, qui diligit super benignitatem· @0919ACujus verba non transeunt· @0919BChristo nullum habenti peccatum· @0919Cut nec peccata sint impunita· @0921Bquae non fructum parit/nihil habebunt cum sanctis· @0926Anullus inde tibi labor/quasi nihil inde tibi sit/pro nullis eorum meritis· @0926CVota … quae a nobis nunquam recedunt· @0928Dnon vera, sed falsa … videntur vivere, nec vivunt/non est ira comparatione futurae· @0930Anon ipsi/non surgeret Paulus, nisi prius caderet Saulus· @0930Anec fieri potest ut superbus non invideat— all checked host by host, all carried, none supplied.
No negative in the range was translated as its opposite, and none was relocated to a neighbouring verb to make a clause run. Nothing in these five chunks was smoothed.
§4 · UNEXPRESSED SUBJECTS — the pronouns I supplied, and who they are
Per the brief's dominant-defect rule, each supplied "he/she/it/they" named:
- @0925B–0926D, Psalm LV throughout: the subject is the CHURCH, feminine.
Orat Ecclesia … dicit se non timere,dicit se a superbis conculcari,laudem Dei cantaturam se dicit. The gloss names her once and then runs on subjectless for a column. Rendered "she" throughout, withEcclesiaas the antecedent — not the psalmist, and not Christ, who enters only at Ps LVI. - @0924B
Alienae sunt, non naturales— feminine plural, and the antecedent isnequitiaefrom Ps 54:16 (nequitiae in habitaculis eorum), which is in the verse and not in the sentence. Rendered "They are alien" of the wickednesses, not of the dwellings (habitacula, neuter) and not of the men. - @0927D
dum eis compatiens sterilis reddebatur ab eis— the subject is Christ, carried fromDominitwo clauses up; theeistwice are the persecutors. - @0928C
horum Molae fractae—horumare the asps and lions of the preceding clause, i.e. the Jews, named there. - @0921B
qui cum eo nihil habebunt cum sanctis—quiare the ministri, the immediately preceding word, not Antichrist.
§5 · CRUCES — passages where the Latin will not simply construe
Rendered as closely as the printed words allow, per Pattern 7. None was repaired inside the translation.
- @0919C
Hyssopus herba humilis, etc., usque ad in quibus est inflatio, sic humilitas superbiam.The abridgment tail has no verb:humilitas superbiam [purgat]. Rendered with the ellipsis visible — "so humility, pride" — rather than supplying purgat. The formula removes words; it does not license me to put one back. - @0920D
Quae dum promittit innovationem, incidit ita ille dolosus, Antichristus scilicet, beatitudinem, et occidit.Two readings construe:inciditshared by both subjects (the razor cuts; so Antichrist cuts blessedness), or a second verb elided afterdolosus(Antichrist promises blessedness and slays). I took the first, becauseinciditis the only finite verb beforebeatitudinemandet occiditpairs with it; the rival is named here because the apparatus does not record it. Rendered "so does that deceitful one, namely Antichrist, cut blessedness, and slay." - @0924A
Corporales, qui solis iniquo poterant esse dulces.solis(nom./gen. of sol, or dat./abl. pl. of solus) against a dative singulariniquodoes not agree. Confirmed on the leaf: Migne sets it thus. It is a real word, so per the addendum's rule it stays Migne's and takes no marker. Rendered by the evident sense, "sweet to the wicked alone", and logged. - @0925A
sed jacta in Dominum, non alium qui portus est, vel saxum navi, non portus fluctuati in saeculo.Two readings:qui portus estdescribes the Lord (and the rest describes the alius), or it describes the alius throughout. Both construe; the second gives a sharper contrast. I rendered the printed order without choosing, keeping both negatives on their own nouns, and name the ambiguity here rather than resolving it silently in the text. - @0926A
Deus, vitam. Confringes, et ego ad institutionem eorum vitam meam ante, quae semper mala.Verbless: the lemma's ownannuntiavihas to carry over. I supplied "declare" and I am saying so, because an English clause cannot stand without a verb; the word supplied is the lemma's own, printed four words earlier, and nothing else is added. - @0926C
Vel ita, ut Trinitas naturae personaliter per tria verba, quae ponit.Same shape, no verb. Rendered "stands personally in the three words which he sets down"; the copula is supplied and named here. - @0922D
Quis dabit mihi pennas sicut?Migne prints the lemma clipped aftersicut, with his own question mark. Rendered with the dangling comparative kept — "Who will give me wings as?" — rather than completed to sicut columbae, which he supplies himself two sentences later as a separate lemma. Convention 3 expands a fragment; it does not license completing a clipped comparative that the plate deliberately leaves hanging with a mark on it. - @0925C
Diei Dies, Christus est— the lemma worddieiand its glossDiesstand inside one italic run. Rendered "Of the day. The Day, is Christ", keeping the run as one span. - @0929A
Malivolentia: peccatum, operis.Two elliptical genitives, no verb: "Iniquity [is a matter] of ill-will; sin, of the deed." Rendered without supplying the copula. The plate readsMalivolenti, a dative, which is a further departure reported for patching. - @0929C
et oraturo Judaeorum salus— a future participle in the dative with no obvious governor. Rendered "and, for him who is yet to pray, the salvation of the Jews", and confirmed on the leaf as printed. - @0930B
ostenditur eis, quod non sine Christo, qui dominatur Jacob— verbless again. Rendered "that this is not so without Christ", keepingnonon the predicate and supplying only the copula.
§6 · CONVENTIONS — inherited, applied, and one axis decided per site
In finem→ "Unto the end." 8 body occurrences in this range (0918CIn finem psalmus, 0920CIn finem pro, 0921CIn finem pro, 0922CIn finem in carminibus, 0925BIn finem, 0926DIn finem, 0928AIn finem ne disperdas David in tituli, 0929A the clippedIn finem ne), and 8 "Unto the end" in the English. Zero rivals. §A1.1 holds. ⚑ A raw grep returns 13 in the Latin: five of those are the frontmatterincipitof each chunk, which is copied verbatim and untranslated. The instrument was checked before the number was reported.usque ad→ "as far as". 57 occurrences in this range (17 · 5 · 10 · 11 · 14), against 57 "as far as" in the English, all inside italic spans, all the abridgment formula, zero rivals. ⚑ I checked for the unitalicized look-alike class the addendum names and found none in these five chunks — a checked negative, worth recording.Diapsalmus— ROMAN, unitalicized, unanglicized. 6 occurrences (0922B, 0923B, 0927A, 0927D, 0929B, 0930B). Our Latin sets all six roman, the plate sets all six roman, and my English follows. §A1.2 holds and needed no override.sedes→ "seat" @0928A (ubi sedes angelorum→ "where is the seat of the angels"), per §A5.- Heads.
PSALMUS L→PSALM L,PSALMUS LI.→PSALM LI.,PSALMUS LIV→PSALM LIV, and the rest with their periods. Roman numerals stay Roman and the twin's punctuation is followed, including where the plate disagrees with the twin (see §1). Psalmus ipsi David@0925B kept distinct fromPsalmus David, per §A1.4.- Archaism.
thou/thee/thyused for the grammatically singular addressee only (God, the soul, the reader),youfor the plural (et dicitis, quis audivit?@0929C → "and you say"). No-eth/saithwas used anywhere in the range, in either voice. There are no « guillemets » in these five chunks, so the two-membership test reduces to the italic one here. gentes— decided per site, and the sites named: | col | Latin | rendering | why | |---|---|---|---| | 0921B |insertus est oleaster de gentibus| Gentiles | Rom 11, againstJudaeiin the same clause | | 0923A |avolavit ad gentes| Gentiles | againstcorda Judaeorumin the same sentence | | 0923B |mansi in solitudine, gentium| Gentiles | the solitude opposed to the synagogue | | 0924D |ut tollat locum et gentem| nation | singular ethnicgens, Jo 11:48 | | 0929A |famam habere in omnibus gentibus| nations | plainly generic, thein omnes gentesshape | | 0929A |orat etiam pro salute gentium| Gentiles | paired withJudaeorum salusat 0929B | | 0929B |Orata salus gentium … et Judaeorum salus| Gentiles | the opposition is explicit | | 0929C |convertere omnes gentes … omnes gentes Christianae futurae sunt| Gentiles | the Gentile mission set against the unbelieving Jews of the same gloss | | 0930B |sciunt se pares gentibus| Gentiles | explicitJudaeisubject |- ⛔
gens tenebrarumdoes not occur in this range. I checked: the onlygens-initial match in the five chunks is insidetangens@0925B. Nothing to flag, and nothing decided. - Em-dashes: zero in all five English chunks.
§7 · CANDIDATES I RAISED AND REJECTED
Named with reasons, because a blind reader will look at each of them:
biatu@0924B — looked like a Migne non-word worth a[sic:]. The plate refutes it: the word is CC's corruption ofhiatu. Marker withdrawn before it was written; site reported.stultorum@0920D — looked like a clean[var:]against Sir 21:29. The plate refutes the premise: Migne printsstulorsorum. Declined; see §2b.quis audivit@0929C — looked like a clean lemma agreeing with Ps 58:8. The plate shows Migne printsqui, so the agreement is CC's, not his. No marker; site reported, and the marker is flagged as unlocked by the patch.Laetctur@0923B — a candidate[sic:]on the leaf that our Latin does not carry. Refused as ink damage, per therossitrule.liberabit@0927A — the twin's reading construes and the plate'sliberavitdoes not. No marker either way: our page prints CC's repair, so there is nothing of Migne's to mark.Recte·Pro nihil·Malivolentia— all real words that read oddly. Per the addendum's 10-for-10 finding, a real word that reads oddly is Migne's until a plate says otherwise. Two of the three were opened at the plate anyway; onlyMalivolentiturned out to be a CC change, and it is reported, not marked.
No [sic:], [d:], [cj:] or [ed:] was fired anywhere in this range. Eleven [var:], all plate-gated. That asymmetry is the report: the defects in these thirteen columns are almost entirely CC's, and the marker for a CC defect is a patch, not an apparatus entry.
§G.0044 — stint file cruces-0044.md, verbatim
# 8967 · Glossa ordinaria, Liber Psalmorum — cruces, chunks 0044–0048 ### Band B, stint 2 · cols 0930D–0940C · Psalms LIX–LXVI
§0 · SPAN COUNT RECONCILIATION — the required check, and it AGREES
data/briefs/8967-lemmata-0044.txt declares 294 italic spans. Counted in my own Latin, with frontmatter stripped:
| chunk | spans |
|---|---|
| 0044 | 66 |
| 0045 | 83 |
| 0046 | 25 |
| 0047 | 52 |
| 0048 | 68 |
| total | 294 |
294 = 294. The brief is cut by chunk membership and is complete for my range; its first entry ([0930D] VERS. 1.-- In finem pro his.) is the first span of 0044 and its last ([0940C] Et metuant eum.) is the last span of 0048. Nothing slid in from a neighbouring stint. English parity, markers stripped: 66 / 83 / 25 / 52 / 68 — 1:1 in every chunk.
Other structural counts, Latin against English, all 1:1 and in order: column anchors 7 / 11 / 4 / 8 / 10 · [n: …] notes 28 / 38 / 19 / 28 / 40 (each matching frontmatter noteCount) · ## heads 2 / 2 / 1 / 1 / 2 · question marks 1 / 2 / 3 / 2 / 0. Word ratio 1.51–1.55.
§1 · PLATE READS — SIX LEAVES, ELEVEN COLUMNS, ALL OF MY OWN RANGE
0 of the work's 46 prior reads fell in cols 0918–1011, so nothing here rested on somebody else's eye. Recorded in data/plate-reads.json.
| corners | columns | depth | |
|---|---|---|---|
| 470 | 930 | 0929A–0930D | read (only 0930D is mine) |
| 471 | 931 / 932 | 0931A–0932D | full |
| 472 | 933 / 934 | 0933A–0934D | full |
| 473 | 935 / 936 | 0935A–0936D | full |
| 474 | 937 / 938 | 0937A–0938D | full |
| 475 | 939 / 940 | 0939A–0940D | full |
Calibration: PDF 471 carries 931 and 932 in its corners, which is (col + 11) / 2 exactly. PATROL. CXIII. stands at the foot of PDF 474 — the volume re-confirmed from the plate, not from the archive id.
Clipping: none. Every one of cols 930–940 is clean at the inner margin. ⚑ This is another nail in the withdrawn mod-4 rule: 933 and 937 are 1 (mod 4) and both are clean, as are 929 and 941's neighbours here. I inferred nothing; I opened all eleven.
Conjecture apparatus: none, in either layer, on any of the six leaves.
Marginal condition: col 0932's OUTER (right) edge is over-inked and smears the last two or three characters of many lines. That cost me one call (§5.1). Nothing else on these leaves is obscured.
§2 · MARKERS FIRED — eleven [var:], and nothing else
No [sic:], no [d:], no [cj:], no [ed:]. Every marker stands on a column I read today; plate-gate.mjs returns OK.
| col | chunk | Migne prints | the Clementine | why it is material |
|---|---|---|---|---|
| 0930D | 0044 | Pro iis qui mutabuntur. Doctrinam. | Ps 59:1 pro his qui immutabuntur … in doctrinam | the titulus Migne re-cites in his own voice, and the gloss argues from the unprefixed stem: Mutantur in doctrinam stands two words later |
| 0931A | 0044 | Et turbasti | Ps 59:4 conturbasti | the gloss pairs it with commovisti, as the Vulgate pairs Commovisti … conturbasti |
| 0931B | 0044 | Et liberentur | Ps 59:6 ut liberentur | a purpose clause turned into a coordinate one |
| 0932B | 0044 | usque ad: quis requiret ei? | Ps 60:8 misericordiam et veritatem ejus quis requiret | dative for genitive: "who shall seek them FOR HIM" against "who shall seek HIS mercy and truth" |
| 0933A | 0045 | impulsae | Ps 61:4 depulsae | the gloss names the word — addit impulsae — so the argument rests on it |
| 0933A | 0045 | Subjecta est anima mea | Ps 61:6 Verumtamen Deo subjecta esto, anima mea | ⭐ indicative for imperative, and Migne's own gloss contradicts his own lemma: it says he hortatur and calls the clause a petitio. Both need the imperative |
| 0933B | 0045 | Punge oculum, et producit lacrymam; punge cor, et producit scientiam | Sir 22:24 Pungens oculum deducit lacrimas, et qui pungit cor profert sensum | ⭐ the largest divergence in the range: imperative for participle, singular for plural, and knowledge for understanding — adduced precisely where the gloss is arguing that tears produce knowledge |
| 0934B | 0045 | Ut fieret in eis fons aquae salientis | Jo 4:14 fiet in eo fons aquae salientis | subjunctive and plural for future and singular. The gloss needs the plural: the fountain is made in the preachers (implens praedicatores) |
| 0936B | 0047 | Cum inciperet | Ps 64:1 cum inciperent exire | singular for plural, and the gloss expounds it singular: Incipit exire, qui incipit amare |
| 0937A | 0047 | Exaudi nos, qui es Salvator | Ps 64:6 Exaudi nos, Deus, salutaris noster | a relative clause for a vocative — a different phrase, not a variant spelling |
| 0939D | 0048 | Clamavi et exaltavi in corde | Ps 65:17 et exaltavi sub lingua mea | ⭐ the whole gloss turns on it: Quod in ore, hoc et in corde habeo, against ore meo clamavi. With the Vulgate's phrase the antithesis the gloss builds has no second term |
§3 · THE DIVERGENCE LIST — every lemma walked, including the clean ones
⛔ This section is the deliverable. 7a″ measures the difference between a range whose prompt named the words and one told merely to be careful. Below is every span in the 294 that touches scripture, sorted into: marked · real but declined · collated and clean.
3.1 Divergences that are REAL and were DECLINED, with the reason
- 0932C
ab ipso salutare meum— Clem Ps 61:2 ab ipso enim salutare meum. Migne drops the particle only. Excluded by §C1's settled rule against letter-and-particle[var:]. - 0932D
Et quasi maceria— Clem Ps 61:4 reads tamquam parieti inclinato et maceriae. Migne's quasi for tamquam is a synonym substitution in a phrase he is paraphrasing, not quoting; the marker went on impulsae, which the gloss actually names. - 0933A
Gloriosa dicta sunt de te, civitas.— Clem Ps 86:3 civitas Dei. Truncation at the point the gloss needed, not a divergence. - 0933B
Corda,— Clem Ps 61:9 effundite coram illo corda vestra. Truncation. - 0933B "mendaces in statera" (gloss prose, unitalicised) against the lemma
Mendaces in stateris(plural) eight words later, and Clem Ps 61:10 in stateris. Migne is inconsistent with himself inside one paragraph. Both rendered as printed — singular "in the balance", then plural "in the balances" — and neither marked: the first is gloss prose, not a quotation. - 0934B
Quia super vitas.— Clem Ps 62:4 Quoniam melior est misericordia tua super vitas. Migne is re-cutting his own lemma (Vel sic,), and Quia/Quoniam is the commonest interchange in the Psalter. - 0934C "Levantes puras manus in oratione, sine ira et disceptatione" (unitalicised, cited as unde Apostolus) — Clem 1 Tim 2:8 Volo ergo viros orare in omni loco, levantes puras manus sine ira et disceptatione. Migne's in oratione is not in the verse at that point; it supplies from the verse's own first clause. Rendered as printed ("Lifting up pure hands in prayer") — declined because the insertion is explicative and changes nothing the gloss argues.
- 0934D
de luce vigilo ad te— Clem Ps 62:2 and Migne's own lemma at 0933D both read ad te de luce. The gloss cites ut supra and reverses its own word order. ⚑ The English keeps the printed order ("from the light I watch unto thee"). Declined as a self-citation with no sense at stake — but it is exactly the shape 7a″ warns about, so it is logged rather than smoothed. - 0934D
Ipsi vero in vanum quaesierunt animam.— Clem Ps 62:10 animam meam. Truncation. - 0935A
Ego in Patre, et Pater in me.— Clem Jo 14:10 … et Pater in me est. Truncation. - 0935B
Expedit ut unus moriatur.— Clem Jo 11:50 expedit vobis ut unus moriatur homo pro populo. Truncation at both ends. - 0935A
et eripe,— Clem Ps 63:2 has a timore inimici eripe animam meam with no et. The et is the gloss's connective inside a clipped lemma, not a reading. - 0936A
Nostra conversatio in coelis est.— Clem Phlp 3:20 Nostra autem conversatio in caelis est. Particle only. - 0936B
De populo transmigrationis.— Clem Ps 64:1 populo transmigrationis with no De. A lemma addressed as a heading. - 0936D
Non vos me elegistis, sed ego vos— Clem Jo 15:16 sed ego elegi vos. ⭐ Migne drops the main verb. Declined: the ellipsis is recoverable from the first clause and the sense is unchanged, and §C1 excludes this size. The English is elliptical too — "but I you", not the familiar "but I have chosen you" — so nothing is conformed either way. - 0937D
Desertum:— Clem Ps 64:13 speciosa deserti. The gloss re-inflects its own lemma to nominative; that is what a gloss does. - 0939A "Non dedisti in commotionem" (unitalicised) — Clem Ps 65:9 et non dedit in commotionem pedes meos. Migne turns the third person into the second, consistently, across the whole paragraph (probasti … dedisti … examinasti). Rendered in the second person as printed. Declined: the shift is the gloss's own address to God, not a corrupt quotation.
- 0940A "in gentibus Christus" — Clem Ps 66:3 in omnibus gentibus salutare tuum. Paraphrase.
3.2 Verse addresses that do not line up with the Clementine's numbering — checked, not defects
Migne's VERS. n.-- addresses a block, and twice the block opens on a phrase the Clementine numbers one verse earlier. 0938B VERS. 3.-- Date gloriam is Clem Ps 65:2, and the same block then glosses Quam terribilia = Clem 65:3. 0939A VERS. 12.-- Laqueum is Clem Ps 65:11, the block continuing into Transivimus = Clem 65:12. Both are Migne's own division of the psalm, both were checked against the flat Clementine rather than assumed, and neither is touched. Every other address in the range lands on its Clementine verse.
3.3 Collated and AGREEING with the Clementine — the checked negatives
Ps 59: In finem pro his · Deus, repulisti nos · Et destruxisti · iratus es · misertus · Ostendisti · Dura · Vino (both) · Arcus · Dextera tua · Deus locutus est · Laetabor · Sichimam · Convallem tabernaculorum · Manasses · fortitudo capitis · Moab olla spei meae (both) · Civitatem munitam · In Idumaeam · Non egredieris. Ps 60: Clamavi dum anxiaretur · Exaltasti me · In petra · Deduxisti me · Inhabitabo · In saecula · Protegar in velamento (alarum) · Quoniam tu, Deus meus, exaudisti orationem · Dedisti · Dies super dies · Misericordiam et veritatem (both). Ps 61: In finem pro Idithun · Nonne · non veniat mihi pes superbiae and et manus peccatoris non moveat me (Ps 35:12, verbatim) · Non movebor amplius · Deo subjecta · Quousque irruitis · super hominem · Universi vos · In hominem · Pretium · Cogitaverunt · Cucurri in siti · Ore suo · Verumtamen Deo · In Deo, salutare meum · Sperate · Effundite · Verumtamen vani · In stateris · In idipsum · Nolite sperare in · Rapinas · Affluant · Nolite cor (apponere) · Semel locutus est · potestas · Potestas Dei est. Ps 62: Psalmus David · Deus, Deus meus, ad te de luce · Deus meus · De luce (both) · Vigilo · Sitivit in te anima mea · Deserta · Invia · Inaquosa · Sic in sancto apparui tibi ut viderem · Super vitas · Labia mea · Laudabunt · Sic benedicam (both) · In nomine tuo levabo manus meas · Levabo manus · Adipe · Si memor fui · In matutinis · me suscepit · dextera tua · In inferiora terrae · Partes vulpium erunt · In Deo · Jurant. Ps 63: Exaudi, Deus, orationem · A timore inimici · Protexisti me · Quia exacuerunt ut gladium linguas · Arcum · Amaram · Subito sagittabunt · Non timebunt · Firmaverunt · Sibi · Reus est mortis (Mt 26:66, verbatim) · Sanguis ejus super nos et super filios nostros (Mt 27:25, verbatim) · Ut absconderent · Scrutati · Accedet homo · Ad cor altum · Sagittae parvulorum factae · Conturbati · faciemus, viri fratres (Act 2:37, verbatim) · Et timuit omnis · Et facta ejus intellexerunt · Laetabitur justus in Domino · Omnes. Ps 64: In finem · Jeremiae · Ezechiel · Te decet · reddetur votum · Sion · Exaudi orationem meam · Omnis caro · Verba iniquorum (both) · ad te omnis caro veniet · Praevaluerunt · Propitiaberis · Beatus quem elegisti · In bonis · Templum · Mirabile · In aequitate · Spes omnium · Et in mari longe · Praeparans montes · In virtute tua · Accinctus · Qui conturbas profundum maris · Sonum · Matutini et vespere · Delectabis · Visitasti terram et inebriasti eam · Flumen · Flumen Dei · Rivos ejus (both) · Inebria · Multiplica · Coronae anni (both) · Parasti · Benignitatis tuae · Campi tui replebuntur · Colles · Pinguescent speciosa deserti · Valles · Clamabunt. Ps 65: In finem · Jubilate Deo, omnis terra · Date gloriam · Quam terribilia · Opera tua, Domine · In multitudine virtutis tuae · Mentientur (both) · omnis terra adoret · Venite · Qui convertit (mare) · In flumine (both) · Ibi laetabimur · In ipso · Non exaltentur · Omnes enim peccaverunt (Rom 3:23, verbatim) · Benedicite · Auditam facite · Vocem laudis ejus · Hic est Filius meus · Qui posuit animam · Quoniam probasti nos · Laqueum · Transivimus · Introibo · In holocaustis · Distinxerunt · Et locutum est os meum · Holocausta medullata (offeram) · Incenso arietum · incenso · arietibus · Cum incenso · cum hircis · Offeram tibi boves · Venite, audite · venite · Ad ipsum ore meo clamavi · Ad ipsum · Meo · Orationem meam. Ps 66: In finem · Deus misereatur nostri et benedicat (all three) · Confiteantur · Benedicat nobis · Confiteantur tibi populi, Deus (both) · Laetentur et exsultent · laetentur · Terra dedit fructum suum · Benedicat · nos. Deus, Deus noster · eum · Et metuant eum.
### 3.4 A non-scripture italic span, for completeness 0936A (XXV, XXIX) — Migne italicises the Jeremiah chapter numbers. Passed through verbatim as printed; it is a locator, not text.
§4 · CRUCES — passages rendered literally with the difficulty named
4.1 sequitur clamoris exaudito in petra Christo @0931D. Will not construe: sequitur has no nominative subject and clamoris is a stranded genitive. Read at the plate at 500 dpi and it is MIGNE'S, not CC's — the plate prints exaudito. Conjecture: exauditio, giving "the hearing of the cry follows, on the rock Christ", which is the sense the surrounding gloss demands (In anxietate … in petra Christo). Rendered "there follows, of the cry heard, on the rock Christ" — deliberately ungainly, because the plate is. ⛔ No [cj:] fired: Pattern 18's bar is that the faithful English asserts something false, and this English asserts nothing at all; it is broken, not misleading. The crux is the right home.
4.2 Misericordia est / Misericordiam est @0932B. See §5.1. Rendered from our TEI.
4.3 Communis Deus meus quodam modo specialiori @0934A. Verbless and elliptical; Communis has no expressed noun. Rendered "Common, my God in a somewhat more particular way", supplying nothing.
4.4 Profundi ad recipiendum repletum est aquis @0937C. Profundi agrees with nothing: repletum is neuter, answering to Flumen. Rendered word for word, "Of the deep, for the receiving, it is filled with waters." Not marked — every word is a real Latin word in a real form.
4.5 quia sic puritas orationis, auditur @0939D. Elliptical; the plate has no stop between auditur and the following lemma (CC supplies one — see the patch queue). Rendered "because thus is the purity of prayer, it is heard."
4.6 Mariae Christum @0940C. Dative or genitive; either way the sentence has no verb. The following clause (Sed non illa sola hoc debet) makes illa = Mary, which fits both "the earth gave Christ TO Mary" and "Mary's earth gave Christ." Rendered "To Mary, Christ" as the dative the form most naturally gives, with the rival named here rather than chosen silently.
4.7 ne quod datum est humili auferatur superbo @0938B. aufero + dative normally means "take from", which gives "lest what was given to the humble be taken away from the proud" — and nobody gave it to the proud. The sense wanted is "be taken from thee, now proud". Rendered as the words stand, contradiction included, per 7a.
4.8 Boves; cervicositatem @0939C. The verb is elided and supplied only at the end of the run (haec in me mactando vitia). No verb supplied: "Oxen; stiffness of neck; with he-goats, wantonness; these vices being slain in me."
4.9 Erat ei @0935C. "There was to him" — the subject is cor altum from the lemma immediately above. Rendered "He had one."
4.10 Et exaltatum deduxisti @0931D. The object is unexpressed; it is me from the lemma Exaltasti me two clauses earlier. Rendered "And thou hast led me exalted."
4.11 commovisti ab errore @0931A. Object unexpressed; nos from Deus, repulisti nos. Rendered "thou hast moved us out of error."
4.12 quia sic videtur non pro temporali vita pugnare @0931D. The subject of videtur is the man who intus operaberis, not God (who is the subject of deducet in the same sentence). Named here because both construe; rendered "he is seen to fight not for the temporal life."
4.13 se eo egere, non illum se @0939B. ⚑ The §4-of-the-launch-brief class exactly: two identical-looking pronouns whose morphology fixes who needs whom. se … eo = the man needs God; non illum se = not God the man. Deum omnia stands two words earlier and fixes the antecedent. The antecedent is named in the English — "that he himself has need of God, not God of him" — rather than left to two bare "him"s that could be read either way.
4.14 quem non delectat ille qui pro eo voluit pati @0937C. quem is the object, ille the subject. Rendered "whom he does not delight who was willing to suffer for him." Checked precisely because a careless English would reverse it.
4.15 sed se quod charius est substraxit @0939B. se is the object of substraxit and quod charius est is in apposition to it. Rendered "but he withdrew that which is dearer, himself."
4.16 quia Deus susceptor non movebor @0932D. The plate reads quis, not quia — see the patch queue. Our TEI's quia construes and is what the English renders; the marker this unlocks belongs to the patch pass, not to me.
§5 · DECLINED — candidates I checked and did NOT mark
5.1 Misericordia est @0932B — a read that could not settle the word. Our TEI has Misericordia est, and the plate looks like Misericordiam est, but the word sits in col 0932's over-inked right margin and its terminal is a blot at 500 dpi under autocontrast. Misericordia est construes ("it is mercy, because he forgives …") and Misericordiam est does not — but that is an argument, not a read, and 8988's aurursus precedent says an unreadable word is not a read word. Queued for Gallica. No marker.
5.2 Three italic es that image as c — declined as copy condition, not compositor error. Ostcndisti 0931A · omncs 0932D · Vallcs 0938A. Each reads as a confident wrong sort from its own crop, and CC has the good letter in all three, so each looked like a class-2 patch candidate. Control: italic e images correctly in dozens of places on the same six leaves (Propitiaberis 0936D, Beatus quem elegisti 0936D, me suscepit 0934D, Pretium 0933A). Broken or under-inked type on this copy falls under the possit→rossit ruling and is not restored. ⚑ The finding for the next stint: the launch brief's h/b warning generalises — in this scan family italic e can image as c too. I would have reported three false patch candidates if I had not looked for a control letter. ⚑ And the boundary matters: the turned-n pair Viuo 0931A and Clamabuut 0938A is in the patch queue, because an n cannot become a clean bottom-arched u by failing to ink.
5.3 propitatio @0934D — a non-word in our Latin, and NO [sic:] is owed. The mirror of 5.2 and of Band A's deeidam. Every internal signal said fire: a form that is no Latin word, sitting at the end of a clause. The plate reads propitiatio. The defect is Corpus Corporum's. The English renders "propitiation" and the site is in the patch queue.
5.4 Scrutina @0935C. Not classical, and Clem Ps 63:7 has scrutinio. Declined under Pattern 9 — an attested medieval form, and the gloss treats it as a plural (id est, acerba et occulta consilia). Rendered "Searchings", no italics, no marker.
5.5 Aggoeus @0936A. Migne's spelling for Aggaeus, confirmed on the leaf (with the œ ligature). Kept as printed; not normalised, not marked.
5.6 Rex vero @0934D set in roman where it is plainly a lemma. Confirmed roman on the plate. Not our TEI's doing, and not a defect to mark; rendered as ordinary text, as Migne sets it.
5.7 quia Deus erigit humiles Desertum: @0937D — no stop before the lemma. Confirmed on the leaf. Pattern 8 forbids supplying one, so the English carries the run-on: "because God raises up the humble The desert: all the Gentiles". It reads oddly. It is what he printed.
5.8 (CAS.) against (CASS.). 0937D's (CAS., AUG.) is a CC change (the plate has CASS.) and is queued per-site. ⛔ It was NOT swept: Migne's own (CAS.) stands three times on the same page — 0937A, 0937C, 0938B — and each was checked on the leaf. The Band A warning against sweeping this siglum holds here exactly.
5.9 Column-band arithmetic. Nothing raised. 0932B→0932C→0932D→0933A runs normally, and 0937D→0938A breaks at a paragraph, not mid-word. Runbook false positive 1.
5.10 noteCount. Frontmatter and body agree in all five chunks (28 / 38 / 19 / 28 / 40). Nothing to report.
§6 · CONVENTIONS APPLIED, AND THE AXES MEASURED IN MY OWN RANGE
Inherited from §A without re-deriving: In finem → "Unto the end" (5 occurrences: 0930D, 0932C, 0936A, 0938A, 0939D) · Diapsalma/Diapsalmus roman, unanglicised, never "Selah" (7 occurrences, and 7 more plate confirmations at 0931B, 0932A, 0933A, 0933B, 0938C, 0938D, 0939C) · Psalmus David kept distinct from Psalmus ipsi David (0933D is the plain form) · Vulgate numbering, nothing converted · heads follow Migne's numerals — every head in my range is PSALMUS LIX.–PSALMUS LXVI. in numerals, so PSALM LIX. … PSALM LXVI., none spelled out · VERS. n.-- passes through verbatim.
usque ad — 40 occurrences, and the instrument was checked. 38 are the italic abridgment formula and take "as far as". Two are unitalicised look-alikes and are rendered by sense: 0931D id est, usque ad terrenos → "even to earthly men" (extension), and 0932A quae usque ad finem mundi accolit → "until the end of the world" (temporal). Both were decided from what stands on either side, per the brief's §D addendum.
The gentes axis — 10 occurrences, decided per site, with the reason.
- Gentiles (7), every one inside an explicit Judaei/gentes opposition: 0937D omnes gentes, quibus nullus propheta missus (Israel had prophets, these had none) · 0938A pro fide gentium, in a sentence opening Judaei ex legis justitia · 0938B invident gentibus gratiam, against Non ut Judaei · 0938B exclusis mendacibus Judaeis, adhibentur gentes · 0938C pertinere ad gentes, repressis Judaeis · 0938D Monet gentes benedicere Deum and 0939C o vos gentes and 0939C cum gentes ad idola, all three continuing that same argument through Ps 65.
- nations (2), where the sense is plainly generic: 0936B
deos gentium("the gods of the nations", the Ps 95:5 formula, no Jew/Gentile pivot in sight) and 0940Acognoscitur in gentibus Christus, which glosses Ps 66:3 in omnibus gentibus salutare tuum — the universal formula the axis names. - No singular
gensin the range, so ⚑gens tenebrarumdoes not occur here and I had nothing to flag. The open ruling stands untouched. natio→ nation: one real occurrence, 0933Din medio pravae nationis(Phlp 2:15). ⚠ The instrument lies: a rawnatiogrep returns four hits in my Latin and three are incarnationis, geminationem, Obstinatione.
turba/multitudo. ⚠ A raw turba grep returns six hits and not one is the noun — turbati, turbasti, Conturbati, conturbata, conturbas, conturbans, all turbare. multitudo occurs once, 0938B In multitudine virtutis tuae → "In the multitude of thy strength". No bleed either way, and no drift to report.
daemonium/diabolus. Three occurrences, all diabolus (0933C ×1, 0937D ×1, and diaboli 0936C) → devil. No daemonium, no satanas.
mysterium/sacramentum. One occurrence, 0938B mysteria incarnationis → "mysteries". No sacramentum.
Not present in my range, and checked rather than assumed: Dominus virtutum (0 — the only virtut- are virtute/virtutis/virtutum-free forms belonging to In virtute tua and In multitudine virtutis tuae) · sedes (0) · gentilis/gentilitas (0) · ethnicus (0) · guillemets « » (0 in all five chunks) · Canticum graduum (0 — Band C's, as the brief says).
Archaism, with BOTH memberships tested. ⚑ The test caught two of my own. No guillemets occur in this range, so italic membership is the only handle, and a sweep of -eth / saith / doth / hath returned eight forms. Six are licensed, standing inside italic lemmata: Who turneth and Who turneth the sea @0938C · Power belongeth to God @0933D · A hymn becometh thee @0936B · God hath spoken @0931B · He hath spoken once @0933C (plus My soul hath thirsted, it hath upheld me, And my mouth hath spoken, Who hath set my soul, The earth hath given her fruit). Two were GLOSS VOICE and were repaired: "the Lord hath strengthened me" @0936A (the etymology of Ezechiel, unitalicised) → "the Lord strengthened me", and "he for whom the Lord hath suffered" @0937C → "he for whom the Lord suffered". A third, "is shewn" @0936A for ostenditur, was normalised to "is shown" — an archaic spelling in the commentator's own voice. ⚠ A fourth sat inside a [var:] marker, whose content is OURS and is required to be plain: the Sir 22:24 gloss read "he that pricketh … bringeth forth" and now reads "he who pricks … brings forth". Second person follows Pattern 17 strictly: thou/thee/thy wherever the Latin is singular (the psalmist to God, 0931A repulisti, destruxisti, misertus; the gloss to its reader, 0932D putas, 0933A putes, 0933C tenes, invenis, perdis, 0934A vigilares, te excitaret, 0938B gaudes, insultes, time) and ye/you wherever it is plural (0932C–0933A irruitis, apponitis, interficitis, Universi vos, vobis data est, putatis; 0933C Nolite, speretis, cupiatis). No number is invented and none is lost.
§7 · THE THREE CONTAINMENT TESTS, AND THE FOURTH
Test 1 — a marker must not swallow the word it marks. Vacuous by construction here: no [sic:], [d:] or [cj:] was fired, and [var:] is additive by definition. I ran the mechanical form anyway — stripped every marker from all five English chunks and read what was left. No stranded article, no doubled punctuation, no clause missing its object. Each of the eleven marked lemmata carries its own full English outside the bracket.
Test 2 / 2a — name the host, then find it. I walked all 125 printed negatives (non 84 · ne 14 · nec 8 · nisi 7 · nolite 6 · nihil/nil 3 · nullus 2 · nunquam 1) and named the single Latin word each attaches to before checking the English. Every one is present and on its host. The trigger population 2a defines — a negative on a verb with a quantifier or correlative nearby — fired nine times and each was resolved from the sentence's own structure, never from what read well:
- 0932D
non omnes unum, sed Ecclesiam— host is unum, proved by thesed Ecclesiampivot, not by omnes standing next to the non. English keeps Migne's own word order. - 0936C
non solum anima, sed etiam malus homo— host is solum anima; "not the soul only, but the evil man also". - 0936A
Ne putes de solis Apostolicis dici— the negative is on putes, and solis is affirmed inside it. The 8990 trap runs the other way here and the English keeps "alone" positive: "Do not think that it is said of the apostolic men alone." - 0940C
Sed non illa sola hoc debet— host is illa sola, the exact 8990 shape. "But not she alone owes this", not "she alone does not owe this". - 0940A
in utroque nos crescimus, non ipse— host is ipse: "it is we that grow, not he." - 0931D
non pro temporali vita pugnare, sed pro futura· 0935Anon per eum … sed in eo· 0937Bfides non a nobis, sed ab eo· 0939Cipsi non per se, sed potius adjuncti bobus— in all four thesedcorrelative is a phrase, so the negative is on the phrase and not on the adjacent verb.
⚑ And the apposition rule from §4 of the launch brief, applied twice. 0932B et post sibi vivat, non illi — the negative belongs on the second dative, and English apposition will not inherit it, so it is marked twice: "live to himself, not to him." 0935B Non Domino, sed sibi — "Not for the Lord, but for themselves." Neither was allowed to sit behind a comma.
Test 3 — punctuation compared BY COLUMN BAND, never by total. Anchors are verified 1:1 and in order, so they partition both twins identically. I compared colons, semicolons and question marks band by band across all 45 bands (40 anchored bands plus the five chunk heads). The first run failed in 19 of them and the failures were real: I had supplied a colon at In saecula, non unus homo @0932A, another at Vel sic, propitiaberis @0936D, another at Quae bona sunt @0936D; and at 0935C a supplied colon and a destroyed semicolon cancelled in the total (Mos malorum; qui dolum parat had become "The way of the wicked: he who prepares") — exactly the cancellation the by-band form exists to catch. All 21 sites across those 19 bands were repaired against the Latin. Final state: 45 of 45 bands match on all three marks. ⛔ No comma→semicolon sweep was run: Migne prints plenty of semicolons in this range himself.
Test 4 — does the English ASSERT what he asserts? Read back paragraph by paragraph against the Latin with the counts already clean. What it caught, in order of how well each read before the check: 4.13 (non illum se — two bare "him"s that parsed either way; the morphology and Deum omnia settle it) · 4.14 (quem non delectat ille — the smooth English reverses subject and object) · 4.12 (whose videtur it is) · 4.10 and 4.11 (objects lifted from lemmata two clauses back, not from the sentence) · and the one that reads best of all and is still wrong on its own terms, 4.7, where the printed sentence takes a gift from the proud that nobody gave them and the English keeps the contradiction.
§8 · SECTIONS READ CLEAN
Ps LIX in full (0930D–0931D) apart from the three sites marked · Ps LX (0931D–0932B) apart from 0932B's two · Ps LXIII entire (0935A–0936A) — 25 spans, 19 notes, no marker, no patch site, and the only crux in it is Scrutina, declined under Pattern 9 · Ps LXVI (0939D–0940C) apart from Mariae Christum.
§9 · FOR THE MERGE, AND FOR WILSON
- Nothing in §A broke on these psalms. No inherited convention needed an exception; the one open question (
gens tenebrarum) does not occur in cols 0930–0940, so it is still owed. - A new plate-reading hazard, and it is the same shape as the brief's
h/bwarning: ⚠ in this scan family italicecan image asc. Three sites in eleven columns (Ostcndisti,omncs,Vallcs). All three declined as copy condition, on a control letter from the same leaf. Bands B and C should carry this next to theh/bnote, because each of the three reads as an obvious compositor error from its own crop and would have gone into the patch queue as a class-2 candidate. - 17 TEI-patch sites reported, appended to
data/briefs/8967-PENDING-TEI-PATCHES.md— 5 where CC has words the plate lacks (including a suppressed dittography at 0934C and a supplied verse number at 0939A), 11 where CC repairs a Migne defect, plus the mirror case (propitatio) where CC creates one. One of them touches sense and should be read first: 0936CChristumforChristus. - One site this copy cannot answer, for the Gallica list alongside Band A's f443/f449/f453: 0932B
Misericordia/Misericordiam, in col 0932's over-inked outer margin. - 11
[var:], 0[sic:], 0[cj:], 0[d:], 0[ed:]. All eleven on columns read today;plate-gate.mjsOK. The three I would put in front of an editor first are 0933ASubjecta estforsubjecta esto(Migne's own gloss argues for the imperative he did not print), 0933B Sir 22:24 (three divergences in one citation, the operative word among them), and 0939Din cordeforsub lingua mea(the gloss's whole antithesis is built on the divergent phrase).
§G.0049 — stint file cruces-0049.md, verbatim
Range: src/latin/8967/0049.md–0053.md, cols 0940D–0953D. Psalms LXVII–LXX. Lemma brief: data/briefs/8967-lemmata-0049.txt.
⚠ This file is one stint's range. It must be merged into src/english/8967/cruces.md.
§0 · SPAN COUNT RECONCILIATION (the required check)
My brief's header states 373 spans for chunks 0049–0053. Counting … in my own Latin:
| chunk | italic spans |
|---|---|
| 0049 | 115 |
| 0050 | 46 |
| 0051 | 97 |
| 0052 | 53 |
| 0053 | 62 |
| total | 373 |
The brief agrees exactly. No mis-split.
§1 · THE PLATE — eight leaves, ~14 columns collated word by word
Pages 475–482 of raw/scans/pl113/patrologiaecurs04migngoog.pdf, read at 200–260 dpi full page with 500 dpi crops on every disputed word. Page map (column+11)/2 calibrated on p. 475, whose printed corners read 939 / 940. Recorded in data/plate-reads.json as eight full reads; plate-gate.mjs passes.
⛔ Clipping: NONE of cols 0939–0954 is clipped at the inner margin. That includes 0941, 0945, 0949 and 0953, all ≡ 1 (mod 4) — four more counter-examples to the withdrawn mod-4 rule, and they were read, not inferred.
⚠ The h/b imaging trap fired once and was defeated by the leaf, not by taste. At 0943D our TEI reads manibus honorum operum; the plate reads bonorum. The temptation was to call it the documented h→b artifact and leave our TEI alone. Checked against the b of manibus on the same line and the h of habeo two lines up: the glyphs differ, and the plate's is a b. Here CC is wrong and Migne is right — the reverse of this class's usual direction.
⚠ deservit/deserit does not occur in this range. Checked; the standing pair is clean here.
### What the plate withdrew or refused
vinetos@0941C looked like a Migne defect worth a[sic:]. The same wordvinctosis set correctly twice within four lines and thechere is a filled bowl. Ink, not a sort. Declined, and reported only as copy condition.|Christum@0953A ·j..dicii@0953C — same class, same refusal.Dilecti, dilecti@0942B looked like a[d:]. It is not: Migne's own next sentence glosses the doubling (Repetitio dilecti ad commendationem; sed non est haec repetitio in omnibus libris). Marking it would have annotated the commentary's own subject matter as a printer's slip.spiritoali@0945D is reported as lower confidence, not asserted. A wrong sort is restorable; a filleduis not, and one copy cannot settle it.
20 TEI-patch sites appended to data/briefs/8967-PENDING-TEI-PATCHES.md (~1.4 per collated column). Two carry an English edit that must land with the patch and not before: 0049.md "honourable works" → "good works" (0943D), and 0051.md drop "thee" from "So may it befall thee" (0947C).
⛔ The worst patch site in this range is 0942A, and it is worth naming here. Our TEI reads Vel, mons Sina a facie Dei Israel,; the plate has no Sina. Migne's very next gloss is Quidam libri non habent mons, sed a facie Dei Sina Israel; — the whole point is that Sina stands in the variant and not in the lemma. CC's insertion makes Migne argue against a text he did not print. The English twin renders our Latin as it stands and will need re-reading with the patch.
§2 · MARKERS FIRED — 16 [var:], and nothing else
0 [sic:] · 0 [d:] · 0 [ed:] · 0 [cj:] · 0 [nt:]. Every defect I found in this range is Corpus Corporum's, not Migne's, and therefore a patch and never a marker.
| chunk | col | marker | why it is material |
|---|---|---|---|
| 0049 | 0941C | [var: Vulg. Ps 67:8 cum pertransires in deserto] | Migne prints Transiit in desertum, — third person for second, and the gloss runs on the third (cum ad gentes venit) |
| 0049 | 0941D | [var: Vulg. Ps 67:10 tu vero perfecisti eam] | Migne prints Perfecit. — again 3sg for 2sg, and the gloss supplies Deus as the subject |
| 0049 | 0942D | [var: Vulg. Ps 67:17 … without eum] | Migne prints habitabit eum in finem; the gloss then construes the verb transitively (habitabit illos montes), which the Vulgate's intransitive reading cannot bear |
| 0049 | 0943D | [var: Vulg. Lev. 5:8 retorquebit caput ejus ad pennulas] | Migne prints Os turturis retorquetur ad ascellas — Os, the mouth, and the argument two clauses earlier is precisely mouth (quod ore praedicant) against hands. The Vulgate's caput would destroy it |
| 0050 | 0944C | [var: Vulg. Ps 67:28 in mentis excessu] | excelsu for excessu; height for ecstasy, and the gloss stops to discuss the Greek word |
| 0050 | 0945C | [var: Vulg. Ps 67:34 ad orientem] | Migne prints Et ascendit ab oriente and then, as a separate lemma, Ad orientem. — a directional reversal that Migne himself glosses twice |
| 0051 | 0946D | [var: Vulg. Ps 68:7 Domine virtutum] | Migne prints Deus virtutum,. ⚑ Band A settled Dominus virtutum → "Lord of hosts"; this is not that phrase, and the divergence is the reason |
| 0051 | 0947A | [var: Vulg. Ps 68:8 opprobrium, singular] | Migne's lemma is plural opprobria and the gloss beneath it is singular opprobrium; the plural is load-bearing — Congregat in unum multa quae pertulit |
| 0051 | 0947C | [var: Vulg. Lc 8:10 mysterium regni Dei] | Migne prints mysterium Verbi Dei. Word for kingdom, in a gloss about teaching in parables |
| 0051 | 0948A | [var: Vulg. Ps 24:10 universae viae Domini] | Migne drops Domini, so the maxim asserts that all ways are mercy and truth |
| 0052 | 0950C | [var: Vulg. Ps 68:33 quaerite Deum] | Migne's lemma is quaerite Dominum and his own gloss two lines below reverts to quaerite Deum |
| 0052 | 0950D | [var: Vulg. Ps 68:35 et omnia reptilia in eis] | Migne prints Omnia quae in eis sunt: — and then prints Et omnia reptilia in eis. as a further lemma, so both stand |
| 0052 | 0951C | [var: Vulg. Ps 69:5 Magnificetur Dominus] | Deus for Dominus, and the gloss's quod non Deus, sed nos turns on the word |
| 0053 | 0951D | [var: Vulg. Ps 70:1 has no In finem] | ⚑ flagged by the lemma brief as MATCHES-ONLY-ELSEWHERE and it is real. Migne opens the Ps 70 titulus with In finem; the Clementine title is Psalmus David, filiorum Jonadab, et priorum captivorum |
| 0053 | 0952D | [var: Vulg. Job 2:9 Benedic Deo, et morere] | Migne prints Dic aliquid in Deum et morere. The Vulgate's euphemism is gone, and the gloss uses the taunt to show provocation against God |
| 0053 | 0952D | [var: Vulg. Tob 2:22 Manifeste vana facta est spes tua] | Migne prints Ubi sunt justitiae tuae? — not the Vulgate at all. (Migne's own locator, Tob. IV, 2., is also wrong; it is left verbatim in the note) |
§3 · 7a″ — THE FULL LEMMA WALK, INCLUDING WHAT I DECLINED
Every lemma word in data/briefs/8967-lemmata-0049.txt was read against sources/vulgate/clementine-flat.txt. The 16 above fired. These diverge and did NOT fire, each for a stated reason — recorded so the merge can overrule me rather than re-derive me.
Single-word inflection, excluded by the settled [var:] rule (Band A §C1):
Viduae,@0941B — Vulg Ps 67:6judicis viduarum. Rendered "Widows," because the gloss's own relative is plural (quibus error maritus moritur).Etenim Dominus habitavit.@0942D — Vulghabitabit.b/vis exactly the letter-level corruption the rule excludes, and the site already carries a[var:]on the sister lemma.In rememoratione.@0951A — Vulg Ps 69:1in rememorationem.Quoniam dixerunt inimici mei.@0952C — Vulg Ps 70:10Quia dixerunt.Nunquid potest Deus parare mensam@0947B — Vulg Ps 77:19poterit.Isti sunt dii tui, Israel@0947B — Vulg Ex 32:4Hi sunt.
Abridgment tails after usque ad — the known false positive, Pattern 4:
usque ad: Quod uni ex minimis fecistis, mihi fecistis.@0943B — Mt 25:40 readsquamdiu fecistis uni ex his fratribus meis minimis.usque ad: et cum eos vincerem, aspersa sunt vestimenta mea.@0943D — a paraphrase of Isa 63:3 inside a Basil excerpt, not a direct citation.Vobiscum sum usque ad consummationem saeculi,@0953C — Mt 28:20 minusomnibus diebus.Vae vobis! Scribae et Pharisaei,@0946B — Mt 23:13 minusautemandhypocritae.
Divergence without a change of sense:
Vidimus eum non habentem speciem neque decorem,@0946A — Isa 53:2 hasnon est species ei, neque decor. Syntax, not sense. ⚑ The negations are carried either way.Sperabamus quod redempturus esset Israel@0946B — Lc 24:21quia ipse esset redempturus.Tu solus peregrinus es in Jerusalem, et ignoras,@0947D — Lc 24:18et non cognovisti. ⚑ Note thatignoraslexicalises a negation the Vulgate spells out; the English "knowest not" carries it, so nothing is lost.Peccator cum venerit in profundum peccatorum, contemnit@0948B — Prov 18:3Impius, cum in profundum venerit peccatorum.Exaudi me, Domine, quia benigna misericordia,@0948C — Ps 68:17quoniam benigna est misericordia tua.Reges terrae.@0944D — Ps 67:30 has onlyreges; the gloss does not argue fromterrae.Caelum, terra, mare.@0950D — Ps 68:35caeli et terra; mare; a re-ordered stump.Os meum annuntiabit justitiam.@0953A — Ps 70:15justitiam tuam.Mirabilis in sanctis.@0945D — Ps 68:36Mirabilis Deus in sanctis suis.
Not a Vulgate collation at all, and correctly not marked:
Dominus autem inhabitare facit monachos in domo,@0941B — Migne's own frame isIn Hebraeo habetur. It is Jerome iuxta Hebraeos (which readssolitarios), not the Gallican Psalter, so a[var:]against the Clementine would be a category error. Rendered "monks", the word Migne prints; not softened to "solitaries".mons Sina a facie Dei Israel/a facie Dei Sina Israel@0942A — Migne is himself running a variant apparatus here (Quidam libri non habent…). Our marker would duplicate his. And the first form is a CC corruption anyway — see §1.Deo regna.@0945A — the lemma brief scores it ⚠ NOT-IN-CLEMENTINE, and it is a false positive: Migne is deliberately juxtaposing the last word of Ps 67:32 with the first of 67:33, because that juxtaposition is the gloss's entire question (Ut Deo sit in principio sequentis versus. Vel magis in fine praecedentis versus).habitu inventus est ut homo@0953B — Phlp 2:7 lacksest, but the run is not italic in our Latin, so it is the gloss's own prose.
§4 · INHERITED CONVENTIONS — one exception taken, with the Latin that forced it
⚑ usque ad inside a scripture lemma is NOT the abridgment formula, and I did not render it "as far as" in two places. The Latin that forced it:
- @0946A
Aquae usque ad animam meam.— Ps 68:2,intraverunt aquae usque ad animam meam. Rendered "Waters even unto my soul." - @0953C
Vobiscum sum usque ad consummationem saeculi,— Mt 28:20. Rendered "I am with you even unto the consummation of the world."
Both are whole italic spans that are quotations, so the italic-membership test — which was written to separate the formula from unitalicised look-alikes — cannot decide them: they are italic because they are scripture, not because they are the abridgment. Band A's measured axis already licenses non-formula readings ("four down to are the non-formula temporal look-alikes"). The chunk-level guarantee is intact: 0051 carries 6 formula "as far as" beside the one exception, and 0053 carries 11 beside its one. Flagged, not settled — the merge may overrule.
Unitalicised look-alikes, rendered by sense and correctly not formula (three in 0049, one in 0053): usque ad terminum majestatis suae @0942D ("even to the term"), praedicando usque ad sanguinem … usque ad mortem @0943D ("even unto blood … even unto death"), a principio mundi usque ad finem @0952A ("from the beginning of the world unto its end").
Formula counts reconcile exactly: Latin usque ad 18/2/7/6/13 against English "as far as" 15/2/6/6/11, the differences being precisely the seven sites named above.
### Applied without incident
In finem→ "Unto the end." Four occurrences (0940D, 0942D ×2, 0943B, 0945D, 0951D).Diapsalma/DiapsalmusROMAN, never italic, never "Selah." Six occurrences, and five more plate confirmations (0941C, 0942C, 0943B, 0944B, 0945B).sedes→ "seat" — does not occur in this range.(ID.)and(Ibid.)never expanded. Note density here is heavy (223 notes over 5 chunks).PSALMUS LXVII.→PSALM LXVII., numerals kept Roman;(cont.)carried on the two repeated heads exactly as Migne's chunking gives them.gens tenebrarumdoes not occur in this range. Checked by grep, not by memory.Dominus virtutumdoes not occur either — what occurs isDeus virtutum,@0946D, which is a different phrase and a[var:]. See §2.gentesaxis: Gentiles 7 · nations 5 · nation 1 · heathen 0, each decided per site.gentes tuae, dum credunt@0941D–0942A → "thy nations" (the psalm's own possessive);annuntiatur in gentibus@0944A anddum gentes in supplementum admisit@0941D → "Gentiles" (the Church's in-gathering).Gentilitas@0945A → "the Gentile world".- Archaism: none used. No
-eth/saith/dothanywhere in these five chunks, so the double-membership test (italic lemmata and « guillemets ») had nothing to adjudicate.
§5 · CRUCES — what does not construe, carried unrepaired
None of these was smoothed, and none has a marker. Where a marker was considered, the reason for declining is given.
- @0950B
Notitia Dei, quae praedestinavit ac vitam, quos praescivit conformes fieri imagini Filii sui.⚑ Read at the plate: the ungrammaticalacis MIGNE'S, not CC's. The source is Rom 8:29 (quos praescivit, et praedestinavit conformes fieri imaginis Filii sui) and the obvious conjecture isad vitam— "which predestined unto life those whom he foreknew". Our English carries the break: "which predestined and life, those whom he foreknew…" ⛔ A[cj: ac; read ad]was drafted and declined. Pattern 18a's actual bar is whether the English asserts something false; this English asserts nothing — it is incoherent, which is what the page is. The census of 2026-08-18 promoted a handful out of ninety on exactly that distinction. If the merge disagrees, the marker is ready and the site is plate-verified. - @0944A
In hoc etiam, patiendo vel credendo, praevenerunt eos principes, vel praevenerunt ad te laudem.The second clause has no construable object relation —praevenire laudem ad teis not Latin I can bind. Rendered flatly: "or they went before unto praise of thee." Not repaired, not marked. - @0944D
Nam stabiles, fortes, et graves non habent seducere.The passage wants a passive ("cannot be led astray") and the printed Latin is active ("have not [wherewith] to seduce"). ⛔ Rendering it passive would be exactly the 7a silent repair — the smooth English with no trace. Rendered active: "have not wherewith to seduce." - @0952D
ne elongeris, ut gravioribus exponat.utafter a prohibition wants to bene, and rendering it "lest" would be the same repair. Rendered "that he may expose [them] to graver things." The[them]is a supplied English pronoun, bracketed. - @0951B
Revereantur, ne proles a justitia poena sequatur.prolesandpoenacannot both be nominative subjects ofsequatur. Rendered as apposition, "lest punishment, an offspring from justice, follow them," which is the least violent reading of the printed words. - @0946D
Quod mei ignari Dei, hi sunt qui commutantur in sapientes et justos.Elliptical;mei … Deiread as "of me, who am God". Rendered without supplying a verb. - @0948D
Hoc ad apertam, ut caro resurgat…apertamis feminine accusative with no noun.liberationemis supplied in English as "unto the open deliverance" — an English gloss, not a Latin emendation. - @0943B
Cursum vitae, quae vere prosperum.Gender mismatch (quaefem.,prosperumneut.), Pattern 9 territory. Carried: "which is truly prosperous."
### The §4 defect classes, checked as SUBJECTS and not only as negatives Band A's blind read found four defects that no negation check could see. I re-read for that shape specifically, and record what I checked rather than that I looked:
- @0941B
Viduae, quibus error maritus moritur— the husband who dies is error, and the widows are the ones for whom he dies. Not "widows who die". - @0943C
et Domini, qui sine peccato fuit, exitus non alius, quam mortis— the genitive isDominigoverningexitus, not a vocative. "even of the Lord … the issue was none other". - @0944A
ut canes ejus sint cujus erant inimici— the two relatives point in opposite directions: his dogs, whose enemies they had been. Not "whose dogs they were". - @0946B
quibus factum est extra quod erat intra— what was within came to be without, not the reverse; the next clause (caecitas quae in corde facta est et in oculis) fixes it. - @0950C
sic qui non contradicit, sed tamen terrenum abjecte sapit— the man who does not contradict is nevertheless the one to be stirred with hoofs. The negative survives thesed. - @0951C
quod non Deus, sed nos laudando proficimus— we make progress, not God. The apposition is marked twice in English ("it is not God, but we"). - @0949A
cum deberent cum eo contristari de caeteris, qui medicum occidebant—quiis the slayers, not the disciples; the disciples are the ones who ought to have grieved. - @0942B
Filii, id est, pater— the genitivedilectiis glossed as of the Son, and the king is the Father. Rendered so that neither collapses into the other.
§6 · OBSERVATIONS, NOT FINDINGS
- Migne skips VERS. 16 of Ps 67 entirely (0942C runs
VERS. 15.→VERS. 17.), and hisVERS. 17.covers Clementine Ps 67:16 and 67:17. HisVERS. 7.in Ps 70 (0952B) is Clementine 70:6. His versification, reproduced; no marker, no patch. - Four impossible locators inside
[n: …], all set thus by Migne and all left verbatim:(Luc. LXXXIV)@0947D for Lc 24:18 ·(Job. VII)@0952D for Job 2:9 ·(Tob. IV, 2.)@0952D for Tob 2:22 ·(Matth. XXI)@0953C for Mt 28:20. noteCountis 52 in the 0049 frontmatter against 53[n: …]in the body — the documented off-by-one false positive. Frontmatter copied verbatim regardless.- Column anchors land mid-word in our TEI at 0949A (
Invidiam ex [0949A] citat) because Migne's own line break falls there. Not the chunk-boundary signal; the English places the anchor at the nearest clause seam. (CAS).at 0945D stands outside a[n: …]marker in our TEI — a bare siglum in the running text. Left untranslated and unmoved.- A stray
)afteretc.at 0950A is reproduced in the English so the twins match; it is on the patch queue and should leave both files together.
§G.0054 — stint file cruces-0054.md, verbatim
Range: src/latin/8967/0054.md–0058.md, cols 0953D–0967C · Psalms LXXI–LXXVI. Lemma brief: data/briefs/8967-lemmata-0054.txt.
⚠ This file is one stint's range. It must be merged into src/english/8967/cruces.md.
§0 · SPAN COUNT RECONCILIATION (the required check)
My brief's header declares 367 spans for chunks 0054–0058. Counting … in my own Latin:
| chunk | italic spans |
|---|---|
| 0054 | 69 |
| 0055 | 64 |
| 0056 | 74 |
| 0057 | 72 |
| 0058 | 88 |
| total | 367 |
The totals AGREE, exactly, and the brief's first and last entries match my range's first and last spans ([0953D] In Salomonem, … [0967C] mons fortitudinis:). The brief is correctly split by chunk; nothing was collated from a neighbour's tail and nothing is missing at the head.
Per-chunk parity re-checked mechanically against the Latin twin after writing, with [var:], [sic:] and [cj:] content stripped first (their contents carry italics of their own): anchors identical in order and count · [n:] identical in order and count · italic spans equal paragraph by paragraph · question marks equal · ## heads 1:1. Zero em-dashes were written.
§1 · THE PLATE — eight pages, and what they overturned
Map used: PDF page = (column + 11) / 2, raw/scans/pl113/patrologiaecurs04migngoog.pdf. Verified on the first render before anything else: p. 482 corners read 953 / 954. All eight reads are recorded in data/plate-reads.json with what was checked, not merely that the page was opened.
| PDF p. | cols | clipped? | conjecture apparatus |
|---|---|---|---|
| 482 | 0953 / 0954 | no | none, either layer |
| 483 | 0955 / 0956 | no | none |
| 484 | 0957 / 0958 | no | none |
| 485 | 0959 / 0960 | no | none |
| 486 | 0961 / 0962 | no | none |
| 487 | 0963 / 0964 | no | none |
| 488 | 0965 / 0966 | no | none |
| 489 | 0967 / 0968 | no | none |
⛔ The withdrawn mod-4 clipping rule would have been wrong on all four odd-left columns here — 953, 957, 961 and 965 are all ≡ 1 (mod 4) and all four are clean to the inner margin. Nothing in my range needed a second witness.
⭐ The plate reversed my reading three times, and in both directions. These are the reason the gate exists, stated as what I checked:
- 0958D
temporatia. A non-word in a psalm gloss, sitting four words from a scripture quotation, in a paragraph otherwise rough. From the Latin alone it is a confident Migne defect and I had it written down as a[sic:]candidate. The leaf setstemporalia, cleanly, with a normal line-break hyphen. The defect is Corpus Corporum's. Marker withdrawn; TEI patch reported; the English renders "temporal things." - 0966B
Caepi. Same shape, same verdict: the plate setsCoepi.The English renders "I have begun." - 0967C
intrepretatur. The mirror. A metathesis that reads exactly like the transcriber artifact class, and I was ready to decline it. At 900 dpi Migne setsintrepretaturplainly, so a[sic:]is owed and now stands.
Eleven further sites went the other way — Migne's own defects that our TEI has repaired (corparabitur, mo for mox, dica for dicat, uque ad, Nafrubimus, Dum for Deum) or his own numbering that our TEI has tidied (two VERS. numerals, one of them a doubled VERS. 17.). All are in data/briefs/8967-PENDING-TEI-PATCHES.md under this stint's heading; none is a marker, because a [sic:] on one would accuse Migne of his transcriber's work, and because [sic:] content must be verbatim in the twin, which for all six it is not.
One site declined as copy condition, not compositor error: 0959D ducens eos in finem, where the s of eos is a half-inked sort. That is this leaf's inking, the possit→rossit class, and restoring it would import a defect that exists nowhere else.
⚠ The h/b hazard produced nothing in this range — I checked every candidate against a known h on the same line and found no site where the two could be confused. ⚠ deservit / deserit: no instance. The two deser- forms in the range are deserendos @0958A and deserendus @0961B, both from desero ("forsake") and both unambiguous in context; neither is the deservio dative confusion.
§2 · MARKERS FIRED
1 [sic:] · 1 [cj:] · 12 [var:] · 0 [d:] · 0 [ed:]. All rest on columns read above; plate-gate.mjs flags nothing in 0953–0967.
### [sic: intrepretatur] — 0967C Moyses intrepretatur assumptus de flumine. Metathesis for interpretatur; a non-word, and Migne's, confirmed at 900 dpi. The marker does not swallow the sense: the English reads "Moses is interpreted [sic: intrepretatur] taken up from the river" — strip the bracket and the sentence still has its verb, its subject and its complement (7a⁗ test 1, plus the fourth question: the object survives).
### [cj: exspecta; read excepta, "the tribe of Levi being excepted"] — 0963B cum reliquis undecim filiis Jacob duodecim tribus sunt, exspecta tribu Levi, quae sacerdotalis. Plate-confirmed as Migne's. exspecta is a perfectly good imperative, so Pattern 12 has no broken type to wrap; but an imperative "wait!" has no grammatical slot in a declarative clause governed by sunt, and the ablative tribu Levi beside it demands an ablative-absolute participle. This is the 11632 Pecte/ama shape. Pattern 18 is the right marker because the type is not broken at all and the gloss is additive: Migne's word keeps its English ("await"), and the conjecture stands beside it. Chose [cj:] over [sic:] deliberately, and record the reason here because a later reader cannot reconstruct it.
The nine [var:], with the Clementine reading each rests on
| col | Migne prints | Clementine | why material |
|---|---|---|---|
| 0955D | Defecerunt hymni David filii Jesse | Ps 71:20 Defecerunt laudes David, filii Jesse | the very next paragraph is a definition of hymnus; the word the argument turns on is the one that differs |
| 0956B | Rectis corde | Ps 72:1 his qui recto sunt corde | the gloss asks "Sed quibus?" and answers with this phrase |
| 0956C | quia non est declinatio morti eorum | Ps 72:4 quia non est respectus morti eorum | the gloss expounds it as "non cito moriuntur, sed diu vivunt" — a turning-aside, not a regard |
| 0956D | Lingua transivit super terram | Ps 72:9 lingua eorum transivit in terra | the gloss's whole point is that the tongue passes beyond human frailty |
| 0959B | Repulisti nos | Ps 73:1 repulisti in finem, no object | the gloss supplies "quasi alienos", i.e. it reads the object |
| 0959D | Leva manum tuam | Ps 73:3 Leva manus tuas, plural | singular against plural, and the singular hand is what the gloss then takes up at v. 11 |
| 0960A–B | In securi et ascia polluerunt tabernaculum nominis tui | Ps 73:6 in securi et ascia dejecerunt eam; 73:7 in terra polluerunt tabernaculum nominis tui | two verses spliced; the gloss then expounds securis and ascia as the instruments of the defiling |
| 0960C | Cum venerit Sanctus sanctorum, cessabit unctio (cited Dan. IX) | Dn 9:24 et impleatur visio et prophetia, et ungatur Sanctus sanctorum | not a variant of the verse but a different sentence, adduced as proof that the unction has ceased |
| 0964B | In revelatione Domini nostri Jesu de coelo cum angelis venient ad judicium exercendum (cited I Thes. I) | 2Thes 1:7 in revelatione Domini Jesu de caelo cum angelis virtutis ejus | the predicate is different, and the citation points at the wrong epistle |
| 0965A | Vox mea ad eum | Ps 76:2 voce mea ad Deum | ⭐ the gloss argues from the nominative: "Ad hoc est vox, propter quod editur." A conformed lemma would have destroyed its own exposition |
| 0966D | Filios Joseph | Ps 76:16 filios Jacob et Joseph | the entire gloss is an exposition of Joseph alone |
| 0967A | Mandabo nubibus meis ne pluant super eam imbrem | Is 5:6 et nubibus mandabo ne pluant super eam imbrem | word order plus the added possessive |
Twelve rows, twelve markers, distributed 2 / 2 / 4 / 1 / 3 across chunks 0054–0058 and counted back out of the written files.
§3 · 7a″ — THE FULL LEMMA WALK. Divergences AND the lemmata checked and found to agree
⛔ Every lemma below was read word by word against sources/vulgate/clementine-flat.txt. A list of findings alone cannot be told apart from a report by an agent that never looked, so the agreements are recorded too.
### Checked and AGREEING with the Clementine, verbatim Ps 71 (chunk 0054): In Salomonem (71:1) · Deus judicium / Justitiam tuam (71:2) · Montes / Et colles / montes pacem populo / suscipiant montes (71:3, and the Vulgate word order Suscipiant montes pacem populo, et colles justitiam is exactly what the gloss redistributes) · Judicabit pauperes populi / Pauperes populi / Humiliabit calumniatorem (71:4) · permanebit cum sole / ante lunam (71:5) · Descendet sicut pluvia / In vellus, et sicut stillicidia (71:6) · Et dominabitur a mari usque ad mare / A flumine (71:8) · Reges Tharsis et insulae munera offerent (71:10) · Quia liberabit pauperem a potente (71:12) · Ex usuris / iniquitate / Nomen / Coram illo (71:14) · Et vivet, et dabitur ei de auro / Arabiae / De ipso semper (71:15) · Firmamentum / In summis montium / In terra / Super Libanum (71:16) · Sit nomen ejus benedictum / Ante solem / Omnes gentes (71:17) · Benedictus Dominus Deus Israel (71:18) · Fiat, fiat (71:19) · Defecerunt laudes (71:20) · Hic est Filius meus dilectus (Mt 3:17). Ps 72 (0055): Quam bonus (72:1) · Pedes / Gressus / pene (72:2) · Pacem peccatorum / Videns (72:3) · Et firmamentum in plaga eorum (72:4) · Operti sunt iniquitate et impietate sua (72:6) · Prodiit quasi / Transierunt (72:7) · In excelso (72:8) · In coelum (72:9) · Ideo convertetur / Dies pleni invenientur in eis (72:10) · Et dixerunt / Quomodo scit (72:11) · Et dixi: Ergo sine causa justificavi cor meum (72:13) · Et castigatio (72:14) · Si dicebam / Reprobavi (72:15) · Existimabam / Ante me / Labor est ante me (72:16) · Sanctuarium (72:17) · Verumtamen / propter dolos (72:18) · Velut somnium / In civitate / In civitate tua imaginem (72:20) · Inflammatum est cor meum / Et renes mei commutati sunt (72:21) · Ad nihilum redactus sum / Nescivi (72:22) · Jumentum (72:23) · Tenuisti manum / Cum (72:24) · In aeternum (72:26) · Qui fornicantur abs te (72:27) · In portis filiae Sion (72:28). Ps 73 (0056): Intellectus Asaph / Ut quid Deus / In finem / Tuae (73:1) · Possedisti / Redemisti / Mons / Virgam haereditatis / Mons Sion (73:2) · Leva / Quanta malignatus est / Inimicus / In sancto (73:3) · Gloriati sunt / In medio solennitatis tuae / Signa (73:4 — ⚑ see below on solennitatis) · In exitu / Quasi in silva (73:5) · Securis / ascia (73:6) · In terra (73:7) · Signa nostra non vidimus / Et nos non cognoscet amplius (73:9) · Usquequo / irritat adversarius (73:10) · Ut quid avertis / Manum tuam et dexteram (73:11) · Deus autem rex noster / In medio terrae (73:12) · Tu confirmasti (73:13) · Escam (73:14) · Fontes et torrentes (73:15) · Tuus est dies et tua est nox / Auroram et solem (73:16) · Tu fecisti omnes / Terminos terrae (73:17) · Memor esto / Hujus / Inimicus improperavit Domino, et populus insipiens incitavit nomen tuum (73:18, word for word) · Respice in Testamentum tuum (73:20) · Ne avertatur humilis, factus confusus (73:21) · Exsurge, Deus / Causam tuam / Tota die (73:22) · Superbia eorum qui te oderunt (73:23) · Verbum caro factum est et habitavit in nobis (Jo 1:14) · Nox nocti indicat scientiam (Ps 18:3). Ps 74–75 (0057): In finem, ne corrumpas (74:1) · Confitebimur tibi, Deus / Confitebimur / Narrabimus mirabilia tua (74:2) · Cum accepero tempus / Justitias (74:3) · Liquefacta est terra / Terra et omnes (74:4) · Inique agere / Nolite exaltare cornu (74:5) · Loqui (74:6) · Quia neque ab oriente (74:7) · et hunc exaltat (74:8) · Quia calix / Calix (74:9) · Ego autem annuntiabo in saeculum: cantabo Deo Jacob (74:10) · Cornua justi (74:11) · Canticum / Ad Assyrios (75:1) · Notus in Judaea / In Judaea (75:2) · In Sion / In pace (75:3) · Ibi confregit potentias (75:4) · Illuminans tu mirabiliter a montibus aeternis turbati sunt (75:5–6, a splice across the verse division, and word for word) · turbati sunt omnes insipientes corde / Dormierunt / Somnum suum / Et nihil invenerunt omnes viri divitiarum / Nihil invenerunt / Viri divitiarum / In manibus (75:6) · Ab increpatione / Qui ascenderunt / Equos (75:7) · De coelo auditum (75:9) · Cum exsurgeret / Mansuetos terrae (75:10) · Quoniam cogitatio / Cogitatio hominis / Reliquiae / reliquiae cogitationis (75:11) · Vovete et reddite / Vovete / Munera / Terribili et ei qui aufert (75:12–13, also a splice across the division, and it agrees) · Spiritum principum (75:13) · Esurivi (Mt 25:35). Ps 76 (0058): Voce mea ad Dominum clamavi / Intendit mihi (76:2) · Renuit consolari (76:3) · Et exercitatus sum (76:4) · Anticipaverunt vigilias / Oculi mei / Turbatus / Non sum locutus / turbatus sum (76:5) · Cogitavi dies antiquos / Dies antiquos, et annos aeternos in mente habui (76:6, word for word) · Cum corde / Et exercitabar / Scopebam spiritum meum / Exercitabar et scopebam (76:7) · ut complacitior (76:8) · Aut obliviscetur misereri Deus (76:10) · Et dixi: Nunc coepi / Mutatio dexterae (76:11) · In adinventionibus (76:13) · Deus in sancto / quis Deus magnus / Via tua (76:14) · Mirabilia / Populis virtutem / redemisti (76:15–16) · Viderunt (76:17) · Multitudo / Sonitus aquarum / vocem dederunt nubes (76:18) · Vox tonitrui / in rota / Contremuit terra (76:19) · In mari / Et vestigia tua non cognoscentur / Vestigia tua (76:20) · Sicut oves / Moysi et Aaron (76:21).
### Divergences found and DECLINED, each with the reason
- 0954B Justitia judicabit pauperem — Migne introduces it himself as
secundum aliam litteram. He has already told the reader it is a variant; a[var:]would say it twice. - 0957B index meus in matutino (Clementine 72:14 castigatio mea in matutinis) and 0965C inimici mei anticipaverunt vigilias (76:5 Anticipaverunt vigilias oculi mei) — both are introduced by Migne's own
Alias. Same reason. - 0955B Sicut fenum — Clementine 71:16 sicut foenum terrae. Orthography only.
- 0956D In coelum (Clem. caelum), 0964A De coelo (Clem. caelo), 0965D Nunquid (Clem. Numquid) — orthography, not reading.
- 0960A qui te oderunt — Clementine 73:4 qui oderunt te. Word order only, and the Clementine itself prints qui te oderunt at 73:23, which this chunk also quotes.
- 0960A solennitatis — ⚑ this one nearly became a false marker. Against our TEI it looks like a Migne divergence from the Clementine's solemnitatis. The plate prints solemnitatis, agreeing with the Clementine: the divergence is Corpus Corporum's and the marker would have been aimed at Migne. Patch reported.
- 0961A Fluvii Ethan (Clem. 73:15 fluvios Ethan) and 0963A vinum merum (Clem. 74:9 vini meri) — both are lemma head-words lifted into the nominative, which is this commentary's ordinary citation practice, not a variant.
- 0964D In finem pro Idithum — Clementine 76:1 pro Idithun. Plate-checked: the
mis Migne's, not our TEI's. A proper-name form with no consequence for the sense; recorded rather than marked. - 0965A In die tribulationis exquisivi (Clem. In die tribulationis meae Deum exquisivi), 0966C quis Deus magnus? (Clem. quis deus magnus sicut Deus noster?), 0958D Dedit … potestatem filios Dei fieri (Jo 1:12 dedit eis potestatem) — abridged lemmata, cut short with the gloss continuing. Fragmentation is not divergence.
- 0965D Et etiam meditatus sum nocte (Clem. 76:7 Et meditatus sum nocte) — an added etiam. Real, checked, and not material: nothing in the gloss turns on it, and Pattern 14's bar is a change of sense. Named here rather than marked, so the merge can overrule me cheaply.
- 0961B the citation
(Psal. XXVIII)on a text that is Ps 18:3 — a citation number, which rides verbatim inside the[n:]per the settled convention. Plate-checked as Migne's.
⚑ Verse-address divergences, reported as a class and not marked. Migne's VERS. n.-- addresses in Ps 71 run one ahead of the Clementine's numbering from Descendet sicut pluvia onward (his VERS. 7. = Ps 71:6; his VERS. 8. = 71:8 again, so the offset closes). His addresses are his, they are reproduced as printed, and no psalm number was converted anywhere (§A2 holds: Vulgate numbering throughout, Ps LXXI–LXXVI).
§4 · INHERITED CONVENTIONS — how each behaved in this range
In finem→ "Unto the end." Five occurrences (0959B, 0959D ×2, 0960B, 0962A, 0964D), all rendered so, zero rivals. ⚑ One is a titulus (In finem, ne corrumpas@0962A) and one is inside the gloss's own prose (In finem mundi, vesperam scilicet@0960B, "unto the end of the world"); the formula carries both without strain.Diapsalma→ roman, unitalicized, unanglicized. Four occurrences: 0963C, 0964B, 0965B, 0966D. All four read at the plate and all four are set ROMAN, confirming the Band A ruling against the launch brief's original wording. RenderedDiapsalmain every case.usque ad→ "as far as". 34 italic occurrences, all rendered "as far as", zero rivals. ⛔ Two exceptions taken, both forced by the Latin, both stated here rather than smuggled: 1. 0954DEt dominabitur a mari usque ad mare.— the words are inside a scripture lemma, Ps 71:8 itself. Rendered "from sea to sea". The axis governs the abridgment formula, not the words wherever they fall (GLOSSA brief §6, the Lc 16:16 precedent). 2. 0954Ddilatatur usque ad terminos orbis terrae, 0955Cperveniat usque ad terminos orbis terrae, 0960BUsque ad terram dejecerunt culmina— unitalicized prose. Rendered by sense ("as far as the ends of the earth", "down to the ground"). The italic-membership test decides it, as §A4 says.Dominus virtutum→ "Lord of hosts" — does not occur in this range. Checked by grep.sedes→ "seat" — does not occur.Psalmus David/Psalmus ipsi David— neither occurs; the tituli here are In Salomonem, Intellectus Asaph, In finem ne corrumpas, Canticum ad Assyrios, In finem pro Idithum.- Heads.
PSALMUS LXXI.…PSALMUS LXXVI.→PSALM LXXI.…PSALM LXXVI.Roman numerals kept as Roman, per §A3; Migne spells out only the first psalm of the book, which is in Band A. (ID.)and(Ibid.)never expanded. 29(ID.)and 0(Ibid.)in this range; all pass through verbatim.- The vocabulary axes.
gentes→ Gentiles throughout, because every occurrence here sits inside the Judaei/gentes typology (0954D gentilitas → "the Gentile world"; 0959D regibus gentium; 0966D significat gentes, de quibus augmentatus est populus Dei). The one place I weighed "nations" was 0959Dregibus gentium— the Roman destroyers of Jerusalem — and the paragraph's own frame (Sed quia haec et de gentibus … Id est, non de gentibus) settles it as the typological word. Singulargensof the Jewish people → nation (0959DTota gens).natio→ nation always (0957B, 0957C ×2).daemonium→ demon (0956A, 0960A) anddiabolus→ devil (0961A, 0962Ddiabolorum→ "devils"), no bleed.multitudo→ multitude (0967A),turbaabsent.mysterium→ mystery (0961A, 0963A),sacramentum→ sacrament (0954D), 1:1. - Archaism. No
saithanywhere. Six-ethforms were written and every one is inside an italic lemma or an italic scripture quotation — the both-memberships test: sheweth (Ps 18:3 @0961B), exalteth (et hunc exaltat @0963A), dwelleth / enlighteneth / saveth (@0963B), taketh (Terribili et ei qui aufert @0964D). No guillemets occur in this range, so italic membership was the only test available and it was applied to all six. Gloss-voicedicit/ait→ "says". (The one place the temptation was live, 0963Bhabitat, illuminat, salvat, is a quoted-scripture lemma set, sodwelleth / enlighteneth / savethis licensed by italic membership and is what I wrote.) thou/you. 95 second-person-singular forms (thou/thee/thy/thine), every one standing on singular Latin —ne putes,quod pecces,Memor esto,Respice,quae promisisti,Leva manum tuam,Quomodo exquisisti,Tenuisti manum. Four plurals, all on plural Latin and checked individually:Vovete et reddite@0964C → "Vow ye and pay",Nolite exaltare cornu@0962D → "Lift not up your horn", andsi Judaei, tunc in vobis notus est Deus: quod si non est, tunc non Judaei@0963B → "if ye are Jews … among you … then ye are not Jews". One further plural possessive,unctio vestra@0960C → "the unction of yours", addressed to the Jews.gens tenebrarum— does not occur in this range. Checked by grep; nothing to flag.- Fragmentary lemmata (Glossa convention 3) — the policy I actually applied, stated so the merge can overrule it in one place. A stump is rendered literally wherever the literal English is readable as a citation head (
Deus judicium.→ "O God, judgment.";Montes.→ "Mountains.";Nomen.→ "Name."), and expanded to the phrase it stands for only where the stump would be unreadable or would misassign a case (Tenuisti manum.@0958C → "Thou hast held my hand," from Ps 72:24 Tenuisti manum dexteram meam;Cum,@0958C → "With," kept literal because the gloss immediately supplies its own context). Ruth'sNon te.→ "Let no man see thee" is the expanding end of that range; most of this range's 367 spans do not need it, and expanding them all would have supplied hundreds of unprinted words.
§5 · THE SENTENCES. Passages read hard, and what I checked in each
⚑ Recorded as what was checked, not that the column was looked at.
- 0954C
permanebit cum sole splendor. The italic span ispermanebit cum soleandsplendorstands outside it. English had to keep the split, so it reads "there shall remain with the sun a brightness" rather than the natural "brightness shall remain". Subject checked: the sentence's own apposition names it — "id est, Filius cum Patre". - 0955B
Non aetas seni sed viriditas sanctis comparatur.Test 2a trigger: a negative on a verb with anon … sedcorrelative nearby. The host isaetas, notcomparatur— the correlative pivots on the two nominatives, and the datives seni/sanctis are parallel. English therefore reads "It is not age that is compared to the old man, but greenness to the saints", with the negative on "age". Rendering it as "age is not compared" would have been the Colossians @0614B failure. - 0956A
deficit laus, non Filii Dei, sed filii Jesse.Same class: the negative governs the genitive, notdeficit. Carried onto "not of the Son of God". - 0956A
quae a Deo, non a daemonibus, ut gentes, quaerebat. The negative sits on the prepositional phrase; the subject ofquaerebatis the Synagogue, named two clauses earlier (loquitur Asaph, id est Synagoga). Every unexpressed "it" in that long paragraph is the Synagogue, and the feminine participlesAttendens,castigans,admonitus… ⚑admonitusis MASCULINE where the string of feminine participles would want admonita. Pattern 9: Latin gender has no English exponent, nothing to render either way. Logged so a later sweep does not churn it. - 0956B
tamen inde correctum, et correctus alios corrigit. Migne prints neutercorrectumthen masculinecorrectusof the same subject. Pattern 9 again; rendered "yet corrected from that, and being corrected it corrects others", and the mismatch is invisible in English by necessity, not by choice. - 0956D
non amicti, ut vel liberum caput haberent, sed toti operti. Thenon … sedpivots on amicti/operti, so the negative is on "clothed", not on "have". Rendered "not merely wrapped about, so as at least to have the head free, but wholly covered." - 0957A
Non dicit, nescit. Two negatives, one on the reporting verb and one inside the reported words. Both carried: "He does not say, He knows not." - 0957B
judicavi quod non est. Kept as "I judged that which is not" — the temptation was "I judged wrongly", which would have deleted the negative and the object together. - 0957C
nisi Deus aperiat—nisicarried ("unless God open it"); the supplied "it" is flagged here because the Latin has no object: the antecedent is the difficulty ofmajor me, me superans, and I could not make the clause English without one. - 0961B
Diem illustrat sed incommutabilis sapientiae.⛔ Does not construe. A genitiveincommutabilis sapientiaehangs with no head noun; the sense wants something like lumen or sol. Rendered as closely as the printed words allow — "He illumines the day but of unchangeable wisdom" — and not smoothed. Plate-checked: this is exactly what Migne sets. Conjecture offered but not placed in the text; a[cj:]would need a printed word to gloss and there is none, the fault being an omission. - 0962B
Confiteri peccata vel semel terreno judici mortem inducit, sed Deo frequens confessio vitam?Migne closes a plain statement with?. Pattern 8: preserved as printed — this is his oddity and recording it is the point. Not an indirect question, so 8b does not apply. Plate-checked. - 0962B
Inde invocatio, post narratio; unde sequitur: Narrabimus. Invocabimus nomen tuum.The order of the two quoted words contradicts the sentence that introduces them (and the Clementine has invocabimus before narrabimus). Plate-checked: Migne's own. Rendered as printed, in his order. - 0962C
Judicandi igitur ante precentur absolvi.Compressed past easy construing;Judicandiis read as a genitive gerundive depending onabsolvi. Rendered "Therefore let them pray beforehand to be absolved of him who is to judge", which is the closest the printed words allow. Flagged rather than smoothed. - 0962D
perniciosus defendendo se, in Deum culpam refundere. The series runs malum … pejus … perniciosus — the third member is a positive where the comparative perniciosius is wanted. Plate-checked: Migne setsperniciosus. Rendered "pernicious", NOT "more pernicious": upgrading it would be the silent repair Pattern 7 forbids, and a[cj:]is not owed because the English asserts nothing false, only something less pointed. - 0964D
et facit renes sui, qui corpus suum moderantur.suifor suos. Rendered "and makes them reins of his own, who govern their own body"; the printed genitive is carried rather than corrected. Declined a[cj:]— it is a case slip in a possessive, the Pattern 9 shape. - 0966A
In alio modo, non est misericordia, nisi Deus eam donet: et ipse erit sine ea.⛔ Read as printed the second clause says God will be without mercy, which contradicts the first. Both thenonand thenisiare carried and nothing is smoothed — this is precisely the contradiction this edition exists to show. Rendered "there is no mercy unless God bestow it: and he himself will be without it." - 0958C
vel in super coelesti Ecclesia. Rendered "or in the supercelestial Church";in superprinted as two words is carried as one adjective because there is no other reading that construes with the ablative. Flagged. - 0959B
Vel vacat in eo.Glossing Ps 73:2's pleonasticin quo habitasti in eo— the note says the phrase is idle. Rendered "Or it is redundant in it", deliberately without adding an italic span for the quoted words, because inventing one would break the span parity that is this stint's only detector against a mis-split brief. - 0965D
Sed contra dies antiquos, annos ponit aeternos:Migne's italics split the construction acrossponit. English keeps the split — "But over against the ancient days, the years he sets eternal:" — rather than regularising it into one span. - 0966A
quod de servis filii— verbless. Rendered "in that of servants there are made sons", supplying only a copula; flagged.
Anchors: every one of the 55 column anchors was placed against the word it stands beside in the Latin, not merely reproduced in order (2b). Three sit mid-construction in the Latin and sit mid-construction in the English too: 0954A inside secundum … utramque naturam, 0955D inside septuagesimus primus, 0961C between judicem and provocat.
§6 · FALSE-POSITIVE CANDIDATES CONSIDERED AND REJECTED
- Column-band arithmetic. 0954A–D then 0955A–D and so on run cleanly; nothing is broken mid-word across an anchor. Not reported.
noteCount. 34 / 36 / 51 / 41 / 39 in the frontmatter; the bodies carry 34 / 36 / 51 / 41 / 39. Exact. Not an issue in this range.- Pattern 4
[f:]. Not applicable — this is lemma-and-gloss commentary, runbook item 4. Nothing tagged. - Pattern 15
[nt:]. All 201 notes in this range are sigla or bare citations ((AUG.),(CAS.),(CASS.),(HIER.),(HIERON.),(ID.),(REM.),(Dan. IX),(Joan. I),(Psal. XXVIII),(I Thes. I)). None is editorial prose; every one stays[n:]. - Migne's own
( sic )— does not occur in this range. (cont.)— no head repeats across a chunk boundary here.
§7 · OWED / OPEN
Nafrubimus@0962B: the leaf must be re-read before the[sic:]is transcribed. The letter betweenNaandrubimuscould not be settled asforteven at 1200 dpi, and a marker must not guess a letter. The patch entry says so.- The 20 TEI-patch sites appended to
data/briefs/8967-PENDING-TEI-PATCHES.md. Two English edits are already made in anticipation and must not be made twice: 0958D "temporal things" (for ourtemporatia) and 0966B "I have begun" (for ourCaepi), both following the plate. Once the patch pass restores Migne's own defects at 0955C, 0958A, 0960C, 0960D, 0962B and 0965C, six further[sic:]become available and this stint's English should be revisited for them. - The blind polarity read on these five chunks, as on all the rest.
§G.0059 — stint file cruces-0059.md, verbatim
Range: src/latin/8967/0059.md–0063.md, cols 0967C–0981A. Psalms LXXVII–LXXX (Ps 77 across three chunks, then Ps 78, 79, 80). Lemma brief: data/briefs/8967-lemmata-0059.txt.
⚠ This file is one stint's range. It must be merged into src/english/8967/cruces.md.
§0 · SPAN COUNT RECONCILIATION (the required check)
My brief's header declares 352 spans for chunks 0059–0063. Counting … in my own Latin:
| chunk | italic spans |
|---|---|
| 0059 | 101 |
| 0060 | 78 |
| 0061 | 52 |
| 0062 | 79 |
| 0063 | 42 |
| total | 352 |
The totals AGREE (352 = 352), and the brief's entries are the same spans in the same order — I walked the two lists against each other, not merely the counts. This brief was split correctly. No head-of-range shortfall, no tail spill. The English carries 352 spans outside markers, 1:1 and in place, in all five chunks (verify-english.mjs 8967 reports no error on any of them).
⚑ Two of the 352 are span-boundary artefacts of Migne's italics, not lemma boundaries, and I reproduce them rather than tidying them:
- 0974B
usque ad opprobrium enim [0974B] sempiternum dedit illis.— the abridgment formula and the verse it splices into are ONE run in Migne's type, broken by an unitalicisedenimand by the column turn. English keeps two spans in the same two places, which costs readability (as far as: reproach indeed [0974B] everlasting he gave to them.). Rendered as printed. - 0974B
Unam petii a Domino, hanc requiram. Sanctificium.— Migne's italic swallows the NEXT lemma (Sanctificium, Ps 77:69) into the Ps 26:4 quotation. One span in Latin, one in English. - 0975C
Visitabo peccata patrum … generationem [n: (Ezech. XVIII.)] Antiquarum.— same shape: the quotation's italic runs on past its own note and swallows the lemmaAntiquarum.
§1 · MARKERS FIRED — 20 [var:], 2 [sic:], no [d:], [ed:], [cj:], [nt:]
plate-gate.mjs 8967 returns gate OK: every one stands on a column I opened this session (§3).
1a. The two [sic:]
[sic: facti]@0968D (0059) — Migne prints Ephraim fuctus est facti columba insipiens, non habens cor for Os 7:11 factus est Ephraim quasi columba seducta.factiis a real Latin form (nom. pl. / gen. sg. participle) standing where the verse needsquasi, and it has no grammatical slot at all between a singular verb and a singular predicate: Pattern 12's test 1. Marked, not rendered away — the rest of the lemma is Englished around it, so the clause keeps its verb, its subject and its object (7a⁗, and its fourth question). ⚑ The neighbouring word is worse and I could NOT mark it. The plate readsfuctus, a non-word; our TEI carriesfactus, i.e. CC repaired it.[sic:]may wrap only type the twin carries, so the marker is unlocked by the patch, not by me — reported as patch site A1.[sic: tribu]@0971C (0060) — Migne prints Manus ejus et de manu tribu; — the compositor's truncation of tribulationis, and the plate confirms it letter for letter with the semicolon. The clause keeps its sense (quae multum differunt, of the two hands), and the hole where the object should be is Migne's hole, so nothing is quarantined that the plate supplies.
1b. The twenty [var:], in order
Chunk 0059 | col | lemma as Migne prints it | Clementine | |---|---|---| | 0968A | Charitas, quae pellit timorem | 1 Jo 4:18 perfecta caritas foras mittit timorem | | 0968C–D | Omnia, quaecunque dixerit nobis Dominus, faciemus et audiemus | Ex 24:7 Omnia quae locutus est Dominus, faciemus, et erimus obedientes | | 0968D | Ephraim … insipiens (and facti for quasi) | Os 7:11 quasi columba seducta | | 0968D | Beneficiorum. | Ps 77:11 benefactorum | | 0969B | De peccato quidem, quia non credunt in me | Jo 16:9 quia non crediderunt in me | | 0970A | …et non creditis mihi, quomodo si dico vobis coelestia? | Jo 3:12 et non creditis : quomodo, si dixero vobis caelestia, credetis? |
Chunk 0060 | col | Migne | Clementine | |---|---|---| | 0971A–B | Et non dispersit eos. | Ps 77:38 et non disperdet eos — different verb AND tense | | 0971B | Spiritus vadens et non revertens | Ps 77:39 non rediens | | 0971B | Omnes qui ambulant in ea non revertentur | Pr 2:19 qui ingrediuntur ad eam | | 0971C | De manu tribulationis | Ps 77:42 de manu tribulantis | | 0971D | Cynomia. | Ps 77:45 coenomyiam | | 0972B | Thanis, | Ps 77:12, 43 Taneos | | 0973B | Non erunt tibi dii alieni | Ex 20:3 Non habebis deos alienos coram me | | 0974A | Et percussit iniquitatem. | Ps 77:66 percussit inimicos suos in posteriora |
Chunk 0061 | col | Migne | Clementine | |---|---|---| | 0975C | Visitabo peccata patrum in filios, usque in tertiam et quartam generationem | Ex 20:5 visitans iniquitatem patrum in filios, in tertiam et quartam generationem (Migne cites Ezech. XVIII, which is the PREVIOUS quotation's book) |
Chunk 0062 | col | Migne | Clementine | |---|---|---| | 0976D | Intellectus pro his qui commutabuntur. | Ps 79:1 In finem, pro iis qui commutabuntur | | 0977C | Ascendit Deus super nubem levem | Is 19:1 Ecce Dominus ascendet super nubem levem | | 0979A | …ut plenitudo gentium intraret | Rom 11:25 …donec plenitudo gentium intraret | | 0979A | …nisi ut ardeat? | Lc 12:49 nisi ut accendatur? |
Chunk 0063 | col | Migne | Clementine | |---|---|---| | 0979B | Exsultat Deo. | Ps 80:2 Exsultate Deo adjutori nostro | | 0980B | Erit hic in ruinam, et resurrectionem multorum | Lc 2:34 Ecce positus est hic in ruinam et in resurrectionem multorum in Israel | | 0980C | Erravimus a via veritatis, et sol justitiae non illuxit nobis | Sap 5:6 justitiae lumen non luxit nobis, et sol intelligentiae non est ortus nobis |
1c. ⭐ SIX OF THESE ARE DIVERGENCES THE GLOSS ITSELF DEPENDS ON
The launch brief asks specifically for these. Six of the twenty are load-bearing: conform the lemma and the exposition built on it collapses.
- 0979B
Exsultat Deo(Ps 80:2). Migne prints a third-person singular indicative; the Clementine has the second-person plural imperative Exsultate. The gloss immediately under it reads Asaph … electos ad celebritatem incitat — Asaph stirs the elect up to the feast, which is a gloss on a command, not on a report. A conformed lemma would leave the gloss commenting on a sentence Migne does not print. Plate-confirmed at 400 dpi (p. 495). - 0971C
De manu tribulationis(Ps 77:42). The Clementine's tribulantis is a participle ("the hand of him that afflicted them"); Migne prints the noun tribulationis. The gloss: Tribulatio solet esse in memoria, sed non eis — it expounds tribulation as a thing, which only Migne's noun licenses. - 0971D
Cynomia(Ps 77:45). The Clementine has coenomyiam, κοινόμυια, the common fly. Migne's form carries κυνο-, dog — and the entire gloss is three words long: Canini mores sunt. "They are dog-like manners." Conform the lemma to coenomyiam and the gloss becomes a non sequitur. - 0971B
Spiritus vadens et non revertens(Ps 77:39). Clementine rediens. The gloss plays on Migne's stem twice in one sentence — per gratiam revocat … per se redire non possunt … non revertentur … per gratiam revocabuntur. The revert-/revoc- chain is the argument. - 0976D
Intellectus pro his qui commutabuntur(Ps 79:1). Migne's titulus readsIntellectuswhere the Clementine readsIn finem. The gloss's very next words are Asaph. Illuminatus agit de adventu Christi — Asaph glossed as enlightened, i.e. read straight off Intellectus. ⚑ This is also an exception worth recording against §A1.1: the Band A ruling (In finem→ "Unto the end") is not in play here, because Migne does not printIn finemat this titulus at all. Plate-confirmed (p. 493). - 0980C
sol justitiae non illuxit nobis(Sap 5:6). The Clementine has TWO clauses, justitiae lumen non luxit nobis and sol intelligentiae non est ortus nobis; Migne fuses them intosol justitiae— and that fused phrase is the hinge of the whole paragraph, which is expounding Samson interpretatur sol eorum and which adduces Mal 4:2 Sol justitiae est in the very next sentence as the pair to it. The conformed reading would break both ends of the chain at once.**
§2 · THE SPANS I CHECKED AND DID NOT MARK — with the words, not a tally
A findings list alone cannot be told from a report by an agent that never looked. These are the divergences I found, named, and declined, with the reason for each decline.
Quanta audivimus ab initio.@0967C — not in the Clementine as one sequence. It is the gloss splicing Ps 77:3 (Quanta audivimus) to Ps 77:2 (ab initio), both of them this psalm's own words, quoted as "what Asaph said below". A conflation of two verses of the SAME psalm is not a divergence from either. No marker.finis legis ad justitiam omni credenti@0967D (Rom 10:4 Finis enim legis, Christus, ad justitiam omni credenti) — the gloss supplies Christus outside the italic span (sed hic Christus, finis legis…), so nothing is lost; an abridgment woven into the host sentence.Vade et dic domui exasperanti@0968B — Migne cites Ezech. II. Not verbatim anywhere: it conflates the vade… loquere of Ez 3:4 with the formula domus exasperans that recurs at Ez 2:5, 2:6, 3:9, 3:26, 12:2 and elsewhere. There is no single received reading to name, and a[var:]must name one. Declined.Non est creditus cum Deo spiritus ejus [n: (Joan. I)]@0968B — the words are Ps 77:8 itself, verbatim; the citation(Joan. I)is Migne's misattribution. A citation tail, and the runbook's known-false-positive list covers it. Note passes through verbatim. No marker.Discite a me… [n: (Joan. VII.)]@0969A — Mt 11:29 verbatim (given our TEI's Discite), under a wrong book. Same class. No marker. ⚑ The plate readsDiscit— patch site A2.Spiritus arguet mundum de peccato@0969B — Jo 16:8 has arguet mundum de peccato with ille as subject; Migne supplies Spiritus from his own frame. Supplying the subject a Gospel pronoun stands for does not change what is asserted. No marker.Nunquid poterimus de petra aquam vobis ejicere?@0970C — Nm 20:10 num de petra hac vobis aquam poterimus ejicere. Migne reorders and drops hac. Order and a demonstrative only; sense identical. No marker — but the English drops "this" with him ("out of the rock"), which is where a silent conformation would have crept in.Manna, quid est hoc?@0970A — Ex 16:15 prints Manhu? quod significat : Quid est hoc? The gloss is naming the word, not quoting the verse. No marker.Non omnem iram accendit@0971B — Ps 77:38 et non accendit omnem iram suam. Word order and a dropped possessive; the gloss's own next words (non punivit eos quantum digni erant) turn on neither. No marker.abstulit eos de Aegypto, et induxit eos in montem sanctificationis [n: (Gen. IV)]@0971A — the note resolves to Cain, four lines above, not to this quotation. Known false positive (anIbid.-class note answering to the "wrong" antecedent). No marker.Propterea tradidit illos in reprobum sensum@0972C — Rom 1:28 tradidit illos Deus in reprobum sensum. Migne supplies Propterea and drops Deus, both to fit his own sentence. No marker.Primogenitum in Aegypto@0972D,In iram concita@0973B,Usquequo, Domine?@0975A — fragmentary lemmata cut mid-phrase, rendered as the phrase they stand for (convention 3). Not divergences.Injice pedem tuum in compedes ejus@0976A — Sir 6:25 in compedes illius. A one-word pronoun swap with no change of sense; the settled single-word rule excludes it. No marker.Alias oves habeo…@0977A — Jo 10:16: Migne has de hoc ovili for ex hoc ovili, ut fiat for et fiet, and omits et vocem meam audient. The omission is the recension's ordinary abridgment and the gloss argues from none of the three. Named here; no marker.Reminiscentur, et convertentur universi fines terrae@0977B — Ps 21:28 …et convertentur ad Dominum universi fines terrae. Migne drops ad Dominum; the gloss turns on reminiscentur (ut jam illi venias in mentem), which is untouched. No marker.Fidelis Deus, qui non patitur vos tentari…@0977C and again @0977D — 1 Cor 10:13 Fidelis autem Deus est, qui non patietur (future). Present for future, twice, consistently. The gloss uses it as a standing maxim either way. No marker; named because the tense is real.Flagellat enim omnem filium quem recipit@0977C — Heb 12:6 flagellat autem. A connective. No marker.aspice@0978D — Ps 79:15 respice de caelo, et vide. A prefix swap with the same sense (ad-/re- + spicio); the settled letter-level exclusion applies. No marker, named.Domine Deus virtutum, converte nos, ostende faciem tuam…@0979A — Ps 79:20 has et ostende. A dropped conjunction. No marker.Sol justitiae est, et sanitas in pennis ejus@0980D — Mal 4:2 orietur vobis timentibus nomen meum sol justitiae, et sanitas in pennis ejus. Migne reduces the clause to a predication; the quoted words are the Vulgate's. No marker. (Its neighbour, Sap 5:6, is marked — §1c.6.)Clama ne cesses, ut tuba exalta vocem tuam@0979C — Is 58:1 quasi tuba. ut for quasi, same sense. No marker.Si spiritualia seminavimus vobis…@0979C — 1 Cor 9:11 Si nos vobis spiritualia seminavimus, magnum est si nos carnalia vestra metamus. Word order and two dropped pronouns. No marker.Qui facit peccatum, servus est peccati@0979D — Jo 8:34 omnis qui facit peccatum. A dropped omnis, absorbed by the gloss's Peccata servilia opera sunt, juxta illud. No marker.Grex tonsarum/ascendens de lavacro/sterilis non erat in eis@0974B–C — these three answer to Ct 4:2 (greges tonsarum quae ascenderunt de lavacro … sterilis non est inter eas), in the singular and in the imperfect. ⛔ Declined deliberately: Migne gives no citation and the words are woven into the gloss's own syntax as Augustine's paraphrase, not set as a quotation. A[var:]is a public claim that a QUOTATION diverges; this is not one. Named in full so a later reader can overrule me with the evidence in front of him.Ego sum, ego sum, et nemo alius@0978D — an allusion to Is 47:8/10 and Soph 2:15, verbatim in neither, and put in the mouth of "every proud man" rather than quoted. No marker.- Confirmed to AGREE with the Clementine word for word (checked, not assumed): Anima quae peccaverit ipsa morietur (Ez 18:4/20), Reliquiae salvae fient (Rom 9:27), Verbum caro factum (Jo 1:14), Vanum est vobis ante lucem surgere (Ps 126:2), Unam petii a Domino, hanc requiram (Ps 26:4), Ubi est Deus tuus? (Ps 41:4/11), Aqua contradictionis (Nm 20:13), Loquar propositiones ab initio (Ps 77:2), and all thirty-odd single-word lemmata of Ps 77–80 checked in place against their own verse.
§3 · THE PLATE — eight pages, sixteen columns, nobody had opened one of them
0 of the work's 92 recorded reads fell in cols 0967–0982 before this stint. I opened all eight pages (489–496) and read the printed corner numbers on every one before trusting the page map. All eight are now in data/plate-reads.json; seven are depth: full (collated word by word), the eighth (0981–0982) is read, because col 0981 is clipped.
15 departures of our TEI from Migne across 15 fully collated columns, ~1.0 per column against the band's running ~1.4. The full list, with what each one does to the apparatus, is appended to data/briefs/8967-PENDING-TEI-PATCHES.md as sites A1–A4, B5, C6–C15. The four that matter here:
⭐⭐ The plate WITHDREW a marker I would otherwise have fired. @0973B our TEI prints qui non ominus jaculatur — a non-word, and under Pattern 7/12 an obvious [sic:]. The plate reads eminus. The non-word is Corpus Corporum's, not Migne's, so no [sic:] is owed and firing one would have accused Migne in public of a defect he does not have. The English renders eminus: "which does not shoot from afar". This is the single most valuable thing the plate did in my range, and it is invisible from the Latin alone.
⭐ The plate UNLOCKED four markers I cannot fire yet, because [sic:] may wrap only type our twin carries: fuctus @0968D, Discit @0969A, proptes @0973D, Illuminatur @0976D — four Migne defects that CC silently repaired. Each becomes available the moment its patch lands.
⭐ One CC-onto-Clementine move, the class no Vulgate collation can see. @0973D the plate sets the lemma Virtutum eorum; our TEI reads Virtutem, which is exactly Ps 77:61. Migne's genitive plural is the reading his own gloss expounds (virtutes abstulit in malis). A [var:] is unlocked by the patch. ⚑ The English as filed renders our twin's Virtutem ("Their strength.") and must change with the Latin — flagged in the patch file too.
⚑ One departure changes the English and I have flagged it in both places. @0980A the plate reads sed jam bene siccata est where our TEI reads pene: "well dried up" against "almost dried up". Controlled at 6× against the descender-bearing p of populorum one line below and the b of turbabantur on the same line, so the b is a set sort. The English currently renders pene.
### 3a. What I controlled, and against what — because a logged column is not a checked column
fuctus@0968D: the suspectuwas checked at 5× against the closed-bowlaof facti, columba and Ephraim on the same printed line. Without that control I would have been inventing the class the brief warns about.Illuminatur@0976D: controlled on the facing column, where 0977A prints Asaph illuminatus correctly. Both forms on one opening; the-turis Migne's, not the scan's.bene@0980A: controlled against a knownpand a knownbon adjacent lines, per the h↔b hazard note. It is ab.- The italic-
e-images-as-chazard: I hunted for it and found no instance in sixteen columns. A checked negative on a class that produced three false candidates in eleven columns for a peer stint. hunc panem, id est verbum@0970A: raised as a suspected CC insertion at 150 dpi and withdrawn at 400 dpi — Migne prints it. My own false candidate, recorded.deserit@0973D (Sic deserit corpora nostra): the standing deservit/deserit check. Plate readsdeserit, our TEI agrees, and the accusative object settles it independently, since deservio governs the dative. Checked negative.Diapsalma@0980B: set ROMAN, unitalicised — a sixth plate confirmation of §A1.2, and my English follows it.
### 3b. The clipping question — three more counterexamples 0981 is clipped at the inner margin; 0967, 0969, 0971, 0973, 0975, 0977, 0979 are clean. Since 0969, 0973 and 0977 are each ≡ 1 (mod 4) and clean while 0981 is ≡ 1 and clipped, this stint adds three clean counterexamples from a single gathering to the rule Band A withdrew. No marker of mine rests on a line-opening word in 0981, so nothing is withheld and no second copy is needed for this range.
§4 · CRUCES — passages rendered as printed, with what I checked
§4.1 · @0968C — an affirmative where the lemma requires a negative. Plate-confirmed as Migne's. > Non est creditus cum Deo spiritus ejus, id est, et si ratio bene suasit, ei acquievit.
Rendered: "His spirit was not trusted with God, that is, and if reason persuaded him well, he yielded to it." The gloss as printed says the man DID yield to reason — the opposite of the lemma it is glossing and of the sentence three lines below (quam fidem non habet generatio prava). The conjecture is nec ei acquievit or ei non acquievit. Not repaired: no word is translated as its opposite and no negative is supplied. Plate read at 400 dpi (p. 489): Migne prints exactly this. ⚑ Checked at the SUBJECT level too, not only the negation level: the subject of acquievit is the man of qui prave intellecta non corrigit, not ratio and not spiritus; the dative ei is rationi. The defect is the missing negative, and nothing else in the clause is wrong.
§4.2 · @0970C — Correcti with no subject to agree with. > Correcti post haec omnia graviora sunt peccata, quae semper accrescunt.
Correcti is nominative plural masculine; the only nominative in the sentence is peccata, neuter. Rendered as printed, with the participle left dangling: "Corrected after all these things, the sins are the graver, which ever increase." No emendation; the anacoluthon is Migne's.
§4.3 · @0970A — non tentati Synagogae, a gender mismatch with no English exponent. Synagogae is feminine and would take tentatae. Pattern 9: Latin grammatical gender has no English exponent, so there is nothing to render either way and nothing to mark. Rendered "not to the tempting Synagogue", against credenti Ecclesiae in the same clause. Logged so a later sweep does not churn it.
§4.4 · @0977C — a double negative that reads as one negative too many. > Transit ira a servo, ut non flagellet ut patet, sed ne damnet.
Rendered word for word: "Wrath passes from the servant, that he may not scourge, as is plain, but that he may not condemn." Both printed negatives are carried, each on the verb it stands before. The sense the paragraph wants is almost certainly not that wrath departs so as not to scourge — the next clause says conversis enim durat ira, sed corrigens, wrath endures upon the converted as a correcting wrath, i.e. it DOES scourge. The likely reading is that ut patet is parenthetical and the first clause is being denied by the sed. Rendered as printed; the conjecture stays here.
§4.5 · @0969A — coram patribus novit, two readings and neither settled. > Sic Christus in terra positus coram patribus novit, humile mandatum docuit.
Rendered "So Christ, set upon the earth, knew before the fathers, and taught the humble commandment." novit may be "knew" or, less likely, a perfect of nosco used causatively ("made known"), which the parallel with docuit would favour. Both construe; I took the printed word at its ordinary value and record the alternative rather than choosing silently.
§4.6 · @0980B — et quia populus iste fremens nihil erat, nisi languidus peccator. A quia clause with no main clause. Rendered as printed ("and because that roaring people was nothing but a sickly sinner"), carrying both nihil and nisi. Migne's fragment, not ours.
§4.7 · Unexpressed subjects I supplied, and what told me who they are. Every "he", "she", "it", "they" below is one the Latin does not print.
- @0969C
dans prius quod, licet tentando, petebat— singular petebat after plural petebant one line above. The subject is the people, taken collectively, as populus throughout this psalm; rendered "what it was asking". Migne's number shift is preserved, not levelled. - @0970C
impedivit ne illis prodessent, quibus … cupiebantandcompedivit ut cum eis molestias sustinerent electi— the subject of sustinerent iselecti, printed, and the "them" they suffer with are the murmurers. Rendered so. (This is the exact shape Band A's blind read caught at the subject level, so I checked it twice.) - @0971A
Quia caro vel spiritus vadens— no verb and no subject. Supplied "they are", from Ps 77:39 itself, recordatus est quia caro sunt, which is the verse this gloss stands under. - @0974A
quando populum suum dedit in manus eorum, quos odit— the unexpressed subject of odit is God, the subject of dedit in the same sentence, and I rendered it so. ⚑ The rival reading ("whom his people hate", i.e. their enemies) also construes and is arguably the more natural sense. Both work; naming the choice here rather than burying it. - @0976B
Pia precatio, ne filios eorum projiciat, qui pro eo puniti sunt.— qui is nominative and filios accusative, so qui cannot attach to the children; it attaches to eorum, the martyrs. Rendered "the children of those who were punished for him". Grammar decided it, not sense. - @0975D
Per hoc nec ingratus est gratiae, nec tollit liberum arbitrium.— subject is the speaker of the verse, not God; "he" throughout. - @0977A
Hic psalmus Synagogae est testimonium de capite ipso, et corpore ejus.— Synagogae read as possessive genitive ("the testimony of the Synagogue"), against the dative reading ("a testimony TO the Synagogue"), which the preceding commutatis … testimonium dat would support. Both construe; the genitive matches the psalm's own title (Testimonium Asaph) and Asaph's role as the Synagogue's voice throughout this psalm. Named, not settled.
§4.8 · Etymological wordplay that does not survive into English, deliberately not italicised. @0970D unde fides dicitur quod fiant dicta — fides from fiant dicta. Rendered "whence faith is so called because the things said are done." ⛔ I did NOT put the Latin words into the English, because every added italic span breaks the 352-span parity that is the only detector for a mis-split lemma brief. The play is recorded here instead.
§5 · CONVENTIONS — inherited, applied, and the one exception
usque ad→ "as far as": 23 italic-set occurrences in my range, all rendered by the formula. ⚑ ONE exception taken, and here is the Latin that forced it: @0974B sic ab initio electionis Hebraeae gentis usque ad Christum procedit — not italic, and a plain temporal extent. Rendered "down to Christ" per the italic-membership test, which is the test §A4 settles.Diapsalma@0980B — unanglicized, roman, not italic, not "Selah". Plate-confirmed.Dominus/Deus virtutum→ "God of hosts" — §A5's ruling on Dominus virtutum applied to the five occurrences ofDeus virtutumin Ps 79 (0977D×2, 0978D×2, 0979A). Plate-confirmed as Migne's at 0977–0978, on a page with zero departures.sedes→ "seat" — @0970B ut in suis sedibus … audiant → "in their own seats". §A5.- Heads mirror the plate:
PSALMUS LXXVII.→PSALM LXXVII., andPSAL. LXXVIII.→PSAL. LXXVIII.is Migne's own abbreviation on p. 492 and is followed, not regularised toPSALMUS.(cont.)on the repeated heads is the chunker's, not Migne's — known false positive. Psalmus Asaph→ "A psalm of Asaph", matching Band A'sPsalmus David→ "A psalm of David" (0017, 0024). Ps 80's Clementine titulus is Psalmus ipsi Asaph; Migne's lemma at 0979B is onlyAsaph,, so §A1.4's distinction is not engaged here.- The gentes axis, decided per site, with the sites named: gentes @0973A (Ps 77:54, the Canaanite peoples) → nations; @0974D (Ps 78:1, the invaders of the inheritance) → nations; @0978A and @0979D (the Church gathered out of the nations, against the Jews) → Gentiles; @0978C (invenerunt eam gentes) → nations; gentilis/gentiles @0976A → Gentiles; singular gens of the Jewish people @0971A, @0974B, @0975B, @0977B → nation.
ethnicusdoes not occur, and "heathen" appears nowhere in my English — consistent with Band A's 0. sacramentum@0979A → "sacrament" (Grande sacramentum); no mysterium in range, so the 1:1 pair is untested here.diabolus@0972C, @0978D → "devil"; no daemonium in range.- Archaism: the only
-eth/-estforms in my English stand inside italic scripture lemmata (Whosoever committeth sin is the servant of sin; he scourgeth every son whom he receiveth; suffereth you not to be tempted). The commentator's own voice is never archaised. Checked against BOTH memberships per §A4 — there are no « guillemets » anywhere in my range (checked: zero in all five Latin chunks), so the italic test is sufficient here, and I say so rather than leaving it implied. ⚑ The sweep caught one of my own: @0971B I had written "a spirit that goeth" in the GLOSS's unitalicised re-quotation of its lemma (Quia caro vel spiritus vadens). The lemma itself two lines above is italic and keeps its goeth; the gloss's echo now reads "goes". Recorded because it is exactly the shape the italic test exists to catch. - Thou/you (Pattern 17): thou only where the Latin is singular (tibi @0973B, tuis @0977D, te/tuo throughout Ps 80's address to Israel, Ubi est Deus tuus? @0974A). you where the Latin is plural (vobis @0970A, @0977C, @0977D, @0979C). No reverence-driven thou anywhere.
- Em-dashes: zero in all five chunks.
- Question marks: 3 / 2 / 3 / 3 / 0, matching the Latin twin band for band. One
?was removed from inside a[var:]marker's quoted Vulgate text so that no mark of ours can be counted against Migne's parity.
§6 · FLAGGED FOR WILSON — not decided here
gens tenebrarumdoes NOT occur in my range. Checked; nothing to match or flag. Recorded because a silent absence and an unchecked absence look identical.- @0973D
Virtutem→Virtutumis a patch that MOVES THE ENGLISH. If the patch lands, the English twin at 0973D must change from "Their strength." to "Of their virtues." Flagged in both this file and the patch queue so it cannot fall between them. - @0980A
pene→benelikewise moves the English ("almost dried up" → "well dried up"). - @0979A
Super te fundatam→Super et fundatammoves it a third time, and worse: restored, the clause does not construe, and a[sic: et]or a[cj:]becomes live. I rendered our twin'sterather than pre-empting the patch pass with a conjecture of my own. - A boundary I want ruled, not assumed: I translated the twin, except once. Where our TEI carries a CC-manufactured non-word (
ominus@0973B) I rendered the plate'seminus, because rendering the non-word would have required a[sic:]that publicly blames Migne. Everywhere else — includingVirtutem,pene,Super te— I rendered our twin as it stands and flagged the site, on the Band A precedent that English twins change WITH the Latin in the patch pass. If that division is wrong, it is wrong in exactly four places and they are all named above.
§G.0064 — stint file cruces-0064.md, verbatim
§0 · SPAN COUNT RECONCILIATION — the required check, and the brief is CORRECT
data/briefs/8967-lemmata-0064.txt declares 272 and lists 272 addressed entries. Counting … runs in my own five Latin chunks:
| chunk | spans |
|---|---|
| 0064 | 34 |
| 0065 | 68 |
| 0066 | 34 |
| 0067 | 53 |
| 0068 | 83 |
| total | 272 |
272 = 272. No mis-split. The head of my file opens at [0981A] VERS. 1.-- Psalmus Asaph., which is the first span of chunk 0064, and the tail closes at [0991D] Proximum et notos,, the last span of 0068 — so the cut is by chunk membership, not by column band.
⚑ The English span totals match 1:1 in every chunk when the contents of [var: …] markers are stripped (my [var:] notes quote Latin in italics, which inflates a raw count by exactly the number of markers in that chunk: 0064 +2, 0065 +3, 0067 +3, 0068 +3).
Other parities, all checked mechanically against the Latin twin: column anchors 6 / 11 / 7 / 8 / 11 verbatim and in place (each one checked against the word it stands beside, not merely present — Pattern 2b); notes 11 / 27 / 18 / 32 / 40; ## heads 1 / 1 / 1 / 2 / 2; question marks 5 / 10 / 2 / 0 / 4, band by band, zero mismatched bands. verify-english clean; plate-gate ✓ on all eleven markers.
§1 · PLATE — I READ MY WHOLE RANGE, SIX PAGES, AND NOBODY HAD OPENED ONE OF THEM
PDF 496–501 of raw/scans/pl113/patrologiaecurs04migngoog.pdf, 300 dpi full width plus 600 dpi crops, corner numbers read first on every page (982 · 983/984 · 985/986 · 987/988 · 989/990 · 991/992) — the map PDF page = (column + 11) / 2 holds. Recorded in data/plate-reads.json at depth full.
Clipping, measured not inferred: col 0981 IS clipped at the inner margin, 3–6 characters. 0983, 0985, 0987, 0989, 0991 are all clean. ⚑ 985 ≡ 1 (mod 4) and is clean — one more counterexample to the withdrawn mod-4 rule, which would have silently withheld two markers here.
What the plate changed:
- It created one marker I would not have dared from the Latin alone (0984A
velfor Rom 2:9'setreads like a transcription slip until you see Migne set it). - It withheld one:
filiis Excelsi omnes@0981C falls in 0981's clipped margin and cannot be settled on this copy. No[var:]fired. See §4. - It refused four
[sic:]candidates outright —omncm,opcrantis,Zcb,Eccc— every one the italic-e-images-as-chazard. I checked each against a known instance of the same letter on the same printed line before believing anything, exactly as the brief requires, and all four came back as our TEI already had them. Without that control I would have invented the class I was hunting. - It found seventeen departures of our Latin from Migne across ~11 columns (§3).
§2 · MARKERS FIRED — eleven [var:], no [sic:], no [d:], no [cj:], no [ed:]
Every one stands on a column read at depth full today.
| col | chunk | the divergence | why it is material |
|---|---|---|---|
| 0981B | 0064 | Migne's lemma reads Ecce deos dijudicat for Ps 81:1 in medio autem deos dijudicat | ⭐ The gloss argues from the words Migne's lemma has replaced: three lines below, Hoc autem facit stans in medio, unde: Medius vestrum stetit. A reader who meets only Ecce cannot see where "in the midst" came from |
| 0981D | 0064 | pauperem et humilem justificate against Ps 81:3 humilem et pauperem justificate | A transposition, and the visible half (pauperem et at the line end, outside the clip) settles it without needing the clipped word |
| 0984A | 0065 | Rom 2:9 quoted Tribulatio vel angustia for Tribulatio et angustia | ⭐ The proof-text has been assimilated to the gloss's own vel: the sentence it proves is Tyrus. Hebraice sor, tribulatio vel angustia. Paul's et is the whole reason the verse is adduced |
| 0984A | 0065 | Eph 6:12 quoted adversus principatus et potestates for adversus principes et potestates | ⭐ The gloss depends on it. The subject is the apostate angels going into the devil's retinue: principatus names an angelic ORDER, principes merely princes |
| 0984C | 0065 | Ps 82:15 lemma Ignis et flamma comburens montes for Sicut ignis qui comburit silvam, et sicut flamma comburens montes | ⭐ The gloss expounds the word the lemma has dropped: quando et densae silvae peccatorum, et montes superbiae cremabuntur |
| 0987B | 0067 | Gn 3:17+19 conflated as Maledicta terra in opere tuo, et in labore et sudore vultus tui vesceris pane tuo | The reader meets a Genesis quotation that stands in no Bible; the note names both verses |
| 0988A | 0067 | Ps 85 titulus Oratio David. for Oratio ipsi David | Band A §A1.4 settled this class: Psalmus David ≠ Psalmus ipsi David, and three Band A stints fired [var:] on such tituli. Inherited, not re-derived |
| 0988C | 0067 | Prv 14:28 quoted In lata gente gloria regis, in diminutione populi principis contritio | Not the Vulgate at all — an Old-Latin/LXX form (ἐν πολλῷ ἔθνει δόξα βασιλέως). The Clementine's In multitudine populi dignitas regis shares not one word of the second member |
| 0989C | 0068 | Mt 21:31 quoted in regnum coelorum for in regnum Dei | A word substitution inside a proof-text |
| 0990C | 0068 | Ps 87:6 quoted quorum non es memor adhuc for quorum non es memor amplius | ⭐⭐ The highest-value one in the range. The gloss reads quorum licet non meminerit Deus adhuc, ut resurgant — adhuc ("as yet") is what licenses a future resurrection. Amplius ("no more") destroys the exposition built on it. The marker says so |
| 0991C | 0068 | Dt 32:39 quoted Percutiam et sanabo: occidam et vivere faciam — the two members reversed against ego occidam, et ego vivere faciam : percutiam, et ego sanabo | The transposition does work: the gloss adduces the verse for Flagellat enim filios quos recipit, and putting percutiam et sanabo first is what makes striking read as corrective |
⛔ No [sic:] is owed anywhere in this range, and that is a finding, not an absence. Six real Migne defects stand on these leaves (§3) and our Latin carries none of them — CC repaired every one. A [sic:] may wrap only type the Latin twin actually carries, so each is a patch first and a marker afterwards. §3 says which marker each unlocks.
§3 · OUR LATIN IS NOT MIGNE'S — seventeen sites, filed to 8967-PENDING-TEI-PATCHES.md
Full table appended there. The headline count: 8 sites where CC repaired a real Migne defect · 4 where CC altered Migne to a different real word · 2 where our Latin has lost what the plate prints · plus punctuation. That is ~1.5 per column, exactly the Band A rate.
The three that matter most:
- ⭐⭐ 0987B
Propheticedixi futura → ourdixit. The person is load-bearing: the same sentence runsquasi dicat, dixi quasi facta. Et quia video futura … oro ut fiant— first person throughout, and CC'sdixitdrops a third person into the middle of it. My English reads "He said prophetically" because Pattern 7 governs the Latin I was given, not the Latin I read at the plate. When the patch lands the English becomes "I said prophetically", and this crux is the record of why. - ⭐⭐ 0991C, a compositor EYE-SKIP Migne never caught. The plate prints
unde amici et videantur, et more deseruntwhere the line above endscircumfluere videantur, et. The compositor re-set that line-ending, losingnoti ti-and stranding the orphanmore. Our TEI readsunde amici et noti timore deserunt. Under 11a the intrusive copy is the second, and marking "the repeated occurrence" mechanically would quarantine the true text. - ⭐ 0986D
eumventibus respici → ourgentibus. A non-word, and the Band-B addendum's rule held: every suspicion aimed at a non-word has been confirmed at the plate, and this one is Migne's own.[sic: ventibus]is owed once patched.
The other five class-2 sites (vallit @0983C · psalmi @0985A · damnado @0991B · Percutium @0991C · the doubled , : and stranded torquebuntur. @0982C) each likewise unlock a marker.
⚑ Direction matters and both directions are here. CC also creates readings Migne does not print (omnino for animo @0985A, eum for cum @0982A, vero for vera @0985D) — so no [sic:] is owed on any of those, and a later collation that meets them must not blame Migne.
§4 · CRUCES — where I chose, what decided it, and what I could not settle
### 4a. filiis Excelsi omnes @0981C — UNSETTLEABLE ON THIS COPY, and no marker fired Our Latin prints Ego dixi: dii estis, et filiis Excelsi omnes. where the Clementine (Ps 81:6) has filii Excelsi omnes. The dative does not construe. But the word opens a line inside col 0981's clipped inner margin, and the plate cannot say whether Migne set filiis or filii. Rendered literally — "and [0981C] all of you to the sons of the Most High" — with no [var:] (the claim needs the plate) and no [cj:] (18a: a form that merely fails to construe, and is neither a negation nor a correlative, stays declined). Logged the way Band A logged f443 / f449 / f453. Needs Gallica.
### 4b. ut sint filii et Dei @0982B — Migne's, and the rival named The plate confirms filii et Dei at 600 dpi; it is not CC's. Rendered literally, "that they may be sons, and of God." The rival is filii et dii — "sons and gods" — which answers the psalm's own dii estis … et filii Excelsi omnes that the gloss has just quoted twice, and which the sentence is plainly reaching for. ⛔ It lost, and here is why: Migne sets a capital D, the conjecture rests on nothing but the argument's shape, and Pattern 18's bar is not met — the printed reading asserts nothing false, it merely reads oddly. Recorded, not marked.
### 4c. idem corpus sanat, et lavat caput @0984D — two parses, and which won The word order splits idem … caput around corpus sanat, et lavat. Taken: "the same head heals and washes the body" (caput nominative, corpus accusative). The rival, "the same body heals and washes the head", lost because it makes the body heal its own head, which reverses the frame the whole gloss is built on (Christ the head healing his body piecemeal now, universally at the end). A third parse — idem alone as "the same one", both nouns accusative — was weighed and declined for want of any masculine antecedent in the sentence.
### 4d. Mater Sion dicet, homo. @0989C — Migne's comma, and it fights his own gloss Migne labels this Secundum aliam litteram and prints the comma after dicet, which makes Sion the speaker. His gloss immediately says the opposite: Est quidam homo, id est, Christus, qui dicit mater Sion — the man is the speaker. Rendered as printed, "Mother Sion shall say, a man." No marker: Pattern 8 forbids moving his mark, and Pattern 18 opens on a word, not on punctuation. This is the crux; the apparatus has nowhere else to put it.
### 4e. Deus quis similis? @0982C — a convention-3 EXCEPTION, forced by the gloss Convention 3 renders a fragmentary lemma as the phrase it stands for. Here it must not, and the gloss says why in its own voice: Ideo non ait: Quis similis est tibi? … sed dicit, Quis similis erit tibi? — the whole paragraph turns on which verb the verse carries. Expanding the bare lemma would decide, silently, the question the commentary exists to argue. Rendered as the stump, "O God, who is like?", all three times. The plate confirms Migne really does clip it.
### 4f. Bare Nunquid lemmata @0987B, @0990D Nunquid in aeternum. and Nunquid mortuis. are interrogative particles with the verb elided, and Migne prints no question mark on either. Rendered "Is it for ever." and "Is it for the dead." — the frame carried, no mark supplied (Pattern 8), no verb invented. Same treatment both times, deliberately.
### 4g. Etenim benedictionem dabit. @0986C Ps 83:8 reads Etenim benedictionem dabit legislator. Migne's lemma cuts before the subject. Rendered "For he shall give a blessing." — the pronoun is the minimum English needs and does not import legislator, which the gloss never uses.
### 4h. commendat Sion spirituali @0989D The head of an usque ad abridgment, so whatever noun spirituali modified was cut. Taken as an ablative of manner, "he commends Sion spiritually", because that supplies nothing; the rivals ("commends Sion to the spiritual man", "commends spiritual Sion") each require a word the plate does not print.
### 4i. exuuntur in tegumentis … quasi vinaciis exuuntur veteri homine @0985C The verb is set twice with different constructions (in + ablative, then a bare ablative of separation). Rendered both, as printed: "they are stripped in the coverings of carnal desires, as in husks; they are stripped of the old man". No smoothing, no marker.
### 4j. quia cui faciunt ibi quippiam, ubi nulli indigent @0986B A direct question that Migne closes with a semicolon, not a mark. Rendered without a question mark (Pattern 8: never supply). nulli read as nominative plural, "where none are in need" — not as a dative with indigent, which takes genitive or ablative.
### 4k. quod ira Dei periisset @0990C — a subject-level trap, checked ira Dei is ablative of cause and the subject of periisset is Christ: "they thought that he had perished by the anger of God". Reading ira as nominative gives "the anger of God had perished", which is not Latin the sentence can use. Named here because §4 of the launch brief is explicit that the blind read's worst finds were subjects, not negatives, and this is exactly that shape.
### 4l. Pronouns supplied where the Latin leaves the subject or object unexpressed Named here, per the unexpressed-subject rule, with what decided each:
- @0981D
Ostendit, nec illos immunes qui permiserunt … et possent illos … liberare— the subject is the multitude,illosare the princes. Decided byse a consensu liberare: a crowd cannot free itself from consent unless it is the consenting party. - @0987B
Ira Dei est omnis poena quam patitur— "which one suffers"; the sufferer is man generally, and no antecedent stands in the sentence, so the English takes the indefinite rather than binding it. - @0982D
iste videt intra— "this one sees within", i.e. the Psalmist, not Christ, who is the object (Christum … quem mali viderunt extra). - @0991D
Peccata undique copiosa inundatione concludunt—concludunthas no expressed object; the English supplies "him", lifted from the lemmaCircumdederunt meand from the gloss's own third-person voice two lines above (Quae in suis sustinet). It is the one supplied word in the chunk that a reader could not reconstruct, so it is recorded. - @0989C
Quare hoc dixisti?— second person singular, addressed to God, so "thou" (Pattern 17), not the plural of the surrounding psalm quotation.
§5 · NEGATION — every printed negative, and where its host is
Carried and checked one by one: 0064 12 · 0065 21 · 0066 14 · 0067 12 · 0068 20. Nothing dropped, nothing invented. The four that needed thought:
- ⚑⚑
nullus est qui non miretur, vel convertatur@0982A — the apposition rule, and it fired. One Latinnongoverns bothmireturandconvertatur. English cannot inherit a negative across a comma, so it is marked twice: "there is none who does not wonder, or is not converted." This is the precise shape the Band A blind read caught atnec … compuncti sunt, id est, poenituerunt. non ad divinitatem hoc refertur, cui nullum hominem comparandum cogitavit@0982D — two negatives, two hosts (refertur,hominem), both kept on their own word.- The
non solum … sedfamily (@0981C, @0982B, @0989A, @0990B, @0990C): every one is the test-2a trigger population — a negative next to a verb with a quantifier beside it. In all five the negative belongs onsolum/tantum, proved from thesedcorrelative and not from what read well, and the English marks it on "only". nec illos immunes@0981D —neconillos, not on the participle: "not even those are guiltless". The subjects were named before the English was written: the ones permitting are the multitude,illosare the princes, andpossent … se a consensu liberareproves it (a crowd cannot free itself from consent if it is not the consenting party).
§6 · THE VULGATE COLLATION — every span, including the clean ones
I walked all 272 spans against sources/vulgate/clementine-flat.txt. Eleven fired (§2). Below is everything else I checked, because a list of findings alone cannot be told apart from a report by an agent that never looked.
### Agreeing with the Clementine word for word Ps 81:2 usquequo judicatis iniquitatem et facies peccatorum sumitis · Ps 81:4 Eripite pauperem · Ps 81:5 Nescierunt neque intellexerunt, movebuntur omnia fundamenta terrae · Ps 81:6 Ego dixi: dii estis · Ps 81:7 Vos autem sicut homines moriemini, sicut unus · Ps 81:8 Surge Deus · Is 1:2 filios enutrivi et exaltavi, ipsi autem spreverunt me · Mt 27:54 Vere Filius Dei erat iste · Ps 82:2 Quis similis erit tibi · Ps 82:3 Quoniam ecce, Qui oderunt · Ps 82:4 Super populum tuum · Ps 82:5 Dixerunt venite, De gente · Ps 2:1 meditati sunt inania · Ps 82:6 Testamentum disposuerunt · Ps 82:7 Tabernacula Idumaeorum · Ps 82:8 Gebal, Ammon, Amalec, Alienigenae · Ps 82:9 Assur · Ps 82:10 Fac illis sicut Madian, et Sisarae, sicut Jabin in torrente, Sicut Madian · Ps 82:11 Endor · Ps 82:12 Pone principes eorum sicut, Oreb, Zeb, Zebee, Salmana · Ps 82:13 Haereditate possideamus sanctuarium Dei · Ps 82:14 Ut rotam, et sicut stipulam ante faciem venti · Ps 82:17 Imple facies · Ps 82:18 Erubescant et conturbentur, in saeculum saeculi · Ps 103:20 Posuisti tenebras et facta est nox · Sir 2:1 Fili, accedens ad servitutem Dei, sta in justitia et timore, et praepara animam tuam ad tentationem — exact, all sixteen words · Ps 83:1 In finem, Pro torcularibus · Ps 83:2 Quam dilecta · Ps 83:4 Etenim passer, Altaria tua, Domine · Ps 83:5 Beati qui habitant in domo tua, Domine; in saecula saeculorum laudabunt te — exact · Ps 83:6 Beatus vir cujus est auxilium abs te: ascensiones in corde suo disposuit — exact · Ps 83:7–8 In loco quem posuit. Etenim benedictionem dabit · Ps 83:9 Domine Deus virtutum, Deus Jacob · Ps 83:10 Respice in faciem · Ps 83:11 Dies una, Super millia, elegi, abjectus, in domo · Ps 83:12 Quia misericordiam · Ps 83:13 Domine virtutum, beatus homo qui sperat · Ps 84:2–14 Benedixisti Domine, Remisisti, Mitigasti, Converte nos, Irasceris, A generatione, Deus tu conversus, Vivificabis nos, Plebs tua laetabitur in te, Ostende nobis Domine, Salutare tuum da nobis, Audiam quid loquatur in me Dominus, Prope timentes eum, Misericordia, Veritas de terra orta est, Justitia ante eum, Ambulabit · Mt 5:8 Beati mundo corde, quoniam ipsi Deum videbunt — exact · Ps 85:2 Quoniam sanctus sum · Ps 85:5 Mitis · Ps 85:6 Auribus percipe · Ps 85:7 Tribulationis · Ps 85:8 quia non est similis tui in diis, Domine · Ps 85:9 Et glorificabunt nomen · Ps 85:10 Tu es Deus solus · Ps 85:11 Deduc me, Domine, in via tua, Laetetur cor meum · Ps 85:13 Ex inferno inferiori · Ps 85:14 Deus, iniqui insurrexerunt super me, et Synagoga potentium · Ps 85:16 Da imperium tuum · Ps 86:1 Fundamenta ejus · Ps 86:3 Dicta · Ps 86:4 Memor ero, Ecce alienigenae, Tyrus · Ps 86:7 Sicut laetantium · Ps 87:2 Domine Deus · Ps 87:3 Intret in conspectu · Ps 87:4 Quia repleta est · Ps 87:5 Aestimatus · Ps 87:6 Sicut vulnerati dormientes, Et ipsi de manu tua repulsi sunt · Ps 87:7 posuerunt me, In lacu inferiori, umbra mortis · Ps 87:8 Super me confirmatus est · Ps 87:9 Longe fecisti, Notos · Ps 87:10 Tota die, tota · Ps 87:11 Aut medici suscitabunt · Ps 87:12 Sepulcro, Misericordiam et veritatem · Ps 87:13 In tenebris · Ps 87:14 Ego ad te, Domine, clamavi · Ps 87:15 Ut quid, Ut quid, Domine · Ps 87:16 Exaltatus, Humiliatus, Conturbatus · Ps 87:17 Transierunt, Terrores tui, Conturbaverunt me · Ps 87:18 Circumdederunt me · Ps 87:19 Proximum et notos · Jo 3:36 Ira Dei manet super eum — exact · 2Tim 4:16 Omnes me dereliquerunt — exact · 1Cor 1:20 Ubi sapiens? ubi scriba?
### Divergent, CHECKED, and DECLINED — with the reason, because a decline is a finding too
- Rom 8:31 @0983A — the Clementine reads
si Deus pro nobis, qui contra nos?; Migne printsquis contra nos?. Declined: a single-letter difference between two interrogatives with the same force, and the gloss does not argue from the word. This is the class Band A's §C1 explicitly excludes. - Jn 1:26 @0981B
Medius vestrum stetit, quem vos nescitisformedius autem vestrum stetit…— the droppedautemis the fragment's own opening. Declined. - Jn 3:29 @0981B
amicus sponsi stat et audit, et gaudio gaudetforamicus autem sponsi, qui stat et audit eum, gaudio gaudet propter vocem sponsi— an abridged quotation. The gloss argues from stat, which is present and correct. Declined. filios Excelsi@0981B — accusative because dicit governs it in the gloss's own sentence, not a divergence at all.- Ps 70:19 @0982D
O Deus, quis similis tibi?— Migne supplies the vocativeO. Declined. - 2Cor 13:3 @0986C
An experimentum ejus quaeritisforAn experimentum quaeritis ejus— word order only. Declined. ⚑ The!that closes it is Migne's and rides as printed. - Mt 10:40 @0986C
Qui vos recipitforQui recipit vos— word order only. Declined. - 1Cor 15:22 @0987B
Quia sicut in AdamforEt sicut in Adam— the connective adapted to the gloss's sentence. Declined. - Jn 14:6 @0988D
Ego sum via, veritas, et vita— oneetdropped. Declined. - 1Cor 1:27 @0989D
Elegit enim Deus infirma mundi ut confunderet fortiaforinfirma mundi elegit Deus, ut confundat fortia— word order and tense of the purpose clause. Declined; the sense is untouched. - Sap 3:1 @0990C
Justorum animae in manu Dei sunt—autemdropped. Declined. ⚑ Recorded because of the 8960 precedent, where an autem was leaned on from stylistic inference and the file proved there was no divergence at all. Here the file is the authority and the word really is absent, and it still does not earn a marker. - Jn 6:44 @0991A
Nemo potest venire ad me, nisi Pater traxerit eum—qui misit medropped; it is the tail of anusque adabridgment, which is what abridgments do. - Mt 23:27 @0991A
quae foris apparentforquae a foris parent, andplenaforpleni. Declined: the first is a prefix, the second a gender that English has no exponent for (Pattern 9). - Apc 3:19 @0991C
Quos ego amoforEgo quos amo— word order only. Declined. - Mch 4:10 @0984C
Et tu, filia Sion, usque ad Babylonem venies, ibique liberaberisagainst…et venies usque ad Babylonem : ibi liberaberis— a compression with the address moved forward. Declined: the argument (Melius est ruere ut poeniteat) turns on going down and being freed there, and both readings give it. - Orthography, all Pattern 9, all declined:
IsmaelitaeforIsmahelitae·CisonforCisson·lacrymarumforlacrimarum·NunquidforNumquid(×3) ·QuascunqueforQuascumque·RaabforRahab·MahalathforMaheleth·sepulcroforsepulchro·Synagogacapitalised at Ps 85:14 where the Clementine hassynagoga. - Declared variants take NO marker. Migne writes
Secundum aliam litteram@0989C and(secundum aliam litteram)@0989D beforeMater Sion dicet, homoandqui facti sunt. He has already told the reader these are another text; a[var:]on top would be ours saying what he said. Same principle as not stacking a[sic:]on his own( sic ). - Gloss-voice italics that are not quotations at all, checked and passed over:
Moabitae,Tyrus(nominative for the psalm's Tyrum),Deus convertens@0987B,filii ancillae@0989A (the psalm has filium ancillae tuae),extensas manus@0990D (the psalm has expandi ad te manus meas),Ecce quam dulce, fasce torcularis premi@0986D — which is in no Bible and is the glossator's own exclamation.
§7 · THE AXES AND THE INHERITED CONVENTIONS — every decision in the range
| axis / convention | what my range did |
|---|---|
In finem → "Unto the end" | 1 occurrence (0985B), rendered so. No rival. |
Diapsalma → roman, unanglicized | 4 occurrences (0981D, 0987A, 0989B, 0989D), all roman, never italic. All four confirmed ROMAN on the plate. |
usque ad → "as far as" | 21 occurrences of the abridgment formula, all italic, all "as far as". ⚑ Two look-alikes decided per occurrence and NOT swallowed by the formula: (1) Num usque ad adventum misi Prophetas @0981C is unitalicized gloss prose and temporal, rendered "until the coming" — the non-formula class §A4 names; (2) usque ad Babylonem venies @0984C is Micah's own words inside a scripture quotation, and takes "as far as Babylon" because that is what the verse says, not because the formula says it. |
gentes family | Gentiles 5 — every one inside an explicit Judaei/gentes opposition: plenitudo gentium intrabit @0982A (Rom 11:25, on Israel's blindness), gentium fide … transgressio Judaeorum @0985A, non solus est Judaeus, sed omnes gentes @0989C, Ecclesia gentium @0989C, gentes quae vagantur per vitia @0989C. nations 5 where the sense is plainly generic: una gens/unam gentem @0983B (all Christians, a non-ethnic singular), eum gentibus respici @0986D, Omnes gentes adorantes @0988B, si est gens quam non fecit Deus @0988C, In lata gente @0988C. No gens tenebrarum in this range — the open ruling is untouched. |
daemonium/diabolus | demon 1 (daemonia colebantur @0987D) · devil 3 (diabolus/diabolicam @0982A–B, diaboli @0984A). No bleed. |
mysterium/sacramentum | sacrament 1 (sacramentorum Ecclesiae @0985D). No mysterium in the range. |
turba/multitudo | crowd 1 (Turba quae cecidit @0982B) · multitude 1 (prae multitudine @0981D). Both stand in my range and they are kept distinct, which is the first time in this work the pair has been available to check together. |
Dominus virtutum → "Lord of hosts" | 2 (Domine Deus virtutum @0986C, Domine virtutum @0987A). Inherited from §A5. |
sedes → "seat" | not present. |
gradus → "degree" | 1 (per gradus veniatur @0986C) → "by degrees". The gradual-psalm series is Band C; the word itself is ruled and I applied it. |
| Heads | PSALMUS LXXXI. → PSALM LXXXI. etc., seven heads, numerals kept as numerals. Migne spells out only the first psalm of the book, which is in Band A. |
| Archaism (both memberships) | -eth/-est forms appear only inside italic lemmata or quoted scripture (filleth, standeth, heareth, receiveth, abideth, hopeth, speaketh). The commentator's own voice is never archaised: dicit/ait → "says". Checked against both markers, italic and guillemet — there are no guillemets in this range at all, so the italic test is sufficient here and I say so rather than leaving it implied. |
| Pattern 17 (thou = singular) | thou/thee/thy used only where the Latin is second-person singular (deputaris, judicabis, tacuisti, haereditabis, dixisti, eleveris, meministi, facis, a te, ad te, animam tuam). you/your used only for the plural (vos, estis, judicatis, sumitis, nescitis, sitis morituri, corrigimini, extollimini, cadetis). The two stand three lines apart at 0982A–B and are kept apart. |
§8 · WHAT I READ CLEAN, AND WHERE A BLIND READER SHOULD GO FIRST
Read clean (Latin and English re-read against each other at the assertion level, §5's fourth test, not merely counted): 0064 VERS. 5–8 · 0065 VERS. 6, 12, 13, 14 · 0066 VERS. 5, 6, 9, 11, 12, 13 · the whole of 0067's Ps 85 section, which is almost entirely usque ad tails and is the lowest-risk stretch in the range · 0068 VERS. 3, 9, 12, 13, 18, 19.
⛔ Where to look first, and why — these are the passages I am least confident about:
- @0984D
idem corpus sanat, et lavat caput(§4c). Two parses, I took one, and the losing one is grammatically available. - @0989C
Mater Sion dicet, homo.(§4d). My English follows Migne's comma and therefore says what his own next sentence denies. That is intended, and it should still be re-read. - @0989C "that is, the Gentiles Tyre,". The seam is CC's dropped
: et, not mine (§3); before flagging it as a translation defect, read the patch queue. - @0987B "He said prophetically". Correct against our Latin, wrong against the plate (§3.1).
- @0981C "all of you to the sons of the Most High" (§4a). Deliberately odd, deliberately unmarked.
- @0989D
God chose indeed the weak things of the world…. Two italic spans with one roman word between them, matching Migne'sElegit enim Deus…; "indeed" renders the postpositiveenimand exists to keep the span structure 1:1. It is the only place in the range where span parity shaped a word choice, and I would rather a reader knew that than guessed it.
§9 · FOR THE MERGE
- Seventeen TEI-patch sites appended to
data/briefs/8967-PENDING-TEI-PATCHES.md, including six that each unlock a[sic:]we are entitled to fire (vallit·psalmi·ventibus·damnado·Percutium· the 0991C eye-skip) and one whose patch changes the English (0987Bdixi, third person → first). - Six pages of plate reads recorded at depth
full— the first reads anywhere in cols 0981–0992. - Band A §D.4 item CLOSED: the
In Hebraeoclause at 0991A prints no Hebrew type at all, like 0868A. Three of Band A's four are now settled. - One site this copy cannot answer, for the Gallica list beside Band A's f443/f449/f453:
filiis/filii Excelsi omnes@0981C, lost in col 0981's clipped inner margin. - One observation escalated rather than patched: a stray
?afterSisara,@0984A, standing flush at the right margin. If a second copy confirms it, chunk 0065's question-mark parity moves by one. gens tenebrarumdoes not occur in this range. The open ruling is untouched, not resolved.- A convention-3 exception is on the record (§4e,
Deus quis similis?) with the Latin that forced it, per the launch brief's instruction to take the exception and say so.
§G.0069 — stint file cruces-0069.md, verbatim
Range: src/latin/8967/0069.md–0072.md, cols 0991D–1002B (Psalms LXXXVIII–XCII). Lemma brief: data/briefs/8967-lemmata-0069.txt.
⚠ This file is one stint's range. It must be merged into src/english/8967/cruces.md.
§0 · SPAN COUNT RECONCILIATION (the required check)
My brief's header declares 302 spans for chunks 0069–0072. Counting … in my own Latin:
| chunk | italic spans |
|---|---|
| 0069 | 97 |
| 0070 | 84 |
| 0071 | 55 |
| 0072 | 66 |
| total | 302 |
The brief agrees with my Latin exactly. No mis-split at either end of the range. Column anchors, notes and ## heads were counted against the Latin twin before and after writing: 16 / 10 / 9 / 7 anchors, 38 / 32 / 25 / 36 [n:], 1 / 2 / 1 / 2 heads, all identical in sequence. (noteCount in the frontmatter is one short in each chunk against the body — the known false positive: the nested [n: (Rom. XV)]-type citations inside italic spans are not counted there.)
§1 · THE PLATE — six leaves, twelve column-bands, all read
Nobody had opened a column in this range before this stint. PDF pp. 501–506 on raw/scans/pl113/patrologiaecurs04migngoog.pdf, map (col + 11) / 2, corner numbers read first on every page (991/992 · 993/994 · 995/996 · 997/998 · 999/1000 · 1001/1002; the foot of p. 506 reads PATROL. CXIII. with signature 32, which also re-confirms the volume from the plate itself). Six pages at 200 dpi full width, with 600 / 900 / 1200 dpi crops on every candidate. All six recorded in data/plate-reads.json at depth full; plate-gate.mjs passes all 14 markers.
⛔ NOT ONE OF THE TWELVE COLUMNS IS CLIPPED at the inner margin — twelve more counterexamples to the withdrawn mod-4 rule, including 993 and 997, which the rule would have called clipped.
Zero foot-of-page conjecture apparatus on any of the six pages, in either layer.
### What the plate changed The plate produced 16 word-level departures between Migne and our Corpus Corporum Latin over 11 collated columns — 1.5 per column, matching Band A's measured rate almost exactly. They are tabulated with their controls in data/briefs/8967-PENDING-TEI-PATCHES.md; the classes are:
- 12 sites where CC REPAIRS a real Migne defect (
Humilitatus·hemo·iuferiori·Opprobri·Elcce·aani·qnasi·delectatio·iniquitales·jauna·speram·uior). ⭐ Every one of these, once patched back, unlocks a[sic:]this stint could not fire — a[sic:]may only wrap type the Latin twin carries, and our twin carries the repaired word. That is why this stint fired zero[sic:]on a range with twelve of them in it. - 2 sites where CC moves Migne ONTO the Clementine, the class no Vulgate collation can see:
considerabit→considerabis@0999D and the lemmaconculcabit→conculcabis@1000B. - 6 sites where our Latin carries what the plate does not, including one dittography CC manufactured at a column turn (
Ideoque [1000A] que, where Migne breaksIdeo-|queacross the column) and one insertedet@0996D.
⭐⭐ The single most consequential of them, and it is the shape the launch brief named. @1000B Migne's lemma is Et conculcabit. — third person — and the gloss's very next words are Serpentem calcat Ecclesia, "the Church treads upon the serpent." Our Latin carries the Vulgate's second-person conculcabis, so the exposition in our file rests on a word Migne does not print. Nothing in the Latin looks wrong; nothing in a Vulgate collation could find it, because the divergence had already been erased. Only the leaf reached it.
### Candidates the plate WITHDREW None — but the reason is worth recording, because it is the opposite of Band A's stint that lost five of six. This stint formed no [sic:] candidate from the Latin alone, because our Latin in this range is unusually clean precisely where Migne is not. The suspect-glyph work therefore ran in the other direction: every candidate came off the plate and had to be defended against the two imaging hazards.
Controls actually run on the ambiguous glyphs (not "looked at" — the specific comparison made):
iuferiori@0996A — theu/ncall. Compared against the italicuofmanu, three words earlier on the same line, and the italicnofanimas, same line. The glyph is the cup, not the arch. Turned sort, therefore a set sort, therefore Migne's.qnasi@0996D — same call, controlled against thenofnihil, same line.hemo@0996A — the italice/ocall, run because the launch brief'se→chazard says this scan lies about italic vowels. Controlled against the round italicoinhemo's own last letter and, decisively, againstQuis est homo?printing correctly eleven lines above at 0995D.Elcce@0996C — read at 1200 dpi: five separate glyphs, thela full-height vertical with its own serif foot and clear white space on both sides. Not an over-inkedc.uior@1000D — the glyph carries an i-dot. A brokentdoes not grow a dot. This is what puts it on the reportable side of thepossit→rossitline and keeps the under-inked class off it.aani@0996D — 1200 dpi; two closed bowls, thenn, then dottedi.
⚑ deservit/deserit — the standing check was run and neither form occurs anywhere in this range.
§2 · THE VULGATE WALK — every lemma word, named
Run against sources/vulgate/clementine-flat.txt, book–chapter–verse in hand, one span at a time. 14 [var:] fired. The pre-scan's ⚠ marks ordered the work and decided none of it: several ⚠ spans are innocent abridgments and two ✓ spans were real divergences.
Fired
| col | Migne prints | received text | why it is material |
|---|---|---|---|
| 0992B | propter veritatem Dei implendam (Rom 15:8) | propter veritatem Dei, ad confirmandas promissiones patrum | ⭐ The gloss is built on the word. Two lines above it argues Non exhibetur veritas in impletione promissorum. Conform the proof-text and the argument's keyword vanishes from its own proof-text — 7914 @1079C exactly |
| 0992C | Ecce ergo constitui te super gentes et regna (Jer 1:10) | Ecce constitui te hodie super gentes et super regna | ergo for hodie turns a dating into an inference |
| 0994A | lemma Tunc locutus est in visione (Ps 88:20) | Tunc locutus es in visione sanctis tuis | ⭐ The gloss itself prints the second person four lines below (tunc locutus es sanctis). Migne's lemma and Migne's exposition disagree on the page |
| 0995B | Destruxisti eum ab emendatione (Ps 88:45) | ab emundatione | amendment for cleansing — a different word, and the gloss's quidam mundi defecerunt sits directly under it |
| 0995C | Quis est homo qui vivit (Ps 88:49) | qui vivet | present for future in a fully quoted clause |
| 0996A | eruent animas suas de manu inferiori (Ps 88:49) | eruet animam suam de manu inferi | ⭐⭐ The highest-value divergence in the range. The gloss's entire argument is non tamen ipsi eruent animas suas … sed ille — they do not deliver their own souls, He does. A conformed singular lemma destroys the exposition it carries |
| 0997C | lemma Quis novi (Ps 89:11) | Quis novit potestatem irae tuae | first person for third. Confirmed at 900 dpi as Migne's, not CC's. A [var:] and never a [sic:]: novi is a real form, so Pattern 12 has nothing to wrap |
| 0998B | Splendor … super nos, et operamini (Ps 89:17) | Et sit splendor … super nos, et opera manuum nostrarum dirige super nos | an imperative plural verb standing where the received text has a clause |
| 1000D | Ipsius figmentum sumus (Eph 2:10) | Ipsius enim sumus factura | ⭐ and the gloss's next lemma is In factura tua (Ps 91:5) — the received word is on the same line, in the other citation |
| 1001A | Cum exorti fuerunt (Ps 91:8) | Cum exorti fuerint | perfect indicative for future perfect: a past event for a condition |
| 1001B | Et ab insurgentibus (Ps 91:12) | et in insurgentibus in me malignantibus | different preposition, different construction. Not the letter-level class §C1 excludes |
| 1001B | Ite, maledicti, in ignem aeternum (Mt 25:41) | Discedite a me, maledicti | different verb, and the clause is quoted as the sentence of judgment itself |
| 1001D | lemma In diem (Ps 92:1) | in die ante sabbatum | ⭐ the gloss's own next three words print In die. Lemma and exposition disagree in the same line of type |
| 1002B | mirabilis elatio maris (Ps 92:4) | Mirabiles elationes maris | singular for plural |
### Checked, named, and NOT fired — with the reason The recension abridges its citations constantly, and marking every abridgment would bury the real divergences in noise. These were each read word by word against the Clementine and deliberately left unmarked:
Venit princeps mundi hujus@0994B (Jn 14:30) — Migne dropsenim. A connective.a transeuntibus viam@0995B (Ps 88:42,Diripuerunt eum omnes transeuntes viam) — the glossator has recast the clause into the passive in his own sentence (quidam jam sunt direpti a transeuntibus viam). That is the gloss's syntax accommodating the quotation, not a divergent text.tamen vane constituisti@0995D —tamenis the glossator's own insertion into the run of Ps 88:48.De terra veritas orta est@0999B (Ps 84:12,Veritas de terra orta est) — word order only, and the gloss does not argue from the order.Sedebitis super sedes duodecim@0999C (Mt 19:28) — dropset vos.Despondi vos uni viro@1000B (2 Cor 11:2) — dropsenim.Quid nobis profuit superbia et divitiae?@1001B (Wis 5:8) — Migne compresses two clauses of the received text into one. An abridgment of the class described above.melior est qui vincit iram quam qui capit civitatem@1002A — a medieval form of Prov 16:32, whose Clementine text (Melior est patiens viro forti…) is too far from it to pair cleanly. Pattern 14 needs a received reading to name; naming the wrong one would be worse than silence.Nimis profundae sunt cogitationes tuae@1001A (Ps 91:6,nimis profundae factae sunt) — a dropped auxiliary; the sense does not turn on it.Mane misericordia tua exsultavimus@0997D (Ps 89:14,Repleti sumus mane misericordia tua; et exsultavimus) — the lemma simply opens mid-verse, which is Convention 3, not a divergence.Laus cantici@0998B (Ps 90:1,Laus cantici David) — likewise: the gloss expounds only the two words it prints.Mittite a latere vestro@0999C — not identified in any book of the Clementine. Recorded as an unplaced citation rather than guessed at.et pascua eveniet@0998C (cf. Jn 10:9inveniet) — stands in the gloss's own prose, not in an italic lemma, so it is paraphrase, not quotation. Confirmed as Migne's at the plate.
§3 · CRUCES — passages read at the SUBJECT level, not only the negation level
Band A's blind read found four defects that no other check could see, and their shapes were a flipped word, a subject/object swap, a supplied possessive, and a self-reversing clause. I re-read every hard passage in this range for those four shapes specifically, after drafting. It caught nine of my own, and they are recorded here rather than quietly fixed, because a fixed defect nobody records teaches the next stint nothing:
| col | what I had written | what the Latin says | shape |
|---|---|---|---|
| 0993B | "or of men thou didst take up some" | alios assumpsit — third person, against reliquisti/permisisti second | person swap; Migne changes person mid-sentence and my draft levelled it |
| 0993D | "prepare themselves a seat" | parant se sedem Domino — se is the predicate accusative: they prepare themselves as the seat | object swap, and it inverts the whole point of the clause |
| 0994C | "separated from their crimes" | a criminibus — bare | supplied possessive, the exact Band A shape |
| 0994D | "his father does not cast him off" | non pater abjicit eum | supplied possessive |
| 0992A | "not mindful of his misery" | miseriae — bare | supplied possessive |
| 0998A | "yet their children" and "through their iniquities"; and vel rendered "yet" | vel filii, per iniquitates | supplied possessive ×2, plus vel ("at least") flattened |
| 0999B | "distinguishes the humble from the proud" | discernit humiles vel superbos | a conjunction turned into a preposition |
| 0999C | "who also protects his offspring" | proles — bare | supplied possessive |
| 1000B | "The Church treads upon the serpent, which is wary of his cunning" | Serpentem calcat Ecclesia, quae cavet astutiam ejus — quae is the Church | relative mis-attached: my English gave the serpent the Church's wariness |
Passages rendered as printed, where the printed Latin does not construe
- @0993B
qui per humilem Christum, in quo alii sunt humiles, humiliantur. The relative is singular (qui, the dragon) and the verb is plural (humiliantur). Rendered with the mismatch intact — "who through the humble Christ, in whom others are humble, are humbled." Pattern 9: there is no English exponent for it either way, so nothing was emended and nothing is marked. - @0993B
qui in mari factus est ad illudendum ei.ad illudendum+ dative admits two readings — "made … to be mocked at" (Augustine's usual sense here) and the Ps 103:26 sense "formed to play therein". I have rendered the first and record the second; no marker, because both are readings of a perfectly sound printed text. - @0997D
ut pro fide omnia spernerent, quae magna habentur, in Veteri et aeterna morte quaererent. ⛔ This does not construe as printed:quaererenthas no expressed object andin Veteri et aeterna morteyokes an implied Testamento to morte. Rendered as closely as the printed words allow and logged rather than smoothed. No[cj:]is offered: every word on the page is a real word in a possible form, so there is nothing to conjecture about without rewriting the clause, and §18a's census is closed. - @0996D
Qui est misit me ad vos?Migne prints a question mark on Ex 3:14, which is a statement. Pattern 8: the mark is carried, not deleted, and not converted. It is not §8b's case — English grammar can hold this mark perfectly well; it is simply Migne's oddity, which is the point. - @0992B
per Spiritum manifestati. Our Latin has a participle governing nothing. The plate readsmanifestasti— a second-person perfect parallel todixisti, and the sentence runs. This English renders our Latin ("made manifest through the Spirit"); ⚑ the patch pass must change the English with the Latin here, as Band A did at 0904A. - @1000A
Ideoque [1000A] que diligenter adverte. Our Latin carries a dittography Migne does not print — he breaksIdeo-|queacross the column turn. I have renderedThereforeonce, kept the anchor in place, and reported the site. ⛔ No[d:]was fired and none is owed: a[d:]accuses Migne's compositor of a doubling that is ours.
### Second person tu/te throughout Ps XC (te ponit, te urat, de te dicens, oculis tuis considerabis) is singular and takes thou; vos at Mittite a latere vestro, Sedebitis super sedes duodecim, Despondi vos uni viro and misit me ad vos is plural and takes you (Pattern 17). Both memberships were used for the archaism test (§A4). The range carries 10 -eth forms and every one is licensed: dwelleth ×5 (all inside the italic Ps 90:1 lemmata Qui habitat/habitat), knoweth (Beatus populus qui scit), liveth (Quis est homo qui vivit), cometh (Venit princeps mundi hujus), overcometh + taketh (melior est qui vincit iram quam qui capit civitatem). No saith, no doth, and no gloss-voice archaism anywhere — dicit/ait render "says" throughout.
§4 · INHERITED CONVENTIONS — how each behaved in this range
usque ad→ "as far as": 34 occurrences of the italic formula, 34 renderings, zero rivals. ⚑ Instrument check run first, and it mattered: a raw grep returns 35. The extra one is @0997Cqui etiam usque ad octoginta annos aliquas vires habere videntur— unitalicised, and therefore not the formula, exactly the case §A4 carves out. It is rendered by sense ("who even up to eighty years are seen to have some strength"), and it is named here rather than left as a silent 34-vs-35.Diapsalmaroman, unanglicized: 5 in the Latin, 5 in the English (0992D, 0994A, 0994D, 0995C, 0996A). Four of the five were read at the plate and Migne sets them ROMAN in every case — four more reads behind §A1.2.In finem: does not occur in this range.gentesfamily — 8 sites, decided one at a time. → Gentiles ×5: 0992Bmisericordia, gentibus(the Judaei/gentes typology in its purest form) and thegentes autem super misericordiaof the Rom 15:9 quotation beside it; 0993Cper eos gentes accipiuntur; 0993CHermon, Gentes, quae prius fuerunt anathematizatae; 0995Apromissa Judaeis, ad gentes lata sunt. → nations ×3: 0992Csuper gentes et regnainside Jer 1:10, where the sense is the prophet's generic one; 0996AIllati servis a multis gentibus; 0996BContra maledictiones gentium. Nogentilis, nogentilitas, noethnicus, and nonatio— ⚑ thenatiogrep returns 3 and all three areilluminatione/incarnatione/incarnatio, the documented instrument false positive; thegent-grep likewise catchesresurgentesandinsurgentibus, anddiligenteranswers togenter.gens tenebrarum: ⚑ does not occur in this range. Nothing to flag; §A5 stands open.Dominus virtutum: does not occur.sedes→ "seat" at 0993D (Sedes Dei aeterna,parant se sedem Domino) and 0995C (Sedem ejus in terram collisisti) — never "throne".mysterium/sacramentum,daemonium/diabolus,turba/multitudo:diabol-9 ×→ devil,daemonium/daemones/daemonum3 ×→ demon(s), no bleed in either direction. Nosatanas, nomysterium, nosacramentum, noturba, nomultitudoanywhere in the range — ⚑ and theturb-grep's 3 hits areturbati/turbatus(Ps 89:7turbati sumus), the documented verb false positive, not the noun.- Heads:
PSALMUS LXXXVIII.→PSALM LXXXVIII.etc., Roman numerals kept, andPSALMUS LXXXVIII. (cont.)keeps its(cont.)(known false positive — not reported). VERS. n.--passes through verbatim, including Migne'sVERS. 1, —at 0996B, which our TEI regularises toVERS. 1.--(recorded as a punctuation departure, not argued as a patch).
§5 · MARKER TOTALS FOR THIS STINT
14 [var:] · 0 [sic:] · 0 [d:] · 0 [cj:] · 0 [ed:] · 0 [nt:]. All 14 stand on columns read at depth full; plate-gate.mjs passes.
⭐ The zero in the [sic:] column is a finding, not an absence. Twelve [sic:] are owed on this range and none can be fired until the TEI is patched, because our Latin has been repaired out from under every one of them. That inverts Band A's stint-1 experience (six candidates, five withdrawn at the plate) and it is the same lesson from the other side: the Latin alone predicts nothing about the plate, in either direction.
No [nt:]: all 131 notes in the four chunks are attribution sigla or bare citation locators ((CASS.), (AUG.), (ID.), (Rom. XV), (Matth. XXV.)). Pattern 15's prose test was applied by content and none passes it.
§G.0073 — stint file cruces-0073.md, verbatim
# 8967 · Glossa ordinaria, Liber Psalmorum — cruces, chunks 0073–0076 ### BAND B, stint 8 (the last) · cols 1002B–1011B · Psalms XCIII–C · 3,774 Latin words
§0 · SPAN COUNT RECONCILIATION — the required check, and it AGREES
data/briefs/8967-lemmata-0073.txt declares 258 italic spans for chunks 0073–0076. Counted in my own Latin, per chunk:
| chunk | spans |
|---|---|
| 0073 | 79 |
| 0074 | 69 |
| 0075 | 74 |
| 0076 | 36 |
| total | 258 |
Exact agreement. The brief was cut by chunk membership, not by column band, and it is complete at both ends of my range: its first entry is [1002B] Psalmus David, which is the first span of 0073, and its last is [1011B] usque ad, which is the last span of 0076. No span in my Latin is missing from it and it carries none from a neighbour's range.
English/Latin span parity after translation: 79/79 · 69/69 · 74/74 · 36/36, counted with the [var: …] markers stripped (each of mine contains one italic Vulgate reading of its own, which is Band A's own form for the marker). verify-english.mjs returns zero findings on all four of my chunks; the only failures in the run are peer chunks not yet written.
Other 1:1 checks, per chunk, Latin against English: column anchors (10 · 10 · 10 · 5, verbatim and in order) · [n: …] notes (39 · 38 · 41 · 19 in the body) · ## heads (2 · 2 · 3 · 1) · question marks (5 · 2 · 2 · 2). No guillemets occur anywhere in my range. No [nt: …] was made: every note in these four chunks is a bare citation siglum or a scriptural locator, and Pattern 15 wants prose.
⚑ Frontmatter noteCount runs one under the body count in all four chunks (39/40, 38/39, 41/42, 19/20). That is the runbook's known false positive #3 and is not reported: the extra [n:] in each case is the one inside the frontmatter's own incipit string.
§1 · MARKERS FIRED — 11 [var:], and nothing else
No [sic:], no [cj:], no [d:], no [ed:]. Every marker stands on a column I opened at the plate today; plate-gate.mjs passes all eleven (read: full). Why the other four classes are empty is in §4 — in every case the reason is that the defect turned out to be Corpus Corporum's and not Migne's, which is a patch, not a marker.
1a. ⭐⭐ The three the GLOSS ITSELF depends on — a conformed lemma would destroy the exposition
| col | chunk | Migne prints | the Vulgate has | why it is load-bearing |
|---|---|---|---|---|
| 1005D | 0074 | Non est inventus qui daret honorem Deo, nisi hic alienigena | Lc 17:18 Non est inventus qui rediret, et daret gloriam Deo, nisi hic alienigena | The lemma being glossed is Honorem. The proof-text is adduced for no other purpose than to attest that word. Conform it to Douay's "glory" and the gloss is quoting a verse that no longer contains the term it was cited for. |
| 1006B | 0074 | Psalmus ipsi David. | Ps 96:1 Huic David, quando terra ejus restituta est. | The whole psalm-preface expounds a clause Migne's titulus does not print. restituta est terra is quoted three times in the next twelve lines — as the literal history (Absalom), as the Church (restituta est terra ei), and as the resurrection (restituta est terra). The words being expounded are simply absent from the lemma above them. |
| 1003A | 0073 | Vel, Qui erudit. | Ps 93:10 qui docet hominem scientiam | The gloss's very next words are Propter quam eruditionem. The argument is built on the noun cognate to Migne's verb; the Vulgate's docet yields no such noun. ⚑ The pre-scan marked this span ✓ Pr 9:7 — a match in a book the gloss is not expounding. Reading the address is what caught it, exactly as the brief's header says. |
1b. The Migne-vs-Clementine tituli — Band A's settled practice, applied
Band A fired [var:] on this class and I follow it rather than re-deciding it: src/english/8967/0031.md carries [var: Vulg. Ps 36:1 Psalmus ipsi David., "a psalm for David himself"] on exactly a Migne Psalmus David. Four sites here:
- 1002B (0073) Ps 93 —
[var: Vulg. Ps 93:1 Psalmus ipsi David, quarta sabbati.] - 1005A (0074) Ps 95 —
[var: Vulg. Ps 95:1 Canticum ipsi David, quando domus aedificabatur post captivitatem.] - 1007C (0075) Ps 97 —
[var: Vulg. Ps 97:1 Psalmus ipsi David.] - 1008B (0075) Ps 98 —
[var: Vulg. Ps 98:1 Psalmus ipsi David.]
⭐ And the negative that makes the class evidence rather than noise. At 1010A (0076) Migne prints Psalmus ipsi David. — the Clementine's Ps 100:1 exactly, with the ipsi he drops at the four sites above. No marker is owed there and none is fired. Migne is not uniformly dropping ipsi; he prints both forms, four columns apart, and §A4's ruling that Psalmus David and Psalmus ipsi David are different lemmata is confirmed from his own plate inside one stint's range. English follows: "A psalm of David." against "A psalm for David himself."
1c. The remaining four
- 1003A (0073) Rm 14:10 — Migne prints
Omnes astabimus ante tribunal Christi, ut recipiat unusquisqueunder the citation(Rom. XIV). Rom 14:10 readsomnes enim stabimus ante tribunal Christiand has no following clause at all;ut referat unusquisquebelongs to 2Cor 5:10. Migne's text is conflated and the borrowed verb is reversed in direction — recipiat, "receive", against referat, "render". Material, and marked. - 1009B (0075) Ps 98:7 — Migne
Testimonia ejus et praecepta.against the Clementine'set praeceptum quod dedit illis(singular, with a relative clause). ⭐ The gloss is built on the plural:Praecepta sunt sicut praecepta legis per Moysen data. - 1009D (0075) Jo 8:31 — Migne
Si manseritis in verbo meoagainstSi vos manseritis in sermone meo. A word substitution, not an orthography; marked on sermone. (The dropped vos and the transposed veritas vos liberabit ride with it and are not separately marked.) - (the fourth is the Ps 98:1 titulus, listed in 1b)
§2 · PLATE READS — SIX LEAVES, TWELVE COLUMNS, ALL OF THEM NEW
0 of the work's plate reads fell in cols 1002–1011 before today. All six leaves are recorded in data/plate-reads.json at depth: "full", with the corner numbers read before the page was trusted, per the launch brief.
| PDF page | columns | corners read | inner margin |
|---|---|---|---|
| 506 | 1001–1002 | 1001 / 1002, foot PATROL. CXIII. | clean |
| 507 | 1003–1004 | 1003 / 1004 | clean |
| 508 | 1005–1006 | 1005 / 1006 | clean |
| 509 | 1007–1008 | 1007 / 1008 | clean |
| 510 | 1009–1010 | 1009 / 1010 | clean |
| 511 | 1011–1012 | 1011 / 1012 | clean |
No foot-of-page conjecture apparatus on any of the six leaves, in either layer.
⚑ Twelve more clean columns, and three of them are ≡ 1 (mod 4): 1001, 1005, 1009. The withdrawn mod-4 clipping rule would have predicted all three clipped and would have silently withheld four markers standing in those bands (1002B is on leaf 506; 1005A, 1005D, 1006B on leaf 508; 1009B, 1009D on leaf 510). Recorded here as three more counterexamples, not as a new rule in the other direction: I opened every column and inferred nothing.
⚠ The two imaging hazards were live on these leaves and I ran the control before believing any suspect glyph. The 200-dpi renders show undc for unde (1003A), verbornm for verborum (1004D), agom for agam (1002D) and nocent with a spur (1004C). Every one was withdrawn at 500 dpi against a known instance of the same letter on the same printed line. Not one entered the report. Without that step I would have manufactured four [sic:] candidates on this stint alone — which is the class the brief says the control exists to prevent.
§3 · ⛔ FOURTEEN CORPUS-CORPORUM DEPARTURES — reported, NOT patched, NOT marked
Appended in full to data/briefs/8967-PENDING-TEI-PATCHES.md with column, leaf and class. ≈1.4 sites per column over ten columns, matching the band rate. Summary only here:
- 🅐 CC moves Migne onto the Clementine (4):
In psalmis←psalmi (1004B) ·Audivit←Audivi (1007B) ·Terram←Terra (1007B) ·ecce illic←esse illic (1005D). - 🅑 CC repairs Migne's real defects (5) — each unlocks a marker once patched back: the head
PSLMUS C.(1010A) ·inicipientibus(1009C) ·in mututinis(1010D) ·adjuraverunt→abjuraverunt (1006B) ·quod et non adhaeserunt→ei (1011B). - 🅒 CC creates non-words Migne does not print (2), so no
[sic:]is owed:hilaritaremfor the plate'shilaritatem(1004A) ·vedumforpedum(1008D). - 🅓 Punctuation and note-placement (10 further sites), listed in the patches file.
⭐ Two of these carry a required ENGLISH change at patch time, and I have flagged rather than made them, because the ordering rule exists precisely to stop a patch rewriting Latin under a filed translation:
- 1005D — after the patch our Latin will read
Ecce hic Christus esse illic. My English currently renders our TEI ("Lo, here is Christ, lo there,"). It must become "Lo, here is Christ to be there,", with the crux carrying the conjecture and a[var:]against Mt 24:23 becoming available. This is the one site in my range where the two Latins say different things, and I have named it in both files rather than quietly translating whichever I liked. - 1007B — after the patch our Latin will read
Audivi et laetata. My English currently reads "He hath heard and was glad." and must become "I have heard and she was glad."
The other twelve need no English change: a non-word has nothing to render but its sense, an orthographic case-form has no English exponent, a psalm head normalizes under Pattern 9 either way, and abjuraverunt/ei are the readings my English already carries.
§4 · THE FOUR MARKER CLASSES I DID NOT FIRE, AND WHY — the measured instrument
Six defect candidates were raised on the Latin alone and the plate withdrew or reclassified every one. Not one survived as a marker. That is the whole case for §2 restated on my own range.
| candidate | what the plate said | verdict |
|---|---|---|
hilaritarem @1004A | plate reads hilaritatem | CC's non-word. No [sic:] owed. Patch. |
vedum @1008D | plate reads pedum | CC's non-word. No [sic:] owed. Patch. |
abjuraverunt @1006B | plate reads adjuraverunt | CC's repair of Migne. The marker runs the other way and is unlocked only after the patch. |
in matutinis @1010D | plate reads in mututinis | ditto — the defect is Migne's and CC hid it. |
incipientibus @1009C | plate reads inicipientibus | ditto. |
PSALMUS C. @1010A | plate reads PSLMUS C. | ditto. |
⭐ Five of the six read as confident, markable Migne defects or as perfectly clean text from our Latin alone, and in every case the truth was the opposite of what the Latin suggested. Three words I would have marked belong to Corpus Corporum; three words I would have passed over in silence are Migne's own defects that our text has hidden. Neither "trust the text" nor "suspect the transcriber" would have produced a single right answer here.
4a. non quas eminus @1004D — [cj:] raised, argued, and DECLINED
Migne prints, and the plate confirms our TEI verbatim:
oves manus, non quas eminus, quia sunt, et oves quas non fecimus, sed ipse gratia sua nos oves fecit.
quas is a relative accusative with no verb to govern it, so the clause does not construe as printed. The conjecture is emimus, "which we bought", and it is a good one: the very next clause is et oves quas non fecimus, the same relative in the same construction with the verb present, and Augustine's argument is about how these sheep came to be his.
Declined, and the reasons are three, in order of weight:
- Pattern 12 excludes a real word that is merely wrong from
[sic:];eminusis a real adverb. Corpus control: 16eminusagainst 2emimusinsrc/latin/, and the ones I checked (11065 @0128B, 11551 @0219A, 11062 @0415D) are all ordinary adverbial "from afar". The form is not itself suspect, so a frequency argument does not reach it either. - Pattern 18's additive
[cj:]form requires Migne's word to keep its English beside the conjecture, and here Migne's word has no English — there is no predicate for it to sit in. The marker would have to swallow the clause, which is exactly what 7a⁗ forbids. - 18a closed the conjecture census, and this is a candidate of the kind it declined.
So the English renders as literally as the words allow — "not those which from afar, because they are" — and the crux carries the conjecture where a later reader can find it. ⚑ It is a Migne crux, not a CC one; no patch is owed and none is proposed.
4b. postquam resurrectionem @1006C — no marker, crux only
The plate sets it as one word, and our TEI agrees. postquam cannot take an accusative; the syntax wants post quam resurrectionem, "after which resurrection". Pattern 10 does cover run-togethers whose halves are real words (sedet for sed et), but Pattern 12's exclusion of "a real word that is merely wrong" is the nearer rule here: postquam stands in an ordinary place and only the following accusative betrays it. English renders the syntax the printed letters permit — "after which resurrection all these things which are here sung were done" — and the crux says so. I record that I can argue this both ways and did not want a marker resting on a coin flip.
4c. Divergences that are REAL and were judged not material — the declined list
- 1002C
Quarto sabbati,against Ps 93:1quarta sabbati. A case form, letter-level, and §C1's rule excludes exactly this. The gloss argues from the day (quo die fecit Deus luminaria), which both readings give. Declined. - 1006A
Regnavit a ligno— not in the Clementine at all (the Old-Latin addition to Ps 95:10). Declined because Migne flags it himself: he introduces it asAlia littera:. This is the( sic )principle — where he has already told the reader, we do not stack our note on top of his. - 1006A
Et gentes in ira tua.— same reasoning, same column: Migne introduces it withAlii addunt,. - 1003C Mt 14:28 — Migne prints
jube me venire ad tefor the Vulgate'sjube me ad te venire super aquas. Word order plus an ellipsis; the gloss argues from Peter on the water, which survives either order. Declined. (The citation(Matth. XXVI)for Mt 14 is Migne's and passes through verbatim.) - 1006A Mt 26:64 and 1004D Mt 28:20 — both compressed quotations, dropping
sedentem a dextris virtutis Dei/caeliandomnibus diebusrespectively. Abridgment ellipses, not variants; the gloss's argument (the clouds = the apostles; the forty years = all the ages) turns on words that are present. Declined. - 1005D
Terra autem,— Ps 95:9 readsuniversa terrawith noautem. A single particle in a lemma stub the gloss does not argue from. Declined. - 1007D
Israeli,for Ps 97:3domui Israel— a fragment inflected to fit the gloss's own sentence (Sed cui? Israeli). Declined. - 1009C
Servite in laetitia.for Ps 99:2servite Domino in laetitia— a cut lemma, not a variant text. Declined. - 1009A
Terra scabellum pedum ejusfor Is 66:1terra autem scabellum pedum meorum— first person to third because the Glossa is reporting it (dicit Scriptura). Declined as oblique report, not divergence. - 1002C
Exaltare, quia, usquequo peccatores.— a splice of the openings of Ps 93:2 and 93:3, in the gloss's own voice, to point at two verses at once. Not a quotation. Declined. - 1009A
Hoc erit vobis in testimonium.— introduced assaepe in lege dicitur, i.e. as a formula rather than a citation, and it occurs nowhere in the Clementine verbatim (the nearest are Dt 31:26, Gn 21:30, Jos 22:27, allin testimoniumin other constructions). Declined; a formula cannot diverge from a text it does not claim to quote. - 1008B
(Psal. XLVIII), 1003C(Matth. XXVI), 1010D(Matth. VIII)— three wrong locators (for Ps 84:12, Mt 14:28 and Mt 5:6). Migne's, passed through verbatim per the series rule;refDisplaykeeps the printed reference. Not defects of ours and not marked.
4d. Quotations collated and found to AGREE with the Clementine — the checked negatives
A list of findings alone cannot be told from a report by an agent that never looked, so:
Exact, word for word: Ps 93:1 Deus ultionum Dominus · Ps 93:1 Libere egit · Ps 93:6 Viduam et advenam · Ps 93:8 Intelligite … insipientes … in populo … stulti … aliquando sapite (all five spans) · Ps 93:11 Dominus scit and Quoniam vanae sunt · Ps 93:13 donec fodiatur and Peccatori fovea · Ps 93:19 consolationes tuae laetificaverunt animam meam · Ps 93:22 Et factus est mihi Dominus in refugium, et Deus meus in adjutorium spei meae (the longest lemma in the range, checked entire) · Ps 93:20 Sedes iniquitatis and Qui fingis · Ps 94:1 Venite, exsultemus · Ps 94:2 Faciem ejus, In confessione · Ps 94:6 Venite, adoremus, Ploremus, Qui fecit nos · Ps 94:8 Hodie si vocem, si vocem ejus audieritis, Nolite obdurare · Ps 94:9 Sicut in irritatione · Ps 95:1 Cantate Domino, Canticum novum · Ps 95:2 Domino et benedicite, De die in diem · Ps 95:6 Sanctimonia et magnificentia · Ps 95:9 Adorate Dominum in atrio, Commoveatur, Universa terra · Ps 95:10 Etenim correxit orbem terrae, Dicite in gentibus, Populos in aequitate · Ps 95:13 Quoniam venit, populos in veritate · Ps 96:1 Dominus regnavit, Exsultet terra, Insulae, Multae · Ps 96:2 Nubes et caligo, Justitia et judicium · Ps 96:3 Ignis ante ipsum praecedet · Ps 96:4 Illuxerunt fulgura · Ps 96:7 Confundantur, Adorate · Ps 96:10 Custodit Dominus · Ps 84:12 veritas de terra orta est, et justitia de coelo prospexit (twice, at 1007D and 1008B, and exact both times) · Job 1:21 Dominus dedit, Dominus abstulit · Ps 97:6 In tubis ductilibus et voce tubae corneae · Ps 97:9 Orbem terrarum, In justitia · Ps 98:1 Irascantur populi · Ps 98:2 Dominus in Sion, In Sion magnus · Ps 98:4 Et honor regis, Tu parasti directiones, In Jacob, Tu fecisti · Ps 98:7 Nubis loquebatur ad eos · Ps 98:8 Propitius fuisti eis, in omnes adinventiones · 2Cor 12:7 Datus est mihi stimulus carnis meae · Ps 99:1 Psalmus in confessione · Ps 99:2 Jubilate, Omnis terra, In laetitia, Introite in conspectu · Ps 100:1 Psalmus ipsi David, Misericordiam et judicium cantabo · Ps 100:2 Quando venies ad me, Perambulabam in innocentia · Ps 100:3 Non proponebam, Non adhaesit · Ps 100:4 Cor pravum · Mt 5:6 Beati qui esuriunt et sitiunt justitiam · Ps 100:6 Ut sedeant mecum · Ps 100:7 Non habitabit in medio domus meae · Ps 100:8 In matutino, Interficiebam, Peccatores, Civitate Domini, Omnes operantes iniquitatem.
Every one of the 258 spans was read against the Clementine or, where it is a gloss word rather than a quotation, identified as such in place.
§5 · THE INHERITED CONVENTIONS — what my range did with each
In finem— does not occur in cols 1002B–1011B. Zero occurrences; nothing to apply.Diapsalma/Diapsalmus— does not occur. Zero.Canticum graduum/gradus— does not occur; the gradual psalms begin at Ps 119, in Band C.usque ad→ "as far as" — 33 occurrences of the italicusque adsplice formula across the four chunks, all 33 renderedas far as, zero rivals. Two further occurrences of the words stand outside the formula and are counted separately — ⭐ two licensed exceptions, each with the Latin that forced it: 1. 1004DVobiscum sum usque ad consummationem saeculi.— the phrase is inside a scripture quotation (Mt 28:20), not the abridgment formula. It renders "unto the consummation of the world". This is the 9000 @0316A case exactly (Lc 16:16's usque ad Joannem), and the italic-membership test does not settle it because the whole quotation is one italic span in the Latin — the test is membership in a splice, not membership in italics. Worth Band C's brief carrying that refinement. 2. 1010CNon proponebam, usque, oculi mei.— bareusque, unitalicized, and it is Cassiodorus marking a stretch of verses rather than splicing a father's sentence. Rendered "down to", which is the treatment Band A's four non-formula look-alikes received.Psalmus David≠Psalmus ipsi David— six sites: fourPsalmus David(1002B, 1005A, 1007C, 1008B) → "A psalm of David", and twoPsalmus ipsi David(1006B, 1010A) → "A psalm for David himself", plusIpsi David.→ "For David himself." at 1010A. Migne's own plate confirms the distinction inside one stint's range (see §1b).- Psalm numbering — Vulgate throughout; Psalms XCIII–C, no conversions, no anomalies. Migne's verse numbering skips within psalms (Ps 93 runs 1, 4, 6, 7, 8, 10, 11, 12, 13, 16, 17, 18, 19, 20, 22; Ps 96 runs 1, 2, 3, 4, 5, 7, 8, 9, 10) — those verses are simply not glossed, not misnumbered, and nothing was reordered or supplied.
- Heads —
PSALMUS XCIII.→PSALM XCIII.etc., Roman numerals kept Roman, four heads, one per psalm boundary in 0073/0074/0075 and one in 0076. ⚑PSALMUS C.isPSLMUS C.on the plate (§3); the English head isPSALM C.either way under Pattern 9. Dominus virtutum→ "Lord of hosts" — does not occur.sedes→ "seat", never "throne" — four occurrences ofsedes, all "seat":Sedes iniquitatis.→ "The seat of iniquity." (1003D) ·Qui correcti sunt sedes ejus→ "his seat" (1006D) ·correcti sunt sedes Dei→ "the seat of God" (1007A) ·quae est sedes Dei→ "the seat of God" (1008C). Zero "throne". (A fifth English "seat" at 1003A istribunalinante tribunal Christi, "the judgment seat of Christ" — a different Latin word, and named here so the count reconciles.)(ID.)and(Ibid.)never expanded — 23(ID.)in my range, all verbatim;(Ibid.)does not occur here at all.
5a. The vocabulary axes, decided per site and recorded
gentesfamily — 9 occurrences, and they split. Gentiles (5), every one in an explicit Judaei/gentes opposition, which is what the axis rules:nunc omnes gentes monetagainstPraemonuit Judaeosin the same sentence (1005A) ·aliae oves de gentibusagainstJudaea, quae crucifixerat(1006C) ·gentes receperunt verbum Deiagainstqui erant in Judaea fratres(1007B) ·Fideles de Judaeis et gentibus(1008A) ·super populos gentiumagainstin Sion Judaeorum(1008C). nations (4), where the sense is plainly generic:Qui corripit gentes(Ps 93:10, God correcting the nations at large, 1003A) ·Dicite in gentibus(1005D),Et gentes in ira tuaandgentes vero, id est, malos(1006A) — ⚑ the second of these is apopuli/gentescontrast, not aJudaei/gentesone: the gloss opposesbonostomalos, and importing "Gentiles" would make an ethnic claim the sentence does not make. Zeronatio, zerogentilis, zeroethnicus.- ⚑
gens tenebrarum— does not occur in my range. The open question is untouched; nothing to flag and nothing decided. daemonium/diabolus— 4 : 5, no bleed. demons:daemonibus imperant(1005B),non super daemonia(1004B),suggestiones daemonumandDaemones, qui omnem carnem faciunt peccare(1011B). devil:patre diabolo(1002D),malleo … id est diabolo(1008A),versutias diaboli(1010D),diabolus dispergiturandimmissiones diaboli(1011B). Zero Satan.mysterium/sacramentum— 0 : 2, kept 1:1.Universa legis sacramenta→ "all the sacraments of the law" (1008A) ·signati nobiscum sacramentis→ "sealed with the sacraments along with us" (1010D). Nomysteriumoccurs.turba/multitudo— neither occurs. (Instrument checked: the onlyturb-string in my range istitubaverantat 1006C, which is a different verb entirely and is exactly the false positive the series brief names.)- The archaism test, run with BOTH memberships. No guillemets occur in my range, so italic membership is the whole test here — and I ran it after translating, not before: stripping every
…span and every[var: …]from all four English chunks leaves zerohath,saithordoth. ⚑ One site failed this check and was repaired: at 1005DQuod regnavit et correxit, et judicavithad been given "That he hath reigned and corrected and judged" in gloss voice — it now reads "That he reigned". The 12 survivinghathare all inside italic lemmata (He hath saved.,The Lord hath reigned.,Dominus dedit, Dominus abstulitand so on). The check only worked because it was run on the finished English. - Thou/you (Pattern 17), as a number marker. Singular
tu→ thou throughout the gloss prose (Be not hasty to punish another, if he has hurt thee;of thyself thou canst fail;if thou hast charity;thou didst not eat, whence then wast thou fed?). Pluralvos→ you, including where it stands two lines from a singular (If perchance you are solicitous, 1004C, againstfor of thyself thou canst fail, same column). Ps 94:8'ssi vocem ejus audieritisand Jo 8:31'sSi manseritisare both plural and both take "you".
§6 · CRUCES — passages rendered literally, with the difficulty named
- 1004D —
non quas eminus, quia sunt. Argued in full at §4a. Rendered "not those which from afar, because they are". Migne's crux, plate-confirmed, no marker, conjecture emimus. - 1006C —
postquam resurrectionem. §4b. Rendered "after which resurrection". - 1002D —
non me curat Deus, quid agam?The wicked man's speech, and the question mark is Migne's. Rendered "God does not care for me, what I may do?" — which is not comfortable English and is not meant to be:quid agamis a bare deliberative with no governing verb printed, and supplying one ("what care I…") would be the silent repair Pattern 7a names. Bothnons carried. - 1010B —
quem iste tantum desiderat.tantumis ambiguous between "only" ("whom he alone desires") and "so much" ("whom he so greatly desires"). Rendered "whom this man so greatly desires" because the sentence is about the intensity of the psalmist's longing (Quando venies ad me), not about his being the sole desirer; but the two constructions both parse and I record that I chose rather than found. - 1008C —
contra quam nihil possunt irati.quamis feminine and bothPlenitudoandcharitatemare feminine and available. The English "against which the angry can do nothing" preserves the same ambiguity rather than resolving it in one direction. Deliberate. - 1010B —
Quando venies ad me.⚠ Migne prints a full stop where the Vulgate prints a question mark, and prints a comma at the second occurrence. Pattern 8 forbids supplying a mark he does not print, so the English reads "When wilt thou come to me." with a full stop. This is a site where the familiar verse pulls hard the other way; naming it here so a blind reader does not repair it. - 1007D —
Misericordia est quo promisit. Our TEI's nominative against the plate'sMisericordiae(§3). Rendered "Mercy is that whereby he promised", which serves our Latin; at patch time the oblique case wants no different English. Cross-referenced to the unresolved 0932B in the patches file.
§7 · THE FOUR TESTS, RUN ON THE FINISHED FILES
1 · No [sic:] swallows the word it marks. Vacuously clean: no [sic:] was fired. I ran the mechanical form anyway — stripping every marker from all four English chunks and reading what is left — and found no stranded article, preposition or doubled mark. Every sentence reads aloud without its brackets.
2 · Each printed negative named to its host, then found on that host in the English. Run on all four chunks. The sites where it mattered:
- 1006D
permittendo dicit, non imperando— thenonis onimperando, not ondicit. English: "he speaks by permitting, not by commanding." ✓ - 1008D
non levi voluntate colendus est, sed fixa deliberatione— ⚠ the 2a trigger fires here: a negative before a gerundive with asedcorrelative one clause away. Thenonbelongs tolevi voluntate, and thesed fixa deliberationeproves it from the sentence's own structure, not from what reads well. English: "he is to be worshipped not with a light will, but with fixed deliberation." ✓ Had it floated ontocolendus estthe page would have said he is not to be worshipped at all. - 1008D
Non solum patriarcha, sed populo— 2a trigger again (non solum … sed). The negative is onsolum. English: "Not only the patriarch, but the people whom he signifies." ✓ - 1009B
Non enim fuit … Moysi poena non intrare in terram promissionis— two negatives, two hosts: the first onfuit(it was not a punishment), the second onintrare(not to enter). English keeps them apart: "it was not, as is thought by very many, a punishment to Moses not to enter." ✓ Collapsing either would reverse Augustine's whole point. - 1009B
qui sub lege essent, et sub gratia esse nollent, non intrarent— three, the middle one lexical (nollent). English: "who were under the law, and were unwilling to be under grace, should not enter into rest." ✓ - 1011A
non praeeminet meritis, nihil potest; non est in populo meo granum, sed palea— three, and the apposition rule applies to the last: English does not inherit a negative across thesed, so the clause is written out in full — "he is not grain in my people, but chaff" — rather than "not grain, but chaff" hanging off the previous negative. ✓ - 1011B
quod et non adhaeserunt nisi boni—non … nisiis a single scope, and English marks it twice or not at all: "that none clave to him but the good." ✓ - 1010C
Innocens est qui nec sibi nec alii nocet— bothnecs carried, both on their own host: "who harms neither himself nor another." ✓
3 · Punctuation compared BY COLUMN BAND, never by total. The anchors verify 1:1, so they partition both twins identically. Colons, semicolons and question marks compared band by band across all 39 bands in my four chunks — and this test earned its place: 11 of the 39 bands came back mismatched, on SIXTEEN individual marks, every one of them mine. None was a dropped or supplied clause — all sixteen were the translator's convenience against what Migne prints — and all sixteen are now repaired:
- fifteen supplied marks demoted to the comma Migne prints —
As it were:→As it were,(1002D, MigneQuasi,) ·that he may see; God→see, God(1002D) ·canst not remake; he remakes→remake, he remakes(1004C) ·to the prelates: declare→prelates, declare(1005B) ·by the eternal sun; the one foretells→sun, the one(1005B) ·because you are little; understand→little, understand(1005B) ·The apostles and the angels; whence→angels, whence(1005B) ·thanks are rendered; whence→rendered, whence(1005C) ·reigned in peace; of which→peace, of which(1006B) ·wish to be adored; the good adore→adored, the good(1007A) ·grow wanton; but they who→wanton, but they(1007C) ·whereby he promised; truth follows→promised, truth(1007D) ·the glorious preaching; judgment requires→preaching, judgment(1008D) ·save of sins: merciful→sins, merciful(1009B) ·also in avenging; behold→avenging, behold(1009B) - one mark I had DROPPED, restored — 1003C
In acie patiens; sed quia ille vincit, qui vim sustinet; perdit, qui ferithad lost its second semicolon, so "he loses who strikes" was hanging off the previous clause as a comma-splice instead of standing as Cassiodorus's own antithesis. It now reads "who bears the violence; he loses who strikes."
After the repairs: 39 bands, zero mismatched. ⚑ Recording the before-state because a test that is only ever reported as passing is indistinguishable from a test nobody ran. The totals would have partly cancelled here — 0073 alone was +2 in one band and −1 in another — which is exactly the failure the by-band form exists to prevent.
3a · Anchor POSITION, not merely presence (test 2b). All 35 anchors checked against the word they stand beside in the Latin, not merely that they are present and in order. Two sit inside constructions and were split to match Migne exactly: oculi [1010D] mei. → mine [1010D] eyes. (inside an italic span) and non quas eminus, quia [1004D] sunt → "because [1004D] they are". One further, [1011B], was checked against the plate's own band mark, which stands beside ubi ostendit / quis finis sit malorum — the same place.
4 · Does the English ASSERT what he asserts? Read back paragraph by paragraph with the counts already known clean. ⚑ Run at the SUBJECT level, not the negation level, because that is where Band A's blind read found four of its six. Every "he", "she", "it" or "they" I supplied that the Latin does not print was named to itself:
- 1003D
ut de eis pungas— no object is printed, and my first draft supplied one ("prick men by means of them"). Removed: it now reads "that thou mayest prick by means of them", because the Latin leaves it open and Augustine'sde eisis instrumental, not objective. - 1006D
Impiis … nubilosus et caliginosus— the supplied subject is the Lord, fromqualis sit Dominus primo adventutwo lines above, not from the sentence. - 1008C
Parvum erat quando irascebantur— the supplied subject is the name, fromConfiteantur nomini tuo magno(Ps 98:3), the verse the lemmaMagno.cuts into. - 1011A
non praeeminet meritis, nihil potest— the supplied subject is the depraved man tolerated, fromEtsi aliquandiu tolereturin the same sentence and from Ps 100:7'squi facit superbiam. Not "the Church", which is the nearer noun and would invert the claim. - 1009A
In hac specie loquebatur— the speaker is God, from Ps 98:7'sin columna nubis loquebatur ad eos, not the pillar. - 1006B
quem iniqui filii … crucifixerunt, atque regnum abjuraverunt ei—eiis Christ, and the sons are the agents of both verbs. Checked because the dative sits where an English reader expects an accusative. - 1004C
nec scandala tibi nocent, quae mensuram a Deo accipiunt—quaeis scandala, notfluctus; the relative is neuter plural andfluctusis masculine. English keeps it on the scandals. - 1003A
quod ipsi per se non possunt scire, sed Dominus novit esse vanas—ipsiare the men whose thoughts are vain, and what the Lord knows to be vain is the thoughts, not the men. Both bindings are load-bearing and both were checked against Ps 93:11.
§8 · SECTIONS READ CLEAN, AND WHAT THAT MEANS
Read at the plate, collated word for word against our TEI, and carrying no crux, no marker and no patch: 1002C–1002D entire (Ps 93 opening through VERS. 8) · 1003B–1003C (Ps 93 VERS. 12–18) · 1005A–1005B (Ps 95 opening through VERS. 5) · 1006D–1007A (Ps 96 VERS. 1–3) · 1007C–1007D as far as Misericordiae (Ps 97 opening) · 1008B–1008C (Ps 98 opening through VERS. 2) · 1009A–1009B (Ps 98 VERS. 6–8) · 1010B–1010C (Ps 100 VERS. 2) · 1011A–1011B (Ps 100 VERS. 6–8).
⚑ A logged column is not a checked column, so here is what "clean" cost. For each of those bands I compared the printed line against our TEI word by word at 200 dpi, dropped to 500 dpi on every glyph that looked wrong, and then re-read the English against the Latin asking only whether it asserts what he asserts. The four suspect glyphs named in §2 were all withdrawn inside these "clean" bands. They are clean because they were read, not because nothing caught my eye.
§9 · FOR THE MERGE, AND FOR BAND C
- Fourteen TEI-patch sites are queued in
data/briefs/8967-PENDING-TEI-PATCHES.md. Five of them unlock markers (two[sic:]on non-words Migne prints, two[cj:]on words CC replaced, one[cj:]onpsalmi); two require an English change at patch time and I have named the exact replacement text for both (§3). None was patched and no chunk was re-chunked. - ⭐ For Band C's brief — the
usque adrefinement. The italic-membership test does not settle a case where the whole scripture quotation is one italic span and the phrase falls inside it (my 1004D, Mt 28:20). Band A's formulation ("the italic-membership test decides it") reads as though italics were sufficient; the real test is membership in a splice. Band C carries the gradual psalms and will meet a great deal ofusque ad; it should be told this. - For Band C's brief — nothing at my tail runs over. My range ends at 1011B in the middle of Ps 100's VERS. 8, and chunk 0077 opens at 1011B with the same psalm's closing note and then Ps CI. No convention, marker or crux of mine is left open across that boundary. Ps 119 and the
Canticum graduumseries are well beyond it. gens tenebrarumremains open. It does not occur in cols 1002B–1011B; I have neither settled it nor added evidence.- Nothing on my six leaves needs Gallica. Every question I raised could be answered on this copy at 500 dpi. The
f443/f449/f453list is unchanged. - Band B marker totals from this stint: 11
[var:]· 0[sic:]· 0[cj:]· 0[d:]· 0[ed:].
Six Opus stints, 29 chunks, 30,038 Latin words — then a patch pass, an English pass, a blind polarity read by three fenced readers, and a repair pass. verify-english clean · plate-gate OK · patch-audit OK (336 patches) · marker-reconcile 67 claims, 67 standing, 0 missing, 0 withheld. This section is the reconciliation, not the concatenation; the fifteen files stand verbatim in §I. With this band the work is translated end to end: 106 of 106 chunks.
H1. ⭐ SIX FOR SIX ON THE SPAN COUNT — and this time the count REPAIRED something
357 · 389 · 277 · 329 · 234 · 146, every stint's own count of the italic spans in its Latin matching its lemma brief exactly, first and last entries checked too. Fourteen stints in a row across three bands.
⭐ And on this band the check stopped being only a check. The 0092–0096 stint's count caught two real span-membership errors at 1059D and 1060D — invisible to verify-english, which cannot see a mis-split brief — and repaired them before filing. The count has always been the only detector there is; this is the band where it detected.
H2. ⛔⛔ EVERY COLUMN IN THE BAND WAS READ AT THE PLATE — 70 of 70
Against 46 in Band A and ~90 of ~93 in Band B. Nothing in this band rests on the twin alone. Six stints, 300–400 dpi full-column slices with 900–1200 dpi crops on every disputed glyph, corner numbers checked before the page was trusted.
### What only the leaf could do, again
- It reversed a reading outright. @1035A our twin prints
Barbaro lingua est, agreeing with its own lemma and ungrammatical; Migne setsBarbara lingua est— a definition, that tongue is barbarous which praises not God. CC had assimilated the gloss's first word to the italic lemma standing immediately before it. ⭐ The general form is worth more than the site: WHEN OUR LATIN AGREES SUSPICIOUSLY NEATLY WITH AN ADJACENT LEMMA, OPEN THE LEAF. - It withdrew four
[sic:]that were already written down.Aventus(plate:Adventus),Ideumaei(Idumaei),occurit(occurrit),Diligi justos(Diligit). Every one is a non-word in OUR file that a stint could have fired a public accusation on. - It stopped two false
[d:]. At 1075B our twin doublesjanam januamandscandala. scandala.; the plate prints each once. Both dittographies are Corpus Corporum's — theIdeo-|quecolumn-turn class from Band B, recurring. - And the mirror ran on the same leaf-runs: Migne really does print
VESS. 4.@1043A and our TEI silently corrected him.
### The clipping rule stays withdrawn, and the real lesson is the opposite of a rule Cols 1037 and 1041 are clipped and were on NO list, while 1053, 1057, 1061, 1073 and 1077 are all ≡ 1 (mod 4) and all clean — about forty more refutations. ⚑ A CLIPPED COLUMN CANNOT TESTIFY TO AN ABSENCE: a stint nearly filed a "CC dropped a word" site that turned out to sit inside col 1037's clip. Two [var:] at 1045C were withheld and logged for Gallica, not fired — the rule's failure mode being made visible instead of being allowed to happen. Gallica list unchanged at seven; no Band C column added one.
H3. OUR LATIN IS NOT MIGNE'S — ~155 departures over 70 columns, and the rate is RISING
1.9 · 1.6 · 1.8 · 2.6 · 2.2 · 2.6 per column by stint, against the ~1.5 Bands A and B measured and 9003's ~3/page on the sibling PL 114 Psalter. The launch brief's budget was too low and the band says so. All three directions ran here, plus a fourth shape:
- CC moves Migne ONTO the Clementine — invisible to any Vulgate collation by construction. ⭐⭐ @1076C it inserts
domusinto the gloss's Mt 15:24 quotation, exactly matching the Vulgate and DESTROYING a real[var:]we are entitled to fire. - CC REPAIRS Migne's real defects, suppressing markers. See H5 — this is the band's headline.
- CC MANUFACTURES readings. The four withdrawn non-words above, the two false dittographies, an unmatched
(at 1050A, a spuriousetc.at 1012A that is material to theusque adsplice test because that test keys onetc. - ⭐ CC repairs Migne into the CONSTRUING form — the hardest class to see, because our Latin reads BETTER than the plate. At the Psalm CXVIII sentence the plate reads
et quibuswhere our TEI has the grammaticale quibus, confirmed mid-line, clear of the clip, and independently by the scan's own OCR layer. Same class, different shape: CC split Migne'sBenedicitintoBene dicit, turning he blesses into he rightly says — and it construes perfectly.
H4. THE PATCH PASS — built MECHANICALLY, and it still had three defects
134 patches (336 on the work). ⛔ Band B extracted 149 patches from prose reports BY HAND and the blind read then found seven defects the pass itself had introduced or left behind; nothing reconciled REPORTED sites against APPLIED ones. scripts/patch-build.mjs is that reconciliation: a reported site must resolve to exactly ONE location in its DECLARED column or it is refused and printed. It refused 51 rows across five rounds and every refusal was a real error in the reading of the report, never a false alarm.
- ⛔⛔ Two NESTED finds — the pair that deadlocked the Band B queue.
cantari debeatsat insidecantari debeat hoc canticum; at 1067D the grown context forveritatiswallowed the whole find forsimilis.chunk-workrefuses a find matching zero times, so the second of each pair would have aborted chunking outright after the first landed. Found by an explicit nesting check, not by running it and watching it break. 1067D's two defects are now one patch. - Seventeen sites whose column was wrong in the report — the 9003 failure recurring: the repair aimed right, the RECORD wrong, which sends the next reader to the wrong page. ⭐ 1062B is the instructive one: the stint filed the
VERS. 6→9site at 1062A, but our TEI hasVERS. 3there; the disagreement is at the psalm's secondVERS. 6, one band later. - Two refusals that are rules. 1039B
promisit/promissithas two instances in its declared column and the report does not say which — a patch must not guess a site any more than a letter. 1037Aostiosus/ostiosnsstill will not settle asuornat 1200 dpi (theNafrubimusprecedent); only the certain half of that clause landed.
### ⛔⛔ And the pass itself failed three ways — every one caught by a refusal downstream
- ⭐⭐ 1052C: I IMPORTED THIS COPY'S INK DAMAGE INTO THE EDITION. The plate images
cxaltaxitand the whole form was patched in. The stint's own copy-condition note had already declined the initial letter — the crossbar of a romanethat failed to ink, against a cleaneone line above. Thexforvis Migne's, because a crossing stroke cannot be produced by ink failing to reach the paper. The word he SET isexaltaxit. This is therossitrule, broken in the very pass that quotes it, and an agent then fired[sic: cxaltaxit], accusing Migne in public of a damaged sort. - 1059A
Ddvidand 1060Ain estwere reported and NEVER BUILT — the Band B failure class, one pass after the tooling meant to stop it. ⚑ The builder's uniqueness guard then refused the first repair attempt, becausepsalmus David.occurs twice. - 1026D printed "subjoining," TWICE in the English. The stint had written its English to the plate; the pre-patch twin's head copy was never removed. Italic span counts still agreed 5/5, so no automated check could see it — an agent found it by reading.
⭐ The detector in all three cases was an agent REFUSING to fire a marker whose content its Latin twin did not carry. That refusal is worth more than any gate in the pipeline.
H5. ⛔⛔ NO MARKER COUNT MEANS ANYTHING UNTIL THE PATCH PASS HAS RUN — §F2, one band later and larger
Band C's six stints fired 32 [var:] · 3 [sic:] · 2 [cj:] and reported, between them, roughly SEVENTY-TWO Migne defects confirmed at the plate that they could not fire — deis, qut, mugnificatus, split type haere ditas, Ft for Et, ete., simlis, veriteti, corectio, omnibns, Ddvid, pecatum, musicas, suseipiet, disper iones, ubyssi, eanticcum, mahsiones, Neseitis, ferrcis and more. Every one was unreachable because a [sic:] may wrap only type our twin carries and CC had already repaired it.
After the patch pass and the English pass the band stands at 33 [var:] · 42 [sic:] · 28 [cj:] · 2 [d:]. That movement is the whole point: the markers were always earned.
⚠ ferrcis @1078D is flagged in both directions and should be re-opened by a second reader: it is the italic-e-images-as-c hazard's own shape, and the deciding evidence is that the glyph is well formed rather than broken.
H6. ⛔⛔⛔ THE [cj:] INVERSION — 19 SITES, AND THE REPAIR WAS ALREADY WRITTEN DOWN
Pattern 18 is explicit: "the gloss is ADDITIVE. Migne's word keeps its English, and our conjecture stands beside it." Bands A and B obey it at every site ("put on corruption [cj: corruptionem; read incorruptionem]"). In Band C, 19 of 28 inverted it: the running English rendered THE CONJECTURE and Migne's printed word reached the reader nowhere.
⭐ And data/briefs/8967-PENDING-TEI-PATCHES.md carries a column headed "English edit owed?" answering YES at every one of those sites, with the 1071C–1080B stint writing the replacement out verbatim ("Praise ye the Lady [cj: …]"). The Latin patches landed, the markers fired, and the English half of the same patch was never made — because the English pass reasoned that markers are "additive" and therefore the existing rendering could stand. The word was right and the reading of it exactly backwards. A plausible principle overrode a written instruction, and the blind read rediscovered a documented, unfinished edit.
⭐ The sharpest site, and it shows why this class is invisible: Migne prints the lemma Laudate Dominam and our English gave "Praise ye the Lord" — the identical string used for Dominum four columns earlier. No reader could have seen the defect; no grep could have found it.
### ⛔ The mechanical test fails in BOTH directions, and that is the durable finding scripts/cj-inversion.mjs exists, and its own header says it shortlists and never decides.
- Verbatim comparison UNDER-REPORTS. It found 19; a repair agent found two more where the echo is inflected — "canst" against "thou canst", "does not admit" against "it admits". The direction nobody audits.
- Stem comparison OVER-REPORTS, and every false positive is an inflectional axis the stemmer flattened: TENSE ("hath delivered" vs "will deliver" — the house-form control itself), NUMBER ("without ends" vs "without end"), SUBJECT ("they had gone before the head" vs "the head had gone before").
- ⭐ The reason is structural: a
[cj:]marks a printed form whose faithful English misleads, so the printed word and the conjecture differ most often in tense, number, case or person — precisely what a lexical test cannot see. Its count is not a measurement of anything.
⚑ The stem test also flags five [cj:] in the merged Bands A and B, at least one demonstrably a false positive. Recorded as a reading list for a later pass; merged bands were not edited on a new instrument's say-so.
H7. THE BLIND POLARITY READ — three fenced readers, ~60 sites
Fenced from cruces.md, every stint file, every brief, the patch reports and the git log. Split 0077–0086 / 0087–0096 / 0097–0105. No chunk in the band came back wholly clean.
- The 0087–0096 reader filed the heaviest report — 27 sites, 15 confident, 12 probable, and it judges EVERY ONE OURS. No site in its range is a Migne error we merely carried.
- ⛔ The dominant class is the predicted one: the supplied possessive, twelve sites. Fourteen in Band B, twelve here. ⭐ What made it checkable rather than a hunch: in eight of them, a lemma that DOES print the possessive stands within a few words of one that does not, and both were rendered alike — Sacerdotes ejus / Et sancti → "Her priests … her saints"; Semitam meum / Et funiculum → "My path … my line". Two were verified against the Latin before any repair ran. A repair agent then found a twelfth the reader had missed, using the reader's own test.
- ⭐ One consequence no other instrument could reach. At 1055A a
[var:]quoting the Vulgate's in servis suis stood on the same line as the lemma into which that suis had migrated — the note was reporting a divergence our English had already erased. Fixing the lemma makes the marker true again. - The sense class with no grep signature: de veteri read as a time-adverb; Deo dative-of- agent re-bound so God says rather than establishes; the title ad Goliam rendered "against Goliath" — the very Vulgate reading the
[var:]beside it disowns; non tamen prohibet → "does not forbid" where the sense is "does not prevent"; an imperative nota → "he notes", moving the act of observing from the reader to the psalmist.
### What the repair agents REFUSED, and every refusal was right
[cj: orbi]is not an inversion: orbi/orbis differ only in case and English has no exponent. The echo test cannot tell "inverted" from "no exponent exists."- A reader asked for Quia persecutis to be marked. The plate does not print it — CC does. A
[sic:]would have accused Migne of his transcriber's defect. - A
[cj:]was declined for promotion to[sic:]because that would be a new claim against Migne's type on a column nobody has read — the plate gate reasoning, applied without being told. - 1059A's concord disagreement is Migne's; forcing it would display our error, not his.
- Three of five "construing across broken punctuation" sites were rejected on the ground that this work's own plate read records the twin agreeing with the plate "apart from commas" — so the claim is about Corpus Corporum's punctuation, not Migne's.
### Two negative results, worth as much as the findings
- Both 7a⁗ markers in the band are correct —
nocfor non @1058D andfungiendum@1059D leave the negative OUTSIDE the quarantine. - The gradus series survives as a series, first through fifteenth. ⚑ The missing fifth degree is Migne's own gap at Psalm CXXIII, faithfully carried — not a finding.
- All ten
[var:]in 0097–0105 check out, and the instrument vocabulary is right: psaltery and harp keep the gloss's sounds from above / from below discriminator, organum is the tower-of-pipes organ the gloss describes, cymbals are the small bowls.
H8. ⭐⭐ RULED BY WILSON, 2026-09-05 — and one of them had ALREADY been ruled
### The omitted negative was never an open question Two stints, three English agents and I reported 1029B and 1078B as a class no marker could reach, and put it up as a ruling. It was ruled on 2026-08-15 and written into Pattern 18 with three worked examples — 7561 @0648, where Migne DROPS the non of non solum … sed etiam: only [cj: solum; read non solum, "not only"], with the note that a dropped word is glossable because the gloss opens on the word Migne DID print.
And 1078B was not even an omission: Migne prints unde nos sit liberum exire where sense wants non — a real Latin form whose faithful English misleads, which is Pattern 18's founding case and the near-mirror of Wilson's own worked example 11064 @1090B (apud non for apud nos). Both are now fired; 1029B's Latin was patched at last, and its negative correctly lives inside the conjecture's gloss, because the negative belongs to the conjecture and not to Migne's text.
⭐ The lesson is the empty grep lesson in a new dress. Everyone reasoned about the apparatus from the three marker definitions in front of them and concluded the class was unreachable; nobody searched the pattern file for the case. WHEN THE PIPELINE AGREES THAT SOMETHING IS IMPOSSIBLE, CHECK WHETHER IT HAS ALREADY BEEN RULED POSSIBLE.
### Pattern 7's non-word clause is AMENDED — practice governs A non-word carrying a [sic:] now has its sense rendered in English with Migne's type inside the marker: Whatsoever [sic: Quaecunquae]. The old clause required carrying it untranslated and leaving a hole, and said Pattern 7 has no exceptions. Its whole argument was disclosure, and Pattern 12 was ruled the same day and does precisely that job. Once the marker exists the hole buys no information and costs a readable page. ~60 markers across two merged bands had already moved; the ruling ratifies practice instead of retrofitting it. ⛔ Untouched: the [sic:] still wraps Migne's type VERBATIM and verify-english still checks that string against the twin — the guard that makes it impossible to accuse the plate of a defect it does not carry. Split type still carries the whole run.
### No [ed:] at 1041D — it is copy condition The four words recovered from the clipped inner margin of the Psalm CXVIII sentence ([Exp]ositionem, [omitti]mus, [ration]es, [glossa]) are not marked. Pattern 13 reserves [ed:] for holes in the DIGITIZATION, and there is no hole: our twin carries all four and so does Migne's plate. Only our photograph of this copy is clipped, and copy condition is never restored or marked — the same line that kept rossit out.
### The uppercased chapter numerals are DECLARED, not retrofitted CC uppercased every lowercase chapter numeral in Migne's citations before we received the corpus — thousands of sites, no English exponent, and under the plate gate each would need its column read to be a claim rather than a guess. content/editorial-method.md now says so in the Citations section: it changes no reference and no sense, we have not undone it, and it is ours to declare rather than the reader's to discover.
### 1075C and 1072A both take the Pattern 18 shape They are the same shape and differed only because of how the repair work was split. 1075C now renders Migne's infinitive as printed — "For unless to send his word to the earth … we should not be raised" — mirroring his own broken construction. The strain is visible, which is what Pattern 7 asks for.
H9. CONVENTIONS — inherited, confirmed, and what only this band could test
In finem→ "Unto the end" held throughout.DiapsalmaROMAN — two more plate confirmations.- ⭐⭐ THE GRADUAL PSALMS ARE PLATE-EVIDENCED FOR THE FIRST TIME. 14 italic
Canticum graduumconfirmed at cols 1039–1050 against zero occurrences in Bands A and B combined, and the ordinal series unbroken through Duodecimus / In tredecimo / Quartus decimus / Quintus decimus. This is why §A1.3's ruling is load-bearing and not stylistic: the gloss numbers the steps in its own voice, and any other rendering ofgradusbreaks the series. ⭐ And at Ps CXXIV Migne printsCanticum.ALONE. The stump was rendered as printed and NOT completed from its eleven neighbours — the supplied-completion discipline working before a blind reader had to catch it. usque ad, §A7'setc.splice test — and TWO refinements no count could have found. 1. ⛔ Migne also prints the formula REVERSED, asad usque, and CC normalizes it away. Our Latin for this whole work carries zeroad usqueagainst 776usque ad, yet the plate setsad usqueat 1015A. The class is invisible to any census taken from our TEI, by construction. (ad usquesurvives elsewhere in the corpus, so this is not a global CC policy that could be corrected for.) 2. Theetc.test is about the TOKEN before, not the character before — a column anchor can stand between theetc.and the formula. ⚑ And italic membership failed in BOTH directions inside this one band: the 0077 stint's two non-formula sites fell OUTSIDE the italic, the 0092 stint's two fell INSIDE it. Two stints, opposite failures, one withdrawn test.- ⭐⭐ PSALM CXVIII IS NOT COMMENTED, AND MIGNE SAYS SO IN HIS OWN VOICE. Read at col 1041D: Expositionem hujus psalmi, ut valde prolixam, omittimus. Vide Ambrosii, Cassiodori, Augustini Enarrationes in psalmos, et quibus ad verbum expressa est glossa ordinaria in hunc locum. Italic throughout, nothing before it, nothing after it, no exposition anywhere on the leaf. Our transcription dropped nothing — but the column is clipped (see H2) and the plate reads
et quibuswhere our TEI had the construinge quibus(see H3.4). It is rendered as the editorial note it is; the missing exposition is not supplied, summarised or glossed. - ⭐ THE WORK ENDS IN THIS BAND AND THE ENDING IS CLEAN — which is a finding, not the absence of one. Col 1080B ends …vitae aeternae vox est: Omnis spiritus laudet Dominum. and nothing follows: no
FINIS, no subscription, no colophon, no closing siglum. Liber Proverbiorum begins on the same leaf beneath Migne's plain full-measure rule. ⚑ The trap avoided: the Psalms break off mid-clause at the foot of col 1079 with Proverbs beneath, so a reader of 1079 alone would call the work truncated — the text resumes at the head of 1080A.
H10. ⛔ STILL OWED BEFORE THE WORK SHIPS
preflight.mjsand the ratchet, then the First/New badge check — Band C added no unread marker, so the ratchet should be green, but it must be run.ferrcis@1078D wants a second reader (H5).- Seven Gallica sites, one IIIF request each, and no ruling on spending them:
f443,f449,f453, 0932B, 0981C, and the two Isaias quotations at 1045C. - 1059C
justificaui— the twin carries it, the English still rendersjustificati. The class was left undecided by its stint; it needs the leaf. - 1039B
promisit/promissit— two instances in the column, the report does not say which. - 1065C
quia→qui— ruled no marker, but the English still renders CC'squia("because"). Recorded as a decision, not an oversight. - 1017B
(AUG.)→(AU.)and the six(CAS.)/(CASS.)sigla — deliberately not applied, so their English edits stay blocked. Consistent with Band B's precedent on residual sigla. - 1055B
VERS. --and 1051B(CASS.— the English keepsVERS. 18.--and(CAS.)because addresses pass through verbatim and note contents verify as a substring of the twin. Recorded, not fixed. - The five
[cj:]the stem test flags in merged Bands A and B (H6).
H11. ⚑ THE MARKER TOTALS, COUNTED FROM THE FILES — AND THEY ARE NOT WHAT §D AND §F2 RECORD
| band | [var:] | [sic:] | [cj:] | [d:] | [ed:] |
|---|---|---|---|---|---|
| A (0000–0038) | 38 | 7 | 2 | 1 | 0 |
| B (0039–0076) | 112 | 56 | 17 | 1 | 0 |
| C (0077–0105) | 33 | 42 | 33 | 2 | 0 |
| work | 183 | 105 | 52 | 4 | 0 |
⛔ §D records Band A at 37 · 6 · 2 · 1 and §F2 records Band B at 112 · 53 · 12 · 2. Neither matches the files today. Nothing was lost: a band's marker total is not stable once a later band's pass runs. Band B's patch pass and this band's both reached columns in earlier bands, and each unlocked or corrected markers there — which is the same mechanism §F2 states for a single band, operating across bands where nobody was watching for it.
⭐ The rule that follows, and it generalises past this work: A PER-BAND MARKER COUNT IS A SNAPSHOT, NOT A FACT ABOUT THE BAND. Quote the count from the files at ship time, never from the band's own merge section — those were true when written and are not true now. §D and §F2 are left as written rather than silently reconciled, because what they record is what that pass found, and that is the thing worth preserving.
Nothing below is abridged: six stint cruces, three English-pass reports, three blind polarity reads, three repair reports. Each stands as written, including the reasoning, the declined lists and the checks.
§I.0077 — file cruces-0077.md, verbatim
# Cruces — 8967 Glossa ordinaria, Liber Psalmorum, chunks 0077–0081 ### Band C, stint 1 · cols 1011B–1025C · Psalms CI–CV · 5,928 Latin words
§0 · SPAN COUNT RECONCILIATION — 357 against 357, exact
| chunk | * in the Latin body | spans |
|---|---|---|
| 0077 | 138 | 69 |
| 0078 | 70 | 35 |
| 0079 | 174 | 87 |
| 0080 | 158 | 79 |
| 0081 | 174 | 87 |
| total | 714 | 357 |
data/briefs/8967-lemmata-0077.txt declares 357 and carries 357 [10xx]-prefixed entries. They agree exactly. First entry ([1011B] VERS. 1.-- Oratio pauperis.) and last ([1025C] in beneplacita populi tui) are the first and last spans of my Latin. The brief is correctly split by chunk; nothing is missing at either end.
Every English chunk was then checked against its twin for column anchors (11/6/12/14/14, verbatim and in order), [n:] count (35/15/51/48/52), italic-span count and question-mark count — all five 4-for-4. verify-english reports no error on 0077–0081 (only the MISSING lines for chunks other stints hold), plate-gate passes with all five of my markers licensed, and my chunks contain zero em-dashes (two were written and both removed).
§1 · ⭐⭐ THE PLATE — EIGHT LEAVES, ALL OF THEM NEW, AND IT DECIDED 28 SITES
raw/scans/pl113/patrologiaecurs04migngoog.pdf, PDF pp. 511–518 = cols 1011–1026, map (col+11)/2 re-verified against the printed corner numbers on every page. 300 dpi full page, then 600 / 900 / 1200 dpi crops. All eight recorded in data/plate-reads.json as depth: full.
⚑ Col 1011/1012 (p. 511) had already been read by an earlier stint; I re-read and fully collated it, and found two sites it had not (deis @1011D, the spurious etc. @1012A). A logged column is not a collated column.
⛔ No column in this range is clipped, inner margin or outer. That is 15 more refutations of the mod-4 rule, and it means not one marker in my range had to be withheld for a second copy.
Result: 28 departures over 15 collated columns, ~1.9 per column — above Band A's 1.5 and Band B's 1.4. Full report appended to data/briefs/8967-PENDING-TEI-PATCHES.md.
### The controls that decided the hard glyphs, named
mugnificatus@1015D — the word is its own control: theaof -catus, four letters later and in the same italic sort, is a closed-bowla; the disputed glyph is a two-stemmed, open-toppedu. Migne prints a non-word inside an italic lemma.qut@1014B —qui audiaton the next line andquison the line above both set a dottedi; the disputed sort carries a crossbar and a curved foot. At.ete.@1023A —vindicantison the line above supplies an open, crossbar-lessc. The glyph here has a crossbar. Ane. Read at 1200 dpi because the claim runs opposite to the briefed italic-e-images-as-chazard, and a hazard briefed in one direction is not evidence in the other.Ft@1021B — the italicEof Et eduxit two lines above has a bottom bar; this sort has none. AnF.par@1014D —benedicere(threee) on the same line,posterison the next.putes@1015D — the closedoof non, same line, three words away.
### ⚠ And the site where the imaging hazard was the RIGHT answer usque ud @1012A. The d of ad has lost its ascender and images as a u. Reported as copy condition, not a reading — §3's line: a compositor's error is Migne's and gets restored, ink damage is this leaf's and does not.
§2 · ⛔⛔ NINE MIGNE DEFECTS I CANNOT FIRE, AND WHY THAT IS THE HEADLINE
deis · qut · par · dilectum · secundam · Deus · mugnificatus · putes · haere ditas · Ft · ete. — eleven sites where Migne's type is defective and our twin has already been repaired, so a [sic:] or [cj:] on any of them would be rejected by the content check, and firing one anyway would accuse Migne at a word the facing column shows him setting correctly.
My fired marker count is therefore 5 [var:], 0 [sic:], 0 [cj:], 0 [d:], 0 [ed:] — and that number means nothing until the patch pass runs. It is Band B's §F2 lesson recurring exactly: one stint there reported zero [sic:] on a range containing twelve. Read this stint's marker count only after the eleven owed markers land.
### ⚑ The rule I applied where the plate and the twin disagree, stated so it can be audited §A6 says the English renders the plate where the leaf has been read. That is unambiguous where the plate's reading renders cleanly. It deadlocks where the plate's reading needs a marker the content check will not yet accept: rendering dilectum as "the beloved" with no [cj:] would put on a reading page an assertion the author did not make, with nothing to warn the reader — the exact failure Pattern 18 exists to prevent. So:
- Plate reading renders cleanly → the English renders the PLATE. 14 sites (##12–25, 26 in the patch report), including the two CC word-division defects, where translating the twin would have produced garble.
- Plate reading needs an unfireable marker → the English renders the TWIN, and the marker is filed as owed with the patch. 9 sites. Every one is named in the patch report with its marker.
This is a departure from a literal reading of §A6 and I am flagging it rather than taking it silently. If Wilson prefers the other branch, the change is nine one-line English edits, all listed.
§3 · MARKERS FIRED — FIVE [var:], EACH ON A COLUMN I COLLATED TODAY
| col | chunk | marker | why it clears the bar |
|---|---|---|---|
| 1016D | 0079 | [var: Vulg. 1 Cor. 12:7 Unicuique autem datur manifestatio Spiritus ad utilitatem…] | Migne prints Unicuique datur Spiritus ad manifestationem, inverting the Clementine's manifestatio Spiritus and replacing ad utilitatem. Different assertion, and the gloss builds on it (gratia ergo et nitor quidam … ut exhilaretur facies in oleo) — brightness/manifestation, not profit. |
| 1018A | 0079 | [var: Vulg. Gen. 3:14 cunctis diebus vitae tuae…] | ⭐ Migne prints Terram comedes omnibus diebus vitae meae. God is speaking to the serpent; meae puts the days in the speaker's mouth instead of the serpent's. Rendered as printed ("all the days of my life") under Pattern 7 — the contradiction is the evidence. |
| 1018C | 0079 | [var: Vulg. Isa. 1:16-18 …discite benefacere … et venite, et arguite me…] | ⭐⭐ Load-bearing. Migne prints et venite et disputemus, and the gloss is built entirely on that word: Disputatio enim hominis ad Deum, est confessio peccatorum … Disputatio ergo tua, sacrificium humilitatis tuae. An English that gave the Clementine's arguite me would take the argument's keyword out of its own proof-text (7a″ exactly). Migne also prints dicite for discite. |
| 1024D | 0081 | [var: Vulg. Ps. 105:38 Et infecta est terra in sanguinibus…] | ⛔ The Clementine reads infecta, "was defiled" — not interfecta. Both our twin and the plate carry an interfic- form, and the gloss is built on it (ipsi enim interficiebant animas suas). The lemma brief's ⚑ MATCHES ONLY ELSEWHERE — 4Rg 11:16 pointed straight at it. |
| 1025B | 0081 | [var: Vulg. Ps. 105:46 in conspectu omnium qui ceperant eos…] | Migne prints no qui, leaving a bare finite clause. The Vulgate sense is confirmed from inside the gloss: Vel, coram daemonibus liberi facti, sub quibus fuere captivi. |
⚑ Every marker was checked against the word it stands on (§F8's misplaced-[sic:] lesson). All five sit at the end of the lemma or clause they annotate.
§4 · THE DIVERGENCE LIST — EVERY SCRIPTURE SPAN IN THE RANGE, INCLUDING THE CLEAN ONES
Collated against sources/vulgate/clementine-flat.txt, cited by book chapter:verse. A list of findings alone cannot be told from a report by an agent that never looked, so the clean ones are here too.
### Agrees with the Clementine, checked and clean
- Is 6:6 @1016A
Volavit ad me unus de seraphim— verbatim. - 1 Cor 1:31 @1016C
qui gloriatur, in Domino glorietur— verbatim. - Ps 33:3 @1019A
In Domino laudabitur anima mea+audiant mansueti et laetentur— both verbatim. - Mt 5:6 @1023B
Beati qui esuriunt et sitiunt justitiam, quoniam ipsi saturabuntur— verbatim. - Ps 101:4 @1011D
Ossa mea sicut cremium aruerunt— verbatim. - Ps 105:2 @1022B
Quis loquetur(twice) · Ps 105:4 @1025CMemento nostri— verbatim. - Ps 105:40 @1024D
Abominatus est· Ps 105:43 @1025ASaepe liberavit,In consilio suo— verbatim. - The Ps CI–CV lemmata proper agree with the Clementine throughout except where noted below. The titulus
Psalmus David.@1015C is confirmed at the plate and is notPsalmus ipsi David(§A4): Migne's two forms stay two forms, and 1010A four columns back prints the other one.
### Diverges, and the divergence was CHECKED and DECLINED — with the reason
- Jo 3:36 @1012B
Ira Dei manet super eos qui non credunt— Clementinemanet super eum(singular, and qui autem incredulus est Filio stands earlier in the verse). Declined: the gloss turns on manet against veniet, which is untouched; number is not the sense here. - Is 53:2 @1012D
Vidimus eum non habentem speciem neque decorem— ClementineNon est species ei, neque decor, et vidimus eum. A recast, not a variant reading: every word is in the verse. Declined. - Mt 28:20 @1013C
Vobiscum sum usque ad consummationem saeculi— Clementine addsomnibus diebus. An abridgment. Declined. - 2 Pt 3:7 @1013D
Terra autem et coeli qui nunc sunt…— ClementineCaeli autem, qui nunc sunt, et terra. Migne reverses the pair and truncates at reservati. ⚑ Worth a second thought because the gloss says Ipsi coeli peribunt, de proximis terrae hoc constat — but the argument needs both members present, which they are. Declined. - 1 Cor 9:19 @1016C
omnium me feci servum— Clementineomnium me servum feci. Word order. Declined. - Dt 8:3 / Mt 4:4 @1018A
quod procedit de ore Dei— Dt 8:3 hasegreditur, Mt 4:4 hasprocedit; Migne cites(Deut. VIII)and quotes Matthew's verb. Declined: no sense change, and a citation-vs-text mismatch of this kind is acitation-corrections.jsonquestion, not a translation one. - 1 Pt 5:8 @1017C
circumit quaerens quem devoret— Clementinecircuit. Orthographic. Declined. - Phil 2:12 @1018B
Cum tremore operamini vestram salutem— Clementinecum metu et tremore vestram salutem operamini. Abridged, and the gloss is entirely about tremor. Declined. - Ex 3:6 @1019C
Ego sum Deus Abraham, Deus Isaac, Deus Jacob— Clementine prefixesDeus patris tui. Abridged to make the point (Ecce tres patriarchae … Ecce triplex auctoritas); restoring the fourth clause would spoil it. Declined. - Jo 8:56 @1019D
Abraham exsultavit, ut videret diem meum, vidit et gavisus est— ClementineAbraham pater vester exsultavit. Abridged. Declined. - 1 Tim 2:5 @1020A
unus enim mediator Christus— Clementineunus et mediator Dei et hominum homo Christus Jesus. Abridged. Declined. - Ps 104:16 @1020A
Ita vocavit, et omne firmamentum panis contritum, cited(Gen. XXXVII)— the words are the psalm's own v. 16 (Et vocavit famem super terram, et omne firmamentum panis contrivit), withItaforEtand the participlecontritumfor the finitecontrivit. ⚑ Declined for the[var:], reported for the record: Gen. XXXVII is where Joseph is sold, so Migne's locator points at the narrative rather than at the words, which is his ordinary practice in this recension. - Mt 6:33 @1020A
primum quaerite regnum Dei, et omnia adjicientur— Clementine addset justitiam ejusandvobis. Abridged. Declined. - Ps 104:30 @1021A
et dedit terra eorum ranas— ClementineEdidit terra eorum ranas, and Migne's own lemma eight lines above printsEdidit terra.⚑ Raised precisely because the two forms stand in one column; declined because both construe and give the same English, and because dedit for edidit is the shape a patch must not guess at. - Mt 6:25 @1023B
Nonne anima est plus quam esca?— ClementineNonne anima plus est quam esca. Word order. Declined. - Ex 32:32 @1023D
Si non dimittis illis, dele me de libro tuo— Clementineaut si non facis, dele me de libro tuo quem scripsisti. A conflation of vv. 31–32, and the gloss argues from the intercession, not the wording. Declined. - Ps 105:25 @1024A
In tabernaculis ejus— Clementinein tabernaculis suis. Declined: no sense change (rendered "In his tents" as printed), though it is a real divergence and is logged. - Ps 105:47 @1025B
Salvos fac nos— ClementineSalvos nos fac. Word order. Declined. - Ps 105:4 @1025C
in beneplacita populi tui— Clementinein beneplacito. ⭐ Migne's plural is confirmed at the plate, so it is his and not CC's; rendered "in the good pleasures of thy people". Declined for the marker: the sense of the clause is untouched. - Ps 103:3 @1016A
Quis tegis.— ⛔ the plate printsQuis, our twinQui, and the ClementineQui tegis aquis superiora ejus. Migne's own gloss two lines below writesVel qui tegis aquis. A[var:]is owed here and is unfireable until the patch lands, because our Latin column would showQuiand contradict the note. Filed, not fired. - Ps 101:5 @1011D
Percussus sum ut fenum— Clementineut foenum. Orthographic. Declined. Diligas Deum et proximum@1022A — not a verse; a summary of the two commandments in Migne's own voice. No collation possible, no marker.
§5 · usque ad — THE etc. SPLICE TEST, COUNTED
59 occurrences of usque ad / ad usque in my Latin. 57 formula, 2 not. (A 60th hit, usque in aeternum @1024B, is not in the class at all.)
- 57 formula → "as far as." Each follows an
etc.and names where the abridged father resumes. ⚑ Two of them are separated from theiretc.by a column anchor (etc., [1016D] usque adandetc., [1017B] usque ad). A naive regex scores both as non-formula. Theetc.test is about the token before, not the character before. - 2 non-formula, both at 1013C and both in one sentence: 1.
Vobiscum sum usque ad consummationem saeculi— Mt 28:20 itself, rendered "unto the consummation of the world", matching §A7's repair of the Mic 4:10 site at 0984C and 0073's rendering. This is col 0953C's problem recurring: a formula and a quotation of the same two words a few lines apart. 2.Totum tempus usque ad finem— ordinary Latin, rendered "unto the end." - ⭐ One typographic finding the counter would have missed: at 1015A Migne prints the formula REVERSED,
ad usque, and CC normalized it tousque ad. It follows anetc.and names the resumption point, so it is the formula and is rendered "as far as"; the reversal is filed as a patch. If the work-wide count of 777 was taken from our TEI, it is short by however manyad usqueMigne set and CC turned round. Worth one grep before the count is quoted again.
§6 · THE RULED AXES — WHAT MY RANGE DID WITH EACH
| axis | my range |
|---|---|
gentes family | Gentiles where the Judaei/gentes opposition is explicit — @1019A ibi ex gentibus sumpturus Ecclesiam, and @1025B where the gloss says de Judaeis fuerunt … id est gentium, ut eos gentes mirarentur in one sentence. nations where the sense is generic — @1024C Gentes. Septem illos populos (the seven Canaanite peoples), @1024C gentium conformitate, @1025C de omnibus gentibus congregetur and Et congrega nos de nationibus. natio → nation, always. Singular gens of a people → nation: @1019A in una gente secundum carnem … sed non alii genti. |
mysterium / sacramentum | sacramentum once (@1014C in baptismi sacramento → sacrament); mysterium does not occur. The adverb mystice @1022A → "mystically". 1:1 held. |
daemonium / diabolus | demon for daemones @1017B, daemoniorum/daemonia @1017C, daemonibus @1024B, daemonibus @1025B. devil for diaboli @1018A, @1023A. Satan for Satanae @1017D. No bleed in either direction. |
turba / multitudo | Neither word occurs in my range. Reporting the absence rather than a zero that could be read as drift (Band A's instrument check). |
usque ad | 57 formula / 2 not — §5. |
| archaism | -eth/saith used only inside italic scripture: abideth @1012B, goeth about @1017C, proceedeth @1018A, glorieth @1016C, saith @1018C, doeth @1014D. All six are inside an italic span. Gloss-voice verbs are plain (says, adds, admonishes). No guillemets occur in my range, so the second membership test had nothing to catch here. |
sedes | Once, @1015B Dominus in coelo paravit sedem suam → "his seat", per §A5. Distinct from throno @1014C (cum rex sederit in throno → "upon his throne"), which is a different Latin word and keeps "throne". |
Dominus virtutum | Does not occur. |
In finem · Diapsalma · Canticum graduum | None of the three occurs in my range. The Ps CI–CV tituli are Oratio pauperis, Benedic anima, Psalmus David and Alleluia; the gradual psalms begin later in the band. Recorded so a sweep does not read the absence as an omission. |
| heads | PSALMUS CI.–PSALMUS CV. → PSALM CI.–PSALM CV. All five numerals left Roman, per §A3. |
(ID.) / (Ibid.) | Never expanded. 201 notes pass through verbatim across the five chunks, including [n: (Id. )] @1021B with Migne's own spacing and [n: (HIER., CASS.)] @1017A. |
§7 · CRUCES — RENDERED LITERALLY, WITH THE DIFFICULTY NAMED
Timebat Israel, ne reliquias eorum consumeret@1021C. ⛔ The subject is Egypt, not Israel, and Israel is the OBJECT of timebat. The lemma is Ps 104:38, whose first half isLaetata est Aegyptus in profectione eorum, and reliquias eorum must name someone other than the fearer. Rendered "Egypt feared Israel, lest he should consume what was left of them." ⚑ Flagged loudly because "Israel feared" parses, reads perfectly, and is the reading a blind English pass would never question — §F8's exact profile.Laus Dei, qui suos vindicavit qualitas poenae facta indicat@1023B. qualitas … indicat is the subject and verb; Laus Dei is the object, fronted. Rendered "The quality of the punishment inflicted declares the praise of God, who has avenged his own." The fronting is why this one is easy to read backwards.Causa est, ne Israel pro debito periret Testamentum Novum@1025A. Testamentum Novum is the predicate of Causa est, with the ne-clause between. Rendered "The cause that Israel did not perish for its debt is the New Testament." The ne is carried.Quia mutavit, quod perdituros eos videbatur@1025A. ⛔ Does not construe as printed — perdituros is accusative plural masculine with nothing to govern it. Rendered as closely as the words allow, "Because he changed what seemed about to destroy them," and the difficulty is recorded rather than repaired. No emendation offered: this is a place where a conjecture would be invention.Fortes, quorum frixorium sunt, qui scandalizantur@1011D. Rendered literally, "The strong, whose frying-pan they are, who are scandalized." Who is whose frying-pan is left where Migne leaves it; the splice cuts Augustine off before he says.Dux est eorum@1017A — the whole gloss is about the gender ofeorum(quod tamen Latine dici non potest, quia cedri feminini generis sunt). English carries no gender on "their", so the point would vanish; I rendered "Is the leader of them, that is, of the sparrows, or of the cedars, which nevertheless cannot be said in Latin, because cedars are of the feminine gender" — keeping the explanation in the clear rather than adding a marker. This is Pattern 9's gender case where the Latin itself supplies the exponent.unde meruit inter alias regni privilegium vel principatum obtinere@1022D. The subject is unexpressed and feminine (inter alias): the tribe. Rendered "whence it deserved to obtain among the others the privilege or the princedom of the kingdom" — "it" for the tribe, and no name supplied, because the splice removed the sentence that named it.Magna oblivio quidem in memoria, si non liberatio@1023D. Rendered "Great forgetfulness indeed in the memory, if not the deliverance." The negative is carried and the ellipsis left open; smoothing it would decide what the Latin declines to say.Efflorebit … id est deflorebit. Et sic est intentivum, vel privativum@1015B. The gloss is about the force of the prefix. Rendered "shall flourish forth … shall shed his flower … it is either intensive or privative", keeping both members so the grammatical point survives.
### Unexpressed subjects supplied, each with its authority
- @1021C "Egypt feared" — Ps 104:38's own first half (see crux 1). The only supplied proper name in the range.
- @1014C "He bestowed when he made me, he requites when he justifies" — God, from retribuit ei Deus in the previous sentence. ⚑ Note that Tribuit homo two clauses earlier has a different subject, printed; the English keeps them apart.
- @1022D "whence it deserved" — the tribe (crux 7); deliberately not "he".
- @1024B "he delivered him whose destruction was to be the greater" — the subject is God, from the (AUG.) gloss it opens; no name supplied.
- Nowhere did I supply a possessive or a completion the Latin does not print. Checked specifically against §F8's fourteen:
Benedic, anima.@1014B stays "Bless, O soul" (not "my soul"),Potum.@1012B stays "Drink" (not "my drink"),Mei.@1012A stays "My",Cinerem.stays "Ashes",In gloria.stays "In glory",Christos,@1019D stays "The anointed" (not "my anointed"),Possessione.@1017D stays "With possession" (not "thy possession"),Laudamini in nomine@1019A stays "in the name" (not "in his holy name"),filii servorum tuorum habitabunt@1014A stays "shall dwell" (not "shall dwell there"), andEt non erat infirmus@1021B stays "And there was no one weak" (not "no one weak among their tribes").
§8 · CANDIDATES RAISED AND REJECTED — the instrument, not the leftovers
[sic: deis]@1011D and the other ten of §2 — the reading is Migne's and confirmed, but the marker content must be verbatim in the twin and is not. Filed as owed, not fired.[sic:]onVERT. 41.@1025A,VERS 28.@1020D,VERS, 32.@1021A — declined. Pattern 9 normalizes a section label in English precisely because the facing Latin preserves the misprint. This is §F8's "right about the fact, wrong about the rule" case; the observation goes in the patch report, the English printsVERS.[sic:]oninterfectus@1024D — declined. A gender/number mismatch with no English exponent (Pattern 12(2) does not reach it, Pattern 9 governs). The[var:]against the Clementine'sinfectais the honest marker and is fired instead.[d:]onAlleluia. Alleluia.@1022A — declined, and it is the trap in this range. Migne prints the word twice adjacently, which is Pattern 11's literal shape; but the entire gloss that follows exists to argue whether there should be one or two (Quidam dicunt, unum alleluia ad finem superioris psalmi pertinere, alterum esse sequentis). Marking one copy as an intrusion would delete the thing the paragraph is about.[d:]onamen amen@1022A — declined for the same reason: Migne is quoting the Lord's doubling and says so (pro majore certitudine rei).[d:]onConcupierunt concupiscentiam@1023A andId est inter medium, etc.@1016B — declined. The first is the Hebraism the gloss then explains (Nimietas desiderii, geminatione verbi ostenditur); the second is a lemma re-quoted, eight words from its first appearance and in a different clause —[d:]marks type printed twice adjacently, and §F8 withdrew[d: videantur, et]for exactly this.[cj:]ondeditforEdidit@1021A — declined. Both construe, both give the same English, and a patch must not guess a letter (§F7'sNafrubimusdiscipline).[var:]on the fifteen abridged or reordered quotations in §4 — declined individually, each with its reason. Abridgment is this recension's method, not a variant reading.- A patch on
Quas consequentur.@1014D (Migne's mark reads as a point, the next word is lowercase) — declined: it is ambiguous between a point and a worn comma, and a patch must not guess a mark any more than a letter. [sic:]on the bracket-shaped marks at 1019A and 1019C — declined as ink on this leaf. ⚑ Distinguished from the[psalmorum/[ostenditstray-sort class reported from cols 1039–1041: those are a repeating sort, these two are isolated and shapeless.- A
[sic:]or patch onusque ud@1012A — declined; broken ascender, copy condition. - Column-band arithmetic — not reported. Migne's A/B/C/D marks sit in the central gutter and serve both columns at the same height; nothing in my range breaks mid-word across an anchor.
§9 · SECTIONS READ CLEAN, AND HOW
- Ps CII in full (0078, cols 1014B–1015C) — collated at the plate line by line. Two departures found (
qut,par), both filed; the remaining 33 spans and all 15 notes agree with the leaf. - Cols 1017A–1018C (the second half of 0079) — the leanest page in the range: one departure in two full columns (the siglum
(AU.)@1017B). Named because a clean page is evidence too. - 1025A
afflictis iterum miseretur— raised as a possiblemiserereturat 300 dpi and checked at 600: the plate agrees with our twin. A checked negative, recorded per the GLOSSA brief's instruction. - Negation sweep (7a, tests 2 and 2a). Every
non/nec/nisi/nullus/nihil/nunquamin the five chunks was located, its host word named, and the English negative checked to be on that host. The population test 2a names fired at four sites —non solum … sed usque in aeternum@1024B,nulli Graecorum codices … habeant@1022B,non ut … sed ut@1021D (twice), andsed non sunt nisi dimidii, si non addantur aeterni@1013C — and each was proved from the correlative rather than from what read well. ⚑nulli … codicesis the one where English word order most wanted to move the negative onto the verb; it stays on the quantifier: "no codices of the Greeks have". - English apposition does not inherit a negative across a comma (§F8): checked at
Non ait, veniet; sed manet@1012B,Non ait peccantes … sed peccatores@1023C,Non ait in similitudinem, sed in similitudine@1023C andnon vetat laudari, si boni; si non, nisi in Domino@1019A. Each negative is stated twice in the English where the Latin marks it once. - Question marks: 1/1, 1/1, 5/5, 1/1, 4/4 against the twins. No indirect question needed Pattern 8b recasting in this range.
§10 · HANDOFF
- The patch queue owes eleven markers, not zero. They are listed by column in the patch report with the exact marker text. Do not read this stint's
0 [sic:] / 0 [cj:]as a clean range. VERS. 15.@1016C is the one to land first. My English prints Migne's address and the Latin twin still prints CC'sVERS. 13., so the two columns disagree visibly until the patch runs. It is deliberate (§A6) and it is flagged in three places.- One English edit is owed with the patch and is not a marker:
0079.md, the note at 1017B,[n: (AUG.)]→[n: (AU.)]. It cannot be made first, because note contents are checked as a substring of the Latin twin. ad usque@1015A may not be unique. If the work-wideusque adcensus (777 / 733 / 44) was taken from our TEI rather than from the plate, it silently counts CC's normalizations. One grep of the plate text layer forad usquewould settle it.- Open for a ruling, not decided by me: the §2 rule (twin where the plate needs an unfireable marker). Nine sites turn on it, all listed, each a one-line edit either way.
- Nothing was committed, deployed or re-chunked.
data/plate-reads.jsongained eight entries;data/briefs/8967-PENDING-TEI-PATCHES.mdgained one section.
§I.0082 — file cruces-0082.md, verbatim
# Cruces — 8967 Glossa ordinaria, Liber Psalmorum, chunks 0082–0086 ### cols 1025C–1039B · Psalms CVI–CXVI · BAND C
§0 · SPAN COUNT RECONCILIATION — 389 = 389, exact
| chunk | italic spans in my Latin |
|---|---|
| 0082 | 71 |
| 0083 | 96 |
| 0084 | 75 |
| 0085 | 83 |
| 0086 | 64 |
| total | 389 |
data/briefs/8967-lemmata-0082.txt declares 389 and carries 389 addressed lines. Counted with a newline-tolerant \[^]+\ sweep over the body (frontmatter excluded), so a span broken across a line — and the one broken across a column anchor, usque [1033A] ad* — is counted once. No mis-split. Band B went eight for eight; this is nine.
⚑ One deliberate span-structure divergence in the ENGLISH, and it is not a count error: at 1026D the plate carries a roman subdens, between two italic runs that CC merged into one, so my English has one span more than the twin at that site. It is filed as patch #14. verify-english does not compare span counts, so this note is the only record of it.
§1 · MARKERS FIRED — two, both on col 1036D, both plate-gated
[var: Vulg. Ps 48:19 confitebitur tibi, "he will praise thee," in the third person, which is what the gloss's argument requires]— 0086.md, col 1036D. Migne printsConfitebor tibi cum benefeceris ei [n: (Psal. XLVIII)], the FIRST person. The Clementine hasconfitebitur. The sense turns on it and the gloss is what turns: the proof-text is adduced for the proposition Diligitur Deus et ab infidelibus quia bona dat — that God is loved even by unbelievers because he gives good things. Third person, the verse proves it (he will praise thee when thou dost well to him); first person, it proves nothing about anyone else. Rendered as Migne prints it, per Pattern 14, with the received reading beside it.
[cj: eum; read cum, "when"]— 0086.md, col 1036D.Diligitur perfecte, eum animus adversis non movetur, sed spe accenditur.The plate was read at 900 dpi and confirmseum, exactly as our twin has it — so this is Migne's, not CC's, and the printed word is present in the twin, which is what makes the marker legal. ⚑ A named departure from Pattern 18's canonical shape. The pattern says Migne's word keeps its English and the conjecture stands beside it; here the accusativeeumhas no English in this clause at all (Diligitur … eum animus … non moveturcannot be construed), so the marker stands beside the conjecture's English rather than Migne's. Recorded because the alternative was a silent repair, which is worse.
No [sic:] was fired in this range. Ten are owed and cannot be written yet — see §3.
§2 · THE PLATE — eight leaves, fifteen columns, every corner number checked
raw/scans/pl113/patrologiaecurs04migngoog.pdf, page map (col + 11) / 2, calibrated leaf by leaf against the printed corner numbers before anything was read off the page. Recorded as eight full entries in data/plate-reads.json.
| PDF page | cols | running head | condition |
|---|---|---|---|
| 518 | 1025 / 1026 | GLOSSA ORDINARIA. — LIB. PSALM. | clean |
| 519 | 1027 / 1028 | WALAFRIDI STRABI FULD. MON. OPP. | clean |
| 520 | 1029 / 1030 | GLOSSA ORDINARIA. — | clean |
| 521 | 1031 / 1032 | WALAFRIDI STRABI FULD. MON. O… | clean |
| 522 | 1033 / 1034 | GLOSSA ORDINARIA. — | clean; PATROL. CXIII. signature at the foot |
| 523 | 1035 / 1036 | WALAFRIDI STRABI FULD. MON. OP… | clean |
| 524 | 1037 / 1038 | GLOSSA ORDINARIA. — LIB. PSA… | ⛔ col 1037 CLIPPED, ~7–9 chars/line at the inner margin |
| 525 | 1039 / 1040 | WALAFRIDI STRABI FULD. MON. | clean |
Zero foot-of-page conjecture apparatus on any of the eight leaves, in either layer.
⛔ Col 1037 is a new entry for the known-clipped list (841, 849, 893, 897, 1045, 1037). And it refutes the withdrawn congruence rule once more: 1037 ≡ 1 (mod 4) and is clipped, 1033 ≡ 1 (mod 4) and is clean, on facing leaves of the same gathering. The clip cost one finding and saved one false one — see the dilector entry in §5.
### What the plate did that the Latin alone could not have done
- ⭐ 1035A. The plate reversed a reading, not merely corrected one. Our twin prints
Barbaro. Barbaro lingua est, quae Deum non laudat— the gloss agreeing with its own lemma, and ungrammatical. Migne setsBarbara lingua est: a definition, "that tongue is barbarous which praises not God." CC had assimilated the first word of the gloss to the italic lemma standing immediately before it. From the Latin alone this reads as Migne's slip and would have taken a marker. The English follows the plate. - ⭐ 1027B.
honorumforbonorum, and the control was in the word two lines above. The h/b hazard fires in both directions, so the reading rests oninhabitabantin the preceding sentence, which sets anhand twob's in one word: the disputed glyph is an open arch with no bowl, anh. Migne prints the non-word. - ⭐ 1038D. A same-column control settled a lemma.
Vota mea reddum.at the VERS. 18, 19 address, with the correctVota mea reddam.set three lines below in the same column. Thea's ofVota,meaandlaudison the same line are closed-bowl; the disputed letter is not. - ⭐ 1039A.
Sed ue quis putet, and the turned-sort excuse does not apply. The glyph is a clean bottom-archeduagainst thenofnominaton the line below. Per the band brief's own rule, anncannot become that by failing to ink. - ⚑ 1032D. The plate CONFIRMED our TEI where the TEI looked wrong.
Timor Domini.stands there as a lemma but is set ROMAN, not italic, in a column where every other lemma is italic. Our twin has it roman. Migne really does set it roman, so this is his inconsistency, not CC's, and it is not a departure. The same at 1036C forSicut misit me Pater, et ego mittam vos.
§3 · THE DIVERGENCE LIST — every CC departure, and the ten markers I could not fire
24 departures over 15 columns, ≈1.6 per column, which is the rate the band brief predicts. The full table with columns and leaves is appended to data/briefs/8967-PENDING-TEI-PATCHES.md; this section records only what bears on the English.
### The ten owed markers — and why not one of them is on the page [sic:] content is checked as a substring of the Latin twin, and [cj:] requires the printed word to be present in it. Every one of these markers is unreachable until the patch lands, and per §3 of the band brief the honest form is to say so rather than to fire something else:
| col | plate | owed |
|---|---|---|
| 1027B | honorum | [sic: honorum] |
| 1029A | posueruent | [sic: posueruent] |
| 1030C | quiquid | [sic: quiquid] |
| 1032B | glorificatur | [cj: glorificatur; read glorificatus] |
| 1033A | liberavi | [sic: liberavi] |
| 1034B | laudamus sit | [cj: laudamus; read laudandus] |
| 1034B | Ili / domo ejus | [sic: Ili] and [cj: domo; read dono] |
| 1037D | intra | [cj: intra; read intrat] |
| 1038D | reddum | [sic: reddum] |
| 1039A | ue / Psalmus / recipi | [sic: ue], [cj: Psalmus], [cj: recipi] |
At every one of these sites the English renders the reading our TWIN carries, which is also the correct Latin, and the site is filed with the English edit that is owed once the Latin moves. That is deliberate: an English that had already moved to Migne's defective reading, with no marker available to say so, would be an unannounced defect on the page.
### Where the English DOES follow the plate (§A6 licence, leaf read, patch filed) 1026D (subdens, restored, , etc. dropped) · 1027B (sed dropped) · 1029A (quod est Deus judex facit) · 1029B (sub dropped; labores) · 1031B (in saeculum saeculi) · 1035A (Barbara lingua est) · 1028C, 1030C (Migne's full stops where CC set commas) · 1038C (Ego servus tuus Filius ancillae as one clause).
### ⛔⛔ The one OPEN site — 1029B, and it is a class, not a case Our twin: Quia non thesaurizant in coelo. The plate: Quia thesaurizant in coelo. Mid-line, unclipped, 900 dpi, unambiguous. The gloss is on the curse of Ps 108:11 and the negative is the whole argument. No marker class reaches an omission: [sic:] may wrap only printed type, [cj:] needs a printed word to gloss, [ed:] confesses our loss and not Migne's. So the choice was between an un-markable reversal on the page and a declared repair. I took the declared repair: the English at 0083.md carries the negative, and the site is filed for Wilson with the class stated. This is the same shape as §F8's two left-open sites, and it is left open in the same way.
§4 · SCRIPTURE — every quotation in the range, the clean ones included
Fired: Ps 48:19 (see §1). Declined, with the reason, every one of them:
| site | Migne | Clementine | why declined |
|---|---|---|---|
| 1031C | Phil 2:9-11 Propter hoc exaltavit illum, et dedit Deus illi nomen … est in gloria Dei Patris | Propter quod et Deus exaltavit illum, et donavit illi nomen … in gloria est Dei Patris | three real differences, no change of sense: dedit/donavit, the position of Deus, and est moved. Pattern 14's bar is sense, not difference. |
| 1034A | 1 Cor 14:20 …ut mentibus perfecti sitis | sensibus autem perfecti estote | a purpose clause for an imperative, and mentibus for sensibus. The gloss uses it only to gloss Pueri as "children in malice, not in sense," which both forms carry. Declined — but it is the closest call in the range. |
| 1035D | 2 Cor 5:19 mundum sibi reconcilians | mundum reconcilians sibi | word order only |
| 1036C | Jn 20:21 et ego mittam vos | et ego mitto vos | future for present; and Migne's citation (Joan. VI) is wrong (the verse is Jn 20:21). ⛔ Not corrected — Pattern: do not expand or repair Migne's addresses. |
| 1036D | Rom 10:14 Quomodo invocabunt | Quomodo ergo invocabunt | one dropped particle |
| 1036D | 2 Cor 6:2 Ecce nunc tempus acceptabile | identical | clean |
| 1037B | Mt 8:22 Dimitte mortuos sepelire mortuos suos | identical | clean |
| 1037B | Ps 113:25 Non mortui laudabunt te, Domine | identical | clean text; Migne's address (Psal. CIII) is wrong (it is Ps 113). Not corrected. |
| 1038A | Mt 25:21 Euge, serve bone et fidelis, intra in gaudium Domini tui | the Vulgate has quia super pauca fuisti fidelis… between | an abridgment, not a divergence |
| 1038B | 1 Cor 10:13 Fidelis Deus, qui non patitur | Fidelis autem Deus est, qui non patietur | abridged opening + present for future |
| 1033D | Wis 5:8 Quid nobis profuit superbia et divitiarum jactantia? | Quid nobis profuit superbia? aut divitiarum jactantia quid contulit nobis? | Migne compresses two clauses into one; the sinner's cry is unchanged |
| 1035C | Jn 7:37 Si quis sitit, veniat ad me et bibat | identical | clean (the plate, unlike our twin, has no comma before et bibat) |
| 1035D | Ps 113:11 Omnia quaecunque voluit fecit | quaecumque | orthography |
| 1033A | Wis 9:15 terrena inhabitatio deprimit sensum multa cogitantem | deprimit terrena inhabitatio sensum | word order |
| 1027C | 1 Cor 10:12 Qui stat, videat ne cadat | qui se existimat stare, videat ne cadat | abridged |
| 1027A | Ps 106:34 In salsugine | in salsuginem | one letter, no exponent in English; §C1 excludes the class |
| 1027B | Ps 106:34 A malitia habitantium | inhabitantium | one prefix, same sense |
| 1030D | Lk 24:47 et remissio peccatorum per omnes gentes | et remissionem peccatorum in omnes gentes | inside an abridgment splice |
| 1030A | Jn 7:39 quia Jesus nondum fuit glorificatus | nondum erat glorificatus | inside an abridgment splice |
| 1033A | Ps 111:2 Erit potens in terra | Potens in terra erit semen ejus | word order in a stump |
### ⚑ One internal control worth recording, at 1028C Migne's lemma prints Quis deducit me in civitatem munitam — present tense — and his own gloss four lines below quotes it back as singulariter dicendo, deducet me, future, which is the Clementine's reading. The English keeps both as printed ("Who bringeth me…" then "he will bring me"), because smoothing either would erase Migne's own inconsistency. Declined as a [var:]: it is a one-letter difference and the gloss does not argue from the tense.
§5 · CANDIDATES REJECTED — the instrument, not the leftovers
Six candidates that read as confident Migne defects from the Latin alone, and the plate or a control withdrew every one:
de hærcticis@1027B,incipicntibus@1030D,saccrdos@1031A — the italic/romane→chazard, three times in one stint. Our TEI is right at all three. Band B withdrew eleven of these; briefing works.nt nnnquam moveatur@1039B — reads as a spectacular Migne failure. It is one over-inked line whoseubowls have filled;quiaon the same line prints a cleanu. Copy condition.eyoforego@1037C, italic, inO Domine, quia ego,. The lower bowl of the italicghas not closed. ⛔ Declined because the control is missing, not because the glyph looked innocent: there is no italicgon that line or the two around it, and a worn descender is ink, not a wrong sort. Recorded here so a later reader does not file it as new.dilector@1037A missing from the plate — our twin has it, and the plate's line appears to stop atostiosus. ⛔ Not filed as a CC insertion. Col 1037 is clipped ~7–9 characters at the head of each line anddilector.sits exactly there. A clipped column cannot testify to an absence — this is the one place in the range where the clipping rule earned its keep.tempcre@1030A,(Aus.)@1030A,(Cass )@1031C — damaged sorts on those leaves.- The bracket-shaped sort before
[psalmorum@1039A — this is the already-reported stray-sort class from cols 1039–1041, and I add only a second sighting, not a finding.
Two markers declined on the RULE, not on the fact:
VERS. 2. — 2. —@1030D, the verse number set twice adjacently. It is a genuine Migne dittography and it is patchable; no[d:]is owed in the English. Pattern 9 exempts section labels, and §5 of the band brief declinedPSLMUSon exactly this ground — normalizing is right because the facing Latin will preserve the misprint once the patch lands.Cass.)with no opening parenthesis @1029D. Note contents are checked against the twin, so the English cannot move; and a(that never inked is a copy-condition question, not a reading.
One patch declined for the same reason a marker would be: ostios[u|n]s @1037A. The intrusive s is certain at 1200 dpi; the penultimate letter will not settle as u or n, and the same-line controls (non, quod) give one of each. Per the Nafrubimus @0962B precedent, a patch must not guess a letter. Left open, needs a second copy.
§6 · THE RULED AXES, measured over my own five chunks
| axis | count in my Latin | what I did |
|---|---|---|
usque ad | 61 occurrences (62 raw hits, one of them inside utriusque @1035B) | 61 formula, 0 non-formula. Every one follows an etc. and names the resumption point, so §A7's splice test passes them all. All 61 → "as far as"; zero "down to", and the English count reconciles per chunk (15 / 20 / 11 / 11 / 4), the 0084 pair being the anchor-split as far [1033A] as. |
gentes family | 20 (gentes 8, gentium 7, gentibus 3, gentilem 1, Gentiles 1) | Gentiles where the contrast is with the Jews (populus gentium @1029B, regnat in gentibus @1034B, Ecclesiam gentilem @1034C, simulacra gentium @1035D–1036A, Idumeae gentes @1028C); nations where the reference is the whole world without that contrast (Judicabit in nationibus @1031B, per omnes gentes in Lk 24:47 @1030D, Laudate Dominum, omnes gentes @1039A/B). Decided per site, as the axis intends. |
mysterium / sacramentum | mysterium 1, sacramentum 0 | Haec tanta mysteria @1027C → "these mysteries". 1:1 preserved trivially. |
daemonium / diabolus | daemonium 0, diabolus 5 | devil ×5, no bleed. |
turba / multitudo | 0 / 0 | ⚑ The instrument was checked, not just run: this is a Psalter and the Gospel crowds are simply absent — exactly Band A's finding, not evidence of drift. |
Canticum graduum / gradus | 0 / 0 | ⭐ The gradual psalms are NOT in this stint's range. My span is Psalms CVI–CXVI; Canticum graduum begins at Ps CXIX, which falls in chunks 0087+. The ruling ("A canticle of degrees" / "degree") is untouched by this range and remains untested against a plate by me. The stints holding 0087–0096 own it. |
In finem | 1 (@1028C, In finem, Psalmus.) | → "Unto the end, a psalm." Not "for the choirmaster." |
Diapsalma | 0 | not engaged in this range |
Psalmus David / Psalmus ipsi David | Psalmus David 1 (@1030C), ipsi David 0 | → "A psalm of David.", kept distinct from 0076's "A psalm for David himself." |
Dominus virtutum / sedes | 0 / 0 | not engaged |
gens singular, non-ethnic | 0 | not engaged; nothing to flag for Wilson |
| archaisms | 0 saith, 0 doth, 0 -eth outside quoted scripture | checked against BOTH memberships (italic lemmata and « guillemets »); this range carries no guillemets at all |
| em-dashes | 0 | none written |
§7 · CRUCES — rendered literally, difficulty named
- @1029A
quod est bonum pro malo quod est Deus judex facit(plate; CC smooths it toquod et Deus judex facit). Two finite verbs, no conjunction. Rendered on the reading that the secondquod estis the explanatory formula: "which is good for evil, which is, God the judge does." The strain is Migne's and CC erased it; the English follows the plate and says so here. - @1029B
Viduae, amisso regno— the Clementine hasvidua. Rendered "Widows,", the printed plural, rather than repairing it to agree withUxor, id est plebstwo words earlier. No marker: the plate was read and printsViduæ,, so it is Migne's, and a concord mismatch with no English exponent takes no marker (Pattern 9,res aliena@0971D). - @1029B
Mendicent, regibus gentium(plate; CC insertssub). Rendered as a bare dative, "of the kings of the Gentiles," rather than "under," which is what CC's preposition would give. - @1029C
quia cum essent rami naturales, facti sunt—facti sunthas no complement. Rendered "because, though they were natural branches, so they became," with nothing supplied. - @1029D
Nullis enim operum etc.— a genitive with no governing noun. Rendered "For by no works, etc.", the ellipsis carried. - @1030B
Una est maledictio malorum Deus, cum benedicit, facit quod dicit—Deusstands between two clauses and belongs to neither cleanly. Rendered as printed: "One is the cursing of the wicked; God, when he blesses, does what he says." The plate was read and reads exactly this; no repair, no marker. - @1033C
Vel, si quis mala minatur, non timet, sed paratum— an accusative where a nominative is wanted. Rendered "but is ready," and named here. - @1038A
sed virtus Dei est, si non credit— obscure, and the twin and the plate agree. Rendered as printed: "but it is the power of God, if he does not believe." Not conjectured. - @1038C
Vel ut ancilla, non sibi, sed Domino— the verb is elided and is supplied from the following clause (parturiam): "as a handmaid brings forth not for herself, but for her lord." The supplied word is the sentence's own, three words later, and nothing else is added.
### Copulas and pronouns supplied, each one named
- @1030A
Manus tua haec.→ "This is thy hand." The copula is supplied because an English clause cannot stand without a verb; nothing else is added, and the gloss's own next words (Christus haec manus) confirm the predication. - @1030A
viderunt pendere in cruce→ "they saw him hanging on the cross." The object is elided in the Latin; the referent is Christ and is not in doubt in the sentence. - @1030A
Moverunt capita.→ "They moved their heads." English requires a possessive with a plural body-part; ⚑ the Clementine'scapita suawould be "their own," and that is precisely the word I have NOT imported.
### ⛔ Stumps rendered SHORT — the fourteen-site failure profile of Band B, checked by name Migne prints these lemmata clipped, and the English is clipped with them. No possessive, subject or object has been completed from the Vulgate at any of them:
Et deduxit. → "And he led." (not "led them") · Esurientem. → "Him that is hungry." (no "soul") · Deus laudem. @1028D → "O God, praise." (not "my praise") · Mala adversus animam. @1029D → "Evils against the soul." (not "my soul") · Quia egenus et pauper. @1029D → "Because needy and poor." (no "I am") · Dominus Domino. @1030C → "The Lord to the Lord." (⭐ not "to MY Lord" — Ps 109:1 prints Domino meo and Migne does not) · Virgam virtutis. @1030D → "The rod of power." (not "thy power") · Virtutem operum. @1032B → "The power of the works." (not "his works") · Fidelia omnia mandata. @1032C → "All the commandments are faithful." (not "his commandments") · In mandatis. @1033A → "In the commandments." · Super filios. @1036B → "Upon the children." (not "your children") · Ubi est Deus. @1035D → "Where is God." (not "their God") · De morte oculos. @1037B → "From death, the eyes." (not "mine eyes" — this is the exact shape of Band B's Anticipaverunt vigilias) · Filius ancillae. @1038C → "The son of the handmaid." (not "thy handmaid") · Dies pauci. @1029A → "Few days." · Filii orphani: @1029B → "Children fatherless:" · Et non sit illi, @1029B → "And let there not be for him,"
⚑ Transferatur, @1029B was the hardest of them: a third-singular passive subjunctive with no subject. Rendered "Let it be transferred," — neutral — rather than "let him be removed," which would invent a person the gloss (ut in captivitate factum est) does not name.
### Negation scope — where Latin marks it once and English must mark it twice
- @1029D
qui dicunt non esse ex Patre, vel minorem Patre→ "who say that he is not of the Father, or that he is less than the Father." Thenongoverns the first limb only; English apposition would have carried it into the second and made the gloss say the opposite about the Arian charge. Marked twice deliberately. - @1033B
et credunt promittenti, non credunt perisse opera sua→ "and who believe him when he promises, and who believe not that their works have perished." Two verbs, opposite polarity, three words apart. Both marked. - @1035C/1036A
inania simulacra probat— note that Migne writesprobathere andreprobateight lines above at 1034D. Both are his; both rendered as printed ("proves the idols empty" / "reproves the empty idols").
### A word order that is Migne's, not a slip @1035A Vidit mare, and @1035B Mare vidit. — Migne sets the same clause in both orders, four lines apart, and glosses each. mare is neuter, so both are "the sea saw," and both are rendered identically. Recorded because the natural instinct is to differentiate them, and there is nothing there to differentiate.
§8 · HANDOFF
- The patch pass owes ten English edits, each one named with its file and its site in the §3 table and in
data/briefs/8967-PENDING-TEI-PATCHES.md. ⛔ Reconcile reported sites against applied ones: seven of Band B's 28 blind-read findings were patch-pass omissions, and two of those were patches a stint reported and nobody built. - Wilson owes a ruling on the 1029B class — what the English does when the plate DROPS a negative and no marker class reaches the omission. The site is open and the English currently carries the negative.
- Col 1037 is clipped and joins the known-clipped list. One site in it (
ostios[u|n]s) needs a second copy; it is the only Gallica-class site this range produced, and it is a sixth alongside the five standing work-wide. - The gradual-psalm ruling is still untested against a plate. It is not engaged anywhere in 1025C–1039B. Chunks 0087+ own it; the tituli columns from 1051 onward are where it must be checked.
- For the blind polarity read, the four places in this range where a reader should look hardest, because they read perfectly in English and rest on a judgement: the supplied copula at 1030A (
Manus tua haec.), the supplied object at 1030A (viderunt pendere), the supplied possessive at 1030A (Moverunt capita.→ "their heads"), and the declared repair at 1029B (the restorednon). ⚑ Logging them is not checking them — each is recorded with WHAT was checked, not merely that it was looked at.
§I.0087 — file cruces-0087.md, verbatim
# Cruces — 8967 Glossa ordinaria, Liber Psalmorum, chunks 0087–0091 ### Band C, stint 3 · cols 1039B–1050B · Psalms CXVII–CXXX · 4,683 Latin words
§0 · SPAN COUNT RECONCILIATION — the brief is CORRECT, and I counted it myself
| chunk | italic spans in my Latin |
|---|---|
| 0087 | 64 |
| 0088 | 68 |
| 0089 | 55 |
| 0090 | 59 |
| 0091 | 31 |
| total | 277 |
Brief total: 277. Mine: 277. They agree exactly. I also checked the ends: the brief's first entry for my range is [1039B] Alleluia. and my Latin's first span is Alleluia.; its last is [1050B] VERS. 3.-- Speret Israel. and my last span is Speret Israel.. The split is sound.
English span counts run 67 / 68 / 57 / 60 / 33 — the excess over the Latin is exactly the italic inside the six [var:] and one [cj:] markers (3 / 0 / 2 / 1 / 2), which are English-only and are stripped from the ratio count. Anchors: 10 / 11 / 9 / 10 / 4, verbatim and in order. Notes: 35 / 40 / 41 / 40 / 15 in both twins. (noteCount in the frontmatter is one lower in every chunk — the known false positive, not reported.)
§1 · ⭐⭐ WHAT THE PLATE SHOWS AT THE PSALM CXVIII EDITORIAL SENTENCE
Read at col 1041D, PDF p. 526, at 200 dpi full-page and 600 dpi crops. ⚑ Col 1041 is CLIPPED at the inner margin — roughly four to six characters per line — and it is not on the known-clipped list, so this stint adds it. The sentence therefore reaches us with the first word of each line lost. Here is the leaf, transcribed exactly as it stands, [ ] marking what the margin has taken:
PSALMUS CXVIII. [Exp]ositionem hujus psalmi, ut valde prolixam, [omitti]mus. Vide Ambrosii, Cassiodori, Augustini Enar- [ration]es in psalmos, et quibus ad verbum expressa est [glossa] ordinaria in hunc locum.
What the plate settles, point by point, because these were the questions:
- Migne sets the head
PSALMUS CXVIII.in roman capitals, exactly as every other head, and the sentence beneath it in ITALIC, the whole paragraph, with no roman word in it. Our TEI has the italic right. - Nothing stands before it and nothing stands after it. The line above is the last line of the Ps CXVII gloss (
d, quod delectet, quam laus Dei.); the line below isPSALMUS CXIX.There is no rule, no bracket, no signature, no editorial siglum — and no exposition of any part of the psalm anywhere on the leaf. Our transcription has dropped nothing. - ⛔ ONE WORD DIVERGES, and it is the hinge of the sentence. The plate reads
et quibus; our TEI readse quibus. The words sit mid-line, well clear of the clipped margin, and the glyph carries a plain crossedtwithestat the end of the same line as control. ⭐ And it is confirmed by a second, independent witness:patrologiaecurs04migngoog_djvu.txt, the OCR layer of this same scan, readset quibus— a reading nobody could have got from our TEI. CC has quietly repaired Migne'setinto the construinge. Filed as Class 3. - The three clipped openings are recoverable by the visible-structure rule (13a) and by sense:
Expositionem,omittimus,Enarrationes,glossa. No marker is owed for a clipped opening whose word the line-structure fixes.
The English renders the plate, and therefore renders et:
The exposition of this psalm, as being exceedingly long, we omit. See the Enarrationes on the psalms of Ambrose, Cassiodorus, Augustine, and from these the Glossa ordinaria on this place has been expressed word for word.
⛔ Nothing is supplied, summarised or glossed. The English says what Migne says and stops. The longest psalm in the Psalter passes under a single sentence in the editor's own voice, and that is the edition's evidence.
§2 · THE PLATE READS I DID — twelve columns, six pages, all recorded
data/plate-reads.json held 1043–1048 for my range and nothing else. I opened all twelve, corner numbers first, at 200 dpi full-page with 600–900 dpi crops on every disputed glyph.
| page | cols | corner read | clipped? | depth |
|---|---|---|---|---|
| 525 | 1039 / 1040 | 1039, 1040 | no | full |
| 526 | 1041 / 1042 | 1042 (1041's own corner is inside the clip) | ⚑ 1041 CLIPPED | full |
| 527 | 1043 / 1044 | 1043, 1044 | no | full |
| 528 | 1045 / 1046 | 1046 | 1045 CLIPPED (as the list has it) | full |
| 529 | 1047 / 1048 | 1047, 1048 | no | full |
| 530 | 1049 / 1050 | 1049, 1050 | no | full |
⚑ Col 1041 is a NEW clipped column and it is 1041 ≡ 1 (mod 4) — which proves nothing, and I am recording it because the mod-4 rule has been refuted twice. Its neighbours 1039, 1043, 1047 and 1049 are all ≡ 3 or 1 (mod 4) in the same gathering and all clean; 1049 is ≡ 1 (mod 4) and is CLEAN. Two clipped columns out of twelve, adjacent-ish and unpredictable. Open every column.
### 2a. ⭐ What the gradual-psalm tituli look like at Migne's own plate — the ruling was untested and ### it holds
Nobody had read a Canticum graduum at the plate before this stint. Every titulus in my range is now read. What the leaf shows:
Canticum graduumis set in ITALIC at every one of the eleven tituli in cols 1041D–1050A (Pss CXIX, CXX, CXXI, CXXII, CXXV, CXXVII, CXXVIII, CXXIX, CXXX, plus the second and third occurrences inside the Ps CXIX gloss). Our TEI has the italic right everywhere.- ⭐ At Ps CXXVI (1046D) Migne prints
Canticum graduum Salomonis.— read at 600 dpi, italic, and the gloss immediately expounds the added word (Hic additur Salomonis, quia is aedificavit templum). Rendered "A canticle of degrees of Solomon." - ⭐⭐ At Ps CXXIV (1045B) Migne prints
Canticum.ALONE — notCanticum graduum. This is the one titulus in the band that breaks the series, and it is Migne's, not our TEI's: the plate is clipped at that column but the wordCanticum.and the(CASS.)after it stand clear of the margin. The stump is rendered as printed — "A canticle." — and NOT completed to "of degrees" from the eleven neighbours. That is the §F8 supplied-completion failure in its purest available form, and refusing it here is the point. - The numbered series is Migne's own and it is unbroken across my range:
Sextus gradus(1045B) ·Septimus gradus(1046A) ·Octavus, gradus(1046D, with the stray comma) ·Nonus gradus(1048A) ·Decimus gradus(1048C) ·Undecimus gradus(1049B) ·Duodecimus gradus(1049D) — plusPrimus gradusandSecundus gradusat 1042A/1042D. Any rendering ofgradusbut "degree" breaks a series the gloss is counting out loud. 14Canticum graduum+ 12gradus+ 2gradibusin my Latin; all rendered "degree(s)".
§3 · MARKERS FIRED — seven, every one on a column I opened today
plate-gate OK; verify-english clean.
| col | chunk | marker | why |
|---|---|---|---|
| 1039D | 0087 | [cj: revelando; read relevando, "by raising up"] | see 3a |
| 1040C | 0087 | [var: Vulg. per me si quis introierit, salvabitur] | Jn 10:9; Migne prints per quod … salvus erit |
| 1044D | 0089 | [var: Vulg. occide, "kill"] | Acts 10:13; Migne prints Macta |
| 1046B | 0089 | [var: Vulg. Mc 7:15 …; Migne's wording is that of Mt 15:11] | see 3b |
| 1047C | 0090 | [var: Vulg. Fuerunt mihi lacrimae meae panes] | Ps 41:4; Migne prints Factae sunt |
| 1049C | 0091 | [var: Vulg. Prov. 18:3 impius … peccatorum] | Migne prints Peccator … vitiorum |
| 1050A | 0091 | [var: Vulg. Sir. 3:20 Quanto magnus es] | Migne prints Quanto major es |
Every marker sits on the word it accuses — checked one by one against §F8's misplaced-[sic:] finding. There is no [sic:] and no [d:] in this stint, and that is not a claim about Migne: see §4.
### 3a. ⭐ The one [cj:], and why it is fireable when six of its siblings are not At 1039D the plate and our twin BOTH read vel, a casu revelando. Ten lines below, at 1040A, Migne writes the same clause again — ostendit etiam quod liberat a casu relevando — and prints it correctly. Both are on page 525 and I read both at 600 dpi. Revelando is a real word, and "by revealing from the fall" is a faithful English that misleads; that is Pattern 18 exactly. The marker fires because the twin carries the printed word, which is the whole difference between this site and the six unlockable ones in §4.
### 3b. The Mark 7 [var:] is doing two jobs, and says so Migne prints Quod procedit de ore, inquinat under (Marc. VII). It agrees with neither Mark 7:15 (quae de homine procedunt, illa communicant hominem) nor, verbatim, Matthew 15:11 — but the wording is Matthew's, not Mark's. The marker names both facts because the gloss's very next sentence turns on the printed noun: Non de ore carnis, sed cordis. Substituting Mark's de homine would delete the word the exposition exists to qualify.
§4 · ⛔ WHY THERE IS NO [sic:] IN THIS STINT — and it is not because Migne is clean
Migne is not clean in these columns. He is defective at seven sites I can prove, and not one of the seven is fireable, because a [sic:] may wrap only type our twin carries and CC has already repaired every one of them. This is §F2's lesson recurring in a fresh band, so I am stating the count rather than letting the marker table imply a clean plate:
| col | plate prints | our twin | marker unlocked by the patch |
|---|---|---|---|
| 1039C | ete., | etc., | [sic: ete.] |
| 1039C | et et ad veram vitam | et ad | [d: et, et] |
| 1040A | spinis pecatorum | peccatorum | [sic: pecatorum] |
| 1043C | et eum Domino judicabunt | cum | [cj: eum; read cum] |
| 1043C | in quibus Deum sedet | Deus | [cj: Deum; read Deus] |
| 1044A | in hoc hoc quod te diligo | in hoc quod | [d: hoc, hoc] |
| 1044B | Dat similttudinem | similitudinem | [sic: similttudinem] |
| 1047C | Quasi dieeret : | diceret | [sic: dieeret] |
| 1048B | sancti veniens | venient | [cj: veniens; read venient] |
Nine, not seven — and the marker count for my range is therefore [var:] 6 · [cj:] 1 before the patch pass and [var:] 6 · [sic:] 4 · [d:] 2 · [cj:] 4 after it. ⛔ Do not quote the first pair as a fact about this Psalter.
⚑ Each of the four unlockable [cj:] sites carries an English obligation, and I have written it into the patch file rather than trusting the merge to notice. The English at 1043C, 1043C, 1048B currently renders the TWIN's reading ("shall judge with the Lord", "in whom God sits", "the saints shall come"). When the Latin is restored, an English left as it stands silently repairs a broken column — §F8's defect number 4, verbatim. The marker and the rendering are one decision.
§5 · THE DEFECT CANDIDATES I DECLINED — the instrument, not the leftovers
Sixteen candidates raised; nine survived (§4), seven declined. Every one below read as a confident finding before the leaf was opened.
- ⛔
Aventus Domini@1046C — the most important rejection in the stint. Our TEI carries the non-wordAventus, sitting at the head of a gloss, withAdventusobvious. I had it written down as[sic: Aventus]. The plate printsAdventus, cleanly, at 600 dpi. CC manufactured the defect. Firing it would have been a false public accusation at a word Migne set correctly — §F8's[sic: Eccesiam]failure in a new costume. - ⛔
PSAMUS CXXIV.@1045B — our TEI's head is a non-word, and the temptation to mark it is strong because it is so visible. The plate printsPSALMUS CXXIV.It is CC's. And even had it been Migne's, Pattern 9 forbids the marker: a section label is normalized in English because the facing Latin preserves the misprint (thePSLMUSprecedent, declined in Band B). English readsPSALM CXXIV.; the head field in the frontmatter is copied verbatim, misprint and all, because frontmatter is copied and not corrected. - ⛔
VESS. 4.@1043A — the mirror case, and it went the other way: Migne really does printVESS.forVERS., and our TEI has silently corrected him. Still no marker: same Pattern 9 ruling, same reason. Patch, no[sic:]. ⚑ Recording both directions together is the point — neither "trust the text" nor "suspect the transcriber" is a rule. - ⛔ The unmatched
(at 1050A. Our TEI readsNutritus in lacte (quod est Verbum caro factumwith no closing parenthesis anywhere in the sentence — a textbook "Migne lost a bracket". The plate has no parenthesis at all. CC inserted it, exactly as it inserted one at 0936D. The English is written without one. - ⛔
quorum uterque in tabernaculis legitur habitasse@1042D —uterqueafter a sentence naming Ismael, Agar and Sara looked like a numeral defect. It is not: the antecedent is the pair Agar/Sara that the preceding clause contrasts. Read as printed, no marker. - ⛔
Non gentes, quia non omnes credunt@1046B — flagged as a possibly dropped word (Non [omnes] gentes). Migne prints exactly this, and the following clause supplies the sense he left implicit. Supplying it in the English would pre-empt his own next words. Rendered "Not the Gentiles, because not all believe." - ⛔
(Matth. XVIII)@1047D for Excutite pulverem de pedibus vestris, which is Mt 10:14. Migne's citation is wrong. No[var:]: Pattern 14 marks divergent scripture text, and the quoted words agree with Mt 10:14 verbatim. A wrong locus is Migne's, is left standing, and — per the 0971A precedent — would need acitation-corrections.jsonentry, not a marker, if it were ever repaired. Same ruling for(Isa. XXI)at 1045C, which points at Is 2:2.
### 5a. ⛔ WITHHELD, NOT DECLINED — two real divergences the clipped column will not let me fire At 1045C Migne quotes Isaias twice, and both quotations diverge from the Vulgate: Et erit in ea murus, et antemurale against Is 26:1 salvator ponetur in ea murus et antemurale, and Erit in novissimis diebus mons in vertice against Is 2:2 praeparatus mons domus Domini in vertice montium. Both open on a clipped line — the plate line begins ea murus, et antemurale and vertice (Isa. XXI), etc. — so Et erit in and mons in, the exact words that carry the divergence, are in the lost margin. The markers are withheld and logged for a second copy (Gallica, f528), not fired and not quietly dropped. A withheld marker leaves no artifact unless somebody writes it down; this is the writing down.
§6 · THE DIVERGENCE LIST — every scripture quotation in the range, the clean ones included
6a. Divergent, marker FIRED (6) — listed in §3.
### 6b. Divergent, marker DECLINED, with the reason
Qui dederit calicem aquae frigidae, non perdet mercedem@1046D (Mt 10:42 quicumque potum dederit uni ex minimis istis calicem aquae frigidae … non perdet mercedem suam). Declined: it stands inside anusque adsplice, so the shortening is Migne's own abridgment formula doing its work, not a divergent text.quia superbis resistit, humilibus dat gratiam@1050B (Jas 4:6 / 1 Pt 5:5, Deus superbis resistit, humilibus autem dat gratiam). Declined: subject andautemdropped by abridgment, inside a splice; the sense is untouched.Quaesivi bona tibi propter domum Domini Dei nostri@1044A (Ps 121:9, same words in the other order). Declined: Migne inverts the clause in order to exhibit it as the exposition of the preceding verse, which is precisely what the surrounding gloss says he is doing.Quid tibi detur, aut quid apponatur?@1042B (Ps 119:3 Quid detur tibi, aut quid apponatur tibi). Declined: Migne re-quotes his own lemma with the pronoun fronted, four words after printing it in the Vulgate order as the lemma proper. The gloss's point is the two verbs.longe a me fecerunt injustitiam suam@1048D. Not a divergence at all: Migne labels itAlias, his own variant-reading siglum.A Domino factum est ei@1040D. Same: labelledsecundum aliam litteram.Ingressus confitebor@1040B (Ps 117:19 ingressus in eas confitebor Domino). Declined: it is a stump, not a divergence — and rendered as a stump, "Having entered I will confess."
### 6c. Collated and found to AGREE with the Clementine — the checked negatives Nemo venit ad Patrem, nisi per me (Jn 14:6) · postula a me, et dabo tibi gentes haereditatem tuam (Ps 2:8) · Excutite pulverem de pedibus vestris (Mt 10:14, the text clean, the locus wrong) · Beati qui lugent (Mt 5:5) · extrema gaudii luctus occupat (Prov 14:13) · Benedictio Domini super vos. Benediximus vobis in nomine (Ps 128:8) · Fiant sicut fenum tectorum (Ps 128:6) · Et ipse redimet Israel ex omnibus iniquitatibus ejus (Ps 129:8) · Quia apud te propitiatio est (Ps 129:4) · Domine, libera animam meam a labiis iniquis (Ps 119:2, abridged, no divergence) · Aquam intolerabilem (Ps 123:5) · cum exsultatione portantes manipulos suos (Ps 125:6) · Beati omnes qui timent Dominum (Ps 127:1) · Ecce dimidium (Lk 19:8) · Speret Israel in Domino (Ps 129:6) · Sicut ablactatus est (Ps 130:2) · Neque ambulavi (Ps 130:1) · Ecce sicut oculi (Ps 122:2) · Montes in circuitu (Ps 124:2) · Pax super Israel (Ps 124:5).
### 6d. The verse numbering was checked, not assumed Every VERS. n.-- in my range was resolved against the Clementine's own versification for the psalm named in the head. All agree; no psalm number in my range needs converting, and none was. Migne skips verses he does not gloss (Ps CXVII runs 14 → 17 → 18; Ps CXXIV runs 3 → 4 → 5 with no 6) — that is non-glossing, not misnumbering, the same pattern the 0847A read found in Psalm II.
§7 · THE RULED AXES — what my range actually did with each
| axis | my range |
|---|---|
Canticum graduum → "A canticle of degrees" | 14 occurrences, 14 so rendered, zero rivals. Plus one bare Canticum. @1045B rendered as the stump. |
gradus/gradibus → "degree" | 14 occurrences, 14 so rendered. The ordinal series Sextus … Duodecimus is unbroken in the English. |
usque ad | 50 occurrences. 48 formula, 2 not — and the two are the same phrase, usque ad fines terrae, twice at 1047D, neither preceded by an etc.; both rendered by sense, "unto the ends of the earth". The §A7 test decided every one of the 50 mechanically; italic membership would have mis-called both non-formula cases, since both sit outside the italic. |
gentes family | 10 occurrences: gentes 5, gentium 4, adjectival gentile 1. Rendered Gentiles 7 · Gentile (adj., mancipium gentile @1042A) 1 · nations 2. The two "nations" are the sites where the word is not opposed to the Jews but simply means the peoples of the earth — Ps 117:10 Omnes gentes and the Mt 25:32 judgment scene @1045D; everywhere else the Jews are the named other half (de duobus parietibus Judaeorum et gentium) and "Gentiles" is the only rendering that keeps the antithesis. Decided per site, as the axis intends. No singular gens in a non-ethnic metaphor occurs in my range, so §A5's named exception is not engaged. |
mysterium/sacramentum | mystery 0 · sacrament 1 (sacramentum corporis et sanguinis @1041B). No bleed. |
daemonium/diabolus | demon 0 · devil 4 (diabolus ×4, no daemonium in the range). |
turba/multitudo | zero occurrences of either. The instrument was checked, not assumed: these are gradual psalms, and the Gospel crowds are simply absent — as they were in Bands A and B. |
Diapsalma | zero occurrences. Not engaged. |
In finem | zero occurrences — the gradual psalms carry Canticum graduum in that slot. Not engaged. |
Psalmus David / Psalmus ipsi David | zero occurrences. Not engaged. |
Dominus virtutum | zero occurrences. Not engaged. |
sedes → "seat" | one occurrence, the lemma Sedes. @1043C (Ps 121:5), rendered "Seats." — plural, because the Vulgate's sederunt sedes in judicio is plural and the gloss expounds it as justi. Not "thrones", per §A5. |
| archaism | Both memberships checked, not italics alone. 12 -eth forms, all inside italic lemmata (keepeth ×4, cometh, contemneth, proceedeth, defileth, resisteth, giveth, soweth, taketh); zero in gloss voice. ⚑ The check earned its keep: a thirteenth, "he that cometh in his own name" @1041A, stood in Migne's ROMAN type — an echo of Jn 5:43 that the plate does not mark as quotation — and was changed to "comes". No « » guillemets occur anywhere in my range, so the second membership is not engaged. |
| em-dashes | zero across all five chunks. |
§8 · CRUCES — passages rendered literally, with the difficulty named
- ⭐
Nesciente Judae rem omnium fecerunt@1039D–1040A. Our twin readsNescientes Judaei, a clean plural subject forfecerunt. The plate readsNesciente Judae— two letters changed in two words, unambiguous at 900 dpi. It is an ablative absolute leavingfeceruntwith an implicit subject, which is harder Latin but not impossible Latin. Rendered from the plate: "Judah not knowing, they made God, by his passion, the concern of all". ⚑ I record this because the twin's reading is the easier one and the temptation to prefer it is exactly what §A6 exists to forbid. unde non: Quod procedit de ore, inquinat@1046B. Thenongoverns a quotation that follows it and is not itself negated — Augustine is denying that the mouth of the flesh is meant, and his next words say so (Non de ore carnis, sed cordis). The negative is carried in the English at the place Migne prints it ("whence not:"), not smoothed into the quotation and not dropped. This is the one negation in my range that a fluent English would silently lose.Heu mihi@1042C andHei mihi@1042B, 1042C. Migne prints both spellings of one interjection, one as the lemma and two in the gloss. Both are rendered "Woe is me." Forcing a distinction in English would invent one: the spellings are orthographic and the gloss treats them as the same cry. Recorded rather than marked.Labores manuum.@1048A againstLabores manuum tuarum.@1048A. ⭐ Migne prints the head lemma SHORT and the second lemma FULL, and the gloss between them exists to point at exactly that difference (a pluribus coepit … sed quia omnes unum sunt in Christo singulariter, sequitur). Rendered "The labours of the hands" and "The labours of thy hands" respectively. Completing the first from the Vulgate would have deleted the observation it introduces — the 0965BOculi meicase, recurring.Domine, non est.@1050A (Ps 130:1, Domine, non est exaltatum cor meum). Rendered as the stump, "Lord, it is not." — awkward English, and deliberately so.sed quia et labore cum gaudio sumuntur propter spem@1048A. The plate'slabore(ablative singular) leavessumunturwithout an expressed subject, which must be carried over from the lemmaLabores. Rendered "they are taken up with joy even in the labour"; our twin'slaboreswould give the smoother "the labours too are taken up with joy". The plate governs and the strain is recorded rather than repaired.sic revelabit Deus quod aliter sapit@1050B. Phil 3:15 is behind it (si quid aliter sapitis, et hoc vobis Deus revelabit), but Migne prints novobisand nohoc. Rendered "so shall God reveal that wherein he is otherwise minded" — third person, as printed.Speret vigilia matutina, qui non aliud a Deo quam immortalitatem speret@1049D.vigilia matutinais read as ablative of time with the masculinequias subject: "Let him hope in the morning watch, who hopes for nothing else from God than immortality." A nominative reading ("let the morning watch hope") is grammatically open and would reassign the subject, which is the §F8 class with no grep signature; the ablative is preferred becauseA custodia matutinais the lemma two lines below and is unambiguously a time phrase. Both readings recorded.ne quis tamen putet iniquitatem juxta justitiam@1048D. Rendered "lest any suppose iniquity to stand beside justice."juxtais spatial here and the whole gloss is about distance (longe est a me); "according to" would collapse the figure.
§9 · SECTIONS READ CLEAN, and what I checked in them
⚑ A logged column is not a checked column, so this names the check, not the looking.
- 1042A–1042D (Ps CXIX, the first gradual psalm). Collated word by word against the plate: agrees at every word. Checked specifically: the
Deut. XIIcitation (Migne's; Dt 21:12 is the locus, left standing), theCedar/Agar/Saragenealogy for a reassigned antecedent, and the Mt 13:26 quotation for 7a″ conformation. - 1043A–1043B (Ps CXX). Checked for dropped negation:
Neque dormitet·Ecce non dormitabit·sol non uret te, neque luna·nihil nocebit— five negatives, five carried. - 1049A–1049B (Ps CXXVIII, close). Checked the four
Et non dixeruntlemmata against each other and against Ps 128:8: all four identical in Latin, all four rendered identically in English, and none completed from the Vulgate'sbenedictio Domini super vos. - 1050A–1050B (Ps CXXX, my last column). Checked every subject in the
Exaltavi, ut haereticisentence, a chain of five verbs with the subject carried across a relative and acumclause; the antecedent stays "the heretics" throughout in the English.
§10 · HANDOFF
- ⛔ Nine markers stand unlocked behind the patch pass (§4), and four of them carry an English edit that must land in the same commit. Both are itemised, site by site, in
data/briefs/8967-PENDING-TEI-PATCHES.mdunderBAND C — stint 0087–0091. - ⚑ Col 1041 is a newly found clipped column and belongs on the known-clipped list beside 841, 849, 893, 897, 1045. 1049 is ≡ 1 (mod 4) and is clean — a thirteenth counter-example.
- Two Gallica sites added, both on one leaf (f528, col 1045C): the Is 26:1 and Is 2:2 quotations, whose divergent opening words are in the clipped margin. That brings the work-wide open list to seven.
- The Psalm CXVIII sentence needs one editorial decision that is not mine: whether the
[glossa],[Exp],[omitti],[ration]recovered from the clipped margin should carry an[ed:]in the English. I have not marked them — the line-structure fixes each word beyond doubt (13a) — but this is the single most quotable line in the work and Wilson may want the margin's condition visible. Flagged, not decided. - ⚑
et quibus@1041D will look like a defect to the next reader and should not be "fixed" twice: it is Migne's, confirmed by the plate and independently by the scan's own OCR layer, and the English already renders it.
§I.0092 — file cruces-0092.md, verbatim
# Cruces — 8967 Glossa ordinaria, Liber Psalmorum, chunks 0092–0096 ### Band C, stint 4 · cols 1050B–1061C · Psalms CXXXI–CXXXVIII · 4,932 Latin words
§0 · SPAN COUNT RECONCILIATION — the brief is CORRECT, and I counted it myself
| chunk | italic spans in my Latin |
|---|---|
| 0092 | 88 |
| 0093 | 55 |
| 0094 | 72 |
| 0095 | 29 |
| 0096 | 85 |
| total | 329 |
Brief total: 329. Mine: 329. They agree exactly. The ends were checked too: the brief's first entry for my range is [1050B] VERS. 1.-- Canticum graduum. and my Latin's first span is Canticum graduum.; its last is [1061C] Proba me et scito. and my last span is Proba me et scito. The split is sound at both ends.
English span counts equal the Latin's exactly, 88 / 55 / 72 / 29 / 85, once the italic inside the eleven English-only markers is stripped. Anchors 11 / 7 / 10 / 4 / 10, verbatim and in the same order (checked by list equality, not by count). Notes 32 / 22 / 38 / 11 / 26 in both twins. Question marks 1 / 0 / 4 / 0 / 7, matching. Ratio 1.50 / 1.49 / 1.48 / 1.45 / 1.48.
⚑ Two span-membership errors were found by this check and repaired before filing, which is exactly what it is for: at 1059D I had split Migne's single span Spiritus enim Domini replet omnia. Quo a facie tua fugiam? into two, and at 1060D I had split scientia tua ex me, nec poteram ad eam; into two. A count alone would not have located them; the per-paragraph comparison did. verify-english sees neither.
§1 · MARKERS FIRED — eleven, every one on a column I opened today
plate-gate reports every one of them ✓ on a full read; verify-english is clean on all five chunks (the only failures in the run are the eight chunks other stints have not yet filed).
| col | chunk | marker | why |
|---|---|---|---|
| 1050C | 0092 | [var: Vulg. Is 66:2 …] | Migne prints Super quem requiescet Spiritus meus, nisi super humilem et quietum where Is 66:2 reads ad quem autem respiciam, nisi ad pauperculum, et contritum spiritu. Only the closing et trementem sermones meos agrees. See §5a. |
| 1050D | 0092 | [sic: Sumnum] | Ps 131:4 somnum. Read at 900 dpi: Migne sets Sumnum and our twin carries it. See §2a. |
| 1054B | 0093 | [var: Vulg. Ps 134:7 fulgura in pluviam fecit] | Migne prints Fulgura et pluviam, and the gloss is built on the et: Fulgur terrorem, pluvia gaudium facit treats them as two coordinate gifts, which in pluviam would not license. |
| 1055A | 0093 | [var: Vulg. Ps 134:14 et in servis suis deprecabitur] | Migne prints consolabitur, a different verb and a different act, and the gloss expounds it (cum praemia aeterna restituet). |
| 1056D | 0094 | [var: Vulg. Mt 6:26 …] | Migne prints quae neque serunt neque congregant for quoniam non serunt, neque metunt, neque congregant — a lost clause and a changed conjunction. |
| 1059B | 0096 | [sic: egestare] | egestate confectus is wanted; the plate prints egestare and so does our twin. See §2a. |
| 1059C | 0096 | [var: Vulg. Ps 138:4 quia non est sermo in lingua mea] | Migne prints dolus for sermo — guile for speech, a different claim, and the lemma the gloss then glosses. |
| 1059D | 0096 | [var: Vulg. Wisd. 1:7 Spiritus Domini replevit orbem terrarum] | Migne prints Spiritus enim Domini replet omnia; the proof-text is adduced precisely for omnia, which the Clementine's orbem terrarum narrows. |
| 1060C | 0096 | [var: Vulg. Ps 138:11 et nox illuminatio mea in deliciis meis] | Migne prints nox facta est illuminatio — the possessive is gone and a passive is added; the gloss's own preceding words are nox mihi facta est illuminatio. |
| 1060D | 0096 | [var: Vulg. Ps 138:14 anima mea cognoscit nimis] | Migne prints the future cognoscet, and the gloss immediately contradicts it with Jam cognoscit anima mea valde. The marker is what makes that visible. |
| 1061C | 0096 | [var: Vulg. Mt 7:23 …; the opening words are those of Mt 25:12] | Migne prints Amen dico vobis, non novi vos, discedite a me — Mt 25:12's opening welded to Mt 7:23's close, and non novi matches neither (nescio / numquam novi). The marker does two jobs and says so. |
Every marker sits on the word it accuses — checked one by one against §F8's misplaced-[sic:] finding, by reading the English clause with the marker deleted.
⛔ 7a⁗ was applied to both [sic:]. [sic: Sumnum] follows the rendered lemma (Sleep [sic: Sumnum]), so the clause keeps its noun; [sic: egestare] follows "worn out with want", so the clause keeps its participle and its sense. Neither marker swallows a verb, a negative or a conjunction.
§2 · ⛔ WHY THERE ARE ONLY TWO [sic:] — and it is NOT a claim that Migne is clean
Migne is defective at fourteen further sites in these twelve columns, and not one of them is fireable, because a [sic:] may wrap only type our twin carries and Corpus Corporum has already repaired every one. This is §F2's lesson recurring for the third band running, so I state the number rather than letting the marker table imply a clean plate.
| col | plate prints | our twin | marker unlocked by the patch |
|---|---|---|---|
| 1052C | cxaltaxit | exaltavit | [sic: exaltaxit] |
| 1053B | iu latitudine | in | [sic: iu] |
| 1055C | totius orbi | orbis | [cj: orbi; read orbis] |
| 1058C | ubi dici quomodo | dicit | [cj: dici; read dicit] |
| 1058D | poena, noc tantum culpa | non | [sic: noc] |
| 1059A | In finem psalmus Ddvid. | David | [sic: Ddvid] |
| 1059B | Semitam meum, | meam | none owed (concord, no English exponent) |
| 1059C | justificaui | justificati | class undecided — see below |
| 1059C | pecatum | peccatum | [sic: pecatum] |
| 1059C | incomprehensibllis | incomprehensibilis | [sic: incomprehensibllis] |
| 1059D | Quo ibo spiritu tuo? | a spiritu | class undecided — see below |
| 1059D | fungiendum | fugiendum | [sic: fungiendum] |
| 1060A | in est efficaciam | id est | [cj: in; read id] |
| 1060B | Et dixit forsitan ×2 | Et dixi, | class undecided — see below |
So the honest marker count for my range is [var:] 9 · [sic:] 2 before the patch pass and [var:] 9 · [sic:] 7 · [cj:] 3 after it, plus up to three more. ⛔ Do not quote the first pair as a fact about this Psalter.
⚑ Six of these carry an English obligation, and I have itemised each one, site by site, in data/briefs/8967-PENDING-TEI-PATCHES.md rather than trusting the merge to notice — the §F8 defect number 4. Two of them are 7a⁗ sites where the negative must be written outside the marker (1058D noc for non, 1059D fungiendum for fugiendum); one (1058C dici) requires the English clause to be rebuilt, because "where he tells how" is our repair of a broken verb; one (1060B dixit) flips the person of a lemma against the gloss's own next word.
2a. The two that DID fire, and why they could
Both are sites where the plate and our twin agree on the defective type, which is the whole difference between them and the fourteen above.
Sumnum@1050D. Read at 900 dpi:S-u-m-n-u-m, italic, in the VERS. 4 lemma. Ps 131:4 is Si dedero somnum oculis meis, and the gloss five lines below printssomnus venit ad oculoscorrectly twice in the B band of col 1051 — the same-clause control, on the facing column of the same opening. Our twin carriesSumnum. Fired.egestare@1059B. dixerat egestare confectus wants the ablative egestate;egestareis a non-word. Read at 900 dpi, unambiguous, and our twin carries it. Fired.
§3 · THE PLATE READS I DID — twelve columns, seven pages, all recorded
data/plate-reads.json held nothing at all for cols 1051–1061 when I began; page 530 had been read by the 0087–0091 stint and I re-read it for cols 1050B–D. I opened every column in my range, corner numbers first, at 400 dpi in three vertical slices per column, with 900 dpi crops on every disputed glyph.
| page | cols | corner read | margin | depth |
|---|---|---|---|---|
| 530 | 1049 / 1050 | 1049, 1050 | clean | full (re-read for 1050B–D) |
| 531 | 1051 / 1052 | 1051, 1052 | clean | full |
| 532 | 1053 / 1054 | 1053, 1054 | clean | full |
| 533 | 1055 / 1056 | 1055, 1056 | clean | full |
| 534 | 1057 / 1058 | 1057, 1058 | clean | full |
| 535 | 1059 / 1060 | 1059, 1060 | clean | full |
| 536 | 1061 / 1062 | 1061, 1062 | clean | full |
⭐ All twelve of my columns are CLEAN at the inner margin — verified by cropping each page from x = 280 px at 400 dpi (≈ 8 % in) and confirming white margin to the left of every line-opening character. No marker in my range rests in a clipped margin, and nothing is owed to Gallica. The known-clipped list (841, 849, 893, 897, 1041, 1045) gains nothing from this run; 1053, 1057 and 1061 are all ≡ 1 (mod 4) and all three are clean, which is a fourteenth, fifteenth and sixteenth counter-example to the withdrawn congruence rule.
⚑ Page 536 also covers col 1062, which is not mine; reading it incidentally licensed two markers in the 0097–0101 stint's chunk 0097, and plate-gate now shows them ✓. Its [sic: quae dam] at 1063D is still unread and is the only gate failure in the work.
⚑ No foot-of-page conjecture apparatus, in either layer, on any of the seven pages. Full page width was rendered each time, not a bottom strip.
3a. ⭐ The tituli at the plate — the Band C rulings hold, and two are newly evidenced
Canticum graduumis ITALIC at every one of the five tituli in my range (1050B, 1052D, 1053A, and the two inside the glosses), and the numbered series continues unbroken in Migne's own voice:In tredecimo gradu(1050B) ·Quartus decimus gradus(1052D) ·Quintus decimus gradus(1053B), picking up exactly where the 0087–0091 stint'sDuodecimus gradus@1049D left off. Any rendering ofgradusbut "degree" breaks a series the gloss is counting out loud. 5Canticum graduum+ 4gradus/graduin my Latin; all rendered "degree(s)". ⚑ At Ps CXXXII (1052D) Migne printsCanticum graduumwhere the Clementine titulus reads Canticum graduum David. The stump is rendered as printed — the 1045BCanticum.precedent, and no completion from the Vulgate.- ⭐
Psalmus DavidandPsalmus ipsi Davidboth stand in my range, four columns apart, and I read both:Psalmus David.at the Ps CXXXVI titulus (1056D) andPsalmus ipsi David.at the Ps CXXXVII titulus (1058A). Migne sets both forms, as 1010A already showed; they are rendered "A psalm of David" and "A psalm to David himself" and are not levelled. - ⭐
In finemoccurs twice in my range and both are at the plate — the Ps CXXXVIII titulusIn finem psalmus Ddvid.(1059A) and its re-quotation. Rendered "Unto the end", per §A1.1. This is the firstIn finemin Band C; the gradual psalms carriedCanticum graduumin that slot.
§4 · CC-vs-PLATE DEPARTURES — 31 over 12 columns (2.6/col), all filed as patches, none marked
Full itemisation in data/briefs/8967-PENDING-TEI-PATCHES.md under BAND C — stint 0092–0096, with the column written in the file's own convention. 2.6 per column is above the ~1.5 budget and above the 1.8 the previous stint measured. All three directions occur, and the two that matter most for the reader are these:
- ⭐⭐ 1056B
facit→fecit. Migne prints the present: quae in Aegypto facit et gente Judaeorum sub figura nostri — what God does in Egypt, as a figure of us now. CC's perfect turns a live typology into past history, and no Vulgate collation could ever see it, because the words are the gloss's own. - ⭐⭐ 1059A
principes→princeps. Migne prints the plural: in quo principes mundi peccatum non invenit. CC's singular makes it the devil; the plural makes it the rulers who killed him, which is what quare occideret requires. A number change with no orthographic cover.
Two more are worth naming because they are the reverse direction — a non-word in OUR file that Migne does not print:
- 1057C
Ideumaei(ours) againstIdumaei(the plate). This is theAventus@1046C case exactly, and I had it written down as a[sic:]candidate before I opened the leaf. - 1059B
occurit(ours, oner) againstoccurrit(the plate). Same class, same stint. - 1051B our TEI's unmatched
(CASS.against the plate's closed, one-s(CAS.)— the third sighting of CC editing a parenthesis, after 0936D and 1050A.
⛔ And the strongest Class-4 site in the work so far: at 1055B Migne prints VERS. — with NO VERSE NUMBER. Our TEI supplies VERS. 18.--. The supplement is correct (Ps 134:18 is the verse) and completely silent. Pattern 9 governs, so no marker is owed and the English keeps the address; but a reader collating our Latin against the plate would find nothing to tell him the number is ours.
§5 · THE DIVERGENCE LIST — every scripture quotation in the range, the clean ones included
### 5a. Divergent, marker FIRED (9) — listed in §1, with the reason each is material. The Is 66:2 site deserves its own line: Migne's Super quem requiescet Spiritus meus imports the verb and the subject of Is 11:2 (requiescet super eum spiritus Domini) into the frame of Is 66:2, and the gloss then argues from requiescet — the resting — which the Clementine's respiciam does not contain at all.
### 5b. Divergent, marker DECLINED, with the reason
Sicut juravit et votum vovit.@1050C (Ps 131:2 sicut juravit Domino ; votum vovit Deo Jacob). Declined: Migne splices two clauses withetand drops both datives — an abridgment of the kind the whole recension is made of, not a divergent text. Rendered as the splice stands.Cornu David, paravi lucernam Christo.@1052C (Ps 131:17 Illuc producam cornu David; paravi lucernam christo meo). Declined: same class — a lemma cut at both ends.Usque in saeculum saeculi,@1052B — Migne quotes Ps 131:12's usque in saeculum with 131:14's in saeculum saeculi. Declined: the gloss is recapitulating two verses it has already quoted separately, and says so (et hoc).Canticum graduum@1052D for Ps 132:1's Canticum graduum David. Declined: a titulus stump.Omnia in sapientia fecisti, Deus.@1055D (Ps 103:24, without the vocative). Declined: an added vocative with no work to do in the argument.Multiplicabo semen tuum sicut stellas coeli et sicut arenam maris.@1061A. Declined, and the reason is a rule I applied consistently: the wording is a conflation of two verbatim-attested loci — Gn 22:17 multiplicabo semen tuum sicut stellas caeli and Gn 32:12 sicut arenam maris — so there is no single locus it diverges from. Compare the Mt 7:23/25:12 site, which I DID mark, because there non novi vos matches neither donor verse.Proba me, Domine.@1061C against Ps 138:23 Proba me, Deus, et scito cor meum. Declined: the printed words are Ps 25:2 verbatim, and Migne's second lemma four words later restores the Ps 138 form (Proba me et scito). A cross-echo, not a corruption.Beati qui lugent, vae ridentibus.@1058D (Mt 5:5 + Lc 6:25 Vae vobis, qui ridetis nunc). Declined: a two-clause allusion inside one italic span, abridged by Migne, with no cited locus.Dum recordaremur,@1057A for Ps 136:1's cum recordaremur. Declined: a conjunction swap with no English exponent and no effect on the gloss.Sicut tenebrae ejus, ita et lumen,@1060C for ita et lumen ejus. Declined: a stump.nec poteram ad eam;@1060D for Ps 138:6's et non potero ad eam. ⭐ Declined deliberately: the gloss has just said ante erat mira and goes on sed modo possum, so the past tense is the gloss's own re-voicing of the verse, not a variant text. This is the site where a[var:]would have been easiest to fire and most wrong.Per diem errabunt.@1061A andConfortata est … invaluit@1059D andPosuisti … Gravasti@1059C andEt funiculum … limitem@1059B — all four are labelled(Alias)by Migne's own variant siglum. No marker; rendered "(Otherwise)".
### 5c. Collated and found to AGREE with the Clementine — the checked negatives Ps 131: Memento, Domine, David et omnis (stump) · Si introiero in tabernaculum domus meae · Et palpebris meis dormitationem · Et requiem temporibus meis · Ecce audivimus · eam in Ephrata · in campis sylvae (silvae, orthographic) · Introibimus · Surge · Sacerdotes · Propter David servum · Juravit Dominus David · Et non frustrabitur · De fructu ventris tui · Si custodierint testamentum · Sedebunt super sedem tuam · Haec requies mea · Viduam · Panibus · Sacerdotes ejus · Induam salutari · Exsultatione exsultabunt · Induam confusione. Ps 132: Ecce quam bonum · Habitare in unum · Sicut unguentum · Barbam · Aaron · In oram · Sicut ros · Hermon. Ps 133: Canticum graduum · Ecce · servi Domini · Statis · In domo Domini · In atriis domus Dei nostri · Extollite manus vestras · in sancta · Benedicat te Dominus · ex Sion. Ps 134: Laudate, servi · Laudate Dominum · Psallite nomini ejus · Jacob · Israel in possessionem · Omnia quaecunque · Qui producit ventos de thesauris suis · Qui percussit primogenita · Ab extremo · Ab homine usque ad pecus · Reges fortes · Sehon regem Amorrhaeorum · Chanaan · Et dedit terram eorum haereditatem · Haereditatem Israel · In generationem et generationem · Quia judicabit · Simulacra · Os habent et non loquentur · Similes illis fiant · Domus Israel benedicite · Domus Aaron benedicite · Benedictus Dominus. Ps 135: Confitemini Domino · Confitemini Deo deorum · Confitemini Domino dominorum · Qui facit mirabilia · Mirabilia magna solus · Qui fecit coelos · Coelos in intellectu · Terram super aquas · super aquas · Qui fecit luminaria magna · Lunam et stellas in potestatem noctis · Qui percussit Aegyptum · Cum primogenitis eorum · In manu potenti · Divisit mare Rubrum in divisiones · Et excussit Pharaonem · Israel servo suo · Dat escam · Omni carni. Also Ego dixi, Dii estis et filii Excelsi (Ps 81:6) and in medio autem deos dijudicat (Ps 81:1), both exact. Ps 136: Super flumina · In salicibus · Quia illic interrogaverunt nos · Verba cantionum · Quomodo cantabimus · Si oblitus fuero · Dextera mea · Adhaereat · Lingua mea · Memor esto · in die · Filiorum Edom · Filia Babylonis misera · Exinanite · Filia · Beatus qui tenebit. Ps 137: Confitebor tibi, Domine · In conspectu · angelorum · Psallam tibi · Super misericordia · Universae viae Domini misericordia et veritas (= Ps 24:10, exact, and correctly used to gloss Ps 137:2) · Super omne nomen sanctum tuum · In anima · virtutem · Confiteantur tibi, Domine · Omnia verba oris tui · audierunt omnia verba · Magna est gloria · Quoniam excelsus Dominus · Humilia respicit · Alta a longe cognoscit · Si ambulavero in medio tribulationis · Super iram · Dextera tua · Retribuet. Ps 138: Domine, probasti me · Intellexisti · De longe · Semitam meam · Et funiculum · Et omnes vias meas · Novissima · Antiqua · Formasti me · Posuisti · Mirabilis · Facta est scientia · Ex me · Confortata est · Et non potero · Quo a facie tua fugiam · Si ascendero in coelum, tu illic es · Si descendero · Ad infernum · Ades · Si sumpsero pennas · diluculo · Et habitavero in extremis · Etenim illuc manus tua · Conculcaverunt me · Non obscurabuntur · et nox · Sicut dies · Quia tenebrae · Quia tu possedisti renes meos · Confitebor tibi · Non est occultatum os meum a te quod fecisti in occulto · Substantia mea in inferioribus terrae · Imperfectum meum viderunt oculi tui, et in libro tuo omnes · Dies formabuntur · Adhuc sum tecum · Si occideris, Deus, peccatores · Nonne qui oderunt te, Domine · Proba me et scito. Plus Surgam et ibo ad patrem meum (Lc 15:18, exact) and Quasi tristes, semper autem gaudentes (2 Cor 6:10, exact) and mors ultra non dominabitur (Rom 6:9, exact) and Erat illis cor unum, et anima una (Act 4:32, exact but for the supplied illis, which is Migne's own resumption of Multitudinis autem credentium).
### 5d. The verse numbering was checked, not assumed Every VERS. n.-- in my range was resolved against the Clementine's own versification for the psalm named in the head. All agree; no psalm number in my range needs converting, and none was. Migne skips verses he does not gloss (Ps CXXXI runs 12 → 14; Ps CXXXIV runs 4 → 6 → 7 → 8 → 10 → 11; Ps CXXXV runs 7 → 9 → 10 → 12 → 13 → 15 → 21; Ps CXXXVII runs 5 → 7 → 8; Ps CXXXVIII runs 1 → 3 and 16 → 18 → 19 → 21) — that is non-glossing, not misnumbering. ⚑ The one genuine anomaly is at 1055B, where Migne prints no verse number at all (§4); the number in our Latin is CC's.
§6 · THE CANDIDATES I REJECTED — the instrument, not the leftovers
Twenty-three defect candidates were raised; fourteen survived as unlockable (§2), two fired, and seven were withdrawn at the leaf. Every one below read as a confident finding before the plate was opened at 900 dpi.
- ⛔
Ideumaei@1057C — the most important rejection in the stint. A non-word in our TEI, sitting in a proper name, withIdumaeiobvious. I had it written down as[sic: Ideumaei]. The plate printsIdumaei. CC manufactured it. Firing would have been a false public accusation against Migne at a word he set correctly. - ⛔
occurit@1059B — onerin our TEI, in ut filio minori redeunti occurit pater. The plate printsoccurrit. Ours. Declined and patched. - ⛔ The unmatched
(at 1051B. Our TEI reads(CASS. Secunda parswith no closing bracket anywhere in the sentence — a textbook "Migne lost a bracket". The plate closes it, and prints the siglum with ones:(CAS.). CC's, twice over. - ⛔
uterigat@1059C. The plate looks fused (ut erigatset as one run), which under Pattern 10 would be a[sic:]swallowing a whole verb. Declined: the neighbouring words on the same line carry the same narrow inter-word space, so this is the leaf's setting, not a fusion. The 9004 @0897C rule cuts both ways and here the leaf does not support the claim. - ⛔
cxaltaxit@1052C — a split decision, and the split is the point. The initial glyph is an opencagainst a clean crossedeinetc.,one line above, so the crossbar has not inked — ink damage, this copy's condition, not restorable. But the seventh glyph is an unmistakablexwhere exaltavit wantsv, and a crossing stroke cannot be produced by ink failing to reach the paper. So the site is reported asexaltaxit, with the lost crossbar named, and thecis not carried into the patch. - ⛔
amein@1060A,id es@1056A,Benedietus@1055C — a brokenm, an uninkedt, a brokenc. All three are the copy's condition. Declined and recorded so a later reader does not file them. - ⛔
justificaui@1059C — the reading is certain, the correction is not, and I did not guess. The disputed glyph is a bottom-archeduagainst the tall crossedtof gratia on the same line, sojustificauiis what Migne set. Whether he meant justificavi (u for v, which he sets nowhere else on these leaves) or a broken justificati cannot be decided from the leaf. The reading is patched; the marker class is left to the pass. A patch must not guess a letter any more than a marker may.
§7 · THE RULED AXES — what my range actually did with each
| axis | my range |
|---|---|
Canticum graduum → "A canticle of degrees" | 5 occurrences, 5 so rendered, zero rivals. All five read at the plate and all five italic there. |
gradus → "degree" | 4 occurrences (gradu, gradus ×3), all "degree". The ordinal series In tredecimo … Quartus decimus … Quintus decimus is unbroken in the English and continues the 0087–0091 stint's count. |
usque ad | 54 occurrences. 52 formula, 2 not, decided mechanically by the etc. splice test. The two non-formula sites are both in 0093 and both inside italic, which is the mirror of the previous stint's pair (both of theirs fell outside it) — a second demonstration that italic membership fails in both directions: quae extenditur usque ad inimicos @1053B ("extends even to enemies") and the Ps 134:8 lemma Ab homine usque ad pecus @1054C ("from man even to beast"). Neither is preceded by an etc. ⚑ Three bare usque besides, none of them the formula: Si introiero usque donec inveniam locum Domino @1050D (a splice, but without ad; rendered "as far as" because it does the formula's work) · subditos usque concordiae utilitas pervenit @1053A (postpositive, "even to them that are subject") · the lemma Usque in saeculum saeculi @1052B. And three look-alikes that are different words: quousque @1059B, hucusque @1061A and @1061C. |
gentes family | 8 occurrences, rendered Gentiles 3 · nations 3 · nation 2, decided per site. The three "Gentiles" are the sites where the Jews are the named other half (propter fidem gentium @1051C, a Judaeis … ad gentes @1052A, Israel et gentium @1056D). The three "nations" are generic (Caeteras gentes sub angelis @1054A, gentes Israel @1054D, ad omnes gentes missa @1058C). The two singular gente are both gente Judaeorum @1055C/1056B → "the nation of the Jews", which is the axis's own settled treatment of a singular gens of the Jewish people. No singular gens in a non-ethnic metaphor occurs, so §A5's named exception is not engaged. |
mysterium/sacramentum | mystery 1 · sacrament 0 (profunditate mysteriorum @1059A). No bleed. |
daemonium/diabolus | demon 2 · devil 4 · Satan 0: daemones @1054D → "the demons"; Diabolum/diabolus ×3 @1056C and Diabolus @1057B → "the devil". No daemonium in the range; no bleed either way. |
turba/multitudo | zero occurrences of either. The instrument was checked, not assumed: these are psalms of ascent and of exile, and the Gospel crowds are absent, as they were in Bands A and B and in the previous stint. |
Diapsalma | zero occurrences. Not engaged. |
In finem → "Unto the end" | 2 occurrences, both at the Ps CXXXVIII titulus (the head lemma and its re-quotation), both read at the plate, both so rendered. Zero rivals. |
Psalmus David / Psalmus ipsi David | Both occur and both are read at the plate: Psalmus David. @1056D → "A psalm of David", Psalmus ipsi David. @1058A → "A psalm to David himself". Kept distinct. |
Dominus virtutum | zero occurrences. Not engaged. |
sedes → "seat" | one occurrence, Sedebunt super sedem tuam @1052B → "They shall sit upon thy seat." Not "throne." (sedere in domo domini @1053B and super puteum sedit @1056A are the verb and are rendered "sit".) |
| archaism | Both memberships checked, not italics alone. 11 -eth/doth forms in the running English, every one inside an italic lemma (trembleth, bringeth, judgeth, doth, endureth, giveth, feedeth, looketh, knoweth, filleth); zero in gloss voice. A twelfth, "my soul knoweth right well", stands inside a [var:] marker — it is my English of the Clementine's wording, i.e. quoted scripture inside the apparatus, and is licensed on the same ground. No « » guillemets occur anywhere in my Latin, so the second membership is not engaged in the other direction. |
| em-dashes | zero across all five chunks. |
§8 · CRUCES — passages rendered literally, with the difficulty named
- ⭐
Charitas saeculi@1053B, the fifteenth degree. The series has just given the fourteenth as Charitas quae facit fratres habitare in unum, and the very next sentence says this psalm is de charitate Dei. So "the charity of the world" sits oddly between them. The plate printssaeculiat 900 dpi and I have rendered it as printed. Two readings are open — saeculi as "of this present age" (charity exercised in the world, over against the cloister of the fourteenth degree), or a defect for something like coeli — and neither is a reading I can license from this leaf. Recorded, not repaired. - ⭐
Non alia gratia sit qua diligitur Deus, et alia qua proximus.@1053B. Our twin reads the construingNon quod alia gratia sit; the plate has noquod. Rendered from the plate as a flat statement, "There is not one grace whereby God is loved, and another whereby the neighbour", which keeps the negation exactly where Migne prints it. ⚑ This is §A6's licence used in the direction it was written for, and the patch is filed. Os ab osse, non ab ore@1060D. An etymology of the Latin word, and Migne sets it in ROMAN, not italic. Translating it destroys it; italicising it would break span parity. The Latin words are carried through as printed, in roman, exactly as Pattern 7's non-word class prescribes for type that cannot be Englished, and the reader has the facing column. Os is bone, not mouth; that is the whole gloss, and it cannot be said in English without becoming the translator's.Invenit consilium, sed sic potero fugere iratum.@1060A. Migne prints no question mark, and the sentence wants one: "He found a counsel, but thus shall I be able to flee from him angered." The mark is not supplied (Pattern 8) and the strain is recorded here. The preceding clauses are all first-person deliberation, so the shift toInvenitis Migne's too.et ubi et precatur qui exaltentur@1051B. A doubledetwith a bare relative. Rendered "and where he also prays that they may be exalted";quiis read as the subject of exaltentur with an unexpressed antecedent, the Jews of the next clause. A second reading —quiforut— would be a Pattern 7 repair and is not taken.Hoc in hominibus fecit propter poculum suum.@1054C. poculum ("his own cup") is confirmed at the plate. Rendered literally, "for his own cup's sake." The image is unexplained by anything in the surrounding gloss and I have not supplied an explanation.et in servis, id est, fidelibus, consolabitur@1055A. consolabitur is deponent and Migne gives it no object. Rendered "he will comfort," with no object supplied — "he will comfort himself" and "he will be comforted" were both considered and both supply something the Latin does not print, which is the §F8 class this band keeps meeting. The[var:]beside it names the Clementine's deprecabitur so the reader can see what the substitution cost.Nonne qui oderunt te, Domine.@1061C (Ps 138:21, …oderam). ⛔ Rendered as the stump — "Have not they that hate thee, O Lord." — and NOT completed with "did I not hate them", although the very next line prints the fuller form Nonne qui oderunt te oderam? and would make the completion look obvious. That is exactly why it is refused: Migne prints the head lemma short and then expounds it, the 0965B Oculi mei case.Memento, Domine, David et omnis.@1050C (Ps 131:1, …omnis mansuetudinis ejus). Same ruling: rendered "Remember, O Lord, David, and all." as printed. LikewiseAb extremo@1054B,Terram super aquas@1056A,Dat escam@1056D,Dextera mea@1057B,Cornu David@1052C — six truncated lemmata rendered short.quia quatenus agnoscit, eatenus ignoscit@1060C. The plate's third person is rendered "in so far as he acknowledges, in so far he pardons" — the sinner acknowledges, God pardons, two different unexpressed subjects in one clause. Our twin'sagnosciswould have given "thou acknowledgest", a second-person address with no other second person in the paragraph. The subject was named before it was supplied, per the unexpressed-subject rule.quas Israel excolit conformando sibi@1054D.quasis feminine plural and its antecedent isgentestwo clauses back, across an interveningquem pascunt. Rendered "or which Israel cultivates by conforming them to himself" — the noun is not repeated in the English, so the antecedent stays where Migne left it.
§9 · SECTIONS READ CLEAN, and what I checked in them
⚑ A logged column is not a checked column, so this names the check, not the looking.
- 1051A–1051D (Ps CXXXI, verses 4–9). Collated word by word against the plate: agrees at every word except the punctuation listed in the patch file. Checked specifically for negation — non amplius credatur mihi · Est qui non dormit · somnus non venit ad oculos · si sua non quaerit · ne fiat locus Dei · ne Judaei sint penitus alieni · non audit Deus ad vitam aeternam · ut jam non conturberis · mors ultra non dominabitur — nine negatives, nine carried, and none moved across a comma.
- 1053C–1054A (Ps CXXXIII close and Ps CXXXIV opening). Checked every unexpressed subject in the
Benedicatgloss, a chain of five verbs (hortatur … benedicit … sint … sunt … convenit) whose subject changes from the psalmist to the many to the blessing; the English names each once and does not carry one over. - 1057B–1057D (Ps CXXXVI, the Edom gloss). Checked the Esau / Jacob / major / minor chain for a reassigned subject — the elder is the carnal man and the younger the spiritual, and the English keeps that order against the pull of prius … postea. Also checked dum putant nocere mali, coronas dant:
maliis the nominative subject, not a genitive with nocere, so the wicked give the crowns; reading it the other way would reverse who does what. - 1058B–1058D (Ps CXXXVII). Checked the two
Non sunt aliae viaeclauses for the §F8 apposition trap: the negative is marked twice in the English, once in each limb, because English apposition does not inherit it across the comma. - 1060B–1060C (Ps CXXXVIII, the darkness gloss). Checked nox mihi facta est illuminatio against the lemma nox facta est illuminatio four lines below: Migne prints the dative in the gloss and not in the lemma, and the English keeps that difference, which is what the
[var:]at 1060C exists to expose. - 1061B (the
Adhuc sum tecumgloss). Checked the three unexpressed subjects across agnoscunt / agnoverunt / reveletur: the first two are the Jews, the third is Christ, and the English says so without supplying a pronoun that could resolve to the wrong one.
§10 · HANDOFF
- ⛔ Fourteen markers stand unlocked behind the patch pass (§2), and six of them carry an English edit that must land in the same commit. Both are itemised site by site in
data/briefs/8967-PENDING-TEI-PATCHES.mdunderBAND C — stint 0092–0096. Two are 7a⁗ sites where the negative has to be written outside the marker (1058D, 1059D); one (1058Cdici) requires the English clause to be rebuilt because the present rendering is our repair. - ⚑ Three sites need a RULING at the patch pass, not a mechanical application: 1059C
justificaui(reading certain, correction not), 1059DQuo ibo spiritu tuo?(the patch makes Migne's lemma contradict his own gloss, which may be right but should be chosen), and 1060BEt dixit×2 (third person against the gloss's first-person Deliberavi). - All twelve of my columns are CLEAN at the inner margin, and nothing is owed to Gallica from this range. The work-wide open list stands unchanged at seven.
- ⭐ 1055B is the first place in the work where Migne prints an address with NO VERSE NUMBER and our TEI silently supplies one. No marker is owed (Pattern 9), but a later collator will find nothing in our Latin to tell him the
18is ours until the patch lands. - The CC departure rate in these twelve columns is 2.6 per column, up from 1.8 in cols 1039–1050 and ~1.4–1.5 in Bands A and B. If the next stints measure the same, the budget quoted in the launch brief is low for Band C specifically and should be restated.
- ⚑ Reading page 536 licensed two markers in chunk 0097 (1062B, 1062C) that were not mine.
plate-gatenow fails on exactly one marker work-wide:[sic: quae dam]@1063D in 0097, which needs page 537.
§I.0097 — file cruces-0097.md, verbatim
# Cruces — 8967 Glossa ordinaria, Liber Psalmorum, chunks 0097–0101 ### Band C, stint 5 · cols 1061D–1071C · Psalms CXXXIX–CXLIV · 4,163 Latin words
§0 · SPAN COUNT RECONCILIATION — 234 against 234, exact
| chunk | * in the Latin body | spans |
|---|---|---|
| 0097 | 150 | 75 |
| 0098 | 64 | 32 |
| 0099 | 62 | 31 |
| 0100 | 94 | 47 |
| 0101 | 98 | 49 |
| total | 468 | 234 |
data/briefs/8967-lemmata-0097.txt declares 234 and carries 234 [10xx]-prefixed entries. They agree exactly. Ends checked as well: the brief's first entry is [1061D] VERS. 1.-- In finem Psalmus David. and my Latin's first span is In finem Psalmus David.; its last is [1071C] VERS. 21.-- Laudationem. and my last span is Laudationem. The split is sound at both ends.
English spans, with the English-only markers stripped from the ratio count, are 75 / 32 / 31 / 47 / 49 — 1:1 with the Latin in every chunk. Anchors 12 / 6 / 5 / 7 / 10, verbatim and in order (each mid-sentence anchor placed at the word-break Migne prints it at, including the two inside italic spans, I have [1066D] meditated. and For thy name's sake, [1067B] O Lord…). Notes 37 / 16 / 16 / 22 / 37, byte-identical to the Latin by diff. Question marks 1 / 1 / 1 / 1 / 1 in both twins. Heads 2 / 1 / 1 / 1 / 1. verify-english reports no error on my five chunks (only the MISSING lines for 0102–0105, another stint's); plate-gate passes with all eight markers licensed. Zero em-dashes in the five files.
§1 · ⭐⭐ THE PLATE — SIX LEAVES, ELEVEN COLUMNS, NONE OF THEM EVER OPENED, AND EVERY MARGIN CLEAN
raw/scans/pl113/patrologiaecurs04migngoog.pdf, PDF pp. 536–541 = cols 1061–1072, map (col+11)/2 re-verified against the printed corner numbers on every page (1061/1062, 1063/1064, 1065/1066, 1067/1068, 1069/1070, 1071/1072). 300 dpi full page, then 900–1200 dpi crops on every disputed glyph. All six recorded in data/plate-reads.json as depth: full.
⛔ NOT ONE COLUMN IN 1061–1071 IS CLIPPED. I looked at the inner margin of every leaf before reading a word of text: every line begins with a whole word in both columns of all six pages. That matters twice over. (a) No marker in my range had to be withheld for a second copy — nothing is added to the Gallica list. (b) It is eleven more counter-examples to the mod-4 rule, three of them (1061, 1065, 1069) ≡ 1 (mod 4) and all three clean; stint 0087 found 1041 clipped and 1041 is also ≡ 1 (mod 4), which is exactly why the congruence is worthless. Open every column.
Result: 24 departures over 11 collated columns, ~2.2 per column — above Band A's 1.5, Band B's 1.4 and stint 0077's 1.9. Full report appended to data/briefs/8967-PENDING-TEI-PATCHES.md.
### The control named for every hard call
omnibns@1071B —operibus, two words later on the same line, sets auwhose arch is at the bottom; the disputed sort's arch is cleanly at the top. A turned sort, and per the launch brief that is NOT in the imaging-hazard class. Anncannot become a bottom-archeduby failing to ink.lingua@1062A (our TEI has the non-wordlinqua) — the descender closes into a lower loop. Aqin this face carries a straight descender; theqofquaeon the line above supplies it.Dixit Domino@1061D — ⭐ the control is Migne himself: he setsDixi Dominocorrectly at 1062B and again at 1062B in the full lemma, twelve lines down the facing column.Fortius … qui non vult@1065B — the control is the argument, not a glyph: Migne's own next clause isPeriit fuga concluso vel forti, a dative pair naming Circumclusus and Fortis.bis actus@1068B —acumineopens the very next line and shows whatacu-looks like.eum ipsi sint@1068D — the disputed sort carries a closed crossbar;macrione line above supplies an openc, andveritateon the same line suppliese.veriteti@1067D — the same line printsvanitatitwice over with unmistakablea.simlis@1067D —Vanitation the same line sets two dottediwheresimlissets none.Frov.@1071A — the glyph has a mid-arm, which aPdoes not possess at all; and Migne sets(Prov. XXVII)correctly at 1070A. Not a brokenP.VERS. 9.for 6 @1062A — the digit has a closed bowl above a descending tail; the6of the running head1061on the same leaf has its bowl below an ascending stroke. ⭐ And the sequence itself is the second control: a realVERS. 9.stands three glosses further down the same column, so Migne prints the number twice.
§2 · ⛔⛔ THIRTEEN MIGNE DEFECTS I CANNOT FIRE — and that is the headline, not the marker table
VERS. 9. (for 6) · Dixit · apponit · Fortius · simlis · veriteti · actus · laboro · eum · corectio · fines · etc,, · omnibns — thirteen sites where Migne's type is defective and our twin has already been repaired, so a [sic:] or [cj:] on any of them is rejected by the content check, and firing one anyway would accuse Migne at a word the facing column shows him setting correctly.
My fired marker count is 7 [var:] + 1 [sic:], 0 [cj:], 0 [d:], 0 [ed:] — and it will be 7 [var:] · 5 [sic:] · 6 [cj:] after the patch pass. ⛔ Do not quote the first pair as a fact about this Psalter. It is §F2's lesson recurring for the third time in Band C.
⚑ Seven of the thirteen carry an English edit that must land in the same commit, because the English currently renders the TWIN at those sites (see §3). Each is itemised in the patch file with the exact edit, rather than left for the merge to notice — §F8's defect number 4, verbatim.
§3 · THE RULE I APPLIED WHERE PLATE AND TWIN DISAGREE — and it is stint 0077's, not a new one
§A6 says the English renders the plate where the leaf has been read. Stint 0077 found that this deadlocks where the plate's reading needs a marker the content check will not yet accept, and split the class in two. I applied the same split, so the band is consistent:
- Plate reading renders cleanly → the English renders the PLATE. Five sites:
spiritus@1067A ("their spirits"),Quia persecutus@1066B ("Because he has persecuted."),Benedicit@1069C ("He blesses now every day"),quia visione@1069C ("because nothing is more delightful than that vision"), and the addressVERS. 9.@1062A, which the English prints as Migne numbers it. - Plate reading needs an unfireable marker → the English renders the TWIN, and the marker is filed as owed. Seven sites:
Dixit,apponit,Fortius,actus,laboro,eum,fines.
⚑ Benedicit/Bene dicit is the one where the choice changes what the page says, and it is worth naming: CC's split gives "he rightly says per singulos dies" (a remark about Augustine's diction); the plate's one word gives "he blesses now day by day" (a remark about the psalmist's act). The plate governs, and the patch is filed.
⚑ VERS. 9. is deliberate and it will look wrong. My English prints Migne's misnumber while the Latin twin still prints CC's VERS. 6., so the two columns disagree visibly until the patch runs. That is the ruled class (Migne's wrong numbers are restored and marked); it is flagged here, in the patch file and in the handoff.
§4 · MARKERS FIRED — 7 [var:] and 1 [sic:], every one on a column I collated today
| col | chunk | marker | why it clears the bar |
|---|---|---|---|
| 1062B | 0097 | [var: Vulg. Isa. 5:18 Vae qui trahitis iniquitatem in funiculis vanitatis, et quasi vinculum plaustri peccatum…] | ⭐⭐ Migne prints Vae his qui trahunt peccata sicut vestem longam — an Old-Latin form sharing scarcely a word with the Clementine. Load-bearing: the gloss's next words are quia addunt peccata peccatis, and the Clementine's iniquitatem would take the argument's keyword out of its own proof-text. |
| 1062C | 0097 | [var: Vulg. Ps. 139:9 Ne tradas, a prohibitive subjunctive] | Migne prints Non tradas me, Domine, a desiderio at the VERS. 9 lemma. A negation particle swapped for another in a lemma; not a letter-level corruption of one word, so the settled single-word exclusion does not reach it. |
| 1063D | 0097 | [sic: quae dam] | see §4a |
| 1064C | 0098 | [var: Vulg. Prov. 21:20 Thesaurus desiderabilis, et oleum in habitaculo justi…] | ⭐⭐ Migne prints Thesaurus desiderabilis requiescit in ore sapientis — the LXX form. Load-bearing: the gloss is built entirely on the mouth and the eating (sapiens, quae audierit, cogitat; retractando ruminat; vir autem stultus glutit illum), and the Clementine's oleum in habitaculo justi has no mouth in it at all. |
| 1065C | 0098 | [var: Vulg. Mt 10:23 Cum autem persequentur vos in civitate ista, fugite in aliam…] | Migne prints Si vos persecuti fuerint in una civitate. Not an abridgment: a different protasis and a different demonstrative, in the sentence that licenses bodily flight from city to city. |
| 1067B | 0100 | [var: Vulg. Ps. 143:1 Psalmus David. Adversus Goliath] | The titulus. Migne prints Psalmus David ad Goliam. Three stints in Bands A and B fired [var:] on divergent tituli, consistently; this is the same class. ⚑ Confirmed at the plate, so it is Migne's and not CC's. |
| 1070A | 0101 | [var: Vulg. Prov. 27:2 Laudet te alienus, et non os tuum ; extraneus, et non labia tua…] | ⭐⭐ The most load-bearing of the seven. Migne prints Non te laudet os tuum, ne arrogans videaris, and the gloss's reply is Sed non est arrogantia, quia Deum in te, non te laudas. The purpose clause exists nowhere in the Vulgate, and the keyword of the answer exists only inside it. 7a″'s exact profile. |
| 1070C | 0101 | [var: Vulg. Mt 25:41 Discedite a me maledicti in ignem aeternum…] | Migne prints Ite, maledicti — a different verb and no a me. |
Every marker was checked against the word it stands on (§F8's misplaced-[sic:] lesson): the seven [var:] sit at the end of the lemma or quotation they annotate, and the [sic:] wraps the broken run and nothing else.
### 4a. The one [sic:], and why it is fireable when thirteen of its siblings are not At 1063D both the plate and our twin read Sunt quae dam contemptibilia. The gap between quae and dam measures the same as the gaps Sunt–quae and dam–contem- on that justified line, and a compositor does not open a space inside a word to justify. Split type, Pattern 10, and the twin carries it — which is the whole difference between this site and the thirteen in §2. The whole broken run is carried untranslated in italics, spacing included: "There are [sic: quae dam] contemptible things from which nevertheless the earth receives its fatness." ⚑ The quarantine takes nothing with it (7a⁗): quaedam governs no verb, negation or preposition, so the English beside it says everything the Latin says.
§5 · THE DIVERGENCE LIST — EVERY SCRIPTURE SPAN IN THE RANGE, INCLUDING THE CLEAN ONES
Collated against sources/vulgate/clementine-flat.txt. A list of findings alone cannot be told from a report by an agent that never looked, so the clean ones are here too.
5a. Divergent, marker FIRED (7) — listed in §4.
### 5b. Divergent, marker DECLINED, with the reason
- Ps 139:8 @1062C
Virtus salutis meae obumbrasti super caput meum.— ClementineDomine, Domine, virtus salutis meae, obumbrasti super caput meum in die belli. Abridged at both ends. Declined; every printed word is the verse's own. - Ps 139:14 @1063A
Habitabunt cum vultu tuo.— Clementinehabitabunt recti cum vultu tuo. Declined: a stump, and the gloss (Quia Deum, sicut est, videbunt) does not argue from recti. Rendered as the stump, "They shall dwell with thy countenance." - 2 Cor 2:16 @1062D
Aliis sumus odor vitae in vitam, aliis odor mortis in mortem— Clementinealiis quidem odor mortis in mortem : aliis autem odor vitae in vitam. ⚑ Migne reverses the two members, drops quidem/autem and supplies sumus from v. 15. Declined: a recast, not a variant reading (stint 0077's Is 53:2 precedent); both members are present and the gloss adduces it for the double effect, not for the order. - 1 Rg 15:23 @1063B
Quasi peccatum hariolandi est repugnare, et quasi scelus idololatriae est nolle acquiescere— Clementinequasi peccatum ariolandi est, repugnare : et quasi scelus idololatriae, nole acquiescere. Declined: an attested orthography (Pattern 9) plus a supplied copula in the second member. ⚑ Note the Clementine's ownnoleis the defective form here, not Migne'snolle. - Mt 6:6 @1065A
…et clauso ostio ora Patrem tuum qui videt in abscondito, etc.— Clementine…ora Patrem tuum in abscondito : et Pater tuus, qui videt in abscondito, reddet tibi. Declined: an abridgment closed withetc.; every word is in the verse. - Jn 10:12 @1065C
Videt lupum venientem et fugit— Clementine addset dimittit oves. Abridgment. Declined. - Lk 15:19 @1066C
non sum dignus vocari filius tuus— Clementinejam non sum dignus. Abridgment. Declined. - Jer 2:29 @1066C
Quid vultis mecum in judicio contendere?— Clementinemecum judicio contendere. A supplied preposition. Declined. - Zach 1:3 @1067A
Convertimini ad me, et ego convertar ad vos— Clementine drops the ego and interposesait Dominus exercituum. An abridgment plus an emphatic pronoun. Declined; the gloss argues from the turning, not the pronoun. - Ps 103:29 @1067A
Auferes spiritus eorum, et deficient— Clementinespiritum. ⭐ Migne's plural is confirmed at the plate and CC had moved him onto the Clementine. Declined for the marker (number alone, and the gloss's argument is the failing, not the number) but filed as a Class-1 patch, and the English renders the plate. - Ps 143:4 @1067D
Vanitati similis factus est: dies ejus sicut umbra.— ClementineHomo vanitati similis factus est ; dies ejus sicut umbra praetereunt. A stump at the head, abridged at the tail. Declined; see the crux at §8.2 for the supplied "he". - Ps 143:13 @1068D
Oves eorum fetosae.— Clementinefoetosae. Orthographic. Declined. - Ps 144:18 @1071C
Prope est omnibus invocantibus eum.— ClementinePrope est Dominus omnibus invocantibus eum. Declined: a stump, rendered as one ("He is near to all that call upon him") with no name supplied. - Ps 83:5 @1069C
In saecula saeculorum laudabunt, cited(Psal. XXXVIII)— the words are Ps 83:5's own, minus itste; the locus is wrong (Ps 83, not 38). No[var:]: Pattern 14 marks divergent scripture text, and a wrong locus is Migne's and stands (stint 0087's(Matth. XVIII)ruling, and the 0971A precedent for repairing one). - Prov 24:16 @1071A
quia septies cadit justus et resurgit; impii autem infirmantur in malis— ClementineSepties enim cadet justus, et resurget : impii autem corruent in malum. A real divergence, declined: Migne does not set it as a quotation (no italic anywhere in the run) and absorbs it into his ownquiaclause, so it is paraphrase in the gloss's voice. Logged rather than marked. - Jas 4:6 / 1 Pt 5:5 @1071A
quia superbis resistit— ClementineDeus superbis resistit, humilibus autem dat gratiam. Declined, and this is the same phrase stint 0087 declined at 1050B for the same reason: unitalicised, subjectless, in gloss voice. - Ps 142:11 @1067B
Propter nomen tuum, Domine, vivificabis me in aequitate tua.— the Clementine's colon falls aftervivificabis meand the verse continueseduces de tribulatione animam meam. Punctuation and abridgment, no word divergence. Declined. - Ps 141:4 @1065A
defecit spiritus meus,re-quoted in the gloss — Ps 141:4 readsin deficiendo ex me spiritum meum; the words Migne quotes are Ps 142:7's verbatim, and he is glossing Ps 141. Declined: a cross-quotation, not a variant, and the gloss turns on the failing spirit, not on the case. - Ps 142:1 @1066B
O Domine, etc.— Migne prefixes a vocativeOthe Clementine has nowhere (Domine, exaudi orationem meam). Declined; logged because it is an addition and not an abridgment.
### 5c. Collated and found to AGREE with the Clementine — the checked negatives In finem. Psalmus David (Ps 139:1) · Eripe me, Domine, ab homine [malo] and A viro iniquo (139:2) · Qui cogitaverunt (139:3) · Acuerunt · Sicut serpentis · Venenum aspidum sub labiis eorum (139:4, verbatim) · Custodi me, Domine (139:5) · Superbi · Et funes extenderunt in laqueum (139:6, verbatim) · Dixi Domino · Dixi Domino: Deus meus · Exaudi, Domine, vocem deprecationis meae (139:7, verbatim) · Caput circuitus and Labor labiorum ipsorum operiet eos (139:10, verbatim) · Cadent super eos (139:11) · Vir linguosus, Injustum, in interitu (139:12) · confitebuntur, Et habitabunt, Verumtamen (139:14) · Dirigatur oratio, Oratio, incensum, Elevatio manuum mearum (140:2) · Pone, Domine, custodiam, Ostium (140:3) · Non declines, Ad excusandas excusationes, Non communicabo, Cum electis (140:4) · Corripiet me, Oleum autem peccatoris (140:5) · Judices, Audient (140:6) · Crassitudo terrae, Secus infernum (140:7) · Quia ad te, Domine (140:8) · Custodi me a laqueo, quem statuerunt mihi, A scandalis operantium iniquitatem (140:9, verbatim) · Cadent in retiaculo, Singulariter sum ego donec transeam, Transeam (140:10, verbatim) · Intellectus David (141:1) · Voce mea ad Dominum clamavi, Deprecatus sum (141:2) · In conspectu ejus (141:3) · Et tu cognovisti, Semitas, In via (141:4) · Considerabam ad dexteram, et non erat qui cognosceret, Periit fuga, Et non est qui requirat [animam] (141:5) · Clamavi ad te, Domine, Spes mea, Portio (141:6) · A persequentibus me (141:7) · Educ de custodia (141:8) · Hodie mecum eris in paradiso (Lk 23:43, verbatim) · Psalmus David (142:1) · In veritate tua, in tua justitia (142:1) · Et non intres in judicium, Cum servo tuo (142:2) · Quia persecutus (142:3) · Memor fui, Meditatus sum, In factis manuum, Memor fui dierum (142:5) · Velociter, Defecit spiritus, In lacum (142:7) · Mane, Notam fac mihi viam, Animam (142:8) · Spiritus tuus bonus (142:10) · Benedictus, Qui docet manus meas (143:1) · Misericordia mea (143:2) · Domine, quid est homo quia, Quia reputas eum? (143:3) · Domine, inclina (143:5) · Emitte manum, de alto, Emitte manum tuam de alto, Eripe me, Et libera (143:7) · Deus, canticum novum cantabo tibi, Canticum (143:9, verbatim) · Gladio, Maligno (143:10) · Et erue me de manu filiorum alienorum (143:11, verbatim) · Quorum filii, Filiae, Compositae (143:12) · Promptuaria, Ex hoc in illud, In egressibus (143:13) · Boves, Maceriae, Neque transitus, neque clamor (143:14, verbatim) · Beatum (143:15) · Lingua eorum gladius acutus (Ps 56:5, verbatim) · Non veni pacem mittere, sed gladium (Mt 10:34, verbatim) · Laudatio ipsi David, Exaltabo te, In saeculum saeculi (144:1, verbatim) · Per singulos dies (144:2) · Nimis (144:3) · Generatio et generatio, Opera tua, Et potentiam tuam (144:4) · Et virtutem (144:6) · Memoriam abundantiae suavitatis tuae eructabunt, Eructabunt (144:7, verbatim) · Miserator et misericors, miserator, Patiens (144:8) · Miserationes, Misericors, Et miserationes ejus (144:9) · Confiteantur tibi, Domine, omnia opera tua, Et sancti tui (144:10, verbatim) · Gloriam regni (144:11) · Ut notam (144:12) · Regnum tuum, Fidelis Dominus in omnibus, Fidelis (144:13) · Qui corruunt, Et erigit omnes elisos (144:14, verbatim) · Oculi omnium in te sperant, Domine, Et tu das escam illorum in tempore opportuno (144:15, verbatim) · Aperis tu manum (144:16) · Justus, Viae, Viis suis, et sanctus in omnibus operibus suis (144:17, verbatim apart from the plate's omnibns) · Voluntatem timentium se faciet (144:19, verbatim) · Laudationem (144:21).
### 5d. The verse numbering was checked, not assumed Every VERS. n.-- in my range was resolved against the Clementine's versification for the psalm named in the head. All agree except one, and that one is Migne's own defect: at 1062A he runs 3, 4, 5, 9, 7, 8, 9, 10, 11, 12, 14 — the first 9 is the Ps 139:6 lemma Superbi (absconderunt superbi laqueum mihi), and a second, genuine VERS. 9. follows three glosses later. Restored as printed and marked (§2, §3). The gaps elsewhere (139 skips 13; 140 skips 1; 141 skips 9–10; 142 skips 4, 5, 9, 11, 12; 143 skips 2, 6, 8, 11; 144 skips 5, 20) are non-glossing, not misnumbering — the same pattern the 0847A read found in Psalm II.
§6 · usque ad — THE etc. SPLICE TEST, COUNTED, AND THE REVERSAL CHECKED FOR
29 occurrences of usque ad in my Latin. 29 formula, 0 non-formula. Every one follows an etc. and names where the abridged father resumes; every one is rendered "as far as." By chunk: 13 / 1 / 2 / 9 / 4.
- ⚑ One is separated from its
etc.by an intervening column anchor —etc., [1069B] usque ad@0101 — and a naive regex scores it non-formula. The test is about the TOKEN before, not the character before, exactly as stint 0077 found; I applied it across the anchor. - ⭐ Zero
ad usque, and I checked the PLATE for it, not our TEI. Stint 0077's finding is that the reversal is invisible to any count taken from our file by construction. On all six leaves I read the italic pair as printed at each of the 29 sites: Migne setsusque adat every one. The reversal exists (1015A) but does not occur in cols 1061–1071. - No look-alike in the range. The only other
usquein my Latin is insidequibusque(@1063C), which is not in the class; there is no temporal or spatialusque ad, and no scripture quotation containing the two words.
§7 · THE RULED AXES — what my range actually did with each
| axis | my range |
|---|---|
gentes family | ⛔ ZERO occurrences. The instrument was checked, not trusted: a gent grep returns exactly one hit in my five chunks, diligentes — the documented false positive. No gentes, gentium, gentilis, gentilitas, ethnicus, and no singular gens, so §A5's named exception is not engaged either. |
natio | Zero. The grep's only hits are dominationis ×2 — the second documented false positive. |
mysterium / sacramentum | mystery 0 · sacrament 1. ⚑ The one site is a strain and I am naming it rather than hiding it: @1069B juxta illud sacramentum quod praecepit Dominus Moysi in tabernaculo septem lucernas ponere. The sense is the older "sacred sign / mystery", not a sacrament of the Church. The axis is binding and I obeyed it — "according to that sacrament wherein the Lord commanded Moses…" — but if Wilson wants a named exception for sacramentum of an Old-Testament type, this is the site that asks for it. Flagged, not decided. |
daemonium / diabolus | demon 1 (daemones @1067B, "the demons") · devil 6 (diabolus ×4, diaboli, diabolum) · Satan 0 (satanas does not occur). No bleed in either direction. |
turba / multitudo | Neither word occurs. Reporting the absence rather than a zero that could be read as drift: these are psalms of complaint and praise, and the Gospel crowds are simply absent, as in Bands A and B and in every Band C stint so far. |
usque ad | 29 formula / 0 not — §6. |
Diapsalma | ⭐ Two occurrences, both @1062B and @1062D, both ROMAN and unitalicised in our TEI, and I confirmed both at the plate: Migne sets the word upright in both places. Two more plate confirmations for §A2, which now stands on five reads in Band A, twelve in Band B and these two. Rendered Diapsalma, roman, never "Selah", never italic. |
In finem | One body occurrence, the Ps CXXXIX titulus @1061D, rendered "Unto the end." Zero rivals. |
Canticum graduum / gradus | ⛔ NOT ENGAGED — zero occurrences of either. The three canticum in my range are Ps 143:9's canticum novum (×2) and its stump Canticum., rendered "a new canticle" and "A canticle." The gradual psalms end at Ps CXXXIII, before my range opens. Recorded so a sweep does not read the absence as an omission. |
Psalmus David / Psalmus ipsi David | ⭐ Both forms occur, and both are confirmed at the plate. In finem Psalmus David. @1061D and Psalmus David. @1066A → "A psalm of David"; Psalmus David ad Goliam. @1067B → "A psalm of David against Goliath" (with a [var:]); and Laudatio ipsi David. @1069A → "Praise, for David himself." They stay different English. |
Dominus virtutum | Does not occur. |
sedes | Does not occur (sedes, sedem, sede all zero), so §A5's "seat" ruling is not engaged. |
| heads | PSALMUS CXXXIX.–PSALMUS CXLIV. → PSALM CXXXIX.–PSALM CXLIV. All six numerals left Roman, per §A3. |
| archaism | ⛔ ZERO -eth, zero saith, zero doth in all five chunks. I checked both memberships and then simply did not need the form: thou/thy/thee carries Pattern 17's number marking, and -est on a second-person singular verb (thou givest, thou deferrest) is grammar, not register. No guillemets occur anywhere in my range, so the second membership test had nothing to catch. |
| em-dashes | Zero across all five chunks. |
(ID.) / (Ibid.) | Never expanded. 128 notes pass through verbatim, (ID.) and (CAS.)/(CASS.) included, and the two malformed ones are passed through as the twin has them: (CAS). @1067A and (ID). @1071C are printed in the English as body text exactly as our Latin carries them. ⭐ The plate prints both correctly — the misplaced point is CC's — so both are patch sites with an English edit owed. |
| Pattern 17 | Checked site by site. The one place it decides a rendering is the Jer 2:29 quotation @1066C: vultis and dereliquistis are plural ("Why will you contend… you have all forsaken me") while servo tuo in the same italic run is singular ("with thy servant"). Both are in one span, and the number shift is Migne's. |
§8 · CRUCES — rendered literally, with the difficulty named
- ⭐⭐
AUG.)@1065B, with no opening parenthesis. Both the plate and our twin print it, and CC could not parse it, so it is not an[n:]in the Latin at all — it stands as body text. I have rendered it as printed,AUG.), and fired no marker. The reasoning, so it can be audited: Pattern 8 carries printed punctuation as printed and never marks it, and Pattern 9 keeps a structural label out of the marker system precisely because the facing Latin preserves the defect. ⚑ A reader will think we lost a bracket. If Wilson prefers a[sic: AUG.)]— the content check would accept it, since the twin carries the run — it is one edit. Flagged, not decided. Vanitati similis factus est@1067D — the one supplied subject in my range, and its authority is on the same line. Migne prints the Ps 143:4 lemma without the Vulgate'sHomo, so English has to supply something. The authority is the gloss's own next sentence, Quando homo conditus est, veriteti similis factus est. Rendered "He is become like to vanity" — and nothing else in the range supplies a subject the Latin does not print.- ⭐
Vel, combinabor.@1063C — where a negative must NOT be pulled inside an italic span. The lemma isNon communicabo.; Migne offers the alternative reading as the bare verb, without repeating the negative. Rendering the span "I shall not be coupled" would put a negation inside an italic span that does not print one. Rendered "I shall be coupled.", and Migne himself supplies the negative two clauses later in roman type (Non combinabor ad similitudinem carnis), which the English carries at the place he prints it. This is §F8's apposition rule read in the other direction. non ut homines Domini, qui emunt saccello, tu sanguine@1062C. Rendered literally, "not as the men of the Lord, who buy with a purse, thou with blood." The splice cuts Augustine off before the construction closes;Dominiis genitive or nominative plural and cannot be a vocative (Domine). No word supplied, and the difficulty is here rather than smoothed.Custodi me, quia per multa fallit, quae nequit praecavere@1062B. ⚑ The subject ofnequitis not the subject offallit. The deceiver deceives; the one who cannot forestall is the one praying. Rendered "because he deceives through many things which he cannot guard against beforehand," with the shift of subject named here — this is precisely §F8's "a case or a subject silently reassigned", and it parses either way.Sicut Absalom David, sic Judas Christum, falsi fratres corpus ejus@1066A. No verb is printed anywhere in the sentence. Rendered "As Absalom did to David, so Judas to Christ, false brethren to his body" — "did" is the only word supplied, and it is supplied from the psalm's own titulus (quando persequebatur eum Absalom), which Migne prints two lines above as the head lemma. Naming a stronger verb ("persecuted") would decide what he leaves open.Novem sunt opera@1069D, followed by EIGHT. Migne lists potentia, magnificentia, sanctitas, mirabilia, virtus, terribilium magnitudo, memoria, justitia — eight items under the word "nine". Both the twin and the plate agree, so it is his. Rendered as printed, nothing supplied, no marker: a miscount in the author's own prose is not broken type.Quae de solis saxis in hortis sed vel vineis@1068D. ⛔ Does not construe as printed —sed velhas no slot and no verb governsQuae. Twin and plate agree word for word. Rendered as closely as the words allow, "Which are of stones alone in gardens but or in vineyards," and the difficulty recorded rather than repaired. No conjecture offered: here it would be invention.id est vita ejus notoria, id est transitoria@1067D.notoriaglossed bytransitoriais strained (one expects nocturna or notata), but twin and plate agree. Rendered "his notorious life, that is, his transitory life", literally, with the strain named.Quod dicit clamavi, exponit, deprecatus sum.@1064D. ⚑ Migne's italic runs across his own gloss verb. The span is one span and containsexponit, which is not scripture. Rendered as one span, "I have cried, he expounds, I have made supplication." — deliberately awkward, because splitting it would break span parity and silently correct his compositor.Qui hic per singulos dies, in aeterno die merebitur laudare@1069B. The first clause has no verb at all. Rendered "He who here every day does so, shall deserve in the eternal day to praise" — "does so" is the minimum English needs, and it is flagged rather than dressed up.inde nos ejus@1070A. Elliptical: "thence we [are mindful] of him". Rendered "and thence we of him", the ellipsis left open.Si opera laudas, et te qui es Dei opus@1070A. The second limb has no verb; rendered "If thou praisest the works, thou praisest thyself also, who art the work of God" — the verb carried over by zeugma from the printed first limb, nothing new introduced.Dicent ergo virtutem disciplinantis et punientis, si praedicant regnum aeternum, non tacent ignem aeternum@1070A. Two coordinate clauses that English wants to subordinate. Rendered with Migne's commas and both clauses left coordinate, per Pattern 8, rather than smoothed into "if they preach… and do not keep silent" — which would have supplied a conjunction he does not print.- ⭐
eructabunt→ "shall belch forth", and it is a deliberate register call. The Douay's "shall publish" is the received English of Ps 144:7, and it would break the gloss, whose whole argument is alimentary: Manducat qui discit, eructat qui docet… Sic ergo manduca ut eructes. 7a″ requires the exposition to rest on the word on the page, so all five occurrences read "belch forth". Recorded because it is the least comfortable rendering in the stint and a later sweep should not "fix" it. Ut notam.@1070D rendered "That known." Migne prints two words of Ps 144:12 (ut notam faciant filiis hominum) and stops. Completing it to "That they may make known" would supply the verb the Vulgate has and Migne does not — the §F8 class. Rendered as the stump, awkwardly and on purpose, the way stint 0087 renderedDomine, non est.at 1050A.
### 8a. Every stump checked against §F8's fourteen, by name Eripe me, Domine, ab homine. stays "from the man" (not "the evil man" — and Migne's own gloss quotes Ab homine malo three lines later, so completing the head would pre-empt it) · Non tradas me, Domine, a desiderio. stays "from desire" (not "from my desire") · Dirigatur oratio. stays "Let prayer be directed" (not "my prayer") · Caput circuitus. stays "The head of the compassing" (not "of them") · Cadent in retiaculo. stays "in the net" (not "in his net") · Considerabam ad dexteram. stays "to the right hand" (not "my right hand") · et non erat qui cognosceret. stays "none that knew" (not "knew me") · Et non est qui requirat animam. stays "the soul" (not "my soul") · Defecit spiritus. stays "The spirit hath failed" (not "my spirit" — where the SAME words with meus printed do get "my spirit" at 1065A) · In factis manuum. stays "of the hands" (not "of thy hands") · velociter exaudi; stays "hear speedily" (not "hear me") · Emitte manum. stays "Send forth the hand" while the full lemma Emitte manum tuam de alto twelve words later keeps its "thy" — the gloss expounds the two differently and the English keeps them apart · Promptuaria. stays "Storehouses" (not "their") · In egressibus. stays "In the goings out" (not "their") · Aperis tu manum. stays "Thou openest the hand" (not "thy hand") · Prope est omnibus invocantibus eum. stays without "the Lord" · Ostium. stays "A door" (not "the door of circumstance"). Nowhere did I supply a possessive or a completion the Latin does not print.
§9 · CANDIDATES RAISED AND REJECTED — the instrument, not the leftovers
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[cj:]or a patch onretiaculo/retiuculo@1064C — the most important rejection in the stint. The Ps 140:10 lemma looked to me likeretiuculo, a non-word, at 300 and again at 900 dpi; the vowel betweenretiandculoreads open-topped where an italicashould close. REFUSED. The scan does not resolve italicafromuat this size with a control I trust, and the form our twin carries is the correct Latin. A patch needs positive evidence, and an ambiguous glyph whose printed form is correct Latin is refused — thelocutus/locutosrule exactly. Recorded so the next reader does not present it as a new finding. - ⛔
[sic:]on the thirteen of §2 — the readings are Migne's and confirmed, but the marker content must be verbatim in the twin and is not. Filed as owed, not fired. - ⛔
[sic:]onVERS 8.@1066A andVERS. 19,@1071B — declined. Pattern 9 normalizes a section label in English precisely because the facing Latin preserves the misprint. This is §F8's "right about the fact, wrong about the rule" case; the observation goes in the patch report, the English printsVERS. 8.--andVERS. 19.--. ⚑ Distinguished from theVERS. 9.case at 1062A, which is NOT this class: a misspelt label has no English exponent, but a wrong number is an address a reader can follow to the wrong verse, and Wilson has ruled that class. - ⛔
[sic:]on the sigla(AUG,)@1067A,(CAS).@1067A,(ID).@1071C — declined, all three, and for two different reasons.(AUG,)is Migne's comma and takes no marker (Pattern 9).(CAS).and(ID).are CC's, not Migne's — the plate prints both correctly — so a marker there would be a false public accusation, theAventus@1046C failure in a new costume. - ⛔
[d:]onDomine, Domine— not present. Checked because Ps 139:8 and 142:1 both double the vocative in the Clementine; Migne prints it once in each place, so there is nothing to mark and nothing to restore. - ⛔
[d:]onin saeculum et in saeculum saeculi@1069C andGeneratio et generatio@1069A. Both are the psalm's own figure, expounded as such by the gloss (ut repetendo confirmet reasoning at the parallel site). Declined:[d:]marks a compositor's doubling, not a Hebraism the text argues from — theConcupierunt concupiscentiamprecedent. - ⛔
[var:]on the eighteen abridged, reordered or re-cast quotations of §5b — declined individually, each with its reason. Abridgment is this recension's method, not a variant reading. - ⛔
[var:]onspiritus/spiritum@1067A — declined although it is a genuine, plate- confirmed divergence from the Clementine: number alone, with no argumentative weight in the gloss. The patch is filed and the English renders the plate; the marker is not owed. - ⛔
[sic:]on the seven bracket-shaped stray sorts (1062C ×2, 1067D, 1068A, 1070A, 1070C, 1071B) — declined as furniture of this gathering, and explicitly matched to stint 0087's[psalmorum/[ostenditclass at 1039–1041: a repeating sort, not a reading. ⚑ They are reported as copy condition, not suppressed. - ⛔ Word fusions at 1062A (
Eripeme,impugnantenim), 1068A (venerit,ei) — declined. Each stands on a tightly justified line whose neighbouring word spaces are equally narrow. ⭐ The contrast withquae dam@1063D is the whole point: there the internal gap equals the neighbouring word spaces, here it is visibly smaller than them. The rule cuts both ways and I ran it in both directions on the same leaf-run. - ⛔
Ex per|sona@1066A — a line break with no hyphen. Declined: a hyphenation failure at a turn is not a word-division defect, and CC correctly joins it. TheIdeo-|queprecedent. - ⛔ Column-band arithmetic — not reported. Migne's A–D marks sit in the central gutter and serve both columns at the same height; nothing in my range breaks mid-word across an anchor.
- ⛔ The
(Psal. XXXVIII)@1069C and(Prov. XII)@1064C wrong loci — no[var:](§5b), and no patch either: they are Migne's own citations and stand. Only theFrov.at 1071A is a patch, because that is broken type rather than a wrong reference. - ⛔
[nt:]on any note (Pattern 15) — none owed. All 128 notes in my range are attribution sigla or scripture locators; not one is editorial prose. Checked, not assumed.
§10 · SECTIONS READ CLEAN, AND WHAT I CHECKED IN THEM
⚑ A logged column is not a checked column, so this names the check, not the looking.
- 1063A–1063C (Ps CXL, vv. 2–4). Collated word by word against the plate: two departures (
apponit,(CASS.)), the remaining run agreeing at every word. Checked specifically: the double negationut nec cogitatio iniqua sapiat, nec prava voluntas … erumpat— both carried, and scoped twice in English ("that neither may… nor may…"), because English apposition does not inherit a negative; and thecombinabor/combinarichain for a supplied negative (§8.3). - 1064D–1065A (Ps CXLI, the opening). Checked the Prov 21:20 quotation word by word against the Clementine before writing the
[var:], and the Mt 6:6 quotation against it before declining one. Also checked thatDavid … significat Christum. Spelunca vero carnemkeeps its three appositions distinct in English (flesh / world / sepulchre) and that none of the three is collapsed. - 1066C–1067A (Ps CXLII, vv. 2–7). Negation sweep run in full:
non justificabitur(not printed — the lemma stops atCum servo tuo),ne cum rogante disceptet, ne eum qui se damnat judicet,quod non iste humilis,non petivit justitiam judicii,non sum dignus,non ex meritis,non audit Deum dicentem,licet Deus omnia gratis faciat(concessive, not negative — checked and not treated as one). Eight negatives, eight carried, and each checked against the word it governs rather than against the sentence. - 1069D–1070A (Ps CXLIV, the nine works). Checked every one of the five conditional clauses in the
Si in magnitudine deficimus … Si opera laudaschain for a reassigned subject: the subject stays "we"/"thou" as printed at each turn, andlaudatur magis in illo qui fecitkeeps the passive with the beauty as its subject rather than being turned into "he praises". - 1070C (the Mt 25:41 gloss). Checked the three negatives of
si … non in te remaneant nisi opera ejus, non te dimittet miseratio ejus: si autem tu non dimittas opera tuafor scope, because the sentence turns entirely on which of the two lets the other go. The subject ofdimittetis his mercy, and ofdimittasis thou — the English keeps them apart. - 1071A–1071C (my last column). Checked
aequum est enim et diligentes custodire et peccatores perdereas a correlative pair (both limbs kept), and theViae … operadistinction throughhaec secundum nos dividuntur. Sed apud illum, hoc est velle, quod facere— the antecedent ofhaecis the distinction, not the works, and the English says so.
§11 · HANDOFF
- ⛔ The patch queue owes THIRTEEN markers from this stint, not one, and seven of them carry an English edit that must land in the same commit. Both are itemised site by site in
data/briefs/8967-PENDING-TEI-PATCHES.mdunderBAND C — stint 0097–0101. Do not read this stint's7 [var:] / 1 [sic:] / 0 [cj:]as a clean range. - ⚑
VERS. 9.@1062A is the one to land first. My English prints Migne's misnumber and the Latin twin still prints CC'sVERS. 6., so the two columns disagree visibly until the patch runs. It is deliberate, it is the ruled class, and it is flagged in three places. - ⭐ Cols 1061–1071 are ALL CLEAN at the inner margin — eleven more counter-examples to the mod-4 rule, three of them ≡ 1 (mod 4). No Gallica site is added by this stint; the work-wide open list stands where stint 0087 left it, at seven.
- Two open questions that are not mine to settle, both flagged rather than decided: -
AUG.)@1065B (§8.1) — render as printed with no marker, as I have, or fire[sic: AUG.)]? The content check would accept it. - The lowercase chapter numerals — Migne sets(I Reg. xv),(Joan. x),(Psal. ciii)and the rest with the chapter in lowercase roman, and CC has uppercased every one in this work. That is an editorial decision about the whole edition, not thirty separate patches, and I have filed it as one flag rather than thirty rows. -sacramentum@1069B of an Old-Testament type (§7) — the axis binds and I obeyed it, but this is the site that would ask for a named exception. - ⚑
quia visione@1069C andBenedicit@1069C will look like defects to the next reader and should not be "fixed" twice: both are Migne's, both confirmed at 900 dpi, and the English already renders them. - ⭐ One inconsistency in the already-merged bands, found while settling my own rendering and worth one line to the merge:
in saeculum saeculiis rendered "For ever and for ever and ever" at 0039 and "Unto the age of the age" at 0092. I have followed the traditional form ("For ever and ever" / "For ever, and for ever and ever"). Two renderings of one phrase across Bands A and B — the merge should pick one. - Nothing was committed, deployed or re-chunked.
data/plate-reads.jsongained six entries;data/briefs/8967-PENDING-TEI-PATCHES.mdgained one section.
§I.0102 — file cruces-0102.md, verbatim
# Cruces — 8967 Glossa ordinaria, Liber Psalmorum, chunks 0102–0105 ### Band C, stint 6 (the LAST) · cols 1071C–1080B · Psalms CXLV–CL · 3,404 Latin words ### ⭐ THE WORK ENDS IN THIS RANGE, and the last leaf was read for that reason.
§0 · SPAN COUNT RECONCILIATION — 146 against 146, exact
| chunk | spans in my Latin |
|---|---|
| 0102 | 30 |
| 0103 | 34 |
| 0104 | 45 |
| 0105 | 37 |
| total | 146 — the brief's header says 146 |
Head and tail checked, not just the total. The brief's first entry is [1071C] VERS. 1.-- Alleluia. and that is the first span in 0102.md's Latin; its last entry is [1080B] Omnis spiritus laudet Dominum. and that is the last span in 0105.md's Latin, and the last italic span in the work. Twelve stints in a row now match exactly.
English span totals are 30 · 35 · 48 · 37. The three surplus are the italic Vulgate readings inside my three [var:] markers in 0103 and 0104 (0104 carries three markers but one of them — Ps 148:6 — is the third; see §3), which is the established relation EN = LA + count([var:]), checked against the shipped 0090 (59→60, one marker) and 0091 (31→33, two).
Column anchors 8 · 6 · 10 · 9, verbatim and in order. Note counts 20 · 20 · 23 · 21, matching the Latin exactly (the frontmatter noteCount runs one low on three of the four — the known false positive).
§1 · ⭐⭐⭐ WHAT STANDS AT THE END OF THE WORK, ON THE PLATE
Read on purpose, at 300 dpi with 1200 dpi crops, PDF 545 = cols 1079/1080, corners checked.
The Glossa on the Psalter ends in the 1080B band with, verbatim:
(AUG.) Tria sunt genera, etc., usque ad vitae aeternae vox est : Omnis spiritus laudet Dominum.
And nothing follows it. No FINIS. No subscription. No colophon. No closing siglum, no editor's closing note, no "Explicit", no rule of the kind Migne sometimes sets beneath a finished work. Beneath the ordinary full-measure rule that separates one work from the next, and on the same leaf, in both columns, the next work begins:
LIBER PROVERBIORUM Quem Hebraei MISLE (משלי) appellant. B. HIERONYMI EPISTOLA ET PROLOGUS DUPLEX DE LIBRIS SALOMONIS. (Vide inter ejus Opera, tom. I, III et VIII.) CAPUT PRIMUM. VERS. 1. — Parabolae Salomonis. Notandum quod vulgata editio paraboles, quae Hebraice misle (משלי), Graece παροιμιας paroemias, id est, proverbia dicit; sed satis convenit. …
PDF 546 (cols 1081/1082) is Liber Proverbiorum throughout, checked to be sure the Psalms do not resume after an interpolated prologue.
⭐ This is a finding and it is recorded as one: our twin's ending is COMPLETE and nothing was dropped there. The one thing the layout could have hidden — that the Psalms break off mid-clause at the foot of col 1079 (…flatu follium sonans; et ut haec) and Proverbs starts immediately beneath it on the same column — is not a loss: the Psalms run across the top of both columns of the leaf and resume at the head of 1080A (omnia de hominibus acciperes…), exactly as our twin has them. A reader of col 1079 alone would have concluded the work was truncated. It is not.
§2 · THE PLATE — FIVE LEAVES, TEN COLUMNS, EVERY MARGIN CLEAN
data/plate-reads.json held nothing for 1073–1080, and for 1071/1072 held one entry that records col 1072 as scanned, not collated. I opened all ten columns and collated all ten word by word, corner numbers first, at 300 dpi full-column with 900–1800 dpi crops on every disputed glyph. Five new entries recorded; plate-gate passes.
| page | cols | corner read | margin | depth |
|---|---|---|---|---|
| 541 | 1071 / 1072 | 1071, 1072 | clean | full (independent re-collation; 1072 first collated here) |
| 542 | 1073 / 1074 | 1073, 1074 | clean | full |
| 543 | 1075 / 1076 | 1075, 1076 | clean | full |
| 544 | 1077 / 1078 | 1077, 1078 | clean | full |
| 545 | 1079 / 1080 | 1079, 1080 | clean | full |
⛔ Ten columns, zero clipped. Two of them are ≡ 1 (mod 4) — 1073 and 1077 — and both are clean, which makes fourteen and fifteen counter-examples to the withdrawn rule. This is not evidence of a new rule either; it is why I opened every column instead of inferring, and why the 0087–0091 stint's newly-found 1041 and stint 0082's 1037 belong on the known-clipped list. ⚑ No site in my range was withheld for want of a second copy. I add no Gallica site; the list stands at seven.
2a. ⭐ The plate reversed me in both directions, which is the point of opening it
- It withdrew nothing that I had already believed — because I formed no
[sic:]candidate from the Latin alone in this range: our twin reads smoothly almost everywhere. That silence was false. The plate produced fifteen Migne defects in ten columns that our twin does not carry, and I could not have guessed one of them. - It stopped TWO false
[d:]markers. Our twin printsjanam januamandscandala. scandala.at 1075B, four lines apart. Both are the classic dittography shape, both are in a single paragraph, and both are Corpus Corporum's: the plate prints each word once. Had I trusted the twin, this stint would have shipped two public accusations against a page Migne set correctly. - It reversed a reading that construes. Our twin's
Diligi justos.at 1073B is a non-word, and the natural inference is that Migne dropped a sort. The plate printsDiligit justos.with a cleart: the non-word is ours. The same site is one of the lemma brief's four ⚠ NOT-in- Clementine flags for this range, and the plate closes it as clean agreement with Ps 145:8.
§3 · MARKERS FIRED — FOUR [var:], every one on a column I collated today
| col | chunk | marker |
|---|---|---|
| 1074C | 0103 | [var: Vulg. 2 Cor. 4:5 nos autem servos vestros per Jesum, "your servants through Jesus"] |
| 1076B | 0104 | [var: Vulg. 1 Cor. 10:17 unus panis, unum corpus multi sumus, "one bread, one body, we being many"] |
| 1076B | 0104 | [var: Vulg. Ps. 147:6 ante faciem frigoris ejus quis sustinebit, "before the face of his cold who shall stand?"] |
| 1077A | 0104 | [var: Vulg. Ps. 148:6 Statuit ea in aeternum, et in saeculum saeculi, "he hath established them for ever, and for ages of ages"] |
Every one rests on sources/vulgate/clementine-flat.txt, cited by book chapter:verse, never on recollection. And every one sits on the word it accuses — checked, because §F8's audit found a [sic:] standing after the wrong word.
⭐ The Ps 147:6 marker is the one worth reading twice. Migne prints Ante faciem ejus Dei quis sustinebit? where the Clementine has ante faciem frigoris ejus. The word Migne has lost is the word his own next gloss expounds: (AUG.) Frigus est, qui deserit, non vocat, non infundit gratiam — it is COLD when he forsakes. The exposition rests on a word that is no longer in the lemma it expounds, and only the collation shows it.
⛔ ZERO [sic:], ZERO [cj:], ZERO [d:] — AND THAT IS NOT A STATEMENT ABOUT MIGNE. See §4.
§4 · ⛔⛔ FIFTEEN MARKERS I CANNOT FIRE, AND THAT IS THE HEADLINE OF THIS STINT
Ten of my ten columns carry at least one Migne defect that our twin does not carry, because Corpus Corporum repaired the type before any instrument of ours looked at it. A [sic:] may wrap only type the twin carries and a [cj:] needs the printed word present, so fifteen markers are unreachable until the patch pass runs. Each is filed in data/briefs/8967-PENDING-TEI-PATCHES.md under BAND C — stint 0102–0105 with its exact marker text and the exact English edit it owes, so the patch pass can fire them without re-deriving anything.
The eleven [sic:] and four [cj:] in short:
musicas (1071D) · laudatio (1072A) · suseipiet (1072D) · disper iones (1073D, split type) · mittere (1075C) · Dominam (1077A) · ubyssi (1077A) · benficus (1077C) · eanticcum (1077C) · debat (1077D) · mahsiones (1078B) · nos (1078B) · Neseitis (1078B) · ferrcis (1078D) · plus the address VERS. 16. (1076C), which CC renumbers to VERS. 19.
⭐ The rate is 2.6 departures per column — the highest reported in this band (0077–0081 and 0087–0091 ran ~1.6–1.9). Three of the ten columns carry four or more.
4a. ⛔ The site that would have reversed the sense, and how it was handled
1078B: the plate reads unde nos sit liberum exire; our twin reads unde NON sit liberum exire. The gloss is about the kings of the earth bound in iron fetters so that they cannot get out — unde non sit liberum exire, and the very next clause says the fetters cannot be broken. Migne's nos (a clean s, controlled against sit on the same line) is a wrong sort for non.
This is the mirror of the open 1029B site, where the twin carried a non the plate does not print — except that here CC has supplied the negative rather than the plate having lost it, and the direction of the repair is what makes it invisible.
What I did, and why: the English follows the TWIN, and reads "whence it may not be free to go out". Following the plate would have put on the page the opposite of the argument Migne's own next clause makes, with no marker able to quarantine it — which is precisely the 7a′ failure ("a marker becomes a place to hide a repair", and here there is not even a marker). This is stint 0082's rule at 1029B, applied a second time. It is flagged rather than settled: the owed [cj: nos; read non, "whence it is not free to go out"] and its English edit are written out in the patch file, and Wilson still owes the ruling on the class.
4b. Where the English DOES follow the plate (§A6 licence, leaf read, patch filed)
Seven sites, every one filed:
- 1071D
Haec spe erecta anima(TEIHac) → "This soul, lifted up by hope, praises God here." - 1072B
per tot saeculorum rerum amores(TEIsaecularium) → "so many loves of the things of the ages". - 1073B
Diligit justos(TEI's non-wordDiligi) → "He loveth the just." - 1075B
januamonce andscandala.once (TEI doubles both) → the English carries neither doubling and no[d:]. - 1076C
VERS. 16.(TEIVERS. 19.) → the English prints Migne's address. ⚑ The two columns will disagree visibly until the patch lands; that is deliberate, it is the 1016C precedent, and the owed[sic: VERS. 16.]is filed. - 1076C
quae perierunt Israel, nodomus(TEI inserts it) → "to the sheep that were lost of Israel". The owed[var: Vulg. Mt 15:24 domus Israel]is filed. - 1076C
gratias Trinitatis(TEIgratia) → "the graces of the Trinity". No marker: the case has no English exponent (Pattern 9), the number does, and the English carries the number. - 1079A
secundum eam laudatur. Deus, cum sine fine laudetur.— Migne sets a full stop where CC runs the clause on. Pattern 8: the English follows the plate, and the short second sentence that results is Migne's, not ours.
§5 · THE DIVERGENCE LIST — every scripture quotation in the range, the clean ones included
5a. Divergent, marker FIRED (4) — listed in §3.
5b. Divergent, marker DECLINED, with the reason
- Sap. 9:15 @1072B — Migne
aggravat animam, et terrena inhabitatio sensum deprimit multa cogitantem; Clementine…deprimit sensum…. Word order only, and nothing in the gloss turns on it. Contrast 7914 @1079B, where a reversed cinis et pulvis WAS material because the gloss expounded the ashes. Declined; the English keeps Migne's order. - 1 Cor. 6:3 @1078B — Migne
Nescitis quia angelos judicabimus?; ClementineNescitis quoniam…. A real lexical substitution, but it has no English exponent: both are rendered "that". Declined on the Pattern 9 ground, and recorded so nobody re-derives it. - Ps. 146:2 @1073D — Migne
dispersiones Israel; Clementinedispersiones Israelis. Israel indeclinable is the ordinary form, the difference has no English exponent, and the gloss argues from the noun (id est fidelium), not its case. Declined. - Ps. 147:7 @1076B — Migne
et liquefaciet eam; Clementineea. Single word, and English renders "it" either way. Declined — the settled single-word rule. - Ps. 149:7 @1078B — Migne
vindicta et increpatio in populis; Clementinead faciendam vindictam in nationibus, increpationes in populis. ⚑ Declined, and the reason is grammatical, not cosmetic: Migne's nominatives are governed by his ownfiet(tunc vere fiet vindicta et increpatio). This is the gloss bending the verse into its sentence, which is adaptation, not a divergent text. Firing it would have accused Migne of a reading he is not asserting. - Sap. 8:1 @1075D — Migne
quae attingit a fine usque ad finem fortiter; ClementineAttingit ergo…. Same class: the relative is bound to Migne's own Haec est sapientia. Declined. - Sap. 7:22–23 @1075D — Migne
actus mobilis, certus, incoinquinatus; Clementine…mobilis, incoinquinatus, certus…, and the Clementine has noactusin the list. ⚑ A compressed florilegic citation of a long adjective-string, reordered. Declined as adaptation; see §7 for howactusis rendered. - Isa. 1:6 @1074A —
Non est malagma imponere, neque oleum, neque alligaturas. ⛔ NOT compared: Migne's own note reads(Isa. I, secundum LXX). He names the version; a[var:]against the Clementine here would accuse him of not being the text he says he is not. - Ps. 146:10 @1074D —
in tabernaculis viri. Migne introduces it himself assecundum aliam litteram. Declined for the same reason.
5c. Collated and found to AGREE with the Clementine — the checked negatives
Ps 145: Nolite confidere (145:2) · In filiis hominum (145:3) · Exibit spiritus ejus (145:4) · Beatus cujus Deus Jacob + Adjutor ejus spes ejus (145:5) · Qui fecit coelum et terram + Omnia quae in eis sunt (145:6) · Qui custodit veritatem in saeculum, Facit judicium, Injuriam patientibus, Dominus solvit compeditos (145:7) · Dominus erigit elisos + Diligit justos (145:8, on the plate's reading) · Pupillum et viduam suscipiet (145:9, the plate's suseipiet being Migne's type, not a variant) · Regnabit Dominus in saecula (145:10). Ps 146: Laudate Dominum, quoniam bonus est psalmus, Deo nostro sit jucunda (146:1) · Aedificans Jerusalem Dominus + congregabit (146:2) · Et alligat (146:3) · Qui numerat multitudinem stellarum, et omnibus eis nomina vocat (146:4) · Sapientiae ejus (146:5) · Humilians autem peccatores (146:6) · Praecinite (146:7) · Qui operit coelum + Servituti hominum (146:8) · Et pullis corvorum (146:9) · In tibiis viri + beneplacitum erit ei (146:10) · Super timentes (146:11). Ps 147: Lauda, Jerusalem (147:1) · Confortavit seras portarum tuarum (147:2) · Adipe frumenti (147:3) · Qui emittit / Qui emittit eloquium suum / Terrae / Velociter currit (147:4) · Qui dat nivem + nebulam sicut cinerem spargit (147:5) · Crystallum suam + Mittit sicut buccellas (147:6, on the plate's spelling) · emittat verbum suum (147:7) · Jacob . . . Israel + Judicia sua (147:8–9). Ps 148: Laudate Dominum de coelis (148:1) · Quia ipse dixit, et facta sunt + Ipse mandavit + facta + creata (148:5) · Statuit (148:6) · Laudate Dominum + Omnes abyssi (148:7, the plate's Dominam and ubyssi being Migne's type) · Quae faciunt verbum ejus (148:8) · Confessio + Confessio ejus super coelum et terram + Exaltavit cornu populi sui (148:14). Ps 149: Cantate Domino + Laus ejus in Ecclesia (149:1) · In rege suo (149:2) · In choro (149:3) · Quia beneplacitum est Domino (149:4) · Exsultabunt / Exsultabunt sancti / Gloria (149:5) · Exaltationes / In gutture / Gladii / Exaltationes Dei in gutture (149:6) · Ad alligandos (149:8) · gloria haec (149:9). Ps 150: Laudate Dominum + Laudate eum in firmamento + In firmamento (150:1) · Secundum multitudinem magnitudinis ejus (150:2) · Tuba / psalterium / cithara (150:3) · In chordis et organo / Chordas / Organum (150:4) · Laudate eum in cymbalis / Cymbala (150:5) · Omnis spiritus / laudet Dominum / Omnis spiritus laudet Dominum (150:6). Elsewhere: Rom. 7:24 @1076B, verbatim · Joan. 14:2 @1078B, verbatim on the plate's own mahsiones · Isa. 55:1 @1076C, verbatim as far as Migne carries it (venite ad aquas).
5d. The verse numbering was checked, not assumed
Every psalm in my range is Vulgate-numbered and agrees with the Clementine head for head: the first lemma under PSALMUS CXLV. is Ps 145:2 (Lauda, anima mea, Dominum), under PSALMUS CXLVI. Ps 146:1, under PSALMUS CXLVII. Ps 147:1 (Lauda, Jerusalem), under PSALMUS CXLVIII. Ps 148:1, under PSALMUS CXLIX. Ps 149:1, under PSALMUS CL. Ps 150:1. Six for six, no offset. No psalm number was converted.
⚑ Migne's own VERS. addresses are reproduced as printed, including where they are odd. Ps CXLVII runs 12, 13, 14, 15, 16, 17, 18, 16 — the last being the site at 1076C, restored from the plate. And Ps CXLVIII's VERS. 13. and VERS. 14. both stand over material the Clementine holds at 148:14; that is Migne's own verse division, it is in sequence, and it takes no marker.
§6 · THE NAMED WORDS, ANSWERED ONE BY ONE
In finem— ⛔ not engaged. Zero occurrences in 1071C–1080B; the Hallelujah psalms carry no such titulus. Reported rather than left silent.Diapsalma/Diapsalmus— zero occurrences. Not engaged.Canticum graduum/gradus— ⭐ ZERO of each. As the launch brief predicted, the gradual series ends at Ps CXXXIII, well before my range; the 0087–0091 stint owns the ruling and has now tested it at the plate. My range neither confirms nor strains it.usque ad— 16 occurrences, and theetc.splice test sorts them 14 / 2. 14 formula (each literallyetc., usque ad), rendered "as far as" without exception. 2 not, and both are ordinary Latin rendered by sense: 1.quae attingit a fine usque ad finem fortiter,@1075D — Wisdom 8:1 itself, inside one italic span, → "which reacheth from end to end mightily". The 0953C case exactly: an italic test would have mis-sorted it, theetc.test does not. 2.per similitudines mysticas usque ad finem psalmi dicit@1079A — gloss voice, unitalicised → "by mystical similitudes even to the end of the psalm".ad usque— ⚑ zero on the plate in all ten columns, checked by eye and not by grep, since the class is invisible to any count taken from our TEI. The 1015A occurrence remains the only one known in the work.Dominus virtutum— zero occurrences. Not engaged.sedes— one occurrence,sedentes super duodecim sedes@1078B → "sitting upon twelve seats". Zero "throne" in my four chunks, checked mechanically.- Musical and instrumental vocabulary — see §7.
§7 · THE RULED AXES, MEASURED OVER MY OWN FOUR CHUNKS
⚑ Every one of these greps was run against the documented trap first. natio returned exactly one hit and it was peregrinatione; turba returned five and every one was turbare (conturbas, perturbationem, perturbatur ×2, turbari), in a range with no crowd in it; and \bdaemoni would have missed the range's only occurrence, which is daemonum.
| axis | Latin in my range | English |
|---|---|---|
gentes family | gentium ×2, gentes ×1, gentilitas ×1, natio 0 | Gentiles ×4 (Ecclesia gentium → "Church of the Gentiles"; omnibus gentibus and omnes gentes in the Judaei/gentes opposition; gentium reges → "kings of the Gentiles") and the Gentile world for gentilitas @1072D, the form added to the axis on 9000. No singular non-ethnic gens; the gens tenebrarum exception is not engaged. |
mysterium / sacramentum | mysterium 0 · sacramenta ×1 | sacraments ×1, 1:1. ⚑ per similitudines mysticas @1079A is the adjective, not the noun, and is rendered "mystical" — outside the axis. |
daemonium / diabolus | daemonum ×1 · diabolus/diabolum ×3 · satanas 0 | demons ×1, devil ×3, no bleed |
turba / multitudo | turba 0 (see above) · multitudinem ×2 | multitude ×2, crowd 0 |
usque ad | 16 | as far as ×14 (formula), sense ×2 — §6 |
sedes | 1 | seat ×1, throne 0 |
Archaism, both memberships checked (§A4). 25 -eth/hath forms stand in the four chunks and every one is inside an italic scripture span or inside the English gloss of a [var:] marker, which is quoted scripture by construction. Three were caught and de-archaised in the gloss voice: and the Lord bindeth up their bruises @1074A and who hath predestinated and hath called @1076A are the resumption text of an abridged father's sentence, which Migne sets roman, and because he hath predestinated us @1075D is plain gloss. ⚑ The resumption after usque ad looks like scripture and is not marked as scripture — an italic-only check passes it, and it is where the two archaisms in this range wanted to hide. No guillemets occur in my range.
§8 · CRUCES — rendered literally, with the difficulty named
- ⭐
humilians autem peccat.@1074B — Migne's cue for the next lemma, and the plate confirmspeccat.with a point. The literal English is a disaster: humilians autem peccat reads "but humbling, he sins", which makes God the sinner in a sentence about God humbling sinners, and Migne's very next lemma isHumilians autem peccatores.in full. Read as a printer's truncation-with-point,peccat.=peccat[ores], and rendered under Convention 3 as the phrase it stands for: "but humbling sinners." ⚑ Recorded because it is a judgement, not a reading, and because the alternative was a Pattern 7a polarity failure of the purest kind. actus mobilis, certus, incoinquinatus;@1075D — Migne'sactushas no counterpart in the Clementine's Wisdom 7:22 list. Taken as the participle of ago and rendered "driven, moveable, sure, undefiled", which keeps it inside the adjective-string rather than promoting it to a noun ("a motion") that would make the clause govern differently. Flagged, not settled.Ante faciem ejus Dei quis sustinebit?@1076B — rendered flatly, "Before the face of him, of God, who shall stand?", with the apposition left as awkward in English as it is in Latin. Smoothing it to "before the face of God" would have erased the very seam the[var:]exists to show, and theAlias, subsistetthat follows is Migne's own alternative, kept as "Otherwise, shall subsist."Frigus est, qui deserit, non vocat, non infundit gratiam@1076B — three negations, and all three carried: "It is cold when he forsakes, calls not, pours not in grace."nec frigus, nec obscuritas, nec duritia desperare potest@1076B — likewise: "neither cold, nor darkness, nor hardness can despair", including the strangeness of hardness being the subject of desperare. Not repaired.Non caro et sanguis, non habitus saeculi@1080A — bothnons carried into a construction English would happily reduce to one.Non datur ergo consilium animae a carne … Nec etiam caro mortalis immortali consulit animae@1072A–B — a four-clause negative chain, each negative rendered separately. ⚑ And the apposition rule (§F8) applied:quae tamen mortua est propter peccatumfollows a comma after a negated main clause, and it is rendered as a positive relative ("which nevertheless is dead because of sin"), because English apposition does not inherit the negative and the Latin does not give it one.et ipsa infinita, vicina est substantiae Dei@1072A —infinitaof the soul rendered "unbounded" rather than "infinite", to keep the soul from being given an attribute of God in a sentence whose whole claim is that it is merely near to God's substance. Flagged.in composito habitu praesumptuosi et audacis … In tibiis notatur incessus incompositus@1074D — Migne says the bearing is composed and three lines later that the gait is uncomposed. Rendered as printed, both times. The strain is his.
8a. ⭐ The instruments, rendered as the gloss construes them and NOT modernised
This range is the densest instrumental passage in the Psalter and every name is a figure the exposition depends on:
Tuba→ trumpet, because Migne's own gloss makes it terribilis, taken up in war or made ready at the coming of kings.psalterium→ psaltery,cithara→ harp, and the pair is kept distinct because the gloss's entire point is positional: psalterium a summo, cithara ab imo sonat.chordis/Chordas→ strings, since the gloss immediately defines it as every musical instrument which sounds by the stretching of strings.Organum→ organ, and the description is left as Migne writes it — quasi turris fistulis diversis fabricata, flatu follium sonans, "as it were a tower framed of divers pipes, sounding by the blast of bellows". ⛔ A modern reader's organ is exactly what must not be substituted here; the tower is the figure.cymbalis/Cymbala bene sonantia/Cymbala bene tinnientia→ cymbals well sounding and cymbals well tinkling, kept as two different phrases because Migne gives two different glosses (lips tuned to the heart; parvissimae phialae of mingled metals, "very small bowls").tympano→ timbrel;in choro→ in choir, with the gloss's nulla dispersio, sed charissima unitas left to explain why.flatus in tuba, pulsus in cithara et in cymbalis, vox in choro→ "breath in the trumpet, striking in the harp and in the cymbals, voice in the choir" — three physical actions, each kept physical, because the sentence's conclusion is that the harmony is not perceived by the ears.
8b. Stumps rendered SHORT — the fourteen-site failure profile, checked by name
Every truncated lemma in the range was rendered as Migne prints it, not completed from the Vulgate:
Laudabo in vita.@1072B → "I will praise in life." ⛔ NOT "I will praise the Lord in my life" (Ps 145:2 Laudabo Dominum in vita mea). ⭐ The proof is on the page: In vita mea. is itself the next lemma, with its own gloss, exactly the 0965B Oculi mei shape.Quandiu.→ "As long as." Not "as long as I shall be" (quamdiu fuero).Adjutor ejus spes ejus.→ "His helper is his hope." Not completed with in Domino Deo ipsius.Laus ejus in Ecclesia.→ "His praise in the Church." Not "in the church of the saints".Cantate Domino,→ "Sing ye to the Lord," not "a new canticle".Lauda, Jerusalem.→ "Praise, O Jerusalem." Not "praise the Lord, O Jerusalem".Mittit sicut bucellas,→ "He sendeth as morsels," not "he sendeth his crystal as morsels" — and Crystallum suam is, again, the lemma immediately before it.Beatus,,Statuit.,Terrae.,Gloria.,Gladii.,Confessio.,Exaltationes.,Ad alligandos.,In gutture.— all rendered as bare stumps.Alleluia.at four tituli — rendered bare; Ps 145's Clementine titulus continues Aggaei et Zachariae, and Migne does not print it there. ⚑ He prints those names in his own gloss prose at 1075A instead, which is where they are rendered.
8c. Subjects, copulas and pronouns supplied — each one named
- @1072A
Anima enim, licet vituperata quia peccatrix— "it is a sinner", the subject supplied from Anima, which stands two words away. - @1072B
Se ergo secundum sensualitatem exhortans dicit— "it says", subject = the mens of the preceding clause, not the soul it is exhorting. ⚑ This is the §F8 subject-reassignment class: the mind speaks and the soul answers, and the following Deinde respondet anima menti is the control that fixes it. - @1072C
in qua quodammodo vivens laudat— "it praises", subject = anima, not spes. - @1074B
Haec facit his qui volunt irridere legem— "he does", subject = God, from Deo incorporeo in the preceding sentence. - @1076B
Hanc autem Deus solvit— "But God dissolved this", the feminine referring to Migne's own feminine crystallum suam, not to Paul. - @1076C
Judicium incipit a domo Dei— no subject supplied; rendered impersonally. - @1077A
O vos qui de terra—vosis plural: "O ye that are of the earth", against the singular thou used throughout 1072B where the mind addresses one soul (§17).
§9 · CANDIDATES RAISED AND REJECTED — the instrument, not the leftovers
- ⛔
[d: januam]@1075B — REJECTED at the plate. Our twin'sjanam januamis CC's. See §2a. - ⛔
[d: scandala.]@1075B — REJECTED at the plate. Same paragraph, same cause. - ⛔
[sic: Diligi]@1073B — REJECTED at the plate. The non-word is ours; Migne printsDiligit. [sic: saeculorum]@1072B — never formed. Bothsaeculorum(plate) andsaecularium(twin) are good Latin. A patch needs positive evidence and a marker needs a defect; there is a departure here and no defect. Patch filed, marker refused.[cj:]ongratias@1076C — REJECTED. The accusative cannot govern eluceat, but Pattern 9 is decisive: case has no English exponent. The number does, and the English carries it ("the graces of the Trinity"). A[cj:]would annotate a difference the reader cannot see.[sic:]onSecunda@1077C — REJECTED. It construes perfectly as secunda [pars], the phrase Migne uses a dozen times in this very work. CC'sSecundois the alteration.[var:]on Ps 149:7 @1078B — REJECTED, and this is the closest call in the stint. See §5b: the case of Migne's nouns is governed by his own verb.[var:]on 1 Cor. 6:3quia/quoniam@1078B — REJECTED, no English exponent (§5b).[var:]on Ps 146:2Israel/Israelis@1073D — REJECTED (§5b).- Seven bracket-shaped stray sorts and one ink blot (1075B, 1075D) — copy condition, not readings, and the same recurring piece of furniture stints 0087 and 0097–0101 met at 1039–1041 and 1062–1071. Not reported as patches.
de tymp: no@1078A — the running head's descender crowding the line. The word is tympano; the twin has it right. Declined.- ⚠
ferrcis@1078D — FIRED, but flagged for a second reader. It is the exact shape of the hazard that withdrew eleven false accusations in Band B. What decided it is that the glyph is well formed, not broken: a clean opencwith both terminals, no ink remnant where a bar would be, against three fully-inked barredes on the same line. If a second reader disagrees at 1800 dpi, drop it; nothing else in the report depends on it. Alias.@1076A with a point — not a defect, because Migne setsAlias,with a comma four lines below in the same column. Both forms are his. Recorded as punctuation only.
§10 · SECTIONS READ CLEAN, AND WHAT I CHECKED IN THEM
⚑ A logged column is not a checked column, so each entry says what was checked, not that it was looked at.
- 1073A–1073C (Ps CXLV, VERS. 6–10) — collated word for word against the plate: zero departures of any kind, and six lemmata collated against the Clementine, all clean. The stretch with the fewest departures in my range.
- 1074B–1074D (Ps CXLVI, VERS. 5–10) — two punctuation departures and nothing else; the
corvi/pulli corvorumpassage checked for a supplied possessive (there is none) and for the negation chainCorvus non invocat, nos vero dimissi invocamus, which is carried. - 1080A–1080B (Ps CL, VERS. 4–6) — ⭐ the last two bands of the work, and they are the cleanest in the range: not one departure from our twin, in either direction, over the whole instrument passage and the closing gloss. Checked for supplied completions in Cymbala, Omnis spiritus and laudet Dominum; there are none.
- 1077B–1077C (Ps CXLVIII, VERS. 8–14) — checked for the subject of haec agit Deus and of attendentes laudent eum; both carried as printed. One punctuation departure.
§11 · HANDOFF
- ⛔⛔ FIFTEEN markers stand unlocked behind the patch pass, every one itemised with its marker text and its English edit in
data/briefs/8967-PENDING-TEI-PATCHES.mdunderBAND C — stint 0102–0105. Do not read this stint's0 [sic:] / 0 [cj:]as a clean range — it is the highest departure rate reported in the band. ⚑ Reconcile reported sites against applied ones: two of Band B's blind-read findings were patches a stint reported and nobody built. - ⭐ The end of the work is confirmed CLEAN (§1). No colophon, no
FINIS, nothing dropped. This question is now closed and needs no second look. - ⛔ Wilson still owes the 1029B-class ruling, and my range produces its mirror at 1078B (
nosfornon): the plate drops a negative the twin supplies, and no marker class reaches it before the patch. My English follows the twin and says so. Two sites now turn on this ruling, in two different stints. - Cols 1071–1080 are all CLEAN at the inner margin and belong in the record as ten more counter-examples, including 1073 and 1077, both ≡ 1 (mod 4). No new Gallica site; the work-wide open list stands at seven.
- For the blind polarity read, the four places in this range where a reader should look hardest, because they read perfectly in English and rest on a judgement: (a)
humilians autem peccat.@1074B, rendered "but humbling sinners" as a truncation rather than "he sins" (§8); (b) the supplied subject at 1072B, where the mind speaks and the soul answers; (c) the plate-followingHaec spe erecta anima@1071D, "This soul, lifted up by hope"; (d)unde non sit liberum exire@1078B, where the English carries a negative the plate does not print and the reason is written out in §4a. ⚑ Each is logged with WHAT was checked, not merely that it was looked at. actus@1075D is rendered "driven" inside the Wisdom 7:22 string and is a flagged guess, not a settled reading.- Nothing was committed, deployed, patched or re-chunked.
data/plate-reads.jsongained five entries;data/briefs/8967-PENDING-TEI-PATCHES.mdgained one section.verify-englishOK,plate-gateOK.
§I.bandC-english-0077 — file cruces-bandC-english-0077.md, verbatim
Written 2026-09-05, after the 134-patch Band C pass landed. The Latin was made right; this file records what was then done to the English at every patched site in the range, and what was looked at and deliberately left alone. ⚑ A logged site is not a checked site — every entry below was read against the patched Latin twin, not against the patch report.
Totals for the range: 23 markers fired (13 [sic:], 10 [cj:]), 21 sites checked and left unchanged, 1 site left untouched under a standing ruling, 1 finding raised and NOT acted on, 1 claim that cannot be made to reconcile for a reason that is not a missing marker.
Checks at close: verify-english OK · plate-gate OK (every marker in this range stands on a column the 0077 and 0082 stints read at the plate) · marker-reconcile --band 10 — every claim in cols 1011C–1039B now stands except one, and that one is a chunk-boundary artifact in the reconciler rather than a missing marker (see §4). The remaining misses in its output belong to columns outside this range. (It reported 64 claims / 0 standing before the pass.)
§1 · MARKERS FIRED — 23, with the word each one sits on
⛔ Every marker below was placed immediately after the English word it accuses, and each was re-read with the marker's contents deleted (7a⁗ questions 1–3). §F8's misplaced [sic: Eccesiam] is the failure this column of the table exists to prevent.
| col | chunk | marker | the English word it sits on | 7a⁗ check |
|---|---|---|---|---|
| 1011D | 0077 | [sic: deis] | "the days" (deis for dies) | verb fail stands outside |
| 1014B | 0078 | [sic: qut] | "who" (qut for qui) | relative supplied in the clear — see §1a |
| 1014D | 0078 | [cj: par; read per, "through"] | "through" | preposition stated outside the marker |
| 1015A | 0078 | [cj: dilectum; read delictum, "the offence"] | "the offence" | subject of abound stands |
| 1015A | 0078 | [cj: secundam; read secundum, "according to"] | "according to" | preposition outside |
| 1015C | 0079 | [cj: Deus; read Deum, "to bless God"] | "God" (object of benedicere) | — |
| 1015D | 0079 | [sic: mugnificatus] | the lemma "magnified." | — |
| 1015D | 0079 | [cj: putes; read potes, "thou canst"] | "canst" | ⭐ the negative "not" stands OUTSIDE the marker (7a⁗-2 / 7a⁗) |
| 1016C | 0079 | [sic: VERS. 15.] | the address itself — see §2 | — |
| 1019C | 0080 | [sic: haere ditas] | "an inheritance" | ⭐ split type, whole run carried (Pattern 10); "is promised" stands outside |
| 1021B | 0080 | [sic: Ft] | "And", inside the italic lemma | conjunction stated in the clear |
| 1023A | 0081 | [sic: ete.] | the "etc." | the etc. itself is kept, so the A7 splice test still keys |
| 1027B | 0082 | [sic: honorum] | "good" (honorum for bonorum) | — |
| 1029A | 0083 | [sic: posueruent] | "set", inside the italic lemma | — |
| 1030C | 0083 | [sic: quiquid] | "whatsoever" | — |
| 1032A | 0084 | [cj: glorificatur; read glorificatus, "glorified"] | "glorified" | — |
| 1033A | 0084 | [sic: liberavi] | "delivered" | — |
| 1034A | 0085 | [cj: laudamus; read laudandus, "to be praised"] | "to be praised" | — |
| 1037D | 0086 | [cj: intra; read intrat, "he enters"] | "he enters" | ⚑ the Mt 25:21 lemma three words later prints the true imperative intra and is untouched |
| 1038D | 0086 | [sic: reddum] | "pay", in the FIRST I will pay my vows. | ⚑ the second, correct reddam at 1038D–1039A is untouched — that is the same-page control |
| 1039A | 0086 | [sic: ue] | "lest" (ue for ne) | ⭐ 7a⁗ — the negative purpose-word "lest" stands OUTSIDE the marker |
| 1039A | 0086 | [cj: Psalmus; read Psalmum, "the following psalm"] | "psalm" | — |
| 1039A | 0086 | [cj: recipi; read recipit, "it admits"] | "admit" | ⭐ "does not" stands OUTSIDE the marker |
(23 markers across 21 patched sites — 1015D carries two and 1039A carries three.)
1a. ⚑ ONE WORDING CHANGE WAS MADE TO GIVE A MARKER ITS WORD — 1014B, and it is declared
Migne prints si est homo qut audiat. The English read "if there is a man to hear", in which qui has no exponent at all — the infinitive absorbs the relative. There was therefore no word for [sic: qut] to sit on, and the only two places to put it were after "man" (which accuses homo, a word Migne set correctly — the §F8 error exactly) or after "hear" (which accuses audiat, ditto).
The English now reads "if there is a man who [sic: qut] hears." This is the minimum change that lets the marker stand on its own word, and it is recorded here because it is a wording edit the worklist did not name. The parallel clause four words later (si non est qui audiat homo → "if there is no man to hear") was not touched: Migne sets that qui correctly, and there is nothing there to mark.
1b. Where the [sic:] wraps a real word — the licence, stated
honorum (1027B), liberavi (1033A) and ete. (1023A) are or contain real forms. They are marked, not rendered silently, on Pattern 12's "does it render IN PLACE?" test and on the [sic: disertum] precedent already standing in this work at col 0923B (chunk 0041): the English gives the sense the passage requires and the marker carries Migne's type immediately behind it. Both stint files (cruces-0077.md §8.1, cruces-0082.md §3) had already named each of these as owed; the patch is what made them fireable, and nothing about the bar was loosened to fire them.
§2 · 1016C — MIGNE'S OUT-OF-SEQUENCE ADDRESS, RESTORED AND MARKED
Migne's sequence at Ps 103 runs 12, 15, 14, 16, 17; CC silently renumbered his VERS. 15. to VERS. 13.. The patch restores it and the English now reads:
VERS. 15.-- [sic: VERS. 15.] Of the fruit of thy works.
⚑ This does not reopen the Pattern 9 decline recorded at cruces-0077.md §8.2. That decline covers VERT. 41., VERS 28. and VERS, 32. — misprints of the label, which English normalizes precisely because the facing Latin preserves them. A wrong NUMBER is not a label misprint: it is a fact about Migne's ordering of the psalm, it survives normalization, and Wilson's ruling is that it is restored and marked. The two classes are now visibly distinct in this range: three unmarked labels, one marked number.
The English and its twin, which disagreed visibly from the moment the 0077 stint wrote the address to the plate (cruces-0077.md §10.2), now agree.
§3 · CHECKED AGAINST THE PATCHED LATIN AND DELIBERATELY UNCHANGED — 21 sites
Every one of these was read in place against the twin as patched. Nothing was edited at any of them.
| col | what the patch restored | what the English says, and why it stands |
|---|---|---|
| 1012A | Pelicano, (AUG.) — CC's etc. removed | the English prints no "etc." here ✔ ⚑ material to the A7 splice test: the real splice is four words later and still keys on its own etc. |
| 1013C | et Paganus credit | "which the Pagan also believes" ✔ |
| 1013D | transeant for transeunt | "which do not pass away" — a mood change with no English exponent (Pattern 9) ✔ |
| 1015A | Per Moysen omnes (CC had fused it) | "By Moses, all the saints" ✔ — translating the fused twin would have forced garble or a false [sic:] |
| 1015C | Aggratulando for CC's Agratulando | "He speaks by way of congratulation" — no exponent ✔ |
| 1015D | quia semper magnus for qui semper | "because thou art always great by nature" ✔ |
| 1021B | ut hic adjuti for ut his adjuti | "that being helped here" ✔ |
| 1022C | Id est, quod for quid | "That is, what thou didst will to give them" ✔ |
| 1023C | quod est boni for quod et boni | "which belongs to a good man too" ✔ |
| 1024B | adinventionibus as ONE word | "in their own devices" ✔ |
| 1024D | et his et supra for et hic | "both in these places and above" ✔ |
| 1025B | caeperant for CC's coeperant | "they had taken them" ✔ ⭐ and the [var:] already standing beside it quotes the Clementine ceperant, so the page now says the same thing twice over |
| 1025C | oratum est for CC's non-word eratum | "which was prayed" ✔ — the non-word was ours |
| 1026D | spiritus procellae. — CC's , etc. dropped | the English prints no "etc." after "the spirit of the storm." ✔ (but see §5 for the other half of this site) |
| 1027A | conmendatur | "the Church is commended" — attested assimilation, Pattern 9, no marker ✔ |
| 1027B | usque ad with CC's inserted sed dropped | "as far as they were not of the fewness of the elect" — no "but" ✔ |
| 1029A | quod est Deus judex facit | "which is, God the judge does" ✔ — the hard clause is rendered hard, not smoothed |
| 1029B | regibus gentium, CC's sub dropped | "of the kings of the Gentiles" ✔ |
| 1029B | Diripiant labores ejus (plural) | "Let them plunder his labours" ✔ |
| 1031D | manet in saeculum saeculi | "for his justice remaineth for ever and ever" ✔ |
| 1035A | Barbara lingua est | ⭐ "That tongue is barbarous which praises not God" — a definition, not an agreement error ✔ exactly what the restored Latin now carries |
§4 · THE ONE CLAIM THAT WILL NOT RECONCILE, AND IT IS NOT A MISSING MARKER
marker-reconcile --band 10 still reports:
⛔ 1015C 0078.md — CLAIMED [cj: Deus; read Deum] but the English does not carry it
The marker is fired, and it is in 0079.md, which is where the text is. Column 1015C straddles the chunk boundary: 0078.md ends inside it (its body carries the [1015C] anchor) and 0079.md opens inside it (colContext: "1015C"). marker-reconcile's colToChunk map takes the first chunk in which a column appears, so it looks for this marker in 0078 and cannot find it. Item benedicere Deus monet, primo is the first sentence of 0079.
⛔ Do not "fix" this by moving the marker into 0078. That would put a conjecture on a column of text that is not there. The defect is in the reconciler's boundary heuristic — it should prefer the chunk whose body carries the patched find-string — and it is recorded here rather than worked around.
§5 · RAISED AND NOT ACTED ON — 1026D, the doubled "subjoining,"
Migne prints, restored:
exponit procellas eorum, dixit et stetit. In profundo. Dixit et stetit subdens, spiritus procellae.
— one roman subdens, and it stands between the two italic runs. The English prints "subjoining," twice:
"he expounds their storms, subjoining, he spoke, and there stood. In the deep. He spoke, and there stood, subjoining, the spirit of the storm."
The italic span counts agree (5 EN / 5 LA at that paragraph), which is what cruces-0082.md §0's note about a deliberate span-structure divergence covers. The doubled roman word is a separate thing and appears to be a leftover: the pre-patch twin carried subdens, at the head of the passage, the 0082 stint wrote the plate's copy in between, and the head copy was never removed. Our page therefore prints a word twice that Migne prints once.
No edit was made. The worklist's disposition for 1026D is "confirm the English still reads correctly", it names no wording change, and deleting a word on my own reading is exactly the kind of unlicensed edit this pass exists to prevent. ⭐ It is filed for a ruling. If it is a leftover, the fix is one deletion — the first "subjoining," — and it belongs to whoever owns 0082.
§6 · UNTOUCHED UNDER A STANDING RULING — 1029B
Our twin: Quia non thesaurizant in coelo. The plate: Quia thesaurizant in coelo. Read mid-line, unclipped, at 900 dpi by the 0082 stint. No patch was applied and none is owed here from me. No marker class reaches an omission ([sic:] may wrap only printed type, [cj:] needs a printed word to open on, [ed:] confesses our loss and not Migne's), the class is open for Wilson's ruling, and the English at 0083.md keeps the negative — "Because they lay not up treasure in heaven" — with the divergence standing on the record. Left exactly as it was.
§7 · REFUSED — one marker the range could have carried and does not
1036D nota for notat. The patch restores Migne's nota quod non est otiosus dilector; the English reads "he notes that the lover is not idle", which renders notat. The worklist gives this site no disposition beyond the plate reading, marker-reconcile makes no claim on it, and the patch note itself says only that "the nota/notat half is certain at the plate".
No marker was fired. [sic:] on a real imperative would be arguable under Pattern 12(1) — an imperative stranded among indicatives is the Pecte/ama shape — but the worklist does not license it, and a marker nobody authorised is a public accusation against Migne made on my own authority. Raised here so the Band C merge can decide; a wrong marker is worse than a missing one.
⚑ The other half of the same clause (ostiosus/ostiosns) was refused at the patch pass itself and remains refused: the penultimate letter will not settle as u or n, and a patch must not guess a letter (the Nafrubimus discipline).
§8 · WHAT WAS DELIBERATELY NOT DONE
- No
[var:]fired. Vulgate divergences in this range were settled by the 0077 and 0082 stints and are outside a patch-completion pass. - No
[d:]fired. The two[d:]claims in the patch file (1039Cet, et, 1044Ahoc, hoc) belong to the next stint's chunks (0087, 0088), not to 0077–0086. - No frontmatter, column anchor or
[n: …]note content was altered. ⚑cruces-0077.md§10.3 lists one owed note edit —0079.md@1017B,[n: (AUG.)]→[n: (AU.)]. The corresponding TEI patch is not in the Band C pass, and note contents are checked as a substring of the Latin twin, so making the edit now would break verification. Still owed, still blocked on the Latin. - No wording was "improved" anywhere the worklist did not name it, with the single declared exception at §1a.
§I.bandC-english-0087 — file cruces-bandC-english-0087.md, verbatim
Range: src/english/8967/0087.md … 0096.md, Psalms CXVII–CXXXVIII. Input: data/briefs/8967-bandC-PATCH-WORKLIST.md, sites in cols 1039–1061. Rule obeyed throughout: a patch is not done when the Latin is right. Every site below was either given its marker, or read against the newly patched Latin and deliberately left alone, or refused with the reason written out. ⛔ Every marker was checked against the word it accuses (§F8 defect 1) and against 7a⁗ (does the clause still have its verb, its negation, its conjunction with the marker's contents deleted?).
Totals for the range: 17 unlock claims in the applied patch file, and 17 markers fired ([sic:] 10 · [cj:] 5 · [d:] 2) · 3 English wording edits made · 22 patched sites checked and deliberately left unchanged · 3 further claims that could NOT be fired, each refused with its reason in §4. marker-reconcile reports 12 of the 17 standing; the other five are fired and are §4.1–4.3 tool/claim artifacts, not missing markers.
§1 · MARKERS FIRED — 12, each on the word it accuses
| col | chunk | marker as fired | sits on | 7a⁗ check |
|---|---|---|---|---|
| 1039C | 0087 | [sic: ete.] | the abridgment sign etc., itself | nothing governed; the as far as formula follows intact. Form follows the etc., [sic: atc.] precedent already standing in Band A. |
| 1039C | 0087 | [d: et] | the intrusive second et of evadit, et et ad | the rendered "and" stands outside the marker; deleting the marker leaves "and comes to the true life". |
| 1040A | 0087 | [sic: pecatorum] | "sins" (= pecatorum), not "thorns" | noun only; clause keeps verb and sense. ⚑ The correctly-set peccata eleven words later — the same-line control — is left unmarked. |
| 1043C | 0088 | [cj: eum; read cum, "with"] | "him", the English of the printed eum | additive per Pattern 18; the ablative Domino keeps "with the Lord". |
| 1043C | 0088 | [cj: Deum; read Deus, "God sits"] | "God" (= Deum) | additive; "sits" stands outside. English has no case exponent, so without the marker the rendering silently repairs the accusative — Pattern 12(2)'s reasoning, met here with the additive marker Pattern 18 provides. |
| 1044A | 0088 | [d: hoc] | the intrusive second hoc of in hoc hoc quod | "in this … that I love thee" is intact with the marker deleted. |
| 1044B | 0088 | [sic: similttudinem] | "a similitude" | noun only. |
| 1047A | 0090 | [sic: dieeret] | "As if he should say" (= Quasi dieeret) | the sense stands in plain English outside the marker; the second, correctly-set diceret at 1047D is untouched. |
| 1048B | 0090 | [cj: veniens; read venient, "shall come"] | "coming", the English of the printed singular participle | ⚑ English edit made with it: "when the saints shall come" → "when the saints, coming […], carrying their sheaves with joyfulness." The old wording rendered the TWIN's venient and would have silently repaired the column (§F8 defect 4). The main clause keeps its verb ("shall their fruit be"); the anacoluthon is Migne's. |
| 1052C | 0092 | [sic: cxaltaxit] — not exaltaxit, see §4.1 | "he has exalted" | the clause's only verb is rendered in plain words beside the marker, per 7a⁗ rule 1. |
| 1053A | 0093 | [sic: iu] | "in" (= iu for in) | ⛔ 7a⁗: the preposition's force stands OUTSIDE the marker — "in [sic: iu] the breadth of charity". Fired in 0093.md, which is where the Latin twin carries iu (see §4.2). |
| 1055B | 0094 | [cj: orbi; read orbis, "of the whole world"] | "world" (= orbi) | additive; fired in 0094.md, where the Latin carries it (§4.2). |
| 1058C | 0095 | [cj: dici; read dicit, "he tells"] | "it is said", the English of the printed passive infinitive | ⚑ English edit made with it, as the worklist required: "where he tells how" → "where it is said [cj: …] how". The old wording was our repair of a broken verb. |
| 1058D | 0095 | [sic: noc] | it sits after the English negative: "a punishment, not [sic: noc] only a fault" | ⛔ 7a⁗: noc IS the negative, so the English "not" stands OUTSIDE the marker. Deleting the marker leaves "a punishment, not only a fault" — the negation survives. |
| 1059C | 0096 | [sic: incomprehensibllis] | "incomprehensible" | adjective only. |
| 1059C | 0096 | [sic: pecatum] | "sin" (= pecatum), not "ancient" | noun only. |
| 1059D | 0096 | [sic: fungiendum] | "flee" (= fungiendum for fugiendum) | ⛔ 7a⁗: the non is rendered "must not flee" and stands OUTSIDE the marker. |
(Seventeen rows, seventeen markers: [sic:] 10 · [cj:] 5 · [d:] 2.)
⚑ Marker content is verbatim in the Latin twin at every one — verify-english check 9 (and check 12 for the [cj:] opening word) is the mechanical proof, and it passes.
§2 · THE ENGLISH WORDING EDITS THE WORKLIST NAMED — all three made
- 1059D
Quo ibo spiritu tuo(0096). Migne drops theaour twin carried. The lemma now reads "Whither shall I go by thy spirit?" where it read "from thy spirit". ⭐ Taken deliberately, and this is the log the worklist asked for: the gloss's own next clause is jam deliberat non esse ab eo fugiendum — "he must not FLEE FROM him" — so the English lemma and the English gloss now contradict each other on the page. That contradiction is Migne's, and Pattern 7 exists to show it. No[var:]is added (Band C's[var:]are settled by the stints, and I was told not to open them), but a reader who collates Ps 138:7 will find the Vulgate'sa spiritu tuo— the divergence is visible, which is the point. - 1060B
Et dixit×2 (0096). Both lemmata now read "And he said" for "And I said". ⚑ The gloss beneath the second is Deliberavi = "I deliberated", first person, so Migne's plate now argues against its own gloss. That is what the plate does; nothing was smoothed. - 1048B — the
venient→veniensrewording, logged with its marker in §1.
§3 · CHECKED AND DELIBERATELY LEFT ALONE — 14 sites. ⚑ A logged site is not a checked site
Each of these was read in the English against the newly patched Latin, word by word.
| col | chunk | what the patch did | what the English says, and why it stands |
|---|---|---|---|
| 1039D | 0087 | Nesciente Judae rem omnium | "Judah not knowing, they made…" — renders the plate. No marker owed. |
| 1041D | 0087 | e quibus → et quibus (the Psalm CXVIII editorial sentence) | "…of Ambrose, Cassiodorus, Augustine, and from these the Glossa ordinaria on this place has been expressed word for word." Renders et quibus as printed. Unchanged. ⛔ No [ed:] added to the four words recovered from col 1041's clipped inner margin — that ruling is Wilson's and is still open. |
| 1043A | 0088 | VERS. → VESS. 4. | Section label: Pattern 9 governs, English normalizes to VERS. 4.-- precisely because the facing Latin now preserves Migne's misprint. No marker either way. |
| 1044A | 0088 | CC's inserted et removed (proximos fratres) | "I spoke peace of thee, for neighbours, brethren" — already without "and". |
| 1045B | 0089 | our TEI's PSAMUS → PSALMUS CXXIV. (CC's non-word, not Migne's) | Head stays PSALM CXXIV. No [sic:] in either direction (Pattern 9). |
| 1046C | 0089 | Aventus → Adventus — CC manufactured the non-word | "The redemption of the coming of the Lord having been foretold…" The English does not accuse Migne here, and must not. |
| 1048A | 0090 | omne→omnes, labores→labore | "Blessed are all they that fear the Lord" · "taken up with joy even in the labour" — both render the plate. |
| 1050A | 0091 | CC's unmatched ( removed | "Nourished in milk, which is the Word made flesh" — written without a parenthesis. |
| 1050C | 0092 | quo→quod | English already renders it. |
| 1052A | 0092 | in → tu before the column turn | "etc., as far as [1052B] for thou doest it because thou hadst erred" — renders the plate. |
| 1053A | 0093 | Non quod alia gratia → Non alia gratia | English already renders the plate. |
| 1055B | 0093 | quasi dicat: → quasi : | "as it were: Let the worshippers of idols become like unto them." Renders the plate. |
| 1055B | 0093 | VERS. 18.-- → VERS. -- (the plate prints NO verse number) | ⛔ The English keeps VERS. 18.-- — addresses pass through verbatim; the patch is Latin-only. Unchanged. |
| 1056A | 0094 | qui→cui | "to whom he granted not only to believe" — renders the plate. |
| 1056B | 0094 | fecit → facit (present) | "what things he does in Egypt" — the live typology, already right. |
| 1056D | 0094 | mente et desiderio → mente desiderio | "who in mind, in desire are citizens of Jerusalem" — no "and". |
| 1057C | 0094 | Ideumaei → Idumaei — CC's non-word | "that is, the Idumeans". No accusation stands there. |
| 1058B | 0095 | exspecto→expecto | Orthographic; no English exponent. Unchanged. |
| 1059A | 0095 | princeps → principes | "in whom the princes of the world found no sin, wherefore they should kill him" — the plural, against quare occideret. Already right. |
| 1059B | 0096 | Semitam meam → Semitam meum | ⛔ NO marker. Migne's concord defect has no English exponent (the res aliena @0971D precedent, Pattern 12's exemption). "My path, namely the evil one" stands. |
| 1059B | 0096 | occurit → occurrit — CC's non-word | "as the father ran to meet the younger son returning". No accusation. |
| 1060C | 0096 | agnoscis→agnoscit | "in so far as he acknowledges" — already the third person. |
§4 · REFUSED, AND WHY — three claims I did not fire, plus two that the reconciler cannot see
⛔ A wrong marker is worse than a missing one, because it accuses Migne in public.
### 4.1 [sic: exaltaxit] @1052C — fired as [sic: cxaltaxit] instead The worklist's claim string is [sic: exaltaxit], but the patch actually applied — and the Latin twin now actually carries — cxaltaxit (secure ⏎ cxaltaxit., 0092.md). A [sic: exaltaxit] would (a) be a hard verify-english error, since the content is not verbatim in the twin, and (b) accuse Migne of type he does not set. I fired what the plate, as patched, prints. The stint's own table (cruces-0092.md §2) records the plate reading as cxaltaxit too, so the claim string in the patch file is the outlier. This is a one-word correction owed to data/tei-patches/8967.json's why field, not to the English.
### 4.2 Two markers the reconciler reports missing that ARE standing — a column→chunk artifact
- 1053A
[sic: iu]is fired in 0093.md; the reconciler looks in 0092.md. - 1055B
[cj: orbi…]is fired in 0094.md; the reconciler looks in 0093.md. Both columns straddle a chunk boundary.marker-reconcile.mjsmaps a column to the first chunk whose body carries its[anchor], and never to a later chunk whosecolContextis that same column. The Latiniu latitudinestands insrc/latin/8967/0093.mdandtotius orbiinsrc/latin/8967/0094.md, so the markers cannot be placed where the reconciler looks without failing the[sic:]/[cj:]substring test. The English is right; the mapping is coarse. (Fix, if wanted: prefer a chunk whosecolContextequals the column when the anchor chunk's Latin twin does not carry the word. I did not edit the script.)
### 4.3 The two [d:] claims can never be reported standing — a key() limitation [d: et, et] @1039C and [d: hoc, hoc] @1044A are both fired ([d: et], [d: hoc]). marker-reconcile.mjs extracts a claim's first italic word; a [d:] claim has none, so it falls back to the raw claim string and builds the regex \[d:[^\]]*\[d: et, et\], which no text can match. Structurally unsatisfiable, not an English defect. ⚑ On the marker itself: Pattern 11 wraps the intrusive copy only, never both, so [d: et, et] is a description of the site, not a marker. Both doublings are identical runs, so 11a does not apply and the marker goes on the second copy. Both copies stand mid-line and adjacent (1044A explicitly not at a column turn), so the manufactured-dittography trap does not apply, and neither firing deletes a finite verb — the withdrawal of [d: videantur, et] @0991C in Band B is not repeated. Content is Migne's own token (et, hoc), following this work's two standing precedents [d: in] @0890A and [d: unde] @0934C.
### 4.4 [sic: Ddvid] @1059A — REFUSED: the patch was never applied cruces-0092.md and 8967-PENDING-TEI-PATCHES.md both report the plate as In finem psalmus Ddvid., but src/latin/8967/0096.md reads David and the site is absent from the applied worklist. A [sic: Ddvid] would fail the substring test and would accuse Migne of type our own Latin does not carry. The Latin patch is owed first.
### 4.5 [cj: in; read id] @1060A — REFUSED: the patch was never applied Same shape. The stint reports in est efficaciam; src/latin/8967/0096.md reads id est efficaciam. A [cj:] may only be offered against a word Migne actually prints (and the verifier enforces it). English left as it stands: "that is, the efficacy of the Godhead."
### 4.6 justificaui @1059C — patched, marker deliberately NOT fired, and the site is OPEN The Latin twin now carries jam in tua gratia justificaui; the English still reads "now justified in thy grace", which renders the twin's old justificati. I did not change it and I did not mark it, because the worklist itself leaves the class undecided ("whether Migne meant justificavi or set a broken justificati cannot be decided from the leaf") and my range's instructions do not license a marker here. ⚑ State it plainly rather than let it pass: if the reading is a broken justificati, a [sic: justificaui] is owed on "justified"; if it is justificavi with the u/v sort, the English owes "now in thy grace I have justified" and no marker. This is the one site in my range where the English still renders a word the patched Latin no longer carries. It needs the leaf, or Wilson.
§5 · CHECKS RUN
node scripts/verify-english.mjs 8967→ verify OK, 106 chunks (pre-existing advisory warnings only: the em-dash note and the 0043 question-mark warn, neither in my range).node scripts/plate-gate.mjs 8967→ gate OK — every marker I fired stands on a column read at the plate (pages 525–535, read by the 0087–0091 and 0092–0096 stints).node scripts/marker-reconcile.mjs 8967 --band 10→ 64 claims · 28 standing · 36 missing, from 0 standing before this pass. 12 of my range's 17 claims now stand; the five that do not are §4.1 (a wrong claim string), §4.2 (two standing markers the mapping cannot see) and §4.3 (two claims the key() cannot express). Every remaining MISSING line is outside cols 1039C–1061C and belongs to another range.
## §6 · HANDOFF
- Two Latin patches are owed and were never applied:
David→Ddvid@1059A andid est→in est@1060A. Two markers are waiting behind them (§4.4, §4.5). - One
whystring indata/tei-patches/8967.jsonis wrong: 1052C claimsexaltaxit, the patch appliedcxaltaxit(§4.1). justificaui@1059C is open (§4.6) — the only English in my range that outruns its Latin.marker-reconcile.mjshas two blind spots (§4.2 column→chunk, §4.3[d:]keys) that will report false MISSING for any later range as well.- Nothing was committed; no Latin file was touched; no frontmatter, column anchor or
[n: …]note content was altered.
§I.bandC-english-0097 — file cruces-bandC-english-0097.md, verbatim
### cols 1061D–1080B · Psalms CXXXIX–CL · the end of the work ### Worked 2026-09-05 against data/briefs/8967-bandC-PATCH-WORKLIST.md, sites in cols 1061–1080 only.
⛔ A patch is not done when the Latin is right. Every patched site in the range was read against the newly patched Latin twin, not merely logged. Below: the markers fired and where each one sits; the sites checked and deliberately left alone; and three things the worklist asked for that I did not do, with the reason.
Totals: 26 markers fired — 15 [sic:], 10 [cj:], 1 [var:]. Two body-text punctuation edits. No other wording changed anywhere in the nine chunks.
§1 · THE GOVERNING DECISION, STATED FIRST BECAUSE EVERYTHING BELOW DEPENDS ON IT
Every marker in this pass is ADDITIVE: the English rendering stands, and the marker carries Migne's type beside it. Not one English word was deleted or replaced to make room for a marker.
Two independent warrants, and they agree:
- The verifier says so for
[cj:]in as many words —verify-english.mjscheck 12: "the gloss is ADDITIVE — the printed word keeps its English and our conjecture stands beside it." - This work's own shipped practice says so for
[sic:]. 8967 already carries ~30[sic:]markers standing beside a full English rendering of the defective word —God is said to harm [sic: Nocere]@0908C,[sic: Clamabuut]beside They shall cry out @0938A,[sic: immortalitai]beside "immortality",[sic: misericodia]beside "a great mercy". That form is also the 7a⁗-safe one: nothing is quarantined, so no verb, negation or conjunction can be swallowed. I checked all fifteen against 7a⁗'s three questions and every clause keeps its predicate, its polarity and its conjunction, because nothing was removed.
⚑ This is why I did NOT make several wording changes the PENDING-TEI-PATCHES file proposes (0102.md: "saving musics" · 0104.md: "Praise ye the Lady" · 0104.md: "All [sic: ubyssi]." · 0102.md: "The fatherless and the widow [sic: suseipiet]." · 0103.md: "the [sic: disper iones] of Israel,"). Those were drafted by the stints before the additive form was settled, and my own brief forbids improving wording it does not name. The additive form loses nothing: the reader still meets Migne's exact type inside the marker. Deleting "he will receive", "deeps", "dispersions" or "the Lord" would have subtracted sense the plate does have in order to display type it also has — 7a⁗-b's "hole exactly the size of a lexeme". ⚠ If Wilson wants the substitutive form instead, it is five edits and they are named above.
§2 · MARKERS FIRED — 26, every one on a column plate-gate reports as fully read
2a. [sic:] — 15
| col | chunk | marker | where it sits, and what it accuses |
|---|---|---|---|
| 1062B | 0097 | [sic: VERS. 9.] | replaces the address, [sic: VERS. 9.]-- The proud. — the 9000 @0344B form. Migne's second VERS. 6. misnumbered as 9; the English already printed it, per the 1016C ruling. |
| 1067D | 0100 | [sic: simlis] | after "like" in "he was made like [sic: simlis] to truth" |
| 1067D | 0100 | [sic: veriteti] | after "truth" in the same clause. ⚑ Two defects, two markers, each on its own word: veriteti simlis in the Latin is "like … to truth" in the English, so the two sit in reversed order and each was placed by the word it accuses, not by position. |
| 1070A | 0101 | [sic: corectio] | after "correction" |
| 1071B | 0101 | [sic: omnibns] | inside the Ps 144:17 lemma, In his ways, and holy in all [sic: omnibns] his works. — the italic run is split so the marker stands on "all", the turned sort's own word, and not at the end of the lemma where a reader would attach it to "works". Precedent for splitting a lemma: 6963 …the vineyard [sic: neam] I have not kept. |
| 1073B | 0102 | [sic: suseipiet] | immediately after the lemma, whose last words are "he will receive" = suseipiet |
| 1073D | 0103 | [sic: disper iones] | the WHOLE split run, Pattern 10, sitting on "the dispersions": because the dispersions [sic: disper iones] of Israel,. Italic run split for the same reason as 1071B. |
| 1076C | 0104 | [sic: VERS. 16.] | replaces the address. Migne runs 17, 18, 16; the English already printed his number. Wilson's ruling: the wrong numbers are restored and marked. |
| 1077A | 0104 | [sic: ubyssi] | after All ye deeps., whose last word "deeps" = ubyssi |
| 1077C | 0105 | [sic: benficus] | after "bountiful" |
| 1077D | 0105 | [sic: eanticcum] | after the second "a canticle" — "a canticle, namely, of peace, a canticle [sic: eanticcum] of charity". ⚠ The word occurs four times in that sentence; the defective sort is the one before charitatis, and the marker is on that one. |
| 1077D | 0105 | [sic: debat] | after "ought" in "this canticle ought [sic: debat] to be sung" |
| 1078B | 0105 | [sic: mahsiones] | after the Jn 14:2 lemma, whose last word is "mansions" |
| 1078B | 0105 | [sic: Neseitis] | inside the 1 Cor 6:3 quotation — Know you not [sic: Neseitis] that we shall judge angels?. The defect is the FIRST word of the quotation, so a marker after the whole run would have accused "angels". Split. |
| 1078D | 0105 | [sic: ferrcis] | after "iron" in "in iron [sic: ferrcis] fetters" |
2b. [cj:] — 10, English unchanged at every one (§1)
| col | chunk | marker | sits after |
|---|---|---|---|
| 1063B | 0097 | [cj: apponit; read apponi, "to be set"] | "asks a watch to be set" |
| 1065C | 0098 | [cj: Fortius; read Fortis, "the strong man"] | "The strong man" |
| 1068B | 0100 | [cj: actus; read acutus, "sharpened"] | "the sword twice sharpened" |
| 1068D | 0100 | [cj: laboro; read labore, "with labour"] | "Not lean with labour" |
| 1068D | 0100 | [cj: eum; read cum, "whereas"] | "whereas they themselves are" |
| 1069C | 0101 | [cj: fines; read fine, "without end"] | "the one day without end" |
| 1071C | 0102 | [cj: musicas; read musica, "a saving music"] | "as it were a saving music" |
| 1072A | 0102 | [cj: laudatio; read laudato, "that is praised"] | "lead that is praised" — on praised, not on "purity" |
| 1075C | 0104 | [cj: mittere; read mitteret, "he were to send"] | "unless he sent" |
| 1077A | 0104 | [cj: Dominam; read Dominum, "the Lord"] | the VERS. 7 lemma Praise ye the Lord. — ⚠ not the VERS. 1 lemma Praise ye the Lord from the heavens., which is a different verse and is not defective |
2c. [var:] — 1, and it is the only one this pass was licensed to add
1076C, 0104.md — [var: Vulg. Mt 15:24 domus Israel, "of the house of Israel"], placed after the quotation to the sheep that were lost of Israel [n: (Matth. XV)]. CC had inserted domus into Migne's Mt 15:24, exactly matching the Vulgate and destroying a real divergence; the patch restores quae perierunt Israel. The English already followed the plate, so only the marker was outstanding. No other [var:] was added anywhere in the range.
§3 · CHECKED AND DELIBERATELY UNCHANGED — a logged site is not a checked site
Each of these was read in the English against the newly patched Latin twin. Nothing was changed at any of them.
| col | what the plate now carries | what the English says | verdict |
|---|---|---|---|
| 1062A | lingua, manu et corde | "with the tongue, the hand and the heart" | ✓ renders the plate; CC's linqua was a non-word |
| 1066A | poenitentialium | "the seventh of the penitential psalms" | ✓ |
| 1067A | Auferes spiritus eorum | "Thou shalt take away their spirits" | ✓ plural, already the plate's; the Clementine's spiritum is what CC had |
| 1069C | Benedicit nunc (ONE word) | "He blesses now every day" | ✓ the plate's gloss, not CC's "he rightly says" |
| 1069C | quia visione | "since nothing is more delightful than that vision" | ✓ renders quia |
| 1071D | Haec spe erecta anima | "This soul, lifted up by hope" | ✓ |
| 1072B | saeculorum rerum amores | "so many loves of the things of the ages" | ✓ |
| 1073B | Diligit justos. | "He loveth the just." | ✓ agrees with Ps 145:8 verbatim once patched — no [var:] owed either, and none was added |
| 1075B | januam ONCE, scandala. ONCE | "the gate of Jerusalem shut" · "whence scandals should be" | ✓ the English carries neither dittography. A [d:] at either would have been a false public accusation against Migne — CC manufactured both |
| 1076A | buccellas | "morsels of white bread" / "He sendeth as morsels" | ✓ CC's de-doubled bucellas had manufactured a Ps 147:6 divergence; there is none |
| 1076C | gratias Trinitatis | "the graces of the Trinity" | ✓ English carries the number; the case has no English exponent (Pattern 9) |
| 1077A | Profunditas aquarum | "The depth of the waters" | ✓ singular |
| 1077C | Secunda agit de gaudiis | "Secondly he treats of the joys" | ✓ secunda [pars], not a defect |
| 1079A | …laudatur. full stop | "…he is praised according to it. God, since he is praised without end." | ✓ the English follows the plate; the short sentence that results is Migne's, not ours (Pattern 8) |
§4 · ⛔ LEFT DELIBERATELY, AND WHY — 1078B nos for non
No marker was fired and the English was not changed. The Latin twin now carries Migne's nos in unde nos sit liberum exire; the English keeps the twin's negative, "whence it may not be free to go out."
Following the plate here would put on the page the exact opposite of Migne's own next clause — the kings of the earth are bound in fetters "such as cannot be broken" — with nothing able to quarantine it, since [cj:] is additive by construction and cannot hold a reversed polarity. That is 7a′'s failure mode in its purest form. The divergence stands recorded here and in the patch file; Wilson's ruling on the class is owed. This and 1029B are its two sites — they are mirrors of each other (there the plate lost a non, here CC supplied one).
⚑ marker-reconcile will therefore keep reporting 1078B [cj: nos; read non] as MISSING. That is correct and intended, not an omission.
§5 · ⛔ REFUSED — the two note promotions at 1067A and 1071C
The worklist says: "our TEI had the point misplaced ((CAS).), so the chunker did not recognise a note and the English prints it as body text. Now that the Latin is fixed these are real [n: (CAS.)] / [n: (ID.)] notes. English edit owed at both."
The first half is true and I made it. The second half is not true of the files on disk, and I refused it.
- The Latin chunks were rebuilt after the patch (
0100.mdcarriesveriteti simlis), and0099.mdstill readsAnimam. (CAS.) Ut vasand0101.mdstill readsVoluntatem timentium se faciet. (ID.) Concludit— as plain body text, not[n: …]. - The reason is structural:
chunk-work.mjsderives[n: …]from the source's inline<note>elements, and the patch ({"find": "m.</hi> (CAS). Ut vas ", "replace": "m.</hi> (CAS.) Ut vas "}) moved a point inside a text node. No<note>was created, so no note can be chunked. verify-english.mjscheck 3 requires the same note count and order in both twins. An[n: (CAS.)]in the English against plain text in the Latin is a hard verifier error, not a warning.
What I did instead — the part that is achievable and correct: the English body text now matches the patched Latin body text exactly.
0099.md@1067A:The soul. (CAS). As a vessel→The soul. (CAS.) As a vessel0101.md@1071C:them that fear him. (ID). He concludes→them that fear him.(ID.) He concludes**
⚑ What is still owed, for whoever can run the chunker: promoting these two to real notes needs the TEI to wrap them in <note> elements and the work re-chunked — a Latin-side change, outside this pass's remit and explicitly outside my instructions. Until then the two sigla are body text in both columns, which is at least honest and consistent.
§6 · ⚑ ONE THING I FOUND THAT THE WORKLIST DOES NOT NAME — 1065C qui / quia
The 1065C patch has two halves. The first (Fortis → Fortius) is marked, above. The second is quia non vult → qui non vult, and the worklist rules that no marker is owed because qui non vult construes.
But our English at that clause reads "because he does not will it", which renders CC's quia, not Migne's qui. I did not change it: no English edit is named for that half, the two readings are identical in force (a causal relative), and an unnamed rewording is exactly what my brief forbids. Recording it so that it is a decision and not an oversight. If it is to move, the text is 0098.md, "The strong man … does not flee in mind, because he does not will it."
§7 · ⚠ THE ferrcis CAVEAT — I HAVE SEEN IT AND FIRED IT AS REPORTED
[sic: ferrcis] @1078D is fired. I record here, as instructed, that I have read the caveat: this is the one call in Band C that a second reader should re-open, because it has the exact shape of the italic-e-images-as-c hazard, and the deciding evidence is that the disputed glyph is well formed — a clean open c with both terminals against three fully-inked barred e on the same line — not that it is broken. The site is roman, not italic, which is the reported control. I have no plate access in this pass and am not in a position to re-open it; the marker stands as the reading stint reported it, and this paragraph is the flag.
§8 · TWO COLUMNS THAT STRADDLE A CHUNK BOUNDARY — recorded so nobody "repairs" them
Two of my columns run across a chunk boundary, and the marker sits in the SECOND chunk, not the first that carries the anchor:
- 1071C
[cj: musicas]is in0102.md— the Latinquasi musicas salutarisis the opening sentence of0102.md(colContext: 1071C), not the tail of0101.md. - 1077C
[sic: benficus]is in0105.md— the Latinbenevolus et benficusis in0105.md(colContext: 1077C), not0104.md.
Both placements are forced, not chosen: verify-english checks a [sic:]/[cj:] word as a substring of its own chunk's Latin twin, so putting either marker in the earlier chunk would be a hard verifier error. plate-gate resolves both correctly, and marker-reconcile did too once its column→chunk map was widened mid-session (it had briefly reported both as MISSING against the earlier chunk; that was the tool, not the placement).
§9 · CHECKS RUN
node scripts/verify-english.mjs 8967→ verify OK: 106 chunks, columns/notes/sections aligned, no duplicate paragraphs. (Pre-existing warns only: the 0043 question-mark parity note and the em-dash count, neither in this range.)node scripts/plate-gate.mjs 8967→ gate OK — every marker stands on a column that was read. All 16 new[sic:]/[var:]in the range report(read: full).node scripts/marker-reconcile.mjs 8967 --band 10→ 64 claims · 62 standing · 2 MISSING, from 64/0/64 before the English passes began. Every claim in my range stands except one, and that one is deliberate:1078B [cj: nos; read non](§4). The other miss,1052C [sic: exaltaxit], is outside my range.- Nothing was committed. No Latin file was touched. No frontmatter, column anchor or
[n: …]content was altered except the two body-text sigla in §5.
§I.polarity-bandC-0077 — file polarity-bandC-0077.md, verbatim
Glossa ordinaria on the Psalms, PL 113, cols 1011B–1039B (Pss CI–CXVI). Read blind against the Latin twins: no cruces file, no brief, no patch, no commit log, no plate-read report was opened. translation-style.md (Patterns 7, 7a–7a⁗, 8, 12, 14, 18) was read.
Chunks read: 0077, 0078, 0079, 0080, 0081, 0082, 0083, 0084, 0085, 0086 — all ten, clause by clause, in both languages.
A. THE ONE STRUCTURAL FINDING — Pattern 18 is inverted at EVERY [cj:] in the band
Eleven [cj: …] markers stand in these ten chunks. In every one of them the running English renders the CONJECTURE and Migne's printed word has no English at all.
Pattern 18 fixes the form and states the reason: "The rule: the gloss is ADDITIVE. Migne's word keeps its English, and our conjecture stands beside it. Nothing is removed, nothing is replaced, and the reader sees both" — the founding shape being peace purely [cj: munde; read mundo, "to the world"], where the running text is "purely" (the printed word) and the marker carries the sense of the emendation.
The mechanical tell that this band inverted it: in all eleven the quoted gloss inside the marker is a verbatim copy of the English immediately before it. In a correctly formed [cj:] the two must differ, because one is Migne's word and the other is ours. Spot-checked against shipped English elsewhere in the corpus, where the printed word is what stands in the text (to presumption [cj: praesumptioni; read praesumptionis, "of presumption"]; Babylon was sunk [cj: mersa; read non mersa, "was not sunk"]; among not [cj: non; read nos, "us"]).
This is exactly the failure 7a′ describes — "the marker becomes a place to hide a repair" — with the marker rather than the crux doing the hiding. Every printed word below was verified to appear verbatim in its own Latin twin, so no marker is accusing a word Migne did not set; the defect is on the English side of each one.
| # | chunk | col | Latin as printed | English as printed | what the English says that the Latin does not | proposed |
|---|---|---|---|---|---|---|
| A1 | 0078 | 1014D | monet benedicere par eas quae antiquis facta sunt | "he admonishes men to bless through [cj: par; read per, "through"] those things" | par is not a preposition; the page gives it the sense of the emendation. Hardest of the eleven — par may have no renderable English here, in which case Pattern 10/12 ([sic:], carried) is the right instrument, not [cj:]. | render or carry par, marker beside it |
| A2 | 0078 | 1015A | ut abundaret dilectum | "that the offence [cj: dilectum; read delictum, "the offence"] might abound" | dilectum = "the beloved (thing)". The page prints only the emendation. | "that the beloved might abound [cj: dilectum; read delictum, "the offence"]" |
| A3 | 0078 | 1015A | Vel secundam aliam litteram | "Or according to [cj: secundam; read secundum, "according to"] another reading" | secundam = "a second". | "Or a second, another reading [cj: …]" |
| A4 | 0079 | 1015C | Item benedicere Deus monet | "Likewise he admonishes men to bless God [cj: Deus; read Deum, "to bless God"]" | Deus is nominative and yields a perfectly good sentence — "God admonishes [us] to bless". The page silently reassigns the subject. | "Likewise God admonishes men to bless [cj: Deus; read Deum, "to bless God"]" |
| A5 | 0079 | 1015D | qui non putes crescere vel minui | "who canst [cj: putes; read potes, "thou canst"] not grow or be lessened" | putes = "thinkest". | "who thinkest not to grow or be lessened [cj: …]" |
| A6 | 0084 | 1032A | quid in futura glorificatur accipiet? | "what shall he receive, glorified [cj: glorificatur; read glorificatus, "glorified"], in the things to come?" | glorificatur is a finite present passive, "he is glorified". | "what, when he is glorified, shall he receive…" |
| A7 | 0085 | 1034A | Quandiu laudamus sit | "how long he is to be praised [cj: laudamus; read laudandus, "to be praised"]" | laudamus = "we praise". | render the printed first person, marker beside it |
| A8 | 0086 | 1037A | Diligitur perfecte, eum animus adversis non movetur | "He is loved perfectly when [cj: eum; read cum, "when"] the mind is not moved" | eum = "him"; the page prints the conjunction the emendation supplies. | render the printed eum, marker beside it |
| A9 | 0086 | 1037D | et ideo intra in gaudium Domini sui, dicentis: Euge… | "and therefore he enters [cj: intra; read intrat, "he enters"] into the joy of his Lord" | ⚠ Twice wrong. Not only is the conjecture in the text: the printed intra is very plausibly no error at all — an imperative echoing the Matthew tag that follows three words later, intra in gaudium Domini tui. "Enter thou into the joy of his Lord, who says: Well done…" construes without emendation. | "and therefore enter thou into the joy of his Lord"; reconsider whether the [cj:] is warranted |
| A10 | 0086 | 1039A | audiat sequentem Psalmus | "let him hear the following psalm [cj: Psalmus; read Psalmum, "the following psalm"]" | The weakest of the eleven: English marks case by position, so the printed nominative has no distinct rendering. Flagged for completeness only. | probably leave; consider whether a marker earns its place here |
| A11 | 0086 | 1039B | pro sui enim brevitate non recipi divisionem | "it does not admit [cj: recipi; read recipit, "it admits"] of division" | recipi is a passive infinitive; the finite verb in the text is the emendation. | render the printed infinitive, marker beside it |
Judgment: OURS, all eleven, and it is one decision made eleven times rather than eleven slips — which is why it belongs at the head of the report. Migne's plate is not implicated anywhere in this class. A2, A4, A5, A8, A9 and A11 each change what the page asserts; A1 and A10 are conventions problems more than sense problems.
B. SITES WHERE THE ENGLISH SAYS SOMETHING THE LATIN DOES NOT
B1. 0078 @1014C — a lemma conformed to the Douay against the printed word ⭐
- Latin: VERS. 4.-- Qui redimit, de corruptione vitam tuam.
- English: "Who redeemeth thy life from destruction."
- corruptione is "corruption". "Destruction" is the Douay's rendering of the Vulgate's de interitu vitam tuam — a word that is not on this plate. This is 7a″ exactly: the remembered verse arrived before the printed Latin was read, and the exposition now rests on a word Migne does not print. (Migne's de corruptione is itself the interesting reading — it is the Old Latin/Romanum wording — and our English deletes the evidence for it.)
- Ours. Nothing is defective in the Latin; the divergence was introduced in English.
- Proposed: "Who redeemeth thy life from corruption." (and consider a
[var:], since the divergence from the received text is material). - Note also that Migne's comma (Qui redimit, de corruptione vitam tuam) is lost when the English re-orders; the printed mark has nowhere to sit.
B2. 0079 @1017C — a possessive the plate never printed ⭐
- Latin: quia in omnibus non possunt, in cubilibus, id est, cordibus pertinacium permanent
- English: "they abide in their dens, that is, in the hearts of the obstinate"
- Migne prints the lemma short, in cubilibus. The Vulgate continues in cubilibus suis collocabuntur, and "their" has been finished in from it. This is the exact class the runbook predicts for verse-by-verse commentary.
- Ours.
- Proposed: "in the dens," — no possessive.
B3. 0079 @1017D — an object supplied into a truncated lemma
- Latin: Ad illudendum. [n: (ID.)] Dicitur in Job (Job XL), illudi Satanae ab angelis Dei…
- English: "To play with him."
- Migne prints two words. The Vulgate's ad illudendum ei supplies the dative that our "with him" renders; the plate does not. (Secondarily, the same verb is rendered "mocked" three words later in the gloss — illudi Satanae → "Satan is mocked" — so the lemma and its own gloss no longer share a word.)
- Ours.
- Proposed: "For mocking." or "To be mocked.", with no dative.
B4. 0084 @1031D–1032A — prohibet rendered so as to reverse the charge
- Latin: Nihil superat voluntatem Dei, qui et si vult, ut non pecces, non tamen prohibet. Si vult parcere poenitenti, vult et impoenitentem punire; ita de homine semper Deus implet suam voluntatem, quia nihil facit homo, de quo non operetur Deus, quod vult.
- English: "who, even if he wills that thou sin not, yet does not forbid it"
- prohibeo here is "hinder, prevent, hold back". The Augustinian point that the rest of the paragraph makes — God's will is fulfilled about man whatever man does — is that God does not prevent the sin he wills you not to commit. "Does not forbid it" says the opposite of the first half of its own sentence: if he wills that thou sin not, he does forbid it. The clause contradicts its own neighbour, which is the standing tell.
- Ours.
- Proposed: "yet does not prevent it."
B5. 0086 @1037A — an imperative to the reader turned into a statement about the psalmist
- Latin: Dum ergo ait, invocabunt, nota quod non est otiosus dilector.
- English: "he notes that the lover is not idle."
- nota is the imperative — "note that the lover is not idle" — addressed to the reader, as the surrounding gloss addresses him throughout. "He notes" renders notat, a word not on the plate, and silently reassigns the act of observing from the reader to the psalmist.
- Ours.
- Proposed: "note that the lover is not idle."
B6. 0083 @1031B — ut ruinas rendered twice, and the objects turned into manner
- Latin: et nunc judicabit in gentibus, ut ruinas, non erectos impleat.
- English: "and now he shall judge among the Gentiles, that he may fill them as ruins, not as men upright."
- One ut is doing the work of two in the English: it is rendered "that" (purpose) and then again "as". ruinas and erectos are the accusative objects of impleat — "that he may fill ruins, not upright ones", i.e. he fills the fallen, not the standing. The English turns both into manner ("as ruins", "as men upright") and adds an object "them" the Latin does not have, which loses the whole point of the antithesis (the humbled are what get filled).
- Ours.
- Proposed: "that he may fill ruins, not the upright."
B7. 0077 @1011D — the frying-pan's subject reassigned
- Latin: Ossa mea sicut cremium aruerunt. Fortes, quorum frixorium sunt, qui scandalizantur, etc.
- English: "The strong, whose frying-pan they are, who are scandalized, etc."
- The subject of sunt is qui scandalizantur: those who are scandalized are the frying-pan of the strong. The English's unbound "they" reads back to the bones/the strong, and "who are scandalized" then floats as a second relative on "the strong" — so the page says the strong are their own frying-pan and are the ones scandalized. Agency inverted (mechanism 5).
- Ours.
- Proposed: "The strong, whose frying-pan are they that are scandalized, etc."
B8. 0082 @1027C — multae rendered singular once and plural once, in one sentence
- Latin: sed iste pauper est multae familiae, multae Ecclesiae: tamen et est una Ecclesia, una ovis.
- English: "but this poor man is of a great household, of many churches: yet there is also one Church, one sheep."
- The same word twice, rendered two different ways, and the first also swaps multae ("many") for "great". The antithesis that closes the sentence — una Ecclesia, una ovis — fixes the number as plural in both limbs.
- Ours.
- Proposed: "but this poor man is many households, many churches".
B9. 0080 @1021C — a proper name supplied as subject
- Latin: Quia incubuit timor eorum super eos. Timebat Israel, ne reliquias eorum consumeret.
- English: "Egypt feared Israel, lest he should consume what was left of them."
- Migne prints no subject noun but Israel, which is indeclinable and can be the nominative ("Israel was afraid"). "Egypt" is nowhere on the plate; the English supplies a proper name to resolve the ambiguity in one direction, unmarked. The reading is probably right on the sense of the lemma, but that is what a crux is for.
- Ours.
- Proposed: render without inventing a subject — "Israel was feared, lest he should consume what was left of them" — or keep the reading and mark it.
B10. 0077 @1013D — in rendered "unto" only where it echoes the Vulgate cadence
- Latin: Vel, in generatione generationum. … and eleven lines later, Qui erunt in generatione generationum.
- English: "Or, unto generation of generations." … "Which shall be in the generation of generations."
- The same three Latin words, rendered two ways in one chunk; the divergent one is the Douay's cadence for Ps 101:25 ("thy years are unto generation and generation"). Low severity, but it is the 7a″ mechanism in miniature: extent substituted for location because the remembered verse arrived first.
- Ours.
- Proposed: "Or, in generation of generations."
B11. 0086 @1038C — two lemmata merged into one
- Latin: Et ut augeat admirationem repetit: Ego servus tuus. Filius ancillae. [n: (AUG.)] Jerusalem coelestis…
- English: "he repeats: I am thy servant, the son of the handmaid."
- Migne prints a full stop between two lemma units, and the AUG. note glosses the second one alone. Replacing it with a comma deletes a printed mark (Pattern 8) and fuses two addresses into one, so the note now appears to gloss the whole.
- Ours.
- Proposed: restore the full stop: "I am thy servant. The son of the handmaid."
B12. 0086 @1038C — Domino decapitalised
- Latin: Vel ut ancilla, non sibi, sed Domino; ita et ego in morte mea aliquos tibi parturiam
- English: "as a handmaid brings forth not for herself, but for her lord"
- Migne capitalises. In this edition that distinguishes the Lord from a human master, and the sentence's own continuation (aliquos tibi parturiam — the martyr bears children for God) needs the capital. Small, but it moves the referent.
- Ours.
- Proposed: "but for the Lord".
C. SILENT REPAIRS OF BROKEN LATIN — the English reads smoothly and nothing marks it
These are the sites where Migne's line is defective and our English construes across the defect without a marker. None is a mistranslation of a sound Latin clause; all are places where the reader cannot tell the plate is damaged. Reported as a class because the runbook asks for exactly this.
| chunk | col | Latin as printed | English as printed | the repair |
|---|---|---|---|---|
| 0081 | 1023B–C | Laus Dei, qui suos vindicavit qualitas poenae facta indicat. | "The quality of the punishment inflicted declares the praise of God, who has avenged his own" | Laus is nominative and cannot be the object of indicat; the English silently makes it one and re-orders the sentence around it. |
| 0083 | 1030B | Una est maledictio malorum Deus, cum benedicit, facit quod dicit. | "One is the cursing of the wicked; God, when he blesses, does what he says." | Deus stands on the first clause's side of Migne's comma; the English moves it across and upgrades the comma to a semicolon so the sentence runs. |
| 0082 | 1028C | quia hic Christus cum membris patitur supra, singulariter dicendo, deducet me | "because here Christ suffers together with his members; above, speaking in the singular, "he will bring me."" | supra likewise moved across Migne's comma. |
| 0080 | 1019B | …propter terram Chanaam, de qua sequitur. Quomodo aeternum est, cum… | "…on account of the land of Chanaan, of which it follows: how is it everlasting, since…" | a printed full stop replaced by a colon and the following capital lowered, joining a sentence Migne broke. |
| 0083 | 1030C | A dextris meis. In potioribus meis bonis et occultis, donec regnes manifestus. | "At my right hand. Among my better and hidden goods. Until thou reign manifest." | the converse: a printed comma raised to a full stop. |
All ours. In each the fix is the same shape — either render across Migne's own punctuation and grouping, or keep the smooth English and let a marker/crux say that the plate is broken. The present text does neither.
There is a further, lower-grade punctuation-supply habit through the band: a comma of Migne's is silently promoted to a colon or semicolon at 0081 @1024B (gravior excessus et vehementior ira daemonibus devovebant filios), 0082 @1026C and @1027C, 0084 @1032D (twice) and @1033C, 0085 @1036A, 0086 @1037C. Individually invisible; listed so the count exists.
D. MARKER AUDIT — every [sic:], [cj:], [d:], [var:] in the band
[d: …]: none in this band.
[sic: …] — twelve. All twelve carry a string that appears verbatim in the Latin twin, and all twelve sit on the English word they accuse. No 7a⁗ swallowing: none of them quarantines a negation, a verb, an interrogative or a conjunction that governs translated text. Checked one by one:
| chunk | marker | Latin verified | on the right word | force intact |
|---|---|---|---|---|
| 0077 | [sic: deis] | Elato enim Adam deis deficiunt | "the days" | yes |
| 0078 | [sic: qut] | si est homo qut audiat | "who" | yes |
| 0079 | [sic: mugnificatus] | etc., mugnificatus | "magnified" | yes |
| 0079 | [sic: VERS. 15.] | VERS. 15 out of sequence before VERS. 14 | the address | n/a |
| 0080 | [sic: haere ditas] | promittitur haere ditas | "an inheritance" | yes (split run, Pattern 10) |
| 0080 | [sic: Ft] | Ft non erat infirmus | "And" | yes — and note the non survives outside the marker |
| 0081 | [sic: ete.] | mutati sunt, ete. | "etc." | yes |
| 0082 | [sic: honorum] | fructus honorum operum | "good" | yes |
| 0083 | [sic: posueruent] | Et posueruent adversum | "they set" | yes |
| 0083 | [sic: quiquid] | quiquid in utroque Testamento | "whatsoever" | yes |
| 0084 | [sic: liberavi] | tanquam a captivitate liberavi | "delivered" | yes |
| 0086 | [sic: reddum] | Vota mea reddum | "I will pay" | yes |
| 0086 | [sic: ue] | Sed ue quis putet | "lest" | yes — the negative purpose is carried in plain words outside the marker. This is 7a⁗ done right. |
[cj: …] — eleven. Every printed word appears in its own Latin twin (verified), so none is smuggling an emendation of our own invention. All eleven fail the additive half of Pattern 18 — see section A.
[var: …] — six. Contents checked against both the Latin twin and the Vulgate:
- 0079 @1016D (1 Cor 12:7), 0079 @1018A (Gen 3:14 meae for tuae), 0079 @1018C (Isa 1:16-18), 0081 @1025A (Ps 105:46), 0086 @1036D (Ps 48:19) — all accurate, all material, all correctly leave the printed wording standing in the English. ✅
- 0081 @1024D (Ps 105:38) — substantively right, placed wrong. The divergence it reports (Et interfecta for the Vulgate's Et infecta) belongs to the lemma "And slain." at the head of the paragraph, and the whole gloss (continens pro contento) exists to explain it. The marker sits ~230 characters downstream, at the end of a clause (et contaminati sunt in operibus) that is not the divergent one and that answers to Ps 105:39. A reader meets it attached to the wrong words. Ours. Proposed: move it to immediately after "And slain."
E. CANDIDATES CONSIDERED AND REJECTED
| chunk | site | why rejected |
|---|---|---|
| 0077 @1012A | Domicilio → "In a dwelling-place" | The supplied "In" looked like the class-3 shape, but a bare Latin ablative cannot reach English without a preposition; nothing from the Vulgate's in domicilio is added beyond what the case itself carries. |
| 0077 @1011C | quae iniquis → "which are in the way of the wicked" | Ellipsis of obstant; the supply is the only way to render the elided verb, and adds no sense the case does not fix. |
| 0077 @1013A | et solutis vertuntur in gloriam → "and when they are loosed, they are turned into glory" | solutis reads equally as ablative absolute or dative; the English picks one defensibly and the sense does not move. |
| 0077 @1014A | nedum ipsi → "not to speak of those themselves" | a fortiori nedum after a positive; correct here, and the same word is correctly "much less" in a negative context at 0078 @1015B. Consistency is with the grammar, not with itself. |
| 0078 @1015A–B | quod figmentum conversus ad Deum dicit → "which frame, being turned to God, says" | conversus is masculine and figmentum neuter, so the concord is broken on the plate — but English marks no gender, so no rendering can expose it and none can conceal it. Not reportable in this instrument. |
| 0079 @1016C | in disco Petri ter submisso → "in the dish let down thrice to Peter" | genitive re-cast as a dative, but it names the same vessel in the same vision; no proposition changes. |
| 0079 @1016D | justitia est, veritas est Christus → "is justice, is truth, is Christ" | The English flattens an asyndeton into a list, and "truth is Christ" is a live alternative — but both readings make the same identification and I could not show the sense moves. |
| 0079 @1018C | finis bonorum → "the end of good men" | "the end of good things" (the Ciceronian phrase) is at least as likely, but the gloss is about the psalm's shape and either reading serves it. Genuinely ambiguous; recorded rather than claimed. |
| 0080 @1019A | nihil est pudore silendum → "nothing that shame should keep silent" | ablative of cause promoted to subject; the injunction is unchanged. |
| 0080 @1020B | in aestuante et sollicita anima → "in his burning and anxious soul" | supplied possessive, but in a gloss, not a lemma, and with an unambiguous antecedent one clause back. Listed so it is on the record. |
| 0081 @1023B | saturitatem, sequitur seditio → "after fulness there follows sedition" | sequor + accusative; restructured but not altered. |
| 0081 @1023C | quod est boni → "which belongs to a good man too" | the "too" is supplied and does change emphasis slightly, but the concessive force is genuinely in quod est boni here. Marginal. |
| 0081 @1025A | ne Israel pro debito periret → "the cause that Israel did not perish" | negative purpose reported as fact; the negation survives and the proposition is the same. |
| 0081 @1025A | quod perdituros eos videbatur | The Latin is corrupt past clean construing (perdituros for perditurus); our English picks a reading, but so must any English, and I could not show the alternative is better. Belongs in a crux, not in a findings list. |
| 0082 @1027B | persistentes per haereticos → "those who persevere under heretics" | per as agent vs. circumstance; the persons and the affliction are the same either way. |
| 0083 @1029C | quia cum essent rami naturales, facti sunt → "though they were natural branches, so they became" | The Latin lacks its complement; the supplied "so" is the minimum needed and does not read smoothly enough to conceal the hole. Borderline against section C — left out because the English does not read smoothly. |
| 0084 @1033D | thesaurum in coelo servabat → "was keeping a treasure for him in heaven" | supplied beneficiary; contextually forced by the antithesis with iste emebat. Recorded. |
| 0085 @1036A | Ne autem videatur majoribus jam res → "a thing possessed by the greater" | dative read as agent and "possessed" supplied; interpretive but not contrary. |
| 0086 @1037D | sed fidelis → "but this one is faithful" | The English introduces a second servant the Latin does not name. Defensible — the Matt 25 contrast requires it and ille two words earlier licenses it — but it is a supply, and it is here so a later reader can re-adjudicate. |
| 0086 @1038B | sed virtus Dei est, si non credit → "but it is the power of God, if he does not believe" | The clause is odd on the plate; the English renders it literally and leaves the oddity visible, which is Pattern 7 working. Not a finding. |
| throughout | Migne's out-of-sequence VERS. addresses (0079 VERS. 15 before VERS. 14; 0085/0086 restarting at VERS. 1 and VERS. 10) | Migne's own, reproduced as instructed. |
| 0083 @1031C | Phil. 2 quotation, Propter hoc exaltavit illum, et dedit Deus illi nomen… with no [var:] | Migne's wording diverges from the Vulgate, but the English renders the printed wording faithfully, and the divergence is not material to the gloss. A missing optional marker is not an English defect. |
F. CHUNKS FOUND CLEAN
None of the ten is clean. Every chunk in the band carries at least one site:
| chunk | cols | sites |
|---|---|---|
| 0077 | 1011C–1014A | B7, B10 |
| 0078 | 1014B–1015C | A1, A2, A3, B1 |
| 0079 | 1015C–1018C | A4, A5, B2, B3 |
| 0080 | 1018D–1022A | B9, C (1019B) |
| 0081 | 1022A–1025C | C (1023B–C), D (var placement @1024D) |
| 0082 | 1025C–1028C | B8, C (1028C) |
| 0083 | 1028C–1031C | B6, C (1030B, 1030C) |
| 0084 | 1031C–1033D | A6, B4 |
| 0085 | 1033D–1036C | A7 |
| 0086 | 1036C–1039B | A8, A9, A10, A11, B5, B11, B12 |
The nearest thing to a clean chunk is 0085 (PSS CXII–CXIII), which returned one site and that one only a member of the section-A class; its lemmata, its negations (non despicit humiles, quae Deum non laudat, non enim haec ad litteram) and its scripture quotations all survive intact. 0080 is clean of every lexical class and carries only a supplied proper name and one repunctuation across four columns.
G. WHAT I WOULD FIX FIRST
- Section A — eleven markers, one rule, and it is the rule whose whole purpose is to stop conjectures reaching the running text. A6, A9 and A11 in particular put an emendation on the page where the printed word construes.
- B1 (de corruptione → "destruction") and B2 ("their dens") — the two purest specimens of the class this instrument was built for, one a conformed lemma and one a possessive finished in from the Vulgate.
- B4 (prohibet) and B5 (nota) — the two that change what the page asserts about God and about the reader respectively, and neither has any marker, note or grep signature.
§I.polarity-bandC-0087 — file polarity-bandC-0087.md, verbatim
Blind read of the Latin against the English, clause by clause, for places where our English says something the Latin beside it does not. Reader was fenced from cruces.md, the briefs, the patch files, and the git log. Ten chunks read in full; nothing skipped.
Psalms CXVII–CXXXVIII, lemma-and-gloss. The numbered gradus series was tracked across the band and is reported under §4.
1. FINDINGS — confident
### 1.1 @1039D (0087) — the conjecture is in the running text, the printed word has vanished
- Latin:
vel non permittendo cadere, vel, a casu revelando. - English: "either by not suffering one to fall, or by raising up from the fall
[cj: revelando; read relevando, "by raising up"]." - What the English says that the Latin does not: revelando is "by revealing." The running English gives only the conjecture relevando, and the
[cj:]gloss then repeats it word for word — delete the marker and nothing of Migne's word survives. Pattern 18 is explicit that the gloss is additive: "Migne's word keeps its English, and our conjecture stands beside it." Here it replaced it. - OURS. The conjecture itself is sound (the parallel gloss ten lines later at 1040A prints a casu relevando and is rendered "by raising up from the fall"), which is exactly why the marker rather than the text is where it belongs.
- Proposed: "…or by revealing from the fall
[cj: revelando; read relevando, "by raising up"]."
### 1.2 @1046A (0089) — a supplied subject in a truncated lemma, twice
- Latin:
In convertendo.(twice:ibi, Converte, Domine. In convertendo.andIn convertendo. [n: (AUG.)] Vel, cum converterit…) - English: "When the Lord turned." (both times)
- Migne prints the lemma short. Ps 125:1 Vulgate supplies the subject — In convertendo Dominus captivitatem Sion — and the translator finished the lemma from the Vulgate. The printed words carry no subject at all. The predicted failure profile of verse-by-verse commentary.
- OURS.
- Proposed: "In the turning." (or "When he turned." only if a subject is unavoidable — but the plate has none).
### 1.3 @1048D (0090) — a possessive the Latin never printed
- Latin:
Prolongaverunt iniquitatem. Alias, longe a me fecerunt injustitiam suam. - English: "They have lengthened out their iniquity. Elsewhere, they have put their injustice far from me."
- The second lemma prints suam and rightly gets "their." The first does not (Vulgate Ps 128:3 has iniquitatem suam), and the English supplied it from memory. The two lemmata are three words apart, which is what makes the supply visible.
- OURS.
- Proposed: "They have lengthened out iniquity."
### 1.4 @1050C (0092) — a cross-reference cue conformed to the verse it points at
- Latin:
Secundo, ostendit domum aedificatam, ibi, Ecce audi. - English: "Secondly, he shows the house built, there, Behold we have heard."
- Migne's cue prints Ecce audi. Our English gives Ecce audivimus — the VERS. 6 lemma it points to, which is correctly rendered "Behold we have heard" at 1051B. And the same two words at 1051B (
Ecce audi, scilicet Dominum nasciturum) are there rendered literally, "Behold, hear." So the page renders one printed phrase two different ways, and the divergent one is the conformed one. - OURS.
- Proposed: "…there, Behold, hear."
### 1.5 @1051B (0092) — an attribution silently altered
- Latin:
VERS. 6.-- Ecce audivimus. (CASS. Secunda pars ubi… - English: "VERS. 6.-- Behold we have heard. (CAS.) The second part where…"
- Migne prints
(CASS.— an unclosed parenthesis, his defect. Our English both closed the parenthesis and dropped an S, producing an attribution siglum that appears nowhere on the plate. Attribution sigla are Migne's and reproduced as printed. - OURS (the unclosed paren is Migne's; "CAS.)" is not).
- Proposed: reproduce
(CASS.as printed.
### 1.6 @1052A (0092) — "thy" imported into a lemma
- Latin:
VERS. 10.-- Propter David servum. - English: "For thy servant David's sake."
- Vulgate Ps 131:10 is propter David servum tuum; Migne prints the lemma without it. Nine words later
propter Davidis correctly rendered "for David's sake," with nothing added — so the supply is local to the fuller lemma, which is the tell. - OURS.
- Proposed: "For David the servant's sake."
### 1.7 @1052C (0092) — "her" imported into a lemma standing beside one that does print the pronoun
- Latin:
Sacerdotes ejus, … Et sancti, id est subditi. - English: "Her priests, … And her saints, that is, those subject."
- Sacerdotes ejus prints the pronoun and rightly gets "her." Et sancti does not (Vulgate Ps 131:16: et sancti eius exultatione exultabunt). Two lemmata in the same sentence, one with the pronoun and one without, both rendered as though both had it.
- OURS.
- Proposed: "And the saints,"
### 1.8 @1055A (0093) — "his" imported into a lemma, with the Vulgate quoted on the same line
- Latin:
judicabit eos in futuro, et in servis, id est, fidelibus, consolabitur, - English: "he will judge them in the time to come, and in his servants, that is, in the faithful, he will comfort,
[var: Vulg. Ps 134:14 et in servis suis deprecabitur …]" - Migne prints et in servis. The
[var:]immediately after quotes the Vulgate's in servis suis, so the Vulgate wording was demonstrably in view when the lemma was rendered — and its possessive migrated into the printed lemma while the var note goes on reporting the divergence as though it had not. - OURS.
- Proposed: "and in the servants,"
### 1.9 @1055B (0093) — a VERS. number supplied that the plate does not print
- Latin:
VERS. -- Similes illis fiant. - English: "VERS. 18.-- Let them become like unto them."
- Migne's VERS. addresses are reproduced as printed, including where a number is absent. Here the plate prints the rubric with no number and our English supplied 18. (It is the right number; that is not the point — the address is Migne's, and this one now silently claims his authority for our arithmetic.)
- OURS.
- Proposed: "VERS. -- Let them become like unto them."
### 1.10 @1060A (0096) — "my" imported into a lemma whose twin four words later has none
- Latin:
Si sumpsero pennas, duas alas charitatis…Pennas. [n: (CASS.)] Quae meae… - English: "If I shall take my wings, the two wings of charity" … "Wings."
- Vulgate Ps 138:9: si sumpsero pennas meas diluculo. Migne prints pennas bare in both places; the second is correctly rendered "Wings." without a possessive.
- OURS.
- Proposed: "If I shall take wings,"
### 1.11 @1059B (0096) — two supplied possessives in one gloss
- Latin:
Et funiculum. (Alias) limitem, quousque perveni: - English: "And my line. (Otherwise) my boundary, how far I came:"
- Vulgate Ps 138:3 prints funiculum meum; Migne does not. limitem has no possessive either. The preceding lemma,
Semitam meum, does print one and is correctly rendered "My path" — again a printed possessive beside an unprinted one, both rendered alike. - OURS.
- Proposed: "And the line. (Otherwise) the boundary, how far I came:"
### 1.12 @1053A (0092) — subject and number silently reassigned
- Latin:
qui primo fide certaverunt, sed vinci non potuerunt, quia jam caput passum praecesserunt. - English: "who first strove in faith, but could not be overcome, because the head that had suffered had already gone before them."
- The printed verb is plural (praecesserunt) and its only available subject is the apostles and primitive saints; caput passum stands as its object. Our English makes caput the subject and the verb singular — a repair of both agent and number, with nothing marking it. (The conjecture praecesserat is almost certainly right; that belongs in a crux or a
[cj:], not silently in the text.) - OURS.
- Proposed: render the printed plural and gloss it, e.g. "because they had already gone before the head that had suffered
[cj: praecesserunt; read praecesserat, "the head had gone before"]."
### 1.13 @1051B (0092) — a garbled clause silently made grammatical
- Latin:
Secunda pars ubi ostenditur aedificata domus, et ubi et precatur qui exaltentur, et ne Judaei sint penitus alieni. - English: "The second part, where the house is shown built, and where he also prays that they may be exalted, and that the Jews be not utterly strangers."
- The plate prints qui; the English reads ut. Nothing on the page tells the reader the conjunction was supplied. This is the sentence at 1051B whose attribution siglum is also altered (§1.5) — two silent repairs within eight words.
- OURS.
- Proposed: either render the relative as printed ("prays for those who are to be exalted") or keep the smooth reading with
[cj: qui; read ut, "that"].
### 1.14 @1054B (0093) — a feminine participle attached to a masculine noun
- Latin:
Fides unde incipimus, qua viva proficit homo in melius - English: "Faith, whence we begin, by which, being alive, a man advances unto better things"
- viva is feminine and agrees with qua (= fides): the faith is what is alive. Our English floats the participle onto homo, so the page says the man is alive rather than the faith — and the gloss's whole point (living faith advances a man) is lost. Gender is decisive here; this is not a judgment call.
- OURS.
- Proposed: "by which, when it is living, a man advances unto better things."
### 1.15 @1058B–C (0095) — "my" imported into a lemma the gloss immediately re-quotes without it
- Latin:
VERS. 3.-- In anima. Et quia in anima potest fieri carnalis multiplicatio… - English: "In my soul. And because in the soul a carnal multiplication can take place…"
- Vulgate Ps 137:3: multiplicabis in anima mea virtutem. The lemma got the Vulgate's possessive; the identical words four words later, in the gloss, did not. Same phrase, same sentence, two treatments.
- OURS.
- Proposed: "In the soul."
2. FINDINGS — probable, lower confidence
### 2.1 @1056C (0094) — the lemma no longer carries the word its own gloss expounds
- Latin:
Et excussit Pharaonem. Diabolum, cum ministris excussit, ut pulverem, qui celeriter excutitur … illae terrenae sordes indicantur, quas solemus excutere. - English: "And he overthrew Pharao. He shook off the devil… as dust, which is quickly shaken off… defilements… which we are wont to shake off."
- The lemma is conformed to Douay's "overthrew" while the three glosses on the same verb are correctly "shake off." The exposition turns entirely on excutere, and after this rendering the keyword is absent from the verse it expounds — 7a″'s exact mechanism.
- OURS. (Lower confidence only because "overthrew" is defensible English for excussit; the defect is the inconsistency with its own gloss, not the gloss of the word.)
- Proposed: "And he shook off Pharao."
### 2.2 @1050A (0091) and @1057A–B (0094) — coeperint / coeperunt given a supplied infinitive
- Latin (0091):
Qui si utcunque aliquid coeperint, vel visi sunt capere, inde superbiunt - English: "Who, if they have in any way begun to grasp something, or have seemed to grasp it, thereupon grow proud"
- Latin (0094):
Et hinc haud parum emolumenti coeperunt - English: "And hence they began to take no small profit"
- Both plates print coep- (begin), not cep- (take/grasp), and in both the printed verb is left with a bare accusative object it cannot govern. The English supplies an infinitive in each case — imported in 0091 from the very next clause (visi sunt capere) — and the defective reading disappears. The right reading is almost certainly ceperint / ceperunt, but that is a conjecture, and neither site marks anything.
- OURS, two sites, one mechanism.
- Proposed: render the printed verb ("if they have in any way begun something"; "hence they began no small profit") with a
[cj:]carrying ceperunt, or mark the repair.
### 2.3 @1060A (0096) — a malformed [cj:] that also replaces rather than glosses
- Latin:
Quae meae potestatis, in est efficaciam deitatis, qua corpus de sepulcro levavit. - English: "Which are of my own power, that is
[cj: in; read id], the efficacy of the Godhead…" - Two problems. (a) Form: Pattern 18 fixes the shape as printed word /
read …/ a short gloss in double quotes. This marker has no gloss at all. (b) Substance: the running English "that is" is the conjecture id est; the printed in gets no English exponent, so deleting the marker leaves the emended reading standing as our text. Same failure as §1.1. - OURS.
- Proposed: supply the missing sense-gloss, and let Migne's word show — the run in est is arguably a Pattern 10 split/defective run and a candidate for
[sic:]rather than[cj:], since in has no grammatical slot here.
### 2.4 @1048C (0090) — an antecedent chosen for the reader
- Latin:
Decimus gradus, ut qui caste timet, pro eo omnia ferat, quod nunc expedit Ecclesiae inter malos. - English: "The tenth degree, that he who fears chastely may bear all things for that fear, which is now expedient for the Church among the wicked."
- eo is masculine/neuter and has no timor to refer back to; the nearest available antecedent is the pacificus of the ninth degree (Christ), i.e. "for his sake." Bearing all things for Christ and bearing all things for fear are different claims, and the plate does not choose between them.
- OURS, medium confidence.
- Proposed: "may bear all things for his sake" (leaving the pronoun as open as the Latin).
### 2.5 @1048C (0090) — the same Latin subject rendered "she" then "he" in consecutive sentences
- Latin:
Ostendens primo quae tulerit, consolatur infirmos. Secundo agit de reprobatione persequentium… - English: "Showing first what things she has borne, she comforts the weak. Secondly he treats of the reprobation of the persecutors…"
- One unbroken series of third-person verbs with one implied subject, split across two referents in English. The parallel formula eight lines later (
Secunda pars, ubi agit de reprobatione) is again "he." Whichever is right, the pair cannot both be. - OURS, low-medium — a consistency defect rather than a mistranslation, but a reader meets two agents where the Latin has one.
### 2.6 @1053C (0093) — a grammatical term read as a quantity
- Latin:
Primo, invitat pluraliter benedicere Deum; secundo, optat benedici - English: "First, he invites many to bless God; secondly, he wishes them to be blessed"
- pluraliter is "in the plural," not "many" (plures). The passage exists to make exactly this grammatical point — 1053D goes on,
Supra hortatur plures benedicere Deum, ipse vero unum benedicit tantum, plural address answered by singular blessing — and our own English at 1048A renders the parallel a pluribus coepit as "he began from the plural." So the reading is available to the translator elsewhere and was not used here. - OURS, medium confidence.
- Proposed: "First, he invites in the plural to bless God."
### 2.7 @1056C–D (0094) — "his" supplied in a gloss quoting a lemma that does print it
- Latin:
VERS. 22.-- Israel servo suo. Accipit per Israel servum, Christum - English: "To Israel his servant. He takes by Israel his servant Christ"
- The lemma prints suo and is right; the gloss's re-quotation prints only servum and got the possessive anyway. Same class as §1.7 and §1.11, smaller stakes.
- OURS.
- Proposed: "He takes by Israel the servant Christ."
### 2.8 @1060B (0096) — a supplied object in a truncated lemma
- Latin:
Et dixit forsitan tenebrae conculcabunt, etc. - English: "And he said, perhaps darkness shall tread me down, etc."
- Vulgate Ps 138:11 has conculcabunt me; Migne breaks off at conculcabunt and prints etc. The later lemma
Conculcaverunt medoes print the pronoun and is correctly rendered. - OURS, low-medium (the etc. arguably licenses the completion — but the convention is to stop where the plate stops).
### 2.9 @1059C (0096) — an active first-person verb rendered as a passive participle
- Latin:
Quia non est dolus in lingua mea: jam in tua gratia justificaui. - English: "For there is no guile in my tongue: now justified in thy grace."
- justificaui (= justificavi) is first-person perfect active, "I have justified" — an object-less transitive, i.e. a defective reading. Our English gives a smooth passive participle agreeing with the speaker, and nothing marks the plate.
- OURS, low-medium; the printed reading is unconstruable and the honest treatment is a crux plus a rendering as close as the words allow, not a silent passive.
### 2.10 @1059A (0095) — a number disagreement harmonized out
- Latin:
in quo principes mundi peccatum non invenit, quare occideret. - English: "in whom the princes of the world found no sin, wherefore they should kill him."
- Both verbs are singular against a plural noun (the source is John 14:30, princeps mundi). English past "found" has no number exponent, but "they should kill" does, and choosing the plural makes the disagreement invisible. Pattern 12's second test — a rendering that works only by hiding the defect — points at
[sic:]or[cj:]here. - OURS, low confidence: this is the least certain item on the list, and reasonable readers will differ about whether English can show the fault at all.
### 2.11 @1041D (0087) — a comparative the Latin does not print
- Latin:
non est salubrius aliquid, quod delectet, quam laus Dei - English: "there is nothing more wholesome, nothing that may delight more, than the praise of God"
- The Latin has one comparative (salubrius) governing one relative clause. The English makes two comparatives and asserts, additionally, that nothing delights more than the praise of God — a claim the plate does not make.
- OURS, low.
- Proposed: "there is nothing more wholesome, which may delight, than the praise of God."
### 2.12 @1059C–D (0096) — three small supplied possessives in glosses
quando partem substantiae petii→ "when I asked for my portion of the substance"quando dixi, da mihi partem substantiae→ "give me my portion of the substance"Gravasti manum, vindicem→ "Thou hast made heavy thy hand, the avenging hand"- All three read back the possessives of Luke 15:12 / Ps 138:5 into glosses that print none. Individually trivial; listed because they are the same mechanism as §1.3/1.6/1.7/1.10/1.11 and the density in one column is itself the evidence.
- OURS, low.
3. MARKER AUDIT — result
Every [sic:], [cj:], [d:] and [var:] in the band was checked three ways: content verbatim in the Latin twin, marker seated on the English word it accuses, and the clause read with the marker's contents deleted.
- All 12
[sic:]and all 6[cj:]contents verify verbatim in the facing Latin. Checked mechanically and by eye:ete.·pecatorum·similttudinem·dieeret·Sumnum·exaltaxit·iu·noc·Ddvid·egestare·pecatum·incomprehensibllis·fungiendum;revelando·eum·Deum·veniens·orbi·dici·in. - Both
[d:]markers sit on the intrusive copy —et et@1039D → "and[d: et]";in hoc hoc quod@1044A → "in this[d: hoc], that". Correct. - All 15
[var:]notes are accurate and none of their quoted Vulgate wording appears in the Latin twin (the inverted test for that marker class). Spot-verified against the received text: Jn 10:9, Acts 10:13, Mk 7:15/Mt 15:11, Ps 41:4, Prov 18:3, Sir 3:20, Is 66:2, Mt 6:26, Ps 134:7, Ps 134:14, Ps 138:4, Wisd 1:7, Ps 138:11, Ps 138:14, Mt 7:23+25:12. The Mt 7:23 note correctly identifies the spliced opening from Mt 25:12; the Mk 7:15 note correctly identifies Migne's wording as Mt 15:11. - ⛔ The two markers standing where the defective word IS or CARRIES a negative — both are CORRECT, and this is a real negative result:
nocfor non, @1058D (0095): "For to be angry is to them a punishment, not[sic: noc]only a fault." Delete the marker's contents and the clause stays negative. The "not" is outside the quarantine. ✅incomprehensibllis, @1059D (0096): "Wonderful, and incomprehensible[sic: incomprehensibllis]to me." The privative is carried by the English word, which stands outside the marker. ✅- (A third that could have failed and did not:
fungiendum@1060B, where the governing non esse … fugiendum is negative. English: "he must not flee[sic: fungiendum]from him." Negative and verb both outside the marker. ✅) - Two
[cj:]markers fail Pattern 18 substantively — §1.1 (revelando) and §2.3 (in) — because the running English carries the conjecture and not Migne's word. §2.3 additionally omits the required double-quoted sense gloss. - One
[cj:]is inert but harmless:[cj: orbi; read orbis, "of the whole world"]@1055B–C — the running English and the gloss are the identical phrase "of the whole world," because English has no exponent for the case. Not a fidelity defect; noted so a later pass does not mistake it for one.
On the house shape of [sic:] in this work: every one of the twelve renders the sense in English and marks the type (a similitude [sic: similttudinem], in [sic: iu] the breadth). This is uniform across all ten chunks and it is what 7a⁗ demands — the sense stands outside the quarantine. Recorded as observed practice, not reported as a defect.
4. THE GRADUS SERIES — checked, intact
The gloss carries the numbered series in its own voice and it survives as a series in English:
| chunk | col | Latin | English |
|---|---|---|---|
| 0088 | 1042A | Primus gradus | The first degree |
| 0088 | 1042D | Secundus gradus | The second degree |
| 0088 | 1043B | Tertius gradus | The third degree |
| 0088 | 1044A | Quartus gradus | The fourth degree |
| 0089 | 1045B | Sextus gradus | The sixth degree |
| 0089 | 1046A | Septimus gradus | The seventh degree |
| 0090 | 1046D | Octavus gradus | The eighth degree |
| 0090 | 1048A | Nonus gradus | The ninth degree |
| 0090 | 1048C | Decimus gradus | The tenth degree |
| 0091 | 1049B | Undecimus gradus | The eleventh degree |
| 0091 | 1049D | Duodecimus gradus | The twelfth degree |
| 0092 | 1050C | In tredecimo gradu | In the thirteenth degree |
| 0092 | 1052D | Quartus decimus gradus | The fourteenth degree |
| 0093 | 1053C | Quintus decimus gradus | The fifteenth degree |
The fifth degree is missing from the plate, not from our English. Psalm CXXIII (0089, 1044C) opens with no gradus label at all where the sequence requires Quintus. That is Migne's gap, faithfully carried, and is not a finding.
5. CHUNKS READ AND FOUND CLEAN
No chunk in this band came back with zero sites, so there is no clean-chunk list to record for band C. Stated positively so the absence is not mistaken for an omission: all ten chunks — 0087, 0088, 0089, 0090, 0091, 0092, 0093, 0094, 0095, 0096 — were read in full against their Latin twins, clause by clause. The lightest are 0088 (one low-grade candidate, all rejected — see §6) and 0089 (one finding, §1.2, and otherwise clean through 992 words including a long Augustine gloss on Ps 123 that renders deglutire / manducare / mactare exactly as printed). The heaviest is 0092, with five findings in three columns.
6. CANDIDATES CONSIDERED AND REJECTED
Migne's own, faithfully carried — the edition working:
- @1054C (0093)
propter poculum suum→ "for his own cup's sake." Almost certainly populum, and the English renders the plate. Correct under Pattern 7. Not a finding. - @1042C (0089)
Post passionem … contra Ecclesiam gentium et Judaei exarserunt— gentium is genitive against a sense that wants nominative gentes. Our English reads it as printed ("the Church of the Gentiles… the Jews also were enkindled"). Faithful. - @1060A (0096)
Invenit consilium, sed sic potero fugere iratum.— reads as an assertion that the fugitive can escape, which the whole gloss denies. But Migne prints a full stop, not a question mark, and the clause is defensible as the fugitive's reported thought. Migne's, or no defect at all. Not ours. - @1051A (0092)
dormituris tempora incipiunt— verbless in Latin, verbless in English ("the temples begin"). Honest. - @1050A (0091)
ad Verbum quod apud Deum, sed non.— the sentence simply stops and the English stops with it. Correct. - @1057D (0092)
sed vinci non potuerunt. Ab illis.— an orphan phrase carried as printed. - @1043A (0088)
VESS. 4.→ "VERS. 4." A normalized section label; Pattern 9/12 exempt it explicitly, and the facing Latin column carries the type. Not a finding — flagged here only because it looks like one.
Grammatical judgment calls where the English is defensible:
- @1043C (0088)
ubi sancti securi et eum Domino judicabuntwith[cj: eum; read cum]— the running English "shall judge him with the Lord" does render the printed eum ("him") and reads Domino as an ablative. Additive, marker correctly seated. Passes. - @1043C (0088)
in quibus Deum sedetwith[cj: Deum; read Deus]— the accusative has no grammatical slot as subject, so the English cannot carry it in place; arguably a[sic:]case rather than a[cj:]one, but the defect is visible and correctly attributed. Not reported. - @1048B (0090)
quando sancti veniens … portantes manipulos suoswith[cj: veniens; read venient]— English keeps the printed singular participle ("the saints, coming") and preserves the anacoluthon. Exemplary; the shape §1.1 and §2.3 should have had. - @1049D (0091)
Speret vigilia matutina, qui non aliud a Deo … speret→ "Let him hope in the morning watch who hopes…" The masculine qui forces a personal subject; supplying "him" is licensed by the relative. Rejected. - @1050C (0092)
donec Ecclesia sancta praedicatione sit fundata— sancta can agree with either noun; either rendering is faithful. - @1051B (0092)
Locus autem Dei est, si suas deserit res→ "a man is a place of God if…" — a supplied generalizing subject where the Latin is elliptical. Borderline; the subject is recoverable from the preceding clause. Rejected. - @1058B (0095)
quibus aequari sicut nunc, ita post, dignitate expecto→ "to whom I look to be made equal in dignity hereafter, as I am now." The sicut nunc / ita post pair picks up the in spe / in re contrast three lines earlier, and the English flattens it — but it does not reverse it. Considered at length and rejected as register, not sense. - @1057B (0094)
ut quid prodest Christus?→ "as, what does Christ profit?" — ut quid is the idiom "to what purpose," and the English splits it. The resulting sense is close enough that this is style, not sense. Rejected. - @1061C (0096)
fictis sibi conjunctis, quos patitur Ecclesia→ "joined to himself" — the reflexive more probably refers to the Church, which is the subject of the next clause. Too fine to call; rejected. - @1041C (0087)
vesiculam gutturis et plumam projici→ "and the feathers" (singular → plural), with plumae correctly plural two clauses later. Number only, and English has no stake in it. Rejected. - @1040A (0087)
Nesciente Judae→ "Judah not knowing." Judae is the same form for Judas and Judah, and the passion context arguably wants Judas — but the plate does not settle it and the English is not wrong. Rejected, with a note for a later pass.
Punctuation drift — observed, not itemized as findings: Roughly a dozen sites across the band substitute a colon or semicolon for a printed comma or full stop (e.g. @1044C Ut cum dicitur. → "As when it is said:"; @1045B ut stupa, tanta fortitudo → "like tow: so great was"; @1053A de quibus dicitur. → "of whom it is said:"; @1055B omnes … Israel, omnes una voce dicamus → "…Israel: let us all"). Pattern 8 forbids supplying, deleting or altering printed marks, so these are real, but none of them changes the sense and the class is better swept mechanically than reported one at a time here. Recorded so the class is on the books.
7. SHAPE OF THE RESULT
27 sites: 15 confident, 12 probable. All 27 judged OURS; no site in this band is a Migne error our English merely carried (the six candidates of that kind are in §6, correctly carried in every case).
The dominant class by a wide margin is the supplied possessive or completion in a truncated lemma — §§1.2, 1.3, 1.6, 1.7, 1.8, 1.10, 1.11, 1.15, 2.7, 2.8, 2.12: eleven sites. In eight of them a lemma that does print the possessive stands within a few words of one that does not, and both were rendered alike — which is both the mechanism and the cheapest test for the rest of the work. Ps 131 and Ps 138 are the worst-affected psalms.
Second class: the marker that replaces instead of glossing — §1.1 and §2.3, both [cj:], both leaving Migne's printed word with no English exponent at all.
Third class: the silent repair of a broken clause — §1.12, §1.13, §2.2 (×2), §2.9, §2.10: six sites where the Latin is defective and the English reads smoothly with nothing marking it.
Neither the negation class nor the swallowed-force class fired in this band: every printed non, nec, ne, nisi, nullus, nihil and haud was traced into its English, including haud parum @1057A, nec poteram ad eam @1060D, ne quis ergo timeat @1048D, and the doubled Non sunt aliae viae … Non sunt aliae @1058B. The two marker-borne negatives are correct (§3).
§I.polarity-bandC-0097 — file polarity-bandC-0097.md, verbatim
Glossa ordinaria on the Psalms, PL 113 cols 1061D–1080B, Psalms CXXXIX–CL (the end of the work). Read blind: cruces, briefs, patch reports, plate-read records and the git log were not opened. Sources read: translation-style.md (register, Patterns 5–18) and the nine Latin/English chunk pairs, clause by clause.
Result: no chunk in the band came back clean. 11 findings + 2 marker classes that run across the band. The two classes account for 22 of the 26 [sic:]/[cj:] markers in the range and are, in my judgment, the product of the second (apparatus) pass rather than the translation pass.
CLASS 1 — [cj: …] INVERTED: the English carries the conjecture, the gloss repeats it
Ten sites. Every [cj:] in the band is built the same way, and the polarity is the reverse of Pattern 18. Pattern 18's founding form is additive: Migne's printed word keeps its English in the running text, and our conjecture stands beside it —
the angels announce peace purely
[cj: munde; read mundo, "to the world"]
In all ten of these sites the running English gives the conjecture's sense, and the marker's quoted gloss then restates the same words that are already in the text. The tell is mechanical and it fires ten times out of ten: the gloss's double-quoted phrase is verbatim the English immediately before it. The consequence is the one Pattern 18 exists to prevent — Migne's printed word reaches the reader nowhere in the English, and the marker, whose job is to add a reading, is doing the work of concealing a repair (7a′: "the marker becomes a place to hide a repair").
| # | col | Latin as printed | English as printed | what the English says that the Latin does not | proposed correction |
|---|---|---|---|---|---|
| 1.1 | 1063B | Nota, quod et cordi et ori petit apponit custodiam | "he asks a watch to be set [cj: apponit; read apponi, "to be set"]" | apponit is a finite indicative — "he sets a watch". The English gives only the infinitive of the conjecture. | "Note that he asks for both heart and mouth: he sets a watch [cj: apponit; read apponi, "to be set"]" |
| 1.2 | 1065C | Fortius non fugit mente, qui non vult. | "The strong man [cj: Fortius; read Fortis, "the strong man"] does not flee in mind" | Fortius is a comparative adverb and renders in place — "more strongly he does not flee in mind". The printed reading is not even unconstruable here. | "More strongly [cj: Fortius; read Fortis, "the strong man"] does he not flee in mind, who does not will it." |
| 1.3 | 1068B | Hic est gladius bis actus | "the sword twice sharpened [cj: actus; read acutus, "sharpened"]" | actus = driven, wielded. "Sharpened" is only the conjecture. | "the sword twice driven [cj: …]" |
| 1.4 | 1068D | Non laboro macri, sed otio pingues | "Not lean with labour [cj: laboro; read labore, "with labour"]" | laboro is 1 sg. indicative and has no slot in the clause — this is a Pattern 12 (1) case, not a [cj:] case at all. | carry it: "Not lean [sic: laboro], but fat with idleness" |
| 1.5 | 1068D | ut his qui affluunt divitiis, eum ipsi sint a veritate jejuni | "whereas [cj: eum; read cum, "whereas"] they themselves are fasting" | eum is a pronoun, not a conjunction; the English asserts a concessive the plate does not print. | render the pronoun as the words allow, or mark it [sic:]; do not let the marker supply the conjunction (7a⁗ q. 3). |
| 1.6 | 1069C | cum venerit unus sine fines dies | "the one day without end [cj: fines; read fine, "without end"]" | the printed sine fines is rendered by the conjecture only. | "the one day without ends [cj: …]" or carry the run. |
| 1.7 | 1071C | quasi musicas salutaris | "as it were a saving music [cj: musicas; read musica, "a saving music"]" | same shape; gloss = text. | render the printed form as the words allow, gloss beside it. |
| 1.8 | 1072A | praeest plumbo in puritate laudatio | "lead that is praised [cj: laudatio; read laudato, "that is praised"]" | same shape; gloss = text. | as above. |
| 1.9 | 1075C | Nisi enim mittere verbum terrae | "unless he sent [cj: mittere; read mitteret, "he were to send"]" | same shape; gloss = text. | "For unless to send his word to the earth [cj: …]" — or carry. |
| 1.10 | 1077A | VERS. 7.-- Laudate Dominam. | "Praise ye the Lord. [cj: Dominam; read Dominum, "the Lord"]" | the sharpest of the ten. Dominam is "the Lady" — a real word meaning something else. The English prints the identical string it used for Laudate Dominum at VERS. 1 of the same psalm, so the defect is completely invisible; and the marker sits outside the italic lemma it accuses. | "Praise ye the Lady [cj: Dominam; read Dominum, "the Lord"]", marker inside or immediately after the lemma word. |
Ours in every case. The [cj:] content check (printed word verbatim in the Latin twin) passes at all ten — I ran it — so nothing here is a false accusation against Migne's type; what is wrong is that the English text has been emended and the marker left to carry the plate's reading, which is the exact inversion of the convention.
CLASS 2 — [sic: …] on type that was TRANSLATED anyway
Twelve sites. Pattern 7's non-word ruling is that type which is not a word cannot be rendered, so it is carried into the English untranslated, in italics, with a crux, and Pattern 12 wraps that carried run: the [sic: ur sam] which came. In twelve sites here the English renders the defective type into ordinary English and then appends the marker beside it, so the reader meets a smooth, fully translated sentence with a decorative badge on it and no way to see that anything on the plate is broken.
Sites: 1067D simlis, veriteti ("he was made like [sic: simlis] to truth [sic: veriteti]") · 1070A corectio ("no correction [sic: corectio]") · 1071B omnibns · 1073B suseipiet · 1073D disper iones · 1077A ubyssi · 1077D benficus, eanticcum · 1077D debat · 1078B mahsiones · 1078B Neseitis · 1078D ferrcis.
The band's one correctly-formed instance is the counter-example that proves the class: 1063D Sunt quae dam contemptibilia → "There are [sic: quae dam] contemptible things" — the run is not translated ("certain" is absent) and the marker stands in its place. That is the convention; the other twelve depart from it.
⚑ One of the twelve is also misplaced. At 1078B the marker sits after the closing italic, after the sentence's full stop and after the [n: (Joan. XIV.)] note:
In my Father's house there are many mansions. [n: (Joan. XIV.)] [sic: mahsiones]
so it accuses no word at all. It belongs on "mansions". ([sic: suseipiet] at 1073B and [sic: ubyssi] at 1077A sit outside their lemmata too, though adjacent to them.)
Judgment: OURS. All twelve accused strings are verbatim in the Latin twin (checked mechanically), so none is a false claim about which type is defective; the defect is that the English silently repairs it and the marker is left standing over a repair.
(Whether corectio and debat merit any marker at all is a separate question — Pattern 9 exempts attested medieval spellings, and corectio is one. I raise it, I do not press it.)
INDIVIDUAL FINDINGS
F1. 1078B — a negation the Latin does not print ⭐ the band's one true polarity site
- Latin: tunc reges terrae ligabuntur: unde nos sit liberum exire.
- English: "then shall the kings of the earth be bound: whence it may not be free to go out."
- What the English says that the Latin does not: the plate prints
nos, notnon. The English has turned a dative-of-advantage into a negative and reversed the clause. And the printed reading is the one that makes sense of the passage: the kings being bound, "whence it may be free for us to go out." The English currently says the opposite of what the gloss is arguing, with nothing on the page marking it. - Proposed: "whence it may be free for us to go out." If a conjecture is wanted, it goes in a marker —
[cj: nos; read non, "it may not be free to go out"]— never in the text. - Ours. The plate is defensible as printed; the English is not.
F2. 1077C — de veteri read as a time-adverb
- Latin: haec est sanctificatio Israel, per quam de veteri factus est novus.
- English: "this is the sanctification of Israel, whereby of old it was made new."
- de veteri is "out of an old one" — the old Israel/old man, the very antithesis the next paragraph builds on (Vetus enim homo vetus canticum cantat … Novus homo novum). "Of old" turns it into olim, a date, and the antithesis vanishes.
- Proposed: "whereby out of an old people it was made new" (or "whereby from being old it was made new").
- Ours.
F3. 1077A — agent re-bound: who established, and who said so
- Latin: Et si coelum novum, Deo tamen bene statuta dicuntur, quae novantur per Christum et meliorata permanent.
- English: "And though the heaven be new, yet they are rightly said by God to be established…"
- Deo is the dative of agent with the participle statuta, and bene modifies statuta: "yet they are said to be well established by God." The English has moved Deo onto dicuntur (God becomes the speaker) and bene onto dicuntur ("rightly said"). Mechanism 5 of Pattern 7a — reference/agency mis-bound; no negation-aware check would see it.
- Proposed: "yet they are said to be well established by God, which are made new through Christ and remain bettered."
- Ours.
F4. 1077B — the lemma Confessio rendered "Praise", and the gloss then explains a word that is gone
- Latin: VERS. 13.-- Confessio. … Confessio ejus super coelum et terram. Illum omnia confitentur in se vel in aliis; pulchritudo omnium vox est confitentium…
- English: "Praise. … His praise above heaven and earth. All things confess him in themselves or in others; the beauty of all things is the voice of them that confess…"
- The exposition is a chain on confiteri, and the lemma is its head. Rendered "praise", the head of the chain no longer matches its own gloss — and the same English chunk renders Confiteantur … omnia opera tua (1070C) as "confess", so the work is inconsistent with itself inside four columns. This is 7a″ in its usual dress: the Douay's "his praise above heaven and earth" arrived before the printed word was read.
- Proposed: "Confession. … His confession is above heaven and earth."
- Ours. (Judgment call, and I flag it as one: confessio does mean praise in the Psalter. The argument is not the lexicon, it is that this gloss expounds the word.)
F5. 1067B — the title rendered from the Vulgate the [var:] beside it disowns
- Latin: VERS. 1.-- Psalmus David ad Goliam.
- English: "A psalm of David against Goliath. [var: Vulg. Ps. 143:1 Psalmus David. Adversus Goliath]"
- The
[var:]exists to say that Migne prints ad Goliam where the Vulgate has adversus Goliath — and the English then renders ad by the Vulgate's adversus. The marker and the text contradict each other, and the divergence the marker announces is invisible. - Proposed: "A psalm of David to Goliath." with the
[var:]unchanged (and it wants a gloss, per Pattern 14's "give the received reading and, if the sense turns on it, a two-or-three-word gloss" — it is the only[var:]in the band with no gloss). - Ours.
F6. 1066C — a defective lemma rendered smoothly, unmarked
- Latin: VERS. 3.-- Quia persecutis.
- English: "Because he has persecuted."
- At 1066B the same lemma is cited in full and correctly — ibi, quia persecutus est — and rendered by the identical English. So the English at VERS. 3 is rendering persecutus est, which the plate does not print at that point. Broken Latin, smooth English, nothing marking it.
- Proposed: carry the run — "Because [sic: persecutis]" — or, if a plate read shows Migne setting it whole, patch the twin. Either way the present state is drift.
- Ours as it stands; the underlying type may be Migne's or the digitization's, which a plate read settles and I have not seen.
F7. 1076C — gratias silently made a nominative
- Latin: tres alios psalmos laudis subjungens, ut in hoc opere gratias Trinitatis eluceat.
- English: "…that in this work the graces of the Trinity may shine forth."
- gratias is accusative plural and cannot be the subject of singular intransitive eluceat; the English promotes it to subject and the sentence reads perfectly. That is Pattern 12's second failure test exactly — "it renders only by hiding the defect", since English has no exponent for the case.
- Proposed: either mark it (
[sic: gratias]) or render the grace singular with a[cj:]beside the printed accusative. Low sense-cost, but it is an unmarked repair. - Ours (low–medium confidence: I cannot exclude that the plate prints gratia).
F8. 1074D — "In the composed bearing", three words before "an uncomposed gait"
- Latin: In tibiis viri. In composito habitu praesumptuosi et audacis. Per virum enim audacem praesumptorem notat. In tibiis notatur incessus incompositus.
- English: "In the composed bearing of the presumptuous and bold. … In the legs is noted an uncomposed gait."
- The English is a faithful rendering of the printed In composito and is therefore correct under Pattern 7 — I am not asking for it to be changed. But the page now makes the gloss assert and deny the same thing two sentences apart, with nothing telling the reader which is the plate. This is a textbook Pattern 18
[cj:]candidate (word division, In composito / Incomposito), and the psalm's sense — God takes no pleasure in the legs of a man — settles which way it runs. - Proposed: keep the English, add
[cj: In composito; read Incomposito, "in the uncomposed bearing"]. - Migne's (or the digitization's) reading; ours is only the missing apparatus.
F9 / F10. 1062B and 1076C — [sic:] fired on Migne's own VERS. addresses
[sic: VERS. 9.]-- The proud.(1062B) and[sic: VERS. 16.]-- Jacob . . . Israel.(1076C).- Three objections, in order of weight: 1. Inconsistent inside the band. The
VERS. 7that followsVERS. 9at 1062B–C is equally out of sequence and carries no marker; so does theVERS. 12that opens Psalm CXLVII. Two of four out-of-sequence addresses are publicly accused and two are not. 2. Wrong instrument. A verse address is neither carried type nor a translated word. Pattern 12 marks "carried, untranslated type"; a numeral that is merely wrong is Pattern 7 matter and rides as printed. 3. It is a public accusation against Migne on a class the edition elsewhere reproduces silently, and it sits on a structural siglum rather than on prose. - Proposed: withdraw both; if the misnumbering is worth recording, it is crux matter.
- Ours.
CHUNKS READ, AND WHAT EACH RETURNED
All nine read in full, Latin against English, clause by clause, including 0105 which ends the work. None came back wholly clean, which is itself the band's headline: every chunk carries at least one site.
| chunk | cols | verdict |
|---|---|---|
| 0097 | 1061D–1064C | 3 sites — F9 ([sic: VERS. 9.]), class 1 (apponit). Prose otherwise clean; the one correctly-formed [sic: quae dam] in the band is here. |
| 0098 | 1064C–1066A | 1 site — class 1 (Fortius). Prose otherwise clean; both [var:] sound. |
| 0099 | 1066A–1067B | 1 site — F6 (Quia persecutis). No markers at all in the chunk. Prose otherwise clean. |
| 0100 | 1067B–1069A | 6 sites — F5, class 1 ×3, class 2 ×2. The most marker-dense chunk in the band. |
| 0101 | 1069A–1071C | 3 sites — class 1 (fines), class 2 ×2. Prose clean — incl. the eight-item list Migne calls nine, correctly carried, and memor nostri est correctly "mindful of us". |
| 0102 | 1071C–1073C | 3 sites — class 1 ×2, class 2 (suseipiet). Prose otherwise clean. |
| 0103 | 1073C–1075A | 2 sites — F8, class 2 (disper iones). Prose otherwise clean. |
| 0104 | 1075A–1077C | 7 sites — F3, F4, F7, F10, class 1 ×2, class 2 (ubyssi). |
| 0105 | 1077C–1080B | 8 sites — F1, F2, class 2 ×6 (incl. the misplaced mahsiones). |
⚑ The instruments came back clean, and I checked them as instructed
Every instrument in the Hallelujah psalms is the one the gloss then describes:
- tympano et psalterio → "timbrel and psaltery" (1078A) — the pair of Ps 149:3.
- Tuba … psalterium … cithara → trumpet / psaltery / harp (1079A–B), and the gloss's own discriminator survives intact: "the psaltery sounds from above, the harp from below" (psalterium a summo, cithara ab imo), which is the whole point of keeping cithara a harp and not a lyre or a lute. Tuba is then "terrible, taken up in war or made ready at the coming of kings" — a trumpet, correctly.
- chordis → "strings", glossed as "every musical instrument which sounds by the stretching of strings" (1080A) — the English word supports the gloss.
- organum → "organ", glossed as "a tower framed of divers pipes, sounding by the blast of bellows" — a pipe organ, correctly, and not an organon in the generic sense.
- cymbala → "cymbals", glossed as "very small bowls of mingled metals which render a shrill sound" — the picture and the word agree.
- The closing summary keeps them straight: flatus in tuba, pulsus in cithara et in cymbalis, vox in choro → "breath in the trumpet, striking in the harp and in the cymbals, voice in the choir."
Truncated lemmata — the predicted failure profile, and it did not recur
I checked every short lemma in the band word for word, this being the class that produced fourteen sites in the previous band. I found no completed lemma anywhere in the nine chunks. Migne prints short and the English stops where he stops, throughout: Custodi me, Domine (1062B), Caput circuitus (1062D), Virtus salutis meae obumbrasti super caput meum (1062C), In factis manuum (1066D), Memor fui dierum (1066D), Notam fac mihi viam (1067A), Emitte manum (1068A), Educ de custodia (1065D), Ut notam (1070D), Laudate Dominum / Laudate eum in firmamento (1078D–1079A), Laudate Dominum at Ps 148:7 (1077A). No supplied "thy", "us", "my", or "his" in any of them. This is a real negative result and I record it as one.
CANDIDATES CONSIDERED AND REJECTED
- 1062D "vel de assertione superantur" → "or they are overcome out of their own assertion." A possessive the Latin does not print — but the very next sentence glosses it de sua falsa assertione, so the antecedent is on the page and the addition costs nothing. Rejected as style.
- 1062B "quia per multa fallit, quae nequit praecavere" → "because he deceives through many things which he cannot guard against." The English leaves the two subjects ambiguous — but so does the Latin, identically. Not a finding under "English says what Latin does not."
- 1063A "Injustum, etc., in interitu" → "unto destruction." in interitu is ablative; "unto" reads it as accusative. But the gloss ten words later prints non tamen in interitum and the English renders that one correctly, so the pair is visible to the reader and the sense is not at stake. Rejected as marginal.
- 1067A "quia etiam perdit confessionem" → "who loses even confession." A causal clause turned into a relative (mechanism 3, connective smoothed). The proposition is unchanged and nothing hangs on it. Rejected; noted because mechanism 3 leaves no lexical trace and I want the near-miss on record.
- 1067A "Auferes spiritus eorum" (Vulg. spiritum). Migne's plural is rendered faithfully as "spirits". An unmarked
[var:]candidate at most — and Pattern 14 is explicitly not retroactive. Not a defect. - 1076A "actus mobilis, certus, incoinquinatus" → "driven, moveable, sure, undefiled." Wisdom 7:22 has no actus; but actus renders in place as a participle, which is what the English does. Faithful. Rejected.
- 1076B "Hanc autem Deus solvit" → "But God dissolved him." Hanc is feminine and points to crystallum; the English resolves it to Paul. The next clause (factus est panis, qui … docuit) is masculine and is unquestionably Paul, so the referent chain lands in the same place. Rejected as marginal; "dissolved it" would be tighter.
- 1077A "ipsa ergo, id est, nos consideratione eorum hortatur laudare" → "these therefore, that is, he exhorts us…" A supplied "he" against a neuter-plural subject — but the Latin clause is itself broken (ipsa + deponent singular), and the English does not resolve it any further than the Latin does. Rejected; a
[sic:]/crux candidate at most. - 1076A "Frigus est, qui deserit" → "It is cold when he forsakes." A masculine relative rendered as a temporal clause. The identification (cold = God's withdrawal) survives whole. Rejected as style.
- 1078C frameas bis acutas → "two-edged swords", against 1068B gladius bis actus → "twice sharpened". Within-work inconsistency on bis acut-; "two-edged" is the received English but not what bis acutas says. Not a sense error (the same weapon is meant) — but if a merge-time reconciliation pass is run, this is one for it.
- 1075B "qui audivimus sic ructantem" → "we who have heard him thus pouring it forth." ructare softened, in a work that spends a whole paragraph at 1070A on eructation (Manducat qui discit, eructat qui docet) and renders it "belch forth" there. Register, not sense; and it sits inside an usque ad tail. Rejected, flagged for the same reconciliation pass.
- 1072A "Sed quaeritur, a quo, cui hoc consulitur?" → "But it is asked, by whom, and to whom, is this counsel given?" Pattern 8b prescribes the colon-plus-direct-question form ("It is asked: by whom…?"). The mark is preserved either way, so nothing is deleted. Rejected as style, noted because 8b is a written rule.
- Supplied possessives at 1072B ("to thy Author"), 1075C ("his word"), 1076D ("praise from his works"), 1079A ("in his powers"). Each is idiomatic English for a bare Latin noun whose owner is unambiguous in the immediate clause. None completes a truncated scripture lemma — which is the class that matters — so all four are rejected.
- Migne's own contradictions, carried correctly. Not reported, per the brief, and worth naming so a later reader knows they were seen: the eight items Migne calls novem (1069D); the Samaritan who descendebat a Jerusalem in Jericho (1074A) where Luke's traveller does; in hortis sed vel vineis (1068D), carried as "in gardens but or in vineyards"; the bare
AUG.)note-opening at 1065B, reproduced as printed; the bare(CAS.)at 1067A, likewise. All four Englishes follow the plate. The edition is working here. - All ten
[var: …]markers in the band. Checked one by one against the Vulgate: Isa 5:18, Ps 139:9, Prov 21:20, Mt 10:23, Ps 143:1, Prov 27:2, Mt 25:41, 2 Cor 4:5, 1 Cor 10:17, Ps 147:6, Mt 15:24, Ps 148:6. Every accused divergence is real, every English renders Migne and not the Vulgate, and no[var:]content appears in the Latin twin. The Ps 147:6 citation is right in Migne's own verse-numbering of Ps 147 (a place it would be easy to get wrong) and Mt 15:24's domus is correctly identified as the missing word. The only complaint is F5, where the marker is right and the text beside it is not.
SUMMARY OF ATTRIBUTION
- Ours: F1–F7, F9, F10, and both marker classes (22 sites). All are defects in our English or our apparatus, and every one of them is invisible to a mechanical check:
verify-englishpasses the class-1 and class-2 markers (their contents are verbatim in the twin), and no negation counter sees F1, because the negation it would count is in the English and not the Latin. - Migne's (or the digitization's), with our apparatus owed: F8.
- Migne's, carried correctly and reported only so it is on record: rejected item 14.
⚑ The two classes are structural, not per-site: they look like one pass's convention applied uniformly, which is why they should be fixed as a pass and not sentence by sentence. F1 is the one site I would fix first — the page currently asserts the negative of what the gloss argues, and it is the only site in the band where a reader is actively misinformed about the sense.
§I.repair-bandC-0077 — file repair-bandC-0077.md, verbatim
Glossa ordinaria on the Psalms, PL 113. Written against polarity-bandC-0077.md. Every proposal below was checked against the Latin twin in src/latin/8967/ and against data/plate-reads.json before anything was changed. No Latin file was touched; no [sic:], no [var:], no [n:], no frontmatter, no column anchor, no VERS. address was touched; 1029B was not touched.
Gates after the pass: verify-english OK (106 chunks) · plate-gate OK · marker-reconcile --band 10 = 65 standing, 0 MISSING, 1 withheld by ruling. Unchanged from before the pass.
⭐ A load-bearing fact the reader could not see, and it decides most of this file: EVERY column in this range was collated word by word at the plate (plate-reads.json, runs 1011A–1026D and 1027A–1040D), and each of the eleven printed words a [cj:] accuses is named in a plate-read entry as Migne's own: 1014D par · 1015A dilectum, secundam · 1015C Deus · 1015D putes · 1032B glorificatur · 1034B laudamus · 1036D eum · 1037D intra · 1039A Psalmus · 1039A recipi. So no marker in the band is accusing a word Migne did not set, and the whole defect really was on the English side.
1 · Pattern 18 inversion — the settled class
Repaired at ten of the eleven sites. The running English now renders Migne's printed word; the conjecture's sense lives in the marker's quoted gloss. One site has no exponent and was left alone, as instructed.
| # | chunk | col | printed | English NOW reads | note |
|---|---|---|---|---|---|
| A1 | 0078 | 1014D | par | "he admonishes men to bless like [cj: par; read per, "through"] those things which were done for the men of old" | see the caveat below |
| A2 | 0078 | 1015A | dilectum | "that the beloved [cj: …] might abound" | |
| A3 | 0078 | 1015A | secundam | "Or a second [cj: …] other reading:" | secundam agrees with aliam litteram; the accusative is left dangling, as on the plate |
| A4 | 0079 | 1015C | Deus | "Likewise God [cj: …] admonishes men to bless, first through heaven and earth" | the exponent is the SYNTAX, not the word — see below |
| A5 | 0079 | 1015D | putes | "who thinkest [cj: …] not to grow or be lessened" | ⚑ not in the brief's nine |
| A6 | 0084 | 1032A | glorificatur | "what shall he receive, he is glorified [cj: …], in the things to come?" | the intrusive finite verb is now visible; Migne's commas are untouched |
| A7 | 0085 | 1034A | laudamus | "how long we praise [cj: laudamus; read laudandus, "is to be praised"], namely always" | gloss re-worded per the brief; the stranded sit has no English and gets none |
| A8 | 0086 | 1037A | eum | "He is loved perfectly, him [cj: …] the mind is not moved by adverse things" | also restores Migne's comma after perfecte, which the old English had absorbed |
| A9 | 0086 | 1037D | intra | "and therefore enter thou [cj: …] into the joy of his Lord" | marker KEPT — see §1a |
| A10 | 0086 | 1039A | Psalmus | unchanged | no exponent — see §1b |
| A11 | 0086 | 1039B | recipi | "for by reason of its brevity not to be received [cj: …] division" | ⚑ not in the brief's nine |
⚠ 1a. intra (A9) — the [cj:] STANDS; I did not remove it
The reader's case is real and I nearly took it: Migne's intra is an imperative and an imperative is printed three words later in the Matthew 25 tag (intra in gaudium Domini tui), so "Enter thou into the joy of his Lord, who says: Well done…" construes.
It falls on one word: sui. Migne writes intra in gaudium Domini sui. His own tag shows what an imperative here takes — tui, second person, because you are being told to enter your lord's joy. A third-person reflexive sui has no possible antecedent under an imperative reading; it needs a third-person subject, and the only one available is the faithful servant of the preceding clause (sed fidelis: quod accepit, impendit, et lucratur), whose whole sentence is third-person narrative. So the printed intra is best explained as exactly what its neighbourhood predicts — the compositor's eye running ahead to the intra of the quotation he was about to set. A genuine error, and the emendation stands. The repair is therefore the inversion, not the removal: the running text now reads "enter thou", and intrat lives in the marker.
1b. Psalmus (A10) — no exponent, marker left alone
audiat sequentem Psalmus. English marks the object by position, so Psalmum and Psalmus both reach English as "the following psalm". There is nothing in the running text to invert. The marker is left exactly as it stands — this is the brief's ⚑ case, and it is the only one in the band.
⚠ 1c. A5 and A11 are inversions too, and the brief's mechanical test could not see them
The brief's tell — the marker's quoted gloss must not be a verbatim echo of the English before it — has a false-negative class: an inflected echo. Both misses are of that shape:
- A5: text "canst", gloss
"thou canst"— the added pronoun defeats a verbatim match. - A11: text "does not admit", gloss
"it admits"— person/number inflection defeats it.
Both are the same inversion as the other nine (the running text carried potes / recipit, and Migne's putes / recipi had no English at all), and both printed words are confirmed at the plate. I repaired them.
⭐ This matters past my range. If the corpus-wide count of 19 failures in 43 glossed [cj:] came from the verbatim test, it is a floor, not a total — re-run it with the gloss and the preceding English both lemmatised/case-folded, at minimum stripping a leading pronoun, over the rest of Band C (0087–0105) before the class is called closed.
⚠ 1d. Two sites where the printed word CONSTRUES, flagged not fixed
- A4 Deus. ⛔ The brief's ⚑ exemption does NOT apply here (it names Deum/Deus → "God" as a no-exponent case). The exponent is not the word, it is the sentence: Deus nominative makes God the one who admonishes, Deum accusative makes God the one blessed. Two different claims, both renderable, so the inversion was real and is repaired. But Item benedicere Deus monet is perfectly good Latin — "Likewise God admonishes [us] to bless" — and under Pattern 18's own bar (the printed word must make the sentence say something the author is arguing against) this marker is arguable. I did not remove it: an inverted marker misleads, a standing one merely reports. Wilson's, if anyone wants the bar applied strictly.
- A1 par. par is a real word ("equal, like"), so Pattern 7's non-word rule does not reach it and it cannot be quarantined as a
[sic:]— and I would not add a[sic:]in any case while that class is frozen. It is rendered "like", its nearest lexical value; the sentence ("to bless like those things which were done for the men of old") is visibly odd, which is Pattern 7 working. If Wilson prefers the reader's instinct here, the alternative is a[sic:]and it needs his ruling on the frozen class first.
2 · Sense defects — verified and repaired
| # | chunk | col | was | now | why it holds |
|---|---|---|---|---|---|
| B1 | 0078 | 1014C | "from destruction" | "from corruption" | Migne prints de corruptione; "destruction" is the Douay's word for the Vulgate's de interitu, which is not on this plate. 7a″ exactly. |
| B2 | 0079 | 1017C | "in their dens" | "in the dens" | plate and twin print the lemma short, in cubilibus; "their" is finished in from the Vulgate's suis. |
| B3 | 0079 | 1017D | "To play with him." | "For mocking." | Migne prints two words, Ad illudendum; the dative ei is the Vulgate's, not his. Also re-joins the lemma to its own gloss, which reads illudi as "mocked". |
| B4 | 0084 | 1031D | "does not forbid it" | "does not prevent it" | prohibet = hinder. "Forbid" contradicts its own protasis (si vult, ut non pecces) and destroys the Augustinian point the rest of the paragraph makes. |
| B5 | 0086 | 1037A | "he notes that" | "note that" | nota is the imperative, confirmed at the plate (@1037A nota for notat), and the gloss addresses the reader throughout. |
| B6 | 0083 | 1031B | "fill them as ruins, not as men upright" | "fill ruins, not the upright" | ruinas/erectos are the accusative objects of impleat; one ut was doing duty twice and "them" was supplied. Italic-span count preserved. |
| B7 | 0077 | 1011D | "whose frying-pan they are, who are scandalized" | "whose frying-pan are they that are scandalized" | sunt is plural against the singular predicate frixorium, so its subject can only be qui scandalizantur. Agency was inverted. |
| B8 | 0082 | 1027C | "is of a great household, of many churches" | "is many households, many churches: yet he is also one Church, one sheep" | see the partial rejection below |
| B9 | 0080 | 1021C | "Egypt feared Israel" | "They feared Israel" | see the partial rejection below |
| B10 | 0077 | 1013D | "unto generation of generations" | "in generation of generations" | same three Latin words eleven lines from their twin, which already reads "in"; the divergent one was the Douay's cadence. |
| B11 | 0086 | 1038C | "I am thy servant, the son…" | "I am thy servant. The son of the handmaid." | Migne prints a full stop between two lemma units and the AUG. note glosses the second alone. Pattern 8. |
| B12 | 0086 | 1038C | "for her lord" | "for the Lord" | Migne capitalises Domino, and the continuation (aliquos tibi parturiam) needs the capital. |
B8 — finding accepted, proposed rendering examined and then adopted with one extra change. I first read multae familiae, multae Ecclesiae as genitives of quality ("of a numerous household"), which would have made the reader's plural wrong. What settles it is the second limb: tamen et est una Ecclesia, una ovis uses predicate nominatives of the poor man, so the first limb is parallel and nominative too. The antithesis is many-yet-one, and the sentence's own subject carries it. That forced one change the reader did not propose: "yet there is also one Church" → "yet he is also one Church", because on this construal est has the same subject throughout. Flagged because it is mine, not the reader's.
B9 — finding accepted, proposed rendering REJECTED. "Egypt" is indeed nowhere on the plate and had to go. But the reader's "Israel was feared" is a passive the Latin does not have either (Timebat Israel is active, and reliquias eorum points at the Egyptians as the fearers). English cannot render a subjectless finite verb, so a subject must be supplied; "They" is the minimum supply, takes its antecedent from the lemma's own super eos, and keeps exactly the ambiguity Migne keeps.
3 · The silent-repair class — TWO accepted, THREE rejected
⭐ The reason three fall is one fact about our sources, and it is recorded in this work's own plate reads: our twin does not carry Migne's commas reliably. The 1017A–1018D collation says in terms that the twin agrees with the plate "apart from commas." So a finding of the form "the English moved a word across Migne's comma" is, at a comma, a claim about Corpus Corporum's punctuation, not Migne's — and none of the three comma sites is named in any plate read. A charge against the English cannot rest on a layer we know is not the plate's.
Accepted (both are sentence-level marks, which do transmit):
- 0080 @1019B — Migne prints a full stop after de qua sequitur; the English had a colon and a lowered capital, which fused the sentence he broke and quietly supplied an apodosis to a si clause that has none. Restored: "…of which it follows. How is it everlasting…". The fragment is now visible, which is the point.
- 0083 @1030C — the converse: a printed comma had been raised to a full stop, splitting In potioribus meis bonis et occultis, donec regnes manifestus into two. Restored to "…hidden goods, until thou reign manifest."
Rejected:
- 0083 @1030B (Deus). The finding misreads the punctuation. Migne's comma stands after Deus, not before it, so Deus, cum benedicit, facit quod dicit is the ordinary comma-around-a-subordinate-clause shape and the English matches Migne's commas exactly. The only English supply is the sentence break between malorum and Deus, where Migne prints no mark at all — English cannot run two clauses together without one, and the alternative ("the cursing of the wicked God, when he blesses…") would assert something false.
- 0082 @1028C (supra). Rests on a comma, per the caveat above. On the substance the English is also right: hic … supra is a here/earlier contrast (the supra is Ps 59:11's deducet me), and attaching supra to patitur would have Christ suffering "above".
- 0081 @1023B–C (Laus Dei). The English does not assert anything the Latin does not: the proposition — the quality of the punishment declares God's praise — is identical under either construal, and Laus Dei fronted as a nominativus pendens is ordinary gloss Latin. What differs is case, and English marks none. This is the reader's own accepted principle at 0078 @1015A–B (conversus/figmentum): a defect no rendering can expose and none can conceal is not reportable in this instrument. Restoring the fronting would also have cost a supplied pronoun and a supplied colon, both of which Migne does not print.
- The lower-grade punctuation-supply list (0081 @1024B, 0082 @1026C/@1027C, 0084 @1032D×2/@1033C, 0085 @1036A, 0086 @1037C). Left, deliberately. Each is a comma read as a colon before a quotation or a semicolon between clauses; none asserts anything the Latin does not, and all of them stand on the comma layer that our twin is known not to carry faithfully.
4 · Not touched, by instruction — and one that still wants Wilson
- All twelve
[sic:]— untouched, and the English around them untouched. The reader judged them sound and I did not re-open them; the Pattern 7 non-word question is Wilson's and the class is frozen. - 1029B (the omitted non) — untouched.
- No
[var:]added. B1's suggested one (Migne's de corruptione is the Old Latin/Romanum reading, and materially so) is recorded here and not fired. - ⬜ The misplaced
[var:]at 0081 @1024D — VERIFIED, NOT MOVED, needs one word from Wilson. The reader is right: the marker reports Migne's lemma against the Vulgate's Et infecta, the whole gloss (continens pro contento) exists to explain that lemma, and the marker sits ~230 characters downstream on et contaminati sunt in operibus, a clause that answers to Ps 105:39. Moving it is a one-line edit inside the same column, so no gate is affected. I left it because my brief fenced the[var:]class and did not assign this site. ⚠ And there is a second thing in it: the plate read for that column records Migne printingEt INTERFECTUSwhere our twin has interfecta — so the marker's own Latin side may need the pending-TEI-patch treatment (§A6) before it is moved. Recommend: settle the patch, then move the marker to sit immediately after "And slain." - ⬜ A4 Deus and A1 par (§1d) — both stand repaired but both raise a question of marker policy rather than of English, and both are noted there for a ruling.
§I.repair-bandC-0087 — file repair-bandC-0087.md, verbatim
Answers polarity-bandC-0087.md (27 sites: 15 confident, 12 probable, all judged OURS). Every proposal was checked against the Latin twin in src/latin/8967/ before anything was changed. Result: 24 of 27 accepted and repaired, 2 recorded-only by standing convention, 1 rejected. One site the reader did not list was found by the same test and repaired.
Gates after the pass: verify-english OK (106 chunks) · plate-gate OK · marker-reconcile --band 10 65 claims · 65 standing · 0 MISSING · 1 withheld by ruling.
⚑ No [sic:] or [var:] was added, moved or deleted anywhere in the band, so the plate ratchet is untouched. Two [cj:] were added (both verified verbatim in the Latin twin); none was removed.
1 · The supplied possessive / completion — the dominant class
All eleven verified and repaired. In every case the Latin twin prints the stump bare, and in eight of them a lemma that does print the possessive stands within a few words.
| § | col | chunk | Latin as printed | was | now |
|---|---|---|---|---|---|
| 1.2 | 1046A ×2 | 0089 | In convertendo. | When the Lord turned. | In the turning. |
| 1.3 | 1048D | 0090 | Prolongaverunt iniquitatem. | …lengthened out their iniquity | …lengthened out iniquity |
| 1.6 | 1052A | 0092 | Propter David servum. | For thy servant David's sake | For David the servant's sake |
| 1.7 | 1052C | 0092 | Et sancti, | And her saints | And the saints |
| 1.8 | 1055A | 0093 | et in servis, | and in his servants | and in the servants |
| 1.10 | 1060A | 0096 | Si sumpsero pennas, | If I shall take my wings | If I shall take wings |
| 1.11 | 1059B | 0096 | Et funiculum. … limitem | And my line … my boundary | And the line … the boundary |
| 1.15 | 1058B | 0095 | In anima. | In my soul. | In the soul. |
| 2.7 | 1056C | 0094 | Israel servum, | Israel his servant | Israel the servant |
| 2.8 | 1060B | 0096 | …tenebrae conculcabunt, etc. | shall tread me down | shall tread down |
| 2.12 | 1059C–D | 0096 | partem substantiae ×2, Gravasti manum | my portion ×2, thy hand | the portion ×2, the hand |
Controls left alone because the possessive IS printed: Semitam meum → "My path" (1059B), Sacerdotes ejus → "Her priests" (1052C), Israel servo suo → "To Israel his servant" (1056C), Novissima mea → "My last things" (1059C), injustitiam suam → "their injustice" (1048D), meae potestatis → "of my own power" (1060A).
### ⭐ The consequence at 1055A — the [var:] is true again The Latin prints et in servis, and the [var: Vulg. Ps 134:14 et in servis suis deprecabitur] sits on the same line. Our English had already absorbed the Vulgate's suis into the lemma, so the note reported a divergence the text had erased. Verified and fixed: the lemma now reads "and in the servants," and the note's contrast stands.
### ⭐ One site the reader did not list, found by its own test — repaired @1048D (0090) VERS. 3.-- Supra dorsum. → our English read "Upon my back." Vulgate Ps 128:3 is supra dorsum meum; Migne prints the stump bare, in the same line as §1.3. Changed to "Upon the back." Recorded as an addition beyond the reader's 27, not a sweep: no other lemma in the band was touched without a verified bare stump.
2 · The two inverted [cj:] markers — both verified, both repaired
§1.1 @1039D (0087). Latin: vel, a casu revelando. The running English gave only the conjecture's sense ("by raising up") and the gloss echoed it verbatim. Repaired to Pattern 18's additive shape:
either by not suffering one to fall, or by revealing from the fall
[cj: revelando; read relevando, "by raising up"]
Migne's revelando now has an English exponent; the conjecture stands beside it. (The conjecture is sound — 1040A prints a casu relevando and is rendered "by raising up from the fall" — which is exactly why it belongs in the marker and not in the text.)
§2.3 @1060A (0096). Latin: Quae meae potestatis, in est efficaciam deitatis. The running English read "that is" — which is the conjecture id est — and the marker carried no double-quoted sense gloss at all. Both faults repaired:
Which are of my own power, in
[cj: in; read id, "that is"]is the efficacy of the Godhead
The English is now as strained as the Latin (in est + accusative efficaciam does not construe), which is Pattern 7 working rather than failing. ⚑ The reader's alternative — that this is a Pattern 10 split run and a [sic:] candidate — was not taken: a [sic:] accuses Migne's type and would have put a new unread-column marker into the ratchet. Flagged for Wilson below.
### ❌ REJECTED — [cj: orbi; read orbis, "of the whole world"] @1055B–C (0094) Latin: totius orbi conditionem. The brief listed this as a third inversion; it is not one, and the brief's own escape clause covers it ("where Migne's word and the conjecture yield the SAME English there is no exponent to change"). orbi and orbis differ only in case, and the genitive totius has nothing to agree with either way — any attempt to render orbi as a dative would manufacture a sense the plate does not carry. The reader's §3 reached the same verdict independently ("inert but harmless"). Marker left exactly as it stands.
3 · The silent repairs
Accepted and repaired:
- §1.12 @1053A (0092)
quia jam caput passum praecesserunt— verified plural. Our English had made caput the subject and the verb singular. Now renders the printed plural with the conjecture beside it: "because they had already gone before the head that had suffered[cj: praecesserunt; read praecesserat, "the head had gone before"]." New[cj:]; content verifies verbatim in the twin. - §1.13 @1051B (0092)
et ubi et precatur qui exaltentur— the plate prints qui, the English read ut. Repaired without a marker, by rendering the relative as printed: "and where he also prays for those who are to be exalted." No conjecture is asserted, so none is marked. - §2.2 @1050A (0091) and @1057A–B (0094) — coeperint / coeperunt given supplied infinitives. Both verified: the plates print coep-, and both verbs are left with a bare accusative. Handled differently on purpose:
- 0091
si utcunque aliquid coeperint→ "if they have in any way begun something" (the imported "to grasp" is gone). coepi + accusative is construable, so no marker — there is nothing to conjecture. - 0094
haud parum emolumenti coeperunt→ "they began no small profit[cj: coeperunt; read ceperunt, "they took"]." Here the accusative genuinely will not go, so the conjecture is named. New[cj:]; verifies verbatim. - §2.9 @1059C (0096)
jam in tua gratia justificaui— verified first-person perfect active. Our English gave a smooth passive participle ("now justified in thy grace"). Now "now I have justified in thy grace" — object-less, as printed. - §1.14 @1054B (0093)
qua viva proficit homo in melius— gender is decisive: viva is feminine and agrees with qua (= fides). Repaired to "by which, when it is living, a man advances unto better things." (Listed by the reader as confident; I agree — this is not a judgment call.)
❌ REJECTED — §2.10 @1059A (0095), in quo principes mundi peccatum non invenit, quare occideret. The reader's own least-confident item, and it does not hold as a defect of ours. The disagreement is real and it is Migne's: our English renders the printed plural noun and the printed sense. English past "found" carries no number at all, and forcing "wherefore he should kill him" onto the plural subject would not display Migne's fault — it would read as our own grammatical error, which is precisely what Pattern 7a forbids. Marking it would require a [sic:] (a claim about the type, unlicensed without a plate read) or a [cj:] (there is no single printed word to conjecture against). Left as it stands; recorded for Wilson below.
4 · Recorded, NOT changed — by standing convention
Both are the reader seeing correctly and the convention overriding the proposal.
- §1.5 @1051B (0092) —
(CAS.)against Migne's(CASS.. Confirmed: the Latin twin prints(CASS.with the parenthesis never closed, and our English prints(CAS.)— a closed paren and a dropped S. Not changed: the siglum is note content, checked as a substring of the Latin twin, and the brief rules the class out of this pass. ⚑ It is a genuine defect and it is two defects, not one (the added)and the lostS). Wilson's. - §1.9 @1055B (0093) — a supplied
VERS. 18.Confirmed: the plate printsVERS. --with no number. Not changed:VERS.addresses pass through verbatim by convention. The number supplied is arithmetically right, which is not the point — it borrows Migne's authority for our count. Wilson's.
5 · Everything else the reader accepted or rejected — checked, no action
- §1.4 @1050C (0092) cue
Ecce audi.conformed to Ecce audivimus: verified and repaired to "there, Behold, hear." The identical two words at 1051B were already rendered "Behold, hear," so the page no longer renders one printed phrase two ways. - §2.1 @1056C (0094)
Et excussit Pharaonem.rendered "overthrew" while its own three glosses on excutere read "shake off": accepted (7a″ exactly — the keyword had vanished from the verse it expounds). Lemma now "And he shook off Pharao." - §2.4 @1048C (0090)
pro eo omnia ferat→ was "for that fear"; no timor noun is printed. Accepted, now "for his sake," leaving the pronoun as open as the Latin. - §2.5 @1048C (0090) one Latin subject rendered "she … she … he." Accepted; harmonised to "he" throughout, matching the work's divisio formula eight lines later and elsewhere.
- §2.6 @1053C (0093)
invitat pluraliter benedicere Deum→ was "invites many." Accepted: pluraliter is "in the plural," the whole passage exists to make that grammatical point (1053D answers plural address with singular blessing), and our own English at 1048A already renders the parallel "from the plural." Now "he invites in the plural to bless God." - §2.11 @1041D (0087)
non est salubrius aliquid, quod delectet— accepted; the English had two comparatives where the Latin has one. Now "there is nothing more wholesome, which may delight, than the praise of God." - The 7a⁗ markers — left untouched, as instructed and as independently confirmed:
noc@1058D andincomprehensibllis@1059D both leave the negative/privative outside the quarantine, as doesfungiendum@1060B. ✅ - The
gradusseries — not touched. The missing fifth degree at Psalm CXXIII is Migne's own gap, faithfully carried, and is not a finding. - No
[sic:]marker or its surrounding English was altered anywhere, per the frozen class.
6 · The reader's twelve "probable" items — my verdict, one by one
| § | verdict |
|---|---|
| 2.1 excussit lemma | ACCEPTED — repaired |
| 2.2 coeperint / coeperunt (×2) | ACCEPTED — repaired, one with a new [cj:], one without |
2.3 malformed [cj: in] | ACCEPTED — repaired (as [cj:], not as [sic:]) |
| 2.4 pro eo antecedent | ACCEPTED — repaired |
| 2.5 "she"/"he" split | ACCEPTED — repaired |
| 2.6 pluraliter | ACCEPTED — repaired |
| 2.7 Israel servum | ACCEPTED — repaired |
| 2.8 conculcabunt | ACCEPTED — repaired |
| 2.9 justificaui | ACCEPTED — repaired |
| 2.10 principes … invenit | ❌ REJECTED — see §3; English has no exponent that shows Migne's fault rather than inventing ours |
| 2.11 double comparative | ACCEPTED — repaired |
| 2.12 three small possessives | ACCEPTED — all three repaired |
Eleven of twelve probables accepted; one rejected. All fifteen confident items verified; thirteen repaired, two recorded-only by convention (§4), none rejected on the facts.
7 · ⚑ FOR WILSON
(CAS.)for Migne's(CASS.@1051B. An attribution siglum that appears nowhere on the plate, plus a closing parenthesis Migne never printed. Frozen out of this pass by the siglum/note-content convention — but it is a real defect and it needs a ruling, because the convention that protects it is what let it through.- The supplied
VERS. 18.@1055B. Same shape: the convention is doing its job by refusing my edit, and the result is a rubric on our page that Migne does not print. in est@1060A (0096). I kept it as[cj: in; read id, "that is"]. The reader's alternative reading — Pattern 10 split/defective run, hence[sic:]— is at least as good, and I declined it only because a[sic:]is a public claim against Migne's type that needs a plate read this column has not had. If col. 1060 is ever read, this is the first thing to look at.- §2.10 @1059A stands unmarked. If Wilson wants Migne's
principes … invenit … occideretvisible, the apparatus that reaches it is a plate-licensed[sic:], not an English rewrite. - The
[sic:]/ Pattern 7 non-word question is still owed a ruling and the class remains frozen; nothing here touched it. - The punctuation-drift class the reader logged (≈a dozen colons/semicolons for printed commas and stops, Pattern 8) was not swept — it is a mechanical class and, as the reader said, better swept mechanically than repaired one site at a time.
§I.repair-bandC-0097 — file repair-bandC-0097.md, verbatim
Answers polarity-bandC-0097.md (11 individual findings + 2 marker classes). Every proposal was checked against the Latin twin in src/latin/8967/ and against the recorded plate reads for cols 1061–1080 (data/plate-reads.json, all ten leaves read full) before anything was changed.
Result: 15 edits made across 9 chunks · 1 [cj:] added · 1 [sic:] moved · 4 proposals rejected outright · 3 recorded for Wilson.
Gates after the pass: verify-english OK (106 chunks) · plate-gate OK (288 markers, all on read columns) · marker-reconcile --band 10 65 claims · 65 standing · 0 MISSING · 1 withheld by ruling.
⚑ No [sic:] or [var:] was added or deleted; exactly one was moved (§2). No [cj:] was removed. The [cj:] marker contents were left untouched throughout — in every class-1 site the marker was already well formed and only the running English was wrong.
⭐ The class-1 finding is not the reader's opinion — it is a documented, unfinished edit
data/briefs/8967-PENDING-TEI-PATCHES.md carries, for both Band C plate stints, a column headed "English edit owed?". For every one of the nine sites it says yes, and names the reason in the same words the reader independently reached: "0100.md 'the sword twice sharpened' renders the twin", "0101.md 'the one day without end' renders the twin". The 1071C–1080B stint even writes the replacement English out site by site ("0102.md: 'as it were saving musics [cj: …]' for 'as it were a saving music'" · "0104.md: 'Praise ye the Lady [cj: …]' for 'Praise ye the Lord.'").
So the Latin patches landed, the markers fired, and the English half of the same patch was never made. That is the whole of class 1. The blind reader rediscovered it from the text alone, and the two accounts agree site for site.
1 · The nine inverted [cj:] — all nine repaired
The running English now renders Migne's printed word; the conjecture's sense stays where it already was, in the marker's quoted gloss. Every printed form was confirmed against the plate read as well as the twin.
| # | col | chunk | Migne prints | was (the conjecture) | now (the plate) |
|---|---|---|---|---|---|
| 1 | 1063B | 0097 | petit apponit custodiam | "he asks a watch to be set" | "he asks, he sets a watch" |
| 2 | 1065C | 0098 | Fortius … qui non vult | "The strong man … because he does not will it" | "More strongly … who does not will it" |
| 3 | 1068B | 0100 | gladius bis actus | "the sword twice sharpened" | "the sword twice driven" |
| 4 | 1068D | 0100 | Non laboro macri | "Not lean with labour" | "Not I labour lean" |
| 5 | 1068D | 0100 | eum ipsi sint | "whereas they themselves are" | "him they themselves are" |
| 6 | 1069C | 0101 | sine fines dies | "the one day without end" | "the one day without ends" |
| 7 | 1071D | 0102 | quasi musicas salutaris | "as it were a saving music" | "as it were saving musics" |
| 8 | 1072A | 0102 | praeest plumbo in puritate laudatio | "surpasses lead that is praised for its purity" | "surpasses lead in purity, praise" |
| 9 | 1077A | 0104 | Laudate Dominam. | "Praise ye the Lord." | "Praise ye the Lady [cj: …]." |
⭐ Site 9 is the one the reader called sharpest and it was right about why. "Praise ye the Lord" is the identical string this same chunk uses for Laudate Dominum at Ps 148:1, so the defect was invisible on the page. The marker has also been moved inside the italic lemma, onto the word it accuses (precedent: Let the desert [sic: disertum] rejoice, 0041.md).
### ⚑ Sites 4, 5 and 8 — the three where Migne's word has no grammatical slot laboro (1 sg. indic.), eum (acc. pronoun) and laudatio (stranded nom.) cannot be construed in place, so their faithful English is ungrammatical. They are rendered literally anyway, on the Pattern 18 precedent of 11064 @1090B, where apud non is set on the page as "among not [cj: non; read nos, "us"]". Rendering them smoothly is what produced the inversion in the first place. I did not reclassify any of them to [sic:] — that would have added markers to the class Wilson has yet to rule on (see §5).
### ⛔ REJECTED — the reader's tenth class-1 site, 1075C mittere (0104) "For unless he sent his word to the earth" for Nisi enim mittere verbum terrae. Already adjudicated and declined: the plate stint's own entry reads "0104.md: no wording change; marker beside 'unless he sent his word'" — the clause has no finite verb under Migne's reading and the stint judged that rendering the infinitive in place would put garble on the page. Left as it stands.
⚠ This is the one place where the standing record and the repair I was asked to make pull against each other, and Wilson should see it. The same brief writes "no wording change" for 1072A laudatio as well — but 1072A is inside the nine, so it has now been changed, while 1075C has not. The two sites are the same shape (a real form that construes nowhere). One is repaired and one is not, on my instruction rather than on a principle. Either both should be rendered literally or both left; it is a one-line ruling.
2 · The misplaced [sic: mahsiones] @1078B (0105) — moved
Was:
In my Father's house there are many mansions. [n: (Joan. XIV.)] [sic: mahsiones]
— outside the italic, past the full stop, past the note, accusing nothing. Now:
In my Father's house there are many mansions [sic: mahsiones]. [n: (Joan. XIV.)]
The marker's content, the English, and the note are all untouched; only the position moved.
⚑ The reader also notes [sic: suseipiet] @1073B and [sic: ubyssi] @1077A sit outside their lemmata. Left alone — they are adjacent to what they accuse, not detached from it, and they fall inside the frozen class (§5).
3 · The sense findings — verified one by one
### ✅ F5 @1067B (0100) — ad Goliam rendered "against Goliath". REPAIRED. The [var:] on the same line exists to say that Migne prints ad Goliam where the Vulgate has Adversus Goliath — and the English rendered ad by the Vulgate's adversus, erasing the very divergence the marker announces. Now "A psalm of David to Goliath." The [var:] itself is untouched.
### ✅ F3 @1077A (0104) — Deo re-bound. REPAIRED. Et si coelum novum, Deo tamen bene statuta dicuntur, quae novantur per Christum. Deo is the dative of agent with statuta and bene modifies statuta; the English had moved both onto dicuntur, making God the speaker. Was "yet they are rightly said by God to be established"; now "yet they are said to be well established by God". The lemma above it is Ps 148:6 Statuit ea in aeternum — the gloss is arguing about who established, not who spoke.
### ✅ F4 @1077B (0104) — the lemma Confessio rendered "Praise". REPAIRED. The reader flagged this as a judgment call; the work has already ruled on the class twice and both rulings run its way:
cruces.md§6 records the chainconfiteor→ confess everywhere in this work, "because the gloss argues from them";cruces.md§1a ("the three the GLOSS ITSELF depends on") establishes that a lemma is not conformed to Douay where the exposition expounds the printed word — 1005D honorem, 1003A erudit.
Here the exposition is a chain on confitentur / confitentium, already rendered "confess". Now "Confession." and "His confession above heaven and earth."
### ✅ F8 @1074D (0103) — the [cj:] the reader thought was owed. VERIFIED AND ADDED. Checked against the parent's ⛔ test first: In composito is a real ablative, clearly set (the 1073A–1074D plate read logs nine departures on that spread and this is not among them, so the twin and the plate agree), and "In the composed bearing of the presumptuous and bold" is its faithful English. It is therefore not a case of the English being wrong about a word Migne set clearly — the English is right and the page still contradicts itself, because In tibiis notatur incessus incompositus stands three sentences later. That is Pattern 18's trigger exactly, and the bar in 18a is met: the printed word makes the sentence say what the gloss is arguing against. Added, English unchanged:
In the composed bearing
[cj: In composito; read Incomposito, "in the uncomposed bearing"]of the presumptuous and bold.
### ✅ F2 @1077C (0105) — de veteri as a time-adverb. REPAIRED. haec est sanctificatio Israel, per quam de veteri factus est novus. Was "whereby of old it was made new" — which reads de veteri as olim and destroys the antithesis the very next paragraph is built on (Vetus enim homo vetus canticum cantat … Novus homo novum). Now "whereby out of the old it was made new." No noun supplied.
### ⛔ REJECTED — F6 @1066C (0099), the "defective lemma" Quia persecutis The plate does not print it. The 1065A–1066D plate read records Quia persecutus (CC gives persecutis), and the pending-patch file already carries the row, with the adjudication written out: "⚑ English renders the PLATE … the plate's reading construes and needs no marker, so §A6's licence applies cleanly here." The English "Because he has persecuted." is correct, a [sic:] there would be a public accusation against Migne for Corpus Corporum's defect, and the Latin twin converges when the patch lands. Nothing changed.
⚑ This is the reader's blindness working exactly as designed: it could not see the plate record, so it correctly reported that the English outran its Latin, and was correctly wrong about who was at fault.
### ⛔ REJECTED — F7 @1076C (0104), gratias silently promoted to subject Already ruled, and the ruling is right. The pending-patch file's Class 4 entry: "gratias is accusative and cannot be the subject of eluceat, but the case has no English exponent and the number does: English renders the plural, 'the graces of the Trinity'. No marker — Pattern 9." The English is a faithful rendering of Migne's plural; what is invisible is the case, which is precisely what Pattern 9 exempts. Nothing changed.
4 · Left exactly as found, by instruction — and confirmed as reported
- ⛔ F1 @1078B
nosfor non (0105). The reader is right that the English carries a negation the plate does not ("whence it may not be free to go out" for unde nos sit liberum exire"). Untouched. The site is already recorded in the patch file as[cj: nos; read non]DELIBERATELY NOT FIRED, andmarker-reconcilereports it as withheld by ruling, not missing. No marker class reaches an omission; the class ruling is Wilson's. Its sibling is 1029B. - ⛔ Class 2, the twelve
[sic:]on translated type. Untouched. The reader states Pattern 7's non-word rule accurately, but the question is not settled by the rule's text: ~60 shipped markers in this work do it the other way ("Whatsoever [sic: Quaecunquae]", "a people not receiving [sic: sucipientis]") across both merged bands, and Band C matches them. Frozen pending Wilson. - ⭐ The
[var:], the instruments and the truncated lemmata. Not disturbed. The reader's three negative results stand as filed: ten[var:]all sound, the Hallelujah instruments all matching their own glosses (incl. the psalterium a summo / cithara ab imo discriminator), and eleven short lemmata with nothing completed from the Vulgate.
5 · ⚑ FOR WILSON — four rulings owed, none of them acted on here
- The
[sic:]class (frozen). Does a[sic:]sit beside translated English (this work's ~60 shipped markers, both bands) or beside carried, untranslated type (Pattern 7/12 as written)? Twelve markers in this band and the whole corpus convention hang on it. Two further sites (F6-adjacent gratias, and the three slotless[cj:]at §1) would move class if the answer is the strict one. - 1075C mittere vs 1072A laudatio — the same shape, now treated differently (§1, ⛔ box). One line settles it.
- The
VERS.addresses. Recorded, not resolved, per instruction: Migne is out of sequence at four places in this band and[sic:]fired at two —[sic: VERS. 9.]@1062B and[sic: VERS. 16.]@1076C — while theVERS. 7that follows the first at 1062B–C and theVERS. 12opening Psalm CXLVII carry nothing. Both fired markers are backed by patch-file rows citing "the 1016C ruling", so the inconsistency is in which sites were fired, not in the convention. It belongs with the address ruling. - The
[var:]at 1067B has no gloss — the only one of the ten without one, where Pattern 14 asks for "a two-or-three-word gloss if the sense turns on it", and after §3/F5 the sense now visibly turns on it (ad vs adversus). Not added, because the[var:]set was ruled not to be disturbed. One line of text if wanted.
6 · Files touched
0097.md · 0098.md · 0100.md (×4) · 0101.md · 0102.md (×2) · 0103.md · 0104.md (×4) · 0105.md (×2). No Latin file, no frontmatter, no column anchor, no [n:] note, no section head, and no chunk-work.mjs run.