MIGNE.APP

Cruces

Expositio in Cantica canticorum

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These are the edition's working notes, published as they were written. They record, work by work, where Migne's plate is defective or the reading uncertain: the printed form, what the English does with it, and why. They are not a groomed apparatus. Where a note argues with itself, withdraws an earlier decision, or leaves a question open, that is the record of how the reading was actually reached, and it is left standing — a conjecture that is visible can be checked, and one that has been tidied away cannot.

The English never silently repairs the page. A construable but wrong reading is rendered literally and the conjecture is recorded here, never applied to the text. How the English is produced and checked →

Merged 2026-07-30 from four agent batches (0000–0006 · 0007–0012 · 0013–0017 · 0018–0022). 23 chunks, 27,638 Latin words, 229 notes. verify-english OK. First English translationworkStatus: none, verified at triage.

The Song of Songs rule, and how it governed this work

Wilson's ruling, 2026-07-30: each commentary stands on its own; a lemma is never harmonized with another commentary. Sixteen PL commentaries expound this book, and imposing one English across them would be editorializing Migne. So every choice below was derived from THIS plate. Where the result differs from another Song commentary on the site, that is correct and must not be swept.

The rule's second case — "where a gloss depends on the word, the Latin stands" — did most of the work here, and the agents applied it four times to words nobody pre-set:

⚠ Site furniture is NOT a lemma. Vers. N. was unified to "Verse N." across the work (Migne prints the abbreviation uniformly; the English was split 76/40). That is apparatus, like the project's existing CAPUTCHAPTER, and site-wide consistency there is right. The ruling governs the words of Scripture, not the furniture around them — do not read this sweep as licence to harmonize a lemma.

Work-wide conventions (reconciled at merge)

Rendered as printed, NOT repaired — the ones that matter

## Two [var:] — Migne's citation diverges from the received text 2 Tim 1:8 quoted as crucem Christi against the Vulgate's testimonium Domini nostri, at 1074A and 1090D, marked identically by two agents independently. Load-bearing both times: the gloss makes the pomegranate rind the mystery of the passion, so "cross" is the hinge of the argument.

## For the indexer's operator — the inline-citation class again Two citations are set by Migne as running text rather than as [n:] notes, so they reach no index: (Isai. LXVI, 2) at 1058D (with a column anchor falling inside it) and Haggai 2:24 at 1102C. Both reproduced verbatim, both deliberately NOT tagged [f:] (Pattern 4's trigger is a citing PRACTICE, not a stray instance). This class is now roughly eight corpus-wide and still has no harvester.

Per-batch logs

The four batch logs follow verbatim, in chunk order.

Auctor incertus (Cassiodorus Vivariensis?), Expositio in Cantica canticorum, PL 70, cols 1055C–1070C. Batch: chunks 0000–0006 (Monitum, Prologus, Capp. I–III.7).


Work-wide conventions (for merge reconciliation)

### The pre-set terms, as applied here

ferculum (Song 3:9) — DECISION: "litter"

ferculum does not occur in this batch (it enters at 0007, col. 1070D), but the decision is recorded here for propagation, per the batch brief.

Rendering: "litter." Reasoning, from this work's own framing and nothing else:

  1. The work does not gloss the word etymologically. It allegorizes it — Quod superius per lectulum Salomonis, sic nunc designatur per ferculum, sancta videlicet Ecclesia, in qua velut in lecto requiescunt sancti Dei, et velut in lecto discumbunt ad epulas. So Pattern-9 case 2 (gloss depends on the word) does not apply, and the Latin need not stand.
  2. The two things the exposition needs the object to do are be reclined on as a bed (velut in lecto requiescunt) and be reclined on at a banquet (discumbunt ad epulas). "Litter" — a portable couch — carries both, and carries them at once, which "palanquin" (conveyance only) and "bed" (already spent on lectus/lectulus) do not.
  3. lectulus is heavily used in this work (Song 1:15, 3:1, 3:7) and is rendered "little bed"; lectus is "bed." The exposition at 1070D turns on ferculum being the same thing under a different name as the lectulus Salomonis — so ferculum must be a word that is clearly distinct from those two and still recline-able. "Litter" is.
  4. Downstream at 3:10 the work reads media hujus ferculi constrata sunt — "the middle parts of this litter were spread/paved" — which "litter" supports without strain.

Merge note: if a later agent has already shipped a different word, this is a WITHIN-work consistency question (the boundary in translation-style.md §Song of Songs), so it must be reconciled to one term, not left to stand.

### Other terminology fixed in this batch (not pre-set)


Carried type — [sic: …] (Pattern 7 / 10 / 12)

### 1. disperi for dispersi — 0001, col. 1058C→D Printed: ad hoc enim divinitus disperi sunt, ut plures Ecclesiae fierent. disperi is not a Latin word. It stands three clauses after Migne prints dispersi sunt correctly twice in the same sentence (ubi nos legimus, dispersi sunt), which makes the conjecture dispersi effectively certain and the defect a compositor's dropped s. Carried untranslated in italics inside [sic: disperi]; the surrounding clause is rendered ("for to this end were they divinely [sic: disperi], that more Churches might be made"). No governing particle or negation is inside the marker (7a′ check: clear).

### 2. il est for id est — 0004, col. 1066A Printed: ibi nidificat, il est fetus bonorum operum congerit. il is not a Latin word; the run is a Pattern 10 division/substitution defect on the standard formula id est, which this work prints scores of times. The whole run is carried ([sic: il est]), not just il, per Pattern 10 — rendering "that is" for half of it would misrepresent the plate while looking considered. The same defect recurs at 0009; a later agent has marked it identically, so no reconciliation is needed. 7a′ check: the run is an appositive formula governing nothing; the clause it introduces (fetus bonorum operum congerit) is translated in full and loses no force.

### 3. unversi for universi — 0006, col. 1069D Printed: Et unversi (inquit) pulveris pigmentarii, id est congerie omnium virtutum. unversi is not a word; the lemma is quoted correctly as universi pulveris pigmentarii two columns earlier at 1069A, so this is a dropped i in the re-quotation, not a variant reading. Carried as [sic: unversi]; Et is a real word and stays outside the marker, translated. Note the marker sits inside an italic lemma — nested italics are not expressible, so the carried run takes the single italic pair of the marker content only. 7a′ check: the gloss id est congerie omnium virtutum renders omnium ("all"), so the universality the mangled word carries is not lost from the translated text.


Readings rendered literally, no marker (Pattern 7 / 12 boundary)

These are real words that are merely wrong or odd. Per Pattern 12 they are rendered as ordinary English — the word on our page is ours — and the conjecture lives here.

### 4. Itera for Iterat — 0006, col. 1068B Printed: Itera autem difficultatem inventionis, et dicit: quaesivi, et non inveni. Itera is a well-formed imperative ("repeat!"), but the sentence is third-person narration about the author's technique (et dicit), so Iterat ("he repeats") is near-certainly meant. Rendered as printed: "Repeat, however, the difficulty of the finding, and he says…". The English is as odd as the Latin, deliberately. Not marked — it is a real word, and marking it would blame the plate for a rendering that is ours.

### 5. Missing first nec — 0006, col. 1069B ⚠ NEGATION Printed: Quanta laude et admiratione digna, quae circumcisione mundata, nec adhuc baptismo sanctificata jam currit ad Deum? The subject is Ecclesia de gentibus — the Church of the Gentiles, which by this work's own argument was neither circumcised nor yet baptized. Sense requires nec circumcisione mundata, nec adhuc baptismo sanctificata; the printed text has only the second nec, so it asserts that she was cleansed by circumcision. Rendered exactly as printed — "who, cleansed by circumcision, and not yet sanctified by baptism, already runs to God?" The printed nec is carried; no nec is supplied. This is a Pattern 7a case of the purest kind: the smooth reading would require inventing a negation Migne does not print, and the contradiction with the surrounding argument is precisely the evidence the edition exists to expose.

### 6. labores aeternos — 0003, col. 1062B Printed: Videns sponsam suam ad requiem festinare, et labores aeternos fugere, ac per quietem praesentis temporis ad aeternam beatitudinem tendere. "Fleeing eternal labours" contradicts the sentence's own destination (ad aeternam beatitudinem tendere) and the moral that follows (per pressuras et labores hujus saeculi illuc pervenire). Conjecture: externos ("outward"), i.e. the labours of public action she is being told she cannot skip — which is exactly this chapter's theme (cf. 1065A, de secreto quietis egredere ad publicam actionem). Rendered as printed: "flee eternal labours." No emendation.

### 7. Inter omnes virtute primatum tenet charitas — 0003, col. 1063A Printed virtute (ablative singular) where virtutes ("Among all the virtues") is expected and gives the standard sentence. Rendered as printed: "Among all, charity holds the primacy in virtue." An ablative of respect is defensible Latin, so this may not be a defect at all; logged for the record, no marker.

### 8. sexcenta et sex millia — 0001, col. 1059C Printed as the number of Israelites who left Egypt, with [n: (Num. II, 32; Exod. XIV, 22)]. Num. 2:32 gives 603,550. Rendered as printed: "six hundred and six thousand." No [var: …] supplied — the divergence is in the exposition's own arithmetic, not in a quoted scripture text, so Pattern 14's trigger is not met.

### 9. qui sodales Christi sunt — 0001, col. 1059A Of the conventicula haereticorum: the plate says the heretics are companions of Christ, justified only by quia et ipsi greges suos pascunt. The looser sense ("who are called companions") is not what is printed. Rendered literally.

### 10. Aemulantur vos non bene — 0004, col. 1065D The [n: (Galat. VI, 13)] citation covers a conflation: Aemulantur vos non bene is Gal. 4:17, sed volunt vos circumcidi, ut in carne vestra glorientur is Gal. 6:13. Rendered as printed, conflation intact, with non carried ("They are zealous for you, not well"). The note stays verbatim per the marker rule; per the standing false-positive list an [n:] locator is never corrected.

### 11. (Joan., IV, 19) — 0003, col. 1063A Migne's note for Diligamus Deum, quoniam ipse prior dilexit nos, which is 1 John 4:19 (and whose Vulgate reads Nos ergo diligamus, quoniam Deus prior dilexit nos). Note reproduced verbatim; text rendered as printed. Logged only so a later reader does not read it as our slip.

### 12. (Isai. LXVI, [1059A] 2) — 0001, col. 1058D–1059A This citation is not in an [n: …] marker — Migne prints it inline, inside the italic run of the quotation, and a column anchor falls inside it. Reproduced exactly as printed, anchor included. It is therefore not counted in noteCount and will not be harvested as a note; flagged in case the indexer should pick it up by another route.

### 13. Punctuation kept as printed (Pattern 8)


Not defects — checked and deliberately left alone

Agent batch: chunks 0007–0012 (cols 1070D–1083C). Frontmatter copied verbatim from each Latin twin. All column anchors, [n:] notes, ## heads, page marks (514521) verified 1:1 against the Latin by script.


Work-wide conventions set by this batch (for merge reconciliation)

Pre-set terms observed as instructed (murenulae untranslated — does not occur in 0007–0012; dilectus/dilecta → beloved; amica/amicus → friend; sponsa → bride, sponsus → bridegroom; pulchra → beautiful; formosa → comely; speciosa → fair; nigra → black; fusca → swarthy; columba → dove). Additional choices made here:

### ferculum (Song 3:9, col. 1070D) — RULED: "litter" The prompt flagged this as the known crux. This work does not gloss ferculum etymologically; it allegorizes it: sic nunc designatur per ferculum, sancta videlicet Ecclesia, in qua velut in lecto requiescunt sancti Dei, et velut in lecto discumbunt ad epulas. The framing is therefore (a) a conveyance Solomon made of Lebanon wood, with silver pillars, a golden reclining-place and a purple ascent — one climbs up into it — and (b) a thing one rests on as on a bed and reclines on to feast. "Dish" (the commonest lexical sense of ferculum) is impossible: nothing is served on it. "Palanquin" and "portable throne" carry the conveyance but not the couch. "Litter" carries both — an English litter is a couch that is carried and ascended — and it keeps the later media hujus ferculi constrata sunt ("the midst of this litter is paved") construable. Used consistently: 0007 ×4 (the lemma, the sic nunc designatur, the media…constrata, the hujus ferculi). Since the gloss is allegorical and not etymological, keeping the Latin was not required (Song-of-Songs rule, case 2 does not fire).

### Other terminology fixed in this batch


Carried type — [sic: …] (4 instances) + supporting notes

  1. 0008 @1072B — esset for es et. Lemma prints Quam pulchra es, amica mea; quam pulchra esset decora (Song 4:1). The commentary in the very next sentence says Vox Christi bis repetit, quam pulchra es — twice, which requires a second es. This is the Pattern 10 run-together class (exactly sedet for sed et), so the whole broken token is carried untranslated and marked; it sits inside an italic lemma, so it takes no second italic marker. Conjecture: quam pulchra es et decora.
  2. 0008 @1073B — spollatione for spoliatione. Non-word; carried in italics inside plain prose. Conjecture certain from context (rerum spollatione gaudentes, paired with voluntaria paupertate).
  3. 0009 @1077C — ac for lac. Prints Sub lingua ergo Ecclesiae mel et ac est where the lemma two lines above is Mel et lac sub lingua tua and the whole gloss turns on lac ("milk is fitting for little ones"). Rendered literally the token would produce "honey and and", which renders nothing; carried and marked instead. Conjecture: lac.
  4. 0010 @1078D — metalia for metalla. Non-word; inter omnia metalia pretiosius est aurum. Carried in italics.
  5. 0012 @1081A — aromalibus for aromatibus. Non-word, inside the italic lemma Messui myrrham meam cum aromalibus meis, so no second italic marker. The commentary's own next sentences use aromata and cum aromatibus suis correctly, which fixes the conjecture.

[var: …] (1 instance)

## Scripture divergences logged but NOT marked Marked only where the sense turns on the difference (Pattern 14 is deliberately sparing). These are recorded so a later sweep can reconsider:

## Punctuation carried per Pattern 8 (no marks supplied, none deleted)

## Grammar rendered as printed, no emendation (Pattern 7)

## Attested/period spellings — translated normally, no marker (Pattern 9) Judeae (0009 @1076A) for Judaeae, beside Judaea in 0010; dulcidinem (0012 @1081A) for dulcedinem; spiritualia/spiritualis, charitas, coelestis, moerores, praelio, thymiamatis, sollicitudo, quotidie. None italicized, none marked.

## Renderings worth a merge check

## Negation audit (Pattern 7a / 7a′) Every printed non, nec, neque, nisi, nullus, nullatenus, nunquam, nihil, nemo, ne in 0007–0012 was checked into the English one by one after drafting. Two carry notes:

Auctor incertus (Cassiodorus Vivariensis?), Expositio in Cantica canticorum, PL 70. Batch: chunks 0013, 0014, 0015, 0016, 0017.


Work-wide conventions set in this batch (for merge reconciliation)

Pre-set by the session brief and followed throughout: murenulae untranslated; dilectus/dilecta = beloved; amica/amicus = friend; sponsa = bride, sponsus = bridegroom; pulchra = beautiful; formosa = comely; speciosa = fair; nigra = black; fusca = swarthy; columba = dove. Named etymologies translated with the proper name kept as printed.

Additional choices made here, none of them pre-set. These need reconciling across the other three agents' batches:

LatinEnglish usedNote
elatae palmarum (Song 5:11)elatae of palm trees — kept in italic LatinThe work glosses the word etymologically at 1085C (nam Graece abies ἐλάτη dicitur). An English word ("tall branches", "boughs") makes that sentence stop explaining anything — the same reasoning that keeps murenulae. Same treatment as the Song-rule case 2 (stylus/epistylium, ferculum).
electus / electa (of Christ, of the Church, of the cedars, of the sun)chosenSong 5:10 electus ex millibus → "chosen out of thousands"; 5:15 electus ut cedri → "chosen as the cedars"; 6:9 Electa ut sol → "Chosen as the sun". One word throughout so the lemma-chain stays visible. Not "choice", not "elect" (reserved for electi = the elect, the persons).
decora (Song 6:3, suavis et decora sicut Jerusalem)seemlyDistinct from pulchra (beautiful) and formosa (comely), both of which the work uses.
species / speciosus (Song 5:15, Species ejus ut Libani)fairness / fairKept in one family because the gloss argues from speciesspeciosiorspeciosus est forma prae filiis hominum (Ps 44:3) at 1088A. Elsewhere species = "form" (in specie hortulani, in specie colombae) or "species/kind" (speciem arboris aromaticae) — context, not one gloss word.
areola (Song 6:1, 5:13)bed (garden-bed)"beds of spices", "the bed of spice"; the gloss at 1089A (laterum parilitate exquadrata) depends on the shape, which "bed" carries.
tornatilis (5:14 manus tornatiles, 7:2 crater tornatilis)turned (on a lathe)The gloss in both places is torno facile operatur — "with the lathe we work more easily" — so the two lemmata must share the word.
distinctus (5:14 Distinctus sapphiris)distinguishedKept in the same family as Distincta est enim operatio in Christo (1087C), on which the whole two-natures argument turns.
castrorum acies ordinata (6:3, 6:9)a battle-line of the camps set in orderNot "an army in battle array": the work expounds castra, acies and ordinata separately (1089C–D, 1092B).
chori castrorum (7:1)the choirs of the campsNot "companies": the gloss is Nam chori, canentium sunt (1093B).
Vers. N.Verse N.Structural section label, normalized per Pattern 9 (the Latin twin keeps the abbreviation).
acervus testimonii (Galaad)a heap of witnessName kept as printed.
cingulum moeroris (Hesebon)a girdle of sorrow
populi mei spontaneus (Aminadab)the willing one of my people
captiva vel despecta (Sunamitis)captive or despised
sanguinis potus / sanguinis oculus (Damascus)a drink of blood / an eye of blood

No guillemets occur anywhere in chunks 0013–0017; the Latin twins have none either, so nothing was supplied (Pattern 6).


Carried type — [sic: …] (Patterns 7, 10, 12)

### 1085C — multi udines for multitudines Migne prints Comae sponsi sunt multi udines fidelium. Split type (Pattern 10); the whole broken run is carried, spacing included, and marked [sic: multi udines]. The word is certainly multitudines — the same phrase runs unbroken three lines later (quia fidelium multitudines et virore fidei gaudent), which is the internal evidence.

### 1086B — perserutantur for perscrutantur sancti doctores assidue … mysteria perserutantur. Not a word (r for c); carried untranslated per the non-word class of Pattern 7 and marked. Conjecture perscrutantur, "search out" — near-certain, and the sense of the sentence is not in doubt.

### 1086D–1087A — crant for erant Aureae enim crant, quia operatio illius divinitatis peragebatur potentia. Not a word; carried and marked. Conjecture erant ("For they were golden"), which the imperfect peragebatur in the following clause requires.

### 1087C — Crara for Crura (inside an italic lemma) The lemma of Song 5:15 is printed Crara illius columnae marmoreae; the very next sentence of the exposition prints Crura sponsi itinera sunt Salvatoris, so the plate itself supplies the correct reading. The broken run is carried inside the lemma. Per Pattern 10 it takes no second italic marker — nested italics are not expressible — so on the page it reads His [sic: Crara] are pillars of marble….

### 1092C — quaies for quales quaies erant illi quibus Apostolus dicebat. Not a word; carried and marked. Conjecture quales, "such as".

### 1094B — me cedis for mercedis pro sola dilectione et supernae me cedis exspectatione hoc facere debet. Split type (Pattern 10); the whole run including the real word me is carried, per the Ad dam rule. Conjecture mercedis, "of the [heavenly] reward" — required by exspectatione and paralleled at 1091A (intuitum supernae remunerationis).

### 1095D — aeras for aerias / aereas Significat etiam aeras potestates, quae animarum nostrarum cruorem sitiunt. Borderline case, and the judgment is recorded here because it sits on the Pattern 12 boundary. aeras is a real form (accusative plural of aera, "counters, eras"), which would normally send it to the "real word merely wrong" side and out of the marker. But in this construction it stands where an adjective agreeing with potestates must stand, and rendering it as the noun would produce English that misrepresents the sentence rather than reproducing it. Carried and marked; conjecture aerias/aereas, "the powers of the air" — the standard phrase, and the same phrase the work prints uncorrupted eight columns earlier at 1092B (Terribilis aeris potestatibus).


Rendered as printed — no marker (Pattern 7, real words merely wrong)

### 1094D — clari for clavi, Eccl. 12:11 Migne prints Verba sapientium quasi stimuli, et quasi clari in altum defixi. The Vulgate has clavi, "nails", which is what in altum defixi ("fixed deep on high") governs. clari is a real word ("bright ones"), so under the Pattern 12 boundary it is rendered as ordinary English — "as bright ones fixed deep on high" — and not marked. The exposition does not build on the word (it goes straight to quae data sunt a pastore uno, "namely Christ"), so nothing in the argument is lost by the plate's reading. Conjecture clavi recorded here only.

### 1088C — plurumque for plerumque Ad hoc enim plurumque differt vota et orationes sanctorum. Attested Old-Latin / medieval orthography, not a defect — Pattern 9. Translated normally ("very often"), no italics, no marker. Flagged only so a later sweep does not churn it.

### 1091C–D — colombae for columbae qui in specie colombae apparuit. Attested late/medieval spelling (Pattern 9); translated normally as "dove". Same non-action as above.

### 1088A — Judeae for Judaeae Standard medieval orthography, Pattern 9. Rendered "Judea".


Punctuation carried per Pattern 8

### 1093C — the doubled stop .: Migne prints …ideoque a gressibus coepit eam laudare.: Gressus enim Ecclesiae sunt velox praedicatio apostolorum. Both marks are printed and both are carried; neither was deleted and none supplied. The English reads "…began to praise her from her steps.: For the steps of the Church are…". This looks like a build defect on the reading page and is not one; it is the plate.

### 1087B — comma absent after frigidissimae …et naturae frigidissimae unde et a dracone, qui calidae naturae est, vehementer appetitur. No mark supplied; the English runs on as the Latin does.


Scripture divergence — [var: …] (Pattern 14)

### 1090D — 2 Tim. 1:8 Migne prints Noli erubescere crucem Christi, neque me vinctum ejus; the Vulgate has Noli itaque erubescere testimonium Domini nostri, neque me vinctum eius. Migne is rendered ("Be not ashamed of the cross of Christ, nor of me his prisoner") and the received reading is noted in a [var:]. The divergence is load-bearing here: the whole point of the sentence is that the cortex mali punici signifies mysterium passionis Christi, and the proof-text as printed says "cross" where the Vulgate says "testimony". Whether the substitution is Migne's compositor, his copy-text, an Old Latin reading or the author quoting from memory is not adjudicated (Pattern 14 forbids speculating).

### Divergences noted but NOT marked Marked sparingly per Pattern 14; these were judged not to change the sense of the argument, and each is recorded here instead.


Construction notes

### 1093D — In feminibus, vel in femoribus The plate offers two Latin thigh-words in apposition (femen/femina and femur/femora), and English has one exponent for both. Rendered "In the thighs, or in the loins" so that the doubling is visible without reading as a dittography; the lemma juncturae femorum and the gloss Femina ergo Ecclesiae both keep "thighs", which is where the argument sits. This is a Pattern 9 situation (a Latin distinction with no English exponent), not a defect: nothing is emended, and the Latin column carries both words.

### 1090C — number shift in the Galaad gloss per Galaad mens sanctorum designatur, qui sunt acervus testimonii quoniam … solum Deum desiderare evidentissimis attestatur indiciis. The relative is plural (qui, agreeing in sense with sanctorum) while the verb is singular (attestatur, agreeing with mens). Rendered as printed — "the mind of the saints, who are a heap of witness, since it attests…" — with the shift preserved rather than smoothed to one number.

### 1086B — the Holy Spirit as subject of his own gloss quia Spiritus sanctus lactis nomine, id est Dei gratia intelligitur, quae per Spiritum sanctum Ecclesiae tribuitur. As printed, the Holy Spirit is what is "understood under the name of milk", and then the grace is what is given "through the Holy Spirit" — the subject is doing duty on both sides of the id est. Rendered as printed; no clause re-bound (Pattern 7a, mechanism 5).

### 1086B — quae lacte sunt lotae answered twice The lemma's relative clause is expounded once of the Holy Spirit (1086A–B) and again of the teachers of the Church (1086B). Both expositions rendered in full; the ut dictum est back-references are the author's, not ours.

### 1088C — Vers. 17 of Song 5 The plate numbers the Quo abiit dilectus tuus lemma as verse 17 of chapter V, and chapter VI opens at Dilectus meus descendit in hortum suum. The chapter/verse division here is the plate's; not adjusted. # Cruces — 7914, chunks 0018–0022 (cols 1096A–1106C)

Auctor incertus (Cassiodorus Vivariensis?), Expositio in Cantica canticorum, PL 70. Batch: chunks 0018, 0019, 0020, 0021, 0022 — the final chunks of the work.


Work-wide conventions set or confirmed in this batch (for merge reconciliation)

Pre-set by the session brief and followed throughout: murenulae untranslated; dilectus/dilecta = beloved; amica/amicus = friend; sponsa = bride, sponsus = bridegroom; pulchra = beautiful; formosa = comely; speciosa = fair; nigra = black; fusca = swarthy; columba = dove. Named etymologies translated with the proper name kept as printed.

Reconciled against the peer batches after drafting (chunks 0000–0017 were on disk by the time this batch was checked, so the following were aligned rather than invented):

LatinEnglish usedNote
doctoresteachersDrafted as "doctors" (8 instances in 0018–0019) and swept to "teachers" to match the 74 instances already standing in chunks 0001–0017.
maligni spiritusmalignant spiritsDrafted as "malign spirits" (3 instances) and swept to "malignant", the peers' form.
castrorum acies ordinataa battle-line of the camps set in orderDrafted as "an army set in array" at 1096C and 1100B — both are back-references to lemmata already expounded at 1089C–D and 1092B, where the work expounds castra, acies and ordinata separately. Swept to the peers' wording so the lemma-chain holds.
decora (7:6)seemlyIndependently arrived at, and it matches chunks 0002, 0004, 0008, 0015. Distinct from pulchra (beautiful) and formosa (comely), both of which the work also uses.
Vers. N.Verse N.Structural label, normalized per Pattern 9; the Latin twin keeps the abbreviation.

New choices made in this batch that were not already fixed elsewhere:

LatinEnglish usedNote
malum granatum / malum punicum (1101A)kept in italic Latin at the etymology, "pomegranate" everywhere elseAt 1101A the work glosses both names etymologically — Dicitur autem malum granatum, eo quod multitudine granorum sit plenum; malum punicum, eo quod in Africa plurimum abundat. Punica enim ipsa est Africa. "Pomegranate" shares no root with either granum or Punica, so the sentence would explain nothing. Same reasoning as murenulae and elatae (cruces-0013). Outside that one passage the ordinary English is used, matching the 12 "pomegranate(s)" already standing in the peer chunks.
pacificus (8:11–12)peaceable / peaceable oneThe lemma Vinea fuit pacifico and the gloss on Salomon, id est pacificus turn on one word, and 8:12 Mille tui pacifici is expounded predicatively (manet te certa illa remuneratio). "Peaceable" carries all three. Not "peacemaker", which would break the Salomon etymology.
πάγος / villa (1098C)Greek kept; villa kept in italic Latin, glossed "the village"Nemo nescit Paganos a villa dictos: quia πάγος Graece, villa dicitur Latine. The whole point is that Pagani is derived from villa; an English word breaks it. Greek reproduced verbatim.
vir / virtus (1104C)kept in italic Latin with English glossesnam vir a virtute dicitur → "for vir, a man, is so named from virtus, strength." Etymology, same treatment.
βάτια (1096B)kept verbatimMigne's Greek for the purple-dyers' channels; reproduced, not transliterated.
elatae — not in this batchNoted only so the merge knows the term does not recur after 1095D.

No guillemets occur anywhere in chunks 0018–0022; the Latin twins have none either, so none were supplied (Pattern 6). The inner-edition page numbers 529535 are reproduced verbatim in place.


Carried type — [sic: …] (Patterns 7, 10, 12)

### 1096D — pulmae for palmae (inside an italic lemma) The lemma of Song 7:7 is printed Statura tua assimilata est pulmae. Not a word; carried untranslated per the non-word class of Pattern 7 and marked. Per Pattern 10 it takes no second italic marker — nested italics are not expressible — so the page reads Thy stature is likened to [sic: pulmae]. The conjecture palmae is certain: the very next sentence but one prints Statura ergo Ecclesiae palmae assimilantur, and the whole exposition that follows is about the palm tree (Palma enim victricem ornat manum).

### 1106B — hinauli for hinnuli Sicut (inquit) capreae et hinauli cervorum, indomita animalia, humanum consortium refugiunt. Not a word; carried and marked. The plate itself supplies the reading twice in the same paragraph — the lemma of Song 8:14 at 1105C prints assimilare capreae hinnuloque cervorum, and the re-quotation a few lines above prints Similis esto capreae hinnuloque cervorum. Conjecture hinnuli, "young harts".


Rendered as printed — no marker

### 1097A — Statura … assimilantur, singular subject with plural verb Migne prints Statura ergo Ecclesiae palmae assimilantur. The subject statura is singular; the verb is plural. Unlike a gender mismatch (Pattern 9), English does have an exponent for number, so smoothing it to "is likened" would be a silent repair of exactly the class Pattern 7a forbids. The English carries the plural — "The stature therefore of the Church are likened to the palm" — and the reader is told here that the disagreement is the plate's. Conjecture: assimilatur, or staturae; the sentence construes either way and neither is preferable on internal evidence, so nothing is proposed in the text. This will look like our typo on the reading page and is not one.

### 1103A — nullius mundi substantiae nam nullius mundi substantiae, nullae opes comparatione dilectionis aliquid sunt. The genitive singular nullius mundi against nominative plural substantiae is odd; rendered as printed ("for the substances of no world, no riches, are anything in comparison of love") rather than normalized to "no substance of the world". Real words, so no marker (Pattern 12 boundary). The argument does not turn on it.

### 1105C–1106A — the two pacifici constructions Song 8:12 Mille tui pacifici is grammatically ambiguous (predicate adjective vs. vocative "O peaceable one"), and the work reads it as a predicate: mille argentei pacifici tui sunt, id est, manet te certa illa remuneratio. The lemma is therefore rendered "A thousand are thy peaceable ones", following the exposition rather than the commoner vocative reading. Recorded because a reader who knows the verse will expect the other construction, and because the choice is the work's, not ours.


Punctuation carried per Pattern 8

### 1102C–D — Rom. 8:35 punctuated as one clause Migne prints Quis nos separabit a charitate Christi, tribulatio, an angustia, an persecutio, an fames, an nuditas, an periculum, an gladius? — a single comma-run with one terminal ?, where the Vulgate and English convention would break the question after Christi. No mark supplied and none deleted: the English runs "…from the charity of Christ, tribulation, or distress, or persecution, or famine, or nakedness, or danger, or the sword?" with the one question mark the plate prints, outside the italic run exactly as printed.

### 1102C — the inline citation (Aggaei II, 24) Haggai 2:24 is cited inside the italic scripture run as running text, not as a [n: …] note, unlike every other citation in the batch. Reproduced verbatim in place, inside the italics, untranslated. Not tagged [f: …]: this is a lemma-and-gloss commentary, not a florilegium, and Pattern 4's trigger is a citing practice, not a stray instance. Flagged so the indexer's operator knows the reference exists and will not be harvested from a [n:].


Scripture divergences noted — none marked [var: …]

Marked sparingly per Pattern 14. Each of the following was judged not to change the sense the exposition builds on, so each is recorded here instead of on the page.


Construction notes

### 1100A — Tu qui modo es in sinu Patris The relative qui is printed inside the italic run while Tu is outside it (Tu qui modo es in sinu Patris), so the italics fall across a clause boundary rather than round a quotation. Reproduced as printed: the English sets who italic and art now in the bosom of the Father italic, with Thou roman. This looks like a typesetting slip and is carried, not tidied.

### 1100D — Marc. IX with no verse The note attached to saepe etiam volentes interrogare apostolos Dominus praeveniebat gives a chapter only. Left verbatim; no verse supplied.

### 1101B — S. Gregorius, homil. 30 in Evang. and 1101C — S. Greg. in cap. II Cant. cant. Two notes citing Gregory in two different abbreviation styles within four columns. Both left verbatim per the [n: …] rule; the variance is evidence of Migne's citing practice and is not normalized (CLAUDE.md rule 9).

### 1100B–C — the Synagogue called the Church Nec mirum videri debet, si nunc Ecclesiam Synagogam dicimus; una est enim Ecclesia in praecedentibus et in sequentibus partibus. The work uses Ecclesia and Synagoga of the same subject throughout chapter VIII, and says so. Both words kept distinct in the English wherever the Latin distinguishes them; no clause re-bound to make the referent easier.

### 1104C — In ea quae habet populos The lemma is printed without the quae clause's antecedent (Song 8:11 in ea quae habet populos), and the gloss supplies it (Ecclesia vero habet populos). Rendered as printed — "In that which hath peoples" — rather than expanded to "in the vineyard which…".

### 1105A — the doubled hundred Sicut per millenarium plenitudo perfectionis, sic et per centenarium summa perfectio designatur: quia centenarius de laeva in dexteram transfertur. The remark about the hundred being "carried over from the left hand to the right" is the ancient finger-reckoning convention (a hundred is the first number counted on the right hand). Rendered literally; no explanatory word added to the text.

### 1096B — quas Graece βάτια vocant The relative quas is feminine while its antecedent canales is masculine. Pattern 9: Latin gender has no English exponent, nothing to emend, nothing rendered differently. Logged only so a later sweep does not churn it.


Four Opus units, blind, 23/23 chunks, no sampling. 14 sites: 7 source-side, 7 ours. Units in data/sweeps/polarity-7914/. Unit boundaries deliberately STRADDLED the translation batches, so every batch seam fell inside some reader's range.

The finding that matters beyond this work

All seven ours-side defects were lemma conformations (5) or mis-bound references (2). Not one was a dropped negation. The same day's read of 11065, a homily collection, gave the opposite profile. The genre predicts the failure mode. In a verse-by-verse commentary the risk is not losing a non; it is the familiar English of a known verse arriving before the printed Latin is read. Written up as translation-style.md 7a″, with these cases as the worked examples.

Fixed (ours)

Controls — both found blind

## Source-side, rendered literally (new, previously unlogged) @1082C ×2 — nunquam where the lemma Lavi pedes meos, quomodo inquinabo illos? requires quondam; and exui for exuta, which makes the Church fear both the stripping she boasts of and the reclothing. @1084A — a dropped non against 1083C's nemo eum in praesenti vita, sicuti est, comprehendere potest.

## A structural gap worth naming The per-batch negation audits in this file cover chunks 0007–0012 only; 0013–0017 had no negation audit at all, and that is exactly where three of the new source-side findings sit. A per-batch audit is not a work-wide one.