These are the edition's working notes, published as they were written. They record, work by work, where Migne's plate is defective or the reading uncertain: the printed form, what the English does with it, and why. They are not a groomed apparatus. Where a note argues with itself, withdraws an earlier decision, or leaves a question open, that is the record of how the reading was actually reached, and it is left standing — a conjecture that is visible can be checked, and one that has been tidied away cannot.
The English never silently repairs the page. A construable but wrong reading is rendered literally and the conjecture is recorded here, never applied to the text. How the English is produced and checked →
Translated 2026-08-08 by twenty-one Opus agents over 126 chunks (134,020 Latin words), each range of six logging to its own cruces-NNNN.md. Those twenty-one files are the record and are unabridged; this file is the merge. It exists because a work split across twenty-one agents who cannot see one another will drift on its load-bearing vocabulary, and reconciling that is a required pipeline step (translation-runbook.md step 4), not a tidy-up. Concatenating is the easy half.
Work totals after the eleven-reader blind polarity read and the whole-apparatus audit (§7): 101 [var:] · 50 [sic:] · 0 [ed:] · 0 [d:] · 0 [nt:] · 0 [f:] · 719 [n:] (719 in the Latin twins — exact parity). verify-english.mjs clean at 126/126: columns, notes and sections aligned, no duplicate paragraphs. EN/LA word ratio 1.56 work-wide (209,013 / 134,020).
§1 · WORK-WIDE CONVENTIONS — RULED AND APPLIED. DO NOT RE-DECIDE.
These are settled and swept. They are set down here with their reasons so that a later sweep does not churn them, and so that a reader can tell a considered choice from an accident.
Divisions. tomus = "Tome" / liber = "book" is inherited from 11638 — but this work has no tomi. Its divisions are liber = book (six of them), caput = chapter, volumen = volume (135 instances, none of them a division of the work). The tomus/liber collapse that cost 11638 sixteen sweep sites cannot arise here in that shape; the 11638 rule stands only in case a tomus ever turns up. INCIPIT = "HERE BEGINS", EXPLICIT = "Here ends".
CAPUT PRIMUM = "CHAPTER THE FIRST." — ruled and swept 2026-08-08. Seven sites: chunks 0002, 0003 ((cont.)), 0026, 0047, 0069, 0091, 0108. The ranges had split 3–3 against "CHAPTER ONE."; the three were swept. "Chapter the First" is the right side of that split because PRIMUM is an ordinal spelled out, and it is the spelled-out-ness that carries Migne's own contrast with the 179 numeral chapters that follow. "Chapter One" is a cardinal and flattens exactly the distinction the plate makes. ✅ Verified: 7 ## CAPUT PRIMUM in the Latin, 7 ## CHAPTER THE FIRST in the English, 0 ## CHAPTER ONE.
⭐ amica mea (Cant. 1:8) = "my friend", NOT "my love." Ruled from Caput V, where Philip glosses the word and proves it from John 15:14's amici mei. The lemma recurs at Cant. 2:10, 2:13, 4:1, 4:7, 5:2, 6:3 — nearly every range met it. ✅ 20 Latin amica mea, 17 English "my friend"; the three shortfalls are re-quotations absorbed into Philip's own syntax, not drift. The one English "my love" in the whole work (0122 @0480D) renders mea dilectio, not amica mea, and is correct — checked, no edit.
⭐ muraenula stays italic Latin. Caput VIII's whole argument is that the word names a fish (Muraenula piscis est…) and the chapter runs tail-to-mouth → ring → net-mesh → chain → Moses' head-and-tail offering. "Chains of gold" makes seventeen paragraphs explain nothing. ✅ 22 Latin instances (0032 ×21, 0033 ×1); the five English instances not carrying their own asterisks are either the frontmatter incipit (verbatim Latin) or nested inside a wider italic run — nesting, not drift.
⭐ vermiculatas argento IS translated ("vermiculated") — the companion call, decided the other way on purpose, because English carries the whole gloss chain: vermiculate → vermilion → little worm → Ego autem sum vermis. Italic Latin is reserved for words with no English exponent; this one has one. ✅ 6/6.
⭐ The bed triple, and it is a triple on purpose. lectus = "bed" · lectulus = "little bed" (40 Latin / 41 English) · cubile = "couch." 0279B's whole humility argument turns on the diminutive (non tamen Virgo lectum, sed magis lectulum), and "bed" is not available for cubile because a third word collapsing into the pair would void that argument. See §4.5 for the two sites where this had not in fact been swept.
Other ruled equivalences, all held work-wide: cancelli = "lattice" (10/10; 0312D identifies the lemma with the architectural sense and "chancel" would sever the argument) · emissio = "emission", not Douay's "plants" · vicus = "lane" (9/10) and platea = "street" (18/19), kept distinct against Douay, load-bearing at 0318D · ferculum stays italic Latin, on the muraenula precedent · maceria = "dry-stone wall", distinct from murus · adolescentulae = "maidens" · charitas = charity (62 Latin / 65 English), never "love" · candidatio is translated, not carried.
⭐ The colour triple, kept strictly distinct: nigra = black · fusca = swarthy · formosa = comely. fusca is never "black" — and in this work that matters more than in 11638, because Cant. 1:5 prints nigra sum where the Vulgate has fusca sim (0230D): the colour word and the mood both changed, and Philip builds four columns of nigredo exposition and the whole nigra sed formosa architecture on it. Marked [var:], never conformed.
Pattern 3, "Holy Scripture" — both words capitalized, for divina, sacra, divinae Scriptura(e) and the bare form alike. 22 instances in the English; 0 instances of "divine Scripture" or "sacred Scripture", which is the defect 11638 shipped. The bare form is the one 11638's sweep missed and this work's brief warned about in advance: it fires on a bare in Scripturis (0260A), a bare genitive Scripturae (0307D), a bare nominative Scriptura (0331B), and sixteen times in chunks 0078–0083 alone, fourteen of them bare.
Pattern 17: thou = singular, you = plural. A number marker, not a reverence marker. Anchor case: 0454D, Luke 10:23 vos videtis → "you see".
⭐ Migne's mixed capitalization is MIRRORED PER INSTANCE, never regularized. Sponsus/sponsus, Sponsa/sponsa, Virgo/virgo, Dilecto/dilecto, Spiritus sanctus/sancti Spiritus — he runs both cases inside single sentences. This was named in advance as the likeliest drift point across twenty-one agents, and it did not drift: every range checked its own plate word by word and reported so. The worked example that closed the question is 0305B Spiritus sanctus against 0356C sancti Spiritus — two ranges appeared to disagree, both were right, and there was nothing to reconcile. Before reporting a capitalization disagreement in this work, check whether Migne simply prints both. He usually does.
Guillemet asymmetries are Migne's and are mirrored, never balanced. Five chunks are asymmetric — 0006 (8 «, 9 »), 0011 (11/10), 0044 (4/3), 0083 (5/4), 0089 (10/11) — and the English reproduces each 1:1 (422 « and 421 » on both sides). At 0307C Migne himself breaks one quotation into two guillemet pairs around inquiens, doing what Pattern 5 forbids us to do; reproduced.
§2 · THE TYPOGRAPHY — three findings, none of which one range could have made
2.1 · The marks divide BY FUNCTION, not by book
11638 changes how it marks scripture at a book boundary — italics in Books I–II, guillemets « » from Book III. 11632 is not built that way. It runs both marks in parallel from chunk 0000, divided by function: guillemets carry a quotation adduced as an authority (scripture is the commonest case, not the rule — the Delphic oracle, Virgil, and two bare pronouns displayed as words are all guilleted at 0251D–0254B), and italics carry the running Song lemma plus book titles, words discussed as words, printed locators, and Migne's marginal source-edition page numbers.
The book boundaries were checked and carry no seam — LIBER SECUNDUS. at 0246C (cruces-0024), LIBER TERTIUS. at 0303A (cruces-0042), LIBER QUARTUS. at 0354C (cruces-0066), LIBER QUINTUS. (cruces-0090). Both marks run identically on either side of each. The question is closed: later book heads are ordinary text.
The proof that the division is functional is that the Song ITSELF takes guillemets when quoted as a proof-text rather than as the lemma — Cant. 4:11 @0220A, Cant. 5:11 @0226A, Cant. 2:14 @0226C, Cant. 1:12 @0270B, Cant. 5:11 again at 0432C, each with the italic lemma a few lines away. Five instances, four ranges.
2.2 · ⭐⭐⭐ BUT THE GUILLEMETS STOP — and the seam is nowhere structural
Found independently by the 0096–0101 and 0102–0107 agents, then verified against all 126 Latin chunks.
| chunks | opening « |
|---|---|
| 0000–0089 | 420 |
| 0090–0125 | 2 (one in 0090, one in 0096) |
From chunk 0097 to the end of the work there is not one guillemet — 29 chunks, ~73 columns, ~50 notes, none. The last « in the book stands at col. 0416D. And Philip does not stop quoting: adduced proof-texts continue at full density, each with its inquit/ait and a correct note, printed in italics.
⭐ Internal control, exact and on one verse: Isa. 53:7 is guilleted at 0399C and italic at 0440A–B — same verse, same siglum, forty-one columns apart.
⚑ The seam falls mid-Caput VII of Book V, 29 columns from either book head. So this does not overturn §2.1's no-seam-at-a-book-boundary result; it strengthens it. Migne's practice changes where nothing structural happens, which is why nobody predicted it and why it had to be measured across the whole work rather than reasoned from one range.
⛔ The practical consequence, which was pushed into the briefs of every range from 0090 on: "italic run = probably just a lemma" is true to 0089 and false after it. In the last 29 chunks italics carry the lemma and every quotation, and they are told apart by function, not by mark. A range applying the earlier rule would have mis-classed every quotation it met and collated none of them.
2.3 · ⭐⭐⭐ THE DISPLAY RULE — it dissolves the "counter-instances"
Waves 3–5 kept logging classical and patristic authorities printed bare — Ovid at 0259, Sallust at 0314A (adduced explicitly, verax sententia… ethnicorum), Ambrose by name at 0337B, Virgil at 0385A — and read them as counter-instances to §2.1, killing one explanation after another, including the tempting "Migne declines to guillemet pagans", which a Father printed unmarked disposed of. They were never counter-instances. The discriminator is typographic DISPLAY.
- A quotation Migne sets displayed, on its own line or lines, is italicised.
- A quotation Migne runs into the paragraph is bare.
⭐ The control is one line of Horace printed twice. At 0022 the Siculi tag is displayed on its own line and italicised (Invidia, inquit, Siculi non invenere tyranni / Tormentum majus.); at 0447D the same line is run into Philip's sentence — majus quo nec Siculi, juxta quemdam ethnicum, tormentum invenere — and printed bare. Same poet, same line, two treatments, one variable. ✅ Checked against all 126 chunks: every displayed block in the work is italicised, and every bare authority is run-in.
⚑ The rule is PERMISSIVE, not predictive, and that has not changed: reproduce what is printed, and never add a mark because the function seems to call for one. What it changes is what counts as a finding. A bare adduced authority is expected; only a displayed quotation printed bare, or a run-in one italicised, would be real.
⚑ Migne's [n:] is usually inside the closing » but not always — outside at 0235B and 0239B; a bare locator inside a run with no [n:] wrapper at 0232D and 0236D; a printed locator standing inside a guillemet run at 0203A and 0222B–C. Reproduced as printed in every case.
§3 · PHILIP'S BIBLE — the copy-text readings
A divergence attested in more than one range is evidence about Philip's copy of the Bible, not a local slip. These are the merge's own results; no single agent could have made any of them.
⭐⭐⭐ Cant. 2:17 — montes BETHEL for the Vulgate's Bether (0338D, again at 0341A). Philip spends four columns on the etymology of the divergent word: Beth, domus; el vero Deus interpretatur; et Bethel domus Dei… Domus autem Dei non incongrue interna Virginis conscientia judicatur. Conform the lemma and the back half of Caput XVIII has nothing to stand on. Printed twice, which is the copy-text shape — the shape that made Zech. 4:14 and Gen. 3:19 findings rather than slips on 11638.
⭐⭐⭐ Eccles. 9:1 — the pair REVERSED in six of its seven printings. utrum odio dignus sit an amore against the Vulgate's utrum amore an odio. ✅ Verified against all 126 Latin chunks: reversed at 0029, 0042, 0062, 0070, 0074 and 0125; only 0049 carries the Vulgate order. So the copy-text shape comes with its own internal control — Migne contradicts himself exactly once. And the seventh printing (0489A, the last in the work) is recast: different wording, the reversal surviving three re-castings. Statistically the strongest member of the class. Marked nowhere it is unmarkable: at 0489A the span carries neither guillemets nor italics nor a note, and under §8a's rule it is logged, not marked.
⭐⭐⭐ Cant. 5:9 — and it is the only member of the class with an AUTHORIAL witness. At 0429B Migne prints ex dilecto once where the Vulgate prints it twice. At 0430B–C Philip discusses the omission himself: he reports that most of the codices he could find carry the phrase twice, and declines to say whether the repetition is the author's or a scribe's. This is not our inference from his exposition — it is his own collation note, printed. [var:] fires; Migne stands.
⭐⭐⭐ Cant. 7:13 — A NEW SHAPE: Migne DIVIDES the verse differently. At 0473B he prints Mandragorae dederunt odorem in portis nostris, where the Vulgate gives the gates to the apples (In portis nostris omnia poma). Every word is present — only the break moved. All of Caput XXXI expounds the gates as the mandrakes' (necdum in aedibus, necdum in thalamo… sed in portis), and Caput XXXII opens its lemma at Omnia poma with the gates already spent. ⚠ This shape is not greppable the way a divergent word is. Nobody was looking for it for 113 chunks. It is found only by reading the lemma against the Vulgate's own division — which is now a standing instruction for lemma-and-gloss commentaries.
⭐⭐ Cant. 5:7 — vigiles for custodes (0427A), which is Cant. 3:3's word, conformed onto 5:7. The proof it is copy-text and not a compositor's reach is Migne's own cross-reference: (sup. l. III, c. 22) resolves exactly to the Cant. 3:3 lemma in chunk 0065. Philip then builds two columns on the resulting distinction (custodes murorum kept a vigilibus), which the Vulgate's single word makes unwritable.
⭐⭐ Cant. 8:2 at 0475C — the lemma carries a whole clause the Vulgate does not have (et in cubiculum genitricis meae), the LXX/Old Latin reading, and five chapters of exposition stand on it. Cant. 8:12 at 0486C is its opposite number: a deletion (his dropped from et ducenti his qui custodiunt) which changes who the two hundred are, and Philip's exposition follows the printed reading.
Others attested and marked: Sponsa mea for speciosa mea (Cant. 2:13, 0323C, with Philip's next sentence proving it is copy-text) · in cavernis plural (Cant. 2:14) · grex for greges (Cant. 4:1–2, and the chapter is an argument about the singular) · pellis Salomonis singular (Cant. 1:4, and Caput XVIII expounds one skin flayed from one animal) · Sunamitis for Sulamitis (seven printings; Sulamit- occurs nowhere in the work) · matri suae dative for matris suae genitive (Cant. 6:8a, printed four times, the whole chapter built on the dative — and the work knows the genitive, printing it correctly at 0020) · Sion added to Cant. 6:8b at 0454B, with Philip expounding the addition in his next clause · conturbata est for conturbavit me (Cant. 6:11, voice reversed, gloss carrying both).
⭐ Cant. 1:12 — Cum for the Vulgate's Dum, ruled here. Migne prints Cum four times: three in chunk 0033 and again at 0270B where the verse returns as a guilleted proof-text with Philip's own gloss picking the word up. No [var:] fires, and that is right — the sense is untouched, which is Pattern 14's threshold. But four independent printings is copy-text evidence, so it is recorded here as an attested reading rather than a slip. ⚠ The fifth occurrence, at 0397C, prints only the verse's second half and supplies no evidence either way; a range reporting "met, agrees" would have been counted as an attestation of something it never witnessed. Name the words, not the verse.
⭐ An expounded quotation Migne leaves unmarked is LOGGED, never marked — ruled once for all twenty-one ranges. The class: Ps. 90:5–6 fused at 0245A, with the next sentence glossing the fusion; Lam. 4:20 at 0291B printed with the Old Latin ante faciem nostram against the Vulgate's oris nostri, expounded three times in two sentences, and carrying no guillemets, no italics and no [n:]; 1 Cor. 2:9 at 0372D; Deut. 32:33 at 0469A; the Chalcedonian formula at 0444A. And one member is a DELETION, which is worse: John 19:39 at 0399D prints ferens misturam myrrhae et aloes libras centum for the Vulgate's quasi libras centum, unmarked in every channel, twelve lines before Philip argues in pondere et numero… certo pondere, perfecto numero consummatum. His whole four-sentence argument needs the hundred to be exact, and what has gone is the Vulgate's hedge. Every other member substitutes; a substitution at least leaves a strange word on the page. A deletion leaves nothing at all, and no mechanical channel can reach it. The ruling stands: log the candidate with its evidence, place no [var:]. A [var:] asserts a divergence inside a quotation, and where Migne marks the words as neither quotation nor lemma we cannot establish the quotation's boundary. Marking it would have us assert a boundary the plate does not print.
§4 · WHAT THE MERGE CHANGED — the reconciliations
Five live divergences between ranges. Each is ruled here, with the reason, and the exact edits are listed. The edits are proposed, not applied — they are handed to Wilson.
4.1 · ⭐ aromata = "spices". "Aromatical spices" comes out. — 12 edits
aromata is one Latin word; "aromatical spices" is two English words, and it is Douay's phrase at Cant. 3:6 and 5:1. Fourteen chunks render the root; nine of them say "spices" and five say "aromatical spices". This is the work's characteristic defect class — the Douay arriving over the plate — showing up in vocabulary rather than in a verse.
⭐ The ruling is forced from inside chunk 0105, which contains both words and contradicts itself in three lines. Migne prints areolae aromatum (noun) in the lemma and arboribus aromaticis (adjective) in the gloss. Our English gave the lemma "beds of aromatical spices" and then, two sentences later, glossed it "the Virgin compared him to beds of spices" — the same phrase, two ways, on one page. If aromata takes two words, the genuine adjective aromaticus has nothing left to be.
RULE: aromata (the noun, any case) = "spices". aromaticus (the adjective) = "aromatic". A bare aromata never takes "aromatical".
| file | col | current | proposed |
|---|---|---|---|
0069.md | @0353D | smoke of aromatical spices, of myrrh | smoke of spices, of myrrh |
0069.md | @0356A | seem to smell like aromatical spices | seem to smell like spices |
0069.md | @0356B | but from aromatical spices; for whose compounding | but from spices; for whose compounding |
0092.md | @0405B | my myrrh with my aromatical spices.* (head lemma) | my myrrh with my spices.* |
0092.md | @0406A | my myrrh with my aromatical spices. (re-quotation) | my myrrh with my spices. |
0092.md | @0406C | shutteth up his aromatical spices also | shutteth up his spices also |
0092.md | @0406D | the myrrh with the aromatical spices | the myrrh with the spices |
0093.md | @0407A | of myrrh or of aromatical spices, he addeth not | of myrrh or of spices, he addeth not |
0093.md | @0407A | thirsteth after aromatical spices | thirsteth after spices |
0093.md | @0407B | myrrh or aromatical spices in the reaping | myrrh or spices in the reaping |
0105.md | @0437A | His cheeks are as beds of aromatical spices, set by the perfumers. | His cheeks are as beds of spices, set by the perfumers. |
0121.md | @0479B | compared to the smoke of aromatical spices | compared to the smoke of spices |
One judgement call, listed separately. 0105.md @0437D reads "herbs and spices are fitly brought forth for aromatical uses" for Migne's herbae et species aromatibus congrue proferuntur. "Uses" is supplied and "aromatical" is doing adjectival work for a noun in the dative. Proposed: "herbs and spices are fitly brought forth for spices" is unreadable, so the least-bad literal is "…are fitly brought forth for the making of spices", with the supply visible. ⚠ Flagged rather than ruled — it is the one site where the rule does not mechanically apply, and it wants a translator's hand.
Not touched, and correct: 0105.md @0438B "brought forth aromatic spices" renders aromaticas species — genuine adjective + genuine noun. Leave it.
4.2 · ⭐ suavis = "sweet". The 0107 mapping wins. — 6 edits
Two ranges mapped the pair in opposite directions:
- 0097–0099: dulcedo = "sweetness", suavitas = "pleasantness".
- 0107: suav- = "sweet", dulc- = "delightfulness".
⭐ 0107 is right, and the reason is that its mapping is fixed by the plate while 0097's is free. Chapter XXVI's lemma is Cant. 5:16 Guttur illius suavissimum — "His throat is most sweet" — and the whole chapter is an exposition of that superlative (non tam suavior quam suavissimus). The chapter then locks the two words into a chiasmus that forces distinct English: dulcedo suavior, suavitas dulcior non habetur. If suavitas is "pleasantness" there, the lemma the chapter expounds has changed word underneath it.
⚑ And 0097 is already inconsistent with itself: it renders suavi otio "sweet leisure" twice (@0419A, @0420D) while rendering suavitatem of the same page "pleasantness". Half that chunk is already on 0107's side.
⚑ The work-wide counts settle the direction rather than the sweep. Latin: 198 suav- against 88 dulc-. English: 279 "sweet", 73 "delight", 19 "pleasant". So suav- is the majority word and "sweet" is its standing exponent almost everywhere; the two collide only where Philip puts them in one period. RULE: suavis/suavitas = sweet/sweetness. Where dulcedo stands in the same period as a suav- word, dulcedo = delight/delightfulness. Elsewhere "sweetness" for dulcedo* is left standing — a full 88-site sweep buys nothing and risks damage out of proportion to the gain (the 11638 principle applied).
| file | col | current | proposed |
|---|---|---|---|
0097.md | @0419A | we behold the sweetness of an inward quiet. Which sweetness | we behold the delight of an inward quiet. Which delight |
0097.md | @0419B | break off the pleasantness of the sweetness I have found | break off the sweetness of the delight I have found |
0097.md | @0419D | having tasted that sweetness | having tasted that delight |
0098.md | @0423C | the pleasing sweetness of silence | the pleasing delight of silence |
0099.md | @0423D | rejoiced in a sweet silence | rejoiced in a delightful silence |
0099.md @0424A "the sweetness of it" already renders ejus suavitas under the ruling — no edit. 0107.md is ruled correct throughout — do not touch it.
4.3 · donec ipsa velit — TWO edits, not three. Migne prints three phrases.
The report was that chunk 0121 renders the formula three ways. Checked against the plate, two of the three are Migne's, not ours — this is the 11638 QUALITER lesson recurring, and a majority-rule "fix" here would have been a silent normalization of the Latin.
| col | Migne prints | our English | verdict |
|---|---|---|---|
| 0477D | donec ipsa velit (head lemma, Cant. 8:4) | "till she please" | Douay. Fix. |
| 0478A | donec velit (no ipsa) | "before she will" | donec is "till", not "before". Fix. |
| 0478C | donec ipsa voluerit | "until she herself shall will it" | Correct. Leave. |
And the lemma is printed at three places in the work: 0046 @0299D "till she herself will", 0068 @0353A "till she please", 0121 @0477D "till she please". Only 0046 renders ipsa. Douay's "till she please" drops both the emphatic pronoun and the volition, and Philip's own exposition at 0478C renders it in full — so the lemma should show what the exposition expounds.
RULE: donec ipsa velit = "till she herself will", at all three lemma sites.
| file | col | current | proposed |
|---|---|---|---|
0068.md | @0353A | nor make the beloved to awake, till she please.* | nor make the beloved to awake, till she herself will.* |
0121.md | @0477D | nor make the beloved to awake, till she please.* | nor make the beloved to awake, till she herself will.* |
0121.md | @0478A | be compelled to return, before she will, to the solicitude | be compelled to return, till she will, to the solicitude |
And doctores = "teacher", one edit. Work-wide: 10 Latin doctor, 10 English "teacher(s)", 1 English "doctors"* — a single outlier, in the same chunk and the same chapter as the above, eleven words from two correct "teachers".
| file | col | current | proposed |
|---|---|---|---|
0121.md | @0477D | ye apostles, you doctors of the Church | ye apostles, you teachers of the Church |
4.4 · ⭐ The catchword at 0124 that does not match its lemma — fix the LEMMA
Migne prints De qua subjungit: «Vinea fuit,» etc., then the head CAPUT XLVII. and the lemma Vinea fuit pacifico, in ea quae habet populos (Cant. 8:11). Our English gave the catchword "There was a vineyard, etc." and the lemma "The peaceable had a vineyard, in that which hath peoples." A reader following the catchword cannot find the passage, because the two share no opening words.
⭐ The cause is not the catchword. The catchword is literal; the lemma is Douay ("The peaceable had a vineyard" is Douay Cant. 8:11, which turns Migne's dative of possession into an English transitive). Repairing the catchword would conceal the pull-through; repairing the lemma removes it and makes the two match automatically.
| file | col | current | proposed |
|---|---|---|---|
0124.md | @0485D | The peaceable had a vineyard, in that which hath peoples. | There was a vineyard to the peaceable, in that which hath peoples. |
Leave There was a vineyard, etc. exactly as it stands — it is a faithful rendering of Migne's two-word re-quotation, and after this edit a reader following it lands on the lemma's first four words. ⚠ Second-best alternative, if the lemma is held sacrosanct: change the catchword to The peaceable had a vineyard, etc. This restores navigability but reproduces four English words where Migne prints two, and leaves the Douay in place. Recorded so the choice is visible.
4.5 · cubile = "couch" — two sites the earlier sweep missed
The ruling was made mid-run (cruces-0060 set "couch"; cruces-0066 rendered it "bed" eleven columns later) and the brief named the remaining sites as chunks 0082, 0083, 0115. All three are correct. Chunk 0070 was never on the list. ✅ Count: 14 Latin cubil- (0063 ×4, 0070 ×2, 0082 ×5, 0083 ×2, 0115 ×1) against 13 English "couch" — and one of the thirteen is not a cubile at all (below).
⭐ The control is internal and exact: 0063 @0342A renders Isa. 57:8's dilatasti cubile tuum "thou hast enlarged thy couch"; 0070 @0357C renders the same verse "thou hast enlarged thy bed." Same verse, same word, fifteen columns apart.
| file | col | current | proposed |
|---|---|---|---|
0070.md | @0357C | « Thou hast enlarged thy bed, he says, thou hast received an adulterer | « Thou hast enlarged thy couch, he says, thou hast received an adulterer |
0070.md | @0357C | But the Virgin, her bed being straitened, admitted the stain | But the Virgin, her couch being straitened, admitted the stain |
0045.md | @0298A | softer than a pillow or any couch (renders quovis reclinatorio) | softer than a pillow or any resting-place |
⚠ 0070 @0357B is NOT an edit. "The bed is straitened" there renders Isa. 28:20's stratum — a fourth Latin word (10 instances work-wide), which under the lectus/lectulus/cubile ruling has nowhere to go. It is left as "bed" because lectus does not occur in that sentence, so nothing collides. Recorded as a crowding, not repaired: a fourth English word for stratum would be invented rather than found, and the merge declines to invent one.
4.6 · The Gallemart colophon at 0490B — a proposed house ruling
Migne closes the work with Joannes GALLEMART S. Theol. Doctor, et catecheseos professor in Universitate Duacensi, hac 7 Febr. 1618. — the subscription of a Douai censor, printed italic. It is not Philip's text and not scripture; it is a documentary signature, and our English currently reads "John GALLEMART, Doctor of Sacred Theology, and professor of catechesis in the University of Douai, this 7 Feb. 1618." — half-Englished, and half in Migne's capitals.
Proposed ruling: in a documentary subscription, the NAME stands as printed and the OFFICE is Englished.
| file | col | current | proposed |
|---|---|---|---|
0125.md | @0490B | John GALLEMART, Doctor of Sacred Theology, and professor of catechesis in the University of Douai, this 7 Feb. 1618. | Joannes GALLEMART, Doctor of Sacred Theology, and professor of catechesis in the University of Douai, this 7 Feb. 1618. |
Reasoning. A signature identifies a historical person in a record, and Englishing half of one manufactures a person — "John Gallemart" signed nothing. The capitals are Migne's typography and fall under the same mirroring rule as Sponsus/sponsus (§1). The office, by contrast, is ordinary descriptive Latin with an ordinary English exponent, and leaving it in Latin would tell an English reader nothing. This is a house ruling, not a work ruling — it will govern every censor's approbatio, imprimatur and editor's subscription in the corpus, which is why it is worth deciding once here rather than per work.
§5 · WHAT THE MERGE RATIFIED — checked, correct, do not churn
- The
CAPUTnumeration is mirrored as printed and not tidied —CAPUT PRIMUMspelled out,CAPUT II–Lin numerals, andCAPUT VIII/CAPUT IX/CAPUT XV/CAPUT XXXIprinted without their full stops at 0052, 0053, 0075, 0114, 0119. Reproduced without them. - Migne's own
[ alias …]variant bracket is reproduced, and no[var:]fires under it — he is carrying the Vulgate reading in his own apparatus (0054 @0321B, in obscuro [ alias caliginoso] loco, 2 Pet. 1:19). - ⭐ But it is NOT a singleton, and the brief's work-wide check was too narrow. Migne prints a second shape at 0122 @0481B: cor est incibile [ f. lucibile] —
f.for forte, his own conjecture on his own non-word. The 2026-08-08 check that declared the class a singleton searched foraliasand found what it searched for. A sweep is only as wide as its pattern list — the same lesson 11638's Pattern 3 sweep taught, recurring in a different register. Both instances are reproduced as printed; neither takes a[sic:]of ours stacked on top (brief §10.5). - Philip's own alia translatio is on the same footing — at 0378C he introduces Ibo mihi ad montem myrrhae as another version. No
[var:]fires; the divergence is his apparatus, not Migne's text. - Migne's lower-case after a misplaced full stop stands, ruled on 11638 and explicitly not to be churned.
- The three mountain etymologies (Amana, Sanir, Hermon) are translated, not carried as Latin — the same call as vermiculatas and for the same reason.
- A quotation broken around inquit/ait keeps its breaks. Pattern 5: 0044 @0297A reads as split gibberish in English («Stay therefore me, she says, up with flowers») — but Migne prints three italic runs and our English mirrors them 1:1. A blind reader proposed the smoother reading and it was declined, because the repair moves sacred marker boundaries. Recorded so the proposal is not made a third time.
- The colour triple and the bed triple hold work-wide (§1), including 0103's se nigras et abjectas.
- Chunk-boundary
(cont.)on a repeated head is ours and is merged at assembly — never a defect, never translated.
§6 · MIGNE'S CITATION SIGLA — counted across all twenty-one ranges
⭐ No siglum in this work is systematically wrong, and that is a weaker and far more useful fact than a running error count implies. It could only be established by counting the RIGHT ones, which every range was instructed to do.
(I Cor. II)was wrong at 0200D, 0240A and twice more — and correct at 0305C and 0318A.(II Cor. IX)correct at 0314C.(Luc. IX)names Matt. 8's words at 0240B and is correct at 0331A.(Psal. XCII)is wrong at 0275B and correct at 0281A, eleven columns later.(Isa. LI)is wrong at 0328C and right at 0332D–0333A.(Isa. LIII)is wrong once at 0421A and correct five times elsewhere. A tally of failures alone would have manufactured a pattern that is not there.
Two real shapes among the scripture sigla:
- Off by exactly one chapter — five of seven wrong sigla in a single range; a mechanical profile.
(Job. II)for Job XI (0372D) belongs to it. - The note cites one book, the words are another book's — four attested: Luke 9/Matt. 8 (0240B), Deut. 32/Ps. 91, Isa. 42/Matt. 12 (0318D), and Exod. 3/Acts 7:34 verbatim (0456B, the cleanest of the four).
⭐ The strongest instance is an INTERNAL control and needs no appeal outside the work. At 0283B Migne prints « Vere Filius Dei erat iste » under [n: (Marc. XV)] — verbatim Matt. 27:54, where Mark 15:39 reads Vere hic homo Filius Dei erat. Decisive because the same six words appear at 0267D under [n: (Matth. XXVII)]: Philip quotes Matthew twice and Migne labels the second one Mark.
(II Paral. III) at 0238A, off by thirty-two chapters, belongs to neither shape. A third shape is now named once and once only: at 0412C an (ibid.) carries Psalm 118 onto a quotation of Psalm 31 standing eleven words away — a positional error, not a naming one.
⭐ Migne's INTERNAL cross-references are a separate class with a real profile: 3 right, 2 wrong, and BOTH wrong ones are off by exactly one book. Wrong: (supra l. I, c. 2) at 0437A should be Book II; (l. IV, c. 10-12) at 0445B should be Book V. Right: 0477D and 0479B (both checked against their targets), and one that reaches back 179 columns and lands exactly. ⚑ The correct ones are the harder cases, which is why the class cannot be dismissed as unreliable.
Nothing is corrected anywhere. §10.2 governs: a following Ibid. resolves against the printed sequence at index time, and "fixing" an antecedent makes the Ibid. inherit the corrected key and resolve wrong.
§7 · THE BLIND POLARITY READ — eleven readers, and what it proves
Runbook step 4a, done 2026-08-08. One reading pass over all 126 chunks, split across eleven Opus readers at ~12 chunks each plus a whole-apparatus marker auditor, every one of them fenced off from these twenty-one cruces files, data/briefs/11632.md, next-session-resume.md and git history. Findings were formed blind and reconciled afterwards, never before. The full record is BLIND-READ.md; this is its result.
144 ours-side sites. Repairs applied there, not here.
⭐ The result that matters
One dropped negation in the entire work — 0122 @0481D, where Migne's appareat non deesse shipped as "may appear to be wanting", asserting the exact opposite of a paragraph that exists to show the lamp serves the neighbour. Repaired.
~110 necdum/nondum sites, one flattening — 0070 @0358C, nondum satis appropinquant as "yet do not draw near", in a chunk that renders nondum tamen plene sciunt correctly twelve words later. The particle was grepped first in every range, ahead of non/nec/nisi, precisely because it had been caught flattening during translation.
⚑ What that pair of numbers means. The prose held where it was being watched. Almost every other ours-side site was lexical or syntactic — a -urus participle read as passive, a dative read as a nominative and eight verbs pluralized to agree with it (0046 @0301A, Capreae), postpositive gratia read as the noun (twice, ranges apart), tota turpis as "wholly" instead of "all" inside a four-term scheme built on the one word. The failures clustered in mis-parsed grammar and in Douay wording arriving over the plate — not in polarity. Migne's own defects were rendered as printed and logged, never repaired, in every case the readers checked.
And one whole 46-word sentence was missing (0091 @0404D). Nothing could see it: column anchors matched, [n:] counts matched, and the word ratio was 1.61 — dead centre for that range. The reader's tell was that the Latin carried four question marks and the English three. ⭐ verify-english.mjs now checks question-mark parity as a WARN; it cost one regex and immediately found a second real item at 0051.
The marker audit: 50 [sic:] checked, 45 sound; 102 [var:] checked, 94 sound (101 stand now — one was deleted in repair). The failure that dominated 11638 is absent here: all 102 sat adjacent to their own quotation, none sat on Philip's prose, all four ellipses showed the divergent words. Reference format is uniform — every note carrying a reference uses arabic chapter:verse, against 11638's 71 roman / 59 arabic / 8 none.
⭐ How four unmarked defects were found, which no per-range reader could have done: the auditor built a frequency baseline over all 100 Latin works in src/latin/, isolated 11632 hapaxes whose single-edit neighbour is high-frequency, and read each in context. The rest were genuine rare Latin.
§8 · OPEN — recorded honestly, NOT resolved
These are Wilson's to rule. They are set down with the argument on both sides, because in each case the rulebook is genuinely ambiguous and a merge that decided them silently would be worse than one that does not decide them.
8.1 · ⛔ Pattern 12's boundary — four [sic:] on real Latin words
| file | col | carried as | the word in place |
|---|---|---|---|
0007.md | @0202C | [sic: Pecte] | pecte = "comb" (imperative). The clause is a third-person report about the Bridegroom's breasts. |
0048.md | @0304A | [sic: signa] | signa = "signs" / "mark thou". The clause needs a subject that burns. |
0067.md | @0350A | [sic: ama] | ama = "love thou". The clause is third-person indicative. |
0075.md | @0369A | [sic: sternis] | sternis = "thou strewest". Cant. 4:2 needs sterilis, "barren". |
Pattern 12 says a real word that is merely wrong gets NO marker and is rendered as ordinary English. The marker audit accordingly wants all four removed (and Incipit @0345B reclassified with them).
They are being LEFT as [sic:], on this reading: Pattern 12's stated test is that such a word can be rendered — the rule exists because "is repeated" for repetitur is available and honest. None of these four construes in place. Ama is an imperative in an indicative clause; sternis is a second-person verb where the verse needs an adjective; Pecte and signa leave their sentences without a subject. Rendering them "as ordinary English" would produce English that is not merely odd but ungrammatical, and would hide a broken type behind a word the reader will read past.
⚠ But the translating agents themselves were not consistent about it, and said so: cruces-0060 records that Incipit at 0345B "is a real word, so Pattern 12 keeps it", and cruces-0030 explicitly asked the merge to rule the class. Answering it in five separate edits guarantees an inconsistent result. The inventory is complete; the boundary is Wilson's to draw, and whichever way it goes it should be drawn for all five sites in one commit.
8.2 · ⛔ Supplied em-dashes — ~562 sites, ONE policy decision
Migne prints ZERO em-dashes anywhere in this work. Our English prints 562, an average of 4.5 per chunk. This was measured rather than reported: the 0072–0083 reader counted the whole work and correctly declined to list its own ~40, because doing so would have buried its real findings.
Also measured: English 3,780 colons against Latin 3,667 — printed colons are routinely replaced and occasionally supplied; and English 224 question marks against Latin 206, with five supplied at 0121/0123/0125 and further ones at 0097 and 0107 (all now surfaced by the verifier's parity check).
This is one Pattern 8 policy decision, not 600 edits. Pattern 8 makes the deletion direction the live one — four deleted colons at 0118 are already logged, and one deleted full stop at 0311A. Whether a supplied dash for a printed comma is a Pattern 8 violation or an ordinary translator's licence is exactly the question, and it is not answerable one site at a time. Recorded, measured, undecided.
8.3 · ⛔ [sic: informen t] at 0100 @0428A may mark OUR OWN artifact
The marker reports broken type. But the Latin source file itself reads informen t — the "break" is italics markup in our own text, not Migne's. The plate almost certainly prints informent, an ordinary word. This is our digitization's damage attributed to the plate, which is precisely the error the corpus rules exist to prevent. Needs a plate read at PL 203 col. 428A; deliberately not guessed. If the plate prints informent, the [sic:] comes out and a data/tei-patches/11632.json entry goes in, in the same commit.
8.4 · The split/join asymmetry — six carried, three normalized
Six word-splits are carried as [sic:] — a beo, a vida, hila rescat, in cutiens, informen t (see 8.3), a dolescentulae. But the word-join aforis (0077) is silently normalized, as are persequenter (0046 @0300C) and the lemma-level myrrhoe (0069) — while the parallel lemma defect fovum (0093 @0407A) is carried as [sic:]. Same defect class, two treatments, inside one work. ⚠ verify-english cannot see any of this: it strips asterisks and compares substrings. Not repaired, because it belongs with 8.1 — both are one question about where our carrying threshold sits.
8.5 · Readings argued on both sides, not flipped
Five construals where a blind reader argued rather than asserted, and was right not to assert. Listed so a later editor knows the argument was had: ille mundus at 0240C ("that world" or "that Clean One" — both grammatical, and ad quem nihil immundum attinet makes the jingle audible) · non vere facies coloratur at 0314D (adverb, or the ablative of ver — and the paragraph is built on verna suavitas, so it may be Philip's pun) · factus a Virgine at 0338B (agent or separation) · printed cum for eum at 0351B and 0339A, handled two incompatible ways, with a bracketed [him] supplied at 0067 and a silent reading at the other — one of the two must move · laetitia cordis ejus (his or hers, split between lemma and exposition with no note, which is the part that is indefensible either way).
§9 · MEASURED — the numbers, so nobody re-derives them
| chunks | 126 (cols 0181A–0490B) |
| Latin words | 134,020 · English 209,013 · ratio 1.56 |
[var:] | 101 · [sic:] 50 · [ed:] 0 · [d:] 0 · [nt:] 0 · [f:] 0 |
[n:] | 719 English / 719 Latin — exact parity |
| guillemets | 422 « / 421 » in both Latin and English (five asymmetric chunks, mirrored) |
| « by half | 0000–0089: 420 · 0090–0125: 2 · 0097–0125: 0 |
| em-dashes | Latin 0 · English 562 (§8.2) |
| colons | Latin 3,667 · English 3,780 |
| question marks | Latin 206 · English 224 |
verify-english.mjs | clean, 126/126 |
The [n:]-only class, reported as a null where it was one. Ranges reported their hit rate on [n:]-only spans even when zero, which is what makes the class measurable: 0/6, 0/20, 0/38, 0/19, 1/12, 1/14, 1/7, 1/4, 1/10 across the ranges that tallied — roughly 3–4 real quotations in ~124 [n:]-only spans. The 0018–0023 agent found all nineteen of its spans to be Philip's own prose and said so. ⛔ That null is exactly why the separate prose pass is mandatory rather than advisory — the real finds (Lam. 4:20, John 19:39, Virgil at 0385A, Deut. 32:33) were in spans the extraction could not list at all.
⚠ The extraction's CLASS LABELS are unreliable in a chunk with a « / » asymmetry. An unclosed « breaks the bracket-matching, so a genuinely guilleted span is listed as [n:]-only — two were, in chunk 0083. The text is still listed and nothing is lost; only the label is wrong.
§10 · OWED
- Plate read at PL 203 col. 428A — §8.3,
informen t. Blocking nothing, but it is the one marker in the work that may be asserting our own damage as Migne's. - Wilson's ruling on §8.1 (Pattern 12's boundary) and §8.2 (em-dashes). Both are one decision applied to a class; neither should be settled piecemeal.
node scripts/index-work.mjs 11632after any of the above edits land — rule 9, index from day one, no retroactive passes.node scripts/scan-raw-markers.mjsbefore deploy. Markers reach the reader as raw brackets unless a builder transforms them, and that has happened twice on PG pages because nothing checks rendered output.- The badge.
workStatusfor 11632 gates the "First English translation" claim; absent a verifiednone, it renders "New English translation" and that is correct. Do not go hunting to earn the strong claim.
§11 · METHOD DATUM — why the quotation lists were worth their cost
Every agent was handed a verbatim list of every quotation printed in its own range, extracted mechanically from the Latin, with the instruction that the divergence list was the most valuable thing it would produce, and with the requirement that a span collated and found to AGREE be logged as such — so that the absence of a marker is recorded evidence rather than silence.
Result: 101 [var:], plus several hundred spans collated and explicitly logged as unmarked across the twenty-one range files, plus roughly 250 further weaves found on the mandatory prose pass that the extraction could not list at all (22 in one range, 24 in another, 31 in a third, and so on). The blind read then found the apparatus sound: 94 of 102 [var:], zero drift, zero markers on Philip's prose.
⭐ The finding that justifies the whole design is that the mechanical list was not enough and everyone knew which half was missing. Two of this work's three strongest §8a items — Lam. 4:20 and John 19:39 — carry no guillemets, no italics and no [n:], and reached a human only through the prose pass. A review that reads only the extractor's list misses that shape entirely.
⛔ And the defect can be an ADDITION you write while looking straight at it. The 0096–0101 agent drafted Eph. 5:29 at 0430D as "no man ever hated his own flesh", silently restoring the Vulgate's unquam, which Migne does not print — having already written "unquam dropped" into its own collation while the English still said "ever." Knowing the divergence did not prevent reproducing the familiar wording; only the separate word-by-word pass caught it. That is the single most useful sentence in this file for whoever translates the next work.
§12 · RULED 2026-08-09 — the four [sic:] on real Latin words STAY
The marker audit proposed stripping [sic:] from four sites because Pattern 12 reserves the marker for carried non-word type and these are all real Latin words. Ruled the other way: all four keep the marker, and Pattern 12 has been amended to record the test the ruling turns on.
The test is "does it render IN PLACE?", not "is it a Latin word?"
| site | printed | conjecture | why no English carries it |
|---|---|---|---|
| 0007 @0202C | Pecte | Recte | imperative "comb!" stranded in a declarative clause governed by dicit |
| 0067 @0350A | ama | amat | imperative among third-person finite verbs (deprehendit… intendit) |
| 0075 @0369A | sternis | sterilis | 2nd-person verb where the clause needs a predicate nominative |
| 0048 @0304A | signa | an adverb | renders only by hiding the defect — see below |
The first three have no grammatical slot at all. Pattern 12's own examples, fuges for sugas and munde for mundo, are not like them: those occupy their slot and merely mean the wrong thing.
⭐ 0048 is the instructive one and it goes the same way for a different reason. ut signa prius ardeat sets a plural noun against singular ardeat. "That signs may burn" is perfectly good English — and that is exactly the problem. English may burn is number-neutral, so rendering signa "signs" silently repairs the disagreement and leaves the reader nothing to see. Where English has no exponent for the defect, rendering it IS the repair, and the marker is the only treatment that does not quietly fix Migne.
⚑ This runs opposite to Pattern 9, which normalizes precisely where English has no exponent — and the difference is worth stating, because a later sweep will meet both. Pattern 9's cases (grammatical gender, section labels) are systemic features of Latin and carry no information about this plate. A number disagreement in one clause is a fact about this printing. Normalize the language; mark the page.
Consequence for the split/join asymmetry recorded above: it is now decidable on the same test rather than by counting precedents. aforis (0077) renders in place as "from without" and takes no marker; persequenter (0046 @0300C) and the lemma-level myrrhoe (0069 @0353D) are non-words and should be marked — both are currently normalized silently, and both remain owed.
Philip of Harvengt, Commentaria in Cantica canticorum, PL 203. Range 1 of 21: the Prologue, the Proem, the explanation of the title, and Caput I–IV on Osculetur me osculo oris sui. This range opens the work, so several conventions below are proposals the merge should ratify or overturn, and they are flagged ⚑ where that is so.
Marker totals for the range: 6 [var:] · 3 [sic:] · 0 [ed:] · 0 [d:] · 0 [nt:] · 0 [f:]. verify-english.mjs clean on 0000–0005 (no errors); ratio warnings on 0004 (1.64) and 0005 (1.68) — see §7.
§1 · THE QUOTATION COLLATION — all 43 listed spans, itemized
Every span in data/quotations/11632/0000-0005.md was collated word by word against the Vulgate. Spans recorded as AGREES were collated and found to agree; the absence of a marker on them is a finding, not a silence.
Chunk 0000 — 6 spans
1–4. 0181A, four italic spans (Sumite, / materiam vestris, qui scribitis, aequam / Viribus; et versate diu, quid ferre recusent, / Quid valeant humeri.) — not scripture. Horace, Ars poetica 38–40, quoted as verse and set by Migne on three lines; the line structure is preserved in the English. Migne prints humeri where Horace has umeri — an attested medieval orthography, Pattern 9, deliberately unmarked.
- 0182A « Homo non percipit animalis [n: (I Cor. II)]. » — 1 Cor 2:14. Vulg. Animalis autem homo non percipit ea quae sunt Spiritus Dei. Migne's span is truncated to four words and inverted (homo … animalis), and the object (spiritalia) sits outside the guillemets in Philip's own clause. Every word printed is a Vulgate word and the sense is unchanged. Collated; no
[var:]— a quotation cut short to fit a host sentence is citation practice, not a variant reading. Rendered « The animal man does not perceive », with spiritalia outside, exactly as printed.
- 0182A « Adsum. » — one word, no locator, no
[n:]. Nearest received text is Isa. 58:9 Ecce adsum. Not a lemma; rendered « I am here. » No marker.
Chunk 0001 — 1 span
- 0184A videntes — not a quotation. A word discussed as a word (quos ampliore gratia videntes vel prophetas voluit appellari; cf. 1 Reg. 9:9). Rendered seers, italics kept by function, per the 11638 §1 rule that italics survive by function. It is not carried Latin and takes no
[sic:].
Chunk 0002 — 11 spans
8–9. ⭐ 0185C Cantica, inquit, canticorum Salomonis. — [var:] FIRED, and it is the most load-bearing divergence in the range. Vulg. Cant. 1:1 title: Canticum canticorum Salomonis, singular. Migne prints the plural Cantica, and Philip's whole paragraph is an argument from the plural: Canticum vel Cantica in ipso titulo superscripsit … hic non solum Cantica, sed Cantica posuit canticorum. Conforming the lemma to the singular voids the paragraph that expounds it. Rendered "Songs, he says, of songs of Solomon." ⚑ And Migne is inconsistent with himself on the same page: the chunk's own ## head prints the singular genitive TITULI CANTICI CANTICORUM EXPLICATIO immediately before quoting the plural title. Both stand as printed — the head renders "THE SONG OF SONGS", the lemma "Songs of songs". Not harmonized in either direction.
- 0185C pax — etymological gloss of Salomon (Salomonis nomine pax signatur), not scripture. Italic word-as-word, translated ("peace").
- 0185D adversarius — etymological gloss of Satan, not scripture. Translated ("adversary").
- 0185D « Habebat, inquit, pacem ex omni parte in circuitu, a Dan usque Bersabee [0186B] [n: (III Reg. IV)]. » — collated; AGREES, but it is a conflation of two verses. 3 Reg. 4:24 has habebatque pacem ex omni parte in circuitu; a Dan usque Bersabee is from 4:25. Each half agrees with the Vulgate word for word; the enclitic -que is dropped because the quotation opens there. No
[var:]— a conflated citation is not a divergent reading. Note that the column anchor [0186B] falls inside the guillemets, between the last word and the[n:]; reproduced in place.
- 0186B « Requiem, ait, dedit mihi Deus meus per circuitum, et non est Satan neque occursus malus [n: (III Reg. V)]. » —
[var:]FIRED. Vulg. 3 Reg. 5:4: Nunc autem requiem dedit Dominus Deus meus mihi per circuitum, et non est satan, neque occursus malus. Migne drops Dominus and moves mihi before Deus meus. The second half agrees exactly, negations included (non est … neque), and both are carried in the English.
- 0186C pacificus — etymological gloss of Salomon, not scripture. Translated ("the peaceable").
15–16. 0186C Parabolae, inquit, Salomonis filii David [0186D] regis Israel. — collated; AGREES with Prov. 1:1 word for word. Rendered per Pattern 2 as a title (The proverbs … of Solomon the son of David, king of Israel). The anchor [0186D] falls inside the italic run; reproduced in place.
17–18. 0187B Verba, inquit, Ecclesiastae filii David regis Hierusalem. — collated; AGREES with Eccl. 1:1. Hierusalem for Jerusalem is orthographic (Pattern 9), unmarked.
Chunk 0003 — 13 spans
19–20, and its recurrences. Cant. 1:1 Osculetur me osculo oris sui — collated; AGREES exactly, at every one of its SEVEN occurrences in this range (0003 ×3, 0004 ×3, 0005 ×1). Rendered uniformly "Let him kiss me with the kiss of his mouth." ⚑ This is the running lemma of the entire commentary and the merge should hold every agent to one English form of it.
- At 0190B Philip re-quotes it with his own connective inserted — Osculetur igitur me osculo oris sui — rendered "Let him therefore kiss me…". The igitur is his syntax, not a variant reading: no marker.
- At 0192B and 0194A the lemma is broken around inquam (Osculetur me, inquam, osculo oris sui). Pattern 5 applies to the italic run as it does to guillemets: the interruption is translated in place and the run is not re-punctuated.
21–23. 0190C–0191A, the three-stage « Ave, inquit, gratia plena » → « …Dominus tecum » → « …benedicta tu in mulieribus [n: (Luc. I)] » — collated; all three AGREE with Luke 1:28. Each stage is a true prefix of the Vulgate verse; the staged truncation is Philip's rhetorical device (the angel greets, then adds, then adds again) and is not a textual variant. No markers.
- 0191A Luke 1:29 Quae cum audisset … qualis esset ista salutatio — collated; AGREES.
- 0191B Luke 1:30 Ne timeas, Maria, invenisti enim gratiam apud Deum — collated; AGREES.
- 0191B Luke 1:31 Ecce concipies in utero, et paries filium, et vocabis nomen ejus Jesum — collated; AGREES.
- 0191C Luke 1:34 Quomodo fiet istud, quoniam virum non cognosco? — collated; AGREES. Note that here alone the
[n: (ibid.)]sits outside the closing guillemet; position reproduced. - 0191D Luke 1:35 Spiritus sanctus superveniet in te, et virtus Altissimi obumbrabit tibi — collated; AGREES.
- 0191D Luke 1:38 Ecce ancilla Domini, fiat mihi secundum verbum tuum — collated; AGREES.
Chunk 0004 — 9 spans
- Cant. 1:1 — agrees (see 19–20).
- ⭐ 0193B « Prophetam, inquit, suscitabit Deus de fratribus vestris similem mei; ipsum audietis [n: (Deut. XVIII)]. » —
[var:]FIRED, four divergences at once. Vulg. Deut. 18:15: Prophetam de gente tua et de fratribus tuis sicut me suscitabit tibi Dominus Deus tuus: ipsum audies. Migne prints the plural de fratribus vestris … ipsum audietis, and similem mei for sicut me — i.e. the form in which the verse is quoted at Act. 3:22 (and 7:37), not the form of Deuteronomy, though Migne's own[n:]cites Deuteronomy. The plural is visible in the English ("from among your brethren … him shall you hear") under Pattern 17, which is exactly why the marker matters: a Pattern-17 reading of the singular Vulgate would have made Moses address one man.
- 0193B « Ipse, inquit, tanquam Sponsus procedens de thalamo suo, exsultavit ut gigas [n: (Psal. XVIII)]. » — collated; AGREES with Ps. 18:6. Vulg. et ipse tamquam sponsus procedens de thalamo suo; exsultavit ut gigas ad currendam viam. The leading et is dropped at the quotation opening and the verse is cut after gigas; tanquam/tamquam is orthographic. No
[var:]. Migne capitalizes Sponsus where the Vulgate has lower case; capitalization mirrored, see §4.
- 0193C « Os, inquit, Domini [0193C] locutum est haec [n: (Isa. I)]; » —
[var:]FIRED. Vulg. Isa. 1:20 (and 40:5, 58:14) read quia os Domini locutum est with no object. Migne adds haec. The addition is small but it is a word that is not in the received text, and Philip's sentence turns on Isaiah speaking these announced things. The column anchor falls inside the quotation and the semicolon inside the closing guillemet; both reproduced (Pattern 8).
- ⭐ 0193C « Ecce, inquit, virgo concipiet et pariet filium, et vocabitis nomen ejus Emmanuel [n: (Isa. VII)]. » —
[var:]FIRED. Vulg. Isa. 7:14: et vocabitur nomen ejus Emmanuel — passive, "his name shall be called". Migne prints vocabitis, second person plural active, "you shall call". Rendered as printed. This is the range's cleanest 7a″ trap: the familiar English of Isa. 7:14 is passive, arrives before the Latin is read, and would have erased both the person and the number.
- 0193C « Faciet, inquit, Dominus novum super terram, et femina circumdabit virum [n: (Jer. XXXI)]. » —
[var:]FIRED. Vulg. Jer. 31:22: quia creavit Dominus novum super terram: femina circumdabit virum. Migne prints Faciet — future for perfect, "shall make" for "hath created" — and supplies et before femina. The tense change is material in a chapter arguing that the thing is still to come.
- 0193D « Fiat mihi, ait, secundum verbum tuum [n: (Luc. I)]. » — collated; AGREES with Luke 1:38 (the second half of the verse quoted at 0191D).
37–38. Cant. 1:1 at 0194A — agrees.
Chunk 0005 — 3 spans
- Cant. 1:1 at the head of CAPUT IV — agrees.
- 0195C « Inventa est, inquit, habens in utero de Spiritu sancto. » — collated; word order diverges, and
[var:]was DELIBERATELY NOT FIRED. Vulg. Matt. 1:18: inventa est in utero habens de Spiritu Sancto. Migne prints habens in utero. Every word is the Vulgate's, in the same clause, and the sense is identical; Pattern 14 fires on divergence "in a way that changes the sense," and this does not. Recorded here so the absence of the marker is a decision on the record rather than an oversight. A later reviewer who fires one here should say so and not treat it as a fresh discovery.
- 0195C « Quod enim in ea natum est, de Spiritu sancto est [n: (ibid.)]. » — collated; AGREES with Matt. 1:20 word for word.
Unguilleted, unitalicised citations also collated (not on the list)
The extraction lists only marked spans; these are woven into Philip's prose with only an [n:], and were checked because the argument leans on them.
- 0187A, quia vir obediens debet magis loqui victorias quam tacere [n: (Prov. XXI)] — Prov. 21:28 reads vir obediens loquetur victoriam (singular, and without debet magis … quam tacere). This is Philip's paraphrase inside his own sentence, not a marked quotation; rendered as printed, no marker (a
[var:]on unmarked prose would misrepresent it as a lemma). - 0186B, [n: (Ephes. V)] on angularem lapidem se objecit. The corner-stone is Eph. 2:20 and utraque unum fecit just before it is Eph. 2:14; Migne's note says chapter V. Reproduced verbatim, no correction proposed — brief §10.2. Logged only because a later agent will meet it again.
- 0188A, [n: (Gen. XXVIII)] / ipsum, ut ait, Deum videt facie ad faciem et salvatur — the face-to-face saying is Gen. 32:30, not the Bethel ladder of Gen. 28; Philip runs them together in his own prose. No marker.
- 0194D, Gen. 2:7 vitae spiraculum … in ejus faciem inspiravit — Vulg. inspiravit in faciem ejus spiraculum vitae. Philip's own word order in his own sentence, unmarked as a quotation. No marker.
§2 · THE TYPOGRAPHY QUESTION — 11632 does NOT open in an italics-only regime
⭐ Brief §7 asks where 11632's seams fall. In this range there is no seam, because both marks are in use from the first columns, and the division between them is FUNCTIONAL, not sequential. Counted across 0000–0005: 21 guillemeted spans, 22 italicised — and they never compete for the same job.
- « » marks scripture quoted inside the running prose. All 21 guillemeted spans in this range are scripture; not one is anything else.
- Italics mark four other things: (a) the running Song lemma being expounded (Osculetur me osculo oris sui, 7×); (b) book titles quoted as titles (Cantica canticorum Salomonis, Parabolae Salomonis…, Verba Ecclesiastae…); (c) words discussed as words (videntes, pax, adversarius, pacificus); (d) classical verse (the Horace) and Migne's marginal source-edition numbers.
This is a materially different opening from 11638, whose Books I–II italicise scripture and switch to guillemets only at INCIPIT TERTIUS TOMUS. Anyone reconciling the two works should not expect 11632 to repeat that history, and an italic run in a later 11632 chunk is not by itself evidence of a pre-seam regime — it may simply be a lemma. Under Pattern 6 nothing was tidied in either direction; guillemets are 1:1 with the Latin twin in all six chunks (verified mechanically: 0/0, 2/2, 2/2, 9/9, 6/6, 2/2 pairs).
No guillemet asymmetry occurs in this range — every « has its », and none is stray or unopened.
Migne's marginal source-edition numbers 101–110 run through the range (101 in the 0000 head, then 102 0182B, 103 0183D, 104 0185B, 105 0187A, 106 0188D, 107 0190C, 108 0192B, 109 0194A, 110 0195D). Kept italic, verbatim, at the exact word they interrupt — 108 in particular falls between excellentiam and non contaminans, and the English clause was built around it rather than moving it. Same class as 11638's 303–313.
§3 · PATTERN 7 — printed readings rendered as printed, conjectures kept here
Three [sic:] fired. Each is a non-word, and none of the three is also translated in the running text (brief §8's named failure — a [sic:] on a word that was ALSO Englished passes every check and reports nothing).
- 0185B
[sic: molodia]— non vocis molodia, sed morum consonantia. Read melodia, near-certain: the phrase is a melody/concord antithesis and molodia is not a word. Carried untranslated in italics. - 0186C
[sic: tilulo]— insuper et in tilulo regem regis filium se appellat. Read titulo, certain: the same sentence-run has in ipso titulo at 0185C and in hujus quoque libri titulo at 0187A. Carried. - 0191C
[sic: eumdum]— ipse tuus uterus eumdum Sponsum hominem generabit. Read eumdem, certain. ⚠ The English deliberately reads "thy very womb shall beget [sic: eumdum] Bridegroom as man" and does not also say "that same": supplying the English demonstrative alongside the marker would have translated the defect and quarantined it at the same time.
Rendered as printed, no marker (real words, merely wrong or merely odd):
- 0181B narratoria — Quod si virium consideratio narratoria est in carminibus aethnicorum. Rendered "is a narratorial thing". The word is formable from narrator/narratio and construes as a predicate adjective, so Pattern 12's boundary puts it on the English side; but the sense wanted is plainly "necessary/required" and necessaria is the obvious conjecture. The English is ours and reads strangely on purpose. ⚑ Second opinion welcome at merge; do not silently smooth it to "necessary".
- 0182A, the misplaced semicolon. Migne prints serius quisque [0182A] videatur; non tam nova cudere, quam furari potius praeinventa — a semicolon cutting videatur from its own infinitives. Pattern 8: preserved, so the English reads "…would seem; not so much to strike out new things…". It is meant to look wrong.
- 0189B longe suavis obdormisse — the construction requires the comparative adverb suavius (longe suavius, "far more sweetly"), and suavis is the nominative adjective, which cannot govern obdormisse. Under 7a the printed word may not be read as its comparative to rescue the clause, so the English reads "slept far sweet". ⚠ This is the sentence in the range most likely to be "fixed" by a later reader. The conjecture is suavius and it lives here, not in the text.
- 0195A laborem fingere valeam in praeceptum — rendered literally, "may be able to shape labour into a precept". Construable but strained; no emendation offered and none made.
Negation audit (brief §9). Every printed non/nec/neque/nisi/nullus/ nihil/nunquam in the six chunks was carried, including the ones that make the English clumsy: nec debeam, nec praevaleam (0189A), nullus penitus adnotatur, qui non … praeloquatur (0189D), nisi suo soli Domino non concessum (0190C, rendered "not granted save to her Lord alone" — the Latin's redundant negative is preserved in the "not … save"), non defectum, profectum vero (0194D), and the double non praestabit … non negabit at 0182B. No negation was supplied that the Latin does not print.
§4 · CONVENTIONS SET BY THIS RANGE — ⚑ for the merge to ratify
Brief §5's ruled vocabulary was applied as given. These are the new decisions the opening forced, which §5 does not cover.
- ⚑
liber= "book",caput= "chapter",volumen= "volume" — and 11632 has no tomi. The work divides into libri (## LIBER PRIMUS.→ BOOK ONE.) and capita (## CAPUT PRIMUM.→ CHAPTER ONE.). Note that 11638's tomus/liber problem does not arise here in the same shape: at 0186C–0188B Philip uses liber and volumen interchangeably for Solomon's three books (In tertio volumine … liber ille primus), and both are rendered by their own English word, never merged. - ⚑ Migne's own numbering inconsistency in the heads stands. He prints
CAPUT PRIMUMin words, thenCAPUT II,CAPUT III,CAPUT IVin numerals. The English mirrors it: CHAPTER ONE. then CHAPTER II. etc. Pattern 9 normalizes a section label only where English has no exponent for the defect; word-vs-numeral has one, so nothing was normalized. Do not tidy this to a uniform series. INCIPIT= "HERE BEGINS" (brief §5), applied at the 0000 head.- ⚑
PROOEMIUM IN CANTICA.→ "PROEM ON THE SONGS." — plural, because Cantica is the plural Philip argues for at 0185B–C. The number of Cantica / Canticum / Cantici is tracked per occurrence throughout, never harmonized; see §1 items 8–9. (cont.)on the repeatedCAPUT PRIMUMhead is untranslated and carried verbatim (brief §10.7).[CANT. I.]at the head of 0003 is Migne's own bracketed marginal locator. Reproduced verbatim, untranslated, in place.- ⚑ Migne's mixed capitalization of Sponsus/sponsus, Sponsa/sponsa, Virgo/virgo is MIRRORED, not regularized. He runs both within single sentences (0193D advenientis sponsi… beside 0193C adventu Sponsi; 0194A sponsam matrem Virginem). The English capitalizes exactly where he does. This is the most likely drift point across 21 agents and is the one convention here that a mechanical sweep could check.
- Pattern 17 applied throughout, and it does real work in this range. The Annunciation dialogue is singular on both sides — thou/thee/thy for Gabriel to Mary and Mary to Gabriel, including Osculare me osculo oris tui at 0194A — while Philip's own frame is plural: postulatis/deposcatis/ vestris precibus (0182A–B), vos veteres nostis (0182B), Vos igitur in hoc auditorio … qui astatis (0195A–B), sicut nostis and vos, fratres, nostis (0195D, 0196B) all take you. The payoff case is item 31 above: Deut. 18:15 printed in the plural, rendered "him shall you hear", visibly different from the singular the Vulgate would have given.
- Pattern 3. Scripturis meaning the canon occurs twice in the range (0184A vera legerent in Scripturis; 0190D scripturis inhaerentem) and is rendered the Scriptures both times. ⚑ Neither instance uses divina or sacra — which is precisely the form 11638's sweep pattern missed — so a later sweep of 11632 must match the bare Scriptura(e) too.
- Register vocabulary held to brief §5 where it appears: clemens = "clement" (0192A) kept distinct from misericors = "merciful" in the same sentence; adolescentulae = maidens (0188B, 0188C).
§5 · THINGS DELIBERATELY NOT REPORTED (brief §10 classes, checked once)
- 0002's column anchors run [0188A] [0188B] [0188C] and then [0187D]. This is brief §10.1's band-arithmetic false-positive class exactly. Checked: no text is broken mid-word or mid-construction across any anchor in this range, and the 0187D anchor closes the chunk after two empty heads. No
[ed:], no patch, no plate check. Recorded only so the next agent does not spend a session on it. noteCountmatches the body[n:]count in all six chunks (1/1/7/18/8/3), verified mechanically.- Attested medieval spellings left alone, unmarked, per Pattern 9: aethnicorum, tanquam, Hierusalem, humeri, spiritalis/spiritales beside spiritale, coelestia.
- No
[f:]. 11632 is lemma-and-gloss, not a florilegium (brief §10.4).
§6 · OPEN — for the merge or a later plate read
- ⚑ The Cantica / Canticum number problem is work-wide, and this range only sees its first page. The plural title at 0185C is argued for; the head at the same column is singular; the running work-title in 0181B is the singular ablative Cantico canticorum. Every later agent will meet the same pair. The merge should collect the numbers rather than impose one, and should check whether any later agent silently conformed the 0185C lemma.
- The
[n: (Ephes. V)]at 0186B and the Gen. 28 / Gen. 32 run-together at 0188A are Migne's references, reproduced. Neither has a following Ibid. depending on it, so both are safe to correct upstream if a citation-corrections entry is ever wanted — but that is not this file's business and no correction was proposed. - ⛔ The blind polarity read has not been done and cannot be done by me. Findings for it must be formed blind and reconciled against this file afterwards (runbook 4a). The three passages most likely to be wrongly repaired are named in §3: narratoria (0181B), the semicolon (0182A), and especially longe suavis (0189B).
§7 · RATIO NOTE
EN/LA by chunk (verifier's own figures): 0000 1.55 · 0001 1.55 · 0002 1.52 · 0003 1.56 · 0004 1.64 · 0005 1.68. The verifier warns on the last two. The cause is genre, not padding: Philip writes rhymed, heavily parallel prosa rimata, and the last two chunks are its densest stretch (purificet, magnificet, laetificet; me deliniat, me reficiat, me serenet; utilis, fertilis, et jucunda), where a Latin participle or a syncopated ablative absolute needs a finite English clause each time. 11638 ran 1.35–1.63 on the same author. No clause was expanded that the Latin does not carry, and nothing was summarized.
Philip of Harvengt, Commentaria in Cantica canticorum, Tome I, Capp. V–XI: the exposition of Quia meliora sunt ubera tua vino (Capp. V–VIII, with VIII running over the 0009 chunk boundary) and of Oleum effusum nomen tuum (Capp. IX–XI).
Marker totals for this range: 15 [var:] · 1 [sic:] · 0 [ed:] · 0 [d:] · 0 [nt:] · 0 [f:]. verify-english.mjs clean on all six chunks (one ratio warning, 0009 at 1.61, inside 11638's shipped 1.35–1.63 band). Guillemet, column-anchor and [n:] parity confirmed 1:1 against the Latin twin for every chunk, including the two asymmetries recorded in §3.
§1 · THE QUOTATION COLLATION — all 64 listed spans
Every span in data/quotations/11632/0006-0011.md was collated word by word against the Vulgate. The spans recorded as AGREEING are the point of this section: an unmarked quotation in these six chunks has been checked, not skipped.
1a. Divergent — marked [var:] (15)
| Col | Ref | Migne prints | Vulgate | Note |
|---|---|---|---|---|
| 0196C (head) | Cant. 1:1 | ubera sua | ubera tua | ⭐ see §2 |
| 0198C | 3 Reg. 18:27 | Illudebat prophetis Baal Elias | illudebat illis Helias | the prophets named where the received text has only a pronoun |
| 0198D | Matt. 23:15 | Vae vobis… qui circuitis | …quia circuitis | relative for causal; the English differs ("who go about" / "because you go about") |
| 0199C–D | Ps. 44:3 (cited) | Procedens enim e thalamo forma prae filiis hominum speciosus | Ps. 18:6 tanquam sponsus procedens de thalamo suo + Ps. 44:3 speciosus forma prae filiis hominum | ⭐ a two-psalm fusion carrying a single (Psal. XLIV) note, with 44:3's word order inverted |
| 0200A | Ps. 93:12 | Beatus… quem tu erudieris | Beatus homo quem tu erudieris | |
| 0201C | 1 Tim. 1:8 | Lex enim bona est, si quis ea legitime utatur | Scimus autem quia bona est lex… | direct assertion for indirect |
| 0201D | Ps. 39:12 | me tua misericordia et veritas susceperunt | misericordia tua et veritas tua semper susceperunt me | semper lost; second tua lost |
| 0202C | Luke 1:48 | et ex hoc beatam me dicent | ecce enim ex hoc beatam me dicent | |
| 0204B | Isa. 53:4 | languores nostros ipse tulit, et infirmitates nostras ipse portavit | …et dolores nostros ipse portavit | ⭐ see §2 |
| 0206D | Rom. 8:35 | …an periculum, an gladius | …an periculum, an persecutio, an gladius | |
| 0208A | Phil. 2:9–11 | Nam dedit illi nomen… quia Dominus est Jesus | donavit illi nomen… quia Dominus Iesus Christus in gloria est Dei Patris | |
| 0209A | Ps. 66:2 | misereatur nostri, illuminet vultum suum super nos, et misereatur nostri | misereatur nostri, et benedicat nobis: illuminet… | ⭐ the clause dropped is precisely the one that would break the doubled misereatur Philip's next sentence asks about |
| 0210A | Acts 4:12 | Non est aliud nomen sub coelo, in quo… | Nec enim aliud nomen est sub caelo datum hominibus, in quo… | |
| 0211B | Ps. 82:19 | Sciant gentes, quia nomen tibi Deus | Et cognoscant quia nomen tibi Dominus | ⭐⭐ see §2 |
| 0211B–C | Ps. 71:11 | adorabunt eum omnes reges | adorabunt eum omnes reges terrae |
1b. Collated and AGREEING with the Vulgate — no marker (24)
Recorded so that the absence of a [var:] is evidence.
- 0006 — Cant. 1:1 Quia meliora sunt ubera tua vino (the second, corrected printing of the lemma) · Deut. 32:33 Fel draconum vinum eorum, et venenum aspidum insanabile · 3 Reg. 18:21 Accedens… Elias ad omnem populum, ait: Usquequo claudicatis in duas partes? Si Dominus est Deus, sequimini eum; si autem Baal, sequimini eum (agrees but for the second eum where Vulg. has illum — no English exponent, so logged here and not marked) · Gal. 2:11 Cum venisset Cephas Antiochiam, in faciem ei restiti, quia reprehensibilis erat (Vulg. autem displaced by the interrupting inquit) · Gal. 2:14 (agrees; gentiliter et non judaice vivis transposes Vulg. gentiliter vivis, et non iudaice, same sense, and Migne prints no terminal
?— the English follows him, Pattern 8). - 0007 — Cant. 1:1 (×3, the running lemma) · John 1:14 Verbum caro factum est · Ps. 84:11 Misericordia et veritas obviaverunt sibi · Ps. 83:12 Quoniam misericordiam et veritatem diligit Deus, gratiam et gloriam dabit Dominus (Vulg. quia for Quoniam; no English exponent).
- 0008 — Cant. 1:1–2 …fragrantia unguentis optimis · Ps. 84:11 Justitia et pax osculatae sunt · Gen. 27:27 Ecce odor filii mei sicut odor agri pleni, cui benedixit Dominus (verbatim; but see §4 on the printed locator) · Heb. 4:12 (verbatim from vivus et efficax on — the opening Vivus est enim sermo Dei is displaced by Philip's own frame Est enim odor ille, so nothing is divergent, only truncated).
- 0009 — Ps. 26:8 Exquisivit te… facies mea, faciem tuam, Domine, requiram · 2 Tim. 4:7–8 Cursum consummavi, reposita est mihi corona justitiae (abridged across fidem servavi. In reliquo; the words printed agree) · Rom. 8:24 Spe salvi facti sumus (Vulg. Spe enim).
- 0010 — Cant. 1:2 Oleum effusum nomen tuum · Luke 1:31 Ecce concipies in utero et paries filium, et vocabis nomen ejus Jesum · Matt. 1:21 ipse enim salvum faciet populum suum (truncated before a peccatis eorum) · Titus 3:5 Non ex operibus justitiae quae fecimus nos, sed secundum suam misericordiam salvos nos fecit · Ps. 142:11 Propter nomen tuum vivificabis me (Vulg. Domine displaced by the interrupting inquit) · Ps. 142:12 In misericordia tua disperdes inimicos meos · Ps. 24:11 Propter nomen tuum, Domine, propitiaberis peccato meo · Ps. 5:12 Gloriabuntur… in te omnes qui diligunt nomen tuum (Migne adds the vocative Domine — an addition that asserts nothing new, logged not marked) · Isa. 48:9 Propter nomen meum longe faciam furorem meum · Ps. 66:3 Ut cognoscamus in terra viam tuam, in omnibus gentibus salutare tuum · Ps. 143:5 Domine, inclina coelos tuos et descende; tange montes et fumigabunt.
- 0011 — Cant. 1:2 (×2) · Matt. 16:16–17 (agrees; abridged — Tu es Christus stops before Filius Dei vivi, which is what Philip's argument needs, and Beatus… Simon Bar-Jona drops the copula es) · Ps. 96:7–8 Adorate eum, omnes angeli ejus; audivit et laetata est Sion · Ps. 71:17 Ante solem permanet nomen ejus and Et benedicentur in ipso omnes tribus terrae · Luke 1:68 Benedictus Dominus Deus Israel · Rom. 9:5 Qui est super omnia Deus benedictus in saecula · Ps. 21:15 Sicut aqua effusus sum; et dispersa sunt omnia ossa mea · Isa. 45:15 Vere tu es Deus absconditus. Deus Israel Salvator (agrees; Migne's full stop and note fall inside the verse — see §3).
1c. Listed spans that are NOT scripture (and were not collated)
- 0197B (Job II) — an italicised printed locator, not a quotation.
- 0198A occurrit digna relatu / Pompa; senem potum pota trahebat anus — an elegiac couplet from quidam poeta, Philip's own citation. Rendered as verse; the italic run structure is mirrored 1:1.
- 0201A Qui properant, / nova musta bibant; mihi fundat avitum / Testa merum. — likewise a classical hexameter fragment, cited as E quibus unus. Three italic runs in, three out.
- 0203A (Psal. [0203B] LXXXIV) — a locator, italic, printed inside the guillemets and containing a column anchor. Reproduced exactly.
- 0207D Salutaris · Salvator · eleos · misericordia, 0209C unctus, 0212A Oleum effusum nomen tuum, / Ideo, — words displayed as words and the closing lemma. See §5.
- The Job III speech at 0197B–C (Quare, inquit Job, non in vulva miser ego mortuus exspiravi…) is Philip's paraphrase, not a quotation; the extractor did not list it because Migne prints no opening «. See §3.
1d. Scripture woven into the prose unquoted (no marker; recorded for the index)
Not in the extracted list, since Migne marks none of it, but each is an adapted verse and each was checked so that no conformation crept in: Ps. 77:47 (percussit… vineas iniquorum), Deut. 32:32, Jer. 35, Exod. 21:24 / Matt. 5:39, Jas. 2:13, Job 28, 1 Cor. 8:1 (cited I Cor. II), Isa. 35:3, Phil. 3:13, 1 Cor. 9:27, Heb. 12:6 (quem Pater diligit Filium — Vulg. quem enim diligit Dominus, castigat), Ps. 83:3, 1 Cor. 5:7–8, Luke 10:34, John 9:6, Ps. 6:7–8, Rom. 10:12, Isa. 10:27, Ps. 44:8 (unxit eum Deus… prae consortibus suis for Vulg. unxit te Deus Deus tuus… prae consortibus tuis, third person for second), John 1:9 (word order), Ps. 18:5, Ps. 75:2, Ps. 59:10, Ps. 111:9 + Ps. 77:25, 1 Pet. 1:12, Rom. 11:29 (see §4).
§2 · THE THREE FINDINGS THE MERGE SHOULD CARRY
⭐⭐ Ps. 82:19 — nomen tibi DEUS, not Dominus (0011 @0211B). This is the proof-text of Caput XI, whose whole thesis is announced in its first line: Nomen Sponsi, Deus est. The Vulgate reads Et cognoscant quia nomen tibi Dominus. Conforming the lemma would leave the chapter arguing that the Bridegroom's name is God from a verse that says it is Lord — the exact 7a″ failure. If another range meets Ps. 82:19, expect Deus and do not conform it.
⭐ Isa. 53:4 — infirmitates nostras, not dolores nostros (0008 @0204B). Migne's reading is the Matt. 8:17 form. It is adduced to prove why the Bride says ointments, plural — languores multos, multas infirmitates nostra sibi miseria comparavit — and the next 200 words run on quae infirmitas, quo unguento indigeat. The Vulgate's dolores would leave the plural argument without its keyword.
⭐ The head lemma of Caput V prints ubera SUA (0006, col. 0196C). The Vulgate, the frontmatter incipit, and every other printing of the lemma in this range (0007 ×3, 0008, and the re-quotation inside Caput V itself) read ubera tua. The commentary that follows the defective printing expounds the second person outright — longe esse meliora ubera tua vino — so the divergence is confined to the lemma line. Rendered as printed ("his breasts") with a [var:]. Worth watching across the other twenty ranges: if the running lemma is printed sua again elsewhere it is Philip's text; if this is the only instance it is the compositor's, and this range holds the datum.
§3 · TYPOGRAPHY — the seam question, answered for this range
11632 does not divide its two quotation marks sequentially the way 11638 does. It divides them by FUNCTION, and does so from Tome I onward. Across cols 0196D–0212A both marks are in continuous simultaneous use:
- Guillemets « » carry every quotation Philip adduces as a witness — scripture, and only scripture, in all 45 runs in this range.
- Italics carry (a) the running Song lemma at the head of every Caput and at its recapitulations, (b) classical verse (0198A, 0201A), (c) words displayed as words (0207D, 0209C), (d) printed locators — (Job II) at 0197B and (Psal. LXXXIV) at 0203A, the latter inside a guillemet run, and (e) Migne's marginal source-edition page numbers 111–119.
So an italic run in this work is not evidence of a pre-seam book, and a range that meets both marks on the same column has not crossed a seam. I crossed no Explicit/Incipit — chunks 0006–0011 are continuous inside Tome I, Capp. V–XI — and I report no seam. Whether a seam exists later is still open; this range shows only that the starting practice already uses both marks.
Guillemet asymmetries, mirrored and not balanced (Pattern 5 corollary):
- Unopened » at 0197C. Philip's paraphrase of Job 3 (Quare, inquit Job, non in vulva miser ego mortuus exspiravi…) is closed by a » that was never opened:
…uberibus sum lactatus [n: (Job III)]? ». Reproduced as printed. The chunk's counts are therefore 8 « against 9 » and this is correct. - Unclosed « at 0211D–0212A.
« Vere, inquit, tu es Deus absconditus [n: (Isa. XLV)]. Deus Israel Salvator.opens and never closes; the run swallows the whole of Philip's closing exposition to the end of the chunk. Reproduced as printed — 11 « against 10 ». This is also why the extractor listed only 14 spans for 0011: the Isa. 45 quotation is invisible to it.
Two guillemet runs swallow Philip's own commentary (the 11638 @0569A phenomenon, twice in this range). At 0207D–0208A a single « … » encloses Joel 2:32, Ps. 117, the eleos/misericordia etymology, the whole argument that our salvation is of mercy and not of justice, and Titus 3:5 — 110 words of which perhaps 25 are quoted. At 0211C a run opening at Luke 1:68 encloses et benedictum nomen majestatis ejus (which is Ps. 71:19, under a (Luc. I) note) and then Philip's own gloss Nomen humilitatis ejus, Homo est; nomen vero majestatis, Deus est. Both reproduced 1:1. Likewise 0210B, where At ille sits inside the Matt. 16 quotation.
§4 · MIGNE'S REFERENCES — printed as printed, not corrected
Recorded, not acted on (refDisplay keeps what he prints; §10.2 of the brief forbids touching an antecedent a following Ibid. depends on — and both of these have one).
- 0204A
[n: (Gen. XVII)]on Ecce odor filii mei — the verse is Gen. 27:27. Reproduced verbatim. - 0211C
[n: (Luc. I)]covers Benedictus Dominus Deus Israel (Luke 1:68) and, under the following[n: (ibid.)], et benedictum nomen majestatis ejus, which is Ps. 71:19. The ibid. chain is therefore anchored to a citation that is right for the first half of its run and wrong for the second. Untouched. - 0200D
[n: (I Cor. II)]on scientia non sanare, sed inflare — the sentence is 1 Cor. 8:1. Untouched.
§5 · RANGE CONVENTIONS (offered to the merge, not settled unilaterally)
Words displayed as words: the Latin is translated, the italics are kept. Four fall in this range, all in the same etymological construction that §5 of the brief ruled on for candidatio:
- 0207D Jesus, Latina lingua Salutaris dicitur, vel Salvator → "Saving, or Saviour". The argument runs Jesus → Saviour → ipse enim salvum faciet populum suum, and Latin left standing would break it.
- 0209C Christus autem unctus dicitur → "anointed". The whole of Caput X runs anointed → oil → ipse unctus et ungens.
- 0207D eleos autem Graece, Latine misericordia est → the Greek* word is kept (eleos; it is named as Greek and is the foreign term), the Latin gloss is Englished: "eleos in Greek is, in Latin, mercy*". Two italic runs in, two out.
This is the same call 11638 §2.3 made and I have made it the same way; it is worth a line in the merge because 11638's own §1 lists Eleos and misericordia among its surviving italics without saying whether they were Englished.
Pattern 17. The range is almost entirely third person. Every second-person form is inside a quotation and every one is singular in the Latin (ubera tua, tu erudieris, faciem tuam, nomen tuum, inclina coelos tuos, tu es Deus absconditus) — so thou throughout. The two plurals are Philip addressing his readers (Nunquid non vobis… videbatur 0198B; De quo legistis 0197C; ut legistis 0199D) and the Matt. 23 Vae vobis, all rendered you. No mixed-number sentence occurs in this range.
Ruled vocabulary held throughout (brief §5): misericordia = mercy (~40 instances, never "pity" where the noun is used) kept distinct from clementia (does not occur here); charitas = charity (0206D a charitate Christi; 0211D ejus charitas se diffudit) — never "love", which is reserved for amor/dilectio, both of which also occur (0205C inducit… amorem, 0210B illius dilectio); Sponsus = Bridegroom, Sponsa = Bride; unguentum = ointment (never "perfume"), species = spices, confectio = confection/compounding.
§6 · PATTERN 7 — printed readings rendered as printed, conjectures kept here
1. 0202C, Pecte igitur virgo ubera sponsi vino dicit meliora. [sic: Pecte] — carried untranslated in italics. Pecte is a real Latin word ("comb!", imperative of pecto) but cannot fill the adverb slot the sentence gives it, and the conjecture is certain: Recte, which is exactly how the parallel sentence opens the same argument at 0196C (Recte, inquit, adventum tuum… praeoptavi) and at 0199C (Recte ergo Jesus dicitur, 0207D). I judged this over the line Pattern 12 draws between "a real word merely wrong" (render it) and carried type: rendering "Comb" would put a considered-looking reading on the page that misrepresents the plate more than the carried run does. This is the boundary Pattern 12 itself flags as worth watching (the 11081 @0030B case); if the merge prefers the other side of it, the fix is one marker.
2. 0204D–0205A, coepit tuam statim turpitudinem abhorrere. Rendered as printed — "began at once to abhor thy foulness" — inside a paragraph that is otherwise wholly third person and reflexive: the next clause is suae merito foeditatis ipsa sibi vehementius displicere, and the one after suo ipsius odio. The conjecture is suam. Rendered literally, not repaired; a real word wrongly inflected takes no marker under Pattern 12.
3. 0203D, quae Deus, honorum semper amans, legitur odoratus. Rendered "ever loving honours". The conjecture is bonorum ("ever loving good things"), which the context — God smelling the odour of sacrifices — plainly wants. A real word, so rendered, not carried.
4. 0206C, unitus patientia, certam velut fiducialiter et humiliter jam praesumit. certam is a feminine accusative with no noun anywhere in the sentence to govern it. Rendered as closely as the words allow ("presumes upon a sure thing, as it were"); the likely loss is certam victoriam or certam salutem (the latter is what the parallel at 0207A supplies — quasi datam teneat jam salutem). Not supplied in the text.
5. 0206B, ejus labores et agones fingit gratia misericorditer in praecepto. fingit rendered "fashions"; figit is possible and would give "fixes… in a precept". Both construe; no repair made, no marker.
6. 0207B, non apud se, ad modum invidorum; clauso spiraculo retentare. Migne's semicolon falls inside the phrase, between invidorum and its participial clause. Preserved (Pattern 8), which leaves the English punctuated oddly at the same point.
7. 0202A, Gal. 2:14 ends with a full stop where the sense is a question (quomodo gentes cogis judaizare.) — 0006 @0199A. The Vulgate prints ?. Preserved as a statement per Pattern 8; not supplied.
Negation audit. Every non / nec / neque / nisi / nunquam / nullus / nihil in the six Latin chunks was matched against the English on a second pass, with particular attention to the dense clusters at 0196D (non sponsorum… non lactari), 0198D–0199A (Nolebat… non solum… quod fas non est), 0208D (noluit misereri… non avertit… non convertit), 0209D (non principio, non fine, non loco, non tempore) and 0210A–D (non prius… non reddiderit se immundum… non Judaeo tantum, non Graeco… nec est ab aliquibus… interclusum). No negation was dropped and none was supplied. The one place where carrying a negation makes the English read strangely is 0210C — remotiores quoque ab eadem exclusi gloria non habentur — and it is carried.
§7 · WHAT A LATER BLIND READ SHOULD LOOK AT FIRST
- 0207D's 110-word guillemet run. If any repair has hidden anywhere in this range it is there: Migne's quotation marks enclose Philip's own prose, which means the reader cannot tell quotation from commentary and neither could I. Read it against the Latin as one unit.
- The
[var:]at 0199C–D (the Ps. 18/Ps. 44 fusion) is the marker in this range making the largest claim, and it asserts a conflation rather than a variant. If the merge decides a fusion under one note is not a Pattern 14 case, that marker is the one to withdraw. [sic: Pecte]at 0202C — §6.1, the one place I chose the less conventional side of a Pattern 12 boundary.
Philip of Harvengt, Commentaria in Cantica canticorum, PL 203. Range covering CAPUT XII–XVII: the exposition of Cant. 1:2–4 (Ideo adolescentulae dilexerunt te → Nigra sum, sed formosa). Six chunks, 6,782 Latin words.
Marker totals for this range: 15 [var:] · 1 [sic:] · 0 [ed:] · 0 [d:] · 0 [nt:] · 0 [f:]. verify-english.mjs clean on all six (one ratio warning, 0013 at 1.61 — inside the 1.35–1.63 band 11638 established for this author's rhymed synthetic prose). Column anchors, [n:] contents and guillemet counts all verified 1:1 against the Latin twins by diff, not by eye.
§1 · TYPOGRAPHY — this range crosses NO seam, and the reason matters
⭐ 11632 does not switch marks the way 11638 does. It prints both, side by side, throughout, and the division is by FUNCTION. Every chunk in my range carries both, and a count across the whole work confirms the pattern holds from chunk 0000 onward (guillemets and italics appear together in 0000, 0002, 0003 … 0029); there is no run of italic-only chunks followed by a run of guillemet-only ones.
The functional division, consistent in all six of my chunks:
- Italics — the Song lemma under exposition, both when quoted as the chapter's head-text (Ideo adolescentulae dilexerunt te., Trahe me; post te curremus…, Introduxit me rex in cellaria sua., Nigra sum, sed formosa…) and when re-quoted piecemeal in the gloss (Curremus, … Trahe me. … Memores, … in te;). Also Migne's marginal source-edition page numbers (120–128 run through this range) and one printed locator (§4 below).
- « » — every other scripture quotation, without exception in this range: 53 guillemeted spans, all of them non-Song scripture (or, at 0220A, the Song quoted from elsewhere in the book — Mel et lac sub lingua tua, Cant 4:11, which is not the lemma under exposition and therefore takes guillemets).
That last case is the proof. At 0220A Philip quotes the Song itself and Migne guillemets it, because it is a proof-text, not the lemma. The mark tracks the quotation's role, not its book. Do not "tidy" 11632 toward 11638's book-boundary model — the two works are marked on different principles, and a sweep that assumes a seam in 11632 will manufacture one.
Guillemet asymmetries: none in this range. All six chunks balance (7/7, 6/6, 4/4, 13/13, 13/13, 10/10) and every pair is reproduced 1:1 in the English. Pattern 5 inquit-interruptions are frequent here — Philip's habit is to drop inquit / ait / inquit Petrus / ait Isaias inside the quotation — and all of them stay inside the guillemets, untouched.
§2 · THE COLLATION — all 80 spans, every one accounted for
The lemma repeats (Trahe me, Curremus, Recti, Exsultabimus, etc.) are short re-quotations of the head-text already collated at its full occurrence and are not re-listed individually below; each was checked against the head-text and none re-quotes it with different words.
0012 (cols 0212B–0214B) — 10 spans
| Span | Verse | Verdict |
|---|---|---|
| Ideo adolescentulae dilexerunt te (0212B, 0214B) | Cant 1:2 | AGREES. adolescentulae/adulescentulae is orthography, not a variant. |
| « Filioli mei, quos iterum parturio donec formetur Christus in vobis » | Gal 4:19 | AGREES, word for word. |
| « In Christo Jesu per Evangelium ego vos genui » | 1 Cor 4:15 | AGREES. |
| « Domine, inquit Petrus, tecum paratus sum et in carcerem et in mortem ire » | Luke 22:33 | AGREES. inquit Petrus is Philip's speech-tag inside the quotation (Pattern 5), not part of the verse. |
| « Dico tibi, ait, Petre, non cantabit hodie gallus donec ter abneges me nosse » | Luke 22:34 | Transposition only: Vulg. abneges nosse me. Sense unchanged; logged, no marker. |
| « Ego, ait, rogavi pro te, ut non deficiat fides tua, et tu … confirma fratres tuos » | Luke 22:32 | AGREES apart from the dropped connective autem (Vulg. Ego autem rogavi). No marker. |
| « Simon Joannis, diligis me plus his? Pasce oves meas » | John 21:15 + 21:17 | ⚑ [var:] FIRED. A conflation: the question is v. 15, whose command is pasce agnos meos; pasce oves meas is v. 17. |
| « omnes, inquit, perseverantes erant unanimiter in oratione cum Maria matre Jesu » | Acts 1:14 | ⚑ [var:] FIRED. Vulg.: Hi omnes erant perseverantes unanimiter in oratione cum mulieribus, et Maria matre Iesu, et fratribus eius. Two clauses dropped, and erant perseverantes transposed. The dropped clauses are exactly the ones that would dilute Philip's point (the apostles' company is Mary), so the marker names them rather than eliding them. |
| Trahe me, (0214B) | Cant 1:3 | Lemma forward-reference; collated at 0013. |
Unguilleted weaves in 0012, checked and left as Philip's own prose (he does not quote them, he writes with them): Wisd 9:15 (corpus quod corrumpitur…), 1 Cor 9:27 (castigat corpus suum). Both carry [n:] and both are recast into his third-person syntax; neither is presented as a quotation.
0013 (cols 0214C–0217A) — 11 spans
| Span | Verse | Verdict |
|---|---|---|
| Trahe me; post te curremus in odore unguentorum tuorum. | Cant 1:3 | ⚑ [var:] FIRED — and this one is load-bearing. Vulg. reads in odorem unguentorum tuorum, accusative ("toward the odour"); Migne prints the ablative in odore. Philip expounds the ablative — he repeats in odore unguentorum four further times in this chunk and glosses it as the state the runners are already in (Odor unguentorum, suavitas spiritualium est donorum, quam cum electi quique sagaci perceperint odoratu…). Conforming the lemma to the Vulgate accusative would turn a fragrance they run in into a goal they run toward, which is not the argument. |
| « Ideo, inquit, attraxi te miserans » | Jer 31:3 | AGREES. |
| « Traham, inquit, eos in vinculis charitatis » | Hos 11:4 | Rearranged, not variant. Vulg.: In funiculis Adam traham eos, in vinculis caritatis. Migne keeps the Vulgate's own words but drops the first colon and re-orders. Logged, no marker; nothing is asserted that the Vulgate does not say. ⚠ Migne's note reads (Ose. II) for what is Hos 11:4 — reproduced verbatim, not corrected (refDisplay principle, and brief §10.2). |
| « Adhaesit anima mea post te » | Ps 62:9 | AGREES. |
| « Currebant, inquit, duo simul, sed Joannes praecucurrit citius Petro » | John 20:4 | ⚑ [var:] FIRED. Vulg.: Currebant autem duo simul, et ille alius discipulus praecucurrit citius Petro. Migne supplies the name Joannes, which the Vulgate pointedly withholds, and replaces et with sed. The substitution is the interesting one: the Fourth Gospel's anonymity is what a reader loses if this is smoothed. |
| « Sic curro, ait, non quasi in incertum » | 1 Cor 9:26 | AGREES (Vulg. Ego igitur sic curro…; the connective is outside the quotation). ⚠ Migne's note reads (II Cor. IX) for 1 Cor 9:26. Reproduced verbatim. |
| « Sic currite ut comprehendatis » | 1 Cor 9:24 | AGREES. ⚠ Note again (II Cor. IX); a second occurrence of the same wrong siglum on the same column, which makes it Migne's habit here rather than a one-off slip. Reproduced verbatim both times. |
Unguilleted weaves checked: Ps 147:15 (cujus velociter sermo currit), Cant 2:8 + Ps 18:6 fused (qui saliens in montibus, colles transiliens ut gigas caeteris antecurrit, with [n: (Cant. II)]). Philip's prose, not quotation.
0014 (cols 0217B–0218D) — 6 spans
| Span | Verse | Verdict |
|---|---|---|
| Introduxit me rex in cellaria sua. | Cant 1:3 | AGREES, word for word. (cellaria = storerooms, ruled on 11638 §5; kept distinct from cella vinaria.) |
| « Omnia quaecunque voluit, fecit » | Ps 113:11 | AGREES. |
| « Qui dives est etc. » | (Migne: Rom. X) | Not collatable as printed. The span is truncated by Migne's own etc. after three words. Rom 10:12 has dives in omnes qui invocant illum, with no relative qui dives est; the phrase as printed matches Eph 2:4 (Deus … qui dives est in misericordia). Logged, no marker — an etc. is an abbreviation, not a divergent reading, and guessing which verse Migne meant to finish would be conjecture in the text. |
| « Homo quidam erat dives, qui habebat villicum » | Luke 16:1 | AGREES. |
| « est terra et plenitudo ejus, orbis terrarum, et qui habitant in eo? » | Ps 23:1 | ⚑ [var:] FIRED. Vulg.: et universi qui habitant in eo. (Domini stands outside the guillemets, absorbed into Philip's cujus.) |
| Exsultabimus, | Cant 1:3 | Lemma forward-reference; collated at 0015. |
Weaves checked: Job 36:5, Wisd 12:18 (subest ei posse cum voluerit — recast to third person from Vulg. subest tibi cum volueris posse; Philip's prose, [n:]-noted, not guilleted), Col 2:3, 1 Cor 2:12, 2 Cor 5:16. All in his own syntax.
0015 (cols 0219A–0221C) — 23 spans
| Span | Verse | Verdict |
|---|---|---|
| Exsultabimus et laetabimur in te, memores uberum tuorum super vinum. | Cant 1:3 | AGREES. |
| « Justitiam tuam, inquit, non abscondi in corde meo, veritatem et salutare tuum dixi » | Ps 39:11 | Vulg. veritatem tuam et salutare tuum. One possessive dropped; sense untouched. Logged, no marker. |
| « Propter hoc, ait, laetatum est cor meum, et exsultavi sub lingua mea » | Ps 15:9 | ⚑⚑ [var:] FIRED — the most consequential divergence in the range. Vulg.: et exsultavit lingua mea, third person, no sub. Migne gives first person and inserts sub. |
| « Laetetur cor quaerentium Dominum » | Ps 104:3 | AGREES. |
| « Libera me de sanguinibus, Deus, Deus salutis meae: et exsultabit lingua mea justitiam tuam » | Ps 50:16 | AGREES. |
| « Ad ipsum, inquit, ore meo clamavi: et exsultavi sub lingua mea » | Ps 65:17 | ⚑⚑ [var:] FIRED. Vulg.: et exaltavi sub lingua mea — "I extolled", not "I exulted". |
| « Mel et lac sub lingua tua. » | Cant 4:11 | AGREES. Guilleted although it is the Song, because it is a proof-text and not the lemma (§1). |
| « Exsultavit cor meum in Domino » | 1 Sam 2:1 | AGREES. |
| « Exsultavit Spiritus meus in Desalutari meo » | Luke 1:47 | ⚑ [sic:] FIRED — see §3. |
| « Tribulatio, inquit Paulus, et angustia in omnem animam hominis operantis malum » | Rom 2:9 | AGREES. |
| « Duplici, ait, contritione contere eos, Domine » | Jer 17:18 | ⚑ [var:] FIRED. Vulg.: et duplici contritione contere eos, with no vocative. Migne adds Domine. |
| « Bibisti, ait Isaias, de manu Domini calicem irae ejus, usque ad fundum calicis bibisti, et potasti usque ad faeces » | Isa 51:17 | ⚑ [var:] FIRED. Vulg.: usque ad fundum calicis soporis bibisti — "the cup of dead sleep". The dropped word is the one the Vulgate's own image turns on. |
| « Duo sunt quae occurrerunt tibi, vastitas et contritio, et fames et gladius » | Isa 51:19 | ⚑ [var:] FIRED. Vulg. interposes quis contristabitur super te? between tibi and vastitas. Without it the printed text reads "there are two things" and then lists four, which is precisely the puzzle a reader meets on the page. |
| « Potasti nos, ait, vino compunctionis » | Ps 59:5 | AGREES. |
⭐ The two Psalm markers are one finding, not two. Ps 15:9 and Ps 65:17 sit sixteen lines apart at 0219D–0220A, and Migne's Ps 15:9 has acquired exactly the two features of Ps 65:17 — the sub lingua and the first-person verb — while Ps 65:17 has in exchange acquired Ps 15:9's verb exsultavi for the Vulgate's exaltavi. The two verses have contaminated each other, and Philip builds directly on the result: « Ad ipsum… exsultavi sub lingua mea. » Sub lingua, dicit in corde. His whole distinction between laetari (of the heart) and exsultare (of the work) — set out over a full column, then qualified by the observation that exultation is sometimes inward too — rests on a phrase that in the Vulgate belongs to the other psalm and to a different verb. Both markers are placed at their own quotation and neither elides the clause it reports.
Weaves checked: 1 Tim 4:8 (vitae quae nunc est et futurae, [n:]-noted, recast).
0016 (cols 0221D–0224C) — 17 spans
| Span | Verse | Verdict |
|---|---|---|
| Recti diligunt te. | Cant 1:3 | AGREES. (recti = the upright, ruled on 11638 §5.) |
| « Qui diligitis Dominum, odite malum » | Ps 96:10 | AGREES. |
| « Pater, inquit, noster qui es in coelis » | Matt 6:9 | AGREES. |
| « Dilexi, ait, decorem domus tuae, et locum habitationis gloriae tuae » | Ps 25:8 | AGREES (Domine stands outside the guillemets). |
| « Coeli enarrant gloriam Dei » | Ps 18:2 | AGREES. |
| « Dominus in coelo sedes ejus » | Ps 10:5 | AGREES. |
| « Coelum sedes mea » | Isa 66:1 | AGREES. |
| « Bonus Israel Deus his qui recto sunt corde (Psal. [0222C] LXIX). » | Ps 72:1 | ⚑ [var:] FIRED. Vulg.: Quam bonus Israel Deus… — an exclamation. Migne drops Quam and the sentence becomes a flat predication, which is how Philip then uses it. See §4 for the locator printed inside the quotation. |
| « Sint lumbi, ait, vestri percincti, et lucernae ardentes… » (0222D) | Luke 12:35–36 | ⚑ [var:] FIRED on percincti — see §3. |
| « Sint lumbi vestri praecincti » (0223B) | Luke 12:35 | AGREES. |
| « Et lucernae ardentes in manibus vestris » | Luke 12:35 | AGREES. |
| « Et vos similes hominibus exspectantibus Dominum suum » (0222D and 0223C) | Luke 12:36 | AGREES, both occurrences. |
| « Nostra conversatio in coelis est, unde et salvatorem exspectamus » | Phil 3:20 | Vulg.: Nostra autem conversatio in caelis est, unde etiam Salvatorem exspectamus Dominum nostrum Iesum Christum. Connective dropped, tail abridged. Logged, no marker — nothing false is asserted. |
| « Virga directionis virga regni tui » | Ps 44:7 | AGREES. |
Weaves checked: Ps 113:8 (idols), Deut 32:4 as cited but Ps 91:16 as worded — Rectus Dominus Deus noster, et in eo iniquitas non habetur stands unguilleted in Philip's own prose with [n: (Deut. XXXII)]; the wording is Ps 91:16's (rectus Dominus Deus noster, et non est iniquitas in eo), recast. Reproduced, not corrected. Acts 3:2–8, Num 17:8, Isa 11:1 cited as [n: (Isai. XXI)] (reproduced verbatim), Cant 3:6, Acts 14:21.
0017 (cols 0224D–0227D) — 13 spans
| Span | Verse | Verdict |
|---|---|---|
| Nigra sum, sed formosa, filiae Hierusalem, sicut tabernacula Cedar, sicut pellis Salomonis. | Cant 1:4 | ⚑ [var:] FIRED. Vulg.: sicut pelles Salomonis, plural. Migne's singular pellis changes Solomon's hangings into a single skin, which pairs oddly with the plural tabernacula beside it. (Hierusalem for Ierusalem is orthography, not a variant.) |
| « Spiritus tristis exsiccat ossa » | Prov 17:22 | AGREES. |
| « Non est, inquit, ei species neque decor » | Isa 53:2 | Vulg.: non est species ei, neque decor. Transposition only; logged, no marker. |
| « Vidimus eum, et non erat aspectus » | Isa 53:2 | AGREES (Vulg. et vidimus eum…; the connective is Philip's). |
| « Comae ejus nigrae quasi corvus » | Cant 5:11 | Vulg.: comae eius sicut elatae palmarum, nigrae quasi corvus. Abridged, not altered. Logged, no marker. |
| « Domine, ait Propheta, in voluntate tua praestitisti decori meo virtutem » | Ps 29:8 | AGREES. |
| « Ostende mihi faciem tuam, facies tua decora » | Cant 2:14 | Vulg. interposes sonet vox tua in auribus meis, vox enim tua dulcis, et, and reads quia facies tua decora. Abridged. Logged, no marker. |
| « Domine, ait, dilexi decorem domus tuae » | Ps 25:8 | AGREES (second quotation of this verse in the range; both agree). |
| « Tristitia, inquit, vestra vertetur in gaudium » | John 16:20 | AGREES. |
| « Mors ultra non erit, neque luctus, neque clamor, neque dolor erit ultra, quae prima abierunt » | Apoc 21:4 | ⚑ [var:] FIRED. Vulg.: quia prima abierunt — causal. Migne's quae makes it a relative, so the clause no longer explains why death is gone but merely re-labels the list. |
| « Ecce nova facio omnia » | Apoc 21:5 | AGREES. |
Corpus quidem mortuum est propter peccatum, spiritus autem vivit propter justitiam [n: (Rom. VIII)] | Rom 8:10 | ⚑ [var:] FIRED — and this span is NOT on the mechanical list, because Migne sets it neither in guillemets nor in italics; it is a bare [n:]-noted quotation inside Philip's sentence. Vulg.: spiritus vero vivit propter iustificationem. Migne prints justitiam, and Philip then repeats vivit propter justitiam eight lines later as the thing being expounded. See §5. |
§3 · TYPE DEFECTS
⭐ 0015 @0220A — Desalutari (Luke 1:47). The one [sic:] in the range. Migne prints « Exsultavit Spiritus meus in Desalutari meo ». Deo salutari has been run together and lost its o: Desalutari is not a Latin word at all, so Pattern 10 governs (run-together division is non-word type) and it is carried into the English untranslated in italics inside [sic: …], with the surrounding in … meo rendered around it. Intended reading, near-certain: Deo salutari, "in God my saviour", the Magnificat's own words. The English therefore reads "« My spirit hath exulted in my [sic: Desalutari] »", which is ugly and is meant to be: the alternative is silently repairing a compositor's fusion in the one verse in this chapter that every reader knows by heart. ⚠ Note that the verse is otherwise in full agreement with the Vulgate — this is a plate defect, not a divergent reading, and it takes no [var:].
⭐ 0016 @0222D — percincti against Migne's own praecincti at 0223B. Luke 12:35 is quoted twice in one chunk, eight lines apart, and Migne spells the participle two different ways: percincti at 0222D, praecincti at 0223B. The Vulgate has praecincti. No [sic:]: percingo is an attested (if rare) verb, so this is Pattern 12's "real word that is merely wrong" class — rendered as ordinary English ("girt about" against "girded" at the second occurrence) and marked [var:] against the Vulgate, not [sic:] against the plate. The self-correction inside a single chunk is what makes it evidential: whatever Philip wrote, Migne's compositor knew the right form and set it eight lines later.
0012 @0213D — a misplaced full stop, preserved (Pattern 8, and 11638 §3). Migne prints cum in me totum Deum, Verbum Patris. Dei Filium introspexi — a stop dropped into the middle of an appositional series, breaking Verbum Patris from Dei Filium. The English carries the stop where the plate sets it, and the resulting fragment stands. Intended reading, obvious: …Verbum Patris, Dei Filium introspexi, "the Word of the Father, the Son of God, I beheld within". Not normalized — English has an exponent for a stop in the wrong place, so Pattern 9's normalization licence does not reach it, and 11638 ruled explicitly that this construction stands.
§4 · A PRINTED LOCATOR INSIDE A QUOTATION — 0016 @0222B–C
Migne prints « Bonus Israel Deus his qui recto sunt corde (Psal. [0222C] LXIX). » — the citation set in italics, inside the guillemets, with a column anchor falling in the middle of it, and no [n:] wrapper. It is therefore not one of the chunk's twenty notes (the count is 20 without it, verified against the body), and it is reproduced exactly as printed, anchor and all, italics and all. This is 11638 §1's "italics survive by function" case: an italic run inside a guillemet quotation that is a locator, not scripture.
⚠ The locator is also wrong — Bonus Israel Deus his qui recto sunt corde is Ps 72:1, not Ps 69. Reproduced verbatim and not corrected; the citation is refDisplay matter and correcting it upstream would break any following anaphora (brief §10.2).
Migne's citation errors in this range, all reproduced verbatim, none patched: (Ose. II) for Hos 11:4 · (II Cor. IX) twice for 1 Cor 9:26 and 9:24 · (Psal. LXIX) for Ps 72:1 · (Isai. XXI) for Isa 11:1 · (Deut. XXXII) on wording that is Ps 91:16's. Five distinct works misnamed in six chunks is a rate worth carrying to the merge — see §5.
§5 · THREE THINGS THE MERGE SHOULD KNOW
1. The mechanical quotation list does not see bare [n:]-noted quotations, and one of my markers is on a span it never listed. Rom 8:10 at 0226B (spiritus autem vivit propter justitiam for the Vulgate's propter iustificationem) is set with neither guillemets nor italics — it sits naked in Philip's sentence with only its note — so it does not appear among the 80 spans I was handed. It is nevertheless a genuine, expounded divergence: Philip repeats vivit propter justitiam eight lines later as the phrase he is glossing, so the Vulgate's iustificationem would take the keyword out of the argument (the 7a″ mechanism exactly). Other ranges should read their chunks for [n:]-noted spans the list could not catch. I found this one only by reading the notes against the prose after finishing the listed collation; there may be more of the class in this work, and no script will surface them.
2. Migne's citation sigla are unusually unreliable in this stretch — five misnamed references in six chunks — and two of them are the SAME error twice. (II Cor. IX) is printed for 1 Cor 9:26 at 0216C and again for 1 Cor 9:24 seven lines later. A repeated wrong siglum on one column is evidence about the copy-text or the compositor's exemplar, not a slip, and it is worth the merge counting the class across all 21 ranges before anyone proposes a citation-corrections.json entry. Nothing was corrected here.
3. 11632's marking practice is functional, not sequential — the brief's open question, answered for this range. Italics = the Song lemma under exposition (plus marginal page numbers and printed locators); guillemets = every other quotation, including the Song itself when quoted as a proof-text from elsewhere in the book (Cant 4:11 at 0220A, Cant 5:11 at 0226A, Cant 2:14 at 0226C — all guilleted, while the lemma five lines away is italic). If the whole work holds to this, 11632 has no seam to find, and the 419/635 corpus counts in the brief reflect a two-channel system running in parallel from column one, not a switch. The merge should test this against the ranges at the Explicit/Incipit boundaries before concluding either way.
Philip of Harvengt, Commentaria in Cantica canticorum, PL 203. Range 4 of 21, covering CAPUT XVIII–XXIV: the exposition of Sicut tabernacula Cedar, sicut pellis Salomonis (Cant. 1:4) through Nolite me considerare (1:5), Filii matris meae pugnaverunt contra me and Posuerunt me custodem in vineis (1:5), to Indica mihi… ubi pascas, ubi cubes (1:6). Six chunks, 5,293 Latin words.
Marker totals for this range: 6 [var:] · 1 [sic:] · 0 [ed:] · 0 [d:] · 0 [nt:] · 0 [f:]. verify-english.mjs clean on all six — no errors, and no ratio warnings (the six sit inside the 1.35–1.63 band). Column anchors (49), [n:] markers (55) and guillemet pairs (37 « / 37 ») were verified 1:1 against the Latin twins mechanically, not by eye.
§1 · TYPOGRAPHY — no seam here either; §7 of the brief holds throughout
Both marks run side by side in every chunk of this range, divided by function exactly as wave 1 described. The proof case recurs and is worth naming, because it is the cleanest instance yet:
⭐ 0239C — Cant. 2:1 is GUILLEMETED while the running Song lemma two columns earlier is italic. Quorum primus et praecipuus ait: « Ego flos campi [n: (Cant. II)]. » The chapter's own lemma, Indica mihi ubi pascas, ubi cubes, is italic at 0237C, and the Song quoted as a proof-text from elsewhere in the book takes « ». Same chunk, same column band, both marks. 11632 is not marked by book, it is marked by role, and no seam should be hunted here.
Two printed locators sit inside guillemet runs with no [n:] wrapper, the 0016 @0222B phenomenon, and both are reproduced exactly:
- 0232D « Non sunt, ait, recordati foederis fratrum (Amos I). » — italic locator, inside the quotation, not counted among the chunk's four notes (verified: III Reg. III, Ephes. III, Joan. X, Psal. LIV). Here the locator is correct (Amos 1:9), unlike the 0222C case.
- 0236D (Osee XII) — an italic locator inside Philip's own prose (Hos 12:1, Ephraim pascit ventum), again with no
[n:].
Guillemet asymmetries: none. All six chunks balance (6/6, 2/2, 3/3, 6/6, 3/3, 17/17). Pattern 5 inquit/ait/inquiunt interruptions are frequent and every one stays inside the marks.
The [n:] does not always sit inside the closing ». At 0235B (…filiis sceleratis! » [n: (Isa. I.)]) and 0239B (…manduces pascha? » [n: (Marc. XIV.)]) Migne prints the note after the closing guillemet, where elsewhere he prints it before. Mirrored in both places; not tidied.
Marginal source-edition page numbers 129–135 run through the range, one or two to a chunk, kept italic and in place.
Capitalization mirrored, per brief §7a. Virgo/virgo alternates within single paragraphs (0229D–0230A has virginem, virgo, virginis lower case in the middle of a chapter that is otherwise Virgo; 0231B virgo prudens; 0235D conversa virgo) and the English follows word by word — "the Virgin" / "the virgin", "the Bridegroom" / "the bridegroom" (0229D sponsi thalamus). ⭐ The sharpest case is 0238D, where John 3:29 is guilleted with lower-case sponsam sponsus inside a sentence whose surrounding prose has capital Sponsus three times. Rendered "he that hath the bride is the bridegroom" inside the marks, "the Bridegroom" outside.
§2 · THE COLLATION — all 80 listed spans, plus the [n:]-only sweep
Every span in data/quotations/11632/0018-0023.md was collated word by word against the Vulgate. Spans recorded as AGREES were checked and found to agree; the absence of a marker on them is a finding, not a silence. Short re-quotations of a head lemma already collated at its full occurrence are noted once and not re-listed.
0018 (cols 0227D–0230A) — 12 spans
| Span | Verse | Verdict |
|---|---|---|
| Sicut tabernacula Cedar, sicut pellis Salomonis. (head) | Cant 1:4 | ⚑ [var:] FIRED. Vulg. sicut pelles Salomonis, plural. The singular is load-bearing in this chunk specifically: the whole of CAPUT XVIII expounds one skin flayed from one animal (Pellis equidem a mortuo detrahitur animali, instar pellis, sicut pellem legitur extendisse, sola pellis inveniar). Wave 1 fired the same marker at 0224D on the full lemma; this is its own occurrence and its own argument, not a duplicate. |
| Nigra, inquit, sicut tabernacula Cedar, formosa sicut pellis Salomonis. | Cant 1:4 | Philip's own redistribution, not a variant reading. The Vulgate does not pair nigra with Cedar and formosa with Solomon; Philip splits the verse to make the two similes answer the two adjectives, and then argues from the split. Rendered as printed; no marker, because nothing here claims to be the text of the verse. |
| tenebrae. | — | Not scripture. The interpretation of the name Cedar; italic kept, Latin translated (darkness), per the 11638 §2.3 / cruces-0006 §5 rule on words displayed as words. |
| « Post tenebras, inquit, spero lucem » | Job 17:12 | AGREES. |
| « Tristitia, inquit, vertetur in gaudium » | John 16:20 | Vulg. tristitia vestra vertetur in gaudium. The possessive is dropped — and note that Migne printed the same verse WITH vestra eight columns earlier (0227A, collated by wave 1 as agreeing). Logged, no marker: nothing is asserted that the Vulgate does not assert. Rendered "Sorrow…" to match wave 1's English for the same verse. |
| « Animus, inquit, gaudens aetatem floridam facit » | Prov 17:22 | AGREES. (Migne quoted the verse's second half at 0225C; both halves agree.) |
0228C [n:]-only ⭐ …quod acutius omni gladio ancipiti [n: (Hebr. IV)] usque ad divisionem pertingere spiritus et animae praedicatur | Heb 4:12 | Philip's prose, not a quotation — the list's left edge is undetermined and the real answer is that there is no opening: the Vulgate's words are folded into an accusative-and-infinitive governed by praedicatur. Two lexical facts recorded for the index: Migne has acutius where the Vulgate has penetrabilior, and spiritus et animae where it has animae ac spiritus. No marker — a woven paraphrase is not a divergent quotation. |
| « Ecce, inquit, ancilla Domini, fiat mihi secundum verbum tuum » | Luke 1:38 | AGREES. |
| « Coelum sedes mea » | Isa 66:1 | AGREES (second occurrence in the work; wave 1 collated the first at 0221D–0222A). |
| « Dominus in coelo sedes ejus » | Ps 10:5 | AGREES. English matched to 0016's rendering of the same verse. |
0229D [n:]-only ⭐ Quis igitur me miserum de mortis hujus corpore liberabit? [n: (Rom. VII 24.)] | Rom 7:24 | Philip's prose. Vulg. Infelix ego homo, quis me liberabit de corpore mortis huius? — he substitutes me miserum for Infelix ego homo, adds igitur, and inverts corpore mortis huius. It is his own cry, unmarked by Migne, and takes no [var:]. ⚠ Its note is the only one in the range that prints a verse number (Rom. VII 24.); reproduced verbatim. |
Weaves checked and left as Philip's own syntax (no conformation admitted): Ps 103:2 (extendit coelum sicut pellem), Ps 113:16 (coelum coeli), Ps 44:3 (forma prae filiis hominum speciosus), Ps 102:5 (instar aquilae juvenescit), Rom 9:20–21 (plasma plasmatori, testa figulo), Col 3:1–2 (in his quae supra sunt), 2 Cor 4:17 (pressuram momentaneam).
0019 (cols 0230A–0232C) — 8 spans
| Span | Verse | Verdict |
|---|---|---|
| Nigra sum, sed formosa, filiae Hierusalem. (head) | Cant 1:4 | AGREES. (Hierusalem for Ierusalem is orthography.) |
| « Ecce mater tua » | John 19:27 | AGREES. |
| Nolite, / Nolite me considerare quod nigra sum, quia decoloravit me sol. | Cant 1:5 | ⚑⚑ [var:] FIRED — the most consequential divergence in the range. The Vulgate reads Nolite me considerare quod fusca sim, quia decoloravit me sol. Migne prints nigra sum: the colour word is changed and the mood with it. Brief §5 rules the colour triple strictly distinct (nigra = black, fusca = swarthy, and fusca is never "black") — so the Vulgate lemma at this verse is not a blackness lemma at all, and Migne's is. Philip then builds two entire chapters on nigredo: Quod nigra sum, quod moesta sum · Sic et ego nigra sum · me vult denigrari · eamdem nigredinem vult inesse · dignam consideratione meam nigredinem · objectu meae nigredinis. Conforming this lemma to fusca sim would leave four columns of exposition attached to a word not on the page — 7a″ in its purest form. The indicative for the subjunctive is part of the same divergence and is named in the marker. |
0231C [n:]-only ⭐ …nec ipse Sponsus meus potestatis privilegio elegit obtinere, sed, ut vobis notum est, pavere potius voluit et taedere [n: (Marc. XIV)] | Mark 14:33 | Philip's prose. Vulg. coepit pavere et taedere; the two infinitives are lifted into his own voluit clause. The printed words agree with the Vulgate's lexis; no marker. |
| Decoloravit me sol, | Cant 1:5 | AGREES as a clause; collated with the head lemma above. |
| « transivi, et ecce non erat » | Ps 36:36 | AGREES (Vulg. et transivi…; the connective sits outside the marks). |
0232B [n:]-only ⭐ …quod scilicet et iter eorum peribit, et ipsi justorum in consilio non resurgent [n: (Psal. I)] | Ps 1:5–6 | Philip's prose, and a fusion under one note: iter eorum peribit is v. 6 (Vulg. iter impiorum peribit, with impiorum replaced by his own eorum), while justorum in consilio non resurgent welds v. 5's non resurgent impii in iudicio to its neque peccatores in consilio iustorum. Recorded for the index; no marker, since Migne presents it as Philip's sentence, not as a quotation. |
⚠ A Pattern 8 item, and it is Migne's own editorial parenthesis, not scripture. 0232A prints quod dictum est: Decoloravit me sol, pro eo potest accipi, quod est (decolorabit) praeteritum scilicet pro futuro. The parenthesized (decolorabit) is a word displayed as a word and is translated, not carried ("(he shall discolour)"), per the brief's candidatio ruling: the argument is the tense, and Latin left standing makes the inference unavailable. It is not italic on the plate and is not italicized here.
Weaves checked: Ps 68:2 (usque ad animam intrant aquae), Luke 2:35 (pertransit gladius passionis), Eph 5:27 (rugam et maculam), Apoc 21:4 (omnem lacrymam), Ps 111:7 (mentem… securam).
0020 (cols 0232C–0234C) — 9 spans
| Span | Verse | Verdict |
|---|---|---|
| Filii matris meae pugnaverunt contra me, posuerunt me custodem in vineis: vineam meam non custodivi. | Cant 1:5 | AGREES, word for word. |
| « Non sunt, ait, recordati foederis fratrum (Amos I). » | Amos 1:9 | AGREES. (Locator printed inside the quotation — §1.) |
| « Dixit, inquit, illa cujus filius vivus erat… haec est enim mater ejus » | 3 Kgs 3:26–27 | Four small departures, none material; logged, no marker. Vulg. Dixit mulier cuius filius erat vivus (Migne illa cujus filius vivus erat) · commota sunt quippe (Migne quippe sunt) · Contra illa dicebat (Migne Econtrario) · Respondit rex et ait (Migne Respondens rex, ait). The substitution of illa for mulier is the only lexical one and Philip's antecedent (matrem esse illam meretricem) supplies it. |
| « Nemo carnem suam odio habuit » | Eph 5:29 | Vulg. Nemo enim unquam carnem suam odio habuit. Abridged; logged, no marker. ⚠ The note reads (Ephes. III) for Eph 5:29 — reproduced verbatim, not corrected. |
0233D [n:]-only ⭐ Unde et ejus filium non de bono ut aiunt, opere, sed de blasphemia persequuntur [n: (Joan. X)] | John 10:33 | Philip's prose, with the Vulgate's own antithesis (De bono opere non lapidamus te, sed de blasphemia) recast: persequuntur for lapidamus, and the Jews' ut aiunt interpolated. No marker. But see §3.1 for the comma. |
| Filii, ait, matris meae. | Cant 1:5 | Lemma re-quotation; collated above. |
0234B [n:]-only ⭐ Verum homo pacis, homo unanimis, homo notus [n: (Psal. LIV)] dicit injustius ut delinquat | Ps 54:14 + Ps 40:10 | Philip's prose, and a two-psalm fusion under one note. homo unanimis and notus are Ps 54:14 (Tu vero homo unanimis, dux meus, et notus meus); homo pacis is Ps 40:10 (homo pacis meae, in quo speravi). The whole surrounding paragraph is likewise woven from Ps 54:13 (si inimicus meus maledixisset mihi, sustinuissem utique) and Ps 108:4–5 (pro eo ut me diligerent, detrahebant mihi; mala pro bonis, et odium pro dilectione). Recorded for the index; no marker. |
Weaves checked: Matt 15:14 (caeci caecorum duces), Wisd 9:4 (suarum sedium assistricem), Matt 26:67 / 27:30 (sputis illinunt, ingerunt alapas).
0021 (cols 0234C–0235D) — 8 spans
| Span | Verse | Verdict |
|---|---|---|
| Posuerunt me custodem in vineis, vineam meam non custodivi. | Cant 1:5 | AGREES. |
| « Nolite, ait, timere, pusillus grex » | Luke 12:32 | AGREES. |
| « Vineam de Aegypto transtulisti » | Ps 79:9 | AGREES. |
| « Vinea Domini Sabaoth, domus Israel est » | Isa 5:7 | ⚑ [var:] FIRED. Vulg. Vinea enim Domini exercituum, domus Israel est. Migne prints the untranslated Hebraism Sabaoth where the Vulgate Isaiah has exercituum — the form belongs to Rom 9:29 / Jas 5:4, not to Isaiah. Marked because it is a lexical substitution from another textual tradition, not an omission; the dropped enim is not part of the claim. |
| « Vae genti peccatrici, populo gravi iniquitate, semini nequam, filiis sceleratis! » | Isa 1:4 | AGREES. Migne's terminal ! is preserved (Pattern 8), as is the note's position after the closing » (§1). |
| « Vae qui potentes estis, inquit, ad bibendum vinum, et fortes ad miscendam ebrietatem » | Isa 5:22 | Vulg. …et viri fortes ad miscendam ebrietatem. One word dropped; logged, no marker. |
| « Fortes quaesierunt animam meam » | Ps 53:5 | AGREES. |
| Indica mihi, | Cant 1:6 | Lemma forward-reference; collated at 0022. |
Weaves checked: Isa 5:2 and Luke 13:8 (ponit vites in ordine, sepit maceria, putat, fodit), Luke 2:35 again (eam eorum gladius pertransivit), the Exsultet's Felix culpa (liturgical, not scripture).
0022 (cols 0235D–0237C) — 12 spans
| Span | Verse | Verdict |
|---|---|---|
| Indica mihi quem diligit anima mea, ubi pascas, ubi cubes in meridie, ne vagari incipiam post greges sodalium tuorum. | Cant 1:6 | AGREES, word for word. |
| « Esurivi enim » | Matt 25:35 | AGREES (truncated after two words by Philip's own inquit). |
0236B [n:]-only ⭐ …nisi qui ab ipso qui docet hominem scientiam doceatur, cum nesciat homo quid sit in homine, nec digne de altero judicetur [n: (I Cor. II)] | 1 Cor 2:11 (+ Ps 93:10) | Philip's prose. qui docet hominem scientiam is Ps 93:10; the 1 Cor 2:11 question (Quis enim hominum scit quae sunt hominis…) is recast as a cum-clause. No marker. The siglum (I Cor. II) is correct here — which matters, because it is wrong twice elsewhere in this work (§4). |
| « Fratres meos, ait, quaero, indica mihi ubi pascant… invenit eos in Dothaim » | Gen 37:16–17 | Vulg. indica mihi ubi pascant greges. The object is dropped; logged, no marker — Philip's entire chapter turns on the bare ubi pascant, and nothing false is asserted. Vulg. spells the place Dothain; Migne prints Dothaim three times in this chunk and builds two Hebrew etymologies on it. Orthographic, not a variant reading; no marker, but recorded, since a later range meeting Dothain would be meeting a different printing. |
| pabulum viride eorum, / sufficiens defectio. | — | Not scripture. Hebrew-name etymologies (Jerome, Lib. interp. hebr. nom.), translated with the italics kept ("their green fodder" / "sufficient failing"), per the candidatio ruling: the following two paragraphs argue green-fodder → envy and failing → the envious man's own ruin, and Latin left standing would break both. sufficiens defectio recurs at 0237A and is rendered identically. |
| (Osee XII) | Hos 12:1 | A printed italic locator, not a quotation (§1). The clause it points at (Ephraim pascit ventum) is Philip's own weave. |
| Invidia, inquit, Siculi non invenere tyranni / Tormentum majus. | — | Not scripture. Horace, Epist. I.2.58–59, quoted by quidam ethnicus. Migne prints Tormentum majus where Horace has maius tormentum; not marked — Pattern 14 is a scripture marker, and the inversion is Migne's line-break setting. Migne breaks the couplet across two lines and the English preserves the break at the same point, with three italic runs in and three out. |
| « Ecce, inquiunt, somniator venit, venite, occidamus eum » | Gen 37:19–20 | AGREES. |
Weaves checked: Isa 51:8 / Job 13:28 (ut vestimentum tinea), 1 John 3:18 (non verbo, non lingua).
0023 (cols 0237C–0240A) — 31 spans, 29 notes
This chunk carries 29 [n:] markers in 1,111 words — the densest citation stretch in the work so far — and nine of the range's nineteen [n:]-only entries. Every one of the nine turned out to be Philip's own prose.
| Span | Verse | Verdict |
|---|---|---|
| Indica mihi ubi pascas, ubi cubes. | Cant 1:6 | AGREES (abridged from the fuller lemma at 0236A). |
[n:]-only ⭐ Scio, ait, quia non pascis in secreto calami, in locis humentibus tua munditia non quiescit, in quibus ille Behemoth… [n: (Job XL)] | Job 40:16 (Vulg. 40:21) | Philip's prose, and a negated inversion of the verse: the Vulgate says Behemoth sleeps in the covert of the reed, in moist places; Philip says the Bridegroom does not feed there. Both negations carried. No marker. |
[n:]-only ⭐ …mons Gelboe tuae gratus pascuae non habetur, in quo Saul adversarius David [n: (I Reg. XXXI)]… | 1 Sam 31 + 2 Sam 1:21 | Philip's prose. The super quem non ros, non pluvia veniunt clause is 2 Reg. 1:21, not 1 Reg. 31, and carries no note of its own. Recorded; nothing corrected. |
[n:]-only ⭐ Scio item quia campus Sennaar tuae pascuae non offertur [n: (Gen. XI)] | Gen 11:2–9 | Philip's prose. See §3.2 for the construction that will not construe. |
[n:]-only ⭐ Campum quoque Mageddo non tibi ad pascendum existimo complacere [n: (II Paral. III)] | 2 Chr 35:22–23 | Philip's prose. ⚠ The siglum is wrong by thirty-two chapters — Josiah's death in the plain of Mageddo is 2 Paral. XXXV. Reproduced verbatim (§4). |
[n:]-only ⭐ Sed nunquid vallem Tophet tuae pascuae congruam elegisti [n: (IV Reg. XXIII)] | 2 Kgs 23:10 | Philip's prose; siglum correct. See §3.3 for Deo non tibi. |
| « In monte, inquit, Sion erit salvatio » | Joel 2:32 | Vulg. quia in monte Sion et in Ierusalem erit salvatio. Abridged; logged, no marker. |
| « Elegit montem Sion quem dilexit » | Ps 77:68 | AGREES. |
| « Mons Sion civitas Regis magni » | Ps 47:3 | Vulg. mons Sion, latera aquilonis, civitas Regis magni. Abridged; logged, no marker. |
| « Diligit Dominus portas Sion » | Ps 86:2 | AGREES (truncated before super omnia tabernacula Iacob). |
| « Vidi, ait, supra montem Sion Agnum stantem » | Apoc 14:1 | ⚑ [var:] FIRED. Vulg. Et vidi, et ecce Agnus stabat supra montem Sion — a finite verb in an independent clause. Migne prints the participle stantem as the object of Vidi, and Philip's very next sentence is an exposition of the participle: Stantem vero ad quid, nisi ad pascendum? Stat enim agnus, dum pascit; dum vero quiescit, cubat. The whole pivot of the chapter — that standing means feeding and lying means resting — hangs on a participle the Vulgate does not print. |
| « Qui habet sponsam sponsus est » | John 3:29 | AGREES. (Lower-case sponsam sponsus mirrored — §1.) |
| « Ecce Agnus Dei » | John 1:29 | AGREES. |
[n:]-only ⭐ …non illo quem caliginosum nominat Isaias [n: (Cap. XIII)], vel quem magnum et in planum deduci coram Zorobabel asserit Zacharias [n: (Cap. IV)] | Isa 13:2 + Zech 4:7 | Philip's prose. ⚠ Both notes are printed as bare (Cap. XIII) / (Cap. IV) — chapter with no book, the book being supplied by the prophet's name in the sentence. An unusual note form for this work; reproduced verbatim. |
| « Emitte, inquit, Agnum, Domine, de petra deserti ad montem filiae Sion » | Isa 16:1 | ⚑ [var:] FIRED. Vulg. Emitte agnum, Domine, dominatorem terrae, de petra deserti… The dropped apposition is the verse's messianic title, and it is dropped from the one proof-text in the chapter that names the Lamb as sent. The marker names the missing words rather than eliding them. |
| « Ecce ego, inquiens, pascam oves meas » | Ezek 34:15 | Vulg. Ego pascam oves meas. Ecce added; logged, no marker. |
| « In montibus, ait, Israel pascam eas » | Ezek 34:13 | Vulg. …et pascam eas in montibus Israel. Word order recast around the interrupting ait; the words agree. Logged, no marker. |
| videns Deum | — | Not scripture. Etymology of Israel; translated with italics kept ("seeing God") — the sentence exists only to license the mountains-of-vision argument that follows. |
| « Sanctis, ait, qui in terra sunt ejus, mirificavit omnes voluntates meas in eis » | Ps 15:3 | Vulg. Sanctis qui sunt in terra eius… Transposition only; logged, no marker. |
[n:]-only ⭐ Mirificavit, inquit, id est pavit, fovit, perduxit mirabiliter ad effectum… essentque magna et mirabilia opera eorum exquisita in omnes voluntates meas [n: (Psal. CX)] | Ps 110:2 | Philip's own gloss, and the interesting fact is that he adapts as he glosses: Ps 110:2 reads Magna opera Domini, exquisita in omnes voluntates eius, and he writes meas, carrying forward the first person of the Ps 15:3 lemma he is expounding. Recorded; no marker, because it is a gloss in his voice, not a quotation. |
| « Quo vis, inquiunt, eamus et paremus tibi ut manduces pascha? » | Mark 14:12 | AGREES. (Note printed outside the closing » — §1.) |
| « Dominus, inquit, domus demonstrabit vobis coenaculum grande stratum, illic parate » | Mark 14:14–15 | Compression across two verses; logged, no marker. Vulg. dicite domino domus… Et ipse vobis demonstrabit coenaculum grande stratum: et illic parate nobis. Migne promotes Dominus domus to subject and drops nobis. Nothing false is asserted — the master of the house does show the room — so this stays a logged compression rather than a marked variant. ⚠ If the merge disagrees, this is the span in the range most likely to deserve a marker it did not get. |
[n:]-only ⭐ …quia Coelum coeli Domino, terra filiis hominum assignatur [n: (Psal. CXIII)] | Ps 113:16 | Philip's prose. Vulg. Caelum caeli Domino, terram autem dedit filiis hominum; assignatur is his verb. No marker. |
| « Ego flos campi » | Cant 2:1 | AGREES — and guilleted, which is §1's proof. |
[n:]-only ⭐ super cujus faciem videt Ezechiel ossa multa [n: (Ezech. XXXVII)], siccaque vehementer | Ezek 37:1–2 | Philip's prose, present tense for the Vulgate's narrative past. No marker. |
[n:]-only ⭐ Denique in Evangelio [n: (Luc. VI)] descendens Sponsus de monte, stetit in loco campestri | Luke 6:17 | Philip's prose. Note the note falls on in Evangelio, before the clause it documents. No marker. |
[n:]-only ⭐ Pascit etiam Sponsus in vallibus, quas frumento David asserit abundare [n: (Psal. LXIV)] | Ps 64:14 | Philip's prose (Vulg. valles abundabunt frumento). No marker. |
| « Cum omnia, inquit, bona feceritis; dicite, quia servi inutiles sumus » | Luke 17:10 | ⚑ [var:] FIRED. Vulg. cum feceritis omnia quae praecepta sunt vobis, dicite: Servi inutiles sumus. Migne substitutes bona for the relative clause: "when you have done all good things" for "all things that are commanded you." The substitution moves the ground of the humility from obedience to merit, which is precisely the valley-of-Josaphat argument Philip is making. Migne's semicolon after feceritis is preserved (Pattern 8). |
| « Si nosmetipsos dijudicaremus, non utique judicaremur » | 1 Cor 11:31 | AGREES (Vulg. Quod si…). ⚠ The note reads (I Cor. II) for 1 Cor 11 — the third misprinted I Cor. II in this work (§4). |
| « Meus cibus est, inquit, ut faciam voluntatem ejus qui misit me » | John 4:34 | AGREES. |
Weaves checked: Ps 44:3 (ille pulcher prae filiis hominum), Joel 3:2 (valle Josaphat), and the classical sella breviore et avaro tripode.
§3 · PATTERN 7 / PATTERN 8 — printed readings rendered as printed
1. 0233D — a comma inside its own phrase, preserved. Migne prints non de bono ut aiunt, opere, sed de blasphemia persequuntur: the parenthetical ut aiunt has been dropped between the adjective and its noun, and the commas set around the wrong words. The English carries the interruption at exactly that point — "not for a good, as they say, work, but for blasphemy" — and reads as oddly as the Latin does. Pattern 8; not normalized, because English has an exponent for a comma in the wrong place.
2. 0238A — divisisque ab invicem turris, non consummatur magnitudinis infinitae. The ablative absolute divisisque ab invicem has no noun anywhere in the sentence to agree with (the sense requires the builders, or the tongues, neither of which is in the nominative or ablative here), and turris stands against a genitive magnitudinis infinitae. Rendered as closely as the printed words allow — "and, they being divided one from another, a tower of infinite greatness is not completed" — with "they" supplied only as English grammar's minimum. Conjecture: an ablative such as linguis or artificibus lost from the phrase. Not repaired, not marked — a real construction with a missing referent is not carried type.
3. 0238B — in qua filii Israel Deo non tibi, sed Moloch superstitione misera deferebant. As printed, the children of Israel paid honour to God, and then "not to thee, but to Moloch" — which contradicts itself inside six words, since the tu addressed throughout the chapter is God. Rendered literally, contradiction included: "wherein the children of Israel paid honour to God, not to thee, but to Moloch." Conjecture, near-certain: non Deo tibi, sed Moloch — "not to thee, their God, but to Moloch" — i.e. non has migrated one word to the right. Not repaired in the text (brief §9: never translate a word as something other than what it means to rescue a sentence), and no marker, because every word printed is a real Latin word correctly inflected.
4. 0235D — [sic: a beo], the one [sic:] in the range. Migne prints conversa virgo ad Sponsum vult a beo qui sint ejus plenius edoceri. A beo is not Latin: the space has migrated one letter to the right in ab eo, which is Pattern 10's split-type class (the defect is the division, so the whole run is carried, a included). Carried untranslated in italics inside [sic: …] with the sentence built around it — "wills to be more fully taught [sic: a beo] who are his." Intended reading, certain: ab eo, "by him", the Sponsum named four words earlier. Rendering "by him" and saying so in a crux was considered and rejected: it puts a considered-looking reading on the page where the plate has none.
Negation audit. Every non / nec / neque / nisi / ne / nunquam / nullus / nihil / nondum / necdum in the six Latin chunks was matched against the English on a second pass, with particular attention to the dense clusters at 0232D–0233A (non verentur… in nullo miserentur… noluerunt… non sorori exhibent, non denique homini), 0233B–C (nec dilexit… nec sensu mollitur… nec Scripturae testimoniis, nec naturae imperiis… nec Deum timent, nec hominem reverentur… nec virginem in conceptu, nec post partum virginem), 0236A–B (non verbo, non lingua, non solo strepitu… non in omnibus locis, non in cunctis pascuis… non habere… non senserit abhorrere) and the whole of 0237D–0238B, which is a chain of five successive non pascis denials. No negation was dropped and none supplied. The two places where carrying one makes the English read strangely are §3.3 above and 0236A quae vitalem succum noverit non habere / quae a vita non senserit abhorrere — a double negative Philip means positively; both are carried.
§4 · MIGNE'S REFERENCES — reproduced verbatim, none corrected
Per brief §10.2 and the refDisplay principle; two of these have a following ibid. chain hanging on them (0239A Ezech. XXXIV → (ibid.), 0239B Marc. XIV → (ibid.)), which makes correcting them actively harmful.
| Col | Printed | Actual | |
|---|---|---|---|
| 0233C | [n: (Ephes. III)] | Eph 5:29 | |
| 0238A | [n: (II Paral. III)] | 2 Chr 35:22–23 | ⭐ off by 32 chapters |
| 0240A | [n: (I Cor. II)] | 1 Cor 11:31 | ⭐ third occurrence of this exact wrong siglum in the work — cruces-0006 §4 records it at 0200D for 1 Cor 8:1, and cruces-0012 §4 records (II Cor. IX) twice for 1 Cor 9. |
| 0238D | [n: (Cap. XIII)], [n: (Cap. IV)] | Isa 13:2, Zech 4:7 | book supplied only by the prophet's name in the sentence |
| 0238A | [n: (I Reg. XXXI)] | 1 Sam 31 — correct, but the nec ros nec pluvia clause it appears to cover is 2 Sam 1:21 |
§5 · THE THREE THINGS THE MERGE SHOULD CARRY
1. ⭐⭐ Cant. 1:5 prints nigra sum for the Vulgate's fusca sim (0230D), and this is the range's most important datum. Brief §5 rules nigra = black and fusca = swarthy, strictly distinct, fusca never "black" — which means the Vulgate's Cant. 1:5 is not a blackness verse and Migne's is. Philip's CAPUT XIX–XX are four columns of nigredo built on it, and the whole nigra sed formosa architecture of Capp. XVII–XXI depends on the colour word being the same one as in v. 4. If another range meets Cant. 1:5, expect nigra sum and do not conform it — and if any range meets fusca, that is a fact worth reporting, because it would mean Migne is inconsistent with himself across the work.
2. All nineteen [n:]-only spans in this range were Philip's own prose, not quotations — and the class is still worth every minute it costs. Wave 1 found Rom 8:10 in this class and it was a genuine expounded divergence; I found none. That is the useful result to report, not a null one: it tells the merge that the class's hit rate is low but that the reading pass is cheap, and it means the range's six [var:] markers all sit on spans Migne himself marked. Two of the nineteen are nevertheless worth the index's attention because they are citation-practice data rather than variants: the Ps 40:10 + Ps 54:14 fusion at 0234B under a single (Psal. LIV) note, and the Ps 110:2 gloss at 0239B where Philip writes voluntates meas for the psalm's eius while glossing a different psalm.
3. 11632's two-channel typography holds through CAPUT XXIV, and 0239C is the cleanest proof in the work so far. Cant. 2:1 (Ego flos campi) is guilleted as a proof-text in the same chunk whose own Song lemma stands in italics — same chapter, same speaker, same book, different marks, because the roles differ. Three wave-1 agents converged on this and my six chunks add nothing against it. Two subsidiary facts for the merge's typographic sweep, both new here: Migne prints the [n:] outside the closing » at 0235B and 0239B (elsewhere always inside), and he prints two locators inside guillemet runs with no [n:] wrapper at all ((Amos I) 0232D, and (Osee XII) 0236D in bare prose). Neither is an asymmetry and neither was tidied, but a script counting notes by their position relative to guillemets will mis-bin them.
§6 · WHAT A LATER BLIND READ SHOULD LOOK AT FIRST
- 0238B Deo non tibi, sed Moloch (§3.3) — the one sentence in the range that says the opposite of what the argument needs, rendered literally and unrepaired. If any silent repair has hidden anywhere here, this is where the pressure to make one was greatest.
- The Mark 14:14–15 compression at 0239B — the span I judged a compression rather than a variant, and the closest call among the eighty.
[var:]on Isa 5:7 Sabaoth (0235A) — the marker in this range making the smallest claim; if the merge decides a Hebraism substituted for its Latin equivalent is not a Pattern 14 case, that is the one to withdraw.
Philip of Harvengt, Commentaria in Cantica canticorum, PL 203. Range covering the end of Book I (Caput XXV–XXVI, on Indica mihi ubi pascas, ubi cubes in meridie and Ne vagari incipiam post greges sodalium tuorum), the Explicit of Book I and the head LIBER SECUNDUS., and then Book II Caput I–V, on Si ignoras te, o pulcherrima inter mulieres, egredere, et abi post vestigia gregum → Et pasce haedos tuos juxta tabernacula pastorum → Equitatui meo in curribus Pharaonis assimilavi te, amica mea (Cant. 1:6–8). Six chunks, 6,853 Latin words.
Marker totals for this range: 9 [var:] · 2 [sic:] · 0 [ed:] · 0 [d:] · 0 [nt:] · 0 [f:]. verify-english.mjs clean on all six (no errors); two ratio warnings, 0026 at 1.66 and 0028 at 1.63, inside the band wave 1 shipped (0004 1.64, 0005 1.68). Column anchors, [n:] contents and guillemet counts were diffed 1:1 against the Latin twins mechanically, not by eye: anchors identical in order and place in all six; [n:] strings byte-identical and in the same order (11 / 2 / 2 / 2 / 14 / 13, matching each frontmatter noteCount); guillemets 3/3, 2/2, 1/1, 1/1, 16/16, 12/12. No guillemet asymmetry anywhere in this range — every « has its », none stray, none unopened.
§1 · ⭐ THE BOOK BOUNDARY — I CROSS ONE, AND THERE IS NO TYPOGRAPHIC SEAM AT IT
This is the range brief §7 asks for. Chunk 0025 ends Book I and prints ## LIBER SECUNDUS. as its last head (col. 0246C), with an empty body; chunk 0026 opens ## CAPUT PRIMUM. under it. Migne even prints the transition in Philip's own voice — primo huic tandem libro terminum imponamus … curabo quiescentem calamum retorquere.
Nothing about the marking changes across it. Guillemets and italics are both in use on both sides, in the same functional division wave 1 established:
- Book I side (0024–0025): italic lemma (Indica mihi…, Ne vagari incipiam…), italic marginal numbers 136–139, italic printed locator; guillemets on Gen. 49:9, Wisd. 9, Matt. 17:4, Cant. 6, Luke 12:32.
- Book II side (0026–0029): italic lemma and its piecemeal re-quotations, italic marginal numbers 140–145; guillemets on twenty-nine quotations.
So the brief's ruling holds at the one place in the work where 11638's book-boundary model predicted a switch. 11632 has no seam. A later range that crosses the Book II/III boundary should test the same thing and say so; on this evidence the merge can stop looking.
1a. ⚑ But the FUNCTIONAL rule needs widening: guillemets are not scripture-only
Wave 1 stated the division as "« » carries scripture, italics carry everything else," and recorded that every guilleted span in cols 0181–0227 was scripture. That is no longer true from col. 0251D onward, and the counter-examples are not marginal — they are the argument of a whole chapter. In 0028 Migne guillemets:
- « Scito, inquit, te ipsum, homo. » (0251D) and « Scito, ait, te ipsum, homo. » (0252B) — the Delphic oracle, twice, attributed by Philip to unum e septem Graeciae sapientibus or to Apollo. Not scripture, not italic.
- « Dii, si qua est pietas coelo. » (0253A) — a line of classical verse (Aen. 2.536, si qua est caelo pietas), introduced sicut ille poeta.
The prologue's Horace and the two poets at 0198A / 0201A were italic. So classical verse takes italics in Book I and guillemets in Book II. The stable description is therefore not "scripture vs. everything else" but « » = a quotation adduced as an external AUTHORITY (whatever its source), italics = the lemma under exposition, printed locators, marginal numbers, and words displayed as words — with 0029's exception below.
1b. ⚑ And guillemets can carry a single word displayed AS a word
0254B prints « Meos » dicit … and dicit « tuos » — two bare pronouns, guilleted, each being discussed as the word of the lemma (pasce haedos tuos, against John 21's agnos meos). Rendered « my » and « thy ». Under wave 1's rule these would have been italic. Reproduced as printed; do not tidy in either direction, and note that 0029 therefore has 12 guillemet pairs where a reader counting quotations would expect 10.
1c. A printed locator inside the guillemets, again
0244C prints « Nolite timere, pusillus grex (Luc. [0244C] XII). » — italic locator inside the quotation, containing the column anchor, with no [n:] wrapper. Third instance of the class (cf. 0203A, 0222B–C). This is why 0025's noteCount is 2 and not 3. Reproduced exactly, anchor and italics and all.
1d. Marginal source-edition numbers
136 (0240D) · 137 (0242D) · 138 (0244B) · 139 (0246B) · 140 (0247D) · 141 (0249C) · 142 (0251A) · 143 (0253A) · 144 (0254D) · 145 (0256B). Continuous with wave 1's 101–128. Each kept italic and verbatim at the exact word it interrupts — 137 falls between vobiscum and et laborat, 143 between tamen and virum, and the English clause was built round it rather than moving it.
§2 · THE COLLATION — all 70 listed spans, plus the unlisted [n:] weaves
Every span in data/quotations/11632/0024-0029.md was collated word by word against the Vulgate. Spans recorded as AGREES were collated and found to agree; the absence of a marker on them is a finding, not a silence. Lemma re-quotations (Egredere, et abi, Si ignoras, Equitatui meo, etc.) are short repetitions of a head-text collated at its full occurrence; each was checked against its head-text and none re-quotes it with different words.
2a. Divergent — [var:] fired (9)
| Col | Ref | Migne prints | Vulgate | Note |
|---|---|---|---|---|
| 0241A | Gen. 49:9 | « Accubuit enim ut leo » | requiescens accubuisti ut leo | second person → third. Philip applies it to Christ in the third person throughout (Quem profecto… tenere potuit monumentum). Rendered "he lay down as a lion". |
| 0244C | Cant. 6:4 | « Capilli tui sicut caprarum » | capilli tui sicut grex caprarum | ⭐⭐ see §3.1 — the dropped word is the one the sentence exists to prove |
| 0249B | John 21:15 | « Si diligis me, inquit, pasce agnos meos » | Simon Ioannis, diligis me plus his? … Pasce agnos meos | a question turned into a condition; and Migne himself prints the interrogative form of the same verse at 0254B, five columns later |
| 0250B | Cant. 1:7 | Si ignoras te, o pulchra inter mulieres | o pulcherrima inter mulieres | ⭐ see §3.2 |
| 0251C | Job 2:10 | « Si bona suscepimus de manu Domini, quare mala non sustineamus? » | de manu Dei, mala quare non suscipiamus? | divine name changed, and "receive" → "endure" |
| 0252D | Luke 17:10 | « Cum omnia bona feceritis, dicite, quia servi inutiles sumus » | cum feceritis omnia quae praecepta sunt vobis | ⭐ see §3.3 |
| 0253C | Acts 1:14 | « Omnes… erant unanimiter perseverantes in oratione cum Maria matre Jesu » | Hi omnes erant perseverantes unanimiter in oratione cum mulieribus, et Maria matre Iesu, et fratribus eius | same verse, same two dropped clauses, as cruces-0012's marker at 0212B — but the word order differs between Migne's two printings (perseverantes erant there, erant… perseverantes here). See §5.2. |
| 0254C | Hos. 12:1 | « Stultus Ephraim pascit ventum » | Ephraim pascit ventum | stultus is not in the received text |
| 0255B | Exod. 15:1 | « Equum et ascensorem projecit in mare » | equum et ascensorem deiecit in mare | ⭐ see §3.4 — the verb of Exod. 15:4, which Migne quotes two lines later |
2b. Collated and AGREEING — no marker (recorded so the absence is evidence)
0024 — Cant. 1:6 Indica mihi ubi pascas, ubi cubes in meridie (the lemma; truncated at the opening, quem diligit anima mea having been expounded in the preceding range at 0022 — truncation, not variant) · Matt. 17:4 « Bonum est nos hic esse » (opening Domine falls outside) · Wisd. 9 « Da mihi… sapientiam ut mecum sit, et mecum laboret » — a conflation, not a variant: Da mihi… sapientiam is 9:4 (dropping sedium tuarum assistricem), ut mecum sit et mecum laboret is 9:10, and every word printed is the Vulgate's. Per the cruces-0000 item-12 precedent, a conflated citation takes no [var:].
0025 — Cant. 1:6 Ne vagari incipiam post greges sodalium tuorum — agrees word for word. · Cant. 6:5 « dentes tui sicut grex ovium » — agrees, truncated before quae ascenderunt de lavacro (the first half of the same span is the [var:] above) · Luke 12:32 « Nolite timere, pusillus grex » — agrees.
0026 — Cant. 1:7 Si ignoras te, o pulcherrima inter mulieres, egredere, et abi post vestigia gregum — agrees exactly (and see §3.2: the same head at 0250B does not) · Luke 1:28 « Benedicta tu, inquit, in mulieribus » — agrees.
0027 — Cant. 1:7 Et pasce haedos tuos juxta tabernacula pastorum — agrees (also at 0254A).
0028 — Gen. 18:27 « Loquar, inquit, ad Dominum meum, cum sim pulvis et cinis » — agrees, opening at loquar · Ps. 70:16 « Quoniam non cognovi, ait, litteraturam, introibo in potentias Domini; Domine, memorabor justitiae tuae solius » — agrees word for word · Dan. 4:27 « Nonne haec est… Babylon magna, quam aedificavi in robore fortitudinis meae, et in gloria decoris mei? » — drops ego and in domum regni; abridgment, no marker · Job 29:13–16, 29:25, 30:1 — the long « Cor viduae… » run agrees clause by clause, abridged across 29:14 (et diademate iudicio meo) and 29:17–24, and cumque sederem for cum sederem; a stitched citation, not a divergent reading · Ecclus. 11:27 « In die… malorum ne immemor sis bonorum » — agrees · 2 Cor. 12:2–4 « Scio, inquit, hominem in Christo raptum usque ad tertium coelum… » — every word Pauline; compressed (drops ante annos quattuordecim and one of the two nescio, folds raptum… usque ad tertium caelum into v. 2). ⚠ Checked specifically for negation loss under brief §9: the surviving nescio and non licet are both carried in the English. No marker · 2 Cor. 12:5 « Pro hujusmodi gloriabor » — agrees · John 19:26 « Mulier… ecce filius tuus » and 19:27 « Ecce mater tua » — both agree · Ezek. 34:31 « Vos autem greges mei, dicit Dominus » — agrees for the words printed; truncated before greges pascuae meae homines estis, with dicit Dominus pulled up from the verse's end. No marker.
0029 — 1 John 1:8 « Si dixerimus… quia peccatum non habemus, nos ipsos seducimus, et veritas in nobis non est » — quia for quoniam, nos ipsos for ipsi nos; sense untouched, logged, no marker · Jas. 3:2 « In multis… offendimus omnes » — agrees (Vulg. In multis enim) · John 21:15 « Simon Joannis, diligis me? pasce agnos meos » — agrees, dropping plus his; note that this is the correct interrogative form of the verse Migne printed as a conditional at 0249B · Exod. 32:7 « Descende, peccavit populus tuus » — agrees, dropping the preceding Vade · Cant. 1:8 Equitatui meo in curribus Pharaonis assimilavi te, amica mea — agrees word for word · John 15:14 « Vos amici mei estis, si feceritis quae praecipio vobis » — agrees, dropping ego · Exod. 15:4 « Currus Pharaonis et exercitum ejus projecit in mare » — agrees exactly · Exod. 15:13 « Dux fuisti… in misericordia tua populo quem redemisti » — agrees · Hab. 3:8 « Qui ascendis super equos tuos, et quadrigae tuae salvatio » — Vulg. ascendes, future. A one-letter tense difference on which nothing in the exposition turns, and both forms are attested in Vulgate transmission; logged here, deliberately NOT marked. Recorded so a later reviewer who fires one says so rather than treating it as a fresh discovery.
2c. The [n:]-only class — read against the prose after the listed collation
All fourteen ⭐ spans on the list were traced back to their real left edge. Thirteen of the fourteen turn out to be Philip's own prose, written with scripture rather than quoting it (accusative-and-infinitive frames, third-person recastings, passive recastings). None takes a marker; a [var:] on unmarked prose would misrepresent it as a lemma. But two are worth the merge's attention:
- ⭐ 0240B, Luke 9:58 cited, Matt. 8:20 worded. Quia ergo vulpes foveas, nidos coeli volucres habere dignoscuntur
[n: (Luc. IX)]. Luke 9:58 reads volucres caeli tabernacula ; nidos is Matthew's word. Philip's own syntax, so no marker — but the note names the gospel whose wording is not printed. Same class as cruces-0012's Deut. 32:4-cited / Ps. 91:16-worded case. - ⭐⭐ 0245A, Ps. 90:5–6 fused, and Philip then expounds the fusion. He writes vel sagitta in tenebris, vel incursu meridiano
[n: (Psal. XC)]. The Vulgate has a sagitta volante in die, a negotio perambulante in tenebris, ab incursu et daemonio meridiano — the arrow flies by day; what walks in darkness is the negotium. Migne's arrow flies in the dark, and the very next sentence glosses the fused form: Sagitta volans in tenebris, quae ferit graviter dum nescitur, occulta est suggestio. The whole hidden-suggestion / open-assault antithesis of Caput XXVI rests on it. No marker, because Migne marks it as neither quotation nor lemma** — it is Philip's prose with a bare note, exactly the class the extractor cannot see — but this is the single most consequential textual observation in my range and the merge should carry it. If a later range meets Ps. 90:6, expect the arrow in darkness.
The remaining twelve, listed so nobody re-opens them: 0240D 1 John 5:19 + Luke 1:35 woven; 0240D John 19:26 recast; 0241C John 13:23 ([n: (Cap. XIII)] — a bare chapter with no book named, reproduced verbatim); 0242A John 20:22; 0242A Acts 2:3; 0244A Ps. 93:20 recast into the passive (labor fingitur in praecepto for qui fingis laborem in praecepto; Philip used the active at 0195A, so the recasting is his); 0244A Matt. 13:43 recast to the singular (justus… sicut sol lucidus resplendescit for iusti fulgebunt sicut sol); 0247A Hag. 1:6 recast; 0249B Matt. 25:33; 0254A Luke 17:10; 0254B Matt. 25:33 again; 0256A 1 Cor. 1:23 recast.
Further unmarked weaves checked for silent conformation and left as Philip's own prose: Matt. 23:15 (duplo filia sit gehennae, 0244D), Luke 10:18, 2 Cor. 11:14 (0245C), Ps. 68:29 / Apoc. 3:5 (deleri de libro viventium, 0248B), 2 Cor. 1:22 (pignus Spiritus et arrhas, 0248C), Luke 1:30 (0248C), John 6:27 (0242C), Ps. 127:2 (0242C), Heb. 12:9 (Pater spirituum, 0241B), Col. 2:9 (0250A), Ps. 117:15 (0249C), Ezek. 28:13 (0250D), Ovid Met. 1.85 (os homini sublime, 0252A), Ps. 31:9 (equum et mulum, 0252B), 1 Cor. 13:10 (evacuato quod ex parte est, 0254D), Ps. 83:8 (de virtute in virtutem, 0254D), Matt. 11:30 (levi jugo et suavi, 0256A). None was conformed.
2d. Listed spans that are NOT scripture
0251D and 0252B « Scito te ipsum, homo » (the Delphic maxim, §1a) · 0253A « Dii, si qua est pietas coelo » (Virgil, §1a) · 0254B « Meos » and « tuos » (words displayed as words, §1b) · 0244C (Luc. XII) (a printed locator, §1c) · all the italic lemma fragments.
§3 · THE FOUR FINDINGS THE MERGE SHOULD CARRY
⭐⭐ 3.1 · Cant. 6:4 at 0244C — the dropped grex is the word the sentence exists to prove. Philip's point is that the faithful are called a grex singular and the false a greges plural: sciens quia convenientius nomen justis attribuitur singulare. He then adduces two proof-texts for the singular. Migne prints the first as « Capilli tui sicut caprarum » — with no noun at all where the Vulgate has sicut grex caprarum. The keyword has fallen out of the proof-text adduced for it, leaving a bare genitive and only the second half (dentes tui sicut grex ovium) carrying the argument. Rendered as printed, "Thy hair as of goats", with the [var:].
⭐ 3.2 · The head lemma of Book II Caput III prints pulchra where Caput I prints the Vulgate's superlative — and Philip's exposition follows the short form. At 0245D the lemma is o pulcherrima inter mulieres, the Vulgate's superlative. At 0250B, four columns later and heading the same verse's exposition, it is o pulchra inter mulieres, positive. And the gloss between them is unambiguously on the positive: O pulchra, inquit, inter mulieres (0247A), Quamvis quod pulchra inter mulieres dicitur (0247B), then o pulchra four more times at 0253A. So the divergence is not a one-off compositor's slip on a head line (the shape cruces-0006 found for ubera sua at 0196C): six of the seven printings of the phrase in this range read pulchra, and the Vulgate's superlative appears only once, at the head that opens the book. [var:] fired at 0250B only, since 0245D is the one that agrees. ⚑ Worth a count across the later ranges: if pulchra keeps winning, it is Philip's text and the 0245D superlative is the outlier, which reverses the usual expectation.
⭐ 3.3 · Luke 17:10 at 0252D — omnia bona, and the next sentence expounds it. Migne prints « Cum omnia bona feceritis, dicite, quia servi inutiles sumus » where the Vulgate has cum feceritis omnia quae praecepta sunt vobis. Philip's immediately following gloss is built on the substituted phrase: non omnia bona quivis facere comprobatur, si non istud dicere bonis caeteris apponatur; et bonorum congeriem… non colorat. Conforming the lemma to "all things commanded you" would leave four sentences arguing about good things from a verse that no longer mentions them — the 7a″ mechanism exactly. Rendered as printed.
⭐ 3.4 · Exod. 15:1 at 0255B — contamination from the verse quoted two lines later. Migne prints « Equum et ascensorem projecit in mare » (Vulg. deiecit), and then, in the same sentence, « Currus Pharaonis et exercitum ejus projecit in mare », which is Exod. 15:4 and where proiecit is correct. The first verse has taken the second's verb. The sense is not changed — both verbs mean "cast" — and I record explicitly that I fired the [var:] on the word, not on a sense-shift, because this is the same evidential class as cruces-0012's Ps. 15:9 / Ps. 65:17 mutual contamination: two adjacent quotations of the same song, one having borrowed from the other. ⚑ If the merge rules that a sense-neutral lexical swap does not earn a Pattern 14 marker, this is the one to withdraw — the finding survives in this file either way.
§4 · PATTERN 7 — printed readings rendered as printed, conjectures kept here
Two [sic:] fired. Neither carried run is ALSO translated in the running text (brief §8's named failure).
- 0241C
[sic: lehari]— ne a gloria deprimamur, dum ad formam lehari stulte invadimus altiora. Read Icari, near-certain: the sentence's own frame is the Daedalus myth (Inter utrumque ergo non Dedalus, sed Pater spirituum doceat nos volare), and the antithesis is exactly Daedalus's counsel — too low into mud and dregs on one side, too high after Icarus's fashion on the other. lehari is not a Latin word, so Pattern 7 governs: carried untranslated in italics, and the English deliberately does not also say "Icarus". - 0254D–0255A
[sic: vidilicet]— ut vidilicet sequatur exemplo. Read videlicet, certain. ⚠ This one sits on a boundary and I record the choice rather than hide it: an e/i interchange in an unstressed syllable is the sort of thing Pattern 9 exempts as period orthography, and a case could be made for rendering it "namely" and marking nothing. I marked it because wave 1 marked exactly this shape —[sic: eumdum]for eumdem at 0191C — and a work that carries one and renders the other is incoherent on its own page. If the merge prefers Pattern 9 here, it should also revisit eumdum.
Rendered as printed, no marker (real words, merely wrong or merely odd):
- ⛔ 0250B Nolens Sponsus gradatim ad profectus Virginem promovere, docet eam quomodo mereatur proficiendi gratiam obtinere. The printed Nolens contradicts its own sentence: the Bridegroom is said not to will to promote her, and in the same breath to teach her how to obtain the grace of promotion, which the whole of Caput III then does. The conjecture is Volens, and it is as near certain as the parallel constructions allow. Under brief §9 the negation is CARRIED — the English reads "The Bridegroom, not willing to promote the Virgin by degrees to advances, teaches her how she may deserve to obtain the grace of advancing." It is meant to look wrong. ⚠ This is the sentence in my range most likely to be silently repaired by a later reader, and the repair would be invisible: dropping one participle's negative gives a perfectly smooth chapter opening.
- 0253A quod quidem difficile est, sed tamen 143 virum est. virum is accusative and fills the slot of a neuter predicate; the clause does not construe. The conjecture is verum ("but yet it is true"), which is what the argument requires — Philip has just said Si here is affirmative, not dubitative. virum is a real word, so Pattern 12 keeps it on the English side and it is rendered, not carried: "which indeed is difficult, but yet is a man". ⚠ Second place most likely to be tidied. Do not.
- 0242D cum invitat justus secum patientiam ad laborem. The proof-text three lines above is Wisd. 9's ut mecum sit, et mecum laboret, of sapientia — so patientiam is almost certainly sapientiam. A real word that construes in its slot; rendered "invites patience along with himself to labour", no marker.
- 0250B si, quae tam obtinuit, apud se… sic reponat. tam where the sense wants jam. Rendered "which she has so obtained".
- 0247B de qua nasci voluit, sepe carnis novo genere non abrupta. sepe = saepe, ablative of saepes, "hedge" — attested medieval orthography, Pattern 9, deliberately unmarked. Rendered "the hedge of her flesh not being broken".
- 0252C Et Adjunxit: « Pro hujusmodi gloriabor ». Migne capitalizes the verb mid-sentence. The English supplies the pronoun English requires ("And he added"), which relocates the capital and so cannot mirror it; logged here rather than forced. Not a Pattern 8 punctuation case and no mark was deleted.
Negation audit (brief §9), second pass, against the Latin. Every printed non / nec / neque / nisi / nunquam / nullus / nihil was matched, with particular attention to the dense clusters at 0242B (non nisi meridie cubare), 0243D (non nisi dies una non proficiens non deficiens dilucescit, cujus non fuscatur splendor, calor splendidus non tepescit), 0250C (vel non quati ariete, vel flatu quantumvis modico non moveri… nunquam animo consentire), 0250D (si non de his quae acceperat superbiret… Deo paria non sentiret), 0252D (quia non omnia bona quivis facere comprobatur, si non istud dicere… apponatur… qui eam vanitatis vitandae gratia non ignorat), 0255C (minasque Pharaonis non evadunt tali praesidio… equo aut rota volubili non transitur… sicut non navigium, sic nec vehiculum), and 0256A–B (non culpam tibi contrahis, non peccatum, non frangeris opprobriis, non iter deseris… Nec solum caput tuum non premit… sed nec rivus praeteriens). No negation was dropped and none was supplied.* The one place where carrying it makes the English contradict itself is 0250B's Nolens*, above, and that is the point.
§5 · CONVENTIONS SET OR HELD IN THIS RANGE
- ⚑
amica mea(Cant. 1:8) = "my FRIEND", not "my love", and the gloss forces it. Caput V opens by glossing the word — Amicam dicit, cujus animus auditui penitus concordat — and proves it from John 15:14, « Vos amici mei estis, si feceritis quae praecipio vobis ». Douay's "my love" would leave the chapter arguing from friends to a lemma that says love, and would also collide with amor and dilectio, both of which are in use in the same columns. This lemma recurs many times later in the Song (2:10, 2:13, 4:1, 4:7, 5:2, 6:3), and the merge should hold every range to one English form of it. Flagged as the range's one work-wide vocabulary decision. LIBER SECUNDUS.→ "BOOK TWO.", after wave 1'sLIBER PRIMUS.→ "BOOK ONE." The head sits at the end of 0025 with an empty body and its Caput I opens the next chunk; nothing was moved.- Migne's
CAPUT PRIMUMin words, thenCAPUT II–Vin numerals, mirrored and not tidied — and note that Book II restarts the numbering while Book I ended atCAPUT XXVI. Preserved as printed. - ⚑ Sponsus/sponsus, Virgo/virgo capitalization mirrored word by word (brief §7a). The live case in this range is 0243B–C, where Migne prints lower-case sponsum — sponsum tenere sinu, affectu, velut brachio circumplecti — inside a paragraph that has Sponsus capitalized four times before and after it. The English reads "bridegroom" there and "Bridegroom" everywhere else. Likewise 0252D quae nondum dat filius (lower case, rendered "the son") beside Sponsus capitalized in the same sentence. Mechanically checkable against the Latin; do not regularize.
- Pattern 17 does real work here. Caput I–V of Book II is the Bridegroom speaking to the Virgin, singular throughout — Tu, ait, quae majorem cunctis mulieribus gratiam jam adepta (0247D), attende diligentius quid tibi jam meo munere sit collatum, si… memoriter consideraveris te habere, assimilavi te, te addixi, te benedixi, tuas… maculas, te perduco, tibi contrahis, caput tuum, vera mater facta es — so thou without exception. Philip's own frame is plural and takes you: sicut nostis (0241C), cum vobis, fratres and the whole 0242C–0243A exhortation (castigatis, alligatis, relegatis, laboratis, manducatis, dicitis, aestuatis), Videtis Paulum (0252C), ut… noveritis (0252D). The one mixed-number sentence is 0255B's « Vos amici mei estis, si feceritis quae praecipio vobis » — plural, inside a chapter otherwise addressed to one woman, and the English shows it.
- Brief §5 vocabulary held: charitas = charity (0241D sua erga eos charitas) kept distinct from amor / dilectio = love (0241C amoris gratia, dilectionis floribus, where Philip's own doublet forces the repetition and it was not varied for elegance); misericordia = mercy (0255D in misericordia tua), clementia does not occur; fusca = swarthy — live at 0247B, matrem elegerit fuscam, luscam, and at 0243D, cujus non fuscatur splendor, both rendered "swarthy"/"made swarthy", never "black"; Sponsus = Bridegroom, Sponsa = Bride; equitatus = cavalry, quadriga = four-horse car, kept distinct from currus = chariot (0255C–D runs all three in two sentences).
- Migne's Si discussed as a word at 0253A is NOT italicized on the plate (Quod enim dicit Si, non dubitativa, sed affirmativa conjunctio est), unlike every other word-as-word in this work. The Latin word is kept in the English and no italics were supplied — adding a run the plate lacks would break italic parity to make a point the sentence already makes.
§6 · THINGS DELIBERATELY NOT REPORTED (brief §10, checked once each)
- 0026's anchors open [0245D] and then jump to [0246D], and its
colContextis 0246C while itscolFirstis 0245D — i.e. the chunk begins at a column before its own context. This is brief §10.1's band-arithmetic class exactly (two works interleaving by band). Checked: no text is broken mid-word or mid-construction across any anchor in any of the six chunks. No[ed:], no patch, no plate check. Recorded only so the next reader does not spend a session on it. noteCountmatches the body[n:]count in all six chunks (11/2/2/2/14/13), verified mechanically, not by eye.- Migne's references reproduced verbatim, none corrected (
refDisplay, brief §10.2):[n: (Luc. IX)]on Matthew's wording at 0240B;[n: (Cap. XIII)]at 0241C, a chapter number with no book named;[n: (Job. II.)]and[n: (Dan. IV.)]printed with a full stop inside the parenthesis where the other notes have none. The two[n: (ibid.)]chains (0252C on 2 Cor. 12, 0253B on John 19, 0255C on Exod. 15) all resolve correctly against their printed antecedents and none was touched. [n:]position varies and is reproduced, not normalized: it falls inside the closing guillemet in most cases, but outside it at 0251A (Dan. 4) and 0251C (Job 2) —…decoris mei? » [n: (Dan. IV.)]. Mirrored.- Attested medieval spellings left alone and unmarked (Pattern 9): tanquam, coelum/coelestia, aethnicum/aetheris, moerentium, sepe, spiritaliter, Aggaeus, Nabuchodonosor, Hierusalem (not in this range), charitas.
- No
[f:]. 11632 is lemma-and-gloss, not a florilegium (brief §10.4). - No
[d:], no[nt:]: no dittography and no prose note in the range — all 34 notes are bare citations.
§7 · OPEN — for the merge or a blind read
- ⛔ The blind polarity read has not been done and cannot be done by me. Findings must be formed blind and reconciled against this file afterwards (runbook 4a). The three passages most likely to be wrongly "repaired" are, in order: Nolens at 0250B (§4), virum est at 0253A (§4), and the carried lehari at 0241C. An entry defending an unusual rendering deserves more scrutiny than an unlogged passage, not less.
- ⚑ §1a and §1b widen wave 1's typography rule and the merge should adopt or reject the widening explicitly, because "guillemets = scripture" is stated as settled in three range files and is false from col. 0251D. The safe form is "guillemets = a quotation adduced as an authority; italics = the lemma, locators, marginal numbers and words-as-words" — with 0254B's « Meos » / « tuos » standing as a genuine exception to the last clause.
- ⚑ The pulchra / pulcherrima count (§3.2) is work-wide and this range only sees its first columns. Cant. 1:7 heads several later capita. The merge should collect the readings rather than impose one, and should check whether any later range silently conformed the 0250B head to the superlative.
- Ps. 90:6's arrow in darkness (§2c.2) is unmarked because Migne marks it as nothing at all. If the merge decides that an expounded
[n:]-only weave earns a[var:]— the question cruces-0012 opened with Rom. 8:10 and answered the other way — this is the range's candidate, and the marker would go at 0245A.
Philip of Harvengt, Commentaria in Cantica canticorum, PL 203. Range covering Capp. VI–XII: the exposition of Cant. 1:9–13 (Pulchrae sunt genae tuae sicut turturis → Botrus Cypri dilectus meus mihi, in vineis Engaddi). Six chunks, 7,684 Latin words.
Marker totals for this range: 5 [var:] · 4 [sic:] · 0 [ed:] · 0 [d:] · 0 [nt:] · 0 [f:]. verify-english.mjs clean on all six (no errors; one ratio warning, 0035 at 1.65, inside the 1.35–1.68 band this work has already shipped — 0004 ran 1.64, 0005 1.68, 0026 1.66). Column anchors (10/12/14/14/10/13), [n:] contents (5/5/19/17/10/7) and guillemet counts (5/4/11/10/9/3 pairs) were diffed 1:1 against the Latin twins by script, not by eye. Every italic run in the English is accounted for against the Latin's own runs plus the four [sic:] and the five [var:].
§1 · THE TERM DECISION THE MERGE MUST RATIFY — muraenula stays Latin
⭐⭐ This is the most consequential thing in the range and it is work-wide, not range-local. Caput VIII (chunk 0032) expounds Cant. 1:10 Muraenulas aureas faciemus tibi, vermiculatas argento, and its entire argument is that the word names a fish:
Muraenula piscis est, qui nutritus in aquis… Cujusmodi piscem forte Sponsus promittere Virgini videtur… quod intellectum ad litteram nobis penitus interdicit, cum eumdem piscem aureum vel argenteum esse dicit.
Then the fish's shape carries the whole chapter — tail to mouth, a ring, meshes of a net, a chain, Moses' head-and-tail offering, ut integretur macula, fiat annulus, muraenula retundatur. Rendering the lemma "chains of gold" (the 10379 solution) makes seventeen paragraphs explain nothing: a chain that "is a fish" is not an argument, it is a non-sequitur.
So this range follows 10804's precedent, which translation-style.md names as correct for this very word: muraenula / muraenulae stays in italic Latin, in the lemma and in the prose alike (17 instances in 0032). This is the Song ruling's case 2 — the gloss IS the etymology, the stylus/epistylium and murenulae/ferculum class — and not a Pattern 12 carry-through, so no [sic:] and no crux-per-instance.
⚑ The lemma recurs later in the work and every later agent must render it the same way. Within a work: one voice (the style file's own boundary clause). If the merge prefers "little lampreys" or "chains", the change is mechanical, but it must be made everywhere or Caput VIII becomes incoherent on its own page.
The companion decision, and it went the other way: vermiculatas argento is translated, as "vermiculated with silver". The gloss chain here runs vermiculat → vermiculatio → vermilio → vermiculus → vermis (Ps. 21:7 Ego autem sum vermis), and English happens to carry the whole chain visibly — vermiculate / vermiculation / vermilion / little worm / worm. Nothing is lost, so nothing is left in Latin. Brief §5's candidatio rule governs: italic Latin is only for words with no clean English equivalent, and this one has one.
§2 · THE COLLATION — all 97 listed spans, every one accounted for
Every span in data/quotations/11632/0030-0035.md was collated word by word against the Vulgate. Spans recorded as AGREES were collated and found to agree; the absence of a marker on them is a finding, not a silence.
0030 (cols 0256C–0258D) — 7 spans
| Span | Verse | Verdict |
|---|---|---|
| Pulchrae sunt genae tuae sicut turturis. | Cant. 1:9 | AGREES word for word. |
« Beata quae credidisti, » ait Elisabeth [n: (Luc. I)]! | Luke 1:45 | AGREES. Vulg. Et beata quae credidisti; the leading et is dropped at the quotation opening. ⚠ Migne's exclamation mark falls outside both the guillemet and the note — reproduced in that position. |
« Mulier, ecce filius tuus; ad discipulum autem: ecce mater tua [n: (Joan. XIX)]. » | John 19:26–27 | AGREES on every word of the verse. Vulg.'s narrative link is Deinde dicit discipulo; Migne prints ad discipulum autem, which is Philip's own connective, copied verbatim from his immediately preceding foil sentence (non ait: Mulier, ecce Sponsus tuus; ad discipulum autem: ecce Sponsa tua). A frame recast to match the foil is not a variant reading. Logged, no marker. |
« Ipsi vos, ait, testimonium mihi perhibetis… gaudio gaudet propter vocem Sponsi [n: (Joan. III)]. » | John 3:28–29 | Transposition and truncation only; no marker. Vulg. Ipsi vos mihi testimonium perhibetis and quod dixerim: Non sum ego Christus; the clause sed quia missus sum ante illum is cut. Every printed word is the Vulgate's and nothing is asserted that it does not assert. Migne capitalizes Sponsam / Sponsus / Sponsi where the Vulgate has lower case — mirrored, per §5. |
« Si in viridi ligno, ait, haec faciunt, in arido quid fiet? » [n: (Luc. XXIII.)] | Luke 23:31 | AGREES. Vulg. opens Quia si; dropped at the quotation opening. ⚠ The note falls OUTSIDE the closing guillemet here — the only such placement in the range. Reproduced. |
« Quod si radix sancta, et rami [n: (Rom. XIII)]. » | Rom. 11:16 | AGREES exactly. ⚠ Migne's siglum reads (Rom. XIII) for Rom. 11:16. Reproduced verbatim, not corrected (refDisplay, brief §10.2). |
ait Elisabeth ([n:]-only) | — | Not a quotation: Philip's speech tag on the Luke 1:45 guillemet run. |
Unguilleted weaves in 0030, checked and left as Philip's own prose (no marker, recorded so a later reader knows they were read): Matt. 11:11 (major quo inter natos mulierum non surrexit), Gen. 2:24 / Eph. 5:31 (secum factus est caro una), Eph. 2:3 (irae filius ex natura).
0031 (cols 0259A–0261D) — 8 spans
| Span | Verse | Verdict |
|---|---|---|
| Collum tuum, sicut monilia. | Cant. 1:9 | AGREES. Migne adds a comma the Vulgate lacks; Pattern 8, kept. |
« Solve, ait, vincula colli tui, captiva filia Sion [n: (Isa. LII)]. » | Isa. 52:2 | AGREES word for word. |
« Tollite jugum meum super vos, et discite a me quia mitis sum et humilis corde [n: (Matth. XI)]. » | Matt. 11:29 | AGREES word for word. |
« Vinum non habent [n: (Joan. II)]. » | John 2:3 | AGREES. The frame Dicit… Mater Jesu ad eum is the Vulgate's own and stands outside the guillemets. |
| « Quodcunque dixerit vobis, facite (ibid). » | John 2:5 | AGREES (quodcunque / quodcumque is orthography). ⚠ The locator is an italic (ibid) printed inside the guillemets with NO [n:] wrapper — the 0222C / 0203A class again. It is not one of the chunk's five notes (count verified) and is reproduced exactly as printed, italics and all. |
…dignaretur habitu ut homo inveniri? [n: (Philip. II.)] ([n:]-only) | Phil. 2:6–7 | Philip's prose, not a quotation. No marker. Only habitu … ut homo inveniri is Vulgate wording (habitu inventus ut homo), and it is recast into his own ut-clause with his own rhyme (vestiri / inveniri). |
In 148 Paulo, sicut ait [n: (Rom. VII)], duae sibi leges… | Rom. 7:23, 25 | Philip's prose, not a quotation. No marker. mente serviens legi Dei… carne autem legi peccati recasts Vulg. mente servio legi Dei, carne autem legi peccati into participles governed by his own sentence. |
| 147 | — | Migne's marginal source-edition page number, not a quotation. |
Also checked and left unmarked: the maxim juxta ethnicum, non honor est, sed onus (Ovid, Her. 9.31) — Migne sets it in neither guillemets nor italics, so there is nothing to reproduce; Luke 1:38 (ancillam humilem se fatetur), Eph. 2:14 + 4:5 (duo parietes una fide, uno baptismate), John 2:7–9 (aqua implentur hydriae). All in Philip's syntax.
⭐ Pattern 3 fires here on a BARE Scripturis. 0260A: unde tamen vel mandatum in Scripturis, vel formam in praecessoribus non haberet → "in the Scriptures". Neither divina nor sacra is present — which is exactly the form 11638's sweep pattern missed, and cruces-0000 §4.9 warned would recur. It has. A later sweep of 11632 must match bare Scriptura(e) too.
0032 (cols 0262A–0265B) — 26 spans
| Span | Verse | Verdict |
|---|---|---|
| Muraenulas aureas faciemus tibi, vermiculatas argento. (and its 5 re-quotations at 0262A, 0265B) | Cant. 1:10 | AGREES word for word at every printing. See §1 for the term decision. |
« Salvum me fac Deus, ait, quoniam intraverunt aquae usque ad animam meam [n: (Psal. LXVIII)]. » | Ps. 68:2 | AGREES. |
« Non absorbeat me profundum [n: (ibid.)]. » | Ps. 68:16 | Vulg. neque absorbeat me profundum. Non for neque at a quotation opening; the negation itself is intact and carried. Logged, no marker.** |
In camino… non praeventa, non feno, non stipulae, sed auro primo similis est inventa [n: (I Cor. III)] ([n:]-only) | 1 Cor. 3:12 | Philip's prose. Only the materials list (fenum, stipula, aurum) is Pauline; the syntax, the furnace and the odor ignis (Dan. 3:94) are his. No marker. |
ille viro incognitam jam praesentis matrem Domini fore spondet [n: (Luc. I)] ([n:]-only) | Luke 1 | Philip's prose. No marker. |
novum hominem pariens qui apud Deum in principio Deus erat [n: (Joan. I)] ([n:]-only) | John 1:1–2 | Philip's prose, the Johannine words folded into his own relative clause. No marker. |
« Scientes, ait, quoniam tribulatio patientiam operatur… quia charitas Dei diffusa est in cordibus nostris [n: (Rom. V)]. » | Rom. 5:3–5 | AGREES on every printed word. Vulg. quod for quoniam, and autem / vero dropped from the chain; the tail per Spiritum Sanctum, qui datus est nobis is cut. Connectives and truncation, not a variant. No marker. |
Ipsius quidem pro nobis, Isaia perhibente [n: (Isa. LXIII)], rubuit indumentum… ([n:]-only) | Isa. 63:2 | Philip's prose, recast from Vulg.'s second-person question (Quare ergo rubrum est indumentum tuum) into third-person statement. No marker. |
…ut pro peccatis rufa vitula debeat immolari [n: (Num. XIX)] ([n:]-only) | Num. 19:2 | Philip's prose (vitula for Vulg. vacca, inside his own ut-clause). No marker. |
« Ego autem sum vermis et non homo; opprobrium hominum et abjectio plebis [n: (Psal. XXI)]. » | Ps. 21:7 | AGREES word for word, punctuation included. |
« jam non moritur, mors illi ultra non dominabitur [n: (Rom. VI)]. » | Rom. 6:9 | AGREES. Truncated before Christus resurgens ex mortuis; both negations carried. |
Annon ille mortuus est, qui mortem negatione timida subterfugit [n: (Marc. XIV)] ([n:]-only) | Mark 14 | Philip's own rhetorical question about Peter. No marker. |
Habetis quia eloquium Domini eloquium castum, argentum igne examinatum, probatum terrae, purgatum septuplum [n: (Psal. XI)]. ([n:]-only) | Ps. 11:7 | ⭐⭐ [var:] FIRED — see §3.1. This span is [n:]-only and it is the range's principal find. |
« Si transieris, ait, per ignem, non combureris; et flamma non nocebit in te [n: (Isa. XLIII)]. » | Isa. 43:2 | ⭐ [var:] FIRED — see §3.2. |
Petri eloquium ignis non sonorum, sed instar plumbi sordidum comperitur [n: (Marc. XIV)] ([n:]-only) | Mark 14 | Philip's prose. No marker. |
« Ne auferas de ore meo verbum veritatis usquequaque [n: (Psal. CXVIII)]. » | Ps. 118:43 | AGREES. Leading Et dropped at the opening. |
« Et respondebo exprobrantibus [0264D] mihi verbum [n: (ibid.)]. » | Ps. 118:42 | AGREES word for word. The column anchor falls inside the guillemets, between exprobrantibus and mihi; reproduced in place. |
« Pater meus, inquit, operatur, et ego operor [n: (Joan. V)]. » | John 5:17 | Vulg. Pater meus usque modo operatur. Adverbial phrase dropped; nothing asserted that the Vulgate does not assert. Logged, no marker. |
« Quaecunque Pater facit, haec et Filius similiter facit [n: (ibid.)], » | John 5:19 | ⚑ Vulg. quaecumque enim ille fecerit, haec et Filius similiter facit. Migne names Pater where the Vulgate has the pronoun ille, and gives present facit for future-perfect fecerit. [var:] deliberately NOT fired, and it is a close call: unlike the 0013 John 20:4 case (where Joannes replaces an anonymity the Fourth Gospel is pointedly keeping), ille here has Patrem as its own antecedent four words earlier, so the substitution asserts nothing new. Recorded so the absence of the marker is a decision, not an oversight. |
« Veniemus, ait, et mansionem apud eum faciemus [n: (Joan. XIV)]. » | John 14:23 | AGREES. Vulg. et ad eum veniemus; truncated at the opening. |
| 149 · 150 | — | Migne's marginal page numbers. |
⚠ Typography worth naming: at 0265B Migne breaks his own italics to isolate a verb. He prints Muraenulas aureas faciam tibi, sed faciemus. — faciam set in roman inside the lemma, because the whole point of the sentence is that the Bridegroom did not say it. The English mirrors the run structure exactly (Muraenulae of gold I will make for thee, but we will make.).
0033 (cols 0265C–0268D) — 25 spans
| Span | Verse | Verdict |
|---|---|---|
| Cum esset rex in accubitu suo, nardus mea dedit odorem suum. (0265C; re-quoted 0265C, 0267B) | Cant. 1:12 | ⭐ Vulg. reads DUM esset rex. Migne prints Cum at all three printings here and a fourth time at 0270B, where the verse is re-quoted as a guilleted proof-text. [var:] deliberately NOT fired — cum and dum are synonymous as temporal conjunctions and the sense is untouched (Pattern 14's threshold). But four independent printings make this Philip's copy of the Bible, not a compositor's slip, and his own gloss picks the word up (Cum igitur, esset rex in accubitu suo, id est cum Deus in homine…). ⚑ Flagged for the merge to rule: it is exactly the shape of brief §6's Zech. 4:14 / Gen. 3:19 attestations. |
« Unde hoc mihi, ait sacerdos, ut veniat mater Domini mei ad me [n: (ibid.)]. » | Luke 1:43 | AGREES. Leading Et dropped. Migne prints a full stop where the Vulgate has ?; preserved (Pattern 8), so the English is a statement. |
« Ecce enim ut facta est vox salutationis tuae in auribus meis, exsultavit in gaudio infans in utero meo [n: (ibid.)]. » | Luke 1:44 | AGREES word for word. |
| « Quem dicunt homines esse Filium hominis (Matth. [0267C] XVI); » | Matt. 16:13 | AGREES. ⚠ A second printed locator inside a guillemet run, italic, with a column anchor falling in the middle of it and no [n:] wrapper — identical in form to 0222B–C and 0203A. Not one of the chunk's 17 notes (count verified against the body). Reproduced exactly. Migne prints ; for the Vulgate's ?; preserved. |
« Vos autem quem me esse dicitis [n: (ibid.)]. » | Matt. 16:15 | AGREES. Terminal ? again absent in Migne; preserved. |
« Tu es Christus Filius Dei vivi [n: (ibid.)]. » | Matt. 16:16 | AGREES. |
« Vere, inquit, Filius Dei erat iste [n: (Matth. XXVII)]. » | Matt. 27:54 | AGREES. |
« Deus Deus meus, ait, utquid dereliquisti me? [n: (Matth. XXVII.)] » | Matt. 27:46 | Migne's cited verse reads Deus meus, Deus meus; what he prints is the Ps. 21:2 Gallican opening Deus, Deus meus. A vocative-doubling variant with no change of sense — no marker, recorded. Note the ? and the note both sit inside the closing guillemet; reproduced. |
« Laboravi, ait, sustinens [0268A] [n: (Isa. I)]. » | Isa. 1:14 | AGREES. Anchor inside the guillemets, before the note. |
« Domine, ait, dedisti eis scutum cordis, laborem tuum [n: (Thren. III)]. » | Lam. 3:65 | ⭐ [var:] FIRED — see §3.3. |
sedit ad dexteram majestatis in excelsis, tanto melior angelis jam effectus, quanto prae illis nomen haereditarium est adeptus [n: (Hebr. I)] ([n:]-only) | Heb. 1:3–4 | ⚑ The densest [n:]-only weave in the range, and the one I came closest to marking. Migne prints sedit for Vulg. sedet, drops differentius, and recasts hereditavit into haereditarium est adeptus. Judged Philip's prose, not a quotation, and unmarked: the subject is supplied by his own preceding narrative clause (Cum vero iter laboriosum… ascendisset), and the recast verb carries his own rhyme (effectus / adeptus). Recorded in full so that a later reader who disagrees can reverse it on the evidence rather than rediscover it. |
Misso quippe Spiritu et in linguis igneis descendente… [n: (Act. II)] ([n:]-only) | Acts 2:2–3 | Philip's prose (ablative absolutes, his rhyme). No marker. |
…quae libram unguenti nardi pistici pretiosi Christo recumbenti voluit propinare [n: (Joan. XII)] ([n:]-only) | John 12:3 | Philip's prose. No marker. |
« Bonum, inquit, opus operata est in me [n: (Matth. XXI)]. » | Matt. 26:10 | Vulg. opus enim bonum operata est in me. Transposition only; logged, no marker. ⚠ Siglum (Matth. XXI) for Matt. 26:10 — reproduced verbatim, not corrected. |
Accumbente quidem Sponso… / Hunc odorem Elisabeth… / …redderet meliorem, quem prophetam Altissimi… / rubum illum mirabilem… / cum post ortum Filii, qui sapientia profecit et aetate… (5 further [n:]-only spans) | Matt. 1:20; Luke 1:39–44; Luke 1:76; Exod. 3:2; Luke 2:52 | All Philip's narrative prose, each carrying only its note. Checked against the Vulgate so that no conformation could creep in; none marked. |
| 151 · 152 | — | Marginal page numbers. |
0034 (cols 0269A–0271B) — 18 spans
| Span | Verse | Verdict |
|---|---|---|
| Fasciculus mirrhae dilectus meus mihi, inter ubera mea commorabitur. (+ 4 re-quotations) | Cant. 1:12 | AGREES (mirrhae / myrrhae orthography). |
« Cum audisset, inquit, adolescens verbum, abiit tristis; erat enim habens multas possessiones [n: (Matth. XIX)]. » | Matt. 19:22 | AGREES. Vulg.'s autem is displaced by the interrupting inquit (Pattern 5). |
« Qui manducat meam carnem… et jam non cum illo ambulabant [n: (Joan. VI)]. » | John 6:57 + 6:61 + 6:67 | AGREES, save a dropped et before quis potest. A three-verse conflation under a single note that is correct for all three — unlike the 0199C–D two-psalm fusion, nothing here is mis-attributed. No marker. Note the column anchor [0269C] falls inside the run, after the second inquit. |
« Esto, ait, consentiens adversario tuo, dum es in via cum eo [n: (Matth. V)]. » | Matt. 5:25 | Vulg. adversario tuo cito dum es in via. One adverb dropped. Logged, no marker. |
« Cum esset, inquiens, Rex in accubitu suo [n: (Cant. I)], » | Cant. 1:12 | ⭐ The typography proof again, and it is now three-for-three across this work: the Song itself takes GUILLEMETS when quoted as a proof-text rather than as the running lemma (which is italic five lines above and below). Same Cum for Dum as at 0033 — fourth printing; see the 0033 row. |
« Divertit ab oneribus dorsum ejus [n: (Psal. LXXX)]. » | Ps. 80:7 | AGREES. |
Et legistis, quia ovem perditam et inventam pastor in humeris reportat ad gregem [n: (Luc. XV)] ([n:]-only) | Luke 15:5 | Philip's prose (reportat ad gregem for Vulg. imponit in umeros suos gaudens). No marker. |
« Laboravi sustinens [n: (Isa. I)]. » | Isa. 1:14 | AGREES (second occurrence in the range; both agree). |
« Deus cordis mei, et pars mea Deus [n: (Psal. LXXII)]. » | Ps. 72:26 | AGREES. Truncated before in aeternum. |
« Parvulus, inquit, natus est nobis [n: (Isa. IX)]. » | Isa. 9:6 | AGREES. Vulg.'s enim displaced by inquit. |
« Tenui eum, nec dimittam [n: (Cant. III)]. » | Cant. 3:4 | AGREES. Guilleted, and again the Song as proof-text. |
| 153 | — | Marginal page number. |
Weaves checked: Matt. 27:32 (non tanquam Simon in angaria), Matt. 26:41 (Spiritus promptus). Philip's prose.
0035 (cols 0271C–0274C) — 13 spans
| Span | Verse | Verdict |
|---|---|---|
| Botrus Cypri Dilectus meus mihi, in vineis Engaddi. (+ 3 re-quotations) | Cant. 1:13 | AGREES. Migne capitalizes Dilectus in the head printing and prints it lower case in all three re-quotations — mirrored, not regularized (§5). |
« Qui manducat, inquit, me, ipse vivet propter me [n: (Joan. VI)]. » | John 6:58 | AGREES. Vulg. qui manducat me, et ipse vivet; connective dropped at the opening. |
« Ergo, inquit, diligentes me diligo [n: (Prov. VIII)]. » | Prov. 8:17 | ⭐ [var:] FIRED — see §3.4. |
« Tetigit me, inquit, aliquis: ego enim sensi virtutem de me exisse [n: (Luc. VIII)]. » | Luke 8:46 | ⭐ [var:] FIRED — see §3.5. |
| fons haedi, · temptationis oculis | — | Not scripture: the etymology of Engaddi, displayed as words. Translated with the italics kept (brief §5's candidatio rule; the whole rest of the chapter runs on kid → fount → Spirit → eye). ⚠ temptationis oculis is a dative/ablative plural with nothing to govern it, against Migne's own nominative singular Oculus quoque temptationis fifteen lines later. Rendered as printed ("to the eyes of temptation"); conjecture oculus temptationis, not supplied. |
Haedus in lege reprobatur… [n: (Levit. XVI)] · …a sinistris [n: (Matth. XXV)] · Fons autem haedi ipse est Spiritus… carnem leprosi Naaman reddit puero puriorem [n: (IV Reg. V)] · haedum in agnum mutat, dans vitae meritum innocentis [n: (Joan. IV)] (4 [n:]-only spans) | Lev. 16:10; Matt. 25:33; 4 Reg. 5:14; John 4:14 | All Philip's prose, each in his own rhymed clause; the John 4:14 tail (fit in eo qui biberit fons uber, fons aquae salientis) is his recast, not a quotation. None marked. |
| 154 · 155 | — | Marginal page numbers. |
Weaves checked: 1 John 2:27 (docet de omnibus unctionem), Ps. 10:8 (qui nonnisi justitias diligit), Prov. 4:18 (diei deducit ad perfectum), Rom. 13:13 + John 12:35 (sicut in die honeste ambulet, et non eum tenebrae comprehendant), Matt. 25:21 (frui jam illo sui Domini gaudio).
§3 · THE FIVE [var:], IN FULL
1. ⭐⭐ Ps. 11:7 at 0264C — eloquium SINGULAR, and it is [n:]-only. Migne prints Habetis quia eloquium Domini eloquium castum, argentum igne examinatum, probatum terrae, purgatum septuplum [n: (Psal. XI)]. The Vulgate reads the plural Eloquia Domini, eloquia casta. The singular is the word Philip goes on to expound, twice, within eight lines: Petri eloquium ignis non sonorum… Joannis vero eloquium non satis lucidum invenitur. His whole point is that one man's speech and another man's speech are each assayed like silver, and the plural would dissolve the comparison into a general predication about scripture.
⛔ This span is set in NEITHER guillemets NOR italics — it is the class the brief warns about at §8 and that cruces-0012 §5.1 found Rom. 8:10 in. The extractor listed it only because the note is attached; it could not know where it began, and the opening is eloquium, not Habetis.
2. Isa. 43:2 at 0264C — two words, and Philip's next clause uses both. Migne: « Si transieris, ait, per ignem, non combureris; et flamma non nocebit in te ». Vulg.: cum ambulaveris in igne, non combureris, et flamma non ardebit in te. (transieris has migrated from the preceding water clause, cum transieris per aquas.) The marker matters because the sentence Philip builds on it reads illaesum transiens, "passing through unharmed" — which picks up transieris and nocebit precisely, and neither of which is in the Vulgate's wording of the verse.
3. Lam. 3:65 at 0268A — tense, plus an added vocative. Migne: « Domine, ait, dedisti eis scutum cordis, laborem tuum ». Vulg.: Dabis eis scutum cordis, laborem tuum — future, no vocative. The tense is material in the place Philip puts it: the verse is the third of three proof-texts (utquid dereliquisti me · Laboravi sustinens · this) adduced to show that the incarnate life was non quietis haec habitatio, sed laboris — an accomplished labour, not a promised one. Same class as the 0193C Jer. 31:22 marker in wave 1.
4. Prov. 8:17 at 0273B — Ergo for Ego. Migne: « Ergo, inquit, diligentes me diligo ». Vulg.: Ego diligentes me diligo. Under Pattern 5 the interrupting inquit sits inside the quotation, so Ergo is the quotation's first word, not Philip's connective outside it. Rendered "Therefore" as printed; the marker records the emphatic pronoun the received text has and this printing does not. (This is the one marker in the range where the divergence is most likely a compositor's transposition rather than a copy-text reading — but Pattern 14 forbids speculating about why, so the note states both readings and nothing more.)
5. Luke 8:46 at 0273B — sensi for novi. Migne: « Tetigit me, inquit, aliquis: ego enim sensi virtutem de me exisse ». Vulg.: nam ego novi virtutem de me exiisse — "I know", not "I felt". Material here because the verse is adduced for a touch, and the paragraph around it is built on sensation: cum tangitur affectu placito diligentis… qui si tactu et amore digne credentium compungatur. The Vulgate's novi would put knowledge where Philip's argument needs feeling.
§4 · PATTERN 7 AND PATTERN 10 — four [sic:], and what was NOT marked
The four carried runs. None of the four is ALSO translated in the running text (brief §8's named failure).
- 0030 @0256C
[sic: a vida]— et alter alterum non fastidit, sed fauce semper a vida satiatur. Pattern 10, split type: a vida is not a Latin phrase (vida is not a word), and the run is avida, agreeing with fauce — "with an ever-greedy throat". The whole broken run is carried, spacing included; the English reads "with a throat ever [sic: a vida] is satisfied" and does not also supply "greedy". - 0031 @0260B
[sic: munos]— Ipsa prior, ipsa felicior accipit grande munos. Read munus, certain (grande munus). Carried untranslated; the English does not also say "gift". - 0032 @0263A
[sic: cam]— nulla adversitas a proposito cam praevalet removere. Read eam, certain. The English reads "no adversity prevails to remove [sic: cam] from her purpose" and supplies no pronoun. - 0035 @0273A
[sic: idco]— idco forte divinus sermo vineas appellavit. Read ideo, certain. The English does not also say "therefore".
Rendered as printed, no marker (real words, merely wrong or merely odd) — conjectures live here and NOT in the text:
- 0263C, fornax exstitit et incudo. The slot wants the nominative incus; incudo is a real word (1 sg. of incudo, "I forge on an anvil") and cannot fill it. Migne himself sets the correct form two columns later (tanquam in incude macula tunditur, 0265A). Rendered "anvil" as an inflectional error under Pattern 12's "real word merely wrong" clause; ⚑ if the merge judges incudo a non-word in this slot, the fix is one
[sic:]and I flag it rather than defend it. - ⚠ 0265A, non viandi completio, non gaudium ei acceptio, sed promissio dat coronae. This clause does not construe as printed and it is the passage in the range most likely to be quietly repaired. gaudium is accusative in a list of nominatives, and coronae cannot be the object of dat. Rendered as closely as the printed words allow — "not the completing of the wayfaring, not joy, the receiving of it for her, but the promise gives of the crown" — which is meant to read wrong. Conjecture: non gaudii ei acceptio… sed promissio dat coronam. No emendation made, none smuggled into the English.
- 0262C, Inquieta undarum profunditas… non sufficiunt admirari, quod festinant adversus Virginem… congregari. Rendered actively ("cannot wonder enough that they hasten…"), the waves personified — which is what obstupescunt attendentes eleven words later requires. A passive reading ("are not enough to be wondered at") is possible; logged, not adjudicated in the text.
- 0266B, nec de utero altero concepisse. Rendered "nor had conceived of another womb". Odd as printed (de viro altero is the obvious sense); a real word, so rendered, not carried.
- 0273B, temptationis oculis — see §2, 0035 table.
- 0274A, in luctu fortior habeatur. Rendered "the stronger in the wrestling": luctus for lucta is attested medieval usage (Pattern 9, no marker), and the paragraph is unambiguous — athletam strenuum, cum recens accingitur in agone, with the wrestler's oil three lines above; the same chunk-neighbour uses lucta correctly (0270A, sopita lucta carnis).
- 0273B, volverit aut valuerit perscrutari. Rendered "shall have turned it over or been able to search it out" — volvere "to turn over in the mind" is good Latin and construes with ipsum. The rhyme partner makes voluerit the likely intention; not read that way, logged here.
- 0272B, Migne's misplaced full stop, PRESERVED with its lower case. He prints potius quam secunda, ut aiunt. qui viderunt, vini peroptimi tam fecunda. The English reads "…rather first than second, as they say. who have seen it, so fruitful of the very best wine…". Brief §5's ruling is explicit — lowercase after a misplaced stop STANDS, because English has an exponent for it — and 11638 §3 and cruces-0012 §3 both settled the construction. ⚠ Do not churn this.
- 0272B, the second stop, likewise preserved: ut ejus gaudium excellentius caeteris liquido cognoscatur. Botrus, de quo sermo est… — a stop cutting a purpose clause from the main clause it depends on. Two sentences in the English, as printed.
Negation audit (brief §9). Every non / nec / neque / nisi / nullus / nihil / nunquam / haud in the six Latin chunks was matched against the English on a separate second pass. The dense clusters are 0256D (non laedit macula, non corruptio… non sordescit… non pallescit), 0257A–B (nullius meriti, nullius… alterum ultra nescit… nec sic alterum vult habere, nec in ligno viridi vult sedere), 0257D–0258A (non se tamen Christum, non esse Sponsum… eligit non mentiri… non se Sponsum asserit, sed amicum), 0258B (non potest non gaudere — a double negative carried as a double negative), 0258C (non germinat, non justo germine fecundatur, nisi Sponso largiente), 0262C (Impellunt, non expellunt; convellunt, non evellunt; concutiunt, non excutiunt), 0262D (Nullum quippe scrupulum, nullum offendiculum), 0264B (nec vermiculi nec argenti), 0265B (haud dubium quin et Spiritus sanctus — carried as "there is no doubt but that"), 0269C–0270A (non solum non eligant consentire… Neque enim possumus… non penitus relegare), 0272C (aliis varie diffidentibus non diffisa), 0272D (non consuetudo, non necessitas), 0273A (Engaddus vineas dicitur non habere), 0274B (nulli par esse creditur non secunda). No negation was dropped and none was supplied.
§5 · TYPOGRAPHY AND CAPITALIZATION — this range crosses no seam either
Brief §7 holds without exception across cols 0256C–0274C, and this range adds two more instances of the decisive proof. Guillemets carry every non-lemma scripture quotation (42 runs); italics carry the running Song lemma, printed locators and Migne's marginal page numbers 146–155. The Song quoted as a proof-text takes guillemets — « Cum esset, inquiens, Rex in accubitu suo [n: (Cant. I)] » at 0270B and « Tenui eum, nec dimittam [n: (Cant. III)] » at 0271A, both guilleted while the italic lemma sits a few lines away in the same column. That is now Cant. 4:11 @0220A, 5:11 @0226A, 2:14 @0226C, 1:12 @0270B and 3:4 @0271A — five instances, three ranges, one rule. 11632 has no seam and no one should go looking for one.
Guillemet asymmetries: none in this range. All six chunks balance and every pair is 1:1 with the Latin twin. Pattern 5 inquit / ait / inquiens / ait sacerdos interruptions are very dense in this stretch — Philip drops one into roughly every second quotation — and every one stays inside the marks, in the italic lemma runs (Cum esset, inquit, Rex in accubitu suo) exactly as in the guillemeted ones.
Two printed locators inside guillemet runs, neither wrapped in [n:]: (ibid) at 0260D and (Matth. [0267C] XVI) at 0267B — the latter with a column anchor inside it. Both reproduced exactly, italics and all; neither counts toward noteCount (verified against the body).
⚑ §7a mirroring — the drift point — held word by word. The range is full of mixed case inside single sentences and none of it was regularized: Virgini… virgo diligens hilarescit (0258A) · cum ea sponsus est (0258B, lower case in a chunk that capitalizes Sponsus eleven times) · in utero virginis Deus homo (0259C) · Patrem cum filio et sanctum aeque Spiritum (0265B) · Sponsae virgini loquens (0265B) · nardus virginis (0268A) beside Virginis throughout 0266 · Dilectum vero suum virgo (0270A) · amore sponsi (0269D) · Bonus iste Fasciculus (0270B, capital) · nostra virgo (0268D) and hujus virginis (0273D, 0274A) in a chapter that capitalizes Virgo nowhere after 0272A. The Cant. 1:13 lemma prints Dilectus capitalized once and lower case three times. All mirrored. This is mechanically checkable against the Latin twin and I would check it first in any review.
Pattern 17. Philip's own frame is plural throughout and takes you (accepistis 0259C, vobis videtur 0259D and 0263C, nostis 0261A and 0264A, Videtis 0258A, 0263C, 0269C, Habetis 0264C, Nostis 0269A, legistis 0270C, accepistis 0273A). Every second-person singular is inside a quotation and every one is singular in the Latin — vincula colli tui, captiva filia Sion; si transieris… non nocebit in te; dereliquisti me; dedisti eis… laborem tuum; consentiens adversario tuo, dum es in via; faciemus tibi — so thou throughout. The one plural inside a quotation is Matt. 11:29 Tollite jugum meum super vos, et discite, rendered you, sitting four lines from the singular Isa. 52:2 — the number distinction is visible on the page exactly as Pattern 17 intends.
Ruled vocabulary held (brief §5): charitas = charity throughout 0032, including the doublet dilectio sive charitas (0263B) which is split "love, or charity"; misericordia = mercy (0266D, 0273C); torcular = winepress (0263D, 0272B); species = spice (0269A, of myrrh); adolescentulae = maidens (0265C, 0274B); recti, cellaria, clementia, nigra/fusca/formosa do not occur. Sponsus = Bridegroom, Sponsa = Bride, unguentum = ointment, nardus = nard (and nardus pistica = spikenard at 0268C, where Migne's own Latin distinguishes them).
One new fixed equivalence this range had to set, offered to the merge: accubitus = "repose", with accubuit / accumbens / accubitui rendered "reposed" / "reposing" / "his repose" throughout Caput IX. The chapter turns on the single root — in accubitu suo → in meo utero Rex ille gratanter accubuit → cujusmodi accubitus accumbenti complacuit → Sponso accumbente in dextera divinae majestatis — so a Douay-style "at his repose" for the lemma and "reclined" for the verbs would have severed it. recumbenti (John 12, of Christ at table, 0268C) is kept distinct as "reclining", because Migne's Latin distinguishes it.
§6 · THINGS DELIBERATELY NOT REPORTED (brief §10, checked once)
- Column-band arithmetic: no anchor in this range is followed by text broken mid-word or mid-construction. The bands run cleanly A–D. No
[ed:], no patch, no plate check. §10.1. noteCountmatches the body[n:]count in all six chunks (5/5/19/17/10/7), verified by script — and note that the two printed locators (§5) are correctly outside that count.- Migne's sigla, all reproduced verbatim, none corrected (§10.2): (Rom. XIII) for Rom. 11:16 @0258C · (Matth. XXI) for Matt. 26:10 @0268D. Two in six chunks — notably lower than the five-in-six rate cruces-0012 §5.2 recorded for cols 0212–0227, which is itself a datum for the merge's count of that class.
- Attested medieval spellings left alone, unmarked (Pattern 9): mirrha, muraenula (for murenula), tanquam, quodcunque, utquid, praetiosae beside pretiosi, Quodpropter, siquis, coelo, spiritalis, luctus for lucta, aethnicum/ethnicum.
- No
[f:]. 11632 is lemma-and-gloss, not a florilegium (§10.4).
§7 · WHAT A LATER BLIND READ SHOULD LOOK AT FIRST
- 0265A, non viandi completio, non gaudium ei acceptio, sed promissio dat coronae (§4). The English is deliberately unconstruable because the Latin is. This is the single most likely place in the range for a well-meaning repair.
- 0264C, the Ps. 11:7
[var:](§3.1). It is on an[n:]-only span, which means nothing on the page marked it as a quotation and nothing mechanical would ever have found it. If it is wrong, it is wrong invisibly — check the left edge of the quotation, which I judged to begin at eloquium and not at Habetis. - The Cum / Dum lemma of Cant. 1:12 (§2, 0033). Four printings, no marker fired. Either the merge rules it Philip's Bible (brief §6 shape) or it is a compositor's habit; the decision needs the other twenty ranges' evidence, not mine.
- §1's muraenula decision. It is the only term choice in this range that would be expensive to reverse late.
Philip of Harvengt, Commentaria in Cantica canticorum, PL 203. Range covering Book II, Capp. XIII–XXI: the exposition of Cant. 1:14–2:3 (Ecce tu pulchra es, amica mea → Ecce tu pulcher es, dilecte mi, et decorus → Lectulus noster floridus; tigna domorum nostrarum cedrina → Ego flos campi, et lilium convallium → Sicut lilium inter spinas → Sicut malus inter ligna silvarum). Six chunks, 6,284 Latin words. The Song's own chapter boundary is crossed: Migne prints his bracketed [CAP. II.] at col. 0281B, inside chunk 0038.
Marker totals for this range: 4 [var:] · 1 [sic:] · 0 [ed:] · 0 [d:] · 0 [nt:] · 0 [f:]. verify-english.mjs clean on all six (no errors); one ratio warning, 0037 at 1.61, inside the band this work has already shipped (0004 1.64, 0005 1.68, 0026 1.66, 0035 1.65). Column anchors (11/10/10/4/9/16), [n:] contents (8/6/3/7/4/13, each matching its frontmatter noteCount) and guillemet counts (3/2/0/4/3/12 pairs) were diffed 1:1 against the Latin twins by script, not by eye; all six frontmatter blocks are byte-identical to the Latin. Every italic run in the English is accounted for against the Latin's own runs plus the one [sic:] and the four [var:].
§1 · THE COLLATION — all 65 listed spans, every one accounted for
Every span in data/quotations/11632/0036-0041.md was collated word by word against the Vulgate. Spans recorded as AGREES were collated and found to agree; the absence of a marker on them is a finding, not a silence.
0036 (cols 0274D–0277B) — 14 spans
| Span | Verse | Verdict |
|---|---|---|
| Ecce tu pulchra es, amica mea, ecce tu pulchra: oculi tui columbarum. | Cant. 1:14 (Vulg. 1:15) | AGREES word for word, punctuation included. amica mea = "my friend", brief §5. |
| Ecce, / tu es pulchra, (0274C) | Cant. 1:14 re-quoted | ⚑ Migne prints tu es pulchra where his own lemma four lines above reads tu pulchra es. Word order only, inside a re-quotation Philip is glossing (Ecce, id est…). Logged, no marker — but recorded because a later blind read will meet the two orders in one column. |
| Ecce tu pulchra es, amica mea; · Ecce tu pulchra? (0274D) | Cant. 1:14 | AGREES. Migne's ? closes a clause that is not a question in the Vulgate (it is Philip's own question about the repetition); preserved, Pattern 8. |
| Ecce tu pulcher es, dilecte mi, et decorus. (0276B) | Cant. 1:15 (Vulg. 1:16) | AGREES word for word. |
« Absalon fili mi, fili mi Absalon [n: (II Reg. XVIII)]. » | 2 Sam. 18:33 | AGREES on the words: Migne prints the verse's closing clause exactly (Absalom fili mi, fili mi Absalom), the opening and the intervening quis mihi tribuat… cut. ⚑ Migne spells Absalon, the Vulgate Absalom — rendered by the English name Absalom; orthography, no marker. |
« Deus, Deus meus [n: (Psal. XCII)]. » | Ps. 21:2 / 62:2 | AGREES as far as printed (a bare doubled vocative — the doubling is the point Philip is making). ⚠ The siglum is wrong: Ps. 92 is Dominus regnavit and contains no such words. Reproduced verbatim, not corrected (§10.2). See §4. |
« Benedicat nos Deus, Deus noster, benedicat nos Deus [n: (Psal. LXVI)]. » | Ps. 66:7–8 | AGREES word for word. Siglum correct. |
…omne verbum stare in ore duorum testium praedicatur [n: (II Cor. XIII)] ([n:]-only) | 2 Cor. 13:1 | Philip's prose. Vulg. in ore duorum vel trium testium stabit omne verbum; recast into acc.+inf. under praedicatur, and vel trium dropped — but the whole clause is inside his own quia-sentence. No marker. Siglum correct. |
…in duobus praeceptis legis et prophetarum pendere auctoritas memoratur [n: (Matth. XX)] ([n:]-only) | Matt. 22:40 | Philip's prose (Vulg. In his duobus mandatis universa lex pendet et prophetae). No marker. ⚠ Siglum (Matth. XX) for Matt. 22:40 — reproduced, not corrected. |
Denique Spiritus sanctus in columba visus est apparere [n: (Luc. III)] ([n:]-only) | Luke 3:22 | Philip's prose. No marker. Siglum correct. |
…dum Joannem, aut Eliam aut unum te ex prioribus esse dicit [n: (Matth. XVI)] ([n:]-only) | Matt. 16:14 + Luke 9:19 | Philip's prose, a two-Gospel fusion in his own dum-clause: unum ex prioribus is Luke's (propheta unus de prioribus), not Matthew's unum ex prophetis. No marker, siglum reproduced. |
Pulcher, inquam, es, quia candor lucis aeternae, speculum sine macula divinae majestatis, paternae splendor gloriae, figura substantiae, imago veritatis [n: (Hebr. I)] ([n:]-only) | Wisd. 7:26 + Heb. 1:3 | ⭐⭐ The range's principal [n:]-only find. Logged, NOT marked, per brief §8a. See §2.1. |
Weaves checked and left unmarked (Philip's own prose, no notes attached, recorded so a later reader knows they were read): Ps. 44:3 (speciosus forma prae filiis hominum, 0274C, and again formam prae filiis hominum pulchriorem, 0276B) · Isa. 53:2 (non habentem speciem vel decorem, 0276B) · Horace, A.P. 365 (juxta poetam decies repetita, 0275B — Migne sets it in neither guillemets nor italics, so there is nothing to reproduce).
0037 (cols 0277C–0279D) — 10 spans
| Span | Verse | Verdict |
|---|---|---|
| Ecce tu pulcher es, dilecte mi. · Ecce, / tu pulcher es, dilecte mi, et decorus. | Cant. 1:15 | AGREES at both printings. |
| Lectulus noster floridus; tigna domorum nostrarum cedrina, laquearia nostra cypressina. | Cant. 1:16–17 | AGREES word for word. ⭐ lectulus is rendered "little bed" throughout, and must stay so — Caput XVI's whole point turns on the diminutive: non tamen Virgo lectum, sed magis lectulum nominavit. "Bed" for both words voids the paragraph. |
…cum a Patre super Sion montem sanctum ejus es constitutus [n: (Psal. II)] ([n:]-only) | Ps. 2:6 (+ Ps. 92:1) | Philip's prose, second person throughout where Ps. 2:6 is first (Ego autem constitutus sum rex ab eo); the surrounding praecingens te, fortiter es indutus is Ps. 92:1 folded into the same clause. No marker. |
…processisti Sponsus e thalamo [n: (Psal. XVIII)] ([n:]-only) | Ps. 18:6 | Philip's prose (Vulg. tanquam sponsus procedens de thalamo suo). No marker. |
« Hanc amavi, et exquisivi, ait, eam, et quaesivi sponsam mihi assumere; et amator factus sum formae illius [n: (Sap. VIII)]. » | Wisd. 8:2 | Every printed word is the Vulgate's. a juventute mea is cut, and eam has migrated forward from quaesivi sponsam mihi eam assumere to sit beside the Pattern-5 ait. Truncation and transposition; nothing asserted that the Vulgate does not assert. Logged, no marker. |
« Mitte illam de sede magnitudinis tuae, ut mecum sit et mecum laboret; et sciam quid acceptum sit apud te, scit enim illa omnia et intelligit [n: (Sap. IX)]. » | Wisd. 9:10–11 | AGREES on every printed word. Vulg. Mitte illam de caelis sanctis tuis, et a sede magnitudinis tuae: the first limb is cut at the quotation opening and the preposition follows it (de for a). Logged, no marker. |
…manum ad collum mittere, et fusum digitis apprehendere memoratur… eo quod panem suum non comederit otiosa [n: (Prov. XXXI)] ([n:]-only) | Prov. 31:19, 27 | ⭐ A real find on an [n:]-only span. Logged, NOT marked. See §2.2. |
…sed cum juxta Prophetam [n: (Psal. XLVII)], esse in domibus cognoscetur ([n:]-only) | Ps. 47:4 | Philip's prose (Vulg. Deus in domibus eius cognoscetur), recast into his own cum-clause with domus supplied from the Song lemma. No marker. |
0038 (cols 0280A–0282B) — 7 spans
| Span | Verse | Verdict |
|---|---|---|
| Tigna domorum nostrarum cedrina; laquearia nostra cypressina. | Cant. 1:17 | AGREES. Migne prints a semicolon here where 0037's printing of the same lemma has a comma; both preserved, Pattern 8. |
| Ego flos campi, et lilium convallium. · Ego, / flos campi | Cant. 2:1 | AGREES word for word at all three printings. |
cum Christo esse melius judicantes [n: (Philip. I)] ([n:]-only) | Phil. 1:23–24 | Philip's prose: Vulg.'s desiderium habens dissolvi et cum Christo esse, multo magis melius becomes a participial phrase governed by his own subject, and permanere in carne necessarium propter vos is recast into in carne vivere propter fratres necessarium arbitrantur. No marker. |
…juxta quod dictum est, decet domum Domini sanctitudo [n: (Psal. XCII)] ([n:]-only) | Ps. 92:5 | Philip's prose: Vulg. Domum tuam decet sanctitudo, Domine; the vocative becomes a genitive and the word order is his. No marker. ⭐ The siglum is CORRECT here — which is the datum that makes the 0275B (Psal. XCII) misfire (§4) demonstrably a wrong reference and not a house habit. |
…et me silentii Habacuc [n: (cap. I)] argueret, devorante impio justiorem ([n:]-only) | Hab. 1:13 | Philip's prose (Vulg. quare… taces devorante impio iustiorem se? — an accusation Habacuc levels, turned round into one Habacuc would level at Christ). No marker. ⚠ The note is a bare chapter siglum, (cap. I), with no book name — the book being carried by Habacuc in the running text. Reproduced exactly. |
Also in this chunk: Migne's own bracketed [CAP. II.] at 0281B, the Song's chapter division, printed immediately after the column anchor and outside the italic lemma. Reproduced verbatim and untranslated, on the footing of [ al., …] — it carries no [n:] wrapper and does not count toward noteCount (verified: 3 notes in body, 3 in frontmatter). The same form recurs at 0063, 0074, 0091, 0108, 0114, 0120 for Capp. III–VIII, so later ranges will meet it.
Weaves checked, unmarked: 1 Tim. 6:16 (lux lucem habitans inaccessam — Migne's accusative lucem… inaccessam for Vulg. lucem inhabitat inaccessibilem; Philip's own apposition) · Isa. 11:1 (Radix Jesse germinavit et flos prodiit de radice) · Ps. 71:6 (descendente, ut in vellus, pluvia spiritali) · Matt. 5:15 (in conclavi sub modio).
0039 (cols 0282C–0283B) — 9 spans
| Span | Verse | Verdict |
|---|---|---|
| Et lilium convallium. | Cant. 2:1 | AGREES. |
…humilia tamen respicere perhibetur [n: (Psal. CXII)] ([n:]-only) | Ps. 112:5–6 | Philip's prose. No marker. |
nec nisi super humilem et mansuetum ejus Spiritus requiescit [n: (Isa. LXVI)] ([n:]-only) | Isa. 66:2 | Philip's prose, and worth recording: the Vulgate reads ad pauperculum et contritum spiritu, et trementem sermones meos. super humilem et mansuetum is the Old Latin / LXX shape of the verse (ἐπὶ τὸν ταπεινὸν καὶ ἡσύχιον). Because the span is [n:]-only and recast into Philip's own nec nisi clause, no marker — but a later range meeting Isa. 66:2 marked should compare. Both negations (nec, nisi) carried. |
« Deus autem ignis est, » [n: (Deut. IV)] | Deut. 4:24 | ⚑ Guilleted, and it does not agree. Vulg. Dominus Deus tuus ignis consumens est, Deus aemulator; Migne prints a four-word predication with Deus for Dominus Deus tuus and without consumens, and Philip's own connective autem stands inside the guillemets (Pattern 5 — not moved out). [var:] deliberately NOT fired: what remains is an abridgement whose predication ("God is fire") is exactly what the argument needs — the red at the lily's heart is deity — and nothing is asserted that the verse does not assert. Recorded so the absence of the marker is a decision, not an oversight; this is the closest call in the range after §2.1. Note the [n:] falls outside the closing » here, six words downstream, after Scripturam perhibere. |
sicut certum est Scripturam perhibere ([n:]-only) | — | Not a quotation: Philip's own attribution frame for the guilleted Deut. 4:24 above. |
Cujus se involucro sapientibus et prudentibus occultavit, sed fide intuentibus parvulis et humilibus revelavit [n: (Luc. X)] ([n:]-only) | Luke 10:21 | Philip's prose (Vulg. abscondisti haec a sapientibus et prudentibus, et revelasti ea parvulis): second person becomes third, and fide intuentibus… humilibus is his own addition. No marker. |
« Tu es, ait, Christus Filius Dei vivi [n: (Matth. XVI)]. » | Matt. 16:16 | AGREES word for word. |
« Rabbi, tu es Filius Dei, tu es rex [0283B] Israel [n: (Joan. I)]. » | John 1:49 | AGREES word for word. The column anchor falls inside the guillemets, between rex and Israel; reproduced in place. |
« Vere Filius Dei erat iste [n: (Marc. XV)]. » | Matt. 27:54 | ⭐ AGREES word for word — with MATTHEW, under a MARK siglum. See §4. |
0040 (cols 0283C–0285C) — 6 spans
| Span | Verse | Verdict |
|---|---|---|
| Sicut lilium inter spinas, sic amica mea inter filias. (+ Sicut, at 0285C) | Cant. 2:2 | AGREES word for word. amica mea = "my friend". |
Habet ergo lilium inter spinas… tam gentes quam Judaei lingua infremunt serpentina [n: (Psal. II)] ([n:]-only) | Ps. 2:1–2 | Philip's prose. Only adversus Dominum, et adversus Christum ejus is verbatim Vulgate, inside his own dum-clause; fremuerunt gentes becomes lingua infremunt serpentina, and Judaei is supplied. No marker. |
« Animus gaudens aetatem floridam facit [n: (Prov. XVII)]. » | Prov. 17:22 | AGREES word for word. Truncated before spiritus tristis exsiccat ossa. |
« Pater, inquit, ignosce illis, quia nesciunt quid faciunt [n: (Luc. XXIII)]. » | Luke 23:34 | ⭐ [var:] FIRED — see §3.1. |
« Laetabitur, inquit, deserta et invia, et exsultabit solitudo; et germinabit quasi lilium [n: (Isa. XXXV)]. » | Isa. 35:1 | ⭐ [var:] FIRED — see §3.2. The strongest of the four: Philip expounds the divergent verb twice within nine lines. |
Weaves checked, unmarked: John 1:5 (lux lucere in tenebris), Rom. 13:12 / 1 Thess. 5:5 (filia lucis lucet, non habens opera tenebrarum), Ps. 136:8 (filiae fuerant Babylonis).
0041 (cols 0285D–0289C) — 19 spans
| Span | Verse | Verdict |
|---|---|---|
| Sicut malus inter ligna silvarum, sic dilectus meus inter filios. (+ Sicut malus, / inter ligna silvarum… at 0289C) | Cant. 2:3 | AGREES word for word at both printings. |
Christus enim lignum est… cujus non cedit folium vento durius saevienti [n: (Psal. I)] ([n:]-only) | Ps. 1:3 | Philip's prose. Vulg. et folium eius non defluet; non cedit is his verb, and cujus omnia prosperantur recasts omnia quaecumque faciet prosperabuntur. Negation carried. No marker. |
Quos attendens Christus, Dei filios et haeredes, fratres eos non confunditur vocare, amare cohaeredes [n: (Matth. XXV)] ([n:]-only) | Heb. 2:11 + Rom. 8:17 | Philip's prose; only fratres eos non confunditur vocare is verbatim (Heb. 2:11), cohaeredes is Rom. 8:17. No marker. ⚠ Siglum (Matth. XXV) covers neither; Matt. 25:40's fratribus meis is the nearest thing in that chapter. Reproduced, not corrected — see §4. The column anchor [0286C] falls BEFORE the note, not after; reproduced in that order. |
« Procidens, ait, Cornelius ad pedes ejus, adoravit eum. Petrus autem levavit eum dicens: Surge, et ego ipse homo sum, sicut et tu [n: (Act. X)]. » | Acts 10:25–26 | ⭐ [var:] FIRED — see §3.3. |
« Annuntians, inquit, pacem per Jesum Christum; hic est omnium Dominus [n: (ibid.)]. » | Acts 10:36 | AGREES word for word (the Vulgate's parentheses round hic est omnium Dominus become Migne's semicolon; Pattern 8, preserved). ⚑ Do not "fix" the antecedent of this Ibid. — §10.2. |
« Postquam audissem, inquit, et vidissem, cecidi ut adorarem ad pedes angeli, qui mihi haec ostendebat, et dixit mihi: Vide ne feceris [n: (Apoc. XXII)]. » | Apoc. 22:8–9 | AGREES save ad pedes for Vulg. ante pedes. Preposition only, and Migne prints ante correctly in the very next quotation. Logged, no marker.** |
« Cecidi, ait, ante pedes ejus, ut adorarem eum, et dixit mihi: Vide ne feceris, conservus enim tuus sum et fratrum tuorum habentium testimonium Jesu, Deum adora [n: (Apoc. XIX)]. » | Apoc. 19:10 | AGREES. Vulg. dicit (historic present) → dixit, and an added enim; neither changes what is asserted. Logged, no marker. Both ne prohibitions carried. |
| « Vide ne feceris, » (re-quoted, 0287C) | Apoc. 19:10 | AGREES. ⚠ Migne prints a FULL STOP before the opening « — cum dixisset Joanni angelus. « Vide ne feceris, » — a stop cutting the speech verb from its own quotation. Preserved (Pattern 8, and brief §5's lowercase-after-a-stop ruling by analogy); the English reads the same way. |
| « Conservus tuus suum, et fratrum tuorum habentium testimonium Jesu, Deum adora. » (0287C) | Apoc. 19:10 | ⭐ A broken re-quotation, rendered as printed, no marker. See §5.1. |
et juxta Job filii Dei ut assisterent Domino leguntur advenisse, inter quos et nequam ille angelus Satan legitur adfuisse [n: (Job I)] ([n:]-only) | Job 1:6 | Philip's prose (Vulg. ut assisterent coram Domino… affuit inter eos etiam Satan), recast into two leguntur/legitur infinitive clauses with nequam ille angelus supplied. No marker. |
« Constituit, ait, terminos populorum, juxta numerum filiorum Israel [n: (Deut. XXXII)]. » | Deut. 32:8 | AGREES word for word. |
| « Statuit terminos gentium, juxta numerum angelorum Dei. » | Deut. 32:8, LXX | ⚑ Not a Vulgate divergence and no [var:] is possible: Migne introduces it as alia translatio, and it is the Septuagint reading (κατὰ ἀριθμὸν ἀγγέλων θεοῦ) which Philip adduces because it differs. Guilleted with no [n:] at all. Recorded, unmarked. |
Deum qui se exinaniens, et accipiens formam servi [n: (Philip. II)], ut homo habitu est inventus ([n:]-only) | Phil. 2:7 | Philip's prose; the participles are governed by his own relative clause and habitu inventus ut homo is transposed. No marker. |
« Minuisti eum paulo minus ab angelis, ait David [n: (Psal. VIII)]. » | Ps. 8:6 | AGREES word for word. The Pattern-5 ait David stays inside the guillemets. |
« Eum, ait, qui modico quam angeli minoratus est propter passionem mortis [n: (Hebr. II)]. » | Heb. 2:9 | ⚑ Every printed word is the Vulgate's, in the Vulgate's order — but the truncation re-binds them. Vulg.: eum autem qui modico quam angeli minoratus est, videmus Iesum propter passionem mortis gloria et honore coronatum, where propter passionem mortis governs the crowning. Cutting the middle leaves it governing minoratus est, which is precisely the proposition Philip wants (minor angelis propter mortis utique passionem, twelve lines above). [var:] NOT fired — no word is other than the Vulgate's, and Pattern 14 marks divergent wording, not divergent syntax produced by an author's own excerpting. Recorded because it is the subtlest thing in the chunk. |
« Corpus quod corrumpitur aggravat animam; et deprimit terrena inhabitatio sensum multa cogitantem [n: (Sap. IX)]. » | Wisd. 9:15 | AGREES on every word. Vulg. Corpus enim quod corrumpitur (connective dropped at the opening) and terrena inhabitatio deprimit (verb fronted). Transposition only. Logged, no marker. |
« Sumus, inquit, natura filii irae [n: (Ephes. II)]. » | Eph. 2:3 | ⭐ [var:] FIRED — see §3.4. |
Weaves checked, unmarked: John 1:12 (eos qui eum receperunt… filii), Rom. 8:29 (in multis fratribus ipse primogenitus), Heb. 2:16 (non angelum… sed semen Abrahae… apprehendit), Eph. 3:9 / Gal. 4:4 (absconditum a saeculis, nostri plenitudine temporis), Acts 4:12 (nec erat nomen aliud in quo datum fuerit nos salvari), Gen. 1:26 (ad imaginem et similitudinem Dei), Gen. 2:9 (lignum vitae… in medio paradisi).
§2 · THE [n:]-ONLY CLASS — hit rate, and two logged candidates
⚑ Hit rate reported as brief §8a requires. The range carries 21 [n:]-only spans. Nineteen are Philip's own prose, itemized above. Two are genuine weaves whose wording diverges from the Vulgate in a way that matters — and per brief §8a both are logged with full evidence and NOT marked, because the plate marks neither with guillemets nor italics and we cannot establish the quotation's left edge without asserting a boundary Migne does not print.
That is 2 of 21 ≈ 10%, against wave 1's Rom. 8:10 (1 hit) and the 0018–0023 agent's null result (0 of 19). The separate second pass over the [n:] notes against the prose, which the brief mandates, is what produced both — neither was visible from the extractor's clause alone, because in both cases the printed clause the script hands you begins in the wrong place.
2.1 ⭐⭐ 0277B — Wisd. 7:26 + Heb. 1:3 fused, with imago veritatis for imago bonitatis
Migne prints, inside Philip's own quia-clause:
Pulcher, inquam, es, quia candor lucis aeternae, speculum sine macula divinae majestatis, paternae splendor gloriae, figura substantiae, imago veritatis
[n: (Hebr. I)]
Three things at once:
- The note names Hebrews only, but the first two members are Wisdom 7:26 (candor est enim lucis aeternae, et speculum sine macula Dei maiestatis, et imago bonitatis illius), and only splendor gloriae, figura substantiae is Heb. 1:3. A two-book fusion under a one-book siglum.
- Wisdom's imago bonitatis is printed imago veritatis. The change is real and is not a truncation: bonitas and veritas are different predications of the Son.
- Wisdom's Dei maiestatis is printed divinae majestatis.
Not marked, and the reason is exactly brief §8a's: the run is set in neither guillemets nor italics, it is grammatically a string of appositives inside Philip's own sentence (the finite verb is his es), and the extractor's left edge — Pulcher, inquam, es — is his prose, not the quotation's. If the merge rules the class markable, this is the site in this range that takes the marker, and imago veritatis is the word to put in it. Nothing in the surrounding exposition picks the word up, which is why I do not think it rises to §3's level even if the class were opened.
2.2 ⭐ 0278D — Prov. 31:19, manum ad collum where the sense requires colum
Migne prints:
illa mulier cujus fortitudo praedicabilis commendatur, manum ad collum mittere, et fusum digitis apprehendere memoratur
[n: (Prov. XXXI)]
The Vulgate of Prov. 31:19 reads Manum suam misit ad fortia, et digiti eius apprehenderunt fusum. Two separate observations:
- ad collum, "to the neck", cannot be right beside fusum, "the spindle". The word wanted is colum, the distaff — a real Latin word one l away, and the reading behind the Hebrew and the Old Latin of this verse. Migne's doubled l makes it the neck.
- Even colum would be a non-Vulgate reading, since the Vulgate has ad fortia here.
Rendered as printed — "to put her hand to the neck, and to take hold of the spindle with her fingers" — under Pattern 7. No [sic:]: collum is a real word merely wrong in its slot (Pattern 12's explicit exclusion, the fuges / munde class), and no [var:] because the span is [n:]-only. The conjecture colum lives here and not in the text. The tail of the same span, panem suum non comederit otiosa, is Prov. 31:27 (panem otiosa non comedit) recast into Philip's eo quod clause, with the negation carried.
§3 · THE FOUR [var:], IN FULL
1. ⭐ Luke 23:34 at 0284D — ignosce for dimitte, and quia for non enim. Migne: « Pater, inquit, ignosce illis, quia nesciunt quid faciunt ». Vulg.: Pater, dimitte illis: non enim sciunt quid faciunt. The main verb is a different word — ignoscere, "to pardon", against dimittere, "to remit" — and it is the Old Latin form of the most famous sentence in the Passion, which is precisely the 7a″ conformation hazard: the remembered English arrives before the printed Latin is read. The marker matters here because the sentence Philip builds round it reads cum manu misericordiae spinarum turpitudinem abradebat — a hand of pardon scraping the thorns, not a debt remitted. Rendered "pardon them" so that the divergence is visible in the English, per Pattern 7a's rule that a [var:] may not elide what it exists to report. The negation is intact on both sides (non enim sciunt / nesciunt) and is carried.
2. ⭐⭐ Isa. 35:1 at 0285A — germinabit for florebit, and Philip expounds the divergent verb twice. Migne: « Laetabitur, inquit, deserta et invia, et exsultabit solitudo; et germinabit quasi lilium ». Vulg.: et florebit quasi lilium. This is the range's clearest marker. Within nine lines Philip writes quia juncta lilio quasi lilium germinabit, and then spe fructus exsultabit habens primitias germinantes — the whole close of Caput XX runs on budding-into-fruit, not on blossoming, and florebit would put the argument's keyword back in a verse that no longer contains it. Everything else in the verse agrees word for word (deserta et invia, exsultabit solitudo), which is what makes the one substitution legible as a reading rather than a paraphrase.
3. Acts 10:26 at 0286D — an added clause, sicut et tu. Migne: « …Petrus autem levavit eum dicens: Surge, et ego ipse homo sum, sicut et tu ». The Vulgate ends the verse at et ego ipse homo sum; the comparative clause is in no edition. It is material in its place: Philip's whole point is that Peter refused adoration by asserting parity with Cornelius, and sicut et tu states the parity the argument needs. (Also in the same span: Migne supplies the subject Cornelius, which the Vulgate carries in the preceding verse, and prints levavit / autem for elevavit / vero — neither marked.) ⚑ Note the marker's content deliberately quotes the Vulgate's wording, not Migne's, so that it cannot collide with Pattern 14's mirror test against the Latin twin.
4. ⭐ Eph. 2:3 at 0288D — Sumus for eramus, present for imperfect. Migne: « Sumus, inquit, natura filii irae ». Vulg.: et eramus natura filii irae, sicut et ceteri — "we were". The tense is the point in the place Philip puts it: the sentence he is proving reads Nos autem miseros multo minores angelis culpa fecit… eo quod versum est vitium in naturam, an argument about our standing condition, not about a state Paul has left behind. The Vulgate's past tense would make the proof-text say the opposite of the sentence it is adduced for. ⚑ Cross-reference for the merge: cruces-0024 recorded Eph. 2:3 as an unmarked weave at 0030 (irae filius ex natura). This is the same verse returning as a guilleted proof-text with the tense changed — a second attestation, and worth counting.
§4 · MIGNE'S SIGLA — four misnamed references in six chunks (brief §8b)
All reproduced verbatim, none corrected. The count is the point.
- ⚠
(Psal. XCII)at 0275B for « Deus, Deus meus ». Ps. 92 is Dominus regnavit, decorem indutus est and contains no such words; the doubled vocative is Ps. 21:2 or Ps. 62:2. And the same siglum is CORRECT eleven columns later at 0281A, where it points at Ps. 92:5 domum tuam decet sanctitudo. One siglum, two uses, one right and one wrong, inside one range. - ⚠
(Matth. XX)at 0274D for Matt. 22:40 — off by two chapters. - ⭐
(Marc. XV)at 0283B for wording that is verbatim MATT. 27:54. Migne prints « Vere Filius Dei erat iste »; Mark 15:39 reads Vere hic homo Filius Dei erat, Matthew Vere Filius Dei erat iste. The decisive evidence is in the previous range: cruces-0030 records the same six words at 0267D under[n: (Matth. XXVII)]. So Philip quotes Matthew twice and Migne labels the second occurrence Mark. This is the cleanest instance of the class so far in this work — the control is internal, not editorial. - ⚠
(Matth. XXV)at 0286C for fratres eos non confunditur vocare + cohaeredes, which are Heb. 2:11 and Rom. 8:17.
Also recorded as a form rather than an error: (cap. I) at 0281C, a bare chapter number with no book name, the book carried by Habacuc in the running prose. And the (ibid.) at 0286D resolves correctly to Acts X — do not propose a correction upstream of it (§10.2).
§5 · PATTERN 7 / 10 / 12 — one [sic:], and what was NOT marked
1. 0283A — [sic: ooopertus]. Migne prints Deus est in homine mundae carnis trabea ooopertus. Three o's: not a word in any Latin, and therefore Pattern 7's non-word class. Read coopertus, "covered", certain from the slot (trabea ablative of means) and from opertorium / occultavit five lines away. Carried untranslated in italics inside the marker, and the English does NOT also supply "covered" — the failure brief §8 names ("a [sic:] on a word that was ALSO translated passes"). The clause reads "is God in man, [sic: ooopertus] with the robe of clean flesh."
Rendered as printed, no marker (real words, merely wrong or merely odd) — conjectures live here and NOT in the text:
- ⚠ 0287C, « Conservus tuus suum, et fratrum tuorum… ». The Apoc. 19:10 re-quotation has lost its only finite verb: suum stands where sum belongs, and Migne himself prints the correct conservus enim tuus sum nine lines above at 0287A, in the full quotation of the same verse. So the conjecture is certain and the plate refutes itself on the same page. Even so, suum is a real word, which puts it in Pattern 12's explicit exclusion (the fuges / munde class: "rendered as ordinary English under Pattern 7, because they can be rendered"), so no
[sic:]. The English reads « Thy fellow-servant his own, and of thy brethren that have the testimony of Jesus, adore God. » — verbless and wrong, deliberately, with Migne's commas preserved. ⛔ This is the single most likely place in the range for a well-meaning repair. ⚑ If the merge judges suum a non-word in this slot (the incudo question cruces-0030 §4 left open), the fix is one[sic:]and I flag it rather than defend it — the two cases should be decided together. - 0283C, nonnullas videtur sentire functiones. functio has no sense here that construes cleanly against its rhyme-partner laesiones; medieval usage (onus, munus) would give "burdens". Rendered neutrally and literally as "workings", from fungi; conjectures concussiones / fluctuationes are possible and not supplied. Logged rather than adjudicated in the text.
- 0275A, ut humilem spiritu reddat virginitatis flosculus clariorem, flore claram virgineo, spiritu humilis pulchriorem. A chiasmus with only one finite verb: virginitatis flosculus is the first subject, and the second is spiritu humilis — a nominative adjective, where spiritus humilis would be expected. Rendered as printed ("the little flower of virginity renders her that is humble in spirit the brighter, and one humble in spirit renders her that is bright with the virginal flower the fairer"), the second verb supplied by English zeugma only. Conjecture spiritus humilis, not supplied.
- 0275B, nec videtur diligenti lectio haec justo amplius requisita. dilectio would be the obvious sense in a sentence whose subject two clauses earlier is dilectio; but lectio is a real word and construes with the Horatian tag that follows (juxta poetam decies repetita — A.P. 365, of a poem that will please though ten times re-read). Rendered "this reading." Logged, no emendation.
- 0279B, quem tu manu gratiae, ego laboris et industriae serenavi.* The verb is first-person singular and governs a second-person subject as well (likewise adornavi* in the next clause). English "have made serene" / "have adorned" carries both persons; the Latin zeugma cannot be reproduced exactly. Logged so the smoothing is on the record.
- 0288D, ut sancta confirmatio aeque vestigio permaneret. vestigio has no governing preposition. Rendered "should equally remain in its footing"; conjecture in vestigio, not supplied.
- 0277D, auctorem mortis Zabulum triumphares. Zabulus for diabolus is attested patristic and medieval Latin (Pattern 9): translated normally as "the devil", no italics, no
[sic:]. - 0286B, copulantur nectura naturali. A rare verbal noun from necto; rendered "by a natural binding". Not marked.
- 0287A, nostri plenitudine temporis deopertum.* Likewise rare, and transparent (de- + operio*); rendered "uncovered". Not marked.
Negation audit (brief §9). Every non / nec / neque / nisi / ne / haud / nunquam / nullus / nihil / nil / nescit / necdum / nondum in the six Latin chunks was matched against the English on a separate second pass. The dense clusters are 0274C (non prior, non posterior ulla), 0275D (quibus haec naturae dona non omnibus omnia conferuntur — the double restriction carried as "not all of them bestowed upon all"), 0276A (non capitis lumen occiduum), 0276C (te non nisi deformem, non nisi hominem intuetur), 0276D (unum tamen, et non alterum), 0277A (nullius conceptio, nullius caruit vitio), 0277B (non possum non amare — a double negative carried as a double negative, "I cannot not love thee"), 0278B–D (nescit amor… non tam laborare… panem suum non comederit otiosa), 0280D (enodes… nunquam recalcitrat; scrupulus non habetur), 0281B (quid habet quod ab alio veraciter asserat non habere? — the negation is inside the indirect statement and stays there), 0281C (ne vel nesciri possem, vel a sciente non facilius apprehendi), 0281D (non nisi operi manuum respondet), 0282C (nec nisi super humilem), 0283C (nullas sustinet laesiones), 0284C (Nunquid non lilium… diffundebat? — both particles carried in the English interrogative), 0284D (Quis nesciat), 0286A (non est salus, non est vita, non indeficiens), 0287B (Non vult Christo angelus… non ligno fructuoso), 0287D (non tamen multum minor), 0289A (vident nec invident), 0289B (non fruges, non aries, non vitulus, non denique homo vel angelus; nec erat nomen aliud). No negation was dropped and none was supplied.
§6 · TYPOGRAPHY AND CAPITALIZATION
Brief §7 holds without exception across cols 0274D–0289C. Guillemets carry every non-lemma quotation adduced as authority (24 runs, all scripture in this range — no classical or oracular material occurs here); italics carry the running Song lemma with its piecemeal re-quotations, and Migne's marginal source-edition numbers 156–164. No seam, no exception, nothing tidied.
Guillemet asymmetries: none. All six chunks balance and every pair is 1:1 with the Latin twin (3/2/0/4/3/12 pairs). ⚑ Chunk 0038 carries zero guillemets across 1,004 words — an entire chapter and a half of exposition in Christ's own voice with not one adduced proof-text, which is worth noting only because a parity check that assumes at least one pair per chunk would misfire.
Pattern 5 interruptions (ait, inquit, inquam, inquiens, ait David) are as dense here as in the preceding range and every one stays inside the marks, in the italic lemma runs (Ecce, inquam, tu es pulchra,) exactly as in the guilleted ones (« Minuisti eum paulo minus ab angelis, ait David »).
[n:] placement varies and is reproduced as printed, per brief §7: usually inside the closing », but at 0283A it falls six words OUTSIDE, after Philip's sicut certum est Scripturam perhibere. At 0286C the column anchor precedes the note (amare cohaeredes [0286C] [n: (Matth. XXV)]). At 0283B and 0287D column anchors fall inside guillemet runs, splitting rex … Israel and servum… jura.
⚑ §7a mirroring — the drift point — held word by word. Mixed case inside single sentences, none of it regularized: pulchram virginem bis dixisse beside Virgo mirabiliter perseverat (0274D–0275A) · mater Sponsi, Sponsa filii (0277A — Sponsi and Sponsa capital, filii lower, in one four-word phrase) · hominem de homine genitum sine Patre… Dei Filium sine matre (0284B — capital Patre, lowercase matre, one sentence) · natus unicus fuit Patris… de virgine, unicus item Matris (0286C) · Cui flori et lilio virgo studet (0284A) and inter istos… virgo non frangitur (0284B) in a chapter whose lemma-word Sponsa is capitalized four lines away · Dilectus Sponsae praeeminet (0287C, capital) beside dilectus meus in the lemma. All mirrored.
⚑ Two mirrorings I want the merge to see, because both look like errors and are not:
- Migne capitalizes Cedri / Cedrus / Cypressus as common nouns at 0280B–0280D and then writes ad cedri et cypressi similitudinem lowercase at 0281A. Mirrored — "beams of Cedar… because Cedars, as they say" — which reads oddly in English and is meant to.
- 0288A, sed ille Spiritus immortalis, of the ANGELIC nature, not the Holy Spirit. Mirrored as "that immortal Spirit". I flag it because a reader may take it for the third Person and a sweep may "fix" it; the Latin capitalizes it and the referent is settled by angeli natura six words earlier.
Pattern 3. ⭐ Fires twice on bare forms, exactly as the brief warns. 0282C, inclinantque aurem Scripturarum monitis → "the admonitions of the Scriptures"; 0287B, angeli nonnunquam in Scripturis filii nominantur → "in the Scriptures" — the identical bare form cruces-0030 found at 0260A and that 11638's sweep missed. A third, singular, at 0287D: si quod Scriptura perhibet → "what Scripture declares". A later sweep of 11632 must match bare Scriptura and Scripturae as well as divina and sacra. Also at 0283A, sicut certum est Scripturam perhibere → "Scripture".
Pattern 17. Philip's frame is plural throughout and takes you (Videtis 0275C and 0286D, audistis 0275C and 0283C, noveritis 0283C, legistis 0288A, potestis — none in this range). Every second-person singular is inside the Bride's or the Bridegroom's address to the other, or inside a quotation, and every one is singular in the Latin (tu pulchra es · accendisti · descendisti · es constitutus · processisti · quem tu manu gratiae · Vide ne feceris · conservus tuus · Tu ergo non angelum, sed Deum adora · Minuisti eum) — so thou throughout. No plural second person occurs inside any quotation in this range, so the Dorotheus effect does not show here.
§7 · RULED VOCABULARY (brief §5) — held, plus three new fixed equivalences
Held: amica mea = "my friend" (0274C, 0283C, 0285C — the Cant. 2:2 occurrence the brief predicts) · misericordia = mercy (0279B, 0282B ×2, 0284C) kept distinct from clementia (does not occur) · charitas (does not occur) · Pattern 3 as above · Sponsus = Bridegroom, Sponsa = Bride, Virgo = Virgin, Deitas / deitas = Godhead. muraenula, vermiculatas, nigra / fusca / formosa, cellaria, recti, adolescentulae, torcular, candidatio, tomus do not occur in this range. Cant. 1:12 does not recur here, so this range contributes no evidence to brief §8c's Cum / Dum count.
Three new fixed equivalences this range had to set, offered to the merge:
- ⭐ lectulus = "little bed", lectus = "bed", never interchanged. Forced by 0279B: non tamen Virgo lectum, sed magis lectulum nominavit; quo nomine legem illam… adimplevit, qua tam verbo quam opere humilia tenere consuevit. The diminutive is the humility argument. Fourteen instances across 0037–0038. The lemma is Cant. 1:15 and will recur.
- laquearia = "panelled ceilings" (not "rafters", Douay's word), because Caput XVII glosses them as laid beneath the beams and stretched wall to wall as a binding — a rafter is the tignum, which is the other half of the same lemma and must stay "beam".
- malus = "the apple tree" throughout Caput XXI, including where Migne writes neuter malum (0287B) — the chapter's three-term proof (umbra, fructus, odor) is about the tree, not the fruit, and poma is separately "apples" at 0286A.
Also fixed within the range for consistency: accubitum = "repose" (0278C), following cruces-0030's ruling · solitudo = "solitude" throughout 0285A–B, because Isa. 35:1's solitudo and Philip's nostra… solitudo are the same word and the gloss depends on it · scrupulus / scrupulosa = "scruple" / "scrupulous" (0280D), keeping the pun between the cypress's knotless wood and scrupulous obedience · convalles = "deep valleys" against valles = "valleys", which Migne's own Valles, imo convalles distinguishes.
§8 · THINGS DELIBERATELY NOT REPORTED (brief §10, checked once)
- Column-band arithmetic: no anchor in this range is followed by text broken mid-word or mid-construction; the bands run cleanly A–D and every chunk's
colFirst/colLastmatches its body. No[ed:], no patch, no plate check. §10.1. noteCountmatches the body[n:]count in all six chunks (8/6/3/7/4/13), verified by script — and note that[CAP. II.]at 0281B is correctly outside that count.- Attested medieval spellings left alone, unmarked (Pattern 9): tanquam, quodcunque, quidquid, coelum / coelestis, spiritalis, nunquam, Zabulus, Hierusalem, mirrha-class orthography, utcunque, nonnunquam, Absalon, Maecenas as a common noun, haereditario, praelatio.
- No
[f:]. 11632 is lemma-and-gloss, not a florilegium (§10.4). - No
[nt:]. All 41 notes in the range are bare citation sigla. - Migne's own
( sic )does not occur in this range.
§9 · WHAT A LATER BLIND READ SHOULD LOOK AT FIRST
- 0287C, « Conservus tuus suum… » (§5). The English is verbless because the Latin is, and Migne prints the correct sum nine lines above — which makes this both the most obviously repairable spot in the range and the one where a repair would be least visible. Decide it together with cruces-0030's incudo.
- 0284D and 0285A, the two Luke/Isaiah
[var:](§3.1, §3.2). Isa. 35:1 is the confident one — Philip uses germinabit twice — and Luke 23:34 is the judgment call, because ignosce / dimitte are near-synonyms and the marker rests on the argument round it rather than on the lexicon. - 0277B, the Wisd. 7:26 / Heb. 1:3 fusion with imago veritatis (§2.1).
[n:]-only, so unmarked under brief §8a — but if the merge opens that class this is where the marker goes in this range. Check the left edge, which I judged to begin at candor and not at Pulcher. - 0283A, « Deus autem ignis est » (§1, 0039 table). Guilleted, abridged, and deliberately unmarked. The closest call in the range.
- The four sigla of §4, and particularly (Marc. XV) at 0283B, which the previous range's (Matth. XXVII) at 0267D turns from a suspicion into a demonstration. That pair is the strongest single piece of §8b evidence the work has produced so far and the merge should count it.
Philip of Harvengt, Commentaria in Cantica canticorum, PL 203. Range covering Book II Caput XXII–XXVI (Cant. 2:3–7: Sub umbra illius quem desideraveram, sedi → Introduxit me rex in cellariam vinariam → Fulcite me floribus → Laeva ejus sub capite meo → Adjuvo vos, filiae Hierusalem), then the explicit-less transition to LIBER TERTIUS. and Book III Caput I–II on Cant. 2:8 Vox dilecti mei. Six chunks, 6,343 Latin words.
Marker totals for this range: 7 [var:] · 1 [sic:] · 0 [ed:] · 0 [d:] · 0 [nt:] · 0 [f:]. verify-english.mjs reports no errors on any of the six; four ratio warnings (0044 1.62, 0045 1.65, 0046 1.68, 0047 1.61), all inside the 1.35–1.68 band this work has already shipped (0004 1.64, 0005 1.68, 0026 1.66, 0035 1.65). Column anchors (13/10/8/9/13/4), [n:] strings (16/7/5/5/4/4, each matching its frontmatter noteCount) and guillemet counts were diffed 1:1 against the Latin twins by script, not by eye: anchors byte-identical in order and place, [n:] contents byte-identical in order. Every italic run in the English is accounted for against the Latin's own runs plus the seven [var:] and the one [sic:].
§1 · ⭐⭐ THE THREE FINDINGS THE MERGE SHOULD CARRY
1.1 · Lam. 4:20 at 0291B — an expounded quotation Migne marks with NOTHING AT ALL, and the extractor could not see it
This is the range's principal find and it came from the §8a second pass, not from the list. After the guilleted half-verse « In umbra, inquiunt, ejus vivemus in gentibus » [n: (Thren. IV)], Philip turns back to the first half of the same verse and writes:
Ideo praemittunt: Spiritus ante faciem nostram Christus Dominus.
The Vulgate reads spiritus oris nostri christus dominus — "the breath of our mouth". Migne prints ante faciem nostram, which is the Old Latin / LXX reading (πνεῦμα προσώπου ἡμῶν, spiritus faciei nostrae). And the divergent phrase is the one Philip expounds — it is the subject of his next two sentences, three times over:
Christus Dominus ante faciem nostram spiritus tunc habetur, cum eum nostra fides jam non secundum carnem, sed secundum spiritum intuetur… Ideo Paulus… Deum et ea quae sunt ejus, ante faciem proponenda.
Conform the lemma to oris nostri and the whole ante faciem / posteriora Christi architecture of the chapter — Peter putting Christ's hinder parts first, Paul setting God before the face — collapses.
⛔ Migne marks this span with NEITHER guillemets, NOR italics, NOR a note. It is not in data/quotations/11632/0042-0047.md in any class, because the extractor keys the [n:]-only class on the note and there is no note. No [var:] fired, per brief §8a: where the plate marks the words as neither quotation nor lemma we cannot establish the quotation's left edge, so marking it would assert a boundary the plate does not print. Logged in full so the merge can rule the class with this candidate in front of it. It is the exact shape of Ps. 90:5–6 at 0245A (cruces-0024 §2c.2) and of Rom. 8:10 at 0226B, and it is the third instance of the class in three ranges — which is itself the argument that the class is real.
⚑ A methodological consequence worth stating. Two of this work's three [n:]-only-class finds were attached to a note; this one was not. A range that reads only the extractor's ⭐ list will miss this shape entirely. The pass that found it was: read every scripture-sounding clause in the prose, note or no note.
1.2 · ⭐⭐ Cant. 2:7 at 0299D — the head lemma prints Adjuvo for Adjuro, and the correct form stands seven words earlier
The head lemma of Caput XXVI is printed:
**Adjuvo vos, filiae Hierusalem, ne suscitetis, neque evigilare faciatis dilectam, quoadusque ipsa velit.
Adjuvo means "I help". The verse is Adiuro vos — "I adjure you" — and the entire chapter is about the adjuration: humano more obtestatur durius et adjurat · astringit eas durius et interserit juramentum · Sponsi monita, quibus adjurat filias Hierusalem · filiae Hierusalem adjurantur (twice) · Mandatum vero sic adjurantis · si, per quod adjuratur… and the verse returns in full at 0302A as « Adjuro vos, inquit, filiae Jerusalem, per capreas, cervosque camporum. »
⚑ The decisive detail: Migne prints the right form immediately before the wrong one. The last words of chunk 0045 (col. 0299C) are the lemma tag Adjuro, etc. — so within seven words of printed text the plate has Adjuro and then Adjuvo.
Rendered as printed ("I help you"), which is meant to look wrong, with a [var:] naming the received reading. Not a [sic:]: adjuvo is a real word and Pattern 12's "real word merely wrong" clause keeps it on the English side. ⚠ This is the sentence in the range most likely to be silently repaired by a later reader, and the repair would be invisible — one letter restores a perfectly smooth chapter opening.
The head lemma also omits per capreas cervosque camporum (truncation, not a variant; the words return at 0302A) — which is itself notable, because the whole back half of the chapter is an exposition of the roes and harts.
1.3 · ⭐ Cant. 2:4 at 0292D — rex added, and cellariam for cellam
**Introduxit me rex in cellariam vinariam: ordinavit in me charitatem.
The Vulgate has introduxit me in cellam vinariam, with no rex.
- rex is Philip's text, not a slip. His first sentence glosses it: Quem et quare nominet regem, supra recolo me dixisse — he takes the lemma to name the king and refers back to his own exposition of Cant. 1:3. Conforming would strand the gloss.
- cellariam is the harder call, and it matters because brief §5 rules cellaria = storerooms against cella vinaria = wine cellar, and this lemma fuses them. Philip's own prose immediately separates them again: cum in regis cellaria introductam Virgo meminit se fuisse; quae… non tamen esse vinaria memorantur. Nunc vero in cellam vinariam Virgo se perhibet introduci — and thereafter tota cella vinaria (0293A), sed cella redundans; domus vinaria (0293A), Hoc in cella vinaria Christus beneficium operatur (0295B). Six printings of the prose form against one of the lemma form.
Rendered so the distinction survives on the page: the lemma reads "the wine storeroom", the retrospect reads "the king's storerooms", and every prose occurrence reads "the wine cellar" — three English forms for Migne's three Latin forms. [var:] fired on the lemma for both divergences.
§2 · THE COLLATION — all 72 listed spans, every one accounted for
Every span in data/quotations/11632/0042-0047.md was collated word by word against the Vulgate. Spans recorded as AGREES were collated and found to agree; the absence of a marker on them is a finding, not a silence. Lemma re-quotations (Sub umbra, Et fructus, Ordinavit, Fulcite me, Dextera, Adjuro vos, etc.) are short repetitions of a head-text collated at its full occurrence; each was checked against its head-text and none re-quotes it with different words — with the single, decisive exception of Adjuvo / Adjuro (§1.2), which runs the other way: the re-quotation is right and the head is wrong.
2a · Divergent — [var:] fired (7)
| Col | Ref | Migne prints | Vulgate | Note |
|---|---|---|---|---|
| 0290C | Ps. 115:1 | « Credidit, propter quod et locutus est » | Credidi propter quod locutus sum | first person → third, and et added. Philip needs the third person: he is arguing about quispiam, "anyone", who believes and is therefore said to be. Rendered "He believed, for which cause he also spoke." |
| 0290C | Esther 14:11 | « Ne tradas regnum tuum his qui non sunt » | ne tradas Domine sceptrum tuum his qui non sunt | lexical substitution + dropped vocative. Same class as the 0251C Job 2:10 Domini/Dei marker (cruces-0024 §2a). |
| 0290D | Hab. 2:4 | « Justus, inquit, meus ex fide sua vivit » | iustus autem in fide sua vivet | ⭐ cited Habakkuk, worded Hebrews. iustus meus ex fide vivit is Heb. 10:38; the sua is Habakkuk's. A fusion of the two, under a Habakkuk siglum. See §2d. |
| 0291A | Lam. 4:20 | « In umbra, inquiunt, ejus vivemus in gentibus » | in umbra tua vivemus in gentibus | second person → third, matching the third-person frame Philip has built (justi… in umbra ejus three words earlier). |
| 0291C | Matt. 16:23 | « Vade, ait, retro, non sapis quae Dei sunt » | Vade post me Satana… quia non sapis ea quae Dei sunt | ⭐ cited Matthew ([n: (ibid.)] on (Matth. XVI)), worded Mark. Vade retro + non sapis quae Dei sunt without ea is Mark 8:33; Satana is dropped. Same class as cruces-0024's Luke 9:58-cited / Matt. 8:20-worded case at 0240B. |
| 0292D | Cant. 2:4 | Introduxit me rex in cellariam vinariam | introduxit me in cellam vinariam | ⭐ see §1.3 |
| 0299D | Cant. 2:7 | **Adjuvo vos, filiae Hierusalem | Adiuro vos filiae Hierusalem | ⭐⭐ see §1.2 |
2b · Collated and AGREEING or abridged only — no marker (recorded so the absence is evidence)
0042 — Cant. 2:3 lemma Sub umbra illius quem desideraveram, sedi; et fructus ejus dulcis gutturi meo — agrees word for word (and at all four re-quotations) · Heb. 11:6 « Oportet, inquit, accedentem ad Deum credere quia est; et inquirentibus se remunerator sit » — every word the Vulgate's; enim dropped and credere moved behind accedentem ad Deum. Transposition, no marker · Heb. 3:14 « Si tamen, inquit, initium substantiae ejus usque ad finem firmum retineamus » — agrees exactly · Matt. 7:21 « Domine, Domine » — agrees · 1 Thess. 2:12 « Ut ambuletis, inquit, digne Deo » — Vulg. ambularetis, imperfect subjunctive in a past-sequence indirect command; Migne's present is the same construction in primary sequence, and nothing is asserted that the Vulgate does not assert. Logged, no marker · 2 Cor. 5:16 « Etsi novimus Christum secundum carnem, sed nunc jam non novimus » — Vulg. et si cognovimus secundum carnem Christum; verb of the same family, word order. Checked specifically for negation loss under brief §9: the single non is carried. No marker.
0043 — Luke 10:27 « Ex toto, ait, corde tuo, et ex tota anima tua, et ex omnibus viribus tuis » — agrees word for word for what is printed; truncated at both ends (diliges Dominum Deum tuum before, et ex omni mente tua after). No marker.
0044 — Cant. 2:5 lemma Fulcite me floribus, stipate me malis, quia amore langueo — agrees word for word (and at both re-quotations) · 2 Sam. 13:1–4 « Factum est, inquit, ut sororem Absalon Thamar adamaret Ammon filius David… » — a heavily compressed but faithful stitch: drops post haec, speciosissimam vocabulo, cur non indicas mihi, and fratris mei; Absalon / Ammon for Absalom / Amnon is transmission orthography. Every word printed is the Vulgate's. No marker; see §3 for the guillemet asymmetry inside it · Acts 5:29 « Oportet obedire Deo, magis quam hominibus » — agrees (Vulg. oboedire oportet, transposition) · Acts 4:20 « Non possumus quae audivimus et vidimus non loqui » — Vulg. non enim possumus quae vidimus et audivimus non loqui. ⚑ The two verbs are transposed and enim dropped; both negations are carried in the English. Sense untouched, so no marker — but recorded, because a transposition inside a double negative is exactly where a silent repair would hide.
0045 — Cant. 2:6 lemma Laeva ejus sub capite meo; et dextera illius amplexabitur me — agrees word for word (and at all three re-quotations) · Matt. 8:6 « Domine, inquit, puer meus jacet in domo » — agrees, Philip splitting off paralyticus et male torquetur into his own question-and-answer outside the marks · Matt. 8:8 « Non sum, inquit, dignus ut intres sub tectum meum; sed tantum dic verbo, et sanabitur puer meus » — agrees, dropping the opening Domine · John 5:3 — agrees for every word printed; Migne breaks the verse into four separate guillemet runs with Philip's own questions between them (see §3), and abridges caecorum, claudorum, aridorum. No marker · Ps. 15:11 « Delectationes, inquit, in dextera tua usque in finem » — agrees word for word. ⚠ The siglum reads (Psal. LI); see §2d.
0046 — Ps. 100:5 « Detrahentem, inquit, proximo suo, hunc persequebar » — Vulg. detrahentem secreto proximo suo hunc persequebar. One adverb dropped, and the clause asserts nothing the Vulgate does not. Logged, no marker — same treatment as the dropped cito at Matt. 5:25 (cruces-0030) · Cant. 2:7 re-quoted Adjuro vos… filiae Jerusalem, per capreas, cervosque camporum at 0302A — agrees word for word, and is the control that convicts the head lemma (§1.2). Note Jerusalem here against Hierusalem five times elsewhere in the same chunk: mirrored, not regularized.
0047 — Cant. 2:8 lemma Vox dilecti mei — agrees (both printings) · Isa. 52:6 « Ego ipse, ait, qui loquebar, ecce adsum » — agrees word for word; opens mid-verse after quia.
2c · The [n:]-only class — hit rate 0 of 20 on the listed spans
All twenty ⭐ spans on the list were traced back to their real left edge. Every one of the twenty is Philip's own prose, written with scripture rather than quoting it: accusative-and-infinitive frames, third-person and first-person recastings, his own rhymed clause-endings. None takes a marker; a [var:] on unmarked prose would misrepresent it as a lemma.
Reported per brief §8a even though it is a null result, and it is a real datum about the class: 0/20 here, against 1/14 for the 0024–0029 range and 0/19 for 0018–0023.
The twenty, listed so nobody re-opens them: 0042 — 0290C 1 Cor. 14:38 (ignorans… legitur ignorari, recast as a passive maxim) · 0291A Heb. 11:1 (fides optatae praesentia non est rei, sed sperandae substantia, his own antithesis; note the siglum, §2d) · 0291B Heb. 11:1 again (id maxime habebunt prae oculis quod habere promerentur nonnisi spiritales) · 0291C John 6:64 (eum qui vivificat, Deum spiritum novit esse) · 0291D Eccl. 9:1 (nescit enim miser homo utrum odio dignus sit an amore — his own adjective, and the Vulgate's amore an odio reversed, inside his own clause). 0043 — 0293A Ps. 22:5 (quam praeclarus ille calix inebriat) · 0293A Acts 2:13 (tanquam madentes musto linguosos efficiat) · 0293B Isa. 12:3 (ex ipso vel in ipso fonte haurit aquas gaudio pleniori) · 0293C 1 Cor. 13:4–5 (malum non cogitat, non agit perperam… ordinat charitatem — Paul's predicates strung into Philip's own list, with diligit aequitatem, iram non suscitat, amorem nutrit added; all six negations carried) · 0293D Matt. 22:39 (amat, sicut scriptum est, omnem proximum ut seipsam) · 0294B Eph. 5:29 (cum nemo carnem suam odio habeat, subjunctive inside his cum-clause). 0044 — 0297A Ps. 110:10 (et intellectus bonus est omnibus, non habentibus, sed facientibus intellectum — the antithesis is Philip's, and so is intellectum for the Vulgate's eum) · 0297B Acts 5:41 (Gaudeam et cum sensero vos ire gaudentes a conspectu concilii, second person, in his own cum-clause). 0045 — 0299C Ps. 16:15 (mane astabo vigilans… sub ejus dextera, apparente ipsius gloria satiabor — an ablative absolute for the Vulgate's cum apparuerit gloria tua, and sub ejus dextera imported from the lemma). 0046 — 0302A Gal. 6:2 (Sic sua invicem onera portantes legem Christi satagunt adimplere) · 0302C Num. 23:10 (ne compellar… resilire; see §2d for the note's position) · 0302C Ps. 83:3 (si anima mea morte justorum moriens et deficiens in atria Domini concupiscat). 0047 — 0303C Ps. 118:66 (docet disciplinam, docet et scientiam, docet etiam bonitatem — the Vulgate's bonitatem et disciplinam et scientiam doce me recast into three third-person clauses; note the siglum, §2d) · 0303C John 3:29 (Ego igitur amica Sponsi sto et gaudeo propter vocem Sponsi — the Vulgate's masculine amicus… sponsi qui stat et audit eum turned feminine and first person; see §5.1 on amica) · 0303C Isa. 64:1 (Utinam disrumperet coelos et veniret for utinam disrumperes caelos et descenderes — third person and a different verb, inside Philip's own utinam).
Further unmarked weaves checked for silent conformation and left as Philip's own prose (none marked, none conformed): Isa. 9:2 / Luke 1:79 (in tenebris et in umbra mortis, 0289D) · Acts 2:2 + Luke 1:78 (spiritus vehemens… ex alto visitans oriens… lumine matutino, 0290A) · 1 Cor. 13:12 (videt per speculum, 0290B) · Ps. 30:15 / Ps. 117:28 (Tu es ipse Deus meus, 0290C — see §4) · Mark 14:15 (in coenaculo grandi strato, 0292A) · Ps. 45:5 (fluminis impetus civitatem, 0293A) · Luke 1:39 (ad montana provehitur, 0295A) · Phil. 1:23 (vult dissolvi, 0299A) · Eccles. 1:3 (sub sole laborantem, 0299A) · Eph. 5:16 (dum dies mali sunt, 0299B) · Ps. 102:5 (sicut aquila, juvenescam, 0299B) · Ps. 62:2 (de mane vigilabo, 0299B) · 1 Pet. 5:3 (non dominari clero, sed formam subditis se praebere, 0300C) · Ps. 13:4 (sicut escam panis, plebem devorant perditorum, 0301C) · Luke 17:10 (servos tamen se inutiles dicunt esse, 0301D) · Ps. 118:32 (viam currunt mandatorum, cum corde et animo dilatantur, 0301D) · 2 Tim. 3:5 (sine virtute non est pietatis species fructuosa, 0297A) · Ps. 26:5 + Isa. 4:6 (ab aestu et turbine et pluvia in abscondito tabernaculi, 0302C) · 1 Cor. 13:12 (facie ad faciem, 0296D) · Phil. 3:8 (pro Christo judicans detrimenta, 0298B) · 1 John 2:27 (cui dat intellectum quem docet scientiam unctio spiritalis, 0298C).
2d · Migne's sigla — four to add to the merge's accumulating count (brief §8b)
Reproduced verbatim, none corrected. Thirty-seven of the range's forty-one notes name their reference correctly, which is a markedly better rate than cols 0212–0227. The four:
- 0291A
[n: (Hebr. II)]for Heb. 11:1 — off by nine chapters, and the chunk's own correct Hebrews sigla ((Hebr. XI)at 0290B,(Hebr. III)at 0290D) stand a few lines away. - 0298D
[n: (Psal. LI)]for Ps. 15:11 (Delectationes in dextera tua usque in finem) — off by thirty-six psalms. - 0303C
[n: (Psal. CXII)]for Ps. 118:66 (bonitatem et disciplinam et scientiam) — off by six. - 0302C
[n: (Num. XXIII)]is correctly named but wrongly placed — it sits after resilire, while the Numbers matter (morte justorum, Num. 23:10) arrives in the next sentence, which carries its own[n: (Psal. LXXXIII)]. Reproduced in place; §10.2 forbids moving it.
⚑ Also for the count, and of a different kind: 0290D [n: (Habac. II)] names the right chapter of the wrong book for a lemma whose wording is Heb. 10:38 (§2a), and 0291C [n: (ibid.)] on (Matth. XVI) does the same for wording that is Mark 8:33. Both are cited-X-worded-Y, the class cruces-0024 §2c.1 and cruces-0012 opened. This range has two, and both are inside guillemets — which is why both took a [var:] where the earlier instances, being on unmarked prose, could not.
§3 · TYPOGRAPHY — the Book II/III boundary is crossed, and there is NO SEAM
⭐ This range answers the question cruces-0024 §1 left for a later agent. Chunk 0047 opens ## LIBER TERTIUS. at col. 0303A (empty body, exactly as LIBER SECUNDUS. sat at 0246C), and ## CAPUT PRIMUM. follows under it. Migne prints the transition in Philip's own voice at 0302D — stylus meus ad prosequendum caetera non festinet, sed dormiente Sponsa, iste paululum se reclinet — and names the division himself: cujus ab osculo primus liber sumpsit exordium, in somno finem accipiat hic secundus.
Nothing about the marking changes across it. Both marks run in the same functional division on both sides: Book II side (0046) has the italic lemma, the italic marginal numbers 171–172, and a guillemeted Ps. 100:5; Book III side (0047) has the italic lemma twice, the italic marginal 173, and a guillemeted Isa. 52:6. So 11632 crosses two book boundaries with no seam at either, and 11638's book-boundary model is now falsified twice over on this work. The merge can stop looking.
LIBER TERTIUS. → "BOOK THREE.", after LIBER PRIMUS. → "BOOK ONE." and LIBER SECUNDUS. → "BOOK TWO." CAPUT PRIMUM spelled in words then CAPUT II in numerals, in the same chunk, preserved as printed (brief §7a) — and note that Book III restarts the numbering while Book II ended at CAPUT XXVI.
3a · ⚠ The guillemet asymmetry at 0295C — a NESTED unclosed «
0044 prints 4 « against 3 », and the extra opening is inside an existing quotation run:
« Factum est, inquit, ut sororem Absalon Thamar adamaret Ammon filius David… Dixitque Ammon: « Thamar sororem Absalon amo
[n: (II Reg. XIII)]. »
Migne opens a run at Factum est, and then, at the point where the narrative gives Ammon his own direct speech, opens a second « without ever closing the first. The single » at the end closes the inner one. Reproduced exactly as printed, unbalanced (Pattern 5 corollary), and logged here rather than repaired. It is the first guillemet asymmetry recorded in this work since wave 1.
3b · Four guillemet runs carved out of ONE verse — John 5:3 at 0298A
Migne dismantles the verse and reassembles it around Philip's own questions, guillemeting each fragment separately:
« In his, » ait, porticibus « jacebat multitudo magna. » Quare jacebat, exponit: « Languentium. » Quare in porticibus, adjungit: « Exspectantium aquae motum
[n: (Joan. V)]. »
porticibus — Philip's word, pulled up from John 5:2 — sits outside the marks, between them. This is why 0045 has seven guillemet pairs where a reader counting quotations would expect four. Reproduced 1:1; the English keeps the same four fragments and the same interleaved prose, at the cost of some awkward word order ("« In these, » he says, porches, « there lay a great multitude. »"). Same class as 0254B's « Meos » / « tuos » (cruces-0024 §1b): the mark is doing grammatical work, not quotation work.
3c · A printed locator outside [n:], again — (Jacob II) at 0297A
sic fides sine opere legitur et intelligitur otiosa (Jacob II). Italic, inside the running prose, with no [n:] wrapper, and correctly not counted in 0044's noteCount of 5 (verified against the body). Fourth or fifth instance of the class in this work (cf. 0203A, 0222B–C, 0244C, 0260D, 0267B). Reproduced exactly, italics and all.
3d · Marginal source-edition numbers
165 (0290A) · 166 (0291D) · 167 (0293C) · 168 (0295B) · 169 (0297A) · 170 (0298C) · 171 (0300B) · 172 (0302A) · 173 (0303C). Continuous with 101–155 from the earlier ranges. Each kept italic and verbatim at the exact word it interrupts — 165 falls between torpentem and invenire, 170 between desiderantibus and spondet, 173 between praestolantibus and non tacet — and the English clause was built round each rather than moving it.
3e · ⚑ §7a mirroring — the drift point — held word by word
Mixed case inside single sentences, none of it regularized:
- 0291D virgo Mater — lower-case virgo, capital Mater, in a work that capitalizes Virgo almost everywhere. Rendered "the virgin Mother".
- 0294A, 0294B, 0295C Virgo mater — the same pair the other way up. Rendered "the Virgin mother" all three times.
- 0292D non modicam virgo fiduciam sibi sumit and 0293A cujus meriti virginem aestimamus — lower case in chapters that capitalize Virgo eleven times. Rendered "the virgin".
- 0290A nonnullos miserans spiritus, vehemens terret — lower case, the Acts 2:2 spiritus vehemens. Rendered "the vehement spirit", against capital Spiritus at 0291B, 0292A, 0293A, 0293D, 0294D, 0295A, 0298C.
- 0293D vera Mater and 0295A in Matre diligente — capital, rendered "Mother".
- Sponsus / Sponsa / Sponsi / Sponsae are capitalized everywhere in this range (thirty-odd instances, no lower-case exception), which is itself worth recording against 0243B–C where Migne dropped the capital.
This is mechanically checkable against the Latin twin and I would check it first in any review.
3f · Pattern 17
Both frames in this range are plural and take you: the Virgin addressing the adolescentulae (vos interim… convenite, fulcite, removete, refovete, floreatis, proferatis, vos ire gaudentes, digni habiti estis, 0296B–0297B) and the Bridegroom addressing the filiae Hierusalem (ne suscitetis, neque evigilare faciatis, revocetis, vobis, volo ergo vos, adjuro vos, 0299D–0302C). Philip's own frame to his brethren is plural too (ut audistis, ne putetis, vobis profero, ut legistis, sicut recolitis vos legisse, de quo legistis).
Every second-person singular in the range is inside a quotation and every one is singular in the Latin — Ne tradas regnum tuum · Absit a te · non sapis · Ex toto corde tuo… ex omnibus viribus tuis · ut intres sub tectum meum · in dextera tua · Quare sic attenuaris macie · Tu es ipse Deus meus — so thou throughout. The one plural inside a quotation is 1 Thess. 2:12 Ut ambuletis digne Deo, rendered you, sitting four lines from the singular Matt. 16 pair. The number distinction is visible on the page exactly as Pattern 17 intends.
§4 · PATTERN 7 — one [sic:], and the readings rendered as printed
One carried run, and it is NOT also translated in the running text (brief §8's named failure):
- 0294C
[sic: reete]— Hunc itaque proximum reete Virgo diligit ut seipsam. Read recte, certain: Philip uses recte correctly at 0290A, 0290C, 0292B, 0297A, 0299D and 0303A. reete is not a Latin word, so Pattern 7 governs: carried untranslated in italics, and the English deliberately does not also say "rightly" — it reads "This neighbour therefore the Virgin [sic: reete] loves as herself." The plate sets the broken word between proximum and Virgo; English word order puts it one word later, immediately before the verb it modifies.
Rendered as printed, no marker (real words, merely wrong or merely odd) — conjectures live here and NOT in the text:
- ⛔ 0290D, quia fides mortua, etsi non diligens, operatur. As printed this says that a dead faith, though it does not love, does work — which is the reverse of the Jas. 2:20 maxim Philip quotes correctly at 0297A (fides sine opere… otiosa) and sits awkwardly against his own next sentence, Dilectio quippe vita est fidei. Rendered exactly as printed ("since a dead faith, even though it does not love, does work"). Conjectures: quia fides mortua est, si non diligens, operatur, or quia fides mortua, etsi non diligens, non operatur. Neither supplied. ⚠ This is the single most likely place in the range for a well-meaning repair, and under brief §9 the printed negation count is exactly what stands: one non, on diligens, and no other.
- 0290C, Tu es ipse Deus meus. A four-word sentence standing outside the Ps. 115:1 guillemets, with no mark of any kind, in a paragraph otherwise in the third person. It reads as the continuation of the psalm-verse in the psalmist's voice (cf. Ps. 30:15 Deus meus es tu, Ps. 117:28), but Migne marks it as nothing. Rendered as printed ("Thou art thyself my God"), no marker, no quotation supplied.
- 0290A, insolubilis vi necturae. nectura is not classical, but it is Philip's own word — he uses it again at 0294B, natura, naturalique nectura proximum suum esse. Pattern 9: attested usage of this author, unmarked. Rendered "the unloosable force of her binding".
- 0298B, the doubled comma. Migne prints Quae ideo laeva satis congrue nominantur,, quia in hac praesenti vita…. A doubled comma has no English exponent (Pattern 9's test) and reproducing it would read as our own build defect; one comma is set and the doubling is logged here. ⚑ If the merge prefers Pattern 8's "never delete a mark", the fix is one character at 0298B.
- 0292C, nondum ad ventrem pervenit, quo perfecta satietas, invenitur. Migne sets a comma between subject and verb. Not reproduced (English cannot carry it without reading as a typo of ours); logged.
- 0291A, fides optatae praesentia non est rei. The genitive rei is split from praesentia by non est, which is Philip's rhyme-driven word order, not a defect. Rendered "faith is not the presence of the thing wished for".
- 0299D, timorem incutiat sacramentum. sacramentum here means the sworn oath (juramentum two words earlier), not the sacrament. Rendered "sacrament", the word Migne prints, because English carries the same ambiguity and glossing it would be an emendation. Logged.
- 0301A, Verum in hoc dramate. drama for the Song's dialogue. Rendered "in this play"; not italicized, because English has the word.
- 0295A, carne mundum et Spiritu Deo cunctis inaccessum genere counitum. The word order is very hard; cunctis inaccessum is taken with Deo, and genere with counitum, giving "clean in flesh and by the Spirit united in kind to God who is inaccessible to all". An alternative construal takes cunctis inaccessum with the child. Logged, not adjudicated in the text.
- 0296C, malagma sive oleum, sive ligatura reputabitur aegrotanti. Rendered "a poultice, or oil, or a binding"; malagma is a real English-available word (emollient plaster) and is not carried in Latin.
Negation audit (brief §9), second pass, against the Latin. Every printed non / nec / neque / nisi / nunquam / nullus / nihil / nil / nondum / necdum / ne was matched against the English. The dense clusters are 0290C (Sine hac fide Deo quispiam non placebit, nec est digna conscientia, cujus Deum scientia non tenebit… qui nescitur, a nesciente non potest acceptari… qui non crediderit, nec dici debet esse; qui autem non est, consequenter nec in umbra est… his qui non sunt… Non esse recte dicitur, qui Deum esse nescit), 0290D (Etiam non justus erit in fide, sed nonnisi justus vivet in fide — carried as "Even one that is not just will be in faith, but none save the just shall live in faith"), 0291C (non fiet istud, non morieris… non sapis quae Dei sunt), *0293B–C (non perturbat… non confundit… non obscurat, non aufert scientiam, sed infundit; malum non cogitat, non agit perperam… iram non suscitat, non infert odium — six in one sentence), 0294A (non jubetur modus aliquis, non mensura… non scriptor aliquis docuit, non Scriptura… videtur non quantum, sed ex quanto), 0294C (non amplexum pertulit, non juncturam… nullum sensit dolorem corporis, non laesuram… nec omnino potuit… nec erat quis tam felix), 0295A (ut seipsam illi non solum non praeferat, sed nec etiam conferat in amore — a triple, carried as a triple), 0297A–B (non habentibus, sed facientibus… Non possumus quae audivimus et vidimus non loqui… non capitis injuria, non membrorum paralysi… non febris angustia, non corporis quavis molestia… nihil ardentius, nihil vehementius… videtur nec tenetur… nec potest inveniri), 0300C–D (non audimus, vel magis audientes… nullatenus obedimus… non dominari clero… non curis exterioribus, non negotiis saecularibus… non causis forensium, non saecularium contentionibus… necessitas eos referat, non voluptas), and 0302C (ut non solum non suscitem nec evigilare faciam quoslibet dormientes, nec* mandati reus inveniar — carried whole). No negation was dropped and none was supplied.
§5 · CONVENTIONS SET OR HELD IN THIS RANGE
- ⭐
amica Sponsi= "the friend of the Bridegroom" (0303C). Brief §5's ruling on amica mea is honoured in its other grammatical form: Philip recasts John 3:29's amicus sponsi into the feminine and the first person, Ego igitur amica Sponsi sto et gaudeo propter vocem Sponsi. "Friend", never "beloved" or "love" — the whole point of the sentence is that the Bride, who is about to hear the Bridegroom's voice, is standing in the Baptist's place. This is the same lemma-word the merge must hold across the work. - New fixed equivalences this range had to set, offered to the merge: - langueo / languor / languens = "languish / languor" throughout (Caput XXIV–XXV turn on the single root: quia amore langueo → amoris incendio Virgo dixerat se languere → ne amor durius langueat, languor moram sufferat duriorem → nihil undique languidum relinquetur). Kept strictly distinct from aegrotare = "to sicken" and deficere = "to fail", because the Ammon paragraph at 0295C runs all three of them in two sentences and the argument is the contrast between the sick lover and the languishing one. - fulcire = "to stay up" · stipare = "to compass about", fixed at the lemma and held through fulta vel stipata (0296D) and se stipari (0296C). - otium = "leisure" against negotium = "business" — Caput XXVI's whole argument is the pair (otio vel negotio spiritali, spiritali otio quamdam velut injuriam, vestra debere negotia… sua vero otia), and any variation would dissolve it. - laeva = "left hand" · dextera = "right hand", nouns not adjectives, after the lemma; sinistra (0299B, 0299C) likewise "the left".
- Pattern 3 fires on a bare Scriptura at 0294A — quantum diligatur Deus, non scriptor aliquis docuit, non Scriptura. Neither divina nor sacra is present. Rendered "Holy Scripture", per brief §5's ⚑ and the 0260A precedent (cruces-0030 §2). This is the second attested bare-form instance in this work; a later sweep must match bare Scriptura(e) too.
- Brief §5 vocabulary held: charitas = charity throughout (0293C ordinat charitatem, ordo charitatis; 0295A–B charitatem praecipuam ordinavit, excellentia charitatis; 0296D, 0302A affectus charitatis), kept distinct from dilectio / amor = love (0290D Dilectio quippe vita est fidei; 0293C in caeteris pluribus dilectio sit diffusa; 0301D geminae dilectionis mandatum) — and note 0294A, where dilectione and diligatur and diligendi run in three consecutive clauses beside charitas, which is exactly the doublet pressure the rule exists to resist · candidatur (0293B) is translated ("is made white"), per the candidatio rule · cellaria = storerooms, cella vinaria = wine cellar (§1.3) · adolescentulae = maidens (0296A, 0296C, 0296D, 0299D) · Sponsus = Bridegroom, Sponsa = Bride. nigra / fusca / formosa, clementia, misericordia, recti, torcular, muraenula, moralitas do not occur in this range.
## CAPUT XXII.–XXVI.→ "CHAPTER XXII."–"XXVI.";CAPUT PRIMUM.→ "CHAPTER THE FIRST." — the numeral/word distinction preserved as printed inside chunk 0047, which carries both forms.- 0303A's frontmatter
incipitbegins## CAPUT PRIMUM.— i.e. the chunker captured a head into the incipit field. Copied verbatim into the English frontmatter, unaltered, per the brief's frontmatter rule. Not a defect of ours and not to be tidied.
§6 · THINGS DELIBERATELY NOT REPORTED (brief §10, checked once each)
- Column-band arithmetic: 0042's
colContextis 0289C while itscolFirstis 0289D, and 0046's body opens with a bare[0299D]on its own line before the lemma. Both are brief §10.1's class. Checked: no anchor in any of the six chunks is followed by text broken mid-word or mid-construction. The bands run cleanly A–D throughout 0289–0303. No[ed:], no patch, no plate check. noteCountmatches the body[n:]count in all six chunks (16/7/5/5/4/4), verified by script — and note that the printed locator (Jacob II) (§3c) is correctly outside that count.- Attested medieval spellings left alone, unmarked (Pattern 9): tanquam, coelum / coelestium / coelis, quandiu, inpraesentiarum, nonnisi, quodpropter, Hierusalem (beside Jerusalem, §2b), charitas, mirrha-class orthography, spiritalis / spiritaliter, ammonere (0303A, for admonere), Absalon / Ammon, Isaiae, aethnicum-class forms.
- No
[f:]. 11632 is lemma-and-gloss, not a florilegium (§10.4). - No
[d:], no[nt:], no[ed:]: no dittography in the range, and all forty-one notes are bare citations, not editorial prose. - Migne's own
( sic )does not occur here.
§7 · OPEN — for the merge or a blind read
- ⛔ The blind polarity read has not been done and cannot be done by me. The three passages most likely to be wrongly "repaired" are, in order: (a) Adjuvo at 0299D (§1.2) — one letter makes a smooth chapter opening, and the correct form stands seven words earlier on the plate, which makes the repair feel authorized; (b) quia fides mortua, etsi non diligens, operatur at 0290D (§4) — the English is meant to read against the Jas. 2:20 maxim, because the Latin does; (c) the carried reete at 0294C.
- ⚑ §1.1's Lam. 4:20 is this range's candidate for the class brief §8a left open, and if the merge rules that an expounded unmarked weave earns a
[var:], the marker goes at 0291B on Spiritus ante faciem nostram Christus Dominus. ⚠ Note that it is a harder case than Ps. 90:5–6, because it carries no[n:]at all — so a rule framed as "an expounded[n:]-only weave" would not reach it. The class the merge needs to name is "an expounded weave Migne leaves unmarked", note or no note. - ⚑ The cited-X-worded-Y count is now at least five across four ranges (0240B Luke/Matthew · 0290D Habakkuk/Hebrews · 0291C Matthew/Mark · plus cruces-0012's Deuteronomy/Psalms). Two of this range's three are inside guillemets, which is new. Worth a work-wide tally before anyone proposes anything, per §8b.
- ⚑ §3's no-seam result at the Book II/III boundary should be recorded in the merge as closing the question, together with cruces-0024 §1's result at Book I/II. Two boundaries, two negatives; brief §7's ruling is now confirmed rather than assumed.
- The doubled comma at 0298B (§4) is a one-character judgment I made against Pattern 8's letter and in favour of Pattern 9's test. If the merge disagrees, it is a one-character fix and I flag it rather than defend it.
Philip of Harvengt, Commentaria in Cantica canticorum, PL 203. Range covering Book III(?) Caput III–IX — the exposition of Cant. 2:8b–13: Ecce iste venit saliens in montibus, transiliens colles → Similis est dilectus meus capreae hinnuloque cervorum → En ipse stat post parietem nostrum → Et dilectus meus loquitur mihi → Surge, propera, amica mea → Jam enim hiems transiit → Vox turturis audita est in terra nostra. Six chunks, 6,351 Latin words.
⚑ No book head falls in this range; the chunks carry only CAPUT heads, and the numeration runs III → IX continuously across the six, so no division boundary is crossed here.
Marker totals for this range: 2 [var:] · 3 [sic:] · 0 [ed:] · 0 [d:] · 0 [nt:] · 0 [f:]. verify-english.mjs reports no errors on any of the six; one ratio warning, 0052 at 1.61, inside the band this work has already shipped (0004 1.64, 0005 1.68, 0035 1.65, 0046 1.68). Ratios: 1.52 / 1.53 / 1.51 / 1.49 / 1.61 / 1.56.
Column anchors (13/13/11/6/11/6), [n:] strings (16/16/10/8/9/10 — each matching its frontmatter noteCount) and guillemet counts (13/2/7/2/2/11 pairs) were diffed 1:1 against the Latin twins by script, not by eye: identical in content, order and position in all six chunks. No guillemet asymmetry anywhere in this range — every « has its », none stray, none unopened. Every italic run in the English is accounted for against the Latin's own runs plus the three [sic:] and the two [var:] (asterisk counts: 8→12, 4→6, 10→10, 16→16, 12→12, 6→12, the deltas being exactly the marker contents).
§1 · THE COLLATION — all 90 listed spans, every one accounted for
Every span in data/quotations/11632/0048-0053.md was collated word by word against the Vulgate. Spans recorded as AGREES were collated and found to agree; the absence of a marker on them is a finding, not a silence.
0048 (cols 0304A–0307A) — 18 spans
| Span | Verse | Verdict |
|---|---|---|
| Ecce iste venit saliens in montibus, transiliens colles. | Cant. 2:8 | AGREES word for word. Truncated at the opening (Vox dilecti mei expounded in the preceding range). |
« Ecce tu pulcher es, dilecte mi, et decorus [n: (Can. I)]. » | Cant. 1:15 | AGREES exactly. Siglum correct. |
« Sicut malus inter ligna silvarum; sic dilectus meus [n: (Can. II)]. » | Cant. 2:3 | AGREES; truncated before inter filios. Siglum correct. |
« Nonne omnes sunt, inquit, administratorii spiritus in ministerium missi propter eos qui capiunt salutis? [n: (Hebr. I.)] » | Heb. 1:14 | Vulg. qui hereditatem capient salutis — future → present. Nothing in the exposition turns on the tense (Philip's point is the angels' ministry, not its time). Logged, no marker, same class as cruces-0024's Hab. 3:8 ascendis/ascendes. The English reads "who receive", so the divergence is visible on the page. |
« Ave, ait, gratia plena; ecce concipies et paries filium [n: (Luc. I)], » etc. | Luke 1:28 + 1:31 | A conflation of two verses, every printed word the Vulgate's, with in utero dropped from v. 31. Per the cruces-0000 item-12 precedent a conflation takes no [var:]. No marker. |
« Audivi, ait Daniel, vocem viri inter Ulai; et clamavit et dixit: Gabriel, fac istum intelligere visionem [n: (Dan. VIII)]. » | Dan. 8:16 | Vulg. Et audivi… et clamavit, et ait: Gabriel, fac intelligere istum visionem. Leading Et dropped; dixit for ait; word order of istum. Sense-neutral throughout. Logged, no marker. |
« Quomodo fiet istud, quoniam virum non cognosco [n: (Luc. I)]? » | Luke 1:34 | AGREES word for word. |
« Spiritus sanctus superveniet in te [n: (ibid.)]. » | Luke 1:35 | AGREES. Migne's lower-case sanctus has no English exponent; not mirrored, noted here. |
« Sapientiam, ait Paulus, loquimur inter perfectos; quam nemo principum hujus saeculi cognovit [n: (I Cor. II)]. » | 1 Cor. 2:6 + 2:8 | AGREES on every printed word. Vulg. Sapientiam autem loquimur; the autem is displaced by the interrupting ait (Pattern 5). ⭐ And the siglum (I Cor. II) is CORRECT here — see §5. |
« Mene ergo dimisit Spiritus Domini, et locutus est tibi? [n: (III Reg. XXII.)] » | 3 Reg. 22:24 | AGREES word for word, punctuation included. Siglum correct. |
« Laeva ejus sub capite meo; et dextera illius amplexabitur me [n: (Can. II)]. » | Cant. 2:6 | AGREES. |
« Quia amore langueo [n: (ibid.)] » | Cant. 2:5 | AGREES. ⚠ Migne prints NO terminal punctuation after the closing guillemet; the next sentence begins Ejus vero humilitas. Not supplied (Pattern 8). |
« Quia respexit humilitatem ancillae suae [n: (Luc. II)]. » | Luke 1:48 | AGREES word for word. ⚠ Siglum (Luc. II) for Luke 1:48 — reproduced verbatim, not corrected. §5. |
« Ecce, inquiunt, Virgo concipiet et pariet filium [n: (Isa. VII; Luc. X)]. » | Isa. 7:14 | AGREES. Migne capitalizes Virgo where the Vulgate has lower case — mirrored (§7a). ⚠ Siglum's second member (Luc. X) is wrong for Luke 1:31 — reproduced. §5. |
quibus tota se infundit juxta verbum angeli, gratiae plenitudo [n: (Luc. I)] ([n:]-only) | Luke 1:28 | Philip's prose. gratia plena recast into his own relative clause with plenitudo as subject. No marker. |
in eisdem ista illi prae cunctis mulieribus se placentem [n: (Psal. XLIV)] ([n:]-only) | Ps. 44 | Philip's prose; and the next sentence (vultum Regis leguntur filiae Tyri in muneribus deprecari, Ps. 44:13) is his own third-person report, introduced leguntur. No marker. |
cessabit, ut legistis [n: (I Cor. VIII)], prophetia, scientia destruetur ([n:]-only) | 1 Cor. 13:8 | ⚑ The most quotation-like weave in the chunk, and it is still Philip's. scientia destruetur is verbatim Vulgate, but cessabit… prophetia fuses Vulg.'s prophetiae evacuabuntur with linguae cessabunt, and the frame ut legistis is his own second-person address. §8a governs: logged in full, no [var:]. ⚠ The siglum (I Cor. VIII) for 1 Cor. 13:8 is a fresh instance of the misnamed-I Cor. class the brief tracks at §8b. |
| Similis est, etc. | Cant. 2:9 | Lemma cue for the next chapter. |
Marginal source-edition numbers: 174 (0305B) · 175 (0307A). Continuous with cruces-0030's 146–155.
0049 (cols 0307B–0310B) — 18 spans
| Span | Verse | Verdict |
|---|---|---|
| Similis est dilectus meus capreae hinnuloque cervorum. | Cant. 2:9 | AGREES word for word. |
« Natura, » inquiens, « filii sumus irae [n: (Ephes. II)]. » | Eph. 2:3 | ⭐ [var:] FIRED — see §2.1. ⚠ And note the typography: Migne himself breaks this quotation into two guillemet pairs around inquiens — the one place in the range where he does what Pattern 5 forbids us to do. Reproduced 1:1: the chunk therefore has two « » pairs for one quotation. |
Utinam esses, Paule, vir non habens spiritum, et mendacium potius loquereris [n: (Michae. II)] ([n:]-only) | Mic. 2:11 | Philip's prose, recast into a second-person apostrophe to Paul. ⚑ Worth the merge's eye anyway: Vulg. reads Utinam non essem vir habens spiritum — the negation is on the verb; Migne's is on the participle (vir non habens spiritum). Since the whole clause is Philip's own optative addressed to Paul, the shift is his rhetoric, not a variant reading. No marker, logged per §8a. |
ego durae cervicis, quid nisi asinus sum ad lyram… Debboram sequi nolo [n: (Judic. V)], imitari Moysen vel Mariam [n: (Exod. XV)] (2 [n:]-only spans) | Judg. 5; Exod. 15 | Philip's own rhymed first-person lament. Not quotations at all — the notes point at the persons named, not at quoted words. No marker. |
Infelix ego homo cujus animae, corpus quod corrumpitur, cauterium hoc impressit… terrena inhabitatio sic depressit [n: (Sap. IX)] ([n:]-only) | Wisd. 9:15 (+ Rom. 7:24) | Philip's prose. Vulg. Corpus enim quod corrumpitur aggravat animam, et terrena inhabitatio deprimit sensum multa cogitantem; Migne recasts both verbs into his own perfect-tense rhyme (impressit / depressit) and folds in Rom. 7:24's Infelix ego homo, which carries no note. No marker. |
Humor est Christi Spiritus… virtus de illo exiens ad medelam mulierculae deposcentis [n: (Luc. VIII)] ([n:]-only) | Luke 8:46 | Philip's prose; a third-person report of the haemorrhissa, not the verse. ⚑ Note that cruces-0030 fired a [var:] on this same verse at 0273B where Migne guillemets it. Here nothing is marked as quotation, so nothing is marked. No marker. |
illius aqua Siloe in qua is qui, ut caecus fieret, non peccavit, sputo prius illitos non sine fructu oculos suos lavit [n: (Joan. IX)] ([n:]-only) | John 9:6–7 | Philip's prose (the whole pericope compressed into one relative clause of his own). No marker. |
Ipse funes extensos in laqueum [n: (Psal. CXXXIX)] ([n:]-only) | Ps. 139:6 | Philip's prose (funes extenderunt in laqueum → accusative object of his praetercurrit). No marker. |
ipse laqueum in via qua ambulabat absconditum pede lapso vel labili non incurrit [n: (Psal. CXLI)] ([n:]-only) | Ps. 141:4 | Philip's prose (Vulg. in via hac qua ambulabam absconderunt laqueum mihi, first person → third). No marker. |
incerti procul dubio utrum amore an odio digni simus [n: (Eccle. IX)] ([n:]-only) | Eccles. 9:1 | Philip's prose (Vulg. nescit homo utrum amore an odio dignus sit, recast to first person plural). No marker. |
subtilis oculus capreae scrutatur nostram Hierusalem in lucernis [n: (Soph. I)] ([n:]-only) | Zeph. 1:12 | Philip's prose (Vulg. scrutabor Ierusalem in lucernis, first person future → third present, with his own subject). No marker. |
nostras quas putamus justitias, tanquam pannum reputat menstruatae [n: (Isa. LXIV)] ([n:]-only) | Isa. 64:6 | Philip's prose (Vulg. quasi pannus menstruatae universae iustitiae nostrae — a nominal clause turned into his own reputat + double accusative). No marker. |
nosque pie commonet salutarem apprehendere disciplinam [n: (Psal. II)] ([n:]-only) | Ps. 2:12 | Philip's prose (imperative Apprehendite → his infinitive). No marker. |
sed, juxta Jeremiam, vias nostras indagine sollicita perscrutemur [n: (Thren. III)] ([n:]-only) | Lam. 3:40 | Philip's prose (Scrutemur vias nostras with his own indagine sollicita added, and juxta Jeremiam as his own frame). No marker. |
qui etiam puer et parvulus homo per Isaiam voluit praedicari [n: (Isa. IX)] ([n:]-only) | Isa. 9:6 | Philip's prose. ⚑ Note the same verse is guilleted and collated as AGREEING at 0270B in cruces-0030's range (« Parvulus, inquit, natus est nobis »); here it is prose. No marker. |
quia qui excelsus super omnes deos… humilibus spiritu se infundit [n: (Psal. XCV)] ([n:]-only) | Ps. 95:4 | Philip's prose. No marker. |
Marginal number: 176 (0308D).
0050 (cols 0310C–0313A) — 13 spans
| Span | Verse | Verdict |
|---|---|---|
| En ipse stat post parietem nostrum, respiciens per fenestras, prospiciens per cancellos. | Cant. 2:9 | AGREES word for word. |
« Non videbit me homo et vivet [n: (Exod. XXXIII)]. » (0310C) | Exod. 33:20 | AGREES exactly. |
« Non videbit me, inquit, homo, et vivet [n: (Exod. XXXIII)]. » (0311C) | Exod. 33:20 | AGREES — second printing, identical but for the Pattern 5 inquit. |
« Deum nemo vidit unquam [n: (I Joan. IV)]. » | 1 John 4:12 | AGREES (unquam/umquam orthography). |
| En ipse stat intra parietem · post parietem nostrum. | Cant. 2:9 | ⭐ Not a variant: an italic counterfactual. Philip prints the words the Virgin did not say (intra) in the same italics as the lemma, to contrast them with what she did say (post). The English mirrors both runs. |
« Mane astabo tibi et videbo [n: (Psal. V)]. » | Ps. 5:5 | AGREES word for word. |
« Post tenebras, inquit, spero lucem [n: (Job. XVII)]. » | Job 17:12 | AGREES. Siglum correct. |
« Heu, ait, quia incolatus meus prolongatus est [n: (Psal. CXIX)]. » | Ps. 119:5 | ⭐ Vulg. Heu mihi, quia incolatus meus prolongatus est. The dative is absent — and the interrupting ait stands exactly in its slot (Pattern 5 displacement, the class cruces-0030 recorded for Matt. 19:22's autem). Logged, no marker — and note that Migne prints the same verse WITH mihi three columns later at 0317C, in chunk 0053, where the interruption falls after mihi. Two printings of one verse, two words apart, inside one agent's range: strong evidence that this is the inquit-displacement mechanism and not a copy-text reading. |
« Tu es, inquit, patientia mea, Domine, spes mea a juventute [0312C] mea [n: (Psal. LXX)]. » | Ps. 70:5 | AGREES for every printed word. Vulg. Quoniam tu es patientia mea Domine; Domine spes mea a iuventute mea — leading Quoniam dropped at the opening, one of the two Domine dropped. Truncation, not a variant. No marker. ⚠ The column anchor falls inside the guillemets, between juventute and mea; reproduced in place. |
Denique Stephanus cum sustinet lapides et opprobria Judaeorum… [n: (Act. VII)] ([n:]-only) | Acts 7:54–60 | Philip's narrative prose. No marker. |
et non inveniens in transitoriis ubi pedem requiescere patiatur [n: (Gen. VIII)] ([n:]-only) | Gen. 8:9 | Philip's prose (Noah's dove: Vulg. cum non invenisset ubi requiesceret pes eius). No marker. |
Quibus oculis non solum mundativa… cuncta reddit infuso lumine deoperta [n: (Ezech. XL et XLI)] ([n:]-only) | Ezek. 40–41 | Philip's prose; the note points at two whole chapters, not at quoted words. No marker. |
Marginal numbers: 177 (0310C) · 178 (0312B).
0051 (cols 0313B–0314C) — 15 spans
| Span | Verse | Verdict |
|---|---|---|
| Et dilectus meus loquitur mihi. | Cant. 2:10 | AGREES. |
« Loquere, ait, Domine, quia audit servus tuus [n: (I Reg. III)]. » | 1 Reg. 3:9 | AGREES word for word. |
ille auditui hujus gaudium et laetitiam dat loquendo [n: (Psal. L)] ([n:]-only) | Ps. 50:10 | Philip's prose (Vulg. Auditui meo dabis gaudium et laetitiam, second person future → third present). No marker. |
| Surge, propera, amica mea, columba mea, formosa mea, et veni. | Cant. 2:10 | AGREES word for word. ⭐ amica mea = "my friend" per brief §5 — this is the lemma's return, and see §4.1. |
« audiens, dicat: Veni [n: (Apoc. VI)], » | Apoc. 22:17 | Vulg. Et qui audit, dicat: Veni. Migne's audiens is a participle for the relative clause; sense untouched, and the guillemets open at audiens, so the divergence is inside a marked quotation. Logged, no marker (Pattern 14 threshold). ⚠ Siglum (Apoc. VI) for Apoc. 22:17 — off by sixteen chapters. §5. |
surge, amplexus infecundos… exi cito in plateas et vicos, claudosque ac debiles huc admitte [n: (Luc. XIV)] ([n:]-only) | Luke 14:21 | ⚑ The densest [n:]-only weave in the range, and the one I came closest to marking. Exi cito in plateas et vicos is verbatim Vulgate; but civitatis is dropped, the Vulgate's four-member list (pauperes ac debiles et caecos et claudos) is cut to two and reordered, and the imperative introduc becomes admitte — and the whole is spoken in the Bridegroom's voice inside Philip's own address to the Virgin, which the Vulgate's paterfamilias is not. Judged Philip's prose. No marker, per §8a, and recorded in full so a later reader who disagrees can reverse it on the evidence rather than rediscover it. |
| Idem, inquit, velle et idem nolle, ea demum firma amicitia est | Sallust, Cat. 20.4 | ⭐ Not scripture, and Migne marks it with NEITHER guillemets NOR italics — although Philip introduces it explicitly as an authority (verax sententia digne concinit ethnicorum). Under brief §7 an adduced authority is the guillemet's own case, so this is a counter-instance to the functional rule and the merge should count it: at 0251D–0253A Migne guillemets the Delphic oracle and Virgil; here he leaves Sallust bare. Nothing to reproduce, so nothing supplied; rendered as running text. (Same treatment as cruces-0030's Ovid Her. 9.31 at 0259.) |
eum tamen (quo in me aestuas) desiderium non postponis [n: (Luc. XI)] ([n:]-only) | Luke 10:42 | Philip's prose; the Martha/Mary unum necessarium follows in the next clause, also unmarked. ⚠ Siglum (Luc. XI) for Luke 10:42. §5. |
adero te confortans et fingens laborem in praecepto [n: (Psal. XCIII)] ([n:]-only) | Ps. 93:20 | Philip's prose. ⚑ Third printing of this weave in the work — cruces-0024 records it at 0195A (active) and 0244A (passive); here it is a present participle in the Bridegroom's mouth. Philip recasts it every time. No marker. |
mihi, cum ad me venies laborans, invenies te propinquam [n: (Rom. XIII)] ([n:]-only) | Rom. 13:11 | Philip's prose. No marker. |
| Surge, quia hora est jam te de somno surgere | Rom. 13:11 | ⭐ An unmarked, unnoted weave the extractor could not see at all (no guillemets, no italics on the quoted half, no [n:]). Vulg. hora est iam nos de somno surgere; Migne's te fits the Bridegroom's address to the Virgin. Philip's prose. No marker, recorded because it is the class §8a exists for and it reached me only on the second pass. |
propera, quia hilarem datorem diligit Deus [n: (II Cor. IX)] | 2 Cor. 9:7 | Vulg. hilarem enim datorem diligit Deus — the connective dropped where Philip's own quia takes over. Philip's prose frame with a verbatim tail. No marker. ⭐ And the siglum (II Cor. IX) is CORRECT here — see §5. |
| et veni, quia ego tecum sum, dicit Dominus | Jer. 1:8 | Verbatim Vulgate tail, no note, no marks at all. Philip's prose. No marker; recorded, again a second-pass find. |
| amica mea, columba, formosa mea; surge, propera, et veni. (0314B) | Cant. 2:10 | ⚠ The re-quotation of the lemma is REORDERED and one word short: the epithets come first and surge, propera after, and columba stands without mea where the head printing has columba mea. Rendered as printed, italics as printed. No marker — it is Philip re-quoting his own lemma piecemeal to gloss it clause by clause (Surge ab otio… propera, obedi… et veni), not a second witness to the verse. |
| Surge, · propera, · et veni, · Jam hiems, | Cant. 2:10–11 | Lemma fragments under gloss, italic. |
Marginal number: 179 (0313D).
0052 (cols 0314D–0317B) — 13 spans
| Span | Verse | Verdict |
|---|---|---|
| Jam enim hiems transiit, imber abiit et recessit; flores apparuerunt in terra nostra; tempus putationis advenit. (+ re-quotations at 0316A, 0317B) | Cant. 2:11–12 | AGREES word for word at every printing. |
Haec nimirum duritia inventa est Petrum gravi ungula tenuisse, cum ille quem noverat, respondit se hominem non novisse [n: (Marc. XIV)] ([n:]-only) | Mark 14:71 | Philip's prose (Vulg. Nescio hominem istum → accusative-and-infinitive under his own respondit). No marker. |
manum piger tenuit sub axilla [n: (Prov. XIX)] ([n:]-only) | Prov. 19:24 | Philip's prose. Vulg. Abscondit piger manum suam sub ascella; axilla is the classical form of the same word and is not a defect (Pattern 9). No marker. |
Meministis… quia cum negaret, et se Petrus calefaceret, frigus erat [n: (Joan. XVII)] ([n:]-only) | John 18:18 | Philip's prose, framed by his own Meministis, ut arbitror, quod Evangelii veritas asseverat. No marker. ⚠ Siglum (Joan. XVII) for John 18:18. §5. |
Flevit enim amare, duro sentiens frigore se teneri [n: (Luc. XXIII)] ([n:]-only) | Luke 22:62 | Philip's prose (Flevit amare absorbed into his sentence with his own participle). No marker. ⚠ Siglum (Luc. XXIII) for Luke 22:62. §5. |
sed eadem hieme transita… Petro Maria mittitur nuntiare potentiam resurgentis [n: (Marc. XVI)] ([n:]-only) | Mark 16:7 | Philip's prose. No marker. |
eum velut suffocato spiritu… Petrus fidentior ter negavit [n: (Marc. XIV)] ([n:]-only) | Mark 14:66–72 | Philip's prose; the note points at the pericope. No marker. |
« Involvit, inquit, eum in sindone [0316D] munda, et posuit in monumento [n: (Matth. XXVII)]. » | Matt. 27:59–60 | Vulg. et involvit illud in sindone munda. Et posuit illud in monumento suo novo. Migne gives masculine eum for the Vulgate's neuter illud (corpus), drops the second object and suo novo. The pronoun's referent is the same person either way, so nothing is asserted that the Vulgate does not assert — the same reasoning cruces-0030 applied to John 5:19's Pater for ille. Logged, no marker. ⚠ The column anchor falls inside the guillemets, between sindone and munda; reproduced in place. |
« Mulier, inquit, ecce filius tuus [n: (Joan. XIX)]. » | John 19:26 | AGREES word for word. (Third printing of this verse in the work — cf. cruces-0030 @0257 and cruces-0024 @0253B; all three agree.) |
Non est ergo differendum, quin proferatur interim falx et admonitio purgativa, quae diligenter resecet vitulamina negligentiae rediviva [n: (Sap. IV)] ([n:]-only) | Wisd. 4:3 | Philip's prose (Vulg. spuria vitulamina non dabunt radices altas — only the noun is shared). No marker. |
| Flores, inquit, apparuerunt in terra nostra, tempus putationis advenit. | Cant. 2:12 | AGREES. ⚠ Note that Migne breaks the italics around inquit here (Flores, roman inquit, italic again) — the same device cruces-0030 recorded at 0265B. Mirrored exactly. |
Marginal numbers: 180 (0315C) · 181 (0317B).
0053 (cols 0317C–0318D) — 13 spans
| Span | Verse | Verdict |
|---|---|---|
| Vox turturis audita est in terra nostra, ficus protulit grossos suos: vineae florentes dederunt odorem suum. | Cant. 2:12–13 | AGREES word for word. |
« Heu mihi, ait, quia incolatus meus prolongatus est [n: (Psal. CXIX)]. » | Ps. 119:5 | AGREES exactly — and see the 0050 row: the same verse, printed without mihi five columns earlier. Both printings are in this range. |
« Plorans ploravit in nocte, et lacrymae ejus in maxillis ejus, non est qui consoletur eam [n: (Thren. I)]. » | Lam. 1:2 | AGREES; truncated before ex omnibus caris eius. |
| « Qui sunt hi sermones, ait ille, quos confertis ad invicem, ambulantes et estis tristes? (Luc. [0317D] XXIV.) » | Luke 24:17 | AGREES word for word. ⚠ A printed italic locator INSIDE the guillemet run, with the column anchor falling in the middle of it and no [n:] wrapper — fourth instance of the class (0203A, 0222B–C, 0244C, 0267B). It is not one of the chunk's ten notes (count verified against the body). Reproduced exactly, italics, anchor and all. |
« Nos sperabamus, inquiunt, quod ipse esset redempturus Israel [n: (ibid.)]. » | Luke 24:21 | Vulg. Nos autem sperabamus quia ipse esset redempturus Israel. autem displaced by the interrupting inquiunt (Pattern 5); quod for quia is orthographic-grade conjunction variation. Logged, no marker. |
« Trahitur, inquit, sapientia de occultis [n: (Job XXVIII)]. » | Job 28:18 | AGREES (autem displaced by inquit). ⚠ Migne prints this siglum without a full stop inside the parenthesis where most others have one; reproduced. |
« Incerta, inquit, et occulta sapientiae tuae manifestasti mihi [n: (Psal. L)]. » | Ps. 50:8 | AGREES word for word. |
« Loquimur, ait, Dei sapientiam [0318A] in mysterio quae abscondita est [n: (I Cor. II)]. » | 1 Cor. 2:7 | AGREES; leading Sed dropped at the opening. ⭐ Siglum (I Cor. II) correct — second correct use in the range. §5. Anchor inside the guillemets. |
« Venit, inquit, Maria Magdalena, annuntians discipulis quia vidi Dominum, et haec dixit mihi [n: (Joan. XX)]. » | John 20:18 | AGREES word for word (Magdalena/Magdalene orthography). |
« Surgens, inquit, Jesus mane prima Sabbati apparuit primo Mariae Magdalenae, illa autem vadens, nuntiavit his qui cum eo fuerant [n: (Marc. XVI)]. » | Mark 16:9–10 | Vulg. Surgens autem mane prima sabbati, apparuit primo Mariae Magdalene, de qua eiecerat septem daemonia. Illa vadens nuntiavit his qui cum eo fuerant. Migne supplies the subject Jesus where the Vulgate has none, drops the seven-demons clause, and moves autem to the second sentence. [var:] deliberately NOT fired: supplying an implicit subject asserts nothing the Vulgate does not assert (cruces-0030's John 5:19 reasoning), and the omission is abridgment. Recorded so the absence is a decision. |
« Pax vobis, inquit, ego sum [n: (Luc. XXIV)]. » | Luke 24:36 | AGREES; truncated before nolite timere. |
« Non audietur in plateis vox ejus [n: (Isa. XLII)]. » | Isa. 42:2 | ⭐⭐ [var:] FIRED — see §2.2. This is the range's principal find. |
Marginal number: 182 (0318D).
The [n:]-only class — hit rate in this range
34 spans listed, plus four further weaves found on the second pass that the extractor never listed (Surge, quia hora est jam te de somno surgere and et veni, quia ego tecum sum, dicit Dominus at 0314C; quam non homo percipit animalis = 1 Cor. 2:14 and debitorem ut sapientibus, sic et stultis = Rom. 1:14 at 0317D–0318A). All 38 are Philip's own prose. Hit rate: zero.
That is a null result and it is real information: 0018–0023 reported 19/19 prose, this range reports 38/38, against wave 1's single Rom. 8:10 and cruces-0030's Ps. 11:7. The mechanism is consistent across every one of the 38 — Philip absorbs the scriptural words into his own rhymed clause endings (the -it / -it, -issit / -essit, -avit / -avit pairs that end nearly every colon in this work), which forces a change of person, tense, or voice. Where the wording survives untouched it is because it happens to fit the rhyme (scientia destruetur, frigus erat), not because he is quoting.
⚑ The two 0314C tails are the class's real warning, and they are the reason the second pass is not optional: quia hora est jam te de somno surgere and quia ego tecum sum, dicit Dominus are near-verbatim Rom. 13:11 and Jer. 1:8, carry no note at all, and were therefore invisible to the extractor in both directions. A [n:]-only sweep that trusts the note list will miss them.
§2 · THE TWO [var:], IN FULL
1. ⭐ Eph. 2:3 at 0307C — sumus for eramus, and the tense is the argument. Migne prints « Natura, » inquiens, « filii sumus irae ». The Vulgate reads et eramus natura filii irae, sicut et ceteri — imperfect, not present. The marker is fired because the tense is precisely what Philip is arguing:
Quod enim primo parenti primitus delinquenti solo accidit vitio non natura, nobis posterioribus longe miserioribus inest, tam vitio quam natura… et Paulus nimis verax est.
His whole point is that what was accidental in Adam is still, now, constitutive in us — and the proof-text is adduced as a present-tense predication about the speaker and his hearers. The Vulgate's eramus places it in the pre-baptismal past, which is the opposite of the claim; and Philip's very next sentence apostrophizes Paul as though the Apostle had just said something he wishes were untrue (Utinam esses, Paule, vir non habens spiritum), which only works if Paul has spoken in the present. Rendered "we are children of wrath"; [var:] records the received reading.
2. ⭐⭐ Isa. 42:2 at 0318D — in plateis, which is MATTHEW's word, in a chapter built on the street. Migne prints « Non audietur in plateis vox ejus » under [n: (Isa. XLII)]. Isaiah 42:2 reads non clamabit… nec audietur vox eius foris — "abroad", "outside". The phrase in plateis is Matt. 12:19's rendering of the same prophecy (neque audiet aliquis in plateis vocem eius).
This is fired, and the reason is 7a″ exactly: platea is the keyword of the whole chapter. Caput IX turns on the turtledove's voice being secret rather than public, and Philip states it with that noun three times around the quotation:
nuntiabat, non turbis in platea, sed apostolis in secreto (0318B) · quem prorsus turbis absconditum foro gaudentibus vel platea (0318C) · vox secreta, quam non capit turba fremens, fori litibus et tumultibus assueta (0318C)
— and then adduces the prophecy as proof, De qua voce scriptum est. Conforming the lemma to Isaiah's foris would leave three sentences arguing about the street from a proof-text that no longer mentions one.
The marker states both readings and names the second witness; it does not speculate about why they differ (Pattern 14). It is worth the merge's notice that this is the third attested instance in 11632 of the class cruces-0024 named at 0240B — a note citing one book while the words printed are another book's (Luke 9 cited / Matthew 8 worded; Deut. 32 cited / Ps. 91 worded; now Isa. 42 cited / Matt. 12 worded). Here, unlike the other two, the span is guilleted, so a marker is available and was used.
§3 · PATTERN 7 AND PATTERN 10 — three [sic:], and what was NOT marked
None of the three carried runs is ALSO translated in the running text (brief §8's named failure — checked word by word on a separate pass).
- 0304A
[sic: signa]— cujus amor amantes conciliat, et consensum eis ingerit spiritalem, ut signa prius ardeat, habere non timeat aemulam non rivalem. Pattern 10, run-together type. signa is a real word but cannot fill this slot: it is neuter plural and ardeat is third singular, and ardere signa governs nothing. The run is si qua, "if any woman burn first" — which is exactly what the sentence before it says (Neque enim movetur invidia si et aliis copia hujus detur) and what the clause after it needs (aemulam non rivalem, a fellow-lover and not a competitor). Carried whole per Pattern 10; the English reads "so that [sic: signa] may burn the sooner" and does not also supply "if any". ⚠ I record this as a judgment rather than defend it. Pattern 12 exempts "a real word that is merely wrong", and signa is a real word; Pattern 10 overrides that exemption for word-division defects and names sedet for sed et — itself a real word — as the governing precedent. If the merge reads it as Pattern 12 instead, the fix is to delete the marker and render "so that the signs may burn first", which construes no better; I judged the division defect the likelier account and the marker the honester one. - 0306C
[sic: vul]— et hic iste in montibus, hoc est, in praecelsis vul muneribus praesentari. A non-word, and it is onetranslation-style.mdPattern 7 names by name (vulfor vult). Carried untranslated in italics; the English does not also supply "wills". ⚑ Note that vult does not construe here either — the sentence already has its infinitive governed by leguntur/praesentari — so the crux carries the conjecture without asserting it. - 0318D
[sic: torrae]— Quae nimirum vox, postquam torrae insonuit et a discipulis est audita, terra sinus laetos aperuit. Read terrae, certain: Migne prints the correct terra six words later in the same sentence, and insonuit wants the dative. Carried untranslated; the English reads "after it sounded to the [sic: torrae]" and does not also say "earth" in that slot.
Rendered as printed, no marker (real words, merely wrong or merely odd) — conjectures live here and NOT in the text:
- ⛔ 0306B, Hujusmodi montes iste veniens et saliens virgini auferre voluit et conferre. auferre + dative means "to take away FROM", which contradicts conferre in the same breath and the whole exchange the sentence describes (he gives the mountains, she renders them back). Conjecture afferre, near-certain. Rendered as printed — "willed to take away from the virgin and to bestow" — so that it reads wrong. ⚠ This is the sentence in my range most likely to be silently repaired, and the repair would be invisible: one letter gives a smooth clause.
- 0306C, ut sine his non inveniatur aliquoties apud aliquos coena duci. This clause does not construe as printed: coena is nominative and duci passive infinitive, giving "that a supper be led", with no obvious sense in a sentence about beauty, birth and learning not being necessary to salvation. Rendered as closely as the printed words allow ("that without them it is not sometimes found among some that the supper is led"), which is meant to read wrong. Conjectures considered and not supplied: coenam duci (led to the supper, i.e. the marriage supper of Matt. 22) or coena dari. Logged, not adjudicated in the text.
- 0308A, tardum et retrogradum pigra boni similis aegritudo. The slot wants bovis: the sentence's own antithesis is asinina… hebetudo / this, and eleven lines later Philip writes qui asini hebetudinem, pigritiam bovis nescit, pairing the same two beasts with the same two nouns. boni is a real word and construes as a genitive, so Pattern 12 keeps it on the English side: rendered "a sluggish sickness like a good man's". ⚑ If the merge prefers to treat it as carried type the marker would go here, but I judged it the fuges/sugas class, not the bonorem class.
- 0316C, Maxime vero multus imber, multa eum munditia suffocavit. The subject munditia ("cleanness") suffocating a man in a paragraph about the flood of the passions is the reverse of the argument; the conjecture is immunditia, and the surrounding sentence (omnes denique tulit aqua, laesit diluvium, culpa mersit) requires it. A real word, so rendered, not carried: the English reads "a great rain, a great cleanness suffocated him." ⚠ Second most likely place in the range for a silent repair.
- 0311A, tendens semper ad occasum — paries temporivus.* Not a classical form (tempestivus means something else); read as a medieval formation on tempus*. Rendered "belongs to time", Pattern 9, unmarked.
- 0317C, cum tenera eorum dilectio, spes dilato desiderio lacessita, inter se disputant. Two nominatives left hanging before a plural verb whose subject is discipuli. An anacoluthon, not a defect; rendered with dashes so the broken construction survives into the English rather than being smoothed into an ablative absolute.
Punctuation — Pattern 8, two live cases, both preserved
- ⭐ 0311A, a full stop MISSING where English and Latin both need one. Migne prints exaudiendis precibus [0311A] praesto esse Et signanter non ait Virgo — no terminal mark at all, and the next word capitalized. Nothing supplied; the English reads "…to be at hand for prayers to be heard And notably the Virgin says not…". This is the mirror image of the lowercase-after-a-misplaced-stop case that brief §5 rules must stand, and the same reasoning governs: English has an exponent for it, so Pattern 8 holds and no mark is invented.
- 0317B, Migne's misplaced full stop with its lower case, PRESERVED. cum vernat viror novus. flores in terra varii se ostentant. The English reads "when a new greenness springs. flowers of many kinds show themselves in the earth." Brief §5 is explicit and cruces-0030 §4 settled it. ⚠ Do not churn this.
- 0306A, the missing stop after « Quia amore langueo
[n: (ibid.)]» — see the 0048 table. Not supplied.
Negation audit (brief §9)
Every printed non / nec / neque / nisi / haud / nunquam / nullus / nihil / nil / ne in the six Latin chunks was matched against the English on a separate second pass, after the prose was drafted. The dense clusters are 0304A (videns nec invidens… non haberi… Neque enim… non timeat aemulam non rivalem), 0304C (nunquam, nusquam credit fides sanior non adesse — a triple, carried as a triple: "believes never, nowhere not to be at hand"), 0306D (non despexit… non aspexit… non inhaesit… non tenetur… non habetur), 0308A (non nisi semper bonum impossibilitas non retundit — rendered "whose willing — never anything but good — no impossibility beats back", both particles carried), 0308C (non spatio, non obstaculo… non seducit… non abducit), 0309D–0310A (absentatur non deserens, non tanquam poenam inferens… nullis praesentibus refoveri… praeter ipsum nil haberi… non sustinet), 0310D–0311A (nemo… non admittit… non permittit… nemo carnem gerens… nemo vidit unquam… non ait Virgo… non aurora consurgens, non sol), 0312C (non solum non inhaeret praesentibus, non attendit — the "not only … not" carried whole), 0313A (vidensque et non visus, ut tamen valeat non nesciri), 0315A (aquae diluvii non repressae imperio non obstaculo repelluntur), 0316B (ut nec verum posset loqui… ne juvaret magistrum), 0316D (caeteris per gratiam evadentibus Judas perditus non emersit), 0318C–D (quam non capit turba… quam nesciunt nisi pauci… oculus pertinacia non caligat… Non audietur in plateis).
No negation was dropped and none was supplied. The one place where carrying the printed reading makes the English contradict itself is 0306B's auferre (above), which is a verb, not a negation, and it is carried for the same reason.
§4 · CONVENTIONS SET OR HELD IN THIS RANGE
- ⭐
amica mea= "my friend" — HELD, and this range is where the merge's ruling first pays. Cant. 2:10 is the first of the six recurrences brief §5 predicts, and it arrives with its own confirmation: Philip immediately glosses the word from friendship, not love — Quod quia vis cum volo, et cum nolo non vis, meam recte dixerim te amicam, attendens cunctis voluntatibus mihi displicentibus inimicam — and then adduces Sallust's definition of friendship (Idem velle et idem nolle, ea demum firma amicitia est) as his proof. "My love" would leave a paragraph proving friendship from a lemma that says love, with amor, dilectio and amicitia all live in the same twelve lines. Rendered "my friend" at 0313C and again in the 0314B re-quotation. - ⚑
cancelli= "lattice(s)", ONE English word for the lemma AND the architectural sense — offered to the merge. Caput V turns on the shape of the cancelli (round, like an eye) and then makes the identification explicit: partem hujus illam quam digniorem meritis intellexit, in rotundum aedificans cancellum voluit nominare, in quo poni significantius Sanctum sanctorum voluit et altare (0312D). English "chancel" descends from this very word and is the natural term for the church-part — but using it here would sever the identity the sentence exists to assert, because the lemma cannot be "looking through the chancels". So "lattice" carries both, and the reader sees Philip name the round part of the church by the lemma's own word. This is the Song ruling's case 2 (stylus/epistylium, murenulae/ferculum) applied to an English pair rather than a Latin one. If the merge prefers "chancel" at 0312D it must accept that the argument goes silent there; I flag it rather than decide it unilaterally. caprea= "roe" ·hinnulus (cervorum)= "the fawn (of harts)" ·cervus= "hart", fixed for Caput IV. The chapter's entire structure is the roe's sight against the fawn's speed, with the hart as the slower third term (caprea, etsi cervo tardior, acutius tamen cernit), so the three must stay distinct. "Young hart" for hinnulus (Douay) would collapse two of the three.humor= "humour", kept as one word through Caput IV. The chapter runs the roe's eye-salve → the Spirit → the water of Siloe → the anointing of our inward eyes on the single noun (humorem quemdam habere perhibetur… interni hujus unctio dat humoris… Humor est Christi Spiritus… humorem illum sui spiritus nostris interioribus oculis superfundit). "Moisture" and "humour" alternating would break it.incolatus= "sojourning" (Ps. 119:5, printed twice in this range at 0312B and 0317C, and glossed at 0317C by suum in terra incolatum dure queritur prolongari). One English word both times.- Brief §5 vocabulary held: charitas = charity (0313D, ad curam proximorum ejus excitat et suscitat charitatem), kept distinct from amor / dilectio = love, which run beside it throughout 0304A and 0310A; misericordia = mercy (0311D, 0315C, 0316B); adolescentulae = maidens (0313C); Sponsus = Bridegroom, Sponsa = Bride, Virgo = Virgin. clementia, torcular, cellaria, recti, moralitas, muraenula, nigra/fusca/formosa as a triple do not occur — but
formosa mea(Cant. 2:10) = "my comely one", holding the formosa = comely rule even where the colour triple is absent. - ⭐ Pattern 3 fires on a bare Scripturae at 0307D. Sumens quippe psalmum et Scripturae tam novae quam veteris harmoniam — no divina, no sacra, and a genitive singular, which is a form neither 11638's sweep pattern nor cruces-0030's bare-in Scripturis case would match. Rendered "the harmony of Holy Scripture, the new as well as the old". ⚑ A later sweep of 11632 must match bare Scriptura in every case, not only the ablative plural.
- Pattern 17. Philip's own frame is plural and takes you — ut legistis (0306D), Meministis (0316B), nunquid non videntur vobis (0316B), Si meministis (0317C), si eumdem Dominum vultis (0318B), ne vos diu lateat (0313C), ut nostis (0313D). Every second-person singular in the range is inside the Bridegroom's address to the Virgin in Caput VII and every one is singular in the Latin — Tu, ait, quae… delitescis… hilarescis; surge… intermitte… admitte… vis… nolis… te amicam… aspiras… suspiras… te exponis… non postponis… non dimittis… praepolles… tibi contrahis… te exhibes… accingere… obedi… ne te inveniat… te confortans… nec te… derelinquam… invenies te propinquam — so thou without exception. The quoted 1 Reg. 3:9 audit servus tuus is likewise singular; there is no plural inside any quotation in this range.
§5 · MIGNE'S SIGLA — six misnamed in six chunks, and two notable RIGHT ones
Reproduced verbatim, none corrected (§10.2). Six wrong in this range, which is between cruces-0012's five-in-six and cruces-0030's two-in-six:
| Col | Printed | Actual verse |
|---|---|---|
| 0306B | [n: (Luc. II)] | Luke 1:48 |
| 0306B | [n: (Isa. VII; Luc. X)] | Isa. 7:14 is right; Luc. X is wrong for Luke 1:31 |
| 0306D | [n: (I Cor. VIII)] | 1 Cor. 13:8 |
| 0313D | [n: (Apoc. VI)] | Apoc. 22:17 |
| 0314B | [n: (Luc. XI)] | Luke 10:42 |
| 0316B | [n: (Joan. XVII)] | John 18:18 |
| 0316B | [n: (Luc. XXIII)] | Luke 22:62 |
(Seven rows; the Isa./Luc. pair is counted once as a half.) ⚑ The shape of the errors is worth the merge's count: five of the seven are off by exactly one chapter (Luc. I→II, Luc. X→XI for X, Joan. XVIII→XVII, Luc. XXII→XXIII, Luc. X→XI). That is a different profile from (II Paral. III)'s thirty-two and (I Cor. II)'s three wrong verses, and it looks mechanical.
⭐ And two sigla the brief's §8b watch-list names are CORRECT here, which the merge needs as much as the misses: [n: (I Cor. II)] is right twice — at 0305C for 1 Cor. 2:6+8 and at 0318A for 1 Cor. 2:7 — and [n: (II Cor. IX)] is right at 0314C for 2 Cor. 9:7. So neither siglum is systematically wrong; they are wrong sometimes, which is a weaker and more useful finding than the accumulating count alone suggests.
The [n: (ibid.)] chains (0305B on Luke 1, 0306A on Cant. 2, 0317D on Luke 24) all resolve correctly against their printed antecedents and none was touched. ⚠ [n:] position varies and is reproduced, not normalized: it falls inside the closing guillemet everywhere in this range except at 0305A, where Migne prints salutis? [n: (Hebr. I.)] » — the note between the question mark and the closing guillemet — and at 0305C, tibi? [n: (III Reg. XXII.)] ». Both mirrored.
§6 · TYPOGRAPHY — brief §7 holds, with one counter-instance worth counting
Guillemets carry the adduced authority; italics carry the lemma, printed locators and marginal numbers, across all six chunks. 37 guilleted runs, and every one is scripture adduced as proof. Italics carry: the running Cant. 2:8–13 lemma and its piecemeal re-quotations, the counterfactual lemma at 0311A (En ipse stat intra parietem), the printed locator (Luc. [0317D] XXIV.) at 0317C, and the marginal source-edition numbers 174–182, continuous with cruces-0030's 146–155.
⚑ The counter-instance, and it cuts against the functional rule rather than for it: at 0314A Philip adduces Sallust (Cat. 20.4) explicitly as an external authority — non solum praesens veritas Canticorum, sed et verax sententia digne concinit ethnicorum — and Migne prints Idem, inquit, velle et idem nolle, ea demum firma amicitia est in neither guillemets nor italics. Under the widened rule cruces-0024 §1a proposed ("« » = a quotation adduced as an authority, whatever its source") this should have been guilleted, as the Delphic oracle and Virgil are at 0251D–0253A. It is not. Nothing was supplied. The merge should weigh this beside cruces-0030's Ovid case (also unmarked): the widened rule may need to be stated as permissive rather than predictive — Migne guillemets non-scriptural authorities sometimes, and never italicizes them in prose.
⭐ A guillemet pair Migne himself splits. 0307C prints « Natura, » inquiens, « filii sumus irae ». This is the construction Pattern 5 forbids us to introduce, and here the plate has it. Reproduced 1:1 — two pairs for one quotation — which is why 0049's guillemet count is 2 pairs for what a reader would call one citation. Do not merge them.
⚑ §7a mirroring — the drift point — held word by word. Migne's mixed case runs through this range and none of it was regularized: Ideo et hic virgo dilecti non abscondit praesentiam (0304A, lower case in a chunk that capitalizes Virgo nine times) · Hujusmodi montes iste veniens et saliens virgini auferre voluit immediately followed by conferenti Virgo eosdem referre studuit — both cases inside one sentence (0306B) · Spiritus sanctus superveniet in te (0305B, lower-case sanctus) · recte ad promovendam fidem sollicitudo virginis accersitur (0317D, in a chunk with no capital Virgo at all) · Sponsus / Sponsa capitalized throughout 0310–0314 without exception. Mechanically checkable against the Latin twin; do not regularize.
Heads mirrored as printed, not tidied: CAPUT III. through CAPUT VII. carry a full stop; CAPUT VIII and CAPUT IX (chunks 0052, 0053) do not. The English heads reproduce the presence and absence of the stop exactly. Same discipline as brief §7a's CAPUT PRIMUM / CAPUT II rule.
§7 · THINGS DELIBERATELY NOT REPORTED (brief §10, checked once each)
- Column-band arithmetic: checked, and no anchor in this range is followed by text broken mid-word or mid-construction. 0049 opens with the anchor glued to the following word (
[0307B]Plerique) exactly as the Latin prints it, and 0051 opens with no anchor at all (colFirst0313B, first anchor mid-paragraph) — both normal. No[ed:], no patch, no plate check. §10.1. noteCountmatches the body[n:]count in all six chunks (16/16/10/8/9/10), verified by script; and note that the printed locator (Luc. XXIV.) at 0317C is correctly outside that count.- Attested medieval spellings left alone, unmarked (Pattern 9): tanquam, coelum/coelesti, unquam, nunquam, quemdam, eumdem, Hierusalem, lacrymae, Sabbati, charitas, spiritalis/spiritalem, aethnicum/ ethnicum, axilla, reumate, Debbora, Dydimo, philomena, cophinus, sindone, mirrha-class forms.
- No
[f:]. 11632 is lemma-and-gloss, not a florilegium (§10.4). - No
[d:], no[nt:]: no dittography anywhere in the range, and all 69 notes are bare citations, none editorial prose. - Cant. 1:12's Cum/Dum (brief §8c) does not occur in this range — the lemma has moved to Cant. 2. Recorded as a null so the merge's count is complete.
§8 · WHAT A LATER BLIND READ SHOULD LOOK AT FIRST
- 0306B, virgini auferre voluit et conferre (§3). The English is deliberately self-contradictory because the Latin is. One letter (afferre) makes it smooth, which is precisely why it must not be changed.
- 0316C, multa eum munditia suffocavit (§3). Second most repairable sentence in the range; the conjecture immunditia is in the crux and must stay there.
- 0318D, the Isa. 42:2
[var:](§2.2). If it is wrong it is wrong on the most consequential span in the range. The check is whether in plateis really is absent from every edition of Isa. 42:2 and present in Matt. 12:19 — it is, but it is the claim to test. - 0304A,
[sic: signa](§3.1). The only marker in the range whose class is arguable (Pattern 10 vs Pattern 12). I have stated the case both ways. - §4.2, the cancelli = "lattice" decision. It is the one term choice here that would be expensive to reverse late, and it is the only place in the range where a natural English word (chancel) was declined on purpose.
Philip of Harvengt, Commentaria in Cantica canticorum, PL 203. Range covering Book III Caput X–XV, the exposition of Cant. 2:13b–15: Vox turturis audita est in terra nostra (continued from the previous range) → Surge, amica mea, Sponsa mea, et veni, columba mea, in foraminibus petrae, in cavernis maceriae → Ostende mihi faciem tuam, sonet vox tua in auribus meis → Capite nobis vulpes parvulas quae demoliuntur vineas (twice) → Nam vinea nostra floruit. Six chunks, 6,368 Latin words.
⚑ No book head falls in this range. The chunks carry only CAPUT heads and the numeration runs X → XV continuously across the six, so no division boundary is crossed. Every head in this range prints its full stop (CAPUT X. … CAPUT XV.) — unlike 0052–0053, whose CAPUT VIII/CAPUT IX print none. The English heads reproduce the stop in all six.
Marker totals for this range: 4 [var:] · 3 [sic:] · 0 [ed:] · 0 [d:] · 0 [nt:] · 0 [f:]. verify-english.mjs reports no errors on any of the six; two ratio warnings (0055 at 1.63, 0059 at 1.62), both inside the 1.35–1.68 band this work has already shipped (0004 1.64, 0005 1.68, 0035 1.65, 0046 1.68). Ratios: 1.54 / 1.63 / 1.56 / 1.54 / 1.55 / 1.61.
Column anchors (19/10/8/8/13/4), [n:] strings (11/3/2/5/12/7 — each matching its frontmatter noteCount) and guillemet counts (9/3/1/4/9/2 pairs) were diffed 1:1 against the Latin twins by script, not by eye: byte-identical in content, order and position in all six chunks. No guillemet asymmetry anywhere in this range — every « has its », none stray, none unopened. Asterisk counts la→en are 8→12, 14→20, 12→12, 6→6, 6→8, 4→6; every delta is exactly the content of a [sic:] or [var:] and nothing else.
§1 · ⭐⭐ THE FOUR FINDINGS THE MERGE SHOULD CARRY
1.1 · ⭐⭐ Cant. 2:13 at 0323C — the lemma prints Sponsa mea for the Vulgate's speciosa mea, and Philip's next sentence proves it is his copy-text
The head lemma of Caput XI is printed:
Surge, inquit, amica mea, Sponsa mea, et veni, columba mea, in foraminibus petrae, in cavernis maceriae.
The Vulgate reads surge amica mea speciosa mea et veni columba mea. Migne's Sponsa mea is not a slip, and the proof is internal and needs nothing outside the work — the whole chapter exists to explain the substituted word, and Philip states the substitution himself, in the second sentence, as an observation about the text in front of him:
Quam igitur amicam, columbam, formosam, cum primo Surge diceret, nominavit, iterum surge dicens, amicam et columbam nihilominus nominavit; Sponsae nomen interserens, quod nusquam eum supra recolo nominasse (0323D)
He is collating his own two printings of the invitation: at Cant. 2:10 the three epithets were amica mea, columba mea, formosa mea; here, he says, two of the three return and the name of Bride is inserted in the third slot — the slot the Vulgate fills with speciosa. He then notes that the name is new to the book (nusquam eum supra recolo nominasse), and the remaining four columns are an exposition of why the Bridegroom reaches for the bride-name at the moment he asks her to leave contemplation for public work:
hoc illi nomen objicit quo eam novit ad obedientiam plus teneri (0323D) · Cum igitur audit Virgo sponsam diligentius se vocari… intelligit non se Sponso debere vel in modico refragari (0324A) · Sponsam, inquit, volo nonnunquam adolescentulis demonstrari (0324B)
Conform the lemma to speciosa mea and Caput XI has no subject. [var:] fired, naming the Vulgate reading only; it does not quote Migne's own words, per Pattern 14's mirror test.
⚑ This is §6-shaped evidence (Zech. 4:14, Gen. 3:19): a divergence the author knows is there and builds on. It is the strongest such instance so far in a lemma rather than a proof-text.
1.2 · ⭐ Cant. 2:14 at 0323C — in cavernis maceriae, PLURAL, and the plural is what is expounded
The same lemma prints in cavernis maceriae against the Vulgate's in caverna maceriae, singular. The plural is not incidental: every one of Philip's six later handlings is plural, and the argument turns on there being many hollows, one per angelic office —
Cujus cavernae et internae velut mansiunculae vel recessus, quos patentes invenit quisquis… (0324D) · Digne ergo eidem Virgini cavernae maceriae non clauduntur, sed recessu patulo ad capiendum eam latius diffunduntur (0325C) · ab antiquo in hac maceria cavernae patuerunt, ex quo inde angeli lapsu perdito corruerunt (0325D) · omnesque suos aditus, omnes illi exerit aperturas (0325D)
The last of these is the decisive one: the hollows are the gaps left by the fallen angels, which are necessarily many, and which men enter one by one. A singular caverna makes the whole angelology unstatable. [var:] fired.
1.3 · ⭐ Isa. 56:10 at 0328C printed under [n: (Isa. LI)] — and the same siglum is CORRECT eleven columns later
Migne prints « canes muti [n: (Isa. LI)], » — the words are Isa. 56:10 (speculatores eius caeci omnes… canes muti non valentes latrare), and the sentence continues, outside the guillemets, dormientes et amantes somnia, which is the same verse (videntes vana, dormientes et amantes somnia).
⭐ And [n: (Isa. LI)] is used again at 0332D–0333A, where it is right: « animae meae: Incurvare, ut transeamus » is Isa. 51:23. So within one range, one siglum, one chapter number: wrong once, right once — the exact shape the brief's §8b names for (Psal. XCII) at 0275B/0281A. Reproduced verbatim in both places, corrected in neither.
⚠ The guillemets here wrap only canes muti, though the rest of the verse runs on unmarked immediately after. Reproduced exactly; no marks supplied.
1.4 · ⭐ Migne prints the Vulgate reading in his OWN apparatus at 0321B — and that is why no [var:] fired there
2 Pet. 1:19 is printed:
« Habemus firmiorem propheticum sermonem, cui benefacitis attendentes quasi lucernae lucenti in obscuro [ alias caliginoso] loco
[n: (II Petr. I)]. »
The Vulgate reads in caliginoso loco. Migne's text has obscuro, and his own bracketed variant supplies caliginoso — i.e. the divergence is already adjudicated on the page, by the editor, in the printed apparatus. A [var:] would tell the reader a second time and blur whose observation it is; this is the ( sic ) reasoning of brief §10.5 and the Nicetas note-(c) precedent applied to a variant bracket. Logged, no marker. The [ alias caliginoso] is reproduced verbatim and untranslated, per the register rule on [ al., …].
⚑ Worth the merge's eye as a class: this is the first place in 11632 where Migne's own apparatus, rather than our collation, is the witness to a Vulgate divergence. If more [ alias …] brackets turn up in later ranges the merge should rule the class once — my reading is that they never take a [var:].
§2 · THE COLLATION — all 57 listed spans, every one accounted for
Every span in data/quotations/11632/0054-0059.md was collated word by word against the Vulgate. Spans recorded as AGREES were collated and found to agree; the absence of a marker on them is a finding, not a silence.
0054 (cols 0319A–0323C) — 13 spans
| Span | Verse | Verdict |
|---|---|---|
| Vox turturis audita est in terra nostra. | Cant. 2:12 | AGREES word for word. Lemma carried over from chunk 0053. |
« Pater noster qui est in coelis [n: (Matth. VI)]. » | Matt. 6:9 | ⭐ [var:] FIRED — see §3.1. Vulg. qui es in caelis. |
« Mane floreat et transeat [n: (Psal. LXXXIX)]. » | Ps. 89:6 | AGREES word for word; truncated out of the middle of the verse. Siglum correct. |
qui juxta Pauli [n: (Ephes. IV)] vocem obscuratum grossitudine habentes intellectum ([n:]-only) | Eph. 4:18 | ⚑ Philip's prose — but the substituted word is the chapter's keyword. Vulg. tenebris obscuratum habentes intellectum; Migne prints grossitudine for tenebris, in a chapter whose entire subject is grossi / grosso sensu / grossa arvina. The frame juxta Pauli vocem is Philip's own, so the left edge is undeterminable. No marker, per §8a; logged in full because it is the likeliest single span in the range to be silently conformed. |
« Durus est, inquiunt, hic sermo, quis potest eum audire? » [n: (Joan. VI.)] | John 6:61 | AGREES; Vulg.'s et before quis dropped in the inquiunt displacement (Pattern 5). ⚠ The [n:] prints OUTSIDE the closing » here, as at 0323A. Reproduced. |
« Ex hoc, ait, multi abierunt retro; et jam non cum illo ambulabant [n: (Joan. VI)]. » | John 6:67 | Vulg. Ex hoc multi discipulorum eius abierunt retro. The partitive is dropped — abridgment, and Philip's application (the Jewish crowd, not the Twelve) is unaffected. Logged, no marker. |
« Domine, ad quem ibimus? Verba vitae aeternae habes: et nos credidimus et cognovimus quia tu es Christus Filius Dei [n: (Joan. VI)]. » | John 6:69–70 | AGREES word for word, punctuation included. Siglum correct. |
« Habemus firmiorem propheticum sermonem… in obscuro [ alias caliginoso] loco [n: (II Petr. I)]. » | 2 Pet. 1:19 | See §1.4. Logged, no marker — Migne's own bracket carries the Vulgate reading. |
| alias | — | Migne's variant-bracket keyword, italic, untranslated. Not a quotation. |
« Agite, ait, poenitentiam et baptizetur unusquisque vestrum in nomine Jesu Christi [n: (Act. II)]. » | Acts 2:38 | Vulg. Paenitentiam agite; Migne inverts the two words around the interrupting ait (Pattern 5 displacement, the class recorded at 0312B and 0316A). Truncated before in remissionem peccatorum. Logged, no marker. Siglum correct. |
Cum Simon Petrus… possessionibus venditis ad pedes apostoli earum pretia posuerunt [n: (Act. V)] ([n:]-only) | Acts 4:34–5:2 | Philip's prose — a narrative report, and the note points at the Ananias pericope he names in the next sentence. No marker. Siglum correct. |
« Non poterant, inquit, resistere sapientiae et Spiritui qui loquebatur [n: (Act. VI)]. » | Acts 6:10 | AGREES; leading et dropped in the inquit displacement. Siglum correct. |
« Exsurge, quare obdormis? » [n: (Psal. XLIII.)] | Ps. 43:23 | AGREES; truncated before Domine. Siglum correct. ⚠ [n:] again outside the closing ». |
Marginal source-edition numbers: 183 (0320C) · 184 (0322C). Continuous with cruces-0048's 174–182.
0055 (cols 0323D–0326A) — 8 spans
| Span | Verse | Verdict |
|---|---|---|
| Surge, amica mea, Sponsa mea, et veni, columba mea, in foraminibus petrae, in cavernis maceriae. | Cant. 2:13–14 | ⭐⭐ TWO [var:] FIRED — §1.1 and §1.2. Every other printed word agrees; the opening propera of 2:13 is not printed here (it was printed at 0313C and is expounded there). amica mea = "my friend" per brief §5. |
| Surge · surge (0323D) | Cant. 2:10 / 2:13 | Philip's own italic re-quotation of the two invitations he is collating. Capital at the first, lower case at the second — mirrored exactly, because the distinction between the two printings is the argument. |
| Columba mea, in foraminibus petrae, in cavernis maceriae. (0324B) | Cant. 2:14 | Second printing; the plural cavernis again. Consistent with the head lemma, which is itself evidence that the plural is copy-text and not a compositor's slip in one setting. No second [var:] (the marker sits on the head lemma). |
« Abiens, inquit, fodit in terram; et abscondit pecuniam domini sui [n: (Matth. XXV)]; » | Matt. 25:18 | AGREES word for word. Siglum correct. |
« Timens, inquit, abii, et abscondi talentum tuum in terra: ecce habes quod tuum est [n: (ibid.)]. » | Matt. 25:25 | AGREES word for word; leading et dropped by the interruption. The ibid. resolves correctly to Matt. XXV. |
« Inutilem, inquit, servum ejicite in tenebras exteriores [n: (Matth. XXV)]. » | Matt. 25:30 | AGREES; leading Et dropped by the interruption. Siglum correct. |
Marginal numbers: 185 (0324A) · 186 (0326A).
⚑ Second-pass finds in 0055, none listed by the extractor (no guillemets, no italics, no [n:] — the Lam. 4:20 shape):
- 0325B Ps. 21:17 — illi qui foderunt manus et pedes Christi, latusque lancea foraverunt. Verbatim foderunt manus… et pedes embedded in Philip's own relative clause, with John 19:34 fused on. Philip's prose. No marker.
- 0325C 2 Cor. 5:16 — tamen secundum carnem, ejus excellentiam jam non novit. Vulg. si et cognovimus secundum carnem Christum, sed nunc iam non novimus: first person plural → third singular, with excellentiam as Philip's own object. Philip's prose. No marker.
0056 (cols 0326B–0328A) — 7 spans
| Span | Verse | Verdict |
|---|---|---|
| Ostende mihi faciem tuam, sonet vox tua in auribus meis: vox enim tua dulcis, et facies tua decora. | Cant. 2:14 | AGREES word for word. |
« Animus, ait, gaudens, aetatem floridam facit: spiritus tristis exsiccat ossa [n: (Prov. XVII)]. » | Prov. 17:22 | AGREES word for word, colon included. Siglum correct. |
| Vox, inquit, tua dulcis, et facies tua decora. (0327B) | Cant. 2:14 | AGREES. ⚠ Migne breaks the italics around inquit (roman inquit between two italic runs) — the device cruces-0048 recorded at 0317B and cruces-0030 at 0265B. Mirrored: English keeps two italic runs about a roman "he says". |
quia et in ore peccatoris non est laus, sicut legitur, pretiosa… [n: (Eccli. XV)] ([n:]-only) | Sir. 15:9 (+ Ps. 49:16–17) | ⚑ The range's most quotation-like [n:]-only weave, and it is still Philip's — see §4.1 for why the substituted word matters. Vulg. Non est speciosa laus in ore peccatoris; Migne prints pretiosa. No marker, per §8a. Siglum correct for the laus in ore peccatoris half. |
| Ostende mihi faciem tuam; sonet vox tua in auribus meis. (0327D) | Cant. 2:14 | AGREES; second printing, truncated before vox enim tua dulcis. ⚠ Migne prints a semicolon where the head lemma prints a colon. Mirrored. |
| Capite nobis, etc. | Cant. 2:15 | Lemma cue for the next chapter. |
Marginal number: 187 (0327C).
0057 (cols 0328B–0330A) — 7 spans
| Span | Verse | Verdict |
|---|---|---|
| Capite nobis vulpes parvulas quae demoliuntur vineas; nam vinea nostra floruit. | Cant. 2:15 | AGREES word for word. |
« Mittam, inquit, venatores multos et venabuntur eos [n: (Jer. XVI)]. » | Jer. 16:16 | Vulg. et post haec mittam eis multos venatores — eis dropped, and venatores multos for multos venatores. Sense untouched; truncated before de omni monte. Logged, no marker. Siglum correct. |
« Lingua canum tuorum [n: (Psal. LXVII)]. » | Ps. 67:24 | AGREES; truncated before ex inimicis ab ipso. Siglum correct. |
« canes muti [n: (Isa. LI)], » | Isa. 56:10 | ⭐ §1.3 — misnamed siglum, and the same siglum is right in 0058. The words themselves AGREE. No [var:]: the divergence is in the note, not in the quotation, and §10.2 forbids correcting it. |
et ad petram parvulos nostros, juxta Prophetam [n: (Psal. CXXXVI)], debemus allidere ([n:]-only) | Ps. 136:9 | Philip's prose. Vulg. beatus qui tenebit et adlidet parvulos tuos ad petram: second person → first plural, beatitude → obligation (debemus), and juxta Prophetam is his own frame. No marker. Siglum correct. |
« Laetantur nonnulli, ut scriptum est, cum male fecerint: et exsultant in rebus pessimis [n: (Prov. II)]. » | Prov. 2:14 | Vulg. qui laetantur cum malefecerint: the relative qui replaced by nonnulli so the clause can stand alone, and ut scriptum est is Philip's own frame inside the guillemets (Pattern 5 territory). Sense untouched. Logged, no marker. Siglum correct. |
| Capite, etc. | Cant. 2:15 | Lemma cue. |
Marginal number: 188 (0329B).
⭐ And the counter-instance of the range, at 0328D: mala morbi semina, dum nova sunt, juxta poetam, opprimere — Ovid, Rem. Am. 81 (opprime, dum nova sunt, subiti mala semina morbi), adduced explicitly as an authority and printed in neither guillemets nor italics. See §6.
0058 (cols 0330B–0333B) — 13 spans
| Span | Verse | Verdict |
|---|---|---|
| Capite nobis vulpes parvulas quae demoliuntur vineas. | Cant. 2:15 | AGREES; truncated before nam vinea nostra floruit, which becomes 0059's lemma. |
« Cum misisset, inquit, diabolus in cor ut traderet eum Judas Simonis Iscariotis [n: (Joan. XIII)]. » | John 13:2 | Vulg. cum diabolus iam misisset in cor: iam dropped in the inquit displacement; Iscariotis/Scariotis orthographic. AGREES otherwise. Siglum correct. |
« Simon, inquit, ecce Satanas expetivit vos, ut cribraret [0330D] sicut triticum: ego autem rogavi pro te, ut non deficiat fides tua [n: (Luc. XXII)]. » | Luke 22:31–32 | AGREES for every printed word; the Vulgate's doubled Simon Simon is printed once. Siglum correct. ⚠ The column anchor falls inside the guillemets, between cribraret and sicut; reproduced in place. |
« Vulpes, inquit, foveas habent [n: (Luc. IX)]. » | Luke 9:58 | AGREES. ⭐ And (Luc. IX) is CORRECT here — worth logging because cruces-0024 records a (Luc. IX) at 0240B where the words printed were Matthew 8's. Same siglum, right this time. §5. |
(sicut enim Scriptura meminit [n: (Prov. I)]… frustra rete jacitur ante oculos pennatorum) ([n:]-only) | Prov. 1:17 | ⚑ The closest thing in the range to a real [n:]-only quotation, and I judged it prose. Vulg. frustra autem iacitur rete ante oculos pinnatorum: autem dropped, rete jacitur for iacitur rete, pennatorum/pinnatorum orthographic. But Migne marks it with neither guillemets nor italics, the note is attached to Scriptura meminit rather than to the words, and Philip fuses a second authority into the same parenthesis (et affirmat veritas expertorum). §8a governs: logged in full, no [var:] — the left edge is undeterminable and the divergences are sense-neutral anyway. Siglum correct. ⭐ Pattern 3 fires here on a bare nominative singular Scriptura — see §4.2. |
tenens memoriter ne tangatur morticinum lege pristina prohiberi [n: (Levit. II)] ([n:]-only) | Lev. 11:39–40 / 22:8 | Philip's prose. ⚠ Siglum (Levit. II) is wrong: Leviticus 2 is the meal-offering; the prohibition on touching morticinum is Lev. 11 (and 22:8). Off by nine chapters. Reproduced, not corrected. §5. |
binasque simul alligans, liberis capitibus, vinctis caudis, supposito caudis igne, mysterium texuit dignum laudis [n: (Judic. XV)] ([n:]-only) | Judg. 15:4 | Philip's prose, in his own rhymed colon (caudis / laudis). Siglum correct. No marker. |
« Ignem, inquit, aeternum, qui paratus est diabolo et angelis ejus [n: (Matth. XXV)]. » | Matt. 25:41 | AGREES; Vulg.'s in ignem becomes accusative Ignem under Philip's own frame, which is grammar, not a variant. Siglum correct. |
« Cujus, ait, consummatio in combustionem [n: (Hebr. VI)]. » | Heb. 6:8 | AGREES word for word. Siglum correct. ⚠ Migne's Et Paulus attributes Hebrews to Paul — a convention of the period, not a defect (Pattern 9); rendered, not flagged in the text. |
« Si ascenderit, inquit, vulpes, transiliet murum eorum lapideum [n: (II Esdr. IV)]. » | 2 Esdr. (Neh.) 4:3 | AGREES; vulpes for Vulg. vulpis is a nominative-form variant of the same word (Pattern 9). Siglum correct. |
« Audi, Deus noster, quia facti sumus despectui, ne operias iniquitatem eorum, et peccatum eorum a facie tua non deleatur, quia irriserunt aedificantes [n: (ibid.)]. » | 2 Esdr. (Neh.) 4:4 | Vulg. …coram facie tua non deleatur, and the converte obprobrium super caput eorum clause is omitted between despectui and ne operias. Preposition swap and abridgment; nothing asserted that the Vulgate does not assert. Logged, no marker. The ibid. resolves correctly. |
« animae meae: [0333A] Incurvare, ut transeamus [n: (Isa. LI)]. » | Isa. 51:23 | ⭐ [var:] FIRED — see §3.2. Vulg. qui dixerunt animae tuae. Siglum correct here (contrast 0328C, §1.3). ⚠ The column anchor falls inside the guillemets, and Migne opens the guillemets mid-clause, after Qui dicunt ait Isaias, — reproduced 1:1, not tidied. |
« Non adjiciet, inquit, ultra, ut pertranseat in te Belial [n: (Nahum. I)]. » | Nah. 1:15 | AGREES word for word. Siglum correct. |
Marginal numbers: 189 (0331A) · 190 (0332D).
0059 (cols 0333C–0334B) — 9 spans
| Span | Verse | Verdict |
|---|---|---|
| Nam vinea nostra floruit. | Cant. 2:15 | AGREES. |
« Nos, inquiunt, populus ejus; et oves pascuae ejus [n: (Psal. XCIX)]. » | Ps. 99:3 | AGREES; Vulg.'s autem displaced by the interrupting inquiunt (Pattern 5). Siglum correct. |
in eis quos apostolos in unum Christus voluit congregari [n: (Act. IV)] ([n:]-only) | Acts 2:44 / 4:32 | Philip's prose. See §5 for the siglum. |
ut anima cunctis una, et cor esset omnibus unum [n: (Act. II)] ([n:]-only) | Acts 4:32 | Philip's prose (Vulg. erat cor unum et anima una, recast under his own ut… esset). ⭐ But see §5: the two sigla in this one sentence look TRANSPOSED, and that is checkable inside the work. |
« Vinea Domini Sabaoth domus Israel est [n: (Isa. V)]. » | Isa. 5:7 | ⭐ A lexical divergence Philip repeats — logged, NO marker; see §3.3. Vulg. vinea enim Domini exercituum domus Israhel est. Siglum correct. |
sed cum Ananiam et Saphyram [n: (Act. V)] adhuc male teneros occulta fuerint avaritia demolitae ([n:]-only) | Acts 5:1–10 | Philip's prose; the note points at the pericope. Siglum correct. No marker. |
eos nolunt nec sufferunt terrae deditos vulpium partes esse [n: (Psal. LXII)] ([n:]-only) | Ps. 62:11 | Philip's prose (Vulg. partes vulpium erunt, a future predication turned into the object of his nolunt). Siglum correct. No marker. |
quae, cum finis temporum venerit, malitiosius jam grandescent… incandescent [n: (Apoc. XX)] ([n:]-only) | Apoc. 20:7 | Philip's prose, wholly his own rhymed colon; the note points at the loosing of Satan. Siglum correct. No marker. |
| Dilectus, etc. | Cant. 2:16 | Lemma cue for the next range. |
⚑ Second-pass find in 0059, unlisted: 0333C Eph. 4:5 — unumque reddit populum unus Dominus, fides una, verbatim Vulgate (bar unum baptisma), with no note, no italics, no guillemets. Philip's prose; the words are the predicate of his own reddit. No marker.
§3 · THE FOUR [var:], IN FULL
1. Matt. 6:9 at 0319A — qui est for qui es, and Philip repeats the third person in his own gloss. Migne prints « Pater noster qui est in coelis ». The Vulgate has qui es in caelis — a vocative address, not a predication. The marker is fired for two reasons and neither is that the sense is destroyed (it is not):
- Philip carries the divergent form into his own next clause — Si Patrem, inquam, qui est in coelis non meum proprie, sed communiter nostrum dico — which is §6-shaped evidence about his copy of the text rather than a compositor's slip in one setting.
- ⛔ This is the single most conformable verse in the Latin Bible. An unmarked English "who is in heaven" reads to any reader as our slip against the Our Father, not as Migne's reading — which is precisely the situation Pattern 11 invented
[d:]for. The marker says whose the reading is.
⚠ I record this as a threshold judgment, not a certainty. cruces-0048's practice on sense-neutral divergences (Heb. 1:14 capiunt/capient) was "logged, no marker", and a merge that applies that threshold strictly should demote this one. The evidence is all above; the English ("who is in heaven") is faithful either way and does not change if the marker goes.
2. Isa. 51:23 at 0332D — animae meae for animae tuae, which moves the addressee. Migne prints « animae meae: Incurvare, ut transeamus ». Isaiah reads qui dixerunt animae tuae: incurvare ut transeamus — the tormentors speak to Jerusalem's soul, in the prophet's second person. Migne's first person makes the prophet himself the one bowed over. The marker is fired because this is Pattern 7a's fifth mechanism exactly — reference or agency mis-bound — the class no negation-aware check can ever see, and the class where an English reader has no way to recover the printed Latin's referent from a smooth sentence. Nothing in Philip's application turns on it (he generalizes at once: Quis dabit ut in nobis ultra Belial non adjiciat pertransire), so the marker records rather than argues. Also dicunt for dixerunt — present for perfect, unmarked.
3. Cant. 2:13 Sponsa mea at 0323C — §1.1.
4. Cant. 2:14 cavernis at 0323C — §1.2.
3.3 · ⭐ Isa. 5:7 at 0333C — Domini Sabaoth for Domini exercituum: logged, and deliberately NOT marked
Migne prints « Vinea Domini Sabaoth domus Israel est » where the Vulgate translates the divine title: vinea enim Domini exercituum domus Israhel est. Sabaoth is the untranslated Hebrew form — an Old Latin / liturgical reading, and the same class of witness as brief §6's olei splendoris.
Philip repeats it in his own next sentence — Recte vinea Domini Sabaoth miros flores proferens… domus Israel appellatur — so it is his copy-text, not a setting error.
No [var:], and the reason is brief §8c's own ruling: Sabaoth and exercituum name the same title and the sense is untouched, which is Pattern 14's threshold; the Cum/Dum precedent decided exactly this shape the same way. But like Cum/Dum it is copy-text evidence, so it is recorded here for the merge's count. If Isa. 5:7 recurs in a later range, record which form Migne prints.
§4 · CONVENTIONS SET OR HELD IN THIS RANGE
- ⭐
grossus— the fig word and the adjective are ONE word in Latin and the chapter is a pun on it; English keeps the pun with "gross". Caput X runs grossos suos (the fig, "green figs", fixed by chunk 0053 and the Cant. 2:13 lemma) straight into grossi hujusmodi homines appellantur, qui grosso magis sensu quam corpore… aspernantur, then obscuratum grossitudine habentes intellectum, then de quorum lateribus videbatur grossa nimis arvina dependere, and finally meritorum copia grossiores. The fruit stays "green figs" (0053's word, and the lemma's); every adjectival use is rendered "gross / grossness / grosser", which is the one English word that carries thick-witted, fat-bodied and coarse at once. The pun survives at the join ("such men are called green figs, who by a sense grosser than their body…") only because the two Englishes are adjacent; a reader who wants the identity has this note. ⚑ The lemma recurs; later ranges should keep "green figs" for the fruit. - ⭐
maceria= "dry-stone wall", distinct from murus = "wall" (0058) and paries = "wall" (0050's lemma). Philip defines the word himself, and the definition is the argument: Maceria vero simplex lapidum congeries appellatur, quae instar sepis extensa caemento medio non ligatur — a wall with no mortar, which is why the angels who compose it ad persistendum firmius non indiget legis, non Evangelii ligatura (0324D). The mortarless binding is the whole point: plain "wall" would leave the sentence about binding-agents with nothing to bind. ⚑ The lemma recurs whenever Cant. 2:14 returns; later ranges must match. vulpes parvulae= "little foxes" andvulpecula= "little fox" — deliberately COLLAPSED, and logged as a collapse. Both run through 0057–0059 and Philip uses them interchangeably (Hujusmodi ergo vulpeculas at 0329A picks up vulpes parvulas of the lemma without a change of referent). No argument in the range turns on the diminutive, unlike lectulus/lectus at 0279B, so the lectulus rule is not engaged. Recorded so a later range that DOES find an argument on it can reverse this on the evidence.sodales Sponsi= "the Bridegroom's companions", fixed through 0057–0059 (Philip's fourth dramatic persona, identified with the angels at 0329C).adolescentulae= "maidens" per brief §5, held throughout — and note that 0057 identifies the maidens with the apostles, so "maidens" is applied to men in Philip's own voice. Not tidied.odor= "scent" throughout Caput X, one English word for the whole chain (odorem suum daret → fugit culpa → odor et fetor → odorem suum dare / venundare), against fetor = "stench". The chapter's last movement turns on the three ways of giving a scent, so elegant variation would break it.- ⭐ Pattern 3 fires on a bare nominative singular Scriptura at 0331B — sicut enim Scriptura meminit — rendered "as Holy Scripture recalls". No divina, no sacra, and a nominative singular, which is a third form after cruces-0030's bare ablative plural in Scripturis (0260A) and cruces-0048's bare genitive singular Scripturae (0307D). ⚑ The sweep pattern for 11632 must match bare Scriptura in every case; three forms have now been attested in three ranges and the sweep that misses one will miss the others. No other occurrence in this range.
- Brief §5 vocabulary held: misericordia = mercy (0323B, ampliorem dignabitur misericordiam impertire; 0330C, Magistri miserentis); adolescentulae = maidens; Sponsus = Bridegroom, Sponsa = Bride, Virgo = Virgin, case mirrored (§6). charitas, clementia, muraenula, lectulus, cancelli, cellaria, torcular, recti, moralitas, and the nigra / fusca / formosa triple do not occur in this range — but formosam at 0323D (Philip's retrospect on the Cant. 2:10 epithets) is rendered "comely one", holding the formosa = comely rule.
- Pattern 17. The second person in this range is entirely determined by the Latin and there is no drift. Plural → "you": Philip's own address to his hearers (ut legistis 0320C, ne putetis 0320C, si diligens lector putat 0320D, si tamen auditum memoriae vestra diligentia commendavit 0329B, sicut nostis 0329C and 0331D, Videtis 0332D) and the Bridegroom's address to the angels in Caput XIV (Vos, inquit, angeli… volo sedulos vos adesse, Vos, ait, qui potestis… capite nobis vulpes). *Singular → "thou": the Bridegroom's address to the Virgin at 0325A (Tu, ait, cujus… surge et propera, nec timor aliquis te retardet… non est tamen cur timeas) and throughout Caput XII (tibi datum est… volo… te habere… ut mihi non formides… tuam conscientiam exhibere… tuum merito jam non claudis… Etsi, ait, faciem videre volentibus non ostendis). Inside quotations: Matt. 25:25 talentum tuum and Luke 22:32 fides tua are singular → thou; Luke 22:31 expetivit vos is plural → "you", in the same sentence as the singular pro te* — reproduced, and it is the Dorotheus/Phil. 4:7 case exactly: the reader can see Satan ask for all the apostles and Christ pray for one man, with no apparatus.
Hierusalem(0332B) kept as printed, not normalized to Jerusalem — but rendered "Jerusalem" in English, as at 0299D. Pattern 9; the Latin column carries the spelling.
4.1 · The Sir. 15:9 weave at 0327C, and why the substituted word is worth the merge's minute
quia et in ore peccatoris non est laus, sicut legitur, pretiosa. The Vulgate reads Non est speciosa laus in ore peccatoris.
⚑ The substituted word is the one the chapter cannot spare. The clause immediately before it is si non antecesserit vocem facies speciosa — and speciosa is the chapter's own predicate of the Virgin's face (decoris sui merito concupitam, amator legitur speciei, tantae placet merito speciei). Had speciosa stayed in the quotation, Philip would have used one word for the sinner's praise and the Virgin's face in adjacent clauses; pretiosa keeps them apart.
Whether that is Philip's deliberate choice, his copy-text, or a compositor is exactly the research question Pattern 14 forbids a marker to answer. Logged, no marker — and the frame sicut legitur is his own, so §8a's left-edge argument applies as well.
§5 · MIGNE'S SIGLA — two wrong, one apparently transposed pair, and three notable RIGHT ones
Reproduced verbatim, none corrected (§10.2).
| Col | Printed | Actual |
|---|---|---|
| 0328C | [n: (Isa. LI)] | Isa. 56:10 (canes muti) — §1.3 |
| 0331B | [n: (Levit. II)] | Lev. 11:39–40 / 22:8 (the morticinum prohibition) |
Two wrong in six chunks, which is the lowest rate any range has reported so far (cruces-0012: five in six; cruces-0048: six in six; cruces-0030: two in six). ⚑ Neither belongs to the "off by exactly one chapter" profile — Isa. 51 for 56 is off by five, Lev. 2 for 11 by nine. That is worth the merge's count, because cruces-0048's five-of-seven off-by-one looked mechanical and this range does not reproduce it.
⭐ The transposition candidate at 0333C, and it is an INTERNAL control. One sentence carries two notes:
in eis quos apostolos in unum Christus voluit congregari
[n: (Act. IV)], sic amor simul omnia possidendi longe fecit quidquid obstitit importunum, ut anima cunctis una, et cor esset omnibus unum[n: (Act. II)].
Cor unum et anima una is Acts 4:32, verbatim and unmistakably; and the gathering of the apostles with all things common is Acts 2:44 (omnes etiam qui credebant erant pariter et habebant omnia communia). The two sigla are each correct for the OTHER clause. Like the Matt./Marc. control at 0283B, this needs no appeal to anything outside the work: both notes are in one sentence, eleven words apart. Corrected nowhere.
⭐ And three sigla that are RIGHT, logged because other ranges have seen their neighbours go wrong (brief §8b):
[n: (Luc. IX)]at 0331A is correct for Luke 9:58 (Vulpes foveas habent) — where cruces-0024 records a (Luc. IX) at 0240B whose words were Matthew 8's.[n: (Isa. LI)]at 0332D is correct for Isa. 51:23 — eleven columns after the same siglum is wrong at 0328C. This is the (Psal. XCII) shape.[n: (Psal. LXII)]at 0334A is correct for Ps. 62:11 (partes vulpium), and[n: (Judic. XV)],[n: (Prov. I)],[n: (Apoc. XX)],[n: (Act. V)](twice),[n: (Eccli. XV)],[n: (Psal. CXXXVI)]are all correct.
The two [n: (ibid.)] chains (0325B on Matt. XXV, 0332C on II Esdr. IV) resolve correctly against their printed antecedents; neither was touched.
⚠ [n:] POSITION varies and is reproduced, not normalized. It falls inside the closing guillemet everywhere in this range except twice in chunk 0054, where Migne prints it outside: audire? » [n: (Joan. VI.)] at 0320B and obdormis? » [n: (Psal. XLIII.)] at 0323A. Both are questions, and in both the note follows the ». Third and fourth instances of the class cruces-0030 recorded at 0235B and 0239B. Mirrored.
§6 · TYPOGRAPHY — brief §7 holds, and the range adds a THIRD unmarked pagan authority
Guillemets carry the quotation adduced as an authority; italics carry the lemma, its re-quotations, words discussed as words, and the marginal numbers. 28 guilleted runs across the six chunks, and every one is scripture adduced as proof. Italics carry: the running Cant. 2:12–15 lemma and its piecemeal re-quotations; Philip's two collated invitations Surge / surge at 0323D (words discussed as words, the brief §7 category, and the case is clean — they are cited to be compared with each other); Migne's variant keyword alias at 0321B; and the marginal source-edition numbers 183–190, continuous with cruces-0048's 174–182.
⭐ The counter-instance, and it is the third of its kind in three ranges. At 0328D Philip adduces Ovid (Rem. Am. 81) explicitly as an authority — mala morbi semina, dum nova sunt, juxta poetam, opprimere — and Migne prints it in neither guillemets nor italics. At 0330C he adduces Virgil (Aen. VII.338, mille nocendi artes) explicitly — et juxta quemdam ethnicum, mille artes et eo amplius sunt nocendi — and again prints nothing.
⛔ The Virgil case is the sharpest evidence yet that the widened rule is permissive and not predictive, because it is the SAME AUTHOR Migne guillemets at 0251D. « Dii, si qua est pietas coelo » is guilleted there; mille artes… nocendi is bare here. Nothing was supplied in either place. Together with cruces-0048's Sallust at 0314A and cruces-0030's Ovid at 0259, that is four unmarked classical authorities against two marked ones, and the merge should weigh the ratio: for non-scriptural authorities in this work, bare looks like the norm and the 0251D–0253A cluster like the exception.
⚑ §7a mirroring — the drift point — held word by word, and this range is one of the richer ones for it. Migne's mixed case runs through 0054 in particular and none of it was regularized: sed quod sponsae est, sponsus sibi satis vindicat opportune and recte sponsa terram quoque non tuam (0319A, both lower case) stand thirty words from recte Sponsa invitatur (0321D) and Vult Sponsus (0321D), capitalized. Likewise praebeat aurem sponsa, dictis oltemperet (0324A) and audit Virgo sponsam diligentius se vocari (0324A), lower case, inside a chunk that capitalizes Sponsa and Sponsus elsewhere throughout; and ut libere virgo introeat (0325D) in a chunk with capital Virgo nine times. All mirrored. Mechanically checkable against the Latin twin; do not regularize.
Migne's parentheses at 0333C are content, not apparatus, and are reproduced: Qui paulo ante (vineas) consequenter (vineam) nominat singularem… Et dicunt se (populum)… et (oves) se appellant. Philip is discussing the two nouns as words, and Migne marks them with round brackets rather than italics — a fifth marking device in this work, used once. Kept exactly.
§7 · PATTERN 7, 8 AND 10 — three [sic:], and what was NOT marked
None of the three carried runs is ALSO translated in the running text (brief §8's named failure — checked word by word on a separate pass).
- 0322B
[sic: hila rescat]— Pattern 10, split type. ut ad ejus primitias intuentis digne oculus hila rescat. Read hilarescat, certain: the verb is Philip's own and he prints it correctly at 0326A (velut jugi convivio facies hilarescat) four columns later, in the same construction. Carried whole per Pattern 10 — including the space — and the English does not also say "grow cheerful" in that slot; it reads "the beholder's eye worthily [sic: hila rescat]". - 0324A
[sic: oltemperet]— a non-word. praebeat aurem sponsa, dictis oltemperet, amet imperium et subscribat. Read obtemperet, near-certain: dictis obtemperare is the standard idiom and the clause sits in a list of three obedience-verbs.lforbis a plausible plate defect. Carried untranslated in italics; the English does not also supply "obey". ⚑ Note the cost is visible: the English clause has no verb, which is exactly what the plate leaves. - 0334A
[sic: tempere]— a non-word in this slot. In hoc ergo tempere vulpes non immerito parvulae perhibentur. Read tempore, certain: hoc is masculine/neuter ablative singular and demands it, and Philip prints cum finis temporum venerit eight words later. ⚠ I record the one argument against the marker: temperi (also tempori) is an attested adverb meaning "in season", so a reader might take tempere for a variant of it and invoke Pattern 9. It cannot be: an adverb cannot take in hoc. Marked.
Rendered as printed, no marker (real words, merely odd) — conjectures live here and NOT in the text:
- ⛔ 0324D, ipse qui invitat vitae foramina et cavernas maceriae pollicetur. The clefts are the rock's everywhere else in the chapter (petrae foraminibus five times in two columns, twice in the lemma itself), and the conjecture petrae is near-certain. But vitae is a real word and construes ("the clefts of life"), so Pattern 12 keeps it on the English side: rendered "the clefts of life". ⚠ This is the sentence in my range most likely to be silently repaired, and the repair would be invisible — one word restores a chapter that is otherwise perfectly consistent.
- 0325A, ut columba tali freta praesidio, fiducialibus expleat quod jubetur. A bare ablative/dative plural adjective with no noun anywhere in the sentence to govern it; fiducialiter would be the expected adverb. Rendered "may with confidence fulfil what is commanded", which is as close as the printed words allow — but the reader should know that the printed form is a plural adjective and that English cannot express a plural adjective standing alone. Logged, not adjudicated in the text.
- 0330C, seducunt Judam Iscariot avarum pecuniae magis quam salutis; et ne magistrum diligat; dolo multiplici dissuadent. Migne's semicolon falls inside the ne-clause, cutting it from the verb that governs it. Preserved** (Pattern 8): the English reads "and lest he love his master; they dissuade him with manifold guile". Not repunctuated.
- 0332D–0333A, Qui dicunt ait Isaias, « animae meae… — Migne prints no comma after dicunt, so the parenthetical ait Isaias is unclosed on its left. Nothing supplied (Pattern 8): the English reads "Who say says Isaias, « to my soul: … »". It reads wrong because it is printed wrong.
- 0328D, qui venari pigritantes somno suam negligentiam configurant. configurant + accusative + dative ("shape their negligence to sleep") is an unusual government but attested medieval usage; Pattern 9, unmarked.
- 0327B, nullius facies tanta conspicuat gratia vel decore. conspicuo as an active intransitive is not classical; a medieval formation on conspicuus. Rendered "shines with", Pattern 9, unmarked.
- 0333D, cum Ananiam et Saphyram… adhuc male teneros occulta fuerint avaritia demolitae.* male teneros* is odd (the pair are the foxes' victims, not the tender vines), but both words are real and construe. Rendered "as yet ill and tender". Logged.
Punctuation — Pattern 8, the live case, PRESERVED
⭐ 0320C, Migne's misplaced full stop with its lower case. ne putetis de eodem populo deinceps nullos esse, qui audire velint Christum. et eum audientibus interesse. The stop breaks a qui-clause in half and the next word is lower-case. Preserved exactly: the English reads "…who would hear Christ. and be present among his hearers". Brief §5 is explicit that Migne's lower case after a misplaced stop stands, and cruces-0030 §4 and cruces-0048 §3 both settled it. ⚠ Do not churn this.
Negation audit (brief §9)
Every printed non / nec / neque / nisi / haud / nunquam / nullus / nihil / nil / nemo / ne in the six Latin chunks (161 tokens: 66/24/25/11/27/9 non plus 34 others) was matched against the English on a separate second pass, after the prose was drafted. The dense clusters are 0319A (nil deinceps habere dicendi sunt non commune, a nil + non pair carried as "nothing… that is not common"), 0319B (si terra tua tantum, et non nostra… non vox turturis audiretur… non proferret, eisque non prolatis, non fructus alios… subinferret — four, carried as four), 0319D (et non cedunt loco… non solum non defluit… pares in gratia non habentur… aequari non merentur… dignus mensae nisi regiae non inferri — the nisi/non pair rendered "worthy to be set on no table unless a king's", both particles present), 0321A (non prece, non pretio, non minarum impetu repelluntur, a triple carried as neither/nor/nor), 0321B (veterem, non obscurat; non praejudicat… non adversatur), 0321C (nullus ordo, non apostolo… non prior, non posterior), 0325B (nonnisi terrae dediti ad petram solidam non venerunt — carried as "given over to nothing but the earth, came not to the solid rock"), 0326D (nihil nisi Sponso fiducialiter se ostendit — "shows itself in nothing save to the Bridegroom"), 0330B (non caro hominibus, non culpa malis spiritibus pares fecit… superbia vel inobedientia non projecit), 0331B (adversus justos penitus nil valere — "of no strength at all against the just"), 0332B (nequando inimici exsultent), 0334A (eos nolunt nec sufferunt… praemonent et adjuvant illarum fraudibus non subesse — the double negative of "help them not to lie under" carried whole).
No negation was dropped and none was supplied. There is no place in this range where carrying the printed reading makes the English contradict itself — unlike cruces-0048's auferre at 0306B.
§8 · THE [n:]-ONLY CLASS — hit rate in this range
12 spans listed by the extractor, plus five further weaves found on the second pass that it never listed (Ps. 21:17 and 2 Cor. 5:16 at 0325B–C; Eph. 4:5 at 0333C; and at 0321D–0322A the fused Mic. 4:4 / Matt. 8:20 weave sub vite sua, sub ficu sua caput valeant reclinare, which carries no note and which is striking because chunk 0058 later guillemets the other half of Matt. 8:20, Vulpes foveas habent, as a proof-text). All 17 are Philip's own prose. Hit rate: zero.
Running total across the ranges that have reported: 0018–0023 19/19 prose · 0048–0053 38/38 prose · this range 17/17 prose, against wave 1's single Rom. 8:10 and cruces-0030's Ps. 11:7. The mechanism cruces-0048 identified holds here without exception — Philip absorbs the scriptural words into his own rhymed colon-endings, which forces a change of person, number, tense or voice: parvulos tuos → parvulos nostros, animam aggravat → cauterium hoc impressit, cor unum erat → ut cor esset, partes vulpium erunt → vulpium partes esse.
⛔ But two of this range's four most quotation-like weaves carried NO note at all — Ps. 21:17 (foderunt manus et pedes) at 0325B and Eph. 4:5 (unus Dominus, fides una) at 0333C — and were therefore invisible to the extractor in both directions, exactly as cruces-0048's two 0314C tails were. A [n:]-only sweep that trusts the note list will miss them. They are also the two least altered spans in the range, which is the uncomfortable part: the more verbatim the weave, the less likely it is to carry a note.
⚑ The closest call, recorded so a later reader can reverse it on the evidence: Prov. 1:17 at 0331B (§2, chunk 0058). It has a note, a frame naming Scripture, and near-verbatim Vulgate wording; it lacks guillemets, italics, and any attachment of the note to the words rather than to the frame. I judged it prose. If the merge judges otherwise, the divergences are autem dropped and rete jacitur for iacitur rete — both sense-neutral — so the ruling changes the class, not the English.
§9 · THINGS DELIBERATELY NOT REPORTED (brief §10, checked once each)
- Column-band arithmetic: checked, and no anchor in this range is followed by text broken mid-word or mid-construction. 0054 runs A–D across five full columns without a gap; 0055 opens at 0323D mid-sentence, which is our chunk boundary, not a plate defect. Two anchors fall inside guillemet runs (0330D in Luke 22:31, 0333A in Isa. 51:23) and one inside an italic lemma run — all reproduced in place. No
[ed:], no patch, no plate check. §10.1. noteCountmatches the body[n:]count in all six chunks (11/3/2/5/12/7), verified by script.- Attested medieval spellings left alone, unmarked (Pattern 9): tanquam, coelis/coelestia, unquam, nunquam, nonnunquam, quemdam, eumdem, Hierusalem, lacrym- class, charitas-class, spiritalis/spiritali, ethnicum, fenore, Saphyra, Mathias, allophylorum, aquilonis, caemento, Iscariot/Iscariotis, Ammanites, Sabaoth, pennatorum.
- No
[f:]. 11632 is lemma-and-gloss, not a florilegium (§10.4). - No
[d:], no[nt:]: no dittography anywhere in the range, and all 40 notes are bare citations, none editorial prose. - Cant. 1:12's Cum/Dum (brief §8c) does not occur in this range — the lemma is at Cant. 2:12–15 throughout. Recorded as a null so the merge's count is complete.
- Migne's own
( sic )does not occur in this range. The[ alias caliginoso]at 0321B is a variant bracket, not a sic; see §1.4.
§10 · WHAT A LATER BLIND READ SHOULD LOOK AT FIRST
- 0323C, the two lemma
[var:](§1.1, §1.2). If either is wrong it is wrong on the most consequential span in the range. The checks are: does any edition of Cant. 2:13 read Sponsa mea, and does Philip's Sponsae nomen interserens sentence bear the weight I put on it? I think both hold, but they are the claims to test. - 0319A, the Matt. 6:9
[var:](§3.1). The one marker in this range whose THRESHOLD is arguable, and I have stated the case for demoting it as fully as the case for keeping it. The English does not change either way. - 0324D, vitae foramina (§7). Deliberately left standing where petrae is near-certain, and the repair is one word. The likeliest silent repair in the range.
- 0334A,
[sic: tempere](§7.3). The only marker here whose class is arguable, because temperi is an attested adverb; I have given the argument that closes it (in hoc). - §4.2, maceria = "dry-stone wall". The one term choice that would be expensive to reverse late, because the lemma recurs and Philip's mortar argument depends on it. Flagged rather than assumed.
- §6, the four unmarked classical authorities. Not a defect and nothing was supplied — but the Virgil-marked-at-0251D / Virgil-bare-at-0330C pair is the cleanest evidence the merge will get for restating brief §7 as permissive.
Philip of Harvengt, Commentaria in Cantica canticorum, PL 203. Range covering Caput XVI–XXIII — the end of the exposition of Cant. 2:16–17 (Dilectus meus mihi et ego illi qui pascitur inter lilia → donec aspiret dies, et inclinentur umbrae → Revertere, dilecte mi… super montes Bethel), then the opening of the Song's third chapter, Cant. 3:1–3 (In lectulo meo per noctes quaesivi → Surgam, et circuibo civitatem → Quaesivi illum, et non inveni → Invenerunt me vigiles qui custodiunt civitatem → Num quem diligit anima mea vidistis?). Six chunks, 5,653 Latin words.
⚑ No book head falls in this range. The chunks carry only CAPUT heads, and the numeration runs XVI → XXIII continuously across the six. ⚠ But the Song's own chapter division does fall here, printed as a bracketed locator inside the lemma at 0341D — [CAP. III.] — and reproduced verbatim after the [CANT. I.] precedent in chunk 0003 (§6).
Marker totals for this range: 3 [var:] · 2 [sic:] · 0 [ed:] · 0 [d:] · 0 [nt:] · 0 [f:]. verify-english.mjs reports no errors on any of the six; four ratio warnings (0061 1.65, 0062 1.64, 0064 1.66, 0065 1.65), all inside the 1.35–1.68 band this work has already shipped (0004 1.64, 0005 1.68, 0035 1.65, 0046 1.68). Ratios: 1.55 / 1.65 / 1.64 / 1.57 / 1.66 / 1.65.
Column anchors (13/4/12/6/10/9), [n:] strings (5/2/6/3/9/2 — each matching its frontmatter noteCount) and guillemet counts (7/2/4/3/9/1 pairs) were diffed 1:1 against the Latin twins by script, not by eye: anchors byte-identical in order and place, [n:] contents byte-identical in order, «/» counts equal in every chunk. No guillemet asymmetry anywhere in this range — every « has its », none stray, none unopened.
§1 · ⭐⭐ THE THREE FINDINGS THE MERGE SHOULD CARRY
1.1 · ⭐⭐⭐ Cant. 2:17 at 0338D — Migne prints Bethel where the Vulgate has Bether, and the whole back half of the chapter is an etymology of the divergent word
The head lemma of Caput XVIII is printed:
Revertere, dilecte mi: similis esto capreae hinnuloque cervorum, super montes Bethel.
The Vulgate reads revertere; similis esto, dilecte mi, capreae hinnuloque cervorum super montes Bether. Two divergences, and they are of completely different weight:
- The vocative is transposed — Revertere, dilecte mi: similis esto for Vulg. revertere: similis esto, dilecte mi. Sense-neutral, and the re-quotation at 0340A (« Similis, inquit, esto capreae, hinnuloque cervorum ») drops dilecte mi altogether while Philip's own re-quotations at 0339A and 0339C print Revertere, dilecte mi as a unit. Migne's own text is internally consistent; the Vulgate's is not being followed.
- ⭐⭐ Bethel for Bether — and this is the range's principal find, because Philip does not merely quote the word, he construes it, at length, as the name of the Virgin's conscience:
Ut aiunt qui notitiam Hebraeorum nominum aestimant se habere… Beth, domus; el vero Deus interpretatur; et Bethel domus Dei Latino eloquio nominatur. Domus autem Dei non incongrue interna Virginis conscientia judicatur, thalamus scilicet spiritalis, qui Deo Dei Filio praeparatur… (0341A–B)
and the identification then governs the remaining twenty lines of the chapter: Quae nimirum domus vel inhabitatio, jure dicitur montuosa · qui super montes Virginis. Conform the lemma to Bether and the entire etymology, and with it the chapter's conclusion, ceases to have anything to stand on. Hebrew Bether ("division", "cleft") yields nothing remotely like domus Dei.
[var:] fired at the head lemma, stating both readings and naming the witness; it does not speculate about whether this is Philip's copy-text, an Old Latin reading, or a compositor's letter (Pattern 14). ⚠ The re-quotation at 0341A also prints Bethel (Super montes, inquit, Bethel), so the reading is attested twice in the chunk, which puts it in the evidential shape of brief §6's Zech. 4:14 and Gen. 3:19 — a copy-text reading, not a slip. This is the strongest §6-class candidate the work has produced since those two, and the merge should treat it as one.
1.2 · ⭐⭐ Matt. 7:8 at 0345B — Migne prints « Incipit et invenit » where the argument requires accipit, and the correct form stands twice within twenty words
Caput XX's whole close is an argument about the tenses and the verbs Matthew prints. Philip has just quoted Matt. 7:7 (future throughout) and Matt. 7:8 (present, then future), and he says so explicitly:
Hoc de praesenti tempore. Non enim dicit, accipiet et inveniet, sed « Incipit et invenit. » … Non enim ait, « pulsanti » aperitur, sed « aperietur, »
Incipit means "he begins". The antithesis Philip is drawing is accipiet (future, which the text does not say) against accipit (present, which it does), and the whole point collapses on the word printed.
⚑ The decisive detail is internal. Migne prints the correct accipit twice inside the same paragraph — « Omnis qui petit accipit, et qui quaerit invenit » at 0345A and « Omnis enim qui petit accipit, et qui quaerit invenit » at 0345B, the latter five words before the defective printing — and accipiet three words before it. So within one column the plate has accipit, accipiet and Incipit, and only the third is impossible.
Rendered as printed ("He beginneth and findeth"), which is meant to read wrong, with a [var:] naming the received reading. Not a [sic:]: incipit is a real word and Pattern 12's "real word merely wrong" clause keeps it on the English side — the same call cruces-0042 made for Adjuvo/Adjuro at 0299D, and this is the same shape one column later in the work. ⚠ This is the sentence in the range most likely to be silently repaired, and the repair would be invisible: one letter restores a perfectly cogent argument.
1.3 · ⭐ Matt. 7:7 at 0345B — et accipietis for the Vulgate's et dabitur vobis, in the one place where the verb is the argument
« Petite, ait, et accipietis, quaerite et invenietis; pulsate et aperietur vobis
[n: (ibid.)]. »
Vulg. Matt. 7:7 (and Luke 11:9) read Petite, et dabitur vobis. Et accipietis is the wording of John 16:24 (petite et accipietis).
Ordinarily this would be logged and left unmarked — both readings are future, and nothing is asserted that the Vulgate does not assert. It is marked because of what Philip does with it four lines later: Non enim dicit, accipiet et inveniet, sed « Incipit [i.e. accipit] et invenit ». His antithesis is between the future accipietis of v. 7 and the present accipit of v. 8 — one verb in two tenses. With the Vulgate's dabitur vobis the pairing is between two different verbs and the argument is materially weaker. This is 7a″'s test exactly: the exposition rests on a word, so the word is marked where it diverges.
⚠ I record this as a judgment rather than defend it. If the merge reads accipietis/dabitur as below Pattern 14's threshold, the fix is to delete one [var:]; §1.2's marker is independent of it and stands either way.
§2 · THE COLLATION — all 65 listed spans, every one accounted for
Every span in data/quotations/11632/0060-0065.md was collated word by word against the Vulgate. Spans recorded as AGREES were collated and found to agree; the absence of a marker on them is a finding, not a silence.
2a · Divergent — [var:] fired (3)
| Col | Ref | Migne prints | Vulgate | Note |
|---|---|---|---|---|
| 0338D | Cant. 2:17 | Revertere, dilecte mi: similis esto capreae hinnuloque cervorum, super montes Bethel | revertere: similis esto, dilecte mi, capreae hinnuloque cervorum super montes Bether | ⭐⭐⭐ see §1.1. Attested twice (0338D, 0341A). |
| 0345B | Matt. 7:7 | « Petite, ait, et accipietis » | Petite, et dabitur vobis | ⭐ see §1.3. et accipietis is John 16:24's wording. |
| 0345B | Matt. 7:8 | « Incipit et invenit » | Omnis enim qui petit accipit, et qui quaerit invenit | ⭐⭐ see §1.2. Internal control: accipit printed twice in the same paragraph. |
2b · Collated and AGREEING, or abridged/transposed only — no marker (recorded so the absence is evidence)
0060 (cols 0334C–0337C) — Cant. 2:16–17 head lemma Dilectus meus mihi et ego illi qui pascitur inter lilia, donec aspiret dies, et inclinentur umbrae — agrees word for word, and so do all four re-quotations (Dilectus meus mihi, 0334D ×2, 0335B, and Dilectus meus mihi at 0336A–B in Philip's own gloss) · Cant. 2:10 « loquitur, » and « Dilectus, inquit, meus loquitur mihi; » — agrees (Pattern 5 inquit inside the marks) · John 20:15 « Domine, ait si tu sustulisti eum, dicito mihi; et ego eum tollam [n: (Joan. XX)]. » — every printed word the Vulgate's; ubi posuisti eum is dropped between mihi and et ego. Abridgment, not a variant. No marker. ⚠ Migne prints no comma after the interrupting ait (Domine, ait si tu sustulisti); reproduced (Pattern 8), and the English is deliberately as unpunctuated as the plate · Cant. 2:15 « vinea nostra floruit. » — agrees word for word · the same verse re-quoted at 0335D as « nostra vinea », word order reversed for emphasis inside Philip's own non sua, non mea, sed magis — his rhetoric, not a second witness. No marker · Gen. 37:27 « Frater enim et caro nostra est [n: (Gen. XXXVII)]. » — agrees word for word; truncated before et. Siglum correct · « nostra? » — Philip's one-word echo, guilleted as a word discussed as a word (the class of « Meos » / « tuos » at 0254B). No marker.
0061 (cols 0337D–0338C) — Cant. 2:16–17 lemma Qui pascitur inter lilia, donec aspiret dies, et inclinentur umbrae — agrees · John 14:10 « Ego, inquit, in Patre, et Pater in me [n: (Joan. XIV)]; » — agrees on every printed word (Vulg. quia ego in Patre, et Pater in me est; the leading quia and the copula fall away where Philip's own frame takes over). Siglum correct · John 14:17 « Apud vos, inquit, manebit, et in vobis erit [n: (ibid.)]. » — agrees word for word. ⚑ The ibid. resolves correctly against (Joan. XIV); untouched (§10.2).
0062 (cols 0338D–0341C) — Cant. 2:17 re-quoted at 0340A « Similis, inquit, esto capreae, hinnuloque cervorum (supra IV). » — agrees with the head lemma for every printed word, dropping dilecte mi; see §3b for the printed locator inside the run · Ps. 42:1 « Judica ergo et discerne causam meam » non solum « de gente non sancta [n: (Psal. XLII)], » — Vulg. Iudica me Deus, et discerne causam meam de gente non sancta. The object and the vocative are displaced by Philip's own connective ergo, which is exactly the mechanism cruces-0048 recorded for the dropped Quoniam / Domine at Ps. 70:5, and the verse asserts nothing it does not assert in the Vulgate. Logged, no marker. ⚠ Migne carves the one verse into two guillemet runs with his own non solum between them; reproduced 1:1 (the class of the four John 5:3 fragments at 0298A) · Joel 2:14 « Quis scit, ait, si convertatur et ignoscat; et relinquat post se benedictionem? » [n: (Joel. II.)] — agrees word for word. Siglum correct. ⚠ The [n:] sits OUTSIDE the closing guillemet here — the class brief §7 records at 0235B and 0239B, and the only instance in this range; everywhere else in the six chunks the note falls inside. Reproduced as printed.
0063 (cols 0341D–0343A) — Cant. 3:1 head lemma [CAP. III.] In lectulo meo per noctes quaesivi quem diligit anima mea. Quaesivi illum, et non inveni — agrees word for word, and so does the re-quotation at 0342C (Per noctes, ait, quaesivi quem diligit anima mea: quaesivi illum, et non inveni) and the third printing at 0345D · Isa. 57:8 « Suscepisti, ait, adulterum, dilatasti cubile tuum [n: (Isa. LVII)]. » — every printed word the Vulgate's (Vulg. quia iuxta me discooperuisti, et suscepisti adulterum; dilatasti cubile tuum); the opening clause and the connective drop where Philip's own frame takes over. No marker. Siglum correct · Ps. 144:18 « Prope est Dominus omnibus invocantibus eum [n: (Psal. CXLIV)], » — agrees word for word; truncated before omnibus invocantibus eum in veritate. Siglum correct · John 7:34 « Quaeretis me, ait, et non invenietis; et, ubi sum ego, vos non potestis venire [n: (Joan. VII)]. » — agrees word for word, punctuation included. Siglum correct. Checked specifically for negation loss under brief §9: both non are carried, and the vos is plural against the singular addressee of Isa. 57:8 nine lines earlier — see §3e.
0064 (cols 0343B–0345C) — Cant. 3:2 head lemma Surgam, et circuibo civitatem: per vicos et plateas quaeram quem diligit anima mea — agrees word for word; truncated before quaesivi illum, et non inveni · Cant. 2:10 « surge, inquiens, propera, amica mea, » — agrees; note lower-case surge here against the capital at 0313C, mirrored, not regularized (§3d) · Isa. 55:6 « Quaerite Dominum dum inveniri potest [n: (Isa. LV)], » — agrees word for word; truncated before invocate eum dum prope est. Siglum correct · Matt. 7:8 « Omnis qui petit accipit, et qui quaerit invenit [n: (Matth. VII)], » (0345A) — agrees, enim dropped. ⚑ And the same verse is printed again at 0345B WITH the enim (« Omnis enim qui petit accipit… »), fifteen lines apart. Two printings, one connective apart, inside one chunk — the same evidential shape cruces-0048 recorded for Heu / Heu mihi at Ps. 119:5, and it argues that these small connective differences are the inquit-displacement / frame mechanism, not copy-text · Matt. 7:8 « Et pulsanti, ait, aperietur [n: (ibid.)]. » — agrees · Matt. 7:7 « Petite… » — see §1.3 · Matt. 7:8 « Incipit et invenit… » — see §1.2 · « pulsanti » and « aperietur, » (0345B) — single words guilleted as words discussed as words, with the contrasting aperitur left outside the marks. Reproduced 1:1; the English keeps the same two pairs at the same two points. No marker.
0065 (cols 0345D–0347D) — Cant. 3:1/3:2 Quaesivi illum, et non inveni — agrees · Cant. 3:3 Invenerunt me vigiles qui custodiunt civitatem — agrees word for word · Cant. 3:3 Num quem diligit anima mea vidistis? — agrees word for word · Ps. 70:16 « Domine, inquit, memorabor justitiae tuae solius [n: (Psal. LXX)]. » — agrees word for word. ⭐ Siglum (Psal. LXX) is CORRECT here, which the merge needs beside cruces-0048's correct (I Cor. II) ×2 and (II Cor. IX): this is the same siglum cruces-0048 records as correct at 0312C for Ps. 70:5, so (Psal. LXX) is now attested right twice in the work.
2c · The [n:]-only class — hit rate 1 of 12 on the listed spans, and the one hit needs no marker
All twelve ⭐ spans were traced back to their real left edge. Eleven are Philip's own prose, written with scripture rather than quoting it — accusative-and-infinitive frames, changes of person and tense forced by his rhymed clause-endings, his own added adjectives. None of the eleven takes a marker; a [var:] on unmarked prose would misrepresent it as a lemma.
The eleven, listed so nobody re-opens them: 0060 — 0336A Gen. 29–30 (Si patriarchae olim quos constat post invicem uno patre… non omnes genitos una matre — Philip's own conditional; the note points at two whole chapters, not at quoted words) · 0336C Gen. 48:15 + Matt. 14:21 (Qui olim patriarcham Jacob a juventute sua pavit, qui multo recentius de quinque panibus quinque millia hominum satiavit — two relative clauses of his own; note that Gen. 48:15, the source of the first half, carries no siglum at all while Matthew does). 0062 — 0339B Prov. 8:17 (tu Scripturae testimonio diligentem diligere te dixisti — the Vulgate's first-person Ego diligentes me diligo recast as a second-person apostrophe under his own dixisti) · 0339B 1 John 4:10/19 (nonnullos… antequam diligerent, dilexisti, with his own parenthesis ut experti praedicant) · 0339D 1 Cor. 13:12 (Promisisti quippe finito vitae cursu, facie ad faciem te videri — only the three-word tag is Paul's, inside his own accusative-and-infinitive; and vidi per speculum imperfecte four lines later is the same verse recast again, unnoted) · 0340D Eccles. 9:1 (Nesciens enim utrum odio digna sit an amore — his own participle, and the Vulgate's amore an odio reversed, exactly as cruces-0042 records at 0291D and cruces-0048 at
- Third printing of the same reversal in the work; it is Philip's habit, not a variant). 0064 — 0343B Gen. 34:1 (Nec imitabor Dinam — the note names the person; ad videndum foras mulieres non exibo in the next clause is the pericope recast in his own first-person future) · 0343B Ps. 133:2 (ad dicendum bene extollam in noctibus manus meas — the Vulgate's plural imperative extollite manus vestras turned first-person singular future, and benedicite split into his own ad dicendum bene, which is a pun, not a quotation) · 0345A John 2:10 (etsi forte omnis homo vinum bonum ei quod est deterius anteponat — subjunctive inside his own etsi clause, with vinum bonum for Vulg. bonum vinum and anteponat for ponit) · 0345C Gen. 29 (Sic Jacob petenti et quaerenti non Liam in conjugium, sed Rachelem — narrative prose; the note points at the chapter). 0065 — 0347D Matt. 18:10 (cujus refecti adipe omnem prorsus molestiam ignoratis — see §2d.1: the note is correctly named but wrongly placed, and the Matthew matter is twelve lines earlier).
⭐ The one hit — 0336C, Matt. 4:2, and it diverges only in its connective.
Denique cum jejunasset quadraginta diebus et quadraginta noctibus, postea esuriit
[n: (Matth. IV)].
Vulg. Matt. 4:2: Et cum ieiunasset quadraginta diebus et quadraginta noctibus, postea esuriit. Every word after the connective is verbatim Vulgate, and Migne marks the span with neither guillemets nor italics** — it sits naked inside Philip's sentence, carrying only its note. It is a genuine member of the class brief §8a names, and it is the only one of the twelve.
No marker, on two independent grounds: (a) §8a's ruling — where the plate marks the words as neither quotation nor lemma we cannot establish the quotation's left edge, which is precisely the question Denique raises; and (b) even if the edge were certain, Denique for Et is Philip's own discourse connective taking over, which is below Pattern 14's threshold and is the same call cruces-0048 made for 2 Cor. 9:7's dropped enim at 0314C. Logged in full so the merge can rule the class with a near-verbatim specimen in front of it — this is a different specimen from the three the class has so far (Rom. 8:10, Ps. 90:5–6, Lam. 4:20), because it is the case where the words are right.
Reported per brief §8a even where it is a null result. 1/12 here, against 0/20 for 0042–0047, 0/38 for 0048–0053, 0/19 for 0018–0023 and 1/14 for 0024–0029.
2c′ · ⭐ Weaves the extractor could NOT list, found on the mandatory second pass
Five spans in this range carry no guillemets, no italics AND no [n:], and therefore appear in the extraction in no class whatever. All five are Philip's own prose and none takes a marker; they are recorded because the class is the one brief §8a exists for.
- ⭐ 0337B — Excursus ejus a patre, ait Ambrosius, recursus ejus ad patrem. Not scripture, and the most interesting of the five: Philip adduces Ambrose by name as an authority, and Migne prints the sentence in neither guillemets nor italics. See §3a — this is a third counter-instance to brief §7's functional rule, after the Sallust at 0314A and the Ovid at
- ⚠ Note also the lower-case patre / patrem inside it, against capital Patre two columns later at 0337D; mirrored.
- 0337A–B — Cant. 2:1, Ipse etenim florem campi, et lilium convallium se fatetur. Verbatim Vulgate nouns (Ego flos campi, et lilium convallium) turned accusative under his own se fatetur. Philip's prose. No marker — and worth the merge's eye because it is the Song quoting itself unmarked, the mirror image of brief §7's "the Song takes guillemets when quoted as a proof-text".
- 0343D — Eph. 2:19, qui intra septa Ecclesiae cives sanctorum et Dei domesticos se fatentur. Vulg. cives sanctorum, et domestici Dei — verbatim but for case, turned accusative under the same verb se fatentur he used at 0337A. The construction is his signature. No marker.
- 0345B — 2 Pet. 1:19, donec dies illucescat et oriatur sol potius quam lucifer. Vulg. donec dies elucescat, et lucifer oriatur in cordibus vestris. ⭐ This is where Caput XX's whole architecture comes from — the entire chapter is built on the lucifer / sol antithesis (twelve occurrences of lucifer in two columns), and the verse that supplies it is quoted unmarked and unnoted, with the two nouns' roles reversed from the Vulgate's (Peter's day-star rises; Philip's sun rises rather than the day-star). Philip's prose, no marker — but a reader who does not know 2 Pet. 1:19 is standing behind the chapter will not learn it from Migne's page.
- 0347D — Ps. 83:11, in atriis illius Domini vobis datur plena refectio, dies una. Vulg. melior est dies una in atriis tuis super millia. Both phrases verbatim, split across his own clause and recombined in the reverse order; and dies una has already been used in his own voice at 0338A (dies occasum nesciens, dies una) with no scriptural intent at all. Philip's prose. No marker.
Further unmarked weaves checked for silent conformation and left as Philip's own prose (none marked, none conformed): Matt. 4:3 (dic ut lapides isti efficaci potentia fiant panes, 0336D — efficaci potentia is his own, and the verb order is inverted from Vulg. ut lapides isti panes fiant) · Ps. 118:32 (per viam mandatorum corde cursum agilem dilatato, 0336B) · 1 Cor. 15:28 (in omnibus omnia Deus erit, 0337D) · John 3:8 (quando vult, quo modo vult, et ubi vult, modo spirat, 0338A) · Eph. 6:12 (nequitiae spiritales, 0338A) · Mark 9:47 (ignique ultorio, et vermi vivido, 0338B) · Ps. 2:11 (timens servit, et exsultat Domino cum tremore, 0340D) · Matt. 3:12 (vannum discussoriam, 0340C) · Prov. 5:19 (cervus amicitiae et pullus gratiarum, 0341C) · 1 Cor. 6:17 (unus cum illo spiritus, 0341D; repeated 0342A) · Phil. 3:20 (conversatio non carnalis, 0342C) · 1 Tim. 6:16 (lucem quoque habitans inaccessam, 0342D, and illam Sponsi lucem inaccessibilem at 0342D — two different adjectives for the one verse within six lines, both Philip's) · Matt. 20:23 / Mark 10:40 (ad consedendum non datur dextera vel sinistra, 0343A) · Luke 14:18–19 (non comparabo villam… non rus ibo, 0343B) · Isa. 40:2 (ad cor Hierusalem introibo, 0343B) · Rom. 1:17 / Hab. 2:4 (adhuc ex fide habent vivere, 0344A) · Matt. 7:8 recast (Hoc accipit qui petit, hoc invenit qui quaerit, haec pulsanti janua reseratur, 0344D — his own third recasting of the verse, outside all marks) · Isa. 62:6 (qui super muros excubant, 0346B) · Heb. 1:14 (mittuntur in ministerium, 0346B — cf. the same verse guilleted at 0304C, cruces-0048) · Ps. 90:5 (non timore nocturno revocata, 0346A) · Matt. 18:10 (quibus datum est patris semper faciem intueri, 0347B — see §2d.1) · John 6:51 (panem vivum, 0347D).
2d · Migne's sigla — twenty-five notes, twenty-four correctly named, and one correctly named but wrongly placed
Reproduced verbatim, none corrected (§10.2). This is by a wide margin the cleanest siglum rate any range has reported in this work — against cruces-0012's five-wrong-in-six, cruces-0048's six-wrong-in-six and cruces-0042's four-in-forty-one. Every one of the following was checked against the verse it stands on and is right: (Joan. XX) Jn 20:15 · (Gen. XXIX, XXX) Jacob's wives · (Gen. XXXVII) Gen 37:27 · (Matth. XIV) the five thousand · (Matth. IV) Matt 4:2 · (Joan. XIV) ×2 (the second as (ibid.), resolving correctly) · (Prov. VIII) Prov 8:17 · (I Joan. IV) · (I Cor. XIII) 1 Cor 13:12 · (Psal. XLII) Ps 42:1 · (Eccle. IX) Eccles 9:1 · (Joel. II.) Joel 2:14 · (Isa. LVII) Isa 57:8 · (Psal. CXLIV) Ps 144:18 · (Joan. VII) Jn 7:34 · (Gen. XXXIV) Dinah · (Psal. CXXXIII) Ps 133:2 · (Isa. LV) Isa 55:6 · (Joan. II) Jn 2:10 · (Matth. VII) Matt 7:8 + three (ibid.) resolving correctly · (Gen. XXIX) Jacob and Rachel · (Psal. LXX) Ps 70:16.
The one exception, and it is of the misplacement kind, not the misnaming kind:
- 0347D
[n: (Matth. XVIII)]is correctly named but wrongly placed. It sits after cujus refecti adipe omnem prorsus molestiam ignoratis — a clause about being fed in the kingdom, which Matt. 18 does not contain. But the Matthew matter is in the chapter: Philip's own sentence at 0347B, twelve lines earlier, is Vos, ait, quibus datum est patris semper faciem intueri — which is Matt. 18:10 (angeli eorum in caelis semper vident faciem Patris mei) and carries no note at all. Reproduced in place; §10.2 forbids moving it. Same class as cruces-0042's (Num. XXIII) at 0302C.
⚑ A methodological note for the merge's running count. A tally of failures alone would have made this range look like an absence of evidence. It is not: twenty-four checked-and-correct sigla in six chunks is a positive datum, and it is the strongest available support for §8b's revised claim that no siglum in this work is systematically wrong. The bad ranges and the good ranges are both real and they alternate.
⚑ Also for the count, of the kind §8b calls an internal control: 0345A and 0345B print the SAME verse (Matt. 7:8) under the same (ibid.) chain, once with enim and once without (§2b) — a two-printings-of-one-verse control inside a single chunk, matching cruces-0048's Heu / Heu mihi pair.
§3 · TYPOGRAPHY
3a · ⭐ A third counter-instance to brief §7's functional rule — Ambrose, adduced by name, printed bare
At 0337B Philip closes his excursus/recursus argument by citing Ambrose explicitly and by name:
Excursus ejus a patre, ait Ambrosius, recursus ejus ad patrem.
Migne prints it in neither guillemets nor italics. Under the widened rule (« » = a quotation adduced as an authority, whatever its source) this is exactly the case a guillemet may take, and the Delphic oracle and Virgil at 0251D–0253A do take one. This one does not. Nothing was supplied; rendered as running text.
That makes three unmarked adduced authorities in this work — Ovid Her. 9.31 at 0259 (cruces-0030), Sallust Cat. 20.4 at 0314A (cruces-0048), and Ambrose here. ⭐ And Ambrose is the one that matters most, because he is a Father, not a gentilis: the earlier two could be explained away as Migne declining to guillemet pagan matter. That explanation is now dead. Brief §7's "permissive, not predictive" formulation is confirmed a third time, and the merge can treat the question as closed in the same way §7 closed the book-boundary question.
3b · A printed locator inside a guillemet run, again — (supra IV) at 0340A
« Similis, inquit, esto capreae, hinnuloque cervorum (supra IV). »
Italic, inside the closing guillemet, with no [n:] wrapper, and correctly not counted in 0062's noteCount of 6 (verified against the body). Sixth instance of the class (cf. 0203A, 0222B–C, 0244C, 0267B, 0317C). ⚑ And it is the first instance that is an INTERNAL cross-reference rather than a scriptural locator — supra IV points back at this work's own Caput IV of the preceding book, where the caprea / hinnulus was expounded (cruces-0048 §4.3), and Philip's next sentence confirms it: Caprea, ut supra dictum nostis, hanc habet vim in oculis naturalem. Reproduced exactly, italics and all.
3c · Marginal source-edition numbers
191 (0334C) · 192 (0336B) · 193 (0338A) · 194 (0339C) · 195 (0341C) · 196 (0343A) · 197 (0344D) · 198 (0346B) · 199 (0347D). Continuous with cruces-0048's 174–182 (the intervening 183–190 belong to the 0054–0059 range). Each kept italic and verbatim at the exact word it interrupts — 192 falls between dilectus? and et ego illi, 193 between occasum and nesciens, 197 between differri and ut ad illam — and the English clause was built round each rather than moving it. ⚠ 193's slot forced the clause dies occasum nesciens to be rendered "a day that a setting 193 knows not", which is more contorted than I would otherwise write; it is deliberate.
3d · ⚑ §7a mirroring — the drift point — held word by word
Migne's mixed case runs hard through this range and none of it was regularized. This is mechanically checkable against the Latin twin and I would check it first in any review.
- ⭐ 0336A Mater Sponsi, Sponsa filii — capital Mater, capital Sponsi, capital Sponsa, lower-case filii, all in one four-word phrase. Rendered "the Mother of the Bridegroom, the Bride of the son."
- ⭐ 0337B in sinu patris… in matris gremio and the Ambrose sentence a patre… ad patrem — four lower-case divine nouns in three lines, in a chunk that capitalizes Sponsus eight times. Rendered "the father", "the mother's lap". Against them, 0337D's in Patre, et Pater in me (inside a quotation) is capitalized, and 0343A's in Patre Filius, et in Filio manet Pater likewise.
- ⭐ 0347B quibus datum est patris semper faciem intueri immediately followed by in Patre Deo Deum aeque Filium num vidistis? — both cases inside one sentence. Rendered "the face of the father" then "in God the Father".
- 0338A sanctus ille spiritus, digne spirat — lower-case spiritus with lower-case sanctus, four lines after capital de Spiritu at 0337D. Rendered "that holy spirit" against "the Spirit".
- Lower-case sponsus in five places where the same chunks capitalize it elsewhere: 0338B ire sponsus et redire (against Sponsus at 0337C) · 0340A Cum igitur Virgo sponsum hujusmodi animalibus similem rogat · 0341B solus inter homines sponsus illi digne supereminens · 0342B quaerit ergo Virgo sponsum (against Sponsi at 0341D and Sponsus at 0342D) · 0344D statim et praemium sponsus donat · 0346C vident nec invident sponsum nunc a Virgine plus amari. All rendered "the bridegroom", lower case, against "the Bridegroom" elsewhere.
- Lower-case virgo twice in chunks that capitalize Virgo throughout: 0342B recte virgo non tam noctis facit quam noctium mentionem and 0346A Ea virgo intemperie quo fortius eo delectabilius exardescens. Rendered "the virgin".
- 0343A Virgo mater — capital Virgo, lower-case mater, two words before capital Matri in the next clause. Rendered "the Virgin mother", then "the Mother".
- 0344A « surge, inquiens, propera, amica mea, » — lower-case surge where the head lemma at 0313C prints Surge (cruces-0048). Mirrored.
- Heads:
CAPUT XVI.throughCAPUT XXIII.all carry the full stop in this range; the English heads reproduce it. (Contrast cruces-0048'sCAPUT VIII/CAPUT IXwithout one — the plate is inconsistent across the work and is not tidied.)
3e · Pattern 17
Three distinct second-person frames in this range, and all three are decided by the morphology, not by who is addressed.
- Singular → thou. Caput XVIII is one long address by the Virgin to the Bridegroom and is singular from first word to last — Revertere, dilecte mi · unde tibi duritia · non ducas ad effectum · tu… dixisti, dilexisti, praedicaris, aspernaris · Tu, ait, cujus amore teneor · te avertis · convertere · te ostentes · revertere · te praesentes · Redde… redde… itera… contulisti… Promisisti · Esto similis · scrutare et perspice · te affectem… te exspectem · perscruteris · non graveris · noveris · tua justitia. So thou throughout, ~40 tokens. Likewise the devil to Christ at 0336D (Tu, ait, fauces cujus… dic ut lapides isti), Mary Magdalene to the gardener at 0335A (si tu sustulisti eum, dicito mihi), and Isa. 57:8 at 0342A (Suscepisti… dilatasti cubile tuum).
- Plural → you. John 7:34 at 0342D (Quaeretis me… vos non potestis venire) · John 14:17 at 0337D (Apud vos… in vobis ) · and the whole of Caput XXIII, where the Virgin addresses the angels: Vos, ait, quibus datum est… non vidistis… num vidistis? Num vobis sodalibus… possitis intueri… invenistis… dicite si vidistis… demonstrate… nuntiate… nuntiaveritis… meruistis… manducatis… ignoratis… adestis… interestis… vobis datur — ~20 plural tokens, all you. Philip's own frame to his brethren is plural too (sicut meministis 0336A, ut supra dictum nostis 0340A).
⭐ The pair the merge should like is at 0342A–0342D, twenty lines apart: the prophet's singular dilatasti cubile tuum ("thou hast enlarged thy couch") against Christ's plural ubi sum ego, vos non potestis venire ("where I am, you cannot come"). A reader sees the number change with no apparatus, which is exactly what Pattern 17 exists for.
§4 · PATTERN 7 AND PATTERN 10 — two [sic:], and the readings rendered as printed
Neither carried run is ALSO translated in the running text (brief §8's named failure — checked word by word on a separate pass).
- ⭐ 0336A
[sic: vinca]— et de vinca quae hac carne redimitur, item filius dicit « nostra? » Read vinea, near-certain: the sentence is the climax of a paragraph about the vineyard, and Migne prints the correct form five times within twelve lines — eo quod vinea floruisset (0335C), Non enim dixit: Vinea mea vel tua (0335C), « vinea nostra floruit » (0335C), « nostra vinea » (0335D), emit sibi vineam vel redemit (0335D). vinca alone is not a Latin word (the plant is vinca pervinca), and rendering it "periwinkle" would be actively misleading — the 11081 @0030B boundary case. Pattern 7 governs: carried untranslated in italics, and the English deliberately does not also say "vineyard": it reads "and of the [sic: vinca] which is redeemed by this flesh". - ⭐ 0339C
[sic: in cutiens]— subito te avertis, gravamen vix ferendum in cutiens rudibus, inexpertis. Pattern 10, split type. incutiens ("striking into") is broken across a space; in and cutiens are not both words (there is no cutiens), and the participle is required to govern both gravamen (acc.) and rudibus (dat.). Carried whole, including the in that is a real word — Pattern 10'sAd damrule — and the English does not also supply "striking": it reads "suddenly turnest thyself away, [sic: in cutiens] to the rude and inexperienced a burden scarce to be borne."
Rendered as printed, no marker (real words, merely wrong or merely odd) — conjectures live here and NOT in the text:
- ⛔ 0345B, « Incipit et invenit » (§1.2). A real word, so Pattern 12 keeps it on the English side and it takes a
[var:], not a[sic:]. Rendered "He beginneth and findeth", which is meant to read wrong, in a sentence whose whole force is Non enim dicit… sed. Conjecture Accipit, certain. Not supplied. ⚠ The single most repairable sentence in the range. - ⛔ 0342B, Nec vox una, sed plurimae quaerenti Virgini se opponunt. Read nox, near-certain: the sentence's own conclusion is recte virgo non tam noctis facit quam noctium mentionem, and the paragraph that follows is a four-fold anaphora Nox est… nox… nox est… nox…, with nox retundit eight words before and turba noctium twelve words after. plurimae is feminine plural and fits either noun, so the morphology gives no help; the sense gives all of it. vox is a real word, so Pattern 12 keeps it on the English side: rendered "Not one voice, but very many set themselves against the Virgin that seeks", which is meant to read wrong. ⚠ Second most repairable sentence in the range, and one letter fixes it.
- ⛔ 0345B, the double negative ne diu sit dubium, nihil… non conferri, nihil aeque… non differri. As printed this says that nothing is not bestowed and nothing is not deferred — two double negatives in one clause, in a sentence introducing a proof-text about what is bestowed. Both negations carried ("that nothing is not bestowed in the nights upon the desire of us that ask, and that nothing likewise is not deferred"), per brief §9, including the fact that it makes the sentence read against itself. Conjecture: ne diu sit dubium governs both infinitives as indirect statements of the doubt, so the sense intended is probably "lest it be long doubtful whether nothing is bestowed… or nothing deferred". Not supplied. ⚑ This is the third-most repairable place in the range and the one an editor is likeliest to "clarify" by dropping a non.
- 0337B, the misplaced full stop with its lower case, PRESERVED. Migne prints neque enim vel in sinu patris, nobis invidens. assidue se abscondit, vel in matris gremio… The English reads "for neither in the bosom of the father, grudging us. does he continually hide himself, nor in the mother's lap…" — the stop falls at the same point and the next word is lower case. Brief §5 is explicit and cruces-0030 §4 and cruces-0048 §3 settled it. ⚠ Do not churn this. It is the only instance in the range.
- 0346D, a sentence that simply stops. …et amoris impatiens suum illis desiderium aperire — no terminal mark of any kind, and the next thing on the plate is the
CAPUT XXIII.head. Nothing supplied (Pattern 8, the 11542 @1036D precedent); the English paragraph ends without a stop. - 0338A, dies occasum nesciens, dies una. Not a defect: dies is being used by Philip in his own voice for God, and dies una recurs at 0347D. Log only; see §2c′.5 for the Ps. 83:11 echo.
- 0347B, qui meo matris et Sponsae necdum sustinet se videri. Elliptical: oculo is carried over from perspicaci oculo in the preceding clause, so meo… matris et Sponsae is "by mine, [the eye] of his mother and his Bride". Rendered with the noun supplied in English word order, not in brackets, because English cannot carry the ellipsis; logged rather than marked.
- 0341C, Est enim retributor ille cervus amicitiae et pullus gratiarum. A conflation of the lemma's cervus with Prov. 5:19's cerva carissima et gratissimus hinnulus, and pullus is a fourth beast-word beside caprea, hinnulus and cervus. Rendered "the hart of friendship and the colt of graces" — pullus given its own English word so the three ruled terms stay clean (§5.2). Logged.
- 0338A, dici aspirantis impatiens (0338B). dici is a genitive of dies in Philip's own hand (medieval, for diei), not a defect. Pattern 9, unmarked; rendered "impatient of the day that breathes".
Negation audit (brief §9), second pass, against the Latin. Every printed non / nec / neque / nisi / nunquam / nullus / nihil / nil / nondum / necdum / nesciens / ne in the six Latin chunks was matched against the English after the prose was drafted. The dense clusters are 0334C–D (nec in ea sensus plenior invenitur, si non… subauditur… non potest ad liquidum inveniri… nec sibi Scripturarum occulta merentur aperiri… meritis non abundo… non arguam… sensu devio non infirmem… non adjunxit), 0335A (non attendit… non contendit… nesciens nisi flere… non timens aliquem Priscianum… nil ante dixerat… non exponit… non consentit), 0336C–D (non potentiae, sed indigentiae… non suggessit… non voluntario, sed necessario… non est faucibus opportuna… nec se praevalent continere… non incongrue), *0337A (non pasci liliis, sed inter lilia… non tam verbo quam specie… non gustu, non sapore), 0337B (neque enim vel in sinu patris… vel… — the neque… vel… vel triple carried whole), 0338A–B (nil obscurum, nil in nobis noxium… non discurret… non recurret… non pascetur, non vel alterum deserens… neutri vel ad modicum… non conspirat… occasum nesciens… non mediocriter… non angustia patiendi… non nocendi sed patiendi… nec manere stabilis… non largitur), *0339A–B (non apponat… non disponat… non postponat… quem non diligo… non mirarer… non ducas ad effectum… non rependat… non impendat… non offendat… non avertit… non negat similia, contraria non impertit — nine in eleven lines), 0340C–D (non accedat, si… non praecedat: nec meum… si… non… judicabit… non solum de gente non sancta… nullatenus… non aequatur… non antea compellatur… Nesciens enim utrum), 0341A–B (nil non suum — the double carried as a double: "nothing that is not his own"… non confertur… non occurrit, quam novit non occurrere, si… non praecurrit — three in one sentence), 0342A–D (non satis angustae… non redegit, nec… se coegit… nec praeter eum… non admisit… non effundit… Nec vox una… ne possit… non tam noctis… etsi jam conversatio non carnalis… non occurrit… non desiisse… non tamen adhuc… non fuisse… non inveni… non praevaluit… non attingit… non invenietis… vos non potestis venire), 0343A (nec solum cuivis nostrum, sed et Matri… non Joannes, non Jacobus, non denique pervenit… non datur… sic nec Matri… non tamen invenitur… quo non sublato, sed dilato), 0343B (Nec imitabor Dinam… non exibo, non comparabo villam… non rus ibo… Culpae non attribuam, non corpori), 0344B–D (non tamen lux, sed… nisi noctes cesserint… nihilque aliud… non emittit… non permittit… non praesentem, sed venturum… non intendit… nonnisi orto sole… necdum viso lucifero… nullo praeambulo nec ad illum via… non habetur… non videtur… Neque enim ut meritum… nisi praemisso lucifero, non videtur… nil in praesenti contulit), 0345B–C (the double negative above, plus Non enim dicit… Non enim ait… non Liam… sed Rachelem… non aequalis quidem pulchritudinis, sed fecundam… non tam ad meritum quam ad praemium… nil invenisse creditur… non revelat), and 0346A–0347D (non labore frangitur, a proposito non desperat… non desistere… non occurrit, non tamen defeciscat… nil sufficit… non contenta… jam non refugit… non attendit… non curat… non timore nocturno… non publicum… non contenta… non offertur… non torpere… vident nec invident… non vigiles a Virgine, sed Virgo a vigilibus… sicut non homines, sic nec angelos… non sexum, non ordinem, non praetergredi terminos… nec de altero verbosatur… nondum inveniat… non culpa, non carne, non quamvis molestia… non vidistis… necdum sustinet… necdum mereor… non sum quae doleam… nondum gaudeo… faucibus non esurie laborantibus… non inducuntur angeli… noluit* sustinere).
No negation was dropped and none was supplied. The two places where carrying the printed reading makes the English contradict itself are 0345B's double negative and 0345B's Incipit, both above, and both are carried for the reason brief §9 gives.
§5 · CONVENTIONS SET OR HELD IN THIS RANGE
- ⭐
lectulus= "little bed" — HELD, and Caput XIX is where brief §5's ruling pays. Cant. 3:1's In lectulo meo opens the chapter, and Philip's entire gloss is the diminutive against a non-diminutive: cubilis amplitudinem in brevem lectulum non redegit, nec intra fines arctos breviato lectulo se coegit · Dilatavit enim cubile suum · in cubili dilatato cum illicitis amatoribus est polluta · unus cum illo spiritus brevi tanquam lectulo se angustat. A third bed-word is therefore needed and is fixed here: cubile = "couch", kept distinct from lectulus = "little bed" and lectus = "bed" (which does not occur in this range). Isa. 57:8's dilatasti cubile tuum accordingly reads "thou hast enlarged thy couch", and the antithesis short-little-bed / enlarged-couch survives intact into the English. Offered to the merge as the third term of brief §5's pair. ⚠ A fourth, cubiculum (0338C, in secreto mentis cubiculo), is rendered "chamber". - ⭐
vicus= "lane" ·platea= "street" — matched to chunk 0051, NOT to Douay. Cant. 3:2 prints per vicos et plateas, and Philip glosses the pair as narrow-against-broad: Vicos arbitror illos dici, quos rectitudo fidei… dirigit certitudo, plateas vero quos provectae charitatis suavior excipit latitudo. Douay renders the lemma "the streets and the broad ways", which would have been the natural choice — but chunk 0051 (cruces-0048's range) already renders Luke 14:21's in plateas et vicos as "into the streets and lanes", and within a work there is one voice. So platea = street throughout, consistent with 0051 and with 0318D's Isa. 42:2 « Non audietur in plateis » = "in the streets", and vicus = lane. ⚑ This is the one cross-chunk reconciliation the merge must not undo; reversing it would put "streets" and "broad ways" for the same Latin noun eight chunks apart. - ⭐
aspirare= "to breathe (upon)" andinclinari= "to be bowed down" in the Cant. 2:17 lemma — a deliberate departure from Douay's "till the day break, and the shadows retire", and Caput XVII is the reason. The chapter is one sustained play on the breath-root and the bowing-root, and both are load-bearing: - spirare / aspirare / inspirare / conspirare run eleven times in one column (0338A: modo spirat… tunc aspirat… digne spirat… se inspirat… tunc aspirat, adversus quem… non conspirat… cujus et nunc spiratio, et tunc magis aspiratio… Dies qua plenius aspirante). Four English verbs are fixed on the four Latin ones: breathe / breathe upon / breathe into / conspire. "Break" for aspirare would silently delete the argument. - inclinari is expounded as the shadows' posture in punishment, not their withdrawal: quae die aspirante coguntur inclinari, cervice conquassata, poenis infernalibus aggravari · fasce duro graviter inclinatur. "Retire" makes the neck-shattering a non sequitur; "be bowed down" carries it. ⚠ The lemma is new in this range (Cant. 2:17's second half is expounded here for the first time), so no earlier chunk constrains it; but chunks 0054–0059 print Cant. 2:16 and may print the donec clause as a cue. Flagged for the merge as the one lemma word in this range where an earlier range could collide. caprea= "roe" ·hinnulus (cervorum)= "the fawn (of harts)" ·cervus= "hart" — HELD from cruces-0048 §4.3. Caput XVIII re-opens exactly the material of Caput IV and Migne says so (ut supra dictum nostis, and the printed locator (supra IV)), so the three terms must be the same three words. The chapter again turns on the roe's sight against the fawn's speed (Caprea… hanc habet vim in oculis naturalem, ut cernat et discernat cito / Hinnulus… cursu fertur praepeti… non tam pedes quam pennatos pedes), which is unreadable if two of the three collapse.- Pattern 3 fires TWICE on bare forms in this range, and one of them is a form no previous instance has had: - 0334C, bare genitive plural Scripturarum: nec sibi Scripturarum occulta merentur aperiri. Rendered "the hidden things of Holy Scripture". - 0339B, bare genitive singular Scripturae: tu Scripturae testimonio diligentem diligere te dixisti. Rendered "by the testimony of Holy Scripture" — the same form cruces-0048 §4.7 records at 0307D. ⚑ The work's bare-form tally is now: ablative plural in Scripturis (0260A), genitive singular Scripturae (0307D, 0339B), nominative Scriptura (0294A), genitive plural Scripturarum (0334C). A sweep that matches only divina / sacra / sancta will miss all five.
- Brief §5 vocabulary held: misericordia = mercy (0336A, cujus in omnibus misericordia me praecedit), kept distinct from clementia (does not occur) · charitas = charity (0343C provectae charitatis suavior… latitudo, 0343D diffusos charitate, 0346B vigili sollicitudine charitatis, 0346C affectuosae benevolentia charitatis), kept distinct from amor / dilectio = love, which run beside it densely throughout 0338D–0339B and 0346A–0347B · adolescentulae = maidens (0335C, 0338C, 0343A) · otium = leisure against negotium = business (0336B, 0343B, 0343C — held from cruces-0042 §5.2) · languida / langueo = languishing (0337A, held from cruces-0042) · fulciri = to be stayed up (0337A, held) · recti = the upright (0343D, rectos fide) · Sponsus = Bridegroom, Sponsa = Bride, Virgo = Virgin, subject always to §3d's case-mirroring · candet (0337A) is translated ("shines white"), per the candidatio rule. nigra / fusca / formosa, torcular, cellaria, muraenula, moralitas, amica mea as a lemma, cancelli do not occur in this range — except amica mea inside the re-quoted Cant. 2:10 at 0343C, where it is rendered "my friend" per brief §5 and cruces-0048 §4.1.
## CAPUT XVI.–XXIII.→ "CHAPTER XVI."–"CHAPTER XXIII.", all with the stop, as printed.- New fixed equivalences this range had to set, offered to the merge: - lucifer = "day-star" · sol = "sun" · dies = "day", the three terms Caput XX is built on (twelve lucifer, fourteen sol, seventeen dies in two columns). "Morning star" was declined because stella never appears and the argument is about light-bearing, not about a star. - excursus / recursus = "running out" / "running back" and the verbs excurrit / recurrit / discurrit / cursitat to match (0337B, 0338C, 0346B). The Ambrose sentence (§3a) is the pair's source and it must read as a pair. - scrutinium = "scrutiny" · discussio = "sifting" · scrutari / perscrutari = "to search (out)" · discutere = "to sift", fixed at 0340B–C where all four run in six lines and the argument is the sequence roe-searches-then-fawn-rewards. - vigiles = "watchmen" (Cant. 3:3) and excubare = "to keep watch", vigilia = "watch", vigilans = "vigilant" — Caput XXII runs the root five times.
§6 · THINGS DELIBERATELY NOT REPORTED (brief §10, checked once each)
- Column-band arithmetic: checked, and no anchor in any of the six chunks is followed by text broken mid-word or mid-construction. 0060's
colContextis 0334B while itscolFirstis 0334C; 0065's body opens with a bare[0345D]on its own line before the lemma; 0062 and 0064 open with no anchor at all until mid-paragraph. All are brief §10.1's class. The bands run cleanly A–D throughout 0334–0347. No[ed:], no patch, no plate check. noteCountmatches the body[n:]count in all six chunks (5/2/6/3/9/2), verified by script — and note that the printed locator (supra IV) at 0340A is correctly outside that count.[CAP. III.]at 0341D is Migne's, not ours. A bracketed printed locator for the Song's own third chapter, inside the head lemma. Reproduced verbatim, untranslated, after the[CANT. I.]precedent in chunk 0003. It carries no colon so it cannot collide with our marker namespace. Not a defect.- Attested medieval spellings left alone, unmarked (Pattern 9): tanquam, coelo, quandiu, nonnisi, nonnunquam, quemdam, eumdem, Hierusalem, charitas, spiritalis / spiritaliter, sepulcrum, lenocinium, aucupetur, inpraesentiarum / in praesentiarum, adgaudere, defeciscat, verbosatur, promptulam, dici for diei.
- No
[f:]. 11632 is lemma-and-gloss, not a florilegium (§10.4). - No
[d:], no[nt:], no[ed:]: no dittography anywhere in the range, and all twenty-seven notes are bare citations, none editorial prose. - Migne's own
( sic )does not occur here. - Cant. 1:12's Cum/Dum (brief §8c) does not occur in this range — the lemma has moved to Cant. 2:16–3:3. Recorded as a null so the merge's count is complete.
- No book boundary falls here, so this range contributes nothing further to brief §7's closed seam question.
§7 · WHAT A LATER BLIND READ SHOULD LOOK AT FIRST
- ⛔ 0345B, « Incipit et invenit » (§1.2). The English is deliberately incoherent because the Latin is, and the correct accipit stands five words away on the plate — which is exactly what makes the repair feel authorized. One letter restores a cogent argument. Do not.
- ⛔ 0342B, Nec vox una (§4). Second most repairable; the conjecture nox is in the crux and must stay there.
- ⛔ 0345B, the nihil… non conferri, nihil… non differri double negative (§4). Under brief §9 the printed count is exactly what stands: two nihil, two non, and no others.
- ⭐ 0338D/0341A, the Cant. 2:17
[var:]on Bethel (§1.1). If it is wrong it is wrong on the most consequential span in the range. The claim to test is whether Bether is the reading of every edition of Cant. 2:17 — it is — and whether Bethel could be a compositor's letter rather than copy-text: two printings three columns apart, plus four columns of etymology built on it, say no. - The 0345B Matt. 7:7
[var:]on et accipietis (§1.3) is the one marker in the range whose threshold is arguable. I have stated the case both ways and would not defend it against a merge that reads it as sub-threshold. - §5.2, the vicus/platea assignment. It was decided by consistency with chunk 0051 rather than by Douay, and it is the one term choice here that is expensive to reverse late because it touches two ranges.
- §5.3, aspirare = "breathe" against Douay's "break". If chunks 0054–0059 have printed the donec clause as a lemma cue with "break", the two must be reconciled — and the reconciliation must go my way, because Caput XVII is eleven breath-words long and Douay's verb makes them all inexplicable.
§8 · FOR THE MERGE'S RUNNING COUNTS
[n:]-only hit rate: 1 of 12 (§2c), the hit being a near-verbatim Matt. 4:2 at 0336C that needs no marker.- Unmarked, unnoted weaves found only on the second pass: 5 (§2c′), one of them a named patristic authority (Ambrose, 0337B).
- Sigla: 24 checked-and-correct, 1 correctly named but wrongly placed, 0 misnamed (§2d) — the cleanest range yet reported, and a positive datum for §8b's revised claim.
- Counter-instances to §7's functional guillemet rule: this range adds Ambrose to Ovid and Sallust, making three, and the first that is not pagan (§3a).
- §6-class copy-text candidates: one, and it is strong — Bethel for Bether, twice printed and four columns expounded (§1.1).
Philip of Harvengt, Commentaria in Cantica canticorum, PL 203. Six chunks, 5,342 Latin words, covering the end of Book III and the opening of Book IV: Caput XXIV–XXVI on Cant. 3:4–5 (Paululum cum pertransissem eos → Tenui eum, nec dimittam → Adjuro vos, filiae Hierusalem), then LIBER QUARTUS. and its Caput I–IV on Cant. 3:6–8 (Quae est ista quae ascendit per desertum → En lectulum Salomonis → Omnes tenentes gladios → Uniuscujusque ensis super femur suum).
⭐ A book boundary falls inside this range — LIBER QUARTUS. at col. 0354C, at the very end of chunk 0068, with nothing after it. See §6.
Marker totals for this range: 1 [var:] · 7 [sic:] · 0 [ed:] · 0 [d:] · 0 [nt:] · 0 [f:]. verify-english.mjs reports no errors on any of the six (the run's VERIFY FAILED is the 54 not-yet-translated chunks after 0071). Three ratio warnings — 0066 1.63, 0067 1.62, 0068 1.61 — all inside the band this work has already shipped (0004 1.64, 0005 1.68, 0046 1.68, 0064 1.66); 0069, 0070 and 0071 warn at nothing.
Column anchors (7/14/5/10/12/2), [n:] strings (0/7/0/1/6/0 — each matching its frontmatter noteCount) and guillemet counts (0/5/0/0/3/0 pairs) were diffed 1:1 against the Latin twins by script, not by eye: identical in content, order and position in all six chunks. No guillemet asymmetry anywhere in this range — every « has its », none stray, none unopened.
§1 · ⭐⭐ THE FINDING THE MERGE SHOULD CARRY FIRST
1.1 · 2 Paral. 23:11 at 0359B — a quotation with inquit, no guillemets, no italics, NO note, and the divergent word is the one Philip glosses
Migne prints, as running text in Philip's own paragraph:
Dederunt, inquit, in manu regis tenendam legem, et constituerunt eum regem. (0359B — reproduced here without italics, because the plate prints none)
The Vulgate, 2 Paral. (2 Chron.) 23:11, reads dederuntque in manu ejus tenendam legem, et constituerunt eum regem. Migne's regis stands where the Vulgate has the pronoun ejus.
Why it matters, and why it is exactly the Lam. 4:20 class of brief §8a. The sentence Philip has just written is ut omnibus ostenderet quia divinae legis cognitio decet regem, imo rex non tam scire quam tenere manu, hoc est, opere debet legem — the whole gloss turns on the word rex, twice, and then the proof-text arrives carrying regis where the received text carries a pronoun. Conforming it would leave two clauses arguing about the king from a proof-text that names none.
It carries an inquit, so Migne presents it as a quotation — and marks it with nothing at all: no « », no italics, no [n:]. It was therefore invisible to the extraction in every one of its three channels and did not appear in data/quotations/11632/0066-0071.md. It reached me only on the mandatory second prose pass.
⚑ Note the near miss that makes it sharper. Eleven words earlier the SAME verse is paraphrased in Philip's own voice under a note — quem sacerdos Joiada in manu dare voluit Joas regis [n: (II Paral. XXIII)] — and that clause is in the extraction list. The listed span is prose; the verbatim quotation ten words later is the unlisted one. A range that had worked only from its list would have collated the paraphrase and missed the quotation.
Ruling applied: logged in full, [var:] NOT fired (brief §8a — where Migne marks the words as neither quotation nor lemma we cannot establish the quotation's boundary, and marking would assert a boundary the plate does not print). The English renders regis: "They gave, he says, into the king's hand the law to be held, and made him king."
⭐ And the siglum on the neighbouring note is CORRECT. [n: (II Paral. XXIII)] is right for 2 Chron. 23:11 — see §5, because brief §8b names (II Paral. III) as an attested thirty-two-chapter miss and this is the same siglum family used correctly.
§2 · THE COLLATION — all 26 listed spans, plus 14 found on the prose pass
Every span in data/quotations/11632/0066-0071.md was collated word by word against the Vulgate. Spans recorded as AGREES were collated and found to agree; the absence of a marker on them is a finding, not a silence.
0066 (cols 0348A–0349C) — 3 spans, 0 notes, 0 guillemets
| Span | Verse | Verdict |
|---|---|---|
| Paululum cum pertransissem eos, inveni quem diligit anima mea. | Cant. 3:4a | AGREES word for word. |
| Cum pertransissem, inquit, eos, inveni quem diligit anima mea. (0348C) | Cant. 3:4a | AGREES. ⚠ Migne breaks the italics around inquit between the verb and its object (Cum pertransissem, / eos, inveni…). English cannot take that break gracefully; it is nonetheless reproduced 1:1 — "When I had passed by, she says, them, I found him whom my soul loveth." — on the Pattern 5 principle that the typography is a fact of the page and English comma habits do not outrank it. Same device cruces-0052 recorded at Flores, inquit, apparuerunt, where English happened to fit. |
Marginal source-edition number: 200 (0349B).
0067 (cols 0349D–0353A) — 9 spans, 7 notes, 5 guillemet pairs
| Span | Verse | Verdict |
|---|---|---|
| Tenui eum, nec dimittam donec introducam eum [0349D] in domum matris meae, et in cubiculum genitricis meae. | Cant. 3:4b | Vulg. …donec introducam illum in domum matris meae… — the second pronoun only, eum for illum, with the same referent. Sense untouched (Pattern 14 threshold). genitricis/genetricis is orthography. Logged, no marker. |
« Cerno, inquit ad Moysen, quod populus iste durae cervicis sit: dimitte me ut irascatur furor meus contra eos et deleam eos [n: (Exod. XXXII)]. » | Exod. 32:9–10 | AGREES word for word, the two verses run together with the Vulgate's rursumque ait Dominus ad Mosen replaced by the Pattern 5 interruption inquit ad Moysen. Siglum correct. |
Vult furorem suum adversus idololatras durius effrenare, sed obsistit Moyses, et furentem nititur refrenare [n: (Jud. X)] ([n:]-only) | — | Philip's own prose, and it is not a quotation of anything: it is his narration of Exod. 32:11–14. No marker. ⚠ But the siglum is a live problem — see §5. |
« Aut dimitte eis, inquit, hanc noxam, aut si non facis, dele me [0350C] de libro tuo quem scripsisti [n: (Exod. XXXII)]. » | Exod. 32:32 | AGREES word for word; truncated at the opening (obsecro, peccavit populus iste… not quoted). Siglum correct. ⚠ The column anchor falls inside the guillemets, between me and de libro; reproduced in place. |
« Dimitte me, ait, jam enim ascendit aurora [n: (Gen. XXXII)]. » | Gen. 32:26a | AGREES word for word. Siglum correct. |
« Non dimittam, inquit, te, nisi benedixeris mihi [n: (ibid.)]. » | Gen. 32:26b | AGREES; the te is displaced one place by the interrupting inquit (Pattern 5). The (ibid.) resolves correctly to Gen. XXXII and was not touched. |
« Et benedixit, inquit, eum in eodem loco [n: (Gen. XXXII)]. » | Gen. 32:29 | Vulg. et benedixit ei in eodem loco — accusative for dative after benedico, the ordinary Christian-Latin construction. Nothing is asserted that the Vulgate does not assert. Logged, no marker. Siglum correct. |
Deus quidem, ut legistis, ab antiquo notus fuerat in Judaea [n: (Psal. LXXV)] ([n:]-only) | Ps. 75:2 | Philip's prose. Vulg. Notus in Iudaea Deus — a nominal clause turned into his own pluperfect with ab antiquo added and ut legistis as his own second-person frame. No marker. Siglum correct. |
| Adjuro vos, (0353A) | Cant. 3:5 | Lemma cue for the next chapter. |
Marginal numbers: 201 (0351B) · 202 (0353A).
0068 (cols 0353B–0354C) — 1 span, 0 notes, 0 guillemets
| Span | Verse | Verdict |
|---|---|---|
| Adjuro vos, filiae Hierusalem, per capreas, cervosque camporum, ne suscitetis neque evigilare faciatis dilectam, donec ipsa velit. | Cant. 3:5 | AGREES word for word, including both negatives. |
⭐⭐ This lemma is an INTERNAL CONTROL on cruces-0042 §1.2, and it should be recorded as one. That range found the head lemma at 0299D printing Adjuvo for Adjuro at Cant. 2:7 — the identical formula. At 0353A the cue prints Adjuro, and at 0353B the full head lemma prints Adjuro, correctly, twice. So the 0299D reading is an isolated defect of that setting and not a copy-text form: the same six-word formula is set right three times inside sixty columns. That is the shape of evidence brief §8b asks for (an internal control needing no appeal outside the work), applied here to a lemma rather than a siglum.
0069 (cols 0353D–0356D) — 3 spans, 1 note, 0 guillemets
| Span | Verse | Verdict |
|---|---|---|
| Quae est ista quae ascendit per desertum sicut virgula fumi ex aromatibus myrrhoe et thuris et universi pulveris pigmentarii? | Cant. 3:6 | AGREES, orthography apart. Vulg. …ex aromatibus murrae et turis…; thuris is Migne's habitual aspirated form, and myrrhoe is his habitual oe-for-ae, the same interchange as coelum, coena, foenum. Pattern 9, no marker, no [sic:] — and note that Philip himself sets myrrha and thure correctly eight lines later (0356B), which is what settles it as orthography rather than broken type. |
Jacob cum caput ejus lapis suppositus visus est sustinere, somno sopitus mystico hujusmodi scalam meruit vix videre [n: (Gen., XXVIII)] ([n:]-only) | Gen. 28:11–12 | Philip's prose (Vulg. supposuit capiti suo, et dormivit… viditque in somnis scalam, recast into his own rhymed sustinere / videre). No marker. Chapter correct. ⚠ Migne prints a comma inside the parenthesis — (Gen., XXVIII) — where every other siglum in the range has none. Reproduced verbatim, not tidied. |
| En lectulum, (0356D) | Cant. 3:7 | Lemma cue. |
⭐ A 7a″ trap declined at the head lemma: virgula is "a little rod", NOT Douay's "pillar". Douay renders Cant. 3:6 "as a pillar of smoke", and that is the familiar cadence the rule warns about. Caput I's entire exposition is built on the word's slenderness: subtilis et gracilis… attollens se in auras tenues et ipsa tenuatur … instar virgulae restringens se in angustum … terrenis abrasis faecibus… tenuata. A pillar is the one thing a virgula is not, and "pillar" would leave four sentences arguing thinness from an image of mass. Rendered "a little rod of smoke" at the lemma and at all three re-uses.
Marginal numbers: 203 (0353D) · 204 (0356B).
0070 (cols 0357A–0359D) — 9 spans, 6 notes, 3 guillemet pairs
| Span | Verse | Verdict |
|---|---|---|
| En lectulum Salomonis sexaginta fortes ambiunt [0357A] ex fortissimis Israel. | Cant. 3:7 | AGREES word for word. ⚠ The column anchor falls inside the lemma, between ambiunt and ex; reproduced in place. ⭐ lectulum = "little bed" — see §4.1, where this chunk supplies the work's decisive text. |
« Coangustatum est, inquit, stratum, ut alter decidat: et pallium breve utrumque operire non potest [n: (Isa. XXVIII.)] » | Isa. 28:20 | Vulg. Coangustatum est enim stratum, ita ut alter decidat… — enim displaced by the interrupting inquit (Pattern 5, the class cruces-0050 recorded for Ps. 119:5's mihi), and ita dropped. Sense untouched. Logged, no marker. Siglum correct. ⚠ Migne prints NO terminal punctuation after the closing »; not supplied (Pattern 8). |
« Dilatasti, ait, cubile tuum, suscepisti adulterum [n: (Isai. LVII.)] » | Isa. 57:8 | ⚑ Every printed word is the Vulgate's, but the two clauses are REVERSED. Isa. 57:8 runs …quia iuxta me discoperuisti, et suscepisti adulterum… dilatasti cubile tuum, et pepigisti cum eis foedus. Migne prints the enlarging first and the receiving second, with the intervening matter cut. Both clauses assert the same thing of the same person and the argument (a widened bed admits an adulterer) is served either way, so this is abridgment-plus-reordering, not a variant reading. Logged, no marker — recorded in full so a later reader can reverse the judgment on the evidence. Siglum correct. ⚠ Again no terminal punctuation after »; not supplied. ⚠ And note Migne spells the prophet Isai. here and Isa. two columns earlier, inside one chunk. Both reproduced. |
Quia enim sex diebus opera sua Deus creator omnium adimplevit, qui, sicut nostis scriptum, ab operibus quae patrarat, die septimo requievit [n: (Gen. II)] ([n:]-only) | Gen. 2:2 | Philip's prose, and the closest call in the chunk: die septimo requievit and quae patrarat are both verbatim Vulgate. But the frame sicut nostis scriptum is his own second-person address, the subject is his own Deus creator omnium, and the Vulgate's ab universo opere becomes his plural ab operibus. No marker, per §8a. Siglum correct. |
« Qui non peccat, inquit, in verbo, hic perfectus est vir [n: (Jacob. III)]. » | James 3:2 | ⭐ [var:] FIRED — see §3. Siglum correct. |
| Omnes tenentes gladios et ad bella doctissimi. | Cant. 3:8a | AGREES word for word. |
…quia sermo Dei vivus et efficax et penetrabilior omni gladio praedicatur, quo recessus animae, et interior conscientia penetratur [n: (Heb. IV)] ([n:]-only) | Heb. 4:12 | Philip's prose. Vulg. Vivus est enim sermo Dei, et efficax, et penetrabilior omni gladio ancipiti, et pertingens usque ad divisionem animae ac spiritus. Migne drops ancipiti (which Philip has just used in his own voice, gladium bis acutum), replaces the participial chain with his own quo… penetratur, and governs the whole by his own praedicatur. No marker. Siglum correct. The neighbouring gladius est spiritus, quem esse Apostolus asserit verbum Dei is Eph. 6:17 in reported speech, unnoted and unmarked — likewise prose. |
Gladius est testimonium fidele, praeceptum lucidum, liber legis, quem sacerdos Joiada in manu dare voluit Joas regis [n: (II Paral. XXIII)] ([n:]-only) | 2 Chron. 23:11 | Philip's prose; and testimonium fidele, praeceptum lucidum is Ps. 18:8–9 absorbed unnoted into his apposition. No marker. ⭐ Siglum correct (§5) — and see §1.1 for the verbatim quotation of this very verse ten words later, which the plate marks with nothing. |
| Uniuscujusque, (0359D) | Cant. 3:8b | Lemma cue. |
Marginal number: 205 (0358A).
0071 (cols 0360A–0360B) — 1 span, 0 notes, 0 guillemets
| Span | Verse | Verdict |
|---|---|---|
| Uniuscujusque ensis super femur suum, propter timores nocturnos. | Cant. 3:8b | AGREES word for word. |
Marginal number: 206 (0359D–0360A, printed immediately after the lemma).
2a · The [n:]-only class — hit rate 0 of 6 on the listed spans
All six listed [n:]-only spans (0350B Vult furorem suum; 0352B Deus quidem… notus fuerat in Judaea; 0355C Jacob cum caput ejus lapis; 0358A Quia enim sex diebus; 0359B Gladius hic non ferreus; 0359B Gladius est testimonium fidele) are Philip's own prose, by the same mechanism cruces-0048 measured at 38/38 and cruces-0042 at 0/20: he absorbs the scriptural words into his rhymed clause endings (sustinere / videre, adimplevit / requievit, praedicatur / penetratur), which forces a change of person, tense, voice or subject. Hit rate: zero. Running total across the four ranges that have reported it: 0 of 83.
⛔ And that null result is exactly why the separate prose pass is not optional. The [n:]-only class caught nothing here; the unmarked, unnoted class caught the range's principal find (§1.1) and thirteen more spans below.
2b · Found ONLY on the prose pass — unmarked, unnoted, invisible to the extractor
Fourteen scriptural weaves carrying no guillemets, no italics and no [n:]. None takes a marker (§8a); all are recorded so the merge has the population.
| Col | Printed | Source | Note |
|---|---|---|---|
| 0359B | Dederunt, inquit, in manu regis tenendam legem, et constituerunt eum regem. | 2 Chron. 23:11 | ⭐⭐ §1.1 — the range's principal find. Carries inquit; diverges; the divergent word is the one glossed. |
| 0348B | quam nescit immutatio vel vicissitudinis obumbratio successurae | James 1:17 | ⚑ Near-verbatim (nec vicissitudinis obumbratio), inside the watchmen's speech, with immutatio for the Vulgate's transmutatio. Philip's own relative clause and his own successurae. The second-strongest candidate in the range and the one I would look at next after §1.1. |
| 0348B | quod vidimus et audivimus hoc testamur | John 3:11 / 1 John 1:3 | In the watchmen's mouth; Vulg. quod scimus loquimur, et quod vidimus testamur fused with quod vidimus et audivimus, annuntiamus vobis. A fusion, so no marker (the cruces-0000 item-12 conflation precedent). |
| 0348D · 0355A | angeli qui, missi in ministerium salutis, haeredibus administrant · qui sunt administratorii spiritus | Heb. 1:14 | Two printings, both prose. cruces-0048 collated the guilleted printing of the same verse at 0305A as agreeing; here it is twice unmarked. |
| 0351B | eo contenta solo in pace dormiam in idipsum | Ps. 4:9 | Vulg. In pace in idipsum dormiam et requiescam — the verb is verbatim and first-person as in the Psalm, but it is spoken by the Virgin inside her own sentence. Prose. |
| 0351D | sub divo libera tanquam onager invenitur | Job 39:5 / Jer. 2:24 | Prose. |
| 0352A | in profundum fodiens petram satagit invenire, supra quam aedificium firmo gradu valeat stabilire | Luke 6:48 | Prose (Vulg. fodit in altum, et posuit fundamentum supra petram). |
| 0352A | illisione fluminum ventorumque impulsu ruinae subjacet graviori | Matt. 7:25–27 | Prose. |
| 0352B | cum temporis adfuit plenitudo | Gal. 4:4 | Vulg. ubi venit plenitudo temporis; the genitive is inverted into his own clause. Prose. |
| 0352B | infirmari Dei voluit fortitudo | 1 Cor. 1:25 | Prose. |
| 0352B | crederent Christum Dei sapientiam et virtutem | 1 Cor. 1:24 | ⚑ Vulg. Christum Dei virtutem, et Dei sapientiam — the pair is reversed and the second Dei dropped. Inside Philip's accusative-and-infinitive, unnoted and unmarked; nothing in the exposition turns on the order. Prose, no marker — recorded because a reversed pair is the class 7a″ names (cf. the cinis et pulvis case). |
| 0352B | ante luciferum ex utero genitum Dei Patris | Ps. 109:3 | Vulg. ex utero ante luciferum genui te; reordered into his own participle. Prose. |
| 0352C | illam scilicet petram, quae Christus est | 1 Cor. 10:4 | Prose. |
| 0357A · 0359C | duobus dominis non servire · non habentibus, sed facientibus intellectum | Matt. 6:24 · Ps. 110:10 | Prose. The second inverts Vulg. Intellectus bonus omnibus facientibus eum into an antithesis of his own. |
| 0358B | ipsum paterfamilias laborantibus in vinea jubet dari | Matt. 20:1–16 | Prose; the note-less report of the whole parable. |
| 0358D · 0360A | nondum tamen plene sciunt utrum odio digni sint an amore · caro autem infirma est | Eccles. 9:1 · Matt. 26:41 | Prose. ⚑ The Eccles. 9:1 weave is the third printing in the work — cruces-0048 recorded it at 0309D under [n: (Eccle. IX)]; here it is unnoted. Philip recasts it every time. |
§3 · THE [var:], IN FULL — James 3:2 at 0358C
Migne prints « Qui non peccat, inquit, in verbo, hic perfectus est vir » under [n: (Jacob. III)]. The Vulgate reads Si quis in verbo non offendit, hic perfectus est vir — a conditional clause with offendit, where Migne has a relative clause with peccat.
Fired, and here is the reasoning, stated so the merge can reverse it. The clause-type change alone would not clear Pattern 14's threshold — cruces-0051 correctly declined a marker on Apoc. 22:17's audiens for qui audit, which is the same grade of recasting. What clears it is the verb. offendere is to stumble or give offence; peccare is to sin. The three sentences around the quotation are a graded scale of imperfection — in cavendis nequam operibus satis provide circumspecti, in verbo tamen adhuc minus debito sunt perfecti … etsi custodiunt vias suas ut in lingua labili non delinquant — and Philip's own word for the failure is delinquere, a sin-word, not a stumble-word. The proof-text as Migne prints it supplies exactly that word; as the Vulgate prints it it does not.
The marker names the witness and the received reading and does not speculate about why they differ (Pattern 14). It does not elide the divergence: both halves of the Vulgate clause are inside it, negation included, so brief §8's quo minus cessem orare failure cannot occur here.
⚠ Its whole content is si quis in verbo non offendit — deliberately trimmed short of hic perfectus est vir, which is the one part of the verse Migne and the Vulgate share, so that no word of the marker's content is a verbatim substring of the Latin twin (Pattern 14's [ed:] mirror test).
§4 · PATTERN 7 AND PATTERN 10 — seven [sic:], and what was NOT marked
None of the seven carried runs is ALSO translated in the running text (brief §8's named failure — checked word by word on a separate pass, and each content string re-verified as a verbatim substring of its Latin twin by script).
- 0348C
[sic: desideriam]— Videns quippe angelos meum mihi desideriam non supplere. A non-word: meum is neuter and desiderium is what the slot wants (Philip uses desiderii correctly nine words later, mei… desiderii suppletores). Carried untranslated; the English reads "did not supply me my [sic: desideriam]" and does not also say "desire". - 0350A
[sic: ama]— eo ama fortius, et amare praeter illum quidpiam non intendit. ⚠ A judgment, and I record it as one. ama is a real word (the imperative of amo) and Pattern 12 exempts "a real word that is merely wrong" — but it cannot fill this slot at all: the subject is the Virgin, the parallel verb is deprehendit, and the correlative quo… eo wants an indicative. It is a lost final letter for amat, which is precisely the classtranslation-style.mdPattern 7 names by name (vulfor vult), and the accident that the truncation happens to be a word is the same accident cruces-0048 met at[sic: signa]. If the merge reads it as Pattern 12 instead, the fix is to delete the marker and render the imperative "love", which construes no better. - 0355A
[sic: susciten]— dicunt tamen ut in nobis affectum susciten audiendi. A non-word, final -t lost from suscitent. The English does not also say "stir up". - 0355D
[sic: praeccurrentes]— proficientem festivis laudibus praeccurrentes. A non-word, doubled c in praecurrentes. ⚠ Note the English word order had to place the carried run before its object ("[sic: praeccurrentes] with festal praises her that advances") because the run is the participle governing it; nothing outside the marker renders it. - 0356A
[sic: eomparatur]— cujus virgulae Virgo proficiens eomparatur. A non-word, e for c — the same c/e confusion cruces-0042 carried at[sic: reete](0294C), which is the governing precedent in this work. - 0356C
[sic: discipliuae]— in corde Virginis tanquam in mortariolo discipliuae. A non-word, u for n in disciplinae. - 0360B
[sic: verb]— ut et defectus causas tanquam femur verb comprimat disciplina. A non-word, truncated verbi — and the certain reading, because Philip's own preceding sentence has cum verbo Domini lucido quod penetrabilius omni gladio perhibetur and rigore firmat verbi. Carried; the English reads "with the discipline of the [sic: verb]".
Rendered as printed, no marker (real words, merely wrong or merely odd) — conjectures live here and NOT in the text:
- ⛔ 0351B, donec cum in domum matris meae, imo et in cubiculum intromittam. The slot wants eum, near-certain: the head lemma four columns earlier prints donec introducam eum in domum matris meae, and intromittam is left without an object. cum is a real word, so Pattern 12 keeps it on the English side: rendered as the conjunction, "until, when I bring [him] into my mother's house, nay, and into her chamber, I let him in" — the object supplied in square brackets, per the corpus's existing supplied-word convention, so that the printed cum is carried and nothing is silently repaired. ⚠ This is the sentence in my range most likely to be quietly smoothed, and the smoothing is one letter.
- 0351D, nescit domum, plaudi non sustinet, pariete vel maceria non sepitur. plaudi ("to be applauded") in a sentence about a wild ass that knows no house and is fenced by no wall wants claudi, "to be shut in" — another c/e-family confusion, here p for c. A real word, so rendered as printed: "it knows no house, it endures not to be applauded, it is hedged in by no wall or dike." It is meant to read wrong. ⚠ Second most repairable sentence in the range.
- 0355B, internae mentis species tam gratiae quam industriae manibus et exculta nullam harum huic similem possumus invenire. The clause does not construe: species is nominative, exculta agrees with it, and et stands where est is needed, after which the sentence changes subject to possumus without a break. Rendered as an anacoluthon with dashes so the broken construction survives — "the beauty of the inner mind, by the hands of grace as well as of industry, and cultivated — none of these can we find like to her" — rather than being smoothed into a subordinate clause. Conjecture est, not supplied.
- 0357B, cum in se mansionem, locum, spatium alteri non consedit.** Three accusatives with an intransitive perfect; the slot wants concedit, "grants". A real word, so rendered as printed: "when it has not settled in itself a dwelling, a place, a space for another."
- 0357D, quae illi ex una tantum parte sine altera non assistunt, se prudenter dispositae ordinato ambitu circumsistunt. se stands where the antithesis wants sed — Pattern 10's sedet / sed et class in reverse, a lost letter yielding a real word. Rendered as the reflexive, and the adversative deliberately NOT supplied: "which stand by her not on one side only without the other; themselves prudently disposed, they stand round about her in an ordered circuit." Supplying "but" would be the connective-smoothing mechanism (Pattern 7a, mechanism 3), which leaves no lexical trace.
- 0350A, non nectura ferrea, sed complexu alligat fortiore. nectura is not classical but is a medieval formation on necto; cruces-0042 met it at 0290A and left it. Held: rendered "fastening", Pattern 9, unmarked.
- 0350A, non gumphis, non glutino. gumphus = γόμφος, a bolt or peg. Attested; rendered "bolts", unmarked.
- 0349D, vigiles lincaeo visa est oculo praeterire. The adjective from Lynceus. Rendered "with a lynx's eye", unmarked.
Punctuation — Pattern 8, three live cases, all preserved
- 0354A, a comma splice preserved. …quam constat penitus nunquam velle, apostoli quidem contra vetitum deserente gratia voluerunt. A full stop belongs where Migne prints a comma, and the lower case follows it. Brief §5 is explicit that Migne's lower case after a misplaced stop stands; the same reasoning covers a missing stop. Nothing changed — the English reads "…who, it is agreed, never wills at all, the apostles indeed, grace forsaking them, willed against the prohibition…".
- 0356B, a comma where a full stop belongs, with a CAPITAL after it. ex universo pigmentarii pulvere sunt confecta, Myrrha mirabilem mortuorum corporibus dat medelam. The mirror image of 0354A and of cruces-0048's 0317B case. Preserved exactly: "…and of all the powder of the perfumer, Myrrh gives a marvellous remedy…".
- 0357B and 0357C, no terminal punctuation after the closing guillemet of either Isaias quotation (
… non potest [n: (Isa. XXVIII.)] » Stratum profecto…and… suscepisti adulterum [n: (Isai. LVII.)] » Virgo autem…). Not supplied, per Pattern 8 and the 0306A precedent.
Negation audit (brief §9)
Every printed non / nec / neque / nisi / haud / nunquam / nullus / nihil / nil / nemo / ne in the six Latin chunks was matched against the English on a separate second pass, after the prose was drafted. The dense clusters are 0348A (non esse aliquem angelorum, nec ostendi posse… ut non eam videat nisi cui voluerit), 0348B (non stare, non haerere, sed potius transire… habentis initium etsi finem non similiter habiturae), 0348D–0349A (neutros… non solum invalidum ordinem, sed naturam, meoque desiderio nullam sufficere penitus creaturam · non a seipsis, sed ab alio · non seipsum, non quemvis alium · sine ipso… penitus nihil posse), 0349A (non nisi pertransiens digne praevalet experiri — the double particle carried whole), 0349B–C (non tamen… nisi oculo tantum fidei · nullo carnis onere contradici; si non fide, sed re, non spe, sed specie · nulla perturbatio · regio jure non injurio), *0350A (non gumphis, non glutino, non tenet vinculo… non nectura ferrea · non remittit, non amorem, non affectum, non intensum… non dimittit), 0350C–D (non evertit… non abrasit… non delevit · nullo modo convenire · nihil impunitum… vult remitti · non se sustinet praeveniri), 0351A (non vult dimittere nisi pretio redimatur, nisi victus victori… sine qua nulla victoria — three carried in one period), 0351B (non nisi propter ipsum… non sufficiunt praeter ipsum · Nec soli mihi… nec enim morbo avaritiae), 0351C–D (non munitur, non umbra, non culmine, non fidei tegulis · nescit domum, plaudi non sustinet… non sepitur · nullo fixa pondere), 0352A (quia petrae non innititur firmiori · ruere non permittit), 0352B (necdum noverat · personaliter non vestivit · non venturos esse deinceps ad salutem, nisi eos qui crederent — the non…nisi pair carried whole), 0353B–0354A (ne parvipendant · ne… tonet, ne… sonet, ne… feriantur · jam non cum illo… gradiantur · Nec solum ii apostatae · ut… non fatiscant · non est conveniens… necdum illam velle… nec est vobis liberum… quam constat penitus nunquam velle — a four-fold chain · ad unguem non resistere valuerunt · nil tale voluit · non suo, sed suorum strepitu), 0354A–B (ne affligatur poena, cujus culpae conscia non habetur · non praesumerent suscitare · ne repellant gratiam · non duxi necessarium… ne, si quod ante dictum est…), 0354D–0355A (nec alii quilibet… non tamen ab ejus facie prohibentur · neque digne sufficiunt admirari, nec inveniunt · ne quid dicant… si penitus nihil dicant — with revocat ne carried as a negative purpose clause, the 7a′ hazard · nequaquam desiderio satisfacit), 0355A–B (Neque enim quisquam nostrum… si… velut sibi non satis conscia penitus refutaret · non ut dignitas Virginis expetit · necdum satis… non intendunt), 0355B–C (nullam harum huic similem · nulla prior, nulla ei posterior · non egere · non natura, sed gratia · non incedit · nescit multitudo neque terit ungula · non tangitur, non respergitur · non attaminat, non operit), 0356A (oculos intuentium non admittat), 0356B (non de abyssi puteo · nihil in eo molle, nihil fluidum), 0357A–B (non permittat… non admittat · non lectus, sed lectulus · non extenta · plurimos non amplecti, duobus dominis non servire · utrumque operire non potest · nonnisi legitimo meditatur · non consedit · non accedit), 0357C–D (non texit dissolutio, superfluitas non orditur · nullatenus operitur, nec… nec… · non arctavit… neque pallium breviavit · non admisit… non permisit · non muris, non turribus, non propugnaculis · hostes nihil inferunt), 0357D–0358A (qui non nisi fortes merentur appellari · non assistunt), 0358A–D (non debere perfectum ideo judicari · nihil timet, nihil dubitat · majora nequeunt adimplere · non peccat in verbo · in lingua labili non delinquant… nondum satis… nondum tamen plene sciunt · nullus quippe similium), 0359A–D (ne… non armati · non ferreus · non habere sed tenere · non qui habent… habere non negantur · parum, sive nihil prodest… si non illum exerit manus · non laesionem illa sufferat, non jacturam · non novella… necdum facere · non habentibus, sed facientibus · sine scientia non satis eruditur · non solum docti, sed et doctissimi · manus a gladio non recedit), and 0360A–B (non deponens · ut sui non sit negligens · non habet a seipsa · gradu stabili non tenetur · non solum se infirmam · a nocturnis timoribus non* timere).
No negation was dropped and none was supplied. Two places deserve naming because carrying the printed reading is what makes the English awkward, and the awkwardness is the point: 0354A's quam constat penitus nunquam velle (the absolute "who never wills at all", left without the object the sense wants) and 0355A's consideratio… revocat ne quid dicant, a negative purpose clause of exactly the shape Pattern 7a′ was written for — the whole clause it governs is carried negative ("calls them back that they say nothing"), not affirmatively.
§5 · MIGNE'S SIGLA — thirteen of fourteen correct, and the one that is not
Reproduced verbatim, none corrected (brief §10.2). This range is the cleanest of any reported so far, which is itself worth the merge's count against cruces-0012's five-in-six and cruces-0048's six-in-six:
| Col | Printed | Verdict |
|---|---|---|
| 0350B | [n: (Exod. XXXII)] | Correct — Exod. 32:9–10. |
| 0350B | [n: (Jud. X)] | ⚠ The one problem. See below. |
| 0350C | [n: (Exod. XXXII)] | Correct — Exod. 32:32. |
| 0350D | [n: (Gen. XXXII)] | Correct — Gen. 32:26. |
| 0350D | [n: (ibid.)] | Correct; resolves to Gen. XXXII. Untouched (§10.2). |
| 0351A | [n: (Gen. XXXII)] | Correct — Gen. 32:29. |
| 0352B | [n: (Psal. LXXV)] | Correct — Ps. 75:2. |
| 0355D | [n: (Gen., XXVIII)] | Correct — Gen. 28:12. ⚠ Note the comma inside the parenthesis, unique in the range; reproduced. |
| 0357B | [n: (Isa. XXVIII.)] | Correct — Isa. 28:20. |
| 0357C | [n: (Isai. LVII.)] | Correct — Isa. 57:8. ⚠ Second spelling of the prophet's name in one chunk. |
| 0358A | [n: (Gen. II)] | Correct — Gen. 2:2. |
| 0358C | [n: (Jacob. III)] | Correct — James 3:2 (the [var:] is about the wording, not the reference). |
| 0359B | [n: (Heb. IV)] | Correct — Heb. 4:12. |
| 0359B | [n: (II Paral. XXIII)] | ⭐ Correct — 2 Chron. 23:11. |
⭐ The (II Paral. XXIII) row is a §8b "log the ones that are RIGHT" item and should be counted as one. Brief §8b names (II Paral. III), off by thirty-two chapters, as the range-outlier of the misnamed class. Here the same siglum family is used correctly, precisely placed on 2 Chron. 23:11. Together with cruces-0048's two correct (I Cor. II) and one correct (II Cor. IX), this further supports §8b's revised statement: no siglum in this work is systematically wrong.
⚠ The one problem, and it belongs to neither established shape. At 0350B Migne prints [n: (Jud. X)] on the clause sed obsistit Moyses, et furentem nititur refrenare — Moses's intercession, which is Exod. 32:11–14, in a paragraph whose two guilleted quotations are both from Exodus 32 and both correctly labelled (Exod. XXXII). Judges 10 has no Moses; it has Israel's idolatry and the Lord's relenting (Judg. 10:16), which is a thematic parallel at best. This is not the off-by-one-chapter profile (five of seven in cruces-0048) and not the cited-one-book/worded-another profile (three attested instances), because the clause is Philip's prose and quotes nothing. It is closest to (II Paral. III): a reference that names an unrelated place. Reproduced verbatim; nothing corrected, and no following Ibid. depends on it.
§6 · TYPOGRAPHY — the Book III/IV boundary is crossed, and there is NO SEAM
⭐ LIBER QUARTUS. at col. 0354C, at the very end of chunk 0068 — the third book boundary in this work, after LIBER SECUNDUS. (0246C) and LIBER TERTIUS. (0303A), and the first to fall inside a range since the question was closed. The brief's §7 result holds a third time:
- The chunk before the head (0068) carries one italic run and nothing else: the Cant. 3:5 lemma. No guillemets, no notes.
- The chunk after the head (0069) carries four italic runs: the Cant. 3:6 lemma, the two marginal numbers 203 and 204, and the En lectulum, cue. One
[n:], no guillemets. - Two chunks later (0070) the guillemets return in exactly their pre-boundary function — three runs, all scripture adduced as proof (Isa. 28:20, Isa. 57:8, James 3:2), identical in kind to 0067's five Exodus/Genesis runs on the far side of the head.
No change of practice at the boundary in either direction. The question is closed and this range adds a third confirming instance; nothing was tidied.
⚑ Head rendering: ## LIBER QUARTUS. → ## BOOK FOUR., matching 0047's LIBER TERTIUS. → BOOK THREE. The head stands at the end of 0068 with no text after it, exactly as the Latin chunk has it (the chunker's split, not a defect).
⚑ CAPUT numeration mirrored as printed, per brief §7a: CAPUT XXIV., CAPUT XXV., CAPUT XXVI. (numerals, with the stop) → "CHAPTER XXIV." etc.; then, after the book head, CAPUT PRIMUM. spelled in words → "CHAPTER THE FIRST." (the cruces-0042 §5.5 form), and CAPUT II., CAPUT III., CAPUT IV. back to numerals. Every head in the range carries its full stop; none was added or removed. This is the same word-then-numeral restart Migne made at Book III (0303A) and it is preserved, not regularized.
6a · ⚑ §7a mirroring — the drift point — held word by word
Migne's mixed case runs hard through this range and none of it was regularized:
- ⭐ 0354D, both cases inside ONE sentence, and the lower case is the odd one out in its own chunk: attendentes quo affectu Sponsus erga virginem teneatur, qua gratia, quo merito supra omnes virgo mulieres provehatur — capital Sponsus, then lower-case virginem AND lower-case virgo, in a chunk that capitalizes Virgo / Virginis nine times elsewhere. Rendered "the virgin" twice, "the Bridegroom" once. Do not regularize.
- ⭐ 0357A and 0357C–D, lower-case sponsus three times in a chunk that also capitalizes it: soli sponso placere nititur (0357A) · ipse sponsus per eumdem Isaiam invenitur gravius accusare (0357C) · et sponso fidem servans (0357D) — against nec communem accipit Sponsus cum adultero portionem (0357C), eleven words from the second of them. All four mirrored.
- 0348A, lower-case filius twice — certum habens Sponsum et filium, suam Dei faciem sic velare, ut non eam videat nisi cui voluerit idem filius revelare — capital Sponsum beside lower-case filium in the same phrase; and again at 0349C Sponsam matrem filio singulari quodam privilegio cohaerere. Mirrored; rendered "son" throughout, "Bridegroom" and "Bride" capitalized.
- 0356C, lower-case sancti with capital Spiritus — igne sancti Spiritus concrematur. English has no exponent for the split (it is "the holy Spirit" either way); rendered lower-case holy to mirror what is printed, and noted here rather than silently normalized. Compare cruces-0048's converse case at 0305B (Spiritus sanctus superveniet), which that range noted and did not mirror. ⚑ The merge should settle this one way for the work.
- 0353B–0354C, Sponsus / Sponsa / Virgo capitalized without exception through the whole of 0068 — sixteen instances, no lower case at all. The variation is chunk-local, which is itself the argument for mirroring rather than regularizing.
- 0354C, lower-case liber twice — secundus liber hujus operis sumpsit finem and praesenti libro — in the same paragraph that is immediately followed by the display head
LIBER QUARTUS.Rendered "the second book of this work" and "the present book", lower case, against the capitalized head.
6b · Marginal source-edition numbers
200 (0349B) · 201 (0351B) · 202 (0353A) · 203 (0353D) · 204 (0356B) · 205 (0358A) · 206 (0359D–0360A). Continuous with cruces-0048's 174–182. All italic as printed; 0068 carries none, which is normal for a 505-word chunk.
⚑ The 206 at the head of 0071 sits between the lemma and the first sentence of Philip's prose, i.e. inside the paragraph rather than at a break; reproduced in place.
§7 · CONVENTIONS SET OR HELD IN THIS RANGE
- ⭐⭐
lectulus= "little bed" vslectus= "bed" — and 0357A is the text the rule exists for. Brief §5 rules the distinction and names 0279B; this range carries the second and more explicit proof. Philip writes: quod propter et ipsa non lectus, sed lectulus meruit appellari, ut hoc diminutivo quaedam videatur ipsius angustia designari, quae ad capiendum pariter alterum non extenta… — the whole argument is that the diminutive means a bed too narrow for two, and it then runs straight into Isa. 28:20's coangustatum est stratum and Isa. 57:8's dilatasti cubile tuum. "Bed" for lectulus would delete the sentence. Rendered "little bed" at all ten body occurrences — three in 0069 (in lectulo and eumdem lectulum at 0356D, plus the En lectulum, cue), six in 0070 (the lemma, 0357A ×3, 0357C, 0357D), one in 0071 (0360B) — counted 1:1 against the Latin twins by script; and "bed" for lectus (0357A), stratum (0357B ×2) and cubile / cubili (0357C ×2). - New fixed equivalences this range had to set, offered to the merge: - transire = "to pass by" · pertransire = "to pass QUITE by", held rigidly. Caput XXIV is built on the compound: Transivi… Pertransivi… Transivi… Pertransivi… in four matched pairs, where the simple verb is the first, incomplete movement and the compound the completed one (Transivi, cum attendi vigiles factos esse. Pertransivi considerans non a seipsis…). Rendering both "pass by" would collapse the chapter's only structure. - vigiles = "the watchmen" (the Cant. 3:3 custodes, carried over from the previous range's lemma) · custodes = "the keepers" at 0357D, where the sixty fortes are meant and the word must not be confused with the watchmen of Chapter XXIV. - fortes = "valiant ones" · fortissimi = "the most valiant" · fortitudo = "valour" · firmitas = "firmness", fixed at Cant. 3:7 and held through Caput II–IV, where fortes ex fortissimis is expounded as a superlative within a class (fortes illas esse constat et praecipua fortitudine commendari). - doctissimi = "most expert" (in war) · docti = "expert" · doctrina = "doctrine" · eruditio = "learning" · scientia = "knowledge" · conscientia = "conscience" · intellectus = "understanding" — Caput III's last paragraph runs all seven against each other in four sentences (non solum docti, sed et doctissimi · scientia sine conscientia · Intellectus… non habentibus, sed facientibus intellectum), and any elegant variation dissolves the argument. - senarius = "the six" · denarius = "the ten" · sexagenarius = "the sixty", as substantives, kept apart from denarius the coin at 0358B (ipsum paterfamilias laborantibus in vinea jubet dari), where the pun is Philip's whole reason for choosing the number — rendered "that very sum" so that the English does not have to choose between the two senses. - pigmentarius = "the perfumer" · pigmenta = "pigments" · aromata = "aromatical spices" · species = "kinds", fixed at Cant. 3:6 and held through the mortariolum passage (0356B–D). - sodales = "the companions", fixed at 0353D and held to the end of the range; distinguished from amici = "friends" at 0360B, where Migne prints both together (angeli qui amici et sodales Sponsi… appellantur).
- Brief §5 vocabulary held: charitas = charity (0353A, dum charitate flagrans bonis proficientium hilarescit) kept distinct from amor / dilectio / diligere = love, which run beside it through 0348A–0350A · adolescentulae = maidens (0353D) · Sponsus = Bridegroom, Sponsa = Bride, Virgo = Virgin (with §6a's lower-case instances mirrored) · tomus, muraenula, vermiculatas, cancelli, nigra/fusca/formosa, clementia, misericordia, recti, torcular, cellaria, moralitas, candidatio do not occur in this range.
- ⚑ Pattern 3 does NOT fire anywhere in this range — recorded as a null. Grepped: no
Scriptura,Scripturae,Scripturis,divina- orsacra- form occurs in any of the six chunks. The nearest approaches are Philip's own ut legistis (0352B) and sicut nostis scriptum (0358A), which are frames, not the noun. So the bare-form hazard cruces-0042 §5.3 and cruces-0048 §4.7 flagged has nothing to bite on here; the null is reported so the eventual sweep's coverage count is complete. - Pattern 17 — checked against the morphology, not the addressee. - Plural → you: Philip's own frame throughout (ut legistis 0352B, quam nostis esse propriam electorum 0352D, sicut nostis scriptum 0358A, in nostris partibus 0351D, in nobis affectum… nobisque auditoribus 0355A), and the whole of the Cant. 3:5 lemma and its exposition, which is addressed to the filiae Hierusalem: Adjuro vos… ne suscitetis neque evigilare faciatis, and Philip's expansion non est conveniens ut velitis… nec est vobis liberum (0353D–0354A). - Singular → thou: only inside the watchmen's speech to the Virgin at 0348B — quem diligis · si vere desideras ut ejus aeque visio te confortet · non stare, non haerere, sed potius transire te oportet · transi et invenies. Every one is morphologically singular; rendered thou / thee without exception. - The Virgin's own long speech (0348C–0349A, 0351A–B) is first person throughout and takes neither.
- Philip cites his own work at 0358C, and Migne prints the title with NO italics — quia in Responsione de Obedientia aggressus sum plenius expedire, hic brevitatis gratia silentio volui praeterire. Under brief §7 italics carry book titles where Migne prints them; here he does not, and Pattern 6's rule forbids supplying a mark the plate lacks. Rendered title-cased but unitalicized: "in the Response on Obedience" (Pattern 2's locator capitalization, without the italics Pattern 2 would otherwise give). ⚑ Offered to the merge as a decision, not asserted: this is the first self-citation to appear in a range file, and if the merge prefers italics it must accept that the English then carries a mark the plate does not.
§8 · THINGS DELIBERATELY NOT REPORTED (brief §10, checked once each)
- Column-band arithmetic. ⚠ This range contains the most striking-looking instance in the work and it is brief §10.1's class, not a defect: chunk 0068 runs
0353B → 0353C → 0354A → 0354B → 0354Cwhile chunk 0069 opens at0353Dand then jumps to0354D— i.e. the two chunks interleave by band, and 0069'scolFirst(0353D) is earlier than 0068'scolLast(0354C). ItscolContext(0354C) is likewise later than itscolFirst. Checked as §10.1 requires, on the only real signal: no anchor in any of the six chunks is followed by text broken mid-word or mid-construction. 0067 opens with the lemma before its first anchor and 0068 and 0070 and 0071 likewise; all normal. No[ed:], no patch, no plate check, nothing reported. noteCountmatches the body[n:]count in all six chunks (0/7/0/1/6/0), verified by script against the Latin twins.- Attested medieval spellings left alone, unmarked (Pattern 9): tanquam, quandiu, quantumcunque, quaecunque, qualemcunque, quovis, coelum, unquam, nunquam, nonnunquam, eumdem, quemdam, Hierusalem, Judaea, Idumaea, haeredibus, charitas, spiritales, thus/thure/thuris, myrrhoe (see §2, 0069), lacrym-class forms, coena-class oe, extimo for aestimo (0354C), cherubin, seraphim, adgaudebo, subfulcitur, praeoptato, deopertam, repulsorio, mortariolo.
- No
[f:]. 11632 is lemma-and-gloss, not a florilegium (§10.4). - No
[d:], no[nt:], no[ed:]: no dittography anywhere in the range, and all fourteen notes are bare citations, none editorial prose. - Migne's own
( sic )does not occur here. - Cant. 1:12's Cum/Dum (brief §8c) does not occur in this range — the lemma has moved to Cant. 3. Recorded as a null so the merge's count over all twenty-one ranges is complete.
- Brief §6's two attested Philip readings (Zech. 4:14 splendoris, Gen. 3:19 Terra es) do not occur here. Null recorded for the same reason.
§9 · WHAT A LATER BLIND READ SHOULD LOOK AT FIRST
- ⭐⭐ 0359B, Dederunt, inquit, in manu regis tenendam legem (§1.1). If the merge decides the §8a class the other way, this is the strongest candidate in my range for a
[var:]— it carries an inquit, the divergence is a single word, and Philip glosses that word twice in the sentence before it. The check is whether in manu regis is absent from every edition of 2 Chron. 23:11 and in manu ejus is the reading; it is. - ⛔ 0351B, donec cum… intromittam (§4). The English is deliberately awkward because the Latin is; one letter (eum) makes it smooth, which is exactly why it must not be changed. The likeliest silent repair in the range.
- 0358C, the James 3:2
[var:](§3). If it is wrong it is wrong on the only marker of its kind here. The claim to test is materiality, not existence: the divergence is certain, the judgment that peccat-vs-offendit clears Pattern 14's threshold is mine, and §3 states the case both ways. - 0350A,
[sic: ama](§4.2). The one marker in the range whose class is arguable (Pattern 7'svultruncation vs Pattern 12's real-word exemption). - 0348B, quam nescit immutatio vel vicissitudinis obumbratio (§2b). The second-strongest unmarked candidate: near-verbatim James 1:17 with immutatio for transmutatio, in the watchmen's mouth, carrying nothing at all. I judged it Philip's prose because the governing relative and successurae are his; a reader who disagrees has the evidence here.
- §6a's lower-case sancti Spiritus at 0356C. The one mirroring decision in this range that another range (cruces-0048 at 0305B) answered the other way. It should be settled once for the work, and the two instances are now both on record.
Philip of Harvengt, Commentaria in Cantica canticorum, PL 203. Six chunks, 5,532 Latin words, covering Book IV, Caput V–XII: the end of the exposition of the Song's third chapter (Cant. 3:9–11, Ferculum fecit sibi rex Salomon → Egredimini, filiae Sion), then the opening of the Song's fourth chapter, Cant. 4:1–4 (Quam pulchra es amica mea → Capilli tui sicut grex caprarum → Omnes gemellis fetibus → Sicut vitta coccinea labia tua → Sicut fragmen mali Punici → Sicut turris David collum tuum).
⚑ No book head falls in this range; the chapter numeration runs CAPUT V. → CAPUT XII. continuously. ⚠ But the Song's own chapter division does fall here, printed as a bracketed locator inside the italic lemma at 0366A — [CAP. IV.] — and reproduced verbatim, after the [CANT. I.] precedent of chunk 0003 and the [CAP. III.] precedent of 0341D (cruces-0060 §6).
Marker totals for this range: 3 [var:] · 4 [sic:] · 0 [ed:] · 0 [d:] · 0 [nt:] · 0 [f:]. verify-english.mjs reports no errors on any of the six (the run's VERIFY FAILED is the 48 not-yet-translated chunks after 0077). Ratios 1.57 / 1.58 / 1.44 / 1.59 / 1.65 / 1.57 — one warning (0076 at 1.63 by the verifier's own count), inside the band this work has already shipped (0004 1.64, 0005 1.68, 0046 1.68, 0064 1.66).
Column anchors (13/10/4/10/7/11), [n:] strings (2/4/1/7/6/0 — each matching its frontmatter noteCount) and guillemet counts (2/2/0/7/6/0 pairs) were diffed 1:1 against the Latin twins by script, not by eye: anchors byte-identical in content, order and place; [n:] contents byte-identical in content and order; «/» counts equal in every chunk. No guillemet asymmetry anywhere in this range — every « has its », none stray, none unopened.
§1 · ⭐⭐ THE FINDINGS THE MERGE SHOULD CARRY FIRST
1.1 · ⭐⭐⭐ Eccles. 9:1 — the pair is reversed in SIX of the work's seven printings, and no single range could see it
This is the range's principal find and it is work-wide, not local. At 0367A Migne prints, inside Philip's own rhetorical question and under [n: (Eccle. IX.)]:
quis est, inquam, qui non sollicitus occultorum, Domino serviat in timore, timens, quia nesciens, utrum odio dignus sit an amore?
The Vulgate, Eccles. 9:1, reads nescit homo utrum amore an odio dignus sit. The pair is reversed. Taken alone that is a shrug — it is exactly the class cruces-0066 §2b logged without comment for 1 Cor. 1:24 (sapientiam et virtutem for virtutem… et sapientiam).
⭐ What makes it a finding is the tally, and the tally required grepping the whole work. Eccles. 9:1 is printed seven times in 11632:
| Chunk | Col | Printed | Order |
|---|---|---|---|
| 0029 | — | utrum odio dignus sit an amore | reversed |
| 0042 | — | utrum odio dignus sit an amore | reversed |
| 0049 | — | utrum amore an odio | Vulgate order |
| 0062 | — | utrum odio digna sit an amore | reversed |
| 0070 | 0358D | utrum odio digni sint an amore | reversed (logged by cruces-0066 §2b) |
| 0074 | 0367A | utrum odio dignus sit an amore | reversed — mine |
| 0125 | — | utrum dignus odio vel amore | reversed |
Six reversed, one Vulgate. That is precisely the shape brief §6 names for Zech. 4:14 and Gen. 3:19 and §8c for Cant. 1:12's Cum: a reading that recurs across many independent settings is copy-text or authorial memory, not a compositor. And it has the additional feature none of those have — Migne's own text contradicts itself once, at 0049, which is an internal control needing no appeal outside the work (brief §8b's preferred evidence shape).
No [var:] fired, and none should have been: at 0367A the words carry no guillemets and no italics, only the trailing [n:], so §8a's ruling governs and the boundary cannot be established. The merge should rule the class once, on all seven printings. My own view, offered and reversible: this is a §6-class attestation of Philip's Bible and belongs in that list, not a defect.
⚠ And note what it cost to see. Four ranges have now met this verse and each logged (or did not log) a single instance. The pattern is invisible from inside any one range and visible in one grep across all 126 Latin chunks.
1.2 · ⭐⭐ 1 Cor. 2:9 at 0372D — three clauses near-verbatim, the middle verb changed, and nothing marks it at all
Migne prints, as running text in Philip's own sentence:
sed quod oculus non videt, auris non sustinet, in cor hominis non ascendit, ad exponendum illud praesens locutio non intendit. (0372D)
The Vulgate, 1 Cor. 2:9, reads quod oculus non vidit, nec auris audivit, nec in cor hominis ascendit. Three clauses reproduced almost word for word, with the tense moved to the present throughout and — the point — the middle verb replaced: sustinet, "beareth", for audivit, "heard".
Why it matters. The substituted verb is the one the argument needs. Philip's whole paragraph is about incapacity to take a thing in: nos ad capiendum invalidos, si dictum ab hominibus caperetur, ad proferendum ea quae capi poterunt, quod nondum capere mortalium praevalet intellectus — four capere-words in eight lines. An ear that has not heard is a fact about history; an ear that cannot bear it is the argument. Conform the quotation and the sentence stops arguing.
It carries no guillemets, no italics AND no [n:] — invisible in all three of the extraction's channels, and therefore absent from data/quotations/11632/0072-0077.md. It reached me only on the mandatory second prose pass. Ruling applied: logged in full, [var:] NOT fired (brief §8a). The English renders what is printed: "but what the eye seeth not, the ear beareth not, what ascendeth not into the heart of man, the present speech purposes not to expound."
1.3 · ⭐⭐ Cant. 4:1–2 prints grex where the Vulgate has greges — and Philip's chapter is an argument about the singular
The head lemma of Caput VIII (0367A, before the first anchor):
Capilli tui sicut grex caprarum, quae ascenderunt de monte Galaath. Dentes tui sicut grex tonsarum quae ascenderunt de lavacro.
The Vulgate reads capilli tui sicut greges caprarum… Dentes tui sicut greges tonsarum… — plural in both clauses.
⭐ The divergent word is the one expounded, explicitly and at once:
Et signanter non capris, sed gregi caprarum capillos Virginis comparavit, in quo sedulum auditorem ad intelligendam collectionem sensuum invitavit, quia eos ab invicem vaga discursio vel furtiva dissolutio non abegit, sed in gregem casta confoederatio sub pastoris cura et baculo sic redegit… (0367D–0368A)
The chapter's whole point is that ONE flock is named, not goats at large: the gathering-together of the senses. A plural would leave collectionem sensuum arguing from nothing. [var:] FIRED, placed immediately after the lemma and covering both clauses.
⚑ Two further facts, both checkable inside the work, and both belong with it:
- The Vulgate's own parallel at Cant. 6:4–5 IS singular — capilli tui sicut grex caprarum… Dentes tui sicut grex ovium. So the 4:1–2 lemma as Migne prints it has the form of its own later parallel. The
[var:]says so; it does not speculate why (Pattern 14). - Philip glosses the teeth with ovium, the word of 6:5 and not of 4:2 — Qui dentes non incongrue gregi ovium comparantur (0368D–0369A), where his lemma had tonsarum. Recorded, unmarked.
⭐⭐ And this is an INTERNAL CONTROL on cruces-0024's marker, which should be recorded as one. That range fired a [var:] at 0244B where Migne prints « Capilli tui sicut caprarum, dentes tui sicut grex ovium [n: (Cant. VI)] » — grex dropped from the first clause — and noted that "the singular grex Philip's argument turns on is absent." The two markers are the same argument from opposite directions, sixty columns apart, and they corroborate each other: Philip's exposition depends on the singular at Cant. 4 and at Cant. 6 alike, and Migne's settings damage it once by dropping it and once by importing it. Chunk 0109 (a later range, Cant. 6:4–5 proper) prints grex twice and will need to match.
1.4 · ⭐ Luke 6:17 at 0368A prints de monte for the Vulgate's cum illis — and de monte is the proof
Migne, guillemeted:
« Descendens, ait, Jesus de monte stetit in loco campestri
[n: (Luc. VI)]. »
The Vulgate reads et descendens cum illis stetit in loco campestri. The mountain is not in the verse.
It is adduced for exactly the missing words. The two sentences before it are cum magis, sicut de campo ad montis sublimia fit ascensus, sic de monte ad campestria significatione verborum propria sit descensus; and the sentence after it, Cum igitur de monte non ascensio, sed descensio rectius dici possit. Philip is proving that one goes DOWN from a mountain, and the proof-text as the Vulgate prints it names no mountain at all. [var:] FIRED — the span is guillemeted, so a marker is available (contrast §1.2, which is not).
⚑ It is printed a second time in the work, and that strengthens it. At 0239D (chunk 0023) Philip writes in his own prose, under [n: (Luc. VI)], the Bridegroom, coming down from the mountain, stood in a plain place — the same addition, unmarked and unnoted there. Two printings puts it in the class of §6's repeated readings rather than a single slip; the merge may want it in that list. The siglum (Luc. VI) is correct for Luke 6:17.
1.5 · ⚠ (Job. II) at 0370A is wrong — and the verse it points at is a QUESTION where Migne prints a negative statement
Migne prints: « Vir, inquit, verbosus non justificabitur [n: (Job. II)]. »
The words are Job 11:2 — numquid qui multa loquitur non et audiet? aut vir verbosus iustificabitur? — the only place in the Vulgate where vir verbosus occurs.
Two separate defects, and they must be told apart:
- The siglum is wrong:
(Job. II)for Job XI. ⚑ A shape not yet in brief §8b's list: not off-by-one-chapter, and not book-cited/words-elsewhere. It is a numeral defect —IIforXI, an X lost — which is the sigla analogue of the truncation class Pattern 7 names (vulfor vult). Reproduced verbatim, corrected nowhere; no following Ibid. depends on it. - The wording carries a non the Vulgate does not print in that clause. The Vulgate's clause is an interrogative expecting the answer "no"; Migne's is a declarative with the negative supplied. The assertion is materially the same, which is why this was a close call — but §9's negation discipline is the reason it got a
[var:]: a reader who checks Job 11:2 will find no negative particle there, and the difference between "shall a wordy man be justified?" and "a wordy man shall not be justified" is exactly the kind of thing this edition exists to make visible.[var:]FIRED, naming the witness and quoting the interrogative in full so nothing is elided. ⚠ Stated so the merge can reverse it: if the merge holds that a rhetorical question and its negative answer are the same assertion (Pattern 14's sense-threshold), delete the marker and keep the log. The divergence itself is not in doubt.
§2 · THE COLLATION — all 49 listed spans, plus 22 found on the prose pass
Every span in data/quotations/11632/0072-0077.md was collated word by word against the Vulgate. Spans recorded as AGREES were collated and found to agree; the absence of a marker on them is a finding, not a silence.
0072 (cols 0360C–0363C) — 4 spans, 2 notes, 2 guillemet pairs
| Span | Verse | Verdict |
|---|---|---|
| Ferculum fecit sibi rex Salomon de lignis Libam, columnas ejus fecit argenteas, reclinatorium aureum: ascensum purpureum, media charitate constravit propter filias Hierusalem. | Cant. 3:9–10 | ⭐ [sic:] FIRED on Libam — see §4, item 1. Everything else AGREES word for word with the Vulgate, orthography apart (charitate for caritate, Hierusalem for Ierusalem, both Pattern 9). The two verses run together with no division printed. |
| candidatio, (0361A) | — | Not scripture: the etymology of Libanus, displayed as a word. Translated with the italics kept ("a whitening"), per brief §5's explicit ruling — and this is the passage that ruling was written for: see §5.2. |
« Charitas enim et vinculum perfectionis est [n: (Col. IV)]; » | Col. 3:14 | Vulg. super omnia autem haec caritatem habete, quod est vinculum perfectionis. Migne turns the relative clause into an independent sentence with enim and et ("for charity is ALSO the bond of perfection"), and vinculum perfectionis is verbatim. Recasting, not a variant reading; sense untouched. Logged, no marker. ⚠ Siglum WRONG — (Col. IV) for Col. III. Off by exactly one chapter, brief §8b's first attested shape. See §5.1. |
« operit multitudinem peccatorum [n: (I Petr. IV)]. » | 1 Pet. 4:8 | AGREES word for word (Vulg. quia caritas operit multitudinem peccatorum; Migne quotes from operit, letting the preceding Charitas serve both). ⭐ Siglum correct — a §8b "log the ones that are RIGHT" item, and worth counting because it sits eight words from a wrong one. |
Marginal source-edition numbers: 207 (0361B) · 208 (0363A).
0073 (cols 0363D–0366A) — 5 spans, 4 notes, 2 guillemet pairs
| Span | Verse | Verdict |
|---|---|---|
| Egredimini, filiae Sion, et videte regem Salomonem in diademate quo coronavit eum mater sua, in die desponsationis ejus, et in die laetitiae cordis ejus. | Cant. 3:11 | Vulg. Egredimini et videte, filiae Sion, regem Salomonem in diademate quo coronavit illum mater sua in die desponsationis illius, et in die laetitiae cordis eius. Three divergences, all sense-neutral: the vocative is moved inside the pair of imperatives, and illum/illius become eum/ejus with the same referents. Pattern 14's threshold not reached. Logged, no marker. Compare cruces-0060 §1.1, where a transposed vocative in Cant. 2:17 was likewise logged and not marked. |
Diadema Salomonis… cum novum quid Dominus fecit, et femina virum circumdedit, juxta vaticinium Jeremiae [n: (Jer. XXXI)] ([n:]-only) | Jer. 31:22 | Philip's own prose. Vulg. quia creavit Dominus novum super terram: femina circumdabit virum — Migne has fecit for creavit, drops super terram, and turns the prophetic future circumdabit into a perfect. All three changes are forced by his own cum-clause frame. No marker, per §8a. Siglum correct. ⚑ Note circumdat virum femina recurs in his own voice at 0365B, present tense — a third form of the same clause inside one chunk. |
Virgo tamen concipiens et pariens, testimonio nihilominus Isaiae [n: (Isa. VII)] ([n:]-only) | Isa. 7:14 | Philip's own prose. Vulg. ecce virgo concipiet et pariet filium; the two futures become his participles and the object is dropped. No marker. Siglum correct. |
« Videmus, ait Paulus, Jesum propter passionem mortis gloria et honore coronatum [n: (Hebr. II)]. » | Heb. 2:9 | AGREES word for word with the Vulgate's second half (…videmus Iesum propter passionem mortis gloria et honore coronatum), truncated at the opening (eum autem qui modico quam angeli minoratus est), with ait Paulus as the Pattern 5 interruption. Siglum correct. |
« Exsultavit, inquit, spiritus meus in Deo salutari meo [n: (Luc. I)]. » | Luke 1:47 | AGREES word for word (Vulg. et exsultavit spiritus meus in Deo salutari meo; the et is displaced by the interrupting inquit, the class cruces-0066 §2 recorded at Isa. 28:20). Siglum correct. |
Marginal number: 209 (0364D).
0074 (cols 0366B–0367A) — 11 spans, 1 note, 0 guillemets
| Span | Verse | Verdict |
|---|---|---|
| [CAP. IV.] Quam pulchra es amica mea, quam pulchra es, oculi tui columbarum, absque eo quod intrinsecus latet. | Cant. 4:1 | AGREES word for word. Migne's punctuation is commas where modern editions print exclamations; preserved (Pattern 8). The printed locator [CAP. IV.] stands inside the italic run and is reproduced verbatim. ⭐ amica mea = "my friend", brief §5's starred rule — see §5.1. |
| Ecce tu pulchra es, ecce tu pulchra; (0366B) | Cant. 1:14 (Vulg. 1:15) | ⚑ Vulg. Ecce tu pulchra es, amica mea, ecce tu pulchra. Migne omits amica mea — and the omission is Philip's argument, not a defect: he is quoting the earlier verse in order to contrast its opening particle with this one's, and prints the two openings stripped to what differs (ecce against quam). Truncation for the sake of the comparison. Logged, no marker. |
| Quam pulchra es, quam pulchra. · Quam pulchra es, / amica mea, quam pulchra. (0366B) | Cant. 4:1 | Re-quotations of the head lemma, the second broken around inquit (Pattern 5). AGREE. |
| ecce · quam (0366B) | — | Not quotations: words discussed AS words, brief §7's named italic class. Kept in Latin, italic, exactly as Migne prints them; the sentence they stand in is a comparison of two Latin particles and Englishing them would dissolve it. |
| Absque eo, / quod intrinsecus latet. (0366C) | Cant. 4:1 | Lemma re-quoted, broken around ait. AGREES. See §5.3 for the rendering decision. |
Quis ille est sanctorum qui absque eo quod latet, se esse glorietur… utrum odio dignus sit an amore? [n: (Eccle. IX.)] ([n:]-only) | Ps. 18:13 + Ps. 2:11 + Eccles. 9:1 | Philip's own prose — two rhetorical questions in his own voice, weaving Ps. 18:13 (delicta quis intelligit? ab occultis meis munda me), Ps. 2:11 (servite Domino in timore) and Eccles. 9:1. Every verb has been moved into his subjunctive. No marker, per §8a. Siglum correct for the last clause. ⭐⭐ But see §1.1: this is the range's principal find. |
| Capilli tui, (0367A) | Cant. 4:1b | Lemma cue for the next chapter. |
Marginal number: 210 (0366B).
0075 (cols 0367B–0369C) — 14 spans, 7 notes, 7 guillemet pairs
| Span | Verse | Verdict |
|---|---|---|
| Capilli tui sicut grex caprarum, quae ascenderunt de monte Galaath. Dentes tui sicut grex tonsarum quae ascenderunt de lavacro. | Cant. 4:1–2 | ⭐⭐ [var:] FIRED on grex — see §1.3. ⚠ Galaath for the Vulgate's Galaad: a name-form, sense untouched, no marker — but see §5.4, because Migne prints Galaad correctly at 0109 and the aspirated form is confined to this one chapter. |
« Pepigi foedus cum occulis meis [n: (Job XXXI)]; » | Job 31:1 | AGREES word for word apart from the broken occulis for oculis. ⭐ [sic:] FIRED — see §4, item 2. Siglum correct. |
« Averte, ait, oculos meos ne videant vanitatem [n: (Psal. CXVIII)]. » | Ps. 118:37 | AGREES word for word (Vulg. Averte oculos meos ne videant vanitatem), the ait interrupting after the first word. Siglum correct. |
« Respexit, inquit, humilitatem ancillae suae [n: (Luc. I)]. » | Luke 1:48 | AGREES word for word (Vulg. quia respexit humilitatem ancillae suae, the quia dropped with the frame). Siglum correct. |
« Descendens, ait, Jesus de monte stetit in loco campestri [n: (Luc. VI)]. » | Luke 6:17 | ⭐ [var:] FIRED — see §1.4. Siglum correct. |
« Ascendit Moyses in montem, et fuit ibi quadraginta diebus [n: (Exod. XXIV)]. » | Exod. 24:18 | Vulg. ingressusque Moses medium nebulae ascendit in montem, et fuit ibi quadraginta diebus et quadraginta noctibus. Migne abridges at both ends and fronts the verb (Ascendit Moyses in montem); every printed word is the Vulgate's. Abridgment, not a variant. Logged, no marker. Siglum correct. |
« Descende, inquit, peccavit populus tuus [n: (Exod. XXXII)]. » | Exod. 32:7 | AGREES; truncated at the opening (Vulg. Vade, descende: peccavit populus tuus). Siglum correct. |
| acervum testimonii (0368B) | Gen. 31:47 | Verbatim Vulgate (et Iacob acervum Testimonii), displayed in italics as the interpretation of Galaath. Not marked; the italics are Migne's and are kept. |
« Fecit, inquit, mihi magna qui potens est [n: (Luc. I)]. » | Luke 1:49 | AGREES word for word (Vulg. quia fecit mihi magna qui potens est). Siglum correct. |
| Dentes, inquit, tui sicut grex tonsarum quae ascenderunt de lavacro. (0368D) | Cant. 4:2 | Re-quotation, carrying the same [var:]-worthy grex already marked at the head lemma (not re-marked; one marker per divergence, at the lemma). ⚠ Migne breaks the italics between the noun and its possessive — Dentes, inquit, tui… — see §3.1 for why the break point could not be reproduced here and how cruces-0066's stricter precedent was departed from, deliberately and with the reason. |
| Omnes gemellis, / Omnes gemellis fetibus, et sternis non est inter eas. (0369A) | Cant. 4:2b | ⭐ [sic:] FIRED on sternis for sterilis — see §4, item 3. The rest AGREES word for word. |
| Sicut vitta, (0369C) | Cant. 4:3 | Lemma cue. |
Marginal numbers: 211 (0368A) · 212 (0369C, at the very end of the chunk).
0076 (cols 0369D–0371B) — 9 spans, 6 notes, 6 guillemet pairs
| Span | Verse | Verdict |
|---|---|---|
| Sicut vitta coccinea labia tua; et eloquium tuum dulce. | Cant. 4:3a | AGREES word for word. (Migne's semicolon where modern editions print a comma; preserved.) |
« Maria conservabat, inquit, omnia haec conferens in corde suo [n: (Luc. II)]. » | Luke 2:19 | Vulg. Maria autem conservabat omnia verba haec, conferens in corde suo. ⚠ verba is dropped. The demonstrative still carries the reference and nothing in the exposition turns on the noun (Philip's next sentence is about the lips being unbarred, not about words kept). Below Pattern 14's threshold. Logged, no marker. Siglum correct. |
« Pone, inquit, Domine, ostium circumstantiae labiis meis [n: (Psal. CXL)]. » | Ps. 140:3 | AGREES word for word with the verse's second half (Vulg. Pone, Domine, custodiam ori meo, et ostium circumstantiae labiis meis); the first half is not quoted, and the vocative is displaced one place by the interrupting inquit. Siglum correct. See §5.5 for ostium circumstantiae. |
« Vae mihi, ait Isaias, quia tacui [n: (Isa. VI)]. » | Isa. 6:5 | AGREES word for word. Siglum correct. |
« Vir, inquit, verbosus non justificabitur [n: (Job. II)]. » | Job 11:2 | ⭐ [var:] FIRED, and the siglum is WRONG — see §1.5. |
| Et eloquium tuum dulce. (0370C) | Cant. 4:3a | Lemma re-quoted. AGREES. |
« Quam magna, inquiunt, multitudo dulcedinis tuae, Domine, quam abscondisti timentibus te [n: (Psal. XXX)]. » | Ps. 30:20 | AGREES word for word. ⚑ Note the plural inquiunt — the speakers are the Virgin's labia, not a person; rendered "they say". Siglum correct. |
« Propter fratres meos, ait ille, et proximos meos loquebar pacem de te [n: (Psal. CXXI)]. » | Ps. 121:8 | AGREES word for word. Siglum correct. |
| Sicut, (0371B) | Cant. 4:3b | Lemma cue. |
Marginal number: 213 (0371B).
0077 (cols 0371C–0374A) — 6 spans, 0 notes, 0 guillemets
| Span | Verse | Verdict |
|---|---|---|
| Sicut fragmen mali Punici, ita genae tuae, absque eo quod intrinsecus latet. | Cant. 4:3b | AGREES word for word. |
| Absque eo, / quod intrinsecus latet. (0372C) | Cant. 4:3b | Lemma re-quoted, broken around inquit. AGREES. ⭐ See §5.3: absque eo is glossed differently here from Caput VII, and the rendering had to serve both. |
| Sicut turris David collum tuum, quae aedificata est [0373A] cum propugnaculis. | Cant. 4:4a | AGREES word for word. ⚠ The column anchor falls inside the lemma, between est and cum; reproduced in place. |
| manu fortis, (0373B) | — | Not scripture: the etymology of David, displayed as a phrase. Translated with the italics kept ("strong of hand"), per the candidatio rule — the next clause is cujus manum inexpugnabilem, so the hand must be visible in English. |
| Mille, (0374A) | Cant. 4:4b | Lemma cue for the next chapter. |
Marginal number: 214 (0372D).
2a · The [n:]-only class — hit rate 0 of 3 on the listed spans
All three listed [n:]-only spans (0364B Diadema Salomonis… juxta vaticinium Jeremiae; 0364B Virgo tamen concipiens et pariens… testimonio Isaiae; 0367A Quis ille est sanctorum…) are Philip's own prose, by the mechanism the previous four ranges measured: he absorbs the scriptural words into his rhymed clause-endings and his own subordination, which forces a change of person, tense, mood or subject. Hit rate: zero.
Running total across the five ranges that have reported it: 0 of 86.
⛔ And, exactly as cruces-0066 said, that null is why the separate prose pass is not optional. The [n:]-only class caught nothing here; the unmarked, unnoted class caught the range's two strongest finds (§1.1's Eccles. 9:1 tally, which begins from a listed [n:]-only span but is only visible work-wide, and §1.2's 1 Cor. 2:9, which carries nothing at all) and twenty more spans below.
2b · Found ONLY on the prose pass — unmarked, unnoted, invisible to the extractor
Twenty-two scriptural weaves carrying no guillemets, no italics and no [n:]. None takes a marker (§8a); all are recorded so the merge has the population.
| Col | Printed | Source | Note |
|---|---|---|---|
| 0372D | quod oculus non videt, auris non sustinet, in cor hominis non ascendit | 1 Cor. 2:9 | ⭐⭐ §1.2 — the range's second principal find. Three clauses near-verbatim; the middle verb replaced by the word the argument needs. |
| 0371D–0372A | quo beatum [sic: lore] spondet eum qui ad petram parvulos nunc allidit | Ps. 136:9 | ⚑ Vulg. Beatus qui tenebit et allidet parvulos tuos ad petram. Near-verbatim, recast into an accusative-and-infinitive with nunc, and the sentence also carries this range's fourth [sic:] (§4, item 4). The strongest unmarked candidate after §1.2. |
| 0373A | instar vitulae quae docta est jugum diligere vel trituram | Hos. 10:11 | ⚑ Vulg. Ephraim vitula docta diligere trituram. Five of six words verbatim, with jugum added from Matt. 11:29–30 (Tollite iugum meum), which the same sentence is also weaving (onus grave… ut suave). Unnoted, unmarked. Second-strongest candidate. |
| 0365D | etsi nomine Christianus pietatis specie dealbescit, ejus tamen virtutem abnegans | 2 Tim. 3:5 | ⚑ Vulg. habentes speciem quidem pietatis, virtutem autem eius abnegantes. Both halves near-verbatim inside his own concessive; the participle is made singular to agree with Christianus. |
| 0366C | pulchra superficies, et ovina, intrinsecus autem lupi rapacitas | Matt. 7:15 | ⚑ Vulg. veniunt ad vos in vestimentis ovium, intrinsecus autem sunt lupi rapaces. intrinsecus autem lupi is verbatim; the adjective is abstracted to rapacitas to match his fraudulentia serpentina. |
| 0364D | speciosum forma prae filiis hominum intuetur | Ps. 44:3 | ⚑ Vulg. Speciosus forma prae filiis hominum — verbatim except for the case, pulled into the accusative by his own intuetur. Prose. ⚑ Compare chunk 0006, where a range fired a [var:] on a Ps. 18:6 / Ps. 44:3 fusion; here the verse stands alone and unmarked. |
| 0364C | non habere putat speciem vel decorem | Isa. 53:2 | Vulg. non est species ei, neque decor. Near-verbatim, turned into indirect statement. |
| 0361A | mons domus Domini praeparatur | Isa. 2:2 | ⚑ Vulg. erit mons domus Domini praeparatus in vertice montium — four words verbatim, the participle turned into a present passive to fit his relative clause. |
| 0361A | qui candor lucis aeternae | Wisd. 7:26 | Vulg. candor est enim lucis aeternae. Near-verbatim, the copula dropped. |
| 0361A | ligna cujus plantata secus aquas Siloe non arescunt | Ps. 1:3 + Isa. 8:6 | A fusion (Vulg. lignum quod plantatum est secus decursus aquarum with Isaias's aquas Siloe), so no marker on the cruces-0000 item-12 conflation precedent. |
| 0360C | cibum qui non perit, sed qui permanet | John 6:27 | ⚑ Vulg. operamini non cibum qui perit, sed qui permanet in vitam aeternam — seven words verbatim, with non moved so that it negates the perishing rather than the working, and the eternal-life tail dropped. |
| 0362A | caput suum a conturbatione hominum reclinavit | Ps. 30:21 + Matt. 8:20 | Two verses fused: the Psalm's a conturbatione hominum (verbatim) with the Gospel's ubi caput reclinet, which Philip has already used in his own voice at 0361C. |
| 0363A | cui diffusa charitas non sit necessaria superponi | Rom. 5:5 | charitas… diffusa is the epistle's word-pair, and it is the whole chapter's keyword. Prose. |
| 0360D | amaros in dulcorem precis suae farinula nos convertit · silvestri prius amaritudine | 4 Kings 4:38–41 | ⚑ An allusion with no verbatim words — Eliseus's pot of death, the herbas silvestres and the meal that takes the bitterness away. Recorded because the two halves sit eight words apart and are unmistakable, not because anything is quotable. |
| 0361A | bona cujus arbor cujus fructum nonnisi bonum facere comprobatur | Matt. 7:17–18 | Prose. |
| 0361C | cum virtute Altissimi verbum Patris Virgo permanens est enixa | Luke 1:35 | Prose. |
| 0362A | cum Petrus crepuit, Joannes resiliit, fugerunt omnes | Matt. 26:56 / John 19:25 | Prose; the note-less report of the Passion narrative. |
| 0364A | in his quae sunt retro, non est vobis diutius remanendum | Phil. 3:13 | Prose. |
| 0365D | cujus regni finis, cujus imperii terminus non habetur | Luke 1:33 | Prose. ⚠ The Latin prints one non governing both genitive phrases; the English carries one negative ("of whose kingdom the end, of whose empire the term, is not had"), deliberately not two (§9). |
| 0365D | abscondendum sub modio non putant | Matt. 5:15 | Prose. |
| 0369B | mandatum primum et secundum simile venerantur | Matt. 22:38–39 | ⚑ Vulg. Hoc est maximum et primum mandatum. Secundum autem simile est huic. Four words verbatim, collapsed into one accusative object. Prose. |
| 0369D | cum sapiens usque ad tempus taceat | Ecclus. 20:7 | ⚑ Vulg. Homo sapiens tacebit usque ad tempus. Near-verbatim, the future turned into his subjunctive. Prose. |
⚑ Also present and deliberately not tabulated, being single-word or formulaic: aures habentibus audiendi (0369D, Matt. 11:15) · quadam peccati lege (0366D, Rom. 7:23) · de virtute in virtutem, inverted to in virtutem de virtute to match de monte in montem (0368B, Ps. 83:8) · de vivis et electis lapidibus (0368C, 1 Pet. 2:4–5) · sermonem durissimum de incarnato Verbo (0368D, John 6:61) · substantiam gigantis geminam (0369B, Ps. 18:6) · velut in camino aurum purificat and quae urit nec comburit (0371A, Prov. 17:3 / Exod. 3:2) · pati oportere omnem qui pie vivere non fastidit (0372A, 2 Tim. 3:12) · ad infirma et egena mundi transitoria (0373A, Gal. 4:9) · qui omnium colla praesentium colaphizat (0373A, 2 Cor. 12:7) · impulsu ventorum sive illisione fluminum non movetur (0373B, Matt. 7:25).
⭐ One of these deserves naming: Luke 2:35 at 0372B — nec tam corpus quam animam gladius vel tribulatio transeat insuavis, against Vulg. et tuam ipsius animam pertransibit gladius. Three words of the Simeon prophecy inside a sentence about the Virgin being broken like a pomegranate, and Philip does not flag it. Unmarked, and recorded here because it is the one place in the range where an unmarked weave carries doctrinal freight.
§3 · TYPOGRAPHY — brief §7 and §7a
3.1 · ⚠ A Pattern 5 break that could NOT be reproduced at Migne's point — and the reason
At 0368D Migne prints Dentes, inquit, tui sicut grex tonsarum… — the italics broken between the noun and its possessive. cruces-0066 §2 met the same device at 0348C (Cum pertransissem, inquit, eos…) and reproduced the break exactly, on the Pattern 5 principle that the typography is a fact of the page. Here that is not available. Latin can front Dentes and defer tui; English cannot ("Teeth, he says, thy are as a flock" is not a sentence).
Rendered "Thy teeth, he says, are as a flock of the shorn…" — the inquit kept inside the printed run and at the earliest point English admits, one word later than Migne's. Logged as a departure, not smuggled: the guillemet/italic structure and the interruption are both preserved; only the break's exact index moves. ⚑ Offered to the merge as a boundary case for Pattern 5: the rule holds 1:1 for quotation MARKS; for the position of an interrupting verb inside a run it can only hold where the two languages' word orders allow.
3.2 · The marks divide by FUNCTION here exactly as brief §7 says — a fifth confirming range
- Guillemets « » carry, in all seventeen instances, scripture adduced as a proof-text (Col. 3:14, 1 Pet. 4:8, Heb. 2:9, Luke 1:47, Job 31:1, Ps. 118:37, Luke 1:48, Luke 6:17, Exod. 24:18, Exod. 32:7, Luke 1:49, Luke 2:19, Ps. 140:3, Isa. 6:5, Job 11:2, Ps. 30:20, Ps. 121:8). Never the running lemma.
- Italics
…carry the running Song lemma and its cues, the two Hebrew-name etymologies (candidatio, manu fortis), the two Latin particles discussed as words (ecce, quam), the printed locator[CAP. IV.]inside an italic lemma run, and the eight marginal source-edition numbers. - ⚑ Every
[n:]that belongs to a guillemeted span prints INSIDE the closing » — seventeen of seventeen, with no exception of the 0235B/0239B kind (the remaining three notes are the[n:]-only class and stand in running prose). Recorded as a null so the merge's count of that variation is complete. - ⚑ The
[n:]-only class here carries a note in the ordinary parenthesis form and there is no bare-locator-inside-a-run case (the 0232D/0236D shape). Null recorded.
No ( sic ) of Migne's own occurs in this range. No [ alias …] bracket occurs (brief §10.7's singleton is at 0321B and stays a singleton).
3.3 · ⚑ §7a mirroring — the drift point — held word by word
Counted against the Latin twins by script; nothing regularized in either direction.
- 0363C, three lower-case forms in one clause, in a chunk that capitalizes elsewhere: Tale quippe ferculum Salomon, sponsus sponsam, Christus Virginem sibi voluit exhibere — lower-case sponsus AND sponsam beside capital Virginem, in a chunk that prints Sponsi (0360C), Sponsus (0360C) and Sponsa (0360D) with capitals. All mirrored.
- 0360D–0362A, sponsum / sponso / sponsae lower-case six times — quia sponsum rogans · solum sponsum amplectatur · Denique sponso adhaerere · nec amare destitit sponsum sponsae intuitu morientem · 0363A sponso et sponsae colloquentibus. Against capital Sponsi convivium and idem Sponsus voluit in the same chunk. Mirrored.
- 0363D, lower-case sponsae and sponso in one clause — ne in hoc sponsae quam sponso viderentur amplius contulisse — in a chunk whose other three are capitals (Ingresso quippe Sponso, factus est Sponsus ejus, suam diu Sponsus praesentiam). Mirrored.
- 0369C, lower-case sponsum — quem sponsum et filium Virgo diligit se habere — in a chunk with three capital Sponsus and one capital Sponsa. Mirrored.
- ⭐ 0366B, lower-case virginis — et laus ista virginis alia hic particula praevenitur — the only lower-case virgo-form in the whole range, in a chunk that capitalizes Virginem twice and Virginis once. Rendered "this praise of the virgin". Do not regularize.
- ⭐⭐ The sancti Spiritus question gets a THIRD and FOURTH instance here, and both fall on cruces-0066's side. Migne prints
sancto Spiritui— lower-case adjective, capital noun — twice in chunk 0075 (0368B cura fuit sancto Spiritui disputare; 0369C non est sancto Spiritui multa cura), andsanctus … Spiritusat 0365C (quam singularem sanctus fecundare Spiritus usurpavit). All three mirrored with lower-case "holy" — "the holy Spirit" — matching cruces-0066 §6a's 0356C decision and differing from cruces-0048's 0305B, which did not mirror. ⚑ The work's tally is now: lower-case sanctus/sancti/sancto + capital Spiritus at 0356C, 0365C, 0368B, 0369C; capital Spiritus sanctus at 0305B. Four to one. That is enough for the merge to settle it, and the majority practice is mirroring. Also in this range: capital artifex Spiritus (0364C) and obumbrante Spiritu (0365B) with no adjective, and lower-case matris spiritus hilarescit (0365C) of the Virgin's own spirit — all mirrored. - ⭐ 0365D, capital
Sodales— Ideo Sodales vel angeli quibus datum fuerat… — against lower-case sodales five times elsewhere in the range (0361A, 0363C, 0365B, and twice in 0072). Rendered "the Companions" with a capital, which looks odd in English and is meant to. Mirrored, not tidied. - 0365D, lower-case filius / filio / filii — quidquid in filio carnis assumptio · ex qua idem filius voluit incarnari (0366A) · imperans filio (0360D). All rendered "son", lower case, beside capitalized "Bridegroom" and "Virgin".
CAPUTheads mirrored as printed:CAPUT V.throughCAPUT XII., all numerals, all with the full stop exceptCAPUT IX, which has none (0075's second head). ⚑ The missing stop is reproduced: the English head reads## CHAPTER IXwith no stop, against## CHAPTER VIII.eight lines above it in the same file. This is the §7a discipline applied to punctuation, and it is mechanically checkable againstheads[]in the frontmatter, which carries the same asymmetry.
3.4 · Punctuation — Pattern 8, four live cases, all preserved
- ⭐ 0366B, a full stop in mid-sentence with a lower-case word after it. Quia verba haec, ut potestis meminisse, retro sunt posita. et in secundo hujus operis libro utcunque exposita. The stop belongs nowhere and the et that follows it is lower case. Brief §5 is explicit that Migne's lower case after a misplaced stop stands. Preserved exactly: "…are set down further back. and in the second book of this work are in some fashion expounded". ⚠ This is the sentence in my range most likely to be quietly tidied by a later editor, and the tidying is one keystroke.
- 0366B, no punctuation where a sentence ends. hic vero quam ponitur, exaggeratio scilicet admirantis illic intelligitur testificatio tantum pulchritudinis ostensiva… — a new clause begins at illic with no stop, no comma, nothing. Not supplied (Pattern 8); the English runs on identically.
- 0366D, a missing comma before tamen. etsi eos intrinsecus non inficit assiduitas virulenta tamen dum tenentur in corpore… Preserved.
- 0371C, a missing comma inside a two-limbed comparison. speciosis vilia mansoriis transitoria similari — Migne prints no comma between the two pairs. Preserved: "mean things be likened to beautiful, transitory things to abiding". ⚑ mansorius is a late formation on maneo; Pattern 9, unmarked.
§4 · PATTERN 7 AND PATTERN 10 — four [sic:], and what was NOT marked
None of the four carried runs is ALSO translated in the running text (brief §8's named failure — checked word by word on a separate pass, and each content string re-verified as a verbatim substring of its Latin twin by script).
- ⭐⭐ 0360C
[sic: Libam]— Ferculum fecit sibi rex Salomon de lignis Libam. The Vulgate and every edition read Libani, and Migne's own next sentence but four prints it right: Est enim facta de lignis Libani. Libanus mons est…, followed by Libanus autem interpretatur candidatio and nine more lines on the mountain. So the lemma is a broken setting of a word the plate gets right three times within twenty words — the strongest internal control of any[sic:]in the range. Libam would be a form of libo, which cannot stand in a genitive-of-material slot; it is a non-word here and is carried untranslated. The English reads "of the wood of [sic: Libam]" and does not also say "Libanus" at that point. ⚠ A formatting decision, recorded because the merge may want it uniform: the run sits inside an already-italic lemma, so per Pattern 10 it takes no second italic marker — the tag is written[sic: Libam]with no inner asterisks, exactly as Pattern 10 prescribes for this position. The other three[sic:]in this range are in roman context and take the asterisks ([sic: occulis],[sic: lore]);[sic: sternis]is the second inside-a-lemma case and is written the same way as Libam. Two conventions in one range, and the difference is the surrounding italics, not a lapse. - 0367B
[sic: occulis]— « Pepigi foedus cum occulis meis ». A non-word, doubled c in oculis — the same doubling class cruces-0066 carried at[sic: praeccurrentes](0355D), which is the governing precedent in this work. Carried; the English reads "I made a covenant with my [sic: occulis]" and does not also say "eyes". ⚠ The word "eyes" DOES appear nine words later, in the next guillemeted quotation (Ps. 118:37 oculos meos), where the Latin prints it correctly — that is not a violation of brief §8's rule, which forbids translating the carried run, but it is exactly the shape that would look like one to a grep, so it is named here. - ⚠ 0369A
[sic: sternis]— Omnes gemellis fetibus, et sternis non est inter eas, for the Vulgate's sterilis. A judgment, and I record it as one. sternis is a real word (2nd sing. of sterno, "thou strewest") and Pattern 12 exempts "a real word that is merely wrong" — but it cannot fill this slot at all: the verb is third-person est, the subject slot wants a feminine nominative singular, and Philip's exposition supplies the word four times in twelve lines (et sterilitatis aliqua non damnetur · non capra, non ovis sterilis est inventa · hoc est esse non sterilem). It is a single changed letter yielding a word, which is the accident cruces-0066 met at[sic: ama](0350A) and cruces-0048 at[sic: signa]. If the merge reads it as Pattern 12 instead, the fix is to delete the marker and render "and thou strewest is not among them", which construes no better. Carried inside the italic lemma, no inner asterisks, per §4, item 1. - 0371D
[sic: lore]— quo beatum lore spondet eum qui ad petram parvulos nunc allidit. A non-word: lore is no form of any Latin word in this position, and the slot wants fore, the future infinitive after spondet — anl/fconfusion, the same single-letter class as cruces-0066's[sic: eomparatur](e for c) and[sic: discipliuae](u for n). The conjecture is near-certain because spondere + accusative demands an infinitive and none is otherwise present. Carried; the English reads "whereby he promises him blessed [sic: lore] who now dashes the little ones against the rock" — and the future "shall be" is not supplied, which is the point of the marker.
Rendered as printed, no marker — conjectures live HERE and not in the text
- ⛔ 0368B, invenire for invenit / invenitur. …nisi quod profectus magni capillorum, id est sensuum indicantur, ad quos relata litteralis illa contextio dignam convenientiam invenire, quae capris materialibus non videtur litteraliter convenire? The relative clause has an infinitive where a finite verb is wanted, and the sentence therefore does not close. A real word, so Pattern 12 keeps it on the English side: rendered as the anacoluthon it is — "to which that literal context, being referred, to find a worthy fitness, which does not seem literally to fit material goats?" Conjecture invenit, not supplied. ⚠ This is the sentence in my range most likely to be quietly smoothed, and the smoothing is two letters.
- 0373D, reddunt sui prominentiam conscientiam Virginis inconcussam. Two accusatives where the sense wants an ablative of means (sui prominentia). Rendered with both accusatives kept in apposition — "render the Virgin's conscience — their own jutting-forth — unshaken" — rather than silently demoted to an ablative phrase. Conjecture prominentia, not supplied.
- 0373D, varioque provectu operum, quaeque noxia longius prohibere. A second infinitive hanging on constat four clauses back, across an intervening finite verb. Rendered as printed ("and, by a manifold advance of works, keep off further whatsoever things are hurtful"), the strain left visible.
- 0369C, quarum diversa quidem et dissimilis (utpote Dei et hominis est natura), quae tamen unum Christum, personam unam constituunt in junctura. The subject slips from singular natura inside the parenthesis to plural constituunt outside it. Rendered as printed, parenthesis in place; no concord supplied.
- 0370D, at quod proferendum prius labia non obtinent vicem vittae. The gerundive is left without a governing preposition. Rendered literally ("but for that which is to be brought forth the lips do not first hold the office of a fillet"); the printed non is carried, though it makes the clause fight its own at.
- 0369D, pulsat obediens. The lips are the subject two clauses back and the Virgin is the subject here; pulsat ("knocks") reverses the agency of the manu pulsantis of the previous sentence. Rendered as printed ("she, obedient… knocks in her turn") rather than repaired to patet or a passive; the reversal is Philip's, or the plate's, and is left visible.
- 0364C, unde et diadema divisionem demens signare perhibetur. demens here is the present participle of demere, "taking away", not the adjective "mad"; but signare is then left without an object. Rendered "whence also the diadem, taking division away, is said to signify", the object not supplied.
- Attested medieval forms left alone, unmarked (Pattern 9): tanquam, nunquam, nusquam, nonnunquam, quandiu, quibuscunque, quantumcunque, eumdem, quamdam, quemvis, Hierusalem, charitas, coelum, coena-class oe, spiritalis, haeresum, Haebraeorum (0368B — the aspirated Hebraeorum, ⚑ unique in the range), Isaias/Isaiae, Moyses/Moysen, Joannes, inpraesentiarum (0372C), mansorius (0371C), aforis (0373C), praeoptato-class formations, lippitudo, gurgustium, loramentum, redimiculum, farinula, mortariolum (not in range), dulcor, tinnulus, conspicuare, subrutilare, fragrescere, tenebrescere, dealbescere, amarescere, indulcescere, inanescere, juvenescere — the -escere inchoatives are Philip's signature and are all real formations, none marked.
Negation audit (brief §9)
Every printed non / nec / neque / nisi / nihil / nil / nullus / nunquam / nusquam / nequaquam / necdum / ne / nolint in the six Latin chunks was matched against the English on a separate second pass, after the prose was drafted. The dense clusters are 0360C–0361A (cibum qui non perit · quae per se non poterant praesentari · si non Virginis interventu · nec est qui… nisi quem offerri), 0361B–0361D (non sensit vermiculum, non admisit… non est laesa… non disrupta · ut nunquam sive nusquam ex parte aliqua se inclinet · non tripodes instabiles, sed columnas · auro melius nil habetur · earum tamen nulla dilectioni potest · ut non flexa mobilitate… non discurrat, non fluctuet… non prorumpat… amplexusque amborum tertius non abrumpat — five in one period), *0362A–0362B (adversis non frangitur, tribulationis malleo non fatiscit · fugerunt omnes non ferentes · nisi cum labore, nisi conatu plurimo non venitur · non pertingit, nisi qui ascensurus · non obscuras fuligine · purpura quemquam nisi principem non vestitum — the double particle carried whole, "no one was clothed in purple save the prince" · non saltu praesumptorio), 0362C–0362D (sanguinem manu carnificis non effusum · virginei vas corporis non pertusum · non femineis, sed purpureis · lenocinia corporis non sentire · quod nulli satis est compertum · non confusa · per ascensum nonnisi purpureum · non tapetibus ex Aegypto, non florum novitate · ut in eo aliquid nusquam penitus appareret), 0363A–0363C (Nihil enim sufficiens · cui diffusa charitas non sit necessaria · non digne colligantur, si caemento charitatis non illorum media suppleantur · ne ab invicem dissiliant · non tam propter Virginem, quam propter filias · ne… non praesumerent arbitrari · cujus nulla vel modica similitudine · non diffidunt quin · quae non satis nostri similibus · alienum procul dubio non habetur · non inefficax spes · non videretur… prohibere · etsi non prorsus per omnia), 0363D–0364B (ne in hoc… viderentur · ne scilicet… velint tenebris remanere · quia non sunt ad videndum idonei · non est vobis diutius remanendum · quem suo videre nequeunt… nisi sancti), 0364C–0365A (quaevis turpia non digna Salomone · non ignominiae sed honoris, non dedecoris sed coronae · nonnisi spinas aestimat · non habere putat speciem · non solum quia Deus est · hominum debitis non tenetur · a se dividi non permittit · nulla prorsus abrumpit divisio · nescit dividi · ab honore et gloria non disjungit · Quis… non deferat, quis non dignam… faciat), 0365A–0365D (tenebras non induxit · nec alius admittitur, nullisque exterioribus patet porta · non est nostrum eloqui · qui… non meruimus introire · vix potuit vel ad modicum · noctem nescit · oculus non clarescit · Neque enim vel ista est Bersabee · nec iste est Salomon · cujus imperii terminus non habetur · non Judaeus, non Gentilis, non potest quilibet anathema · ne videantur… invidere · abscondendum sub modio non putant, non silentio contegendum), 0366A–0366D (gloria non aufertur · praesentiam non avertit · pulchritudinem non deesse · non sunt in isto vel loco vel tempore iterum exponenda · nulla inest subdola turpitudo · etsi non dealbantur foris · etsi eos intrinsecus non inficit · nonnunquam velint nolint — the polar pair carried whole · non quidquid mali… statim potest aliis apparere · nec… non solum ab evidentibus, sed a culpis quoque latentibus · non magis delicta non intelligens — two in four words · qui non sollicitus occultorum · timens, quia nesciens), 0367A (nequaquam erat sibi conscia · non nescia suorum occultorum — the double negative carried whole and NOT resolved into an affirmative · intrinsecus dedecens nihil erat), 0367A–0367D (nisi forte revocentur · ne videant vanitatem · grata caesaries jam non restat · non solum ipsum caput · si non manu apposita… restringuntur · non permittit vaga licentia), 0368A–0369A (non abegit · non auderet · nec expertis faucibus · non descendere sed ascendere — the antithesis that is the chapter's whole point, carried both times · Neque enim de ascensu caprarum cura fuit · non juga montium, sed excelsa profectuum · non suam ipsius gloriam · non solum in capillis · non litteraliter, sed spiritaliter · ne falsitatis germina… contradicant · non incongrue · non illarum quae velleris… praegravantur · nil jam superfluum), 0369A–0369C (non capra, non ovis sterilis · nulla fertilium est contenta · contentae non habentur · nec Deum propter hominem, nec propter Deum hominem aspernantur · hoc est esse non sterilem · non est sancto Spiritui multa cura), 0369D–0370D (argui non meretur · non nisi disciplinam profert · ne vel immoderato silentio · culpa non minore · nec clausa sint ad tacendum, nec ad loquendum tempore nisi congruo resolvantur — three in one clause · ne superflua loquerentur · ne licenter effluant · ne vagetur · ne haec vel tempore illicito · si tamen illius sepositae nunquam desinat reminisci · non reprehenditur, non vilescit · quod sub labiis non formatur, nec in silentio coalescit · labia non obtinent vicem vittae), 0370D–0371B (nonnisi coccineae · non coccum, sed forte lutum · quae urit nec comburit · quae luti nescia… non pallescunt · nec tamen dissoluta · amaritudinis umbram nescit), 0371C–0372D (nostra non facile capiat hebetudo · etsi nulla aestimari potest · non privilegio roboratum · neuter alteri contradicat · a minoribus maxima non discernit · qui pie vivere non fastidit · non aegrescit · si non premitur, si non frangitur · defectu lurido non pallescit · fractum vero non minuit · non depressa, non concussa · non nigredo sordet · decor alius gratiae non minoris · non dente, sed potius mente · non solum candore vel rubore · non solum opera · nonnisi virtutum collectio · non dat Virgini · non exponit · quod oculus non videt, auris non sustinet, in cor hominis non ascendit… praesens locutio non intendit — four in one sentence, §1.2 · quod adhuc absconditum non videtur · quod nondum capere… praevalet), and 0372D–0374A (non inflectit · non deflectit · a statu non excutit, nec more infirmantium scandalizat · non laesuram · non movetur · locum suum non dimittat · nec solum sibi ipsi · non indecens ornamentum · non curat · non perdurat · non* contemptibili).
No negation was dropped and none was supplied. Three places deserve naming because carrying the printed reading is what makes the English awkward, and the awkwardness is the point:
- 0367A, non nescia suorum fuerat occultorum — a double negative which English idiom would resolve into "was well aware". It is not resolved: "and yet had not been ignorant of her own hidden things", because Philip's whole antithesis is nequaquam sibi conscia against non nescia, and flattening the second destroys the pair.
- 0362B, purpura quemquam nisi principem non vestitum — nisi + non round a single accusative-and-infinitive. Rendered "that no one was clothed in purple save the prince", carrying the non in "no one" and the nisi in "save"; the alternative ("that anyone, unless the prince, was not clothed") is not English.
- 0365D, one non governing two genitive phrases — cujus regni finis, cujus imperii terminus non habetur. English wants two negatives ("no end… no bound"); only one is carried — "of whose kingdom the end, of whose empire the term, is not had" — because supplying the second would be the invented- negation half of §9's rule.
§5 · CONVENTIONS SET OR HELD IN THIS RANGE
5.1 · ⭐⭐ ferculum STAYS LATIN, italic — the biggest lexical call in this range, and it is offered to the merge with the case stated both ways
Cant. 3:9's ferculum occurs seventeen times, and only in chunks 0072 and 0073 — nowhere else in the work's 126 chunks (grepped). So no earlier range constrains it and no later range will meet it. It is mine to set, which is precisely why it is set out here for reversal.
The case for translating it. Douay reads "litter"; brief §5's candidatio ruling says italic Latin is reserved for words with no English exponent, and "litter" is an exponent.
The case for keeping it, which is what I did. Caput V is an argument that the word means a table, and it runs the noun against its own plural:
Quem lectulum dixerant, dicunt et ferculum, in quo multa Salomoni fercula deferuntur, et epulanti cibum qui non perit… opponuntur. (0360C) Est enim tanti meriti praedictum ferculum sive mensa… (0360D) …in mensam et ferculum est redacta. (0361B) velut mensa offertoria … velut a mensa propitiatoria … Mensam quippe virgineam praesentavit Salomoni … alieni vero a mensa…
"Litter" makes multa fercula deferuntur unintelligible (a litter has no courses) and makes ferculum sive mensa a non-sequitur. "Table" throws away the lemma's own word and leaves columnas, reclinatorium, ascensum — pillars, a back, an ascent — describing a piece of furniture no English "table" has. English has no word that is both, which is the muraenula test exactly (brief §5: "'chains of gold' makes seventeen paragraphs explain nothing").
So: ferculum / fercula kept in Latin, italic, everywhere — and the reader meets Philip's own gloss ferculum sive mensa four lines in, which is the gloss the plate itself supplies. ⚑ If the merge reverses this, the substitution is mechanical (17 sites, two chunks) and the crux is here.
The three companion lemma-words, fixed with it: reclinatorium = "reclining-place" (not Douay's "back"; the gloss is ubi caput suum velit aut valeat reclinare, and the root has to survive) · ascensus = "ascent"*, with gradus sive scalae = "steps or stairs" · media… constravit = "the midst he strewed", with media kept as the plural neuter Philip re-uses at 0362D (Hujus autem ferculi *media) and 0363A (in omnium… medio).
5.2 · Brief §5 vocabulary held — with two starred rules firing here
- ⭐ amica mea = "my friend" — fires at Cant. 4:1, one of the six recurrences brief §5 names. Printed three times in chunk 0074 (0366A lemma, 0366B ×2) and rendered "my friend" every time. ⭐ And this range supplies fresh confirmation of the rule from the plate: Philip's own gloss on the word is tu quae mea es amica, et secreti mei conscia comprobaris (0366B) — the sharer of the secret, which is John 15:15's quia omnia quaecumque audivi a Patre meo, nota feci vobis — the very argument brief §5 says was made from John 15:14 at Caput V of Book I. The lemma is glossed as friendship twice, ninety columns apart.
- ⭐ candidatio is TRANSLATED — and 0361A is the passage the ruling names. Libanus autem interpretatur candidatio, Christum significans, qui candor lucis aeternae. Rendered "a whitening", italics kept, and the very next word is candor → "brightness"; leaving the Latin standing would put the argument's hinge (white → Christ → the wood of the ferculum) out of an English reader's reach. ⚑ Recorded emphatically because this is where the rule pays, and a later reader who meets italic Latin here will think it a lapse.
- ⭐ lectulus = "little bed" — held at 0360C (Quem lectulum dixerant) and 0363D (nunc lectulum, nunc ferculum), continuous with cruces-0066 §7.1's ten occurrences. lectus, stratum, cubile do not occur in this range. ⚠ A drift the merge must resolve, spotted while reading the two preceding range files: cruces-0060 §5.1 fixes cubile = "couch" (Cant. 3:1's argument) and cruces-0066 §7.1 renders cubile / cubili at 0357C as "bed". Both are inside the same work, eleven columns apart, and one of them has to move. Not my range's word, reported because no one else is positioned to see both files.
- charitas = charity, kept strictly distinct from amor / dilectio / diligere = love — and 0362D–0363B is the densest test of that rule in the work so far: media charitate constravit · insertae charitatis… ornamentum · cui diffusa charitas · caemento charitatis · in omnium medio charitas · « Charitas enim et vinculum perfectionis » · quod in illorum medio poni charitas perhibetur — seven in twenty lines, against dilectionem Virginis at 0361D and si diligant et eligant diligenti diligentius adhaerere at 0363B, which is a four-fold play on diligere alone. Collapsing them would erase both.
- Sponsus = Bridegroom, Sponsa = Bride, Virgo = Virgin, subject always to §3.3's case-mirroring.
- Not in this range: tomus, muraenula, vermiculatas, cancelli, nigra / fusca / formosa, clementia, misericordia, recti, torcular, cellaria, moralitas, adolescentulae, vicus / platea. ⚑ nigredo does occur, at 0372B (non nigredo sordet interius), and is rendered "blackness" — the noun of brief §5's nigra, and deliberately not "swarthiness", which belongs to fusca.
5.3 · ⭐ absque eo quod intrinsecus latet = "without that which lieth hid within" — Douay's "besides" declined, because Philip glosses the phrase two DIFFERENT ways and one English has to serve both
The phrase is printed seven times in this range (0366A, 0366C ×2, 0366D, 0371C, 0372C ×2) and Douay renders it "besides that which lieth hid within". That would have been the natural choice. It was declined because the two chapters read it in opposite directions:
- Caput VII (0366D) reads it privatively — the Virgin has no hidden fault: cum absque eo quod intrinsecus latet Sponsus Virginem dicit esse, immunem eam non solum ab evidentibus, sed a culpis quoque latentibus probat esse.
- Caput XI (0372C) reads it as praeteritio — the Bridegroom is leaving the hidden thing unsaid: Absque eo, hoc est eo tacito quod adhuc absconditum non videtur.
"Besides" carries only the second; "apart from" carries only the second; "without" carries both, and is what the English prints at all seven sites. ⚑ Offered to the merge as a decision, not asserted — and note that whatever it settles on must work in both chapters, which is the constraint that is easy to miss when only one of them is in front of you.
5.4 · ⚠ Galaath / Galaad — an internal inconsistency in Migne, and a warning for a later range
Migne prints Galaath six times in chunk 0075 (the lemma and five re-quotations, cols 0367A–0368C) and Galaad once, at chunk 0109 — the only two places the name occurs in the work. The Vulgate has Galaad at Cant. 4:1 and at Cant. 6:4 alike.
No marker: an aspirated name-form changes nothing that is asserted, and Galaath is attested in the Old Latin tradition. But it is logged as a §8b-shaped internal control — the same setting-house prints both forms of one proper name inside one work — and the range that translates 0109 should be told, because it will meet the correct form and may take the earlier one for a defect.
5.5 · New fixed equivalences this range had to set, offered to the merge
- vitta = "fillet" (Cant. 4:3), against Douay's "lace". Caput X is entirely about a hair-band that binds and is loosed (qua capilli capitis ne licenter effluant revocantur · manu sedula tenuem vittam solvit · tanquam vittae depositio), and a "lace" binds nothing. ⚑ The companion redimiculum at 0367C is likewise "fillet" (disciplinae redimicula mox imponit) — the two words are the same object in the same argument and were deliberately not split.
- coccus / coccineus = "scarlet" · ruber / rubor / rubeus = "red / redness" · rubicundus = "ruddy" · candor / candidus = "whiteness / white" · niveus = "snowy" · lutum = "mire". Caput X and Caput XI run all six against each other (digne… non coccum, sed forte lutum potius repraesentant · rubore coccineo modeste subrutilant · foris rubeus, intus niveus · candore vel rubore), and any two collapsed dissolves a comparison.
- fragmen = "fragment" (Cant. 4:3b), with frangere / fractum / fractura = "break / broken / breaking". English happens to preserve the root here as Latin does (fragment / fracture), which is why "piece" was declined: Caput XI is built on cum frangitur · fracta vero et contrita · necdum fractum… fractum vero (four matched pairs) · pressuris et fracturis***.
- propugnacula = "bulwarks" (Cant. 4:4), held with turris = "tower", munimen / munimentum = "defence", civitas = "city".
- eloquium = "speech" · locutio = "utterance" · sermo = "word" · multiloquium = "much-speaking" · silentium = "silence". Caput X runs all five in six lines (et sermo in vacuum obscuratur, et eloquium amarescit · placet locutio temporiva, et eloquium audientibus indulcescit). ⚑ Note for the merge: chunk 0032 fired a
[var:]on the singular eloquium at Ps. 11:7 and expounded it of Peter and John; the lemma-noun here is the same word in the same work, and "speech" is what both need. - speculum = "mirror" · speculari / speculantes = "to gaze". 0363D–0364B puns the two (egressus merito efficimini filiae speculantes · proposito veluti speculo tergite maculas · hoc speculandi studio, et speculo disciplinae). English keeps the pun only half; recorded rather than forced.
- puella = "girl" · juvencula = "young girl", kept clear of adolescentulae = "maidens" (brief §5), which does not occur here. 0363D–0364B and 0370B and 0371C are the sites.
- officina = "workshop" (0364B reprehensibilis officinae, 0370C natalem deserit officinam) — the same metaphor twice, six columns apart.
- drama = "drama" (0372D, quos in hujus dramatis auditorium introducam). ⚑ Recorded because it is Philip's own name for the Song, and I have not seen it in an earlier range file; the merge may want it in the work's vocabulary.
- agon = "contest" (0364C ×2), conversatio = "conversation" (0372A), discussa conscientia = "conscience sifted" — the last held from cruces-0060's discussio = "sifting".
5.6 · Pattern 3 — fires three times in this range, all in chunk 0077, and two of them on a BARE form
- 0373D, bare genitive plural Scripturarum — praecepta vel monita Scripturarum. Rendered "the precepts or admonitions of Holy Scripture".
- 0373D, bare genitive plural Scripturarum again — Scripturarum quippe subtilitas et intelligentia spiritalis. Rendered "the subtlety of Holy Scripture**".
- 0373D, Scripturae sanctae — gaudet apposito Scripturae sanctae patrocinio confortari. Rendered "the patronage of Holy Scripture".
⚑ All three inside eleven lines, and the third is the only one a sancta-matching sweep would catch. The work's bare-form tally is now: in Scripturis (0260A) · Scripturae gen. sg. (0307D, 0339B) · Scriptura nom. (0294A) · Scripturarum gen. pl. (0334C, 0373D ×2) — seven bare instances against however many adjectival ones. A sweep that matches only divina / sacra / sancta misses all seven. ⚑ And chunk 0025 has Scripturae sonat nonnunquam praedicatio, another bare genitive singular, noticed while checking the grex control and reported here because it is outside every range that has yet filed.
5.7 · Pattern 17 — checked against the morphology, not the addressee
- Plural → you: Philip's own frame to his readers (ut potestis meminisse, 0366A) and the whole of chunk 0073's exhortation, which is addressed to the filiae Sion: Egredimini… videte… Vos igitur, aiunt, quas invitamus… scitote… non est vobis diutius remanendum… volumus vos exire, vestros exeuntium pedes… Exite… exite… exite… proficite… habetote… Egredimini… purgate… tergite… impendite… obtinebitis… vobis dabitur — nineteen plural forms in one paragraph, every one rendered "you / your".
- Singular → thou: the Bridegroom to the Virgin, throughout the Cant. 4 lemmata and their expositions — Quam pulchra es… oculi tui… Quantum ait, pulchra es, quanta pulchritudine decoraris, tu quae mea es amica (0366B) · Capilli tui… Dentes tui (0367A) · labia tua; et eloquium tuum (0369C) · genae tuae… collum tuum (0371C, 0372D) · Virgo debes laudanda praedicari… Ex quo tibi digne praecipua laus daretur… tuas laudes disseram (0372C–0372D). All morphologically singular; rendered thou / thee / thy without exception.
- First person takes neither: the psalmists' and the Virgin's quoted speech (Pepigi foedus, Averte oculos meos, Exsultavit spiritus meus, Fecit mihi magna, Pone Domine, Vae mihi, loquebar pacem), and Philip's own aestimo / arbitror / video / volo.
§6 · THINGS DELIBERATELY NOT REPORTED (brief §10, checked once each)
- Column-band arithmetic. Checked as §10.1 requires, on the only real signal: no anchor in any of the six chunks is followed by text broken mid-word or mid-construction. Two anchors fall inside a scripture lemma (0373A between est and cum; and 0367A inside the
[n:]-only weave, between odio and dignus) and both are reproduced in place with the construction intact. Chunks 0074–0077 each open with the lemma before their first anchor, which is normal for this work. No[ed:], no patch, no plate check, nothing reported. noteCountmatches the body[n:]count in all six chunks (2/4/1/7/6/0), verified by script against the Latin twins.- No
[f:]. 11632 is lemma-and-gloss, not a florilegium (§10.4). - No
[d:]: no dittography anywhere in the range. ⚑ The near-miss is 0361B's mansit et permansit and 0372D's venit et pervenit / Absque eo… Absque eo — all deliberate figures of Philip's, not doubled type. - No
[nt:]: all twenty notes are bare citations, none editorial prose. - No
[ed:]: nothing in the digitization is lost. - Migne's own
( sic )does not occur here. - Cant. 1:12's Cum/Dum (brief §8c) does not occur in this range — the lemma has moved to Cant. 3:9–4:4. Recorded as a null.
- Brief §6's three attested Philip readings (Zech. 4:14 splendoris, Gen. 3:19 Terra es, Cant. 2:17 Bethel) do not occur here. Null recorded for the same reason. ⚑ But §1.1 proposes a fourth candidate for that list, on seven-printing evidence.
- The gender mismatch at 0369C (quarum diversa quidem et dissimilis… natura) is Pattern 9's no-English-exponent class: adjectives carry no gender in English, there is nothing to render either way. Logged in §4, unmarked, and flagged so a later sweep does not churn it.
§7 · WHAT A LATER BLIND READ SHOULD LOOK AT FIRST
- ⭐⭐⭐ Eccles. 9:1, six reversed printings against one (§1.1). The claim to test is arithmetical and reproducible:
grep "utrum.odio\|utrum.amore" src/latin/11632/*.md. If it holds, the class belongs in brief §6 and four range files have each logged a fragment of it. - ⭐⭐ 0372D, auris non sustinet (§1.2). The strongest §8a candidate in my range: 1 Cor. 2:9 with the verb the argument needs, and no mark of any kind. If the merge decides the §8a class the other way, this is what it fires on.
- ⭐⭐ 0367A/0367D, the grex
[var:](§1.3). The divergence is certain and the exposition's dependence on it is explicit. The judgment to test is whether citing the Vulgate's own singular at Cant. 6:4–5 inside the marker is help or speculation under Pattern 14; I judged it a statement of witness, not of cause. - 0370A, the Job 11:2
[var:](§1.5). Materiality is the question, not existence: a rhetorical question against a negative statement. §1.5 states the case both ways and says how to reverse it. - ⛔ 0368B, invenire for invenit (§4). The English is deliberately unclosable because the Latin is. The likeliest silent repair in the range, and it is two letters.
- 0369A,
[sic: sternis](§4, item 3). The one marker whose class is arguable (Pattern 7 truncation vs Pattern 12's real-word exemption), exactly as cruces-0066's[sic: ama]was. - ⭐ §5.1, ferculum left in Latin. Eighteen sites, two chunks, mechanically reversible, and the whole argument for and against is in §5.1. This is the one decision in my range that a reader will notice on the page.
- §5.2's cubile drift between cruces-0060 and cruces-0066. Not my word and not my range; reported because it is a live within-work inconsistency and the two files that carry it were both read for this batch.
§8 · FOR THE MERGE'S RUNNING COUNTS
- Sigla: 18 of 20 correct. Wrong:
(Col. IV)at 0363A for Col. III (off by exactly one chapter — brief §8b's first attested shape) and(Job. II)at 0370A for Job XI (a numeral defect, a third shape, see §1.5). Correct and worth counting because they use sigla other ranges have seen go wrong:(I Petr. IV),(Jer. XXXI),(Isa. VII),(Hebr. II),(Luc. I)×3,(Eccle. IX.),(Job XXXI),(Psal. CXVIII),(Luc. VI),(Exod. XXIV),(Exod. XXXII),(Luc. II),(Psal. CXL),(Isa. VI),(Psal. XXX),(Psal. CXXI). ⚑ Note(Job XXXI)at 0367B is correct and(Job. II)at 0370A is wrong, three columns apart — the same siglum family right once and wrong once, which is the(Psal. XCII)shape brief §8b already records. ⚑ Note also the inconsistent stop:(Job XXXI)without,(Job. II)with;(Eccle. IX.)with,(Psal. XXX)without. All reproduced. [n:]-only hit rate: 0 of 3. Running total across five reporting ranges: 0 of 86.- Unmarked/unnoted prose weaves found on the separate pass: 22 (§2b), plus eleven single-word ones named but not tabulated.
- Marginal source-edition numbers: 207 (0361B) · 208 (0363A) · 209 (0364D) · 210 (0366B) · 211 (0368A) · 212 (0369C) · 213 (0371B) · 214 (0372D). Continuous with cruces-0066's 206.
- Book/chapter structure: no
LIBERhead in this range;CAPUT V.→CAPUT XII., all numerals,CAPUT IXalone without its stop (§3.3). - Guillemet asymmetries: none. 17 pairs, all balanced. Of the 20
[n:], 17 print inside the closing » and 3 are[n:]-only (0364B ×2, 0367A).
Philip of Harvengt, Commentaria in Cantica canticorum, PL 203. Six chunks, 5,313 Latin words, covering Book IV, Caput XIII–XX — the exposition of Cant. 4:4b–4:8: Mille clypei pendent ex ea → Duo ubera tua sicut duo hinnuli → Vadam ad montem myrrhae → the alia translatio's Ibo mihi ad montem myrrhae → Tota pulchra es amica mea → Veni de Libano, Sponsa mea → Coronaberis de capite Amana, expounded twice over, first in malo (the three mountains as the wicked spirit, Caput XIX) and then interpretatione dextera (the same three as preachers and apostles, Caput XX).
No book head falls in this range. The CAPUT numeration runs XIII → XX continuously, all in numerals, all with the stop, none tidied.
Marker totals for this range: 2 [var:] · 0 [sic:] · 0 [ed:] · 0 [d:] · 0 [nt:] · 0 [f:]. verify-english.mjs reports no errors on any of the six (the run's failure is the 42 not-yet-translated chunks after 0083). One ratio warning — 0078 at 1.61 — inside the band this work has already shipped (0004 1.64, 0005 1.68, 0046 1.68, 0064 1.66). Ratios: 1.60 / 1.55 / 1.57 / 1.59 / 1.54 / 1.56.
Column anchors (8/9/10/5/9/9), [n:] strings (4/1/3/0/1/7 — each matching its frontmatter noteCount, total 16) and guillemet characters were diffed 1:1 against the Latin twins by script, not by eye: anchors byte-identical in order and place, [n:] contents byte-identical in order.
⚠ The guillemet asymmetry the extraction flagged in 0083 is real and is mirrored, not balanced: the Latin twin prints 5 « and 4 », and the English prints 5 « and 4 ». The unclosed one is the Gal. 1:16 quotation at 0385C — see §6.1. Chunks 0080 (2/2) and 0082 (1/1) are balanced; 0078, 0079, 0081 carry none.
§1 · ⭐⭐ THE TWO FINDINGS THE MERGE SHOULD CARRY FIRST
1.1 · Acts 10:13 at 0384C — Macta for the Vulgate's occide, and Philip has glossed the divergent verb in the clause before it
Migne prints, guilleted, under a correct siglum:
« Macta, inquit, et manduca [n: (Act. X)]. » (0384C)
The Vulgate, Acts 10:13, reads Surge, Petre, occide et manduca (and again at 11:7). mactare is not occidere: it is to slaughter as a sacrifice, to immolate.
Why it is material, and why the [var:] fired. The word is not incidental — Philip has just used it himself, in the sentence that introduces the quotation: cui dum offertur linteum plenum animalibus… mactare et manducare non realiter, sed mysterio mandatur spiritali. The whole point of the paragraph is that the command is not literal butchery but a spiritual mystery, and mactare, a sacrificial verb, is the word that carries it. Conform the lemma to occide and the gloss five words earlier is expounding a word that is no longer in the proof-text — precisely the 7a″ mechanism.
The span is guilleted, so unlike §8a's class its boundary is printed and a [var:] is available. Fired at 0384C: [var: Vulg. Acts 10:13 occide et manduca, "kill and eat"]
⚑ It does not elide the divergence (brief §8 warning): both Vulgate words are inside the marker, and the English renders Migne's verb as "Slay", not "kill". The marker's content is not a verbatim substring of the Latin twin (Pattern 14's [ed:] mirror test): the twin has Macta… et manduca, never occide.
1.2 · ⭐⭐ 0385A — Virgil quoted VERBATIM, adduced explicitly as an authority, with a note, and Migne prints NEITHER guillemets NOR italics. This is an INTERNAL control on brief §7.
Migne prints, as running text inside Philip's own paragraph:
Dolus, inquit, an virtus, quis in hoste requirat? [n: (Virgil. II Aeneid.)] (0385A — reproduced here without italics and without guillemets, because the plate prints neither)
It is Aeneid ii. 390, word for word (dolus an virtus, quis in hoste requirat?), with Migne's capital D and Philip's Pattern 5 inquit inserted. And Philip frames it as an adduced authority in the strongest terms available to him — apud antiquos celebri est sententia promulgatum, et, ne illud deleret oblivio, apud ethnicos litteris est mandatum — the same ethnicorum frame brief §7 records for the unmarked Sallust at 0314A.
⭐ What makes it evidence rather than one more instance: brief §7 records that Migne GUILLEMETS Virgil at 0251D (« Dii, si qua est pietas coelo »). Same poet, same work, one marked and one not. That needs no appeal to anything outside 11632 — it is the (Marc. XV) / (Matth. XXVII) shape of §8b applied to typography instead of to a siglum. The conclusion the brief already draws is confirmed a fourth time and now from the inside: there is no predictive rule to find here; there is only the plate. Nothing was tidied in either direction, and no mark was supplied.
⚑ It is also the range's only [n:]-only hit (§2a) and the only non-scriptural citation among sixteen notes.
§2 · THE COLLATION — all 47 listed spans, plus 21 found on the prose pass
Every span in data/quotations/11632/0078-0083.md was collated word by word against the Vulgate. Spans recorded as AGREES were collated and found to agree; the absence of a marker on them is a finding, not a silence.
0078 (cols 0374A–0376A) — 6 spans, 4 notes, 0 guillemets
| Span | Verse | Verdict |
|---|---|---|
| Mille clypei pendent ex ea, omnis armatura fortium. | Cant. 4:4b | AGREES word for word. |
Quod enim de femina circumdatura virum longe ante praedixit Jeremias [n: (cap. XXXI)] ([n:]-only) | Jer. 31:22 | Philip's prose. Vulg. creavit Dominus novum super terram: femina circumdabit virum. His future participle circumdatura is governed by his own praedixit. No marker. Siglum correct. |
quod de Virgine conceptura et paritura filium Isaias [n: (cap. VII)] ([n:]-only) | Isa. 7:14 | Philip's prose. Vulg. ecce virgo concipiet et pariet filium; the two future indicatives become his two future participles. No marker. Siglum correct. |
quod de porta non aperta Ezechiel [n: (cap. XLIV)] ([n:]-only) | Ezek. 44:2 | Philip's prose, and not even near-verbatim: Vulg. Porta haec clausa erit, non aperietur, where Philip writes porta non aperta. No marker. Siglum correct. |
quod de virga Aaron Moyses mirabiliter praesignavit [n: (Num. XVII)] ([n:]-only) | Num. 17:8 | Philip's prose (a bare allusion; no words of the Vulgate survive). No marker. Siglum correct. |
| Duo ubera, (0376A) | Cant. 4:5 | Lemma cue. |
Marginal source-edition number: 215 (0374B–C).
0079 (cols 0376A–0378B) — 5 spans, 1 note, 0 guillemets
| Span | Verse | Verdict |
|---|---|---|
| Duo ubera tua sicut duo hinnuli gemelli capreae qui pascuntur in liliis, donec aspiret dies, et inclinentur umbrae. | Cant. 4:5 + 4:6a | ⚑ Vulg. Duo ubera tua sicut duo hinnuli capreae gemelli, qui pascuntur in liliis — the two words are transposed, nothing else. donec aspiret dies et inclinentur umbrae is Vulg. 4:6a, correctly, and the verse is split by Philip's own chapter division, its second half becoming the Caput XV lemma. Sense untouched (Pattern 14 threshold): gemelli qualifies hinnuli either way. Logged, no marker. |
| duo (0376B) · duo, (0376B) | — | The word discussed as a word (brief §7 italic class). Not a quotation. |
Hic igitur Virgo pascit… ubi juxta prophetiam [n: (Jer. XXXI)] a minore Deus usque ad maximum cognoscetur ([n:]-only) | Jer. 31:34 | Philip's prose — but the closest call in the range. Vulg. non docebit ultra vir proximum suum… cognosce Dominum: omnes enim cognoscent me a minimo eorum usque ad maximum. Philip recasts to a passive future with Deus as object and drops eorum. ⚠ And he prints a minore, a comparative, for the Vulgate's superlative a minimo — rendered "from the lesser even to the greatest", NOT Douay's "from the least". A 7a″ trap declined. No marker (§8a: prose). Siglum correct. |
| Vadam ad montem myrrhae, et ad collem thuris. | Cant. 4:6b | AGREES word for word. |
Marginal numbers: 216 (0376A) · 217 (0377D).
0080 (cols 0378B–0380D) — 4 spans, 3 notes, 2 guillemet pairs
| Span | Verse | Verdict |
|---|---|---|
| Ibo mihi ad montem myrrhae. (0378C) | Cant. 4:6b | ⭐ Not a variant of the lemma — Migne SAYS it is another version: Unde alia translatio habet: Ibo mihi ad montem myrrhae. Philip's own apparatus, on the same footing as the [ alias …] bracket of brief §10.7: no [var:] fires, the reading is rendered as printed ("I will go for myself to the mountain of myrrh"), and the ethical dative mihi is expounded for three lines (ibo mihi, illi quidem consulere… sed et mihi) so it must not be smoothed away. Logged in full; this is the range's one alia translatio. |
« Ecce, inquit, ancilla Domini [n: (Luc. I)]. » | Luke 1:38 | AGREES word for word (the Pattern 5 inquit displacing nothing). Siglum correct. |
| Tota pulchra es amica mea, et macula non est in te. | Cant. 4:7 | AGREES word for word, Migne's comma after pulchra es apart. ⭐ amica mea = "my friend", brief §5's ruled lemma, matched — see §5.1. |
« Nemo mundus a sorde [n: (Job XV)].--Non est homo qui non peccet [n: (II Par. VI)]. » | Job (see §3) · 2 Par. 6:36 | ⭐ [var:] FIRED on the first — see §3. The second: Vulg. 2 Par. 6:36 reads si autem peccaverint tibi, neque enim est homo qui non peccet; Migne's Non est homo qui non peccet is that clause with the connective changed at the left edge, and it matches 3 Reg. 8:46 (non est enim homo qui non peccet) word for word but for enim. Nothing is asserted that neither passage asserts, and both printed negations are carried. Logged, no marker. Siglum defensible for 2 Par. 6:36. |
⚠ Two verses inside ONE guillemet run, divided by Migne's own --. Reproduced exactly, with the second note inside the closing » and the -- in place; the [var:] is placed after the closing », so nothing of ours sits inside Migne's quotation.
Marginal number: 218 (0379B).
0081 (cols 0380D–0382A) — 8 spans, 0 notes, 0 guillemets
| Span | Verse | Verdict |
|---|---|---|
| Veni de Libano, Sponsa mea, veni de Libano, veni. | Cant. 4:8a | AGREES word for word. |
| Veni, · de Libano, sponsa mea. · Veni de Libano sponsa. · Veni de Libano, · sponsa, · de Libano Sponsa, | Cant. 4:8a | Six re-quotations of the same three-word lemma, all AGREEING with the head lemma and with the Vulgate. ⭐⭐ But the capitalization of Sponsa changes under them — see §6.2, which is this range's principal §7a datum. |
| Coronaberis, (0382A) | Cant. 4:8b | Lemma cue. |
Marginal number: 219 (0380D).
0082 (cols 0382A–0384B) — 7 spans, 1 note, 1 guillemet pair
| Span | Verse | Verdict |
|---|---|---|
| Coronaberis de capite Amana, de vertice Sanir, et Hermon, de cubilibus leonum, de montibus pardorum. | Cant. 4:8b | AGREES word for word; Migne's comma after Sanir is punctuation only (Vulg. de vertice Sanir et Hermon) and is preserved. ⭐ cubile = "couch" — see §5.2. |
| dens vigilans, · avis nocturna, · fetor. · exsecratio, · anathema ejus. | — | Not quotations: the etymologies of Amana, Sanir and Hermon, italicized by Migne as words discussed as words (brief §7). All five are translated, not carried as Latin — they have clean English exponents and the whole of Caput XIX and XX is built on them. See §5.3. |
« Exsecratio autem peccatori sapientia [n: (Eccli. I)], » | Ecclus. 1:25 | Vulg. …et scientiae religiositas: exsecratio autem peccatoribus sapientia. Migne prints the dative singular peccatori for the plural peccatoribus. The surrounding exposition is about one hardened man throughout (nequam ille miserum amplius cor obdurat), so the singular is if anything the reading his argument wants; nothing turns on the number, and Pattern 14's sense threshold is not met. Logged, no marker. Siglum correct. ⚠ Migne prints the comma outside the closing » (sapientia [n:], »); reproduced as printed, not moved. |
Marginal numbers: 220 (0382B) · 221 (0384A).
0083 (cols 0384B–0386C) — 17 listed spans, 7 notes, 5 «/4 »
| Span | Verse | Verdict |
|---|---|---|
| De capite Amana, de vertice Sanir et Hermon, etc. | Cant. 4:8b | AGREES; the head-lemma cue, printed here without the comma after Sanir that 0082's full lemma carries. Both mirrored. |
| dens vigilans · avem nocturnam · exsecratio, · anathema · ejus · anathema ejus, | — | The etymologies again, and ejus discussed as a word. Not quotations. |
Dens autem vigilans, praedicator ille… linteum plenum animalibus, vel potius more viventibus animali [n: (Judae 19)] ([n:]-only) | Acts 10:11–12 + Jude 19 | Philip's prose. The sheet-and-beasts is Acts 10:11–12 narrated, not quoted; the note hangs on the single word animali, for which Jude 19's animales, Spiritum non habentes is exactly right. No marker. ⭐ Siglum correct, and it is a §8b "log the ones that are RIGHT" item: it names a book the narrative does NOT come from and is nevertheless right, because it is keyed to the word and not to the story. ⚠ It is also the only siglum in the range using an arabic verse number; reproduced. |
« Macta, inquit, et manduca [n: (Act. X)]. » | Acts 10:13 | ⭐⭐ [var:] FIRED — see §1.1. Siglum correct. |
« Peccata populi mei comedent [n: (Ose. IV)]. » | Hos. 4:8 | AGREES word for word. Siglum correct. |
Dolus, inquit, an virtus, quis in hoste requirat? [n: (Virgil. II Aeneid.)] ([n:]-only) | Aeneid ii. 390 | ⭐⭐ VERBATIM, and unmarked — see §1.2. The range's only [n:]-only hit and its only non-scriptural note. Siglum correct. No [var:] (§8a: the plate marks it as neither quotation nor lemma, so its boundary is not printed). |
« Quae mihi, ait, fuerunt lucra, haec arbitror ut stercora [n: (Philip. 3)]. » | Phil. 3:7 + 3:8 | ⚑ A fusion of two verses, every word verbatim. Vulg. 3:7 Sed quae mihi fuerunt lucra, haec arbitratus sum propter Christum detrimenta; 3:8 …et arbitror ut stercora. Migne joins 3:7's protasis to 3:8's verb, cutting the intervening clause. No marker — the cruces-0000 item-12 conflation precedent, and the same judgment cruces-0066 made on John 3:11 / 1 John 1:3. Logged. Siglum correct. ⚠ Arabic chapter numeral, second of two in the range. |
« Non acquievi, ait Paulus, carni et sanguini [n: (Galat. I)]. | Gal. 1:16 | AGREES word for word. Siglum correct. ⚠⚠ This is the UNCLOSED « — see §6.1. The extraction listed it twice, once as the head of a RUNAWAY span and once as [n:]-only; it is neither — it is a guilleted quotation whose » Migne never prints. |
| Coronaberis de capite Amana, de vertice Sanir et Hermon. (0385C) | Cant. 4:8b | AGREES. ⭐ And it is set against Philip's own counterfactual, which Migne prints UNITALICIZED: Non enim dictum est: Coronaberis de Amana, de Sanir, de Hermon, sed + the italic lemma. The whole argument is head-and-top against bare names; the italic/roman split is the argument's punctuation and is mirrored exactly — no italics supplied on the counterfactual. |
« Levavi, ait, oculos meos in montes, unde veniet auxilium mihi [n: (Psal. CXX)]. » | Ps. 120:1 | AGREES word for word. Siglum correct. |
| Coronaberis, (0386C) | Cant. 4:8b | Lemma cue. |
Marginal number: 222 (0385D).
2a · The [n:]-only class — hit rate 1 of 7, and the hit is Virgil
The extraction lists 9 [n:]-only spans. Two of the nine are not of the class at all: the Gal. 1:16 and Ps. 120:1 spans at 0385C and 0386B are guilleted, and appear as [n:]-only only because the unclosed « at 0385C threw the extractor's bracket-matching (it also emitted the intervening 700 words as a RUNAWAY). That leaves seven genuine [n:]-only spans:
- 0374C ×4 (Jeremias, Isaias, Ezechiel, Moyses) — Philip's prose, all four: each is a quod… praedixit/prophetavit/praesignavit clause governed by his own finite verb, with the scriptural words recast into participles.
- 0377C (Jer. 31:34) — Philip's prose, and the near miss of the range: the clause endings are his (docetur / cognoscetur), and he prints a minore for a minimo.
- 0384B (Jude 19 / Acts 10:11–12) — Philip's prose; the note keys a single adjective.
- 0385A (Aeneid ii. 390) — ⭐ A HIT. Verbatim, adduced as an authority, and unmarked.
Hit rate: 1 of 7. Running total across the ranges that have reported it: 1 of 90. ⚑ Two things the merge should note about this hit. First, it is the class's first positive since wave 1's Rom. 8:10 — so the class is not empty, and a null-result argument built on 83 misses would have been wrong. Second, it is not scripture, which is new: the mechanism (a quotation Migne notes but does not mark) is indifferent to what is quoted, and a [n:]-only pass that looks only for Bible verses will not see the next one either.
2b · Found ONLY on the prose pass — unmarked, unnoted, invisible to the extractor
Twenty-one scriptural weaves carrying no guillemets, no italics and no [n:]. None takes a marker (brief §8a); all are recorded so the merge has the population.
| Col | Printed | Source | Note |
|---|---|---|---|
| 0375B | Christum Dei virtutem et Dei sapientiam non inveniunt in Scriptura | 1 Cor. 1:24 | ⭐⭐ An INTERNAL CONTROL on cruces-0066 §2b, and it should be counted as one. That range recorded 0352B printing Christum Dei sapientiam et virtutem — the pair reversed and the second Dei dropped. Here the same phrase is printed in the Vulgate's own order with both Deis intact. So the 0352B form is a local recasting, not a copy-text reading of Philip's Bible: the work sets it right twenty-three columns later. Prose (governed by his non inveniunt), no marker. |
| 0375D | non quaerentibus et non interrogantibus se objecit | Rom. 10:20 / Isa. 65:1 | Vulg. Inventus sum a non quaerentibus me: palam apparui iis qui me non interrogabant. Both negations verbatim; the verb is Philip's. Prose. |
| 0375C | verbum bonum quod ipsum cor Dei Patris ineffabiliter eructavit | Ps. 44:2 | Vulg. Eructavit cor meum verbum bonum. Prose — the subject is changed from the psalmist's heart to the Father's. |
| 0375A | dies sanctificatus nobis olim caligantibus jam illuxit | liturgical (Dies sanctificatus illuxit nobis) | The Christmas gradual, not a Vulgate verse. Prose; logged because it reads like scripture and is not. |
| 0374D | nec in ea seris aut vectibus est inclusum | cf. Job 38:10 / Ps. 147:13 | Faint. Logged for completeness only. |
| 0376D | manuque sollicita a turbine et a pluvia nos abscondit | Isa. 4:6 | Vulg. …in securitatem, et absconsionem a turbine et a pluvia. Five words verbatim, inside his own clause. Prose. |
| 0376D | sanat lacte medico quidquid aspis venefica superfundit | cf. Ps. 57:5 / Deut. 32:33 | Prose. The asp returns, noted, at 0383B. |
| 0377B | candore morum et odore boni testimonii | cf. 2 Cor. 2:15 | Prose. |
| 0379C | sanctusque supervenit et obumbrans ei Spiritus dat virtutem | Luke 1:35 | Vulg. Spiritus sanctus superveniet in te, et virtus Altissimi obumbrabit tibi. All three key verbs survive, redistributed into his own clause; and the word order splits sanctus from Spiritus — see §6.3. Prose. |
| 0379D | Velle quidem adjacet, sed luctam contradictoriam experitur | Rom. 7:18 | Vulg. nam velle adiacet mihi. Two words verbatim, and the whole surrounding paragraph (0379D–0380A: the good law willed and not performed, the will knocking and the flesh resisting) is a sustained unnoted paraphrase of Rom. 7:15–23. Prose. |
| 0380A | cujus caro quieta est, nec adversus spiritum insolescit | Gal. 5:17 | Vulg. caro enim concupiscit adversus spiritum. Prose. |
| 0381C | quem filia Jephte negligens quasi devovet et deplorat | Judg. 11:37–38 | Narration, no Vulgate words. Prose. |
| 0381C | virga Jesse prudenter eligens | Isa. 11:1 | Vulg. egredietur virga de radice Jesse. Prose. |
| 0382D | cum ignavus instar bovis ad victimam ducitur, imo seducitur | Prov. 7:22 | Vulg. statim eam sequitur quasi bos ductus ad victimam. Near-verbatim, with instar for quasi and Philip's own seducitur pun. Prose. |
| 0383B | aurem quoque, instar claudit aspidis et obturat | Ps. 57:5 | Vulg. sicut aspidis surdae et obturantis aures suas. Prose. |
| 0383C | tanquam leo insidians de cubili | cf. Ps. 9:30 / Lam. 3:10 | Prose; the cubile of the lemma pulled into a scriptural image. |
| 0383D | nunc quasi leo rugiens quaerit quem devoret furiosus | 1 Pet. 5:8 | ⚑ Vulg. tamquam leo rugiens circuit quaerens quem devoret. Six words verbatim but for the finite verb; the strongest unmarked scriptural candidate in the range after §1, and the sentence Philip builds his lion/leopard antithesis on. Prose (his nunc… nunc frame and furiosus), no marker. |
| 0384A | ut lutum platearum calcat Virgo fortiter et emollit | Ps. 17:43 / Mic. 7:10 | Vulg. quasi lutum platearum delebo eos. Two words verbatim. ⭐ platea = "street", brief §5's ruled word, rendered "the mire of the streets" — see §5.4. Prose. |
| 0384D | pastor bonus, qui non dormit super nostram custodiam nec dormitat | Ps. 120:4 | ⭐ Vulg. Ecce non dormitabit neque dormiet qui custodit Israel. Both verbs present, both negations carried, the pair reversed and the tense levelled. And it is Ps. 120 — the same psalm Migne guillemets at 0386B, two columns later: one printing marked, one not, inside one chapter. Prose, no marker; logged as a small internal control of the same shape as §1.2. |
| 0385A | jam vigiles, ut aquila pullos provocat ad volandum | Deut. 32:11 | ⚑ Vulg. Sicut aquila provocans ad volandum pullos suos. Every content word verbatim, the participle turned finite. The second-strongest unmarked candidate, and it sits four lines from §1.2's Virgil, which Migne DID note — so the two classes are adjacent on one column. Prose. |
| 0385D | manente sic Joanne, Christum specialiter est secutus | John 21:19 + 21:22 | Vulg. Sic eum volo manere donec veniam + sequere me. Prose, a fusion of the two. |
| 0386A | contra spiritalia nequitiae pugnaturus | Eph. 6:12 | Vulg. adversus spiritualia nequitiae in caelestibus; spiritalia is Migne's habitual spelling (Pattern 9). Prose. |
| 0386B | cum tanquam vivos lapides Sponsus ordinet et disponat | 1 Pet. 2:5 | Vulg. et ipsi tamquam lapides vivi superaedificamini; the pair inverted inside his own accusative. Prose. |
| 0385D | quos propheta nominat optimates, capita populorum | unidentified | ⚠ Recorded as unresolved rather than guessed. Philip attributes it to "the prophet" and Migne notes nothing. optimates is Vulgate vocabulary (Num. 21:18; Nah. 3:10) but I can find no verse joining it to capita populorum, and the nearest collocation, Ps. 46:10's principes populorum, has neither word. The merge should treat this as an open identification, not as prose I have cleared. No marker either way. |
§3 · THE SECOND [var:], IN FULL — Job at 0380B
Migne prints « Nemo mundus a sorde [n: (Job XV)] » as the first half of a two-verse guilleted run introduced by De qua scriptum est.
No Vulgate verse reads thus. Job 14:4 — the verse this sentence is everywhere quoted for — reads Quis potest facere mundum de immundo conceptum semine? nonne tu qui solus es? Job 15:14, the chapter Migne's note names, reads Quid est homo ut immaculatus sit, et ut iustus appareat natus de muliere? Neither contains sordes, and neither is a nemo clause.
Fired, and here is the reasoning, stated so the merge can reverse it. The divergence is not a word but the whole shape of the sentence: a universal negative for a rhetorical question. Philip adduces it, with 2 Par. 6:36, to prove that a residual macula clings to every one of us dum hic vivimus — and a reader who checks Job 14:4 or Job 15:14 in the Vulgate will find neither the words nor the form. That is exactly the situation Pattern 14 exists for.
[var: Vulg. has no clause in this form; the nearest is Job 14:4, Quis potest facere mundum de immundo conceptum semine?]
⚠ What the marker deliberately does NOT say. Nemo mundus a sorde is the familiar medieval form of Job 14:4–5 in the Old Latin (quis enim mundus erit a sorde? nec unus, etiam si unius diei fuerit vita eius super terram), and that is almost certainly its origin. I did not put it in the marker, because I cannot collate a Vetus Latina text from anything committed to this repository, and brief §8's warning names precisely this failure — a [var:] that "quotes a Vulgate found in no edition." The marker asserts only what is checkable: that the received text has no such clause, and what its nearest verse is. The Old Latin conjecture lives here, in the crux, where it belongs.
⭐ And the note is off by exactly one chapter, which is brief §8b's first named mechanical profile: (Job XV) where the sense-verse is Job XIV. Reproduced verbatim, corrected nowhere (§10.2); no following Ibid. depends on it. See §4.
§4 · MIGNE'S SIGLA — sixteen, fifteen correct
Reproduced verbatim, none corrected (brief §10.2). Together with cruces-0066's thirteen-of-fourteen this range further supports §8b's revised statement: no siglum in this work is systematically wrong.
| Col | Printed | Verdict |
|---|---|---|
| 0374C | [n: (cap. XXXI)] | Correct — Jer. 31:22. ⚑ Note the bare cap. with no book name, because Jeremias stands in the sentence; four such in one column. |
| 0374C | [n: (cap. VII)] | Correct — Isa. 7:14. |
| 0374C | [n: (cap. XLIV)] | Correct — Ezek. 44:2. |
| 0374C | [n: (Num. XVII)] | Correct — Num. 17:8. ⚑ The book IS named here, in the same series, because Moyses is the subject and Numeri is not. |
| 0377C | [n: (Jer. XXXI)] | Correct — Jer. 31:34. |
| 0379B | [n: (Luc. I)] | Correct — Luke 1:38. |
| 0380B | [n: (Job XV)] | ⚠ The one problem — off by one chapter (§3). |
| 0380B | [n: (II Par. VI)] | Correct — 2 Par. 6:36. |
| 0383C | [n: (Eccli. I)] | Correct — Ecclus. 1:25. |
| 0384B | [n: (Judae 19)] | ⭐ Correct — Jude 19, keyed to the word animali, not to the Acts narrative it sits inside. A §8b "right one" worth logging. ⚠ Arabic verse number. |
| 0384C | [n: (Act. X)] | Correct — Acts 10:13 (the [var:] is about the wording, not the reference). |
| 0384C | [n: (Ose. IV)] | Correct — Hos. 4:8. |
| 0385A | [n: (Virgil. II Aeneid.)] | ⭐ Correct — Aeneid ii. 390. The only non-scriptural siglum in the range, and the only one naming an author. |
| 0385B | [n: (Philip. 3)] | Correct — Phil. 3:7–8. ⚠ Arabic chapter number, second of two. |
| 0385C | [n: (Galat. I)] | Correct — Gal. 1:16. |
| 0386B | [n: (Psal. CXX)] | Correct — Ps. 120:1. |
⚑ A numeral-style observation worth the merge's tally. Fourteen of sixteen sigla use Roman numerals; two use arabic — (Judae 19) and (Philip. 3) — and they sit twenty lines apart in one chunk, beside eleven Roman ones. Not a defect; recorded because a siglum-normalizing sweep would erase it.
§5 · CONVENTIONS SET OR HELD IN THIS RANGE
- ⭐
amica mea= "my friend" — HELD at Cant. 4:7, brief §5's ruled recurrence. The brief names 1:8, 2:10, 2:13, 4:1, 4:7, 5:2 and 6:3; 4:7 falls here, at 0379C, and is rendered Thou art all fair, my friend, and there is not a spot in thee. ⚑ And Philip supplies a second, unforced confirmation eight lines earlier, at 0376A: agit quod agere proprium est amici, qui pariter arbitratur quidquid de amica commendabile potest dici — masculine and feminine of the same noun in one clause, glossing the lemma before it arrives. "My love" would sever that sentence from its lemma. Rendered "friend" in both. - ⭐
cubile= "couch" — HELD from cruces-0060 §5.1, and Cant. 4:8's de cubilibus leonum is where the hold costs something. Douay renders it "from the dens of the lions", and "dens" is the natural English. But cruces-0060 fixed cubile = couch against lectulus = little bed and lectus = bed, on Isa. 57:8's dilatasti cubile tuum, and within a work there is one voice. It also turns out to be the better reading here, which is worth recording: Philip's whole apostolic exposition at 0386A is cubilia… in quibus se deponunt reges and quid nisi leo stratus in cubiculi apostolico requiescit. Kings lay themselves down; the lion lies stretched out and rests. A den is entered, a couch is lain on, and every verb in the sentence is a lying-down verb. Rendered "couches" at all five occurrences (0382A lemma, 0382B, 0383C, 0383D, 0386B) — and lectulo at 0383A, in the same chunk, keeps its ruled "little bed" (in lectulo caliginis sub lodice), so the two words stay apart exactly as brief §5 requires. cubiculum = "chamber" (0381D, 0386A). - ⭐ The three mountain etymologies are TRANSLATED, not carried as Latin, on the brief §5 candidatio principle (italic Latin is for words with no English exponent; these have clean ones, and the argument is unreadable without them). Fixed for the range and for any later recurrence: - dens vigilans = a watching tooth (Amana) — held through the praedicator… vigili… dentem mordacius exposition of 0384C. - avis nocturna / avem nocturnam = a night bird; nocturna avis at 0385C likewise. - fetor = a stench, with fetidus = "fetid" and fetoribus = "stenches", kept apart from sentina = bilge (0383A, 0385B). - exsecratio = execration, with the verb exsecratur = "execrates" and exsecrandum = "execrable" — the root is kept visible in English at all nine occurrences, because Caput XIX turns on the hardened man execrating what religion holds and Caput XX on the preacher execrating what he preaches against. "Abomination"/"curse" would break the chain. - anathema = anathema, and anathema ejus = his anathema, with the gloss anathematis anathema = "the anathema of an anathema" and separatio separationis = "the separation of separation". ⚠ ejus at 0385B is Migne's italic word-discussed-as-a-word, and is rendered as the English word it is (his) inside the italics, not carried.
- Brief §5 vocabulary held: platea = "street" (0384A, lutum platearum → "the mire of the streets"), matched to chunk 0051 and to cruces-0060 §5.2, not to Douay · Scriptura = "Holy Scripture" — see §5.5 · Sponsus = Bridegroom, Sponsa = Bride, Virgo = Virgin, with §6.2's and §6.3's lower-case instances mirrored · fortes = "the valiant" and fortitudo = "valour", held from cruces-0066 §7.2 at Cant. 4:4's omnis armatura fortium and through Caput XIII's eight re-uses · caprea = "roe" · hinnulus = "fawn", held from cruces-0060 §5.4 at Cant. 4:5 · aspirare = "to breathe" · inclinari = "to be bowed down", held from cruces-0060 §5.3: Cant. 4:6a reads "until the day breathe, and the shadows be bowed down", matching 0060 and 0061 exactly, and Philip's own dies suavior aspirabit at 0377B reads "a sweeter day shall breathe" so that the pun with exspirabit ("shall breathe its last") survives · thus/thuris = frankincense, matched to 0069 · charitas, clementia, misericordia, muraenula, vermiculatas, cancelli, nigra/fusca/formosa, recti, torcular, cellaria, adolescentulae, moralitas, candidatio, vicus, tomus do not occur in this range.
- ⚑ Pattern 3 fires SIXTEEN times in this range, and fourteen of them are on BARE forms — by a wide margin the densest cluster the work has produced, and all of it in Caput XIII, whose subject IS Holy Scripture. Recorded in full, because brief §5's ⚑ warns that a sweep matching divina / sacra / sancta would catch none of them: - accusative Scripturam (0374A) · genitive singular Scripturae (0374C Scripturae veteris, 0375B Scripturae facies, 0375C Scripturae beneficium) · genitive plural Scripturarum (0374D, 0375A ×4, 0375C) · ablative in Scriptura (0375B ×3, 0383A) · nominative Scriptura (0383A, non admittitur commonitio, non Scriptura). - All rendered "Holy Scripture", matching cruces-0060 §5.5's treatment of the bare genitives at 0334C and 0339B. The work's bare-form tally is now: in Scripturis (0260A) · Scripturae gen. sg. (0307D, 0339B, 0374C, 0375B, 0375C) · Scriptura nom. (0294A, 0383A) · Scripturarum (0334C, 0374D, 0375A ×4, 0375C) · Scripturam acc. (0374A) · in Scriptura abl. (0375B ×3, 0383A). - ⚠ ONE exception, and I flag it as a judgment. At 0374C Migne prints seriem Scripturae veteris, with Philip's own adjective. Pattern 3 names the Bible as a whole; Scriptura vetus names a part of it, and "the sequence of the old Holy Scripture" both reads badly and asserts something the Latin does not. Rendered "the old Scripture", capital S, without the fixed name. If the merge prefers uniformity it should change this one and nothing else in the list.
- Pattern 17 — checked against the morphology, not the addressee. - Singular → thou: the whole of Cant. 4:5's Duo ubera tua, Cant. 4:7's Tota pulchra es… in te, Cant. 4:8's Veni… Coronaberis, and Philip's expansion of the last, which is a sustained second-person singular address to the Virgin: Tu, ait, quae montem Libanum novo munere candidasti, quae candorem virgineum… sublimasti, veni (0381C) · ut quae gaudes… exsultes (0381D) · non ut a virginitatis proposito jam desistas, sed ut mihi largitori jungaris… et assistas · te averte… te converte… jucunderis… coroneris (0382A). Every one morphologically singular; rendered thou / thee / thy without exception, roughly thirty tokens in chunk 0081 alone. - Plural → you: exactly once, at 0380B — ut vobis verum fatear — Philip addressing his readers. Rendered "that I may confess the truth to you", inside a paragraph whose surrounding first person plural (nostri similis, dum hic vivimus, nostris oculis) is unaffected. - The Bridegroom's Vadam / Ibo mihi speech (0377D–0378C) is first person throughout and takes neither.
- New fixed equivalences this range had to set, offered to the merge: - clypeus = "shield" · scutum = "buckler", kept distinct. Migne uses the second to gloss the first at 0374D–0375A (amantibus obtulit quasi scuta. Scuti cava planities civem protegit), so a single English word would make the gloss say "she offered them shields; a shield's hollow surface…" and lose the fact that Philip has changed nouns. ⚠ This is the reverse of Douay, which gives "a thousand bucklers" at Cant. 4:4; the lemma word takes the commoner English so that the glossing word can take the rarer. - millenarius = "the thousand" · centenarius = "the hundred" · denarius = "the ten" · unitas = "unit", as substantives — the same construction cruces-0066 §7.2 fixed for senarius / denarius / sexagenarius, and the arithmetic of 0374B (ex decem unitatibus denarius, ex decem denariis centenarius… ex totidem centenariis millenarius) is unreadable if any two collapse. - affectus = "affection" · effectus = "effect", held rigidly through Caput XIV, where the two breasts ARE the pair (Ex his ergo duobus uberibus videlicet affectu et effectu) and Philip rhymes them nine times. Neither may become "feeling" or "result". - candor = "whiteness" · candidare = "to whiten" · decor = "comeliness" · pulchritudo = "beauty" · pulchra = "fair"*, fixed at Caput XVII–XVIII, where Tota pulchra es runs straight into Libanus's candor and the two must not blur (mirum in modum ipsa candidior Libanum candidaret, decoremque virgineum ipsa sui merito decoraret). This also keeps faith with brief §5's candidatio ruling — the whiteness words are Englished, never carried. - macula = "spot" at the lemma and through its whole exposition (0379C– 0380C, eleven occurrences), but "mesh" where the word is a net's: 0378B amoris tamen *maculas non evadit ("escapes not the meshes of love") and 0383D ad texendas fraudium maculas ("to the weaving of the meshes of frauds"), both governed by escape- and weave- verbs. ⚠ The split is deliberate and is logged as a judgment: Philip plays on both senses, and maculosus of the leopard (0383D, 0386A) is a third, "spotted". - vertex = "top" · summitas = "summit" · caput = "head", fixed at Cant. 4:8b, because 0385D distinguishes all three in one sentence (vertex vero, ipsius capitis summitas appellatur). - dolus = "guile" · fraus = "fraud"/"fraudulence" · virtus = "valour" (in the Virgil context) / "virtue" (elsewhere). ⚠ The last is a genuine split inside one chunk: 0385A's sola virtutis praestantia and Dolus… an virtus are military and take "valour" (matching cruces-0066's fortitudo); 0386A's virtute propria non securus is moral and takes "virtue". Logged because a mechanical check would read it as drift. - praelati = "prelates" · ordo apostolicus = "the apostolic order" · chorus apostolicus = "the apostolic choir" · optimates = "chief men", fixed at 0385D.
§6 · TYPOGRAPHY, PATTERN 7 AND PATTERN 8
6.1 · ⚠ The unclosed « at 0385C — mirrored, not balanced
Migne opens « before Non acquievi, ait Paulus, carni et sanguini [n: (Galat. I)] at 0385C and never closes it. The next » on the plate belongs to the Ps. 120:1 quotation at 0386B, roughly 470 words later. Under Pattern 5's corollary and brief §7a the asymmetry is Migne's: the English opens « at the same word and supplies no », so the twin counts match exactly at 5 « / 4 » (diffed by script).
⚑ The practical consequence, and it is what the extraction warned about. The missing » made the script treat everything to 0386B as one RUNAWAY span and re-list two real quotations as [n:]-only. Nothing inside that stretch is a quotation except the two guilleted ones at its ends — I read the whole of it as Latin, and it is continuous exposition (head/top, prelates/apostles, Peter, kings, leopards). The three unmarked weaves it does contain (John 21, 1 Pet. 2:5, Eph. 6:12) are in §2b.
6.2 · ⭐⭐ §7a's drift point: the Cant. 4:8 lemma prints Sponsa twice and sponsa three times, in ninety words
This is the range's principal mirroring datum and it is mechanically checkable against the Latin twin, which is why it is worth stating exactly:
| Col | Printed | Rendered |
|---|---|---|
| 0380D (head lemma) | Veni de Libano, Sponsa mea | "my Bride" |
| 0381C | Veni, inquit, de Libano, sponsa mea. | "my bride" |
| 0381D | Veni de Libano sponsa. | "bride" |
| 0381D | nec additur sponsa, | "bride" |
| 0381D | nec apponit, de Libano Sponsa, | "Bride" |
Five printings of one lemma word inside one chapter, capital–lower–lower–lower– capital. Do not regularize in either direction. ⚑ And note the trap: the argument of Caput XVIII is precisely that the word sponsa is dropped at the second repetition and again at the third, so a translator tidying the case is one keystroke from tidying the presence.
6.3 · §7a elsewhere in the range — mirrored word by word
- ⭐⭐ A chapter-level shift, counted rather than eyeballed. Caput XIV (0376A– 0377D) prints 14 capitals (Virgo ×8, Virginis ×4, Sponsus, Sponsi) and 3 lower case; Caput XV (0377D–0378B), the very next chapter, prints 13 tokens and NOT ONE capital (virginem ×3, virgine ×3, virginis ×2, virgini ×2, sponsus ×2, sponso). All 30 mirrored — "the Virgin"/"the Bridegroom" in XIV, "the virgin"/"the bridegroom" in XV. ⚑ And the shift begins BEFORE the chapter head, which is the part worth having: XIV's three lower-case tokens are its last three (largo virginis beneficio at 0377B, then Laudatis vero sponsae uberibus, sponsus tanquam subtrahens at 0377C), so the plate slides into the new practice across the head rather than at it. A range-level regularizer would have flattened all of this, and it is the strongest support in my range for brief §7a's "mirror per instance". (An earlier draft of this entry claimed XIV was capitalized without exception; the counts above are from a script over the twin and supersede it.)
- ⭐ 0381A–0381B, both cases inside ONE sentence: non tam locus virginem, quam locum Virgo sacrare videatur, neque virgo a monte, sed mons a virgine commendabilis habeatur — one capital among four. Mirrored.
- 0376C, lower-case filio beside capital Mater and Filio in the next clause: quos redemptos a filio velle considerat … certum habens Mater sancta redemptori Filio non placere … habet Virgo a Filio. Mirrored; "her son" then "the Son" twice.
- 0379B, capital Virgo beside lower-case mater: quanta humilitate Virgo devotissima se depressit, quae jam dicta Dei mater. Mirrored.
- 0379C, lower-case sanctus with capital Spiritus, and the two words SPLIT: sanctusque supervenit et obumbrans ei Spiritus dat virtutem. ⚑ This is a third data point on the question cruces-0066 §9.6 asked the merge to settle (cruces-0048 at 0305B Spiritus sanctus superveniet; cruces-0066 at 0356C sancti Spiritus). Here Migne prints a third arrangement again, and it is the same Luke 1:35 verse as 0305B. Rendered "the holy Spirit", lower-case holy, mirroring the plate** — the same decision cruces-0066 made, and I record it so that the merge is choosing among three attested printings and not two.
- 0379C, capital Angelus / Angeli against lower-case angelus at 0379A — Quam cum solam in conclavi… angelus inveniret (0379A) vs ad verbum Angeli (0379B) and Angelus Virgini nuntiat (0379C). Three occurrences, two capital, in fifteen lines. Mirrored.
- ⚠ 0386A and 0386A, capital Excelsi mid-sentence, twice: et Excelsi principes regionum and sunt et montes meritis Excelsi. Migne capitalizes an ordinary adjective in both. Mirrored — "the Lofty princes of the regions", "mountains Lofty in merits" — which reads oddly in English, because a capitalized adjective there looks like a proper name. Logged as the one mirroring decision in this range I would most expect a reader to query. Regularizing it is a one-line change if the merge prefers.
6.4 · Pattern 7 — real words that are merely wrong. THREE, all rendered as printed, NO [sic:]
No [sic:] fires anywhere in this range — there is no non-word type in any of the six chunks (checked word by word). All three defects below are real Latin words in the wrong slot, which Pattern 12 explicitly exempts, so the English word on the page is ours and the conjecture lives here.
- ⛔ 0384C — Post mentem vero Amana, montem Sanir Sponsus voluit nominare. The slot wants montem, and the certainty is total: the same sentence prints montem Sanir five words later, and the whole chapter is mons … mons … mons. mentem is a real word (and a c/e-family neighbour of nothing — this is o→e), so Pattern 12 keeps it on the English side. Rendered as printed: "But after the mind of Amana, the Bridegroom willed to name mount Sanir." ⚠ This is the likeliest silent repair in my range — one letter makes it smooth, and the smoothed version is what every reader expects.
- ⛔ 0374B — ut cum hostes non impetunt, non solum ad dependentes clypeos recurramus… The slot wants nos ("when the enemies assail us"), and the sentence as printed says the opposite of what the paragraph argues: one runs to shields when one IS attacked. But it is a printed negation, and brief §9 is unconditional. Rendered with the negation carried: "so that when the enemies do not assail, we may not only run back to the hanging shields…" The English is self-contradictory because the Latin is. ⚑ This is the range's one live negation-fidelity case and the second-likeliest silent repair.
- 0386A — quid nisi leo stratus in cubiculi apostolico requiescit? A genitive where the ablative cubiculo is wanted by apostolico. Pattern 9: a case mismatch has no English exponent — there is no way to render "of the chamber" that the preposition will take. Rendered "in the apostolic chamber", unmarked, and logged so a later sweep does not churn it.
Also rendered as printed, no marker, no conjecture needed: extimo for aestimo (0381D — the same form cruces-0066 §8 lists as attested) · spiritalis / spiritali / spiritalia throughout · foecibus (0383B) · nevus (0380C) · versipellis (0383D) · aucupium (0383C) · immulgere (0376C) · vermescentes (0378D) · candidatis (0377B) · tripudialiter (0377B) · superefferens (0378D) · lodice (0383A) · subsannat (0382D) — all attested medieval or classical forms, Pattern 9, no italics, no [sic:].
6.5 · Pattern 8 — punctuation. Four live cases, all preserved
- ⭐ 0384D–0385A, NO terminal stop at all, and the next word capitalized: …daretur victoria bellatori Porro apud antiquos celebri est sententia promulgatum. Migne prints nothing between bellatori and Porro. Not supplied (Pattern 8's "never supply, including a terminal stop"), so the English reads "…the victory were given to the warrior Moreover among the ancients it was published…". It is meant to look wrong.
- ⭐ 0386A, a full stop in mid-clause followed by lower case: virtute propria non securus. et de victoria non confidens. Brief §5 is explicit that Migne's lower case after a misplaced stop stands; the stop is preserved too. Rendered "not secure in his own virtue. and not trusting in victory".
- 0377D, a comma between subject and verb: Porro mons, est hujus nostrae virginis celsitudo. Preserved: "Now the mountain, is the loftiness of this our virgin."
- 0384A, a semicolon where a comma belongs, splitting a participial phrase from its main verb: et miserans quos hostilis fere malitia jam peremit; interpellat filium. Preserved.
Also preserved: 0383C's comma outside the closing » (§2, Eccli. 1:25); 0375B's missing comma before quia (armaturam utilem in Scriptura quia nescientibus); 0375B's semicolon before the main verb of the gentiles… et Judaei period (partus Virginis scandalizat; Christum Dei virtutem… non inveniunt).
6.6 · The one place I ADDED italics, declared
0375D, turris a tuendo. Migne prints Denique turris a tuendo (ut nonnulli asserunt) nominatur with no italics. The etymology is the sentence's whole content and English shares no root ("tower" / "guard"), so the two Latin words are carried, in italics, inside Migne's own parenthetical structure: "Lastly turris, a tower, is named from tuendo, guarding (as some assert)…". This is the register's carried-Latin convention (italic Latin = a word with no English exponent) applied to words we add, not to Migne's own text, so Pattern 6's never-supply rule is not engaged — but it is the only asterisk pair in the range that has no counterpart in the twin (0078 runs 6 asterisks Latin / 10 English; every other difference in the six chunks is inside a [var:]). ⚑ Declared here so the merge can strike it if it prefers cruces-0066 §7.6's stricter answer, which declined italics on Philip's self-citation at 0358C.
§7 · THINGS DELIBERATELY NOT REPORTED (brief §10, checked once each)
- Column-band arithmetic. Two chunks in this range look irregular and neither is: 0080 opens its
## CAPUT XVI.head with a bare[0378C]on its own line before any text and does the same for## CAPUT XVII.at[0379C], and 0081'scolContext(0380D) is the previous chunk'scolLast. Checked on the only real signal: no anchor in any of the six chunks is followed by text broken mid-word or mid-construction. Every chunk's lemma opens cleanly before its first anchor. No[ed:], no patch, no plate check, nothing reported. noteCountmatches the body[n:]count in all six chunks (4/1/3/0/1/7), verified by script against the Latin twins.- No
[f:]. 11632 is lemma-and-gloss, not a florilegium (§10.4). - No
[d:]: no dittography anywhere in the range. No[nt:]: all sixteen notes are bare citations, none editorial prose. No[ed:]: nothing lost. - Migne's own
( sic )does not occur here. Migne's[ alias …]bracket does not occur here (§10.7 — it is a work-wide singleton at 0321B). - Cant. 1:12's Cum/Dum (brief §8c) does not occur in this range — the lemma has moved to Cant. 4. Recorded as a null.
- Brief §6's three attested Philip readings (Zech. 4:14 splendoris, Gen. 3:19 Terra es, Cant. 2:17 Bethel) do not occur here. Nulls recorded so the merge's coverage count over twenty-one ranges is complete.
- No book boundary falls in this range, so brief §7's crossed-seam question has nothing to add from here. Recorded as a null.
§8 · WHAT A LATER BLIND READ SHOULD LOOK AT FIRST
- ⭐⭐ 0384C, the Acts 10:13
[var:](§1.1). The divergence is certain (Macta ‖ occide); the judgment that it clears Pattern 14's threshold is mine, and the case rests on Philip's own mactare et manducare five words earlier. If the marker is wrong it is wrong on materiality, not on fact. - ⭐⭐ 0385A, Virgil unmarked (§1.2). The claim to test is the internal control: that brief §7's guilleted Virgil at 0251D and this unguilleted, unitalicized one are the same author in the same work. Both columns are named.
- ⛔ 0384C, Post mentem vero Amana (§6.4.1). The likeliest silent repair in the range — one letter, and the repaired sentence is the one every reader expects. The English deliberately says "mind".
- ⛔ 0374B, cum hostes non impetunt (§6.4.2). The one negation in the range whose faithful carrying makes the sentence contradict its own paragraph. Brief §9 requires exactly that; a blind read should confirm the negation is still there.
- 0380B, the Job
[var:](§3). Test two things separately: that no Vulgate verse reads Nemo mundus a sorde (certain), and that the marker was right to name Job 14:4 as nearest rather than the Job 15 that Migne's note gives. The Old Latin conjecture is deliberately outside the marker. - 0385D, optimates, capita populorum (§2b, last row). An unresolved identification, flagged as unresolved rather than guessed. If it is a real prophetic verse I have missed it.
- §6.3's capital Excelsi at 0386A — the mirroring decision in this range most likely to read as an error to someone who has not seen the plate.
Philip of Harvengt, Commentaria in Cantica canticorum, PL 203. Six chunks, 5,756 Latin words, covering Caput XXI–XXVII of Book IV — the exposition of Cant. 4:9–14: Vulnerasti cor meum, soror mea, sponsa → In uno oculorum tuorum → Quam pulchrae sunt mammae tuae → Favus distillans labia tua → Hortus conclusus… fons signatus → Emissiones tuae paradisus malorum Punicorum → Cypri cum nardo… myrrha et aloe cum omnibus primis unguentis.
⚑ No book head falls in this range. The chunks carry only CAPUT heads, XXI → XXVII continuously, and every one carries the full stop (CAPUT XXI. … CAPUT XXVII.); the English heads reproduce it. Numerals throughout — no CAPUT PRIMUM-style spelling in this stretch.
Marker totals for this range: 2 [var:] · 1 [sic:] · 0 [ed:] · 0 [d:] · 0 [nt:] · 0 [f:]. verify-english.mjs reports no errors on any of the six (the run's VERIFY FAILED is the 36 not-yet-translated chunks after 0089). Two ratio warnings — 0085 1.64, 0088 1.62 — both inside the 1.35–1.68 band this work has already shipped. Ratios: 1.55 / 1.64 / 1.57 / 1.58 / 1.62 / 1.56.
Column anchors (10/7/12/9/3/15), [n:] strings (4/0/2/2/0/12 — each matching its frontmatter noteCount) and guillemet counts were diffed 1:1 against the Latin twins by script, not by eye: anchors byte-identical in order and place, [n:] contents byte-identical in order. Marginal source-edition numbers 223– 230 likewise verified in place.
⚠ ONE GUILLEMET ASYMMETRY, and it is Migne's: 0089 prints 10 « against 11 ». See §3a. Mirrored, never balanced.
§1 · ⭐⭐ THE THREE FINDINGS THE MERGE SHOULD CARRY
1.1 · ⭐⭐⭐ Gen. 3:19 at 0398A — brief §6's second attested reading turns up in 11632, guilleted, under a correct siglum
« Terra es, inquit, et in terram ibis
[n: (Gen. III)]. » (0398A)
The Vulgate reads pulvis es, et in pulverem reverteris. Brief §6 lists this exact divergence as one of two "already attested in his other commentary," confirmed across several agents' ranges on 11638 — evidence about Philip's copy of the Bible rather than a compositor's slip.
⭐ This is, so far as this range can tell, its first attestation inside 11632 itself, and it arrives in the strongest available shape: inside guillemets, with a correct [n: (Gen. III)], in a chain of three proof-texts Philip has assembled deliberately — Terra es et in terram ibis (Gen. 3:19), Ago poenitentiam in favilla et cinere (Job 42:6), cum sim pulvis et cinis (Gen. 18:27) — all three adduced to gloss the cinnamomum of Cant. 4:14, "quod colore, cineri similatur."
⚑ And there is a detail that makes it sharper, not weaker. The chain's theme is ash and dust, and the other two members print cinis and pulvis verbatim — so the Vulgate's own pulvis es, et in pulverem reverteris would have suited Philip's argument better than what Migne prints. He is not adapting the verse to his context; the terra reading is simply what stood in front of him. That is precisely the inference brief §6 draws from a copy-text reading, and this instance supplies it without needing an etymological exposition to carry it (as Bethel did at 0338D).
[var:] fired at the quotation, naming the witness and giving the Vulgate's whole clause; it does not speculate about origin (Pattern 14). The merge should count this as the §6 class's first cross-work attestation — the class was established on 11638 and is now confirmed in the work the brief governs.
1.2 · ⭐⭐ John 19:39 at 0399D — a near-verbatim quotation Migne marks with nothing at all, and the dropped word is the one Philip's next sentence argues from
Migne prints, as running text in Philip's own paragraph, with no guillemets, no italics and no [n:]:
Recte Nicodemus in Evangelio ferens misturam myrrhae et aloes libras centum, eodem prorsus ordine sibi conficiens hoc unguentum… (0399D)
Vulg. John 19:39: venit… ferens mixturam myrrhae et aloes, quasi libras centum. Every printed word is the Vulgate's except that the Vulgate's quasi is gone — "about a hundred pounds" has become "a hundred pounds."
⭐⭐ And that is exactly the word the exposition cannot spare. Twelve lines later Philip writes:
Quod autem misturae hujus libras centum Nicodemus legitur attulisse, innuit Christum in pondere et numero suum nobis beneficium contulisse; et quod ante fuerat… prophetatum, tandem esse certo pondere, perfecto numero consummatum. (0400A)
The whole argument is that the hundred is exact — a certain weight, a perfect number, and that exactness is what makes it a figure of the Consummatum est he quotes two sentences later. With the Vulgate's quasi the number is approximate and the inference does not run.
Ruling applied: logged in full, [var:] NOT fired (brief §8a — where Migne marks the words as neither quotation nor lemma we cannot establish the quotation's boundary, and a marker would assert a boundary the plate does not print). The English renders what is printed: "bearing a mixture of myrrh and aloes, a hundred pounds."
⚑ This is a stronger member of the §8a class than Lam. 4:20 or 2 Paral. 23:11 in one respect and weaker in another, and the merge should note both. Weaker: it carries no inquit, so Migne does not even present it as speech. Stronger: the divergence is a DELETION, and the deleted word is a hedge. The three earlier members of the class all substitute one reading for another, which a reader could in principle notice. Nothing on this page tells a reader that a qualifier has gone missing — and the argument built on its absence is four sentences long. ⛔ This is also the single most repairable place in the range: one word restores the Vulgate and silently unbuilds Philip's paragraph.
1.3 · ⭐⭐ John 12:3 at 0397B — Migne prints « unxit pedes Jesus » for the Vulgate's Jesu, and the correct genitive stands five lines later
« Sumpsit, inquit, libram unguenti nardi pystici pretiosi, et unxit pedes Jesus
[n: (Joan. XII)]. » (0397B)
Vulg. John 12:3: Maria ergo accepit libram unguenti nardi pistici pretiosi, et unxit pedes Jesu, et extersit pedes eius capillis suis.
Jesu is the genitive — "anointed the feet of Jesus." Migne's Jesus is nominative, and as printed it makes Jesus the agent of the anointing: "and Jesus anointed the feet." That is Pattern 7a's fifth mechanism — reference or agency mis-bound — and it is the mechanism no negation-aware check can see.
⭐ The control is internal and needs no appeal outside the work. Migne prints the correct genitive at 0397C, five lines later, in Philip's own gloss: ut ungant pedes Jesu, et ad caput ipsum profectu veniant ampliore. And Philip's own sentence immediately before the quotation names the true agent — et Maria Magdalena pedes Domini ungere voluit hoc unguento. So within one column the plate has the right form on either side of the wrong one, and the prose on both sides contradicts what the quotation as printed asserts.
Rendered as printed ("and Jesus anointed the feet"), which is meant to read wrong, with a [var:] naming the Vulgate's genitive and pointing at 0397C. Not a [sic:]: Jesus is a real word and Pattern 12's "real word merely wrong" clause keeps it on the English side — the same call cruces-0060 made for Incipit/accipit at 0345B and cruces-0042 for Adjuvo/Adjuro at 0299D. This is now the third instance of that shape in the work, and all three are single letters.
⚠ Also divergent in the same span, and deliberately kept out of the marker so it cannot elide the finding: Sumpsit for the Vulgate's accepit. Synonymous, and the subject Maria ergo falls away where Philip's frame plus the Pattern 5 inquit takes over — below Pattern 14's threshold. Logged here, unmarked. The [var:] names both readings but is worded so the Jesus/Jesu point is the one it asserts.
§2 · THE COLLATION — all 43 listed spans, plus 22 found on the prose pass
Every span in data/quotations/11632/0084-0089.md was collated word by word against the Vulgate. Spans recorded as AGREES were collated and found to agree; the absence of a marker on them is a finding, not a silence.
2a · Divergent — [var:] fired (2)
| Col | Ref | Migne prints | Vulgate | Note |
|---|---|---|---|---|
| 0397B | John 12:3 | « Sumpsit… et unxit pedes Jesus » | Maria ergo accepit… et unxit pedes Jesu | ⭐⭐ §1.3. Internal control: correct Jesu at 0397C. |
| 0398A | Gen. 3:19 | « Terra es, inquit, et in terram ibis » | pulvis es, et in pulverem reverteris | ⭐⭐⭐ §1.1. Brief §6's attested copy-text reading, now in 11632. |
2b · Collated and AGREEING, or abridged/transposed only — no marker
0084 (cols 0386D–0389A) — Cant. 4:9 head lemma Vulnerasti cor meum, soror mea, sponsa, vulnerasti cor meum in uno oculorum tuorum, et in uno crine colli tui — agrees word for word, and so does the re-quotation In uno oculorum tuorum opening Caput XXII at 0387D · Luke 1:45 « Et beata, ait, quae credidisti quoniam perficientur ea quae dicta sunt tibi a Domino [n: (Luc. I)]. » — agrees word for word, the ait a Pattern 5 interruption. Siglum correct · Eph. 3:17 « Habitare, inquit, Christum per fidem in cordibus vestris [n: (Ephes. III)]. » — agrees word for word. Siglum correct. ⭐ The Pattern 17 pair the merge should like sits in these two sentences: Luke's singular tibi → "to thee", Ephesians' plural vestris → "your", eight words apart, with no apparatus (§3d).
0085 (cols 0389B–0390D) — Cant. 4:10 head lemma Quam pulchrae sunt mammae tuae, soror mea sponsa: pulchriora ubera tua vino, et odor unguentorum tuorum super omnia aromata — every printed word the Vulgate's; Vulg. reads pulchriora sunt ubera tua vino and Migne drops the copula. Elision, sense untouched; logged, no marker · the re-quotation at 0389D, Et odor, inquit, unguentorum tuorum super omnia aromata — agrees, the italics broken round inquit exactly as printed. ⚠ Note the lemma prints lower-case sponsa here against capital Sponsa in 0086's lemma one column later; mirrored (§3c).
0086 (cols 0391A–0393D) — Cant. 4:11 head lemma Favus distillans labia tua Sponsa, mel et lac sub lingua tua; et odor vestimentorum tuorum, sicut odor thuris — agrees word for word. ⭐ This is brief §7's proof-text in reverse and worth recording as one: the same verse is guilleted at 0220A when adduced as a proof-text (brief §7), and printed italic here where it is the running lemma. The functional division holds exactly · Luke 1:28 « Ave, inquit, angelus, gratia plena, Dominus tecum [n: (Luc. I)]. » — agrees on every printed word; truncated before benedicta tu in mulieribus. Siglum correct. ⚠ The Pattern 5 interruption is two words, inquit, angelus, verb before subject, and it falls between Ave and gratia plena — inside the salutation. Reproduced in place · Luke 1:31 « Ecce concipies et paries filium [n: (ibid.)]. » — Vulg. Ecce concipies in utero, et paries filium, et vocabis nomen eius Iesum. ⚑ This is an INTERNAL omission, not a truncation — in utero falls out between concipies and et paries, where the tail (et vocabis…) is merely cut. Nothing in the gloss turns on it (conceptum quasi lacteum repromittit), so it is below Pattern 14's threshold. Logged, no marker — but recorded separately from the ordinary truncation class, because the two are not the same evidential shape and earlier ranges' tables do not distinguish them. The (ibid.) resolves correctly to (Luc. I); untouched.
0087 (cols 0394A–0396A) — Cant. 4:12 head lemma Hortus conclusus soror mea sponsa, hortus conclusus, fons signatus — agrees word for word, doubling included (and Philip glosses the doubling: hoc ipsum ingeminat eisdem nominibus iteratis).
0088 (cols 0396B–0396D) — Cant. 4:13a head lemma Emissiones tuae paradisus malorum Punicorum cum pomorum fructibus — agrees word for word.
0089 (cols 0397A–0400C) — Cant. 4:13b–14 head lemma Cypri cum nardo, nardus et crocus, fistula et cinnamomum cum universis lignis Libani, myrrha et aloe cum omnibus primis unguentis — agrees word for word, and so do all six re-quotations (Cypri cum nardo 0397B · nardus et crocus 0397B · Fistula… et cinnamomum 0397D · Myrrha… et aloe cum omnibus primis unguentis 0398B · myrrha et aloe cum omnibus primis unguentis 0399C · cum omnibus primis unguentis 0400B) · John 12:3b « Domus, ait, impleta est ex odore unguenti [n: (ibid.)]. » — agrees word for word; the Vulgate's leading et falls away where Philip's frame takes over. The (ibid.) resolves correctly to (Joan. XII) · ⭐ Cant. 1:11 [Vulg. 1:12] « Nardus, inquit, mea dedit odorem suum [n: (Cant. I)]. » — agrees word for word. Siglum correct. See §2e — this is the §8c Cum/Dum verse, and what it does NOT print is the datum · Job 42:6 « Ago, inquit, poenitentiam in favilla et cinere [n: (Job. XLII)]. » — agrees word for word; truncated before Idcirco ipse me reprehendo, et. Siglum correct · Gen. 18:27 « Loquar, inquit, ad Dominum meum, cum sim pulvis et cinis [n: (Gen. XVIII)]. » — agrees word for word; truncated before Quia semel, ait, coepi. ⚑ Note the Vulgate's own ait sits in the truncated head, and Migne supplies his own inquit inside the run — Pattern 5, reproduced. Siglum correct · Matt. 7:16 « A fructibus, inquit, eorum cognoscetis eos [n: (Matth. VII)]. » — agrees word for word. Siglum correct (the same words stand at 7:20) · Isa. 53:7 « Oblatus est enim quia ipse voluit [n: (Isa. LIII)]; » — Vulg. Oblatus est quia ipse voluit. Philip's own connective enim has been drawn INSIDE the guillemets. Same mechanism cruces-0060 recorded for Matt. 7:8's enim at 0345A/0345B, here running the other way; nothing is asserted that the Vulgate does not assert. Logged, no marker. Siglum correct · Rom. 5:8 « Christus pro nobis, ait, mortuus est [n: (Rom. V)]. » — agrees word for word; truncated before cum adhuc peccatores essemus. Siglum correct · John 19:30 « Consummatum est [n: (Joan. XIX)], » inquit. — agrees. Siglum correct. ⚠ The [n:] sits INSIDE the closing » while the inquit sits OUTSIDE it — the inverse of this chunk's other ten runs, and the only place in the range where an attribution verb falls outside the marks. Reproduced 1:1 (brief §7's "reproduce what is printed").
2c · The [n:]-only class — hit rate 0 of 6, and the null is real information
All six ⭐ spans were traced back to their real left edge. All six are Philip's own prose, written with scripture rather than quoting it. None takes a marker. Listed so nobody re-opens them:
- 0386D, Prov. 27:6
[n: (Prov. XXVII)]— sed gratiora, sed meliora judicantur vulnera sic amantis, quam fraudulenti oscula, et fraudes nequiter osculantis. Vulg. Meliora sunt vulnera diligentis quam fraudulenta oscula odientis. Philip has rebuilt the verse on his own rhyme (amantis / osculantis), turned fraudulenta oscula into fraudulenti oscula + a second limb fraudes nequiter osculantis of his own, and put the whole under judicantur. Philip's prose. Siglum correct. - 0388C, and it is the range's one siglum problem — see §2d.1. Bene de illa Paulus
[n: (I Cor. XIII)], prout dignum fuerat, aestimavit, quam volens commendare, perfectionis vinculum nominavit. Philip's own sentence; the only scriptural words in it are perfectionis vinculum, and those are Col. 3:14, not 1 Cor. 13. - 0394C, Col. 2:9
[n: (Coloss. II)]— …sed in eo habitat divinitatis corporaliter plenitudo. Vulg. quia in ipso inhabitat omnis plenitudo divinitatis corporaliter. The last clause is near-verbatim with omnis dropped, inhabitat → habitat, and the noun order rebuilt for the rhyme with turpitudo — but the listed span runs back thirty words into an apposition that is entirely Philip's (lignum vitae effusum oleum, flos formosus, ipse Sponsus Virginis, forma prae filiis hominum speciosus). His prose. Siglum correct. ⚑ Note Ps. 44:3 inside it, transposed: Vulg. Speciosus forma prae filiis hominum, Migne forma prae filiis hominum speciosus — his own word order, for the rhyme with formosus. Unmarked, unnoted; no marker. - 0395C, "Prov. V"
[n: (Prov. V)]— Fons autem a fundendo, ut nonnulli asserunt, nominatur… This is an etymology, not a quotation (Isidore, Etym. XIII.xxi), and Philip flags it as hearsay with ut nonnulli asserunt. ⭐ The siglum is nonetheless defensible and I record it as correct rather than wrong, because fons, cisterna and vena are all Prov. 5:15–18's words and the note points at the imagery, not at quoted words. Under §8b that is a datum on the right side of the ledger. - 0398A, Ecclus. 7:40
[n: (Eccles. VII)]— Et quoniam juxta mandatum sua semper novissima sapiens memoratur. Vulg. Ecclus. 7:40: In omnibus operibus tuis memorare novissima tua, et in aeternum non peccabis. The imperative has become a third-person present with sapiens as subject and juxta mandatum as his own frame. Philip's prose. ⚠ On the siglum, see §2d.2 — it is ambiguous rather than wrong. - 0399C, Rom. 8 + Eph. 2
[n: (Rom. VIII; Ephes. II)]— …quod adversus aeternam putretudinem, non vitio, sed natura carnalibus dat sufficiens munimentum. Entirely Philip's own sentence; not one Vulgate phrase survives. ⚑ The double siglum points at imagery in two places at once — Rom. 8's flesh/spirit and, for non vitio sed natura, Eph. 2:3's eramus natura filii irae. Correct as a pointer, quoting nothing. ⭐ Recorded because wave 1's Rom. 8:10 find sits in this same siglum's territory: here the note is a gesture, not a quotation, and a range hunting for a second Rom. 8:10 would find nothing.
Reported per brief §8a even though it is a null result. 0/6 here, against 1/12 for 0060–0065, 0/20 for 0042–0047, 0/38 for 0048–0053, 0/19 for 0018–0023 and 1/14 for 0024–0029. The class's running rate across the six ranges that have reported it is now 2 of 109.
2c′ · ⭐ Weaves the extractor could NOT list — 22 found on the mandatory prose pass
These carry no guillemets, no italics and no [n:], so they appear in the extraction in no class whatever. None takes a marker. The first four are the ones the merge should see.
- ⭐⭐ 0399D–0400A — John 19:39, and it is §1.2. The range's headline §8a-class find. Not repeated here.
- ⭐⭐ 0393A–0393B — Prov. 31:10, 19, 21, 22, four verses in three sentences, and Philip TELLS YOU he is quoting. hoc reservans illi mulieri, quam, ut alias dictum est, quis invenit, cujus procul pretium, et de ultimis finibus huc advenit… manum mittens ad fortia, laboret, tanquam sedeat in textrino… nisi quae bysso et purpura sic vestitur, ut non solum frigus non timeat… dum ornata duplicibus invenitur. Against Vulg. Prov. 31:10 Mulierem fortem quis inveniet? procul et de ultimis finibus pretium eius · 31:19 manum suam misit ad fortia · 31:21 non timebit domui suae a frigoribus nivis: omnes enim domestici eius vestiti sunt duplicibus · 31:22 byssus et purpura indumentum eius. Every italicised run above is verbatim Vulgate, recast into Philip's relative clauses. ⭐ His own ut alias dictum est announces the quotation, and Migne marks not one word of it — which puts it in exactly the class brief §8a exists for, and makes it the densest specimen this range found. No marker.
- ⭐ 0391D — Ps. 140:3, and it supplies the chapter's controlling image. sed ostio circumstantiae aperturam moderans labiorum. Vulg. Ps. 140:3: Pone, Domine, custodiam ori meo, et ostium circumstantiae labiis meis. ostium circumstantiae is a distinctive Vulgate coinage (rendering θύραν περιοχῆς) and is not Latin one writes by accident; the whole of Caput XXIV's argument about the half-open mouth is built on it — clausa parte oris, altera pars aperta six lines later. Unmarked, unnoted. No marker, but a reader who does not know Ps. 140:3 will not learn from Migne's page that it is standing behind the chapter. Same shape cruces-0060 §2c′.4 recorded for 2 Pet. 1:19 at 0345B.
- ⭐ 0395A — Rom. 7:25. Nos enim etsi mente servimus per gratiam legi Dei, carne tamen per legem insitam aliquantulum sumus rei. Vulg. igitur ego ipse mente servio legi Dei: carne autem, legi peccati. Verbatim but for the person, with legi peccati replaced by his own per legem insitam… rei. Philip's prose, no marker — recorded because it is the same Pauline flesh/spirit territory as wave 1's Rom. 8:10.
The remaining eighteen, checked for silent conformation and left as Philip's own prose (none marked, none conformed): 0084 — Ps. 17:35 (Manus enim docta ad praelium, 0386D) · Matt. 5:8 (mundus corde, 0387B) · Matt. 11:12 (irremissa constantia violentus, 0387B) · Phil. 3:13 (omnia quae praetereunt oblivisci, 0387B) · Luke 10:41–42 (erga plurima non turbatur, sed unum illud necessarium concupiscit, 0388A — erga plurima and unum… necessarium are both verbatim Vulgate, turned into his own relative clause) · Ps. 118:81 (in salutare Dei laudabiliter defetiscit, 0388A) · Col. 3:14 (perfectionis vinculum, 0388C — see §2d.1) · Gal. 5:6 (cum per dilectionem quod lex divina praecipit operatur, 0388D — Vulg. fides quae per caritatem operatur; his own noun, and the §5 split forces "through love" here against "charity" for charitas four lines earlier) · Heb. 11:6 (sine qua impossibile est… Deo… complacere, 0388D). 0085 — Acts 1:14 (ut cum Maria matre Jesu in oratione unanimiter perseverent, 0390D — three verbatim Vulgate runs inside his own purpose clause) · Acts 2:3 (necdum in linguis igneis Spiritus est concessus, 0390D). 0086 — Luke 2:19/51 (verba sensu gravida in corde conferens et conservans, 0391B) · Ps. 44:3 (gratia in labiis est diffusa, 0394D — see also §2c.3) · Luke 1:35 (sanctum sibi Spiritum desuper advenire, cujus umbra, sanctum efficitur quidquid illa dicitur parturire, 0392D) · 1 Cor. 3:2 / Heb. 5:12–14 (Lacte etenim parvuli necessario nutriuntur, 0392A). 0087 — John 4:14 (fontem aquae salientis, 0395D) · Isa. 22:22 / Apoc. 3:7 (clave Davidica sibi signat, 0395D) · Num. 19:15 (non reliquit eam ut vas sine operculo, 0395D) · 1 Cor. 2:6–8 (mundi principes sunt jejuni, 0396A) · Gen. 3:7, 3:17, 3:22 throughout 0394A–0394D, all narrated in his own words. 0089 — Ps. 138:22 (quae perfecto condemnat odio, 0399B) · Ps. 89:6 (cum florem matutinum occasu decusserit vespertino, 0398C) · Acts 3:11 / John 10:23 (porticum Salomonis, 0399A).
2d · Migne's sigla — twelve notes checked, ten right, one wrong-book, one ambiguous
Reproduced verbatim, none corrected (§10.2). Correct and checked against the verse each stands on: (Prov. XXVII) Prov 27:6 · (Luc. I) ×3 (Lk 1:45, 1:28, and (ibid.) → Lk 1:31, resolving correctly) · (Ephes. III) Eph 3:17 · (Coloss. II) Col 2:9 · (Prov. V) the Prov 5 fountain imagery (§2c.4) · (Joan. XII) Jn 12:3 + (ibid.) → Jn 12:3b, resolving correctly · (Cant. I) Cant 1:11 · (Gen. III) Gen 3:19 · (Job. XLII) Job 42:6 · (Gen. XVIII) Gen 18:27 · (Matth. VII) Matt 7:16 · (Isa. LIII) Isa 53:7 · (Rom. V) Rom 5:8 · (Joan. XIX) Jn 19:30 · (Rom. VIII; Ephes. II) both correct as imagery pointers (§2c.6).
The two exceptions:
- ⭐ 0388C
[n: (I Cor. XIII)]— the note names one book and the quoted words are another book's. Philip writes Bene de illa Paulus[n: (I Cor. XIII)]… quam volens commendare, perfectionis vinculum nominavit. Vinculum perfectionis is Col. 3:14 (super omnia autem haec caritatem habete, quod est vinculum perfectionis); 1 Cor. 13 does not contain the phrase. The chapter Migne names is of course the Pauline locus for charity, which is why the slip is easy — but the only words Philip actually reproduces come from Colossians. Reproduced in place; §10.2 forbids correcting it. This belongs to brief §8b's second shape ("note cites one book, the words are another book's"), which now has four attested instances (Luke 9/Matt. 8; Deut. 32/Ps. 91; Isa. 42/Matt. 12 at 0318D; and this). ⚑ Note the asymmetry with §1.3 and §1.1: both of those are on correct sigla. In this range the sigla are wrong where the words are Philip's own and right where the words are Migne's copy-text — which is more support for brief §8b's revised "no siglum in this work is systematically wrong." - ⚠ 0398A
[n: (Eccles. VII)]— ambiguous, and chapter-correct either way. The words behind it are Ecclesiasticus 7:40 (memorare novissima tua), not Ecclesiastes. Migne's own practice in this work is (Eccle. IX) for Ecclesiastes (0340D, cruces-0060), so (Eccles. VII) is a third spelling of the abbreviation and could be read either way. Chapter VII is right for Ecclesiasticus. I record this as ambiguous, NOT as an error, because a tally that counted it wrong would manufacture a failure out of an abbreviation this work spells inconsistently — exactly the manufactured-pattern risk brief §8b warns about. Reproduced verbatim.
2e · ⭐ Brief §8c — Cant. 1:12 IS in this range, and what it does not print is the datum
Brief §8c asks every range that meets Cant. 1:12 to record which word Migne prints for the Vulgate's Dum. The verse appears at 0397C, guilleted and noted:
« Nardus, inquit, mea dedit odorem suum
[n: (Cant. I)]. »
⛔ It is printed WITHOUT its opening clause. The Vulgate's Dum esset rex in accubitu suo is not there; Migne quotes only the verse's second half, so neither Cum nor Dum is printed, and this occurrence supplies no evidence in either direction. That is a real datum and not a non-answer: the §8c count stands at four printings, all of them elsewhere, and a range that reported "Cant. 1:12 met, verse agrees" without saying which half was printed would have been read by the merge as a fifth attestation. It is not one.
⭐ What the occurrence DOES supply is a fifth proof of brief §7. This is the Song quoted as a proof-text — Philip introduces it Et supra in hoc epithalamio — and it takes guillemets, while the running Cant. 4:13–14 lemma five lines above it takes italics, in the same chunk, on the same page. Brief §7 lists Cant. 4:11 @0220A, Cant. 5:11 @0226A and Cant. 2:14 @0226C for this; 0397C is a fourth, and 0086's italic Cant. 4:11 lemma against the guilleted 0220A printing of the same verse is a fifth.
§3 · TYPOGRAPHY
3a · ⚠ THE GUILLEMET ASYMMETRY — an unopened » at 0398B, and it closes a lemma
0089 prints 10 « against 11 ». The extra closing mark is here:
Myrrha, inquit, et aloe cum omnibus primis unguentis. » (0398B)
The lemma is set in italics with the ordinary Pattern 5 inquit break, and then a closing guillemet with no opening one follows the full stop. The nearest preceding « is at 0398B (Loquar, inquit, ad Dominum meum…) and it is properly closed eight lines earlier, so this is a stray », not a run-on.
Reproduced exactly as printed (Pattern 5 corollary, brief §7a: "guillemet asymmetries are Migne's and are mirrored, never balanced"). Nothing supplied, nothing deleted; the English carries 10 « and 11 » and the verifier's parity check passes on the pair, not on either side alone.
⚑ The interesting part for the merge is WHERE it falls. It closes a lemma — italic, a re-quotation of Cant. 4:14 introducing the myrrh-and-aloes section — in a chunk where every other run is a guilleted proof-text. So the stray mark is a compositor's reflex reaching for the mark the neighbouring class takes, on the one line where the italic class was in use. That is weak evidence for brief §7's functional division rather than against it: the two marks are distinct enough in practice that the error is visible as an error.
3b · ⭐⭐ Horace at 0399B, adduced as an authority and printed in ITALICS — the collision §7 has not yet had to adjudicate
Oderunt, inquit, peccare boni virtutis amore. (0399B)
This is Horace, Epist. I.xvi.52, verbatim, and Philip adduces it with an explicit authority formula: bene quidam ethnicus non expers vel inscius similis medicinae, demonstravit non vagis et negligentibus, sed in auditorio residentibus disciplinae. By the function brief §7 assigns to « » — "a quotation adduced as an authority" — this is the guillemet case exactly, and it is the same authority-formula shape as the Delphic oracle and the Virgil at 0251D–0253A, which are guilleted.
Migne prints it in italics.
⭐ But this is not a fourth counter-instance, and the merge should not file it as one. The three known counter-instances — Ovid at 0259, Sallust at 0314A, Ambrose at 0337B — are all printed bare, with no mark at all. This one is marked, and marked with the mark §7 assigns to "classical verse quoted as verse rather than adduced as proof (Horace in the prologue)." So the two functional rules genuinely collide here — classical verse, adduced as proof — and the plate resolves the collision in favour of the verse rule.
⚑ That is a positive finding about the typography rather than another hole in it, and it is the same author (Horace) the prologue's italic instance uses, which makes it as near a controlled comparison as this work offers. Offered to the merge as a refinement of §7, not a contradiction of it: where a run is BOTH classical verse AND an adduced authority, 11632 prints italics. One instance is one instance; a second would settle it.
⚠ The Pattern 5 break is awkward in English and was kept anyway. Migne breaks the italics after the single word Oderunt — before the subject boni has arrived — so the English reads "They hate, saith he, to sin, the good, for the love of virtue." The subject lands where Latin puts it. Same call cruces-0066 made for Cum pertransissem, inquit, eos at 0348C.
3c · ⚑ §7a mirroring — the drift point — held word by word
Migne's mixed case runs hard through this range and none of it was regularized. Mechanically checkable against the Latin twin; I would check it first in any review.
- ⭐ The two head lemmata one column apart disagree with each other. 0389B prints soror mea sponsa (Cant. 4:10, lower case) and 0391A prints labia tua Sponsa (Cant. 4:11, capital), with 0394A back to soror mea sponsa (Cant. 4:12, lower case). Three lemmata, two cases, in five columns. Mirrored.
- ⭐ 0387B–C, four lower-case spouse-words in one sentence where the same chunk capitalizes Sponsus six times: iste simul sponsam nominat et sororem · quia et sponsae, quod sponsi est · fratrem et sponsum vulnerat. Rendered "spouse" throughout, lower case, against "Bridegroom" elsewhere; and 0387A's Sponsae vulnere two lines above is capital. Rendered "the Bride's".
- 0393D ut scilicet sponso exhibeat suo — lower case, against capital Sponsi at 0393B and 0393C, twelve lines apart in the same paragraph.
- *0395A hortum conclusum semel sponso dicere — lower case, and 0399B sponsoque* venienti sternit likewise.
- ⭐ 0395A–0396C, lower-case virgo five times in chunks that capitalize Virgo throughout: 0395A ab eadem virgine sic exclusum · 0395D Nuptialem itaque thalamum virginis · 0396B Emissiones itaque virginis · 0396C de horto vel fonte virginis est emissa — the last twenty words before capital in Virginis vita et moribus in the same sentence-pair. All rendered "the virgin", lower case.
- 0392B sanctum sibi Spiritum desuper advenire (capital) against 0391B divinus ei Spiritus desuper voluit instillare (capital) and 0390D in linguis igneis Spiritus (capital) — this range happens to capitalize it throughout; recorded so the merge can see there is nothing to reconcile here.
- Pattern 3 fires once and only once in the range: 0391C obscura superficies Scripturarum — the canon, with no divina and no sacra, exactly the bare form brief §5 flags as the one 11638's sweep missed. Rendered "the Scriptures*". ⚑ There is no other Scriptura of any form in the six chunks; 0387C's divina lex* is the law, not the canon, and reads "the divine law".
- Heads:
CAPUT XXI.throughCAPUT XXVII.all carry the full stop, matching cruces-0060's range and contrasting cruces-0048's stop-less pair. Reproduced.
3d · Pattern 17
Decided by morphology throughout, never by who is addressed.
- Singular → thou. All six head lemmata are the Bridegroom to the Bride and are singular from first word to last: Vulnerasti… oculorum tuorum… colli tui · mammae tuae… ubera tua… unguentorum tuorum · labia tua… lingua tua… vestimentorum tuorum · Emissiones tuae. Likewise Luke 1:45 (quae credidisti… dicta sunt tibi), Luke 1:28 (Dominus tecum), Luke 1:31 (concipies et paries), Gen. 3:19 (Terra es… ibis), and the Virgin's own address to Christ at 0389C (Si electos, inquit, tuos… dares nasci, ut te vivificante… de tuo vel conceptu vel partu), ~10 tokens.
- Plural → you. Eph. 3:17 (in cordibus vestris) · Matt. 7:16 (cognoscetis eos) · and Philip's own frame to his brethren, twice: 0389B ubera Virginis non longe superius nostis apposita and 0393A Vestimentis, ut notum est, nostra nuditas operitur.
⭐ The pair the merge should like is at 0388D, eight words apart in adjacent sentences: Elisabeth's singular dicta sunt tibi a Domino → "spoken to thee", against Paul's plural in cordibus vestris → "in your hearts." Philip has put the two verses side by side to make a single point about faith, and under Pattern 17 a reader can see, with no apparatus, that one is addressed to one woman and the other to a church.
3e · Marginal source-edition numbers
223 (0387B) · 224 (0389A) · 225 (0390C) · 226 (0392B) · 227 (0394A) · 228 (0395D) · 229 (0397B) · 230 (0399A). Continuous with cruces-0060's 191–199. Each kept italic and verbatim at the exact word it interrupts — 223 falls between pede and minus recto, 227 between alium and Deus Dei Filius, 229 between medicinalium sunt and praemissae, 230 between motuum and habita notione — and the English clause was built round each rather than moving it. ⚠ 223's slot forced "with a foot 223 less upright", and 227's "another garden 227 for himself"; both are more contorted than I would otherwise write, and both are deliberate.
§4 · PATTERN 7 / 8 / 9 / 10 — one [sic:], and the readings rendered as printed
The carried run is NOT also translated in the running text (brief §8's named failure — checked word by word on a separate pass).
- ⭐ 0395C
[sic: muueris]— sed interni gratia muueris docetur ineffabiliter et ditescit. Read muneris, near-certain: muueris is not a Latin word in any form, the classic Mignen/ubroken-type substitution, and interni… muneris ("of an inward gift") is what the sentence requires — the paragraph's subject is the scientia God has assignavit to the Virgin, and munus recurs in the same argument at 0395D (ipse auctor muneris) and 0399D (munere cujus amor meretur). Pattern 7 governs: carried untranslated in italics, and the English deliberately does not also say "gift": it reads "by the grace of an inward [sic: muueris] she is taught unspeakably". Marker content verified as a verbatim substring of the twin.
Rendered as printed, no marker (real words, merely wrong or merely odd) — conjectures live here and NOT in the text:
- ⛔ 0393C, quia thure liquefacto ad Sponsi latitudinem fumus tendit, odor vel opinio ad nos latitudine se extendit. Read altitudinem for the first, probable but not certain: smoke rises, and the antithesis the sentence is building is height (his) against breadth (ours) — the smoke goes up to the Bridegroom while the odour spreads sideways to us. As printed, both limbs say "breadth" and the antithesis collapses into a tautology. latitudo is a real word, so Pattern 12 keeps it on the English side: rendered "the smoke stretcheth to the Bridegroom's breadth", which is meant to read flat. ⚠ The most repairable sentence in the range after §1.2, and one letter fixes it.
- ⛔ 0388A, Iste oculus qui se foras ad vivendum plurima non effundit. Read videndum, probable: the whole chapter is about two eyes and what each sees (cui visibilia datum est intueri · attollit se ad videndum Creatoris faciem twelve lines earlier, with the same gerund), and effundere se ad vivendum plurima is not a construction vivere takes comfortably. A real word; rendered "poureth not itself forth abroad unto the living of many things." Not supplied.
- 0393C, Ille igitur virtutes… quaedam sunt vestimenta. Read Illae. ⚑ Pattern 9, and it is the clean case: English "those" carries no gender, so there is no emendation to make and none to undo. Rendered normally, "Those virtues therefore… are certain garments". Logged and marked here so a later sweep does not churn it.
- 0396B–0396C, paradisus treated as FEMININE throughout — velut quaedam paradisus · Fuit pridem paradisus serpentinae suasoria pravitatis… conceptoria… peremptoria · Ista vero paradisus… quae… est emissa. Attested medieval usage (the Greek noun's gender pulling against the Latin declension), not a defect; Pattern 9, unmarked, rendered normally.
- 0394C, prudenti concilio voluit sic concludi. concilium for consilium is a standard medieval orthographic confusion, attested; Pattern 9, unmarked. Rendered "with a prudent counsel".
- 0399C, adversus aeternam putretudinem. Against putredinem / putredinis four times in the same chunk (0398C ×2, 0399A, 0399D). putretudo is attested late Latin, so Pattern 9 exempts it; logged rather than marked**, and recorded here only because the correct form standing four times around it makes it look like a defect at first sight.
- 0391C, quae, etsi favus erant, clausa sub signaculo tenebantur. Singular predicate with plural verb, the subject being the four-item list of 0391B–C. No English exponent for the mismatch; rendered "which, though they were a honeycomb, were kept shut up under a seal." Pattern 9, logged.
- 0395C, cujus non arescit intelligentia, non aestu arido sensus habet.* Elliptical and not comfortable: habet has no clean object, and the parallel with arescit wants something like aret*. Rendered as closely as the printed words allow — "whose understanding withereth not, whose sense hath no parching heat" — and logged rather than emended.
- 0388D, Quos enim gravis… moles a capite semovet et disjungit, fides, velut collum, Christo nos continuat, nos conjungit. The relative Quos has no antecedent and is resumed by nos; a Latin anacoluthon with no English exponent. Rendered "For us whom a heavy… mass removeth and disjoineth from the head, faith, like a neck, knitteth on to Christ and joineth us." Logged.
- ⚠ 0390B, primum thalamo virginali efficax sanitas, sana relectio. Conjecture refectio ("refreshment"), which would pair with efficax sanitas as nova confectio pairs with confecta novitas. But relectio is a real word, and the chapter is about a knowledge re-gathered and re-read (notio et suavis recordatio notionis six lines later), so the printed reading is defensible. Rendered as printed — "a sound re-reading" — and NOT emended.** ⚑ Flagged for the merge as the one place in the range where I would most welcome a second opinion.
- 0391C, the missing comma after inquam. Migne prints non sic, inquam favus distillans esse vel dici etiam merebantur. Reproduced (Pattern 8): the English reads "not so, I say did they deserve to be…", deliberately as unpunctuated as the plate. Same call cruces-0060 §2b made for Domine, ait si tu sustulisti at 0335A. ⚠ Do not churn this.
- ⭐ 0393D, the full stop where a colon belongs: Unde subjungitur. Hortus, etc. Every other chapter in this range closes with a colon — De quo subjungitur: Favus (0390D), Unde subditur: Emissiones tuae (0396A) — and 0393D alone prints a stop. Preserved (Pattern 8: never delete a mark the plate prints, never supply one it lacks); the English reads "Whence it is added. A garden, etc." ⚑ The three formulas stand three lines from each other in the work and this is the only one that breaks, which is what makes it worth recording rather than smoothing.
Negation audit (brief §9), second pass, against the Latin. Every printed non / nec / neque / nisi / nihil / nil / nullus / nunquam / nondum / necdum / nescius / ne in the six Latin chunks was matched against the English after the prose was drafted. The dense clusters are 0386D–0387B (vulneratus odium non rependit… manus ad injurias non extendit… compunctus non conqueritur… non ira, non jactura, non est laesio… transfigi non gladio… non expirat… non caput, non pedem, non quidquam simile… manum medicam non admittit… non pestiferum, non mortale… non corporeum neque morti obnoxium… non cruenti, non furore… non ira… illuc non penetrat… violentiam non intorquet), 0388A–0388D (nisi quod auctor rerum… non naturae… mundum nesciens… non turbatur… non amore multiplicium… plurima non effundit… nisi unum et simplicem non abscondit… Nec solum in oculo… nec Virgini satis erat… nec item satis Sponso… non vento rapitur, non dispergitur… Nulla… mulier… nisi cum redimita pluralitas… ne vanitatis aura… si non ligatur… neque digna laus… si non instar crinium… non ligata vinculo… sine qua impossibile est — nineteen in one column), 0389B–0389D (non vilescant… quarum illic vel supra uspiam, mentio non habetur… manum sive studium non admovi… non parvulis lac emittunt… nondum fructu congruo… necdum natos… nec producit, nutrire non praesumens… quos ad vitam nativitas congrua non educit… non lac femineum… non tempore sed odore… quod mente incredula non gentiles capiunt, non Judaei… non lactis alimoniam, non ejus rivulos), 0390B–0390C (nullus praecedentium… vulnus culpae jam nesciat… non possunt… expediri… ab altero non possit homine vel sentiri… non unguenta Virginis, quae nobis… non apponit… nulla priorum scientia nulla possunt aromata comparari… Non sine causa… necdum in linguis igneis), *0391B–0392A (nescia concubitus… non luxuria, sed amore… non pigrescit… virum nesciens… non labore… non morbo invidiae non clave avaritiae… non cuncta simul exerit… nec tanquam vas reversatum… Non sic Testamentum Vetus… non sic, inquam… non noverat distillare… nequaquam perducebat… non expressus; nec accessit… non patulo tanquam vase, non effudit impetu repentino… non serantur pessulo, nec inseritur eis clavus… Non enim ut linguosa mulier), 0392C–0393D (non solum dignior… Non enim de conceptu posset… si non de divina praesentia… nisi sciret… penitus nos non privat… non subito reddit expositum… nec mutire… non prodigis manibus… nisi quae bysso et purpura… non solum frigus non timeat… non descripserit… non expresserit… non tegunt ignominiam, non frigus… non permittit nos videre… non expressit numerum, non decorem, sed ne totum taceat… damnabiliter non consumptum… non sentimus… non operiendae necessaria nuditati… non auro, non vestibus… Ad nihil enim aliud), 0394A–0395B (arbusta non continens… morte gravi non laeditur… ultra vivere non desivit… non in Arabia… fetores nesciet serpentinos, nec somnolentia… gaudio… non transitorio… non turpis inopia, non inops obsidet… non umbraliter… non obstruitur… non Judaeum, non gentilem, non fide vacuum… non toxicat, odorem non attaminat, flosculos non decerpit; non esurit… esuries non procedit, non serpenti mulier, vir mulieri non obedit… non desertum, non solitarium… dolor non stimulat… facie non confusa… non nisi pulchritudo restet… semel sponso dicere non est satis… mollitie non assistat… caro contumaciter non resistat… non mediocriter imperfecti… in neutro… non ostendat… non detraheret spiritali… non horreret… ut locum daret nulli), 0395C–0396A (ne arescat… non tam fonte… non arescit intelligentia, non aestu arido… non revelat… non reliquit eam… ne audientes et non capientes… non resignat… signaculo non soluto, non fontem percipit… oblatrantes non capiunt, nil proficiunt importuni… nil omnino… nonnisi mens collecta, nonnisi amor… serpentem lividum non admittit), 0396B–0396D (nullos vel paucissimos… virginalem munditiam non relinquit; injuriis non turbatur… non delinquit… non solum grata visui… non mediocriter fructuosa, et non colore seductibili… non est rerum), and 0397D–0400B (non sejungi… detrimentum inferri non sustinens… ne hostis malevolus… non cessurum… non damnum sanguinis, non martyrii respuat… ne, quod amat devotio… ne bonum propositum, cum non frangat… nunquam desinat reminisci… non tamen putredine, non verme defluat… non timet illa… lege miratur insita non disjungi… nescit vermem… non praevaluit… nonnisi in mortuis carnibus… Neque enim voluntas sine opere… nec opus sine voluntate… nulli dubium… non praemisit aloen… etsi non unguento… Non enim ait, aloe et myrrha… non enim labor per amorem… non sit lege mortalium ad putredinem transitura… non confecit… non vermes, non putredinem longe fecit… non magis paradisum… ne forte cuilibet… non* suppletur).
No negation was dropped and none was supplied. ⚠ One place was caught by this pass and would otherwise have shipped wrong: 0396A, signaculo non soluto, non fontem percipit tam secretum. The draft had rendered the ablative absolute affirmatively ("the seal being unloosed"), which reverses the sentence — the crowd stands outside because the seal is not loosed. Fixed to "the seal not being unloosed". Recorded per brief §9 as a caught instance of mechanism 2, in the exact shape (a negated ablative absolute governing a negated main verb) that the count-based check is documented to miss.
§5 · CONVENTIONS SET OR HELD IN THIS RANGE
- ⭐⭐
emissio= "emission", NOT Douay's "plants" — set here, and the whole of Caput XXVI depends on it. Cant. 4:13's Emissiones tuae opens the chapter, and Philip's entire gloss is the verb: Quae conclusus iste hortus, vel munitus signaculo fons emittit · Emissiones itaque virginis · quae de horto vel fonte virginis est emissa · ut signetur emissio Virginis opulenta · paradisum unguentariae plenitudinis huc emisit (0400B) · virginalis duxit emissio (0398B) · quae instar paradisi de horto Virginis sunt emissae (0397B) — eight occurrences of the root across three chunks, and every one of them is the argument. Douay's "thy plants" is botanical and severs the chain: "the garden sends forth… thy plants" explains nothing. This is the Song section's case 2 exactly (stylus / epistylium, murenulae / ferculum): where the gloss IS the etymology, an English word sharing no root makes the gloss explain nothing. ⚠ The lemma recurs — Cant. 4:13 is re-quoted at 0396B and the noun again at 0400B, and the fountain half of the same verse-pair is promised for the NEXT chapter at 0400C (ad ea consequenter non differt Sponsus loquendo pertransire, quae signato quoque fonti videntur probabilius convenire). The 0090+ range inherits this word. ⛔ This is the one cross-chunk decision in my range the merge must not undo. - ⭐ The beauty-words kept strictly distinct, extending brief §5's colour triple. formosus = comely (0394C flos formosus, per brief §5's formosa) · speciosus = fair (0394C forma prae filiis hominum speciosus; 0394D forma prae hominibus specioso) · pulcher = beautiful (0389A/0389B Quam pulchrae, pulchriora; 0395A non nisi pulchritudo) · decor / decus = comeliness / grace. All four stand within two columns of each other at 0394C–0395A and the passage is built on their difference. Offered to the merge as the extension of brief §5's triple into the beauty field.
- ⚠
speciessplits, and the split is contextual — flagged rather than asserted. In the aromatic catalogue it is "spice" (0397B sine altera specie vel mistura · 0398A praemissis speciebus · 0398C ad aliorum… charismatum species · 0396D multa subdit genera specierum, which introduces 0089's spice list). In the garden passage it is "kind" (0394D species vigent rerum · multiplicitas specierum, where no spice is in view and the subject is the things growing). Both are right in context and the work has no single English exponent; logged so a merge sweep does not flatten one into the other. fistula= "sweet cane" (Douay), not carried Latin. Philip's gloss — coloris est subrubei, corticem habens durum — is of cassia bark, and "cassia" was considered. Douay's "sweet cane" was kept because a cane has a rind and the gloss survives it, and because nothing in the chapter is an etymology of the word. crocus = saffron · cyprus = cypress (Douay; Philip's arbusculae… graciles whose grana are boiled in oil is henna, but again no etymology depends on it) · nardus = spikenard · malum Punicum = pomegranate. Logged as judgment calls, all reversible.- Bed- and chamber-words: none occur in this range, so cruces-0060 §5.1's lectulus / lectus / cubile / cubiculum set is untouched. ⚠ But thalamus does occur twice — 0390B primum thalamo virginali and 0395D Nuptialem itaque thalamum virginis — and is rendered "bridal chamber" / "nuptial bed" respectively by the immediate context. Offered as a fifth term of that set, and flagged as the one I am least sure of: a merge that wants one English word for thalamus should pick "bridal chamber" and change 0395D.
charitas= charity ·dilectio= love — held, and the range contains the pressure point. 0388C–0388D prints sub una redigit charitate and charitatis redimiculo and then, four lines later, cum per dilectionem quod lex divina praecipit operatur — where the underlying verse (Gal. 5:6) has caritatem. Rendered "charity" / "charity" / "love", per brief §5, which is what preserves the fact that Philip has changed the noun. Also 0388C si dilectionis vinculo non ligatur = "the bond of love" against 0400B unguenta geminae charitatis = "the twin charity."- Pattern 3 held on the one bare instance (§3c): 0391C Scripturarum → "the Scriptures".
Philip of Harvengt, Commentaria in Cantica canticorum, PL 203. Six chunks, 6,255 Latin words, running from Caput XXVIII of Book IV through Caput VI of Book V — the exposition of Cant. 4:15–5:2: Fons hortorum, puteus aquarum viventium → Surge aquilo, et veni auster (expounded twice over, first with the north wind driven off, Caput XXIX, then with him licensed to blow, Caput XXX) → Veniat dilectus meus in hortum suum → Veni in hortum meum soror mea sponsa → Comedi favum cum melle meo → Comedite amici, bibite et inebriamini → Ego dormio, et cor meum vigilat → Vox dilecti mei pulsantis.
⭐ A BOOK BOUNDARY FALLS IN THIS RANGE — LIBER QUINTUS. at the bare anchor [0403] in chunk 0091 — and it is the fourth crossed boundary in the work. See §3a: no seam, confirming brief §7 a third time.
⚠ AND IT CORRECTS A HEADER ERROR IN cruces-0084. That file describes its range (chunks 0084–0089, cols 0386D–0400C) as "Caput XXI–XXVII of Book V". It is Book IV: chunk 0091 at 0404C prints Philip's own hujus operis quartus liber finem sibi congruum jam imponat, and LIBER QUINTUS. follows immediately. cruces-0078's "Book IV, Caput XIII–XX" is right and cruces-0084's book number is not. Nothing in either file's findings depends on it — the column numbers and chapter numerals are correct in both — but the merge should fix the label before it propagates into a TOC.
Marker totals for this range: 2 [var:] · 3 [sic:] · 0 [ed:] · 0 [d:] · 0 [nt:] · 0 [f:]. verify-english.mjs reports no errors on any of the six (the run's VERIFY FAILED is 20 not-yet-translated chunks). Four ratio warnings — 0091 1.62, 0092 1.69, 0094 1.62, 0095 1.68 — inside the band this work has already shipped (0005 and 0046 both 1.68). Ratios: 1.59 / 1.61 / 1.68 / 1.57 / 1.64 / 1.67.
Column anchors (10/10/7/17/9/8, 61 in all), [n:] strings (1/0/0/9/10/1 = 21, each matching its frontmatter noteCount), guillemet characters (1 «/1 » in 0090, none elsewhere) and the marginal source-edition numbers 231–239 were diffed 1:1 against the Latin twins by script, not by eye: byte-identical in order and place. Two intra-paragraph line breaks (0090, 0093) — Migne's displayed verse lines — are reproduced as line breaks, and the parity of those was scripted too. No guillemet asymmetry in this range.
§1 · ⭐⭐ THE THREE FINDINGS THE MERGE SHOULD CARRY
1.1 · ⭐⭐⭐ THE DISPLAYED-VERSE RULE — settled work-wide, and it closes cruces-0084 §3b
cruces-0084 §3b found Horace at 0399B adduced as an explicit authority and printed in italics, offered it to the merge as a refinement of brief §7 ("where a run is BOTH classical verse AND an adduced authority, 11632 prints italics"), and closed with: "One instance is one instance; a second would settle it."
My range has two. Both are Ovid, both introduced by the work's ethnicus formula, both in italics, and — the part that matters — both are set off by Migne onto their own line:
Cum autem, juxta quemdam ethnicum Capiant vitium ni moveantur aquae, ⏎ in fundo putei non stativas… (0401B — Ovid, Ex Ponto I.v.6)
Qualibus quidam ethnicus: Quid vos, ait, perdiderit, dicam: nescitis amare. ⏎ Isti non vino vel draconum… (0408C — Ovid, Ars am. III.41)
⭐⭐ So I ran the technique brief §6 asks for and greped the other 125 chunks for intra-paragraph line breaks. The whole work contains ten of them, and they are exactly the displayed verse quotations. Nine of the ten are italicised, without exception:
| Chunk | Col | Quoted | Marked |
|---|---|---|---|
| 0000 | prologue | Horace, A.P. 38–39 Sumite materiam vestris… | italic |
| 0006 | — | Juvenal …occurrit digna relatu / Pompa; senem potum pota trahebat anus | italic |
| 0007 | — | Qui properant, inquit, nova musta bibant; mihi fundat avitum / Testa merum | italic |
| 0022 | — | Horace, Epist. I.ii.58 Invidia… Siculi non invenere tyranni / Tormentum majus | italic |
| 0089 | 0399B | Horace, Epist. I.xvi.52 Oderunt… peccare boni virtutis amore | italic (cruces-0084 §3b) |
| 0090 | 0401B | Ovid, Ex Ponto I.v.6 | italic |
| 0093 | 0408C | Ovid, Ars am. III.41 | italic |
| 0110 | — | Horace, Epist. I.vi.12 Gaudia, inquit, pelle, / Pelle timorem | italic |
| 0125 | — | Terence, Andria 555 Irae amantium, redintegratio est amoris? | italic |
| 0000 | 0182B | Unam vos veteres nostis tantummodo lunam… (six lines) | bare |
⚑ And the one bare member is not a counter-instance: it is Philip's OWN dedicatory epigram, six lines closing the prologue, not a quotation at all. So of ten displayed verse blocks, every adduced one is italic and the only bare one is the author's.
⭐⭐ The discriminator is therefore TYPOGRAPHIC DISPLAY, not function — and that is what dissolves brief §7's apparent inconsistency rather than adding to it. Every classical quotation the work prints bare is run into the paragraph: Sallust at 0314A, Virgil Aen. ii.390 at 0385A (cruces-0078 §1.2), Virgil's mille nocendi artes at 0245A and 0330C, Horace's Siculi… tormentum at 0447D, Omnes ignoscunt, nemo succurrit at 0473A, Si mater est, inquiunt at 0233B. The guilleted Virgil at 0251D is run-in too. Nothing that is set off is ever bare; nothing that is run-in is ever italic.
⚑ The internal control the merge wants is Horace's Siculi line, printed TWICE in this work under the two regimes: displayed and italic at 0022 (Invidia, inquit, Siculi non invenere tyranni / Tormentum majus), run-in and bare at 0447D (majus quo nec Siculi, juxta quemdam ethnicum, tormentum invenere). Same poet, same line, same ethnicus formula, two treatments — and the treatment tracks the setting, not the citation. That is the (Marc. XV)/(Matth. XXVII) shape of §8b applied to typography, and it needs no appeal to anything outside 11632.
⚑ A second control, same shape, from my own range: OVID. Brief §7 records an Ovid case at 0259 printed bare; mine are printed italic. cruces-0078 §1.2 built the same argument out of Virgil (guilleted 0251D, bare 0385A). Ovid now supplies it independently — and under the display rule the two Ovids are not in conflict at all.
What I am NOT claiming. This is a description of what the plate does, not a licence to add a mark. Brief §7's "reproduce what is printed. Never add a mark because the function seems to call for one" is unaffected and was followed literally: I supplied no mark anywhere and reproduced both line breaks. What the rule buys the merge is that §7's three "counter-instances" (Ovid 0259, Sallust 0314A, Ambrose 0337B) and cruces-0078's Virgil are no longer anomalies needing explanation — they are the run-in class, which is the majority class.
⚠ Neither of my two carries an [n:]. They were reachable only because they are italicised, i.e. only through the extraction's italic channel. A range whose classical quotation is run-in and unnoted (0314A, 0385A, 0447D, 0473A) can reach it by no mechanical channel whatever — which is brief §8a's argument, restated for pagans.
1.2 · ⭐⭐ 0407A — the LEMMA itself is broken type: Migne prints fovum for favum, and prints favum correctly six times in the next two columns
The head lemma of Caput III (Cant. 5:1c) is printed:
Comedi fovum cum melle meo: bibi vinum meum cum lacte meo. (0407A)
Vulg. Cant. 5:1: comedi favum cum melle meo. fovum is not a Latin word in any form — not a case of favus, not a form of foveo or fovea.
⭐ The internal control is total and sits within two columns. Migne prints favum / favus / favo correctly six times in Philip's own exposition of this very lemma: nunc favum invenit (0407B) · Nostis favum quamdam velut thecam (0407B) · in quo, favum, et in favo, miro studio mel recondit (0407C) · Favus quidem tenerior (0407C) · quam in favum redigit conversatio (0407C) · Favum igitur, quem interna siccat inanitas (0407D). The chapter is an eight-column exposition of the honeycomb and there is no doubt what the word is.
Pattern 7/10/12 govern: carried untranslated in italics, marked, not also translated. The English reads "I have eaten [sic: fovum] with my honey" and does not anywhere in that sentence say "honeycomb" — the very failure brief §8 names (a [sic:] on a word that was ALSO translated) was checked for word by word on a separate pass. Marker content verified as a verbatim substring of the twin.
⛔ This is the single most repairable place in the range, and worse than the usual instance of that class, because the defect is in the lemma and every reader will silently supply the right word. One letter restores it.
⚑ A note for the merge on where this sits in the work's defect ledger. All three earlier real-word-merely-wrong instances the ranges have logged (Incipit/ accipit @0345B, Adjuvo/Adjuro @0299D, Jesus/Jesu @0397B) are single letters that produce another real word, so they stay on the English side under Pattern 12. fovum is a single letter that produces no word at all, which is what puts it in the [sic:] class instead. The work now has one of each shape in consecutive ranges, and they are worth telling apart in the merge's tally.
1.3 · ⭐⭐ 0412C — Migne's (ibid.) carries Psalm 118 onto a quotation of Psalm 31, and the two verses stand eleven words apart
Migne prints, in three consecutive sentences:
Dilata, inquit, os tuum, et ego adimplebo illud
[n: (Psal. LXXX)]. Et alibi: Da mihi intellectum ut discam mandata tua[n: (Psal. CXVIII.)]Et ille: Intellectum, ait, tibi dabo, et instruam te[n: (ibid.)]. (0412C)
The first two sigla are correct (Ps. 80:11; Ps. 118:73). The third is not. Intellectum tibi dabo, et instruam te is Ps. 31:8 — Intellectum tibi dabo, et instruam te in via hac qua gradieris — verbatim. Psalm 118 contains no such clause anywhere in its 176 verses, and Philip's construction makes the error visible: Et ille marks a change of speaker (the psalmist asks at Ps. 118:73, God answers at Ps. 31:8), which is precisely what an Ibid. cannot express.
⭐ This is the strongest siglum finding in my range and it belongs to a shape the work has not yet logged. Brief §8b's two attested shapes are "off by exactly one chapter" and "note cites one book, the words are another book's." This is a third: an Ibid. correctly formed and correctly resolving to its printed antecedent, where the antecedent is wrong for the verse it now labels. It is not a misprinted book name — (ibid.) names nothing — so no tally of misnamed books would ever catch it.
⛔ Reproduced verbatim, corrected nowhere, and NO correction proposed — brief §10.2 is unconditional and this is the exact case it describes: anaphora resolves against the printed sequence at index time, so touching the antecedent (Psal. CXVIII.) would make this Ibid. inherit the corrected key and resolve wrong in a second way. The merge should log it and leave it.
⚠ Note also that (Psal. CXVIII.) prints a full stop inside the parenthesis, alone among the twenty-one notes in this range. Reproduced.
§2 · THE COLLATION — all 61 listed spans, plus 24 found on the prose pass
Every span in data/quotations/11632/0090-0095.md was collated word by word against the Vulgate. Spans recorded as AGREES were collated and found to agree; the absence of a marker on them is a finding, not a silence.
2a · Divergent — [var:] fired (2)
| Col | Ref | Migne prints | Vulgate | Note |
|---|---|---|---|---|
| 0401D | Cant. 4:16 | perfla hortum meum: et fluent aromata illius | …et fluant aromata illius | §2f. Future indicative for jussive subjunctive; the last clause stops being part of the invocation and becomes a promised result, which is how Philip reads it. |
| 0412D | Eph. 3:10 | ut innotescat principibus et potestatibus | ut innotescat principatibus et potestatibus | §2g. "Princes" for "Principalities" — the angelic order's proper name; Philip repeats the divergent word in his gloss two lines later. |
Both markers were re-read against the Latin as if written by someone else (brief §8): neither elides its divergence behind an ellipsis, both name the witness first, both quote a Vulgate reading that exists, and neither content string is a verbatim substring of the twin (Pattern 14's [ed:] mirror test — scripted).
2b · Collated and AGREEING — no marker
0090 (cols 0400D–0403A). Cant. 4:15 head lemma Fons hortorum, puteus aquarum viventium quae fluunt impetu de Libano — agrees word for word. · John 15:26 « Cum venerit, inquit, Paracletus quem ego mittam vobis [n: (Joan. XV)]. » — Vulg. Cum autem venerit Paraclitus, quem ego mittam vobis a Patre, Spiritum veritatis… Migne's inquit stands in the slot the Vulgate's autem occupies (Pattern 5), and the quotation is cut after vobis. Ordinary truncation plus a displaced connective; Paracletus for Paraclitus is Pattern 9 orthography. Logged, no marker. Siglum correct. · Cant. 4:16 head lemma — see §2f. Its three re-quotations agree: Surge (0402A) · Et veni, inquit, auster. (0402B) · perfla, (0402C).
0091 (cols 0403B–0405B). Cant. 4:16a re-quoted at the head of Caput XXX, Surge aquilo, et veni auster — agrees, and note that this second printing stops before fluent, so it supplies no second attestation of §2f's divergence. Its cues Surge, / aquilo, (0403B) agree. · Cant. 4:16b / 5:1a, the Caput primum lemma of Book V: [CAP. V.] Veniat dilectus meus in hortum suum, ut comedat fructum pomorum suorum. Vulg. …et comedat fructum pomorum suorum. ⚑ A purpose conjunction for a coordinate one, in the same verse whose first half carries §2f's mood change. Sense untouched — both express the wish — so this falls under §8c's stated threshold ("the sense is untouched, which is Pattern 14's threshold") and takes no marker. See §2f for why the two halves were treated differently. ⭐ And the printed locator [CAP. V.] is itself a datum: Migne puts the chapter break one clause earlier than the Clementine, which runs Veniat dilectus meus… as the last clause of 4:16 and opens chapter V at Veni in hortum meum. Reproduced verbatim and untranslated, per the work's established practice for this bracket ([CAP. II.]–[CAP. VIII.], 15 in all, all carried).
0092 (cols 0405C–0407A). Cant. 5:1a head lemma Veni in hortum meum soror mea sponsa, messui myrrham meam cum aromatibus meis — agrees word for word, and its two re-quotations at 0406A (Messui, / myrrham meam cum aromatibus meis) agree. ⚑ Veni is the perfect, not the imperative, and Philip's own gloss proves it: non adventum suum petenti pollicetur, sed venisse et fecisse… se fatetur. Rendered "I am come", matching Douay and, more to the point, matching the exposition.
0093 (cols 0407B–0411B). Cant. 5:1c head lemma — see §1.2 for the fovum defect; the rest of the lemma (cum melle meo: bibi vinum meum cum lacte meo) agrees word for word, as does the re-quotation Bibi, ait, vinum meum cum lacte meo. (0407D) · Luke 12:19 Anima, inquit ille, habes multa bona posita in annos plurimos: requiesce, comede, bibe, epulare [n: (Luc. XII)] — agrees word for word. Siglum correct · Prov. 9:5–6 Bibite, inquit, vinum quod miscui vobis: relinquite infantiam, et vivite [n: (Prov. IX)] — agrees word for word on every printed word; Migne opens at Bibite (Vulg. Venite, comedite panem meum, et bibite vinum…) and cuts after vivite, before et ambulate per vias prudentiae. Head- and tail-truncation only. Siglum correct · Matt. 10:37 Qui amat filium vel filiam plus quam me, non est me dignus [n: (Matth. X)] — ⚑ a fusion of the verse's two limbs, and worth stating exactly. Vulg.: Qui amat patrem aut matrem plus quam me, non est me dignus; et qui amat filium aut filiam super me, non est me dignus. Migne joins the second limb's objects to the first limb's comparative, and prints vel for aut. Every printed word is the Vulgate's; nothing is asserted that the verse does not assert, and Philip's argument is about the ordering of the two loves, not about the comparative particle. Logged, no marker — the cruces-0000 item-12 conflation precedent, and cruces-0078's Phil. 3:7+3:8 case at 0385B. Siglum correct · 1 Cor. 2:2 Non judicavi, ait, scire me aliquid inter vos nisi Jesum Christum et hunc crucifixum [n: (I Cor. II)] — Vulg. Non enim iudicavi me scire aliquid inter vos, nisi Iesum Christum, et hunc crucifixum. Migne drops enim and transposes me scire → scire me; the accusative-and-infinitive is unchanged and the sense is untouched. Logged, no marker. ⭐ Siglum correct, and this is a brief §8b "log the ones that are RIGHT" item: (I Cor. II) is the siglum §8b singles out as having been "printed for three different wrong verses," and the 0048–0053 agent found it correct twice (0305C, 0318A). This is the third correct printing. · 1 Cor. 3:2 Tanquam parvulis, ait, lac vobis potum dedi non escam [n: (I Cor. III)] — agrees word for word (Tanquam for tamquam is Pattern 9). Siglum correct · Isa. 55:1 Venite, ait Isaias, emite absque argento: et absque ulla commutatione vinum et lac [n: (Isa. LV)] — agrees word for word; opened at the verse's third clause. Siglum correct.
0094 (cols 0411C–0413C). Cant. 5:1d head lemma Comedite amici, bibite et inebriamini charissimi. Vulg. Comedite, amici, et bibite, et inebriamini, carissimi. Migne drops the first et. Elision, sense untouched — the same shape cruces-0084 logged for Cant. 4:10's dropped copula. Logged, no marker. Its two re-quotations agree: Comedite, inquit, amici. (0411C) and Bibite, inquit, et inebriamini, charissimi. (0413A) — ⚑ and note the second restores the et the head lemma dropped, an internal control showing the omission is local · Isa. 25:6 medullatorum pinguium, et vindemiae defaecatae [n: (Isa. XXV)] — ⚑ Vulg. convivium pinguium, convivium vindemiae, pinguium medullatorum, vindemiae defaecatae. The pair is transposed, nothing else; medullatus and pinguis qualify each other either way. Same threshold call cruces-0079 made for Cant. 4:5's gemelli capreae. Logged, no marker. Siglum correct · John 1:14 Verbum caro factum est [n: (Joan. I)] — agrees. Siglum correct · Ezek. 3:1 Fili, ait, hominis comede volumen istud, et vadens loquere ad filios Israel [n: (Ezech. III)] — Vulg. Fili hominis, quodcumque inveneris comede: comede volumen istud, et vadens loquere ad filios Israel. An internal omission of the intervening clause, not a truncation — the same shape cruces-0084 distinguished at Luke 1:31, and recorded here in the same class. Sense untouched. Logged, no marker. Siglum correct. ⚠ The Pattern 5 ait falls between Fili and hominis, inside the vocative; reproduced in place · Ezek. 3:2 Et aperui, inquit, os meum, et cibavit me volumine illo [n: (ibid.)] — agrees word for word. The (ibid.) resolves correctly to (Ezech. III) · Ezek. 2:10 + 3:1 Expandit, inquit, illum coram me: et dixit, comede volumen istud [n: (ibid.)] — ⚑ a fusion of two chapters. Expandit illum coram me is Ezek. 2:10 (et expandit illum coram me, qui erat scriptus intus et foris); et dixit… comede volumen istud is Ezek. 3:1. Every printed word is the Vulgate's. Logged, no marker. ⚠ The (ibid.) therefore resolves to (Ezech. III) for a span whose first half is Ezech. II — a mild instance of §1.3's shape, recorded separately from it because here the chapter named is right for half the span and because Philip is plainly quoting out of order for his own argument's sake. Not corrected (§10.2) · Ps. 80:11 Dilata, inquit, os tuum, et ego adimplebo illud [n: (Psal. LXXX)] — Vulg. (Gallican and Roman alike) dilata os tuum, et implebo illud. Migne adds the emphatic ego and compounds the verb. ⭐ Recorded prominently though unmarked, because the addition supports Philip rather than disturbing him: his gloss in the same breath is meum est os aperire… illius est implere — the whole antithesis is whose act it is, and ego underlines it. Rendered "and I will fill it up", deliberately distinct from the gloss's "to fill", so that the compound is visible in English. Nothing is asserted that the Vulgate does not assert; below Pattern 14's threshold. Siglum correct · Ps. 118:73 Da mihi intellectum ut discam mandata tua [n: (Psal. CXVIII.)] — Vulg. da mihi intellectum, et discam mandata tua. Purpose for coordination; sense untouched. Logged, no marker. Siglum correct · Ps. 31:8 Intellectum, ait, tibi dabo, et instruam te [n: (ibid.)] — agrees word for word, truncated before in via hac qua gradieris. ⭐⭐ The siglum is the range's headline §8b find — see §1.3 · Eph. 3:9–10 — see §2g; apart from principibus the span agrees word for word, with qui omnia creavit cut between in Deo and ut innotescat (an internal omission, logged) · Hos. 4:14 — see §2c, the range's [n:]-only hit.
0095 (cols 0413D–0415C). Cant. 5:2a head lemma Ego dormio, et cor meum vigilat — agrees word for word · Hos. 2:14 Lactabo, inquit, eam, et loquar ad cor ejus [n: (Osee. II)] — Vulg. Propter hoc, ecce ego lactabo eam, et ducam eam in solitudinem, et loquar ad cor eius. An internal omission of the wilderness clause. Sense untouched, and the exposition wants precisely the two verbs Migne keeps (Lactabo, ait, cum in sinu meo… Loquar vero ad cor ejus, cum eam, ut evigilet, commonebo). Logged, no marker. Siglum correct. ⭐ See §4.3 for the rendering decision — lactabo is Englished "I will give her milk", not Douay's "I will allure her", and the whole of Caput V depends on it · Cant. 5:2b Vox dilecti mei pulsantis — agrees, truncated before Aperi mihi, soror mea.
2c · The [n:]-only class — hit rate 1 of 4, and the hit AGREES
The extraction lists five [n:]-only spans. One of the five is not of the class: the 0410C listing (Non judicavi, ait, scire me aliquid…) is the same span as the 0410B italic one, re-listed because the [0410C] anchor falls between the italic run and its [n:]. That leaves four genuine spans.
- ⭐⭐ 0413A, Hos. 4:14 — A HIT. et sicut populus non intelligens, Osee testimonio
[n: (Osee. IV)], vapulabit. Vulg. Hos. 4:14 ends: et populus non intelligens vapulabit. Every word verbatim and contiguous, broken only by Philip's own attribution Osee testimonio — which is not a hedge but the opposite: he tells you he is quoting, by the prophet's name, and Migne marks the words with neither guillemets nor italics. This is brief §8a's class exactly. No[var:](there is nothing divergent to mark, and the plate prints no boundary), no marker of any kind. Siglum correct. ⚑ Recorded as a hit even though it agrees, because the class's question is "quotation or Philip's prose?", not "divergent or not" — and a null-result tally that counted only divergent hits would understate it. - 0408A, Deut. 32:33
[n: (Deut. XXXII)]— Vinum quippe non illud insanabile, et veneno comparabile aspidum vel draconum. Vulg. Fel draconum vinum eorum, et venenum aspidum insanabile. Four of the verse's nouns survive, but redistributed: venenum aspidum insanabile is broken apart and rebuilt round Philip's own comparabile, under his own negated predicate. Philip's prose. No marker. ⭐ Siglum correct, and worth a §8b line: brief §8b names "Deut. 32/Ps. 91" as one of the attested wrong-book instances, and here the same book's siglum is right. - 0409B, Wisd. 2:24 under
[n: (Rom. V)]— nec doleret mortis meritum incurrisse, quae illius invidia in orbem terrarum legitur introisse. Vulg. Wisd. 2:24: invidia autem diaboli mors introivit in orbem terrarum. Rom. 5:12, the chapter named, reads per unum hominem peccatum in hunc mundum intravit. ⚠ So the words are Wisdom's and the doctrine is Romans', and I record it as ambiguous rather than wrong: the note plainly points at the locus for death's entry, which is Rom. 5, and Migne's practice in this work is often to key a note to imagery rather than to words (cruces-0084 §2c.4, §2c.6). But in orbem terrarum and introisse are not Rom. 5's words in any form. Philip's prose either way — the clause is governed by his own legitur and his own relative quae — so no marker. Logged for the merge's ledger under §8b's second shape, flagged as ambiguous. - 0409D, Job 6:12
[n: (Job VI)]— Neque enim duritia lapidum ejus duritia; nec mens ejus aenea potest dici. Vulg. Nec fortitudo lapidum fortitudo mea, nec caro mea aenea est. Philip has changed the person (first → third), and changed both nouns — fortitudo → duritia and caro → mens — and the changes are the argument: he is denying that the Mother's tenderness is stony or brazen. Philip's prose. No marker. Siglum correct.
Hit rate: 1 of 4. Running total across the ranges that have reported it: 3 of 113 (0/6, 0/20, 0/38, 0/19, 1/12, 1/14, 1/7, and now 1/4). ⚑ Two things worth the merge's attention. First, this is the class's second hit in three ranges after eighty-three straight misses, so the run of nulls in waves 1–2 was not the class's true rate. Second, it is the first hit that is scriptural and that agrees with the Vulgate — cruces-0078's was Virgil, wave 1's Rom. 8:10 was divergent. The mechanism is indifferent to what is quoted and to whether it diverges; a pass that stops at "does this differ from the Vulgate?" will not see the next one.
2c′ · ⭐ Weaves the extractor could NOT list — 24 found on the mandatory prose pass
No guillemets, no italics and no [n:], so they appear in the extraction in no class whatever. None takes a marker (brief §8a). The first four are the ones the merge should see.
- ⭐⭐ 0401D–0402B — Isa. 14:12–14, and Philip has recast it as direct address. Tu, ait, qui tibi posuisti sedem quasi regiam ad arcturum, disponens imperare… Putasti similem te fore Altissimo qui tantum Lucifer dicebare… habens enim similem jam nec Altissimus potest dici. Against Vulg. Isa. 14:12–14: Quomodo cecidisti de caelo, Lucifer… in caelum conscendam, super astra Dei exaltabo solium meum, sedebo in monte testamenti, in lateribus aquilonis… similis ero Altissimo. ⭐ The whole of Caput XXIX rests on the fusion: the Song's aquilo is identified with Isaiah's lateribus aquilonis, and the chapter's entire argument (that the north wind is Lucifer) exists only because Philip has read the two texts through each other. Migne marks not one word of it. The densest specimen this range found, and — like cruces-0084's Prov. 31 case at 0393A — one where the author signals the quotation (his ait announces a speech that is Isaiah's) and the plate does not. No marker.
- ⭐ 0404D — Rom. 5:3–5, the whole chain, verbatim in its Vulgate order. ille tribulans, patientiam, patientia probationem, spem probatio non confusam, iste, operabitur charitatem quae in nostris praebet cordibus se diffusam. Vulg. tribulatio patientiam operatur, patientia autem probationem, probatio vero spem, spes autem non confundit: quia caritas Dei diffusa est in cordibus nostris. Every noun of the chain, in order, plus the non confundit negation preserved as non confusam, all compressed under a single future operabitur of Philip's own. Prose, no marker — but a reader who does not know Rom. 5 will not learn it from this page.
- ⭐ 0408D — Ps. 18:6, and it returns two columns later. Ille etenim qui a summo coelo, a secreto sinu Patris egreditur, qui thalamum nuptialem… ingreditur… Sponsus egreditur. Vulg. tamquam sponsus procedens de thalamo suo… a summo caelo egressio eius. And at 0410D the same psalm's next image returns in one word: sed geminae gigantem substantiae geminato munere delectari (Vulg. exsultavit ut gigas ad currendam viam), where gigas geminae substantiae is the received patristic gloss. Two unmarked touches of one psalm inside one chapter. Prose, no marker.
- ⭐ 0404D — 1 Cor. 3:6–7. horto quem plantavit, quem rigavit, cui dedit etiam incrementum. Vulg. Ego plantavi, Apollo rigavit: sed Deus incrementum dedit. Three verbatim verbs turned into relative clauses. Prose, no marker.
The remaining twenty, checked for silent conformation and left as Philip's own prose (none marked, none conformed): 0090 — Ps. 35:9 / Jer. 2:13 (Ad hunc fontem aquarum viventium… convenite, 0401C, the lemma's own image turned into an invitation) · Gen. 2:8 (de horto voluptatis, 0400D) · John 4:14 (in vitam vigore vivido salientis, 0401D — the same verse cruces-0084 logged at 0395D) · John 3:8 (etsi ubi vult, et quando vult, adesse, 0403A) · John 15:26 in prose before its own guilleted printing (sicut Pater Spiritum, sic et Filius mittere se testatur, 0402D). 0091 — Rom. 8:17 / 2 Tim. 2:5 (probationis merito dignius et gloriosius coronari, 0403B) · Job 1:12 / 2:6 (nec ad opus nequam exsurgere, nisi data licentia sit permissus, 0403A–B) · Matt. 7:25 (fortique fundamento graves impetus fluminis illiduntur, 0404B) · Ps. 51:10 (sed oliva fructifera medicinaliter impinguescit, 0404B) · Job 40:4 / Prov. 30:32 (ut… stylus noster paulisper ori digitum superponat, 0404C). 0092 — Luke 1:26–30 (mittens ad Virginem… gratiam invenisse, 0405C, the Annunciation narrated) · Eph. 2:3 (supra naturam irae, 0406A) · Matt. 13:25 (Inimicum hominem qui super triticum zizania plerumque seminat, 0406D — near-verbatim, and the sentence the chapter's whole enemy-figure rests on) · Matt. 6:26 / 13:4 (Volatilia coeli quae honestum aliquid… non seminant, 0406B) · Isa. 22:22 / Apoc. 3:7 (signatis clave Davidica, 0406C — the second printing of the image cruces-0084 logged at 0395D, and unmarked both times). 0093 — John 2:1–10 (non exhauritur hydria, calix regius aquam nescit, non princeps in triclinio mysterii nescius obstupescit, 0408D — Cana narrated, with architriclinus Englished into Philip's own phrase) · John 4:24 (quia Deus Spiritus est, 0409A) · Mark 12:30 / Deut. 6:5 (toto corde, tota anima, totis viribus, 0409C) · Matt. 22:38–39 (si primo et maximo non addatur simile vel secundum, 0409D — four verbatim words carrying the paragraph's whole architecture) · 1 Cor. 2:6 (sapientiam loquitur ad perfectos, 0410C, verbatim but for the person) · Matt. 5:3 (sed spiritus pauperie, 0411A) · Mark 14:51–52 (relicta molli sindone nuditatem, 0411B). 0094 — Gal. 4:4 (cum venit plenitudo temporis, 0412D) · Matt. 25:26 / Luke 19:22 (servus nequam, 0413B) · Phil. 2:9 / Heb. 1:4 (assumpta in Deum humanitas meretur super angelos exaltari, 0413C). 0095 — Phil. 3:13 (oblitaque posteriorum, 0414A) · 2 Cor. 5:6 (Manens in corpore, ab his quae sunt corporis aliena, 0414A) · Isa. 13:22 / 34:13 (sirenarum seductibiles melodias, 0414B) · 2 Cor. 12:2–4 (in excessum rapitur mens serena, 0414A).
2d · Migne's sigla — twenty-one notes checked, nineteen right, one wrong, one ambiguous
Reproduced verbatim, none corrected (§10.2). Correct, each checked against the verse it actually stands on: (Joan. XV) Jn 15:26 · (Luc. XII) Lk 12:19 · (Deut. XXXII) Deut 32:33 · (Prov. IX) Prov 9:5–6 · (Job VI) Job 6:12 · (Matth. X) Matt 10:37 · (I Cor. II) 1 Cor 2:2 ⭐ · (I Cor. III) 1 Cor 3:2 · (Isa. LV) Isa 55:1 · (Isa. XXV) Isa 25:6 · (Joan. I) Jn 1:14 · (Ezech. III) Ezek 3:1 · (ibid.) → Ezek 3:2, resolving correctly · (Psal. LXXX) Ps 80:11 · (Psal. CXVIII.) Ps 118:73 · (Ephes. III) Eph 3:9–10 · (Osee. IV) Hos 4:14 · (Osee. II) Hos 2:14.
The three that need comment:
- ⛔ 0412C
[n: (ibid.)]on Ps. 31:8 — WRONG, and it is §1.3. The only outright wrong siglum in the range. - ⚠ 0412B
[n: (ibid.)]on the Ezek. 2:10 + 3:1 fusion — half right. The chapter named is right for the second half of the span and off by one for the first. Recorded, not counted as an error, because the span is a fusion Philip made and the note can only name one chapter. - ⚠ 0409B
[n: (Rom. V)]on words that are Wisd. 2:24's — ambiguous (§2c.3). Recorded as ambiguous, not wrong, on the same reasoning cruces-0084 applied to (Eccles. VII) at 0398A: a tally that counted it wrong would manufacture a failure out of a pointer Migne is entitled to key to doctrine.
⭐ The merge's running §8b picture is unchanged and strengthened. Nineteen of twenty-one right here; cruces-0078 fifteen of sixteen; cruces-0084 ten of twelve; cruces-0066 thirteen of fourteen. No siglum in this work is systematically wrong — including (I Cor. II), now correct three times in three different ranges, which is the specific claim §8b was revised to make.
⚑ A numeral-style note for the tally: all twenty-one sigla in this range use Roman numerals, against cruces-0078's two arabic ones twenty columns earlier. Recorded so a normalizing sweep does not erase either practice.
2e · Brief §6 and §8c — the coverage nulls, recorded
- Cant. 1:12's Cum/Dum (§8c) does not occur in this range. The lemma is at Cant. 4:15–5:2 throughout. Null.
- Brief §6's three attested Philip readings — Zech. 4:14 splendoris, Gen. 3:19 Terra es, Cant. 2:17 Bethel — do not occur here. Nulls.
- Eccles. 9:1 (§6's fourth) does not occur here. Null.
- ⭐ §2f's fluent was checked against all 126 Latin chunks and is a SINGLETON — flu[ae]nt aromata occurs in 0090 only, so unlike the four §6 readings it has no copy-text shape and should not be filed with them. Recorded because the test is cheap and a range that fired a
[var:]without running it would have left the merge unable to tell the two classes apart. Likewise fovum (§1.2) occurs in 0093 and nowhere else in the work.
2f · The first [var:], in full — Cant. 4:16 at 0401D
Surge aquilo, et veni auster, perfla hortum meum: et fluent aromata illius.
Vulg. Cant. 4:16: Surge, aquilo, et veni, auster: perfla hortum meum, et fluant aromata illius. One letter, and it is the mood: a jussive subjunctive becomes a future indicative. Under the Vulgate the clause is the last member of the invocation — let its spices flow; under Migne it is a promised consequence — and its spices shall flow — and Migne's own colon after meum points the sentence that way.
Fired, and here is the reasoning stated so the merge can reverse it. Philip reads it as consequence: ut ornetur hortus iste et fixo gaudeat de ornatu (0402C), ut ex eis fiant aromata… quae fluant imo influant (0402D), hortus aromatizans fluat, et nobis tanquam superfluat ad medelam (0403A) — every gloss turns the clause into a result. The English must therefore read "shall flow", and a reader who knows "let the spices flow" needs to be told the plate does not say it. [var: Vulg. Cant. 4:16 et fluant aromata illius, "and let its spices flow" — jussive subjunctive, where Migne prints the future indicative fluent]
⚠ Why the companion divergence eleven lines later took NO marker. The same verse's second half prints ut comedat for the Vulgate's et comedat (0403D, §2b). Both are one-word changes to the same verse, so the merge should know the two were weighed separately and deliberately: ut/et leaves the wish a wish — let him come, that he may eat asserts nothing let him come and let him eat does not — and brief §8c has already ruled that class below Pattern 14's threshold on the Cum/Dum evidence. fluant/fluent changes the mood of the verb, which is what Pattern 14 means by sense. If the merge decides the two should be treated alike, the consistent answer is to demote fluent, not to promote ut** — the English rendering ("shall flow") stands either way, because that is what is printed.
2g · The second [var:], in full — Eph. 3:10 at 0412D
Quae sit, inquit, dispensatio sacramenti absconditi a saeculis in Deo, ut innotescat principibus et potestatibus in coelestibus per Ecclesiam multiformis sapientia Dei
[n: (Ephes. III)].
Vulg. Eph. 3:9–10: …quae sit dispensatio sacramenti absconditi a saeculis in Deo, qui omnia creavit: ut innotescat principatibus et potestatibus in caelestibus per Ecclesiam multiformis sapientia Dei.
principatus is the proper name of an angelic order — the Principalities of Col. 1:16 and Eph. 1:21 — and it is what the Vulgate prints in all three of those places. principes is a generic word for rulers, and as printed the verse names no order at all.
Why it clears Pattern 14's threshold: Philip expounds the divergent word. Two lines later he writes quae principibus et angelicis potestatibus quasi multiplicius innotescit — repeating Migne's noun, and having to add angelicis to the second member to keep the angelic sense that principatibus would have carried on its own. That is 7a″'s mechanism running in reverse: the exposition has adapted itself to the divergent lemma, which is exactly the evidence that the divergence was in front of him. Conforming the lemma to principatibus would leave his angelicis doing work no one asked for.
[var: Vulg. Eph. 3:10 principatibus et potestatibus, "to the Principalities and the Powers" — the angelic order; Migne prints principibus, "to the princes"]
⚑ Deliberately kept OUT of the marker so it cannot elide the finding: the same span cuts qui omnia creavit between in Deo and ut innotescat. That is an internal omission of a relative clause and asserts nothing; it is logged in §2b and the marker says nothing about it, so that the noun is the one thing the marker asserts. Siglum correct.
⚠ The one place in this range I would most welcome a second opinion. If the merge judges "princes" and "Principalities" to be the same thing in a twelfth-century argument about angelic knowledge, this marker should come down. The English is unaffected either way — it renders principibus.
§3 · TYPOGRAPHY
3a · ⭐ THE BOOK BOUNDARY AT 0403 — no seam, confirming brief §7 a third time
LIBER QUINTUS. falls in chunk 0091, at the bare anchor [0403] (no band letter), followed immediately by the marginal source number 233 and then CAPUT PRIMUM. at [0403D]. Brief §7 records the question closed at LIBER SECUNDUS. (0246C) and LIBER TERTIUS. (0303A). This is the third crossing, and the fourth boundary in the work, and it behaves identically:
- Guillemets run on both sides. The last « » before the boundary is John 15:26 at 0403A; the next is in chunk 0096, three columns after it. Chunks 0091–0095 carry none at all — which is a density fluctuation, not a regime change, because chunks 0092, 0094 and 0095 are pure exposition with no adduced proof-text in guillemet position, and 0093 carries nine noted proof-texts all set in italics as lemma-adjacent quotations woven into Philip's syntax (
Bibite, inquit, vinum…), which is the italic function throughout. - Italics run identically on both sides — head lemma, re-quotation cue, displayed verse (§1.1), printed locator (
[CAP. V.]), marginal source number. - The
[CAP. V.]locator sits INSIDE the italic lemma run, exactly the behaviour brief §7 records for the locator inside a guillemet run at 0203A.
⚑ Report of an exception, per brief §7's instruction: I found none. The boundary is translated as ordinary text.
⚠ One head-rendering DRIFT the merge must settle, and it is not mine to settle. CAPUT PRIMUM. occurs five times in the work and the shipped English renders it two ways: CHAPTER ONE. at 0002 and 0026 (Books I and II), CHAPTER THE FIRST. at 0047 and 0069 (Books III and IV). I used CHAPTER THE FIRST., following the two nearest and most recent, and flag it here rather than harmonizing anything outside my own six chunks. Within a work there is one voice (translation-style, Song section, the ⚠ boundary), so this needs a merge sweep of four files, whichever way it goes. ⚑ The Latin is CAPUT PRIMUM spelled in words at every book head and numerals thereafter (CAPUT II.–CAPUT VI. in my range), exactly as brief §7a describes; that half is mirrored and needs nothing.
Heads in this range, all reproduced with the full stop, all in numerals except the book-opening CAPUT PRIMUM.: CAPUT XXVIII. CAPUT XXIX. CAPUT XXX. LIBER QUINTUS. CAPUT PRIMUM. CAPUT II. CAPUT III. CAPUT III. (cont.) CAPUT IV. CAPUT V. CAPUT VI. — the (cont.) is ours and untranslated (§10.8).
3b · ⚑ §7a mirroring — the drift point — held word by word
Mechanically checkable against the twin by script, and I would check it first in any review. None of it was regularized.
- ⭐⭐ The chapter-level pattern is the strongest datum in this range, and it is counted, not eyeballed. Sponsus/sponsus and Virgo/virgo swing by chapter, and the swing is total:
- 0093 (Caput III, cols 0407B–0411B) capitalizes EVERYTHING — Sponsus ×5, Sponsum ×2, Sponso ×2, Sponsa, Sponsi, Sponsali, Virginali, and Virgo/Virginem/Virgine/Virgini/Virginis ×11. Not one lower-case token in 1,912 words.
- 0095 (Caput V–VI, cols 0413D–0415C) is the inverse — sponsus ×4, sponsi ×3, sponso ×2, sponsae, sponsam, sponsum, sponsa, and virgo, virgineo: thirteen lower-case tokens and ONE capital, Sponsi at 0415A, which falls inside the Bride's own first-person speech. All fourteen mirrored.
- 0094 straddles: capital Sponsus at 0411C and 0412C, then lower-case sponsus and sponsa at 0413C, in the chapter's last two sentences — the same "slides into the new practice before the head" behaviour cruces-0078 §6.3 documented at Caput XIV/XV. A second instance of that shape, twenty-six columns later.
- ⭐ 0402B, both cases of Virgo in one clause, against a capital two columns earlier: virgo vel hortus virginis claudit tibi ostium jam deriso (lower ×2) against Virginis benevolentia (0400D) and Virginis sapientia (0401A). Rendered "the virgin, or the virgin's garden" and "the Virgin's".
- ⭐ 0402C, capital Virgo twelve words from lower-case virginis: adhuc Virgo tali est beneficio non contenta.
- ⭐ 0403B, lower-case virginem and virgini in one sentence, against capital Virgo at 0404B and 0403D — adversus virginem effrenata malitia praevalere, venit auster dans virgini vs Virgo non ut cremium exarescit.
- ⭐ 0405D, capital Sponsae four lines from lower-case sponsam: quomodo sponsam, quam severo… suasit mysterialis unitas amplectendam → Cujusmodi nominum videlicet Sororis et Sponsae. ⚑ And this one has a visible local logic: the capitals fall on the two words discussed as words (nominum videlicet), the lower case on the ordinary uses. Recorded as an observation, not as a rule — the 0402B pair above has no such explanation.
- ⭐⭐ 0402D–0403A, the Trinity capitalized and then not, inside three lines: sicut Pater Spiritum, sic et Filius mittere se testatur, qui spiritus etsi ubi vult… « Cum venerit, inquit, Paracletus… » Mittit ergo spiritum filius horto… — capital Pater / Spiritum / Filius, then lower-case spiritus / spiritum / filius, with a guilleted scripture quotation standing between them. All six mirrored ("the Father… the Son… the Spirit" then "which spirit… The son therefore sendeth the spirit"). ⚠ This is the mirroring decision in my range most likely to read as an error to someone who has not seen the plate, and it is one line of change if the merge prefers to regularize.
- The Spiritus sanctus question, a fourth data point. 0402C prints sancti Spiritus — auster typum sancti Spiritus obtinere. Brief §7a's worked example has 0305B Spiritus sanctus and 0356C sancti Spiritus; cruces-0078 added 0379C's split sanctusque… Spiritus. This is the second printing of the 0356C arrangement, and it is the second time the sancti Spiritus order has appeared. Rendered "the holy Spirit", lower-case holy, matching cruces-0066 and cruces-0078. So the merge is choosing among three attested arrangements with a 2–1–1 count, not among three singletons — which is the useful form of the fact.
- Pattern 3 fires TWICE, and BOTH are bare forms — the exact class brief §5 flags as the one 11638's sweep missed. 0409D legi satisfaciens vel Scripturae and 0412A non Scripturae sono tinnulo, both genitive singular, no divina, no sacra, no sancta. Both rendered "Holy Scripture." ⚑ There is no other Scriptura of any form in the six chunks (scripted).
3c · Marginal source-edition numbers
231 (0400D) · 232 (0402C) · 233 (0403, immediately under LIBER QUINTUS.) · 234 (0405D) · 235 (0407C) · 236 (0409B) · 237 (0411A) · 238 (0412C) · 239 (0414B). Continuous with cruces-0084's 223–230. Each kept italic and verbatim at the exact word it interrupts, and the English clause was built round each rather than moving it: 231 falls between bibendi and repulsam duriorem, 232 between vultu ei and placido, 234 between severo and et sincero, 237 between documentum and quid sibi vult, 238 between vobis autem and mihi ministrantibus, 239 between subtilius and alloquenti. ⚠ 232's and 239's slots forced "present thee to her with a calm 232 countenance" and "more sweetly and more subtly 239 speaketh"; both are more contorted than I would otherwise write, and both are deliberate. ⚑ 233 is the odd one and worth a line: it stands alone on its own line between the book head and the chapter head, beside a bare [0403] with no band letter — the only bare anchor in the range.
3d · Pattern 17 — decided by morphology throughout, never by who is addressed
- Singular → thou. The address to the north wind, which is sustained for two columns and is the range's densest singular run (~35 tokens): Tu, ait, qui tibi posuisti sedem… surge… te securum… Putasti similem te fore… dicebare… tuae nequitiae… compesce… evanesce… te disperge… te immerge… non tua ludibria… tibi perdito… corrupisti… tibi ostium (0401D–0402B) · the address to the south wind: Tu igitur qui non gaudes… nec… sinis… te praesenta… veni: spira et fla (0402C) · and both again at 0403B–C: Surge, ait, aquilo, erumpe… exere… intona, fulgura, perstrepe, ingere… congere, adde… ne putes… quidquid ingeris… Tu aquilo surge et insurge… persona… tu auster intro spira, da… tu maligne… exaspera… tu benigne confirma. Likewise the Bridegroom to the Virgin at 0405C (Tu, inquit, sollicite petis ut veniam), and the scriptural singulars Ezek. 3:1 (comede… loquere), Ps. 80:11 (Dilata os tuum), Ps. 118:73 (Da mihi… mandata tua), Ps. 31:8 (tibi dabo, et instruam te).
- Plural → you. John 15:26 (quem ego mittam vobis) · Philip's address to the worldly-wise at 0401C (convenite… vos compedibus expedite… effutite… vestri ruinam studii… resarcite) · his address to his brethren at 0404A (Nunquid non vobis visus est aquilo) and 0407B (Nostis favum) · Prov. 9:5–6 (miscui vobis: relinquite… vivite) and Wisdom's own gloss on it (Vos, ait, quos tenet infantia… laboratis… bibite) · Ovid (Quid vos perdiderit… nescitis) · 1 Cor. 2:2 (inter vos) and 3:2 (lac vobis) · Isa. 55:1 (Venite, emite) · Cant. 5:1d (Comedite… bibite et inebriamini) and Philip's whole gloss on it (0411C–0413A: Vos ait… comedite quae vobis apponuntur… intelligite… vobis autem mihi ministrantibus… capitis… estote… videamini quod coepistis… bibite… diligite quod… percepistis, ~20 tokens).
⭐⭐ The pair the merge should like is the finest one this work has yet produced, and it needs no apparatus at all. Within eight lines at 0411C–0412A Philip sets the Song's plural Comedite… bibite… vobis (the Bridegroom to the angels) beside Ezekiel's singular comede… loquere (God to one prophet) — and his entire argument is that "eating" means "understanding" in both. Under Pattern 17 the English reads "Eat, O friends… eat the things that are set before you" and then "Son of man, eat this volume, and going speak", and a reader can see, with nothing but the pronouns, that Philip has moved from a heavenly court to a single man. A flat "you" makes the move invisible; a flat "thou" falsifies it. This is the Dorotheus Phil. 4:7 case (Pattern 17's worked example) reproduced in Latin.
§4 · PATTERN 7 / 8 / 9 / 10 — three [sic:], and the readings rendered as printed
None of the three carried runs is ALSO translated in the running text (brief §8's named failure — checked word by word on a separate pass, after the prose was drafted).
- ⭐⭐ 0407A
[sic: fovum]— the lemma defect. See §1.2; not repeated. Read favum, certain. - ⭐ 0408D
[sic: attunt]— et inde in celebrato nuptiarum mysterio Sponsus egreditur; tantam secum attunt; tantam voluit plenitudinem nuptiis interesse. attunt is not a Latin word in any form — not a verb, not a noun, no attested medieval spelling. Read attulit, probable: tantam secum attulit ("he brought so great a fullness with him") is what the accusative tantam requires, and the next clause supplies the very noun (tantam… plenitudinem). Carried untranslated in italics: the English reads "so great he [sic: attunt] with himself; so great a fullness he willed to be present at the nuptials", and it deliberately does not say "brought". ⚑ Recorded but NOT marked[d:]: the doubled tantam looks like a compositor's eye-skip, but the two occurrences govern different constructions and the second carries its own noun, so it is not the repeated run Pattern 11 marks. Logged here instead. - ⭐ 0413D
[sic: sommo]— nuptiali pausat in thalamo, et oculos vel ad modicum sommo claudit. sommo is not a Latin word; read somno, certain. The internal control is three columns wide and inside the same chapter: Migne prints somno / somni / somnum correctly six times in the next two columns — procul a somno pellens nubes (0414A), inventam somni dulcedinem (0414B), somnum excutiat violenter (0414B), cum gustata somni dulcedine (0414D), praeoptato somni munere (0415A), somno delectabili delinita (0415B) — and the chapter's entire subject is the Bride's sleep. Carried untranslated: "and closeth her eyes even for a little with [sic: sommo]".
All three marker contents verified as verbatim substrings of the twin by script.
Rendered as printed, no marker (real words merely wrong, or Pattern 9 exempt) — conjectures live here and NOT in the text:
- ⛔ 0411A, in quo omnis qui sane Christus amat, cum eo permanet in aeternum. Read Christum, certain: qui is the subject of amat, so Christus stands in an object slot as a nominative. ⚑ Pattern 9, and it needs to be told apart from the Jesus/Jesu case at 0397B (cruces-0084 §1.3), which it superficially resembles. There, the nominative produced a readable alternative sense ("Jesus anointed the feet"), so the English could and did render the mis-bound agency and a
[var:]fired. Here no alternative reading exists — cum eo permanet fixes Christ as the one abided with, and English has no way to put a nominative in an accusative slot. Rendered normally, "everyone who soundly loveth Christ", unmarked, and logged so a sweep does not churn it. ⚠ The distinction is worth keeping: agency mis-bound is Pattern 7a mechanism 5 only when English can express the wrong binding. - 0407A, quamvis necdum omnia juxta libitum Virginis peregisse — an accusative infinitive left hanging where peregerit is wanted. Anacoluthon with no English exponent; rendered "although he had not yet accomplished all things according to the Virgin's pleasure." Pattern 9, logged.
- 0408C, suavitate inebriat quampraeclara. Run together for quam praeclara. ⚠ Deliberately NOT marked
[sic:], against my first instinct: quamplures, quamplurimi and quamprimum are attested solid compounds and this is the same formation, so Pattern 9's "attested medieval spellings are correct Latin" exempts it, and Pattern 10's run-together class is for type that cannot be rendered. It can: rendered "with a right excellent sweetness."* ⚑ Logged rather than marked, and flagged as a judgment the merge may reverse — if it does, the marker is[sic:quampraeclara*] and the English must stop rendering it. - 0409A debriare and 0413B debriati, against the lemma's own inebriamini / inebriantur / inebriat. debriare is attested late Latin; Pattern 9, unmarked. ⭐ But kept lexically distinct in English on purpose — inebriare = "to inebriate" (the lemma word, and Philip glosses it: inebriantur, cum stupent et haerent), debriare = "to make drunken". Collapsing them would put the lemma's word in two places Migne does not.
- 0401C, tumorem philosophicum iteratis vomitibus effutite. effutire is "to blab, to pour out"; with vomitibus the natural English is "cast out", which would be a repair. Rendered on the root sense, "pour out"**, and logged.
- 0405D, quem severo et sincero commercio suasit mysterialis unitas amplectendam. severo is odd of a marriage-commerce and sacro would suit; but severus is a real word and the austerity theme runs through the chapter (Districta castigatio, abstinentiae fortis austeritas). Rendered as printed, "by a severe and sincere commerce", NOT emended.
- 0400D, vel oblatae forte gratis repulsae contumeliam non referre. gratis (adverb) where gratiae (genitive, with oblatae) is wanted. Real word; rendered as printed — "or not to bring back the reproach of a repulse where grace is perchance offered" — and logged.
- 0413D, Virgo forum forense judicans quidquid alto silentio non applaudit. Not corrupt, but very hard: forum forense is a figura etymologica with no English exponent. Rendered as closely as the printed words allow — "judging whatsoever applaudeth not in deep silence to be a market and a thing of the market-place" — and logged rather than smoothed.
- 0406B, non avis alta sapiens introire. alta sapiens ("wise for high things") of a bird is strange but constructible; rendered "the bird that is wise for high things", unmarked.
- Attested forms rendered normally, Pattern 9, no italics, no
[sic:]: spiritalis / spiritali / spiritalem throughout (Migne's habitual spelling) · Paracletus (0403A) · Tanquam (0410C) · vermescentis (0401D) · hauritorium (0401A ×2) · reliduntur (0404B) · cremium (0404B) · repostoriam (0407B) · mysterialis / mysterialibus (0405D, 0412C) · sophistae (0406D) · nundinas (0411B) · asseclae (0411B) · comparticipes (0411B) · exstasim (0413B) · delinita (0415B).
Pattern 8 — punctuation, three live cases, all preserved:
- ⭐ 0413A, a full stop in mid-sentence followed by lower case: Si me, inquit. donante sacramenta recondita capitis intellectu… Brief §5 is explicit that Migne's lower case after a misplaced stop stands, and Pattern 8 forbids deleting the stop. Rendered "If, by me, saith he. giving, ye take in the hidden sacraments by understanding…" — deliberately broken. ⚠ Do not churn this. Same call cruces-0084 §4 made for inquam favus at 0391C.
- 0400D–0401A, a semicolon splitting a relative from its own main verb: Nos enim quibus placet inventa suavitas sentiendi, sed claudit velut aditum labor nimius requirendi; illius non exasperat… Preserved.
- 0408D, a semicolon between the participial run and its verb: et inde in celebrato nuptiarum mysterio Sponsus egreditur; tantam secum attunt — preserved, and see §4.2.
Also preserved: 0401D's colon before et fluent (§2f), which is load-bearing; 0407A's colon inside the lemma (cum melle meo: bibi vinum); 0412C's stop inside the note parenthesis ((Psal. CXVIII.)).
Negation audit (brief §9), second pass, against the Latin. Every printed non / nec / neque / nisi / nihil / nil / nullus / nunquam / nondum / necdum / nequaquam / nonnisi / nesci- / ne in the six Latin chunks was matched against the English after the prose was drafted. The dense clusters are 0401B–0402B (quidquam morticinum, quidquam noxium non accedit, non serpens insibilat, non venefico flatu laedit; non lapsus desuper ramus turbat, limus influens non succedit… quidquam inesse turbidum non concedit… nivibus non solutis… largiore copia non haurimus… ne festinus praeveniat… non super horti pulchritudinem saeviturum… non sit per alterum luminare… nec Altissimus potest dici… non tua ludibria, non ludificantium placet jocus… non est locus… non insanit… ne cures), 0402C–0403C (non admittit… non gaudes… nec… sinis… nil habetur caliginis, nil obsceni… non potest aquilo sustinere… non prorsus removet… nisi missus, nec ad opus nequam exsurgere, nisi data licentia… nec timere minas… posse non deficere… nesciens rei finem… ne putes… vel prorsus non sentiat, vel saltem non deficiat), 0404A–0405B (Nunquid non vobis… Nunquid non dure intonat… Non est dictu facile… non excussit… non ut cremium exarescit… non auro comparabilia non argento… Non ergo illi soli… non claudere cuncta silentio… non potest diutius desiderium… non ardere… non praevaleant imo nec habeant quidquam juris… non confusam… non vocatum… non vocare nequeat… non alterius, non in jus alienum… nisi forte senserit intempestum… non praetendunt, quae non sicut nonnullorum visa placent… non tam in agro… nec adventum postulatum… non se spondet), *0405C–0407A (Nec enim dignum est… non bona magis initia… ne fastidium generet… nequaquam forte solis praesentibus… ne putetur illic torpore… nil egisse… necdum omnia… non inferret extollentiae cariem, non vermiculum, non laesuram… non posset agri bestia, non avis… nil suum in conceptu… nil depopulatorium… non seminant… non violentia, non fraudulentia… non exaudit… ne in agro feris exposito laedatur… non praevalens… Non vult enim… quamvis caeteris inexperta), 0407A–0408A (non addit se perfusum… cum non myrrha videatur… cum non dicat aromata quispiam… non molli somno… nihil amaritudinis… non cujus nocte repetenda… non spem tendit falsam… neque vannum… nil melle dulcius… nulla Christo gratior… laedi non sustinet, arescere non permittit… negato sibi melle… non dulcescit… non clarescit… non assumit… non corruptibili… non aquis turbidis… non algere se defectu), 0408A–0409B (non illud insanabile… non aquas insipidas… non annorum… non aetatis… non defectu virium… non Falernum… nequaquam ad majora sufficit… quae non amat, vel potius, nonnisi carnaliter scit amare… non ad lucem promovet… non serenat… nescitis amare… non vino… non exhauritur hydria… aquam nescit… non princeps… nescius obstupescit… non conqueritur quispiam… non Sponsus arguitur… nil deesse… non debent nuptiae sine vino… quae non fiunt solius carnis intuitu… non vinum deficit… non solum reficit… non carnali… non visibiliter vult videri), 0409B–0410D (non falleretur homo, nec doleret… non in illis, sed in hominibus… non satis utile, non fecundum, si non primo et maximo… non persequitur odio novercali… Neque enim duritia lapidum… nec mens ejus aenea… non divino derogat, non vino praejudicat, non semper est adversarius… si non solus principari… non est me dignus… non damnavit… careat vel mensura… necdum sunt idonei… sine primo… non novit invidere… nonnisi crucifixum… necdum poterant… Non judicavi… nisi Jesum Christum… non escam… non detrectat), 0411A–0412C (absque argento: et absque ulla commutatione… non placari… non admittitur ulla commutatio, non argentum… non auro, non argento, non terreno… Non enim pecuniarum congerie… pretium vile nescit, nec ab eo vult teneri… nullam… praeferunt mentionem… alterum ille sine altero non sitiret… pulsis longe non amantibus… non esse inopes sustinet, non jejunos… remotisque non amantibus… non indigentiam intendit pellere… nihil vel parum prodest… non dente, sed mente… non sola cibi contentus specie… non Scripturae sono tinnulo… nequit suae solius viribus… necdum sibi sufficit… nullo mihi studio nullis… viribus… ne ex toto a pastu sim dignus abigi), 0412C–0413C (noluit eos esse… non amicis… quod natura non obtinet… Neque enim, ut nonnulli aiunt… non angelo, non homini satis… si non intellectui… non contenti… Nihil enim vel parum prodest… si non gratia potiore… populus non intelligens… non diligens intellecta… non solum intelligere… non sufficiunt admirari), and 0413D–0415C (non vino… non applaudit… Ne vero dormitio videatur… ne turbet moles… ne secretum cubiculi quaevis intret… non refutat… nihil se medium interponet… ne, ut volo, veniat ad perfectum… si non meae voluntati… non mediocriter complacere… exteris non patere… non instar patulum lupanaris… nunquam prorsus noverit, nisi cum ipse pulsaverit… non sibi claustrum aperiat, non prorumpat… nisi pulsata fuerit… non solum non cuivis, sed nec sponso festinat aperire… nisi tandem… non reposcit… non audit vel exaudit… non obturat… non* solum secretius).
No negation was dropped and none was supplied. ⚠ Two places were caught by this pass and would otherwise have shipped wrong, both recorded per brief §9:
- ⛔ 0405A, mechanism 5 (scope), and it is the one I would most want a blind read to confirm. quae non sicut nonnullorum visa placent, tacta protinus evanescunt: the
nongoverns both verbs — the apples do not do what other men's apples do, namely please when seen and vanish when touched. The draft had rendered it "which please not, as the apples of some men do, when seen, and straightway when touched vanish away", which puts evanescunt outside the negation and makes Philip say the Virgin's apples vanish. Fixed to "which do not, as the apples of some men do, please when seen and straightway vanish when touched." ⚑ No negation count could have caught this — the non is present in both drafts. It is Pattern 7a's mechanism 3/5 territory, and exactly why the audit is a read and not a tally. - 0402B, mechanism 2 (a softened negation). Inter nostra seria non tua ludibria, non ludificantium placet jocus — two members under one placet. The draft rendered the first "thy mockeries have no place", which is a paraphrase rather than the printed non… placent. Fixed to "thy mockeries please not, the jest of them that make sport pleaseth not."
§5 · CONVENTIONS SET OR HELD IN THIS RANGE
- ⭐⭐
emissio= "emission" — INHERITED AND HELD, and mine is the first range to inherit it. cruces-0084 §5.1 set it at Cant. 4:13 and flagged that "the 0090+ range inherits this word." It arrives in my first sentence: 0400D Sicut emissiones tuae mala sunt Punica… sic emissio tua, est non horti unius, sed potius fons hortorum. Two occurrences, both rendered "emissions" / "emission", and the sentence is the hinge on which Caput XXVIII turns from Cant. 4:13's emissiones to Cant. 4:15's fons hortorum. Douay's "thy plants" would sever it. ⛔ The cross-chunk decision held; the merge must not undo it. - ⭐
lactareat Hos. 2:14 = "to give milk", NOT Douay's "allure" — set here, and the whole of Caput V depends on it. Douay renders lactabo eam "I will allure her" (following the Hebrew), and lacto does carry that sense in Latin. But Philip reads the milk, and reads nothing else: the verse arrives at the end of two chapters built on lac (Cant. 5:1's vinum meum cum lacte meo, 1 Cor. 3:2's lac vobis potum dedi, the Virgin's teneritudinis lac), and his gloss is unmistakable — Lactabo, ait, cum in sinu meo inclinato capite se deponet (0414C) and Lactat ergo Virginem sponsus, cum ad sui arcana pectoris introducit (0414D). Rendered "I will give her milk" / "giveth the Virgin milk" at all three sites. This is the Song section's case 2 exactly: where the gloss IS the word, an English word sharing no sense makes the gloss explain nothing. ⚠ Offered to the merge as a new fixed equivalence; the verse does not recur (scripted). - ⚠
thalamus= "bridal chamber" — ADOPTING cruces-0084 §5.5's recommendation, and the merge should now treat it as settled. That file rendered thalamus two ways (0390B "bridal chamber", 0395D "nuptial bed") and said: "a merge that wants one English word for thalamus should pick 'bridal chamber' and change 0395D." I used "bridal chamber" at all four sites — 0403A horto sive thalamo virginali, 0404A confirma thalamum, 0408D thalamum nuptialem, 0413D nuptiali pausat in thalamo — which makes the recommendation a one-file change (0395D) instead of a five-file one. ⚑ The two nuptialis sites read "the nuptial bridal chamber", which is heavy, and the heaviness is the price of the single word. - Bed- and chamber-words:
cubiledoes NOT occur in this range, so brief §5's live drift closure needs nothing from here. Null recorded. cubiculum = "chamber" (0413D, 0414B), held from cruces-0078 §5.2. lectus / lectulus do not occur. ⚠ accubitus is new and I had to set it: rendered "reclining" (0413D molliore accubitu se reclinat → "in a softer reclining"; 0415A in meo… accubitu praeoptato → "in my chosen reclining"). "Couch" was deliberately NOT used, because brief §5 reserves it for cubile and a third word entering the pair would void the lectus/lectulus distinction the brief protects. ⚑ Flagged because accubitus is Cant. 1:12's word (Dum esset rex in accubitu suo) and later ranges will meet it as a lemma. - Brief §5 vocabulary held where it occurs: adolescentulae = "maidens" (0414D, assistentibus sibi… adolescentulis) · cellarium = "storeroom"* (0411C, aperto cellario, matching cellaria = storerooms) · charitas = "charity" (0404D, 0410B, 0414D — and note 0414D's fraterna vigilans *charitate stands eight lines from amore et curam proximorum, rendered "love", so the §5 split is visible) · Sponsus = Bridegroom, Sponsa = Bride, Virgo = Virgin, with §3b's lower-case instances mirrored · Pattern 3 — see §3b · muraenula, ferculum, vermiculatas, cancelli, nigra/fusca/formosa, clementia, misericordia, moralitas, recti, torcular, candidatio, vicus, platea, amica mea, tomus do not occur in this range. ⚑ vermiculum DOES occur once (0406B, non inferret extollentiae cariem, non vermiculum, non laesuram) and is rendered "little worm" — the literal English that brief §5's vermiculatas ruling is built on (vermiculate → vermilion → little worm), here in its plain sense.
- New fixed equivalences this range had to set, offered to the merge: - aquilo = "the north wind" · auster = "the south wind", Englished rather than carried, on the brief §5 candidatio principle: Caput XXIX–XXX is four columns of weather and the argument (cold/warm, frost/breath, Lucifer/Spirit) is unreadable in Latin. The vocatives read "thou north wind", "O south wind". arcturus stays "Arcturus" (0401D), a proper name. - favus = "honeycomb" · mel = "honey" · cera = "wax", fixed through Caput III's eight-column exposition, where all three are the argument (0407B–0407D). See §1.2 for the lemma's broken type. - inebriare = "to inebriate" · debriare = "to make drunken" · ebrius = "drunken", kept apart — §4 above. - volumen = "volume" through the Ezekiel sequence (0411D–0412B, six occurrences), not Douay's "book", because Migne prints librum four times in the same paragraph for the physical book and Philip's whole gloss turns on the roll being expansum (spread open) as against involutum (rolled up). liber = "book" accordingly. - sodales = "companions" · amici = "friends" · charissimi = "most dearly beloved", fixed at Cant. 5:1d, where Philip distinguishes the three explicitly (0413C: amicos nominavit, ebrios autem… charissimorum nomine cumulavit). - affectus = "affection" · effectus = "effect", held rigidly from cruces-0078 §7 — 0404B's sic affectu vario et effectu contrario auster et aquilo conseruntur is the pair again, twenty-eight columns later. - intellectus = "understanding" · intelligentia = "understanding" (of the faculty's act) · sensus = "sense", and comestio = "eating", fixed through Caput IV, where comedere = intelligere is the chapter's thesis. - probatio = "trial" · tribulatio/tribulare = "tribulation"/"to tribulate", fixed at 0404D's Rom. 5 chain (§2c′.2), so the chain survives in English as a chain. - hauritorium = "bucket" · funis = "rope" · puteus = "well" · fons = "fountain", fixed at Cant. 4:15, where fons and puteus are set against each other for a full column (0400D–0401B: the shallow fountain for the weak, the deep well for the strong) and a single English word would collapse the argument. - phantasma = "phantasm" · phantasia = "phantasy" (0414A), kept apart because Migne prints both in one clause.
§6 · THINGS DELIBERATELY NOT REPORTED (brief §10, checked once each)
- Column-band arithmetic. Chunk 0091's anchors run
[0403B] [0403C] [0404A] [0404B] [0404C]and then back to a bare[0403]before[0403D] [0404D]. That is §10.1's named false positive twice over — a recurring column number and a band regression — and it is normal: the book head is set on a fresh page and Migne's marks interleave. Checked on the only real signal: no anchor in any of the six chunks is followed by text broken mid-word or mid-construction. Chunk 0094 opens with[0411C]inline before its lemma and 0092 closes with a bare[0407A]under## CAPUT III.; both are clean. No[ed:], no patch, no plate check, nothing reported. noteCountmatches the body[n:]count in all six chunks (1/0/0/9/10/1), verified by script against the Latin twins.- No
[f:]. 11632 is lemma-and-gloss, not a florilegium (§10.4). - No
[d:]— see §4.2 for the one candidate and why it is not one. No[nt:]: all twenty-one notes are bare citations, none editorial prose. No[ed:]: nothing lost. - Migne's own
( sic )does not occur here. Migne's[ alias …]bracket does not occur here (§10.7 — a work-wide singleton at 0321B). (cont.)on 0093's## CAPUT III.head is ours and is not translated (§10.8).
§7 · WHAT A LATER BLIND READ SHOULD LOOK AT FIRST
- ⛔⛔ 0407A, the lemma's fovum (§1.2). The single most repairable place in the range, and the one a reader will silently fix without noticing. Confirm the
[sic:]is still there, that the English does not also say "honeycomb" in that sentence, and that favum still stands correctly six times in the two columns after it. - ⛔ 0405A, the non… placent / evanescunt scope (§4, negation audit). The one place a faithful negation was nearly put outside its own clause. A count cannot see it; only the pair can.
- ⭐⭐ §1.1's displayed-verse rule. The claim to test is arithmetical and cheap: ten intra-paragraph line breaks in 126 chunks, nine italic quotations and one bare block that is Philip's own poem. If a single displayed classical quotation anywhere in the work is bare, the rule is wrong and cruces-0084 §3b's narrower statement should stand instead. I did not verify the identifications of the 0006, 0007 and 0110 verses against an edition — only their marking — so treat the poet-attributions in that table as provisional and the marking as scripted.
- ⭐⭐ 0412C, the
(ibid.)→ Ps. 118 on Ps. 31:8 (§1.3). Two things to test separately: that Ps. 118 contains no such clause (certain), and that Ps. 31:8 is the right verse (verbatim). ⛔ And confirm that nothing has been "corrected" — §10.2 is the reason. - ⚠ 0412D, the Eph. 3:10
[var:](§2g). The divergence is certain (principibus ‖ principatibus); the judgment that it clears Pattern 14 is mine, and rests on Philip's principibus et angelicis potestatibus two lines later. If the marker is wrong it is wrong on materiality, not on fact. - ⚠ 0401D, the Cant. 4:16
[var:](§2f). Same test, and note the deliberate asymmetry with ut comedat at 0403D. Reversing either one should reverse it in the direction §2f names. - §3b's Trinity capitalization at 0402D–0403A — the mirroring decision in this range most likely to read as an error to someone who has not seen the plate.
- ⚠ §3a's
CAPUT PRIMUMdrift — 2 files say "CHAPTER ONE.", 2 say "CHAPTER THE FIRST.", and mine makes it 3–2. A merge sweep, not a range fix.
Philip of Harvengt, Commentaria in Cantica canticorum, PL 203. Six chunks, 6,457 Latin words, covering Caput VII–XVI of Book V — the exposition of Cant. 5:2–5:9: Aperi mihi, soror mea, amica mea → Exspoliavi me tunica mea → Dilectus meus misit manum suam per foramen → Surrexi ut aperirem dilecto meo → Manus meae distillaverunt myrrham → Pessulum ostii mei aperui dilecto meo → Anima mea liquefacta est → Invenerunt me vigiles → Adjuro vos, filiae Hierusalem → Qualis est dilectus tuus ex dilecto.
⚑ Book label, corrected for the merge. LIBER QUINTUS. stands in chunk 0091 (col. 0403B); LIBER QUARTUS. in 0068, LIBER SEXTUS. in 0107. So this range is Book V, and cruces-0084 (chunks 0084–0089, cols 0386D–0400C) is Book IV, not Book V as its header states. A label slip only; nothing in that file's findings depends on it.
⚑ No book head falls in this range. The chunks carry only CAPUT heads, VII → XVI continuously, and every one carries the full stop (CAPUT VII. … CAPUT XVI.); the English heads reproduce it. Numerals throughout — no CAPUT PRIMUM-style spelling.
Marker totals for this range: 3 [var:] · 3 [sic:] · 0 [ed:] · 0 [d:] · 0 [nt:] · 0 [f:]. verify-english.mjs reports no errors on any of the six (the run's VERIFY FAILED is the not-yet-translated chunks after 0101). Four ratio warnings — 0096 1.61, 0097 1.67, 0099 1.64, 0100 1.68 — all inside the 1.35–1.68 band this work has shipped. Ratios: 1.61 / 1.67 / 1.57 / 1.64 / 1.67 / 1.58.
Column anchors (12/12/8/11/8/11), [n:] strings (14/3/0/1/1/1 — each matching its frontmatter noteCount) and guillemet counts were diffed 1:1 against the Latin twins by script: anchors byte-identical in order and place, [n:] contents byte-identical in order. Every [sic:] content was machine-checked as a verbatim substring of its Latin twin; every [var:] was machine-checked NOT to be one. Marginal source-edition numbers 240–249 verified in place.
Guillemets: 1 « against 1 » in the whole range, at 0416D, balanced. That single pair is the last guillemet in the work — see §1.1, which is this range's headline finding.
§1 · ⭐⭐ THE FINDINGS THE MERGE SHOULD CARRY
1.1 · ⭐⭐⭐ THE GUILLEMETS STOP — the last « » in all 126 chunks stands at col. 0416D, and the change of practice falls inside this range
Brief §7 asks each range to report "a genuine change of practice at an Explicit/Incipit… as an exception with the column named," and warns that no single range can see a work-wide pattern. I ran the ⭐ whole-work grep. Counting « in the body of every one of the 126 Latin chunks:
| chunks | cols | « |
|---|---|---|
| 0000–0089 | 0181A–0400C | 420 |
| 0090 | 0400D–0403A | 1 |
| 0091–0095 | 0403B–0415C | 0 |
| 0096 | 0415D–0418C | 1 ← the last one in the work |
| 0097–0125 | 0418D–0490B | 0 |
422 guillemets across the first ninety-seven chunks; then not one in the remaining twenty-nine — 29 chunks, ~72 columns, the back half of Book V and the whole of Book VI. Chunk 0089 alone (four columns) carries ten.
⛔ It is a change of MARK, not a fall-off in quotation. My five post-0416D chunks carry at least eight quotations adduced as authorities with an attribution verb and a correct [n:] — Isa. 53:1 @0421A, 1 Cor. 13:1 @0421A, 3 Kings 8:24 @0421B, Ps. 62:7 @0424D, Eph. 5:29 @0430D, plus the Cant. lemmata — and every one of them is set in italics. The quotations did not stop; the guillemet did.
⭐⭐ And the controlled comparison sits inside this one range, five columns apart, on the same prophet.
« Plenus sum, inquit
[n: (Isa. I)]. Et iterum: Laboravi sustinens (ibid). » (0416D — guilleted) Domine, ait, quis credidit auditui nostro[n: (Isa. LXIII)]? (0421A — italic)
Same author, named in Philip's frame both times (Unde per Isaiam Deus / Unde Isaias), same inquit/ait attribution shape, same [n:] apparatus, one guilleted and one not.
⭐⭐ And there is a stronger control still, on the SAME VERSE, which I record here because the merge will want the best specimen. Isa. 53:7 is printed twice in the work, forty-one columns apart, with the identical siglum:
« Oblatus est enim quia ipse voluit
[n: (Isa. LIII)]; » (0399C, chunk 0089) Oblatus est, ait, quia [0440B] ipse voluit[n: (Isa. LIII)]. (0440A–B, chunk 0106)
Same verse, same words, same note, same ait-shaped attribution, adduced as proof both times — guilleted before col. 0416D, italic after. (Verified by me in the Latin twins at the coordinator's prompt; the neighbouring John 10:18 at 0440A is italic too.) Nothing about the function has changed between the two printings; only the mark has. This is §8b's shape of evidence applied to typography — the same shape as the brief's Virgil control (guilleted 0251D, bare 0385A), but with a date attached: the mark is available at 0416D and gone by 0421A.
⚠ Where exactly. The transition is inside chunk 0096, between 0416D and 0417A: eight lines after the guilleted Isaiah, John 10:33 (De bono, inquiunt, opere non lapidamus te… [n: (Joan. X)]) is already italic, and so is everything thereafter. I do not claim a clean switch-point, because narrative speech and proof-text are not the same function and 0090–0095 (another agent's) is already unguilleted; what I claim is the countable fact and its last instance.
⚑ This does not contradict brief §7 — it dates it. §7's functional division (« = a quotation adduced as an authority · italics = everything else) is an accurate description of chunks 0000–0096. From col. 0418D onward there is no division to describe: italics carry every class. The brief's two book boundaries (0246C, 0303A) genuinely carry no seam, as it says; this is not at a book boundary either — LIBER SEXTUS. is thirty-nine columns later, at 0442C. It is a change of compositor's practice that happens mid-book.
⚑ The consequence for reading, and it is the practical half. Brief §7's closing warning — "an italic run in this work is NOT evidence of a pre-seam regime; it is probably just a lemma" — is sound advice through chunk 0089 and misleading after it. From 0097 the italics carry the lemma and every adduced quotation, so the mark cannot sort them and only function can: the lemma is the verse under exposition (it opens a Caput and is re-quoted in fragments as the gloss advances); a quotation is adduced as proof and normally carries an attribution verb and an [n:]. ✅ My chunks 0097–0101 were collated on that basis — every italic run was treated as a candidate quotation and collated against the Vulgate, not assumed to be a lemma — which is how §1.6 (Isa. 53:1 Domine), §2b's 3 Kings 8:24 (Ore fronted, tuo dropped), Ps. 62:7 (agrees, siglum correct) and §4's Eph. 5:29 unquam were all found. Nothing in those five chunks was passed over as "just a lemma."
⛔ What the merge should do with it. Nothing to any chunk: every range has reproduced what is printed, which is the rule, and mine reproduces one « and one ». But §7 should be given its scope — "« » carries an adduced authority in the first 97 chunks; the work abandons the mark entirely at col. 0416D" — so that the four remaining agents (0102–0125) are not left hunting for a mark that is not there, and do not read its absence as their own error. The table above is the whole evidence and it is reproducible in one grep.
1.2 · ⭐⭐⭐ Cant. 5:9 at 0429B — Migne prints ex dilecto ONCE where the Vulgate prints it twice, and Philip collates the variant himself, in the text, and reports his manuscripts
Qualis est dilectus tuus ex dilecto, o pulcherrima mulierum: qualis est dilectus tuus, quia sic adjurasti nos? (0429B, head lemma of Caput XVI)
Vulg. Cant. 5:9: Qualis est dilectus tuus ex dilecto, o pulcherrima mulierum? qualis est dilectus tuus ex dilecto, quia sic adiurasti nos? The phrase stands in both questions. Migne's second question has lost it.
⭐⭐⭐ And the omission is not merely expounded — it is adjudicated. Philip builds his whole Christological reading of the doubled question on the asymmetry (0430B–C):
Prima enim inquisitio cum dixisset: Dilectus statim ex dilecto supponit, secunda, dilectus repetens ex dilecto juxta quosdam codices non apponit: per hoc dans intelligi Deum dignum diligi ex Patre esse nihilominus diligendo, hominem vero etsi diligi, tamen dignum esse ex homine non aequaliter amplectendo… quarum prima posuit ex dilecto, secunda voluit reticere.
— and then, extraordinarily, he reports the collation against himself:
Quod si dixerit quispiam quia illud et prima posuit, et secunda non tacuit, nolo nimis contendere, pertinaciter reluctari, quia multos inveni codices huic testimonio suffragari. Nam, etsi non omnes, quos invenire potui codices, plerique tamen ex eis, sicut in prima inquisitione, sic et secunda habent dilectus ex dilecto; neque satis compertum habeo utrum ex dilecto repetitum fuerit ab auctore, an potius scriptum vitio vel errore. (0430C)
This is a twelfth-century commentator doing textual criticism on his own Bible, naming the two readings, conceding that MOST of the codices he could find carry the phrase twice, and declining to decide whether the repetition is the author's or a scribe's error. Migne's lemma prints the minority reading — the one Philip's doctrine of the two substances requires — and the four columns of Caput XVI stand on its absence.
[var:] fired at the head lemma, naming the Vulgate's repetition and pointing at 0430B–C. It does not speculate about origin (Pattern 14) — Philip's own two sentences do that better than any note could.
⚑ For the merge, this is a member of brief §6's class with an internal witness, which none of the other four members has. Zech. 4:14, Gen. 3:19, Bethel and Eccles. 9:1 are all inferred from recurrence; here the author states the variant. ⚠ It is also the one instance in this work where a merge might reasonably demote the marker on §10.7's logic ("Migne's own [alias] bracket… the divergence is already adjudicated on the page"). I fired it anyway, and the reason is that §10.7 concerns MIGNE'S apparatus. This adjudication is Philip's, inside the body text, in the twelfth century, in Latin, sixty lines below the lemma — it is not apparatus and a reader meeting the lemma has no signal at all. Flagged so the merge can rule the class once.
⚑ The phrase recurs at 0448A (chunk 0108) — Supra enim dixerant: Qualis est dilectus ex dilecto — where the daughters recall the question. Printed once there too (and with tuus dropped). So Migne is internally consistent: two printings, both single. That is the copy-text shape.
1.3 · ⭐⭐ Cant. 5:7 at 0427A — Migne prints vigiles for the Vulgate's custodes, and Philip's cross-reference note proves it is copy-text, not a slip
Invenerunt me vigiles qui circumeunt civitatem: percusserunt me, et vulnerarunt me, tulerunt pallium meum custodes murorum. (0427A)
Vulg. Cant. 5:7: Invenerunt me custodes qui circumeunt civitatem; percusserunt me, et vulneraverunt me; tulerunt pallium meum mihi custodes murorum.
Two divergences, and the first is material:
- ⭐⭐ vigiles for custodes. In the Vulgate the verse uses one word twice — custodes find her, custodes murorum take her cloak. In Migne it uses two, and Philip's Caput XIV is built on the distinction. He keeps the two parties apart for two columns (vigiles five times, custodes murorum → the apostles → the walls), and closes the chapter by subordinating one to the other:
civitatem ambiunt ad custodiam fortiter expediti, si tamen a vigilibus digne fuerint custoditi. (0428B)
The keepers of the walls are themselves kept by the watchmen. On the Vulgate's text, where both are custodes, that sentence cannot be written.
- The Vulgate's mihi is gone — a deletion, named inside the same
[var:]so it cannot be elided. Nothing turns on it (Philip supplies the dative himself at 0427D, gaudet Virgo pallium sibi tolli), but it is recorded as a deletion because §8a's John 19:39 case is exactly the shape that leaves nothing on the page to notice.
⭐⭐⭐ The proof that vigiles is copy-text and not a compositor's reach is inside the work, and Migne prints the pointer. The very next words carry [n: (sup. l. III, c. 22)] — Migne's only note in the chunk, an internal cross-reference — and Philip writes Longe retro eamdem Virginem dicti sunt vigiles invenisse. I resolved it: Book III, Caput XXII is chunk 0065, col. 0346A, and its head lemma is Cant. 3:3 — Invenerunt me vigiles qui custodiunt civitatem. vigiles is the Vulgate's own word at 3:3.
So Philip identifies the finders of Cant. 5:7 with the finders of Cant. 3:3, and the identification works because his text uses the same noun in both places. On the Vulgate they are different nouns and the cross-reference is a looser gesture. Migne's Cant. 5:7 has been conformed to Cant. 3:3 — and the exposition that follows requires exactly that conformation.
⚑ Two by-products worth the merge's ledger:
(sup. l. III, c. 22)is CORRECT, resolving exactly (§8b wants the right ones logged as much as the wrong). It is also the only internal cross- reference siglum this range met; it is a locator, so it stays[n:], not[nt:].- The lemma prints syncopated vulnerarunt while the re-quotation eleven lines later at 0427A–B prints full vulneraverunt. Migne differs from himself inside one column. No sense change; logged, no marker.
1.4 · ⭐⭐ 0418B — Jer. 6:7 quoted with only an [n:], and it IS a quotation: the range's one [n:]-only hit
Sicut enim perhibente propheta frigidam cisterna facit aquam
[n: (Jer. VI)]; sic frigidam fecit malitiam suam. (0418B)
Vulg. Jer. 6:7: Sicut frigidam fecit cisterna aquam suam, sic frigidam fecit malitiam suam.
No guillemets, no italics — only the note. And unlike every other [n:]-only span this range met, this one is not Philip's prose: the whole verse is there, both limbs, and the second limb (sic frigidam fecit malitiam suam) is word for word the Vulgate and stands entirely OUTSIDE the note, unmarked in any way. Migne's note falls at the semicolon, so the extraction could only ever see the first half.
Divergences in the first limb: present facit for the Vulgate's perfect fecit, and suam dropped, with the word order rebuilt (frigidam cisterna facit aquam for frigidam fecit cisterna aquam suam). The tense-break is the interesting one — the Vulgate's parallelism is perfect/perfect, and Migne's is present/perfect, so the simile becomes a general truth rather than a matched act.
Ruling applied: logged in full, [var:] NOT fired (brief §8a — where Migne marks the words as neither quotation nor lemma we cannot establish the quotation's boundary, and here the boundary problem is visible on both edges: the left edge runs into Philip's Sicut enim perhibente propheta, and the right edge runs past the note into unmarked verbatim Vulgate). The English renders what is printed: "For as, the prophet bearing witness, a cistern maketh water cold; so hath she made her malice cold."
⭐ Reported as a hit, and it is the class's third in the whole run. The running rate before this range was 2 of 109 (see §2c). Mine is 1 of 5.
1.5 · ⭐⭐ 0416D — 1 Cor. 11:3 quoted with an explicit Paulo teste and printed bare, and it is the chapter's controlling text
Caput Christi, Paulo teste, Deus est. (0416D)
Vulg. 1 Cor. 11:3: caput vero Christi, Deus. Every printed word is Paul's (the connective vero falls away where Philip's own frame takes over, and est is supplied from the Vulgate's ellipsis). Philip names his authority — Paul bearing witness — and Migne prints the words in neither guillemets nor italics, with no [n:] of their own.
⭐ And it carries the chapter. The lemma under exposition is quia caput meum plenum est rore; the identification caput Christi = Deus is what turns the dew into the Jews' refusal of Christ's divinity, and the next four sentences are entirely about that refusal (dum Christum hominem Deum esse, Dei Filium non intelligunt), proved from John 10:33 and John 5:18. Remove the Pauline sentence and Caput VII has no hinge.
Ruling applied: logged, no marker (brief §8a). This is the class the brief describes exactly — an expounded quotation Migne leaves unmarked — and, like the Virgil at 0385A, it is adduced as an authority with an attribution formula and printed bare, which is the shape §7's counter-instances take.
⚠ On the siglum, and I record it as CORRECT rather than wrong. The nearest note is [n: (I Cor. II)], one sentence later, at the end of …friget iniquitas Judaeorum. It is tempting to read it as a corrupted XI (a lost X would give exactly II) misplaced from Paulo teste — but 1 Cor. 2:8 (quam nemo principum huius saeculi cognovit: si enim cognovissent, nunquam Dominum gloriae crucifixissent) is a genuinely apt imagery pointer for the iniquity of the Jews, which is the clause it actually stands on. I therefore record (I Cor. II) as a correct pointer and 1 Cor. 11:3 as simply unnoted, and log the numeral hypothesis here only so the merge has it. Brief §8b's warning about manufactured patterns cuts directly against counting this as an error, and (I Cor. II) is the very siglum §8b says has been vindicated twice already (0305C, 0318A).
1.6 · ⭐ 0421A — (Isa. LXIII) for Isa. 53:1, and Migne prints (Isa. LIII) correctly five times elsewhere in this same work
Domine, ait, quis credidit auditui nostro
[n: (Isa. LXIII)]? (0421A)
The words are Isa. 53:1. The note says Isaiah 63.
⭐ The control is internal and needs no appeal outside the work, which is the shape brief §8b asks for:
(Isa. LIII)is printed and correct at 0206B (0008), 0227D (0017), 0398B (0089) and 0439D–0442B (0106) — the work knows the numeral.(Isa. LXIII)is printed and correct at 0264A (0032), where it stands on Ipsius quidem pro nobis, Isaia perhibente, rubuit indumentum, et velut calcantium in torculari sorduit vestimentum — Isa. 63:2 exactly.
So Migne prints both numerals correctly elsewhere and gets this one wrong. The shape is one extra I in the numeral (LIII → LXIII) — neither of brief §8b's two attested profiles ("off by exactly one chapter"; "note cites one book, the words are another book's"). It is a third shape, and a mechanical one. Reproduced verbatim; §10.2 forbids correcting it, and a following (ibid.) does not depend on it (there is none).
⚠ Also divergent in the same span, and marked: Domine is not in Isaiah. Vulg. Isa. 53:1 reads Quis credidit auditui nostro? with no vocative; the vocative belongs to the New Testament citations of the verse (Rom. 10:16, John 12:38). Philip introduces it as Isaiah's twice over (Unde Isaias … non fidem adhibent Isaiae), so a reader sent to Isaiah 53 will not find the word. [var:] fired, naming both witnesses.
⛔ This is the one marker in my range I would most expect a merge to demote, and I say so plainly: under a strict reading of Pattern 14 ("in a way that changes the sense") an added vocative is arguably below threshold, and by that reading it should have gone in §2b with distillaverunt and annuntietis. I fired it because it is a whole word added inside a marked (italicised) quotation — so the boundary is established and the marker is safe — and because the added word is the tell that Migne's text here is the NT citation form rather than Isaiah's, which is transmission evidence of the same kind as §6's class. Reversible; the crux carries everything the marker does.
§2 · THE COLLATION — all 63 listed spans, plus 33 found on the prose pass
Every span in data/quotations/11632/0096-0101.md was collated word by word against the Vulgate. Spans recorded as AGREES were collated and found to agree; the absence of a marker on them is a finding, not a silence.
2a · Divergent — [var:] fired (3)
| Col | Ref | Migne prints | Vulgate | Note |
|---|---|---|---|---|
| 0421A | Isa. 53:1 | Domine, ait, quis credidit auditui nostro | Quis credidit auditui nostro? | §1.6. Vocative is Rom. 10:16 / Jn 12:38's. |
| 0427A | Cant. 5:7 | Invenerunt me vigiles qui circumeunt… tulerunt pallium meum custodes murorum | Invenerunt me custodes qui circumeunt… tulerunt pallium meum mihi custodes murorum | ⭐⭐ §1.3. Conformed to Cant. 3:3; mihi deleted. |
| 0429B | Cant. 5:9 | qualis est dilectus tuus, quia sic adjurasti nos (no ex dilecto) | qualis est dilectus tuus ex dilecto, quia sic adiurasti nos | ⭐⭐⭐ §1.2. Philip collates the variant himself. |
2b · Collated and AGREEING, or abridged/transposed/prefixed only — no marker
0096 (cols 0415D–0418C). ⭐ Cant. 5:2 head lemma Aperi mihi, soror mea, amica mea, columba mea, immaculata mea, quia caput meum plenum est rore, et cincinni mei guttis noctium — agrees word for word. Rendered amica mea = "my friend" per brief §5's ⭐ ruling, which names Cant. 5:2 explicitly in its recurrence list; the gloss that follows makes the rendering load-bearing here (sic amica detrahe vectem… quae amica facta es animi diligentia · quae soror et amica es), so a slip to "my love" would have voided three clauses. ⚑ The second half is re-quoted at 0416D–D with NO marks of any kind — Quia caput meum plenum est rore: et cincinni mei guttis noctium — and with a colon where the head lemma prints a comma; both reproduced (Pattern 8) · Isa. 1:11 + 1:14 « Plenus sum, inquit [n: (Isa. I)]. Et iterum: Laboravi sustinens (ibid). » — both agree word for word. Siglum correct. ⚑ The (ibid) is printed bare inside the italic run, with no [n:] wrapper and no terminal stop — the phenomenon brief §7 records at 0232D and 0236D; this is a third instance, and it is the reason the chunk's noteCount of 14 is right while the visible locators number 15 · John 10:33 De bono, inquiunt, opere non lapidamus te, sed de blasphemia; et quia tu homo cum sis, facis teipsum Deum [n: (Joan. X)] — agrees word for word. Siglum correct. ⚠ The Pattern 5 break splits De bono from opere, giving the awkward "For a good, say they, work we stone thee not"; kept, on cruces-0084 §3b's precedent · ⚠ John 5:18 Propterea magis quaerebant eum Judaei interficere, quia Patrem suum dicebat Deum aequalem se faciens Deo [n: (Joan. V)] — Vulg. Propterea ergo magis quaerebant eum Iudaei interficere, quia non solum solvebat sabbatum, sed et patrem suum dicebat Deum, aequalem se faciens Deo. This is an INTERNAL deletion of a whole clause, not a truncation: the sabbath charge falls out between interficere and Patrem suum. Nothing in the gloss turns on it (Philip adduces the verse only for the equality charge), so it is below Pattern 14's threshold — logged, no marker, and recorded in the internal-deletion class cruces-0084 opened for Luke 1:31's in utero, because a whole clause is the largest specimen of it so far. Siglum correct · Mark 3:13–14 Vocavit, inquit, ad se quos voluit ipse, et fecit ut essent duodecim cum illo [n: (Marc. III)] — agrees on every printed word; the Vulgate's Et ascendens in montem falls in the join between the two verses. Siglum correct · Acts 1:15 Erat, inquit, turba hominum simul fere centum viginti [n: (Act. I)] — agrees; autem falls away where the Pattern 5 inquit takes its slot. Siglum correct · Acts 2:4 et repleti sunt omnes Spiritu sancto, et coeperunt loqui variis linguis, prout Spiritus sanctus dabat eloqui illis [n: (Act. II)] — agrees word for word. Siglum correct. ⚑ Migne prints Spiritu sancto and Spiritus sanctus, both lower-case, inside one sentence; English has no exponent (the Holy Ghost capitalizes regardless), so §7a's mirroring rule cannot be applied here and nothing was regularized in either direction · ⚠ Acts 2:41 Baptizati sunt, inquit, et appositae sunt in illa die animae circiter tria millia [n: (ibid.)] — Vulg. …appositae sunt in die illa animae circiter tria millia. Word order reversed, sense untouched; logged, no marker. The head Qui ergo receperunt sermonem eius is truncated. The (ibid.) resolves correctly to (Act. II) · Acts 4:4 Factus est numerus virorum quinque millia [n: (Act. IV)] — agrees; leading et dropped. Siglum correct · Acts 19:5 + 19:7 baptizati sunt, inquit, in nomine Domini Jesu, erant autem omnes viri fere duodecim [n: (Act. XIX)] — agrees on every printed word across the verse join. Siglum correct · ⚠ Acts 4:19–20 Si justus est, inquiunt, vos potius audire quam Deum, judicate, non enim possumus quae vidimus et audivimus non loqui [n: (Act. IV)] — Vulg. Si iustum est in conspectu Dei vos potius audire quam Deum, iudicate. Two divergences, both logged, neither marked: (a) justus masculine for the Vulgate's neuter iustum — a gender mismatch with no English exponent ("just" carries none), so Pattern 9 governs, rendered normally as "If it be just"; (b) in conspectu Dei deleted, internally, which removes the irony of the apostles' retort but touches nothing Philip says. Siglum correct. ⚑ The double negative non… non loqui is rendered "we cannot but speak", the standing English exponent; both printed negatives are carried and none supplied (§4) · Acts 5:29 Obedire oportet Deo magis quam hominibus [n: (Act. V)] — agrees word for word. Siglum correct.
0097 (cols 0418D–0421C). Cant. 5:3 head lemma Exspoliavi me tunica mea, quomodo induar illa? Lavi pedes meos, quomodo inquinabo illos? — agrees word for word; Migne's Exs- for the Vulgate's Ex- is an attested orthographic doubling, Pattern 9, unmarked · Cant. 5:4 head lemma Dilectus meus misit manum suam per foramen, et venter meus intremuit ad tactum ejus — agrees word for word. ⚠ venter rendered "belly", not Douay's "bowels", because the gloss is a simile on the organ: quod in se tanquam duruerat, molle redditur, quasi venter (0420B). Douay's phrase would make the comparison unreadable. Logged as a judgment call · Cant. 5:5a Surrexi ut aperirem dilecto meo — agrees (three printings: 0420D head lemma, 0421B re-quotation, 0421D in 0098's Non enim ait: Surrexi et aperui, sed ait: Surrexi ut aperirem) · 1 Cor. 13:1 fit instar cymbali tinnientis [n: (I Cor. XIII)] — Philip's own genitive construction on Vulg. aut cymbalum tinniens; his prose, see §2c.2. Siglum correct · ⚠ 3 Kings 8:24 Ore, ait, locutus es: et manibus perfecisti [n: (III Reg. VIII)] — Vulg. qui locutus es ore tuo, et manibus perfecisti. Ore fronted and tuo dropped, which is precisely what makes the mouth/hands antithesis Philip needs (quod ore praeloquitur, manibus consummare). Sense untouched; logged, no marker. Siglum correct, and Philip's attribution to Solomon is correct (it is Solomon's dedication prayer).
0098 (cols 0421D–0423C). ⭐⭐ Cant. 5:5b head lemma Manus meae distillaverunt myrrham, et digiti mei pleni myrrha probatissima — Vulg. manus meae stillaverunt myrrham…. Migne prints the compound; the Vulgate prints the simple verb, and it prints it in both body occurrences (the head lemma, and the re-quotation Manus, inquit, meae distillaverunt myrrham at 0421D). Logged, NO marker, and the reason is an internal control that runs against firing:
Manus ergo virginis myrrhae amaritudinem stillaverunt, cum omnes actus ejus disciplinae regulam tenuerunt… (0422A)
Philip's own gloss of the lemma, eight lines below it, uses the SIMPLE verb — the Vulgate's. So the compound is not his and nothing in the argument rests on the prefix: his contrast is tenere / habere against distillare ("not to hold but to drop"), which the simple verb serves equally, and he glosses the sending- out with derivare ad exteros, not with the prefix. ⚑ The likeliest source of the compound is inside the work: Cant. 4:11's lemma at 0391A is Favus distillans labia tua, where distillans is the Vulgate's own word, thirty columns earlier and still in the same commentary. Under Pattern 14 the sense is untouched, which is §8c's threshold exactly. ⛔ But two printings is copy-text shape, so it is logged here with all its evidence for the merge to weigh against §6's other members. The English preserves the difference visibly: distillaverunt = "dropped down", stillaverunt = "dropped", stillicidium = "a dropping" · the rest of the lemma, digiti mei pleni myrrha probatissima, agrees word for word (printed twice more: 0422C Digiti, ait, mei pleni myrrha probatissima, and the frontmatter incipit). ⚠ Both re-quotations break the italics before the possessive (Manus, inquit, meae… · Digiti, ait, mei…), giving "Hands, saith she, mine dropped down myrrh"; kept, Pattern 5, on the cruces-0084/0066 precedent.
0099 (cols 0423D–0426B). Cant. 5:6a head lemma Pessulum ostii mei aperui dilecto meo: at ille declinaverat, atque transierat — agrees word for word, and so do both re-quotations (Pessulum, inquit, ostii mei aperui dilecto meo 0424B · At ille declinaverat atque transierat 0425B) · ⭐ Ps. 62:7 Si memor fui tui super stratum meum, in matutinis meditabor in te [n: (Psal. LXII)] — agrees word for word. Siglum correct, and logged as such per brief §8b's instruction to record the right ones: (Psal. …) is a siglum this work has been seen to get wrong ((Psal. XCII) at 0275B) and right (0281A), so a third correct instance is a datum. Philip introduces it as illud propheticum quod in Psalmi versiculo breviter continetur — an authority formula, and it is italic, not guilleted (§1.1).
0100 (cols 0426C–0428B). ⭐ Cant. 5:6b head lemma Anima mea liquefacta est, ut dilectus locutus est. Quaesivi, et non inveni illum, vocavi, et non respondit mihi — Vulg. Anima mea liquefacta est, ut locutus est; quaesivi, et non inveni illum; vocavi, et non respondit mihi. Migne ADDS dilectus, supplying a subject the Vulgate leaves unexpressed. Logged, no marker: the sense is untouched, and Philip's gloss supplies the same subject in his own words three times (Ille quidem loquitur et monet Virginem · verbum Sponsi, ut ignis in camino · cum ille loquitur), so the addition asserts nothing the exposition does not already assume. ⚑ Recorded separately as an ADDITION, because the classes this work has logged are substitutions, truncations, internal deletions and transpositions, and an addition to a head lemma is a fifth shape — the exact mirror of brief §8a's John 19:39 deletion, and much easier to see. One printing only (plus the frontmatter incipit) · Cant. 5:7 — see §1.3, [var:] · the re-quotation Percusserunt me, inquit, et [0427B] vulneraverunt me — agrees with the Vulgate word for word (full vulneraverunt), against the head lemma's syncopated vulnerarunt eleven lines above. The column anchor falls inside the quotation, between et and vulneraverunt; reproduced in place.
0101 (cols 0428C–0431A). ⚠ Cant. 5:8 head lemma Adjuro vos, filiae Hierusalem, si inveneritis dilectum meum, ut annuntietis ei quia amore langueo — Vulg. …ut nuntietis ei quia amore langueo. Compound for simple, the same shape as distillaverunt and with the same internal control running against it: Philip's own gloss uses the SIMPLE verb three times — nuntiate, praedicate amore tenero me gravari (0428D) · aestus meos… nuntiate (0428D) · volo, ut invento nuntietis (0429A). Sense untouched; logged, no marker. The English keeps the difference visible: annuntietis = "announce", nuntiate = "tell" · Cant. 5:9 — see §1.2, [var:]; the sub-lemmata under discussion at 0430B–C (Dilectus · ex dilecto · dilectus · ex dilecto, · dilectus ex dilecto;) are words discussed as words and take italics, which is brief §7's own category, confirmed here on five consecutive runs · the re-quotation Qualis est dilectus tuus at 0431A — agrees · ⚠ Eph. 5:29 nemo enim carnem suam odio habuit [n: (Ephes. V)] — Vulg. Nemo enim unquam carnem suam odio habuit. unquam is deleted. Nothing turns on it; logged, no marker. Siglum correct. ⛔ This one caught me, and it is recorded as a caught defect rather than a clean pass: the first draft read "for no man ever hated his own flesh" — the Vulgate's adverb restored from memory into a quotation that does not contain it. It was removed on the §4 negation-and-addition pass, which is the pass brief §8a exists to mandate, and it is exactly 11638's lemma-conformation failure (Pattern 7a″) reproduced in miniature. A range that had not run that pass would have shipped it, and no verifier could see it.
2c · The [n:]-only class — hit rate 1 of 5
Five ⭐ spans in the extraction. All five were traced back to their real left edge. One is a genuine quotation with divergences (§1.4); four are Philip's own prose. None takes a marker.
- ⭐⭐ 0418B, Jer. 6:7
[n: (Jer. VI)]— A HIT. See §1.4. Siglum correct. - 0421A, 1 Cor. 13:1
[n: (I Cor. XIII)]— the extraction's span opens mid-note (LXIII)]? Cunctorum passim…), a bracket-matching artifact of the preceding note, and runs thirty words of Philip's own sentence. The only scriptural matter is fit instar cymbali tinnientis; Vulg. factus sum velut aes sonans, aut cymbalum tinniens. Philip has put the noun into the genitive under his own instar and dropped the aes sonans* limb. Philip's prose. Siglum correct. - 0416D, 1 Cor. 2
[n: (I Cor. II)]— infidelium frigus est, et subtilis malitia perfidorum, qua tenentur nationes, friget iniquitas Judaeorum. Not one Vulgate phrase survives; the note is an imagery pointer at 1 Cor. 2:8's princes of this world who did not know. Philip's prose, siglum correct — and see §1.5, because the genuine Pauline quotation in this passage is one sentence earlier and carries no note at all. - 0418B, Jer. 6 — same span as 1, listed twice by the extractor at different left edges (Sicut enim perhibente propheta frigidam cisterna facit aquam). Counted once.
- 0418C, 1 John 2:27
[n: (I Joan. II)]— Etsi enim unctio spiritus justos de omnibus legitur edocere. Vulg. sed sicut unctio eius docet vos de omnibus. The verbatim run is de omnibus; unctio and docere are rebuilt into Philip's own concessive with legitur flagging it as a reference, and spiritus is his (the Vulgate has unctio eius). Philip's prose. Siglum correct.
Reported per brief §8a. 1/5 here, against 0/6 for 0084–0089, 1/12 for 0060–0065, 0/20 for 0042–0047, 0/38 for 0048–0053, 0/19 for 0018–0023 and 1/14 for 0024–0029. The class's running rate across the seven ranges that have reported it is now 3 of 114.
2c′ · ⭐ Weaves the extractor could NOT list — 33 found on the mandatory prose pass
These carry no guillemets, no italics and no [n:], so they appear in the extraction in no class whatever. None takes a marker. The first three are the ones the merge should see.
- ⭐⭐ 0416D — 1 Cor. 11:3, and it is §1.5. The range's
Paulo testefind. Not repeated here. - ⭐⭐ 0430A — the NICENE CREED, printed bare, and it is not scripture at all.
Ille quidem ex Deo Deus, lumen de lumine, et ex carne caro est, homo de virgine. (0430A)
lumen de lumine is the Creed's own clause, verbatim, and ex Deo Deus is its Deum de Deo recast into Philip's nominative frame. It is doing creedal work: the daughters are asking how God man may be firmly believed and loved, and Philip answers with the Creed's own formula, extended by a matching pair of his own (ex carne caro… homo de virgine) — which is why the Creed's rhythm has to be audible for the extension to land. No guillemets, no italics, no [n:]. ⚠ This is the range's Virgil. Brief §8a's warning is that a prose pass scanning for scriptural cadence walks past the next unmarked authority; here the unmarked authority is a creed, which no scripture-shaped search of any kind can reach. Logged, no marker (§8a: the boundary is not printed). ⭐ For the merge: the class of unmarked adduced authorities in this work now holds Virgil (0385A), Sallust (0314A), Ovid (0259), Ambrose (0337B), Paul (0416D) and the Nicene Creed (0430A) — a poet, a historian, a poet, a Father, an apostle and a conciliar formula. There is no genre that predicts it.
- ⭐ 0422A — a natural-history authority reported with dicitur. Myrrha enim molles et fluxas carnes dicitur confirmare, et ne lege naturali subjaceant putredini, conservare — the standard myrrh lemma (Isidore, Etym. XVII.viii, ultimately Pliny), which Philip flags as reported speech and Migne leaves bare. Recorded as a weak member of the class: there is no verbatim source-phrase to collate, only an attributed commonplace. Same shape as cruces-0084 §2c.4's Fons a fundendo.
The remaining thirty, checked for silent conformation and left as Philip's own prose (none marked, none conformed). Where a verbatim Vulgate run survives inside his sentence it is bolded:
0096 — Heb. 12:9 (pater ille spirituum vult orari, 0416A) · Matt. 6:6 (Clauso enim ostio, 0416A) · Matt. 10:27 / Luke 12:3 (ut quod in cubiculo percepisti, praedices super tecta, 0416A — recurs at 0431A, below) · Rom. 8:17 (qui haeredes imo etiam cohaeredes una militant summo Patri, 0416B) · ⭐ Cant. 4:7 (sed quia sic tota pulchra, ut jam macula non sit in te, 0416C — the Song quoting itself, unmarked, thirty columns after its own lemma at 0386D; recorded because brief §7's proof-texts-from-the-Song are normally guilleted and this one is not) · Ps. 45:11 (dulcius est vacare et videre, 0418C) · Ps. 71:6 / Deut. 32:2 (the whole dew-figure, 0416D) · Ps. 105:21 (ut suum vili venderet Salutare, 0418A). 0097 — ⭐ Gen. 3:19 (in sudore vultus nostri, vescimur nostro pane, 0419A — the person changed from singular to plural and tui/tuo to nostri/nostro; ⚑ note this is the verse brief §6 attests in its divergent Terra es et in terram ibis form at 0398A, eighteen columns earlier, and the divergent half is not what is echoed here — Philip is quoting v. 19a, which Migne prints nowhere in this range) · Gen. 3:7 and 3:21 (Nudus Adam factus est … pellicea post inobedientiam est indutus, 0418D — narrated in his own words) · 1 Cor. 13:10, 12 (donec quod perfectum est videamus, 0419A) · Ps. 57:5 (imperanti aurem instar aspidis non obturo, 0419B) · Mark 14:51–52 (relicta sindone, 0419A) · Rom. 8:24–25 (spe futurorum, 0416C) · Isa. 6:10 / Matt. 13:15 (non caligat intellectu, 0420C). 0098 — ⭐ 1 Cor. 9:27 (quae corpus inquietum castigat, castigatum subjicit servituti, 0423A — Vulg. sed castigo corpus meum, et in servitutem redigo; three verbatim runs recast into a relative clause) · Rom. 7:23 (ne lex membris insita resistat vitae, 0423A) · Rom. 8:7 / Gal. 5:17 (non solum legi carnis fortior spiritus non consentit, 0423B) · Rom. 7:5 (passiones corporis incentivas pullulantes, 0423B). 0099 — ⭐ 1 Cor. 13:5 (non quaerit quae sua sunt, 0423D — five words verbatim, and it is the hinge of the chapter's argument that the Virgin opens for the Bridegroom and not for herself) · ⭐ 1 Tim. 6:16 (lucem habitans inaccessam · et lucem nulli mortalium revelatam, 0425C — Vulg. lucem inhabitat inaccessibilem; both nouns kept, both endings rebuilt) · Matt. 25:27 (talentum Domini cum exponit caeteris ad usuram, 0423D) · 1 Cor. 13:12 (ne facie videatur ad faciem, 0426A) · 2 Cor. 5:7 (nondum sustinet fidem in rem, spem in speciem pertransire, 0426A) · ⭐ Phil. 3:13–14 + 1 Cor. 9:24 (cum in anteriora Virgo cursu prospero se extendit… cum illa currens necdum bravium comprehendit, 0426A — bravium is a rare word and not one written by accident) · 1 Cor. 15:53 (deponere satagit naturalem istud corruptibile corruptelam, 0425C) · Rom. 12:2 (mundo, in quo vivimus, configurat, 0425D). 0100 — ⭐ Heb. 1:14 (ad homines spiritus administratorii transmittuntur, 0428A — verbatim, and it is the identification on which the whole vigiles = angels reading depends) · ⭐ Ps. 83:8 (quos de virtute in virtutem fortius et liberius noverint pertransire, 0427B) · ⭐ Isa. 62:6 (circumeunt Hierusalem… super muros, 0427B — the custodes super muros text, standing directly behind the custodes murorum of §1.3's lemma and worth recording beside it) · 2 Cor. 3:18 (nec ad eum pervenit facie revelata, 0426D) · Ecclus. 27:6 / Dan. 3:22 (ut ignis in camino aestuans, 0426C) · Phil. 3:13 (postpositis quae sunt retro, solummodo in anterioribus se extentam, 0426C) · Mark 12:30 (Illum toto corde, tota illum anima, viribus amo totis, 0426D — the order of the three rebuilt for the rhyme) · 2 Cor. 12:2 / Ps. 115:11 (rapiant in excessum, 0428A). 0101 — ⭐ Phil. 1:23–24 (intelligens dissolvi cupientem, ad hoc tamen necessarium se manere, 0431A — Vulg. desiderium habens dissolvi et esse cum Christo… permanere autem in carne necessarium propter vos; three verbatim words in his own participial frame, and it is the sentence the whole commentary turns on at this point) · ⭐ Gen. 40:14 + 40:23 (dum cum Joseph adhuc carcere sum detenta; mementote mei quae teneor, nec in oblivionem recens prosperitas vos abducat, 0429A — Vulg. memento mei cum bene tibi fuerit… nec recordatus est… sed oblitus est; ⚑ Philip has reversed the roles: the Virgin speaks Joseph's plea, and the daughters are the butler who forgot) · Matt. 19:30 / 20:16 (quia et novissimi gaudent plerumque fieri se priores, et qui primi videbantur conqueruntur effici tardiores, 0428D) · Matt. 10:27 (quod hausit in cubiculo super tecta studeat edocere, 0431A — the same text as 0416A, closing the range as it opened it) · ⭐ Ps. 18:6 (qualiter ille gigas substantiae geminae vult amari, 0430B — the standard patristic Christological gloss, adduced with no marker of any kind) · ⭐ Apoc. 5:1–5 (in quodam velut codice complicatur, ad solvendum ejus signaculum diligens inquisitio, 0430B) · John 1:18 / Matt. 11:27 (quia Patrem nisi Filius, et nisi per Filium nemo vidit, 0429D) · 1 Cor. 13:12 (quamvis per speculum intueris, 0429C) · Ps. 21:15 (cerae similem igne potentior liquefacit, 0429A) · Luke 1:38 / John 1:14 (ex qua homo factus est, 0430D).
2d · Migne's sigla — twenty notes checked, nineteen right, one wrong
Reproduced verbatim, none corrected (§10.2). Correct, and checked against the verse each stands on: (Isa. I) Isa 1:11+1:14 · (Joan. X) Jn 10:33 · (Joan. V) Jn 5:18 · (Marc. III) Mk 3:13–14 · (Act. I) Acts 1:15 · (Act. II) Acts 2:4 · (ibid.) → Acts 2:41, resolving correctly · (Act. IV) ×2, Acts 4:4 and Acts 4:19–20 · (Act. XIX) Acts 19:5+7 · (Act. V) Acts 5:29 · (Jer. VI) Jer 6:7 · (I Joan. II) 1 Jn 2:27 · (I Cor. II) 1 Cor 2:8 as an imagery pointer (§1.5, and §2c.3) · (I Cor. XIII) 1 Cor 13:1 · (III Reg. VIII) 3 Kgs 8:24 · (Psal. LXII) Ps 62:7 · (Ephes. V) Eph 5:29 · and the internal cross-reference (sup. l. III, c. 22), which resolves exactly to chunk 0065, col. 0346A, CAPUT XXII of Book III, whose lemma is Cant. 3:3 (§1.3).
The one exception: 0421A (Isa. LXIII) for Isa. 53:1 — see §1.6. A third shape for brief §8b's ledger (an extra I in the numeral), and one the work supplies its own control for, printing (Isa. LIII) correctly five times and (Isa. LXIII) correctly once at 0264A.
⚑ The direction of the errors in this range is the reverse of cruces-0084's, and both are worth the merge's attention. There the sigla were wrong where the words were Philip's own and right where the words were copy-text; here the one wrong siglum sits on a verbatim quotation while all four imagery-pointer notes ((I Cor. II), (I Cor. XIII), (I Joan. II), (Jer. VI)) are right. 19 of 20 is the highest accuracy rate any range has reported, which is more support for §8b's revised "no siglum in this work is systematically wrong."
2e · Brief §8c — Cant. 1:12 does NOT fall in this range
Recorded per §8c's instruction to name what was actually seen: neither Cum nor Dum appears anywhere in chunks 0096–0101, and Cant. 1:12 is not quoted. This range supplies no evidence on the class. The §8c count is unchanged by it.
§3 · TYPOGRAPHY
3a · Guillemets — one balanced pair, and it is the work's last (see §1.1)
0096 prints 1 « against 1 », at 0416D, properly opened and closed round the two Isaiah fragments. Chunks 0097–0101 print none. No asymmetry anywhere in the range; nothing supplied, nothing deleted. The English carries 1 « and 1 » and the verifier's parity check passes on the pair.
3b · ⚑ §7a mirroring — the drift point — held word by word
Migne's mixed case runs hard through this range and none of it was regularized. Mechanically checkable against the Latin twin; I would check it first in any review.
- ⭐⭐ The case-mixing extends to Dilectus, which I do not find any earlier range reporting. 0428C prints Dilecti monitis est praeventa and 0429B Dilectum invenerint — capitals — while the *head lemma of the same chapter and Philip's gloss twelve lines later print lower case (si inveneritis dilectum meum 0428C · quae dilectum* miro dilectionis privilegio jam novisti 0429B), and the whole of Caput XVI runs lower-case dilectus twenty-odd times. Two capitals against ~25 lower-case, all within three columns. Rendered "Beloved" / "beloved" respectively. ⚑ Worth the merge's attention because dilectus is the Song's commonest noun and a work-wide mirroring check on it is cheap.
- ⭐ 0430D — lower-case virgo twenty words after capital Virginis, in one sentence-pair: in cujus utero Virginis humanatur; et quod illi humanato exhibet necessario totius obedientia creaturae, virgo ditior gratia agit quadam voluntaria vi naturae. Rendered "the Virgin's" / "the virgin". Exactly the shape cruces-0084 §3c flagged at 0396C.
- ⭐ 0422A–0423B, lower-case virgo/virginis/virgini five times in a chunk that capitalizes Virgo five times: 0422A Manus ergo virginis myrrhae · 0422A non sufficit virgini · 0422B Ad aperiendum igitur virgo sollicita · 0423B huic tantae virgini non deesse — against capital Cum Virgo surgeret (0421C), consulte Virgo manus apposuit (0421D), Virgo prudentissima (0422D), Caeterum Virgo myrrham (0423A). All rendered lower case.
- ⭐ 0428A mentem virgineam totam rapiant in excessum — lower-case adjective in a chunk where every one of the fourteen Virgo/Virginis/Virginem is capital, and where 0427C prints capital menti Virgineae, the same phrase, ten lines earlier. Rendered "the virgin mind" against "the Virgin's mind". ⚠ This is the most mechanically checkable pair in the range.
- ⭐ 0421B — capital Sponsam Sponsus in a chunk that is otherwise wholly lower-case. Ore igitur Sponsam Sponsus monuit ad laborem. Everywhere else in 0097 the words are lower case: 0419A inquietanti sponso and dulcedinem sponsa gustu avido · 0420A Manus sponsi · 0420B sine sponsi bene placito and non nisi sponsi beneplacitum · 0420D apud eam sponsi non obtinuit vox · 0421A qua sponsus Virginem monuit · 0421A remota manu sponsi · 0421C sponso pandat semitam. One capital pair against nine lower-case, in one chunk. Rendered "the Bridegroom … the Bride" at 0421B and "the spouse" elsewhere, per cruces-0084 §3c's call.
- 0096 likewise runs lower-case sponsus — 0418A manus sponsi revocans, 0418B monet sponsus Virginem — against capital cincinni Sponsi (0417C) five lines apart. Mirrored.
- 0099 and 0100 are uniformly CAPITAL for Sponsus/Sponsa/Sponsi/Sponso (0424C ×2, 0424D ×2, 0425A, 0425B, 0426C, 0427B, 0427D ×2) and uniformly capital for Virgo — recorded so the merge can see there is nothing to reconcile in those two chunks and that the lower-case runs are localized.
- ⭐ Pattern 3 does not fire once in this range. There is no Scriptura of any form — not divina, not sacra, not bare in Scripturis — in any of the six chunks. Checked for all three forms per brief §5's ⚑, including the bare one that 11638's sweep missed. Recorded as a null so a sweep does not go hunting here.
- Heads:
CAPUT VII.throughCAPUT XVI.all carry the full stop, matching cruces-0060's and cruces-0084's ranges. Reproduced.
3c · Pattern 17
Decided by morphology throughout, never by who is addressed.
- Singular → thou. The whole of Caput VII is the Bridegroom to the Virgin and is singular from first word to last: Aperi mihi · Tu, ait, quae… obfirmasti… confirmasti · laxa fores… sepone… evigila… audi… excute · Cum te vacare patior · ne quod prius vel amplius haurire valuisti, videaris… invidere · sicut igitur claudis… detrahe… excute · quae amica facta es… diceris et columba · ut jam macula non sit in te · Tu igitur, quae… insigniris… experiris; vocem pulsantis audi, aperi fores clausas… vide causas — some forty tokens, all thou. Likewise John 10:33 (non lapidamus te… tu homo cum sis, facis teipsum Deum), 3 Kings 8:24 (locutus es… perfecisti), Ps. 62:7 (memor fui tui… meditabor in te), and the whole of the daughters' speech to the Virgin at 0429B–0430B (Tu, aiunt, quae… novisti… videris… teneris… Dic igitur… adjurasti… quia Patrem diligis… affectas… defectas… tibi autem… dic nobis… a te volumus edoceri… cum audis… intelligas… Moveat ergo te… ut non differas… dic qualis tuus ille dilectus), ~25 tokens.
- Plural → you. Isaiah's complaint at 0416D–0417A (me gravatis… vestrae mihi videar pravitatis… vestras iniquorum sarcinas) · Acts 4:19 (vos potius audire quam Deum, judicate) · Cant. 5:8 and the whole of Caput XV (Adjuro vos, filiae Hierusalem, si inveneritis… annuntietis · Vos, ait, qui… aestuatis… praeparatis; vos admoneo… vos adjuro · nuntiate, praedicate · si vos regis mensa susceperit · mementote mei · rogate Dominum), ~30 tokens · and Philip's own frame to his brethren twice: 0417B Videtis caput Christi and 0417D Nonne vobis illa nox videtur, plus 0424B sicut nostis.
⭐ The pair the merge should like is at 0416D–0417A, and it is two sentences long. The Bridegroom's forty singular verbs to one Virgin (Aperi mihi… vide causas) run straight into God's plural complaint to a nation, quoted from Isaiah and glossed in Philip's own words: Tanto, ait, rore… me gravatis. Under Pattern 17 the page turns from thou to you at the exact word where the addressee turns from one woman to a people, with no apparatus at all, and the Latin morphology decides it. A flat "you" would have made the whole chapter one undifferentiated address.
3d · Marginal source-edition numbers
240 (0415D) · 241 (0417D) · 242 (0419B) · 243 (0421A) · 244 (0422C) · 245 (0424B) · 246 (0426A) · 247 (0427C) · 248 (0429B) · 249 (0430D). Continuous with cruces-0084's 223–230. Each kept italic and verbatim at the exact word it interrupts — 240 between vacare and patior, 242 between ubi and fueram, 243 between quod and nobis, 245 between retro and pellit, 247 between Virginis and digne, 249 between ex and se — and the English clause was built round each rather than moving it. ⚠ 249's slot forced "as made man out of 249 herself", and 243's "but that which 243 the voice of him that commandeth speaketh out to us"; both are more contorted than I would otherwise write, and both are deliberate.
§4 · PATTERN 7 / 8 / 9 / 10 — three [sic:], and the readings rendered as printed
The carried run is NOT also translated in the running text (brief §8's named failure — checked word by word on a separate pass, by script and by eye).
- ⭐ 0420C
[sic: sublilem]— ad sublilem cujus tactum si quid durum fuerat, emollescit. Read subtilem, near-certain: sublilis is not a Latin word in any form,t/lis a standard Migne broken-type substitution, and subtilis is the chapter's own keyword, standing correctly five times within twenty lines on either side of it (0419D subtilem instar foraminis… intellectum · 0420A infundit subtilius · 0420B subtilior percipit intellectus · 0420B Hoc subtiliter intellecto · 0420C cum intelligentiam subtilem dederit). Pattern 7 governs: carried untranslated in italics, and the English deliberately does not also say "subtle" in that clause: it reads "at whose [sic: sublilem] touch, if aught had been hard, it groweth soft." Marker content machine-verified as a verbatim substring of the twin. - 0422B
[sic: assitentibus]— ut assitentibus sibi non solo prosit desiderio voluntatis. Not a Latin word. Two conjectures, both single-letter and neither decisive: assistentibus ("them that stand by" — the word Philip uses at 0391B, permittit nobis assistentibus distillare, in the same figure of the Virgin dropping sweetness to bystanders, which makes it the likelier) or assidentibus ("them that sit by"). Carried untranslated in italics; the English does not also say "them that stand by". Content verified. - 0428A
[sic: informen t]— ut minores quoslibet informen t ad licita, ne delinquant. Split type, Pattern 10: the finaltof informent is broken off and set as its own italic run in the source. The whole broken run is carried, spacing and all, per Pattern 10's "carry the WHOLE broken run, even when one fragment is a real word." Read informent, certain: the parallel verb sollicitent governs the answering clause four words later, and informare ad licita is exactly the sense. Content verified as a substring (asterisks stripped).
Rendered as printed, no marker (real words, merely wrong or merely odd) — conjectures live here and NOT in the text:
- ⛔ 0422B, Ah hoc enim surgit, ut ejus eruditio non haereat… Read Ad hoc, near-certain: Ah hoc enim surgit does not construe (ah takes no accusative), and Ad hoc… surgit, ut is the exact construction Philip uses at 0428A in this same range (Ad hoc quippe ad homines spiritus administratorii transmittuntur, ad hoc multa sollicitudine… enituntur; ut minores…). Ah is a real Latin word, so Pattern 12 keeps it on the English side: rendered "Ah, for to this she riseth," which is meant to read wrong. ⚠ But I flag the attribution rather than assert it.
h/dis an OCR confusion far more than a typesetting one, so this may be a defect in Corpus Corporum's transcription rather than in Migne's plate. Under the standing rule I render our source and log; I do not claim the plate is defective. ⭐ The most repairable place in the range, and the one I would most want checked against a leaf render* — one letter fixes it, and adata/tei-patches/11632.jsonentry would be the right home if* the plate proves clean. - ⛔ 0419A, A quo aestu vel sudore aliquantulum respiramus, cum remoto curarum onere ad invisibilia respiramus. The same verb twice in one sentence, in two different senses ("we take breath from" / "we breathe toward"), the second governing ad invisibilia, which respirare does not take comfortably. Conjecture aspiramus ("we aspire"), probable but not certain — Philip uses precisely ad placendum sponso tendit perfectius et aspirat eleven lines later at 0420A. Not a
[d:]: Pattern 11 is for a run the plate sets twice adjacently, and these are two clauses with different constructions. A real word; rendered "we take breath a little… we breathe again unto things invisible," which is meant to read flat. - 0422C, quidquid in eis districtius non afficit, angit severius vel angustat, suo illa consortio reddit perfectius et venustat. Elliptical and not comfortable: the three verbs share no expressed subject, only the first carries non, and the antecedent of illa is discretio six words earlier. Rendered as closely as the printed words allow — "whatsoever in them she affecteth not the more strictly, paineth the more severely or straiteneth, that same discretion by her fellowship rendereth the more perfect and adorneth" — and logged rather than emended. The single printed non is carried and none supplied.
- 0422D, the stray comma: indiscretum et, injurium deprehendit. Preserved (Pattern 8: never delete a mark the plate prints): the English reads "she findeth it indiscreet and, injurious to stand short of them." ⚠ Do not churn this. Same call at 0423A (non probatam, sed magis, probatissimam nominavit → "not approved, but rather, most approved") and 0422D (multis, et variis negotiis · plurima, dividens prout vult singulis). Four misplaced commas in one chunk, all reproduced.
- 0419C, si necessitas presserit voluntatem, videor aggravari. videor first person against the third-person presserit — no anacoluthon in English, which needs the subject anyway. Rendered normally.
- 0423A, cui nostra laborantium studet conversatio sic addici. nostra… conversatio with the partitive genitive laborantium interposed; Pattern 1 does not fire (it is not a fronted partitive governing the clause), and the English promotes it: "whereto the conversation of us that labour striveth so to be given over." Logged.
- 0425D, Virginem adhuc subditam huic necturae. Read naturae, near-certain — natura stands four times in the same sentence-pair (non vitii, sed naturae eleven words later; lege naturali; naturalem… corruptelam at 0425C). ⚠ But necturae is not a word, so Pattern 7's non-word class would ordinarily force a
[sic:]. I did not mark it, and the reason is that this is aa/esingle-vowel slip in a word the same sentence prints correctly twice, which reads as a transcription artifact rather than as broken type — the same judgment as the Ah hoc case above. Rendered "subject to this nature," and logged here so the call is visible and reversible. ⛔ If the merge wants a uniform rule for the Ah hoc / necturae class, these are the two sites in my range and both would take[sic:]under a stricter reading. - 0429B, quae aestu liquefacta ad ea quae sunt mundi transitoria penitus intorpescit. intorpescere with ad is late and unusual but attested; Pattern 9, unmarked. Rendered "groweth utterly torpid toward the transitory things of the world."
- 0424C, Virgo quietis vernula gaudet.* vernula is a diminutive of verna*, "a little home-born slave" — attested classical Latin, unusual in this register. Pattern 9, unmarked; rendered "the home-born handmaid of quiet."
- 0430B, quid, juxta quod dilectus appellatur, nec apponitur ex dilecto. The nec has no clean coordinate and the clause is elliptical (quid [vult sentiri] juxta quod… appellatur, nec apponitur). Rendered as printed, "and what according as he is called beloved and of the beloved is not added", with the nec carried. Logged.
Negation-and-addition audit (brief §9 + §8a), second pass, against the Latin. Every printed non / nec / neque / nisi / ne / nihil / nil / nullus / nunquam / nondum / necdum / nesciens / nescit / nonnisi / sine / haud in the six Latin chunks was matched against the English after the prose was drafted — 242 tokens, chunk counts 41 / 42 / 47 / 44 / 32 / 36. The dense clusters are 0415D–0416C (non invido, sed cupido… nihil penitus debet claudi… non vitio, non forensi negotio… non turbari… non est consilii… non projecta… non graveris… Neque enim tuis solummodo… ne quod prius… non valentibus invidere… non est cui… non ut pavo… nondum plene praesentibus… non quod praesenti nihil penitus desit… macula non sit in te… ne putes), 0416D–0417B (non intelligunt, non fatentur… quid nisi… non verentur… quasi non valeat sustinere… qui turbari nesciens… non credentis… non aliud intelligit vel non amat… De bono… non lapidamus te… non solum caput), 0418D–0419D (non clausura cubiculi, non panniculis… nullo tegmine praepedito… aperire citius non consentit… quas non diligo… Non recuso… non abjuro… jam non curo… non obturo… molestias nesciebam… non urgebar… nihil mihi… resistebat… non dimovi… non assistit… non aggredi certamen… nesciens invenire), 0420A–0420D (haerere me diutius non permittit… sine sponsi bene placito non vacantium, non laborantium… non evitat… status neuter… si non tanquam obediens… non contendit jam resistere… ne offendat, jam non nisi… non permittat… non secedit, non caligat, non affectu claudicat… quasi nescit… nesciebat), 0421D–0423B (non torpentes otio, non aridas, non fallaces… Non enim aperta est janua… nec eam… non praebetur… Non enim ait… si non manus validas… ne praesumeret… ne lege naturali… ne forte… non sufficit… nisi et caeteros erudiat… non tenere, vel habere… non haereat, uspiam non vacillet… non clausum teneat… non solo prosit desiderio… non habetur, si… non tenetur… non afficit… non contendit… non sit absonum… non negatur… nihil aut parum proficit indiscreta… non elucet, nisi… non arctatur… non cornu vacuo… non confusa… non probatam… ne lex membris insita resistat… nec effici patitur… non solum permittat… nec laxet… non solum manus opus illicitum non committit… quidquam reprehensibile non admittit… non solum legi carnis… non consentit… quidquam dignum venia jam non sensit… non deesse… non inopes… non recusat penitus), 0423D–0426B (Non sibi quidem, sed dilecto… non sibi, sed pulsanti… non suae sed illius… non quaerit quae sua sunt, non quidquam proprium… penitus non detrectat… non habetur, si… non tenetur… nec summus ille judex… non ostium aperuisse… ut non pessulum ostio… non tam studii… non pessulum, sicut nostis… non ostium, sed ostii pessulum… non littera, sed spiritalis… sicut non de ligno… non admittit grossitudinem… ne volvatur… non dubium quin… desiderio, non veraci… nesciens non audire… jam non negat… non refugit obedire… necdum satis poterat… non potest inveniri… non possit comprehendi… non offensa culpabili… faciem inconcessam… neque rem auferens… nulli mortalium revelatam… nulli tamen eorum… ne liberius evolemus… non satis exstricabili… non penitus quidem obruitur… non vitii, sed naturae… mortalem oculum non admittit… ne facie videatur ad faciem… non dat id quod expetit… nondum sustinet… non perveniens… necdum bravium comprehendit), 0426C–0428B (nullis adhuc viribus, nullis meritis… non turbetur, non proferat querimoniam… nonnisi spiritalibus… necdum tamen invenitur, nec ad eum pervenit… vocare non desisto… necdum plenius dat… non respondet… vocanti non respondet… non praesentat… non me esse patitur destitutam… ne nimis… non invenio… nihil suum, nil… retinere… nescio si… ne forte sit oneri… nec tamen sufficiunt… non tam pungi graviter… nec tam perfossa… Nec sufficit semel invisere… non gravantur… ne delinquant… diu Virgini non ostendunt… non penitus voluntati… non, ut assolet… necdum pertingere… non invidens, sed adgaudens), and 0428C–0431A (ne admonitio insufficiens… ne quis praetereat… nec in oblivionem… ne de poenis meis rideat… non gigni ejus odio, sed amore… nisi Sponsum nesciens… non teneris… nullis retro saeculis… nulla mulierum sic accessit… nulla melius… penitus non emisit… non admisit… non refundere pigriteris… ne temere seducamur… non contemnere… nisi Filius, et nisi per Filium nemo vidit… penitus non invidit… nil, aut parum… non mediocriter… non semel tantum… non differas… nolo nimis contendere… non omnes… neque satis compertum habeo… nemo enim carnem suam odio habuit… non solum factum hominem… non dicunt… nec videtur… invidere).
No negation was dropped and none was supplied. ⚠ Two places were caught by this pass and would otherwise have shipped wrong:
- ⛔ 0430D, Eph. 5:29 — an ADDITION, not a dropped negation, and it is the Pattern 7a″ failure exactly. The draft read "for no man ever hated his own flesh." Migne prints nemo enim carnem suam odio habuit; the Vulgate's unquam is not on the page, and "ever" had arrived from the remembered verse. Fixed to "for no man hated his own flesh." Recorded per brief §8a because it is the mirror of the John 19:39 deletion: a hedge-word restored is as invisible as a hedge-word removed, the sentence reads perfectly either way, and
verify-englishis blind to both. ⚑ The pass that caught it is the separate word-by-word one, not the collation — I had already collated the span and written "unquam dropped" in my notes while the English still said "ever." - 0420B, sine sponsi bene placito non vacantium, non laborantium est profectus. The draft rendered the two printed non with a single English "no advancement either of them that are at leisure or of them that labour" — one negation distributed over a disjunction the Latin does not print as a disjunction. Fixed to "there is no advancement of them that are at leisure, none of them that labour." Mechanism 3 (connective smoothed), the one with no lexical trace.
§5 · CONVENTIONS SET OR HELD IN THIS RANGE
- ⭐⭐
districtio= "strictness" ·discretio= "discretion" — and discretio is NOT split when it means "separation." The whole of Caput XI is a pun held across two senses: the fingers foras tamen discreti prodeunt… eorumque discretio tam prudenti naturae artificio fabricatur (0422C, the anatomical sense) becomes, four words later, virtus recte accipitur discretiva — the virtue of discretion. English "discretion" carries both senses and the pun survives; "distinction" for the first would sever it. This is the Song section's case 2 (stylus/epistylium, murenulae/ferculum) applied to a pun rather than an etymology. Held with severitas = "severity" and moderatio = "moderation" kept separate, since 0422C sets all four in one sentence (discreta moderatio, vel moderata discretio). ⛔ This is the one cross-chunk decision in my range the merge must not undo; districtio/discretio recur through 0098 twenty-two times. - ⭐
probata/probabilis/probatissima= "approved" / "approvable" / "most approved", against Douay's "choicest". Forced by 0423A, where Philip builds the argument on the degree: non probatam, sed magis, probatissimam nominavit · Probabilis vero vel probata illa congrue potest dici · Probata est quae… Probatissima vero est quae… Douay's "choicest" has no positive or comparative in English and the four-term chain would collapse. Cant. 5:5's lemma therefore reads "the most approved myrrh." - ⭐
vigiles= "watchmen" ·custodes= "keepers" — kept strictly distinct, and it is load-bearing (§1.3). "Watchmen" is already the work's English for vigiles (21 instances, set at 0346A on Cant. 3:3), so this range inherits rather than sets it; what is new is that the same verse now carries both words and the English must show it. custodes murorum = "the keepers of the walls"; custodia = "guard"/"keeping". ⛔ Do not harmonize. otium= "leisure" ·negotium= "business" — held, matching the work's 37 / 22 existing instances. The pair is the axis of Caput VIII–XII and appears sixteen times in this range. The Latin's neg-otium etymology has no English exponent and nothing in the argument turns on it.distillare= "drop down" ·stillare= "drop" ·stillicidium= "a dropping" — set here so that Migne's lemma and Philip's gloss of it remain visibly different words on the English page (see §2b, 0098). Consistent with 0086's "dropping honeycomb" for Cant. 4:11's distillans.annuntiare= "announce" ·nuntiare= "tell", on the same principle (0101).- ⚠
stratum= "bed" — flagged, because brief §5's ruled triple has no fourth term. Ps. 62:7's super stratum meum (0424D, and glossed at 0424D–0425A, Stratum, quietem vocat) needs a plain English noun, and Douay's is "bed" — but §5 assigns "bed" to lectus, "little bed" to lectulus and "couch" to cubile. ⚑ None of those three occurs anywhere in this range, so nothing collides on the page; but a merge enforcing the triple work-wide should know that stratum is a fifth word with no slot left, and that "bed" is what I used. Reversible in one line. (cubiculum= "chamber" andthalamus= "bridal chamber" are held from cruces-0084 §5.5; conclave at 0420D = "inner room".) pessulum= "bolt" ·sera= "lock" ·vectis= "bar" — three fastening-words in one sentence at 0416B (detrahe vectem, seram excute) and the whole of Caput XII on the bolt. Kept distinct, per Douay for pessulum.venter= "belly", not Douay's "bowels" (0420A lemma), because the gloss at 0420B is a simile on the organ (molle redditur, quasi venter). Logged as a judgment call, reversible.pallium= "cloak" (0427A), matching the work's five existing instances, against Douay's "veil" at Cant. 5:7.filiae Hierusalem= "daughters of Jerusalem". ⚠ The work is split — 16 "Jerusalem" against 7 "Hierusalem" in the shipped English — and I followed the majority. Offered to the merge as a one-line sweep, since Cant. 5:8 puts the phrase in a head lemma and it recurs through Book VI.charitas= charity ·dilectio= love — held, per brief §5. The pressure point in this range is 0430A–D, where dilectio and diligere run fourteen times against Cant. 5:9's dilectus ("beloved"); rendered "love" / "to love" / "beloved" respectively, with charitas reserved (0416B vinculo charitatis = "the bond of charity" · 0418B quos nectit charitas = "whom charity knitteth" · 0429A charitatis recolens vulneratae = "calling to mind a wounded charity" · 0428B charitatis indissolubili firmamento).
Philip of Harvengt, Commentaria in Cantica canticorum, PL 203. Six chunks, 5,606 Latin words, covering Caput XVII–XXVII of Book V and closing it — the head-to-foot descriptio of the Bridegroom, Cant. 5:10–16: Dilectus meus candidus et rubicundus → Caput ejus aurum optimum → Oculi ejus sicut columbae → Genae illius sicut areolae aromatum → Labia ejus lilia → Manus ejus tornatiles → Venter ejus eburneus → Crura illius columnae marmoreae → Species ejus ut Libani → Guttur illius suavissimum → Talis est dilectus meus. Chunk 0107 ends with Philip's own ut hic tandem liber quintus finem sibi gaudeat obtinere and the bare head LIBER SEXTUS.
⚠ A correction of record the merge needs: this is BOOK V, and cruces-0084 is wrong to call chunks 0084–0089 Book V. LIBER QUINTUS. stands in the heads[] of chunk 0091 (col. ~0404), so 0068–0090 are Book IV and 0091–0107 are Book V — which Philip's own closing sentence at 0446A confirms. Chapter numbering agrees: 0084–0089 run Caput XXI–XXVII of Book IV, and my XVII–XXVII are Book V's. The two ranges therefore both contain a Caput XXI–XXVII and they are different chapters. Nothing in either translation depends on it; the range headers do.
Marker totals for this range: 1 [var:] · 0 [sic:] · 0 [ed:] · 0 [d:] · 0 [nt:] · 0 [f:]. verify-english.mjs reports no errors on any of the six (the run's VERIFY FAILED is only the 25 chunks not yet translated). Two ratio warnings — 0102 at 1.60 and 0103 at 1.61 — both inside the 1.35–1.69 band this work has already shipped. Ratios: 1.60 / 1.61 / 1.59 / 1.54 / 1.54 / 1.56.
Column anchors (6/8/10/10/11/12), [n:] strings (4/0/1/3/3/1 — each matching its frontmatter noteCount) and guillemet counts were diffed 1:1 against the Latin twins by script, not by eye: anchors byte-identical in order and place, [n:] contents byte-identical in order. Asterisk counts match 1:1 in all six once the [var:]'s own italics are subtracted. Marginal source-edition numbers 250–257 verified in place. Heads: CAPUT XVII. → CAPUT XXVII. continuously, every one in numerals and every one carrying the full stop, plus LIBER SEXTUS. (also with the stop) standing at the very end of 0107 with no text under it — the book's first chapter opens in 0108.
⚑ GUILLEMETS: this range has NONE — zero « and zero » in 5,606 words. That is not an accident of my six chunks and it is §1.1 below, the range's largest finding.
§1 · ⭐⭐ THE THREE FINDINGS THE MERGE SHOULD CARRY
1.1 · ⭐⭐⭐ THE GUILLEMETS STOP. Migne's « » practice ceases at col. 0417A and never resumes for the remaining 73 columns of the work — and the seam is NOT a book boundary
Brief §7 says: "If you nonetheless meet a genuine change of practice at an Explicit/Incipit, report it as an exception with the column named." This is that exception, and it is not at an Explicit.
The measurement, taken over all 126 Latin chunks by script:
| chunks | columns | « pairs | [n:] notes |
|---|---|---|---|
| 0000–0089 | 0181A–0400C | ~380 | 592 |
| 0090–0125 | 0400D–0490B | 2 | 88 |
The last two guillemet runs in the entire work are:
« Cum venerit, inquit, Paracletus quem ego mittam vobis
[n: (Joan. XV)]. » (chunk 0090, cols 0400D–0403A) « Plenus sum, inquit[n: (Isa. I)]. Et iterum: Laboravi sustinens (ibid). » (chunk 0096, col. 0416D–0417A)
After col. 0417A there is not one « or » in 29 chunks and 73 columns.
⛔ And the vacuum is not because the adduced authorities stop. They continue at undiminished density and are printed in italics instead. My own six chunks carry seven of them, every one with an explicit attribution formula and a [n:] note — precisely the class brief §7 assigns to « »:
| col | printed | function |
|---|---|---|
| 0436C | Mundi sunt, ait, oculi tui… [n: (Habac. I)] | Habacuc adduced by name |
| 0437B | forma prae filiis hominum speciosus [n: (Psal. XLIV)] | proof-text |
| 0438D | velut aes sonans aut cymbalum tinniens [n: (I Cor. XIII)] | proof-text |
| 0440A | Potestatem, inquit, habeo ponendi animam meam [n: (Joan. X)] | Christ quoted, inquit |
| 0440A–B | Et propheta: Oblatus est, ait, quia ipse voluit [n: (Isa. LIII)] | prophet named + ait |
| 0440D | Verbum caro factum [n: (Joan. I)] | proof-text |
| 0445A | Ego, inquit, diligentes me diligo [n: (Prov. VIII)] | proof-text, inquit |
The same is true of the chunks between the seam and mine: chunk 0093 alone prints Luke 12:19, Prov. 9:5, Matt. 10:37, 1 Cor. 2:2 and Isa. 55:1 with ait / inquit and correct notes, all italic, none guillemeted.
⭐ The internal control is exact, and it is a verse this work has already tested. Isa. 53:7 is printed twice. At 0399C (cruces-0084 §2b) it is « Oblatus est enim quia ipse voluit [n: (Isa. LIII)]; » — guillemeted. At 0440A–B it is Oblatus est, ait, quia ipse voluit [n: (Isa. LIII)] — italic. Same verse, same siglum, forty-one columns apart, two treatments. This is Virgil-at-0251D-vs-0385A applied to a scriptural proof-text, and it converts a distributional observation into a controlled comparison.
⚑ Two secondary observations that make the finding sharper, not weaker:
- The seam is not a book boundary.
LIBER QUINTUS.stands at chunk 0091 andLIBER SEXTUS.at 0446A; the last guillemet falls at 0417A, mid-Caput VII of Book V, twenty-nine columns from either. This strengthens brief §7's settled ruling that 11632's book boundaries carry no seam — the one real change of practice in the work ignores them too. - The last surviving instance is a transitional hybrid. 0416D–0417A prints « » wrapping italics (« Plenus sum, inquit… Laboravi sustinens »), which is the only such nesting in the work. It reads as the compositor's last use of a mark he is abandoning.
⭐⭐ What the merge must revise. Brief §7 warns: "an italic run in this work is NOT evidence of a pre-seam regime — it is probably just a lemma." That is true of chunks 0000–0089 and false from ~0090 onward. In the last 36 chunks an italic run is routinely an adduced proof-text, because there is nothing else it can be. Any later range that assumes "italic ⇒ lemma" will mis-class every quotation it meets. No single range could see this — it is exactly the shape brief §6's "grep the other 125 chunks" note describes, and it cost one script run.
⚠ This changes nothing about what we print. Reproduce the plate; do not supply guillemets to the later chunks, and do not read the absence of a « as evidence that a run is not a quotation.
1.2 · ⭐⭐ Cant. 5:12 at 0434D — the lemma has LOST the word its own chapter expounds, and Philip's gloss contradicts the lemma four times
Migne prints the running lemma of Caput XIX as:
Oculi ejus sicut columbae super rivos aquarum, quae factae sunt lotae, et resident juxta fluenta plenissima. (0434D)
Vulg. Cant. 5:12: Oculi eius sicut columbae super rivulos aquarum, quae lacte sunt lotae, et resident iuxta fluenta plenissima.
Two divergences, and the second is the finding. lacte has become factae, which as printed barely construes ("which have been made washed") and drops the milk — and the milk is the whole second half of the chapter. Philip glosses it back in, four separate times, inside three columns:
Quod autem columbae perhibentur, non aquis, sed potius lacte lotae, innuit quod longius a columbis materialibus sunt remotae (0435D) non aquis lotae, sed lacte potius referuntur, quia lacti nivalis candor naturaliter assignatur, in quo gratiae columbinae munda simplicitas designatur (0436B) secundoque profectu velut candore lacteo nos emundat (0436D) vel lavacro uti lacteo memorantur (0437A)
The gloss quotes the lemma's own word four times and the lemma does not contain it. The argument — dove-simplicity, snowy whiteness, milk as the mark that these are not material doves — has nothing to stand on in the verse as printed.
⭐ The companion divergence supplies an internal control on the same line. The lemma prints rivos; twelve lines later Philip writes non solum super aquas, sed super rivulos sunt aquarum (0436A) and then builds on instar rivuli non constare (0436B). So on both halves of the lemma the plate's exposition carries the Vulgate reading and the plate's lemma does not.
[var:] FIRED, immediately after the lemma, naming the witness and giving both Vulgate words with a gloss (Pattern 14). ⚠ The marker is available here and was not at the §8a cases, because Migne italicises this run: it is marked as a quotation, so its boundary is printed and a [var:] asserts nothing the plate does not. That is the same distinction brief §8b drew for Isa. 42 at 0318D. The English renders what is printed — "which have been made washed" — and is meant to read wrong.
⚑ On rivos/rivulos alone I would not have fired: a diminutive lost is sub-threshold under Pattern 14, and Philip himself writes rivos once in his own prose at 0435D. It rides inside the marker because it sits in the same six words and eliding it would have been the §8-warned "a [var:] must not elide the divergence it exists to report" in reverse. The marker's assertion is lacte.
⛔ This is the most repairable place in the range. One letter restores the Vulgate, the sentence improves, and four columns of exposition quietly lose their subject.
1.3 · ⭐⭐ Ps. 44:3 — nine printings, four word-orders, and all three that carry [n: (Psal. XLIV)] are non-Vulgate
At 0437B Migne prints, in italics with a note:
forma prae filiis hominum speciosus
[n: (Psal. XLIV)]
Vulg. Ps. 44:3: Speciosus forma prae filiis hominum. The predicate has moved to the end. cruces-0084 §2c.3 recorded the identical transposition at 0394C, unmarked and unnoted, and correctly declined a marker. I grepped all 126 Latin chunks. The verse is printed nine times, in four** orders:
| order | sites | marked? |
|---|---|---|
| forma prae filiis hominum speciosus | 0006 @0199D · 0018 · 0087 @0394C · 0105 @0437B | 0006 « »+note · 0105 italic+note · others bare |
| forma est speciosus prae filiis hominum | 0109 | italic + note |
| prae filiis hominum forma est speciosus | 0017 | bare |
| Speciosus forma prae filiis hominum (Vulgate) | 0036 · 0073 (speciosum) | both bare, both Philip's own prose |
⭐ The distribution is the finding, and it is the Eccles. 9:1 shape. Three printings carry [n: (Psal. XLIV)] — 0006, 0105, 0109 — and not one of them is the Vulgate order; the only two Vulgate-order printings sit unmarked inside Philip's own sentences, where nobody was quoting. That is the opposite of what a compositor's slip predicts and the same shape brief §6 draws its inferences from.
⚑ But I did NOT fire a [var:], and I think that is right. The sense is untouched, which is Pattern 14's threshold; Philip's prose is rhymed throughout and every transposition puts speciosus into a rhyme (with fructuosus at 0437B, formosus at 0394C, luminosus at 0018), which is a sufficient and non-textual explanation; and cruces-0084 declined the marker on the same words, so firing here would put two ranges out of step on one verse. Logged, unmarked, and handed to the merge with all nine sites — this is the class that can only be ruled once, across ranges, exactly as §8c asks for Cant. 1:12.
§2 · THE COLLATION — all 36 listed spans, plus 24 found on the prose pass
Every span in data/quotations/11632/0102-0107.md was collated word by word against the Vulgate. Spans recorded as AGREES were collated and found to agree; the absence of a marker on them is a finding, not a silence.
2a · Divergent — [var:] fired (1)
| Col | Ref | Migne prints | Vulgate | Note |
|---|---|---|---|---|
| 0434D | Cant. 5:12 | super rivos aquarum, quae factae sunt lotae | super rivulos aquarum, quae lacte sunt lotae | ⭐⭐ §1.2. Four internal controls in the gloss. |
2b · The eleven Song lemmata — collated, and ten of eleven agree word for word
Cant. 5:10–16 is expounded lemma by lemma through this range. Each was collated against the Clementine text.
- 0431A Cant. 5:10 Dilectus meus candidus et rubicundus, electus ex millibus. — agrees word for word.
- 0432C Cant. 5:11 Caput ejus aurum optimum, comae ejus sicut elatae palmarum, nigrae quasi corvus. — agrees word for word. ⭐ This is brief §7's proof-text in reverse, and its fifth instance: the same verse is guillemeted at 0226A when adduced as a proof-text, and printed italic here as the running lemma.
- 0434D Cant. 5:12 — DIVERGENT ×2, see §1.2.
- 0437A Cant. 5:13a Genae illius sicut areolae aromatum, consitae a pigmentariis. — agrees word for word.
- 0438C Cant. 5:13b Labia ejus lilia distillantia myrrham primam. — agrees word for word.
- 0439C Cant. 5:14a Manus ejus tornatiles, aureae, plenae hyacinthis. — Vulg. Manus illius tornatiles. Pronoun only; sense untouched, below Pattern 14's threshold. Logged, no marker. ⚠ Recorded because Migne prints illius correctly in the three neighbouring lemmata (5:13, 5:15, 5:16) and ejus correctly at 5:12 and 5:14b, where the Vulgate has eius — so this is the one place in eleven lemmata where the two pronouns are swapped. A singleton, not a pattern.
- 0440D Cant. 5:14b Venter ejus eburneus, distinctus sapphiris. — agrees word for word.
- 0442B Cant. 5:15a Crura illius, columnae marmoreae, quae fundatae sunt super bases aureas. — agrees word for word (commas Migne's). The re-quotation at 0442D, columnae marmoreae super bases aureas fundatae, recasts the relative clause into a participle for Philip's rhyme with fundatur/memorantur; nothing added or denied. Logged, no marker.
- 0443A Cant. 5:15b Species ejus ut Libani, electus ut cedri. — agrees word for word.
- 0443D Cant. 5:16a Guttur illius suavissimum, et totus desiderabilis. — agrees word for word.
- 0444C Cant. 5:16b Talis est dilectus meus, et ipse est amicus meus, filiae Hierusalem. — agrees word for word; Hierusalem for Ierusalem is orthographic, Pattern 9.
2c · The seven adduced proof-texts — collated
- 0436C Hab. 1:13 Mundi sunt, ait, oculi tui ne videas malum, et respicere ad iniquitatem non poteris
[n: (Habac. I)]. — agrees word for word. Siglum correct. Pattern 5 ait reproduced inside the italics as printed, breaking them after Mundi sunt. - 0437B Ps. 44:3 — transposed; see §1.3. Siglum correct as to chapter.
- 0438D 1 Cor. 13:1 velut aes sonans aut cymbalum tinniens
[n: (I Cor. XIII)]— agrees word for word; truncated before factus sum, which Philip's own tamen replaces. Siglum correct — see §2e. - 0440A John 10:18 Potestatem, inquit, habeo ponendi animam meam
[n: (Joan. X)]. — Vulg. 10:18 Potestatem habeo ponendi eam, the antecedent animam meam standing in v. 17 (ego pono animam meam). Philip has resolved the pronoun into its antecedent from two lines above. Sense identical; below Pattern 14's threshold. Logged, no marker. Siglum correct. - 0440A–B Isa. 53:7 Oblatus est, ait, quia ipse voluit
[n: (Isa. LIII)]. — agrees word for word. Siglum correct. ⭐ This is §1.1's control. It also confirms cruces-0084's reading of the 0399C printing: that range found « Oblatus est enim quia ipse voluit » and judged the enim to be Philip's own connective drawn inside the guillemets. Here the same verse is quoted with no enim at all, which settles it — the enim was never part of the quotation. - 0440D John 1:14 Verbum caro factum
[n: (Joan. I)]— Vulg. Et Verbum caro factum est. The copula is gone because Philip has made the phrase the grammatical subject of ignoravit (Quia vero Verbum caro factum culpas carnis penitus ignoravit); the participle is used substantivally, not defectively. Logged, no marker. Siglum correct. - 0445A Prov. 8:17 Ego, inquit, diligentes me diligo
[n: (Prov. VIII)]. — agrees word for word. Siglum correct. ⚑ Prov. 8 is Wisdom speaking in the feminine; Philip attributes it to the Bridegroom and Migne's inquit is gender-neutral, so "saith he" is the printed frame's, not an interpretation supplied.
2d · The [n:]-only class — hit rate 0 of 5, and the null is real information
All five ⭐ spans were traced back to their real left edge. All five are Philip's own prose — or, in one case, not a quotation at all. None takes a marker. Listed so nobody re-opens them:
- 0431B, John 1:5
[n: (Joan. I)]— Candor est, inquam, lucis, lux praesens omnibus non ostensa, lucens quidem in tenebris, nec a tenebris compraehensa. Vulg. et lux in tenebris lucet, et tenebrae eam non comprehenderunt. Philip has turned both verbs into participles and inverted the agency of the second (active "the darkness did not comprehend it" → passive "not comprehended by the darkness"), which is his rhyme (ostensa / compraehensa). The clause before it, lux praesens omnibus non ostensa, is his own on John 1:9–10. Philip's prose. Siglum correct. ⚑ compraehensa is an attested medieval spelling — Pattern 9, no marker. ⚑ The same John 1:5 recurs at 0440B, again unmarked and this time unnoted: etsi non a tenebris comprehensa, tamen in tenebris lux relucet. - 0431C, Zech. 3:3
[n: (cap. III)]— inopsque et invalidus, et, juxta Zachariam, sordida praeferens indumenta. Vulg. Iesus autem erat indutus vestibus sordidis. Recast into a participial phrase with a different verb and noun. Philip's prose. ⚑ The siglum is a bare chapter number, the book being carried by juxta Zachariam in the running text — the only note of that shape in the range. It is correct: Zech. 3. ⚠ And note what it is not: brief §6's attested divergence is Zech. 4:14 (duo filii olei splendoris). Zech. 4:14 does not occur in my range, and this Zech. 3 citation supplies no evidence about it either way. - 0431D, 1 Cor. 3:12–15
[n: (I Cor. III)]— et cujus lignum, fenum, stipula, non lucem, sed incendium experitur, iste aurum, argentum, lapidem salvans, paria singulis remetitur. Vulg. 3:12 lists aurum, argentum, lapides pretiosos, ligna, faenum, stipulam — Philip prints the two triads in the reverse order, because his sentence needs the perishable ones first (they meet the fire) and the enduring ones second (they are saved). Six nouns verbatim, one dropped adjective (pretiosos), everything else his own. Philip's prose. Siglum correct. - 0432B, Heb. 1:3 + Wisd. 7:26
[n: (Hebr. I)]— Est igitur ille splendor gloriae, figura substantiae, imago paternae Deitatis, lucis aeternae candor, divinae speculum majestatis. Philip's prose — a five-member apposition in his own sentence — but see §2e.2: the note names Hebrews and two of the five members are Wisdom's, not Paul's. - 0437A,
[n: (supra l. I, c. 2)]— not a scriptural quotation at all. This is Migne's own internal cross-reference to the commentary's own divisions, attached to Philip's ut longe retro dictum est. It stays[n:](a locator, Pattern 15) and is reproduced verbatim. But it is wrong, and it is a new shape — see §2e.1.
Reported per brief §8a even though it is a null result. 0/5 here, against 0/6 for 0084–0089, 1/12 for 0060–0065, 0/20 for 0042–0047, 0/38 for 0048–0053, 0/19 for 0018–0023 and 1/14 for 0024–0029. The class's running rate across the seven ranges that have reported it is now 2 of 114.
2e · Migne's sigla — twelve checked; eleven right, and the twelfth is a new shape of error
Reproduced verbatim, none corrected (§10.2). Correct and checked against the verse each stands on: (Joan. I) Jn 1:5 @0431B and Jn 1:14 @0440D · (cap. III) Zech. 3:3 @0431C · (I Cor. III) 1 Cor 3:12–15 @0431D · (Hebr. I) Heb 1:3 @0432B · (Habac. I) Hab 1:13 @0436C · (Psal. XLIV) Ps 44:3 @0437B · (I Cor. XIII) 1 Cor 13:1 @0438D · (Joan. X) Jn 10:18 @0440A · (Isa. LIII) Isa 53:7 @0440B · (Prov. VIII) Prov 8:17 @0445A. No Ibid. occurs anywhere in the range, so §10.2's anaphora hazard does not arise.
The two entries the merge should take:
- ⭐⭐ 0437A
[n: (supra l. I, c. 2)]— an INTERNAL cross-reference to the work's own divisions, and it names the wrong book and the wrong chapter. Philip writes in quibus, ut longe retro dictum est, pulchritudo elucet faciei — "wherein, as was said long since, the beauty of the face shineth out." The place where that was said is Book II, Caput VI (chunk 0030, col. 0256C), Philip's exposition of Cant. 1:9 Pulchrae sunt genae tuae sicut turturis:
In genis constat Virginis pulchritudinem amplius apparere… cum toti faciei candor largo munere se infundit, et rubor se in genis aspersione tenui superfundit… (0256C)
Cheeks, beauty, face, and the white-and-red — the exact back-reference. I read Book I, Caput II (chunk 0004): it contains no discussion of cheeks or of the face at all, and the word pulchritudo occurs once, in advenientis sponsi regia pulchritudo, a wholly unrelated sentence. So (supra l. I, c. 2) should be (supra l. II, c. 6).
⭐ This belongs to NEITHER of brief §8b's two shapes. It is not "off by exactly one chapter" (it is off by one book and four chapters) and it is not "note cites one book, the words are another book's" (there are no quoted words — the reference is to Philip's own earlier argument). It is a third shape: a wrong internal self-reference, and so far as I can see from the range files it is the first internal cross-reference any range has adjudicated. Whether more exist is cheap to check — the form (supra l. …, c. …) is greppable. Reproduced verbatim; §10.2 forbids correcting it, and nothing here depends on an Ibid..
- ⭐ 0432B
[n: (Hebr. I)]— correct, and incomplete in a way worth recording. Two of the five appositional members it stands on are Wisd. 7:26, not Hebrews: lucis aeternae candor, divinae speculum majestatis against Vulg. candor est enim lucis aeternae, et speculum sine macula Dei maiestatis. Migne's note names only Hebrews. ⚑ And the Wisdom text is running the whole chapter, not just this sentence: Candor est, inquam, lucis stands at 0431B, unmarked and unnoted, and the chapter's controlling opposition (candor / rubor, whiteness / redness) is built on Wisdom's noun. I record this as a note that is correct but partial, NOT as an error** — per brief §8b's revised warning, a tally that counted it wrong would manufacture a failure out of a note that points truly at one of its two sources.
⭐ And one to log because it is RIGHT where another range found it wrong (brief §8b's explicit instruction): (I Cor. XIII) at 0438D is correct — 1 Cor. 13:1's velut aes sonans aut cymbalum tinniens, verbatim. cruces-0084 §2d.1 found the same siglum at 0388C standing over words that are Col. 3:14 (vinculum perfectionis). So (I Cor. XIII) is now attested wrong once and right once, which is the same profile brief §8b records for (Psal. XCII) at 0275B/0281A and for (I Cor. II). Three sigla in this work are now each independently attested both wrong and right. That is stronger support for §8b's "no siglum in this work is systematically wrong" than any of them alone.
2f · ⭐ Weaves the extractor could NOT list — 24 found on the mandatory prose pass
These carry no guillemets, no italics and no [n:], so they appear in the extraction in no class whatever. None takes a marker (brief §8a). The first four are the ones the merge should see, and the first of them is not scripture.
- ⭐⭐ 0444A — THE CHALCEDONIAN FORMULA, adduced as the standard of orthodoxy and printed completely bare. Migne prints, inside Philip's own sentence:
ubi non confusio, non conversio alterius in alteram fit naturae, sed personalis unio, virginalis in mysterio geniturae. (0444A)
This is the two-natures canon in its received Latin: Chalcedon's inconfuse, inconvertibiliter (ἀσυγχύτως, ἀτρέπτως) and the Quicunque vult's non confusione substantiae, sed unitate personae. Philip is not describing; he is invoking a formula, and the immediately preceding clause is its other half — divinitas assumens hominem nullatenus est consumpta: nec defecit, sed profecit humanitas, cum in Deum mirabiliter est assumpta, which is the creed's non conversione divinitatis in carnem, sed assumptione humanitatis in Deum. No guillemets, no italics, no [n:], no inquit. ⚠⚠ This is the range's answer to brief §8a's "DO NOT HUNT ONLY FOR BIBLE VERSES." The 0078 hit was Virgil; mine is a creed. A prose pass listening for scriptural cadence walks straight past it, because the cadence is conciliar. No marker — the boundary is unprintable and §8a's ruling governs. But the merge should note that the §8a class now has three genera: scripture, classical verse, and credal/conciliar formulae. Nothing in the run had sampled the third.
- ⭐⭐ 0435B — John 1:14, and Migne's DOUBLING is what the chapter is built on. Migne prints, unmarked and unnoted:
qua Verbum caro factum est plenum gratiae, plenumque veritatis. (0435B)
Vulg. John 1:14: Et Verbum caro factum est… plenum gratiae et veritatis. Migne repeats the adjective: plenum gratiae, plenumque veritatis, for the Vulgate's single plenum governing both nouns. ⭐ And that doubling is Caput XIX's entire thesis. The chapter argues that the Bridegroom's two eyes are grace and truth, two distinct luminaries: the very next sentence reads duo ista nobis luminaria superfudit; dignatusque est homo factus oculo duplici nos videre, and the chapter then spends three columns keeping them apart (Gratia quidem fuit vocatio et promissio… veritas vero fuit exhibitio). A single plenum makes one thing of grace-and-truth; the doubled plenum makes two, which is what Philip needs. The Vulgate reading would not have voided the argument, but the printed reading is the argument's own shape, and Migne marks it in no way at all. ⚑ The verse recurs at 0440D, there italicised and noted [n: (Joan. I)], and there it is truncated to Verbum caro factum with no plenum clause. So the work prints John 1:14 twice, once marked and once not, and only the unmarked printing carries the divergence. No marker, per §8a.
- ⭐ 0442D — Matt. 22:38–39, two verbatim clauses inside indirect discourse, and the chapter's whole argument rests on the pair. Migne prints:
in quorum altero teneri mandatum primum et maximum intellexit, in altero vero secundum et simile non neglexit. (0442D)
Vulg. Matt. 22:38–39: Hoc est maximum et primum mandatum. Secundum autem simile est huic. Both phrases verbatim (the first with its pair reversed, primum et maximum for maximum et primum); recast as accusative + infinitive under intellexit. Unmarked, unnoted. This is the proof-text for the geminae charitati on which Caput XXIV's golden bases stand — the preceding sentence is inniti visus est illi geminae charitati, quae auro pretiosior. No marker.
- ⭐ 0444A and 0444B — 1 Pet. 1:12, printed twice, and it carries the lemma's own gloss. cui, quod angeli desiderant, jam conceditur experiri (0444A) and Quod si angeli desiderant Deum quem incessabiliter contemplantur (0444B). Vulg. in quem desiderant angeli prospicere. Two words, but they are the two the chapter turns on: the lemma is totus desiderabilis, and Philip's proof that the Bridegroom is desirable is that the angels desire him (digne et homines eumdem totum et desiderant… toto desiderio totum desiderabilem amplexantur). Unmarked, unnoted. No marker.
The remaining twenty, checked for silent conformation and left as Philip's own prose (none marked, none conformed):
0102 — Wisd. 7:26 (Candor est, inquam, lucis, 0431B — see §2e.2) · Isa. 53:2 (non decor illi maneat, non aspectus, 0431C — Vulg. non est species ei, neque decor; his own verb and case, and it stands eight words from the Zech. 3 note without being covered by it) · Phil. 2:7 (servile corpus induens, 0431C; ut hominem habitu voluit inveniri, 0432A) · John 10:17–18 (assumptam ponens animam, positamque simili resumens potestate, 0432B — the same verse Migne italicises and notes twelve lines later at 0440A, here recast into his rhyme and left bare) · Ps. 18:6 (non gigas potentior, 0432B) · Wisd. 7:13 (quibus non invideo, 0432B) · Heb. 5:1 / 9:14 (sacerdos factus et hostia, seipsum in sacrificium obtulit, 0432B). 0103 — ⭐ Cant. 1:4–5 (se nigras et abjectas humili voce clamant, 0434C; corvi nigredinem repraesentant, 0434A; seipsos angeli deprehendunt [nigros], 0434B) — the Song's own nigra sum turned on the angels, which is worth recording because brief §5's colour triple is a live rule: everything in this chapter is niger / nigredo / nigrescere, and no fuscus occurs anywhere in the range. Rendered "black" / "blackness" / "grow black" throughout · 1 Cor. 11:3 (Caput igitur Christi, 0432D). 0104 — Isa. 12:3 (haurientes in gaudio de fontibus Salvatoris, 0436A — Vulg. Haurietis aquas in gaudio de fontibus Salvatoris, verbatim but for the participle and the dropped object) · 1 Cor. 7:31 (figura mundi praeterit, 0436B — Vulg. praeterit enim figura huius mundi, verbatim) · Gen. 1:31 (facta vidit omnia valde bona, 0434D) · Gen. 3:8–10 (sub arbore… sub ficu… auditam vocem timet, ob recentem ignominiam nuditatis, 0435A) · James 2:13 (judicio misericordiam superferret, 0435B). 0105 — Eph. 2:14 (interjectam maceriam solvens, terrenis coelestia sociavit, 0437D — Vulg. medium parietem maceriae solvens; the distinctive noun survives) · 1 Cor. 15:53–54 (abscondens, imo absorbens quod mortale fuerat, immortali gloria nos praecingit, 0439C) · Rom. 8:29 / Phil. 3:21 (nostra corpora suo Sponsus corpori configurat, 0439C) · Isa. 9:2 / Matt. 4:16 (cum sol respexit tenebras et in umbra sedentibus lux advenit, 0438D) · 2 Cor. 6:2 (quod accepto tempore supervenit, 0438D) · 1 Cor. 12:4–11 (Pater simul et Spiritus dicuntur operari, 0438A). 0106 — ⭐ Matt. 12:41–42 (plus quam Jonam vel Salomonem eburnea fortitudine hominem se commendat, 0442B — Vulg. ecce plus quam Iona hic… ecce plus quam Salomon hic; the Vulgate's own order is kept, and it is the chapter's closing proof, printed bare) · Eph. 2:3 (naturam dignam irae, 0441B) · Luke 1:34–35 (viri nesciam de sancto eam constat Spiritu concepisse, 0441A) · John 2:9 and Matt. 14:20 / 15:38 (aquam in vinum… transmutavit, quod pane raro multa hominum millia satiavit, 0442A). 0107 — Ps. 83:8 (de virtute provehatur in virtutem, 0443B — Vulg. ibunt de virtute in virtutem) · 1 Tim. 2:4 (per quem salvus fieri valeat omnis homo, 0444B) · Rom. 5:19 (sicut homo hominum fuit praecipitatio vel ruina, 0444B) · Phil. 2:7 (est homo indutus formam hominis, 0444B) · 3 Reg. 5:6–6:9 (quam prudenti consilio Salomon sibi voluit adhibere, cum vel domum sibi, vel promissum Domino templum studuit exhibere, 0443B — narrated in his own words, no phrase reproduced).
2g · Brief §8c and §6 — what this range does and does not witness
⚠ Recording what I actually saw, per §8c's warning, not that I "met the verse."
- Cant. 1:12 does NOT occur in this range, in either half. No evidence either way on Cum/Dum.
- Cant. 2:17 (Bethel/Bether) does not occur.
- Zech. 4:14 does not occur. Zechariah IS cited, at 0431C, but it is Zech. 3:3, under a bare
[n: (cap. III)], and it supplies nothing about the olei splendoris reading. - Gen. 3:19 does not occur.
- Eccles./Ecclesiastes 9:1 does not occur.
- ⭐ What the range DOES add to §6's class is §1.3's Ps. 44:3 — nine printings, four orders, and the three noted ones all non-Vulgate. It has §6's statistical shape without §6's certainty, because a rhyming author is a sufficient rival explanation and Zech. 4:14 / Gen. 3:19 had none.
§3 · TYPOGRAPHY
3a · Guillemets — none, and see §1.1
0 « and 0 » in all six chunks, matching the Latin twins exactly. Pattern 6's parity check passes trivially; all quotation marks on the English pages of this range are ours (" ") or none at all, and every proof-text is carried by Migne's italics. There is no asymmetry to mirror because there is no mark.
3b · §7a mirroring — the drift point — held word by word
Migne's mixed case runs through this range and none of it was regularized. Diffed mechanically against the Latin twins after drafting; I would check it first in any review.
- ⭐ Chunk 0105 is the specimen, and both cases sit inside single paragraphs. Thirteen spouse-words in 1,011 words, six capital and seven lower-case, and the shipped English mirrors each one in order — verified by an ordered positional diff, not by eye: 0437A
Sponsi→Bridegroom · 0437BSponsi→Bridegroom [see §3b′] · 0437Dsponsi→bridegroom · 0437Dsponsum→bridegroom · 0438Bsponsi→ bridegroom · 0438Bsponsus→bridegroom · 0438CSponsi→Bridegroom · 0438DSponsi→Bridegroom · 0438DSponsi→Bridegroom · 0439Asponsi→ bridegroom · 0439Asponsus→bridegroom · 0439Bsponsi→bridegroom · 0439CSponsus→Bridegroom. ⚑ Note 0438B–0438C, where four lower-case instances are followed immediately by three capitals with no change of subject, and 0437A–0437B, where two capitals open a paragraph whose remainder is entirely lower-case. - Chunk 0107, seven spouse-words, four lower-case and three capital, mirrored in order: 0442B
Sponsi→Bridegroom · 0443Asponsum→bridegroom · 0443Bsponsi→bridegroom · 0443Csponsus→bridegroom · 0443Csponsum→bridegroom · 0443Dsponsi→bridegroom · 0445ASponsi→Bridegroom. ⭐ Note 0443C, where sponsus Virginis is lower-case eleven words after capital Virginis in the same clause — the two words are cased independently, in the same breath. - Chunks 0104 and 0106 capitalize throughout (6 and 4 instances, all
Sponsi/Sponsus), and 0102–0103 contain none at all. Recorded so the merge can see there is nothing to reconcile in those four. - Virgo is capital at every one of its 18 occurrences in the range and there is not one lower-case virgo; the sole lower-case form is the adjective virginalis (0444A), rendered "virginal". So the virgo/Virgo alternation cruces-0084 recorded at 0395A–0396C does not continue into Book V's close.
- Spiritus is capital at all six occurrences (0437D, 0438A, 0441A ×2, 0441B ×2) and the only lower-case form is the adjective spirituali (0438D). The Spiritus sanctus / sancti Spiritus order does not arise — Philip writes sancto… Spiritu and sanctus ei Spiritus and eorum Spiritus, never the fixed pair, so brief §7a's worked example has no instance here.
- Pattern 3 fires eight times, and TWICE on the bare form brief §5 flags. 0436A continentiam Scripturarum → "the content of the Scriptures" · 0436B Scripturarum speculum → "the mirror of the Scriptures" · 0436D plenissima fluenta Scripturarum → "the fullest streams of the Scriptures" · 0436C Scripturas evangelicas → "the Scriptures of the Gospel" · 0436C Scripturae propheticae → "the prophetic Scriptures" · 0436D Scripturis veteribus → "the old Scriptures" and evangelicis → "the Scriptures of the Gospel" · ⚑ 0438C nonnunquam in Scripturis efficiens ponitur pro effectu → "sometimes in the Scriptures the efficient is put for the effect" — no divina, no sacra, the exact bare form 11638's sweep missed · 0441C quae hujusmodi pertulisse illum Scriptura memoravit → "such things as Scripture hath recorded him to have borne", the canon in the singular with no adjective, a ninth and slightly different bare form. No divina Scriptura or sacra Scriptura occurs in the range at all, so every instance here is of the bare type.
- Heads:
CAPUT XVII.throughCAPUT XXVII.all carry the full stop and all are numerals, matching cruces-0060's and cruces-0084's ranges and contrasting cruces-0048's stop-less pair.LIBER SEXTUS.likewise carries the stop.
3b′ · ⚠ The one mirroring slip caught on the second pass, and how
0437B's Sic et Sponsi, id est ejus divina pulchritudo is capital on the plate and my draft had rendered it "the bridegroom's", lower-case, because the four lower-case instances that follow it at 0437D–0438B had set the paragraph's tone in my ear. It was caught by the ordered script diff described above and not by reading. ⛔ Recorded because brief §7a names this as the likeliest drift point across twenty-one agents and this is what the failure actually looks like: not a decision, an assimilation to the surrounding instances. The mechanical check is cheap and it is the only thing that found it. Fixed; the shipped file mirrors all thirteen.
3c · Pattern 17
Decided by morphology throughout, never by who is addressed. The range is unusually clean on this and gives the merge a usable pair.
- Singular → thou. One instance only, and it is a quotation: Hab. 1:13 @0436C, Mundi sunt oculi tui ne videas malum, et respicere… non poteris → "Thy eyes are clean, that thou mayest not behold evil, and thou canst not look upon iniquity."
- Plural → you. All eleven remaining second persons, and every one of them is the Virgin addressing the filiae Hierusalem: 0431A notitiam acquisistis… jam sollicite requisistis · 0432B vobisque… digne requirentibus vult largiri, quibus non invideo… gaudeo vos efficaciter erudiri · 0444D ut ipse quem diligo, vobis aliquatenus innotescat, et in amorem ejus vester quoque animus incalescat · 0445A Vos igitur filiae Hierusalem hunc amare et amari ab illo totis viribus laborate.
- ⭐ The pair the merge should like is at 0436C–0445A, and it is the widest one the work has produced: the Virgin's whole peroration is plural — she is speaking to a company and the vocative filiae Hierusalem says so — while the single scriptural quotation embedded in the same book is singular, God to the prophet. Under Pattern 17 a reader sees the address change number without apparatus and without ever meeting an archaism in Philip's own voice. Under a flat "thou" the daughters would become one woman; under a flat "you" the Habacuc verse loses the prophet.
3d · Marginal source-edition numbers
250 (0432C) · 251 (0434B) · 252 (0435D) · 253 (0437C) · 254 (0439B) · 255 (0441A) · 256 (0442D) · 257 (0444B). Continuous with cruces-0084's 223–230 (which ended at 0399A), so the 0090–0101 range carries 231–249. Each kept italic and verbatim at the exact word it interrupts, with the English clause built around it rather than moving it: 252 falls between ratio non and admittit, 253 between Nulla and quippe areola, 254 between parum and quid rubeum, 255 between penitus and expedire, 256 between si and quod bene videtur, 257 between non solum and quia homo. ⚠ 253's and 254's slots forced "For no 253 bed is set by a hand so prudent" and "in the midst whereof somewhat 254 a little red is found"; both are more contorted than I would otherwise write, and both are deliberate.
3e · ⚑ An anchor observation NOT reported as a defect (brief §10.1)
Chunk 0107 runs …exspectat [0446A] responsa filiarum… and ends at 0446A; chunk 0108's colFirst is 0445A, so the column sequence across our chunk boundary reads …0445A, 0446A ‖ 0445A, 0445B…
I am recording this and NOT reporting it. Brief §10.1 names recurring column numbers and non-monotonic band marks as the phantom-gap class, examined 49 times corpus-wide with none real, and states that the only real signal is text broken mid-word or mid-construction across an anchor. There is none: exspectat [0446A] responsa filiarum construes perfectly across the mark, and 0108 opens a fresh sentence at 0445B. No [ed:], no patch, no plate check. Noted only so a later reader can see the check was made rather than skipped.
§4 · PATTERN 7 / 8 / 9 / 10 — no [sic:], and the readings rendered as printed
No type in these six chunks is a non-word, so Pattern 12 fires nowhere; every odd reading below is a real Latin word merely wrong or merely odd, which Pattern 12's own boundary clause keeps on the English side. Conjectures live here and NOT in the text.
- ⛔ 0431B, lux candorem nivem supergressa. Two bare accusatives in apposition where the sense wants a comparison; read candore nivem supergressa ("having surpassed snow in whiteness") or candorem nivis, neither certain. As printed the clause says "a light that hath gone beyond whiteness, snow", and that is how it is rendered. Both candidates are single-letter changes and I decline to pick one in the text. ⚠ The most repairable sentence in the range after §1.2.
- ⛔ 0441C, Remora igitur necessitate apud nos generaliter coactiva, sua usus est voluntate potentialiter effectiva. Read Remota, probable: the sentence needs necessity to be taken away from Christ, which is exactly what the preceding clause says (legem nobis insitam vi quadam ingenita potentialiter supergressus) and what the following one says (potuit non sufferre molestias, neque laedi). But remora is a real Latin noun, so Pattern 12 keeps it on the English side: rendered "Necessity therefore being a delay generally compulsive among us, he used his own will, powerfully effective", taking Remora as an ablative in apposition to necessitate. It construes and it is flat. Not emended. ⚑ The one place in the range where I would most welcome a second opinion, and it is the same call shape cruces-0084 §4 made for relectio at 0390B.
- ⛔ 0440A, in praeferendo, non ut videbatur defectus fuit virium, sed potestas. Read perferendo ("in bearing them through"), probable: the clause it depends on is pertulit et molestas, with per- in the verb, and praeferre ("to carry in front, to prefer") makes no sense of enduring troubles. A real word; rendered "in the bringing of them forward", which is meant to read flat. Not supplied.
- ⛔ 0439B, ut vitare valeat praesentiam penitus ustionem. Two accusatives again; read praesentem… ustionem ("the present burning"), which the antithesis requires — praesentia stands against futuram gloriam four lines later, and the whole lily gloss is present-red against future-white. As printed the clause reads "avoid the presence, the burning, utterly", and that is how it is rendered.
- 0441A, the misplaced full stop: Quam legem dure insitam. Virgo sola concipiens creditur non sensisse. Migne breaks a single sentence between its object and its verb, and the following word is a proper name so the capital tells us nothing. Preserved (Pattern 8: never delete a mark the plate prints): the English reads "Which law, harshly implanted. The Virgin alone in conceiving is believed not to have felt, forasmuch as…", deliberately as broken as the plate. ⚠ Do not churn this.
- 0435C, the missing full stop: meritorum praemiis non coronat Vidit ergo nos gratia. The inverse defect, twelve columns earlier: a sentence ends and the next begins with a capital and no stop at all. Preserved: "…crowneth none with the rewards of deserts but the deserving Therefore he saw us with grace…". Same call cruces-0084 §4 made for inquam favus at 0391C and cruces-0060 for Domine, ait si tu sustulisti at 0335A. ⚑ Worth recording together with the 0441A case: this range has one supernumerary stop and one missing stop, six columns apart, and both are inside the same argument.
- 0439A, the missing stop before ut justus: sint non immemores aeternorum ut justus quisque sic manus inserat. A third instance of the same class in the same chunk-pair. Preserved.
- 0437A, ad genas, quos a laudandi merito nequaquam judicat alienas. Masculine relative for feminine genas, with the feminine alienas two words later proving the gender. ⚑ Pattern 9, and it is the clean case: English "which" carries no gender, so there is no emendation to make and none to undo. Rendered normally. Logged and marked here so a later sweep does not churn it.
- 0432D, in unam personam habent duplex natura convenire. Singular subject, plural verb. English can show it ("a twofold nature have to come together") and it is so rendered; Pattern 9, no marker.
- 0434A, elatis palmarum proceris et rutilantibus similis gaudent esse. Singular similis with a plural subject. No English exponent — "like" is numberless. Pattern 9, rendered normally, logged.
- 0432C, ex infinite omnium numero. Adverb where an adjective (infinito) is expected. No English exponent for the part-of-speech slip; rendered "out of the infinite number of them all". Pattern 9, logged, no marker.
- 0431B compraehensa · 0441D agritudo · 0433D ramusculi. Attested medieval spellings (ae/e interchange in both directions); Pattern 9 exempts them explicitly. Translated normally, no italics, no crux beyond this line. ⚠ Recorded only because comprehensa stands correctly at 0440B and aegritudo nowhere, which makes the first look like a defect at first sight.
- 0437B, Sic et Sponsi, id est ejus divina pulchritudo, in qua nihil inquinatum… A genitive with no governing noun and a sentence with no main verb — the whole period is an anacoluthon depending on sunt hortuli two sentences back. Rendered as closely as the printed words allow ("So also is the Bridegroom's, that is, his divine beauty, wherein is nothing defiled…") and logged rather than repaired.
- 0441A, Quod vitium quae transitio, quae velut altera jam natura… ventrem omnium … infirmat. Three nominative relatives resumed by nothing, then a singular verb. Rendered literally ("Which vice, which passing over, which now as it were a second nature… weakeneth the belly of all"), logged; the same Latin anacoluthon class cruces-0084 §4 recorded for Quos… nos at 0388D.
- 0440D, quia modum et ordinem ejus, quam si noverat geniturae, non laeserat mollities. quam si will not construe; quam sic or quam ipsa are both possible and neither is certain. Rendered as closely as the words allow — "the manner and the order of that begetting, such as she had known it" — and logged, not emended.
Negation audit (brief §9), second pass, against the Latin. Every printed non / nec / neque / nisi / nihil / nil / nullus / nunquam / nondum / necdum / nescire / nequaquam / nequire / nonnisi / nullatenus / ne in the six Latin chunks was extracted by script after the prose was drafted and matched one by one against the English. Totals: 0102 30 · 0103 23 · 0104 36 · 0105 35 · 0106 44 · 0107 55 — 223 in all. The dense clusters are 0431C–0432B (non decor illi maneat, non aspectus… mens non caligat, non hebet intellectus… de culpa nil praesumere nisi poenam… non sordet… nec est culpae laesio… Nec solum genae… non nisi gratia… non sustinet, si non misericordia praevenitur… non lucem, sed incendium… non ab aliquo facile potest sciri, nisi cui… quibus non invideo… nulla respersus macula… non desinit… non gigas potentior, non quisquam illi similis), 0433B–0434C (promotum illuminat, non consumit… non decalvat turpitudo, calvities indecens non deturpat… non quibusvis arboribus… non declinant… non ostendunt… non admittit… non aufert praesentiam sed promittit… non solum homines… non incongrue… nec nisi per alterum caret fine, non comparatur… non derogat, non detrahit… non coronae), 0435A–0436D (qui non fuerant… non deesse… nec superba caderent pravitate, ut cadere jam non possent… non respexit… gradum stabilem non accepit… nonnisi immeritis merita prima donat, et item nisi meritos… non coronat… nonnisi gratis… nec est satis utile… veritas non respondet… non invidet… durius nos non vident… non rapinam meditantur… non aquis, sed potius lacte lotae… usus vel ratio non admittit… non solum super aquas… non cessant… nihil stare sinit… non aquis lotae… non noceat, et nos velit alteri non nocere… ne videas malum… non poteris… eligant non videre… non possunt intuitum retorquere… Quis istos non commendet… mala nostra nesciens… non frivolum, sed utile, non superfluum), 0437A–0439C (nequaquam judicat alienas… nil omnino comparandum… non auro, non argento, non hujusmodi… nihil inquinatum, nulla indecens turpitudo… immortalitas finem nescit… non civibus, sed virtutibus… non invalida, non inutilis… Nulla quippe areola… non quisquam pigmentarius… non contrivit… non homo, non angelus praevaleret… Nec alii pigmentarii… nonnisi Filius incarnari… non caret intellectu… nisi ore et labiis… non venimus… non dolum, non fallaciam, non noverunt utique falsitatem… tempus nondum gratiae… non invenit… non immemores aeternorum… non remordet… non excedunt… nec est tam felix quispiam… non vacillat), 0439D–0442B (nondum natus… nil obesse… nihil torno facilius… relabi nesciens in defectum… non angeli, non hominis, non est cujuslibet… non homo simpliciter… non natura… non plumbum, non stannum… etsi non a tenebris comprehensa… non apparens… non tenentur… non solum aureas… Nihil enim aliud… nonnisi ad coelestia bona tendit… non naturae vitio… non carneum appellavit… creditur non sensisse… viri nesciam… non praevenit… non pervenit… non solum nihil intulit detrimenti… vitio non carnalis… non culpae, sed culparum merito… non defectu virium… nihil horum, nisi quia, quando, quantum… potuit non sufferre molestias, neque laedi… non solum indutus… motus nescit… non uratur… nihilominus adhibere… ne plus vel minus valeant… Neque enim vel humana semper), and *0442C–0445A (viandi nescios… non incongrue… nulli dubium… super basim solidam non fundatur… commendabiles non negantur… creditur non coactus… non neglexit… nulli sanctorum… nescit uri vitiis… defectus nesciens repentinos… nesciens culpa laedi… nihil penitus operetur, quod non hujus benevolentia… nequit stare, si… non munitur… non ruinam invenit, nullum sustinet detrimentum… non tam suavior… ne, si minus dictum… dulcedo suavior, suavitas dulcior non habetur… nihil subtilius, nihil mirabilius, nil suavius… nullatenus est consumpta: nec defecit… non confusio, non conversio… non angustat… nec est alius praeter ipsum… non solum quia Deus, non solum quia homo… non qualis alias quivis homo… non totum desideret, non totum diligat, non totum admiretur… non quaerat studiosius, non teneat avidius… non studeat… nescit aemulam, vel pellicem non veretur… non vult caeteris invidere… non sum deceptorie circumventa, nec amor intemperans… non laudavit… necdum tamen valeo… necdum satis congrue sunt expressa… Nec enim potest diligi, si non fuerit intellectus, nec videtur intelligi si non fuerit et dilectus… nihil sanctius… nihil beatius quam ab illo diligi qui nescit non diligere* diligentem).
No negation was dropped and none was supplied. ⚠ Two places were caught by this pass and would otherwise have shipped weakened:
- 0434C, nec nisi per alterum caret fine. The draft had rendered the pair idiomatically as "and lacketh an end only through another", which is defensible English for non nisi but leaves neither particle visible. Rewritten to "and lacketh not an end save through another" — the standard nisi → "save" mapping the corpus already uses, with the nec carried. This is the shape of mechanism 3 (connective smoothed), which the audit note in Pattern 7a says leaves no lexical trace at all; here it left one only because the Latin was in front of me.
- 0444C, quis talem non quaerat studiosius, non teneat avidius… et alios ad quaerendum non studeat erudire? The draft had let a single "would not" distribute across all three verbs — grammatical in English, but two of the three printed nons were then invisible. Rewritten so each verb carries its own: "would not seek… would not hold… would not be zealous to instruct."
⭐ And one place where the double negation was deliberately kept, because it is the range's best sentence: 0445A ab illo diligi qui nescit non diligere diligentem → "to be loved by him who knoweth not how not to love him that loveth." An English ear wants "who cannot but love"; that would drop one of two printed negations and flatten the figure Philip is closing his book with.
§5 · CONVENTIONS SET OR HELD IN THIS RANGE
- ⭐⭐
elatae palmarum(Cant. 5:11) IS translated — "the raised boughs of palm trees" — against Douay's "branches of palm trees", and Caput XVIII depends on it. This is the vermiculatas argento call, not the muraenula call: English has the exponent, so italic Latin is not available. Philip's whole gloss is the participle. Elatae vero illi palmarum esse ramusculi perhibentur, qui in altum prae caeteris procera rectitudine promoventur (0433C) · Sic virtutes coelorum in altum prae caeteris sunt elatae (0433C) · ad intuendam cujus faciem semper erigere se festinant (0433D) · quasi triumphantes elatam palmae gestare gratulantur (0433D) · palmarum, ut jam dictum est, similes sunt elatis (0434B) · elatis palmarum proceris… similes (0434A). Six occurrences of the root across one chapter, and every one is the argument: raised bough → raised on high → the angels lift themselves → they bear the raised bough in triumph. "Branches of palm trees" is botanical and severs the chain exactly as "thy plants" severed emissio. ⛔ This is the one cross-chunk decision in my range the merge must not undo, and the lemma does not recur after 0434C, so it is a closed set. - ⭐
distinctus/distinguitur/distinctio(Cant. 5:14) = "distinguished", NOT Douay's "set with". Same argument, smaller: Venter ejus eburneus, distinctus sapphiris (0440D) → sapphiris… est distinctus (0441D) → venter eburneus… distinguitur sapphiris (0442B) → sed operandi seriem distinctionis gratia decorari (0442B). Philip's closing move in Caput XXIII is that God's works are distinguished — set apart from one another in a series — and "set with sapphires" makes the last sentence explain nothing. The lemma does not recur after 0442B. - ⭐
electus= "chosen" everywhere, at both lemmata, against Douay's "excellent" at Cant. 5:15. electus ex millibus (Cant. 5:10, 0431A) and electus ut cedri (Cant. 5:15, 0443A) are the same word and Philip glosses both with the verb: solus ille sit electus ad ministerium offerendi… iste singulariter est electus (0432C) and Quem nimirum Deus Pater elegit… Propter quod electus est ut in aedificio collocetur (0443B–C). One English word, both places. Douay's "excellent as the cedars" would have broken the second chapter's whole argument from election. - The taste-words split, and the split is forced by one chiasmus. suavis = sweet · dulcis = delightful / delightfulness. Set at 0443D–0444A, where Migne prints dulcedo suavior, suavitas dulcior non habetur — a chiasmus that collapses into "no sweetness is sweeter, no sweetness more sweet" under any single equivalent. "Sweet" is kept for the lemma word (suavissimum, suavior, suavitas, suavius — five occurrences) and dulcis takes the second slot. Logged as a judgment call, reversible, and flagged as the one I am least sure of* — a merge that prefers "sweet" for dulcis must change suavis* everywhere, including the printed lemma.
speciestakes a THIRD sense here, extending cruces-0084 §5.3. That range split it "spice" (aromatic catalogue) / "kind" (garden). This range adds "fairness" for the Cant. 5:15 lemma Species ejus ut Libani (0443A) and for laudari digna est facies merito speciei (0437A) — the face's beauty, which is speciosus = "fair" territory (cruces-0084 §5.2) and not spice or kind. ⚠ And "spice" also occurs in this range, four times in 0105's perfumer passage (multimodis divites speciebus 0437B · herbas sive species non contrivit 0437D · salutis species collegerunt 0438A · aromaticas species attulerunt 0438B), so both senses stand within six columns. The word has three English exponents in this work and no single one; logged so a merge sweep does not flatten them.charitas= charity — held, and the range is thin on the pressure point. Two instances only: 0437C ardet praesentia charitatis → "the presence of charity burneth" and 0442D inniti visus est illi geminae charitati → "that twin charity", which is the same phrase cruces-0084 §5.6 recorded at 0400B and is rendered identically. No dilectio occurs in the range, so the doublet is not tested here.- ⭐
amicus meus(Cant. 5:16) = "my friend" — the masculine counterpart of brief §5's ruledamica mea, and it is confirmed by the same mechanism. Migne prints ipse est amicus meus, filiae Hierusalem at 0444C and Philip glosses it in his own voice at 0445A: quem fieri et amicum vere diligentibus intellexi. §5's ruling was proved from John 15:14's amici mei; this lemma is the word in the masculine, in the same book, glossed the same way. "My beloved" is already taken by dilectus meus in the same verse — Talis est dilectus meus, et ipse est amicus meus — so the two must differ in English, which is the §5 argument in miniature. Offered to the merge as the completion of that rule, not a new one. - Beauty-words: cruces-0084 §5.2's set held unchanged. formosus = comely · speciosus = fair · pulcher = beautiful · decor = comeliness. All four are live in this range (0431C non decor illi maneat · 0437A pulchritudo elucet faciei · 0437B forma prae filiis hominum speciosus · 0434A comarum pulchritudo), and formosus does not occur. Nothing to reconcile.
- The colour triple held: niger = black throughout 0103, candor = whiteness, rubor = redness. fuscus occurs nowhere in the range, so brief §5's "fusca is never black" rule is untested here. ⚑ candidus at 0431A/0432B is rendered "white" (the Cant. 5:10 lemma candidus et rubicundus), and candidatio does not occur — but brief §5's ruling that candidatio is translated governs the same field and is consistent with this.
- Bed- and chamber-words: none occur in this range, so brief §5's cubile = "couch" ruling and cruces-0060's lectulus/lectus pair are untouched. thalamus does not occur either, so cruces-0084 §5.5's open question is not advanced.
Philip of Harvengt, Commentaria in Cantica canticorum, PL 203. Six chunks, 5,444 Latin words, opening Book VI and running Caput I–XII of it — Cant. 6:1–11: Quo abiit dilectus tuus → Dilectus meus descendit in hortum suum → Ego dilecto meo → Pulchra es, amica mea → Averte oculos tuos a me → Capilli tui sicut grex caprarum → Sexaginta sunt reginae → Una est columba mea → Viderunt illam filiae Sion → Quae est ista quae progreditur → Descendi in hortum nucum → Nescivi: anima mea conturbata est. LIBER SEXTUS. stands at the end of chunk 0107 with no text under it (cruces-0102 §3e); CAPUT PRIMUM. at 0445B is the book's first head, so this range opens Book VI.
Marker totals: 4 [var:] · 3 [sic:] · 0 [ed:] · 0 [d:] · 0 [nt:] · 0 [f:]. verify-english.mjs reports verify OK: 126 chunks, columns/notes/sections aligned, no duplicate paragraphs — the whole work now passes. Ratio warnings on 0108 (1.62), 0111 (1.61), 0112 (1.62), 0113 (1.64); 0109 and 0110 fall below the warn threshold. All inside the 1.35–1.69 band this work has shipped.
Column anchors (10/11/6/10/8/11), [n:] strings (1/6/1/5/1/4 — each matching its frontmatter noteCount) and guillemet counts were diffed 1:1 against the Latin twins by script, not by eye: anchors byte-identical in order and place, [n:] contents byte-identical in order. Every [sic:] content was machine-checked as a verbatim substring of its Latin twin; every [var:] was machine-checked NOT to be one. Marginal source-edition numbers 258–266 verified in place, and they are continuous with cruces-0102's 250–257.
⚠ Asterisk parity — three deliberate departures, itemized so nobody hunts them. Once each [var:]'s and [sic:]'s own italics are subtracted, 0108, 0111, 0112 and 0113 match their twins exactly. 0109 carries +2 and 0110 carries +2, and both are intentional: 0109's is the italic Latin castra at 0449A (§4.1 below), 0110's is the [sic: a dolescentulae] at 0451C.
⚑ GUILLEMETS: zero « and zero » in 5,444 words, matching the twins. This is the third consecutive range to report none, and brief §7c predicted it exactly. Every quotation in this range is carried by italics alone, and every one was therefore treated as a candidate quotation and collated, not assumed to be a lemma. §2 records what that produced.
§1 · ⭐⭐ THE FINDINGS THE MERGE SHOULD CARRY
1.1 · ⭐⭐⭐ Cant. 6:8b at 0454B — Migne ADDS Sion to the lemma, and Philip's very next clause expounds the added word
Viderunt illam, filiae Sion, et beatissimam praedicaverunt: reginae et concubinae, et laudaverunt eam. (0454B, head lemma of Caput IX)
Vulg. Cant. 6:8: Viderunt eam filiae, et beatissimam praedicaverunt; reginae et concubinae, et laudaverunt eam. The Vulgate's filiae is bare — no place-name anywhere in the verse.
⭐⭐ And the addition is load-bearing in the first six words of the exposition. Philip's opening sentence is:
Filiae Sion supra filiae Hierusalem appellantur, quae Virginem, ut ante dictum est, in hoc epithalamio comitantur… (0454B)
— "The daughters of Sion are above called the daughters of Jerusalem." His whole first paragraph is an identification of two named groups, and it identifies a name the Vulgate's lemma does not contain. On the Vulgate text the sentence has nothing to identify: filiae and filiae Hierusalem are not two names. He then keeps the added name in play twice more (hanc attollunt filiae Sion, et beatissimam praedicant confidenter, 0454C).
[var:] FIRED at the lemma, naming both readings. The marker is available because Migne italicises the run — the quotation's boundary is printed, so the marker asserts nothing the plate does not (the same distinction cruces-0102 §1.2 drew, and the reason §8a's unmarked class takes no marker).
⚑ The companion divergence rides inside the same marker and is not elided: Migne prints illam for the Vulgate's eam in the first clause while keeping eam in the last (laudaverunt eam), so the verse uses two pronouns where the Vulgate uses one. Sense untouched; it is inside the marker only because it sits in the same six words.
⚑ Copy-text shape, and the evidence is in the plate. Viderunt illam is printed three times — the chunk's incipit, the lemma at 0454B, and the forward citation De qua subditur: Viderunt illam, etc. at 0454A (chunk 0111) — and never Viderunt eam. And filiae Sion is a phrase this work prints elsewhere in its own right: at 0073 it is the head lemma of Cant. 3:11 (Egredimini, filiae Sion) and at 0023 in Philip's prose. So the Song supplies the name twenty-eight columns earlier, and the natural mechanism is conformation to Cant. 3:11 — exactly the shape of §6's Cant. 5:7 vigiles/custodes case, where Migne's 5:7 was conformed to 3:3. Two members of that shape are now attested in Book V–VI alone.
1.2 · ⭐⭐ Cant. 6:8a at 0451D — matri suae (dative) for the Vulgate's matris suae (genitive), printed four times, and the whole chapter is built on the dative
Una est columba mea, perfecta mea; una est matri suae, electa genitrici suae. (0451D)
Vulg. Cant. 6:8: …una est matris suae, electa genetrici suae.
One letter, and it changes the construction: the Vulgate's genitive says she is the one of her mother (the mother's only child, the Hebrew sense); Migne's dative says she is one unto her mother. Philip reads the dative and builds on it. The phrase is printed four times in the chunk, always dative:
| col | printed |
|---|---|
| 0451D | una est matri suae (head lemma) |
| 0452B | Haec igitur matri suae una est, et in hac excellentia singularis |
| 0452D | Una est igitur matri suae, quia mater gratia, nec primam visa est habere similem nec secundam |
| 0452D | sicut una matri suae, sic et genitrici electa perhibetur |
⭐ And the mother he means is gratia, not Anne — quia mater gratia (0452D), quae tam digne, quae tam recte, quam ipsa gratia praedicatur (0452C). That reading needs the dative: grace is the one to whom the Virgin is one and for whom she is unique, and the four columns of Caput VIII run una uni jungitur → in amorem unius… collecta → unitatis hujus merito… perfecta. The genitive would make the sentence a statement about parentage, which is not what he expounds.
⚑ The work knows the genitive. matris suae is printed correctly at 0020 and 0120 — in Philip's own prose, on other verses. So the form is available to the compositor and does not appear at this verse.
[var:] FIRED at the lemma (italicised, boundary printed). ⚠ This is the marker in my range a merge is likeliest to weigh again, and I say so plainly: one letter, and the English "one unto her mother" / "the one of her mother" is a small shift. I fired it because it is a change of case, not of orthography, because it is printed four times, and because §7a mechanism 5 (reference or agency mis-bound) is precisely the class no negation-aware check can see.
1.3 · ⭐⭐ Cant. 6:11 at 0457D — conturbata est (passive) for the Vulgate's conturbavit me (active), and Philip's gloss carries BOTH readings
Nescivi: anima mea conturbata est propter quadrigas Aminadab. (0457D)
Vulg. Cant. 6:11: Nescivi: anima mea conturbavit me propter quadrigas Aminadab. The Vulgate makes the soul the agent troubling the speaker; Migne's passive makes the soul the patient.
The gloss is the interesting part, and it runs both ways inside one column:
- passive, twice — sum turbata, expavi, obstupui (0458A) · Virgo prius nescia conturbatur (0458D, the chapter's closing sentence)
- active, once, and it is the Vulgate's own construction — labore salutifero deficiens, vel magis, proficiens me turbavit (0458B)
⭐ So at 0458B Philip writes me turbavit for a soul that troubles her, which is the reading his own lemma does not print. [var:] FIRED (the lemma is italicised), and the crux records the internal control that runs against firing, exactly as cruces-0096 §2b did for distillaverunt: the Vulgate reading survives in the exposition. I fired anyway because unlike distillaverunt (compound for simple, sense untouched) this is a change of voice and of agency, which is Pattern 14's own threshold.
1.4 · ⭐⭐ Exod. 3 at 0456B — the note says Exodus and the words are Acts 7:34's, verbatim
Videns vidi, inquit, afflictionem populi mei, et descendi liberare eos
[n: (Exod. III)]. (0456B)
- Vulg. Exod. 3:7–8: Vidi afflictionem populi mei in Aegypto… et sciens dolorem eius, descendi ut liberarem eum de manibus Aegyptiorum.
- Vulg. Acts 7:34: Videns vidi afflictionem populi mei qui est in Aegypto, et gemitum eorum audivi, et descendi liberare eos.
Every printed word is Acts 7:34's, including the two things Exodus does not have: the LXX Hebraism Videns vidi (ἰδὼν εἶδον) and the bare infinitive with a plural object, liberare eos, against Exodus' ut liberarem eum. Philip frames it as God's own act in Aegypto and Migne's note names Exodus.
[var:] FIRED — the span is italicised, so the boundary is printed. This is brief §8b's second attested shape ("note cites one book, the words are another book's"), and it is now the fourth instance of it (Luke 9/Matt. 8; Deut. 32/Ps. 91; Isa. 42/Matt. 12 at 0318D; this). ⚑ It is also the cleanest of the four, because the Old Testament verse it names and the New Testament verse it prints are the same verse quoted twice in the canon — so nothing here depends on our judgment of what Philip "meant". The two Latin texts are simply different, and the plate prints one under the other's name.
1.5 · ⭐⭐ 0445B [n: (l. IV, c. 10-12)] — a second wrong internal self-reference, and both known instances are off by exactly ONE BOOK
Philip writes:
Cui cum pessulum ostii sui festinaret Virgo superius
[n: (l. IV, c. 10-12)]aperire; sperans eum, cujus vocem pulsantis audierat in januis, propius invenire: Ille, inquit, declinaverat atque transierat. (0445B)
That is Cant. 5:6, and the place it was expounded is Book V, Caput XII–XIII — chunk 0099, col. 0423D, whose head lemma is Pessulum ostii mei aperui dilecto meo: at ille declinaverat, atque transierat, continuing into chunk 0100. (l. IV, c. 10-12) resolves instead to chunks 0076–0077 (Book IV Caput X–XII, cols 0369D–0374A), whose lemmata are Cant. 4:3–4 — Sicut vitta coccinea labia tua and Sicut fragmen mali Punici — no bolt, no door, nothing that turns aside.
⭐⭐ The merge should put this beside cruces-0102 §2e.1. That range found (supra l. I, c. 2) at 0437A pointing where Book II, Caput VI was meant, and called it a third shape — a wrong internal self-reference, the first such adjudicated. Mine is the second, and the two agree on their book error:
| col | printed | resolves to | book error | chapter error |
|---|---|---|---|---|
| 0437A | (supra l. I, c. 2) | l. II, c. 6 | −1 book | −4 |
| 0445B | (l. IV, c. 10-12) | l. V, c. 12–13 | −1 book | −2 |
Both name the book immediately before the right one. Two instances is not a profile, but it is the shape §8b asks ranges to log, and it is the sort of thing only the merge can rule on. ⚑ And the class is not uniformly wrong — three internal cross-references are now attested correct: (sup. l. III, c. 22) @0427A (cruces-0096 §1.3) and both of mine, §1.6 below. So the running tally for (l. …, c. …) is 3 right, 2 wrong, and the two wrong ones are the two that are off by a book.
Reproduced verbatim; §10.2 forbids correcting it, and no Ibid. depends on it (there is none in the range).
1.6 · ⭐ The two internal cross-references that are RIGHT — logged because §8b asks for those too
- 0449D
[n: (l. IV, c. 8)], on Cujusmodi laudes, quia supra… fere verbis eisdem sunt positae. Book IV Caput VIII is chunk 0075, whose incipit is Capilli tui sicut grex caprarum, quae ascenderunt de [monte Galaad] — the very praises being repeated at 0449D. Exactly right, and Philip's own fere verbis eisdem ("in wellnigh the same words") is vindicated by the plate: see §2b's apparuerunt/ascenderunt note. - 0453B
[n: (l. II, c. 13)], on De quibus, quia loqui longe supra invenior distulisse, cum in secundo libro primum columbas ad medium videtur hoc epithalamium protulisse. Book II Caput XIII is chunk 0036, col. 0274D, whose lemma is Cant. 1:14 Ecce tu pulchra es, amica mea… oculi tui columbarum — the Song's first mention of doves, exactly as Philip says. And chunk 0036 carries septem, septenario, septempliciter, columbina, naturas: the deferred promise is where he says it is. Exactly right, in both the book and the chapter, across a 179-column back-reference.
⭐ Both of these are harder to get right than the two that are wrong — one reaches back 179 columns and lands on the correct chapter of the correct book. That is a strong argument against reading the two failures as a systematic defect, and it is the same correction §8b already applied to (I Cor. II).
§2 · THE COLLATION — all 59 listed spans, plus 26 found on the prose pass
Every span in data/quotations/11632/0108-0113.md was collated word by word against the Vulgate. Spans recorded as AGREES were collated and found to agree; the absence of a marker on them is a finding, not a silence.
⚠ The extraction's class counts for my range were 0 guillemeted / 52 italic / 7 noted-only, and the zero is real, not a bracket-matching artifact — there is no « anywhere in the six chunks to break the matcher. So unlike chunk 0083's case, no span in my list is mis-classed.
2a · Divergent — [var:] fired (4)
| Col | Ref | Migne prints | Vulgate | Note |
|---|---|---|---|---|
| 0451D | Cant. 6:8a | una est matri suae | una est matris suae | ⭐⭐ §1.2. Dative for genitive, printed 4×. |
| 0454B | Cant. 6:8b | Viderunt illam, filiae Sion | Viderunt eam filiae | ⭐⭐⭐ §1.1. Sion added; Philip expounds the addition in his next clause. |
| 0456B | Exod. 3:7–8 | Videns vidi… descendi liberare eos | Vidi… descendi ut liberarem eum | ⭐⭐ §1.4. The words are Acts 7:34's, under a note naming Exodus. |
| 0457D | Cant. 6:11 | anima mea conturbata est | anima mea conturbavit me | ⭐⭐ §1.3. Voice reversed; gloss carries both. |
2b · The Song lemmata — collated, and eight of eleven agree word for word
- 0445B Cant. 6:1a Quo abiit dilectus tuus, o pulcherrima mulierum, quo declinavit dilectus tuus, et quaeremus eum tecum. — agrees word for word. ⚑ Migne prints a comma where the Vulgate has the first
?and a full stop where it has the second; preserved (Pattern 8), so the English lemma is not a question. - 0446B Cant. 6:1b [CAP. VI.] Dilectus meus descendit in hortum suum ad areolam aromatis, ut pascatur in hortis, et lilia colligat. — Vulg. ad areolam aromatum. Singular for plural; logged, no marker — the sense is "a bed of spice" against "a bed of spices" and Pattern 14's threshold is not met. ⚠ Recorded with its internal control, because the control is unusually clean: Migne prints areolae aromatum correctly at 0105 (Cant. 5:13), twice, twenty columns earlier — so the work has the plural and does not use it here. And Philip's gloss keeps the singular: instar aromatis attritus multifaria passione (0446C, of Stephen bruised like spice). Two printings + an internal control = §6's evidential shape without §6's threshold; handed to the merge unmarked. ⚑ Unlike the ita/sic case below, this divergence IS carried into the English and is visible without the Latin column: cruces-0102's range renders Cant. 5:13's areolae aromatum "beds of aromatical spices" at 0437A, and mine renders Cant. 6:1's areolam aromatis "the bed of spice". The two English pages differ in number exactly where the two Latin pages do, with no marker on either — which is the state brief §8's "record the collation so absence of a marker is evidence" exists to make legible. ⚑ The printed locator
[CAP. VI.]is reproduced verbatim inside the italic run, per the[CAP. V.]/[CANT. I.]precedent (cruces-0090 §, cruces-0072, cruces-0036). - 0446D Cant. 6:2 Ego dilecto meo, et dilectus meus mihi, qui pascitur inter lilia. — agrees word for word.
- 0447C Cant. 6:3 Pulchra es, amica mea, suavis et decora sicut Hierusalem, terribilis ut castrorum acies ordinata. — agrees word for word (Hierusalem orthographic, Pattern 9). ⭐ amica mea rendered "my friend" per brief §5's ⭐ ruling, which names Cant. 6:3 in its recurrence list — and the gloss makes it load-bearing here, more so than at any earlier site: sollicite respuens omnes faeculentias inimici, amica in his gaudeas quae salutaria, quae delectabilia sunt amici (0447C). Philip puns inimici / amica / amici in one line. "My love" would have voided the pun and the clause.
- 0449A Cant. 6:4a Averte oculos tuos a me, quia ipsi me avolare fecerunt. — agrees word for word.
- 0449D Cant. 6:4b–6 Capilli tui sicut grex caprarum, quae apparuerunt de Galaad. Dentes tui sicut grex ovium, quae ascenderunt de lavacro. Omnes gemellis fetibus, et sterilis non est in eis. Sicut cortex mali Punici, ita genae tuae absque occultis tuis. — agrees word for word except the last connective. Vulg. Cant. 6:6: Sicut cortex mali punici, sic genae tuae, absque occultis tuis. ⭐ ita is Cant. 4:3's word, and this work prints Cant. 4:3 with it: chunk 0077's head lemma is Sicut fragmen mali Punici, ita genae tuae, absque eo quod intrinsecus latet. So Migne's 6:6 is a hybrid — cortex from 6:6, ita from 4:3 — which is the vigiles conformation shape again, applied to one word. ⛔ But no marker is even expressible, and that is worth saying plainly: ita and sic have the same English exponent ("so"), so a faithful English rendering of Migne is byte-identical to a faithful rendering of the Vulgate. The divergence exists only on the Latin side of the parallel page. Logged here so it is not invisible; no
[var:], because a marker would announce a difference the English does not carry and Pattern 14's threshold is untouched. ⚑ And note what this range's whole chapter is: Philip declines to expound the verse at all (in praesenti expositionem supersedeo replicare), pointing back to Book IV c. 8. So nothing rests on either word here. - 0450B Cant. 6:7 Sexaginta sunt reginae et octoginta concubinae, et adolescentularum non est numerus. — agrees word for word. ⭐ adolescentularum rendered "maidens" per brief §5. Re-quoted twice, both agreeing: Et octoginta, inquit, concubinae (0450D) and Et adolescentularum non est numerus (0451A–B).
- 0451D Cant. 6:8a — DIVERGENT, §1.2. The sub-lemmata columba mea, and perfecta mea re-quoted at 0453A agree; they are words discussed as words and take italics (brief §7's own category).
- 0454B Cant. 6:8b — DIVERGENT ×2, §1.1.
- 0455A Cant. 6:9 Quae est ista quae progreditur quasi aurora consurgens, pulchra ut luna, electa ut sol, terribilis ut castrorum acies ordinata? — agrees word for word, question mark included. The re-quotation eleven lines above, Quae est ista quae progreditur ut aurora (0455A), abridges quasi… consurgens to ut for Philip's rhyme with priora. Logged, no marker — an abridgement inside the author's own sentence.
- 0456A Cant. 6:10 Descendi in hortum nucum, ut viderem poma convallium, et inspicerem si floruisset vinea, et germinassent mala Punica. — agrees word for word.
- 0457D Cant. 6:11 — DIVERGENT, §1.3. The forward citation Revertere, etc. at 0458D (Cant. 7:1) is a bare first word; nothing to collate.
2c · The adduced proof-texts — collated, and this is where §7c bites
Ten italicised runs in this range are proof-texts, not lemmata. Under the pre-0090 regime every one of them would have been guillemeted; here there is no mark but the italics, so each was collated on function alone.
- 0448B Ps. 44:3 forma est speciosus prae filiis hominum
[n: (Psal. XLIV)]— Vulg. Speciosus forma prae filiis hominum. Transposed, and est added. ⭐ This is the site cruces-0102 §1.3 already tabulated as the ninth printing (its row "forma est speciosus prae filiis hominum | 0109 | italic + note"). I confirm the reading exactly and follow that range in declining a marker: the sense is untouched, Philip's rhyme is a sufficient non-textual explanation (hominum / relucescit / contemplatur), and firing here would put two ranges out of step on one verse. ⚑ But my printing is the third of the three that carry[n: (Psal. XLIV)], and cruces-0102's observation now stands complete: not one of the three noted printings is the Vulgate order, while both Vulgate-order printings are unnoted prose.** The merge has all nine sites and can rule the class once. - 0448D Gen. 32:2 Castra Dei sunt haec
[n: (Gen. XXXII)]— agrees word for word. Siglum correct. ⚑ The identical span with the identical siglum recurs at 0460A (chunk 0114), so a later range should find it agreeing too. - 0448D 4 Kings 6:16 Noli timere, ait, plures enim nobiscum sunt quam cum illis
[n: (IV Reg. VI)]— agrees word for word (Vulg. Noli timere: plures enim nobiscum sunt, quam cum illis). Siglum correct. Pattern 5 ait reproduced inside the italics as printed. - 0449B–C Exod. 33:20 Non me, inquam, videbit [0449C] homo, et vivet
[n: (Exod. XXXIII)]— Vulg. Non enim videbit me homo et vivet. Two divergences, both sub-threshold: enim dropped, its slot taken by the Pattern 5 inquam; and me fronted before the verb. Logged, no marker. Siglum correct. ⚠ The Pattern 5 break gives the awkward "Not me, I say, shall man see, and live"; kept, on the precedent of cruces-0096's John 10:33 and cruces-0102's Hab. 1:13. The column anchor falls inside the quotation, between videbit and homo; reproduced in place. - 0451B Ps. 138:18 Dinumerabo eos, et super arenam multiplicabuntur
[n: (Psal. CXXXVIII)]— agrees word for word. Siglum correct. - 0452B Phil. 3:12 Non quia jam acceperim, ait quidam, aut perfectus sim
[n: (Philip. III)]— Vulg. Non quod iam acceperim, aut iam perfectus sim. Two divergences: quia for quod (interchangeable in medieval Latin, no English exponent) and the second iam deleted. Sense untouched; logged, no marker. Siglum correct. ⛔ This is the range's Eph. 5:29, and it is recorded as a caught trap rather than a clean pass. The familiar English is "or were already perfect", and the second iam is exactly the kind of word that arrives from memory. It was checked against the plate before drafting and again on the §4 pass; the shipped English reads "or am perfect", with no "already". The first jam is printed and is carried ("I have already received"). - 0452B Ps. 138:16 Imperfectum, inquit, meum viderunt oculi tui
[n: (Psal. CXXXVIII)]— agrees word for word. Siglum correct. ⚠ The Pattern 5 break falls after Imperfectum, which English cannot mirror word for word; rendered "My imperfect being, saith he, thine eyes did see", the split kept at the printed place. - 0452C Luke 1:28 Ave, inquit, gratia plena
[n: (Luc. I)]— agrees word for word. Siglum correct. - 0454D Luke 10:23 Beati, ait, oculi qui vident quae vos videtis
[n: (Luc. X)]— agrees word for word. Siglum correct. ⭐ This is the range's Pattern 17 anchor: vos videtis is plural and is rendered "you see", inside a chunk whose only other second person is none — see §3c. - 0458B Hab. 3:8 Qui ascendis, ait, super equos tuos, et quadrigae tuae salvatio
[n: (Habac. III)]— Vulg. qui ascendes super equos tuos, et quadrigae tuae salvatio. Present for future, one letter. Sense barely touched (Philip's frame is ille et salutem potenter operetur, a present); logged, no marker. Siglum correct. Rendered "Thou that ridest", present, not the Douay future.
⭐ And one adduced authority that is neither scripture nor prose — see §2e.1 for the Boethius at 0451A, which the extraction lists but which belongs to brief §7b's evidence, not to the collation.
2d · The [n:]-only class — hit rate 0 of 7
All seven ⭐ spans were traced back to their real left edge. None is a quotation with divergences; three are not quotations at all but Migne's own internal cross-references. None takes a marker. Listed so nobody re-opens them:
- 0445B
(l. IV, c. 10-12)— not a scriptural quotation. Migne's internal cross-reference on Philip's superius. Stays[n:](a locator, Pattern 15), reproduced verbatim. And it is wrong — §1.5. - 0448B, Matt. 12:50
[n: (Matth. XII)]— qui Sponsi, vel filii digne fecerit voluntatem; ille frater hujus, et soror, et mater merebitur appellari, sicut ipse idem invenitur in Evangelio protestari. Vulg. Quicumque enim fecerit voluntatem Patris mei… ipse meus frater, et soror, et mater est. The triad is verbatim; everything round it is Philip's (Sponsi vel filii for Patris mei, merebitur appellari for est). Philip's prose. Siglum correct. - 0449D
(l. IV, c. 8)— not a quotation. Internal cross-reference, and correct — §1.6. - 0451D, 2 Tim. 2
[n: (II Tim. II)]— Virgo vero prae caeteris, mihi placens, utilis, opportuna, pluralem nescit numerum. The note is an imagery pointer at 2 Tim. 2:4 (ut ei placeat cui se probavit) and 2:21 (erit vas in honorem… utile Domino). Not one clause survives verbatim; placens and utilis are Philip's own participle and adjective. Philip's prose. Siglum correct as a pointer. - 0453B
(l. II, c. 13)— not a quotation. Internal cross-reference, and correct across 179 columns — §1.6. - 0456B, Luke 6:17
[n: (Luc. VI)]— In evangelio etiam descendere non inaniter perhibetur, sed ut turbas in campestri loco positas consoletur. Vulg. Et descendens cum illis, stetit in loco campestri, et turba discipulorum eius. Two words verbatim, transposed, inside Philip's own purpose clause; descendere is his infinitive, not the Gospel's participle. Philip's prose. Siglum correct. - 0457A, Ps. 83:8
[n: (Psal. LXXXIII)]— cum illam de virtute in virtutem sollicitus promovere… vult. Vulg. Ibunt de virtute in virtutem. Four words verbatim, but taken as the object of Philip's own promovere with the Vulgate's verb gone; the same phrase runs unmarked and unnoted in his prose at 0443B (cruces-0102 §2f) and at 0427B (cruces-0096 §2c′). Philip's prose, and collated as agreeing on all four words. Siglum correct.
Reported per brief §8a even though it is a null result. 0/7 here, against 0/5 for 0102–0107, 1/5 for 0096–0101, 0/6 for 0084–0089, 1/12 for 0060–0065, 0/20 for 0042–0047, 0/38 for 0048–0053, 0/19 for 0018–0023 and 1/14 for 0024–0029. The class's running rate across the nine ranges that have reported it is now 3 of 126.
⚑ A shape worth the merge's notice: three of my seven are internal cross-references, not scripture at all. No earlier range reports more than one. Book VI opens by looking backwards — Philip is closing promises made in Books II and IV — and that is why the class is loaded with locators here. It is also why the class's "hit rate" understates its value in this range: two of the three locators had never been resolved, and one of them is §1.5.
2e · ⭐ Weaves the extractor could NOT list — 26 found on the mandatory prose pass
These carry no guillemets, no italics and no [n:], so they appear in the extraction in no class whatever. None takes a marker (brief §8a). The first four are the ones the merge should see, and the first of them is not scripture.
- ⭐⭐⭐ 0447D — HORACE, and this is brief §7b's own internal control, verified in place. Migne prints, run into Philip's sentence:
Virgo autem recte Sponsum diligens, non novit invidere majus quo nec Siculi, juxta quemdam ethnicum, tormentum invenere. (0447D)
Horace, Epist. I.ii.58–59: Invidia Siculi non invenere tyranni / maius tormentum. Printed bare — no guillemets, no italics, no [n:] — and adduced with an explicit attribution formula (juxta quemdam ethnicum). ⭐ Brief §7b names this column as half of the display-rule proof, against the displayed and italicised printing of the same line at chunk 0022 (Invidia, inquit, Siculi non invenere tyranni / Tormentum majus.). I confirm the reading word for word at the column named, which is the half of the control that had not been checked inside a translated range. No marker (§8a). ⚑ Note that Philip has recast it into a comparative relative (majus quo… invenere) round his own non novit invidere, so the only verbatim run is Siculi… tormentum invenere — which is why the scripture-shaped search of §8a's warning walks past it twice over.
- ⭐⭐ 0451A — BOETHIUS, displayed on four lines and italicised, with NO note and NO name, and it is the second half of §7b's rule. Migne prints:
Gaudia, inquit, pelle, Pelle timorem, Spemque fugato, Nec dolor adsit.
Boethius, De consolatione I, m. vii.25–28: Gaudia pelle, / pelle timorem / spemque fugato / nec dolor adsit. — agrees word for word. Introduced only as prudens ille philosophus, and carrying an inquit. ⭐⭐ This is the strongest single confirmation of §7b any range can supply, because both variables sit four lines apart in one chunk: the same author quotes a pagan poet twice within 0109–0110, once run-in and bare (Horace, 0447D) and once displayed and italicised (Boethius, 0451A). Same book, same page-run, same function, two treatments, and the discriminator is display. ⚑ And it adds a datum §7b did not have: a displayed quotation is italicised even when it carries no note and names no author. The italics are doing the work of the guillemets that are no longer available (§7c), on a quotation the apparatus does not identify at all. ⚑ Rendered as four italic lines with the Pattern 5 inquit kept inside the first — "Joys, saith he, drive away, / Drive away fear, / And put hope to flight, / Nor let grief be present."
- ⭐⭐ 0458D — Dan. 7:10, verbatim, unmarked and unnoted, and it is the chapter's closing image. Migne prints:
cum introducta in ejus sanctuarium ministrantia ei millia millium admiratur. (0458D)
Vulg. Dan. 7:10: millia millium ministrabant ei, et decies millies centena millia assistebant ei. Three words verbatim with the finite verb turned into a participle. This is what the Virgin is troubled by — the quadrigae Aminadab of the lemma are resolved into the angelic host, and the sentence that says so is the chapter's last. No guillemets, no italics, no [n:], no inquit*. No marker (§8a: the boundary is not printed).
- ⭐ 0454D–0455A — 2 Tim. 3:5, and it is the DEFINITION of the concubines. Migne prints: et multi virtutem abnegantes, pietatis specie colorati. Vulg. habentes speciem quidem pietatis, virtutem autem eius abnegantes. Four of the verse's words verbatim, in reverse order, inside Philip's own antithesis — and the whole point of Caput IX's second half is that the later concubinae are the teachers non amantes, sed amorem simulantes. Unmarked, unnoted. No marker. ⚑ In the same sentence, Matt. 24:12 with a substituted noun: apud nonnullos vero abundante malitia charitas refrigescit against Vulg. et quoniam abundavit iniquitas, refrigescet caritas multorum. The distinctive verb refrigescit survives; iniquitas has become malitia. Bare, unnoted, and therefore logged unmarked — but recorded because a substituted noun inside an otherwise verbatim run is §8a's commonest shape.
The remaining twenty-two, checked for silent conformation and left as Philip's own prose (none marked, none conformed). Verbatim Vulgate runs bolded:
0108 — Matt. 3:12 / Luke 3:17 (quos tritos in area, et exutos pannoso tegmine palearum, transferre vult in horrea · cum eos de area vult in horreum transportare, 0446D–0447A — the winnowing figure, twice) · Ps. 4:9 (ut dormiam et quiescam… in idipsum, 0447B — Vulg. In pace in idipsum dormiam et requiescam; the noun idipsum and the first verb verbatim) · Acts 6–7 (the whole Stephen paragraph at 0446C narrated in his own words, no phrase reproduced) · John 14:2 (in me praeparo mansionem, 0447A). 0109 — ⭐ Phil. 1:23 (velle dissolvi citius, et cum ipso potius semper esse, 0447C — Vulg. desiderium habens dissolvi et esse cum Christo; the same verse cruces-0096 §2c′ found unmarked at 0431A, so it is printed bare twice in seventeen columns) · Cant. 6:9/6:3 self-quotation (tanquam in acie castrorum ordinata, 0448C, the lemma's own phrase re-used in his prose) · 1 Cor. 13:4 (livoris nescia… non invideat, 0448A) · Ps. 47:2 / Apoc. 21:2 (illi Hierusalem… quae in coelis posita, 0448B) · Isa. 6 / Apoc. 5:11 (angelorum sancta et sibi consona multitudo, 0448B) · Phil. 3:13 (in ea quae sunt ante, spe et desiderio te extendis, 0449B) · 1 Tim. 6:16 (in lucem figis oculos inaccessam, 0449C — the same text cruces-0096 §2c′ logged at 0425C) · Ecclus. 3:22 (ut altiora te et inscrutabilia non scruteris, 0449A — Vulg. Altiora te ne quaesieris; the distinctive altiora te verbatim). 0110 — ⭐ Ps. 146:4 (ei qui numerat multitudinem stellarum penitus innotescunt, 0451B — six words verbatim, adduced immediately after the Dinumerabo eos proof-text and carrying no note of its own; the two together are the chapter's arithmetic of the innumerable) · ⭐ Matt. 13:47–48 (congregatos ex omni genere piscium in sagena, 0451B · qui in vasa postmodum eliguntur, sive mali qui emissi forinsecus respuuntur, 0451C — Vulg. sagenae missae in mare, et ex omni genere piscium congreganti… elegerunt bonos in vasa, malos autem foras miserunt; the net figure carries the chapter's close and is bare throughout) · Ps. 118:9 (qui cum vias suas custodiunt, 0450B) · Matt. 22:37–40 (amore carentes gemino… forma dilectionis geminam, 0450D–0451B, the two-commandment figure in his own words). 0111 — ⭐ Col. 2:9 (in qua me inhabitante, totius divinitatis habitat plenitudo, 0452A–B — Vulg. quia in ipso inhabitat omnis plenitudo divinitatis corporaliter; every noun kept, the adjective changed, and it is the sentence that licenses calling her perfecta) · ⭐ Matt. 10:16 (maturo consilio, prudentia serpentina, formatam consummavit simplicitas et perfectio columbina, 0453A — Vulg. estote ergo prudentes sicut serpentes, et simplices sicut columbae; recast into two adjectives, and it is what makes the seven dove-properties a virtue list rather than a bestiary) · ⭐ Gen. 1:31 + 2:2 (in his tanquam sex diebus omnia valde bona satagit operari… necdum datur in septimo plenius feriari, 0454A — the six-days/seventh figure closing the chapter) · Luke 1:35 (sanctus ei Spiritus superveniens obumbravit, 0453B) · Ps. 4:9 (donec tandem in pace dormiat in idipsum, 0452A — five words verbatim, the second bare printing of the verse in this range; see 0108 above) · 2 Cor. 5:2 (ingemit ut columba, 0452A) · Rom. 12:2 / 1 Cor. 2:9 (non famae erraticae, sed praecognitae potius veritati, 0453B) · Rom. 12:17 (vicem meritam non rependit, 0453C) · 1 Pet. 2:23 (in omni gravamine patientiam inflexibilem, 0453C) · Luke 23:34 (converti mallet impios quam eos juxta meritum sic affligi, 0453C). ⚑ And one non-scriptural authority, adduced and bare — the seven properties of the dove (0453B–0454A), which Philip explicitly attributes (Sicut aiunt qui diligentius naturas avium sunt scrutati) and Migne leaves entirely unmarked. It is the standard patristic dove-lemma (Gregory, Hom. in Ezech.; Isidore, Etym. XII.vii; ultimately the Physiologus). Recorded as a WEAK member of the class, like cruces-0096 §2c′.3's myrrh note: there is no verbatim source-phrase to collate, only an attributed commonplace, and the seven headings are Philip's own Latin. ⚠ But the shape matters for the merge's tally: it is a run of seven displayed one-sentence headings, each starting a paragraph, each an authority's claim rather than Philip's — and none of them is italicised, which is consistent with §7b only because they are not set off as quotations at all. 0112 — ⭐ Luke 1:42 (hanc inter omnes, hoc est super omnes mulieres… asserunt benedici, 0454C · fructum ventris fecundati sola Virgo permanens protulit benedictum, 0454C — Vulg. Benedicta tu inter mulieres, et benedictus fructus ventris tui; the verse's two limbs split across two clauses and neither marked, in a chapter whose subject is beatissimam praedicaverunt) · Luke 1:48 (beatissimam praedicant, 0454C, the lemma's own word bound to beatam me dicent) · 2 Tim. 3:5 and Matt. 24:12 — see 4 above · Gen. 1:16 (ut tam stellis quam planetis majus appareat luminare, 0455C). 0113 — ⭐ Cant. 4:12 (Antequam hortum suum concluderet… antequam signaret fontem, 0458A — Vulg. Hortus conclusus soror mea sponsa, hortus conclusus, fons signatus; the Song quoting itself, unmarked, forty-nine columns after its own lemma, and Philip immediately denies the material reading of both — non tamen sepe, non maceria, neque vallo… non tamen sera ferrea, non vecte, non metallo) · ⭐ Dan. 7:10 — see 3 above · ⭐ 1 Reg. 5:6–7:1 + 2 Reg. 6:3 (arcam Domini quam Azotii captam per dies aliquot tenuerunt, compulsi laesis natibus tandem liberam reddiderunt, quae imposita plaustro novo in domum Aminadab est relata, 0458B–C — Vulg. 1 Reg. 5:6 percussit eos in secretiori parte natium; 6:7 facite plaustrum novum; 7:1 duxerunt eam in domum Abinadab. ⚠⚠ Philip writes Aminadab for the ark narrative's Abinadab, and the whole of Caput XII depends on the identification: the Song's quadrigas Aminadab are glossed by the ark's journey to Abinadab's house, and the etymology Aminadab interpretatur spontaneus is then hung on the fused name. This is Philip's own conflation, narrated in his own words with no quotation marked, so §8a governs and no marker fires — but it is the most consequential unmarked identification in the range) · Ezech. 1:5 / Apoc. 4:6 (illa quatuor animalia quae Joannis vel Ezechielis vaticinio describuntur, 0458C — named, not quoted) · Exod. 1:14 (oppressis luto et latere, 0456B — Vulg. in luto et latere, verbatim, sitting eight words before the Exod. 3 proof-text and not covered by its note) · Isa. 11:1 (germen in surculo jam producit, 0457D) · Luke 1:38 (ancillam humilem, 0458A).
2f · Brief §8c and §6 — what this range does and does not witness
⚠ Recording what I actually saw, per §8c's warning, not that I "met the verse." Verified by grep over all six Latin chunks, not by memory:
- Cant. 1:12 does NOT occur in this range, in either half. Neither Cum nor Dum appears anywhere in the six chunks. No evidence either way.
- Cant. 2:17 (Bethel/Bether) does not occur. Neither string appears.
- Zech. 4:14 does not occur; Zechariah is not cited at all.
- Gen. 3:19 does not occur in either form.
- Eccles. 9:1 does not occur; neither word-order string appears.
- fuscus does not occur anywhere in the range, in any form. Nor does nigra/nigredo: the colour vocabulary of Caput VIII–X is candidus / candor (whiteness) and rubor / rutilans / subrubere (redness), and brief §5's triple has no instance here. ⚑ candidatio does not occur either, but candens and candidos do (0447A, me candens lilium; quos ad messem candidos colligere) and are translated ("a shining lily", "white as lilies"), on brief §5's ruling for that root.
- ⭐ What the range DOES add to §6's class is §1.1's Cant. 6:8b and §1.2's Cant. 6:8a, both printed multiple times, both expounded, and §1.1 with the vigiles conformation shape. Together with §2b's ita hybrid at 0449D, three of Book VI's first eleven lemmata carry a divergence that looks like conformation to a parallel verse elsewhere in the Song.
§3 · TYPOGRAPHY
3a · Guillemets — none, and §7c is confirmed a third time
0 « and 0 » in all six chunks, matching the Latin twins exactly. Pattern 6's parity check passes trivially; every quotation mark on the English pages of this range is ours (" ") or none at all, and there are in fact no " " either — every quotation Migne marks, he marks with italics, and every one is carried by italics in the English.
⭐ The range adds one thing §7c did not have: a positive account of what the italics are now doing. Ten adduced proof-texts (§2c), eleven Song lemmata (§2b), one displayed classical quotation (§2e.2), the sub-lemmata columba mea / perfecta mea discussed as words, one printed locator [CAP. VI.], one etymological spontaneus, and nine marginal source numbers — seven distinct functions, one mark. Nothing but function separates them, and the lemma/ proof-text line in particular has to be drawn by asking is this the verse under exposition, or is it adduced? — never by the mark. Chunk 0109 is the specimen: its three italic runs at 0448B–0448D are a lemma-fragment, a Psalm proof-text and a Genesis proof-text, and they look identical on the page.
3b · §7a mirroring — the drift point — held word by word
Migne's mixed case was diffed mechanically against the Latin twins after drafting, as an ordered positional string, not by eye. All six chunks match 1:1.
- ⭐⭐ Chunk 0113 is the specimen of the range, and it is the cleanest spouse-word alternation the work has produced: six capitals followed by five lower-case, with no change of subject and no chapter boundary between them. In order: 0456A
Sponsus→ Bridegroom · 0456CSponsam→ Bride · 0456CSponsus→ Bridegroom · 0457ASponso→ Bridegroom · 0457ASponsus→ Bridegroom · 0457ASponsus→ Bridegroom · 0457Bsponsus→ bridegroom · 0457Csponsus→ bridegroom · 0457Dsponsus→ bridegroom · 0457Dsponsum→ bridegroom · 0458Bsponsum→ bridegroom. The switch falls inside Caput XI, between videt Sponsus, et approbat (0457A) and amat sponsus nihilominus pervidere (0457B) — twelve lines apart, same paragraph, same sentence-shape, same verb of seeing. ⛔ Nothing licenses regularizing it and nothing explains it; it is mirrored. - Chunks 0108 (5), 0109 (9), 0110 (4), 0111 (3) and 0112 (1) capitalize every spouse-word, so there is nothing to reconcile in those five. Recorded so the merge can see the check was made.
- Virgo is capital at every one of its 54 occurrences across the six chunks, and the sole lower-case form in the whole range is the adjective virginalem (0458A), rendered "virginal". So cruces-0102's finding that the virgo/Virgo alternation does not continue past Book IV holds through Book VI c. XII too.
- Dilectus/dilectus: capital twice, both times sentence-initial inside a printed lemma citation (Ad haec Virgo respondet: Dilectus, etc. 0446B; [CAP. VI.] Dilectus meus descendit 0446B) and lower-case at all fourteen other occurrences. ⚠ English capitalizes sentence-initially anyway, so this particular alternation has NO English exponent and nothing was mirrored or could be. Recorded because cruces-0096 §3b reports a genuine mid-sentence Dilecti/dilectum alternation at 0428C–0429B; mine is not that, and a merge comparing the two should not read them as the same phenomenon.
- Spiritus is capital at both its divine occurrences (0453B sanctus ei Spiritus, 0458A sanctus mihi Spiritus) with lower-case sanctus both times, and lower-case at non habui ultra spiritum (0458B, of the Virgin's own breath) and in spiritualium / spiritaliter. ⚠ The Spiritus sanctus / sancti Spiritus order does not arise — Philip writes the adjective before the noun both times with the noun's own possessor between them. English has no exponent for the lower-case sanctus: "the Holy Spirit" capitalizes regardless, so cruces-0096 §2b's ruling governs and nothing was regularized in either direction. Both are rendered "the Holy Spirit"; the lower-case spiritum is "spirit".
- Pattern 3 fires twice, and BOTH are the bare form brief §5 flags. 0453D diligenter fluentis incumbit scripturarum → "the streams of the Scriptures" — ⚑ Migne prints it lower-case, with no divina and no sacra; and 0453D–0454A dum curam vel studium adhibet in Scripturis → "in the Scriptures", the exact bare form 11638's sweep missed and brief §5 names at 0260A. No divina Scriptura, no sacra Scriptura and no Scriptura singular occurs anywhere in the range, so both instances here are of the bare type and one of them is bare and lower-case — which is the hardest version of the form to catch by pattern-matching.
- Heads:
CAPUT PRIMUM.thenCAPUT II.→CAPUT XII.continuously, every one carrying the full stop. ⭐CAPUT PRIMUM.is rendered "CHAPTER THE FIRST." per brief §7a's ⭐ ruling of 2026-08-08 — this is Book VI's opening, the last of the work's six book-openings, and it is the first time the ruling has been applied since the sweep. The numerals that follow are kept as numerals; nothing was tidied into one style.
3b′ · ⚑ The mirroring slip that did NOT happen, and why it is worth a line
cruces-0102 §3b′ records that its one slip was an assimilation — a capital Sponsi flattened to lower case because four lower-case instances followed it — and that only the ordered script diff found it. This range presented the same trap in a worse form: 0113 runs six capitals and then five lower-case in one chapter, which is exactly the gradient that produces assimilation in either direction. The ordered diff was therefore run before the file was considered finished rather than after, and it came back clean on the first pass. ⛔ Recorded because the cheap mechanical check is the only thing that can establish this, and a range that reports "mirrored carefully" without running it has reported nothing. The check is four lines of node and it is in §3b.
3c · Pattern 17 — the range gives the merge two clean in-chunk pairs
Decided by morphology throughout, never by who is addressed.
- ⭐ Chunk 0113 carries both numbers in one chapter, eleven lines apart. Plural: Nostis quod arcam Domini… (0458B) → "You know that the men of Azotus…" — Philip turning to his readers. Singular, inside the quotation two lines earlier: Hab. 3:8 Qui ascendis super equos tuos, et quadrigae tuae salvatio (0458B) → "Thou that ridest upon thy horses, and thy chariots are salvation". A reader sees the address change number across the quotation boundary with no apparatus.
- ⭐ Chunk 0108 carries the reverse pair across a chapter boundary. The daughters address the Virgin as one woman throughout Caput I — quo abiit dilectus tuus · quaeremus eum tecum · Dic ergo… dic, si nosti · cujus laudes tam multimodas texuisti… tam sollicite monuisti · quam tu, quae dono gratiae illius sanctuarium introisti — thirteen singulars, all thou/thy/thee. The Virgin answers in Caput II addressing them as a company — Scire vultis · ad vestrum desiderium · cum vobis quasi esurientibus — all you/your. ⚑ This is the mirror of cruces-0102 §3c's pair, which had the Virgin plural and a quotation singular; here the number switches between two consecutive chapters of the running dialogue, and under a flat "you" the whole o pulcherrima mulierum address would collapse into the chorus that speaks it.
- The remaining second persons are all singular and all the Bridegroom to the Virgin — the whole of Caput IV–V (0447C–0449D): Tu, ait, quae tanto aestuas… pasceris… formas… te conformas · volo tamen ut altiora te… non scruteris, neque putes · Averte oculos tuos a me · quo… attentius in lucem figis oculos inaccessam — thou throughout. Plus Luke 10:23 at 0454D, quae vos videtis, plural inside a quotation in a chunk that otherwise has no second person at all: "the eyes that see the things which you see".
- God addressed in the singular at 0452B: licet tuis, Deus, in oculis merito non despectos → "though in thine eyes, O God, deservedly not despised" — and Ps. 138:16 in the same sentence, viderunt oculi tui → "thine eyes did see". Both singular, both thou-family, and the ruling's point is that they take it for the same reason a monk would.
3d · Marginal source-edition numbers
258 (0445D) · 259 (0447B) · 260 (0449A) · 261 (0450C) · 262 (0452A) · 263 (0454A) · 264 (0455C) · 265 (0457A) · 266 (0458D). Continuous with cruces-0102's 250–257, which ended at 0444B. Each kept italic and verbatim at the exact word it interrupts, with the English clause built around it rather than moving it: 258 between quaerentes, and errore devio; 261 between sexies deni, and sic decies seni; 263 between nondum revelata and facie contemplatur; 264 between pulchrior est quam and luna; 265 between et approbat and et facit omnia prosperari. ⚠ 263's slot forced "because him whom she loveth she contemplateth not yet with a revealed 263 face", which inverts the Latin's participle order to keep the number between the two words it actually sits between; deliberate. ⚑ 259, 260 and 266 fall at the very end of their chapters and sit at the end of the English paragraph, as printed.
3e · ⚑ An anchor observation NOT reported as a defect (brief §10.1)
Chunk 0108 opens with a bare [0445A] on its own line — chunk 0107 already ran through 0445A and ended at 0446A — and 0108 then runs …0446A, 0446B… while 0107's last anchor is 0446A. So the sequence across our chunk boundary reads …0445A, 0446A ‖ 0445A, 0445B, …0446A, 0446B…
Recorded and NOT reported. cruces-0102 §3e made the identical observation from the other side of the same boundary and cited brief §10.1; I confirm it from mine and add the only thing that would matter: there is no text broken mid-word or mid-construction. Chunk 0107 ends on a completed sentence (ut hic tandem liber quintus finem sibi gaudeat obtinere) followed by the bare head LIBER SEXTUS.; chunk 0108 opens a fresh head and a fresh lemma. No [ed:], no patch, no plate check.
§4 · PATTERN 7 / 8 / 9 / 10 — three [sic:], and the readings rendered as printed
4a · Carried type — [sic: …] fired three times
All three contents were machine-checked as verbatim substrings of their Latin twins. Conjectures live here and NOT in the text.
- ⭐ 0451C,
[sic: a dolescentulae]— Pattern 10 split type, the clearest in the range: novitatis vel imperfectionis merito, a dolescentulae nominantur. The word is adolescentulae, and it is the lemma's own word — Cant. 6:7's adolescentularum, printed correctly four lines above at 0451B and in the head lemma at 0450B. Carried whole, spacing included, per Pattern 10's "carry the WHOLE broken run" rule, even thoughais a real Latin word: the defect is the division. The crux is here; the conjecture is certain. - ⭐ 0456B,
[sic: invados]— a non-word: quos cum invados et rerum spiritualium inopes intellexit. Read invalidos ("weak"), which the doublet requires — it is paired with inopes ("poor") and the whole clause is about the multitudes' incapacity. Nothing else construes: invado is a verb and has no form invados in any voice. Carried into the English untranslated, in italics, under Pattern 7's non-word ruling. ⚑ Pattern 7a′ observed: the run governs an accusative-and-infinitive, and the governed clause is translated ("that they were… and poor in spiritual things"). The marker quarantines the fragment, not what it governs. - ⭐ 0458B,
[sic: Videos]— a non-word: Videos enim sponsum non inopem, non indigum… descendisse… non habui ultra spiritum. Read Videns, near-certain: the sentence needs a nominative participle governing descendisse / advenisse, and the Virgin is the subject of non habui. ⚠ Recorded with an internal control that makes the conjecture nearly mechanical: Videns is printed correctly at 0457D, eight lines above, in the parallel sentence Videns Virgo in hortum suum sponsum mirabiliter descendisse — same participle, same accusative, same verb, same subject. So the plate prints the word right and then prints it wrong within one column. Carried untranslated, in italics.**
4b · Real words merely wrong or merely odd — rendered, logged, not emended
- ⛔ 0446D, quae ubera, quam mortem denique sit perpessus. Read verbera ("stripes"), probable: perpeti takes verbera naturally, the paired noun is mortem, and Stephen is contemplating quid pro salvandis salvator miserans sit aggressus — what the Saviour underwent. ubera ("paps, breasts") is a real Latin word, so Pattern 12's boundary clause keeps it on the English side: rendered "what breasts, what death at last he endured", which is meant to read wrong. Not emended. ⚠ The single most repairable place in the range, and the one I would most welcome a second opinion on — it is the same call shape cruces-0102 §4 made for Remora at 0441C.
- ⛔ 0451C, Non sive boni sunt, qui in vasa postmodum eliguntur, sive mali qui emissi forinsecus respuuntur… cuivis hominum numerabiles non habentur. Read Nam for Non, probable: sive… sive wants a positive frame, and the sentence's own non habentur already carries the negation the sense needs. As printed there are two negations governing one predicate. Both are carried (brief §9), giving "Not whether they be good… or evil… are they held numerable by any man." It construes, it is flat, and it is deliberate. ⚑ Recorded as a candidate for the merge's polarity ledger, because a supernumerary non is the mirror of the class §9 exists to protect.
- ⛔⛔ 0452B, quae videlicet si curam adhibeat seipsam intueri, dum vivit mortaliter perfectam audeat se fateri. This is the range's one candidate DROPPED NEGATION, and it is logged rather than repaired. The clause as printed says the Virgin would dare to confess herself perfect while she lives mortally — and the next two sentences are Phil. 3:12 and Ps. 138:16 adduced to prove the exact opposite (Quod si Paulus et David se cognoscunt veraciter imperfectos…). A vix, a non, or a rhetorical
?would each rescue it, and Migne prints none of the three. Rendered as printed — "who, to wit, if she should apply care to behold herself, might dare, while she liveth mortally, to confess herself perfect" — with the subjunctive left potential rather than smoothed into a negative. ⛔ Not emended, and the reason is Pattern 7a′ exactly: a crux that describes a repair does not make the repair honest. The merge should have it as a candidate; I decline to pick among three conjectures in the text. - ⛔ 0457B, quae cum novo genere tumorem ad nos protulit uterinum, longe tamen illicitae suspicionis maculam, et virus protulit serpentinum. The same verb governs two clauses with opposite senses — she brought forth the swelling of the womb, and she [put] far off the stain of suspicion. longe… protulit will bear "carried far off" only under pressure; the argument wants something like proturbavit or abstulit, and Philip's rhyme (uterinum / serpentinum) explains why the verb was not varied. Rendered as closely as the words allow — "yet far off brought forth the stain of unlawful suspicion and the serpent's venom" — and logged. ⚑ Not a
[d:]: the repetition is rhetorical, not a compositor's doubling, and both occurrences are needed. - ⛔ 0457B, si odore florido a suis finibus omne virus noxium prohibere. The third of three si clauses under amat sponsus pervidere, and it drops into a bare infinitive where the first two have finite verbs (accelerat respondere / invenitur refulgere). An anacoluthon. Rendered literally — "whether with a flowery odour to forbid all hurtful venom from her borders" — and logged, not repaired.
- 0448B, tanto decore conspicuat.* conspicuo* is attested but rare and is here used intransitively with an ablative of manner. Rendered "is conspicuous with so great beauty"; Pattern 9, no marker.
- 0448C, recte, sicut Hierusalem, formoso praedicatur. Masculine (or neuter) ablative where the subject is the feminine Virgin; the parallel clauses round it are all feminine. ⚑ Pattern 9's clean case: English carries no gender on "comely", so there is no emendation to make and none to undo. Rendered normally. Logged and marked here so a later sweep does not churn it.
- 0450C, the misplaced full stop: qui juxta legis formam disponit quidquid temporaliter operatur. is profecto digne in sexagenario continetur. Migne breaks a relative clause from its apodosis and the following word is lower-case. Preserved in both respects (Pattern 8, and brief §5's ruling that Migne's lower-case after a misplaced stop STANDS): the English reads "…whatsoever he worketh in time. he assuredly is worthily contained in the number sixty". ⚠ Do not churn this; cruces-0102 §4 preserved the identical shape at 0441A.
- 0453C, the missing full stop: Alienos pullos nutrit columba Virgo quidem in hujus vitae salo animum retinet tam serenum. The inverse defect, and it falls at the head of one of the seven dove-properties, where the other six all carry their stop (Columba felle caret. · Non rostro lacerat columba. · Columba secus fluenta libenter habitat. · Meliora grana eligit columba. · Columba libenter in petra nidificat. · Columba pro cantu gemit.). Preserved: "The dove nourisheth another's young The Virgin indeed keepeth…" ⚑ Recorded with its six controls, because a stop missing from one member of a seven-member parallel series is as close to a demonstrable plate defect as Pattern 8 cases get — and it is still not emended.
- 0451B, non est forma dilectionis geminam invenire. A nominative forma with an accusative attribute geminam, under an impersonal non est… invenire. Read formam. Rendered "it is not possible to find the twofold form of love"; the case slip has no English exponent (English nouns carry no case), Pattern 9, logged, no marker.
- 0451B, nulli quidem hominum, Deo soli potius numerosa. numerosus ("numerous") where the sense wants numerabilis ("numerable") — and numerabiles is printed correctly eight lines later at 0451C. A real word merely wrong; rendered "numerous indeed unto no man, but rather unto God alone"**, which is meant to read slightly off. Not emended.
- 0446C representat · 0453A praecognitae · 0447C similandi · 0455D incoepto. Attested medieval spellings and formations (ae/e interchange, similare for simulare, incoeptum for inceptum); Pattern 9 exempts them explicitly. Translated normally, no italics, no crux beyond this line. ⚠ Recorded only because simulantes stands correctly at 0454D, eight columns from similandi, which makes the first look like a defect at first sight.
4c · ⭐ One editorial judgment I want the merge to see: castra left in italic Latin at 0449A
quia et angelos caro vel carnis copula nunquam laedit, et remotis a complexu domestico castris, castitas nomen dedit. (0449A)
This is an etymology: castra ("camp") from castitas ("chastity"), the standard patristic derivation, and Philip makes it the hinge on which the lemma's terribilis ut castrorum acies becomes a statement about the Virgin's virginity. English shares no root. Rendered "chastity gave its name unto the castra, the camps that are removed from the household embrace" — the Latin noun shown once, italic, with its English gloss beside it, so that the inference is available to a reader who cannot see the Latin column.
⚑ Why this and not the muraenula treatment. castra is translated "camps" at all nine of its other occurrences in the range, including the lemma itself, because there the word is doing no etymological work. Leaving it Latin throughout would make the lemma unreadable; leaving it English throughout makes one sentence explain nothing. This follows translation-style.md's Song ruling case 2 (stylus/epistylium, murenulae/ferculum) rather than brief §5's blanket-italic list. It is the reason 0109's asterisk count runs +2 against its twin, and it is reversible in one edit if the merge prefers uniform English.
4d · Negation audit (brief §9), run as a separate pass AFTER the prose was drafted
Every printed non / nec / neque / nisi / nihil / nil / nullus / nunquam / nondum / necdum / nescire / nequaquam / nullatenus / nonnisi / ne in the six Latin chunks was extracted by script after drafting and matched one by one against the English. Totals: 0108 21 · 0109 53 · 0110 18 · 0111 40 · 0112 24 · 0113 50 — 206 in all.
⛔ The pass found four of my own defects, and every one was an OMISSION of a printed word, not an addition. Recorded rather than quietly fixed, because brief §8a's whole argument is that this pass earns its cost:
- 0108 @0445B — necdum sinit ad liquidum se videri had been drafted "he suffereth not himself to be seen clearly". necdum is "not yet", and the whole clause is about a deferral, not a refusal. Fixed to "not himself as yet to be seen clearly".
- 0108 @0446B — cum necdum penitus ad vestrum desiderium se inclinat, the same word, the same loss, eleven lines later. Fixed.
- 0109 @0449C — quod affectant necdum penitus apprehendunt drafted as "and yet do not fully apprehend", where "and yet" was carrying tamen and necdum had vanished. Fixed to "do not as yet fully apprehend". ⚑ Three instances of one word, in one range. necdum is the range's characteristic particle (10 occurrences) and it is the easiest of the whole list to lose, because English "not yet" splits and the "not" alone reads complete. A merge sweeping this work for dropped negations should grep necdum and nondum first.
- 0111 @0454A — nihil Virgo meritis, nihil suae detrahit sanctitati, nihil ei… unitati nil subtrahit columbae gemitus. Four negations and I had written three, having collapsed nihil ei… unitati and nil subtrahit into one English clause. Fixed to carry all four; the sentence is clumsier for it and correctly so.
No negation appears in the English that the Latin does not print. The two places where that was a live risk are §4b's Non sive boni sunt (where the temptation is to drop the supernumerary Non and read Nam) and §4b's audeat se fateri (where the temptation is to supply the missing one). Both are rendered exactly as printed.
4e · ⭐ The conformation audit, run against my OWN English (brief §8a's ⭐ instruction)
Every quotation in §2b and §2c was re-read against the plate after the collation was written, on the ground that cruces-0096 §2b's Eph. 5:29 case proves the two acts come apart. One real trap and two near ones:
- ⛔ Phil. 3:12 @0452B — the trap, and it was defused before drafting, not after. Migne prints Non quia jam acceperim… aut perfectus sim; the Vulgate and every English have aut iam perfectus sim, "or were already perfect". The English says "or am perfect". Checked twice, on the plate both times.
- Exod. 33:20 @0449C — the remembered English is "For man shall not see me, and live"; Migne prints neither the enim nor that word order. The English mirrors the printed order (Non me… videbit homo) and carries no for.
- Cant. 6:9 @0455A — Douay gives "Who is she that cometh forth as the morning rising fair as the moon, bright as the sun"; Migne prints electa ut sol, and Philip's exposition turns on election (ad hoc divinitus est electa, 0455D). The English reads "chosen as the sun" and the chapter is coherent because of it.
Philip of Harvengt, Commentaria in Cantica canticorum, PL 203. Six chunks, 6,459 Latin words, covering Caput XIII–XXXII of Book VI — the Bridegroom's foot-to-head descriptio of the Bride, Cant. 6:12–7:13, answering the Bride's head-to-foot descriptio of him in Book V (chunks 0102–0107). The range runs: Revertere, revertere, Sunamitis → Quid videbis in Sunamite → Quam pulchri sunt gressus tui → Junctura feminum → Umbilicus tuus → Venter tuus → Duo ubera tua / collum tuum sicut turris eburnea → Oculi tui sicut piscinae in Hesebon → Nasus tuus sicut turris Libani → Caput tuum ut Carmelus → Quam pulchra es → Dixi: Ascendam in palmam → Guttur tuum → Dignum Dilecto meo → Ego dilecto meo → Veni, dilecte mi → Mane surgamus ad vineas → Ibi dabo tibi ubera mea → Mandragorae dederunt odorem → Omnia poma nova et vetera.
⚑ Book VI is confirmed from inside the range, not inferred: at 0461A Philip writes Ipsa autem Virgo in praecedenti libro of the Cant. 5:10–16 descriptio, and Migne's note there is [n: (l. V a c. 18 ad 27)] — which is cruces-0102's Book V, chunks 0102–0107. So 0114–0119 are Book VI, Caput XIII–XXXII.
Marker totals for this range: 4 [var:] · 5 [sic:] · 0 [ed:] · 0 [d:] · 0 [nt:] · 0 [f:]. verify-english.mjs now reports verify OK: 126 chunks, columns/notes/sections aligned, no duplicate paragraphs — the whole work verifies clean with these six in place. One ratio warning, 0118 at 1.60, inside the 1.60–1.69 band this work has shipped in thirty-nine other chunks. Raw ratios: 1.52 / 1.55 / 1.60 / 1.60 / 1.60 / 1.64.
Column anchors (12/11/11/11/10/8), [n:] strings (5/4/1/2/0/0 — each matching its frontmatter noteCount) and guillemet counts were diffed 1:1 against the Latin twins by script, not by eye: anchors byte-identical in order and place, [n:] contents byte-identical in order. Asterisk counts reconcile exactly once the markers' own italics are subtracted (0114 +2 pairs, 0115 +2, 0116 +5, 0117 +5, 0118 +0, 0119 +1). Marginal source-edition numbers 267–276 verified in place, one per column-pair.
⚑ GUILLEMETS: zero « and zero » in 6,459 words, matching the Latin twins exactly. Brief §7c holds without exception here, and §7c's operational warning bit: five of the six chunks carry an adduced proof-text in italics, and a range reading "italic ⇒ lemma" would have collated none of them.
Heads: CAPUT XIII. → CAPUT XXXII. continuously, all in numerals. ⚠ Two of the twenty lack the full stop and are reproduced without it: CAPUT XV (0114) and CAPUT XXXI (0119). The other eighteen carry it. Not tidied.
§1 · ⭐⭐ THE FOUR FINDINGS THE MERGE SHOULD CARRY
1.1 · ⭐⭐⭐ Cant. 7:13 at 0473B — Migne DIVIDES THE VERSE differently from the Vulgate, and Caput XXXI has nothing else to stand on
This is the range's largest finding and the only one that reshapes a chapter.
Migne prints two lemmata, heading two chapters:
CAPUT XXXI — Mandragorae dederunt odorem in portis nostris. (0473B) CAPUT XXXII — Omnia poma nova et vetera, Dilecte mi, servavi tibi. (0474A)
Vulg. Cant. 7:13: Mandragorae dederunt odorem. In portis nostris omnia poma: nova et vetera, dilecte mi, servavi tibi.
Every word is present; the division is not. The Vulgate's in portis nostris belongs to the apples; Migne's belongs to the mandrakes, and Caput XXXII's lemma accordingly opens at Omnia poma with the gates already spent.
⭐ And the whole of Caput XXXI is an exposition of the gates as the mandrakes'. Philip re-quotes the divided lemma with his own jam wedged into it — Odorem, inquit, in portis nostris mandragorae jam dederunt, the roman jam standing inside the italic run and reproduced there as printed — and then builds:
Et ii quidem necdum in aedibus, necdum in thalamo fructum proferunt pleniorem, sed in portis, id est sensibus spiritalibus gratum virgini dant odorem (0473D)
The Jews-as-mandrakes are not yet in the house or the bridechamber; what they give in the gates is a smell. Under the Vulgate's division the gates hold apples and the mandrakes' smell has no location at all, and the antithesis aedibus / thalamo / portis — the chapter's frame — is unwritable.
[var:] FIRED, immediately after the lemma, naming the Vulgate's division and what it gives to which fruit. The marker is available here for the reason cruces-0102 §1.2 gives: Migne italicises the run, so the quotation's boundary is printed and the [var:] asserts nothing the plate does not.
⚠ This is a division, not a wording divergence, and I want the merge to see it as its own shape. Pattern 8 governs punctuation and says mirror the plate; Pattern 14 governs scripture divergence and says mark what changes the sense. Here they meet: the only difference from the Vulgate is where the sentence breaks, and the sense changes completely. I judged Pattern 14 to govern because what diverges is the extent of the quotation, which is a textual fact, not a compositor's comma. If the merge rules the other way the fix is a one-line deletion; nothing in the English depends on it.
1.2 · ⭐⭐ Cant. 6:12 at 0458D — Sunamitis for the Vulgate's Sulamitis, seven printings, and the whole chapter is an etymology of the divergent name
Migne prints, as the running lemma of Caput XIII:
Revertere, revertere, Sunamitis: revertere, revertere, ut intueamur te.
Vulg. Cant. 6:12 (6:13 Heb.): Revertere, revertere, Sulamitis; revertere, revertere, ut intueamur te. And Cant. 6:12b at 0459D: Quid videbis, aiunt, in Sunamite, nisi choros castrorum? for Vulg. in Sulamite.
Three lines later Philip glosses the divergent form:
Sunamitis interpretatur captiva vel despecta, sive coccinea. (0459A)
Those are Jerome's interpretations of Sunamitis (coccinea sive despecta), not of Sulamitis, which is the peace-name. And they are not decoration: they are the chapter's three-part architecture, and Philip works each one —
naturaliter filia fuit irae… adhuc tamen gravatur vinculo, et naturae legibus est captiva · infectionis merito mundioribus Dei oculis est despecta · et coccinea digna sit nominari merito, non colore. Coccus ignis speciem tenet, amorem significans … ut coccus sit bis tinctus, ad hunc amorem geminum bis invitat (0459A–C)
— and the coccus bis tinctus leg then carries the chapter to its end, twinning the Bridegroom's two natures with the two dyeings and the two Revertere's. Conform the lemma to Sulamitis and there is no captive, no despised, no scarlet, and the twice-dyed scarlet has no verse to hang from.
⭐ I greped all 126 Latin chunks. Sulamit- occurs nowhere in the work; the verse is printed only here, and the name seven times in the body of one chunk (four Sunamitis, three Sunamite). So there is no internal control — this is unlike Eccles. 9:1, which contradicts itself at 0049, and unlike Ps. 44:3, which Migne prints nine times in four orders. What it has instead is the authorial witness: the exposition names the form and derives from it. That is §6's Zech. 4:14 shape (Philip builds on the addition) rather than its distributional shape.
[var:] FIRED at the lemma, once, naming Vulg. Sulamitis. The English carries Sunamite throughout, including in the gloss.
1.3 · ⭐⭐ Cant. 7:5 at 0465B — the lemma prints juncta canalibus, and Philip's own gloss twice keeps the Vulgate's vincta
Migne prints:
Caput tuum ut Carmelus, et comae capitis tui sicut purpura regis juncta canalibus. (0465B)
Vulg. Cant. 7:5: …sicut purpura regis vincta canalibus — "bound in channels." Migne repeats the divergent word in the exposition: purpurae regis junctae canalibus similantur (0465D).
⭐ But the dyer's excursus that immediately follows is written on vincta. Philip explains the craft twice, and both times the verb is binding or straitening, never joining:
solet purpura per fasciculos in angustis canalibus alligari, cui alligatae aqua superfunditur (0465D) lana subtilis et candida in canalibus angustatur (0465D) Comae autem capitis in angustis canalibus disponuntur (0466A) Quos in canalia, id est in depressas et humiles angustias voluit introduci (0466C)
Four times the channel constricts the purple. Junctus ("joined to") says the opposite thing about the same preposition-less ablative, and the moral it carries — thoughts driven down into humble narrows — needs the binding.
[var:] FIRED, naming Vulg. vincta and pointing at Philip's alligari. ⚑ Iuncta is not a phantom: it is a known variant in the Vulgate tradition. That is an argument for [var:]'s wording ("Vulg. vincta"), not against firing — Pattern 14 states two readings and lets the crux argue.
⭐ Grep result, offered because it is the cheap kind: canalibus occurs in this work only in chunk 0116, five times, all in this chapter. There is no second printing anywhere to control against.
1.4 · ⭐⭐ 0464C — Migne prints cinis where his own etymology, six lines above, requires cingulum — and it stands inside the only autobiographical paragraph in the range
At 0464A Philip gives the name's meaning, italicised:
Hesebon interpretatur cingulum moeroris. — "the girdle of sorrow"
He then applies it: ingressos portae angustias moeror necessarius nos accingit ("a necessary sorrow girdeth us", 0464A–B) — the verb built on the same root. Twelve lines later, in the personal passage, Migne prints:
hujus [0464C] cinis Hesebon mea ipsius moestitia cogeret deperire, si non Virgo dignaretur extenta manu citius subvenire.
cinis, ash, is a real Latin word, so Pattern 12's own boundary clause keeps it on the English side and no [sic:] fires. Rendered as printed — "the ash of this Hesebon, mine own sadness, would have compelled me to perish" — taking cinis and moestitia as the two nominatives in apposition that the plate supplies. ⛔ The conjecture is cinguli / cingulo, and it is close to certain: the sentence is the payoff of the cingulum moeroris gloss, the girdle is what the whole chapter has built, and ash has appeared nowhere in the book. Not emended. ⚠ This is the range's most repairable place: one word restores the argument and destroys the evidence.
⭐ And note what the paragraph is. Expertus sum quod aio — "I have experienced what I say" — introduces Philip speaking in his own person about being turned on by his own community: Cum divino perurgente judicio filii matris meae contra me pugnaverunt, cum exteris parcentibus, ii quos mea credebam viscera, me laeserunt. That clause is Cant. 1:5 (filii matris meae pugnaverunt contra me), taken out of the lemma-machinery entirely and turned on his own life, with no marks and no note. See §2f.1.
§2 · THE COLLATION — all 61 listed spans, plus 31 found on the prose pass
Every span in data/quotations/11632/0114-0119.md was collated word by word against the Vulgate. Spans recorded as AGREES were collated and found to agree; the absence of a marker on them is a finding, not a silence.
2a · Divergent — [var:] fired (4)
| Col | Ref | Migne prints | Vulgate | Note |
|---|---|---|---|---|
| 0458D, 0459D | Cant. 6:12 | Sunamitis / Sunamite | Sulamitis / Sulamite | ⭐⭐ §1.2. Philip glosses the divergent name and builds the chapter on it. |
| 0465B | Cant. 7:5 | purpura regis juncta canalibus | purpura regis vincta canalibus | ⭐⭐ §1.3. Four counter-instances in Philip's own gloss. |
| 0469B | Matt. 25:41–42 | Ite, inquit, maledicti; sitivi enim, et non dedistis mihi bibere | Discedite a me maledicti… sitivi et non dedistis mihi potum | §2c.6. Italicised + noted, so the marker is available. |
| 0473B | Cant. 7:13 | Mandragorae dederunt odorem in portis nostris. | Mandragorae dederunt odorem. In portis nostris omnia poma… | ⭐⭐⭐ §1.1. The division, not the words. |
2b · The eighteen Song lemmata — collated; sixteen of eighteen agree word for word
Cant. 6:12–7:13 is expounded lemma by lemma across this range. Each was collated against the Clementine text.
- 0458D Cant. 6:12a Revertere, revertere, Sunamitis: revertere, revertere, ut intueamur te. — DIVERGENT, §1.2.
- 0459D Cant. 6:12b [CAP. VII.] Quid videbis, aiunt, in Sunamite, nisi choros castrorum? — DIVERGENT in the name only (§1.2); the rest agrees word for word. ⚑ aiunt is Philip's own, drawn inside the italics exactly as Pattern 5 describes for inquit, and is reproduced in place, not lifted out. ⚑ Migne's bracketed chapter locator
[CAP. VII.]stands inside the italic run and is reproduced verbatim, untranslated — the 0074 precedent ([CAP. IV.]). - 0460C / 0460D Cant. 7:1a Quam pulchri sunt gressus tui in calceamentis filia principis. — agrees word for word (the vocative comma is Migne's to omit; Vulg. in calceamentis, filia principis).
- 0461D Cant. 7:1b Junctura feminum tuorum sicut monilia, quae fabricata sunt manu artificis. — agrees word for word.
- 0462C Cant. 7:2a Umbilicus tuus crater tornatilis, nunquam indigens poculis. — agrees word for word; nunquam for numquam is orthographic, Pattern 9.
- 0463A Cant. 7:2b Venter tuus sicut acervus tritici, vallatus liliis. — agrees word for word.
- 0463C Cant. 7:3–4a Duo ubera tua sicut duo hinnuli gemelli capreae: collum tuum sicut turris eburnea. — agrees word for word; Migne's colon joins two Vulgate sentences, Pattern 8, preserved.
- 0463D Cant. 7:4b Oculi tui sicut piscinae in Hesebon, quae sunt in porta filiae multitudinis. — agrees word for word.
- 0464C / 0464D Cant. 7:4c Nasus tuus sicut turris Libani, quae respicit contra Damascum. — agrees word for word.
- 0465A / 0465B Cant. 7:5 — DIVERGENT, §1.3.
- 0466C Cant. 7:6–7 Quam pulchra es, et quam decora charissima in deliciis? Statura tua assimilata est palmae, et ubera tua botris. — agrees word for word; charissima for carissima is orthographic. ⚠ Migne closes an exclamation with a question mark where the Vulgate prints
!. Pattern 8: preserved, the English reads "…most dear one, in delights?" Do not churn. - 0467B Cant. 7:8 Dixi: Ascendam in palmam, et apprehendam fructus ejus; et erunt ubera tua sicut botri vineae; et odor oris tui sicut odor malorum. — ⚠ one word ADDED. Vulg. et odor oris tui sicut malorum — Migne repeats odor. Logged, no marker: the sense is identical (the ellipsis is simply filled), which is Pattern 14's threshold, and Philip's own gloss at 0468A runs both ways (et odores ejus, vel odor oris ejus efficitur ut malorum), so the exposition supplies no test. ⭐ Recorded because brief §8a's John 19:39 case was a DELETION and this is its mirror — the class "is a word missing / is a word extra?" now has an instance on the other side, and this one is inside a marked lemma where a
[var:]was available and declined. - 0468B Cant. 7:9a Guttur tuum sicut vinum optimum. — agrees word for word.
- 0468D Cant. 7:9b Dignum Dilecto meo ad potandum, labiisque, et dentibus illius ad ruminandum. — agrees word for word. ⚑ Migne capitalizes Dilecto here and prints lower-case dilecto in the very next lemma (Cant. 7:10, 0469C); both mirrored — see §3b.
- 0469C Cant. 7:10 Ego dilecto meo, et ad me conversio ejus. — agrees word for word.
- 0470A Cant. 7:11 Veni, dilecte mi, egrediamur in agrum, commoremur in villis. — agrees word for word.
- 0470D–0471A Cant. 7:12 Mane surgamus ad vineas, videamus si floruit vinea, si flores fructus parturiunt, si floruerunt mala [0471A] Punica. Ibi dabo tibi ubera mea. — agrees word for word. ⚑ The anchor falls between mala and Punica; English has one word for the pair, so it stands immediately after "pomegranates". Not a §10.1 case — nothing is broken across it; the construction closes cleanly on both sides.
- 0472D Cant. 7:12c Ibi dabo tibi ubera mea. (repeated as Caput XXX's lemma) — agrees word for word.
- 0473B Cant. 7:13a — DIVERGENT, §1.1.
- 0474A Cant. 7:13b Omnia poma nova et vetera, Dilecte mi, servavi tibi. — the words agree; see §1.1 for what has been taken off the front of them.
2c · The eight adduced proof-texts — collated
Three are italic, five are printed bare, none is guillemeted. ⭐ And the split falls exactly on brief §7b's display rule, with no exception: the three italic ones (Gen. 32:2 @0460A, Cant. 4:4 @0463C, Matt. 25:41–42 @0469B) are each set off by a colon or a dictum est and stand as their own displayed unit; the five bare ones (Isa. 9:6 @0461D, Matt. 27/John 19 @0466A, Naboth/Sorec/Noe @0468C, Deut. 32:33 @0469A, Isa. 2:2 @0466B) are every one run into Philip's own sentence. Reported per §7b's instruction — a bare run-in authority is expected and is not a finding; I met no displayed quotation printed bare and no run-in one italicised, which is what would have been.
- 0460A Gen. 32:2 De quibus Jacob: Castra Dei sunt haec
[n: (Gen. XXXII)]. — agrees word for word. Siglum correct. - 0461D Isa. 9:6 Isaiae testimonio recte dicitur princeps pacis
[n: (Isa. IX)]. — agrees; two words only, drawn into Philip's own predicate. Siglum correct. - 0463C Cant. 4:4 Supra enim dictum est
[n: (l. IV, c. 12)]: Collum tuum sicut turris David. — ⚠ word order transposed. Vulg. Cant. 4:4: Sicut turris David collum tuum, quae aedificata est cum propugnaculis. ⭐ And the work supplies its own control: I greped all 126 chunks, and chunk 0077 (Book IV, Caput XII, col. 0372D) prints the lemma in the Vulgate order, Sicut turris David collum tuum. So Migne prints this verse twice, ninety columns apart, in two orders. Logged, no marker*: the sense is untouched (Pattern 14's threshold) and the transposition is transparently assimilation to the running lemma two words later, hic autem sicut turris eburnea*, which Philip is setting the two side by side to compare. This is cruces-0102 §1.3's Ps. 44:3 shape at one-ninth the sample size. - 0466A Matt. 27:28 + John 19:2 eumdem irrisorie purpuream chlamidem induerunt
[n: (Matth. XXVII; Joan. XIX)]. — ⭐ the note is right about both books, and it has to be, because the phrase is a fusion. Vulg. Matt. 27:28 has chlamydem coccineam (scarlet cloak); John 19:2 has veste purpurea (purple garment). Philip needs the purple for the chapter (purpura regis) and the cloak for the mockery, and takes one word from each. Logged, no marker — a fusion of two cited texts, both of which the note names, is not a divergence from either. ⚑ Log this as a siglum that is RIGHT, per brief §8b's revised instruction: it is the only double-siglum in the range and it is exactly correct. - 0468C 3 Reg. 21 / Isa. 5:2 / Gen. 9:20 non vinea Naboth, non vinea forte Sorech simile propinavit, non bibit Noe melius de prima vinea quam plantavit. — three vineyards named, no phrase reproduced, no note. Philip's own prose. Sorech for Vulg. Sorec (Isa. 5:2 vinea… Sorec) is orthographic, Pattern 9.
- 0469B Matt. 25:41–42 — DIVERGENT ×3,
[var:]fired. Ite for Discedite a me; bibere for potum; enim inserted, and the two verses joined. ⚑ Pattern 5's inquit is reproduced inside the italics as printed, breaking them after Ite. Siglum(Matth. XXV)correct. ⚠ Rendered "Go, you cursed; for I thirsted, and you gave me not to drink" — Pattern 17 plural throughout the quotation, and no "Depart from me" restored. The familiar English of this verse is the strongest pull in the range and it was checked twice. - 0469A Deut. 32:33 — see §2d.1; this is an
[n:]-only span and is the range's one real hit. - 0466B Isa. 2:2 / Mich. 4:1 mons domus Domini super verticem montium praedicatur — Vulg. erit mons domus Domini praeparatus in vertice montium. Unmarked, unnoted; Philip's own predicate. Logged, no marker (§8a).
2d · The [n:]-only class — hit rate 1 of 10, and the hit is the range's best §8a candidate
All ten ⭐ spans were traced back to their real left edge. Nine are Philip's own prose or bare cross-references. One is a genuine quotation with a genuine divergence, and it is unmarked, so per brief §8a it is LOGGED AND NOT MARKED.
- ⭐⭐ 0469A, Deut. 32:33 — THE HIT. Migne prints, naked inside Philip's own sentence:
Sitit enim ille, et nostra omnium bona sitit, qui tamen fel draconum et vinum aspidum non admittit
[n: (Deut. XXXII)]
Vulg. Deut. 32:33: Fel draconum vinum eorum, et venenum aspidum insanabile. Migne has vinum aspidum for the Vulgate's venenum aspidum — asps' wine for asps' poison — and has dropped eorum, which is what made vinum the predicate of the dragons' gall in the first place. Two words re-soldered into one phrase.
⭐ And the divergence is the chapter's own subject. Caput XXVI is a wine chapter from end to end: the Bride offers the Bridegroom vinum optimum, in a grato calice, merum… vinum, not a faeculentus calix. What Philip needs at this exact sentence is a counter-wine — the one drink the thirsting Christ refuses — and venenum aspidum does not supply one. The very next clause confirms it: non acetum Judaeorum, non oblatam bibit amaritudinem, sed recusat. Vinegar, drinking, bitterness. The printed reading is the argument; the Vulgate reading is not.
⛔ NO MARKER, per brief §8a: Migne prints the words in neither guillemets nor italics, so the quotation's left edge is not on the plate and a [var:] would have to assert a boundary Migne does not print. The note is the only thing marking it at all, and §8a's ruling is explicit that a note is not a boundary. Logged with full evidence for the merge to rule once. ⚑ The siglum (Deut. XXXII) is correct.
- 0460D,
[n: (l. IV, c. 7 et 22)]— not a quotation. Migne's internal cross-reference on qui supra cum laudaret ab oculis voluit inchoare. CORRECT, verified: chunk 0074 is Book IV Caput VII and its lemma is Cant. 4:1, [CAP. IV.] Quam pulchra es amica mea… oculi tui columbarum. See §2e. - 0460D,
[n: (l. IV, c. 23)]— not a quotation. On mammas ejus vel ubera non transivit. CORRECT, verified: chunk 0085 is Book IV Caput XXIII and its incipit is Quam pulchrae sunt mammae tuae, soror mea sponsa (Cant. 4:10) — precisely the praise Philip says he did not pass beyond. - 0461A,
[n: (l. V a c. 18 ad 27)]— not a quotation. On Ipsa autem Virgo in praecedenti libro laudans eum… a capite ad crura et eorum bases. CORRECT: cruces-0102 places Cant. 5:11 Caput ejus aurum optimum at Book V Caput XVIII and closes the descriptio at Caput XXVII. Start and end both right. - 0461D, Jer. 6:14 / 8:11. dicunt enim plures pax, pax, in quibus pax non potest inveniri. Vulg. dicentes Pax, pax, et non erat pax. Unnoted, unmarked, and recast (present tense, relative clause, non potest inveniri for non erat). ⚠ It sits eleven words after
[n: (Isa. IX)]and is NOT covered by it — the note stands on princeps pacis, and the extraction pulled the whole run up to the note. Philip's prose on a proverbial tag. No marker. - 0462A, Ezek. 16:25 conflated with Isa. 51:23
[n: (Isa. LI)]— sicut propheta meminit, pedes suos quibusque transeuntibus divaricat. Vulg. Ezek. 16:25: et divisisti pedes tuos omni transeunti. Vulg. Isa. 51:23: posuisti ut terram corpus tuum et quasi viam transeuntibus. ⭐ I checked the siglum before reporting it wrong, and it is not wrong. The verb and the feet are Ezekiel's; transeuntibus is Isaiah 51's word, and the whole picture — a body laid down for passers-by — is Isaiah 51:23's. Migne names the book that supplies the noun Philip actually reproduces. Logged as CORRECT but partial, exactly the call cruces-0102 §2e.2 made for(Hebr. I)over a Wisdom phrase, and for the same reason brief §8b gives: a tally that counted this wrong would manufacture a failure. Philip's prose. No marker. - 0462A,
[n: (Luc. I)]— not a quotation. On Qualis enim in conceptu, praedicante Angelo, legitur exstitisse. A reference to the Annunciation, no words reproduced. Correct. - 0463C,
[n: (l. IV, c. 12)]— the Cant. 4:4 cross-reference; correct, see §2c.3 and §2e. - 0463D,
[n: (sup. l. IV, c. 7, et alibi)]— see §2e.1. Correct, and it is the one entry where the note and Philip's own sentence name different books. - 0466A,
[n: (Matth. XXVII; Joan. XIX)]— see §2c.4. A real quotation, and the extraction listed it[n:]-only because Migne italicises nothing; the words purpuream chlamidem induerunt are Philip's own sentence built from two named texts. Correct siglum, no marker.
Reported per brief §8a. 1/10 here. Running rate across the eight ranges that have reported the class: 0/5 (0102) + 0/6 (0084) + 1/12 (0060) + 0/20 (0042) + 0/38 (0048) + 0/19 (0018) + 1/14 (0024) + 1/10 (0114) = 3 of 124. ⚑ The class is thin but not empty, and both of the last two hits (Rom. 8:10 at 0226B, Deut. 32:33 here) are cases where the divergent word is the one the surrounding argument needs. That is a sharper description of the class than "unmarked quotation," and I offer it to the merge as a possible test.
2e · Migne's sigla — ten checked; ten right, and FOUR of them are internal cross-references
Reproduced verbatim, none corrected (§10.2). No Ibid. occurs anywhere in the range, so §10.2's anaphora hazard does not arise.
Correct and checked against the text each stands on: (Gen. XXXII) Gen. 32:2 @0460A · (Isa. IX) Isa. 9:6 @0461D · (Isa. LI) @0462A (see §2d.6) · (Luc. I) @0462A · (Matth. XXVII; Joan. XIX) @0466A · (Deut. XXXII) Deut. 32:33 @0469A · (Matth. XXV) Matt. 25:41–42 @0469B · plus the four internal ones below.
⭐⭐ THE ENTRY THE MERGE SHOULD TAKE: cruces-0102 §2e.1 adjudicated the first internal cross-reference in the run and found it WRONG. I have four and ALL FOUR ARE RIGHT. cruces-0102 asked whether more exist and said the form (supra l. …, c. …) is greppable; here is the answer for one range, verified against the target chunks rather than reasoned:
| col | note | resolves to | verified |
|---|---|---|---|
| 0460D | (l. IV, c. 7 et 22) — praise beginning ab oculis | chunk 0074 = Bk IV Caput VII, lemma Cant. 4:1 oculi tui columbarum | ✅ |
| 0460D | (l. IV, c. 23) — praise stopping at the mammae | chunk 0085 = Bk IV Caput XXIII, incipit Quam pulchrae sunt mammae tuae | ✅ |
| 0461A | (l. V a c. 18 ad 27) — the head-to-foot descriptio | chunks 0102–0107 = Bk V Caput XVIII–XXVII (cruces-0102) | ✅ |
| 0463C | (l. IV, c. 12) — Collum tuum sicut turris David | chunk 0077 = Bk IV Caput XII, lemma Sicut turris David collum tuum | ✅ |
So the internal-cross-reference class is now attested 4 right and 1 wrong, and brief §8b's "no siglum in this work is systematically wrong" survives its first real test on a new class. A merge that had only cruces-0102's datum would have had a 0-for-1 class.
⚠ One entry that is right but disagrees with Philip, and is worth its own line. At 0463D Migne prints [n: (sup. l. IV, c. 7, et alibi)] on the sentence
De oculis quoque in secundo libro satis aestimo dictum esse (0463D)
and four lines later Philip repeats it: ut liber secundus explicat, conformati moribus columbinis (0464A). Philip says Book II twice; the note says Book IV. I checked both. Chunk 0074 (Bk IV, Caput VII) does expound oculi tui columbarum — so the note is not false. But chunk 0036 (Book II, col. 0274D+, incipit Ecce tu pulchra es, amica mea) is the Cant. 1:14 printing of the same oculi tui columbarum, and that is what Philip's own words point at; it is where the dove-manners exposition lives. Migne's et alibi covers it without naming it. Reproduced verbatim, no correction (§10.2), and logged as "correct but pointing away from the author's own reference" — a fourth shape beside brief §8b's two, and distinct from cruces-0102's wrong-self-reference because nothing here is false. ⚑ oculi tui columbarum occurs in exactly two chunks work-wide, 0036 and 0074. Both were checked; the note names one, Philip names the other.
2f · ⭐ Weaves the extractor could NOT list — 31 found on the mandatory prose pass
No guillemets, no italics and no [n:], so they appear in the extraction in no class whatever. None takes a marker (brief §8a). The first five are the ones the merge should see.
- ⭐⭐ 0464B–C — Cant. 1:5 turned on Philip's own community, inside the range's only autobiographical paragraph. Migne prints, bare:
Expertus sum quod aio. Cum divino perurgente judicio filii matris meae contra me pugnaverunt, cum exteris parcentibus, ii quos mea credebam viscera, me laeserunt (0464B–C)
Vulg. Cant. 1:5: filii matris meae pugnaverunt contra me. Verbatim but for the word order, with the tense kept. This is the Song's own verse, and the work is a commentary on the Song — yet here it is quoted not as lemma, not as proof-text, but as the description of a life, and Migne marks it in no way at all. ⚑ The Song-as-proof-text class brief §7b names (Cant. 4:11 @0220A, 5:11 @0226A, 2:14 @0226C, all guillemeted) now has a third mode: Song-as-autobiography, unmarked. The paragraph continues into the cinis Hesebon crux at §1.4, so the two findings share four lines.
- ⭐⭐ 0459B — Luke 1:48, the Magnificat, printed verbatim and completely bare, and the chapter's hinge verb is taken from it. Migne prints:
sed ejusdem humilitas tandem per gratiam est respecta. Respexit enim humilitatem ancillae suae, eamque semel et iterum revocavit (0459B)
Vulg. Luke 1:48: quia respexit humilitatem ancillae suae. Four words verbatim, the connective enim Philip's. No guillemets, no italics, no [n:], no inquit. ⭐ And the sentence before it is built to land on the verb: mundioribus Dei oculis est despecta, sed ejusdem humilitas tandem per gratiam est respecta — despecta / respecta is the chapter's rhyme pair and the second half of the Sunamitis etymology (§1.2). Philip is proving "despised" from the name and answering it from the Magnificat, and Migne prints the Magnificat as though it were Philip's own clause. No marker. ⚠ Recorded also as a translation hazard I hit: my draft had "the lowliness of his handmaid" (the Douay-adjacent English) against humilitas two words earlier rendered "humility." Same word, two Englishes, nine words apart — 7a″'s mechanism exactly, caught on the second pass and fixed to "humility" in both.
- ⭐ 0471B — 1 Cor. 10:13 with tribulatione for tentatione, and the surrounding sentence is about tribulari. Migne prints:
nec permittat plus justo tribulari, sed cum tribulatione faciat et proventum (0471B)
Vulg. 1 Cor. 10:13: sed faciet cum temptatione etiam proventum. Proventum — the distinctive noun, and not a common one — survives verbatim; temptatione has become tribulatione, matching the tribulari four words before it and the tribulationibus of the martyr paragraph twelve lines later (0471D). Unmarked, unnoted. No marker. ⚑ This is the same profile as §2d.1: the divergent word is the one the argument is already using.
- ⭐ 0461A–B — Gal. 4:9 verbatim, six words, unmarked and unnoted. ad infirma et egena mundi hujus elementa morbus aridus non retorsit. Vulg. quomodo convertimini iterum ad infirma et egena elementa. Philip has inserted mundi hujus and made the disease the agent. ⚑ He uses the same tag again at chunk 0077 (quae se ad infirma et egena mundi transitoria non inflectit) — the same Book IV chapter the 0463C note points to, which is a small confirmation that Philip is deliberately re-running the turris David chapter's material here.
- ⭐ 0466C — Rom. 11:20 verbatim, and it is placed to prepare the Jews. cujus tota conversatio non novit altum sapere, sed timere. Vulg. noli altum sapere sed time. Four words with only the mood changed. Unmarked, unnoted. ⭐ Romans 11 is the chapter Philip will spend all of Caput XXXI and XXXII inside — see 6 below — so this is its first, unannounced entrance, eight columns early, on the Virgin's own hair.
The remaining twenty-six, checked for silent conformation and left as Philip's own prose (none marked, none conformed):
0114 — Eph. 2:3 (naturaliter filia fuit irae, 0459A — Vulg. eramus natura filii irae) · Exod. 25:4 / Heb. 9:19 (coccus… bis tinctus, 0459C) · 1 Reg. 5:1–6:12 + Cant. 6:11 (arca Dei quae… captivatur, inter Azotios, in domum Aminadab, quadratae novitatis vehiculo for the quadrigae, 0458D–0459A — narrated, no phrase reproduced; ⚑ spontanee at 0459A is the Aminadab etymology, populus meus spontaneus, unglossed) · Ps. 18:6 / Job (non… planetarum se illi comparet harmonia, 0460B — Philip's own). 0115 — ⭐ Eph. 5:29 (Etsi enim carnem suam Virgo non habet odio, 0463A — Vulg. nemo enim umquam carnem suam odio habuit; ⛔ recorded because brief §8 names this exact verse as the trap: the English reads "hath not her own flesh in hatred" with no ever, and there was none to import, because Philip has recast it into a concessive about the Virgin. Not a quotation; logged so the merge can see the site was met and handled) · Ps. 118:158 / Isa. 51 (see §2d.6) · 1 Cor. 7:7 (quae miro Paulus desiderio postulat sibi dari, 0462C — narrated) · Isidore, Etym. XIX.31 (A muniendo quippe vel monendo, ut nonnulli aiunt, monilia nominantur, 0462B — ⭐ an adduced authority named only as nonnulli, printed bare and run-in, brief §7b's expected shape; see §4 for the untranslatable etymology) · Phil. 3:13 (extendere… in priora, 0463B) · Luke 24 / John 20 (facta resurrectio nonnullis visionibus est ostensa, 0462D — narrated) · Ps. 62:12 (obstruxit os loquentium tam iniqua, 0464C — Vulg. obstructum est os loquentium iniqua; the noun phrase verbatim, the verb made active and the Virgin its subject). 0116 — Ps. 138:22 (super cujus inimicos, perfecto velut odio, contabescit, 0465A) · Acts 7:51 (corde et auribus… circumcisa, 0465C — Vulg. incircumcisi cordibus et auribus; inverted to the positive) · John 7:22 (quam datam a Moyse Judaei litteraliter tenuerunt, 0465C) · Luke 1:35 (cum sic ei obumbrat Spiritus, 0465C) · Ps. 71:6 (cum in vellus descendens pluvia, 0466A — Vulg. Descendet sicut pluvia in vellus) · Isa. 2:2 / Mich. 4:1 (0466B, see §2c.8) · 1 Cor. 11:3 (caput Virginis appellatur, 0466B) · Rom. 12:1 (tanquam vivens hostia refulgere, 0466C — Vulg. hostiam viventem). 0117 — John 12:32 (ad me traham omnia, 0467D — Vulg. omnia traham ad me ipsum) · Gal. 4:4 (cum illuxit felix temporum plenitudo, 0467C — Vulg. ubi venit plenitudo temporis) · Luke 19:4 (tanquam in arborem sicomorum, 0467D) · Matt. 21:19 (ficus fatua, 0467D) · Lev. 11:3–4 / Deut. 14:6 (quibus constat munda animalia ruminare and animal, quod non ruminat, lex immundum voluit praedicari, 0469B–C — the clean/unclean rule stated twice and correctly, unnoted) · Matt. 27:34 / John 19:29 (non acetum Judaeorum, 0469B) · Ps. 120:3–4 (ipse dilectus meus non dormitat me custodiens, neque stertit, 0469D — Vulg. non dormitabit neque dormiet qui custodit Israel; ⚑ stertit, "snores," is in no version of the psalm — it is Philip's own intensification, and it is left standing) · Num. 12:8 (quasi ore ad os familiariter alloquatur, 0470A). 0118 — John 13:10 (pedes lotos quasi formidaveram inquinari, 0470A) · John 1:14 (cum Verbum carnem factum mundus fide diligit amplexari, 0470B) · Ps. 59:10 / 107:10 (In Idumaea enim calceamentum suum Christus extendere non negavit, 0470C — Vulg. in Idumaeam extendam calceamentum meum; ⚑ the psalm's speaker is God and Philip's is Christus, made explicit) · Eph. 2:19 (hostes in amicos, in domesticos alienigenas commutavit, 0470C) · Rom. 13:12 (cum in lucem jam compellitur nox converti, 0471A) · Ps. 82:19 (Sciant gentes quia Dominus nomen tuum, 0471B) · Dan. 13 (decernunt in Susanam totum pondus criminis retorquere… nisi misso Daniele, 0472A — narrated; Susanam for Susannam is Pattern 9) · 3 Reg. 22:19–27 + 2 Tim. 4:3 (seducunt Achab, auribus prurientem… Michaeas vero, qui solus verum voce libera protestatur, primum caesus alapa, statim carceri mancipatur, 0472B — ⭐ the lying-spirit narrative runs eleven lines and reproduces four of 3 Reg. 22's distinctive elements plus Paul's prurientes auribus, all bare and unnoted; the spiritum mendacii of 0472A is 3 Reg. 22:22's spiritus mendax). 0119 — ⭐⭐ Rom. 11:25–26 twice (postquam ingredi plenitudo gentium concedetur, tunc reliquiae Judaeorum, tunc omnis Israel convertetur, 0473C; postquam plenitudo gentium fuerit introgressa, 0473D–0474A — Vulg. donec plenitudo gentium intraret, et sic omnis Israel salvus fieret) and Rom. 11:17–24 (cum eos gaudet inseri et insertis oleae dari largius ubertatem, 0474B; quod gentiles antea sunt inserti, 0474C — Vulg. insertus es in illis et socius radicis et pinguedinis olivae). Romans 11 is the whole engine of Caput XXXI–XXXII and Migne notes it nowhere — two chapters of Jewish-conversion exposition with not one [n:] in the chunk. ⚑ Add Rom. 11:20 at 0466C (§2f.5) and the chapter is quoted three times across six columns, always bare. No marker, per §8a, but this is the range's clearest case of an argument that is entirely a scriptural argument and is typographically invisible · Matt. 15:26–27 (nec micas de mensa suscipit dominorum… et vescetur panibus filiorum, 0473D–0474A — both halves of the Canaanite woman's exchange, inverted onto Judea).
2g · Brief §8c and §6 — what this range does and does not witness
⚠ Recording what I actually saw, per §8c's warning, not that I "met the verse."
- Cant. 1:12 does NOT occur in this range, in either half. No evidence either way on Cum/Dum.
- Cant. 2:17 (Bethel/Bether) does not occur.
- Zech. 4:14 does not occur. Zechariah is not cited at all in these six chunks.
- Gen. 3:19 does not occur. Genesis is cited once, at 0460A (Gen. 32:2), correctly.
- Eccles. 9:1 does not occur.
- Cant. 5:9 (ex dilecto) does not occur. Cant. 5:7 (vigiles/custodes) does not occur.
- ⭐ What the range ADDS to §6's class is §1.2's Cant. 6:12 Sunamitis. It has §6's authorial shape (Philip expounds the divergent word, as at Zech. 4:14) but not §6's distributional shape (the verse is printed only here, so there is no second witness and no internal contradiction). I record it as a member of the class on the strength of the exposition alone, and flag the difference so the merge does not count it as a second Eccles. 9:1.
- ⭐ And §1.1's Cant. 7:13 is a NEW shape for the class: a divergent verse DIVISION rather than a divergent word. Nothing in §6 or §8c anticipates it, and I do not know whether other ranges have met one — it is not greppable the way a word is. Worth a merge-time question to all twenty-one ranges.
§3 · TYPOGRAPHY
3a · Guillemets — none, and this is now the third consecutive range to report zero
0 « and 0 » in all six chunks, matching the Latin twins exactly. Pattern 6's parity check passes trivially; every quotation mark on the English pages of this range is ours (" ") or none at all — and in fact I supplied none, because every quotation Migne marks he marks with italics and every one he does not mark is left unmarked under §8a. ⚑ So these six English chunks contain zero quotation marks of either kind, which I note because it is unusual and because a downstream parity check comparing quotation counts will see 0/0 and should.
⭐ The range confirms §7c's operational claim, not just its distributional one. §7c says the adduced proof-texts continue at full density and are printed in italics. Here three of the eight are (§2c), and they are typographically indistinguishable from the eighteen italic Song lemmata standing in the very same paragraphs. At 0469B the two are twenty lines apart inside one chapter: the italic lemma Dignum Dilecto meo ad potandum… opens Caput XXVI, and the italic Ite, inquit, maledicti… is an adduced proof-text within it. Nothing on the plate tells them apart — only the inquit, the note, and the function. A range applying §7 as written ("italic ⇒ probably just a lemma") would have read both as lemma and collated neither; and the one that carries the range's [var:] is the proof-text.
3b · §7a mirroring — the drift point — held word by word
Diffed mechanically against the Latin twins after drafting.
- Sponsus / sponsus: 30 instances, 24 capital and 6 lower-case, mirrored in order. The six lower-case: 0459A
sponsus(Revocat ergo sponsus eam) · 0459Bsponsus(eamdem sponsus addit) · 0459Csponsoandsponsus(dum in sponso… sponsus ditat) · 0460Bsponso(a sponso, si quid amplius noverit) · 0461Csponso(sponso melius innotescit) · 0474Bsponso(quia sponso ad vescendum gaudet). ⭐ Chunk 0114 is the specimen and it is a clean two-part shape: Caput XIII runs entirely lower-case (four instances, 0459A–C) and then switches at 0459D — adgaudentes Sponso, de Sponsa — and stays capital for the rest of the chunk (0459D ×2, 0460C, 0460D). The switch falls at the sentence where the angels enter, which is a tempting explanation and I decline to offer it as one: 0460B has a lower-casesponsoinside the angels' own speech, which breaks it. Mirrored per instance; no rule inferred. ⚑ 0474B is the merge-relevant one: chunk 0119 has one lower-casesponsoand one capitalSponso(0474C, non in se, sed in Sponso) twelve lines apart, both of the same person in the same argument. Exactly brief §7a's worked example. - Virgo / virgo: 61 instances, 48 capital and 13 lower-case, mirrored in order. The thirteen lower-case: 0460B
virgine· 0460Dvirginem· 0461Avirginis· 0461Cvirgini,virginem· 0461Dvirginis· 0462Bvirginem· 0462Cvirginis· 0463Cvirginis· 0471Cvirgini· 0473Cvirgini· 0473Dvirgini· and 0462B'svirgineum(adjective, not counted above). ⭐ 0473C–0473D is the specimen: gratum virgini dant odorem and jam a longe odoranti datur virgini praesentire are both lower-case, four lines apart, inside a chapter that opens …mala Punica Virgo antea nominavit (0473B) and closes with capitals. Three capitals bracketing two lower-case, no change of subject. ⚠ Recorded because this is precisely the assimilation cruces-0102 §3b′ describes: the surrounding capitals set the ear. Caught by the ordered diff, not by reading. - Spiritus — 3 instances, all capital, and one of them is the DEVIL'S. 0465C cum sic ei obumbrat Spiritus (the Holy Spirit) · 0471D Spiritus enim qui ab invidia et mendacio non quiescit (the lying spirit of 3 Reg. 22) · against lower-case spiritum mendacii at 0472A and spiritu at 0471C. ⭐⭐ So Migne prints capital Spiritus of the spirit of lying at 0471D and lower-case spiritum mendacii of the same spirit eight lines later. Both mirrored ("the Spirit which resteth not from envy" / "the spirit of lying"). This is the strongest argument yet for brief §7a's mirror-don't-regularize rule, because it is the one case where regularizing would look like a theological correction rather than a typographic one — and it is Migne's, not Philip's, since the plate's own next sentence disagrees with it. ⚑ The Spiritus sanctus / sancti Spiritus order does not arise in the range; brief §7a's worked example has no instance here.
- Pattern 3 fires four times, and THREE are the bare form brief §5 flags. 0462D–0463A leguntur in Scriptura → "are read in Scripture" — no divina, no sacra, and singular, the exact form 11638's sweep missed · 0473D per scientiam Scripturarum → "by the knowledge of the Scriptures" — bare plural · 0464A ut liber secundus explicat → not Scripture, a self-reference, correctly NOT promoted. ⚠ And the one I deliberately did NOT promote: 0460A Angelos quippe castra invenitur divina lectio nominare. The adjective is divina — brief §5's trigger word — but the noun is lectio, not Scriptura, and Pattern 3 is a rule about the proper name of the Bible, not about the pattern "divina + noun." Rendered "the divine reading." Logged explicitly so a later sweep matching on divina does not churn it into "Holy Scripture." ⚑ No divina Scriptura or sacra Scriptura occurs anywhere in the range, so every Pattern-3 instance here is of the bare type.
- Heads:
CAPUT XIII.throughCAPUT XXXII., all numerals.CAPUT XV(0114) andCAPUT XXXI(0119) lack the terminal stop; the other eighteen carry it. Reproduced as printed, not tidied — matching cruces-0048's stop-less pair rather than cruces-0060's and cruces-0102's uniform ranges.
3c · Pattern 17
Decided by morphology throughout.
- Singular → thou. The overwhelming majority, and all of it is the Bridegroom to the Bride or the Bride to the Bridegroom: eighteen lemmata of gressus tui, junctura feminum tuorum, umbilicus tuus, venter tuus, ubera tua, collum tuum, oculi tui, nasus tuus, caput tuum, quam pulchra es, statura tua, guttur tuum, and Philip's own expansions on them (cum ab imo inchoans, processu fructifico dilataris, 0467A; forma vitae tuae qua… erudis ignorantes, 0467A; nullam tibi similem intuentur, 0467B); then the Bride to the Bridegroom from 0470A on (Tu… quem diligo, qui supra non negasti; nomen tuum… tuam gratiam; tibi dabo; servavi tibi).
- ⭐ Plural → you, and there are exactly two places. 1. 0459D–0460C, the angels to the Bridegroom — aiunt, inquiunt, and they speak as a company: videmus, gaudemus, volumus, nobis considerantibus. But everything they say to him is singular (invitas, vis, videbis, censebis, revocas, a te ipso), so the English is "we… thou" throughout — plural speakers, singular addressee. No you is required here at all, which is the cleaner half of the datum. 2. 0469B, Matt. 25:41–42 — the only true plural address in the range: Ite… non dedistis mihi bibere → "Go, you cursed… and you gave me not to drink." ⭐ The pair the merge should like is 0467A vs 0469B, six columns apart: the Bridegroom says quam pulchra es… statura tua to one woman and the same Bridegroom says Ite… dedistis to a crowd, and under Pattern 17 an English reader sees the number change with no apparatus. Under a flat "you" the Bride and the reprobates take the same pronoun in the same book.
- 0464B's nos passages are first-person plural, not second, and take no archaism: nos restringit, nos accingit, vult nos esse.
3d · Marginal source-edition numbers
267 (0460C) · 268 (0462B) · 269 (0463D) · 270 (0465A) · 271 (0466D) · 272 (0468B) · 273 (0469D) · 274 (0471B) · 275 (0473A) · 276 (0474C). Continuous with cruces-0102's 250–257 (which ended at 0444B), so the 0108–0113 range carries 258–266. Each kept italic and verbatim at the word it interrupts, with the English clause built around it: 268 falls between digno and sui pretio, 269 between fortiter and se defendit, 271 between voluntate and torporis nescia, 272 between quanta and credi possunt, 273 between me and custodiens, 275 between filium and quem nobis, 276 between potius and intermissam. ⚠ 273's slot forced "slumbereth not while he keepeth me 273, nor doth he snore" and **271's "with a will 271 that knoweth not torpor"; both are more contorted than I would otherwise write and both are deliberate. ⚑ 267, 270, 274 and 276* fall at clause boundaries and cost nothing.
3e · ⚑ Anchor observations NOT reported as defects (brief §10.1)
Two, both recorded so a later reader can see the check was made rather than skipped, and neither reported:
- 0114 opens with its lemma BEFORE the first anchor —
colContextis 0458D,colFirst0459A, and the whole of Revertere, revertere, Sunamitis… plus thirty words of exposition stand above[0459A]. Normal: the chunk boundary falls inside col. 0458D. The construction closes across the mark (non est efficacia [0459A] remeantis) and is rendered continuous. - Two chunks put an anchor on its own line under a
##head —[0465B]underCAPUT XXII.(0116),[0468B]underCAPUT XXV.(0117),[0472D]underCAPUT XXX.(0119). The Latin twins print exactly this layout and the English mirrors it. Not a lost paragraph. - 0471A falls between mala and Punica, two words English renders as one. §2b records where it went. Not a §10.1 case: nothing is broken across it.
§4 · PATTERN 7 / 8 / 9 / 10 — five [sic:], and the readings rendered as printed
Conjectures live here and NOT in the text.
4a · The five carried non-words — and four of them are one mechanical class
⭐ n set for u, three times in three chunks, and o for u/i twice. Recorded together because the profile is a compositor's, not a copy-text's, and because a merge counting "defects" would otherwise count five unrelated events:
| col | printed | read | marker |
|---|---|---|---|
| 0464B | qnod | quod | [sic: qnod] |
| 0465B | proficiendnm | proficiendum | [sic: proficiendnm] |
| 0466A | pnrpuream | purpuream | [sic: pnrpuream] |
| 0462D | virita | virili | [sic: virita] |
| 0467A | recundito | recondito | [sic: recundito] |
- 0462D fide virita constat. Not a Latin word in any form. virili is near-certain: the clause it stands in is an antithesis — quae apostolis defluentibus timore carneo et mollitie feminina; fide virita constat — and feminina two words earlier demands virilis. Carried, in italics, untranslated: "standeth firm by a [sic: virita] faith." ⚑ The English keeps "firm" from constat, not from the marked word, so nothing inside the marker is doing translation work (Pattern 7a′).
- 0467A vino recundito. recondito ("stored up") is near-certain — a stored wine is the whole point of botris fertilibus… laetabundis, and recunditus exists nowhere. It is a single-vowel misprint like pnrpuream, and Pattern 12's test is whether the run is a word at all, not how small the error is. Carried: "joyous with [sic: recundito] wine."
- ⚠ The
[sic:]content of all five was checked as a verbatim substring of the Latin twin (Pattern 12's safety rule) — the check that stops a[sic:]being wrapped round English.
4b · Real words merely wrong or merely odd — rendered as printed, NO marker
Pattern 12's boundary clause keeps every one of these on the English side.
- ⛔⭐⭐ 0467D, cujus ascensio, id est carnis assumptio fideli cuique ficus fatua reputatur. As printed: the Incarnation "is reckoned by every faithful one a foolish fig" — and the second half of the same sentence says ei autem qui digne suspicit, et humiliter suscipit, fructum salutiferum operatur. The sentence contradicts itself in six words. Read infideli, near-certain: the fatua ficus is the barren fig of Matt. 21, the antithesis needs an unbeliever, and cuique + autem is a standard either/or frame. ⛔ NOT repaired. Rendered "is reckoned by every faithful one a foolish fig," which is meant to read wrong. This is brief §9's exact case — a dropped negative that makes the author assert the opposite of his own argument — and it is a DELETION of a prefix, which brief §8a names as the hardest member of the class because nothing on the page signals it. ⚠ It is also the range's cheapest repair: two letters. The single most important line in this file after §1.1.
- ⛔ 0464C, hujus cinis Hesebon. See §1.4. Read cinguli / cingulo, from Migne's own italic gloss cingulum moeroris six lines above. Rendered "the ash of this Hesebon." Not emended.
- 0464A, the missing full stop: Hesebon est civitas quam populorum inhabitat multitudo [0464A] piscinae, fontes sunt. A sentence ends and the next begins with no mark at all, the anchor sitting where the stop should be. Preserved (Pattern 8: never supply): "…which a multitude of peoples inhabiteth [0464A] the fishpools are fountains…". Same call cruces-0102 §4 made for non coronat Vidit ergo at 0435C and cruces-0084 for inquam favus at 0391C. ⚠ Do not churn.
- 0462D, the misplaced semicolon: quae apostolis defluentibus timore carneo et mollitie feminina; fide virita constat. Migne breaks a single clause between its ablatives and its verb. Preserved.
- 0463D–0464A, the missing comma before sed: nec repeti quod dictum est, necessarium reor esse sed quia nova comparatio videtur hic apponi. Preserved: "…be repeated but because a new comparison seemeth here to be added…".
- 0464C and 0472C both end etc with NO terminal stop (Nasus tuus, etc / Ibi dabo, etc), while 0460C, 0465A, 0468A and 0469C end etc. with it. All six reproduced as printed. ⚑ Four-to-two inside one range, which makes this Migne's inconsistency rather than a chunk-boundary artifact.
- 0466C–D, Quam pulchra es, et quam decora charissima in deliciis? — a question mark closing an exclamation, in the lemma. Preserved (Pattern 8; cf. 11537 col. 1060C). The Vulgate prints
!. - 0461B–C, the anacoluthon at Ob hoc forte in praesenti, quod nusquam supra filiam nominavit, quod juxta formam suam illam specialius calceavit… — two causal quod clauses with no main verb for Ob hoc. Rendered as closely as the printed words allow, with a dash standing where the missing clause would be: "For this cause perchance in the present place — that nowhere above did he name her daughter, that after his own fashion he shod her more especially…". Logged rather than repaired. ⚑ The supplied dash is punctuation English needs to render the fracture, not a supplied mark under Pattern 8; nothing on the plate was deleted or added.
- 0472A, Quis istam, quis Marinam, et Eugeniam, et alias ejusmodi non laudare, qui eas praesumpserit… defraudare. A bare infinitive with no governing verb (audeat / praesumat expected, and praesumpserit stands in the next clause, which is what probably swallowed it). Rendered "Who is there that would not praise her, that would not praise Marina and Eugenia…" — supplying nothing lexical, only the English syntax a rhetorical question needs. Logged.
- 0467A, Et ubera tua… similis est non herbis inutilibus. Singular verb and adjective with a plural subject (ubera). Rendered "is like," which English can carry. Pattern 9, no marker, logged so a sweep does not churn it.
- 0473A, ne sub fasce duro fides elanguerat, spes vacillet. Pluperfect indicative where the parallel vacillet is subjunctive. Rendered "lest under a hard burden faith had languished and hope should waver" — the mismatch shows in the English. Pattern 9, logged.
- 0466D, in tam multis deliciis mihi charissima delicato.* Masculine dative agreeing with mihi* where the whole sentence addresses the Bride. Rendered "most dear amid so many delights to me who am delicate" — the reading the printed case forces. Pattern 9 (a gender/agreement matter with no English exponent), logged, not emended.
- 0469A, sic merum et illi me vinum sibi postulat praesentari. Four pronouns for two persons and the word order will not settle. Rendered "so requireth of me that unmixed wine, and that only, be presented to him" — the et… sibi taken as emphatic. ⚑ The place in the range where I would most welcome a second opinion after §1.4.
- 0459A Azotios · 0462C matri Virgini · 0468C Sorech · 0472A Susanam · 0466C spiritalibus / 0467A spiritaliter (for spiritual-). Attested medieval spellings and proper-name forms; Pattern 9 exempts them explicitly. Translated normally, no italics.
4c · An untranslatable etymology, logged because §5's rule made the call
0462B–C, A muniendo quippe vel monendo, ut nonnulli aiunt, monilia nominantur, eo quod munita quaeque tali munere moneantur.* The whole second half of Caput XVI turns on monile ← munire / monere*, and English "necklace" shares no root with "fortify" or "admonish."
I translated it ("necklaces") rather than carrying monilia in italics, on brief §5's stated principle: italic Latin is reserved for words with no English exponent, which is the ground on which vermiculatas argento was translated and muraenula and ferculum were not. Monile is a plain object with a clean English word; muraenula required a fish. The English keeps the argument's shape (fortify / admonish / fortified / admonished, all four cognate pairs rendered by cognate English) and loses only the sound-link to the noun. Logged so the merge can see the call was made deliberately and can reverse it cheaply — it is five occurrences in one paragraph of one chunk.
⚑ Two other lemma words where I did not reach for italic Latin, on the same principle: crater tornatilis → "a turned bowl" (Philip glosses tornatura, which English carries) and frixorium → "frying-pan" (0466A; odd, but it is a frying-pan and the oddity is Philip's).
4d · Negation audit (brief §9), second pass, against the Latin
Every printed non / nec / neque / nisi / nihil / nil / nullus / nunquam / necdum / nequaquam / nequire / nescire / nullatenus / ne in the six Latin chunks was extracted after the prose was drafted and matched one by one against the English. No negation is missing and none was added. The places I checked twice, because they are the ones a smooth English would have eaten:
- 0468C ut non gaudere nequeat — a double negative. Rendered "is not able not to rejoice," not "cannot but rejoice," which would have dropped one.
- 0464B nisi moestos et miseros non admittit — rendered "admitteth none save the mournful and the wretched," carrying both particles.
- 0469C nullum prius, nullum posterius inconveniens apparere — first drafted as "no unfitting thing… neither before nor after," which fused the two nullum into one; corrected on this pass to "nothing unfitting appeareth before, nothing after."
- 0467D ficus fatua — see §4b. The negation that is missing from the Latin was not supplied.
- 0469D non dormitat… neque stertit… faciem non avertit — three, all kept, including the psalm-adjacent pair where the familiar English ("shall neither slumber nor sleep") was the pull.
- 0459A–B non potuit… non est efficacia… non suspensa… non puellaris… non retorsit… non extorsit — the six-negation cluster of Caput XV, all present.
⭐ And the one caught in my OWN English, per brief §8's ⭐ instruction. Drafting 0114 I wrote "For he regarded the lowliness of his handmaid" for Migne's Respexit enim humilitatem ancillae suae — the Douay-adjacent wording — nine words after correctly rendering humilitas as "humility" in the sentence that sets up the rhyme despecta / respecta. Not a conformation to a word Migne does not print, but the same mechanism: the remembered English arrived before the printed Latin was read, and it split one word into two. Fixed to "humility" in both places. It was found by the second pass, not by reading, and I record it because brief §8's measured claim is that the two acts — collating and writing — come apart.
Philip of Harvengt, Commentaria in Cantica canticorum, PL 203. Six chunks, 6,115 Latin words, covering Caput XXXIII–L of Book VI and closing the work: Cant. 8:1–14 expounded lemma by lemma — Quis mihi det te fratrem meum → Apprehendam te, et ducam in domum matris meae → Et dabo tibi poculum ex vino condito → Laeva ejus sub capite meo → Adjuro vos, filiae Hierusalem → Quae est ista quae ascendit de deserto → Sub arbore malo suscitavi te → Pone me ut signaculum → Lampades ejus → Si dederit homo omnem substantiam → Soror nostra parvula est → Si murus est → Ego murus → Vinea fuit pacifico → Vinea mea coram me est → Quae habitas in hortis → Fuge, dilecte mi. Chunk 0125 carries Philip's own peroration and prayer to the Virgin (0489A–0490B) and then, in italics and with no heading, the Douai approbation of Joannes Gallemart, 7 Febr. 1618. These are the last six chunks of the work.
Marker totals for this range: 4 [var:] · 2 [sic:] · 0 [ed:] · 0 [d:] · 0 [nt:] · 0 [f:].
node scripts/verify-english.mjs 11632 now reports verify OK: 126 chunks, columns/notes/sections aligned, no duplicate paragraphs — with these six the work is complete and the whole of 11632 passes. Ratios: 1.65 / 1.63 / 1.53 / 1.55 / 1.55 / 1.53, all inside the 1.35–1.69 band this work has already shipped. ⚠ 0123 is the shortest English file in the range (1,397 words) because it is the shortest Latin chunk (863 words against 983–1,152); its ratio is 1.55, mid-band, its last sentence matches the Latin's (amore satiabitur jam completo → "shall be satisfied with a love now fulfilled"), and both its ## heads and its terminal anchor [0484B] are in place. It is not truncated.
Column anchors (10/10/11/8/11/11), [n:] strings (0/1/1/1/0/2 — each matching its frontmatter noteCount), ## head counts (3/4/3/2/4/2) and asterisk counts were diffed 1:1 against the Latin twins by script, not by eye: anchors byte-identical in order and place, [n:] contents byte-identical, asterisks matching 1:1 in all six once our own [var:]/[sic:] italics are subtracted. Marginal source-edition numbers 277–285 verified in place.
⚑ GUILLEMETS: zero « and zero » in 6,115 words, matching the Latin twins exactly. This is the end of the run described by brief §7c, and it holds to the last column of the work.
§1 · ⭐⭐ THE FINDINGS THE MERGE SHOULD CARRY
1.1 · ⭐⭐⭐ Cant. 8:2 at 0475C — Migne's lemma carries a WHOLE CLAUSE the Vulgate does not have, and it is the LXX/Old Latin reading. Five chapters of exposition stand on it
Migne prints the running lemma of Caput XXXIV as:
Apprehendam te, et ducam in domum matris meae, et in cubiculum genitricis meae, ibi me docebis. (0475C)
Vulg. Cant. 8:2: Apprehendam te, et ducam in domum matris meae: ibi me docebis, et dabo tibi poculum ex vino condito… — no chamber.
The added clause is verbatim Cant. 3:4's (donec introducerem illum in domum matris meae, et in cubiculum genitricis meae), which this same commentary prints as its own lemma at 0349D, chunk 0067 — so Philip's Bible has the phrase, and the question is only whether it belongs at 8:2. It does, in the Greek and the Old Latin: LXX 8:2 reads εἰς οἶκον μητρός μου καὶ εἰς ταμιεῖον τῆς συλλαβούσης με. So this is not a compositor's eye-skip from 3:4 but an attested non-Vulgate form of 8:2.
⭐⭐ And the exposition is built on the added words, at length. Caput XXXIV turns on the chamber from its second sentence onward:
ut in eis deambulet, et ad cubiculum gaudeat devenire, ubi cubet, ubi pauset, et quietis accubitum valeat invenire. In domum matris suae, et in cubiculum virgo sollicita sponsum ducit… (0476A)
and the word then carries the argument through four further chapters, into the range's most distinctive phrase: in cubiculum meruit jam induci… non se gaudet de cubiculo in cubiculum introduci (0483B), in secretiorem thalamum inducenda (0483D), and at last intra cubiculum cubiculi (0484A), "within the chamber of the chamber," which is unwritable if the lemma has only a house. It also reaches back: ab ejusdem cordis cubiculo salutem quoque proximam longe fecit (0480C).
[var:] FIRED, immediately after the lemma, naming Vulg. and Vet. Lat./LXX (Pattern 14). The marker was available here and was not at brief §8a's unmarked cases, because Migne italicises the run: the quotation's boundary is printed, so the marker asserts nothing the plate does not — the same distinction cruces-0102 §1.2 drew.
⚠ This belongs beside brief §6's five, but it has a different profile from all of them. Zech. 4:14, Gen. 3:19, Cant. 2:17 Bethel, Eccles. 9:1 and Cant. 5:9 are substitutions, transpositions or an omission; this is an addition, and an addition with an identifiable versional witness behind it. It is printed once, so it lacks the recurrence-shape §6 draws its confidence from — but the recurrence is supplied by the exposition instead of by a second lemma, six times over three columns. The merge should decide whether an addition attested in LXX/Vet. Lat. and expounded six times counts to the same class.
1.2 · ⭐⭐ Cant. 8:12 at 0486C — a DELETION, and it changes who the two hundred are
Vinea mea coram me est: mille tui pacifici: et ducenti qui custodiunt fructus ejus. (0486C)
Vulg. Cant. 8:12: …et ducenti his qui custodiunt fructus eius — "and two hundred for them that keep the fruits thereof" (so Douay).
One word is gone, and it is the word that carries the syntax. With his the two hundred are a payment made to the keepers; without it the two hundred are the keepers. ⛔ This is exactly brief §8a's "is a word MISSING?" discipline, and the answer is only visible if you ask it — the line reads perfectly as printed and the familiar English ("and two hundred for them that keep") arrives before the Latin is counted.
⭐ Philip's exposition follows the printed reading, not the Vulgate's. He takes ducenti as a predicate of the givers themselves — Nec pacifici solum dici poterunt, sed ducenti, id est pacem duplicem conferent largienti (0486D) — and closes the chapter by giving the double peace to the keeper directly: pacem mereatur duplicem invenire, quisquis illius fructus amat cura vigili custodire (0486D). The Vulgate's dative would put the two hundred on the other side of that sentence.
[var:] FIRED, quoting the dropped word and stating what its loss does. The English renders what is printed.
1.3 · ⭐⭐ Eccles. 9:1 at 0489A — the SEVENTH and LAST printing. The pair is REVERSED, and the wording is unlike the other six
Asked for explicitly, so recorded explicitly, and with the words named rather than the verse (brief §8c). Migne prints, inside Philip's own closing prayer:
tuus, tibi serviens, quamvis adhuc nesciens utrum dignus odio vel amore
[n: (Eccle. IX)](0489A)
Vulg. Eccles. 9:1: et tamen nescit homo utrum amore an odio dignus sit.
✅ The pair is REVERSED — odio stands before amore. So this printing joins the six and the count closes at six reversed to one Vulgate-order, exactly as brief §6 predicted. This is the last of the seven and the last column of the work.
⚠ But the wording is NOT brief §6's formula, and the merge should have the difference. §6 gives the reversed form as utrum odio dignus sit an amore. I grepped all seven sites; there are in fact three shapes, not two:
| chunk | col | printed | order |
|---|---|---|---|
| 0029 | — | (per brief §6, verified there) | reversed |
| 0042 | — | nescit enim miser homo utrum odio dignus sit an amore | reversed |
| 0049 | — | incerti procul dubio utrum amore an odio digni simus | Vulgate |
| 0062 | 0340D | Nesciens enim utrum odio digna sit an amore | reversed |
| 0070 | — | (per brief §6, verified there) | reversed |
| 0074 | 0367A | timens, quia nesciens, utrum odio dignus sit an amore? | reversed |
| 0125 | 0489A | nesciens utrum dignus odio vel amore | reversed |
0125 alone drops sit, writes vel for an, and fronts dignus before odio. The other five reversed printings all keep dignus sit … an. So the reversal is stable across all six and the frame is not — which is mildly better evidence for a copy-text reading than six identical printings would be, because six identical strings could be one compositor repeating himself, whereas a reversal that survives three different re-castings is being carried in the author's head.
⛔ NO MARKER, and this is the settled treatment. The span carries neither guillemets nor italics — only its [n:] — and Philip has dissolved it into his own sentence (nescit homo → nesciens, agreeing with tuus… serviens), so the quotation's left edge is not printed and a [var:] would assert a boundary the plate does not have (brief §8a). ✅ This matches the shipped precedent exactly: cruces-0072 §2d treated the 0070 printing as [n:]-only, Philip's own prose, no marker, and the four English chunks 0042/0049/0062/0074 all render the clause inline with the note and carry no [var:] on it. Nothing in the range is out of step with that. Siglum (Eccle. IX) is correct.
⚑ Note the abbreviation: this range and the other six sites print (Eccle. IX), while chunk 0089 prints (Eccles. VII) for Ecclesiastes 7. Both forms are in the work; neither is corrected.
1.4 · ⭐⭐ 0487D — the range's non-scriptural adduced authority is TERENCE, italicised, unattributed, and quoted in its MEDIEVAL proverb-form
Brief §8a: "DO NOT HUNT ONLY FOR BIBLE VERSES." The 0078 hit was Virgil, cruces-0102's was the Chalcedonian formula; mine is a Roman comedian. Migne prints, closing the paragraph after a colon:
…nisi forte quod amantes habent iras spe concordiae gratioris, quia, ut quidam praedicat: Irae amantium, redintegratio est amoris?** (0487D)
This is Terence, Andria 555, whose received text reads amantium irae amoris integratio est. Two things are worth the merge's time:
- ⭐ Migne prints redintegratio, not integratio, and reverses the clause-halves. That is not corruption — it is the medieval florilegium form of the tag, the shape in which the line circulated in the twelfth century. So the divergence is evidence about Philip's source for the proverb, not about Migne's compositor. No marker: it is not scripture, Pattern 14's witness list has no exponent for a comic poet, and §8a governs the boundary.
- ⭐ Philip does not name him — ut quidam praedicat, "as a certain man declareth" — and Migne supplies no
[n:]. So the citation is invisible to every mechanical channel; only the prose pass reaches it.
⚑ On brief §7b's display rule, this one is worth a second look and I do not call it a counter-instance. The quotation is italicised, and it is neither plainly displayed nor plainly run-in: it is introduced by a colon, it is the last thing in its paragraph, and the paragraph break falls immediately after it. On §7b's variable that reads as display, and the italics are then exactly what the rule predicts. Recorded, not reported — but if the merge wants a test case for where §7b's "displayed" ends, this is it.
⭐⭐ And the range has two further classical turns, both entirely bare:
- 0478D — ASTRAEA. quam Astraea deservit, urticis, spinis, tribulis pleniorem, et in astra se revehens, locum illic tenuit gratiorem. This is Ovid, Met. i.149–150 (ultima caelestum terras Astraea reliquit), and it is doing real work: the chapter's lemma is Quae est ista quae ascendit de deserto, and Philip has set the pagan virgin leaving the earth against the Virgin rising from it, with the constellation Virgo as the hinge. No guillemets, no italics, no
[n:], no inquit, and Ovid is not named. - 0483C — VENUS and CUPIDO. quem usurpat et deturpat Venus male suasoria vel cupido, in Philip's own sentence, unmarked. Not a quotation; recorded because it is the second pagan register in three columns and shows the closing book is not written in a purely scriptural idiom.
None of the three takes a marker.
1.5 · ⭐ 0477D — an INTERNAL cross-reference to the work's own books, and it is CORRECT
cruces-0102 §2e.1 found the run's first internal self-reference — [n: (supra l. I, c. 2)] at 0437A — and it named the wrong book and the wrong chapter, a third error-shape beyond brief §8b's two. This range contains the second such self-reference and it is right, which per §8b's explicit instruction is worth logging as loudly as a failure.
Philip writes of the Adjuro vos adjuration:
Haec autem adjuratio… in secundo et tertio hujus operis libro nihilominus invenitur. (0477D)
Checked against the whole work: the book heads stand in chunks 0002 (LIBER PRIMUS), 0025 (II), 0047 (III), 0068 (IV), 0091 (V), 0107 (VI). Adjuro vos… ne suscitetis occurs at 0046 (Cant. 2:7 — inside Book II) and 0067 (Cant. 3:5 — inside Book III). Both named books are exactly right, and the one other Adjuro vos in the work, at 0101, is Cant. 5:8, a different adjuration with a different continuation. Philip's own in hoc ultimo repetita is likewise right: this is Book VI.
⚑ Same paragraph, same shape, also checked and also correct: at 0479B he says the angels' question Quae est ista is tertio repetitum and then enumerates the three — Cant. 3:6 (instar virgulae… universo pulveri pigmentarii), Cant. 6:9 (similis est aurorae… castrorum aciei) and the present 8:5. Three, and the right three.
So the internal-self-reference class is now attested wrong once and right twice. That is the same "no siglum in this work is systematically wrong" profile brief §8b reached for (I Cor. II) and (Psal. XCII), and it should keep a merge from generalizing cruces-0102's finding into a rule.
1.6 · ⭐ 0481B — a SECOND shape of Migne's own variant bracket, which the brief records as a singleton
Brief §10.6/§10.7 records [ alias caliginoso] at 0321B and states: "✅ Checked work-wide 2026-08-08: this is the ONLY instance in all 126 chunks. It is a singleton, not a class." That check was for the string alias. Migne's apparatus takes another form as well, and it is in this range:
vas est commendabile, exinaniri nesciens, copiosum, cor est incibile [ f. lucibile], cor est lampadi simile, non umbrosum. (0481B)
f. = fortasse / forte: Migne is conjecturing, not reporting another reading. The conjecture is right and the context proves it — the clause runs into cor est lampadi simile, non umbrosum, and the whole chapter is the lamp of fire and flames — so lucibile, "capable of light," is what the sentence needs.
Handled as follows, and the two halves are deliberately different:
- The bracket is reproduced verbatim and untranslated, italics as printed (§10.7; register rule on
[ al., …]). - incibile is carried into the English untranslated, in italics, inside a
[sic: …]. It is not a Latin word — there is no incibilis — so Pattern 7's non-word class applies and there is nothing to render. ⚠ I considered §10.5 ("where Migne prints his own sic, do not add ours") and judged it does NOT apply:f.is a conjecture about what the word should have been, not a flag that the type is defective, and an unmarked italic run would read as our editorial Latin (Pattern 12's whole argument). The merge may overrule this; it is one marker.
The finding for the merge is not the word, it is that the [ alias …] singleton is not a singleton once the apparatus is described by function rather than by string. [ f. …] is greppable and cheap to sweep.
§2 · THE COLLATION — all 42 listed spans, plus those found on the prose pass
Every span in data/quotations/11632/0120-0125.md was collated word by word against the Clementine text. Spans recorded as AGREES were collated and found to agree; the absence of a marker on them is a finding, not a silence.
2a · Divergent — [var:] fired (4)
| Col | Ref | Migne prints | Vulgate | Note |
|---|---|---|---|---|
| 0474D | Cant. 8:1 | et jam nemo me despiciet | et iam me nemo despiciat | §2b.1 below — mood + order |
| 0475C | Cant. 8:2 | + et in cubiculum genitricis meae | phrase absent | ⭐⭐⭐ §1.1 |
| 0481C | Cant. 8:7 | aquae multae non poterunt exstinguere | non potuerunt extinguere | §2b.9 — future for perfect |
| 0486C | Cant. 8:12 | et ducenti — qui custodiunt | et ducenti his qui custodiunt | ⭐⭐ §1.2 — deletion |
2b · The seventeen Song lemmata and re-quotations — collated one by one
Cant. 8:1–14 is expounded lemma by lemma through the range. Each was read against the Clementine text before the English was trusted (Pattern 7a″).
- 0474D Cant. 8:1 Quis mihi det te fratrem meum sugentem ubera matris meae, ut inveniam te foris, et deosculer te, et jam nemo me despiciet? — Vulg. et iam me nemo despiciat. DIVERGENT ×2 and
[var:]FIRED. The pronoun/nemo order is trivial; the mood is not — a present subjunctive ("let no man despise me") has become a future indicative ("no man shall despise me"), a wish turned into a prediction. ⭐ The internal control is Philip's own gloss, and it runs futures throughout: Cujusmodi honor cum digne filio deferetur, ipsi quoque Virgini reverentia debita non tolletur, eritque in oculis recte quaerentium non despecta (0475B). So the plate's exposition carries the plate's lemma — the opposite of the 0434D case (cruces-0102 §1.2), where the gloss carried the Vulgate and the lemma did not. ⚠ The English says "and now no man SHALL despise me" and is meant to. - 0475B, the deosculari gloss — a translation decision, logged because a later reader will want the reason. Philip glosses the lemma's compound verb explicitly: Nec tamen osculari Virgo, sed deosculari potius vult inventum, verbique compositio nihil minus innuit, sed augmentum. Under the Song ruling's case 2 (a gloss depends on the word) the two verbs must be distinguishable in English, so osculari = "to kiss" and deosculari = "to kiss thoroughly", carried consistently through the lemma and all four of the chapter's occurrences. Douay's flat "kiss thee" would make the sentence verbique compositio… augmentum explain nothing.
- 0475C Cant. 8:2a — DIVERGENT,
[var:]FIRED, §1.1. - 0476A Cant. 8:2 re-quoted Ibi, ait, me docebis. — agrees word for word.
- 0476B Cant. 8:2b Et dabo tibi poculum ex vino condito: et mustum malorum granatorum meorum. — agrees word for word (the colon is Migne's punctuation).
- 0476C Cant. 8:2b re-quoted Et mustum malorum granatorum. — truncated before meorum, deliberately: Philip picks the dropped word up as his next subject, Meorum vero forte ideo Virgo dicit (0476D). Not a divergence. ⚑ Meorum there is not** italicised on the plate, so the English marks it with our own straight quotes ("my own"), Pattern 6.
- 0477B Cant. 8:3 Laeva ejus sub capite meo, et dextera ejus amplexabitur me. — Vulg. …et dextera illius amplexabitur me. Pronoun only; sense untouched, below Pattern 14's threshold. Logged, no marker. ⭐ But grep the work and it becomes a real datum: the same clause is printed at Cant. 2:6 in chunks 0045 (lemma + two re-quotations) and 0048 (a guillemeted proof-text), and all four of those printings read dextera illius. Migne prints illius four times and ejus twice, and the two ejus are both here. A plate singleton, not a copy-text shape — the opposite verdict from §1.1, and recorded so the merge can see the test was applied and came back negative. ⚑ The 0048/0121 pair is also another instance of §7c's control shape: same clause, guillemeted pre-seam, italic here.
- 0477D Cant. 8:4 Adjuro vos, filiae Hierusalem, ne suscitetis, neque evigilare faciatis dilectam, donec ipsa velit. — agrees word for word (Hierusalem for Ierusalem is orthographic, Pattern 9).
- 0478B Cant. 8:5a Quae est ista quae ascendit de deserto deliciis affluens, innixa super Dilectum suum? — agrees word for word. The capital on Dilectum is Migne's and is mirrored.
- 0479C Cant. 8:5b Sub arbore malo suscitavi te: ibi corrupta est mater tua, ibi violata est genitrix tua. — agrees word for word.
- 0480B Cant. 8:5b re-quoted Ibi corrupta est mater tua, — agrees.
- 0480C Cant. 8:6a Pone me ut signaculum super cor tuum, ut signaculum super brachium tuum, quia fortis est ut mors dilectio, dura sicut inferus aemulatio. — Vulg. dura sicut infernus aemulatio. Logged, no marker: inferus and infernus are the same noun in two attested forms and the sense is identical, which is below Pattern 14's threshold; and Philip glosses with the same form he was given (sicut inferus, cum in quosque miseros gaudet durius desaevire, 0481B), so nothing in the argument moves. ⚑ Grepped work-wide: inferus occurs in chunk 0122 only (twice, lemma and gloss), so there is no competing printing anywhere to make it a shape.
- 0481C Cant. 8:6b–7 Lampades ejus, lampades ignis, atque flammarum; aquae multae non poterunt exstinguere charitatem, neque flumina obruent illam. — Vulg. …aquae multae non potuerunt extinguere caritatem, nec flumina obruent illam. DIVERGENT ×2,
[var:]FIRED. nec → neque is nothing; the tense is the marker's assertion. ⛔ This is the range's clearest 7a″ trap and I flag how close it came: the remembered English of this verse is "many waters cannot quench charity," which is what Douay makes of the perfect, and it fits Philip's present-tense gloss (non exstinguit aquarum multitudo) perfectly well. The English reads "shall not be able to quench," because that is the tense on the page. - 0482B Cant. 8:7b Si dederit homo omnem substantiam domus suae pro dilectione, quasi nihil despiciet eam. — agrees word for word.
- 0482D Cant. 8:7b re-quoted domus suae — agrees; italicised as a phrase under discussion, with addit Scriptura facere mentionem (Pattern 3, and the bare form — see §3c).
- 0483A Cant. 8:8 Soror nostra parvula est, et ubera non habet. Quid faciemus sorori nostrae in die quando alloquenda est? — Vulg. Soror nostra parva, et ubera non habet (no copula). Logged, no marker: parvula is an attested variant and a diminutive of the same word; sense untouched, below Pattern 14. ⚠ But recorded, because the internal evidence points the other way from §1.1's: Philip's own re-quotation nine lines later reads Adhuc ergo parva est, the Vulgate word (0483C), while the lemma has the diminutive. That is cruces-0102 §1.2's shape exactly — lemma diverges, exposition reverts — occurring here at sub-threshold size. Two instances of that shape now stand in the work; a third would be a class. ⚑ Philip does use the diminutive elsewhere in the same chapter (dum aetas est parvula, laborans parvitate), so he is not avoiding it.
- 0484C Cant. 8:9 Si murus est, aedificemus super eum propugnacula argentea. Si ostium est, conpingamus illud tabulis cedrinis. — agrees word for word; conpingamus for compingamus is an unassimilated orthography, Pattern 9, and ⚑ Migne prints the assimilated form himself eight lines later in the gloss (cedrinis illud tabulis compingamus, 0485A), which is why it looks like a defect at first sight and is not one.
- 0485B Cant. 8:10 Ego murus, et ubera mea sicut turris, ex quo facta sum coram eo, quasi pacem reperiens. — agrees word for word.
- 0485D Cant. 8:11 Vinea fuit pacifico, in ea quae habet populos. Tradidit eam custodibus, vir affert pro fructu ejus mille argenteos. — agrees word for word (Migne's comma after pacifico is punctuation only).
- 0486C Cant. 8:12 — DIVERGENT,
[var:]FIRED, §1.2. - 0487A Cant. 8:13 Quae habitas in hortis, amici auscultant, fac me audire vocem tuam. — agrees word for word.
- 0487C Cant. 8:14 Fuge, dilecte mi, assimilare capreae, hinnuloque cervorum super montes aromatum. — Vulg. Fuge, dilecte mi, et assimilare capreae… The connective et is dropped. Logged, no marker — a bare connective is below Pattern 14's threshold and the imperative construes without it. ⛔ But it is carried into the English, which reads "Flee, my beloved, be like to the roe" with no "and" — this is the §8a deletion discipline applied to my own prose, and "and be like" is precisely what the hand wants to type. ⚑ No control available: grepped work-wide, assimilare occurs only here; Cant. 2:17's parallel is printed similis esto dilecte mi capreae at 0062, a different verb.
- 0487D Cant. 8:14 re-quoted Fuge, ait, mi dilecte, — the vocative is reversed against the lemma printed six lines above (dilecte mi) and against the Vulgate. ⚑ Migne's own inconsistency inside one chapter, and at sub-threshold size; logged, no marker. Recorded because it is the cheapest available demonstration that this plate reorders short pairs without prompting — which is the mechanism brief §6's Eccles. 9:1 finding depends on, observed here in miniature.
2c · The four [n:]-only spans — hit rate 0 of 4, and one of the four yields a new siglum shape
All four ⭐ spans were traced back to their real left edge. None is a quotation whose boundary Migne prints; none takes a marker. Listed so nobody re-opens them:
- 0481B, Num. 19:15
[n: (Num. XIX)]— quisquis eo caret signaculo, facile violatur, et vas carens operculo, immundum legis testimonio judicatur. Vulg. Num. 19:15: Vas, quod non habuerit operculum nec ligaturam desuper, immundum erit. Philip has turned the relative clause into a participle (carens for quod non habuerit), dropped the second condition, and replaced the verb with legis testimonio judicatur, his own frame. Two nouns survive. Philip's prose. Siglum correct (Num. 19:15). - 0483A, Rom. 8:18
[n: (Rom. VIII)]— ⭐⭐ the span as extracted is Philip's own prose, but the note is not idle: it points one sentence FORWARD, and the quotation it points to is printed BARE. The extraction's clause ends …homo cordatus dederit, nihil dedisse congruum arbitratur[n: (Rom. VIII)]. — that is Philip's sentence about giving the body, with nothing of Romans in it. The very next sentence is the quotation: Non sunt enim condignae passiones hujus temporis. Vulg. Rom. 8:18: Existimo enim quod non sunt condignae passiones huius temporis ad futuram gloriam quae revelabitur in nobis. Six words verbatim, truncated before ad futuram gloriam; the enim is the Vulgate's own, stranded when Existimo… quod was dropped. No guillemets, no italics — and the note, which is the only mark it has, stands before it, closing the previous sentence. ⭐ This is a new shape for brief §8b's list, and it is a positional error, not a naming one. The siglum is correct; what is wrong is where it sits. §8b records "off by exactly one chapter" and "note cites one book, the words are another book's"; this is "note is correct and stands one sentence early," which no chapter-checking pass would ever catch, because nothing about the reference is false. Reproduced verbatim in place (§10.2); no marker on the quotation, per §8a — its boundary is unprintable. ⚑ Cheap to sweep: the shape is "a[n:]whose host sentence contains no quoted words." - 0488B, Apoc. 14:4
[n: (Apoc. XIV)]— Tene ergo manum dexteram meam, et me deduc in tua voluntate, sequar Agnum quocunque ierit[n: (Apoc. XIV)], nulla claudicans tarditate. Vulg. Apoc. 14:4: hi sequuntur Agnum quocumque ierit. Three words verbatim, the verb recast from third plural to first singular so that the Virgin can say it of herself. Siglum correct. Philip's prose, no marker — but ⭐ the sentence is a weave of two texts and Migne notes only the second. Its opening clause is Ps. 72:23–24: tenuisti manum dexteram meam, et in voluntate tua deduxisti me, verbatim but for the tense. The Psalm carries no note and no marks at all and would have reached nobody without the prose pass. Recorded beside cruces-0102 §2e.2's Heb. 1:3 / Wisd. 7:26 case as a second instance of "note correct but partial" — NOT counted as an error, per §8b's revised warning. - 0489A, Eccles. 9:1
[n: (Eccle. IX)]— §1.3. Philip's prose by the same test (nescit homo → nesciens, agreeing with his own tuus… serviens), siglum correct, no marker, and the reversed pair recorded in full above.
Reported per brief §8a even though it is a null result. 0/4 here, against 0/5 for 0102–0107, 0/6 for 0084–0089, 1/12 for 0060–0065, 0/20 for 0042–0047, 0/38 for 0048–0053, 0/19 for 0018–0023 and 1/14 for 0024–0029. The class's running rate across the eight ranges that have reported it is now 2 of 118. ⚠ And the 0483A entry is why the null should not be read as "the class is empty": the span was correctly classed as prose, and the real quotation was sitting one sentence away from it, unlisted in any class whatever.
2d · Migne's sigla — five checked, five right
Reproduced verbatim, none corrected (§10.2). No Ibid. occurs anywhere in the range, so §10.2's anaphora hazard does not arise.
(Luc. III)@0478B — Luke 3:6, Et videbit omnis caro Salutare Dei, verbatim (see §2e.1). Correct.(Num. XIX)@0481B — Num. 19:15. Correct.(Rom. VIII)@0483A — Rom. 8:18. Correct as to book and chapter; one sentence early. §2c.2.(Apoc. XIV)@0488B — Apoc. 14:4. Correct (and partial — §2c.3).(Eccle. IX)@0489A — Eccles. 9:1. Correct.
Plus the two internal self-references at 0477D and 0479B, both correct — §1.5. Seven references checked in this range and seven are sound, which is worth stating plainly beside cruces-0102's wrong one.
2e · Weaves the extractor could NOT list — some three dozen found on the mandatory prose pass
These carry no guillemets, no italics and no [n:], so they appear in the extraction in no class whatever. None takes a marker (brief §8a). The first five are the ones the merge should see; the first three are not Bible verses at all, or not only.
- ⭐⭐ 0478D — OVID's Astraea, and 0483C — Venus and Cupido. §1.4.
- ⭐⭐ 0487D — TERENCE, italic, unattributed, in the medieval proverb-form. §1.4.
- ⭐ 0488B–0488D — the ASSUMPTION argument, where Philip appeals to AUGUSTINE by name and Migne supplies no note at all. quia etsi hoc Scriptura canonica non clamat evidentibus documentis, ad hoc tamen pia fides adducitur verisimilibus argumentis, quod… illud tamen dignum credi noster ille asserit Augustinus. A Father named as the authority for the bodily assumption, nothing quoted, no
[n:], in the theologically weightiest sentence of the work's last chapter. ⚑ Recorded because brief §7b disposed of "Migne declines to mark pagans" by producing an unmarked Father; this is a second unmarked Father, and here the appeal is by name and doctrinally load-bearing. No marker — nothing is quoted, so there is nothing for one to attach to. - ⭐ 0488A — Ps. 72:23–24, inside the noted Apoc. 14:4 sentence. §2c.3.
- ⭐ 0477D — Matt. 28:19, three words verbatim, opening the Bridegroom's adjuration and printed bare. Vos, ait, apostoli, vos doctores ecclesiastici ite, docete omnes gentes. Vulg. euntes ergo docete omnes gentes; Philip has made the participle an imperative to match his own ite, and the three following words are exact. Unmarked, unnoted, and it is the hinge on which the whole chapter's reading of Adjuro vos as an address to the apostles turns. No marker.
The remaining, checked for silent conformation and left as Philip's own prose (none marked, none conformed):
0120 — Isa. 45:15 (qui Deus absconditus prophetico vaticinio praedicaris, 0475A — Vulg. Vere tu es Deus absconditus; two words, recast into a relative clause) · 1 Cor. 1:23 (nec Judaeorum scandalo, nec stultitia gentium ferietur, 0475C — Vulg. Iudaeis quidem scandalum, gentibus autem stultitiam; both nouns kept, both cases changed, and it sits eight words from mira matris integritas) · Luke 2:7 / general infancy language (parvulorum alimoniam… cibo, potu, veste, somno, 0475A). 0121 — ⭐ Cant. 2:5 (cum stipari malis virgo postulat, fulciri floribus se languentem, 0477B — Vulg. Fulcite me floribus, stipate me malis, quia amore langueo; this is the Song quoting itself as a cross-reference, recast into indirect discourse, and Philip names it as an earlier exposition rather than quoting it) · Cant. 3:6 and Cant. 6:9, both recast as the angels' first and second questions at 0479B–0479C (instar virgulae… universo pulveri pigmentarii; similis est aurorae… castrorum est comparabilis aciei) — see §1.5 · Gen. 3:18 (urticis, spinis, tribulis pleniorem, 0478D). 0122 — Rom. 8:22 (languet omnis et ingemit creatura, 0479D — Vulg. omnis creatura ingemiscit) · Gen. 3:6 (pomum vetitum male continens appetivit, esuque illicito virum male uxorium irretivit, 0479D — narrated, no phrase reproduced) · Isa. 6:2 / 6:6 (seraphin ardentibus interno se desiderio configurat, 0481D) · ⭐ Rom. 8:35 (non denique flumina, non majorum inundatio pressurarum, non fames, non gladius obruent, 0482A — Vulg. tribulatio? an angustia?… an fames?… an gladius?; the two decisive nouns kept, the interrogative frame replaced by Philip's non… non, and it is adjacent to the Cant. 8:7 lemma it is adduced to reinforce) · 1 Cor. 13 generally (charitati recte quidquam perfunctorium non confertur, 0482A). 0123 — ⭐ 2 Cor. 5:2–4 (cum Paulus quoque optet supervestiri potius quam nudari, 0482D — Vulg. habitationem nostram… supervestiri cupientes… nolumus expoliari, sed supervestiri; the distinctive verb survives, nudari replaces expoliari, and Paul is named) · ⭐ John 21:15–18 (et Petrum ter amantem ab ista lege carnis amor penitus non reduxit, sed Christo praedicente, quo non vellet, alius illum duxit, 0482D — Vulg. alius te cinget, et ducet quo tu non vis; the ter is v. 17's threefold questioning) · Heb. 1:1 (superius cum ea, vel de ea, multifariam modisque plurimis est locutus, 0484A — Vulg. Multifariam multisque modis; the rare adverb is kept and the second half loosened, in a sentence about how the Bridegroom has spoken) · Matt. 25:1–13 (Non sunt aptae nuptiis virgines, 0483D — the theme, no phrase) · 1 Cor. 13:12 (quaerentis facies datur quaesiti faciem invenire, 0484B). 0124 — ⭐ Eph. 4:5 (unus Dominus, una fides copulat et constringit, 0484C — Vulg. Unus Dominus, una fides, unum baptisma; *four words verbatim, bare and unnoted, carrying the definition of Jerusalem) · Ps. 18:5 / Rom. 10:18 (sed et in omnem terram sonus exierit, et audita praedicatio sit eorum, 0486A — Vulg. In omnem terram exivit sonus eorum, et in fines orbis terrae verba eorum; praedicatio for verba is Philip's) · Ezek. 44:2 (ipsa omni clausa viro, soli Deo fidei clavicula reseratur, 0485A — Vulg. Porta haec clausa erit… et vir non transibit per eam) · Luke 1:35 (Ex quo enim ad concipiendum sanctus ei Spiritus obumbravit, 0485C — Vulg. Spiritus sanctus superveniet in te… obumbrabit tibi) · 1 Pet. 2:5 (congeriem vivorum lapidum charitate ligante media, 0485B) · Isa. 5:7 / Rom. 9:29 (vinea Domini Sabaoth profectum habuit efficacem, 0485D — Isaiah's vineyard with the Sabaoth of Romans/James, where Isa. 5:7 has Domini exercituum) · Acts 13:46 (ad gentes asserit se converti, 0486A) · Acts 4:35 and Phil. 3:8 in one clause (ad pedes apostolicos afferens, projicit, et habet vice stercoris in contemptu, 0486B) · Wisd. 11:21 (affert illud sine pondere, numero vel mensura, 0486B — Vulg. in mensura, et numero, et pondere, the triad reordered) · John 8:12 (non ambulat in tenebris, sed est in lumine coram ipso, 0486C) · Matt. 19:29 / 13:8 (pro cujus centenario, 0486A) · ⚑ arrectis auribus (0486C) is Virgil, Aen. ii.1 in origin but is proverbial by the twelfth century; recorded as a weak candidate only, and not counted with §1.4's three. 0125 — Apoc. 14:4 and Ps. 72:23–24 (0488B — §2c.3) · Ps. 109:1 / Heb. 1:3 (tene sedem in Patris dextera… qui sumptam carnem ad Patris dexteram collocavit, 0488B, 0488C — and note Philip's own hesitation about the anthropomorphism, quidquid illud vere est quod Scriptura dexteram appellavit) · Ps. 90:13 / Gen. 3:15 (vel me prorsus non mordebit, vel morsu non nocebit coluber venenatus**, 0490A) · Ps. 44:10 (in gremio… in coelesti solio, 0488D) · 1 Pet. 5:8 (occursu malignantium*, 0489B).
2f · Brief §8c and §6 — what this range does and does not witness
⚠ Recording what I actually saw, per §8c's warning, not that I "met the verse."
- ⭐ Eccles. 9:1 DOES occur, at 0489A, and it is the seventh and last printing: nesciens utrum dignus odio vel amore. The pair is REVERSED. Full evidence and the three-shape table at §1.3.**
- Cant. 1:12 does NOT occur in this range, in either half. No evidence either way on Cum/Dum.
- Cant. 2:17 (Bethel / Bether) does not occur. Montes aromatum occurs at 0487C, but as Cant. 8:14, a different verse, and it agrees with the Vulgate there.
- Zech. 4:14 does not occur. Gen. 3:19 does not occur. Cant. 5:9 does not occur. Cant. 5:7 (vigiles / custodes) does not occur. ⚑ Custodes is printed at 0485D, but as Cant. 8:11's Tradidit eam custodibus, which agrees with the Vulgate and bears on §6's sixth candidate not at all.
- ⭐ What the range ADDS to §6's class is §1.1's Cant. 8:2 — an addition, with a versional witness, expounded six times over five chapters. It is the only member of the class so far whose divergence has a named non-Vulgate source rather than only an internal argument.
§3 · TYPOGRAPHY
3a · Guillemets — none, and the run holds to the last column
0 « and 0 » in all six chunks, matching the Latin twins exactly. Pattern 6's parity check passes trivially; every quotation mark on the English pages of this range is ours (" "), and there are only two of those (0476D's "my own", 0484A's "to speak to", both words-as-words). Every proof-text in the range is carried by Migne's italics or by nothing at all.
⭐ This closes brief §7c's measurement at the end of the work. The last guillemet in 11632 stands at 0417A (chunk 0096); from there to 0490B — 73 columns, 30 chunks, 88 notes — there is not one. My six chunks are the last of that run and they confirm it to the final page, including through the work's climax (the assumption argument at 0488B–D), its peroration, and the Terence quotation at 0487D, which is the sort of adduced authority the pre-seam plate would have guillemeted.
3b · §7a mirroring — the drift point — held word by word, and verified by ordered script diff
Migne's mixed case runs through this range and none of it was regularized. Diffed mechanically against the Latin twins after drafting, as an ordered positional comparison, not by eye. All six match.
- Spouse-words, LA → EN, in order: 0120
SponsiSponsumsponsumSponsoSponsi→ C C l C C ✓ · 0121 twelve lower-case, thenSponsumSponsum→ l×12 C C ✓ (sponsalium → "espousals", carrying no spouse-word in English) · 0122sponsaeSponsusSponsumsponsaeSponsumsponsum→ l C C l C l ✓ · 0123 C C C l (sponsalium) l l ✓ · 0124SponsusSponsumsponsumSponsus→ C C l C ✓ · 0125sponsamthen six capitals → l C C C C C C ✓. - ⭐ 0121 is this range's specimen and it is the starkest in the work so far: twelve consecutive lower-case spouse-words (0477B–0478D) followed immediately by two capitals (
Sponsumat 0478C and 0479C), with no change of subject — the angels are contemplating the same person throughout. The English mirrors all fourteen. ⛔ This is the paragraph where assimilation would have happened (cruces-0102 §3b′ records that failure mode exactly), and it is the reason the diff was run as a script rather than as a reading. - ⚑ 0122 alternates inside one argument: mater sponsae (l) → ubi Sponsus Virginem (C) → ibi mater Sponsum occidi postulans (C) → fides sponsae (l) → verum Sponsum abnegans (C) → audit sponsum dicentem (l). Six words, four changes of case, one sentence apart. Mirrored.
- Virgo / virgo: 0120 C C C C C C C l C l (the two lower-case are in cubiculum virgo sollicita, 0476A, and poculum virgo diligit propinare, 0476D) · 0121 l l C C C l l C · 0122 C C C C C C l C · 0123 C C C C C C l C · 0124 C C C C l l C C C C C l · 0125 C C l C C. All mirrored 1:1 in order.
- ⚠ The one place English orthography would have overridden the plate, and how it was handled. 0483D prints Non sunt aptae nuptiis virgines, lower-case mid-sentence. The natural English ("Virgins are not fit for nuptials…") puts the word sentence-initial, where English must capitalize it and the plate's signal is silently lost. The clause was recast to front the predicate — "Not fit for nuptials are virgins, while they are yet in childhood…" — which keeps the non, keeps the word lower-case, and keeps the word order's emphasis. Recorded because it is a mirroring hazard with no lexical trace: nothing in the English would have looked wrong, and the ordered diff is what found it.
- Spiritus runs BOTH cases in this range and is mirrored per instance: eight occurrences, three capital and five lower-case. Capital: Spiritus angelici (0478B), sanctus ei Spiritus obumbravit (0485C), Ex quo operante Spiritu (0485D). Lower-case: ferventes spiritu (0476D), fervore spiritus (0477C), corrupto vigore spiritus (0478D), unanimo spiritu sic addici (0486A), non solum spiritu (0488C). ⚑ *The division is NOT divine-vs-human, which is the tidy hypothesis and is false here: ferventes spiritu at 0476D and unanimo spiritu at 0486A are both the Holy Spirit and both lower-case, while operante Spiritu at 0485D is the same referent capitalized eleven lines later. Mirrored per instance, per brief §7a; no rule inferred and none applied. ⚑ The Spiritus sanctus / sancti Spiritus order does not arise — Philip writes sanctus ei Spiritus*, splitting the pair around the pronoun, so brief §7a's worked example has no instance here.
- Heads:
CAPUT XXXIII.→CAPUT L.continuously, every one in numerals and every one carrying the full stop, matching cruces-0102's range and contrasting cruces-0048's stop-less pair. NoLIBERhead falls in this range — Book VI opened at 0107/0108 — and the work ends with noEXPLICITand no closing rubric of any kind: chunk 0125's last chapter simply stops and the Gallemart approbation follows. See §3e.
3c · Pattern 3 — fires three times, and all three are the bare form brief §5 flags
- 0482D et ob hoc domus suae addit Scriptura facere mentionem → "and for this cause Scripture addeth to make mention of his house" — the canon in the singular with no adjective.
- 0488C quidquid illud vere est quod Scriptura dexteram appellavit → "whatsoever that truly is which Scripture hath called the right hand" — same bare form.
- 0488D etsi hoc Scriptura canonica non clamat evidentibus documentis → "although canonical Scripture crieth not this out with evident proofs".
⚑ No divina Scriptura, no sacra Scriptura and no plural Scripturae occurs anywhere in the range, so every instance here is of the bare type — the exact form 11638's sweep missed, and the third range in a row to report it. ⚠ 0488D's Scriptura canonica is a fourth shape (adjective present, but not divina or sacra), and it is doing real work: it is the concession on which the whole assumption argument turns.
3d · Pattern 17 — the range gives the merge the work's closing pair, and it is decided by morphology alone
Counted by script against the Latin, after drafting. Latin second persons ‖ English archaisms:
| chunk | LA sing. (tu/te/tuus) | LA plur. (vos/vester) | EN thou-family | EN you-family |
|---|---|---|---|---|
| 0120 | 24 | 0 | 46 | 0 |
| 0121 | 0 | 6 | 0 | 13 |
| 0122 | 18 | 0 | 40 | 0 |
| 0123 | 0 | 0 | 0 | 0 |
| 0124 | 3 | 0 | 3 | 0 |
| 0125 | 33 | 1 | 58 | 1 |
Every English second person in the range is decided by the printed morphology and by nothing else. The distribution is unusually clean: three chapters of pure singular address (the Virgin to the Bridegroom, 0120; the Bridegroom to the Virgin, 0122 and 0125), one of pure plural (0121, the Bridegroom to the apostles and the filiae Hierusalem — Vos, ait, apostoli, vos doctores ecclesiastici… ne vestra negligentia), and one with no second person at all (0123, where the companions speak among themselves in the first person plural).
⭐⭐ The pair the merge should take is the work's last sentence, and it is a single word. Philip's whole peroration addresses the Virgin in the singular — quaeso te, Virgo sancta… Tuus quidem ego sum… Tu igitur, Virgo sancta, de manu mea suscipe parvum munus — thirty-three singular forms in one prayer. Then, in the final clause of the work, he turns:
…et ut finem ponam libro, mihi tandem a malis libero vobiscum in coelestibus gloriari. (0490B)
vobiscum, plural — he has stopped addressing the Virgin and is addressing the company of heaven, or his readers. Under Pattern 17 the English shows this with no apparatus: fifty-eight thous, and then "to glory with you in the heavens." Under a flat "you" the whole prayer's intimacy is invisible; under a flat "thou" the last word is falsified and the book ends addressing one woman instead of opening out. This is Dorotheus Ep. IV's shape (Pattern 17's own worked case) occurring at the close of a Latin work, and it cost nothing to preserve.
3e · ⭐ The work's ending, and how it is printed — recorded because a merge will ask
0125 has no EXPLICIT, no closing rubric, and no colophon in Philip's voice beyond his own ut finem ponam libro. What Migne prints after it, as the last line of col. 0490B, in italics, with no heading and no [n:]:
Joannes GALLEMART S. Theol. Doctor, et catecheseos professor in Universitate Duacensi, hac 7 Febr. 1618.
This is the Douai censor's approbation of the 1621 Gallemart edition, which Migne has carried over from his copy-text. Translated, not carried — it is running prose (a title, an office, a place, a date), not a citation, so Pattern 15's [n:]/[nt:] boundary does not arise and the register rule on untranslatable technical Latin does not either. The surname keeps Migne's capitals and the date keeps his abbreviated shape: "John GALLEMART, Doctor of Sacred Theology, and professor of catechesis in the University of Douai, this 7 Feb. 1618." ⚑ Flagged for the merge as a judgment, not a certainty — an argument could be made for carrying it verbatim as apparatus. It is one line and reversible.
3f · Marginal source-edition numbers
277 (0476A) · 278 (0477C) · 279 (0479B) · 280 (0480D) · 281 (0482B) · 282 (0483D) · 283 (0485B) · 284 (0486D) · 285 (0488C). Continuous with cruces-0102's 250–257 (which ended at 0444B), so chunks 0108–0119 carry 258–276, and 285 is the last one in the work. Each kept italic and verbatim at the exact word it interrupts, with the English clause built around it rather than moving it: 277 falls between domum and matris, 278 between illorum and gloria, 279 between mulierum and comparetur, 280 between plenitudine and contineri, 281 between praepollenti and fungitur, 282 between differri? and Alloquenda, 283 between casurus and cui, 284 between duplicem and invenire, 285 between generavit and Illic. ⚠ 280's, 281's and 284's slots forced "wherein my love seemeth in a large fulness 280 to be contained", "useth a prevailing 281 reason" and "deserve to find a double 284 peace"; all three are more contorted than I would otherwise write, and all three are deliberate.
3g · ⚑ An anchor observation NOT reported as a defect (brief §10.1)
Chunk 0125 runs …pressuris durioribus [0490A] intermisi… — so the column sequence in that chunk reads 0489A, 0489B, 0490A, 0490B, with no 0489C or 0489D.
I am recording this and NOT reporting it. Brief §10.1 names exactly this as the phantom-gap class (49 examined corpus-wide, none real) and states that the only real signal is text broken mid-word or mid-construction across an anchor. There is none: opusque inchoatum multoties pressuris durioribus [0490A] intermisi construes perfectly across the mark, with the verb on the far side of it and its adverb and ablatives on the near side. Two works interleaving by band in PL 203 would produce this shape exactly. No [ed:], no patch, no plate check. Noted only so a later reader can see the check was made rather than skipped.
§4 · PATTERN 7 / 8 / 9 / 10 — two [sic:], and the rest rendered as printed
Conjectures live here and NOT in the text.
- ⛔⛔ 0477B, nilaresco —
[sic:]FIRED, and it is the range's clearest non-word. In illius fructu rei, et in hujus umbra spei jam suaviter delitesco, multum de praesentibus, de futuris amplius nilaresco, quod nimirum ideo vobis assistentibus innotesco, ut et ipsum diligatis, cujus tantis muneribus jam ditesco. There is no Latin verb nilaresco. Read hilaresco, "I grow glad" — near-certain, on three grounds: the rhyme is a four-member -esco chain and hilaresco completes it; the degree adverbs multum… amplius require a verb that admits degree; and the sentence is about joy in present and future goods. ⚠ The tempting alternative is split type (Pattern 10), reading nil aresco, "I wither not at all" — and it is wrong, because nil would contradict multum in the same clause and leave amplius governing nothing. Carried into the English untranslated, in italics, inside[sic:](Pattern 12's operational test: the word on the page is Migne's, not ours), and the English reads "…more largely from things to come, do I [sic: nilaresco]". It is meant to read strangely. - ⛔ 0481B, incibile —
[sic:]FIRED; Migne's own conjecture bracket reproduced beside it. §1.6. The judgment that[ f. …]is a conjecture rather than a flag of defective type — and therefore does not trigger §10.5's "do not stack ours on his" — is the one call in this range I would most welcome a second opinion on. - ⛔⛔ 0487C, non arescunt — NOT emended, and the sentence says the opposite of what its own antithesis requires. Migne prints: Apud te amor vane praetereuntium et timor supervenientium non arescunt, sed fides, spes, dilectio, tanquam horti rore florido dilucescunt. Read ardescunt, "do not blaze up" — probable: the sed demands that the first pair be suppressed and the second pair flourish, and as printed both halves are affirmations of vitality, so the sed has nothing to turn on. Philip uses the verb eleven lines later in his own voice — eum quem sic amat, videre citius inardescit (0487D) — and ardesco/inardesco is one of this book's habitual words. ⚠ But aresco is a real Latin word, so Pattern 12's own boundary clause keeps it on the English side: rendered "do not wither," with the non carried, exactly as printed. ⛔ This is the most repairable sentence in the range, and repairing it would be a silent repair of the purest kind — one letter, a smoother sentence, and no trace. Not emended.
- 0481D, sed et proximus diligenter perpendentibus appareat non deesse. Nominative proximus where the dative proximo is required by deesse (whose other complement, sibi, is correctly dative in the same clause). Read proximo, near-certain. ⚠ A case slip does have an English exponent in principle, but not here: English "to itself… the neighbour also" carries no case marking either. Rendered as closely as the printed words allow — "that it may appear… to be wanting not only to itself, but the neighbour also" — and logged rather than repaired.
- 0475B, et illud deosculari, ut quibusdam visum est, affirmamur. Passive affirmamur, "we are affirmed," where the active affirmamus would construe cleanly with the accusative-and-infinitive. Read affirmamus, probable. A real word in a real form; rendered literally — "and we are affirmed thoroughly to kiss, as it hath seemed to some" — and meant to read flat. Not emended.
- 0488D, si humanam carnem vident supra se in matre et Filio gloriosus honorari. Adjective where the comparative adverb gloriosius is expected — and the parallel clause four words later has the comparative (illic felicius nuptias consummari), which is what makes it visible. Rendered "gloriously honoured", at the positive degree Migne prints, not the comparative the parallel wants. Pattern 9 / Pattern 7; logged, no marker.
- 0487C, rejecto carnis pallio meam dilecti faciem praesentialiter salutare. A first-person possessive and a genitive stacked on one noun, in the Bridegroom's mouth about his own face. Rendered as printed — "to greet in presence my face, the face of thy beloved" — with the supplied "the face of" doing only what English apposition requires. Logged.
- 0480B, Si vero sub arbore crucis mater sponsae creditur violata Judaea mater ejus recte intelligitur appellata. The plate prints no punctuation at the clause boundary after violata, so violata Judaea reads for a moment as a phrase. Pattern 8: nothing supplied and nothing deleted — but English requires a comma somewhere in a clause this long and the English comma is ours, so this defect has no English exponent and is logged only. ⚑ Recorded because it is the inverse of the missing/supernumerary full stops cruces-0102 §4 catalogued at 0435C and 0441A: same class, sub-sentence scale.
- 0475D, Absit enim ut desim diligentibus, ut despiciam non despecta. Feminine despecta agreeing with the Virgin as speaker, inside a clause whose verb is first-person. No English exponent for the gender (Pattern 9); rendered "that I, who am not despised, should despise" and logged so a later sweep does not churn it.
- 0474D diluscescit · 0483C puerascunt · 0482B praepollenti · 0483A gunfis. All attested medieval forms, Pattern 9 exempt: diluscescit is a double-inchoative beside dilucescit; puerasco and praepolleo are standard medieval; gunfis is gomphus / gumphus (Gk γόμφος), "bolt, pin," a well-attested medieval loan — rendered "clamps", not carried. Translated normally, no italics, no marker.
- 0478D, quam Astraea deservit. deservit is ambiguous between deserere ("forsook", perfect deseruit) and deservire ("served"). Ovid's Astraea reliquit settles it: rendered "forsook", and the following in astra se revehens confirms the departure. Logged because the form as printed is the one that means "serves", and the reading is decided by the source, not the morphology.
Negation audit (brief §9), second pass, against the Latin. Every printed non / nec / neque / nisi / nihil / nil / nullus / nunquam / nondum / necdum / nequaquam / nullatenus / ne / nesciens in the six Latin chunks was extracted by script after the prose was drafted and matched one by one against the English. Latin totals: 0120 29 · 0121 27 · 0122 54 · 0123 41 · 0124 28 · 0125 30 — 209 in all, every one carried.
The dense clusters, all checked word by word:
- 0480D–0481A — nulli quidem versutiae, nulli subjacet laesioni, quia quod ars subtilior, non recens excogitat, manus eruditior non compingit, non reserat versutia, violentia non confringit → six negations, six in the English ("to no craft, to no hurt… doth not newly devise, nor… fasten together, craft doth not unbar, violence doth not break").
- 0481B — duram ejus saevitiam non labor, non miserorum potest gemitus emollire… non vult a proposito, nec prece, nec pretio, nec mollitie revocari → "neither labour nor the groaning of the wretched can soften… willeth not to be called back from her purpose, neither by prayer, nor by price, nor by softness."
- 0482A — quem… non exstinguit aquarum multitudo, non minis, non blanditiis cedit amans… non denique flumina, non majorum inundatio pressurarum, non fames, non gladius obruent → seven printed negations, seven English ones, and the run is deliberately not smoothed into "neither… nor… nor" ("quencheth not; …yieldeth not to threats, not to blandishments; nor at last shall floods, nor… nor famine, nor the sword").
- 0483C–0483D — necdum satis est sufficiens, nec adulta… non perducta… ubera non habere… non carere… necdum plenam… dicimur non habere… nondum satis praevalent… Non sunt aptae… non turgescunt… non differri → eleven, all carried.
- 0477C — the double negative non potest de talibus… non laetari, rendered "she cannot but rejoice over such things," which carries both.
- 0487B — ego adhuc differo, nec induci suffero, rendered "and suffer them not to be led on"; the object "them" is supplied and is the only supplied word in the clause.
- 0490A — vel me prorsus non mordebit, vel morsu non nocebit coluber venenatus → "either the venomous serpent shall not bite me at all, or by his biting he shall not hurt me."
⛔ And run against my OWN English, per brief §8's warning, which is where the real risks were. Four places where the familiar wording had to be actively declined, all caught on the separate pass and all now correct on disk:
- Cant. 8:7 @0481C — "many waters cannot quench charity" (the received English) → "shall not be able to quench," rendering Migne's future poterunt. The collation had already recorded the tense; the sentence had not. This is the exact failure the brief's Eph. 5:29 case describes.
- Cant. 8:14 @0487C — "and be like to the roe" → "be like to the roe," because Migne drops the Vulgate's et. An added connective, invisible.
- Cant. 8:12 @0486C — "and two hundred for them that keep" → "and two hundred they that keep," because Migne drops his. §1.2.
- Cant. 8:1 @0474D — "and now let no man despise me" → "and now no man shall despise me," because Migne prints the future indicative. §2b.1.
All four are restorations of Vulgate wording I had already written into the collation as divergent. Recording the divergence and carrying it into the sentence are two separate acts, and in this range they came apart four times.