These are the edition's working notes, published as they were written. They record, work by work, where Migne's plate is defective or the reading uncertain: the printed form, what the English does with it, and why. They are not a groomed apparatus. Where a note argues with itself, withdraws an earlier decision, or leaves a question open, that is the record of how the reading was actually reached, and it is left standing — a conjecture that is visible can be checked, and one that has been tidied away cannot.
The English never silently repairs the page. A construable but wrong reading is rendered literally and the conjecture is recorded here, never applied to the text. How the English is produced and checked →
Garbled or irregular printed readings in Migne's plate, rendered per the intended reading (house convention) and logged here, plus one standing terminology decision.
Standing terminology decision (applies to all chunks)
The treatise is built on a borrowed rhetorical vocabulary, and its whole argument turns on the terms staying distinct from one another:
- oratio → prayer · precatio → entreaty · petitio → petition
- supplicatio → supplication · postulatio → postulation · insinuatio → intimation (the three species orationis)
- captatio → kept in italic Latin, per the register rule for technical terms with no clean English equivalent: it is the rhetor's captatio benevolentiae, and "winning of goodwill" would be a gloss, not a rendering.
- exactio → exaction · pura oratio → pure prayer (the three genera supplicationum)
- affectus → affection throughout (never "emotion" / "feeling"), because chapter VII treats it as a taxonomic term.
"Postulation" rather than "petition" for postulatio is deliberate: Hugh uses petitio alongside it in the same definitions, so collapsing the two would erase the distinction his three-fold scheme rests on. Cheap to reverse if a human prefers "request."
Chunk 0000
- Col 0977D —
Cogitemus quam brevis sit vita nostra, quam lubrica, via quam mors incerta.The comma has slipped one word to the left: the members are quam lubrica via, quam incerta mors. Rendered "how brief our life is, how slippery the way, how uncertain death." - Col 0978C —
si quemadmodum in praeterito nostri misertus, sit cogitemus.The comma falls inside the perfect misertus sit. Rendered as one verb. - Col 0979B —
Postremo nisi eam plus quam mala sua diligeret … refugium sibi in ipso eligeret.The feminineeamhas no clean antecedent in the sentence, whose other pronouns (eo, ipso) are masculine and refer to God; the nearest feminine is misericordiam implied by the preceding speraret eum misereri velle. Rendered "unless he loved that mercy more than his own evils," keeping the feminine. A human may prefer emending to eum and reading "loved him."
Chunk 0001
- Col 0980B —
Hoc genus orandi in forma est, et quam prae caeteris omnibus unicum, tam est apud Deum prae caeteris omnibus pretiosum.in forma estis obscure as it stands (candidates: informe est, "is without form," which suits pure prayer forgetting its own petition; or in summa forma est). Rendered neutrally, "is in a form of its own." Flagged for a human — the sense of the sentence turns on it. - Col 0981B —
quia nos obstinere posse sola insinuatione speramus.obstinerefor obtinere. Rendered "obtain." - Col 0981B —
quod in nuptiis deficiente vino Domino mater dicit. Vinum non habent— a full stop, not a colon, before the quotation. Reproduced as printed. - Col 0981C —
Maria enim a Christo non quasi mater exigere Filio, sed quasi mulier … miraculum humiliter postulare, debebat a Deo.The construction is tangled (a Christo … Filiowith a bare dative, and a comma beforedebebat). Rendered per the evident sense: "Mary ought not, as a mother, to exact a miracle of Christ as her Son, but, as a woman … humbly to postulate it of God."
Chunk 0002
No garbled readings found in this chunk.
Chunk 0003
- Col 0985D —
ex commmemoratione, with a trebled m. Typographic only. - Col 0985C / 0985D — the same affection is named
affectus moeroriswhen the list is set out andaffectus doloriswhen it is applied. Both rendered as printed ("the affection of mourning" / "the affection of grief"); not harmonized. - Col 0986A —
in quo fit invectio et accusatio in adversarios videlicet contra nequitiam illorum, indignatio contra injuriam, zelus propter malitiam, major de Dei misericordia praesumptio.The three members have lost their verbs and the pairing of affection to occasion has slipped out of alignment (as printed, indignatio attaches backward to nequitiam and zelus forward to malitiam). Rendered following the printed comma sequence, without repairing the alignment. Flagged for a human.
Chunk 0004
- Col 0986D —
Quare fremuerent gentes [n: (Psal. II)].fremuerentfor fremuerunt — the same incipit is printed correctly at 0987A a few lines later, and at 0982A in chunk 0002. Rendered "Why have the gentiles raged." - Col 0988A —
quia tamen quodammodo me ab eoderelictum video.ab eo derelictumrun together by the compositor. Rendered "forsaken by him." - Col 0988A —
verbi gratia: In angustiis constitutus; [n: (Psal. III)];. In angustiis constitutus is not the incipit of Psalm 3 (which is Domine, quid multiplicati sunt, quoted two clauses later with its own[n: (ibid.)]); it reads as Hugh's own narrative frame, "Being set in straits." Migne has nevertheless italicized it and hung the[n: (Psal. III)]marker on it, and the punctuation is broken (semicolon inside the italics, another after). Reproduced as printed. Flagged for a human — the note is almost certainly misplaced from the quotation that follows. - Cols 0987A → 0988A — anchor-sequence gap: 0987B, 0987C and 0987D are not marked, the text running straight from [0987A] to [0988A]. Reproduced as printed; the chunk's own
colLastis 0988A, so this is upstream of the translation, but it is worth a check against the plate for dropped text.
Citation notes — passed through verbatim
[n: …] contents are reproduced unchanged per the marker rule. All numerals in this work check out against the Vulgate psalter (Psal. CXLIII, V, L, II, LXXVII, XVII, VIII, XLVI, XXX, XII, VI, LI, XCIII, XXV, I, CVIII, III) and against John 11 and John 2. The two [n: (Ibid.)] / [n: (ibid.)] chains resolve to (Joan. II) at 0981C and to (Psal. III) at 0988A respectively.
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Blind Opus read of the Latin/English pair for sense-reversing defects (one word or one letter asserting the opposite of what the context requires). 1 site(s). Migne's defects are recorded here and rendered literally in the English; our own errors were fixed in place. Full context: data/sweeps/corpus-polarity/REPORT.md.
0980B — sense-reversing-letter (migne, low confidence)
Printed: Hoc genus orandi in forma est, et quam prae caeteris omnibus unicum, tam est apud Deum prae caeteris omnibus pretiosum.
Conjecture: Read informe est ("is formless") for the plate's word-divided in forma est; the privative in- has been split off and the claim inverted from "has no form" to "has form."
Pure prayer is defined immediately before as the prayer that loses its own content: "prae amoris ejus magnitudine etiam petitionis suae obliviscatur ... ejus etiam, pro quo venit, curam libenter postponat" — it forgets even its own petition and sets aside the very business it came for. A few lines later the same chapter makes the outward formlessness explicit and grades it as the mark of the highest devotion: "quod per sola nomina fit, quo magis est foris significatione imperfectum, tanto magis intus est abundantia dilectionis plenum ... quanto major et ferventior intus est, tanto minus foris per vocem explicari potest", and "Illud igitur, quod solis nominibus fit, ad puram orationem pertinere videtur." Pure prayer is precisely the species with the least outward form, so "in forma est" asserts the opposite of what its own neighbours require. The English "in a form of its own" is a silent repair that smooths the defective plate rather than translating it.