These are the edition's working notes, published as they were written. They record, work by work, where Migne's plate is defective or the reading uncertain: the printed form, what the English does with it, and why. They are not a groomed apparatus. Where a note argues with itself, withdraws an earlier decision, or leaves a question open, that is the record of how the reading was actually reached, and it is left standing — a conjecture that is visible can be checked, and one that has been tidied away cannot.
The English never silently repairs the page. A construable but wrong reading is rendered literally and the conjecture is recorded here, never applied to the text. How the English is produced and checked →
Migne, PL 196, cols 0527A–0545A (Prologue and Capp. I–IV). Printed readings are rendered literally in the translation per translation-style.md Pattern 7; conjectures live here only.
Carried type (Pattern 10 + 12 — [sic: …] in the English)
- col 0535C (chunk 0002) — "centum cubitos longitudinis, et centum cubitos latitudiuis".
latitudiuisis not a word; near-certainly latitudinis (n/u inversion, a standard Migne compositor slip). Carried untranslated in italics inside[sic: latitudiuis].
- col 0536A (chunk 0002) — "Eminebat itaque templum cum vestibulo suo a parte occident eratali, situmque in atrio exteriori". A split/interpolated run: the sense requires a parte occidentali ("on the western side"), and the intruding letters
eratappear to be a displaced verb driven into the middle of occidentali. Both fragments are carried as one run per Pattern 10 ([sic: occident eratali]); rendering only occidentali would repair the plate silently.
- col 0544C (chunk 0004) — "qninquaginta cubitorum longitudinem ejus, et latitudinem viginti quinque cubitorum".
qninquagintafor quinquaginta (u/n inversion). Carried as[sic: qninquaginta]. The arithmetic confirms the intended figure: the three porches are 25 + 10 + 25, and Richard's own summary two sentences later says they "implebant cubitos sexaginta" — so the porch is 50 long × 25 wide, exactly as the parallel southern-gate lemma (col 0544D) prints quinquaginta correctly. The defect is orthographic only; no measurement is in doubt.
Readings rendered literally though they will not construe
- col 0527B (chunk 0000) — "Supervacuum enim et inane quis possit solidum aliquid fundare, vel firmiter statuere?" The two accusatives have no governing preposition; the argument requires something like in supervacuo et inani ("upon the superfluous and the empty"). Rendered "For upon the superfluous and the empty, who could found anything solid…", which is as close as the printed words allow; the supplied "upon" is the minimum needed to put the accusatives into English at all and is flagged here rather than concealed.
- col 0527B (chunk 0000) — "ubi ipsa sibi expugnat, vel nihil nisi frivolum resonat". expugnare ("to storm, take by assault") does not take a dative and does not construe with sibi; the expected verb is repugnat ("fights against itself"), which the whole clause requires. Rendered as printed ("where it assails itself"), not repaired: expugnat is a real word and takes no
[sic: …]per Pattern 12's boundary.
- col 0537B (chunk 0003) — "Adductus est autem in terram promissionis, haud dubium ante quod de terra Babylonis…". ante will not construe here; the expected reading is haud dubium autem quod ("but there is no doubt that"). The printed
haudis carried ("there is no doubt") and ante is rendered "before", producing the awkward "there is no doubt before, that it was from the land of Babylon". This is deliberate: smoothing ante away would be exactly the silent repair Pattern 7a forbids.
- col 0540B (chunk 0003) — "Sed dicitur: Ei ascendit per gradus ejus." Richard has quoted this same lemma nine lines earlier as "et ascendit per gradus ejus" (col 0540A), and the Vulgate (Ezek. 40:6) reads et.
Eiis therefore a compositor's slip for Et. Because ei IS a Latin word, Pattern 12 forbids carrying it untranslated, so it is rendered literally — "To him he went up by its steps" — which is the closest English the printed words allow. The reader should know the sentence is Migne's, not the translator's. This is the one place in chunks 0000–0004 where the literal rendering is actively misleading, and it is the class Pattern 12 flags as still open (cf. 11081 col. 0030B).
- col 0535A (chunk 0002) — "Sane si consulas tam rationem quam Scripturam, inventes unumquemque trium horum murorum tres portas habuisse."
inventesfor invenies. Treated as a Pattern 9 orthographic variant (e/i interchange is routine in medieval Latin) and translated normally, "you will find"; logged so a later sweep does not read it as a silent repair. If the volume editor prefers to class it as broken type, it would take[sic: inventes].
Scripture divergences from the received text
- col 0533C (chunk 0002) — Ezek. 42:20 is printed "Per quatuor ventos mensus est illud murum ejus undique per circuitum". The Vulgate has no illud (mensus est murum eius). Rendered as printed ("he measured it, its wall on every side round about"). No
[var: …]— the intrusive pronoun does not change the sense.
- col 0541D (chunk 0004) — Isa. 62:6 is printed "Super muros tuos, Hierusalem, constitui custodes, tota die et nocte non tacebunt laudare nomen Domini". The Vulgate reads tota die et tota nocte perpetuo non tacebunt and has no laudare nomen Domini; Migne's clause supplies an object the received text lacks. Rendered as printed. Borderline for
[var: …]; logged here instead, since the added phrase specifies rather than reverses the sense.
- col 0530B (chunk 0001) — Ezek. 1:11 is printed "Duae pennae singulorum jungebant" (active) where the Vulgate has iungebantur (passive). Rendered as printed, "The two wings of each joined." Richard's argument does not turn on the voice.
Pattern 9 items (no English exponent — logged, English unchanged)
- col 0527C (chunk 0000) — "Ex his namque quosdam, quae Scripturam sanctam recipiebant": masculine quosdam with relative quae. English "who" carries no gender; nothing to render either way.
- col 0532C (chunk 0001) — "nisi forte qui putet" for quis putet.
- col 0541A (chunk 0003) — "hic nomen" for hoc nomen.
- col 0542C (chunk 0004) — "Post hanc portam orientalem de quo modo loquitur", referring to portam (feminine).
- col 0531A (chunk 0000) — "facies igneas habebant, qui calorem … fundebant": masculine relative for feminine facies.
Punctuation carried per Pattern 8
- col 0529C (chunk 0000) — "quia in eam etiam partem faciem habebant Nos cum ad posteriora redire volumus…": the plate prints no stop between habebant and Nos, though the capital shows a new sentence was intended. No stop is supplied in the English.
- col 0540B (chunk 0003) — "Cur, quaeso, primo loco ejus mensuras non caperet … si hoc de alia aliqua atrii exterioris porta intelligi voluisset." A question closed with a full stop. Reproduced as printed.
Negation fidelity
Every printed non / nec / neque / nisi / nunquam / nullus / nihil / haud in cols 0527A–0545A is carried into the English, and none is added. Two paragraphs are negation-dense and were read against the Latin word by word: col 0529B ("Revertentes ergo non revertebantur … non retro vertebantur, quia non convertebantur" — four negations, all present) and col 0541A–B ("neminem esse tam improbum … quem … contraire non pudeat, qui … reprehendere non erubescat … si … non subsannaverit" — a coherent double-negative period, not a defect). No confirmed dropped- or intrusive-negative site was found in chunks 0000–0004. The nearest approach is the haud dubium ante quod of col 0537B above, where the negation itself is intact and the corruption lies in the adjacent word.
Numerals — all checked, all internally consistent
Logged as verified rather than as defects, since this volume has a documented history of corrupt measurements:
- col 0533 / 0534C — walls of 600 / 500 / least; and 50 cubits of suburbana between the middle and outermost wall. 500 + 50 + 50 = 600. Consistent.
- col 0535C — thirty chambers, fifteen south + fifteen north. Consistent.
- col 0535B vs 0543A — seven steps to the outer court, eight to the inner, stated twice in the same terms. Consistent.
- col 0536C — house (100) + portico (50) − shared wall (5) = 145. Consistent.
- col 0539B — 500 cubits divided 200 (outer court) + 100 (inner court) + 100 (temple) + 100 and more behind. Consistent, and matches the 200 cubits restated at col 0544A.
- col 0544B / 0544C / 0545A — porch 25 + gate-way 10 + porch 25 = 60, matching "fecit frontes per sexaginta cubitos" (col 0543C) and "implebant cubitos sexaginta" (col 0545A). Consistent.
Translation-convention notes (not cruces)
- The work-wide architectural vocabulary fixed for 11553 is followed without departure: porticus → portico, vestibulum → porch, atrium → court, gazophylacium → chamber, thalamus → little chamber, limen → threshold, calamus → reed, mensa → table, platea → pavement, arula → little hearth, aedificium → building, medietas → half.
- Latin words Richard quotes as words, when his argument turns on their form and English has no exponent, are kept in italic Latin: earum / eorum, quas / quos, unum (col 0532B–D). Greek/Latin technical terms likewise: exedrae, ethecae (col 0536D–0537A).
- Where Richard re-quotes a lemma as a phrase inside his own prose and Migne prints it unitalicized, the English marks it with straight quotes
" "per Pattern 6 (marks we supply), never guillemets and never added italics. Guillemet count in these five chunks is 0, matching the Latin twin. - CAPUT PRIMUM is rendered "CHAPTER THE FIRST" (the 11539 precedent), keeping the plate's numbering style rather than normalizing to "CHAPTER I."
CAPUT IIIprints without a following period at cols 0537B and 0541D; the English head reproduces that.
Richard of St Victor, PL 196, cols 0545B–0559C. Rendered under translation-style.md Pattern 7 / 7a: the printed reading stands in the English, the conjecture lives here.
0546A (chunk 0005) — utrumque for utrimque in the Ezekiel lemma
Migne prints, quoting Ezek. 40:12: Et mensus est marginem ante thalamos cubiti unius, et cubitus unus finis utrumque. The Vulgate has utrimque, "on both sides," and Richard's own argument requires it (he immediately glosses the verse as meaning the one-cubit margin lay "not only in front, but also on either side"). Decisive internal evidence: at 0553B the same lemma is re-quoted and there Migne prints utrinque. So the plate contradicts itself between two printings of one verse, twelve columns apart.
Rendered as printed ("and one cubit the boundary, both"), with a [var: Vulg. utrimque, "on both sides"] beside it. No [sic: …] — utrumque is a real Latin word, merely the wrong one (Pattern 12's boundary), so what stands on the page is our English, not his type.
0549A (chunk 0006) — liber where the syntax requires libet
…et quae de thalamis seu liminibus hoc loco dicenda videbantur ordine prosecuti sumus, liber hoc loco ad majorem dictorum dicendorumque evidentiam … colligere, ut… The infinitive colligere has no governing verb; libet ("it pleases [me] … to gather") supplies one exactly and is a one-letter difference. Rendered with the printed word taken as the adjective it is — "I am free in this place … to gather" — which construes with the infinitive and keeps liber visible. No marker: the word is real and translatable.
0549A / 0550A / 0549 (chunk 0006) — anchor sequence, NOT reported as a defect
Recorded only so a later pass does not re-open it. The run reads [0549A] … [0550A] … [0549], i.e. out of order and including a bare band-less anchor. Per the standing ruling this is normal positional transcription; no text breaks mid-word or mid-construction across any of them. Reproduced verbatim, no [ed: …], no patch. (The bare anchors [0549] here and elsewhere in this work are likewise carried as printed.)
0551C (chunk 0007) — ispius for ipsius
…cujus limen prius, et postmodum ispius vestibuli mensuram describit… Metathesis; not a word. Carried into the English untranslated in italics under Patterns 7/10 and marked [sic: ispius]. Conjecture: ipsius, certain.
0552B (chunk 0007) — quinquagina for quinquaginta
…duo collateralia triplicis porticus vestibula hinc inde quinquagina cubitos longitudinis… Not a word. Carried untranslated in italics, marked [sic: quinquagina]. Conjecture: quinquaginta, certain — fifty is the figure the whole chapter runs on, and Migne prints quinquaginta correctly at 0553D and 0555C.
0553A–B (chunk 0007) — ut in superioribus where the argument demands non ut
This is the negation site. Migne prints:
Ecce limen hoc ut superiora portae limen dicitur, et tamen hic, ut in superioribus, nihil determinationis adjungitur, et ex eo ipso innuitur quod vere et proprie portae dicatur.
Richard has spent the two preceding columns proving the opposite: at 0551B and again at 0551D–0552A he insists that in the earlier cases a determination (juxta vestibulum portae intrinsecus) was appended, and that its presence is precisely what shows those thresholds were not properly the gate's. Here he argues that nothing is appended, and that the absence is what proves this threshold IS properly the gate's. The clause as printed therefore asserts the reverse of the sentence it sits inside, and of the chapter around it. Conjecture: non ut in superioribus (or ut non in superioribus) — a dropped non, the PL 196 defect class.
Rendered exactly as printed ("and yet here, as in the foregoing, nothing of determination is added"), so the English contradicts itself where the plate does. No repair, no marker — there is nothing carried, only a printed word doing the wrong work.
0553D (chunk 0007) — vestibularum for vestibulorum
Nullum ergo hujusmodi vestibularum limen X cubitorum capere potuit. Feminine genitive plural of a neuter noun. Pattern 9: a declension/gender mismatch has no English exponent — there is no emendation to make or undo. Translated normally ("of porches of this kind"); no marker, no churn on a later sweep.
0556D (chunk 0008) — sentence ends with no terminal stop
…Nam interior porticus convertebat faciem suam ad exteriora, et exterior nihilominus convertebat suam ad interiora — the plate simply stops; the next paragraph opens Notandum sane…. Under Pattern 8 no mark is supplied: the English paragraph ends unpunctuated as the Latin does.
0559A (chunk 0009) — quadraginta cubitos where the work elsewhere prints sexaginta
The measurement defect. Migne prints, in Richard's back-reference to the first description: de longitudine, et fecit frontes per quadraginta cubitos. Every other occurrence of that lemma gives sixty — 0554C (Et fecit frontes per sexaginta cubitos), 0555C (et fecit frontes per LX cubitos), and Richard's own arithmetic at 0554A–B (XXV + XXV + X = LX). Forty also breaks the very inference he draws from it three lines later: two porches of twenty-five plus a third of ten fill sixty, not forty.
Rendered as printed ("and he made fronts of forty cubits"), so the figure and the arithmetic disagree on the page, which is the evidence. Conjecture: sexaginta, effectively certain.
0559B (chunk 0009) — mid-sentence interpunct
…quod quidem legitur et apud secundam portam · Et vestibulum, inquit… Migne sets a raised point where a full stop or comma would be expected. Reproduced verbatim (Pattern 8); not normalized.
0559C (chunk 0009) — longitudo where the sense requires latitudo
Notandum quod porticum per portam intelligit, et quod pavimenti solam longitudinem describit: nam ejus longitudo ex alio melius patebit. The second noun must be the dimension NOT yet described; having just said that only the length is given, "for its length will appear better from elsewhere" is self-cancelling. The parallel passage at 0558B–C settles it: Notandum quod solam longitudinem centum cubitorum describit. Nam latitudo pavimenti quanta fuerit … melius ex sequentibus patebit. Conjecture: latitudo.
Rendered as printed ("only the length … for its length will appear better"). No marker.
Conventions applied, beyond the work-wide list
- coenaculum → upper chamber, solarium → loft, tabulatum → planking — needed because thalamus was already spoken for by "little chamber"; these three carry the storey above the gate at 0554D–0555A and had to stay distinct from it.
- margo → margin (the one-cubit ledge round each little chamber), ejectura muri → projection of the wall.
- frons → front throughout (never "façade"), including the plural frontes of the sixty-cubit measure, since Richard's whole argument at 0554A turns on identifying them.
- determinatio / determinare → determination / determine in the technical scholastic sense (a qualifying phrase that pins a term down); this is load-bearing at 0551B–0552A and 0553A–B.
- Roman numerals are kept Roman where Migne sets them (X, XIII, XXIV, XXXIV, XLII, LX, XXV, VII, V) and spelled out where he spells them out, including the mixed run at 0556B (XV gazophylacia … et decem et quinque).
- lxx at 0551B is left in Migne's lower case, unexpanded.
Chunks found otherwise clean
0005 (cols 0545B–0546D) carries no defect but the utrumque lemma above; its arithmetic (3 × 8 = 24, + 5 + 5 = 34; 34 > 25 breadth, < 50 length) is internally sound. 0008 (cols 0554C–0557B) is clean apart from the missing terminal stop at 0556D — all its figures (25 + 25 + 10 = 60; 15 + 15 = 30 chambers; 100 cubits gate to gate) agree with the rest of the work.
Blind polarity read, 2026-07-30 (unit 11553-u2) — one item left UNRESOLVED
0551A — Quam autem vir ille … metitur … Scriptura innuit quod …: our clause binding may invert Richard's inference. NOT changed; recorded for a ruling.
Migne prints Quam autem vir ille qui portam ingreditur hoc limen primo loco, et ante thalamos metitur, patenter, ut arbitror, Scriptura innuit quod in primo praedictorum VII vestibulorum invenitur.
Our English makes the measuring-order the thing Scripture hints, and the location the reason for it ("…Scripture hints that that man … measures this threshold in the first place, and before the little chambers, in that it is found in the first of the aforesaid VII porches").
The reading the argument seems to want is the reverse: because he measures it first and before the chambers, Scripture plainly hints that it is found in the first porch — i.e. the quod clause is the content of innuit, not a causal tail. Two things support that: the location is what this stretch is out to establish, and Richard states it as settled at 0551C (Primo de limine dicit quod erat in primo vestibulo).
Left as printed, deliberately. Quam is unaccounted for on either parse, and cruces-0014.md records a comparable unresolvable Quam autem … at 0571D where the English supplies a bracketed word — so this is likely the same defective construction rather than a mis-parse of a sound one. Re-binding the clause would assert a reading of a sentence that does not fully construe, which is the emendation Pattern 7 forbids. No claim is reversed to its opposite — both propositions are Richard's — so this is not a polarity defect; it inverts the direction of an inference. Flagged for Wilson.
0536D — oportet totum hoc et australem plagam habere vestibulum (chunk 0002, found by unit 11553-u1). Our English makes totum hoc a co-subject rather than the object of habere. The resulting claim is the same (the south side has all of this too), so it is not a polarity defect and was not changed — recorded because it is a genuine mis-parse and was in no cruces file before.
Richard of St Victor, PL 196, cols 0559C–0570D. Rendered under translation-style.md Pattern 7 / 7a: the printed reading stands in the English, the conjecture lives here.
Written as an audit of a translation stint that finished the four English chunks and stopped before writing its apparatus. All four Latin chunks were read against their English twins sentence by sentence; what was found, what was changed, and what was deliberately left alone are all recorded below, including the candidates examined and rejected.
Carried type (Patterns 7 / 10 / 12 — [sic: …] in the English)
0559D–0560A (chunk 0010) — habenta for habentia
Et mensus est fenestras ejus, et vestibulum ejus in circuitu habenta L cubitos longitudinis… Not a word. Decisive internal evidence: Migne prints the correct habentia two lines earlier in the very sentence that sets up this re-quotation (in sequentibus, habentia, vel aliquid ejusmodi subaudiendum est), so the plate supplies its own conjecture. Carried untranslated in italics, [sic: habenta]. Conjecture: habentia, certain.
0563A (chunk 0011) — demidii for dimidii
…longitudine cubiti unius et demidii, et latitudine cubiti unius et dimidii… The same word is printed both ways inside one lemma, four words apart. Carried untranslated in italics, [sic: demidii].
Pattern 9 was considered and rejected here. demidius could be argued as an e/i orthographic variant and so translated normally; but the plate's own correct dimidii in the same breath makes this a compositor's slip on this plate, not a period convention — which is precisely the boundary Pattern 9 draws ("reserve carry-through for forms unique to this plate"). Carried.
0564C (chunk 0011) — in fallor for ni fallor
…ipsumque, in fallor, in his verbis describitur… The parenthesis is Richard's standing ni fallor, "unless I am mistaken"; in fallor will not construe at all (in + a first-person passive verb). Per Pattern 10 the whole run is carried, including the real word in, since the defect is the pair and not either token: [sic: in fallor]. Conjecture: ni fallor, certain.
0565A (chunk 0011) — contracuntem for contra euntem
…sicut australem viam illa quae ab Occidente erant contracuntem habebant. Run-together type of the kind Pattern 10 names, with a letter lost at the join. Carried untranslated in italics, [sic: contracuntem]. Conjecture: contra euntem ("running over against them"), which is what the immediately preceding clause has been arguing with contra three times (non contra viam Aquilonis … et non contra ea).
0566A (chunk 0012) — totitem for totidem
…ejusdemque longitudinis atrium includebant, totitemque gradibus assurgebant… Not a word. Carried untranslated in italics, [sic: totitem]. Conjecture: totidem, certain — Richard's point is that the eastern porticoes rose by as many steps as the others, the eight steps of 0560C.
0566B (chunk 0012) — Occiente for Occidente
…quid tamen vel quantum de illo medio centenario ab Occiente … tumor montis detraxerit… A dropped d; not a word. Carried untranslated in italics, [sic: Occiente]. Conjecture: Occidente, certain — the plate prints Occidente correctly twice within twenty lines (0566B versus Occidentem, 0568C ab Occidente in Orientem).
0566D (chunk 0013) — Scriturae for Scripturae
Libet hic, sicut et supra, … Scriturae testimonia in unum colligere… A dropped p; not a word. Carried untranslated in italics, [sic: Scriturae]. Conjecture: Scripturae, certain — the word is printed correctly some forty times in these four chunks.
0569D (chunk 0013) — darietemque for parietemque
Post quem parietem si porticus aquilonaris domus incoepit, darietemque post parietem habuit… Not a word; d/p type substitution. Carried untranslated in italics, [sic: darietemque]. Conjecture: parietemque, certain on the sentence's own evidence — parietem stands correctly twice in the same clause, before and after it.
The numeral that propagates — 0560B (chunk 0010)
This is the finding the range was opened for. cruces-0005.md records that at 0559A — three lines before this chunk begins — Migne prints et fecit frontes per quadraginta cubitos where the same lemma is printed sexaginta at 0554C and LX at 0555C, and where Richard's own arithmetic (XXV + XXV + X = LX, 0554A–B) requires sixty.
The corrupt figure recurs at 0560B, inside Richard's own prose:
Per istud vestibulum viginti quinque cubitorum longitudinis facile probari poterit, quod mensura illa frontium quadraginta cubitorum intra parietes sumpta fuerit.
The inference is that the twenty-five-cubit porch proves the fronts-measure to be an interior measure. It works only with sixty: the front is composed of two porches of twenty-five and a middle span of ten, so 25 + 25 + 10 = 60, and the twenty-five being an inside figure makes the sixty an inside figure. With forty the composition is impossible — two porches of twenty-five will not fit inside forty at all, and the sentence destroys the argument it is offered as proving.
So the defect is not isolated to 0559A: it appears twice within two columns, once in a lemma and once in the commentary that reasons from it. That is worth recording, because a single occurrence looks like a compositor's slip and two consecutive ones raise the possibility of a corrupt exemplar behind this stint of the plate.
Rendered as printed — "that measure of the fronts of forty cubits was taken within the walls" — so that the figure and the arithmetic disagree on the page. No marker: quadraginta is a real word doing the wrong work (Pattern 12's boundary). Conjecture: sexaginta, effectively certain.
Readings rendered literally though they will not construe
0565C (chunk 0012) — utrum utrobique
…et idcirco duobus porticibus interioris atrii hinc inde utrum utrobique simile spatium in coquinarum officium relinquimus. Two adjacent forms of uter with nothing to govern utrum, in a sentence that already carries hinc inde. The sense wanted is "to each of the two, on both sides." Rendered as closely as the printed words allow — "on this side and on that, to either on both sides" — which is redundant English because the Latin is redundant Latin. Both words are real, so no [sic: …]. No confident conjecture is offered (utrique utrobique is the likeliest, but the 9604 boundary applies: the run is corrupt past secure restoration).
0566D (chunk 0013) — the chapter head, De quantitate vel aedificiorum
CAPUT XIII. De quantitate vel aedificiorum quae templo adjacebant. The vel has no second member: a noun has dropped out after it (vel qualitate is the obvious supplement, and Richard's chapter does treat both size and disposition). Rendered as printed — "On the size or of the buildings which lay adjacent to the temple" — which is broken English because the head is broken Latin. No marker; the words are real. This is a head, so it is also a sacred marker: the ## line stands 1:1 with the Latin twin and was not repaired.
0563C–0564B (chunk 0011) — extra portam interiorem re-quoted as contra portam interiorem
Migne prints the lemma (Ezek. 40:44) at 0563C as Et extra portam interiorem gazophylacia cantorum in atrio interiori, and Richard re-quotes his own lemma at 0564B as et contra portam interiorem gazophylacia cantorum in atrio interiori. The plate contradicts itself between a lemma and its own re-quotation half a column apart — the same shape of defect as 0584A–B (satius / latius) in cruces-0014.md, though here nothing in the argument turns on it, since Richard's whole discussion is about in atrio interiori and not about the preposition. Both are rendered as printed ("outside the inner gate" / "over against the inner gate"). No [var: …]: the divergence is internal to Migne, not a divergence from the received text, and Pattern 14 exists for the latter.
0567D (chunk 0013) — a terrae cubitis quinquaginta — the existing [var: …] endorsed
The stint left a [var: Vulg. a terra cubitis quinquaginta, "from the ground, fifty cubits"] against Migne's eminebant de inferioribus et de mediis aedificii a terrae cubitis quinquaginta (Ezek. 42:6), rendering the printed genitive literally as "by fifty cubits of the earth." Checked and kept. The rendering is faithful to what is printed, the note names its witness as Pattern 14 requires, and its content is not a verbatim substring of the Latin twin (which prints terrae, not terra), so the verifier's mirror test is satisfied. It is the only [var: …] in the four chunks.
Punctuation carried per Pattern 8
- 0561C (chunk 0010) — Cur ergo hoc quod hic de gazophylaciis dicitur, huic ultimae descriptioni adnectitur, nisi ut per hoc idem de omnibus intelligi daretur. A direct question (Cur ergo…?) closed with a full stop. The English reproduces the full stop and supplies no question mark, though the four questions around it at 0561D–0562A (Nunquid…? Nunquidnam…?) are all printed with their marks and all keep them.
- 0569C (chunk 0013) — …et quinquaginta cubitorum latitudinis erat. Quod templum et aquilonare aedificium interjacebat, si hoc gazophylacium usque ad vicesimum cubitum atrii interioris se extendebat. Migne breaks a relative clause off as its own sentence. The English reproduces the break ("…of fifty cubits in breadth. Which lay between the temple and the northern building, if…"), which leaves a verbless fragment in English exactly as in the Latin. Not merged.
No sentence-boundary mark was supplied or deleted anywhere in the four chunks — every terminal stop, question mark and mid-sentence full stop in cols 0559C–0570D stands where Migne sets it. (Checked explicitly, because the merging defect logged at 11542 col. 1041D and 11436 col. 0349A is exactly what an unaudited stint produces.)
Numerals — every sum verified, and stated as results
This work has a confirmed corrupt measurement at 0559A and a second occurrence of it at 0560B (above), so every figure in these four chunks was checked against Richard's own reckoning rather than spot-checked. Apart from the 0560B quadraginta, all of them close, and several close exactly.
- 0559D–0561B (chunk 0010) — the three inner gates: each fifty long by twenty-five broad, printed three times over (south, east, north) with no variance. The porch is 25 long × 5 broad; three little chambers a side leave two five-cubit spaces a side, which is what the plate says (inter tres thalamos duo in latere uno, et duo in latere alio). Eight steps to the inner gates against the outer gates' seven. Consistent.
- 0560D (chunk 0010) — one portico divides into three porches, of which the two greater subdivide into fourteen. No sum to close; no conflict with the divisions of Capp. V–IX.
- 0562C–0563B (chunk 0011) — the tables. Four within the porch (two and two) and four without (two and two) = eight along the sides of the gate, which is the figure the lemma prints and the figure chunk 0010 annexed to all three inner gates at 0561C. Richard's own breakdown — four at the one side, two within and two outside; likewise two within and two without at the other — gives 4 + 4 = 8. Exact. Table dimensions 1½ × 1½ × 1 cubit, lips of one palm. Consistent.
- 0565D–0566A (chunk 0012) — the cleanest computation in the batch. From the fronts of the inner gates to the place of the common people is a hundred and forty cubits; five go to the wall; the rest is divided equally among fifteen chambers; Richard concludes nine cubits each. (140 − 5) ÷ 15 = 9 exactly. Fifteen a side gives the thirty round about the pavement of the lemma. Exact throughout.
- 0565D (chunk 0012) — chambers of the singers ranged at fifty by fifty, matching the scriptural longitudo … quinquaginta cubitorum which Richard quotes at 0567C. Consistent.
- 0566A (chunk 0012) — inner court 100 × 100 foursquare, sitting as the middle hundred of the five hundred cubits enclosed north-to-south. Consistent with the 500-cubit wall of 0596D and the 100-cubit court of 0573C in the peer chunks.
- 0568A (chunk 0013) — 215 = 145 + 70, exactly. From the inner court's portico plus five cubits of wall thickness to the place of the common people is two hundred and fifteen; the house with its portico runs a hundred and forty-five west; seventy remain over. And the 145 is itself derived correctly: house 100 + portico 50 = 150, less 5 for the common wall = 145, which is why Richard says "not a hundred and fifty, but only a hundred and forty-five." Both stages exact.
- 0568B–C (chunk 0013) — the separate building: 100 × 80 overall, 90 × 70 within the walls, wall five cubits round about. 90 + 5 + 5 = 100; 70 + 5 + 5 = 80. Exact both ways, and both totals are the figures the lemma prints.
- 0568D (chunk 0013) — 140 = 20 + 100 + 20, exactly. The space enclosed between the two adjacent buildings is a hundred and forty; the separate building's length of a hundred lies between them and the twenty-cubit interval of the lemma is added at either end.
- 0570B (chunk 0013) — 30 + 20 = 50. Fifty cubits from the chamber's eastern side to the northern building; the chamber can hold no more than thirty in breadth, because twenty must remain over to satisfy inter gazophylacia latitudinem viginti cubitorum. Exact.
- 0570B–C (chunk 0013) — 220 = 30 + 100 + 80 + 5 + 5, exactly. From the chamber's eastern side to the boundary of the five-hundred-cubit sanctified space is two hundred and twenty: chamber 30, court 100, separate building 80, then ten remaining of which five is wall and five a way. Richard says the numbers "rise to two hundred and twenty," and they do.
- 0570C–D (chunk 0013) — 130 − 100 = 30. Chamber (30) plus the court set before it (100) reach a hundred and thirty to the separate building; the temple with its porch holds a hundred; the interval is thirty. Exact.
The one arithmetical tension worth recording
- 0569A–B (chunk 0013) — the derived length of the singers' chamber. The printed chain is: from the northern side of the portico to the inner court, 100; of which the portico's breadth holds 50; a walk of 10 interposed; then the chamber begins and extends to the twentieth cubit of the inner court; "whence it is agreed that its length was of fifty cubits." Worked through, 100 − 50 − 10 = 40 to the court, plus 20 into it = 60, not 50. The stated fifty follows if the chamber reaches the tenth cubit rather than the twentieth (50 + 10 + 50 = 110 = 100 + 10) — and 0569C prints si a decimo cubito post illius aedis porticum incipiebat, which is the same ten-cubit walk counted from the other end. Against that, the twenty is a scriptural constant (contra viginti cubitos atrii interioris) and Richard repeats it at 0569C.
Every figure is rendered as printed and none is altered. Recorded because it is the only place in these four chunks where Richard's own figures do not close, and because it is not reducible to the 0560B defect.
- Considered and rejected as a defect: the singers' chambers are ranged at fifty broad at 0565D (chunk 0012) but the northern one can be at most thirty broad at 0570B (chunk 0013). These are different chambers in different quarters — 0565D ranges the fifteen-a-side ranks of the eastern, northern and southern ways, 0570B measures the single chamber beside the northern house's portico — and Richard derives the thirty from the fifty-cubit interval, not from the ranked chambers. No conflict; no crux.
Negation fidelity (Pattern 7a) — read clause by clause
Every printed non / nec / nisi / ne / nihil / nullus / nunquam / nusquam / nondum / necdum / neminem / nemo in cols 0559C–0570D is carried into the English, and none is added. The negation-dense passages, which is where the PL 196 defect class lives:
- 0560A (chunk 0010) — __Nec__ illud debet praeteriri … Si autem vestibuli, __non__ vestibulorum legitur … ab Hieronymo __non__ vestibuli, sed vestibulorum ponitur. All three carried; the second and third are load-bearing, since the whole paragraph turns on which of two readings is printed.
- 0560B (chunk 0010) — quod in praecedentibus __non__ dixerat … superius __nusquam__ descripserat … __nisi__ inter thalamos fuit? … __Nec__ unum tantummodo. All carried.
- 0561A (chunk 0010) — cujus utique omnino dici __non__ debuisset, si … jacuisset. Carried; dropping it would reverse the concession the sentence exists to make.
- 0561C (chunk 0010) — in frontibus portarum __non__ erit … __nullam__ de eis mentionem facit … __nisi__ ut per hoc idem de omnibus intelligi daretur. All carried.
- 0561C–D (chunk 0010) — quamvis Scriptura hoc __non__ videatur aperte determinare … quae ratio … latere __non__ sinit. Both carried.
- 0561D–0562A (chunk 0010) — the four rhetorical questions: utrum ratio patiatur orientalem portam __non__ habere … An aquilonarem portam __non__ habere … __Nunquid__ … __Nunquidnam__ horum __neutrum__ … quia … mentio __nulla__ facta fuit? Six negations in one run, all carried, and all four question marks stand.
- 0562A (chunk 0010) — quae juxta litteram stare __non__ possent … __Neminem__ ergo scandalizet … __Nemo__ dedignetur … __nemo__ miretur. All carried.
- 0562B (chunk 0010) — sed __nunquam__ verius honoramus … Attende ergo __non__ utrum dicam aliquid novum, sed verum … dum tamen __nihil__ dicam perversum. All three carried; the last is the epigram the paragraph closes on and it survives intact.
- 0562D–0563A (chunk 0011) — in diebus __non__ festis … haec porta (__nec__ mirum). Both carried; nec mirum is rendered "and no wonder," which keeps a negation on the page.
- 0563B (chunk 0011) — expositione __non__ indigent. Carried.
- 0563C–D (chunk 0011) — Atrium namque interius __non__ erat in latere hujus portae … __non__ uniformiter hoc semper accipere debemus … __nihil__ aliud erat __nisi__ unum altare. All carried. The first is the load-bearing one: it is the objection the whole chapter answers, and without it the chapter has no occasion.
- 0563D–0564A (chunk 0011) — quas … efferre __non__ licebat … ut __non__ efferant in atrium exterius … quae in exterius atrium efferri __prohibebantur__. All carried.
- 0564A (chunk 0011) — __non__ quod intra ipsam sit, sed quod secretiorem locum teneat … __nullus__ locus secretior et ab aditu portarum __nullus__ remotior. All three carried.
- 0564B (chunk 0011) — __Nihil__ itaque prohibet illum locum intelligere. Carried.
- 0564D (chunk 0011) — si dictum fuisset, quorumdam facies, __non__ quaedam facies … __non solum__ ibi una … ponitur, sed etiam. Both carried.
- 0565A (chunk 0011) — __non__ contra viam Aquilonis faciem habebant … et __non__ contra ea. Both carried, and they are the pair the sentence's whole distinction rests on.
- 0566B (chunk 0012) — __nondum__ ex praedictis puto posse probare … __necdum__ patet … in eumdem cathetum __non__ concurrunt, __nec__ … aequale spatium includunt. All four carried. The nondum/necdum pair matters: it is Richard deferring the proof, and either one dropped would turn a postponement into an assertion.
- 0566C (chunk 0012) — De hujus mensura __nihil__ hic dicitur. Carried.
- 0567A (chunk 0013) — ex eo quod __nulli__ caeterorum cohaesit. Carried — it is the etymology of separatum and the reason for the building's name.
- 0567D (chunk 0013) — Nam frustra ejus porticus quinquaginta cubitis a terra emineret, __nisi__ et coenaculum post se haberet. Carried; the argument is a reductio and collapses without it.
- 0568B (chunk 0013) — sed __nondum__ constat quantum intercapedinis includebant. Carried.
- 0569A (chunk 0013) — __Non__ igitur contra hujus atrii latitudinem quin potius contra domum dicta gazophylacia introitum haberent __nisi__ porticus … ex uno loco inciperet. Both carried, and this is the one to watch in the batch: the sentence is a contrary-to-fact conditional whose entire force is the non … nisi pair, and it is exactly the shape that invites a translator to smooth one of them away. The English keeps both ("would have their entry not over against the breadth of this court … unless the portico … began from one place").
- 0569C (chunk 0013) — __ne__ aliud quam aquilonare pavimentum … intelligere possimus … __nusquam__ invenimus porticum junctam porticui. Both carried.
- 0570A (chunk 0013) — __Nec__ nos movere debet quod idem aedificium, modo gazophylacia, modo gazophylacium dicitur. Carried.
- 0570B (chunk 0013) — plus quam triginta cubitos latitudinis habere __non__ poterat. Carried, including the comparative — this is the non plus quam class flagged at 11088 @0896C, and the figure it governs is load-bearing (see the 30 + 20 = 50 above).
No dropped negative, no intrusive negative, and no comparative reversal was found in chunks 0010–0013. The 0553A–B site recorded in cruces-0005.md has no counterpart in this range; the two places where the plate defeats its own argument here (0560B quadraginta, 0566D Scriturae) are a numeral and broken type, not polarity.
Also checked for the other three mechanisms of Pattern 7a:
- No opposite-word substitution. Every word in the four chunks that could have been quietly flipped to rescue a sentence was read against the Latin; the two places where a translator would be tempted (0560B quadraginta, which breaks the arithmetic it proves, and 0566D's broken chapter head) both stand as printed.
- No smoothed connective. The adversative chains at 0564A–B (Alia … ratione … Alia autem ratione), 0566B (Nam, licet … tamen) and 0569C–D (Sed … Nam … Sed) were read for the 8777 @0191B failure — a dropped negative papered over by re-weighting a sed. Each sed, tamen, licet, quin potius and nihilominus is rendered with its printed force.
- No mis-bound reference or agency. The relative-heavy passages at 0561C (quidquid post illam), 0564D (una facies … quae facies), 0567B (qui ejus gazophylacia quae ipsam supportabant cingebat) and 0569D (porticus, quae huic porticui juncta fuerat, ei … ex parte eam tangens, et ex majore sui relinquens) were each traced antecedent by antecedent. The 0569D sentence — three pronouns for two porticoes — is the hardest in the range and binds correctly in the English.
The u/n sweep
qnod for quod is confirmed three times in this work, once at 0589D (chunk 0018). Cols 0559C–0570D were swept for it and its relatives (nou, euim, antem, uon, Domiuus, qni, qnae, snnt, iu), and every hapax token in the four Latin chunks was listed and read individually rather than pattern-matched.
No u/n inversion occurs anywhere in chunks 0010–0013. The eight broken forms this range does carry (habenta, demidii, in fallor, contracuntem, totitem, Occiente, Scriturae, darietemque) are all other mechanisms: dropped letters, a d/p substitution, and one run-together. Recorded as a negative result so a later pass does not repeat the sweep.
Pattern 9 items (no English exponent — logged, English unchanged, do not churn)
- 0563B (chunk 0011) — Quatuor enim erant ad latus unum, duo intra vestibulum, et duo extra vestibulum. Similiter duo interius, et duo exterius… Masculine/neuter duo four times over for the feminine duae, of mensae. English numerals carry no gender. Translated normally; no marker. (The 0553D vestibularum precedent in
cruces-0005.md.) - 0570B (chunk 0013) — …usque ad terminum sanctificati quingentorum cubitorum ducentum viginti cubiti erant. A nominative plural ducenti printed as ducentum. Attested as an indeclinable use in medieval Latin and in any case without an English exponent — "two hundred and twenty" carries no case. Translated normally; no
[sic: …]. - 0567B (chunk 0013) — utrinque is printed correctly here. Noted only because
cruces-0005.mdlogs the utrumque / utrinque instability of 0546A and 0553B; this occurrence is sound and is not a third instance.
Cross-confirmation of a peer's conjecture — 0566D (chunk 0013)
cruces-0005.md records at 0549A that Migne prints __liber__ hoc loco … colligere, where the infinitive has no governing verb, and conjectures libet. Chunk 0013 confirms it. At 0566D the plate prints the same sentence-frame, seventeen columns later and correctly:
Libet hic, sicut et supra, in descriptione porticuum hinc inde Scriturae testimonia in unum colligere…
— libet + colligere, with Richard's own back-reference sicut et supra pointing at the 0549A passage. The peer's conjecture is now near-certain on the plate's own evidence. No edit is made to chunk 0006 (that is a peer's file), but the corroboration is recorded here so the conjecture can be upgraded when the work's cruces are next consolidated.
Conventions reconciled — two chunks were edited
Both edits are terminology, both bring a chunk into line with settled work-wide vocabulary, and both left every column anchor, [n: …], [sic: …] and ## head untouched. node scripts/verify-english.mjs 11553 passes after the edits.
- peribolus → "enclosure" (chunk 0013, four occurrences). The chunk had kept the word in italic Latin. The settled work-wide vocabulary renders it "enclosure," and
cruces-0014.mdargues the case: Richard glosses the word himself (ejus peribolus, id est, murus qui ejus gazophylacia … cingebat, 0567C — in this very chunk), so an English word is available and "enclosure" keeps it distinct from murus / paries, both of which are "wall." Changed at 0567B (its enclosure, that is, the wall which girded…), 0567C (in the lemma, And the enclosure, he says, the outer one…), 0567D (is named the outer enclosure) and 0569A (in the lemma, in the breadth of the enclosure of the court).
Flagged, not fixed: chunks 0019 (×2) and 0020 (×1) still keep the italic Latin, per the decision recorded in cruces-0018.md. With chunk 0013 conformed, the work now stands at six "enclosure" against three italic Latin, so the remaining three are the ones to sweep — but they are a peer's files and the change is not one this audit should make unilaterally. Recorded here and in the return so the sweep can be done in one pass.
- cathetus — "perpendicular" → "cathetus" (chunk 0012, one occurrence, 0566B). The chunk rendered in eumdem cathetum non concurrunt as "do not meet in the same perpendicular."
cruces-0014.mdsettles cathetus → "cathetus" for the geometrical demonstration at 0575D–0576A (chunk 0015), where it is one of three named parts of the right triangle alongside hypotemisa and basis and cannot be paraphrased without dissolving the argument. 0566B is the same term in the same geometry — the oblique line, the flat line, and the perpendicular they fail to meet in — and now reads "do not meet in the same cathetus."
Conventions applied without change (checked against the work-wide list)
porticus portico · vestibulum porch · atrium court · gazophylacium chamber · thalamus little chamber · cubitus cubit · mensa table · pavimentum pavement · altare holocausti altar of holocaust · aedificium building · coenaculum upper chamber · frons front · determinatio / determinare determination / determine · deambulatio walk (0569B, matching the peer convention at 0583C). All were verified present and consistent in all four chunks; none required an edit.
- Compass points are eastern / northern / southern / western throughout. Meridiana (0565A, of the way the singers' chamber faces) is rendered southern, the same as australis, per the compass rule — the two words are not distinguished in this work's argument, unlike the wind-name Notus that
cruces-0018.mdhad to keep at 0596A. ad mare in the Ezekiel lemma at 0568C is kept literal ("to the sea"), not converted to "west," because Richard does not gloss it as a compass point. - Roman numerals follow the plate. Chunk 0010 keeps
LandXXVRoman at 0559D–0560A where Migne sets them, and spells out quinquaginta / viginti quinque everywhere he spells them — including inside the same lemma, which is why the mixed run at 0559D–0560A looks inconsistent and is correct. Elsewhere in the four chunks Migne spells every numeral out and none has been converted. The[n: (Ezech. XLVI)]and[n: (Ezech. XLI)]notes keep their numerals verbatim, being citations. - Guillemet count is 0 in all four chunks, matching the Latin twin. Lemmata Migne sets in italics keep the italics; lemmata Richard re-quotes inside his own prose, which Migne sets unitalicized, take supplied straight quotes per Pattern 6 (0559D and he measured, he says, the gate; 0560A the vestibuli / vestibulorum debate; 0561B–C; 0563C; 0564B; 0564D; 0570A now "chambers," now "chamber").
- Sancta sanctorum follows the plate's casing — capitalized in the Ezek. XLI lemma at 0564A, as
cruces-0014.mdfixed for 0572D. - Chapter heads stand as
## CHAPTER X.…## CHAPTER XIII., per the work-wide sweep. The divergencecruces-0018.mdflagged for chunks 0005–0013 has been resolved in favour of the English form; nothing here reverts it.
Anchor sequence — recorded, NOT reported
Per the standing ruling, logged only so a later pass does not re-open it. Chunk 0013 opens on a bare, band-less [0566D] standing alone on its own line between the head and the first paragraph, exactly as the Latin twin does. Every other anchor in the four chunks is banded and in order (0559D–0562B, 0562C–0565B, 0565C–0566C, 0566D–0570D), and each chunk's first anchor follows its predecessor's last without a gap.
No text breaks mid-word across any anchor in these four chunks — each of the twenty-eight joins was checked. Several break mid-construction (0560B superius [0560B] nusquam descripserat; 0567D quinquaginta [0567D] cubitis; 0568D octoginta cubitorum [0568D] exstitit), which is normal positional transcription and not a defect. Reproduced verbatim; no [ed: …], no patch.
Candidates examined and rejected
Recorded so this audit can be told from one that did not read.
- 0562D lavantur where the argument has been about immolari — Si ad solam orientalem victimae lavantur in diebus non festis…, in a paragraph whose premise is ut super eas holocaustum immolari debeat. Not a defect: chunk 0010 has just established at 0561C–D that washing belongs to the gazophylacia and sacrificing to the mensae, and Richard is deliberately running the dilemma across both offices. Rendered as printed, no crux.
- 0563D quas tamen … reponebant with no expressed subject — the subject sacerdotes stands in the preceding clause. Ordinary Latin ellipsis, not a defect.
- 0564A Sic thalamus interior aula dici solet — read for a lost word (aulae?), rejected: the sentence construes as printed, and the following non quod intra ipsam sit fixes aula as the thing the chamber is called. Rendered normally.
- 0567B in superioribus humiliora in the Ezek. 42:5 lemma — considered for a
[var: …], and not marked. The divergence from the received text, if any, is one of word-order and does not change the sense Richard draws (that the upper chambers were lower because they carried the porticoes), and Pattern 14 explicitly requires the sense to turn on it. Rendered as printed. - 0568C versumque ad viam respicientem ad mare — the -que has nothing to co-ordinate inside the lemma as printed. Read as loose lemma-stitching rather than broken type; rendered as printed, no marker.
- Chunk 0010's
[sic: habenta]sitting inside a partly-italic lemma — checked that no nested italics were produced and that the marker's content is a verbatim substring of the Latin twin. It is. Same check run on all eight[sic: …]markers in the range; all pass. - Anchor
[0566D]alone on its own line in chunk 0013 — checked against the Latin twin, which does the same. Not an[ed: …]case; nothing is lost. heads:frontmatter still readingCAPUT X.etc. while the body readsCHAPTER X.— left alone. The frontmatter mirrors the Latin twin's field and the verifier aligns on it; changing it is a pipeline decision, not a translation one.
Chunks found wholly clean
- Chunk 0011 (cols 0562B–0565B) carries no error of ours and no numerical defect. Its three carried runs (demidii, in fallor, contracuntem) are Migne's and were already marked; its arithmetic (4 + 4 = 8 tables; 1½ × 1½ × 1) closes; its one dittography (Sic utique sic at 0564A) was correctly marked
[d: so]under Pattern 11 and the repetition is printed, not suppressed — checked against the Latin twin, which prints sic twice. Every negation is carried. Nothing was edited. - Chunk 0010 (cols 0559C–0562B) is clean apart from the quadraginta of 0560B, which is Migne's and correctly rendered as printed, and the Pattern 8 full stop closing the Cur ergo question at 0561C. Its long peroration on the Fathers and the gleaned ears (0562A–B) was read with particular care, being the only stretch of free rhetoric in the range and so the easiest place to paraphrase; it is rendered clause for clause, and its five negations all stand. Nothing was edited.
- Chunk 0012 (cols 0565B–0566C) is clean apart from two carried runs (totitem, Occiente), the unconstruable utrum utrobique, and the one terminology fix recorded above. It contains the batch's only exact independent computation, (140 − 5) ÷ 15 = 9, and it is right.
- Chunk 0013 (cols 0566C–0570D) is the longest and most figure-dense chunk in the work (1,589 words, eleven distinct measurements). Two carried runs (Scriturae, darietemque), one broken chapter head, one arithmetical tension at 0569A–B, and the peribolus fix. Every other sum in it closes exactly, including the three-stage 220.
Richard of St Victor, PL 196, cols 0571A–0585. Rendered under translation-style.md Pattern 7 / 7a: the printed reading stands in the English, the conjecture lives here.
Carried type (Patterns 10 + 12 — [sic: …] in the English)
- col 0574D (chunk 0015) — "Hoc tamen inter ista et orientale et pavimentum fuit, quod iliud secundum unam dimensionem octoginta cubitos … habuerit."
iliudis not a word; near-certainly illud (l/i confusion, a standard Migne compositor slip), and the following verbs (habuerit … possedit) require a neuter singular subject. Carried untranslated in italics inside[sic: iliud].
The same sentence carries a second defect which is not marked, because it is a real word doing the wrong work: "inter ista et orientale et pavimentum" will not construe. The sense demands inter ista et orientale pavimentum ("between these and the eastern pavement"), and the whole paragraph is a comparison of the two lateral pavements with the eastern one. The intruding second et is rendered as printed ("between these and the eastern and the pavement"), which is unconstruable English because the Latin is unconstruable Latin.
- col 0585A (chunk 0017) — "ostium unum ad viam Aquilenis" in the Ezekiel lemma (Ezek. 41:11).
Aquilenisis not a word; Aquilonis is certain — the very next clause pairs it with ad viam australem, and the work prints Aquilonis dozens of times elsewhere. Carried untranslated inside[sic: Aquilenis]. Per Pattern 10 the run takes no inner italic asterisks, because it sits inside an already-italic scripture lemma and nested italics are not expressible.
Scripture divergence from the received text ([var: …])
- col 0584A–B (chunk 0017) — the sharpest site in this batch. Migne's lemma at Ezek. 41:7 prints "Idcirco satius erat templum in superioribus", and then, eight lines later, Richard re-quotes his own lemma as "Quod autem ait, idcirco latius erat templum in superioribus" and builds the entire following argument on latius ("wider"): the sides do not reach the upper storeys, "et idcirco templi amplitudo ibi latior erat". The Vulgate reads latius. So the plate contradicts itself between the lemma and its own gloss, half a column apart.
Both are rendered as printed — "the temple was preferable in the upper parts" in the lemma, "the temple was wider in the upper parts" in the gloss — with [var: Vulg. latius, "wider"] beside the lemma. No [sic: …]: satius is a real Latin word, merely the wrong one (Pattern 12's boundary). Conjecture: latius, effectively certain, on the strength of Richard's own re-quotation.
- col 0581C (chunk 0016) — Ezek. 41:1 is printed "mensus est frontes sex cubitos latitudinis hinc, et sex cubitos altitudinis inde"; the Vulgate has latitudinis in both members. Marked
[var: Vulg. reads "of breadth" in the second member also, not "of height"]and rendered as printed. This one is emphatically not to be repaired: Richard reads the divergence deliberately and expounds it at length ("Secundum metitur non quid latitudinis ex alio latere exstiterit … sed quid altitudinis a superioribus portae usque ad primum coenaculum fuerit"), and the six-cubit height is the figure from which he later derives the height of both gates and of the upper chamber (0583B–C). His text is the divergent one; a conventional Ezekiel would destroy the argument.
- col 0572C (chunk 0014) — Ezek. 46:20 is printed "ubi coquent sacerdotes pro delicto et pro peccato"; the Vulgate has coquant (subjunctive) and the order pro peccato et pro delicto. Rendered as printed. No
[var: …]: neither the mood nor the order changes the sense, and Richard's argument turns only on locus and vergens ad Occidentem.
Readings rendered literally though they will not construe
- col 0571D (chunk 0014) — "Quam autem vestibulum habebat, Scriptura illa determinat. Quae via erat ante vestibulum separatum." The relative Quam has no expressed antecedent; the scriptural clause that follows supplies via, so the intended reading is almost certainly Quam autem viam vestibulum habebat. Rendered "But which [way] the porch had, that Scripture determines", with the supplied noun in brackets — the minimum needed to put the feminine accusative into English at all, and flagged here rather than concealed.
- col 0572A (chunk 0014) — "pro amore suo nominat viam quae ab Aquilone…" pro amore suo ("for his own love") is odd of a naming-practice; the expected phrase is pro more suo, "after his custom", which is exactly what the sentence is about (Richard is explaining Ezekiel's habitual way of naming that road). One letter. Rendered as printed — "he names, for his own love, that way…" — because amor is a real word and can be rendered; the conjecture stays here.
- col 0573D (chunk 0015) — "quod superficietenus in omnem partem absque omni ambiguo centum cubitorum erat, sed illud: Et mensus est atrium…" sed illud introduces a proof-text with no verb and no construction; secundum illud ("according to that word") is the standard formula and is what the sense requires. Rendered as printed ("but that: And he measured the court…").
- col 0575D–0576A (chunk 0015) — "Hujus autem trianguli basim … ejus quae hypotemisam, id est, lineam inclinatam si quantumlibet protraxeris…" ejus quae will not construe with the accusative hypotemisam; the expected reading is ejusque hypotemisam ("and its hypotenuse"), which the parallel accusatives (basim … hypotemisam … cathetum) require. Rendered as closely as the printed words allow ("and of it which the hypotenuse"), which is deliberately awkward English for deliberately awkward Latin.
- col 0582B (chunk 0016) — "Quod igitur dicit portam sex cubitorum, ipsum hiatum inter ejecturas intelligere." A bare infinitive with no governing verb — an anacoluthon; the parallel sentence immediately following supplies oportet referre, so oportet intelligere is what is wanted. Rendered with the supplied copula in brackets: "In that therefore he says the gate of six cubits, [is] to understand the opening itself between the projections."
- col 0576D (chunk 0015) — "et de tertio et intimo thalamo dicitur esse:" followed by the lemma. The construction is loose (dicitur with a bare esse and no predicate). Rendered literally, "and of the third and innermost little chamber it is said to be:".
Numerals — the arithmetic, checked figure by figure
This volume has a documented history of corrupt measurements (cf. 0559A in chunk 0009), so every figure in these four chunks was checked against Richard's own reckoning. All of them agree, and one of them agrees remarkably:
- 0571A–C — outer-court chambers: 90 cubits ÷ X chambers = 9 each; ten on each side = the twenty of the later lemma. Consistent.
- 0572B–0573B — 70 cubits beyond the northern house = 10 (interval) + 50 (portico) + 10 (walk); the corner space 30 × 20 halves into 30 × 10 kitchens + 30 × 10 walk. Consistent.
- 0573C — 20 + 60 + 20 = 100 across the inner court. Consistent.
- 0574A — 200 + 100 + 200 = 500 from extremity to extremity. Consistent.
- 0575C–D, 0575D–0576A — the geometrical demonstration is exact: five sections of 20 give A F = 100, A E = 80, E K = 60; 80–60–100 is a true right triangle, and Richard's ratios sexquiquarta (hypotenuse : base = 100 : 80 = 5 : 4) and sexquitertia (base : cathetus = 80 : 60 = 4 : 3) are both correct. The rise of the mountain follows from it and also checks: 0.75 × (60 + 80 + 60 + 80) = 210, the figure printed at 0576A; and 0.75 × 60 = 45, the figure printed three lines later. Nothing here is corrupt.
- 0576B — 5 cubits = 7½ feet, one step per foot, seven or eight steps. Consistent.
- 0576C–D — 13 + 2 = 15; 15 + 25 = 40; 40 + 5 = 45; 45 + 45 = 90. Consistent throughout, and the 45 matches the 45 derived geometrically above.
- 0580, 0581C–D — porch 5 + 10 + 5 = 20; temple 20 wide, opening 8 + 1 + 1 = 10 leaves, leaving 6 on each side. Consistent.
- 0582B–C — opening 6 + ½ + ½ = 7 leaves; (20 − 6) ÷ 2 = 7 on either side. Consistent.
- 0583A–C — height 20 (double the tabernacle) gives gates of 14 and 13 (20 − 6, 20 − 7); height 30 (equal to Solomon's) would give 24. Both branches compute correctly.
- 0583D — three sides of 6 cubits fit beneath a 20-cubit storey; 3 within + 30 without = the 33 of bis triginta tria. Consistent.
- 0585A–0586A — breadth 20 + 4 + 4 + 6 + 6 = 40; + 4 + 4 + 5 + 5 = 58; + 1 + 1 = 60. Length 40 + 20 + 11 + 24 + 5 = 100. Both totals are exactly the figures Richard names.
The one numerical tension worth recording
- col 0574A vs 0574C (chunk 0015) — at 0574A the inner porticoes "sexaginta cubitorum mensuram intra parietes tenebant"; at 0574C, deriving the wall thickness, "constat unamquamque quinquaginta cubitos tantum intra parietes habere". Read of the same dimension the two are incompatible; read together they yield the wall thickness Richard wants (60 outer − 5 − 5 = 50 inner), which is precisely the inference he draws. Most probably the first intra parietes is loose for the sixty-cubit frons measured overall. Both are rendered as printed; no figure is altered. Recorded because it is the only place in these four chunks where two printed measurements of one object differ.
Pattern 9 items (no English exponent — logged, English unchanged)
- col 0573B (chunk 0014) — "illud superius designatum ejusdem magnitudini spatium": a dative where the genitive ejusdem magnitudinis is required. English "of the same magnitude" carries no case; nothing to render either way.
- col 0581D (chunk 0016) — "latitudo templi intra parietas solummodo viginti cubitorum fuit": an analogical accusative plural for parietes. Translated normally ("within the walls"), on the 0553D vestibularum precedent in
cruces-0005.md— a declension slip has no English exponent and takes no[sic: …]. - col 0582A (chunk 0016) — "in [0583A] his verbis describit" … "Quam autem longitudo et latitudo interioris domus in his verbis describitur": quam where quod would be expected. Rendered "But how…", which the adverbial quam will bear.
Punctuation carried per Pattern 8
- col 0576B (chunk 0015) — "…octo gradus tantummodo habeat? quis sic sapiat?" The plate sets a question mark and then continues in lower case. The English reproduces both the mark and the lower-case opening ("…only eight steps? who would think so?"); no capital is supplied.
- col 0584C (chunk 0017) — "…quod superius de calami mensura jam diximus, et vidi, inquit." A comma where a colon or full stop is expected, joining Richard's own clause to the resumed lemma. Reproduced as one sentence.
Negation fidelity (Pattern 7a)
Every printed non / nec / nisi / nihil / nullus / nunquam / ne in cols 0571A–0585 is carried into the English, and none is added. The negation-dense passages were read against the Latin word by word:
- 0572A "et non illa de quibus nihil dixit" — both carried.
- 0574C "nihil ejus mensurae confert, vel detrahit" — carried as "contributes nothing to its measure, nor takes anything away"; the second verb's negation is inherited from nihil in the Latin and is made explicit by "nor", not supplied.
- 0574D "nonnisi octoginta cubitos" — rendered "no more than eighty cubits", which keeps a negation on the page; "only eighty" was rejected because it erases it.
- 0581C–D "Secundum metitur non quid latitudinis … Alioquin non possumus" — both carried.
- 0582C–D "aperte non dixit … omnino non dicit … nisi quod debeamus" — all three carried.
- 0583D "non plus quam tria latera … non habebant", 0584A "non usquequaque … et non attingerent" — all carried.
- 0584B "non usquequaque pertingebant, vel … omnino non erant … obstacula … nulla habebat" — three in one sentence, all carried.
- 0584D "qui templum ingredi vel non possent, vel non auderent", 0585A "nec locum orationis dixerat, nec quod in circuitu" — all carried; the second pair required a supplied "[said]" to put the second nec into English, bracketed.
No confirmed dropped- or intrusive-negative site was found in chunks 0014–0017. The 0553A–B site recorded in cruces-0005.md has no counterpart here; the two places where the printed text contradicts itself in this batch (0574D et orientale et pavimentum, 0584A–B satius / latius) are lexical, not polarity, defects.
Conventions decided here, beyond the work-wide list
- peribolus → "enclosure." Richard glosses the word himself twice — "ejus peribolus, id est, murus qui ejus gazophylacia … cingebat" (0567C, chunk 0013) and "sed peribolum ejus exteriorem, id est parietem illum quem ad exteriora habebat" (0594B, chunk 0019) — so an English word is available and the argument survives it. "Enclosure" keeps it distinct from murus / paries, both of which are "wall". Chunks 0013 and 0019 carry the other four occurrences; if their agents chose otherwise, theirs is the larger share and this should follow them.
- hiatus → "opening" and ambitus → "compass" — load-bearing at 0580–0582D, where Richard's whole distinction of the three senses of porta (door / opening / surrounding ornamented wall) depends on keeping the three words apart. ejectura → "projection" (matching ejectura muri → "projection of the wall" in
cruces-0005.md), valva → "leaf", copula valvarum → "coupling of the leaves". - deambulatio → "walk" (the ten-cubit way) and deambulatorium → "walk" at 0583C; tabulatum → "planking" per the peer convention.
- sexquiquarta / sexquitertia (0576A) are kept in italic Latin, unexpanded and with Migne's sex- spelling. They are technical ratio-names with no single-word English exponent, and the register rule keeps such terms in Latin; the values are verified above. No
[sic: …]— sesqui- / sexqui- is an attested medieval orthography (Pattern 9). - hypotemisa → "hypotenuse", cathetus → "cathetus" — the first is the standard medieval form of hypotenusa and is translated normally under Pattern 9; the second has no ordinary English equivalent and is kept.
- arduitas montis → "the steepness of the mountain" (chapter head of Cap. XV).
CAPUT XVprints with no following period at col 0573D. The English head reproduces that, asCAPUT IIIwas reproduced without its period incruces-0000.md.- Guillemet count is 0 in all four chunks, matching the Latin twin. Lemmata that Migne sets in italics keep the italics; lemmata Richard re-quotes inside his own prose, which Migne sets unitalicized, take supplied straight quotes per Pattern 6 (0571A, 0580–0582B, 0584B, 0584D).
- sanctum sanctorum follows the plate's own casing — lower case in Richard's prose (0582A, 0583A, 0586A), capitalized Sancta sanctorum where Migne capitalizes it inside the lemma at 0572D.
- Notus (0573B lemma) → "the south", matching the work-wide australis → southern rather than keeping the wind-name.
Anchor sequence — recorded, NOT reported
Per the standing ruling, logged only so that a later pass does not re-open it. Chunk 0015 ends [0577] [0579], both bare and band-less, with [0578] never appearing; chunk 0016 opens at the bare [0580]; chunk 0017 runs [0585A] … [0586A] … [0585], i.e. out of order and ending on a bare anchor, and the next chunk opens at [0587A]. All are normal positional transcription. No text breaks mid-word or mid-construction across any anchor in these four chunks — each was checked at the join. Reproduced verbatim; no [ed: …], no patch.
Chunks found otherwise clean
0014 (cols 0571A–0573C) carries no broken type at all and no numerical defect; its only entries above are the Quam autem vestibulum ellipsis at 0571D and the pro amore suo of 0572A, both real words rendered as printed. Its arithmetic is sound at every point.
Richard of St Victor, PL 196, cols 0587A–0600C — the closing four chunks of the work. Rendered under translation-style.md Pattern 7 / 7a: the printed reading stands in the English, the conjecture lives here.
Carried type (Patterns 7 / 10 / 12 — [sic: …] in the English)
0588B (chunk 0018) — Ante solaria for antesolaria
__Ante solaria__ quaedam intelligimus esse istas ethecas, quas, ut Hieronymus in his verbis testatur, Romae vocant solaria de coenaculorum parietibus eminentia…
Read as printed, ante solaria is "before the lofts," which strands the neuter plural quaedam with no noun to modify (ethecas is feminine). The word required is antesolaria, and Migne himself prints it as one word twelve lines later, at 0588D: per limina solariorum situs __antesolariorum__ exprimuntur. So the plate divides at 0588B a compound it sets whole at 0588D. Split type per Pattern 10; the whole run is carried, including the real word Ante, and marked [sic: Ante solaria].
Conjecture: antesolaria, certain on the plate's own evidence.
0589D (chunk 0018) — qnod for quod
Angulos itaque vocat, eo __qnod__ angulos tenerent ligna illa… u/n inversion, the standard Migne compositor slip already logged twice in this work (0535C latitudiuis, 0544C qninquaginta). Not a word; carried untranslated in italics, [sic: qnod]. Conjecture: quod, certain.
0590D (chunk 0018) — sta for ista
…quae ab eo loco incipiebat ubi __sta__ porticus porticui aquilonaris domus juncta erat… A dropped initial letter; sta is not a Latin word in this position. Carried untranslated in italics, [sic: sta]. Conjecture: ista ("that portico"), near-certain — Richard uses ista porticus of this same triple portico repeatedly in Capp. XIII–XVII.
0598A (chunk 0021) — altars for altaris
Erat itaque suprema extremitas __altars__, vel coronae, ubi altare terminabatur… A dropped i; not a word. Carried untranslated in italics, [sic: altars]. Conjecture: altaris, certain — the genitive is required by extremitas, and the plate prints altaris correctly in the same sentence's neighbours (0597D, 0598B, 0598C).
Readings rendered literally though they will not construe
0587B (chunk 0018) — hunc inde for hinc inde
…unde constat inter templum et utramque domum __hunc inde__ quadraginta cubitos fuisse… The phrase Richard uses throughout the work for "on this side and on that" is hinc inde (0588B in this very chunk, 0590D, and passim). hunc is a real Latin word (masculine accusative of hic) and therefore takes no [sic: …] under Pattern 12's boundary, but it governs nothing here and leaves inde stranded. Rendered as closely as the printed words allow — "there were, this one thence, forty cubits" — rather than smoothed to the idiom. Conjecture: hinc inde.
0591B (chunk 0018) — Nondum sane where the argument requires Notandum sane
Ostium unum ad Aquilonem. __Nondum sane__, quia quod prius quasi singulariter posuit, postea pluraliter designavit.
Nondum ("not yet") answers nothing in the preceding sentence and leaves the quia clause without a main verb. Notandum sane — "it must indeed be noted" — is Richard's standing formula and supplies exactly what is wanted; he uses it at 0588A in this chunk, at 0594B in chunk 0019, and at 0558B, 0558C, 0558D, 0559C earlier in the work. The corruption is t→n, a→u, d dropped.
This is a negation site and the printed negation is carried: the English reads "Not yet indeed, because what he first set down as if in the singular, he afterward marked out in the plural," which does not follow, exactly as the Latin does not follow. No repair, no marker.
0591D–0592A (chunk 0019) — de interioribus aedificii where the lemma reads de inferioribus
__Inferior__ porticus de __interioribus__ aedificii eminebat, quia supra gazophylacia sita erat, quae __inferioribus__ aedificiis respondebant. __Superior__ porticus de __mediis__ aedificii eminebat…
The sentence pair is built as a strict parallel on the scripture Richard is glossing, which he quotes twice in these two chunks: Eminebant de __inferioribus__, et de __mediis__ aedificii (0592C, and again at 0595D). The lower portico must therefore project de inferioribus, not de interioribus — and the same sentence's own relative clause (quae inferioribus aedificiis respondebant) prints inferioribus correctly.
Rendered as printed ("The lower portico projected from the inner parts of the building"), which breaks the parallel on the page as the plate breaks it. interioribus is a real word, so no [sic: …]. Conjecture: inferioribus, effectively certain.
0597C (chunk 0020) — ut inimicitias vitaret
Forte ergo ut __inimicitias__ vitaret, imo absque dubio certi causa mysterii, ut plenum mysticumque numerum exprimeret, minores hoc loco calamos posuit…
"Enmities" has no antecedent: the whole passage is about why the prophet reckoned in the lesser reed rather than the greater, and nothing hostile is in view. Something in the class of inaequalitates / ambiguitates is what the argument wants. The word is real and translatable, so it is rendered as printed ("that he might avoid enmities") and no conjecture is offered here with any confidence — the reading is corrupt past secure restoration, and is marked rather than adjudicated (the 9604 boundary).
Punctuation carried per Pattern 8
- 0589B–C (chunk 0018) — Sequentibus autem verbis videtur exprimere non tantummodo modum quantitatis, sed etiam facturam operis — the plate prints no terminal stop; the next line opens Ait itaque:. No stop is supplied in the English. (The same defect was logged at 0556D in chunk 0008; it is a recurring habit of this stint of the plate.)
- 0589D (chunk 0018) — Et locutus est ad me haec est mensa coram Domino. Migne prints no punctuation between me and haec, where the quotation opens. Reproduced unpunctuated.
- 0599B (chunk 0021) — …et longe post in sequentibus. quasi diceret, erit in omni praedicto sanctific… A full stop followed by a lower-case quasi. Both are reproduced.
Migne's abbreviations in the Cap. XX glosses (0599B–0599C) — decision recorded
The italic gloss paragraphs opening Cap. XX are set very tight and Migne abbreviates inside them: sanctific. twice, and sanctuar, (with a comma where the period belongs). These are translated, not carried. Reasoning: an abbreviation is not broken type — it is legible, unambiguous (the unabbreviated sanctificatum / sanctuarium stand in the same sentence and in the scripture blocks immediately below), and it has a full English exponent. Marking them [sic: …] would blame Migne for a defect where he merely compressed, and would bury the four genuine carried runs above in noise, which is the argument Pattern 9 makes. The stray comma after sanctuar is reproduced as a comma, per Pattern 8.
Numerals — checked, and internally consistent throughout
Logged as verified results, since this volume has a documented history of corrupt measurements and this work has already produced one (0559A).
- 0587A–B (chunk 0018) — separate building 100 cubits between the northern and southern house, plus 20 cubits of space on either side = 140 across, as printed; and of that 140, "the remaining sixty" is the temple's breadth, leaving 40 on each side. 40 + 60 + 40 = 140. Consistent.
- 0587B–C (chunk 0018) — the slope argument: the court is 40 by the level and 50 on the surface, and Richard says 100 : 80 :: 50 : 40. Both are 5 : 4. Consistent, and it matches the 100/80 pair established for the other courts earlier in the work.
- 0588A (chunk 0018) — the whole court 140 long (S→N) × 100 broad (toward the East); a single part beside the temple 100 long × 50 broad. Consistent with the 50-on-the-surface figure just above.
- 0590A–B (chunk 0018) — wall of six cubits' thickness holding two doors, inner and outer; matches the six-cubit reed of 0597A. Consistent.
- 0592A–D (chunk 0019) — earth higher by 60 on the temple side; the first upper chamber projects 50; difference 10, which is exactly the figure printed. Total height 50 + 50 + 50 = 150, as printed. Consistent.
- 0592B (chunk 0019) — chambers 50 long and "not more than nine cubits" broad; six porticoes divided into seven portions. No arithmetic to check, no conflict with the rest.
- 0597A–C (chunk 0020) — the reed identity, and it checks exactly. The wall is 500 reeds and also 500 cubits; the reed is six cubits; Richard resolves it by a lesser reed of one cubit and a palm, and states "octoginta et tres calami cum triente de majoribus complent quingentos de minoribus." 83⅓ × 6 = 500. Exact. This is the most load-bearing computation in the four chunks and the plate has it right.
- 0597D–0600A (chunk 0021) — the altar. Height 5; 12 × 12 up to the end of the fourth cubit; a projection of 1 cubit each way from the fourth cubit up, giving 14 × 14 at the fifth. The lemmas then print Ariel duodecim cubitorum (12) and crepido quatuordecim cubitorum (14), and the Ariel's height is 4, which is exactly the distance from the greater brink (14, the projection's base) to the lesser (12, the altar's base). The crown takes the upper half of the topmost cubit, the remaining half lying below it. Every figure closes. Consistent throughout.
- 0599B–0600C (chunk 0021) — the land: 25,000 × 10,000 twice over (priests' portion and Levites'), with the sanctified square 500 × 500 four-square and 50 cubits of suburbs. Agrees with Ezek. 45 as printed and with the 500-cubit wall of 0596D above.
Negation fidelity (Pattern 7a)
Every printed non / nec / neque / nisi / nunquam / nullus / nihil / nondum in cols 0587A–0600C is carried into the English, and none is added. The negation-dense passages were read against the Latin clause by clause:
- 0588C–D (chunk 0018) — videtur determinare velle interius sanctuarium ejusmodi caelaturas __non__ habere … __Ne__ enim altiores vel demissiores ipsis coenaculis putarentur. Both carried.
- 0589A (chunk 0018) — __non solum__ interius, sed etiam extrinsecus. Carried.
- 0590B (chunk 0018) — __ne__ muri latitudinem excederet dum aperiretur. Carried.
- 0591B (chunk 0018) — ut __nesciamus__ utrum aliquid (__nisi__ forte pro litterae expositione) ad praedicta addere debeamus. Both carried.
- 0592A (chunk 0019) — Sed quis __nesciat__…? … __Ne__ ergo putaremus terram ab una parte sexaginta cubitis cavatam fuisse. Both carried; the second is the load-bearing one, since dropping it would reverse Richard's whole account of the terracing.
- 0592C (chunk 0019) — in his vero __nullae__ erant, and the lemma columnas __non__ habebant. Both carried.
- 0592B (chunk 0019) — quae tamen __non plus quam__ novem cubitorum latitudinis … __non tam__ videntur parietibus interseptae, quam columnis distinctae. Both carried, including the comparative non plus quam, which is the class flagged at 11088 @0896C.
- 0592D (chunk 0019) — Inferior autem porticus __non ubique__ a terra quinquaginta cubitis eminebat. Carried; this one matters, because without it the sentence asserts the opposite of the ten-cubit correction that follows.
- 0595B (chunk 0020) — longitudinem ante templum centum cubitos, secundum planum habere __non__ posse … quod secundum plani considerationem omnino habere __non__ potuit. Both carried, and the pair is coherent as printed.
- 0595D (chunk 0020) — et eadem replicare __non__ debemus. Carried.
- 0596B (chunk 0020) — __ne__ duo habendo aliarum in hoc aedium formam excederet. Carried.
- 0597A (chunk 0020) — Sed diversitatem calamorum intelligere __nil__ obstat … ad sui testimonium __minus__ sufficere videtur. Both carried; minus is rendered "less," not inverted.
- 0598D (chunk 0021) — cur cubitum unum prius __non__ posuit … __nisi__ quod majorem numerum Latinorum more prius ponere voluit? Both carried, and the question mark stands as printed.
- 0597D (chunk 0021) — et eadem replicare __non__ debemus. Carried.
No confirmed dropped- or intrusive-negative site was found in chunks 0018–0021. The two sites where the plate defeats its own argument (0591B Nondum sane, 0591D interioribus) are corruptions of adjacent words, not of a negation, and both are rendered as printed.
Conventions decided here, beyond the work-wide list
- ethecae — kept in italic Latin throughout (the 0000–0004 precedent for exedrae / ethecae), because Richard glosses the word from Jerome rather than translating it, and the gloss is the point of the passage at 0588B.
- antesolarium → fore-loft (0588D). Coined against the settled solarium → "loft", and required to keep it distinct from both solarium and coenaculum → "upper chamber" in a sentence that uses all three.
- peribolus — kept in italic Latin (0593B, 0594B, 0595B). Richard's argument at 0594B turns on distinguishing the peribolus exterior from the portico itself, and he supplies his own English-equivalent gloss in the next clause (id est parietem illum quem ad exteriora habebat); translating the head-word would pre-empt his gloss. Where it falls inside an italic scripture lemma it takes no second marker, nested italics not being expressible.
- mansio → storey (0591C), in in triplicem mansionem distinguebatur — the sense is demonstrably a tier, not a dwelling: the same sentence resolves it into chambers below, one upper chamber in the middle, and another at the top.
- crepido → brink (0598B–0600A), following Richard's own gloss praeruptionem, vel praecisionem alicujus planitiei, vel superficiei. "Ledge" was considered and rejected as too flat for praeruptio.
- definitio → definition (0597D–0598A), kept rather than idiomatized, because Richard immediately glosses it: Hoc loco definitio idem est quod terminatio.
- Notum (0596A, Ezek. 42:12) → the south wind, not "the south". The compass rule fixes australis → southern, and Migne here prints the wind's proper name in a passage that names the other three as winds (ventum orientalem, aquilonarem, australem, occidentalem, 0596C–D); rendering Notum as a bare compass point would erase that.
- Ariel — kept untranslated as the proper name Migne prints, with his own gloss leo fortis → "strong lion" left in the italics he sets.
propitiatorium et propitiatorium(0598D) is NOT dittography and takes no[d: …]. Richard has just quoted the LXX as reading a propitiatorio minori usque ad propitiatorium majus, and the following clause says these two places are the two crepidines: the repetition names the lesser and the greater propitiatory in turn. Rendered plainly, "designating by propitiatory and propitiatory the same places."- Re-quoted lemmata inside Richard's own prose take supplied straight quotes
" "per Pattern 6, never guillemets and never italics the plate lacks. The one guillemet pair in these four chunks is the III Reg. VI, 34 quotation at 0590B, which Migne prints — count 1 : 1 with the Latin twin, as verified. - Latin word-forms the argument turns on stay in italic Latin: earum / eorum at 0591B, where Richard is explicitly weighing which gender is read.
- Roman numerals: Migne spells out every numeral in these four chunks; none is set in Roman, and none has been converted.
A divergence from chunks 0005–0013 that needs a sweep, not a silent choice
These four chunks translate the chapter head-word: CAPUT XVII. → CHAPTER XVII., per the settled CAPUT PRIMUM → "CHAPTER THE FIRST." convention recorded in cruces-0000.md and per the standing rule that ## head text is translated.
The work is currently inconsistent about this. Chunks 0000–0004 translate it (CHAPTER THE FIRST, CHAPTER II, CHAPTER III, CHAPTER IV); chunks 0005–0013 leave it as CAPUT V. … CAPUT XII. This is flagged rather than resolved unilaterally: the fix is a one-line sweep of the English heads in 0005–0013 (and of 0014–0017 if the same choice was made there), not an edit any single agent should make to a peer's files.